The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Introduction: This chapter was modified slightly to make it compatible with the new chapter 4.

Invited Inside

The Third Visit

At exactly noon on Saturday, Duncan, Rachel and their daughter Lauren walk up to Marcus’ door. After sending the women inside, Marcus uses his trance inducer and sends Duncan away. Once this is done, Marcus steps back inside.

“Welcome ladies. I am glad to see you.”

Lauren smiles. “I am glad to see you too Sir.”

Rachel nods in agreement, but doesn’t look as enthusiastic as Lauren.

“Now, let me inspect your outfits.”

Both women come to attention. Rachel again has on a blouse and skirt. Today’s blouse is translucent enough to see the outline of her bra and unbuttoned enough to show a bit of cleavage. Like last time, her skirt comes down to her knees but today has a slit in the front that shows her thighs when she walks or sits. Her shoes have 3 inch heels.

Lauren has on a light, sleeveless sun dress. The front dips down far enough to show some cleavage and a hint of her bra. The dress stops well above her knees, showing off her toned legs well. Her shoes have a slight heel.

Marcus runs his hands over both women, squeezing here and there. “You both look better than last time, so I am pleased.” Both women smile but keep their eyes forward. “Next time you come, however, I want to see you both in very short mini-dresses.” Both women look a bit worried. They are wondering what Duncan will think. Neither knows that Marcus has programmed Duncan to not worry about any unusual behavior from his wife or daughter. “How has it been making your rounds dressed like this?”

Rachel answers, “More people will stop what they are doing to talk with us about our church. I am not sure that we are getting the message across to them, however.”

Lauren chimes in, “Yeah, the men mainly want to look at our chests and legs.”

Marcus chuckles. “Alright, relax and follow me.” He leads them into the living room. “I told you to get sexier maid costumes. Change into them while I get my cameras.”

When Marcus returns to the living room, he finds both women pulling up thigh-high fishnet stockings. They again have identical maid costumes, but much more revealing than last time. Each outfit is a black, very short skirt and a black cropped top, both with white lace trim. This leaves a wide expanse of bare skin between the top and the skirt. Each outfit is accessorized with a small, lacy, white apron and a lace head piece. Their legs are well displayed by the fishnet stockings and high heel shoes. The tops are small enough that Marcus can see both women have on black bras. The skirts are short enough that he expects to see their panties as soon as they start moving around.

They both come over to Marcus and bow, allowing a nice view down the front of their tops.

They speak together, obviously rehearsed, “How may we serve you, Master?”

“Just freeze for the moment.”

Marcus turns on his video camera. He gets some nice shots down their tops and then slowly circles them as they stay bowed forwards. He can see that they both have on black panties, but Lauren’s is a thong. Once he makes a full circle, he parks the video camera on its tripod to free up his hands.

“Rachel, start dusting. Do your best to look sexy while doing it.”

“Yes Master.”

“Lauren, come over with me to the sofa and sit on my lap.”

“Yes Sir.”

With her very short skirt and thong, her bare butt plops down sideways onto his thighs. Marcus is wearing shorts, so he enjoys the skin on skin contact. She wiggles a moment, just to tease him a bit.

Marcus places his hand on her thigh and his other hand on her low back. “Have you been touching yourself like I instructed you?”

“Of course Sir. I am a very good girl and always obey you. Besides, I really like obeying that instruction. I have been making myself orgasm every day at least once.”

“Well, you are a good girl. Have you been practicing blow jobs?”

“Yes Sir, and I hope you will be pleased with me. I thought that I could do better than just practice on the dildo you gave me. I found a guy named Bill to be my boyfriend. I have given him two blow jobs so far. He really seemed to like it.”

“That is taking the initiative. I like that. Now tell me about these blow jobs.”

“The first time was at my house on Monday. I brought Bill home from school. I put the dog collar and leash on Mom and sent her to the basement to do my laundry and ironing. Dad was still at work. I took Bill upstairs to my room. I got topless and let him suck on my breasts. I didn’t realize how good that would feel. Then I put his hand under my skirt and showed him how to touch me to make me orgasm. I found out that it feels way better if someone else does it. I left my top off while I knelt down and gave him my first real blow job. I think it was his first as well. I took him in as far as I could and used my tongue, just like you told Mom to do. I also swallowed just like you said. Poor Bill about passed out.”

“Very good work.”

“Thank you Sir.”

“Now tell me about the second blow job you gave.”

“On Thursday, I had Bill take me shopping at Victoria’s Secret. I used the collar and leash on Mom to make her let me go. Bill was so embarrassed looking around in the store, it was funny. I tried not to laugh at him, however. I figured a good girlfriend shouldn’t do that. Oh, I was wondering Sir; does a good girlfriend obey her boyfriend? I’ve never had a boyfriend before.”

“Yes, you should obey him most of the time. Don’t do anything dangerous or harmful. Don’t do anything illegal. Otherwise you should obey him and serve him as long as he treats you well. If he starts to abuse you, then dump him. If you are not sure if what he is doing is a problem, then ask me.”

“OK, Sir. I will do exactly as you say.”

“Good. Now, you were telling me about shopping at Victoria’s Secret.”

“Right, I picked out the bra and panties that I am wearing now. Bill paid for them, after I gave him my best ‘puppy dog’ eyes and begged a little. I think he actually did it because he wants to see me in them. I saved them, however, for you. I am wearing them for the first time now Sir. May I wear them for Bill later?”

“Yes Lauren, you may. You may also serve him in either of your maid costumes.”

“Thank you, Sir.”

“Now, back to the second blow job.”

“Oh yeah. When we got back to his car, I pulled up my shirt and bra and placed his hands on my bare breasts. Then I leaned over and did the blow job there in the front seat of his car in the mall’s parking lot. That got me really hot. I touched myself at the same time and came right before he did. Then I put my clothes back together and he drove me home.”

“Nice, but don’t get in trouble for doing anything too publically. Also, you may keep having fun with Bill like you have been since none of that is immoral, but you must remain a virgin.”

“Of course, Sir. I explained that to Bill right after the second blow job and he seemed agreeable.”

“Now, it sounds like you are using the dog collar and leash to do more than teach your Mom to do pet tricks.”

Lauren looks down, embarrassed. “You are right, Sir. I hope you don’t mind. Mom didn’t want me to have a boyfriend so I have been putting the collar and leash on her whenever she brings the subject up.”

“Have you been using them to make her do anything else?”

Lauren blushes a bit. “Yes Sir. I make her do all of my chores for me. She only cooks foods that I like. Once, I made her give me a foot massage. I think that the power went to my head a bit because I made her kiss all of my toes, just because I could.”

“I am fine with all of that. In fact, have her wear a maid costume when she is doing your chores as much as you can without your Dad, or anyone else, noticing.”

“Thank you Sir. I am so glad that you are not mad about all that. I really like making her obey me.”

“Don’t worry, I can understand that that sort of urge. Now, speaking of your Mom’s collar and leash, go put them on her and have her crawl over here. I want to see what pet tricks she can do.”

Marcus looks up to see Rachel dusting while bent forward with her cute butt facing him.

Lauren bounces with happiness. “Oh good. I hope you will be pleased.” She gets the collar and leash out of a bag she brought and takes them over to her Mom. She puts on the collar with practiced ease and attaches the leash. “Down, puppy.”

Rachel sets down the duster, sighs and gets down on her hands and knees. Marcus starts the video camera.

“Heel, puppy.”

Rachel crawls beside Lauren as she leads her around the room, gradually working their way over to Marcus. He enjoys looking at Rachel’s breasts down the front of her top.

“Up, puppy.”

Rachel gets up on her knees with her hands held in front of her breasts. Lauren gets a box of crunchy dog treats out of her bag and sets one on her Mom’s nose.

“Stay, puppy.”

Rachel holds still, balancing the treat.

“Ok.”

Rachel tips her head down. The treat slides off of her nose. She catches the dog treat in her mouth and holds it between her teeth, showing it to Marcus. He claps.

“Ok.”

Rachel grimaces and eats the dog treat.

She is able to catch and eat 3 more dog treats the same way without dropping any.

“Good puppy. Now we are going to play catch.”

Rachel gets back down on her hands and knees while Lauren gets a soft, small ball out of her bag. Lauren walks across the room and turns to face her Mom.

“Catch, puppy.”

Lauren tosses the ball to her Mom and Rachel catches it in her mouth.

“Bring it here.” Rachel crawls over to her daughter and places the ball carefully into her outstretched hand. Lauren pats her Mom’s head. “Good puppy.”

Marcus enjoys the view of Rachel’s rear end as she crawls. Her panties are black lace and expose about half of her butt cheeks. Then she crawls back to her original position and gets ready to catch the next toss. She catches the ball a total of 4 times without missing before Lauren stops and puts the ball and dog treats away. Marcus claps again and then shuts off the video camera.

“Take off her collar and leash now.” Lauren puts them back into her bag. “Rachel, crawl over here and kneel between my legs.”

“Yes Master.”

“What do you think of Lauren’s boyfriend?”

“He seems like a nice boy, but I don’t approve of what they are doing together.”

“Well, I’m glad to hear that you approve of him in general. Now, I gave you some homework last time. Did you give your husband a blow job?”

Rachel glances at Lauren, who is listening intently. “Yes Master.”

“Tell me how it went.”

Rachel blushes and briefly glances at Lauren again before answering. “Thursday Duncan came home early from work. Lauren was out shopping.” She pauses to frown at Lauren,” and apparently giving a blow job too.”

“Keep going.”

She looks back at him, contritely. “Yes Master. I told him that I had been reading a woman’s magazine and wanted to try something. I took him into our bedroom and had him sit on the bed. Then I knelt down and did it.”

“What were you wearing?”

Rachel looks puzzled. “The clothes I had been wearing all day: jeans and a button down shirt.”

“From now on, you should at least have your breasts exposed and accessible while giving blow jobs. Completely topless would be even better. Lauren managed to figure that out on her own, so you should have too.”

Rachel looks down, worried. “I am very sorry Master. I will do it right from now on.”

“I am still going to punish you. From now on, do your best to give Lauren and her boyfriend time alone together to have fun.”

She jerks her head up to look at Marcus with wide eyes. After a moment she puts her head back down. “Yes Master. I will do as you say.”

“Good. Now, you were also supposed to have sex with your husband sitting in his lap.”

“I did Master, last week on Wednesday night after Lauren went to bed.”

“Did you orgasm?”

“No Master.”

“Why not?”

“Since we met you, every time I have sex with him I think of it as practicing for the next time I come over here. It makes me too distracted to orgasm.”

“Hmmm. That is interesting. Do you orgasm when Lauren uses the dildo on you?”

“Yes Master. She always puts my collar and leash on and she orders me to.”

“Well, if you aren’t already, fake an orgasm when having sex with your husband. Also, every time you give a blow job, touch yourself at the same time and orgasm when he does. That should keep everyone satisfied.”

“Yes Master.”

“Now, I have seen enough of your maid costumes. It is time to show me your sexy underwear. Stand up Rachel.” She does. “Strip down to your underwear, but make it interesting.”

Marcus turns the video camera back on.

She blushes bright red but begins swaying her body to an invisible beat. She slowly pulls her top off over her head while continuing to sway her hips. The reveals a black demi bra with the cups made of lace. Her D-cup breasts are almost spilling out and her nipples are visible through the thin fabric. Rachel poses for a moment while Marcus nods in appreciation. She starts an exaggerated wiggle as she slowly slides her skirt down off of her hips. Her panties are made entirely out of black lace and sit very low on her hips. They are also cut high enough in the back to leave about half of her butt cheeks visible.

“Leave the stockings and heels on. Now, spin in place slowly so I can see you from every angle.”

Rachel puts her hands up behind her head and turns slowly. She becomes flushed and breathes faster. Marcus isn’t sure if it is from embarrassment or arousal or some of both. He lets her go around twice before deciding that he has seen enough. “Take off the bra and panties but leave the stockings and heels.”

She flushes even more as she tries her best to seductively remove her underwear. She unclasps her bra and then covers her breasts with her hands for a moment before letting the bra slide to the floor. She hooks her thumbs into her panties and slowly slides them down her legs as she bends at the waist with her knees straight. Finally, she tosses them onto the sofa with a flourish.

“Kneel between my legs again. Remove my shorts and underwear while I watch Lauren remove her maid costume.”

Lauren takes her cue and starts to imitate her Mom’s striptease. When she slides her top off, Marcus can see that she is wearing a shelf bra that supports her D-cup breasts but leaves her nipples visible. They are obviously aching for attention. Wiggling out of her skirt reveals a black thong with only a tiny triangle of fabric in the front. It is small enough that Marcus can tell she must have at least trimmed down there. Lauren puts her hands behind her head and throws her chest out. She starts to rotate in place. She is a vision of perfection as each moment reveals new views of her stunning body. Marcus stares until she has gone around 4 times.

“Whoa, I guess that is enough. Come over here.”

“Yes Sir.”

“Did you bring the dildo I gave you?”

“Yes Sir.”

“Good, get it while I go get another one for you.” Marcus heads down the hall while Lauren goes over to her bag. Once they are both back and on the sofa, Marcus gives Lauren the second dildo. It is smaller than her first one.

“Rachel, get on your hands and knees. Lauren, kneel down behind her. Now catch.” He tosses a tube of lube that Lauren catches.

“Rachel, start giving me a blow job.” Her mouth engulfs his erection and she begins bobbing her head up and down while swirling her tongue. She is better than last week, so her practice apparently helped her technique. She can also get him farther down her throat than she could last week. She supports herself on one hand and reaches the other back to rub her clit.

“Lauren, slide the larger dildo into her, like you have been doing this past week.” Lauren lines up the dildo and slides it deftly in. She begins pumping it slowly in and out. “Push it all of the way in and then leave it there. Rachel, don’t let it fall out.” Rachel tilts her hips and tightens her internal muscles to hold the dildo inside. “Lauren, put some lube on the smaller dildo and then slowly push it into her butt.” Rachel gulps but continues to bob her head up and down on Marcus’ erection. Lauren looks up, shocked, for a moment before opening the tube of lube.

Rachel grunts a few times as Lauren slowly forces the dildo into her rear passage, but continues to provide Marcus with the best blow job that she can.

“Now, start pumping both dildos in and out. Try doing them together and alternating to see which gets the best reaction from her.” Lauren soon settles on moving both dildos in and out at the same time.

Rachel begins moaning from arousal. Between rubbing her own clit and the double penetration, she quickly builds up to an orgasm. The blow job falters for a moment as she screams around Marcus’ erection. She quickly gets back on task and switches hands so she can continue to rub her clit while resting her now tired arm. Lauren keeps moving the dildos in and out steadily through all of this.

Rachel is getting close to another orgasm when Marcus grabs her head and pushes it all of the way down onto his erection. “Get ready!” Marcus says sharply and then erupts. Rachel swallows over and over, milking Marcus dry. Her orgasm hits before his has finished. Afterwards, she remembers to lick him clean without prompting.

“You can stop now, Lauren.”

“Ok Sir.”

“Rachel, go get cleaned up, including the dildos, and then get dressed in your regular clothes. Lauren, I have something else to show you.” Marcus gets out a vibrator and turns it on. “Touch yourself with this and see how it feels.”

Lauren slides it around her exposed nipples and they harden even more. Then she pulls aside her thong. She is shaved everywhere except a triangle of hair above her clit.

Marcus raises an eyebrow. “When did you shave down there?”

“This morning Sir. I hope that was OK.”

“Yes, what you did is good, but don’t shave completely. I like it the way you have it.”

“Yes Sir.” She brings the vibrator down and does circles around her clit. Then she starts moving it on and then back off of her clit, almost teasing herself. Her free hand wanders up to her breasts and starts tugging on her nipples. She begins to flush and pant as her pleasure builds. When she is close, she shifts to holding the vibrator right on her clit. Almost immediately she starts screaming and thrashing her way through a massive orgasm. She slowly calms down and collapses into the sofa.

“Wow, that was awesome Sir!”

“Go get cleaned up and dressed in your regular clothes.”

Lauren heads towards the bathroom just as Rachel is leaving it.

“Rachel, come sit on my lap.” She sits down sideways on his lap. He slides one hand up under her blouse and starts caressing her breasts through the thin fabric of her bra. “You will give your husband two topless blow jobs before your next visit. At least one has to be somewhere other than in your bedroom. Also, offer him anal sex. Do your best to convince him. Even if you don’t like it, act like you do and fake a massive orgasm if necessary. Now, give me your most passionate kiss.”

Lauren returns to the room to find her Mom making out with Marcus.

After kissing Rachel for a few moments, Marcus pulls her hand down to his crotch and encourages her to start rubbing. He continues to grope her breasts with one hand. His other hand unzips the back of her skirt and slides in to squeeze her butt. Her hand job gets him fully erect. He pulls her blouse up over her head but not all of the way off. This leaves her arms trapped over her head, tangled in her blouse. He uses one hand to keep her arms trapped over her head while the other pulls her breasts out of her bra. He sucks on her nipples hungrily before kissing her mouth again.

Marcus stands up suddenly, almost dumping Rachel onto the floor. He bends her forward over the front of the sofa with her arms still tangled in her blouse. After groping her breasts some more, he pulls her skirt down to her knees. He yanks aside her panties and quickly stabs his erection into her to the hilt.

She moans and pushes back against him, trying to force him even deeper.

Marcus pounds into her over and over as Rachel begs him to go faster and harder. Finally, Marcus grabs her hips and pulls, forcing himself even deeper just as his orgasm blasts into her. Rachel’s world explodes in pleasure. She can’t even scream. She throws her head back as her vision goes white.

After a several long moments, Marcus pulls out and lets Rachel drop to her knees, quivering and gasping for air.

He looks up to find Lauren in a chair with her dress hiked up enough to reveal both her bra and thong. She has one hand squeezing a nipple and the other inside her panties.

“Lauren,” he says sternly.

She snatches her hands out of her underwear, looking guilty. She can’t meet Marcus’ gaze so she concentrates on pulling down and straightening her dress. Once she is presentable, she looks up. “Sir, are you sure that I have to stay a virgin? I want to feel like that.”

“You are still only 17, so not yet.”

“Yes Sir,” she says with a resigned sigh. Then she brightens up. “My birthday is next week. I will be 18 when we come back the next time in two weeks.”

“Excellent.”

Marcus looks over at the still recovering Rachel. She is kneeling on the floor with her upper body on the sofa. She still has her skirt around her knees, her arms tangled in her blouse and her breasts hanging out of her bra.

“Go get your Mom re-dressed. Make her look presentable before your Dad gets here.”

“Yes Sir.” Lauren starts to pull up her Mom’s skirt. “Same time in two weeks Sir?”

“Of course. Make your Mom go rent a video about strippers and practice for me before next time. Give Bill enough blow jobs that he doesn’t care that you won’t have sex with him.”

“No problem, Sir.”

“Also Lauren, I don’t want your power to go to your head too much. So, on Wednesdays and Sundays your Mom can put the dog collar and leash on you whenever she wants. You must obey her the same way she obeys you.”

Lauren’s eyes get big while Rachel looks over her shoulder and smiles.