Anypony want to critique my submission?
#1
Posted 05 January 2013 - 11:11 PM
The Warp is /warp s7
Please and Thank You in advance.
#2
Posted 05 January 2013 - 11:47 PM
#3
Posted 09 January 2013 - 11:53 PM
Hey, just wondering if anypony would like to critique my submission house. I would be really greatful for any help.
#4
Posted 10 January 2013 - 08:36 PM
Merged those two posts since they are about the same house
#5
Posted 11 January 2013 - 05:22 PM
Alrighty, I'll start outside.
I would suggest to place an extra block of yellow wool on the north and south faces of the roof to give it the look of a roof overhang. This is simply a decorative thing and if you're not sure what I mean there are a couple of submission houses that have this around you.
The entrance and hallway leading to the stairs is good, but it might be beneficial, in my opinion, to place a doorway between the large open kitchen area and the entrance hall. The reason being that it feels like it's all too open. An alternative to this could be to place a wall between the kitchen counter and the small office-like area directly across from it since it doesn't seem to really coincide with the kitchen.
Moving upstairs, the bathroom is looking good, I don't see anything needing changed there.
I like the little den area as well, but I've never seen a pinball machine in a ponyville house. If there was something more canon that you could switch that out for, that might be a good thing to think about.
And from there, the bedroom looks good as well.
Also, as I walk through the house, I see a lot of paintings on the walls. I would almost say there might be too many of them, but that's also my own personal opinion. I see them as something to place only if the wall seems bare or you're using it for a specific decoration.
I hope this helps somewhat!
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