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#1 swordzgirl55

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Posted 31 October 2015 - 06:46 PM

Name: Eclipse Shine

Gender: female
Race: pegasus
Age: 15 years
Appearance: Eclipse has a black and white mane and tail; her mane is spiky, her tail is braided. She is a blank-flank, with white fur, greenish-blue eyes, and a black watch on her right foreleg.
Cutie Mark and Special Talent: Eclipse never got her cutie mark, and thinks of them as cages.
Personality: Eclipse is shy, funny, and weird (in a good way).
Biography: Eclipse Shine was born in Ponyville, but moved to Cloudsdale when she was 12. Her parents are both unicorns, but she is a pegasus. She also has 2 siblings; her 9-year-old brother still lives in Ponyville, and her 14-year-old sister lives in Manehattan. Eclipse loves to play video games, and when she is bored, she flies as fast as she can or reads. Her favorite video game is Fallout; Equestria. She isn't the best at flying, but loves to anyway. She is not that interested in the "Daring-do" series, but loves the legend of the "Mare in the Moon". Her only accessory is her black watch, which she got on her 11th birthday and hasn't removed since.
Other: Eclipse was born on Hearths-warming eve, and gets twice as many presents! Also, Eclipse thinks more highly of Luna, than of Celestia.

 

 

(I think I made it too short, and don't expect to get access to "Colonization", but aw well)



#2 R9000

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Posted 01 November 2015 - 04:43 PM

Alright. I'm not really sure why you submitted an application that you thought might fail, but here's the thing: it's not a bad start. However, your biography must fit in with Symphoria's lore, which can be found in the main Colonizations: Empty Skies page. So here's your chance, make the bio about twice as long, and make it fit in with Symphoria. Then it should be able to be approved. You can edit your post here rather than posting a new thread.


Edited by R9000, 01 November 2015 - 08:36 PM.



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