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#1 TheRanger7

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Posted 19 April 2013 - 02:10 AM

Hey guys/gals. I got a one week extension.  My plot is s74, so leave any comments below! Thanks!



#2 Seras Victoria

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Posted 20 April 2013 - 07:56 PM

I looked at your submission and has this to say:

 

Your design is fine although your roof look's like it need's fixing, it is an A frame although it looks a bit wobbly and uneven. Your exterior has alot of Trapdoors on it and you have alot of large windows. Moving into the interior your ground floor looks rather empty other than the table and your kitchen is under furnished, remember you can look at /wapr ikea and /warp ikea2 for ideas if your stuck. Your first floor landing area is way too open and your bathroom is too small and basic. The attic is just one big open room which is also your bedroom which due to the size makes it look too open. Overall your exterior just needs a bit of tweaking but your interior needs more furnishing and a better layout. Try making furniture using multiple blocks which look nicer and are more complex. You can always look at ponyville for ideas and on the internet for minecraft furniture. 




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