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#1 Gigavoltz

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Posted 27 February 2014 - 07:28 AM

Hey all! I made a practice house that I'm looking to get critiqued.

The warp for the build is /w Derpyhouse.

 

If you could stop by, give it a peak, and jot down some ideas for improvements, I'd be very thankful!



#2 Rulerofblocks

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Posted 03 March 2014 - 05:48 PM

Alright, sorry for the late reply, but I might as well!

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Overall, the tower really drags the house down a lot. I think (Well, me and Kili did this one together) this is either a fail or improve as is if it was a sub. I suggest removing the tower, then it would be a possible pass. But yeah just take a look at all the above tips and try to improve :) Good luck!




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