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 My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.



Hung Over

 

Hung Over


Yotna ElToub

The reflection of the club and drugs scene is well done. As is the confusion we have all felt due to intoxicants in our time. The sex is casual, but the story expands on the unwanted side effects both of the sex and by implication the �club scene�. The writing is nicely detached which matches the style of the piece Clare�s final decision is nicely observed.



I Remember Erewhon

 

I Remember Erewhon


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TheUprightMan

Lyrical. Mystic. Touching. Why are you not doing this professionally?



International Cowgirl

 

International Cowgirl


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biggym

Excellent!!! Great hot story. You just added fun back into the Olympics. Waiting for the 300 man marathon. Great idea. Great read and very well done.



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littlered1

This is a very interesting story. The introspective nature of the story I found enjoyable. The metaphor of a sex athlete for any other field that you feel you have reached your peak in is also good. I can see the same type of ideas and emotions going on in the head of anyone ready to leave a job they have done for a long time. Maybe I'm reading too much into it.



Koochy

 

Koochy


The Erotic Scream

Natalia

Classy You really are a writer! Real atmospheric. I was amused to hear a Brit say, Fucking A. Kind of a more universal term than I thought.



The Erotic Scream

Jules

Wicked! Do you know...I think I was at this party :) Impressive writing and hot pierced lesbian sex! Sums up North London parties brilliantly. Loving your work.



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Anonymous

THAT IS SOME VERY GOOD WRITING

I enjoyed getting lost in the details as they come out. Your sentences so clearly describe actions as thoughts occur I could see her moving to kiss her new lover. That description, "tasting sweat and navigating the contours of the hard reddish skin of the aureole of motherhood," just awed me.



Lush Stories Bugs This piece is so good that I am at a loss for words. Raw emotions, poetic prose. Hot action and a hint of sadness. Nice writing.

Lonely as a Cloud

 

Lonely as a Cloud


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Anonymous

Refreshing even while sad.

Nice to see something that takes a somewhat different view of things.



Love Is Blind


Love is Blind 


Rajah Dodger

Awwwww...

A lovely little story, elegantly described.



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madengineer3

True Love

 

It is not often that I read a story where the essence of true love is demonstrated. The closing lines of this story indicate exactly that. This is good writing.

 




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TiggerToo

Thank you so much!

 

I enjoy reading about fictional but realistic people who have persisted in overcoming life�s adversities to their great benefit. Could I be that strong?


We have a deaf man where I work and we all make an effort to include him in our socializing. He is the nicest person and we�re great buds.

 




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RedHairedandFriendly

Beautiful reflections. . .


This was a moving write. Thank you so much for it.

 



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Anonymous

Probably not the best reason to like it


Anyone who does not shy away from human nature to refer to having a crap in the morning (without making a fetish of it) has got to be commended

 



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masked_author 

Wonderful


I really enjoyed this... it's a unique perspective to take, and what I really enjoyed about it is how you kept up the little details about the perspective: the steps she took for example, the feelings rather than the sights. It's a great read. Well done!

 



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littlered1

A great story. I liked that you made the characters full and real and made their disabilities simply a part of who they were. The focus on the love and romance, while allowing their disabilities to remain in the background, show how they were like any other couple emotionally.



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RumpleForeskin

Good writing...great character development...enjoyable read. Being blind myself, I appreciated the job you did on making her blindness an important element in the story.



Night Out


Night Out

 

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Anonymous

A beautiful story

This is really a beautiful tale, which captures the essence of Modern British Youth, its present and future! I cannot wait for the next installment! One very minor caveat; your portrayal is a bit too sanitized. Next time, don't worry about offending the audience! Tell it like it REALLY is!



Not Naked in School


Not Naked in School


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Anonymous

Cool

Very original. 



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Anonymous

Oppoite of the Nudist

A great twist on the idea of nudism.
Great story.



Tenyari

Dressed in School?


What is more perverse everyone being dressed and just a few people nude? Or everyone being nude and just a few people being dresse?

 

Bradley Stoke did a humorous short on this variation - where a girl had to go to school clothed and not let anyone touch in a world where everyone was nude and highly sensual.


One Snip Short



One Snip Short

 

Rajah Dodger

Very cool story!  Enjoyed it!



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Anonymous

I think that your story was romantic and beautiful in its own right. Good job. Keep on writing!

 



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Anonymous

Read the Title of the Story

Good Lawdy Lawdy, do none of the readers read the Titles of the Tales?

This Title suggested the outcome of the �girl�, not going for the �snip�, though not the proclivities of the guy which was also a pleasant surprise.


And the tantalising �red herrings� scattered throughout, mention of a haircut, snip snip, and the Restaurant Bill, �A snip under ...�. The red herrings were so well placed that they made me wonder about the girl really being a guy, or should I look for some other �snip�.


and then, Bravo Bradley, the �snap� at the end.

 

 



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Shadownight_Keeper

Interesting

 

Well written, like the character development, subtle clues that only added to the story.

 



Party Slave

 

Party Slave


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Steve150177

Not a jill/jack off story, but ...

This story clearly illustrates the 2nd reason that real (as opposed to consensual) slavery is always evil. 
The 1st reason is because of what it does to the slaves.
The 2nd reason is because of what it does to the slave owners.
and
The 3rd reason is because of how it retards technological progress in society as a whole. 
. . . . Notice that the Age of Enlightenment began after the Black Death had undermined the basis of the serf system by killing so many of all classes off.
As to the owners -- If rich men find it hard to get into heaven (as Jesus said), then how much harder for a man who raped 1 or 2 women every day to get into heaven?

I give it 5***** for that.



Peace Returns



 

Peace Returns


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Anonymous in USA

I hated it-in a backwards kind of way

 

It took me a few paragraphs (ok, more than I�d like to admit) but this was a very original way to explore a life spiralling out of control.

 

Very consistent and well done

 



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Anonymous in nedewS

!taerG

 

.levels many so on backwards was that, Wow.

Gonna check to see if you�ve written anything else now.



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Anonymous

Great Writing

 

This is great writing, and one of the most original pieces I've read.

 



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Anonymous in USA

GREAT STORY

 

What a powerful story. Another take on the downward spiral. This should be required reading for everyone who has ever taken that first step.

 



Reality



 

Reality


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JoJo Jinx

I just read a new Bradley Stoke�s story over on ASSM. He calls it Reality but really it is about virtual reality.

 
It has some similarities to MMORPGs and some to Stanislaw Lem�s �The Cyberiad� but as always Stoke imbues it with his own particular flavour.


Click on over and give it a read. He�s one of my favourite authors.



Sliding Sideways


Sliding Sideways


Lush Stories Sitting Loved this. I enjoyed Sliding Doors (the movie) but this was just perfect. A great idea and I love how you altered events... or did you?! Excellently written! 


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