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#1 SwiftDagger

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    Misha_cupcake

Posted 21 November 2015 - 10:56 AM

Hey guys so i'm doing the CMC test (my first try) i really wanna do it good so can you guys Critique my house ;D ? Its at /warp s78 i hope you guys like it and

say in the reactions what you really think about my CMC house 

 

Thanks guys Greetz Cupcake <3 :pinkiesmile:  :rainbowkiss:  :derpy:  :heart:



#2 Coloratura

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Posted 24 November 2015 - 03:11 AM

Wow this is a good build. There's only one major thing is the lamps outside. The levers on the side look really bad. If you can find a way to power the lamps without showing the redstone workings, then it'd be good, otherwise I recommend a different lighting method.

 

The one minor thing would be that the fencing touching the wall on the second floor doesn't look terribly good.

 

Other than those two things this is really well done. Not many builders can pull off a balcony either, but you did it! Good luck!


Edited by Edward, 24 November 2015 - 03:12 AM.



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