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Campfire Stories (extremely shippy) Northern Lights 11/02/20(Sun)23:28 No. 116

> Shippy, and talking about shipping, and full of girly stuff. Thou hast been warned.
> (incomplete, will post as I write more)

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>> | Mute!!IvMzMyZGIy 11/02/21(Mon)01:06 No. 118 I read the part with Fluttershy describing her ideal crush in her voice. So adorable. Hope there's more!

>> | Northern Lights 11/02/21(Mon)01:58 No. 120 File 129828230961.png - (102.45KB , 600x1401 , ponyfic2.png ) Indeed, I posted on the other chan and got a good response so stayed up writing a little more (warning, not-totally-hetero ahead)

>> | Anonymous 11/02/21(Mon)02:10 No. 121 I was hoping to get a story worth reading before I headed into college. I have not been disappointed.

>> | Part three Northern Lights 11/02/21(Mon)09:09 No. 130 File 129830819818.png - (117.42KB , 600x1554 , ponyfic3.png ) .. of the epic:P Well not really. Condensing the three parts into one image on the other chan, but you bronies have to suffer Warning, potential incoming femslash!

>> | Anonymous 11/02/21(Mon)11:57 No. 136 Was following this on /co/, hope you finish this soon! It's really well written, lol, which makes a nice change

>> | Anonymous 11/02/21(Mon)12:05 No. 137 >>136 Yeah, you've done the characters justice. Really looking forward to the next part.

>> | Star !LiteAAhd/Y 11/02/21(Mon)20:32 No. 148 File 129834914674.jpg - (143.29KB , 531x475 , woo hoo.jpg ) This was rather sweet. I'd like to see a continuation of this.

>> | Final part Northern Lights 11/02/21(Mon)20:46 No. 150 File 129834997175.png - (155.62KB , 600x2070 , ponyfic4.png ) Final part of Campfire stories. Pony kissing, emotional d'aww, etc I'll most likely write more of this, though I have my eye on something much longer.

>> | Star !LiteAAhd/Y 11/02/21(Mon)21:37 No. 151 >>150 That was wonderfully written. You have a real talent for writing.

>> | Northern Lights 11/02/21(Mon)22:00 No. 153 File 129835440632.png - (352.65KB , 705x401 , mlpfim_ep0105.png ) >>136 >>137 >>148 >>151 Awww Thank you all. Glad you liked it. /co/ 's a little distracted with cupcakes and drawing right now *^__^*

>> | Anonymous 11/02/21(Mon)23:06 No. 154 Fucking Beautiful! Moar plz!

>> | Northern Lights 11/02/21(Mon)23:23 No. 156 >>154 Well this particular story is done. I might either do a longer, serious one or a Fluttershy shippy one in the same ponyverse as this.

>> | Anonymous 11/02/22(Tue)02:37 No. 161 AWESOME. Will read more if it's ever made.

>> | Anonymous 11/02/22(Tue)03:19 No. 164 Since you're warning about it... what does shippy mean? I'm new to this kinda stuff

>> | Anonymous 11/02/22(Tue)05:01 No. 166 >>164 shipping = romantic slash fiction (Eg. Pinkie/Dash)

>> | Jsbb 11/02/22(Tue)12:53 No. 177 AMAZING! I would LOVE to see more from you. Dont stop being amazing :)

>> | Twilight is !/mYWaIfu4E 11/02/23(Wed)12:34 No. 213 File 129849324284.png - (118.66KB , 453x531 , 1294324514916-(n1296553238019).png ) >>116 >Pinkie thought she found her ideal stallion >Doesn't like him because he enjoys popping balloons >Pinkie's flank mark is balloons Translation: Pinkie found a guy she liked, but turned him down after she found out that all he wanted to do was "pop her balloons" This story has added many new innuendos to my vocabulary. :D >>116 >>120 >>130 >>150 This story was very enjoyable. It actually felt plausible and in-character. I don't usually read a lot of shipping stories, but I really loved this one. I'll definitely be on the lookout for any future stories you write.

>> | Ocean light!dx9GdjgC/U 11/02/24(Thu)04:46 No. 241 >>213 this is the first shipping I've ever read (still don't quite know what it means) and it was pretty good. I can relate to twilight and rainbow dash, though I never thought of experimenting with a brony before, too much into chicks. great read

>> | Arc!TEMPeStR9o 11/02/24(Thu)09:24 No. 246 This made me facehoof in the greatest of ways

>> | Arc!TEMPeStR9o 11/02/24(Thu)09:28 No. 247 BTW. The Mask from the movie, The Mask, Is the only person I will ever hear say: "Anypony else decide they like the candy vag?"

>> | Alt ending Arc!TEMPeStR9o 11/02/24(Thu)09:37 No. 248 One final thing :P Be cause i loved it so much, I'm going to write an alt ending. I hardly EVER do this, and when I do i only do it with extremely well written stories, And while i was reading this, the tension was amazing, and i felt that a surprise ending i thought up would work somewhat as well as your's did :P (note) its alot shorter. And it's sheer comedy. Smiling as she moved to finish packing, Rarity called over her shoulder:" If I do she'll be one in a millionohHORSEAPPLES. All the other ponies stopped right in their tracks and yelled "WHAT!?!?!" :P

>> | Kitten Nibble!Ciu0zbOdx. 11/02/24(Thu)14:08 No. 252 File 129858528563.jpg - (52.89KB , 600x343 , usehorncap.jpg ) >>120 When I read that, I had to think at exactly this 1/30 second. ^_^

>> | Kitten Nibble!Ciu0zbOdx. 11/02/24(Thu)14:46 No. 253 Just finished. This was such a sweet story! I had to smile all the time, while reading it. :D

>> | Lexie Sapphire!!Z5MwD1BQx1 11/02/24(Thu)17:55 No. 258 File 129859892423.jpg - (261.27KB , 523x600 , 129858560661.jpg ) The picture pretty much describes my emotional state throughout reading this story. Although I agree that the whole 'candy vag' thing was perhaps a leeeeetle out of step with the overall tone, not to mention the general sexual undertone (the 'that's not where you put a horn' thing made me cringe), I did still find this fic very enjoyable, not to mention cute and well in-character. I'm glad that Rarity was able to play a part in the happy ending (it was an unexpected twist, to say the least) - although it seemed to me as though her last words were tinted with melancholy. Now, if you will excuse me, I must go and find a mop and bucket so that I may clean up the glutinous puddle on the floor that was up until recently my heart. I need to re-freeze it in preparation for any future Fluttershy fics you may write (oh please oh please oh PLEASE!). Good work and good night, Northern Lights.

>> | FOXGEAR!FXGexHXcKg 11/02/24(Thu)19:26 No. 263 File 129860441694.png - (144.62KB , 475x797 , 1298600648951.png ) WOWZERS. That was very well done, though I agree the horn and the candy vag thing may have been a bit much. Not necessarily the sexuality of it, just the awkwardness of the words. The horn statement made me groan like when I read a bad pun, and candy vag just sounds weird, but I saw where you were trying to go with it. If you look at any group of teen girl friends nowadays, they will joke around like that, so good show overall.

>> | Kitten Nibble!Ciu0zbOdx. 11/02/24(Thu)22:52 No. 270 >>252 Pic deleted? It wasn't that hard, was it? D: (It was the scene from Dragonshy, where Twilight bumps Fluttershy's behind to make her get up and I put the last scentence from the second story part over it.)

>> | Anonymous ## Mod ## 11/02/24(Thu)23:03 No. 272 >>270 Nothing was intentionally deleted, just a slight mistake. Please see the home page for more info.

>> | Kitten Nibble!Ciu0zbOdx. 11/02/25(Fri)01:19 No. 275 File 129862554466.jpg - (52.89KB , 600x343 , usehorncap.jpg ) >>272 Thanks for the enlightment. :D So I don't have to feel bad about uploading it again.

>> | Anonymous 11/02/25(Fri)21:42 No. 289 File 129869897749.jpg - (32.76KB , 604x588 , 1297231221131.jpg ) Hey, readin the story now, really liking it. Some constructive criticism though - be careful with your tenses - it jumps from past to present a wee bit. Also, you say about pinky maybe enjoying having mer mane set on fire that >"even with the unicorn it's be a close thing" - I thought Pinky was an earth pony? I teach English, so can't help but point out little things like that, sorry! But this is just little stuff, the rest is really cool ^_^ I've only just started reading, and just wanted to let you know that it's really awesome, I really like it - the bit where Twilight blushes had me get all uncomfortable and twitchy like it was me, very well don

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