I read the part with Fluttershy describing her ideal crush in her voice. So adorable.


Hope there's more!

Indeed, I posted on the other chan and got a good response so stayed up writing a little more
(warning, not-totally-hetero ahead)

I was hoping to get a story worth reading before I headed into college. I have not been disappointed.

.. of the epic:P Well not really.
Condensing the three parts into one image on the other chan, but you bronies have to suffer
Warning, potential incoming femslash!

Was following this on /co/, hope you finish this soon! It's really well written, lol, which makes a nice change

>>136
Yeah, you've done the characters justice. Really looking forward to the next part.

This was rather sweet. I'd like to see a continuation of this.

Final part of Campfire stories.
Pony kissing, emotional d'aww, etc
I'll most likely write more of this, though I have my eye on something much longer.

>>150
That was wonderfully written. You have a real talent for writing.

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Awww
Thank you all. Glad you liked it. /co/ 's a little distracted with cupcakes and drawing right now *^__^*

Fucking Beautiful! Moar plz!

>>154

Well this particular story is done. I might either do a longer, serious one or a Fluttershy shippy one in the same ponyverse as this.

AWESOME.

Will read more if it's ever made.

Since you're warning about it... what does shippy mean? I'm new to this kinda stuff

>>164
shipping = romantic slash fiction
(Eg. Pinkie/Dash)

AMAZING! I would LOVE to see more from you. Dont stop being amazing :)

>>116
>Pinkie thought she found her ideal stallion
>Doesn't like him because he enjoys popping balloons
>Pinkie's flank mark is balloons

Translation: Pinkie found a guy she liked, but turned him down after she found out that all he wanted to do was "pop her balloons"
This story has added many new innuendos to my vocabulary. :D

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This story was very enjoyable. It actually felt plausible and in-character. I don't usually read a lot of shipping stories, but I really loved this one.
I'll definitely be on the lookout for any future stories you write.

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this is the first shipping I've ever read (still don't quite know what it means) and it was pretty good. I can relate to twilight and rainbow dash, though I never thought of experimenting with a brony before, too much into chicks. great read

This made me facehoof in the greatest of ways

BTW. The Mask from the movie, The Mask, Is the only person I will ever hear say:
"Anypony else decide they like the candy vag?"

One final thing :P Be cause i loved it so much, I'm going to write an alt ending. I hardly EVER do this, and when I do i only do it with extremely well written stories, And while i was reading this, the tension was amazing, and i felt that a surprise ending i thought up would work somewhat as well as your's did :P

(note) its alot shorter. And it's sheer comedy.


Smiling as she moved to finish packing, Rarity called over her shoulder:" If I do she'll be one in a millionohHORSEAPPLES.
All the other ponies stopped right in their tracks and yelled "WHAT!?!?!"

:P

>>120
When I read that, I had to think at exactly this 1/30 second. ^_^

Just finished. This was such a sweet story! I had to smile all the time, while reading it. :D

The picture pretty much describes my emotional state throughout reading this story. Although I agree that the whole 'candy vag' thing was perhaps a leeeeetle out of step with the overall tone, not to mention the general sexual undertone (the 'that's not where you put a horn' thing made me cringe), I did still find this fic very enjoyable, not to mention cute and well in-character. I'm glad that Rarity was able to play a part in the happy ending (it was an unexpected twist, to say the least) - although it seemed to me as though her last words were tinted with melancholy.

Now, if you will excuse me, I must go and find a mop and bucket so that I may clean up the glutinous puddle on the floor that was up until recently my heart. I need to re-freeze it in preparation for any future Fluttershy fics you may write (oh please oh please oh PLEASE!). Good work and good night, Northern Lights.

WOWZERS. That was very well done, though I agree the horn and the candy vag thing may have been a bit much. Not necessarily the sexuality of it, just the awkwardness of the words. The horn statement made me groan like when I read a bad pun, and candy vag just sounds weird, but I saw where you were trying to go with it. If you look at any group of teen girl friends nowadays, they will joke around like that, so good show overall.

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Pic deleted? It wasn't that hard, was it? D:

(It was the scene from Dragonshy, where Twilight bumps Fluttershy's behind to make her get up and I put the last scentence from the second story part over it.)

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Nothing was intentionally deleted, just a slight mistake.
Please see the home page for more info.

>>272
Thanks for the enlightment. :D So I don't have to feel bad about uploading it again.

Hey, readin the story now, really liking it. Some constructive criticism though - be careful with your tenses - it jumps from past to present a wee bit. Also, you say about pinky maybe enjoying having mer mane set on fire that
>"even with the unicorn it's be a close thing"
- I thought Pinky was an earth pony? I teach English, so can't help but point out little things like that, sorry! But this is just little stuff, the rest is really cool ^_^
I've only just started reading, and just wanted to let you know that it's really awesome, I really like it - the bit where Twilight blushes had me get all uncomfortable and twitchy like it was me, very well don