I read both parts and loved it.
I can't tell if that second part was the end of the series or not though because, well not giving the "ending", it seemed open ended and kinda sad.

You really captured the feel and tone of all the ponies though and I was instantly taken in by it. Also great detail in the background characters too.

I look forward too more!

If you stop there,

Don't plan on waking up tomorrow.

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lol don't worry i read his explanation at the bottom and it said there are at least 2 more to come.

#3 is sooo sad...

Please hurry with number 4 cause i must know the ending now or i will be super sad for very long.