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Luna's first filly chapter one


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#1 fox150

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 02:51 AM

hey every pony hows it going :) well lets just get rite to the point i just got done with a story i had bin working on for a month now and i want to share it with you so here you go please enjoy :)

 

 

http://night-fire123...filly-413426007 just a heads up this story is split up into 7 parts and i left a link to the next part at the bottom of the page :)



#2 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 09:26 AM

I had a quick skim read, a few grammar errors, but looks good.



#3 fox150

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Posted 14 November 2013 - 07:26 PM

I had a quick skim read, a few grammar errors, but looks good.

thanks and im sorry for the bad grammar im not really good at writing lol




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