Julie Story Page

If one added the other events of the last few hours then her life had attained a spectacle beyond her wildest imaginings. She’d never dreamed of someone sticking a penis there, or trying to, which caused her to gag which Nellie said was normal. Nellie said one day, sooner than later, she’d find herself naturally open there as elsewhere. And the boys could shoot their yuck straight into her (bypassing her mouth and tongue) which she secretly admitted missed half the fun. Tasting it, knowing what it was and where it’d come from. Given to her without love or affection, roughly.

Julie makes a choice and what happens next isn’t anything she’d ever dreamed of. First off, it hurt. A lot. All her teachers hated her. Being naked all the time to show her state wasn’t that awful. And maybe not all the teachers hated her. Even blowjob class after school in the parking lot wasn’t that bad. Not when she has two boyfriends who are watching from a parked car.

While writing, I thought of this as part The Handmaid’s Tale and part “naked in school.” It’s 41,000 words long, in 26 chapters. This was written in 2007 and was set aside when things got busy. Final minor revisions made in 2013.

Links
Julie is available as an Adobe Acrobat document download.

Julie can be read online in two chapter segments.

Story Codes
Story codes could best be stated as: m+f, mmff, mm, ff: oral, anal, exhib, noncons. Usually the characters having sex are under 18.

Note that one male character is gay, another is bisexual and two females are bisexual. So there are interesting combinations, but the focus is almost entirely male to female sex.

In two chapters near the end there are rapes and bondage but nothing too graphic. Nonconsensual sex does occur quite frequently in the story. This, however, probably isn’t a story for those who like rape or nonconsensual sex fantasies.

Writing the Story
In the last chapters there are references to the Story of O. That and a number of other influences could be found, but mostly the story is concept driven – characters living and acting in a society not that much different than ours.

One of the things I realized after picking up the typescript in 2013 was how, maybe, attitudes towards gays and lesbians have already begun to change. When I was writing in 2007 the end of that dark tunnel of bias and hatred toward the glbt community wasn’t so visible.

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