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#1 Arashionn

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Posted 13 June 2013 - 05:36 PM

He was born as a pegasus and grew up in cloudsdale. on his first day of school he had a lesson in technology and used a computer for the first time and was amazed!he read about amazing machines like the cider machine by the flim-flam brothers but never saw them. he learnt coding(amazingly) and mechanics by the age of 5 and was assigned to a class project on magic.He was a pegasus so he found it hard but he flew down to the ground and looked around for some magical substance. he was about to give-up when he fell into a flower patch and something poked into his back he looked picked up what he found and he found a red gem.

This gem looked familiar so he read a book on magic he found the alicorn amulet and it looked just like the gem he was holding so he knew he could do something despite not being a unicorn.

he went to his basement and took out his goggles he got as a birth gift. he got some metal and wires and constructed a artificial horn. he brought it to school and got a a++ in magic and technology.He thought he would get his cutie mark but never did and from this day forward he is always trying to find his cutie mark while making other great inventions 



#2 Ice Strike

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Posted 13 June 2013 - 05:41 PM

I think this is supposed to be in the OC backstories thread, just saying.



#3 Arashionn

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 02:12 AM

I think this is supposed to be in the OC backstories thread, just saying.

 


couldnt find it :(



#4 -Hawk-

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 05:14 PM

needs some work . . .



#5 Colgate The Unicorn

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 06:12 PM

needs some work . . .

Eeyup, way overpowered, "Found the Alicorn Amulet"



#6 Slushie

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 06:55 PM

needs some work . . .

I can agree with this. It seems to short, and the part where it says that he just found the Alicorn Amulet is just... odd. the rest of it is sort of okay, but when it says he learned coding that early in his age, that is pushing it slightly. I mean, I could be wrong, but coding is quite difficult, and the fact that he is five... Yeah...



#7 Colgate The Unicorn

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 09:29 PM

and how he made a "Mechanical horn"



#8 Arashionn

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Posted 04 June 2015 - 03:43 PM

RIP OLD POST 2013-2015
oh yeah
hi everyone


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