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#1 Anarchpony

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 12:38 AM

If I read it correctly, the proper coordinates are 171, if I didnt do it correctly, well ill be chatting most of the night anyway, so it wont be hard to get a hold of me, but I do sincerely hope that those 3 numbers are the magic numbers you need.

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#2 Ratty

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 01:32 AM

There's 3 numbers for a coordinate, X Y and Z. For example 100,65,300 or 154,66,-200. You only need the whole number part of the number, so ignore everything after the decimal point.

When you do "/where" it should give you the 3 numbers separated by commas. And thanks for at least trying, I'm totally happy to help people that at least try first.

#3 Anarchpony

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 03:09 AM

well shite then, eh? I cant quite hit the server at the moment because my internet like to be difficult around this time of night most of the time, but rare exceptions that are much too few and far between for my liking, despite that, occasionally Ill be able to sneak in a post during the chaos, but it usually takes anywhere from 3-5 minutes to load pages, depending. its all a patience game, and Im determined to WIN. >:1

Ill try again in a moment to get onto the server, and if I can, Ill F3 it up and get you the coordinates.
((but if it helps in any case, my house is right next door, on the right, to Marylol's fine manor))

EDIT: Yeah, just tried. not a snowball's chance in hell that I can maintain a solid enough connection to the server to accomplish anything meaningful. my 'net usually returns around 0130-0300, if not before, so Ill just have to wait a bit longer. fortunately Ive got stuff to keep this Fox entertained for a few hours....

#4 maxaminus

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 04:03 AM

Ok, we found it.

We're rejecting this submission, but you're on the right track, you just need to spend some more time on it. We're going to grant you an immediate retry with the option of continuing this house or starting a new one. Please post your resubmission no sooner than Tuesday, Nov 22.

Here's what we saw:

GOOD
-Overall structure is amazing, shows a lot of potential.
-Very creative use of glass.
-Exterior is very well done.
-Spacious interior.
-Symmetrical where appropriate.
-Some nice details near the entrance.

NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
-Kitchen feels Incomplete, explore some houses in northern Ponyville to see some kitchen designs.
-Needs lighting, interior can get very dark. Get some glowstone and torches in there.
-Stairway is somewhat hidden and can be missed.
-Solid blocks were used where stairs should be. If you're having trouble finding the ID for a particular block, use the /search command.
-Second floor greatroom is completely devoid of furnishings, please complete it!
-More detailing overall would be nice.

I will leave this thread open for now. Let us know here when you're finished.

#5 Anarchpony

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 11:03 AM

I am extremely grateful that you would give me another shot so soon, and while I was wandering through it again, I had some interesting ideas. I wont say anything just yet, but im sure youll like it...

#6 Anarchpony

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 12:34 PM

nearly done...just adding a few more details such.

#7 Narrator

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Posted 21 November 2011 - 02:25 PM

Approved.


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