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#1 Ki-Tomo

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Posted 02 June 2014 - 03:06 AM

Name: Solus Pinion
 
Gender: Male
 
Race: Changeling
 
Age: 14
 
Appearance: A changeling whom has had a hard lot in life, Solus's body shows the history of each challenge he has faced. Scars cover roughly 40% of his body, and his carapace has been damaged to such an extent that in some areas, it is missing entierly. What areas that aren't covered in scars or wounds, show the beginnings of fresh healing.
 
The reason for the scaring is quite obvious, as a genetic mutation has resulted in a deep red coloration to his eyes and wings. While in pony society this would be accepted, in the monochromatic tunnels of the Changeling Hive, such outliers are ostrasized and persecuted. Fortunately, not all members of the hive are so prejudiced, allowing him the occasional reprieve.
 
Personality: 
 
Solus, due to the abuse he has recieved, prefers to work alone on any task he has been assigned. This has made him a very eligible canidate for scouting duties, which have done nothing to help his social skills. The end result is a quivering ball of social confusion.
 
Fortunately for his psyche, the self reliance that being a solo scout requires has given him a large amount of will and independence. Thanks to this, while he may not have a way with words, he definatly has made his mark through actions. Just ask those he's saved from suffering the same fate as his own.
 
Biography: 
 
The only reason why Solus wasn't killed at birth was due to the intervention of a single drone. If the drone had not interviened, Solus would have been destroyed for his genetic deformation alone, as was standard procedure. Sadly, the drone died while on another assignment, his position having been critically damaged by saving Solus from an early demise. Solus was a changeling that pursued a life of solitude and enjoyed watching other people fail at their own cost. Solus never made many friends that really cared for him. He met one changeling who simply acted as a friend but was manipulating him in order to gain material goods.
 
-Queen assigns to scouting
-Wanders far and wide
-Returns to the hive to find things abandoned
-Moves on to proto-equestria area
 
 
 
 
Other:
 
-Hates being called 'Pinkling'.
-Known for defeating the dreaded cake monster
-REALLY hates being called 'Pinkling'.
-Has been suspected of chronic pranking, but was never proven.
-Seriously, don't call him 'Pinkling'. The last guy who did is still in the infirmary.
-THIS RESUME IS SHORTENED

 

 


#2 Aoloebio

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Posted 07 June 2014 - 08:11 AM

The appearance and personality sections are great but the biography is currently lacking in content, your biography ends with a short bulleted list of events which would make for some good additional storytelling if fully expanded upon.




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