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#1 Brightful

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Posted 30 April 2015 - 12:50 AM

/w s56
the inside isn't done, and that's because i want to make sure the base of the house is okay. i have some concerns about the left side of the roof and the whole roof in general. also the patterns around the house. what do you amazing builders think i should fix/delete/add? it'd be nice if you could check the inside as well even though it's not done.
okay, thanks cB

#2 Princess Unitopia

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Posted 14 October 2015 - 10:39 PM

hey there!

heres what i think of your house

 

some of the furniture looks a little weird and not very pony like. add more furniture too, it looks a little bare (more colors!)

use another bed like the wool ones instead of real beds

also don't use fence for the stair well only their top not the part going up (hope that made sense)

also take a second look at the bathroom, it looks a bit weird, add a carpet and make it look more like a bathroom 

also the lever in the bathroom is one block to low

also add a door to the balcony in the bedroom, it must be really cold in winter!

 

add a slab or something under the window boxes, it looks like the dirt is falling through

the out side is decent but a little to much wood one one wall and none on the other, make patterns but don't over do it

also on the long window in the bedroom take the trapdoors off the top

take a but of shrubbery on the perimeter off, its a little to much

and the lamp outside in in a awkward place move it to the under edge of the roof (the part in between the wool and sandstone)

 

 

hope i didn't offend you or anything! just trying to help, sorry if i did though!

also i type to fast so if there is mistake in my writing, ignore it.

 

 

Unitopia signing off!




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