I knew this would happen. It's because the story isn't done, and it's a bit shady at first. I'll try to explain...
Yeah, the first part is a bit common, maybe until the learning curb stops. Then that's where my blood lust begins. Then again, I can try to make it into third-person view. But, that's my chapter 3, the only third person view with a mix of first person. The only reason I made it in FPV, the ending of the book will be dramatic with it, and not so much as in third person.
Actually, my first Idea was he should be a Raider, and escaped the life of it, only to be hunted down. But I saw one in the side stories already, so I scraped that Idea. For the enclave part, That's a few more chapters away. Same concept as you had.
Plus I Roleplay a lot. I know what story to do. I know how to do it. But I don't know how to simplify the logs. It's a bit lengthy and they are voice recordings. Maybe do a mix or written and voice logs? Would that work?
Also... Who's Darion? Oh, you mean Fallout 2. No. I just thought of a random number as a Stable number. I have no Idea what Fallout 2 is. Only played the ones in first person, not good at tactics like that. Kinda bores me.
Edited by Guardian, 26 March 2014 - 06:29 AM.