Most of this is touched on in near identical fashion, but after seeing the misstake repeated, or made in a rather large fasion, I thought it best to also sepparate these into their own section to better explain my view on it.
- Flooring switches multiple times, examples being second floor (compare the "arrival" to that near the couch, the floor for the bedroom and the one for the bathroom). All this contributes to giving a rather messy look to the house, as if the builder violently tried to mash ideas left and right and hoped it would give a acceptable result. This is not the case as the house instead comes across as verry much so as bland, and flat out boring.
Many of these changes you have done on the floor aren't needed to begin with, or could easily be toned down as the change just isn't neededto begin with atleast.
(If it isn't needed, and rarely done at all in Ponyville, I sincerely doubt a submisson has to include it)
- If the flooring and roof (since using it for both is best due to consistency) consists of a material such as the default wooden planks, I HIHLY dissadvice making the interior walls in the same materials, as you get no clear divide between the three of them. and they blend togeather in a rather ugly fashion. Then duing furnishments directly connected to the wall in the same material (default wood floor: default wood walls: default wood furnishing: and defaul wood roof) causes a REALLY ugly blend, such as the case of the attic bedroom, there is absolutely no way to easily sepparate walls from the floor and roof, and walls from furnishing.
You do not even have to go far with it, as just using, for example spruce wood, instead of the default wood i walls,
would nearly eliminate the problem completely.
(In my personal oppinion, sepparating exterior and interior walls is in general actually something unecessary or flat out bad since it is rather difficult to make them blend well unless you use simmilar materials, but that is my own oppinion, and I am not asking you to follow it when I know the directions tell you to do the opposite compared to me)
- Take the time, and remain calm, eliminating potential smudges should never be done if it just damages the look in the end
This is something I've noticed in general when looking at your house.
It looks rushed, and as if it's shining through on every corner that you are terrified of failing, in how near frantiqly you've tried to cover any potential smudge that could put your passes of chances under question. (in refference to the frame work)
If this is not the case, then I deeply apologise for assuming it, but it has nontheless projected itself on your house when I look at it, and it's a thing I'd rather not see.
Framing is downright exessive on the exterior in multiple occasions.
Areas do not connect very well when materials suddenly change right in the middle of something, and most in general just looks slapped togeather as if it has been seen somewhere else.
You've done well to come this far, some people never even do their first try, even less their second, so the fact that you're even trying at this point is commendable.
Remain calm, and remain confident, you will pass this time if you give this the needed time to be as perfect as it can be.
This is in particular refference to an earlier conversation today. Use the most of your week to build your submission, and then to get Builders to critique it. If no Builders are interested when yo ask them to, jus try again later, or even the next day.
Just as long as you can, by the end of the day, say this "This cannot be made better",
If there is still time to improve it, and it might be possible to improve it, do it.
Never submitt a work you aren't 100% satisfied with.