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#1 bruciuc

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Posted 18 January 2013 - 11:12 PM

Can please somepony look at my house?

 

I want to be sure nothingis missing when i give it for the test.

 

Plot s37

 

Thanks  Bruciuc



#2 Xeadin

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Posted 19 January 2013 - 02:25 AM

I think this will be a pretty good house to look at.

 

The exterior is laid out well. You've got the birch planks with the redwood logs, which makes that nice white-wash contrast that most of the Ponyville houses have, although you could probably lighten up on some of the logs though. The shape of the house is what has me somewhat concerned-- quite a few Ponyville homes have a T and/ or L shape to their general structure, so try experimenting with those shapes. The entryway doesn't need to have wool going to it-- you could probably change it to match the house interior.

 

Speaking of the interior, it looks pretty well laid out. I would suggest adding in a couple more furnishings in the first floor to make it look more like a living space. The second floor hallway doesn't need to be exposed, so you could probably add in a window there. The bathroom looks like it's missing a couple of things. The attic also doesn't need to be exposed, but you can choose to keep the deck there.

 

Overall, the house is decent looking, but I would safely say that it does need some work done. You have some good ideas, but a couple of them aren't exactly necessary, and there are a few things missing as well. Shave out some stuff and substitute them for others.


Edited by Xeadin, 19 January 2013 - 03:51 AM.



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