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#1 rterwa

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 05:18 AM

plot /s11


Is that more to an admin's liking?

#2 Dethklok78

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 09:26 PM

We're going to let you improve this house. The entrance hallway needs some furnishings, and the kitchen and bathroom could be a bit nicer. The attic is currently wasted space- it's just bookshelves. You could turn that room into something useful. Also add some lighting inside. Please make the recommended changes and post here when you are done.

#3 rterwa

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Posted 31 March 2012 - 11:26 PM

We're going to let you improve this house. The entrance hallway needs some furnishings, and the kitchen and bathroom could be a bit nicer. The attic is currently wasted space- it's just bookshelves. You could turn that room into something useful. Also add some lighting inside. Please make the recommended changes and post here when you are done.

Ok I will!
I promise!

#4 Verdana

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 09:49 AM

Sorry does this mean you are ready for a second review of the house?

#5 rterwa

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Posted 07 April 2012 - 04:30 PM

Sorry does this mean you are ready for a second review of the house?

Yes but unfortunately Ill need more time on the house...sorry.
my mother took me to rehoboth beach for spring break and the house we're staying in has no internet connection at the time so I cannot login to the brohoof server at this time. I will be coming back home on sunday so I would like to please ask for an extention on my deadline for the house.
Thanks for the consideration!
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#6 Verdana

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 05:30 PM

Okay you have another one week starting now.

#7 rterwa

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Posted 08 April 2012 - 11:09 PM

Thanks Mick! :-P

#8 rterwa

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 01:37 AM

OK I hope it passes! I spent weeks on it!

#9 iffie668

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Posted 14 April 2012 - 02:58 AM

Rejected. This was unfortunately your last attempt.

Firstly, it seems that you had overhanging roofs at one point, but then you decided to remove them, so now it looks a bit wierd. The outside could also have used more wooden supports.

The foyer could have used a little more furniture/decoration, maybe a rug or closet. The kitchen seems like you took one of every block generally found in a kitchen and just placed them together without too much thinking about it. Would have also liked to see a better/more defined living room area.

For the second floor, it would have been nice if you had separated the stairwell from the bedroom with a wall, and perhaps furnished the bedroom more, it is very bare. Same with the third floor.

Edited by iffie668, 14 April 2012 - 02:59 AM.



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