I've worked very hard and I think I need critique from builders so I can learn more and improve my build.
My plot warp is: s76 Please come and critique
Posted 04 November 2015 - 02:14 PM
I've worked very hard and I think I need critique from builders so I can learn more and improve my build.
My plot warp is: s76 Please come and critique
Posted 05 November 2015 - 07:20 PM
This is a really great build! I might argue it's a little big and the exterior is a little too square in places, but that aside it looks wonderful.
Your interior decorations are great, but try using different wood colours for chairs so that there's some contrast between the floor and furniture. Secondly, the room with all the chests in it is a little bit weird. I get that it's probably meant to be some sort of pantry, but bear in mind admins are looking for aesthetics, not practicality - floor to ceiling chests may be practical in a survival game, but this is a creative server.
As for the exterior, generally you've nailed the Ponyville look but the house could do with a couple of window boxes. Also, the sizes of most of your windows are far too big! 4x2 should be a maximum, not an average. However, since it suits the house so well I think I can excuse this and just ask you make the window at the top right of the front of the house a little smaller. That aside, the exterior really is lovely - I like the greenery on the roof a lot, and the structure of the roof itself is fab!
Very well done, this a great build and I'm fairly sure it would pass. :3
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