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#1 sosoawesome26

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Posted 02 February 2016 - 11:12 PM

I've tried once more on my submission build:)

 

Plot: s73, /warp s73



#2 Shroom Agent

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Posted 02 February 2016 - 11:55 PM

We've decided to give your house an improve.

 

Your house feels a bit small still, but it is much better than your last attempt. Please do not edit the shape of your house, just work on the existing house without re-sizing it. The windows on the first floor, that connect to the dining room and the one that is next to it should not have been placed there. The window on the right just looks into a fence post, and the window position behind the dining table also looks weird from the interior. The bedroom on the second floors gives a claustrophobic feel. While fence posts are a good way to give staircases support, you do not need a wall of fences to support the stairs. Just make it like guide rails, and do not have them connect to the floor.

 

Reply to this thread when you have finished with the changes requested above.



#3 sosoawesome26

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Posted 03 February 2016 - 12:16 AM

I did it. I didn't change the structure like you said but i did make all the other changes:)



#4 Shroom Agent

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Posted 03 February 2016 - 12:28 AM

Approved, but that isn't what we had in mind for the window.

 

 

I was thinking either removing the back part of the seats, and making it a 2x2 window, or just removing the window entirely. 




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