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#1 coinboy75

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 12:27 AM

plot s74 i have gotten many builders to critique it and i have finished it thanks Coinboy75



#2 Shroom Agent

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 01:39 AM

Sorry, but we are rejecting your house.

The exterior of your house is a mess of shapes. While ponyville houses do not have a shape such as a cube or rectangular block, they shouldn't be a jumble of pieces either. The interior of your house is too simple. There is a lot of empty space on the first floor. Don't use sandstone for interior walls. Use something like wood instead. There are also too many bookshelves in the attic. Your furniture needs to be better thought-out and more detailed.

Visit /w ponyville to see example houses and /w ikea2 to see furniture examples.


Edited by R9000, 23 January 2016 - 01:41 AM.



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