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#1 Varisity

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    Hi, why are you are even looking here?

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 07:33 AM

So... Here's a RP I've been developing, and I want to see if anyone likes it.

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It had been eleven years since the argument started. Twilight, she wanted to go further with science, leaving the elements of harmony behind. Celestia and Luna confronted her, made a stand. The argument, it went on for 4 years. The argument started developing into something more... A war. Twilight abandoned her friends one day, and flew towards the castle. She attacked. They drove her off but something inside her had changed. Her lessons of friendship, the power of the elements were leaking away from her. Twilight, she was in her basement for two years before she came out. With weapons of science, of mass destruction. She gathered a army, but what she didn't know was that her enemy was doing the same. Soon it was pure civil war. The war machines rattled on the roads, puffing out extreme gases which clouded the sun. The princesses army marched across the road, ready for battle. It was soon all over. Twilight had won but her army was starving. She looked up to see gases clouding the sun. No food grew for 6 years. But by then Equestria had been corrupted, it's food often wilted and grass was black as coal. Ponies left on ships, on rafts, on straps of wood to survive. You have not left. You stayed. You were brave enough to tackle this land and return it to its former glory.

Rules:
1. No god modding or op characters.
2. No NSFW.
3. All other Forum RP rules apply.

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Appearance:
Personality:
Short Bio (What did you do during the war?):
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So that's about it! Tell me what I could improve if you think I need to.

Edited by Purple Shadows, 15 November 2013 - 07:48 AM.


#2 Coloratura

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 07:46 AM

I'll apply when my computer gets repaired, but I just need to ask a question to clear things up. Was the war a battle between Twilight's machines and Celestia's traditional equestrian army? Or did I miss something completely?

#3 Varisity

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 07:49 AM

Yes, it was but her war machines were driven by ponies so that's why her army was hungry.

#4 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 11:49 AM

Ok.

This looks fun, like it could be a really fun RP, so I am so in this.

:D

 

Name: Hot Shot
Age: 26
Gender: Stallion
Race: Unicorn
Appearance: >> Will update ASAP <<
Personality:  Caring, kind but tends to get irritated easily. Enjoys hanging out with friends, but has learnt to be tough due to his time without a father.  
Short Bio (What did you do during the war?): Before the war hit, Hot Shot enjoyed a happy family and child hood with his parents, but held great sadness later in his life when his father was killed by a roadside bomb. Has leant how to use weapons in a relatively good fashion, but yearns for old Equestria.  



#5 Varisity

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 03:21 PM

Since people seem to like this ill actually add it to the apps. Anyone who has already applied a character will be included all ready.

#6 SugarCrystal

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 03:42 PM

Is this in-game?

If it is I will apply once I get back home.

#7 Varisity

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 03:43 PM

No, it isnt sorry.



#8 SugarCrystal

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 03:49 PM

Ok, thanks.

That would be cool if you had your own land that looked trashed.

Edited by SugarCrystal, 15 November 2013 - 03:51 PM.



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