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#1 Lieutenant Delta

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:00 PM

This is the layout to introduce your OC (To get in you need 3 yes votes, or a instant yes from the owner):

 

 

Name: (Of your OC)

 

Race: (Anything canon EXCEPT ALICORNS)

 

Gender: (Oak: Are you a boy or a girl?)

 

Estimated age: (This doesnt have to be exact, just around what you think to have a general idea)

 

Appearance: (A picture, or written out in detail)

 

Talent: (What he or she is good at)

 

Bio: (What did your OC do before the attacks. This can be as long as you want, just give us enough information)

 

2nd Bio: (What happened to yours OC when the bots invaded)

 

 

Rules of OOC:

 

 

 1. Dont Fight

 

 2. Only talk about the Roleplay, dont go to far off topic 

 

 

What happens when you join

 

YOU MUST FOLLOW SWIMCHAMP'S DIRECTIONS! To enter, we need to keep the plot inline, she may say you need to wait before introducing yourself. Also, your OC may be put into a specific spot, so that the main group doesnt get to packed. Do not get angry! This is to insure the RP doesnt go downhill in randomness! 


Edited by Swimchamp565, 13 June 2013 - 10:48 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:06 PM

*nevermind*


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:09 PM

Name: Ella Rose

Race: Earth Pony

Gender: Female

Estimated Age: 20

Appearance: (My picture to the left of my name.) A light pink mare with a curly bleach blonde mane. She has a Rose for a cutie mark.

Talent: Her talent is cosmatology. She is good with makeup, disguises, and doing hair.

Bio: Ella Rose attended Manehattan University before the attacks. She was studying Cosmatology. Her mother is dead, and her dad is married to her step mom. The mare lived in a wealthy family.

Bio2: Ella was going to gt engaged by her boyfriend, but the robots killed him in front of her. She gathered supplies and hid away in a local arcade where she had some provisions, but not a lot.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:13 PM

Name: Ana Belle

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Gender: Female

 

Estimated age: 23

 

Appearance: th1kbg6.jpg

 

Talent: Ana's talented in all forms of science. Her cutie mark is a microscope

 

Bio: Ana Belle is the head professor in the Science wing of Canterlot University. Before the war happened, Ana experienced a very upsetting break up. When Ana became pregnant with her son, her fiance wasnt ready to accept the responsibility and left her 5 months pregnant. Ana was then attacked by the press (Being a important figure in Canterlot) she then moved to Ponyville to get away from it all. She gave birth to her son, Zeus and took a small break before continuing work in Canterlot. (This is abridged, it has much, much more detail)

 

2nd Bio: Ana was in her home in Ponyville when the first wave of machines attacked. Luckily, when the armies marched into the streets of Ponyville, she was able to hide underground in her lab. Once the waves past, Ana was shocked to see what happened to Ponyville when she came out. It was all ash, and when she took a step out the door robots targeted her and her only 3 months foal, down. Ana being very athletic was able to run, and traveled to Manehatten to seek refuge. She did find this in one of the older building, she then spent most of her time studying the mysterious enemy in the locked down fortress she cleverly created.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Name: Zeus Belle

 

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Gender: Male

 

Estimated age: 3 months

 

Appearance: (The grey foal with a brown mane on Ana's side above)

 

Talent: Zeus is only a foal, and shows no real talent yet

 

Bio: Zeus Belle was born to his mother Ana Belle, and stayed with her though all of her work in Canterlot. He is very clever, but is a young age and hasnt developed a character yet.

 

2nd Bio: Zeus was protected very well by his mother on there trip to seek refuge in Manehatten 


Edited by Swimchamp565, 19 May 2013 - 08:17 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:17 PM

Name: Spark Thundervolt

 

Race: Earth pony

 

Gender: stallion

 

Estimated age: 26

 

Appearance:

Spoiler

 

Talent: Spark is one of the best at archery in Equestria.  He is good with knives and short swords, and he can sneak around pretty well without being detected.

 

Bio: Before the robots had invaded Equestria, Spark was in the Ranger Corps, a secret military organization founded by Luna.  Rangers dealt with border problems and problems that the ordinary royal guard couldn't handle. 

 

2nd Bio:  When the robots attacked, he was defending Luna with his mentor Jace, who was eventually killed in battle while Spark got away.  Now Spark walks the roads of Equestria looking for survivors and hunting down the last robots.


Edited by Npawesome, 21 May 2013 - 11:32 PM.


#6 Lieutenant Delta

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:20 PM

Name: Ella Rose

Race: Earth Pony

Gender: Female

Estimated Age: 20

Appearance: (My picture to the left of my name.) A light pink mare with a curly bleach blonde mane. She has a Rose for a cutie mark.

Talent: Her talent is cosmatology. She is good with makeup, disguises, and doing hair.

Bio: Ella Rose attended Manehattan University before the attacks. She was studying Cosmatology. Her mother is dead, and her dad is married to her step mom. The mare lived in a wealthy family.

Bio2: Ella was going to gt engaged by her boyfriend, but the robots killed him in front of her. She gathered supplies and hid away in a local arcade where she had some provisions, but not a lot.

Accepted by the owner. Welcome to the RP. Do not start, we are waiting for a few more characters



Name: Spark Thundervolt

 

Race: Earth pony

 

Gender: stallion

 

Estimated age: 26

 

Appearance:

Spoiler

 

Talent: Spark is one of the best at archery in Equestria.  He is good with knives and short swords, and he can sneak around pretty well without being detected.

 

Bio: Before the robots had invaded Equestria, Spark was in the Ranger Corps, a secret military organization founded by Luna.  Rangers dealt with border problems and problems that the ordinary royal guard couldn't handle. 

 

2nd Bio:  When the robots attacked, he was defending Luna with his mentor Jace, who was eventually killed in battle while Spark got away.nting down the last of the robots in hopes of having a normal Equestria again.

Accepted by the owner (Duh). Welcome to the RP. Do not start, we are waiting for a few more characters. I do suggest you find some way to get your character to Manehatten, where most of the Roleplay will start.



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:33 PM

Do we have and or get weapons?

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:37 PM

Name: Storm Chaser

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Gender: Boy/Male/Colt

 

Estimated age: 25

 

Appearance: (Warning Hi-Rez) 0qsN8RF.png

 

Talent: Poetry

 

Bio: Storm at the age of 15 went to a University and practiced poetry any time he could. His father being a major music type disgusted Storm, still being from a family of music Storm took in poetry to try to please his father.  

 

2nd Bio: Storm resorted to locking himself at his fathers old music museum in Manehatten and protect what he had left and resorted to striping broken robots of there weapons so he could use them against the remaining robots.


Edited by Hoopman98, 19 May 2013 - 08:56 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:42 PM

Eh....

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:47 PM

Name: Storm Chaser

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Gender: Boy/Male/Colt

 

Estimated age: 25

 

Appearance: (Warning Hi-Rez) 0qsN8RF.png

 

Talent: Poetry and building/using guns

 

Bio: Storm locked used to build guns alone for a long time at the age of 13 eventually he decided to go to a Uni at the age of 15 and focus on poetry. 

 

2nd Bio: Storm resorted to locking himself at his fathers old music museum in Manehatten and protect what he had left resorted to building guns again in case of an emergency and had no idea if any one had survived the attack.

Building guns isnt very canon, you can say though, that once the machines attacked, you collected the weapons they dropped and found a talent with them.



Do we have and or get weapons?

Really, the only weapon that can kill a robot, is a gun. When the machines are killed, it is easy to salvage weapons off of them. It would be good to have weapons to protect yourself



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:49 PM

Well, then Ella doesn't have weapons. She'll just use her fist. Until she can get a weapon. The mare usually just sits in the arcade hoping that someone will rescue her....

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:55 PM

Name: Stardust

 

Race: Unicorn

 

Gender: Female

 

Estimated Age: 24

 

Appearance: Light blue coat, with a wavy blond mane. Her eyes and magic glow are purple. Her cutie mark is a star surrounded by tiny particles resembling dust.

 

Talent: Magic and astronomy.

 

Bio: When she was young she knew nothing of what would become her talent, thinking it was "egghead stuff." She strived to be at the top of the social ladder and was subject to peer pressure. One day, her mother told her to read a book on magic. She obliged and became fascinated with it. Her father, part of the royal guard, was rarely home, not allowing for much of a bond. Her mother was a librarian, giving her a vast amount books to chose from. Her teen years consisted of studying and researching with her two best friends, both of which died after the invasion.

 

Bio #2: She was visiting relatives in Manehattan when the machines came. She was in an encounter with a large machine that killed the relatives she had been with. She took shelter in the rubble of an apartment building, swearing to Celestia that one day she would avenge the deaths of her loved ones.


Edited by Arthur the Stone, 19 May 2013 - 08:55 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:55 PM

Is it okay to say that Spark's arrow tips are made from the finest steel and can pierce almost anything?  Because Rangers have their weapons crafted by masters and the steel that goes into them almost never gets dented.  But if that's too OP I understand and Spark can just use his saxe knife (AKA sea axe)

 

EDIT: also yes to Stardragon from me


Edited by Npawesome, 19 May 2013 - 08:57 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:55 PM

Name: James Ein

 

Race: Earth Pony

 

Gender: Male

 

Estimated age: 19

 

Appearance:  

Spoiler

 

Talent: Hes good with making flavored candy

 

Bio: James was born in manehattan, with his lovely caring parents, at the age of 12, he discovered his love for making candy, it started when he  was younger, but he found his way back from a recipe her mom had told him. When he was at the age of 15, his shy like behaviour made him get bullied in high school, the bullying had continued till it almost broke James' Mind. When he was 16, her mother died, James got over it quickly, When he reached the age of 19, he became a bit over the top, always acting a bit too insane. This was caused becouse of his mothers death.

 

2nd Bio: After the attacks had ocurred, James was nothing but scared, he kept on going on like a nomad, scared for his life at every moment, he was a scavanger, killing people for nothing. 

 

(the second one is a bit short.. sorry


Edited by James Ein, 19 May 2013 - 08:56 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:57 PM

Ok I edited my post a bit.



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:58 PM

Name: Stardust

Race: Unicorn

Gender: Female

Estimated Age: 24

Appearance: Light blue coat, with a wavy blond mane. Her eyes and magic glow are purple. Her cutie mark is a star surrounded by tiny particles resembling dust.

Talent: Magic and astronomy.

Bio: When she was young she knew nothing of what would become her talent, thinking it was "egghead stuff." She strived to be at the top of the social ladder and was subject to peer pressure. One day, her mother told her to read a book on magic. She obliged and became fascinated with it. Her father, part of the royal guard, was rarely home, not allowing for much of a bond. Her mother was a librarian, giving her a vast amount books to chose from. Her teen years consisted of studying and researching with her two best friends, both of which died after the invasion.

Bio #2: She was visiting relatives in Manehattan when the machines came. She was in an encounter with a large machine that killed the relatives she had been with. She took shelter in the rubble of an apartment building, swearing to Celestia that one day she would avenge the deaths of her loved ones.

Accepted by owner


Ok I edited my post a bit.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 08:58 PM

Is it okay to say that Spark's arrow tips are made from the finest steel and can pierce almost anything?  Because Rangers have their weapons crafted by masters and the steel that goes into them almost never gets dented.  But if that's too OP I understand and Spark can just use his saxe knife (AKA sea axe)
 
EDIT: also yes to Stardragon from me

That does kinda sound op.

Also I might join this tomorrow.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:00 PM

Yes to Arthur.
Also, Ella will just have a knife.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:00 PM

That does kinda sound op.

Also I might join this tomorrow.

Thought it would be.  Then I guess Spark just has to rip into the bots with his knife and destroy them that way I guess.  That is, until he gets a gun.



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:00 PM

Name: James Ein

Race: Earth Pony

Gender: Male

Estimated age: 19

Appearance:

Spoiler


Talent: Hes good with making flavored candy

Bio: James was born in manehattan, with his lovely caring parents, at the age of 12, he discovered his love for making candy, it started when he was younger, but he found his way back from a recipe her mom had told him. When he was at the age of 15, his shy like behaviour made him get bullied in high school, the bullying had continued till it almost broke James' Mind. When he was 16, her mother died, James got over it quickly, When he reached the age of 19, he became a bit over the top, always acting a bit too insane. This was caused becouse of his mothers death.

2nd Bio: After the attacks had ocurred, James was nothing but scared, he kept on going on like a nomad, scared for his life at every moment, he was a scavanger, killing people for nothing.

(the second one is a bit short.. sorry

Last accepting by owner, to get in you must be voted it. Waiting for maybe one or two more OC's. While you wait read the actual RP thread and make sure you understand. Post questions here.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:01 PM

i read it two times since it asked me to do so. e.e



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:01 PM


Thought it would be. Then I guess Spark just has to rip into the bots with his knife and destroy them that way I guess. That is, until he gets a gun.

I accept this, but he has to get a perfect shot right in the eye to disable it

Edited by Swimchamp565, 19 May 2013 - 09:02 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:02 PM

How will we find eachother? And is it the end of the invasion or are the robots just beginning to become less active?

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:05 PM

Options on how they can find each other will be shown in the intro. The robots moved on from Manehatten, there are a good amount still there, but they are just starting to slow down

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:06 PM

I accept this, but he has to get a perfect shot right in the eye to disable it

Wait you mean you accept that he's able to kill them with a bow?  Because a shot like that he would most likely make.  Also, if anyone's wondering.  I got the whole ranger concept of things from the book series 'The Ranger's Apprentice'.  I'd recommend it to anyone who loves lots of action and it even has (a little) romance in it.



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:23 PM

By the way you misspelled OOC o3o



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:30 PM

I notice D:

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:33 PM

out cooper chat



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:42 PM

Character Name: Magnet Rise
 
Gender: female
 
Race/Species: Pegasus
 
Age: 20-25, she lost track a few years back
 
Description: TrTDSQV.png(Ignore the white on the cutiemark, I forgot to fix that)

Talent: she is a MIM (Master In Magnetism) that loves anything to do with magnetism

 

Bio: Magnet Rise owns a M.R.L. (Magnetic Research Lab) hidden in the basement of her house in manehattan. she goes down there ready to explore magnetism 5 to 10 hours a day. when she was introduced to magnetism by her father, she was just a filly at the age of 5. time passed, she earned her passion for magnetism, got her cutie mark, and at the age of 15, she finally decided she needed a break.

 

Bio2: when the robot onslaught came, magnet rise was prepared. or so she thought... the robots quickly overwhelmed her, but she managed to escape with a stroke of luck. she locked herself in her lab and created, with some help from some blueprints her dad created, a self-powering electric pulse rifle using scrap parts from dead or dying robots, copper wire, magnets, and parts from guns the robots dropped. armed, she then went robot hunting.

 

I doubt I'll be accepted, but hey, we all get rejected every once in a while



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:49 PM

Hm...  Magnet seems alright to me



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:50 PM

Ok, a yes for magnet.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 10:02 PM

As long as she isnt always talking only about magnets through the RP, yes

 

 

 

 

You're in, going to post intro. I want you guys all to make a good intro of what situation your OC is in.


Edited by Swimchamp565, 19 May 2013 - 10:03 PM.


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Posted 19 May 2013 - 10:26 PM

lol


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#34 Lieutenant Delta

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 10:38 PM

Intro is up



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Posted 19 May 2013 - 11:05 PM

Are we suppose to make are Intro posts now?



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 12:00 AM

Yeah

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 12:12 AM

Excuse me, I sent you a pm asking a few questions but you never replied, would you kindly reply? In sorry of I sound rude, but I woul love to join this rp but need the questions answered before hand so I k ow which character I can use.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 12:22 AM

I fell asleep, I'm sorry, be patient

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 02:36 AM

Name: Darkness Eclipsed

Race: Changling (Takes form of Unicorn with mechanical wings when disguising)

Gender: male

Estimated age: 22

Appearance: As a changling he is a normal black pelt and sleek look but he had a red mane and tail, his wings are insect like and translucent red. His eyes remain same style but are red also and he has a scar across his right eye.

In his disguised form he still had a black pelt ad a red mane and tail. His eyes remain red but are normal pony look to them. He has a sharp black horn and his wings appear false and mechanical but he still flies great with them.

He is a fairly skinny changling and taller then normal, just between a standard Pegasus size as an Alicorn size. Although he is quite sling he is fairly built and lean in muscles, able to handle hoof to hoof quite well, but at the same time nimble and agile. His flaw is his slight blindness in his right eye after a flash blinding in the cave due to an over powered light spell.

Due to his blindness he wears a pair of stamping style goggles where the right eye peice is replaced with a telescopic lense to allow him better vision. While the goggles work great and allow limited night vision it also slightly limits his perphireal vision.

Talent: Darkness is an Engineer and Mechanic, he worked on metal all his lde in the hive to build armor for the Changlings. He also learned a bit about these robots after shutting one down as examining it.

Bio: Born into the hive serveral years after the events of the wedding he was raise to build. And that he did, he forged and crafted armor and simplistic weapons like swords for an attack the Queen had planned on Canterlot. But he learned of this plan and wanted none of it, so he took the form of Darkness and fled to Manehatten. He lived many years there in peace and serenity, using his skills to become a blacksmith. He lied happily there...until that day.

2nd Bio: When the large mecha beings, that he now calls clankers, attacked, he fled to his basement and into a 'panic' room he made. It saved him very well, and he now roams the streets, carefully, searching for others and helping those he can.

Other: He owns an Executioner Revolver, it was a normal revolver he customized himself to shoot normal magnum rounds, shotgun slugs and shells, and also low caliber sniper rounds.

(this gun is based of a real one: Tarus Judge)

Edited by QueenChrysalis747, 20 May 2013 - 02:47 AM.


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:24 AM

Name: Zark Tomb

 

Race: Pegasus 

 

Gender: Male

 

Estimated age: mid-aged 

 

Appearance: photo-thumb-22098.png?_r=1368402641

 

Talent: Due to amnesia, he has no true talent worth noting. 

 

Bio: He was a horrible criminal, murdering 12 ponies in his life. His eyes were stained red in a freak accident in the testing rooms at the mental institute, and was stabbed in the eye(s). After getting out of the hospital, he was hit by a bird in mid-air, sending him flying out of control and into the ground giving him amnesia, and false memories/voices in his head (also explaining why he has no cutie mark). Every day he is on the outskirts of the forest, looking into towns, waiting... For what you may ask? Nobody knows.

 

2nd Bio: On his way to his apartment, he was cut off by the police (I think there are police in Equestria...) and told to flee the town. Being as dumb and stubborn as he is, he ignored them and sneaked into his complex anyways. Whilst taking an afternoon nap, it happened. There were loud explosions as the robot death things raged across the town, his apartment had caught fire, and he was forced to use his window to escape. The glass had cut one of his legs and eye, and the, hmm.. about 8 foot drop had caused him to loose balance, toppling over into more of the glass shards. As the robot death things went about wreaking havoc, Zark tried his best to escape he town. But his attempt failed. He lost consciousness and was found later on by a group of  survivors. They took him to their base and patched up his leg. They didnt have eye patches, so they could do anything to the eye except clean it. As Zark regained consciousness, he discovered that these brave ponies had saved him. A few hours had passed, and it was getting dark. One pony was out watching for the robot death things. All was quiet in the dark, cold night... Until it was interrupted by the hum of gears and electronics, and the dark vaporized by the eerie glow of the robot death thing's eyes. The robot death things attacked the base, smashing it's walls, caving in the roof, breaking all of it's windows, and murdering all of it's inhabitants. Zark and some other pony hid under a large table, hoping they would not see them. But a radar sweep scanned the room, and one of the robot death things turned to where they were hiding. One of it's massive fists smashed the table in half, crushing the the pony in the process. Zark quickly ran out from under it and, once again, jumped out one of the windows. He ran and he ran until he had reached the crowded part of the city, hiding in one of the buildings. Waiting for somebody- I mean, somepony to save him.

 

There? Is that complicated enough?!


Edited by SlasherWild, 22 May 2013 - 02:43 AM.


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:27 AM

... Your second bio is important, I'm not accepting you in unless you make it more complicated. There are no forests in Manhatten


And Chrysalis I told you what I think, I'm waiting for others

Edited by Swimchamp565, 20 May 2013 - 03:28 AM.


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:33 AM

i'm going to join this.

this won't be connected to the Uni days RP if you guys don't want it to be..

 

Name: Electron

 

appearance:

Spoiler

 

Race: Unicorn

 

Gender: Female

 

Estimated age: 20

 

talent: Electricity, machines and engineering are all of her talents. (she can create machines and contraptions)

 

Bio: Electron was a scientist-in-training for Equestria Labratories, a lab community striving for better knowledge of the world.

She gained her cutie mark by electrocuting herself, creating a electrical circuit without supervision.

Her parents are: 'Blue Flame', Her mother, who is married to Ella Rose's father. (stepsister), and her father left for another mare, ever since the age of 14.

She was working in the lab one day, when the invasion had started. there was a lockdown, and she just barely got out.

She has minor training in archery, but is more specialised in tae-kwondo/karate. (defence and attack)

 

second bio: Electron was about to travel back to canterlot, when, the invasion had happened, and the train line was cut off.

she was stuck near the crystal empire, but was so far out it would take a week to get back.

She set out with other ponies from the same train, and became the leader of the pack, after all had lost hope.

She tried creating machines that could get the train working again, but nothing worked and she just started using the crap metal for other resources, and used the coal for heat.

While the other ponies died from (amonia? being frozen to death?) she used her last magic to electrocute them back to life, butit was useless. in the end, it was only her, because others had walked away, never to come back, and the others died.

She set out the next day, Taking a backpack full of crap metal, and created a sharp dagger.

She protects herself with this, and becomes corrupt and assertive. The deaths haunt her memories, but she isn't scared of the cold at all, and is now trained to survive in tempuratures up to 5 degrees. (she shivers, but she is strong. i can edit that.)

(she doesn't need to know Spark. She is searching for Ella though, because she spent most of her time with her, before the invasion.)

----edited---


Edited by Izzy86671, 20 May 2013 - 03:58 AM.


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:36 AM

Chrysalis seems fine to me, and Izzy, I'll make a decision on yours when I see your second bio.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:37 AM

For your second Bio it can be as simple as you room a day trip to Manehatten and the invasion happened and you hid in the sewers

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:40 AM

Ella Rose's father is named Morttin Bit. He's a wealthy entrepreneur who hates all children except for his son/ our brother; Carter Bit.
The last name is bit because they're money makers. Ella's last name is rose is because she wanted to be like her uncle. It's a long story and if you want to read it go to Swim's OC critique.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:47 AM

Slasher creeps me out XD.

 

Anyway yes I know Swim, but as you see i did change a little, I removed boots and made the eye peice more of a practical device he needed and gave it flaws so it wasn't OP.

 

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:59 AM

edited.

i don't think electrical alicorns are allowed.

if so, my OC is fit for that... and i have a skin for that.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 04:05 AM

Yes to Izzy.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 04:08 AM

2nd yes.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:05 AM

:/ well guess I gotta ask, what should I change Swim? I want to be accepted.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 01:42 PM

Again, I was sleeping XD. Yes, Welcome to the RP

 

 

Anyone up for the job of keeping a list of all the characters in the RP?


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:06 PM

Name: Zark Tomb

 

Race: Pegasus 

 

Gender: Male

 

Estimated age: mid-aged I guess

 

Appearance: photo-thumb-22098.png?_r=1368402641

 

Talent: Due to amnesia, he has no true talent worth noting. 

 

Bio: As for my OC "about me" thing, this is the story behind him:

He was a horrible criminal, murdering 12 ponies in his life. His eyes were stained red in a freak accident in the testing rooms at the mental institute, and was stabbed in the eye(s). After getting out of the hospital, he was hit by a bird in mid-air, sending him flying out of control and into the ground giving him amnesia, and false memories/voices in his head (also explaining why he has no cutie mark). Every day he is on the outskirts of the forest, looking into towns, waiting... For what you may ask? Nobody knows.

 

2nd Bio: I don't fuggin' know. Stuff. He kind of just watched from the forest, I guess.

 

I'm gonna have to say no to this

i'm going to join this.

this won't be connected to the Uni days RP if you guys don't want it to be..

 

Name: Electron

 

appearance:

Spoiler

 

Race: Unicorn

 

Gender: Female

 

Estimated age: 20

 

talent: Electricity, machines and engineering are all of her talents. (she can create machines and contraptions)

 

Bio: Electron was a scientist-in-training for Equestria Labratories, a lab community striving for better knowledge of the world.

She gained her cutie mark by electrocuting herself, creating a electrical circuit without supervision.

Her parents are: 'Blue Flame', Her mother, who is married to Ella Rose's father. (stepsister), and her father left for another mare, ever since the age of 14.

She was working in the lab one day, when the invasion had started. there was a lockdown, and she just barely got out.

She has minor training in archery, but is more specialised in tae-kwondo/karate. (defence and attack)

 

second bio: Electron was about to travel back to canterlot, when, the invasion had happened, and the train line was cut off.

she was stuck near the crystal empire, but was so far out it would take a week to get back.

She set out with other ponies from the same train, and became the leader of the pack, after all had lost hope.

She tried creating machines that could get the train working again, but nothing worked and she just started using the crap metal for other resources, and used the coal for heat.

While the other ponies died from (amonia? being frozen to death?) she used her last magic to electrocute them back to life, butit was useless. in the end, it was only her, because others had walked away, never to come back, and the others died.

She set out the next day, Taking a backpack full of crap metal, and created a sharp dagger.

She protects herself with this, and becomes corrupt and assertive. The deaths haunt her memories, but she isn't scared of the cold at all, and is now trained to survive in tempuratures up to 5 degrees. (she shivers, but she is strong. i can edit that.)

(she doesn't need to know Spark. She is searching for Ella though, because she spent most of her time with her, before the invasion.)

----edited---

 

I think this is a yes from me



"Ok, so, number 138..."

 

magnet rise was flying through the sky, blasting robots here and there with her pulse rifle. 134... 136... There, 138!

 

she slowed to a stop and hovered down to the front of a house labeled 138. pulse rifle equipped and ready, she attempted to open the door. locked.

 

"Time for a more--" she stops as a robot stomps past, luckily not noticing her. ".;..phew. now, as I was saying, time for a more... assault-based approach."

 

she aimed her pulse rifle at the hinge-side of the door and blasted three separate spots where she thought the hinges were.

 

I'm leaving it up to GM if it works



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:07 PM

I guess I may join.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:13 PM

Ignore plz

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:19 PM

Oh god damn it, I didnt notice that and I replied



Hm...  Magnet seems alright to me

Nevermind!

 

Character Name: Magnet Rise
 
Gender: female
 
Race/Species: Pegasus
 
Age: 20-25, she lost track a few years back
 
Description: TrTDSQV.png(Ignore the white on the cutiemark, I forgot to fix that)

Talent: she is a MIM (Master In Magnetism) that loves anything to do with magnetism

 

Bio: Magnet Rise owns a M.R.L. (Magnetic Research Lab) hidden in the basement of her house in manehattan. she goes down there ready to explore magnetism 5 to 10 hours a day. when she was introduced to magnetism by her father, she was just a filly at the age of 5. time passed, she earned her passion for magnetism, got her cutie mark, and at the age of 15, she finally decided she needed a break.

 

Bio2: when the robot onslaught came, magnet rise was prepared. or so she thought... the robots quickly overwhelmed her, but she managed to escape with a stroke of luck. she locked herself in her lab and created, with some help from some blueprints her dad created, a self-powering electric pulse rifle using scrap parts from dead or dying robots, copper wire, magnets, and parts from guns the robots dropped. armed, she then went robot hunting.

 

I doubt I'll be accepted, but hey, we all get rejected every once in a while

Nevermind!



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:20 PM

Oh wait... Nvm sorry

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:22 PM

Quick question, I'm still gonna play a pony even if, is it allowed to play hacked robots?



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:23 PM

Character Name: Magnet Rise
 
Gender: female
 
Race/Species: Pegasus
 
Age: 20-25, she lost track a few years back
 
Description: TrTDSQV.png(Ignore the white on the cutiemark, I forgot to fix that)

Talent: she is a MIM (Master In Magnetism) that loves anything to do with magnetism
 
Bio: Magnet Rise owns a M.R.L. (Magnetic Research Lab) hidden in the basement of her house in manehattan. she goes down there ready to explore magnetism 5 to 10 hours a day. when she was introduced to magnetism by her father, she was just a filly at the age of 5. time passed, she earned her passion for magnetism, got her cutie mark, and at the age of 15, she finally decided she needed a break.
 
Bio2: when the robot onslaught came, magnet rise was prepared. or so she thought... the robots quickly overwhelmed her, but she managed to escape with a stroke of luck. she locked herself in her lab and created, with some help from some blueprints her dad created, a self-powering electric pulse rifle using scrap parts from dead or dying robots, copper wire, magnets, and parts from guns the robots dropped. armed, she then went robot hunting.
 
I doubt I'll be accepted, but hey, we all get rejected every once in a while

 

Nevermind!


wut?



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:24 PM


wut?

Npa said you didnt apply, and I agreed.... but then I noticed you did apply and said Nevermind. Anyway I edited that post you replied to, you may want to go back and fix how you replied.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 03:27 PM

edited it



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 06:59 PM

Name: Shigeru Metalwork

 

Race: griffin

 

Gender:  Boy

 

Estimated age: 32

 

Appearance: mlp__fim_where_the_world_ends_griffin_ba

 

Talent: scavenging and creating things

 

Bio: lived in the griffin kingdoms for most of his life, his father taught him how to create mechanisms out of clockwork. All were ponypower, and were nowhere near as effective as modern robotics. He had utilized designs his father made to create new weaponry to defend against the threats within the griffin kingdom, such as the peppermill rotary cannon and the double fire revolver. He earned decent money from this, and eventually moved to Equestria with his 14 year old son Dag.

 

2nd Bio: He had been living in equestria for around a year before the bots invaded, and when they did, he utilized his weaponry to slay them in vast quantities, but was relying on the luck and seclusion of where he lived, and when he heard his son might be alive in Manehatten, he quickly made his mission to head there, get his son out, and escape. He is currently stuck in Manehatten with his son, and is finding it harder and harder to survive.

 

Other: peppermill slows him down quite a bit, uses lots of Horsepower to use.

 

 

Name: Dag Metalwork

 

Race: griffin

 

Gender: boy

 

Estimated age: 14

 

Appearance: 235287__safe_oc_griffon_bow_artist-eques

 

Talent: making plans, escaping, firing a bow (not amazing at it though)

 

Bio: the only son of Shigeru, born in the griffin kingdoms and quickly learnt how to make things out of wood with his father, and has some minor experience with cogs. Isn't the most intelligent, and is dyslexic from a slight birth defect.

 

2nd Bio: was travelling with his dad when the robots attacked, and when they did, him and his father were separated. He survived using his survival skills and his small size to hide throughout Manehatten, and was eventually reunited with his dad.

 

Hope these are alright, it was hard making them :/

 

If anything is op, tell me and I'll fix.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:21 PM

yay and yay



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:25 PM

Name: Shigeru Metalwork

 

Race: griffin

 

Gender:  Boy

 

Estimated age: 32

 

Appearance: mlp__fim_where_the_world_ends_griffin_ba

 

Talent: scavenging and creating things

 

Bio: lived in the griffin kingdoms for most of his life, his father taught him how to create mechanisms out of clockwork. All were ponypower, and were nowhere near as effective as modern robotics. He had utilized designs his father made to create new weaponry to defend against the threats within the griffin kingdom, such as the peppermill rotary cannon and the double fire revolver. He earned decent money from this, and eventually moved to Equestria with his 14 year old son Dag.

 

2nd Bio: He had been living in equestria for around a year before the bots invaded, and when they did, he utilized his weaponry to slay them in vast quantities, but was relying on the luck and seclusion of where he lived, and when he heard his son might be alive in Manehatten, he quickly made his mission to head there, get his son out, and escape. He is currently stuck in Manehatten with his son, and is finding it harder and harder to survive.

 

Other: peppermill slows him down quite a bit, uses lots of Horsepower to use.

 

 

Name: Dag Metalwork

 

Race: griffin

 

Gender: boy

 

Estimated age: 14

 

Appearance: 235287__safe_oc_griffon_bow_artist-eques

 

Talent: making plans, escaping, firing a bow (not amazing at it though)

 

Bio: the only son of Shigeru, born in the griffin kingdoms and quickly learnt how to make things out of wood with his father, and has some minor experience with cogs. Isn't the most intelligent, and is dyslexic from a slight birth defect.

 

2nd Bio: was travelling with his dad when the robots attacked, and when they did, him and his father were separated. He survived using his survival skills and his small size to hide throughout Manehatten, and was eventually reunited with his dad.

 

Hope these are alright, it was hard making them :/

 

If anything is op, tell me and I'll fix.

BAH!! Auto accept!



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:30 PM

Bah what? : ?



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:31 PM

No, I just really like it, Auto accept



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:34 PM

No, I just really like it, Auto accept

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 08:15 PM

Can some people please look at my application? I was really hoping to join and do far only 1 yay. I want to know what you would like to see changed of you aren't yay yet also, I don't want to join late is all.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 08:23 PM

I think your character classes as an alicorn like that.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 09:16 PM

Swim said changling was fine, I already pm'd him about that.



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 09:17 PM

Swim said changling was fine, I already pm'd him about that.

Swim is a girl.  Lol



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 09:19 PM

Name: Darkness Eclipsed

Race: Changling (Takes form of Unicorn with mechanical wings when disguising)

Gender: male

Estimated age: 22

Appearance: As a changling he is a normal black pelt and sleek look but he had a red mane and tail, his wings are insect like and translucent red. His eyes remain same style but are red also and he has a scar across his right eye.

In his disguised form he still had a black pelt ad a red mane and tail. His eyes remain red but are normal pony look to them. He has a sharp black horn and his wings appear false and mechanical but he still flies great with them.

He is a fairly skinny changling and taller then normal, just between a standard Pegasus size as an Alicorn size. Although he is quite sling he is fairly built and lean in muscles, able to handle hoof to hoof quite well, but at the same time nimble and agile. His flaw is his slight blindness in his right eye after a flash blinding in the cave due to an over powered light spell.

[scrap the goggles for now, maybe in future]

Talent: Darkness is an Blacksmith and forger, he worked on metal all his lde in the hive to build armor for the Changlings. He also learned a bit about these robots after shutting one down as examining it. [changed to more suit him]

Bio: Born into the hive serveral years after the events of the wedding he was raise to build. And that he did, he forged and crafted armor and simplistic weapons like swords for an attack the Queen had planned on Canterlot. But he learned of this plan and wanted none of it, so he took the form of Darkness and fled to Manehatten. He lived many years there in peace and serenity, using his skills to become a blacksmith. He lied happily there...until that day.

2nd Bio: When the large mecha beings, that he now calls clankers, attacked, he fled to his basement and into a 'panic' room he made. It saved him very well, and he now roams the streets, carefully, searching for others and helping those he can.

Other: He owns an Executioner Revolver, it was a normal revolver he customized himself to shoot normal magnum rounds, shotgun slugs and shells, and also low caliber sniper rounds.

(this gun is based of a real one: Tarus Judge)

Sorry to double post, just wanted to say I changed him a bit, removed the goggles and changed him from mechanic/engineer to blacksmith/forger

 

 

Also sorry swim, didn't realize


Edited by QueenChrysalis747, 20 May 2013 - 09:19 PM.


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 09:34 PM

I don't get why a changeling would fit in this RP, unless it was evil and wanted to kill survivors.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 09:56 PM

Swim said changling was fine, I already pm'd him about that.

A: I already accepted you into the RP. Now I'm rethinking it because you seem to be very impatient. Hell you woke me up in the middle of the night because you kept posting complaints here while I was sleeping

B: I'm a girl.
 


Edited by Swimchamp565, 20 May 2013 - 09:56 PM.


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Posted 20 May 2013 - 10:26 PM

I appologize, I Was unaware that the comment was referring to me, as there were 2 other applicants that were also in process of accepting at time as well. I also appologize about impatience but it's just a bit dead in the rp section for me, with not many new and open rp I can join

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 10:38 PM

Alright, my honest opinion, I think you shouldnt be a changeling 



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 10:41 PM

Alright, my honest opinion, I think you shouldnt be a changeling

*gives thumbs up sign*
Agreed. All in favor, aye.
All opposed....

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 10:54 PM

I'd say it would be ok if he lost ability of his wings at the start.Therefore making him a Unicorn and not an Alicorn

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 10:59 PM

That's fine, I'm not gonna argue, that's why I aske first. Give me a moment:


Name: Darkness Eclipsed

Race: Pegasus

Gender: male

Estimated age: 22

Appearance:
He has a black pelt and a red mane and tail, short mane but long tail. His eyes are red and sort of cat like look to them. His wings are slightly larger then normal. He has a scar over his partially blind right eye, due to a welder accident. He has a metal sleeve to go I've his right hoof when metal forging

He is a fairly skinny stallion and taller then normal, just between a standard Pegasus size as an Alicorn size. Although he is quite sling he is fairly built and lean in muscles, able to handle hoof to hoof quite well, but at the same time nimble and agile. His flaw is his slight blindness in his right eye after a flash blinding in the cave due to an over powered light spell.

[scrap the goggles for now, maybe in future]

Talent: Darkness is an Blacksmith and forger, he worked on metal all his life. He also learned a bit about these robots after shutting one down as examining it. [changed to more suit him]

Bio: Born in Manehatten he was raised by a single father who was a locksmith and carpenter. His father always needed help with his work which Darkness happily helped him with, while it made him slightly anti-social it also gave him skills in working with tools. He worked many years with his dad until he found out about the metal forging business known as Blacksmithing, and he knew that it was his calling. He began to study it intensely and trained himself very well over time, and became a well know blacksmith in his area of Manehatten. That was...untill that day

2nd Bio: When the large mecha beings, that he now calls clankers, attacked, he fled to his basement and into a 'panic' room he made. It saved him very well, and he now roams the streets, carefully, searching for others and helping those he can.

Other: He owns an Executioner Revolver, it was a normal revolver he customized himself to shoot normal magnum rounds, shotgun slugs and shells, and also low caliber sniper rounds.

(this gun is based of a real one: Tarus Judge)I

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 11:17 PM

You couldn't just edit the other one...?



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 11:24 PM

You couldn't just edit the other one...?

I guess not.

 

That's fine, I'm not gonna argue, that's why I aske first. Give me a moment:


Name: Darkness Eclipsed

Race: Pegasus

Gender: male

Estimated age: 22

Appearance:
He has a black pelt and a red mane and tail, short mane but long tail. His eyes are red and sort of cat like look to them. His wings are slightly larger then normal. He has a scar over his partially blind right eye, due to a welder accident. He has a metal sleeve to go I've his right hoof when metal forging

He is a fairly skinny stallion and taller then normal, just between a standard Pegasus size as an Alicorn size. Although he is quite sling he is fairly built and lean in muscles, able to handle hoof to hoof quite well, but at the same time nimble and agile. His flaw is his slight blindness in his right eye after a flash blinding in the cave due to an over powered light spell.

[scrap the goggles for now, maybe in future]

Talent: Darkness is an Blacksmith and forger, he worked on metal all his life. He also learned a bit about these robots after shutting one down as examining it. [changed to more suit him]

Bio: Born in Manehatten he was raised by a single father who was a locksmith and carpenter. His father always needed help with his work which Darkness happily helped him with, while it made him slightly anti-social it also gave him skills in working with tools. He worked many years with his dad until he found out about the metal forging business known as Blacksmithing, and he knew that it was his calling. He began to study it intensely and trained himself very well over time, and became a well know blacksmith in his area of Manehatten. That was...untill that day

2nd Bio: When the large mecha beings, that he now calls clankers, attacked, he fled to his basement and into a 'panic' room he made. It saved him very well, and he now roams the streets, carefully, searching for others and helping those he can.

Other: He owns an Executioner Revolver, it was a normal revolver he customized himself to shoot normal magnum rounds, shotgun slugs and shells, and also low caliber sniper rounds.

(this gun is based of a real one: Tarus Judge)I

looks like a yay



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Posted 20 May 2013 - 11:31 PM

It's a yes for chrysalis.

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 11:45 PM

thanks, as far as edit goes, sorry, I perfer to just post a new one to make it easier for you guys so you don't have to flip back was all.



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 01:52 AM

Alright, you are accepted..... again....



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 02:13 AM

Do you guys think this is a good look for the robots? 

 

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These are the standards ones you see walking around. As I said they took all terrains, so some could fly, others could go in water, and there was a bug type that could get inside foundations and go underground.



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 02:14 AM

Sorry for allthe trouble.

And they look good...and familiar...but yeah they seem good

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 02:26 AM

Oh hell yeah they look familiar. Whoever can guess the movie they are from, gets a cookie

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 05:07 AM

Oh hell yeah they look familiar. Whoever can guess the movie they are from, gets a cookie

They're from NINE aren't they?

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 10:32 AM

Yeah, I actually hate Tim Burton, let alone that movie, I liked the idea though

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 11:57 AM

That looks like a pretty accurate look for them.



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 12:45 PM

Name: Shadow Blitz

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Gender: Male

 

Estimated age: 20 - 30 

 

Appearance: A light blue coated pony with a yellow mane and his cutie mark is a  shadow of a pony and a large saddle bag with water and food in it ( he also has a Large combat knife and a sniper with 12 bullets.

 

Talent: Stealth 

 

Bio: Blitz lived in Cloudsdale since he was a colt. when he became 15 he moved to Manehattan for a job removing clouds from the sky ) and soon after he went to Ponyville and helped Fluttershy with taking care of animals. About 7 years later he Came back to Manehattan. Then robots attacked and Blitz escaped to a bunker where he lived for 2 months.

 

2nd Bio: Blitz was found woundering the streets in Manehattan when he came across a dog that was laying down near a destroyed building, he went up to the dog and gave  it a drink of water and some food. Blitz walked away but the dog followed him so he named him Jericho and now they are living in a half burned house in Manehattan.

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Can i have a German Shepard?

 

Name: Jericho 

 

Age: 2 

 

Description: A light brown fur coat and a white beam down his neck

 

Gender: Male

 

Race: Dog


Edited by jaydencooper, 21 May 2013 - 10:53 PM.


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Posted 21 May 2013 - 12:49 PM

You're going to need to make your character go to Manehattan where everyone else is. Your character seems okay but I'm going to leave the dog up to swim.

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 12:53 PM

fixed



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 02:10 PM

Yeah, I actually hate Tim Burton, let alone that movie, I liked the idea though

I thought nine was good :/



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 07:24 PM

The apocalypse hasn't been going on for two years. Maybe for about 2 months has Equeastria actually been destroyed. The borders were held for a year, then the machines finally prevailed and entered Equestria destroying it.

The dog is fine, don't get to OP


I thought nine was good :/

Don't get me wrong, I loved the idea. It just got to creepy at times... Burton does that sometimes

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 07:29 PM

Yeah, NINE is virtually built around creepiness.



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 11:09 PM

haha, Electron will not like Spark in this RP.

at first, she will try to kill him.

then maybe get a bit more comfortable and call him an aquaitance. (nearly friend)

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 11:15 PM

haha, Electron will not like Spark in this RP.

at first, she will try to kill him.

then maybe get a bit more comfortable and call him an aquaitance. (nearly friend)

>:3

D: what'd he ever do to her?



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Posted 21 May 2013 - 11:17 PM

D: what'd he ever do to her?

notin.

she just feels that there is a danger with him around, especialy near Ella.

coz Ella is her sister, and she won't let anything happen to her!



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Posted 22 May 2013 - 02:26 AM

... Your second bio is important, I'm not accepting you in unless you make it more complicated. There are no forests in Manhatten


And Chrysalis I told you what I think, I'm waiting for others

Well, thats all I have. Guess Im not doin' this.

 



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Posted 22 May 2013 - 02:43 AM

Name: Zark Tomb

 

Race: Pegasus 

 

Gender: Male

 

Estimated age: mid-aged 

 

Appearance: photo-thumb-22098.png?_r=1368402641

 

Talent: Due to amnesia, he has no true talent worth noting. 

 

Bio: He was a horrible criminal, murdering 12 ponies in his life. His eyes were stained red in a freak accident in the testing rooms at the mental institute, and was stabbed in the eye(s). After getting out of the hospital, he was hit by a bird in mid-air, sending him flying out of control and into the ground giving him amnesia, and false memories/voices in his head (also explaining why he has no cutie mark). Every day he is on the outskirts of the forest, looking into towns, waiting... For what you may ask? Nobody knows.

 

2nd Bio: On his way to his apartment, he was cut off by the police (I think there are police...) and told to flee the town. Being as dumb and stubborn as he is, he ignored them and sneaked into his complex anyways. Whilst taking an afternoon nap, it happened. There were loud explosions as the robot death things raged across the town, his apartment had caught fire, and he was forced to use his window to escape. The glass had cut one of his legs and eye, and the, hmm.. about 8 foot drop had caused him to loose balance, toppling over into more of the glass shards. As the robot death things went about wreaking havoc, Zark tried his best to escape he town. But his attempt failed. He lost consciousness and was found later on by a group of  survivors. They took him to their base and patched up his leg. They didnt have eye patches, so they could do anything to the eye except clean it. As Zark regained consciousness, he discovered that these brave ponies had saved him. A few hours had passed, and it was getting dark. One pony was out watching for the robot death things. All was quiet in the dark, cold night... Until it was interrupted by the hum of gears and electronics, and the dark vaporized by the eerie glow of the robot death thing's eyes. The robot death things attacked the base, smashing it's walls, caving in the roof, breaking all of it's windows, and murdering all of it's inhabitants. Zark and some other pony hid under a large table, hoping they would not see them. But a radar sweep scanned the room, and one of the robot death things turned to where they were hiding. One of it's massive fists smashed the table in half, crushing the the pony in the process. Zark quickly ran out from under it and, once again, jumped out one of the windows. He ran and he ran until he had reached the crowded part of the city, hiding in one of the buildings. Waiting for somebody- I mean, somepony to save him.

 

After a few years of him taking cover in the sewers, hoping for someone to find him, he decides one day to approach the surface once more. 

As he breaches the door to the outside world, he is shocked to see that the land he grew up in, was now a total madhouse. Robot death things roamed the streets, buildings and houses half destroyed and overgrown with trees and weed. Sneaking his way out of the sewers, he takes shelter in a nearby abandoned house, the roof was missing, but it looked like it had a basement. As he made his way down into the underground room, he noticed a small box in the corner. Opening it, he finds a  9mm pistol, and  some rounds. Hm. Kind of coincidental, huh?

There? Is that complicated enough?!

I redid my second bio.


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