News from the Invid Hive
The Waifs, now on ASSTR
Well, the threat has been carried out. My rewrite of the story previously only on SOL is now starting here. I've spent a month or two, on and off, rewriting the sucker, trying to improve it. I'm not sure how much damage I've managed to do, but at the very least it's more readable and I've managed to beef up the characters. This is NOT a sex story. Very few graphic descriptions of the act, even less than the Bells stories. Hell, I've taken one out in the rewrite.
At the moment, this is running 25 chapters, as opposed to the original 24. I'm still working on the last batch, but everything else up to about chapter 17 is with SciFi Nut for editing, so releases will be based on when he finishes with his end. …