Hello. my plot is ready to be judged at /warp s72
My house is ready to be judged.
#1
Posted 15 December 2015 - 02:23 AM
#2
Posted 17 December 2015 - 02:22 AM
Sorry, but we're rejecting your house. For next time, here are some things you can improve:
-Your house shape is very odd. The shape is a little too bulky and basic, lacking any real exterior detail. A smaller, more detailed exterior would have been a better choice.
-Your roof is a bit of a mess. It's too flat and disjointed. Ideally, the edges of your 'A frame' should go down a few blocks further.
-The furniture in your house is a little strange too. There seems to be no toilet in the bathroom, your carpet use is a little excessive, and your upstairs 'attic' room is oddly placed and can only be accessed by a ladder, which doesn't make much sense for ponies.
-You only used red and yellow flowers. There's a lot more variety in flora in the game these days.
-Your windows are only one block tall, leaving them looking a little claustrophobic. Windows should normally be at least two blocks tall.
Better luck next time. Take a closer look at some of the houses in /warp Ponyville to improve your building style.
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