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Bio:
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Prologue:
Spoiler
Prologue- Rough V.1.1
'Twilight Sparkle.'
The deep, surly voice cut through the seemingly endless pitch black void of Twilight Sparkle's dream realm as she stood, gazing at the desolate plain. She was aware of herself and her body however, there was neither nothing around her nor anything below her as she stood on air. Peering through the onyx haze that surrounded her, Twilight could not discern which direction the voice had spoken from. The voice had bombarded her from every direction and reverberated off of unseen walls that surrounded the lavender unicorn.
'Hello? Who's there?'
She answered back, her voice sounding weak and tiny compared with the booming voice.
'Twilight Sparkle.' The voice repeated.
'How do you know my name?'
She replied in a different direction, trying unsuccessfully to find the source.
'You have been living a lie Twilight.'
'What?'
Twilight asked, utterly confused. The crypticness of the voice catching her off guard.
'Your life, since you defeated Nightmare Moon , never happened.'
Twilight's demeanor soon turned pensive as she furrowed her brow, deep in thought. She couldn't believe what she was hearing! It had been over a year since she had met the 5 ponies which had become her best friends in Ponyville, during the last Summer Sun Celebration. How could it not have happened?!
'All will be revealed, Twilight.' The voice interjected, breaking through her stream of thought.
Her attention was now fixed on the words from the voice, which now spoke with an urgent tone. She had a strange feeling that this strange being spoke the truth, but brushed the feeling away it as it spoke again.
'Remember this if nothing else when you awaken.'
'A nightmare or a dream is what you are in, the truth you will find if you look within. Seek out the one they call Flare Pie. He can show you the truth, then enter the blue "Police" booth. '
Once the voice spoke the last syllable, the void started to collapse around Twilight, pulsing violently around her. Suddenly the transparent platform on which she stood collapsed. Twilight screamed as she was falling.
Falling…
Falling…
Falling...
'Twilight Sparkle.'
The deep, surly voice cut through the seemingly endless pitch black void of Twilight Sparkle's dream realm as she stood, gazing at the desolate plain. She was aware of herself and her body however, there was neither nothing around her nor anything below her as she stood on air. Peering through the onyx haze that surrounded her, Twilight could not discern which direction the voice had spoken from. The voice had bombarded her from every direction and reverberated off of unseen walls that surrounded the lavender unicorn.
'Hello? Who's there?'
She answered back, her voice sounding weak and tiny compared with the booming voice.
'Twilight Sparkle.' The voice repeated.
'How do you know my name?'
She replied in a different direction, trying unsuccessfully to find the source.
'You have been living a lie Twilight.'
'What?'
Twilight asked, utterly confused. The crypticness of the voice catching her off guard.
'Your life, since you defeated Nightmare Moon , never happened.'
Twilight's demeanor soon turned pensive as she furrowed her brow, deep in thought. She couldn't believe what she was hearing! It had been over a year since she had met the 5 ponies which had become her best friends in Ponyville, during the last Summer Sun Celebration. How could it not have happened?!
'All will be revealed, Twilight.' The voice interjected, breaking through her stream of thought.
Her attention was now fixed on the words from the voice, which now spoke with an urgent tone. She had a strange feeling that this strange being spoke the truth, but brushed the feeling away it as it spoke again.
'Remember this if nothing else when you awaken.'
'A nightmare or a dream is what you are in, the truth you will find if you look within. Seek out the one they call Flare Pie. He can show you the truth, then enter the blue "Police" booth. '
Once the voice spoke the last syllable, the void started to collapse around Twilight, pulsing violently around her. Suddenly the transparent platform on which she stood collapsed. Twilight screamed as she was falling.
Falling…
Falling…
Falling...
Chapter 1:
Spoiler
Twilight woke with a start, beads of sweat matting and disheveling her usual luster in her sable mane. Yawning and sitting up in bed, the words of the strange voice reverberated through her psyche as she tried to make sense of the strange dream.
'Did that really happen? What could it possibly mean? If I never lived in Ponyville then…'
She rose slowly out of her bed rubbing her head.
'Ooh.. Why am I believing dreams all of the sudden? I mean really Twilight! It was just a dream that's all.'
Taking deep breaths, she calmed down and dismissed the dream as nerves for today. Rising off the bed, she made her way into the bathroom and splashed cool water on her glistening lavender coat and mane. Ready for the day, she soon set her mind on the preparations for today's long anticipated event. She would need to be focused all day if things were going to go according to plan. All of Ponyville was gearing up for another visit from Princess Celestia after the wedding at Canterlot. The rest of Ponyville was excited and carefree, but Twilight had learned from the last two times what happens when the Princess visits. Silently snaking her way through the numerous piles of books she had yet to study, Twilight's thoughts wandered back to last time Celestia had visited.
'Come on Twilight! Have some faith in your friends! After the parasprite incident, things can only get better from here, right?'
Twilight rolled her eyes to herself. 'Yeah and maybe Rainbow Dash will read a dictionary.' She quietly tiptoed across the quiet the door exiting out of the Ponyville library. Glancing up to the basket where Spike slept, she considered waking him to help in the morning's preparations.
'Spike should sleep in for once. With all the excitement going on, he deserves some rest.'
Opening the door with a slight creek, she stepped outside into the bright morning sunrise. It was going to be another beautiful day! Twilight set off at a brisk trot towards Town Hall, taking in the alluring decoration which lined every street which boasted the arrival of royalty. Houses with bright, vibrant décor of every hue popped out from every direction at the unicorn. Things were already looking up! Arriving at the intricate framework of the rotunda, Twilight stepped onto the porch and glanced around, confused.
'Well that's weird. Everypony should be here for Mayor Mare's scheduled speech!'
Gazing down the streets that surrounded the rotunda, Twilight noted the absolute stillness. The streets, devoid of any living creature, shuddered at the tickle of the morning breeze. Walking around the cylindrical structure, Twilight peered down every street and corner. Chills shot down her spine as she saw… nothing.
'What's going on? Where is everypony?'
Racking her brain, she remembered at least that she had seen Spi-
She didn't see Spike this morning. She just assumed he was there as usual! In fact, I didn't remember seeing any ponies on her way over here!' Panic soon overtook all emotion in Twilight.
'Oh please no! Not Spike! '
Twilight hoped to Celestia that the unthinkable had not happened.
Holding onto the slight tendril of remaining hope, she took off like a rocket. Sprinting faster than ever before, she navigated back down the winding gravel path towards her tree house through the approaching hot tears. Her hoof beats clopping rhythmically against the ground, as she tore through Ponyville. Sliding to a stop in front of the library door, Twilight threw it open, and desperately called out.
'Spike? Spike!?'
Twilight took the stairs two at a time and stopped at the foot of Spike's bed. She slowed her pace as she approached the side of Spike's bed. Grasping the baby blue blanket, Twilight carefully lifted up and peered below it...
Twilight wailed in sorrow and wept as she found the bed vacant.
She had lost her family.
'Did that really happen? What could it possibly mean? If I never lived in Ponyville then…'
She rose slowly out of her bed rubbing her head.
'Ooh.. Why am I believing dreams all of the sudden? I mean really Twilight! It was just a dream that's all.'
Taking deep breaths, she calmed down and dismissed the dream as nerves for today. Rising off the bed, she made her way into the bathroom and splashed cool water on her glistening lavender coat and mane. Ready for the day, she soon set her mind on the preparations for today's long anticipated event. She would need to be focused all day if things were going to go according to plan. All of Ponyville was gearing up for another visit from Princess Celestia after the wedding at Canterlot. The rest of Ponyville was excited and carefree, but Twilight had learned from the last two times what happens when the Princess visits. Silently snaking her way through the numerous piles of books she had yet to study, Twilight's thoughts wandered back to last time Celestia had visited.
'Come on Twilight! Have some faith in your friends! After the parasprite incident, things can only get better from here, right?'
Twilight rolled her eyes to herself. 'Yeah and maybe Rainbow Dash will read a dictionary.' She quietly tiptoed across the quiet the door exiting out of the Ponyville library. Glancing up to the basket where Spike slept, she considered waking him to help in the morning's preparations.
'Spike should sleep in for once. With all the excitement going on, he deserves some rest.'
Opening the door with a slight creek, she stepped outside into the bright morning sunrise. It was going to be another beautiful day! Twilight set off at a brisk trot towards Town Hall, taking in the alluring decoration which lined every street which boasted the arrival of royalty. Houses with bright, vibrant décor of every hue popped out from every direction at the unicorn. Things were already looking up! Arriving at the intricate framework of the rotunda, Twilight stepped onto the porch and glanced around, confused.
'Well that's weird. Everypony should be here for Mayor Mare's scheduled speech!'
Gazing down the streets that surrounded the rotunda, Twilight noted the absolute stillness. The streets, devoid of any living creature, shuddered at the tickle of the morning breeze. Walking around the cylindrical structure, Twilight peered down every street and corner. Chills shot down her spine as she saw… nothing.
'What's going on? Where is everypony?'
Racking her brain, she remembered at least that she had seen Spi-
She didn't see Spike this morning. She just assumed he was there as usual! In fact, I didn't remember seeing any ponies on her way over here!' Panic soon overtook all emotion in Twilight.
'Oh please no! Not Spike! '
Twilight hoped to Celestia that the unthinkable had not happened.
Holding onto the slight tendril of remaining hope, she took off like a rocket. Sprinting faster than ever before, she navigated back down the winding gravel path towards her tree house through the approaching hot tears. Her hoof beats clopping rhythmically against the ground, as she tore through Ponyville. Sliding to a stop in front of the library door, Twilight threw it open, and desperately called out.
'Spike? Spike!?'
Twilight took the stairs two at a time and stopped at the foot of Spike's bed. She slowed her pace as she approached the side of Spike's bed. Grasping the baby blue blanket, Twilight carefully lifted up and peered below it...
Twilight wailed in sorrow and wept as she found the bed vacant.
She had lost her family.
Chapter 2:
Spoiler
Twilight awoke, sprawled on the cold wood floor of her library. Raising her head, she peered outside the dusty windows, panes glowing orange in the sun’s gaze.
'I must've fallen asleep.' she muttered to herself.
Groaning and sitting up, Twilight's muscles yelled at her in protest. The hard, unforgiving floor had not been kind to her as she slept. Getting up, the uneasiness and tension in her stomach dispersed and she felt a little better. Suddenly, it hit her.
'Celestia's visit was scheduled for noon! What time is it?!'
Spinning around so she faced the clock upstairs, Twilight squinted as she couldn't believe what she saw. It read “13:64 PM."
'Wha-? How is that possible?' she said, believing her eyes were playing tricks on her again.
Twilight shook her head. "13:64" She then closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and opened them. "13:63"
'I have to get to the bottom of this! Everypony disappearing, now the clock is going crazy! They can't all be just coincidences!'
Now wide awake, and more confused than every before, Twilight rubbed away the dried tears from earlier and stepped outside into the dusk surrounding Ponyville. Searching for any remnants of the life she once lived. *************************************************************************************
‘Give me her chart’
Name: Twilight Sparkle
Patient No. 000001-A
Blood Pressure: 120/70
Blood Type: M
Race: Unicorn
Sex: Female
Notes: (See timestamps on P.12)
- Embryo is confirmed and stable in parent [CONFIDENTIAL]
- Birth
- 1-A Sickness detected; Diagnosis: Cold
- Gained entrance to Magic School for Gifted Unicorns; Direct control assumed- authorization: X32-7459
- Subject 1-A has adapted well to stimuli and passed all physical and magic strain tests.
- Literacy/ Arithmetic mastery rate: Exponential- Commonness: Rare
- Directive given by leader: [CONFIDENTIAL]
- Subject react code: 34B to Holos:1,3,4,5 Code35Y to Holos:2,6
- Subject 1-A’s Directive: Success
- Subject has passed all tests.
- Initiate [CONFIDENTIAL-34DJK] procedures until further instructed by both leaders.
‘The need has arisen for Twilight’s abilities. It is as we have foreseen. We both agree. The time has come.’
'Are you sure she's ready?'
'Yes.'
'Both of you are positive? We have already initiated extraction as ordered, but her reemergence process could be dangerous. You remember our last subjects! 00083-B and 00084-M suffered cascading nervous system failures! Not to mention-'
'I am aware of 83 and 84 Doctor. Twilight is different. She'll survive. She must survive.'
‘At our current stage, the temporal processes are deteriorating. If we do it, we have to do it now.’
An eerie silence settled between the two as they gazed at the peaceful looking unicorn.
‘Do it.'
*************************************************************************************
Twilight had been searching for at least an hour now, and still had turned up nothing. She had checked houses, barns, trees, and even in the clouds using a cloud-walking spell for her friends. All she had found were more memories and tears. With darkness cascading its haze upon Equestria, Twilight returned to the lonely, dark shape of an empty house. Approaching the library, Twilight had descended into her deepest thoughts as to why this could have happened, but ultimately found no answer in books or in the left belongings of her friends. As she arrived at the welcome mat at the foot of her door, she noticed a light on in her room that she hadn't left on before! Quietly opening the door, she peeked around the corner and found the intruding creature! A very peculiar looking pony jumping on her bed!
'Hey! What are you doing in my house?!'
Twilight exclaimed. Startled, the light red colored pony flopped off the bed. In his daze Twilight's attention turned to this strange pony's cutie mark. It was in the shape of a mushroom, but made out of clouds. Twilight had never seen such an odd cutie mark before. Suspicious, Twilight took a few steps towards him. Jumping up off the floor, the intruder turned and faced the direction of the assailing voice and immediately recognized the owner.
'Oh! Hey there! I didn't see you come in! My name is Flare Pie! I think you're friends with my sister, Pinkie.' he said running up and extending out a hoof.
'Yes… err, I'm Twi-'
'Oh I know who you are! You're Twilight Sparkle!'
Flare exclaimed knowingly, shaking her hoof violently.
'HoOOOooow dooooOOooo yoOoou knoooOOOw my naAAAme?' Twilight asked, positive she had dislocated something.
'I was sent by my boss to give you this!' he said, springing up and down with giddiness similar to that of Pinkie when she was excited. 'Well I guess there's no denying the relation there.'
Twilight thought to herself as she regathered her wits. Flare reached into his nearby saddlebags and took out a cube-shaped device. Handing it to Twilight she stared at the intricately etched metal which glowed aqua in the swirling designs. Upon reaching her hooves, the previously dormant cube sprang to life, crackling with energy. As an image began to materialize, Twilight had nearly dropped it in astonishment!
'Holograms? But last time I check that technology was just in the research stages in Canterlot! It won't be invented for at least another 100 years!'
As she looked at the hologram in awe, a million questions flooded her mind at once, but forgotten immediately as she gasped and stared at the image before her.
'Hello Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student.'
'I must've fallen asleep.' she muttered to herself.
Groaning and sitting up, Twilight's muscles yelled at her in protest. The hard, unforgiving floor had not been kind to her as she slept. Getting up, the uneasiness and tension in her stomach dispersed and she felt a little better. Suddenly, it hit her.
'Celestia's visit was scheduled for noon! What time is it?!'
Spinning around so she faced the clock upstairs, Twilight squinted as she couldn't believe what she saw. It read “13:64 PM."
'Wha-? How is that possible?' she said, believing her eyes were playing tricks on her again.
Twilight shook her head. "13:64" She then closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and opened them. "13:63"
'I have to get to the bottom of this! Everypony disappearing, now the clock is going crazy! They can't all be just coincidences!'
Now wide awake, and more confused than every before, Twilight rubbed away the dried tears from earlier and stepped outside into the dusk surrounding Ponyville. Searching for any remnants of the life she once lived. *************************************************************************************
‘Give me her chart’
Name: Twilight Sparkle
Patient No. 000001-A
Blood Pressure: 120/70
Blood Type: M
Race: Unicorn
Sex: Female
Notes: (See timestamps on P.12)
- Embryo is confirmed and stable in parent [CONFIDENTIAL]
- Birth
- 1-A Sickness detected; Diagnosis: Cold
- Gained entrance to Magic School for Gifted Unicorns; Direct control assumed- authorization: X32-7459
- Subject 1-A has adapted well to stimuli and passed all physical and magic strain tests.
- Literacy/ Arithmetic mastery rate: Exponential- Commonness: Rare
- Directive given by leader: [CONFIDENTIAL]
- Subject react code: 34B to Holos:1,3,4,5 Code35Y to Holos:2,6
- Subject 1-A’s Directive: Success
- Subject has passed all tests.
- Initiate [CONFIDENTIAL-34DJK] procedures until further instructed by both leaders.
‘The need has arisen for Twilight’s abilities. It is as we have foreseen. We both agree. The time has come.’
'Are you sure she's ready?'
'Yes.'
'Both of you are positive? We have already initiated extraction as ordered, but her reemergence process could be dangerous. You remember our last subjects! 00083-B and 00084-M suffered cascading nervous system failures! Not to mention-'
'I am aware of 83 and 84 Doctor. Twilight is different. She'll survive. She must survive.'
‘At our current stage, the temporal processes are deteriorating. If we do it, we have to do it now.’
An eerie silence settled between the two as they gazed at the peaceful looking unicorn.
‘Do it.'
*************************************************************************************
Twilight had been searching for at least an hour now, and still had turned up nothing. She had checked houses, barns, trees, and even in the clouds using a cloud-walking spell for her friends. All she had found were more memories and tears. With darkness cascading its haze upon Equestria, Twilight returned to the lonely, dark shape of an empty house. Approaching the library, Twilight had descended into her deepest thoughts as to why this could have happened, but ultimately found no answer in books or in the left belongings of her friends. As she arrived at the welcome mat at the foot of her door, she noticed a light on in her room that she hadn't left on before! Quietly opening the door, she peeked around the corner and found the intruding creature! A very peculiar looking pony jumping on her bed!
'Hey! What are you doing in my house?!'
Twilight exclaimed. Startled, the light red colored pony flopped off the bed. In his daze Twilight's attention turned to this strange pony's cutie mark. It was in the shape of a mushroom, but made out of clouds. Twilight had never seen such an odd cutie mark before. Suspicious, Twilight took a few steps towards him. Jumping up off the floor, the intruder turned and faced the direction of the assailing voice and immediately recognized the owner.
'Oh! Hey there! I didn't see you come in! My name is Flare Pie! I think you're friends with my sister, Pinkie.' he said running up and extending out a hoof.
'Yes… err, I'm Twi-'
'Oh I know who you are! You're Twilight Sparkle!'
Flare exclaimed knowingly, shaking her hoof violently.
'HoOOOooow dooooOOooo yoOoou knoooOOOw my naAAAme?' Twilight asked, positive she had dislocated something.
'I was sent by my boss to give you this!' he said, springing up and down with giddiness similar to that of Pinkie when she was excited. 'Well I guess there's no denying the relation there.'
Twilight thought to herself as she regathered her wits. Flare reached into his nearby saddlebags and took out a cube-shaped device. Handing it to Twilight she stared at the intricately etched metal which glowed aqua in the swirling designs. Upon reaching her hooves, the previously dormant cube sprang to life, crackling with energy. As an image began to materialize, Twilight had nearly dropped it in astonishment!
'Holograms? But last time I check that technology was just in the research stages in Canterlot! It won't be invented for at least another 100 years!'
As she looked at the hologram in awe, a million questions flooded her mind at once, but forgotten immediately as she gasped and stared at the image before her.
'Hello Twilight Sparkle, my faithful student.'
Edited by Golfmann14, 16 November 2012 - 10:08 PM.




