If I could get some feedback on my house at /w Zombie13 that would be nice. Thanks in Advance
Zombie's 13th Practice house
#1
Posted 21 May 2014 - 03:54 AM
#2
Posted 21 May 2014 - 09:09 AM
It looks Ponyville standard to me. Here's a few criticisms though, because I felt there ought to be some anyhoo:
-Fill in those empty spaces with simple accents, like small tables or plants. Anything to fill out a room.
-Turn down the brightness and see if you can't improve your lighting somewhat. It is good already, but some areas appear a bit dimmer than others.
-Think of how storage might really look in an attic space. Minecraft chests seem altogether too gamey but that does not mean they have to go, if you know how to make them fit in. Consider shelving units or similar solutions. Carpets stack on top of themselves.
Looking at this, I cannot see what more there is to improve. You've done everything and more that is required of you to pass as a builder. Most builders have done far less than you and have passed the test. I myself included. I only improved way after I passed. You can do this, Zombie, no doubting it there.
#3
Posted 21 May 2014 - 12:47 PM
Seems pretty good, you've done well. However, the ground floor really shouldn't be entirely open-plan and there's no dining table! Your garden could also benefit from a few more plants and maybe a picnic table. Finally, the attic should probably have a few cobwebs! None of this is necessary, but it's what I'd like to see.
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