Lightning Strike and the quest for his Cutie Mark
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Posted 17 February 2012 - 08:01 PM
The main idea of the story is: Lightning goes off on a quest to find his Cutie Mark. He finds multiple villages with problems and tries to help them out. He finds a Manticore terrorizing a village and decides he wants to help them get rid of it. (Here's where people are probably gonna rage) He struggles massively fighting against the Manticore when he finally realizes that he wants to protect everypony. He get's a massive strength boost due to his passion and he pushes the Manticore back into the Everfree forest, saving the village from absolute destruction. This also leads to him getting his Cutie Mark. He is the youngest pony in his class to get his Cutie Mark. Although when he went off on his adventure he was on vacation. He went back to his hometown of Cloudsdale and everypony saw his Cutie Mark and wondered how he got it. He replied that he had "beaten" (more like scared off but yeah.) a Manticore and realized how much he wanted to protect others. And that's the story summed up for you. Let me know what you think.
P.S. Fluttershy BEFRIENDED the Manticore so why not have somepony be able to scare it off?
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Posted 17 February 2012 - 08:13 PM
#3
Posted 17 February 2012 - 08:13 PM
How is it so far though? Good? Bad? In between? Godmoddy? or otherwise?
Edit: How come Fanfiction story topics are hardly visited? I'm probably just being impatient though.
Edited by AKingGamer, 17 February 2012 - 08:22 PM.
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Posted 17 February 2012 - 10:09 PM
Please, stop.LOL LOL LOL LOL
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Posted 17 February 2012 - 10:29 PM
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Posted 18 February 2012 - 05:01 AM
Edited by plankmonkey, 18 February 2012 - 05:03 AM.
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Posted 18 February 2012 - 02:29 PM
Also, a picture of him can be found here: (I took the liberty of actually getting the pic instead of just linking you there
Edited by AKingGamer, 18 February 2012 - 02:31 PM.
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