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#1 Mystic

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Posted 28 March 2015 - 07:03 PM

Hey all I was wondering if you can critiq my house a bit, post the critiq in forums since im very active on here and check my topics several times a day.
Not finished the cmc yet but would like some critiq's while im building.
Started CMC on 3/27/15
Thanks!
And I will have updates on the House below

Here is a Screenshot of outside(so far):
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Here is the Warp:
/w MysticSubmission2
 
Updates:
Exterior Décor almost completed
First floor I believe is finished
Still working on second floor and attic

Edited by Mys7ic, 28 March 2015 - 07:31 PM.


#2 The_Miner_Nick

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Posted 01 April 2015 - 01:12 AM

Well, here are my thoughts on it:

 

  • The back top wall is very simple, I'd recommend some more detail there.
  • Landscaping on the other three sides of the house would make the exterior look better, and your landscaping in front is well done.
  • The shape needs something. It's just a little basic looking, especially the roof.
  • Interior is very well done, no overall comments on that.
  • I'm assuming you're planning on doing something with that attic.

Overall, it looks good, keep it up!




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