i Have finished my house and i was wondering can someone Critique it for me?
Plot: S19
Posted 13 January 2013 - 03:25 AM
i Have finished my house and i was wondering can someone Critique it for me?
Plot: S19
Posted 14 January 2013 - 02:07 AM
Exterior:
> for the most part, it looks pretty nice.
- one thing that really stands out though is is the logs in the walls are very spotty and random, whereas ponyville houses use the wood for structural support, not just aesthetics.
- also red fences arnt very traditional for ponyville houses either.
- the window below the overhanging balcony looks very awkward.
- the balcony it'self looks very unsupported. you'll notice that a lot of the houses from the show have some sort of support that keep up their balconies or overhanging windows.
- also, just a personal preference, i don't know how the admins will like it, but the blue roof looks kind of odd to me.
Interior:
- one thing i noticed immediately on walking in is your rooms are very empty. i would suggest adding alot more furnature in almost every room/area. maybe hit up /warp ikea or ponyville for some ideas.
- also you have alot of paintings.
- i don't know if you knew, but your house is on fire too.
- your kitchen table looks really cramped.
- your attic also looks very plain, id suggest sprucing it up a bit with some "old" furniture or something besides just a whole bunch of chests. think about whats in your attic.
Overall:
- overall if you just make some tweaks, your house will be in pretty good standing.
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