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#1 yandame

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Posted 09 December 2011 - 07:23 PM

my house is finished

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#2 Verdana

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Posted 09 December 2011 - 08:47 PM

The exterior is nicely in-theme, but we feel the interior needs some work, it's just a single big room on each floor. Please work on it some more and post again in this thread when you are ready for us to take another look at it.

#3 yandame

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Posted 09 December 2011 - 11:18 PM

house is update

#4 Verdana

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Posted 10 December 2011 - 11:00 AM

This house shows potential and is getting close, but it is still not quite good enough for us to approve as it is. You have a lot of space to play with, but it is quite sparsely furnished, with not much to look at inside. The pieces sticking out the top sides of the house make it look quite peculiar, so you might want to remodel those too. We'd like to give you more time to improve it, particularly the interior, so take three days if you need them to make it really nice. If you can't think what to do, take a look around Ponyville or ask some builders for ideas of how to improve it. Post here when you'd like us to look again.

#5 yandame

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Posted 11 December 2011 - 06:39 PM

my house is done.. again

#6 OrangeL

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Posted 11 December 2011 - 08:41 PM

Rejected. Interior lacks.


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