The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Introduction: This chapter was modified slightly to make it compatible with the new chapter 4.

Invited Inside

The Second Visit

At exactly noon on Saturday, Duncan, Rachel and their daughter Lauren walk up to Marcus’ door.

“Come on or we’re going to be late.” Lauren urges. “We can’t keep him waiting.”

Rachel sighs, “I know Lauren, I know.”

Lauren rings the door bell and Marcus promptly opens the door.

“Hello.” Marcus says as he steps out onto the front porch. “Ladies, go on inside.” After waiting a moment for them to comply, he turns to Duncan while pulling out his trance inducer. After a few seconds of programming, Duncan is ready to leave his wife and daughter to Marcus’ tender mercies.

Marcus steps inside. “Ladies, I am glad to see you. Now, stand at attention while I inspect your outfits.”

Both women snap to attention with eyes forward. Rachel is wearing a blouse and skirt like last time. Today, however, her green blouse has two buttons undone. Also, her skirt comes down just to her knees. She has on nylons like last time but her shoes have a bit of a heel. Overall, she looks better than last time but still rather conservative.

Lauren has on a short-sleeve dress that stops just above her knees. It covers a modest amount of skin but hugs her curves well.

Marcus completes his inspection with a few pats and squeezes before standing in front of his toys. “You both look better than last time, but still not very sexy. Will you be making your rounds again in 2 more weeks?”

Rachel nods once. “Yes, Master. On Saturday again.”

“Good. Obviously, I want you to visit here again. Next time, I want you both to look more eye-catching and attractive. Now, relax and follow me.”

He leads them into the living room. “Did you bring everything I told you to?”

“Yes Sir.”

“Yes Master.”

“Good. I want to see you in your maid costumes first. Put them on while I go get my video camera.”

After a short while, Marcus returns with his digital camera, his video camera and a tripod. He finds Rachel and Lauren in identical maid costumes. They each have on a short, black, sleeveless dress with white ruffles under the hem and a white apron on the front. White lace chokers and lace hair pieces finish out the outfits. Their legs are bare and are shown off nicely by the short dresses. The outfits are costumes however, not lingerie. They cover enough that they could be worn in public to a Halloween party. The costumes are very daring for women with Rachel and Lauren’s conservative religious background, however.

“Now, I have some tidying up for you both to do. The idea is not just to tidy up, but to look enticing while doing it. Do you understand what I have in mind?”

Lauren shakes her head. “No Sir.”

Rachel shrugs. “Sort of Master.”

“OK, try stuff like this. When you pick something up, bend at the waist with your knees straight. Bend away from me at times so I can see up the back of your dress. Bend towards me at times so I can see down the front of your dress. Stretch up on your toes with your arms over your head at times to show off your figures. That sort of thing should get you started.”

Marcus has intentionally scattered some dirty clothes and stuff around to give them something to clean up. He is hoping to build up some anticipation with tantalizing glimpses of both attractive women.

Both women do some cleaning while posing in their maid costumes. They are rather stiff at first but, after a few helpful suggestions, they loosen up. Lauren becomes particularly good at facing away from Marcus while bending over. She locks her knees and bends at the waist. This gives him a view all the way up her toned legs. Rachel’s best trick is facing Marcus while bending over and showing off her impressive cleavage.

“Freeze, both of you.”

Both women stop moving in the middle of bending over. Rachel has her head held up, to provide a better view down the front of her dress.

Marcus picks up his digital camera. “Smile Rachel.” Her smile looks a bit forced, but Marcus takes some pictures anyway. Then he reaches carefully down the front of her dress and briefly squeezes her D cup breasts through her bra. Once he has finished with this end of her, he walks around and lifts the hem of her dress to reveal her black, satin panties. After a few more pictures, he squeezes her butt cheeks a few times. Next, he walks over to Lauren and lifts the back of her dress. Her panties are white lace. After taking a moment to appreciate the view, he swats her playfully.

“Back to work, ladies.”

A few minutes later Marcus calls both women over to him.

“Lauren, go get the dog collar and leash that you got for your Mom. By the way, has she been obedient while wearing them?”

She nods and scampers over to a grocery bag that she had left on the floor.

“Yes Sir. The whole time she has done whatever I say while she is wearing them.”

“Rachel, take off your dress, but do it as a strip tease. I want to get a good look at the underwear you chose.”

Rachel blushes and glances at Lauren before starting to move her hips to an inaudible beat. She unties the apron and twirls it on a finger a few times before tossing it away. She pulls the dress off of her shoulders and scoots it down slowly off of her chest. A black, satin bra with lace trim is revealed. She continues to sway her hips as she teasingly works the dress down her torso and off of her hips. Soon, matching panties come into view as the dress slides to the floor. Rachel steps out of the dress, kicks it away and strikes a pose. Only when Marcus starts applauding does she notice that the video camera has been recording her performance. Her eyes get big and she blushes, but she holds her pose since Marcus seems to like it.

“Not bad, Rachel. Not bad at all. You do need some more practice, but I am sure we will find time for that at some point. Perhaps I should send you to a strip club to take notes.” Marcus smiles at her mortified expression. “Now, get down on your hands and knees so Lauren can put on your collar and leash.”

Lauren has a pink leather dog collar with fake gems on it. She easily fastens it around her Mom’s neck. Next she attaches a matching pink leash.

“Set the leash down for a moment, Lauren, and remove your dress. I want to see your underwear too.”

Lauren smiles shyly and promptly slips out of her dress. She is left wearing white, lacy bra and panties.

“Now pick up the leash and show me, and the video camera, what your puppy dog can do.”

“Sure.” Lauren looks down at her Mom. “Beg puppy.”

Rachel gets up on her knees and holds her hands in front of her in a begging position.

“Speak puppy.”

Rachel makes some cute little barking sounds.

“Down puppy.”

Rachel lies down on the floor.

“Stay puppy.” Lauren sets the end of the leash down and walks over to the bag on the floor. She pulls out small toy ball with a bell in it. She comes back over to Rachel and picks up the leash. “We are going to play fetch. You know how this works puppy.” Lauren unfastens the leash and sets it on the floor. Then she rolls the jingling ball across the floor and says, “Fetch puppy.”

Rachel scrambles after the ball on her hands and knees. Her rear end wiggles nicely as she scampers across the floor. When she catches up with the ball, she picks it up with her mouth and hurries back to Lauren. When Rachel gets to Lauren’s feet, she sits up on her knees with her hands in front of her breasts and offers the ball, looking embarrassed. Lauren takes the ball out of Rachel’s mouth and pats her head. “Good puppy.” Rachel gets back down on her hands and knees.

Lauren repeats this three more times, sending the ball in a different direction each time. Then she puts the ball back in the bag and gets out a box of crunchy dog treats. She reattaches the leash and says, “up puppy.” Rachel gets back up on her knees with her head tilted back. Lauren places a treat on Rachel’s nose. “Stay puppy.” Rachel holds still, balancing the treat on her nose. After a few seconds, Lauren says “OK”. Rachel quickly tilts her head down and tries to catch the falling dog treat in her mouth, but misses.

Lauren turns to Marcus with a sheepish grin. “We need to work on that part some more. I promise she will have it down by the next time we come over.” She looks down at Rachel. “Bad puppy. Clean up the mess you made.”

Rachel looks horribly embarrassed but leans down and eats the dog treat off of the floor.

Marcus smiles and nods. “Good, now have your puppy sit and stay.” Once Rachel is sitting on her heels, Marcus leads Lauren over to the sofa.

“Lauren, have you been touching yourself?”

She smiles brightly. “Yes sir, almost every day.”

“Excellent. Show me.”

Lauren sits her butt on the very edge of the sofa and leans back. Both hands start with her breasts. She rubs and then pulls on her nipples through her bra. After a few moments of this, she opens her front-clasp bra and exposes her lovely D cup breasts. She goes back to caressing and tugging with more enthusiasm. About the time she starts moaning, one hand slides down to rub her belly in small circles. This hand gets gradually lower and lower until it slips inside her panties. Her eyes close. She continues to rub in circles around her clit. The circles get gradually smaller until she is rubbing 2 fingers directly on her clit. Now her moaning picks up and her hips begin to move in small circles. Her body begins to glisten with sweat. Her hands begin to move faster as her hips begin bucking. Her thrashing builds until her pleasure boils over into an orgasm. She throws her head back and arches her back while rubbing her clit furiously with both hands. She screams incoherently as her hips buck wildly with spasms of pleasure. Marcus is amazed by the spectacle. She slowly calms down and relaxes limply into the sofa. After a few moments of catching her breath, she opens her eyes and looks at Marcus. “That feels way better when I do it with someone watching.”

Marcus nods in mock seriousness. “Well, do try to be discrete.”

Lauren smiles. “Of course Sir. I will be the very picture of discretion.”

“Now, go take off puppy’s collar so she can be Rachel again while I go get something to show you.”

Lauren nods and hurries over to her Mom. The collar and leash are quickly removed and placed back in the bag along with the dog treats. Rachel remains kneeling on the floor.

Marcus leaves the room and returns with a dildo. He hands it to Lauren. “Do you know what this is?”

She looks very embarrassed and holds it hesitantly. “Well, some girls at school have talked about this sort of thing.” She stares at it for a moment. “Are men really this big?”

“That is a medium size dildo. So, some men are smaller and some are larger than that.”

“Some are larger?” She asks incredulously.

Marcus sits on the sofa next to Lauren. She hasn’t bothered to refasten her bra so her breasts are still exposed. Marcus looks across the room. “Rachel, crawl over here and kneel between my legs.” Once she has arrived, Marcus looks over at Lauren. “Finish taking off your bra and then take off your Mom’s.”

Lauren slips her bra off of her shoulders and lays it on the end of the sofa by her maid costume. Then she leans over her Mom, with her breasts dangling in front of Marcus, and removes her Mom’s bra. She lays it next to hers.

Marcus puts his hand under Rachel’s chin and lifts her face up. “Have you ever given a blow job before?”

Rachel glances at her daughter, who is looking on with avid interest, before replying, “Once.”

“Was that before or after you met your husband?”

“After.”

“Well, now you get a chance to do it a second time. Remove my pants and underwear.”

Rachel unfastens his pants. When she starts to pull his pants and underwear down, his erection springs into view. She pauses, almost mesmerized, for a few seconds before catching herself and pulling everything completely off.

“Rachel.” She looks back up at Marcus’ face. “In a moment I want you to give me the best blow job you can. Since you are a beginner, I will coach you along.” Rachel nods slightly.

Marcus turns to Lauren. “I want you to practice what your Mom is doing on the dildo. This is an important skill for someone who wants to remain a virgin but still keep a boyfriend happy.” Lauran nods and grips the base of the dildo with both hands, looking determined.

“OK Rachel, begin.”

She starts with a few tentative licks around the shaft. The light touch is only mildly stimulating.

“Try some more licking, but stronger.”

She sticks her tongue out more and licks up the entire length of his shaft.

“Better, do that all around.”

Rachel’s tongue starts to move back and forth around his shaft while she drags it up towards the tip. Then she rolls her tongue around and around the tip before licking back down. This produces a pleased “Hmmm” noise from Marcus so she repeats this a few times.

“Now uses your whole mouth, but no teeth.”

Rachel pauses to look up at Marcus with an unreadable expression before turning her gaze back to his erection. She opens her mouth and gently closes it around the tip. Then she slowly slides her mouth down his shaft as far as she can.

“Good, keep doing that for now.”

Marcus watches Rachel slide her warm mouth up and down and then turns his attention to Lauren. She is sliding her mouth up and down the dildo with her eyes intently focused on her Mom’s performance.

“Rachel, add some suction and swirl your tongue around as you go.” Watching both Rachel and Lauren working so diligently quickly builds his arousal.

“Faster Rachel, and go as far down as you can each time.” She speeds up and is able to take him a bit deeper into her mouth without gagging.

“Oohh, I am going to cum. You must swallow every bit. You must always swallow when a man cums in your mouth.” Marcus grabs Rachel’s head and forces her to speed up even more. This quickly brings him to his peak and he fires into her mouth. Rachel shudders but obediently swallows over and over until he is finished.

“Now, lick everything clean.” Rachel delicately complies.

“Rachel, take off your panties”. Rachel stands and slides her panties to the floor. “Now, lie on the sofa on your back.”

Marcus takes the dildo from Lauren. “Your Mom is the only one who hasn’t had an orgasm so far, but we will fix that.” Rachel looks at Marcus with some trepidation. “Bend your knees and spread your thighs, Rachel.” She slowly does as instructed. “Now Lauren, watch what I do closely. You will be doing this to her later. First, suck on that a few more times to make sure it is nice a wet.”

Lauren slides her mouth up and down the dildo with a smile before handing it to him. Marcus uses his left hand to spread Rachel’s lower lips. Then he points with the dildo. “Lauren, this is where it goes.” He slides the dildo into Rachel as far as it will go. She grunts slightly. “Now I will start sliding it in and out. Watch her breathing. When she starts breathing faster, I will start moving this faster.” After several strokes, Rachel starts to moisten more and breathe faster. “Lauren, it is time to start touching her on your favorite spot.” He moves his left index finger to Rachel’s clit and begins rubbing in small circles. She gasps and starts to thrust her hips slightly in time with the dildo thrusts. “This part will be easy for you. Just touch her the way you would like to be touched.” Rachel continues to pump her hips and begins to pant. Marcus speeds up as her panting gets faster. “Lauren, see how flushed she is getting and how fast she is panting. That should be familiar because it is how you look just before you cum. Rachel, am I right, are you about to cum?”

Rachel tries to nod while panting and thrusting her hips harder. Marcus suddenly stops moving both hands. “Rachel, I asked you a question.”

“Oh, yes Master. I’m so sorry Master. I am so close. Please don’t stop, I need it so badly.”

“I forgive you.” Marcus starts moving the dildo again and quickly picks up speed to his previous pace. After a few more moments, he starts rubbing her clit again. Rachel quickly builds back up to a climax. Marcus pushes the dildo in as far as it will go and rapidly rubs on her clit while Rachel gasps and moans through her orgasm.

Once Rachel has calmed down, he pulls the dildo out and hands it to Lauren. “Take this and your clothes to the bathroom. Clean it off and get dressing in your maid outfit again.”

“Rachel, get back down on your knees and start sucking until I am hard again.” Once she has moved off of the sofa, Marcus sits down and she crawls between his knees. She takes his semi-hard erection in her mouth and begins sucking. She has remembered his comments and does a better job right from the start. He reaches down and plays with her breasts. Her nipples start to react about the time he gets fully hard.

“Climb onto my lap and sit yourself down with me inside you.”

She gulps, “Yes Master.”

Rachel climbs onto his lap and wraps her legs around his waist before lowering herself carefully onto his erection. She sits there, looking embarrassed.

Marcus waits a moment and then glares at her. “Well, start moving. I did all of the work for your first orgasm so now it is your turn.”

“Oh, sorry Master.” She starts lifting and dropping her hips up and down on his erection.

After a few unsatisfactory moments Marcus asks, “Have you ever done it this way before?”

“No Master.”

Marcus grabs her hips and starts guiding her movements. “Well, you need to practice. Do your husband this way at least once before the next time you come over.”

“Yes Master.”

“Oh, and you need to practice blow jobs too so give him at least one of those as well.”

“But, I we have never done either of those things withhim before. I am afraid that he will start to wonder what is wrong with me.”

Marcus programmed her husband to not worry about any strange behavior from his wife or daughter, but Rachel doesn’t know this.

“Wait, you said that you had given one blow job before. When was that?”

“That night when I was so drunk, with Lauren’s biological father. I barely remember doing it.”

“Well, you obviously didn’t learn much from doing it that time, so you will do your husband both ways before next time.”

Rachel sighs, “Yes Master.”

“Speaking of your husband, did you seduce him 3 times like I told you?”

“Yes Master. He was kind of tired by the third time so I had a hard time persuading him.”

“Where did you do this?”

Rachel looks puzzled. “In our bedroom of course.” Then her eyes get huge. “Are you going to order me to…?”

“Probably, but not right now.”

Lauren walks back into the family room and stops suddenly. “Sir! What are you and Mom doing?”

“We are doing exactly what you think we are doing, but don’t worry. Remember how I explained to you that nothing you do while obeying me is immoral?”

“Yes Sir.”

“Anything your Mom does while obeying me isn’t immoral either, so there is no problem with us having sex.”

Lauren takes a moment to process this. “Umm, Ok, if you say so, Sir.”

“Now, start dusting around this room while posing for me, like you did earlier.”

Lauren’s smile returns. “Yes Sir.” She begins bending and stretching; showing off her long, toned legs, her cleavage and sometimes her white, lacy panties.

Marcus guides Rachel into tilting and rocking her pelvis as she lifts up and down. This increases Marcus’ pleasure. It also starts rubbing her clit against his pubic bone, so she enjoys it more as well. She begins to sweat from the effort but feels too good to care.

“Oh Master, this is so good.”

When Marcus reaches his climax, he grabs Rachel’s hips and stands up, holding her with his hands under her butt. This drives him even deeper into her and grinds her clit against him. She screams through a huge orgasm as Marcus fires inside her.

Lauren drops her feather duster in surprise and watches all of this with wide eyes.

“Rachel, lick me clean, like you did after the blow job.”

She almost hesitates before obeying. Marcus pats her on the head as she finishes. “Now, go clean up in the bathroom and put on your regular clothes.”

“Yes Master.” She scoops up her clothes and hurries down the hall.

“Lauren, stop dusting and change into your regular dress.”

“Yes Sir.” She calmly unties the apron around her waist and pulls her maid costume off over her head. While she is pulling on her dress, Marcus gives her instructions for the coming two weeks.

“Lauren, I want you to use the dildo on your Mom, like I showed you, until she orgasms. Do it at least 3 times before your next visit. Put the collar and leash on her first so she can’t object. Also, practice giving blow jobs. See how far you can take the dildo into your mouth without gagging.”

“No problem, Sir.”

A short while after Lauren finishes dressing her Mom returns from the bathroom dressed in her blouse and skirt.

“I want you both here at noon again in two weeks. Now, both of you did an adequate job of acquiring sexy underwear, but I want better than adequate. I want to see you in some really sexy, really revealing underwear next time. Also, you got maid costumes, but not sexy maid costumes. I want to see you in more revealing maid costumes next week as well. Any questions?”

“No Sir.”

“No Master.”

“Good. Duncan should have arrived a few minutes ago and I expect he is waiting for you on the front porch. Off you go.”