Hello Admins,
Since my first submission failed, I am now using you suggestions to create a new house. I am done and would like to be reviewed. Thank you
.
Sincerely,
Stitcherooo @ plot s78
Edited by Stitcherooo, 20 January 2016 - 12:04 AM.
Posted 19 January 2016 - 10:29 PM
Hello Admins,
Since my first submission failed, I am now using you suggestions to create a new house. I am done and would like to be reviewed. Thank you
.
Sincerely,
Stitcherooo @ plot s78
Edited by Stitcherooo, 20 January 2016 - 12:04 AM.
Posted 23 January 2016 - 01:11 AM
Sorry, but we are rejecting your house.
Your house is very blocky, in a sense. The shape doesn't really fit Ponyville, house looks a bit like a square with a chunk cut out, but a chunky block of a dining room left in its place. A boring L shape, if you will. Your stairs have no structural support. Your fireplace and chimney are excessively large. There is just a general feeling of a lot of empty space in your house. Consider adding more paintings and carpets to the ground floor.
Visit /w ponyville to see example houses.
Edited by R9000, 23 January 2016 - 01:13 AM.
0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users