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#1 Space Kitty

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Posted 01 March 2015 - 12:59 AM

Hi everypony,

 

It's me, Toxic Flame! I have entered the CMC group and built a humble abode at S72 Brohoof Lane. Please give me your advice and opinion on it, as I could use some!  :-D  :mrgreen:  :-P  :-P

 

Also, happy Derpy Day everypony! 

 

{Edit: got a critique from another builder and am currently renovating XD}


Edited by pompomkittyrocks, 01 March 2015 - 01:20 PM.


#2 Squint

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Posted 01 March 2015 - 02:03 AM

I don't think this is actually finished at the time I'm reviewing, but there's still some advice I can give. I'll also be fairly minimal since this is an actual CMC

  • The interior has a real lack of colour
  • The house ideally should not be so L-shaped
  • The overhang at the back of the house is very, very odd - overhangs should not quite be so large and connect to a single wall
  • One part of the roof is way too tall, they shouldn't be different heights
  • One window is much too large for Ponyville

I'd strongly suggest that you look around at houses in Ponyville to give you some ideas. Try and nail either the interior at least if you don't have time for a full renovation!



#3 MorbidTerror

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Posted 01 March 2015 - 02:14 AM

Adding to the previous critique:

Your furnitures aren't very creative and blend with the floor, a lot of rooms are empty or need more furniture, you don't need to label everything in your house and why are there holes in your front yard?




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