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#301 castle13oblivion

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Posted 13 April 2013 - 06:28 PM

The hair doesn't look too good, swap that out for a lighter colour. Oh and try not to use the tail styles of the main 6 ponies. Other than that, he's fine.

which of the mane 6 has that tail style? i try to avoid the mane 6 for that reason. granted, i dont feel the tail matches the mane anyway

 

thanks for the critique



#302 deactivated-333333333

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Posted 14 April 2013 - 01:10 PM

which of the mane 6 has that tail style? i try to avoid the mane 6 for that reason. granted, i dont feel the tail matches the mane anyway


I think it's twilight's tail.

By the way guys, I'd appreciate if you'd post after I critiqued your OC. It's kind of annoying when I spend at least 10 minutes of my time critiquing a group of OCs then never getting a reply back.

#303 Snopes13

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Posted 14 April 2013 - 09:20 PM

I think it's twilight's tail.

It isnt twilights tail, twilights tail is longer. It's Photo Finish's tail :)

Edited by Snopes13, 14 April 2013 - 09:22 PM.


#304 Living Ordyin

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Posted 14 April 2013 - 09:33 PM

I'm going to be brutally honest here. I apologise if any of the following offends you.

 

This OC, is to be frank, an eyesore, and one of the most overused kinds of OCs I've seen. Making a colour-swap of vinyl scratch is extremely popular for some reason. Here are some tips to getting your OC to not be kind of awful

1. Change the mane and tail to something that isn't a direct colour swap of vinyl scratch's 

2. Change the body colour to something that doesn't stand out so much and not black

3. Use more than 2 colours in your OC's design, here you've used nothing but black and purple

4. Try to come up with an idea for an OC that isn't yet another DJ, there's already approximately 1432135 of them in the community.

 

Again, sorry if I've been harsh, but you have a ways to go before your OC is acceptable.

I had a stroke of genius! Ok, since is name is living, how about he's a doctor?

 

Light Gray Coat, Reddish Hair (to symbolise the health colours I guess)

 

New Living: living_oc_2_by_a_living_pony-d61qsbe.png


Edited by Living, 14 April 2013 - 09:55 PM.


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Posted 15 April 2013 - 05:48 AM

I had a stroke of genius! Ok, since is name is living, how about he's a doctor?

 

Light Gray Coat, Reddish Hair (to symbolise the health colours I guess)

 

New Living: living_oc_2_by_a_living_pony-d61qsbe.png

 

That's actually a lot better, and it's not a complete strain on the eyes. Nice job.



#306 CraftyAllie

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 06:14 AM

I finally drew an updated picture of Tumble Wonder!

 

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You like? :3

 

Also, thanks for the last critique, I'm glad you like her! :D



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Posted 21 April 2013 - 02:45 AM

I finally drew an updated picture of Tumble Wonder!

 

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You like? :3

 

Also, thanks for the last critique, I'm glad you like her! :D

 

Spoooky.

 

 

(Updating the first post btw)


Edited by Jasplosion, 21 April 2013 - 02:45 AM.


#308 Fohlen Ein Formschön

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Posted 22 April 2013 - 10:57 PM

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Mind might I ask I keep switching OC's XD Mind telling me, how does this look? 
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#309 Eighth Note

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Posted 25 April 2013 - 10:15 PM






Firstly, those hooves do not fit a pegasus. Those hooves are the kind that a hardworking earth pony colt has, like Big Macintosh. Your OC's body type doesn't fit the hooves either. Also, for the hair, mane and eyes, Pastelspastelspastelspastelspastels. The eye, mane and tail are all too dark.

So overall, just get rid of those hooves or change the body time, and switch those colours out for some Pastels.


 

Sorry for taking such a long time haha, is this any better?

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Edited by Eighth Note, 25 April 2013 - 10:16 PM.


#310 John Smith

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Posted 25 April 2013 - 10:47 PM

Im not exactly willing to change it and im aware the hoof color really shouldn't be that but just tell me what you think

 

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#311 deactivated-333333333

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Posted 06 June 2013 - 04:32 AM

How not to make an OC 101:

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Sorry for taking such a long time haha, is this any better?

 298259_10200863967979980_1580821737_n.jp

 

Nothing I can see that needs improvement.



#312 Virelen

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Posted 06 June 2013 - 04:35 AM

yo jas, how's this new OC of mine look?

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if you can't tell, it's a soda bottle with a gear.



#313 Silver Rock

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Posted 06 June 2013 - 07:06 PM

How does my OC look?

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#314 deactivated-333333333

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Posted 07 June 2013 - 01:36 AM

yo jas, how's this new OC of mine look?

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if you can't tell, it's a soda bottle with a gear.

 

pretty nice, the colours complement each other well, but try making the eye a little lighter, i think that'd look pretty nice. other than that, it's good (helps that blue is my favourite colour)

 

How does my OC look?

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the coat would be acceptable had you used a different colour than black in the mane, it's an improvement over the last revision you made since it's not an RD recolour, but it still needs refinement. try using different colours other than black to even out the balance between lightness and darkness in the colour scheme.



#315 Turbo Maximus

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Posted 07 June 2013 - 02:27 AM

EXTREME ZEBRA UPGRADE

 

my new and better OC...the world needs more zebras (note neon green hair is suppossed to be very drippy and incorporeal not actually hair)

 

http://fc01.devianta...mus-d67rchc.jpg

 

PS ( i rushed this piece...so the eye brow was extremely wonky)



#316 deactivated-333333333

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Posted 07 June 2013 - 07:36 AM

EXTREME ZEBRA UPGRADE

 

my new and better OC...the world needs more zebras (note neon green hair is suppossed to be very drippy and incorporeal not actually hair)

 

http://fc01.devianta...mus-d67rchc.jpg

 

PS ( i rushed this piece...so the eye brow was extremely wonky)

 

to be honest i have absolutely no idea what you mean

 

Anyway

most zebra OCs I've seen, and i mean this in the nicest way possible, are just attempts to make the owner's OC seem special and different. there is a grand total of one zebra in all of MLP, so there should be a lack of zebra OCs in order to fit into canon (assuming that people make OCs that fit into the canon, which isn't always true). the lime green is an eyesore to be honest, and doesn't fit with the white coat at all.



#317 Night_Breeze

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 06:54 PM

Sterling Hooves

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Stallion

 

 

 

 

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#318 Lieutenant Delta

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Posted 14 June 2013 - 09:44 PM

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Ana Belle 

 

Pegasus 

 

Mare

 

You can critique the foal in the first picture, who is Zeus Belle, another OC. I dont think you have alot to work there with though




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