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#1 MrButternubs

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Posted 28 October 2013 - 06:20 AM

Hello important person who is reading this!

 

1st: my plot is s53 

2nd: due to a time mix up on my part the house is nearly at completion but not quite there

        (i spoke to Sandwich and explained the situation and was told that it was okay to submit it)

3rd: Whether or not I pass or fail, thanks for the chance!

 

-Mr_Butternubs



#2 Philly

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Posted 24 November 2013 - 04:45 AM

We're going to give you an extra week to improve (and complete!) this house; we like enough of it that we want to see if you can make it better with extra time.

 

Here are the things that need changing:

-The exterior is a little too over-detailed; too many vines/leaves, and the square wooden thing surrounding a lamp on the side is pretty odd and out of theme for Ponyville.

-The first floor is fine, but the second and third floor need a lot of work; I would suggest redoing them completely as they make very little sense

-No bed?

-Many unfinished walls

-Too much of the same dark wood on the second floor!

 

Post back here when you're done. Also, check out the houses at /warp ponyville and the furniture ideas at /warp ikea for more ideas!



#3 MrButternubs

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Posted 01 December 2013 - 05:28 AM

She's all yours.

 

Thanks for the extension.  :)

 

warp s53

 

-Mr_Butternubs



#4 Seabreeze

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Posted 18 December 2013 - 03:21 AM

Approved, but avoid the birch wood columns next time, they are quite ugly.




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