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#1 BlueShield123

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Posted 06 October 2013 - 01:17 AM

 

Just a little RP I wanted to do, since there are others, and it seems like alot of fun! If you I call something a different name from what it was in the fanfic, please let me know. Because I have a hard time remembering certain things like that. I do want AT LEAST 1 person who's read the fanfic for this purpose please. (And if you say you did, please be honest...)

 

---Remember, if you've never played Fallout, you don't have to know how! I can teach you the ropes and everything through RP! Just let me know that you don't so I'll be able to help. (Don't be a nuisance and ruin the fun for everyone else please.)

 

----I won't do any rolls, but PLEASE be realistic in what you do... If you're no good with guns, don't make yourself expert marksman in all of equestria, or poorly skilled in medecine, don't make yourself the team surgeon...

 

----If you're NOT a unicorn, I will not allow any use of magic.

 

---If you're not a pegasus, I will not allow any use of flight.

 

---No Changelings... No Alicorns... No exceptions.

 

 

 

 

 

        War. War never changes. When the megaspells consumed Equestria, those who survived did so in great, underground Stables. When they opened, their inhabitants set out across ruins of the old world to build new societies, establish new villages, and form new tribes. As decades passed, what had been the Equestrian southwest united beneath the flag of the New Celestial Republic, dedicated to old world values, democracy and the rule of law.

As the Republic grew, so did its needs. Scouts spread east, seeking territory and wealth, in the dry and merciless expanse of the Marejave Desert. They returned with tales of a city untouched by the Megaspells that had scorched the rest of the world and a great wall spanning the Clopalato River. The NCR mobilized its army and set it east to occupy the Hoofer Dam and restore it to working condition. But across the Clopaloto, another society had arisen under a different flag. A vast army of slaves, forged in the conquest of 86 tribes: Sombra's Legion. Four years have passed since the Republic held the Dam, just barely, against the Legion's onslaught. The Legion did not retreat. Across the River, they gathered strength. Campfires burned, training drums beat. Through it all, the New Pegasus Strip has stayed open for business under the control of its mysterious overseer, Mr. House and his army of rehabilitated Tribals and police robot ponies.

 

 

Read FO:E? Y/N

Played Fallout? Y/N

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character. :)

 

Name-

Age-

Gender-

Race-

Build-

Eye Color-

Mane/tail color-

Mane-tail style-

coat color-

cutie mark-

Clothing (if applicable)-

Voice-

 

Personality-

Likes-

Dislikes-

Bio- (Please limit the use of dead or missing parents...)

 

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

 

Points left- 650

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter-

Guns-

Energy Weapons-

Explosives-

Lock pick-

Medicine-

Melee Weapons-

Repair-

Science-

Sneak-

Speech-

Survival-

Unarmed-

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength-

Perception-

Endurance-

Charisma-

Intelligence-

Agility-

Luck-

 

Inventory

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

 

 

THIS WILL BE MY CHARACTER!!!! And an example for you!

 

Read FO:E? Y

Played Fallout? Y

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character. :)

 

Name- Blue Shield

Age- 21

Gender- Male

Race- Pegasus

Build- Tall and muscular

Eye Color- Pale blue

Mane/tail color- Gold

Mane-tail style- His tale is long and flowing, his mane is rather short and hung in a curtain style.

coat color- White

cutie mark- A Blue Shield

Clothing (if applicable)- A vest to hold any ammunition, healing poltuces, so on.

Voice- Deep, but very sweet and gentle

 

Personality- Very protective over his friends and tends to react extremely violently to someone who brings harm to them. More often, Blue is kind and compassionate toward anyone seeking his help and he tends to be wise beyond his years.

Likes- Protecting others, eating.

Dislikes-Spiders, those wanting to do harm to his friends, and fighting (Especially without reason.)

 

Bio- Blue Shield never lived in the stables, but his mother was a former merchant, and his father was in the NCR until his recent death. Blue Shield always respected his dad and always wanted to grow up to be like him. His mother was a very sweet and gentle mare, and always taught him to treat others kindly. Blue Shield has lived in what was Canterlot in the pre war world, until one day he left home to move to Appleloosa and help the folk there. When he left, his mother gave him an old pip buck, which didn't seem to work. After aiding in defeating some fiends, he settled down in the town and became the new sheriff. From that day forward, he's protected Appleloosa and its citizens from any harm.

 

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

 

Barter- 10

Guns- 100

Energy Weapons- 15

Explosives- 15

Lock pick- 15

Medicine- 100

Melee Weapons- 100

Repair- 100

Science- 5

Sneak- 50

Speech- 15

Survival- 100

Unarmed- 75

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L.

Strength- 8

Perception- 7

Endurance- 8

Charisma- 5

Intelligence- 5

Agility- 5

Luck- 2

 

Inventory

 

5 Healing poultices

1 RadAway

1 Combat knife

1 9mm Pistol (35% condition)

100 9mm rounds

 

Perks-

1- Guardian's breath- Having a protective nature, this character gains +5 to all combat stats, but loses 1 perception, when his friends are in danger

 

2- Big Iron- Desperate times call for desperate measures... When this character is at 10% health, he relies on "Ol' Reliable" (A .44 magnum with the name etched down the side of the barrel) through S.A.T.S. (When available) To do the talking for him, allowing him to instantly kill his target if the bullet hits.

 

3- Musical Medic- When listening to music, this character gains +100% to medical skill saves. (NOTE: This is only applicable to radio, the effect negated if it's someone humming or whistling.)

 

4- Commando- When using a rifle or similar weapon, this character gains +5% hit chance when using S.A.T.S.

 

5- Center of Mass- This character doesn't go for fancy headshots. He just wants to get the job done! This character now has +5% chance of hit on body shots when using S.A.T.S.

 

6- Concentrated fire- When using S.A.T.S, this character can focus his fire to certain body parts to increase his chance of hit with each consecutive shot.


Edited by BlueShield123, 17 October 2013 - 05:22 AM.


#2 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 06 October 2013 - 02:09 AM

I would love to join, but im really new when it comes to RPing, but will gladly learn.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 04:45 AM

I would love to join, but im really new when it comes to RPing, but will gladly learn.

 

Awesome! Just read through everything and make an app. You can easily make one by copying the empty one and building off of it. If you've got any questions, feel free to ask!

 

Also, don't hesitate to join friends. What fun is kicking butt and chewing gum if you're all outta gum, I say! XD



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 06:58 AM

You know what, I'll join, just for the heck of it.

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Name- Guardian Braveheart

Age- 16

Gender- Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build- Tall and a bit skinny

Eye Color- Dark blue

Mane/tail color- Black and white

Mane-tail style- Spiky

coat color- Turquoise

cutie mark-

Spoiler

Clothing (if applicable)- Whatever was the clothes in Fallout

Voice-

https://www.youtube....h?v=07lSvwh6GRw

(Sorry, audio problems in video.)

 

Personality- Paranoid, friendly, kind

Likes- Hiding, Lone wolf, Guns (And Lots of it), Melees

Dislikes- Other persons, Traitors, CQC

 

Bio- All his life, he lived in the stables. He never knew what the outside world looked like. He has only heard stories about it, before the incident that almost demolished the whole land. The dream of looking at nature and seeing plants and trees are gone. The only trees he saw was from the pictures of the books he had. everything was gone, including the mysterious disappearance of his parents. He continues to find the truth about his parents, he tries to search for it all his life. But given the fact that he doesn't even know whether his parents are still alive or dead, he seems bothered by the sights of the complete families in the stable. With his friends support, he tries to accept that the world was destroyed and the hope of rebuilding it is slim.

 

Spoiler

Points left- 650

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 45

Guns-75

Energy Weapons- 60

Explosives- 45

Lock pick- 45

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 30

Repair- 50

Science- 45

Sneak- 55

Speech- 50

Survival- 60

Unarmed- 30

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 10

Endurance-5

Charisma-2

Intelligence-10

Agility- 4

Luck- 3

 

Inventory

 

3 Med Kits / Health Poltices

1 Rifle (40% working order)

1 Dagger

5 10/10 Magazines for rifle

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

1. Aim - Takes time to aim the weapon at any part of the body. The character will get a far more devastating attack from a long range with one shot. +20% attack with effect. - 30% Agility.

Effects: Disability / Disarm / Bleeding

 

2. Camouflage  - Hides into any surrounding. When hiding, this character blends into his surroundings, making him 50% harder to detect.

 

3. Sharp eye - Makes precise aims at long range targets.  +30% perception. - 10% Agility.

 

4. Sneak - Sneaks up behind the enemy for a massive silent takedown. Being light footed helps! When sneaking, this character has the option to silently subdue a target. 50/50 chance of success.

 

5. Once more - At the peek of near death, gets +20% Agility and Strength for a small amount of time. Also - 10% Endurance.

(Will add more if I thought of any more. I'll reach it up to 10.)

 

Also, it was a long time ago that I played fallout. I didn't read fallout: equestria yet. But I do know the ropes of it.

 

If there's anything wrong, just let me know. Hope this RP will be fun.

 

Done editing.


Edited by Guardian, 06 October 2013 - 10:17 AM.


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 07:27 AM

You know what, I'll join, just for the heck of it.

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Name- Guardian Braveheart

Age- 16

Gender- Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build- Tall and a bit skinny

Eye Color- Dark blue

Mane/tail color- Black and white

Mane-tail style- Spiky

coat color- Turquoise

cutie mark-

Spoiler

Clothing (if applicable)- Whatever was the clothes in Fallout

Voice-

https://www.youtube....h?v=07lSvwh6GRw

(Sorry, audio problems in video.)

 

Personality- Paranoid, friendly, kind

Likes- Hiding, Lone wolf, Guns (And Lots of it), Melees

Dislikes- Other persons, Traitors, CQC

Bio- Finding the truth about his parents, he tries to search for it all his life. With his friends support, he tries to accept that the world was destroyed and the hope of rebuilding it is slim. Also a novice marksman, with 3/-3 difference aim.

 

Spoiler

Points left- 650

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 55

Energy Weapons- 50

Explosives- 55

Lock pick- 50

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 60

Repair- 50

Science- 50

Sneak- 55

Speech- 55

Survival- 60

Unarmed- 50

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 10

Perception- 6

Endurance-5

Charisma-2

Intelligence-10

Agility- 4

Luck- 3

 

Inventory

 

3 Med Kits

1 Rifle (40% working order)

1 Dagger

5 10/10 Magazines for rifle

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

1. Aim - Takes time to aim the weapon at any part of the body. +20% attack with effect. - 30% Agility.

Effects: Disability / Disarm / Bleeding

 

2. Hidden - Hides into any surrounding. +50% chance of miss.

 

3. Sharp eye - Makes precise aims at long range targets. +30% accuracy/perception. - 10% Agility.

 

4. Sneak - Sneaks up behind the enemy for a massive silent takedown. 50/50 chance of success. Only knock out, not kill.

 

5. Once more - At the peek of near death, gets +20% Agility and Strength for a small amount of time. Also - 10% Endurance.

(Will add more if I thought of any more. I'll reach it up to 10.)

 

Also, it was a long time ago that I played fallout. I didn't read fallout: equestria yet. But I do know the ropes of it.

 

If there's anything wrong, just let me know. Hope this RP will be fun.

Juuuust a few things... Nothing real big... I'll go in order.

 

First thing I noticed, was that you were very short with your backstory. If you'd be a little more detailed than a couple of lines, that'd be suweeet!!!

 

Second thing, and this is my fault, I didn't put a guns skill in the skills tree. If you would please throw that in there, I'd really appreciate it. I'm gonna go into the base and fix that error.

 

third, If he's a marksman, I'd suggesst lying more along the lines of guns or energy weapons, along with perception, rather than balancing it out and putting everything onto Strength. Strengh is good if you want a pack mule, or a tank, but definately not a marksman.

 

fourth, For aim, you might want to elaborate a little more with its description. Because as I interpret it, it's like Blue Shield's "Concentrated Fire" Perk.

 

Fifth, for hidden, I'd suggest changing the name to "Camoflauge" And making the effect along the lines of "When hiding, this character blends into his surroundings, making him 50% harder to detect."

 

LAST BUT NOT LEAST, Sneak is fine, but I'd suggest changing it to "being light footed helps! When sneaking, this character has the option to silently subdue a target!"

 

Other than that, it was a really good character, and I hope to see you in the RP! Please invite a friend or two! Better to kick butt and chew gum, right?


Edited by BlueShield123, 06 October 2013 - 07:32 AM.


#6 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 06 October 2013 - 07:57 AM

Ill just jump in and have a go ^_^

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sonic Lightning

Age- 15

Gender-Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build-Average height and body

Eye Color- Aqua with a slight tint of green

Mane/tail color-Aqua with black stripes 

Mane-tail style-A long smooth style

coat color-White

cutie mark-A black lightning bolt

Clothing (if applicable)-

Voice- Light but can be deep at times.

 

Personality- Sonic can be very shy sometimes, but enjoys hanging out with a handful of friends. He is very into magic, reading and books, as his friends often find him stuck deeply into a novel, or asleep with one lying on him. He is also kind, and caring about his friends.

Likes- Reading, books, studying, learning

Dislikes- Large groups, heat, tight spaces

Bio- When sonic was younger, he loved hanging out with his parents, and didn't go outside much, which may have contributed to his shyness. He grew up a average pony, but at the age of 11 started readying many books. He read the norm of books, like adventure and action, but soon got stuck into magic. When the war hit, and his family had to go into shelter, he had many books, and lots of time to read and master his magic. As of now he has learned lots of spells, but is still uncomfortable around lots of people, and since he lost two of his friends, he has been very sad.

 

If you need any more reference about his appearance, just look at my profile pic.

 

Points left- 

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 50

Energy Weapons-  100

Explosives-  50

Lock pick- 40

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 15

Science-  50

Sneak- 100

Speech-  10

Survival- 75

Unarmed- 50

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 8

Endurance-  6

Charisma- 6

Intelligence- 8

Agility- 5

Luck- 1

 

Inventory

1 Med Kit

1 10mm Handgun  (40% working order)

1 Dagger

350 rounds - 10mm

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

Intense Magic - Focuses all remaining magic into a very powerful bolt, which drains all remaining magic and deals extreme damage to the enemy

 

Nimble Magic - Can shoot twice and reload twice as fast

 

Rush - A short burst of speed allows for barging type attack to break through enemies

 

Bright Light - Uses magic to create a light (Magic drains when on)

 

Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

Cloak - Uses magic to completely disappear. Player cannot attack whilst cloaked (Magic drains when cloaked)

 

 

 

Minute Transport - Uses magic to teleport a few meters. Useful for getting behind enemies. (Teleport limit: 10 meters)

 

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​Sorry about those many mistakes, but I think I have fixed it. If there's any more, just tell me.


Edited by Sonic Lightning, 06 October 2013 - 09:44 AM.


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:11 AM

Ill just jump in and have a go ^_^

 

Read FO:E? Y/N

Played Fallout? Y/N

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sonic Lightning

Age- 15

Gender-Stallion

Race- Alicorn

Build-Average height and body

Eye Color- Aqua with a slight tint of green

Mane/tail color-Aqua with black stripes 

Mane-tail style-A long smooth style

coat color-White

cutie mark-A black lightning bolt

Clothing (if applicable)-

Voice- Light but can be deep at times.

 

Personality- Sonic is a very keep to himself pegasi. He often doesn't hang out with other pegasi and prefers to hang out up in the clouds with himself. He does though, enjoy racing. Allot. And when he wins, he can sometimes, almost be up himself  :P. He finds it hard though, to hang out with others as friends due to his shyness, and takes compliments lightly. After Rainbowdash, he is the second fastest pony in all of Equestria. He looks up to Rainbowdash, and one day hopes to as fast as her, but not before he masters the art of socialization. Though, through his life he has had one friend, his only friend, Fluttershy. Him and her share the same trait of shyness and is why they get on so well. Recently Sonic performed a Sonic Lightning/Rainboom, which surprised Rainbowdash greatly, but when she confronted him he didn't know what to say apart from hello, and flew away.

(You did ask for a long one, so there you go ^_^

Likes- Racing, Flying, Competition, open fields, sky

Dislikes- Large groups, water, tight spaces

Bio- When Sonic Lightning was younger, he tried to perform a Sonic Rainboom, but it backfired terribly and he ended up in critical care. But after his wings healed, he was not afraid to take to the skys again.

His lifelong dream is to fly with the Wonderbolts, and be faster than Rainbowdash

 

If you need any more reference about his appearance, just look at my profile pic.

 

Points left- 

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 50

Energy Weapons-  100

Explosives-  50

Lock pick- 20

Medicine- 20

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 20

Science-  5

Sneak- 100

Speech-  5

Survival- 100

Unarmed- 50

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 7

Perception- 10

Endurance- 10

Charisma- 5

Intelligence- 9

Agility- 10

Luck- 5

(The tens are due to his ecxellent flying skills)

Inventory

1 Med Kit

1 Handgun (40% working order)

1 Dagger

5 10/10 Magazines for the Handgun 

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

Intense Magic - Focuses all remaining magic into a very powerful bolt, which drains all remaining magic and deals extreme damage to the enemy

 

Restoration - Uses magic to heal self, or for extra, heals allies (Magic drains as play heals)

 

Bright Light - Uses magic to create a light, or a bright light to blind enemy's (Magic drains as the light is on)

 

Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

Cloak - Uses magic to completely disappear. Player cannot attack whilst cloaked (Magic drains when cloaked)

 

Breach - Uses magic to form a huge energy blast, useful for breaking away rock or pushing back enemies

 

Minute Transport - Uses magic to teleport a few meters. Useful for getting behind enemies. (Teleport limit: 10 meters)

 

​If there's anything wrong, just give a heads up, also, as you may see my character uses heavy magic :P

 

 

K, if he's a pegasus, he CANNOT use magic. If you want to use magic, he'll have to be a unicorn. So that'll have to go.

 

I didn't need a long personality, I need a long bio. And it seems with the personality, you gave me two bios. So you'll need to fix that a little.

 

I gave a limit of 40 points. The only way to getting past that is to use the "Intense training" Perk. And I only allow a stack of 3. So you're going to have to get rid of alot of your points. When given limits, you need to follow them. Going over them takes the fun out of it for everyone because then you'd be way too overpowered.

 

What kind of handgun is it? is it a 9mm? a 10 mm? a .380? or is it a .50 cal Desert Eagle? You need to specify so I know what kind of heat you're packing.

 

Lastly, you're a pegasus, and you've got way too many perks laying more for magic. Sorry, but unless you're a unicorn, that's gotta go.

 

EDITED: Also, FO:E takes place a long time after the events of the FiM series. So you'll need to get rid of your relations with Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and aspirations of the Wonderbolts. Since they'd be long gone and dead by now.


Edited by BlueShield123, 06 October 2013 - 08:12 AM.


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:16 AM

K thanks for the heads up, I'm new to it so I thought I would have some mess ups :P



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:19 AM

K thanks for the heads up, I'm new to it so I thought I would have some mess ups :P

Don't worry about it. If you need to ask me anything, please do. It's what I'm here for. I'll also be in the RP with you guys for that reason.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:22 AM

Oh yah, I did the editing, check if it's ok now.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:43 AM

You know what, I'll join, just for the heck of it.

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Name- Guardian Braveheart

Age- 16

Gender- Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build- Tall and a bit skinny

Eye Color- Dark blue

Mane/tail color- Black and white

Mane-tail style- Spiky

coat color- Turquoise

cutie mark-

Spoiler

Clothing (if applicable)- Whatever was the clothes in Fallout

Voice-

https://www.youtube....h?v=07lSvwh6GRw

(Sorry, audio problems in video.)

 

Personality- Paranoid, friendly, kind

Likes- Hiding, Lone wolf, Guns (And Lots of it), Melees

Dislikes- Other persons, Traitors, CQC

 

Bio- All his life, he lived in the stables. He never knew what the outside world looked like. He has only heard stories about it, before the incident that almost demolished the whole land. The dream of looking at nature and seeing plants and trees are gone. The only trees he saw was from the pictures of the books he had. everything was gone, including the mysterious disappearance of his parents. He continues to find the truth about his parents, he tries to search for it all his life. With his friends support, he tries to accept that the world was destroyed and the hope of rebuilding it is slim. Also a novice marksman, with 3/-3 difference aim.

 

Spoiler

Points left- 650

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 45

Guns-75

Energy Weapons- 60

Explosives- 45

Lock pick- 45

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 30

Repair- 50

Science- 45

Sneak- 55

Speech- 50

Survival- 60

Unarmed- 30

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 10

Endurance-5

Charisma-2

Intelligence-10

Agility- 4

Luck- 3

 

Inventory

 

3 Med Kits

1 Rifle (40% working order)

1 Dagger

5 10/10 Magazines for rifle

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

1. Aim - Takes time to aim the weapon at any part of the body. But with patience the character will get a far more devastating attack from a long range with one shot. +20% attack with effect. - 30% Agility.

Effects: Disability / Disarm / Bleeding

 

2. Camouflage  - Hides into any surrounding. When hiding, this character blends into his surroundings, making him 50% harder to detect. Chances of the enemy seeing you could be their last.

 

3. Sharp eye - Makes precise aims at long range targets. If you're going to be the best marksman in all of Equestria, you should really practice this, about a mile shot or so. +30% perception. - 10% Agility.

 

4. Sneak - Sneaks up behind the enemy for a massive silent takedown. Being light footed helps! When sneaking, this character has the option to silently subdue a target. 50/50 chance of success. Only knock out, not kill.

 

5. Once more - At the peek of near death, gets +20% Agility and Strength for a small amount of time. Also - 10% Endurance. It's your chance of survival, don't waste it.

(Will add more if I thought of any more. I'll reach it up to 10.)

 

Also, it was a long time ago that I played fallout. I didn't read fallout: equestria yet. But I do know the ropes of it.

 

If there's anything wrong, just let me know. Hope this RP will be fun.

 

Done editing.

 

K, still a few things wrong. Starting with the bio.

 

You can take out that note mentioning his skill in marksmanship. It's not needed and takes extra time to read.

 

I'd rather not have anyone with dead or missing parents... Because EVERYONE thinks of it, and it takes all of the creativity out of it.

 

Great job in staying in your limits! :)

 

Med kits are Healing poultices in FO:E. I don't remember what doctor's bags were. I'll need to read the fan fic again when I can find time.

 

The side comments on your perks can go. Again, they serve no purpose and waste time to read. Your "Their chance of seeing them is their last" The side comment about "If you're going to be the best shot in Equestria so on and so on... The "But with more patience" Remark, "Only knock out, but not kill" There's one on just about every one of them. And let me know once you're finished with your character. Because once they're accepted, I won't allow any changes.


Edited by BlueShield123, 06 October 2013 - 08:46 AM.


#12 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:43 AM

I fixed up my application, so it should be better now, if there's still a few mess ups here and there, just tell me.


Edited by Sonic Lightning, 06 October 2013 - 09:03 AM.


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 08:58 AM

Ill just jump in and have a go ^_^

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sonic Lightning

Age- 15

Gender-Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build-Average height and body

Eye Color- Aqua with a slight tint of green

Mane/tail color-Aqua with black stripes 

Mane-tail style-A long smooth style

coat color-White

cutie mark-A black lightning bolt

Clothing (if applicable)-

Voice- Light but can be deep at times.

 

Personality- Sonic can be very shy sometimes, but enjoys hanging out with a handful of friends. He is very into magic, reading and books, as his friends often find him stuck deeply into a novel, or asleep with one lying on him. He is also kind, and caring about his friends.

Likes- Reading, books, studying, learning

Dislikes- Large groups, heat, tight spaces

Bio- When sonic was younger, he loved hanging out with his parents, and didn't go outside much, which may have contributed to his shyness. He grew up a average pony, but at the age of 11 started readying many books. He read the norm of books, like adventure and action, but soon got stuck into magic. When the war hit, and his family had to go into shelter, he had many books, and lots of time to read and master his magic. As of now he has learned lots of spells, but is still uncomfortable around lots of people, and since he lost two of his friends, he has been very sad.

 

If you need any more reference about his appearance, just look at my profile pic.

 

Points left- 

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 50

Energy Weapons-  100

Explosives-  50

Lock pick- 20

Medicine- 50

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 10

Science-  50

Sneak- 100

Speech-  5

Survival- 50

Unarmed- 30

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 8

Endurance-  6

Charisma- 6

Intelligence- 8

Agility- 5

Luck- 1

 

Inventory

1 Med Kit

1 10mm Handgun  (40% working order)

1 Dagger

5 10/10 Magazines for the Handgun 

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

Intense Magic - Focuses all remaining magic into a very powerful bolt, which drains all remaining magic and deals extreme damage to the enemy

 

Restoration - Uses magic to heal self, or for extra, heals allies (Magic drains as play heals)

 

Bright Light - Uses magic to create a light, or a bright light to blind enemy's (Magic drains as the light is on)

 

Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

Cloak - Uses magic to completely disappear. Player cannot attack whilst cloaked (Magic drains when cloaked)

 

Breach - Uses magic to form a huge energy blast, useful for breaking away rock or pushing back enemies

 

Minute Transport - Uses magic to teleport a few meters. Useful for getting behind enemies. (Teleport limit: 10 meters)

 

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​Sorry about those many mistakes, but I think I have fixed it. If there's any more, just tell me.

 

You only spent 515 points... Are you SURE you don't want to spend the rest of your points?

 

Can't go in magazines... You need to tell me exactly how many rounds you have. i.e. 400 rounds, or 56 rounds. This makes it easier to know when you're out of ammunition.

 

You need to take out the restoration perk... You're using magic to heal, and personally, I see that as being over powered since that's not a spell for someone that young. They'd have to be Celestia's age or so to cast it.

 

Try to make your perks actually perks about being your character. Not just spells. I can understand you're a unicorn, but you've got too many spells, not enough strengths. Try asking yourself "What would be a good situation to put my character in?" Afterward, think "Do I really see my character in this situation?" Then finally, "How is my character PHYSICALLY or MENTALLY able to handle this situation?"



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 09:21 AM

Thinking about it, I understand why the restoration perk WOULD be OP. I added two perks more on the physical side, and add more points. Hope that fixes it. :)



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 09:37 AM

Sorry about that, I'm writing more fanfics. XD Anyway...

 

Ill just jump in and have a go ^_^

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sonic Lightning

Age- 15

Gender-Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build-Average height and body

Eye Color- Aqua with a slight tint of green

Mane/tail color-Aqua with black stripes 

Mane-tail style-A long smooth style

coat color-White

cutie mark-A black lightning bolt

Clothing (if applicable)-

Voice- Light but can be deep at times.

 

Personality- Sonic can be very shy sometimes, but enjoys hanging out with a handful of friends. He is very into magic, reading and books, as his friends often find him stuck deeply into a novel, or asleep with one lying on him. He is also kind, and caring about his friends.

Likes- Reading, books, studying, learning

Dislikes- Large groups, heat, tight spaces

Bio- When sonic was younger, he loved hanging out with his parents, and didn't go outside much, which may have contributed to his shyness. He grew up a average pony, but at the age of 11 started readying many books. He read the norm of books, like adventure and action, but soon got stuck into magic. When the war hit, and his family had to go into shelter, he had many books, and lots of time to read and master his magic. As of now he has learned lots of spells, but is still uncomfortable around lots of people, and since he lost two of his friends, he has been very sad.

 

If you need any more reference about his appearance, just look at my profile pic.

 

Points left- 

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 50

Energy Weapons-  100

Explosives-  50

Lock pick- 40

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 15

Science-  50

Sneak- 100

Speech-  5

Survival- 75

Unarmed- 40

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 8

Endurance-  6

Charisma- 6

Intelligence- 8

Agility- 5

Luck- 1

 

Inventory

1 Med Kit

1 10mm Handgun  (40% working order)

1 Dagger

350 rounds - 10mm

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

Intense Magic - Focuses all remaining magic into a very powerful bolt, which drains all remaining magic and deals extreme damage to the enemy

 

Quick Draw - Can shoot twice and reload twice as fast

 

Rush - A short burst of speed allows for barging type attack to break through enemies

 

Bright Light - Uses magic to create a light (Magic drains when on)

 

Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

Cloak - Uses magic to completely disappear. Player cannot attack whilst cloaked (Magic drains when cloaked)

 

 

 

Minute Transport - Uses magic to teleport a few meters. Useful for getting behind enemies. (Teleport limit: 10 meters)

 

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​Sorry about those many mistakes, but I think I have fixed it. If there's any more, just tell me.

 

 

Change the name of Quick Draw to "nimble magic" Since he's a unicorn and doesn't exactly use hooves to reload.

 

And lastly, you're at 635 our of 650. ALMOST THERE!!! :D
 



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 09:42 AM

XD, Yeah thanks, ill change the name add more points :P



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 09:49 AM

XD, Yeah thanks, ill change the name add more points :P

 

Then it is with great awesomeness, I say......

 

ACCEPTED!!!! :mrgreen: 

I hope to see you in the RP once its ready. We only need two more slots filled! Why don't you invite friends?



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 09:54 AM

Done editing, again.

 

But I won't edit the bio. See he doesn't know if his parents are alive, or dead, or missing. The element of mystery is right there.

 

If you don't want, I'll edit it again, but other than that, I'm ok with my entry.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 09:59 AM

You know what, I'll join, just for the heck of it.

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Name- Guardian Braveheart

Age- 16

Gender- Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build- Tall and a bit skinny

Eye Color- Dark blue

Mane/tail color- Black and white

Mane-tail style- Spiky

coat color- Turquoise

cutie mark-

Spoiler

Clothing (if applicable)- Whatever was the clothes in Fallout

Voice-

https://www.youtube....h?v=07lSvwh6GRw

(Sorry, audio problems in video.)

 

Personality- Paranoid, friendly, kind

Likes- Hiding, Lone wolf, Guns (And Lots of it), Melees

Dislikes- Other persons, Traitors, CQC

 

Bio- All his life, he lived in the stables. He never knew what the outside world looked like. He has only heard stories about it, before the incident that almost demolished the whole land. The dream of looking at nature and seeing plants and trees are gone. The only trees he saw was from the pictures of the books he had. everything was gone, including the mysterious disappearance of his parents. He continues to find the truth about his parents, he tries to search for it all his life. With his friends support, he tries to accept that the world was destroyed and the hope of rebuilding it is slim. Also a novice marksman, with 3/-3 difference aim.

 

Spoiler

Points left- 650

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 45

Guns-75

Energy Weapons- 60

Explosives- 45

Lock pick- 45

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 30

Repair- 50

Science- 45

Sneak- 55

Speech- 50

Survival- 60

Unarmed- 30

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 10

Endurance-5

Charisma-2

Intelligence-10

Agility- 4

Luck- 3

 

Inventory

 

3 Med Kits / Health Poltices

1 Rifle (40% working order)

1 Dagger

5 10/10 Magazines for rifle

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

1. Aim - Takes time to aim the weapon at any part of the body. The character will get a far more devastating attack from a long range with one shot. +20% attack with effect. - 30% Agility.

Effects: Disability / Disarm / Bleeding

 

2. Camouflage  - Hides into any surrounding. When hiding, this character blends into his surroundings, making him 50% harder to detect.

 

3. Sharp eye - Makes precise aims at long range targets.  +30% perception. - 10% Agility.

 

4. Sneak - Sneaks up behind the enemy for a massive silent takedown. Being light footed helps! When sneaking, this character has the option to silently subdue a target. 50/50 chance of success.

 

5. Once more - At the peek of near death, gets +20% Agility and Strength for a small amount of time. Also - 10% Endurance.

(Will add more if I thought of any more. I'll reach it up to 10.)

 

Also, it was a long time ago that I played fallout. I didn't read fallout: equestria yet. But I do know the ropes of it.

 

If there's anything wrong, just let me know. Hope this RP will be fun.

 

Done editing.

 

 K, all you need is to add the fact that he doesn't know whether or not his parents are alive, and it looks like you'll be good to go.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 10:02 AM

Ok, Final edit is done. Hopefully that's good.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 10:10 AM

Again, the thing in the bip about his marksmanship skill's gotta go. It's talking about his past. Until we hit skills or perks, no one would really care about his 3/-3 differential... Whatever that means... And there's no way to fit it anywhere else, so it's gotta go.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 10:18 AM

Oops, sorry about that.

 

Ok, it's gone now.



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Posted 06 October 2013 - 10:25 AM

K, then you are

 

ACCEPTED!!! :mrgreen: 

 

Why don't you try to ask a friend to join? There's one slot left that needs to be filled before we can start.



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Posted 07 October 2013 - 12:43 PM

is there still a chance of me joining?



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Posted 07 October 2013 - 02:03 PM

Well, there's still one slot left. So... Show me an app, once accepted, I'll show you pure... Awesome...

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Posted 07 October 2013 - 05:57 PM

Read FOE Yes... well audio book im on to chapter 18 of Project Horisons.

played FO? Oooh Hell yeah. even Fallout BoS.

 

 

Name Ash Cloud

Age 12 Foal

Race Pegasus. ( If allowed a Cybernetic augmented pony like Black jack or Red eye.)

Build Small average weight.

Eye colour Orange 

Main / tail colour. Gray ( Smoke like.) 

Coat colour. Golden yellow. 

Cutie mark. Blank flank.

Clothing. Miniturised combat armour. 

 

Voice. Spinellie from Recess. ( On web browser so no coppy and paste sorry.))

 

Personality. trys to be self sufficiant trying to make up for her lack off size with bravado and over confidence.  

 

Likes Bananas....oh and fighting, sarkyness, fighting, drinking Sparkle Cola, fighting, stealing, fighting,  

and poking fun at people.. also fighting.

 

Dislikes. Lectures and Radaway.

 

Bio

Born to Dashite Dust Cloud and former rockfarmer Ash was born into a drunken abusive family.

this led to her being beeten so bad  the young filly was left for dead baddly wounded thankfully she was saved buy a Group of Apple Jacks rangers who removed her from her abusive family and gave her to thr FotA.  

She receved several implants inorder to save her life and these augmented her to neat super pony levels.

she has sworn her life to the FotA and will do anything for them.

 

Barter 40

Guns 80

Magical energy weapons 90   

Explosives 70

Lockpick 40

Medical 50

Melee weapons. 50

Repair. 70

Sciance 70

Sneak. 20

Survival 60

Unarmed 50

 

Strength 7

Perception 6

Endurance 8

Charisma 6

Inteligence 6

Athletics 5

Luck4

 

Stuff or inventory.

 

1 battle sadle fitted with.

1 Tri laser riffle.1 Chain gun both in 75% condition. 100 rounds of Energy cells.300 5 mm

1 Tallon battle armour... Minitureised.

2 Saddle bags with 5 healing poltrices and 16 Sparkle Colas.

 

 

Perks.

 

1 RoboPony 

gives you 5% Damage to and resistance from

Robots / Automated turrets. also gives a 15% disposition to any AI robot.

 

2 B-52.

Allows for a 15% Resistance to fatigue while carrying heavy weapons whilst flying. 

 

3 Filly style Kung phoo.

Allows for the cafeen and sugar in Sparkle Cola to augment your combat prowess.

 

4 Magical power armor training.

allows for use of Enclave power armor.

 

5 Umm.

20% chance for a crittical hit while screeming like a nut case and firing away like a mental patiant. 

 

6 Pfft Aiming is for sissies.

splash damage on grouped enimies. 

5% damage.

 

(Will keep for latter.)

 

7

 

8

 

9

 

10


Edited by Ashcloud, 08 October 2013 - 05:46 PM.


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Posted 07 October 2013 - 06:29 PM

Wip

 

Read FOE Yes... well audio book.

played FO? Hell yeah

 

 

Name Ash Cloud

Age 12 Foal

Race Pegasus. ( If allowed Cyberpony.)

Build Small average weight.

Eye colour Orange 

Main / tail colour. Gray ( Smoke like.) 

Coat colour. Golden yellow. 

Cutie mark. Blank flank.

Clothing. Miniturised combat armour. 

 

Voice. Spinellie from recess. ( On web browser so no coppy and paste sorry.))

 

Personality. trys to be self sufficiant trying to make up for her lack off size with bravado and over confidence.  

 

Likes Bananas....oh and fighting, swearing, fighting, drinking, fighting, stealing, fighting,  

and poking fun at people.. also fighting.

 

Dislikes. Lectures and Radaway.

 

Bio

Born to Dashite Dust Cloud and former Steel ranger Mintie Fresh Ash had something few Foals had... a loveing family.

That is untill both were slayen buy the Enclave.

 

Barter 10

Guns 60

Magical energy weapons 80   

Explosives 50

Lockpick 50

Medical 40

Melee weapons. 20

Repair. 50

Sciance 70

Sneak. 10

Survival 30

Unarmed 20

 

Strength 6

Perception 5

Endurance 6

Charisma 5

Inteligence 6

Athletics 5

Luck 5

 

K, it looks good so far. I'll allow the cyber pony race. I'll go ahead and give you a few pointers now, since she's a WIP.

 

You might want to use your remaining 2 points in your SPECIAL.

 

You also have alot of unspent points in your skills. You're at 490 out of the 650.

 

You don't HAVE to spend the remaining points, but I would HIGHLY recommend it.



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Posted 07 October 2013 - 06:41 PM

Aaah miscalculation on my part. sorry im Dyslexic.

at the moment i cant Coppy and paste as i am on a Web browser no spell check either.



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Posted 07 October 2013 - 06:45 PM

It's fine. :) And actually... You can edit your previous post. So there's no need for copy paste.



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Posted 07 October 2013 - 06:55 PM

Done... hopefully.


Edited by Ashcloud, 07 October 2013 - 07:04 PM.


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Posted 07 October 2013 - 07:19 PM

Read FOE Yes... well audio book im on to chapter 18 of Project Horisons.

played FO? Oooh Hell yeah. even Fallout BoS.

 

 

Name Ash Cloud

Age 12 Foal

Race Pegasus. ( If allowed a Cyberpony.)

Build Small average weight.

Eye colour Orange 

Main / tail colour. Gray ( Smoke like.) 

Coat colour. Golden yellow. 

Cutie mark. Blank flank.

Clothing. Miniturised combat armour. 

 

Voice. Spinellie from Recess. ( On web browser so no coppy and paste sorry.))

 

Personality. trys to be self sufficiant trying to make up for her lack off size with bravado and over confidence.  

 

Likes Bananas....oh and fighting, swearing, fighting, drinking, fighting, stealing, fighting,  

and poking fun at people.. also fighting.

 

Dislikes. Lectures and Radaway.

 

Bio

Born to Dashite Dust Cloud and former Steel ranger Mintie Fresh Ash had something few Foals had... a loveing family.

That is untill both were slayen buy the Enclave the young filly was left for dead baddly wounded thankfully she was saved buy a Group of Apple Jacks rangers.  

She receved several cybernetic implants inorder to save her life and these augmented her.

 

Barter 40

Guns 80

Magical energy weapons 90   

Explosives 70

Lockpick 40

Medical 50

Melee weapons. 50

Repair. 70

Sciance 70

Sneak. 20

Survival 60

Unarmed 50

 

Strength 7

Perception 6

Endurance 8

Charisma 6

Inteligence 6

Athletics 5

Luck4

 

Stuff or inventory.

 

1 battle sadle fitted with.

2 Tri laser riffles. both in 75% condition. 100 rounds of Energy cells.

1 Tallon battle armour... Minitureised.

2 Saddle bags with 5 healing poltrices and 6 Sparkle Colas.

1 IronWills Beer... not hers honist.

 

Perks.

 

1 RoboPony 

gives you 5% Damage to and resistance from

Robots / Automated turrets. also gives a 15% disposition to any AI robot.

 

2 Poninator.

Allows for a 15% Resistance to fatigue while carrying heavy weapons whilst flying. 

 

3 Drunk Filly

Allows for Alcohol to fuel your Cyborg parts. just don't tell your dad.

 

4 Magical power armor training.

allows for use of Enclave power armor.

 

5 Umm.

20% chance for a crittical hit while screeming like a nut case and firing away like a mental patiant.. or drunk. 

 

6 Pfft Aiming is for sissies.

splash damage on grouped enimies. 

5% damage.

 

(Will keep for latter.)

 

7

 

8

 

9

 

10

 

 

K, so just a few suggestions.

 

I already have a character with missing parents, so I can't allow dead parents. The closest I can allow would be that you had an abusive parent and ran away from home.

 

I can't allow swearing, since it's going to be in the forum. I don't like the idea myself, but I don't want to get booted for strong language and gore. So this is more or less censored version...

 

I wouldn't use alcohol to fuel her robotic parts. I'd suggest Spark Engines.

 

You might want to change your second perk, poninator, to something like "Flying fit"

 

Other than that, it actually looks pretty good other than the spelling and grammar errors. But due to your dyslexia, I won't get you for it.



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Posted 07 October 2013 - 07:49 PM

Im not going to use real swears just. %#&¤$!}{€¥$ ing ¡¿%?`}{>*/)}'!  and some ¡££¤¤¥€)(=*/+-)((><[,;s if thats allowed. :-D im not going to swear anyway that bit was a joke.

poninator is just a pun as is the Alcohol thing...( psst its an excuse for her to drink her parts are spark powered.)

edited anyway. :-D done hopefully i can get my flying tank started.

can anyone help me with the OC creator and make my Filly forme?


Edited by Ashcloud, 07 October 2013 - 10:45 PM.


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I'm sorry, but I can't really condone underage drinking, even in RP. I'll have to take another look into the rules and ask around to see if censored cursing is allowed.

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 07:46 AM

nah no swearing and i'll switch to Sparkle Cola all those preservatives have to be adictive. and the swearing thing was a joke im not going to swear just be witty and sarky. Edited.



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Posted 08 October 2013 - 02:33 PM

Ok. I still see the thing about swearing still in there. Drunken... I'm sorry, but I can't accept this character.

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 05:41 PM

Edited removed swearing, cybernetics and Drinking.  Her likes was a reference to Terry prattchets Wee free men. 


Edited by Ashcloud, 08 October 2013 - 05:43 PM.


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Read FOE Yes... well audio book im on to chapter 18 of Project Horisons.

played FO? Oooh Hell yeah. even Fallout BoS.

 

 

Name Ash Cloud

Age 12 Foal

Race Pegasus. ( If allowed a Cybernetic augmented pony like Black jack or Red eye.)

Build Small average weight.

Eye colour Orange 

Main / tail colour. Gray ( Smoke like.) 

Coat colour. Golden yellow. 

Cutie mark. Blank flank.

Clothing. Miniturised combat armour. 

 

Voice. Spinellie from Recess. ( On web browser so no coppy and paste sorry.))

 

Personality. trys to be self sufficiant trying to make up for her lack off size with bravado and over confidence.  

 

Likes Bananas....oh and fighting, sarkyness, fighting, drinking Sparkle Cola, fighting, stealing, fighting,  

and poking fun at people.. also fighting.

 

Dislikes. Lectures and Radaway.

 

Bio

Born to Dashite Dust Cloud and former rockfarmer Ash was born into a drunken abusive family.

this led to her being beeten so bad  the young filly was left for dead baddly wounded thankfully she was saved buy a Group of Apple Jacks rangers who removed her from her abusive family and gave her to thr FotA.  

She receved several implants inorder to save her life and these augmented her to neat super pony levels.

she has sworn her life to the FotA and will do anything for them.

 

Barter 40

Guns 80

Magical energy weapons 90   

Explosives 70

Lockpick 40

Medical 50

Melee weapons. 50

Repair. 70

Sciance 70

Sneak. 20

Survival 60

Unarmed 50

 

Strength 7

Perception 6

Endurance 8

Charisma 6

Inteligence 6

Athletics 5

Luck4

 

Stuff or inventory.

 

1 battle sadle fitted with.

1 Tri laser riffle.1 Chain gun both in 75% condition. 100 rounds of Energy cells.300 5 mm

1 Tallon battle armour... Minitureised.

2 Saddle bags with 5 healing poltrices and 16 Sparkle Colas.

 

 

Perks.

 

1 RoboPony 

gives you 5% Damage to and resistance from

Robots / Automated turrets. also gives a 15% disposition to any AI robot.

 

2 B-52.

Allows for a 15% Resistance to fatigue while carrying heavy weapons whilst flying. 

 

3 Filly style Kung phoo.

Allows for the cafeen and sugar in Sparkle Cola to augment your combat prowess.

 

4 Magical power armor training.

allows for use of Enclave power armor.

 

5 Umm.

20% chance for a crittical hit while screeming like a nut case and firing away like a mental patiant. 

 

6 Pfft Aiming is for sissies.

splash damage on grouped enimies. 

5% damage.

 

(Will keep for latter.)

 

7

 

8

 

9

 

10

 

 

Weren't the Apple Jack's raiders during the war? I'm listening to the audio books right now and I'm not hearing anything about them in the wasteland. That's not the only issue I'm finding. Unfortunately... This character is

 

REJECTED



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Posted 08 October 2013 - 08:17 PM

Ok, since we have too many fighters, none for support, I'll create a character for support. Obviously, biggest thing we'd need would be medical. I've got a perfect medic. But a warning, the medic is STRICTLY a non combatant. Do he will not be doing any fighting.

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 10:13 PM

Can i make a  Medic / mechanic?



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Posted 08 October 2013 - 11:25 PM

I was going to take up the role of a medic. If you can come up with a decent mechanic, I'll allow you to try again. In the meantime, the others'll have to change their bios a little so they're not so "My parents are dead, woe is me" John deer and Jane doe.


They'll need more detail in their backstories. My medic has a dead mother, but doesn't know his father because he was fighting in the NCR. The reason his mother is dead is the very same reason he's a doctor. You'll see why once I bring it up. So I'm withdrawing my agreement to accept the characters until their backstories are either changed or put into more detail.



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Posted 08 October 2013 - 11:51 PM

Read FO:E? Y

Played Fallout? Y

 

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Name- Red Cross

 

Age- 21

 

Gender- Stallion

 

Race- Unicorn

 

Build- Slender

 

Eye Color- Light Blue

 

Mane/tail color- Red

 

Mane-tail style- Short mane, long tail

 

coat color-Yellow

 

cutie mark- A red cross with two red and white capsules infront of the center

 

Clothing (if applicable)- N/A

 

Voice- Deep, but very gentle and soft.

 

Personality- Often very kind and compassionate, not at all shy like his great, great, great (so on) Grand mother. He is also very VERY cowardly in a fight.

 

Likes- Helping others regardless of uniform, looks or beliefs, following in his Ancestor's hoofsteps, the ministry of peace

 

Dislikes- Blood, fighting, death, killing

 

Bio- Red Cross was born and raised in Canterlot for most of his life until his family moved west to new Appleloosa. His father joined the NCR to protect his family, but dissappeared shortly after the battle for Hoofer Dam... His mother took up trading to make some money for her and the foal to eat, but grew ill one day for unknown reasons... Red Cross then began to study and find the cause as to what ailed his mother... To his despair, once he had found the cause and the cure... His mother passed away. That day forward, he has gone to his mother's grave to pay his respects. The town was shortly attacked by raiders, and Red Cross was the first to jump into the cross fire when he started seeing the unbearable sight of ponies being shot and marred infront of him. But he couldn't stop with just the Appleloosians... He began treating raiders too. He didn't see them through what they called themselves, or what they did... He saw that these were ponies who needed his help. After the battle, he became well known throughout the town, and well loved as their new doctor, as he was far more knowlegable about first aid than their late doctor who was the first to be shot and killed in the fray. Adoringly, they gave him the nickname "Doc" as he took up the new role and began helping anyone who passed through the town.

 

Points left- 650

 

Barter- 100

Guns- 1

Energy Weapons- 1

Explosives- 1

Lock pick- 50

Medicine- 80 (+10 Long term doctor +10 Non Combatant= 100)

Melee Weapons- 1

Repair- 50

Science- 100

Sneak- 65

Speech- 100

Survival- 100

Unarmed- 1

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L

 

Strength- 5

Perception- 9

Endurance- 5

Charisma- 5

Intelligence- 10

Agility- 2 (+1 Intensive Training =3)

Luck- 3 (+2 Intensive Tranining =5)

 

Inventory

 

5 Healing poultice

6 Radaway potions

4 Rad-X

2 Med-X

5 Magical bandages

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

1. Musical Surgeon- When listening to music from a radio, this character gains a +100% chance for all MEDICAL saves.

 

2. Short of Supply- Years of extensive research has made this character knowlegeable of conserving medical supplies. Magical bandages have a 25% chance of being useable a second time, and potions are 50% more potent.

 

3. Intensive training (3) (MAX)- Allows (+1) on any SPECIAL skill per stack.

 

4. Non combatant- Refusing to fight, this character will never be on the 'good end' of a gun. But being so gains this character a +10 in the Medical Skill.

 

5. COMPANION PERK: When this character is on your team, he can use his mending spell to gradually restore any wounds the entire team has.

 

6. Long time doctor- Being in the medical field since childhood allows this character to be more knowledgable about the healing arts, gaining this character +10 in the Medical skill.

 

7. Minister of Peace decsendant- Being a direct decsendent, this pony knows all "Ministry of Peace spells" But is completely incapable of learning any other spells.


Edited by BlueShield123, 09 October 2013 - 05:41 AM.


#42 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 02:31 AM

Wait, so im still accept right? :P and whos this for ^ ^ ^ ?


I can't allow swearing, since it's going to be in the forum.

Also, are we doing this RP in the forum? That might clear a few things up cuase I wasn't sure where we are doing this RP xD.


Edited by Sonic Lightning, 09 October 2013 - 02:31 AM.


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Posted 09 October 2013 - 02:33 AM

That's my other character. We're going to need a medic, since there was none. After looking over your characters, I noticed that you'll need more description in your characters bio's, mostly in terms of how the characters parents are dead or missing, how the characters dealt with it, and eventually, how they overcame it. As you can see from Red Cross' bio. I'm looking for that kind of detail. Not a vague description of their past that barely tells a thing about them.



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Posted 09 October 2013 - 10:15 AM

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Read FO:E? Yes and am reading project horisons

Played Fallout? Yes

 

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Name- Hot streak

Age- 13

Gender- maire

Race- Earthpony (no one else has one.)

Build- small

Eye Color- orange

Mane/tail color- red with black streeks

Mane-tail style- scruffy

coat color-  golden brown

cutie mark- A cog

Clothing- None  

Voice- Lorr from Weekenders.

 

Personality- Stubborn and protective of her freinds tends to be scatter brained.

Likes- Machines

Dislikes- Other Ponies.. with exceptions.

Bio- Born to a group of junk traiders one a Dashite Pegasus named Silver Streak the other a Unicorn named Hot Stuff  Hot Streak was born verry mechanicaly giffted. 

She grewup surrounded but machines and had a almost magical knowlage of them tinkering with every and anything and selling it to other settelers.

( I cant think of anything else other than a seperation story sorry.) 

 

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

 

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Points left- 650

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 40

Guns-60

Energy Weapons- 60 

Explosives- 90

Lock pick- 50

Medicine- 20

Melee Weapons- 40 

Repair- 100

Science- 100

Sneak- 20

Speech- 40

Survival- 40

Unarmed- 10

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength-6

Perception-6

Endurance-6

Charisma-5

Intelligence-7

Agility-5

Luck-5

 

Inventory

1  Battle saddle with 1 Riot shot gun. 50 slugs

2 saddle bags full of tools and 7 health poltrices  

1 set of goggles.

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

1

Junkyard Pony

You know your dumpster diving and can scavang more useful scrap than most ponys. 

 

2

Pack Mule

You can haz more stuff.

items weigh half there weight. 

 

3

Robopony

Aditional 25% damage to robots plus a 15% Disposition to AIs

 

4

Nerrrrrd

You is better with compusters.

youe terminal hacking skills are 20% cooler.

 

Will keep for latter.


Edited by Ashcloud, 12 October 2013 - 04:51 PM.


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Posted 09 October 2013 - 02:32 PM

K, so far she seems alright. I'll look her over once she's finished and I have time. I'm gonna be working some APUs at work, some dangerous stuff and I'm gonna need alot of concentration.

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 09:37 PM

Ok done i hope. Can i have a sprite bot like ED-E?



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Posted 09 October 2013 - 10:14 PM

K, I'm on my phone, so I can't do the awesome text...

But...

You are...

ACCEPTED!!!!! All of you, hop on in and start your introductions!!!

I don't see any problems with having a sprite bot, but I'll have to disallow it using combat, since we have too much combat, not enough support.. I CAN however, allow it to make ammunition, due to your repair, explosives, for whoever had high explosoves, energy cells for high science, so on.

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 10:27 PM

I was thinking of it acting as a shild generator or some such thing but even then it can act as a distraction.. 

 

Name SPRK-L - Sparkle

Race Sprite bot.

Owner Hot Streak

Function. Pet


Edited by Ashcloud, 09 October 2013 - 10:31 PM.


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Posted 09 October 2013 - 10:36 PM

Can't allow shields for the group, but you can use it as a distraction. It can only shield itself when it has a fully charged spark battery, since bringing the shield up drains its energy, and using it constantly would be Overpowering the pet.

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 10:47 PM

Yeah thats what i was thinking the shield was only an idea anyways it was only a sugestion.

the hing is realy just a companion.



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Posted 09 October 2013 - 11:03 PM

Well, you and your companion are accepted now. Go into the actual RP and put up your first post.



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Posted 10 October 2013 - 02:42 AM

Wait, so im still accept right? :P and whos this for ^ ^ ^ ?


Also, are we doing this RP in the forum? That might clear a few things up cuase I wasn't sure where we are doing this RP xD.

Face plant, the multiquote was meant to be about where we were doing this RP... *Faceplant* XD



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Posted 16 October 2013 - 08:21 PM

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sleepy Wing

Age- 17

Gender- F

Race- Pegasus

Build- Short and Thin

Eye Color- Yellow/Orange

Mane/tail color- Light Blue

Mane-tail style- Mane and Tail are cut with a knife, leaving it uneven but not as easy to grab. 

coat color- White, but dirt shows more so unless she cleans up, beige. 

cutie mark- Three Z's

Clothing (if applicable)- None

Voice- Mid-Range but still high enough to be clearly feminine. 

 

Personality- Kind and a little Naive about the wasteland. 

Likes- Anything from the Past, Diaries, Journals, Logs about Before and During the Period when Bombs fell, and Civilization.

Dislikes- Raiders, Nighttime, Darkness, and the Wasteland. 

Bio- Sleepy was raised in a small town on the outskirts of the wasteland. It was made up of people from a vault that had opened; many vault-dwellers had gone off on their own, but several stuck together and started a town that lived in the past, filled with books and customs of before the bombs fell. Due to the fact they had been inside the shelter when the pegasi closed up the clouds, they had no knowledge of a better civilization above. But food was starting to run out, and her parents wanted to keep her but her grandfather kicked her out in the night with just a few supplies that would get her far enough that they wouldn't find her body later. If they hadn't found the body, they couldn't believe they had sentenced her to death. She was educated little about the wasteland, but knew that she had to keep travelling while the food lasted her until she could find another source. After several days of strenuous flying and walking, she collapsed on the ground near a road. Had this town been anywhere but Appleoosa, surely raiders would have been the ones to pick her up, but luck had kept her alive long enough for her to be treated with kindness towards a stranger. No matter how kind they were to her, she didn't have the heart to talk about her pasts to anypony. In return for their help, she started medical training when she was 15 and finished when she was 17. Even though there's no cash debt left, she still feels she owes the town for their kindness.

 

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Points left- 0

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 25

Guns- 20

Energy Weapons- 10

Explosives- 5

Lock pick- 50

Medicine- 100

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 60

Science- 100

Sneak- 10

Speech- 75

Survival- 30

Unarmed- 15

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 2

Perception- 5

Endurance- 4

Charisma- 9

Intelligence- 10

Agility- 6

Luck- 4

 

Inventory 

3 Medkits/ Health Poltices

1 Dagger

2 Drinkable Water

1 Rad Away

 

Perks

 

1. Healing Hooves - Medical training has left you with advanced healing abilities provided you have proper supplies.

 

2. Science Geek - 10% faster healing from radiation poisoning.

 

3. Well Rested - 25% faster healing when you sleep.

 

4. Fast Flight - Travel 10% faster when flying.

 

5. Fight or Flight - 20% Strength and Speed increase when health is below 30%. 

 

6. Hoof to Hoof - Melee combat is increased by 15% when you are disarmed.

 

((I listened to FO:E as an audiobook on Youtube, so forgive me if I'm rusty on some of the details.))  


Edited by catopia26, 17 October 2013 - 03:14 AM.


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Posted 17 October 2013 - 02:17 AM

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sleepy Wing

Age- 17

Gender- F

Race- Pegasus

Build- Short and Thin

Eye Color- Yellow/Orange

Mane/tail color- Light Blue

Mane-tail style- Mane and Tail are cut with a knife, leaving it uneven but not as easy to grab. 

coat color- White, but dirt shows more so unless she cleans up, beige. 

cutie mark- Three Z's

Clothing (if applicable)- None

Voice- Mid-Range but still high enough to be clearly feminine. 

 

Personality- Kind and a little Naive about the wasteland. 

Likes- Anything from the Past, Diaries, Journals, Logs about Before and During the Period when Bombs fell, and Civilization.

Dislikes- Raiders, Nighttime, Darkness, and the Wasteland. 

Bio- Sleepy was raised in a small town on the outskirts of the wasteland. It was made up of people from a vault that had opened; many vault-dwellers had gone off on their own, but several stuck together and started a town that lived in the past, filled with books and customs of before the bombs fell. Due to the fact they had been inside the shelter when the pegasi closed up the clouds, they had no knowledge of a better civilization above. But food was starting to run out, and her parents wanted to keep her but her grandfather kicked her out in the night with just a few supplies that would get her far enough that they wouldn't find her body later. If they hadn't found the body, they couldn't believe they had sentenced her to death. She was educated little about the wasteland, but knew that she had to keep travelling while the food lasted her until she could find another source. After several days of strenuous flying and walking, she collapsed on the ground near a road. Had this town been anywhere but Appleoosa, surely raiders would have been the ones to pick her up, but luck had kept her alive long enough for her to be treated with kindness towards a stranger. No matter how kind they were to her, she didn't have the heart to talk about her pasts to anypony. In return for their help, she started medical training when she was 15 and finished when she was 17. Even though there's no cash debt left, she still feels she owes the town for their kindness.

((Will put up picture once I finish drawing it))

 

Points left- 0

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 25

Guns- 20

Energy Weapons- 10

Explosives- 5

Lock pick- 50

Medicine- 100

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 60

Science- 100

Sneak- 10

Speech- 75

Survival- 30

Unarmed- 15

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 2

Perception- 5

Endurance- 4

Charisma- 9

Intelligence- 10

Agility- 6

Luck- 4

 

Inventory 

3 Medkits/ Health Poltices

1 Dagger

2 Drinkable Water

1 Rad Away

 

Perks

 

1. Healing Hooves - Medical training has left you with advanced healing abilities provided you have proper supplies.

 

2. Science Geek - 10% faster healing from radiation poisoning.

 

3. Well Rested - 25% faster healing when you sleep.

 

4. Fast Flight - Travel 10% faster when flying.

 

5. Fight or Flight - 20% Strength and Speed increase when health is below 30%. 

 

6. Hoof to Hoof - Melee combat is increased by 15% when you are disarmed.

 

((I listened to FO:E as an audiobook on Youtube, so forgive me if I'm rusty on some of the details.))  

 

 

 

HOLY MOLY!!! Great job! Love it! Well written, and first try too!!!

 

ACCEPTED!!!



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Posted 17 October 2013 - 03:13 AM

Sorry about the delay, picture is finished:

 

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Posted 18 October 2013 - 04:18 PM

Is there sill room in this rp for one more person?



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 02:44 AM

Hm... I think I'll go for the six elements of harmony... Why not?



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 03:12 AM

I'm confused, what do you mean go for the elements?



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 04:45 AM

I think he means Six for six. Six characters



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 04:58 AM

That would be cool.



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 06:00 AM

Read FO:E? No

 

Played Fallout? No 

Name- Sera Steadyhoof 

Age-early 20s

Gender-Mare

Race-Unicorn

Build- Slightly thinner than a normal unicorn (this comes from her father being a pegasus)

Eye Color- Brown

Mane/tail color- brown

Mane-tail style- short

coat color- blue

cutie mark- Lockpick

Clothing (if applicable)- Dark blue vest with numerous pockets

Voice- tends to vary depending on whether or not she's attempting to manipulate or comfort someone. She Often doesn't speak when she's trying to be sneaky. 

 

Personality-Blunt, clever, sneaky

Likes- Shinny things, non-electronic locks, 

Dislikes- electronics and security alarms

Bio- Born into a lower class family in Manehatten her father was a surgeon during the early years of her life. Unfortunately due her fathers compulsive gambling her mother left the relationship when his habit drove the family into debt. For awhile she and her father moved around constantly in order to escape debt collectors. During this time Cleo discovered her love of stealing things. This coupled with her proficiency at lock picking resulted in her arrest. Ever since her first arrest at age 18 Cleo has been in and out of prison several times. A kleptomaniac at heart, she will do whatever it takes to get what she wants.

 

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Points left- 0

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter-3

Guns-5

Energy Weapons-2

Explosives-5

Lock pick-100

Medicine-100

Melee Weapons-100

Repair-10

Science-20

Sneak-100

Speech-100

Survival-100

Unarmed-5

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength-3

Perception-7

Endurance-6

Charisma-7

Intelligence-6

Agility-7

Luck-4

 

Inventory: survival knife

 

Perks:

1. Knife toss- launches knife at enemy. Has a 50/50 percent chance of success uses up half of casters magic. After which the knife must be retrieved manually by the caster.

 

2. Clot- Magically staunches bleeding in minor wounds by locking up blood cells for 5 seconds (2 posts) Uses up all of the casters magic. (Cannot be used on gunshot wounds or deep knife wounds)

 

3. Anesthesia- Attempts to knock out opponent with chloroform. Has a 50/50 percent chance of success if failure then player gets a luck and agility penalty of -4 during their next move this penalty increases by 4 as the skill levels up. 

 

4. Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

5. Fleet of foot: increases players agility by 3 for two turns afterwards gives the user a penalty of -6 in agility

 

6. Muscle cramp: player charges at the enemy and attempts to touch their horn to the enemy to temporarily lock up their muscles for a single turn. Player has a 50/50 percent chance of making contact with their horn during the charge.

 

If I've done something wrong please let me know and I'll make the necessary changes. 


Edited by raptorvelo, 24 October 2013 - 04:59 AM.


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Posted 19 October 2013 - 07:39 AM

 

Read FO:E? No

 

Played Fallout? No 

Name- Cleo

Age-early 20s

Gender-Mare

Race-Unicorn

Build- Slightly thinner than a normal unicorn (this comes from her father being a pegasus)

Eye Color- Brown

Mane/tail color- brown

Mane-tail style- short

coat color- blue

cutie mark- Lockpick

Clothing (if applicable)- Dark blue vest with numerous pockets

Voice- tends to vary depending on whether or not she's attempting to manipulate or comfort someone. She Often doesn't speak when she's trying to be sneaky. 

 

Personality-Blunt, clever, sneaky

Likes- Shinny things, non-electronic locks, 

Dislikes- electronics and security alarms

Bio- Born into a lower class family in Manehatten her father was a surgeon during the early years of her life. Unfortunately due her fathers compulsive gambling her mother left the relationship when his habit drove the family into debt. For awhile she and her father moved around constantly in order to escape debt collectors. During this time Cleo discovered her love of stealing things. This coupled with her proficiency at lock picking resulted in her arrest. Ever since her first arrest at age 18 Cleo has been in and out of prison several times. A kleptomaniac at heart, she will do whatever it takes to get what she wants.

 

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Points left- 0

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter-5

Guns-5

Energy Weapons-

Explosives-5

Lock pick-100

Medicine-100

Melee Weapons-100

Repair-10

Science-20

Sneak-100

Speech-100

Survival-100

Unarmed-5

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength-3

Perception-7

Endurance-6

Charisma-7

Intelligence-6

Agility-7

Luck-4

 

Inventory: survival knife

 

Perks:

1. Knife toss- launches knife at enemy. Has a 50/50 percent chance of success uses up half of casters magic. After which the knife must be retrieved manually by the caster.

 

2. Clot- Magically staunches bleeding in minor wounds by locking up blood cells for 5 seconds (2 posts) Uses up all of the casters magic. (Cannot be used on gunshot wounds or deep knife wounds)

 

3. Anesthesia- Attempts to knock out opponent with chloroform. Has a 50/50 percent chance of success if failure then player gets a luck and agility penalty of -4 during their next move this penalty increases by 4 as the skill levels up. 

 

4. Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

5. Fleet of foot: increases players agility by 3 for two turns afterwards gives the user a penalty of -6 in agility

 

6. Muscle cramp: player charges at the enemy and attempts to touch their horn to the enemy to temporarily lock up their muscles for a single turn. Player has a 50/50 percent chance of making contact with their horn during the charge.

 

If I've done something wrong please let me know and I'll make the necessary changes. 

 

 

 

Can you come up with a name less human?



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 07:49 AM

Well her last name's Steadyhoof if that makes any difference. If it doesn't, I could always go with Clepta, which is Latin for thief, or even Sera, Latin for lock.


Edited by raptorvelo, 19 October 2013 - 08:00 AM.


#64 BlueShield123

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Posted 19 October 2013 - 09:09 AM

Sera Steadyhoof has a nice ring to it I think. Ok, you're welcome into the RP! :)



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Posted 19 October 2013 - 09:19 AM

I almost forgot to ask where is everyone's OC at the moment?


Edited by raptorvelo, 19 October 2013 - 09:19 AM.


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Posted 19 October 2013 - 11:56 AM

We were about to leave Appleloosa and go to the stables where Sleepy is. If you want to get to the group, you better hurry.



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Posted 24 October 2013 - 04:52 AM

 

Read FO:E? No

 

Played Fallout? No 

Name- Sera Steadyhoof 

Age-early 20s

Gender-Mare

Race-Unicorn

Build- Slightly thinner than a normal unicorn (this comes from her father being a pegasus)

Eye Color- Brown

Mane/tail color- brown

Mane-tail style- short

coat color- blue

cutie mark- Lockpick

Clothing (if applicable)- Dark blue vest with numerous pockets

Voice- tends to vary depending on whether or not she's attempting to manipulate or comfort someone. She Often doesn't speak when she's trying to be sneaky. 

 

Personality-Blunt, clever, sneaky

Likes- Shinny things, non-electronic locks, 

Dislikes- electronics and security alarms

Bio- Born into a lower class family in Manehatten her father was a surgeon during the early years of her life. Unfortunately due her fathers compulsive gambling her mother left the relationship when his habit drove the family into debt. For awhile she and her father moved around constantly in order to escape debt collectors. During this time Cleo discovered her love of stealing things. This coupled with her proficiency at lock picking resulted in her arrest. Ever since her first arrest at age 18 Cleo has been in and out of prison several times. A kleptomaniac at heart, she will do whatever it takes to get what she wants.

 

Spoiler

 

Points left- 0

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter-5

Guns-5

Energy Weapons-

Explosives-5

Lock pick-100

Medicine-100

Melee Weapons-100

Repair-10

Science-20

Sneak-100

Speech-100

Survival-100

Unarmed-5

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength-3

Perception-7

Endurance-6

Charisma-7

Intelligence-6

Agility-7

Luck-4

 

Inventory: survival knife

 

Perks:

1. Knife toss- launches knife at enemy. Has a 50/50 percent chance of success uses up half of casters magic. After which the knife must be retrieved manually by the caster.

 

2. Clot- Magically staunches bleeding in minor wounds by locking up blood cells for 5 seconds (2 posts) Uses up all of the casters magic. (Cannot be used on gunshot wounds or deep knife wounds)

 

3. Anesthesia- Attempts to knock out opponent with chloroform. Has a 50/50 percent chance of success if failure then player gets a luck and agility penalty of -4 during their next move this penalty increases by 4 as the skill levels up. 

 

4. Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

5. Fleet of foot: increases players agility by 3 for two turns afterwards gives the user a penalty of -6 in agility

 

6. Muscle cramp: player charges at the enemy and attempts to touch their horn to the enemy to temporarily lock up their muscles for a single turn. Player has a 50/50 percent chance of making contact with their horn during the charge.

 

If I've done something wrong please let me know and I'll make the necessary changes. 

 

This is the only app I found missing anything, Raptor, you need to reallocate your Skill Points so you have at least 1 in energy weapons.



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Posted 24 October 2013 - 05:03 AM

Ill just jump in and have a go ^_^

 

Read FO:E? N

Played Fallout? Y

 

Please fill out the character sheet, and if possible, add a picture of your character.  :)

 

Name- Sonic Lightning

Age- 15

Gender-Stallion

Race- Unicorn

Build-Average height and body

Eye Color- Aqua with a slight tint of green

Mane/tail color-Aqua with black stripes 

Mane-tail style-A long smooth style

coat color-White

cutie mark-A black lightning bolt

Clothing (if applicable)-

Voice- Light but can be deep at times.

 

Personality- Sonic can be very shy sometimes, but enjoys hanging out with a handful of friends. He is very into magic, reading and books, as his friends often find him stuck deeply into a novel, or asleep with one lying on him. He is also kind, and caring about his friends.

Likes- Reading, books, studying, learning

Dislikes- Large groups, heat, tight spaces

Bio- When sonic was younger, he loved hanging out with his parents, and didn't go outside much, which may have contributed to his shyness. He grew up a average pony, but at the age of 11 started readying many books. He read the norm of books, like adventure and action, but soon got stuck into magic. When the war hit, and his family had to go into shelter, he had many books, and lots of time to read and master his magic. As of now he has learned lots of spells, but is still uncomfortable around lots of people, and since he lost two of his friends, he has been very sad.

 

If you need any more reference about his appearance, just look at my profile pic.

 

Points left- 

You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

 

Barter- 50

Energy Weapons-  100

Explosives-  50

Lock pick- 40

Medicine- 60

Melee Weapons- 50

Repair- 15

Science-  50

Sneak- 100

Speech-  10

Survival- 75

Unarmed- 50

 

 

S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40

You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

 

Strength- 6

Perception- 8

Endurance-  6

Charisma- 6

Intelligence- 8

Agility- 5

Luck- 1

 

Inventory

1 Med Kit

1 10mm Handgun  (40% working order)

1 Dagger

350 rounds - 10mm

 

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

 

Intense Magic - Focuses all remaining magic into a very powerful bolt, which drains all remaining magic and deals extreme damage to the enemy

 

Nimble Magic - Can shoot twice and reload twice as fast

 

Rush - A short burst of speed allows for barging type attack to break through enemies

 

Bright Light - Uses magic to create a light (Magic drains when on)

 

Sneak - Can sneak behind the enemy without being seen, unless players performing a take down, in which there is a 50/50 chance of detection. 

 

Cloak - Uses magic to completely disappear. Player cannot attack whilst cloaked (Magic drains when cloaked)

 

 

 

Minute Transport - Uses magic to teleport a few meters. Useful for getting behind enemies. (Teleport limit: 10 meters)

 

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​Sorry about those many mistakes, but I think I have fixed it. If there's any more, just tell me.

 

Sonic, You forgot to add guns to your character's points list.


Edited by raptorvelo, 24 October 2013 - 05:44 AM.


#69 BlueShield123

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Posted 24 October 2013 - 05:49 AM

Sonic, You forgot to add guns to your character's points list.

(Oh shit. I see what you mean there. XD Sorry about that.)



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Posted 25 October 2013 - 02:44 AM

i would like to join


Edited by Pony Killer 5000, 25 October 2013 - 02:45 AM.


#71 BlueShield123

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Posted 25 October 2013 - 03:05 AM

K, we literally have one spot available. So fill out an app and join. :3



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Posted 28 October 2013 - 12:44 AM

Can i join im the alt account of Pony Killer 5000 i forgtot the password



#73 BlueShield123

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Posted 28 October 2013 - 02:01 AM

Send an app.

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Posted 08 November 2013 - 01:28 PM

Name- Dice Roller
Age- 42
Gender- male
Race- earth
Build- weak
Eye Color- blue
Mane/tail color- black
Mane-tail style- short and spicky (and a beard)
coat color- light brown
cutie mark- 2 dice
Clothing- white suit and a Pipbuck with a blue screen
Voice- deep ( kinda like Ulysses )

Personality- He is mostly mad until he drinks, then he becomes happy
Likes- gambling, shooting and drinking
Dislikes- Radscorpions, Ponies with a smart mouth and Legion
Bio- Dice Roller was born in Las Pegasus with his mother and father. When he turned 13 his father went into the Mojave desert and came back with a Pipbuck and gave it to dice. After he turned 19 he lied that he was 21 and went to the casinos every day and gambled. He never had his cutie mark until he played the craps table and won 5 times in a row and his cutie mark appeared. He traveled the Mojave desert looking for other ponies to gamble or play caravan with.

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

Points left- 650
You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

Barter- 20
Guns-40
Energy Weapons-5
Explosives-5
Lock pick-20
Medicine-5
Melee Weapons-5
Repair-5
Science-30
Sneak-30
Speech-40
Survival-20
Unarmed-5


S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40
You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

Strength-4
Perception-6
Endurance-5
Charisma-6
Intelligence-6
Agility-5
Luck-6

Inventory
1 health pack, Desert Eagle, 2 dice, beer and a Ace of Spades card
Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

Steady Aim: You aim 40% more better when you have 20% or lower health

Charming: When you become drunk you get 50% more speech skill

THIS WILL BE MY CHARACTER!!!!!!!

Read FO:E? Yes
Played Fallout? Yes

Edited by jaydencooper, 09 November 2013 - 04:17 AM.


#75 BlueShield123

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Posted 08 November 2013 - 10:07 PM

Name- Dice Roller
Age- 42
Gender- male
Race- earth
Build- weak
Eye Color- blue
Mane/tail color- black
Mane-tail style- short and spicky (and a beard)
coat color- light brown
cutie mark- 2 dice
Clothing- white suit
Voice- deep

Personality- He most of the time is angry
Likes- gambling, shooting and drinking
Dislikes- Radscorpions and running out of caps
Bio- Dice gambled for many years and when the bonfires went of he felt like nothing happened because every day to him was destruction and mayhem.

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

Points left- 650
You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

Barter- 20
Guns-40
Energy Weapons-5
Explosives-5
Lock pick-20
Medicine-5
Melee Weapons-5
Repair-5
Science-30
Sneak-30
Speech-40
Survival-20
Unarmed-5


S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40
You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

Strength-4
Perception-6
Endurance-5
Charisma-6
Intelligence-6
Agility-5
Luck-6

Inventory
1 health pack, Desert Eagle, 2 dice, beer and a Ace of Spades card
Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

Steady Aim: You aim 40% more better when you have 20% or lower health

Charming: When you become drunk you get 50% more speech skill THIS WILL BE MY CHARACTER!!!!!!!
Read FO:E? Yes
Played Fallout? Yes


Unfortunately, I'm having a hard time understanding what you're trying to say, because of multiple grammatical and spelling issues... There are also a few other problems.

1: nothing is very descriptive at all.
2: his backstory is very vague.
3: if he's always mad, how does he expect to get much done? His anger'll get in the way of everything.

#76 Jaybro42

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 02:53 AM

I fixed my app

#77 BlueShield123

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 03:09 AM

Name- Dice Roller
Age- 42
Gender- male
Race- earth
Build- weak
Eye Color- blue
Mane/tail color- black
Mane-tail style- short and spicky (and a beard)
coat color- light brown
cutie mark- 2 dice
Clothing- white suit and a Pipbuck with a blue screen
Voice- deep ( kinda like Ulysses )

Personality- He is mostly mad until he drinks, then he becomes happy
Likes- gambling, shooting and drinking
Dislikes- Radscorpions, Ponies with a smart mouth and Legion
Bio- Dice Roller was born in Las Pegasus with his mother and father, every day they told him not to panic. After he turned 19 he lied that he was 21 and went to the casinos every day and gambled. He never had his cutie mark until he played the craps table and won 5 times in a row and his cutie mark appeared. He traveled the Mojave desert looking for other ponies to gamble or play caravan with.

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

Points left- 650
You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

Barter- 20
Guns-40
Energy Weapons-5
Explosives-5
Lock pick-20
Medicine-5
Melee Weapons-5
Repair-5
Science-30
Sneak-30
Speech-40
Survival-20
Unarmed-5


S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 40
You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

Strength-4
Perception-6
Endurance-5
Charisma-6
Intelligence-6
Agility-5
Luck-6

Inventory
1 health pack, Desert Eagle, 2 dice, beer and a Ace of Spades card
Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

Steady Aim: You aim 40% more better when you have 20% or lower health

Charming: When you become drunk you get 50% more speech skill

THIS WILL BE MY CHARACTER!!!!!!!

Read FO:E? Yes
Played Fallout? Yes


More problems with the app.

1: I see that he uses a pipbuck, however, there's nothing in his bio about any kind of mention how he got it. Was he born in a vault? Were his family vault dwellers? Did a friend give it to him? Or lost it in a bet to him?

2: you mention something about "don't panic" but you never mention about what.

#78 Jaybro42

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 03:42 AM

It's fixed and the don' t panic thing, dice won't discover that until he is is a situation

#79 BlueShield123

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 03:58 AM

There still needs to be an explanation, as I why they say that, or that part has to go.

#80 Jaybro42

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 04:18 AM

Er mer gerd
Ok I took it out

Edited by jaydencooper, 09 November 2013 - 04:16 AM.


#81 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 04:21 AM

Lol, I had the same amount of editing, actually more, since I was new to RPing at the time.

 

:P



#82 Jaybro42

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 04:31 AM

I'm not new though

#83 UnknownFluttershy

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 04:47 AM

I know, I was just stating how I made a few mishaps too lol.



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Posted 09 November 2013 - 06:51 AM

Now another thing. You keep calling it the Mojave. If you actually read the intro, you'll see it's "marejave"

Since you've failed to read the intro, I can't trust you to read and follow along with what's going on in the story. Therefore, I cannot accept your character.

I know, I was just stating how I made a few mishaps too lol.


But you actually read the intro, and knew what was going on.

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 07:37 AM

I did read the intro, it's a simple mistake

Edited by jaydencooper, 09 November 2013 - 07:38 AM.


#86 BlueShield123

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 09:00 AM

[quote name="jaydencooper" post="531598" timestamp="1383982661"]

I did read the intro, it's a simple mistake[/quote

There's a difference in making a mistake, and neglecting certain details. Sorry. You're not getting in.

#87 Jaybro42

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 09:09 AM

Does it really matter if I said Mojave, not marejave

#88 Varisity

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 09:18 AM

Read FO:E? N
Played Fallout? N


Name- Scarlet River
Age- 21
Gender- Mare
Race- Earth Pony
Build- Strong and slightly tall for a pony, but considered normal size.
Eye Colour- Amber
Mane/tail color- Golen with streaks of blue.
Mane-tail style- Curled, like Sunset Shimmer.
coat color- Light red.
cutie mark- A magnifying glass, representing her intellect and her skills at piecing clues together.
Clothing (if applicable)- She has a light red jacket and shades with a blue rim.
Voice- A calm, soothing tone which isnt high nor low.

Personality- Calm, quiet. Observeres more than takes part, but given the command shes ready for a fight.
Likes- Getting to the point, observing, intelligent ponies.
Dislikes- Ignorance, moaners, crying.
Bio- (Please limit the use of dead or missing parents...) Scarlet was born in the stable yes, but she came with her parents to start a new village overhead. It was there where she lived most of her young life, but she secretly learnt survival skills and fighting just in case she'd ever need it.

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

Points left- 0
You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

Barter-43
Guns-22
Energy Weapons- 19
Explosives-34
Lock pick- 54
Medicine- 63
Melee Weapons- 62
Repair- 27
Science- 29
Sneak- 53
Speech- 44
Survival-100
Unarmed- 100


S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0
You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

Strength- 10
Perception- 6
Endurance- 4
Charisma- 3
Intelligence- 7
Agility- 5
Luck- 5

Inventory- Pocket Knife, two small daggers.

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

River Thrust - Charge into the enemy and attempt to stab them with a knife causing critical damage 60/40 chance of success. One per battle.

Piercing Eyes - Is able to tell if someone is lying to her, but this can become faulty, making her have false suspicions. 40/60 chance if used twice within six posts, 60/40 otherwise.

(All the perks i can come up with)

Edited by Purple Shadows, 09 November 2013 - 08:22 PM.


#89 BlueShield123

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 06:42 PM

Does it really matter if I said Mojave, not marejave


In fact, yes. Because if we're in the marejave, and you say Mojave, it might throw people off, or have other set backs. You are NOT getting in.

#90 Varisity

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 06:43 PM

What about me?

#91 BlueShield123

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Played Fallout? N


Name- Scarlet River
Age- 21
Gender- Mare
Race- Earth Pony
Build- Strong and slightly tall for a pony, but considered normal size.
Eye Colour- Amber
Mane/tail color- Golen with streaks of blue.
Mane-tail style- Curled, like Sunset Shimmer.
coat color- Light red.
cutie mark- A magnifying glass, representing her intellect and her skills at piecing clues together.
Clothing (if applicable)- She has a light red jacket and shades with a blue rim.
Voice- A calm, soothing tone which isnt high nor low.

Personality- Calm, quiet. Observeres more than takes part, but given the command shes ready for a fight.
Likes- Getting to the point, observing, intelligent ponies.
Dislikes- Ignorance, moaners, crying.
Bio- (Please limit the use of dead or missing parents...) Scarlet was born in a vault yes, but she always wondered what 'out there' was like. She never felt properly at home in the vault. Her parents had taught her survival skills which were not handy at all. Then the day came when she was allowed to go out. It was such a day. She soon learnt fighting and sometimes she camped out in he wasteland. She soon started only going into the vault to get supples, and see her family. She was admired for her daring. She started observing quite after she started living in the wasteland. She started to learn strategy, and how to play her cards right. There were many faults of course, but nothing she couldn't fix easily.

(Picture goes here if applicable.)

Points left- 0
You CANNOT go higher than 100, or lower than 1.

Barter-43
Guns-22
Energy Weapons- 19
Explosives-34
Lock pick- 54
Medicine- 63
Melee Weapons- 62
Repair- 20
Science- 9
Sneak- 23
Speech- 24
Survival-100
Unarmed- 100


S.P.E.C.I.A.L left- 0
You CANNOT go over ten or below 1.

Strength- 10
Perception- 6
Endurance- 4
Charisma- 3
Intelligence- 7
Agility- 5
Luck- 5

Inventory- Pocket Knife, two small daggers.

Perks (You can make up your own, but PLEASE explain what they do. You are allowed 10.)

River Thrust - Charge into the enemy and attempt to stab them with a knife causing critical damage 60/40 chance of success. One per battle.

Piercing Eyes - Is able to tell if someone is lying to her, but this can become faulty, making her have false suspicions. 40/60 chance if used twice within six posts, 60/40 otherwise.

(All the perks i can come up with)


You'll have to fix something on here.

It's regarding the vault. You see, you can't really leave and enter a vault at will, unless everyone in it is dead.

#92 Varisity

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 06:53 PM

Ah ok I'll fix it!
I think I fixed it!

Edited by Purple Shadows, 09 November 2013 - 06:53 PM.


#93 BlueShield123

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 08:11 PM

Ok, it looks much better. Still a little vague... I'll accept he'd, but if you could detail her past a little more, I'll appreciate it. Let me get home and calculate her stats before I make the final decision on if I'll accept her. K?

#94 Varisity

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 08:14 PM

Ok.

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 08:28 PM

K, it looks like you did a really good job at keeping her within my limits in terms of stats.

I'll accept her.

#96 Varisity

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 08:37 PM

Needed about 4 edits to get it right, so thanks! But how should I enter?

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 08:40 PM

Well, personally, I'd recommend starting as a stable dweller for the vault we're in. But you can come in however you like.


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