/warp s72
It is based upon a house in the show.
Sorry, I waited too long to submit, school got in the way. I've made a new house. It's already been submitted. /warp s70
Check it out if you like.
Edited by DarkHeartPlays, 04 December 2015 - 10:17 PM.
Posted 25 November 2015 - 11:10 PM
/warp s72
It is based upon a house in the show.
Sorry, I waited too long to submit, school got in the way. I've made a new house. It's already been submitted. /warp s70
Check it out if you like.
Edited by DarkHeartPlays, 04 December 2015 - 10:17 PM.
Posted 29 November 2015 - 01:27 AM
Exterior:
- The house shape overall seems really small. You haven't used up the plot capacity which is always encouraged if you are going to make a proper ponyville house. Admins usually allow CMCs to go over their plot borders by a few blocks.
- Some log patterns in the walls may seem understandable for the house you were basing your CMC build on, however that does not look too good in Minecraft.
- Overhangs are very strange. It seems as if the majority of the first floor is the overhang itself, which should not be the case in a ponyville house.
- Some windows lack in windowsills or flowerbeds if you prefer.
- Some window sizes, for example one block tall windows do not really go well.
- There is an excessive use of the leaf blocks on the roof. Try to get rid of some.
- Well done on the cellar trapdoor.
Interior:
- Because of the house shape and limits, every room aside from the attic gives me the uncomfortable impression of how small the living space is.
- Don't use glowstone to make a full ceiling out of it. It looks terrible. Often admins won't really care about the source of light as long as it covers the areas needed. Because the living space is so small, putting a glowstone lamp in the living room would probably still light up the bathroom.
- On the first floor, the majority of the floor is covered with carpets. Don't overdo the carpets.
- The kitchen is very basic and resembles of those regular minecraft houses with only a few machines necessary for a player to live. Think about things you actually find in the kitchen in real life.
- If I was you, I'd do something about the attic. The yellow roof is exposed greatly to the attic and is not supported by any logs which would've been logical to have in a proper realistic house.
- Nice idea for the bed, but I think it is too large considering the size of the attic. It takes up half of the attic.
- There is quite a lot of bookshelves in a way that's not proportional.
I'd recommend that you take a minute to go through ponyville and have a serious look at both exterior and interior.
Edited by Tanyan, 29 November 2015 - 01:27 AM.
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