I've finished my submission, I hope it's up to snuff. I'll admit, it's not much, but I put all my skill and knowledge into it. If there's anything that can be improved then I'm open for any and all constructive criticism.
Here's the coordinates:
x: 43
y: 72
z: 27
Moon_Dew's Submission House
Started by Moon_Dew, Oct 28 2011 05:09 PM
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#1
Posted 28 October 2011 - 05:09 PM
#2
Posted 28 October 2011 - 06:03 PM
This house is really close to passing. It took us a little while to decide. this is what we came up with. This is what I would like you to do.
The idea was to build a modern ponyville themed house, which you did pretty well. Walking around your house, it feels really basic, and simple. This would work for a normal house, but it would not cut it if it were to be put in Equestria. Try to be a little more creative! The second floor had hardly any interior at all. That's what bothered me the most. You seem like you really tried, and payed attention to the rules, so I would like for you to improvise a bit with your interior decoration. Mainly on the second floor. Once you did this, and feel you are finished, please post back for a second judgement. Thank you
The idea was to build a modern ponyville themed house, which you did pretty well. Walking around your house, it feels really basic, and simple. This would work for a normal house, but it would not cut it if it were to be put in Equestria. Try to be a little more creative! The second floor had hardly any interior at all. That's what bothered me the most. You seem like you really tried, and payed attention to the rules, so I would like for you to improvise a bit with your interior decoration. Mainly on the second floor. Once you did this, and feel you are finished, please post back for a second judgement. Thank you
#3
Posted 30 October 2011 - 12:58 PM
Okay, been a bit but I think I've finished updating my submission. Same place as before. I'm ready when you are.
Thanks for giving me that second chance; I'm actually starting to believe that you're ponies instead of people, and I mean that in the best way, of course.
Thanks for giving me that second chance; I'm actually starting to believe that you're ponies instead of people, and I mean that in the best way, of course.
#4
Posted 31 October 2011 - 12:31 AM
Accepted!
Much better! Thank you
Much better! Thank you
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