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#1 TheEpicBrony

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 01:45 PM

Its a horror fic but its very well written. I like it but thats just me.

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 01:50 PM

Moved to fanfiction forum.

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 03:25 PM

Where can I find this mysterious fanfic?

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 03:36 PM

http://bit.ly/MI6qLg

Looks like gore-heavy cupcakes-style grimdark to me. Not really my thing.

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 04:17 PM

But wait, I already googled it- OH, it's the Experiments of Twilight Sparkle. I typed in the Elements of Twilight Sparkle. Thanks, Verdana!

#6 TheEpicBrony

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 07:52 AM

Twilight has a letter due at the end of the day but hasn't learned anything on friendship that day. So she decides what better way to study friendship than with the magic of science. So she invites her friends over for a sleepover and they're in for a big surprise. As Twilight discovers new meaning of friendship and finds new love for her friends...her friends only discover new meanings of hatred as the secrets of this twisted pony unfold.

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 07:54 AM

http://bit.ly/MI6qLg

Looks like gore-heavy cupcakes-style grimdark to me. Not really my thing.

yes its very gorey but I'm that kind of person so...yeah...

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 08:07 AM

You don't need two topics for this so I've merged this with your original one.

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 08:20 AM

You don't need two topics for this so I've merged this with your original one.

ok thx

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 10:27 AM

I read it. It was pretty well written as you claimed aside from a few grammar errors. I managed to get a chuckle or two out of how ridiculously Rainbow Dash acted through the second half, and some of what Twilight said. Aside from that, I found the chapters between two and six to be quite good, but the several tiny bits of clop in some chapters I had to scroll through quickly. The seventh chapter was a little bit out of place in my opinion, but it was... grimdark, so mission accomplished?

It made me feel awkward the whole time and it was pretty frightening, but Twilght is still less scary than Pinkamena Diane Pie.

It's not a bad story, though.

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 12:00 PM

yes there are some clop parts that i did not expect and i didn't really read those parts thoroughly either

Edited by Lightning_Bolt, 22 July 2012 - 12:00 PM.


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Posted 22 July 2012 - 12:18 PM

Yep. It was pretty weird. The central looktrogon (still not sure if that's a pun) part was definitely the weirdest. Not the scariest, but it takes the cake for weird.

Imagining it is creepy.

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 12:38 PM

yes quite

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Posted 22 July 2012 - 01:09 PM

Like, it's got the hole in the top, and all the sloppily sewn-together ponies moaning in pain, and Braeburn's body is hanging limp out of the bottom and over in the corner of the room Flim and Flam have been surgically combined into a two-headed spiderpony monster, and Trixie has no bones and is glorping around on the floor because she has no bones.

Shining Armor is just having a soda and chilling with Twilight. He had a rough day, Cadence kicked him out of bed.

Where was I going with this?

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 12:31 PM

Like, it's got the hole in the top, and all the sloppily sewn-together ponies moaning in pain, and Braeburn's body is hanging limp out of the bottom and over in the corner of the room Flim and Flam have been surgically combined into a two-headed spiderpony monster, and Trixie has no bones and is glorping around on the floor because she has no bones.

Shining Armor is just having a soda and chilling with Twilight. He had a rough day, Cadence kicked him out of bed.

Where was I going with this?

The hell did I just read?

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 02:20 PM

Like, it's got the hole in the top, and all the sloppily sewn-together ponies moaning in pain, and Braeburn's body is hanging limp out of the bottom and over in the corner of the room Flim and Flam have been surgically combined into a two-headed spiderpony monster, and Trixie has no bones and is glorping around on the floor because she has no bones.

Shining Armor is just having a soda and chilling with Twilight. He had a rough day, Cadence kicked him out of bed.

Where was I going with this?

Um i didn't read that in the story :/

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 02:42 PM

I know. I'm just letting the mind wander. You see I had an extra soda the day I posted that.

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Posted 23 July 2012 - 08:54 PM

lol

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 12:23 PM

So after reading that, it made me pretty interested in grimdark. Of course you all know Cupcakes, but what other grimdark stories have you read/took an interest in?

Personally I kind of like Flutter, even if it is a little bit weirder than most of the stories out there.

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 02:14 PM

Well there is Slice, then theres Pages of Harmony, and then theres Under the Apple Trees.
Im still looking for more.

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Posted 24 July 2012 - 03:45 PM

I'll have to check them out.

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Posted 26 July 2012 - 11:37 AM

they're very good and well written. Slice does have a weird ending but the story itself is very good.

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Posted 26 July 2012 - 12:57 PM

The following fanfics are Grimdark that shenko passed down to me and I'm going pass down to the next generation.

The Severing (very good)
What Happened Last Week (A little slow at first, but gets really good)
Final Dream of a Filly (Not grimdark, just very sad. One of only two fics to ever make me cry*)
The Journal of the Cupcake Killer (Actually part 6, but you can easily read it by itself. Very dark, I loved it.)

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Posted 27 July 2012 - 12:05 PM

im guessing the the only other fic that makes you cry is My Little Dashie? (i cry every time i read it)

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Posted 27 July 2012 - 12:19 PM

Never read My Little Dashie. I'll see if I can read it over the weekend. And maybe try to read some more of these.

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Posted 27 July 2012 - 05:49 PM

YOU MUST READ My Little Dashie!!!!!!!!

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Posted 27 July 2012 - 07:56 PM

I read it. I didn't cry, but I almost did...

Is there something wrong with me?

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Posted 27 July 2012 - 08:43 PM

The other fanfic that made Shenko cry was fallout equestria but only because he read the whole thing in one sitting.

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Posted 27 July 2012 - 08:55 PM

lol

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 06:55 AM

I'm making my own fic called Secrets Of Equestria. I just started on it and it won't be finished till...much later but when it is ill give you the link

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:32 AM

I look forward to it. What genre?

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 10:41 AM

Its kind of grim dark with a little suspense

its my first fic so...yeah it might not be that good

Edited by TheMixer, 28 July 2012 - 10:41 AM.


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Posted 28 July 2012 - 11:11 AM

Hmm, I will give it a look, I like to see a new writer come up with something, and you just might surprise me.

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Posted 28 July 2012 - 11:25 AM

its not NEAR finished but i will get it done soon

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Posted 01 August 2012 - 03:37 PM

May read it but I hate huge amounts of gore. Blood is fine but not guts and brains every 5 seconds.

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Posted 01 August 2012 - 04:11 PM

braaaaaaaains

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Posted 15 August 2012 - 07:30 AM

no nothing like that...well...not every five seconds at least but its pretty intense...


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