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#1 Starlight Aurora

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Posted 16 December 2013 - 10:58 PM

Hi I would like a critique on my practice build.

 

The warp is /warp Starlightpracticebuild (Don't ask why)

 

You can take your time.

 

 



#2 Captain Char

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Posted 20 December 2013 - 12:04 AM

IM going to get right to it

Exterior:
needs roof overhangs, and needs more windows, Id also suggest mixing the sand type blocks to give your house some texture.

Interior:
kinda bland, your kitchen could use a tile like flooring, IM not sure why you didn't use stair blocks. There is also a lack of life in the house, it seems bare.
the bathroom seems out of place due to the wall.

overall: Id suggest touring ponyville houses, and ikea2, as well as asking other builders in game

#3 wondernerd

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Posted 23 December 2013 - 05:47 PM

okay, here we go

 

exterior:

first, overhangs

in the back, don't put a tree, it's really awkward

get more creative, tour ponyville houses for ideas

 

interior:

i have to agree with char, it's kind of bland on the inside, and just because you have carpets doesn't make the house decorative

the bathroom's walls clash with the birch oddly, fix that

add more storage units, and decorate, decorate, decorate!!

 

basically, just look over the ponyville houses in ponyville, and search the ikeas for decorative design ideas



#4 Squint

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Posted 26 December 2013 - 06:35 PM

Exterior:

• Don't make your house L-shaped.

• Ponyville houses don't have balconies.

• Overhang your roof! It makes the building look less flat.

• Don't forget windows at the front.

• The glowstone lamp is obtrusive.

 

Interior:

• The house feels empty.

• What's the structure in the back room on the ground floor?

• Where's the decor? No paintings.

• Random leaf block in the bathroom?




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