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#1 Rainbow_Cat

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Posted 09 November 2015 - 08:20 PM

I've finally finished after long work and many critiques. My plot number is... /warp s76 inside the /warp submissions world!



#2 R9000

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Posted 09 November 2015 - 10:29 PM

Hi, sorry but you didn't pass. Your house definitely had potential, but there were several parts of it that sadly, still needed work.

 

Your exterior wasn't bad, and your roof design was good, but your house's shape wasn't very interesting. Slightly altered rectangles don't usually make for very good house shapes. A few extensions and a more complex overall shape wouldn't have gone amiss. Your windows were the real problem, however. We don't usually accept windows larger than 3x2, because it looks too modern or disproportionate, and besides that your house had way too many. You also might not want to have two massive windows in your bathroom. With windows, it's all about getting the balance right, not too many, nor too few. 

 

Interior-wise, you had some nice ideas. Covering the inside of your roof in the attic was a nice touch, and your use of different items of furniture, carpets, and varied wood types was quite good. Torches are not encouraged, however, as they don't really look good in a house. We encourage the use of other light sources like glowstone or redstone lamps instead. Finally, your 'chest' room was a little too much. When making a house, you might find it helpful to consider whether you personally would live in a place like that. I don't know many people with an entire room dedicated to storage chests in their house, stacked up to the windows.

 

Despite this, like I said, your house had many good points as well. You've got the right idea with the general theme, and most of your furniture choices were good. I think you could pass next time, given time and practice. Never be discouraged! :) Better luck next time.




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