The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Introduction: I hadn’t originally planned a fourth chapter but I received fan mail requesting it so here it is. I had to go back and rework the first 3 chapters a bit to make things fit. So, you might want to re-read the new versions of those chapters before starting this chapter. That isn’t required, however.

Invited Inside

The Fourth Visit

At exactly noon on Saturday, Duncan, Rachel and their daughter Lauren walk up to Marcus’ door. After inviting the women in, Marcus sends Duncan away and steps back inside.

“Welcome ladies. Inspection time.”

Both women snap to attention side by side with eyes forward. Rachel is wearing a black dress that falls to mid thigh. It has a high neck line with a diamond shaped cut out over her breasts that shows a lot of cleavage. Another diamond shaped cut out shows her belly button. The dress fits tightly enough that Marcus can see the outline of her bra and panties through the fabric. She also has on 4 inch heels.

Lauren’s red mini-dress is even more daring. It is completely backless, dipping down far enough to show the top of her red thong. The front is split far enough down to show the entire valley between her breasts. She is obviously not wearing a bra. Her legs are bare and she is wearing 3 inch heels.

“Lauren, have you ever gone out without a bra on before?”

“No Sir, but it feels kind of good when my nipples rub on the fabric of the dress.”

“Have either of you ever worn heels this high before?”

“No Master.”

“No Sir.”

“How has it been making your rounds dressed like this?”

Rachel answers, “We convinced Duncan to come here first so we wouldn’t have to visit any other houses dressed like this.”

“That isn’t quite what I had in mind, but I will let that slide.”

Marcus steps behind Rachel and runs his hands over her well-shaped rear. Then he slides his hands up to the sides of her waist and gives a brief squeeze. Next he reaches around her and traces the diamond shaped cut outs in her dress with his fingers. Her soft, warm skin feels delightful. After hefting her breasts for a moment, he gives them some gentle squeezes. She sighs and leans back slightly against his chest. Finally, he flips her lovely brown hair away from her neck and kisses it. “I do like your dress. You must have been shopping recently to get this.”

“Yes Master. I have never worn anything like this before.”

Marcus moves over to stand behind Lauren. He runs his hands lightly from her shoulders down her bare back and then slips his hands inside her dress to squeeze her butt cheeks. Lauren gasps and begins to breathe faster. Keeping his hands inside her dress, he slides them up over her hips to the sides of her waist and pulls her back against his chest. She remains rigidly at attention but allows her body to be tilted back against him. Marcus takes his hands out of her dress and reaches around her. He grasps her breasts through the thin fabric of the dress. After gently pinching her nipples erect, he pulls the dress open enough for her breasts to come free. Some more fondling produces a whimpering, pleading sound in Lauren’s throat. Marcus flips her brown hair to the side and gently nips her ear lobe. “I really like your dress.”

Lauren’s voice is husky. “Thank you Sir.”

Marcus pulls the dress back over Lauren’s perfect breasts. “Now ladies, relax and follow me.” He leads them into the living room.

The video camera has already been set up when they arrive in the living room.

Marcus turns to face the women. “Rachel, you were supposed to learn more about stripping. Now it is time to show me what you have learned.”

Rachel glances at Lauren. Lauren smiles hesitantly and says, “Sir, actually, we have both been watching videos and practicing stripping. Mom didn’t want me to but I used the collar and leash to make her agree. I made us learn the same song so we can perform together if you would like.”

“Performing together sounds interesting. You are showing good initiative again Lauren.”

“Thank you, Sir. I really enjoy serving you.”

“Good, let’s have you both show me what you’ve learned.”

Lauren pulls an iPod and a pair of small speakers out of her bag. She quickly sets them up and starts a Pop song with a strong dance beat. Meanwhile, Marcus starts his video camera. Lauren moves to stand beside her mother. Each woman starts with her hands at her sides and begins to sinuously draw her hands up along her dress. This pulls the bottom of each dress up enough to show more tantalizing thigh. Moving in sync, they pull their hands up their sides to their breasts. All four hands pause to caress a breast before cupping it to present to Marcus. The women continue to draw their hands up over their heads and then sway their hips to the beat for a few moments.

Lauren continues to sway with her hands over her head but Rachel slowly brings her hands down and behind her back. She begins to gradually pull down the zipper on the back of her dress while turning to face away from Marcus. As the zipper goes down, the dress peels away from her back. Soon, the back of a black bra is revealed. She continues to pull the zipper slowly down as more and more of her back becomes visible. Once the zipper is all of the way down, Rachel shrugs her shoulders forward and lets the dress fall to her waist. She swirls her hips as she spins slowly to face Marcus, revealing her black bra with her nipples visible through the thin fabric. After a few moments of this, she spins around to face away from him again. She beings tugging the dress off of her hips as she bends forward with her knees locked. This gradually reveals the back of her black, lacy panties covering her shapely rear end. Finally, the dress drops to the floor and Rachel steps out of it. She wiggles her butt for a moment and then turns around to face Marcus while raising her arms over her head. Both women are now standing with hands over head and swaying to the music.

Lauren brings her hands down to her chest and begins to tug the top of her dress sideways. This partially reveals first one breast and then the other as she smiles in a teasing fashion. Next her hands move up to the shoulder straps of her dress and begin to tug them sideways, gradually spreading her dress and revealing more of both breasts. Just before the right shoulder strap comes off, she spins away from Marcus. She finishes tugging the right shoulder strap off and slips her arm out of it. That part of the dress drops. Lauren spins back around with her hand covering her right breast. She begins to rub her hand in a circle over her breast, massaging it while gradually revealing it. Finally, she pulls her hand away. With her right breast in full view, Lauren jiggles and produces some delightful movement of both breasts. After a few moments of this, her left hand tugs the left shoulder strap off. The dress drops to her waist, revealing her left breast and flat belly. After jiggling her breasts some more, she begins gently tugging the dress down off of her hips. Her red thong comes in to view gradually and then the dress drops to the floor. She kicks it away with a flourish. Her hands move back up over her head and she begins swaying her hips to the music’s beat again.

This is Rachel’s cue to bring her hands back down. She massages her breasts and then pinches her nipples enough to make them stand out through the thin fabric of her bra. She unhooks the front clasp of her bra but holds her hands over the cups to keep them in place. After spinning away from Marcus, she shrugs the bra off of her shoulders. This leaves her back fully exposed as she swings her hips to the beat for a moment. She spins back around to face Marcus with her hands covering her breasts. Her hands go from covering to cupping her breasts as she leans forward to offer them to Marcus. Finally she pulls her hands completely away and jiggles her breasts. After a moment of this, her hands drop to the waist band of her panties. She tugs up, pulling the damp fabric tight against her lower lips. She has apparently done some shaving since last visit. Next, she begins tugging her panties down as she turns sideways. She bends at the waist with her knees locked to slowly drag her panties down to her ankles. She steps out of them and kicks them to the side as she stands back up. She begins to swirl her hips and she slowly turns away from Marcus, showing off her lovely rear. Rachel continues to spin until she is facing Marcus with her small “landing strip” of pubic hair exposed. Then she lifts her arms up over her head and goes back to swaying with the beat.

Lauren lets her arms drop slowly to her hips. She begins tugging her thong different directions before dragging it slowly down. The damp fabric clings to her lower lips for a moment before pulling free as her panties slide down her legs to pool around her feet. She scoops up the bit of fabric and puts one of the hip straps in her mouth, letting the rest of the thong dangle. Then she smiles and strikes a pose.

Rachel pulls her arms down and slinks slowly over to Marcus. She is wearing only her heels. She straddles his lap and begins to dance in place. She offers first one breast and then the other for him to suck. Her hard nipples and glistening lower lips show her arousal. Marcus reaches a hand between her legs. She slows her hip movement to give him better access. After a few moments of rubbing his hand over her clit, he slides 2 fingers inside of her. She forgets about dancing and begins pumping herself up and down on his fingers. Marcus watches this spectacle for a bit and then captures a nipple in his mouth. He bites gently and this pushes Rachel over the edge into an orgasm. She jams her hips down onto his hand and cries out in time with the spasms clenching his fingers. When the spasms stop, Marcus pulls his hand out and Rachel collapses straddling his lap. She ends up with her sopping pussy against his erection and her head on his chest as she gasps for breath.

Marcus reaches around Rachel’s body to applaud their performance. “Wow, that was better than I expected! We’ll have to cool this party down a little or it will be over too soon. Lauren, turn off the music and come over here.” He points to the floor by his right knee.

“Yes Sir.” Lauren drops her panties from her mouth. She quickly shuts off and stows the music player. She does her best to strut over to Marcus and her Mom on the sofa. She almost stumbles in her heels, however. Once she arrives, she drops to her knees and lays her head submissively on the sofa next to Marcus’ right knee.

Marcus looks down at Lauren. “If I remember right, you had a birthday last week.”

She sits up on her knees and looks at him. “Yes Sir. It was last Wednesday. I am 18 now!”

“What did your parents get you?”

“Mom and Dad got me the new cell phone I wanted. Also, Mom didn’t put the collar and leash on me all day. Last time we were here, you said that she could put the collar and leash on me on Wednesdays and Sundays. The Wednesday before she made me do yard work while wearing the collar. Last Sunday Dad was at church meetings most of the day. She made me clean the whole house while wearing the maid costume I wore on our second visit here.”

“Have you been more careful about not abusing the power that the collar and leash give you over her?”

“Yes Sir. It is fun having her obey me, but it is a lot less fun having to obey her. I only enjoy obeying you. Well, I guess I enjoy obeying my boyfriend Bill as well. He usually tells me to do fun stuff like be his maid or give him blow jobs.”

“Did Bill get you anything for your birthday?”

“Yes Sir.” Lauren looks down at the floor and blushes. “He got me a card and…” She looks up at her Mom, who has recovered enough to be listening avidly. “…And he umm licked me.”

“Licked you?”

“Yeah, down there.”

“Tell me all about it.”

“Yes Sir.” She looks up, still blushing. “I brought him home from school on my birthday. Dad was still at work and Mom was out. We went up to my room. I took off my top and bra and then I took off his shirt for him. We kissed and I let him play with my breasts for a while. Then I told him that I wanted him to touch me down there. My orgasms are better when he touches me than when I do it myself. He said that he wanted to try something different but not to worry that I would still be a virgin. He took the rest of my clothes off and had me lie on the bed. Then he got between my legs and started licking my clit. It was amazing. It was better than him touching me with his hand. The orgasm was like an explosion. When I recovered, I gave him the best blow job that I could to thank him. I hope he will do it again soon.”

“That does sound like a nice birthday present.” He lifts Rachel’s shoulders up and back until she is looking at his face. She is still on her knees on the sofa, straddling his lap and facing him. “You were really turned on by your stripper performance. Why is that?”

“I still can’t orgasm when making love to my husband. I have to fake it each time. With you, I have massive orgasms; more than I ever imagined possible before we met you.” She hangs her head. “I have started looking forward to our visits here almost as much as Lauren does.”

“Excellent! I am glad to hear that you are enjoying yourself.” Marcus lifts Rachel off of his lap and deposits her on the sofa to his left. “Lauren, get between my knees.” She eagerly moves her nude, sexy body between his thighs. “Take off my pants and underwear.” She initially fumbles with his belt and has to take a moment to calm herself before she can unfasten it. Then she quickly pulls his pants and underwear off. She looks up and her eyes glow with anticipation. “Now, give me your best blow job.”

She smiles brightly, nods once and promptly inhales his erection. She swirls her tongue as she bobs her head up and down his entire length. Her hands are busy running her nails along his inner thighs and gently fondling his balls. Marcus grabs Rachel’s face with both hands and pulls her over for a passionate kiss. He quickly approaches his climax, but shortly before the point of no return, Lauren pops her mouth off and starts gently licking. In between licks she asks, “How long do you want this to take Sir? I can finish you now or ease off and make you last longer.”

Marcus pulls Rachel’s hungry lips away and grunts, “Now!”

Lauren dives back into deep throating Marcus as she hums and works her swallowing muscles. Every few seconds she backs off to breath before cramming Marcus’ erection back down her throat. He switches to sucking on Rachel’s nipples about the time that he erupts into Lauren’s eager mouth. She swallows everything and licks him clean.

“Now, use your mouth to get me hard again. Touch yourself at the same time.” Lauren nods and gets to work. Marcus goes back to kissing Rachel and sucking on her nipples. A few minutes pass before Marcus starts to respond. Once his erection starts to rise, it quickly becomes rigid. Feeling him rising in her mouth turns Lauren on. Along with rubbing her clit, this is enough to push her into an orgasm. Her mind is beginning to associate pleasing Marcus with pleasure.

Marcus pulls away from Rachel and says, “Stop now Lauren.” She releases his erection and looks up expectantly. “Come up here.” He pulls Lauren into his lap and arranges her like her mother was a short while ago. She straddles his lap with her knees on either side of his hips. Marcus grabs her hips and starts rubbing her clit on his erection. She quickly gets the hang of it and starts to move this way on her own. Marcus moves his hands to her perfect breasts and begins to play. He alternates between sucking her nipples and kissing her mouth. Soon, Lauren begins humping herself harder and faster against his erection. When her motions start to get frantic, Marcus gathers his self control and pushes her away. She whimpers but allows herself to be pushed back until both she and Marcus are standing in front of the sofa.

Marcus moves around behind Lauren. “Bend over the sofa.” Lauren quickly complies. She spreads her legs and braces herself.

Marcus reaches between her thighs to stroke her clit. She purrs and then looks back over her shoulder. “Please Sir.” She says desperately.

Marcus continues to stroke Lauren while looking over at Rachel. She is still sitting on the end of the sofa and has been stroking herself. “Rachel, what do you think of me taking your daughter’s virginity?”

She stops stroking herself for a moment to consider. She had been so caught up in the moment that she wasn’t thinking about where this was all headed. “Well, I would rather you do it than Bill.” She pauses another moment while Lauren nods eagerly. Rachel looks Marcus in the eye. “Yes, make her scream Master.”

“Excellent. Stand up behind me and rub your body against me while I do this.” Rachel hops up to obey.

Marcus pulls his hand away from Lauren’s sopping pussy and starts to press his erection into her. Her hands clench the top of the sofa as an unfamiliar feeling of fullness and pressure starts to build. He feels some resistance and pauses to let her adjust. After a moment, she begins to rock her hips back and forth, pushing him in against the resistance. Marcus lets her push back with gradually more pressure until the resistance suddenly vanishes. He grabs her hips to hold her still while she grunts and clenches the sofa even harder.

He waits for her grip on the sofa to loosen. Meanwhile, he enjoys Rachel rubbing her breasts against his back and reaching around to tweak his nipples. When Lauren starts to relax, he starts to stroke in and out. Each time he pushes in a little farther. At first, Lauren just holds still; overwhelmed by the fullness and pressure. Soon, however, the discomfort fades and she begins to push back against his thrusts. Marcus leans forward, reaches around Lauren and starts playing with her breasts. Rachel switches to kissing all over his back while she grinds her clit against his thigh.

Gradually, Lauren begins to move faster and Marcus matches her speed. When she starts to get more frantic, he grabs her hips and forces her to pause for a moment. She groans in frustration but complies. Marcus restarts stroking in and out of her slowly. Lauren matches his speed as she pushes back against him. He draws out Lauren’s first time by maintaining a slow, steady pace. His hands play with her breasts and clit, but never long enough to get her off. Sweat begins to pool in the small of Lauren’s back from her arousal and effort.

Rachel continues to kiss and rub Marcus as she humps his thigh. When Marcus feels the beginnings of his own orgasm, he suddenly picks up speed. Lauren gasps and then matches his speed. Sweat begins to drip from her nipples as Marcus rubs her clit. She begins to make a sound in her throat each time she thrusts back against him. Her sounds get gradually louder and her grip on the sofa tightens.

Marcus feels his own pleasure beginning to peak and leans over Lauren’s back. He whispers in her ear, “I am about to cum inside you.”

She can barely gasp, “Yes Sir, please.”

When he feels his balls start to fire, he rubs her clit faster and tweaks a nipple. Lauren feels the warm rush inside her pussy. Her back arches and she screams as her vision goes white from the pleasure. Even after he finishes firing, Marcus continues to rub her clit, drawing out her orgasm. Finally, her legs buckle and she drops to her knees with her chest on the sofa. Marcus slows her fall as his softening member slips out of her.

Lauren gasps for air and shudders as the last waves of orgasm wash through her mind and body. Marcus turns to Rachel and kisses her passionately. He reaches between her legs and finds her clit. A brief rub is enough to push her over the edge into her second orgasm. Her knees start to buckle and Marcus lowers her to the floor. He sprawls onto the sofa next to Lauren and begins to stroke her hair. After her breathing calms down, Lauren looks up at Marcus.

“Is it always like that Sir?”

“No, not always. But even bad sex is still pretty good.”

Lauren thinks for a moment. “I want to be yours forever, just like Mom. I don’t know why we do what you say, but we always do. I can tell that you have more control over Mom, however. She belongs to you. I want that too. Do whatever magic you need to make Dad agree and keep us both.”

A quiet “Yes, please Master,” floats up from the Rachel on the floor.

Marcus glances back and forth between both women. “That is something to be decided another day. Besides, Duncan will be here soon. Time to get cleaned up.”