Disgust

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Desiremakesmeweak

literary and erotic

I liked the cynicism cellophane wrapped around the sex. Has all the right touches and was a rewarding, quality read

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ReiDeBastos

Well-written, but thoroughly unpleasant.

I found that I could not take viewing the world through the main character's eyes, and bailed at the end of the concert.

Door-to-Door Prostitution

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Anonymous

That was something!

I'm just not sure what! Well written and entertaining, this story also had a little moral. This was clever and different.

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Anonymous

Very nice

Well-written and fun to read. Now, I wait for the comments about the husband that are usually reserved for the wife in this story.

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bornagain

Very well done

I think Jenny should get the same treatment from Cherry that the dumb sod is getting but cut him off from Cherry.

It isn�t right that the husband belittle the wife like he does just because she can�t produce children doesn�t give him the right to drag a hooker into the house right in front of his wife.

Doubly Endowed

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Jaxtraw

For a change, here�s an illustration I created for Bradley Stoke. The pic is for a short story called �Doubly Endowed�, the subject matter of which will be obvious (hopefully) from the pic! I heartily recommend his website, where you�ll find the finished, colour version of this illustration (Doubly Endowed can be found in the short stories section, page five).

Excess

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gilrenard

Good sexy story. I like your style of writing. You should check out the group RockBitch..they're nasty on stage.  5 from me, for rocking on.

Extracurricular Love

Desdmona

Bradley Stoke has set up a wonderful scene by omitting rationalization or embarrassment. It�s the matter-of-factness that makes this rather fantastical setting come off as perfectly normal. It�s a college. A college devoted to sexual studies. (I think I might want to enrol!) It�s intelligently written with subtleties that glide the reader right along.

Very interesting premise with a nice story to go along with it.

I really enjoyed it! I think many of you might as well!

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hpldwg

How refreshing! Real people with real flaws, muddling through life in a real way, both looking for happiness and fulfillment. And, they found it with each other. A true happy ending; well Done!

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biggym

Excellent!!! Very well done and great read. Thanks. A lot can happen at Starbucks.

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Katje

This was a very touching story. At first, I didn't like her opinion of him, but it went in a lovely direction. Keep up the good work!

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TB_OrNot2B

I was distraught at first...

because I thought the mention of his pictures showing only one side of his face was a giveaway to the rest of the story. Instead, I found a story about two "average" people, as in not the beautiful, big-breasted and well-endowed characters in so many other stories. I enjoyed the reluctant, yet natural, building of their appreciation for one another--all the things that had undoubtedly made them Facebook Friends--which in turn lead them to become sex partners, Facebook Boyfriend (and, I assume, Girlfriend,) and perhaps lovers. Thank you for the effort.

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cmsix

I just read it and I liked it. I especially liked Fatima and also the fact that it ended with a little hope for her. I didn�t really like Freddy but he was very real.

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PredatorSmile

Fantastic Story! Excellent!!!

I love this story! It is so very much like my own tale. What a world!!!

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Anonymous in USA 

Fat Chance

I myself am a Fat woman and every feeling that was written down on this story about how she felt about herself and how she saw herself was almost identical to how I am myself. It was as though someone had seen the thoughts in my head and decided to put them on a computer screen. Great depth with feelings. Amazing how right on this story was from a fat woman�s point of view.

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Softly

You are right!

Ava is quoted as saying, �Frank is one hundred and thirty pounds of man, of which eighty pounds is cock.�

On another occasion, Frank was playing poker. Ms. Monroe came in naked. He told her, �Get your fat ass out of here.�

Those that knew him allege that he had sex with every major female movie star of his time.

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Kenny N Gamera

Nice. I found it less a story and more a poem (40%/60%).  The second time through I imagined a small jazz combo in the background, though it didn�t work. It wasn�t beat enough.

Yotna ElToub

I add my vote, but you are poetical here Bradley. Is this a new career?

Very nice, and I look forward to my old age ;)

Her Husband�s Ex

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luganstud

Well written. Quite a conclusion! I look forward to reading more of your work.

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SSean08

Excellent story. What a triangle.

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LovelikeWinter

I love the wording and how I couldn't predict what would happen next. I haven't read something so exciting in a while. 

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Here�s Looking at You

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Anonymous

I loved this sublime love story . . . 

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Anonymous in Revolla

I loved

this story and the memories it stirred.

How High the Moon

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ungenderless

Romantic and sensual

I really appreciated the subject matter of jazz music in this story. There was a unique relation between Lynn�s growing lust for an admirer and the way her night on stage progressed. We also get a healthy dose into Lynn�s history, which makes me care about her more.

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tak0chan

To borrow a musical metaphor, there is a rich contrapuntal texture to this story that makes it deeply satisfying at numerous levels. The thematic interweaving of music, present and past emotions and situations, regrets and hopes etc, is brilliantly done, as is your evocation of the scene in which Lynn and her fellow musicians perform.

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