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#1 coinboy75

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Posted 21 January 2016 - 08:06 AM

i have finished my first draft and i would like it if someone can critique it for me

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#2 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 21 January 2016 - 12:46 PM

For starters, the exterior is okay. For exterior walls, I'd recommend having patterns and designs into the wall (some, if not most ponyville houses have those, those are a great place to reference). The current walls just seem a bit bland.

 

I'm not really sure what to think of the vines on the side of the house. I wouldn't be surprised if from one person's perspective they look a bit like part of an overgrown, abandoned house. I'd recommend going for a simpler, more cleaner house look as to not make people mistake your house for some abandoned copy.

 

Your interior looks pretty good as well, but consider trying to add a slight bit more color. Perhaps adding a rug somewhere on the floor at any given location? Occasional paintings may help as well, just to spice things up. However, don't go overboard on these.

 

In the space between floors 2 and 3 (upper and most upper floors), the stairwell seems a bit... awkward. The space between the windows and stairs doesn't really seem right. Consider at least covering it up, or moving the stairs closer, or whatever you think deems fit. 

 

Other than that, I think your house is pretty good. Try and get critiques from other builders for more diversity too. The more the merrier, as they say!



#3 coinboy75

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Posted 22 January 2016 - 11:27 AM

thank you I.M mean for those suggestions I put them into account and changed my house with some of them I appreciate it if you could take another look and anyone else who wants to at

 

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