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#1 Tj032803

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Posted 05 January 2015 - 05:42 AM

The warp is /warp s71 Pease review it Thank You!



#2 Squint

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Posted 07 January 2015 - 08:15 PM

Sadly, this build doesn't look too good at all!

 

-It shouldn't be square

-The ceiling's much too high on the second floor

-You need to be more creative with furniture: use different types of wood, maybe

-A pillar of water is not a bathroom

-The floor shouldn't have glowstone on it

-A fridge and a furnace in a wall are not a kitchen

-You need a barrier so that ponies don't fall down your staircase

-There's no furniture in the hallway of the second floor

-The yellow roof shouldn't be exposed inside

-The roof needs to overhang the walls on all sides

 

You've got a long way to go! Nailed the materials, though. I'd say take a break after this one and do some practice builds in one of the derp worlds. Good luck!




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