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#1 Guardian Selene

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 04:54 PM

I've been working off and on with this story along with two others and I would like some feedback. Please note there might be spelling mistakes and grammar errors. I'm am slowly going to release the chapters becuase they either need proof reading, editing, or finished. I'm a very busy person, so don't rush me. The story takes place on the moon two years before the events of episode one of MLP FIM.

 

PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK

 

 

Background Information

History of Selene

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Prologue

Operation Pest Control 998

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Chapter 1 (Coming Later)


Edited by Commander Nanook, 10 August 2013 - 02:43 PM.


#2 Rhythmition

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 05:49 PM

Commander I could edit for you. I'm out of town right now though so it won't get done for a few days. Just putting the offer out there.

#3 Guardian Selene

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 05:56 PM

Commander I could edit for you. I'm out of town right now though so it won't get done for a few days. Just putting the offer out there.

I'll think about it, but most likely let you be my alpha reader. My current alpha reader has been very busy lately with his college work, plus I think he forgot about being my LR tales alpha reader. So the odds are in your favor.

 

Congrats Flaming your my new Alpha reader


Edited by Commander Nanook, 21 February 2013 - 08:42 PM.


#4 RattlesnakeBites

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Posted 10 June 2013 - 11:37 PM

I could help proof read, if that would be useful.



#5 iluvponies35

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Posted 11 June 2013 - 03:38 AM

I really think you should stop bumping several-month old threads...



#6 Guardian Selene

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Posted 01 July 2013 - 01:27 AM

Well the Prologue is finally out, sorry for the long wait. I had to add/ double check the LSTS codex doc files and deal with college. Chapter 1 might take a long while to finish, since summer and fall classes, working on Flare & Breeze, and a few other things. 

Please give feedback on the prologue and if the footnotes is an ok thing.

 

I could help proof read, if that would be useful.

If I get enough time to write a chapter, I give you a call.




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