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#1 SwiftDagger

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Posted 21 November 2015 - 02:41 PM

Hello admins 

 

I have finisht my house i hope you guys like it i workt realy hard on it its at /warp s78 And my plot number is so plot number 78

This is my first try and i hope reaaly  mutch you guys like it

 

Thanks  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  :heart:  Greetz Cupcake ;D 



#2 R9000

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Posted 21 November 2015 - 07:13 PM

Hi,

looking at your house, it's certainly a strong start. However, we think there are still some things you could make better, to bring this up to the standard we need. Therefore, we're giving you an improve. This means you get one extra week to improve your house, after which you either pass or fail. Considering your current build, it shouldn't be too hard for you to pass if you just take a look at some of the following things:

 

-Your exterior is, on the whole, quite good. However, the four 3x2 windows on the rear seem a little too symmetrical and uniform for an entire wall of a Ponyville house. Maybe you could try changing them a little? Also, the lamp out the front is a little odd-looking, given that it's hanging several meters out from the house. It doesn't need to be that far out.

-The place where your wheat is growing doesn't make much sense. Crops tend to need lots of sunlight to grow.

-Your interior definitely has the essentials down, which is an excellent place to start, but it is a little plain. You only use oak planks and your interior decor is a bit sparse. Try to make it feel like you would want to live inside.

 

That's all, remember to take your time, and good luck!



#3 SwiftDagger

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Posted 21 November 2015 - 09:58 PM

I looks at al your tips and i think i did them all i hope its good 

 

Greetz Cupcake  :raritywink:  :derpytongue:  :heart:  :scootangel:



#4 Luna Lens

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Posted 24 November 2015 - 08:16 PM

Approved. Well done, but there were still a few issues.

 

The back of the house looks better with the smaller windows, but you did not solve the problem of it being perfectly symmetrical.

Some flower boxes were unfinished.




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