Alright, so im making a new shop here. My old shop I was always busy and didnt have time to write out a essay on your OC. I will however do a couple sentence opinion on what I do think of your OC instead of doing multiple paragraphs and parts, because it was alot of work. Also a new feature I am offering is helping people create Original Characters! I seem to be fairly good with making characters, but I usually need a base to start with, so I can get started. I usually have a brain blast when I get a couple ideas. You know the drill (By The Way, if you have a OC that was skipped by me on the old post, please get it now, copy and paste it, and make a note that it was on the old post and I will get to it first)
If you want your OC critiqued,
Name: (I will give you my two cents on this)
Gender: (Are you a Stallion, a Mare, a Colt, or a Filly)
Race: (Anything that is canon. Please, I will critique alicorns, but I really dislike them. Only if they have a amazing back story)
Age: (Currently, you can skip this if you are posting your OC's entire life story)
Appearance: (Picture would be nice, but you can write out a description, I will do my best to say what I think of it)
Personality: (Write down what your OC's personality is, make sure you add his or her flaws, and there social, emotional, and mental status)
Back story: (This is really important. What is your OC's life story from birth? It doesn't have to go all the way until they die, just to where they are currently. This is where I will look at what you gave me and give you a honest opinion)
If you want to create a OC,
In Game Name: (That way I can know who you are)
What you are looking for: (This is what you are looking for, but only for AGE, RACE, NAME, GENDER AND APPEARANCE, NOT back story! If you don't know what you want to do for one of these categories, leave it blank, but the more you give me, the more I can work with)
Personality: (What you want your character to act like)
What you want your back story to be: (Give me a general idea of what you want this character to be)
Your Personality!: (What do you act like in real life? Sometimes the perfect OC can be based off how you act. You don't have to answer this)
Hold on a minute. We may need to establish a few rules here. You chose to post your OC, and im going to critique it. Please do not get offended, I am only trying to help you! Also, please try to give me as much information as possible, the more I have, the more I can work with. Also, have fun, please, this is a OC here, dont start fighting in my thread and getting all upset because I dont like your OC's mane. I personally love seeing the servers OC's, and I will try my best to get to everyone.
Edited by Swimchamp565, 20 June 2013 - 03:43 PM.











