I need some one to look at my house plot s64 thank you!
Can a builder look at my house?
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Posted 25 March 2014 - 12:11 AM
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Posted 17 April 2014 - 11:17 PM
Okay, first off it looks like it's been griefed or something because of the windows. Why is one of them half sandstone? Why have some of them been opened in a weird way? I'm sure it must make sense to you for you to have put it in there but to me it just feels really off.
On entering and looking through all the rooms, again it seems like you know what you're doing because of all your signs relating to your OCs, etc, but I still find myself getting a little confused. The placement of the furniture is weird to me but the attention to detail is phenomenal: you have a toilet roll, blender, labelled nightlight, books aplenty, paintings, a TV and even a corner and painting stand for your OC Cometstar! However it feels like you've put more effort into that than you have put effort into getting the build up to standard. It misses, but I think it's because you haven't focused on the fact that this is a test.
What I mean by 'this is a test' is that there's a mark scheme and you have to be able to tick all of the boxes. There are no boxes to fill on having toilet roll or a TV (in fact, TVs are discouraged since Equestria doesn't have that technology), you don't need to have all of these other things that you seem to have painstakingly crammed into your house. It's charming and wonderful that you've put in all of these easter eggs, but it won't help you to pass your CMC test if you really want to become a builder.
This isn't a particularly good build at the moment and it would not pass as it is. You need to improve it.
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