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I Have Now Finished My Ponyville House


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#1 Dr. Freaky

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Posted 01 February 2016 - 07:09 AM

I Have Now Finished My Ponyville House and would like it judged. The Plot is s80.



#2 Shroom Agent

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Posted 02 February 2016 - 01:22 AM

Sorry, but we are rejecting your house.

 

While your house shape is complex, it isn't in the right way. It's overly complex. For example, the house is too large. In the back area of a house, you have a room that is covered by a flat roof. The kitchen which is in this area could have  used a window, to let some light in. The bedroom on the second floor feels empty, and the office that is next to the bedroom is just a small room that is very tall and it only has a desk in it. Consider adding some cobwebs to your attic to make it more attic like.


Edited by Solar Flare, 02 February 2016 - 01:28 AM.



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