Reviews: Public Comments Page Four

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My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.

Snow White

Literotica	onyxessence in USA	Nicely written I liked the story; it's definitely one of the best written I've come across on this site. The characters were well written and the story was rich with elements of the unexpected. I particularly liked the realistic descriptions of the dwarves!

Superslut

Literotica	Bridget69 in Canada	Super! I think that even the most ardent bible thumpers have this hidden persona.

Literotica	hansbwl	Brilliant So refreshing to read an original story. Very good!!!

Lush Stories	littlered1	This was a great story. Her alter-ego fighting her all the way. It is good to learn from your more carnal side but it's not what you want to be. Love is better than lust.

Teen Spirit

Literotica	J.Q. Hack in USA	Great story. I think the tone and mood you set in the story was spot on. Without seemingly too much effort you got what it�s like to be awkward and unpopular. The sex scene showed what a first time would be like -- not the day long marathons seen in many stories. Thankfully you kept the ending realistic and plausible.

Lush Stories	tak0chan	A beautifully observed story, told with great sensitivity and style!

The Coming of Age

Lush Stories	DirtyMindedMom	I don't usually read "science fiction," but this wonderful story has opened up the possibilities for me. I love the vision of this story and the freedom to imagine alternate moral realities. Very sexy stuff!

The Cream of Sheba

Literotica	Ton8ty	Wonderful! I loved it. However, I think that this tale properly belongs in the �How To� category. If more writers paid better attention to their audience, the quality of their work might improve significantly.


Literotica	Boyd	Great Hilarious!

The House to Themselves

Literotica	noone269	Another great story You have done it again, keep up the great work!!

Literotica	TheCaptain	Damn fine work! I thought your story was great! Much better than most, and definitely worth the read. Thanks for writing!

Literotica	Anonymous in USA	MTV Just a comment on the person who objected to the MTV: The breaks in between all of the action were intentional. It's a style of writing. It's metaphoric. Not all erotica has to be SEXSEXSEXEND. Now, a comment on the submission, if you will: This was a great piece of writing; matured writing with naive characters. The child at the end was perfect. The pace and 60�s-with-technology feel were showing of a true writer. Having read this after suffering three paragraphs of a submission that the author was probably jerking off while writing, I am impressed. I don't view it, in retrospect, as a piece of erotica so much as a piece of true writing. Well done.

The Imposter

Lush Stories	littlered1	Very interesting and even satirically humorous. I liked this very much. The sex was good but in reality had little to do with the real story. Classic erotic tale.


The Philosopher�s Tool

Sticky Pen	TuDestino	Awesome Wow that was like nothing I�ve ever read before. I really enjoyed it. I hope you�ll write more.

The Price of Prejudice

Literotica	Anonymous in USA	Amazing story. I really felt the emotions of the two girls and the mentality of the prejudice was well done as well.

The Pursuit of Manliness

Literotica	Anonymous inUSA	Cute and hot A fun, silly romp. Nice writing!


The Silent Tutsi

Lush Stories	tak0chan	Congratulations on a hauntingly beautiful and poignantly moving story that I know I will come back to and re-read again and again.
Lush Stories	bluewolf12	Such an amazing read. Really got involved with the characters.
Vagina Dialogue

Ruthie�s Club	Poison Ivan	I doubt anyone who reads this newsletter knows this, but I have what I believe to be the largest collection of synonyms of the female genitalia ever collected. The list is getting close to 2000 words now. Some are funny, some are baffling, some are vulgar, and some are quite nice. We have the �Cunt Equals� box on the Club Cocktails page because I have a special fondness for the various euphemisms we use for that special part of the woman�s anatomy. There are synonyms, and then there is Bradley Stoke�s new story, �Vagina Dialogues.� As the owner of the Not-So-Famous Pussy List, all I can say is, �Wow, you must read this story.� I thought it was funny and instructive. I think you�ll find it funny, at least.

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Waiting for the Longships

Lush Stories	danceswithsunlight	Very horny story; Viking women must have been very strong;mentally emotionally, and psychically to survive the winters; a psychological and detailed description of life in Norse times!