I'm looking for criticism on my OC becaus i want to join rps but i want to know if the backstory and stuff is good c;
Name: Swift dagger
Gender: Mare
Kind: Unicorn
Age: 20
discripsion :

CM : Pencil whit light from it meaning is that she can draw very well
Backstory: Swift wase born in manehatten she lived there whit her mother blue sky's father orange sparkle and her younger brother green wind. on school she got bullied but she always find her peace in drawing one day she finnaly realised that and got her cutiemark afther finishing high school she went to a art school and learnt to draw more stuff when she finnisht it she went to ponyville and begin a little art shop
Thank you for the help ;D ~Greetz cupcake



