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#1 BackwaterOtter

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Posted 03 November 2015 - 05:34 PM

I would like someone to critique my submission please

It is at /warp s79

Thanks in advance!

Big Thanks to:

EdwardWoperting
Squu
Abouya14
Coolmannj
Samjones
Naibi
And any other people who took time to critique my house!

I have submitted my house, and no longer require anymore critiques, but thank you all!

Edited by Emerald Rose, 05 November 2015 - 12:32 AM.


#2 Squint

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Posted 03 November 2015 - 08:47 PM

Glad to see you're trying your CMC!

 

This is a pretty good build, but I feel as though it's too large: you shouldn't aim to make the house fill as much of the plot as possible, you should aim to make the house fit a comfortably sized interior. Because of this, you seem to have run out of ideas for the interior which has left especially the attic (top floor) looking a bit barren. You could definitely do with a few more decorations interior and exterior, particularly on the house's east side on the exterior that has ended up looking a bit flat. For the interior, try using different types of wood, flowers, carpets etc. Also fridge.

 

Generally, this is nice and I think it would just pass but there's always room for improvement.



#3 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 03 November 2015 - 11:22 PM

Wow! CMC! Congrats on being a banana.

 

Well, I'll start out on what you should improve on. Your interior is, as Squint pointed out, pretty bare. But from what I look at it, it looks more bare and empty color wise. There are virtually no paintings or anything on the wall. Also, usually something to fix would be making the stairs a different color or material than the floor. Carpets are also a great addition, but don't go overboard.

 

Another thing to improve on the exterior would be adding wall patterns. It makes the exterior walls more lively. If you need reference, Ponyville is your obviously choice. Because your house is so big, you can't do this, but if in any time you make space outside of your house that is still within your plot limit, a small garden couldn't hurt. However, since you can't do that on this current house, perhaps adding a small, thin vine on the roof. Remember, don't make your house look like it was abandoned for 50 years.

 

On the bright side, while the size of the house is excessive, the shape and roof are well done. Most of the different rooms on the second and third floors are pretty well done, however, consider adding in a thing or two so you don't have all this excess space. One room on the third floor didn't have anything at all.

 

Well, that's all I really see currently. This is my first house critique, so if I added too much or too little information, I can improve in future critiques. However, I'm happy to have helped, and good luck on your final result!




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