First Floor
- The whole entire first floor is carpeted in pink. Quite possibly the worst carpet color, it's blinding and all attention is focused there. If anything, I'd leave the whole floor wood and add in a few carpet rugs here and there.
- The kitchen counters should not be pink like the floor! The kitchen is also very basic, I recommend you spice it up and focus on the needed additions of a working kitchen (Fridge, stoves, work area, etc.) A nice counter/bar area is a great addition.
+ - Personal pet peeve here, but TVs for me are a no! I've never thought they were canon, and that's what we as builders strive for most. Also, it's much too big, if anything the TV would have to be an old box TV.
- The first floor just feels so empty, it needs much more furniture and much LESS carpet. I would remove the TV area and make that into a fireplace/hangout area.
- The lighting in the floor is so weird, I would trip over it all the time! I would put the lights up in ceiling corners or such.
+ - I hate redstone lamps for lighting, I just do. I always ALWAYS use glowstone.
- The stairs are way too large, size them down and you have more space for furniture!
Second floor
- And the second floor is covered in pink too. Like I said, wood for flooring is great. I normally use spruce wood planks.
- I would say as a rule of thumb to NEVER use the same material for inside walls as outside walls. I would say that using wood planks would work well, just not the same color as your floor (ex. you use spruce for the floor, use oak for the walls so they don't blend together).
- The top floor is not separated from the attic at all. This is a big problem because most PV houses have three floors, two for living and a storage attic. The rooms look very tall and strangely built. This is what I mean, I took a screenshot and this is what I see -
See how the walls just go up to meet the roof? That's fine in an attic, but not in a second floor. The height of the second and first floor should be the same. Here it is again in the bathroom, look at how high the ceiling is, the light is so high up -
- I almost missed it with Fullbright on, but the top floor has no lighting in the "hallway" at all! Can't run around in the dark, now can we?
- I've said it three times now: Lose the pink carpet in every room! It looks so bright and clashes with most other colors.
- The bedroom is too basic, you need things like a reasonable looking bed (the one you have looks more like a lawn chair at the moment) and a living space, like a desk and walking space. Also, torches are a big no-no for lighting, I use them as candles sometimes but not very often.
- The bathroom is so basic, where do you get clean? The sign isn't necessary but it is cute and funny. The toilet is a stair with a button, which doesn't look at all like a toilet. If I hadn't been in the bathroom and seen it I would not have known what it was.
- The stairs at the top could use some railing so you don't fall off, down onto the stairs.
- The entire top floor is empty except for two rooms, every space should have furniture! You wouldn't want to live in an empty house, now would you? Adding some quaint little objects like a fish tank or even a small couch area can make a big difference in the vibe of a home.
+ With a lot of work, some larger rooms, and some shape change, the layout could be very nice.