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#1 Discord_

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Posted 07 November 2015 - 05:02 AM

This is my third time submitting i guess... Anyways, my submission house is ready for rating and assessment. Thank you! ./warp s71 .


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#2 Matthew_Winston

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Posted 08 November 2015 - 03:29 AM

I'm sorry, but your submission has been rejected. The exterior of your building is very large, uniform, and distinctly not Ponyville house shaped. The materials you are using are correct, but the execution needs to be handled better.

The interior has to parts that make it shine, but it seems a bit hectic and cluttered in many places. In addition, you use far too many paintings, try to limit paintings to a total of around 3 or 4. The interior also has a problem in that it could not reasonably support itself. A structure this large would need supports, but primarily, the structure does not need to be this large.

 

You have some good ideas, but they need to be pulled together more cohesively. Warp to Ponyville and take a good look at how the houses are framed and laid out.

I believe that with enough study and planning your next submission could be successful. 




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