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#1 Mrawesome1

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Posted 21 May 2013 - 06:40 PM

comme and look at my test submission house

it's at /warp s80

thank you



#2 Matt

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 04:56 PM

I hope you realize that this house will be submitted when your cmc runs out unless you decide to destroy it and start again; test houses are supposed to be made before applying.

So, lets start; I like the use of materials and the use of a gabled roof, however it is rather simple and physics defying on the exterior. Maybe try adding some patterns and other small details that are used on the other houses in ponyville. I would also recommend looking at your chimney, it is rather large

For the interior, I suggest looking at houses in ponyville for inspiration. My favorite room is the bedroom but it does feel a bit empty. The objects inside the house are very nice, but it could use some more and a slight improvement of the layout so you can show off.

Edited by Matt, 23 May 2013 - 05:00 PM.


#3 Squint

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Posted 26 May 2013 - 11:40 AM

Exterior:

 

Your block choice is excellent, but I have to point out that it feels a bit jumbled and disorganised. I understand this is the trend of Ponyville cottages, but it is far more controlled. The cobweb smoke is unsightly, but I suppose that's just a matter of opinion. I think you should try adding more details, such as vines. You definitely have the right idea though.

 

 

Interior:

 

Again, you have a good block choice but your presentation is still letting you down. Downstairs I suggest you split the area up into two or three smaller rooms, because like Matt said it feels very empty. The paintings definitely add to it, though, and on the subject of detail, I think exactly what you need is a few little features like a larger dining area and some flower pots like the ones you have at the front door.

 

Overall, I think your house just needs a couple of homely details to make it seem more lived-in. At the moment it feels synthetic.




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