It always sounds so simple, he thought afterwards. He was pressed as close to her as possible. He felt her heart beat under his hand on her breast. It always sounds so simple, he thought, but I cannot even describe it.

Peter’s vacation begins with an unusual proposition to play a game over the weekend with an eighteen-year-old pizza delivery girl. Peter and Belinda discover things about themselves and each other by Sunday evening that call into question everything they know.

Part One of Bring is twelve chapters long, almost 29,000 words long. The first draft of Part One was written in August 2003. The first chapter of Part Two is almost 4,000 words. The first draft of Part Two was written in September 2003.

There are twelve chapters in the first part, covering a weekend (Friday through Sunday). Only the first chapter of the second part is given here, which takes place eighteen months later. Until I'm completely satisfied with the second part I won't post it. There are links at the bottom of each chapter to take you to the next chapter.

There is sex or sexual situations in almost every chapter. The sex isn't very graphically described and Bring is in the main Bingo story section rather than the Lair for that reason. If there were codes for this story they would be something like: MF (also M+F), FF: oral, rape, objects, bdsm. (These codes could also — with a stretch — be used to describe some mainstream novels.)

The first part of Bring was the first long, plot-driven story I ever wrote. I felt a sequel was needed and a second part was written. I'm still not satisfied with the second part which is why it has taken me so long to share Bring. I like the first chapter of the second part and some day may come back and try writing a satisfactory conclusion.

A short third part was written but was shelved almost immediately. A few months afterwards other projects, including Switch: a novel, took precedence.

I hope readers enjoy Bring and I’d appreciate comments.

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