Jump to content


Photo

Remade


  • This topic is locked This topic is locked
13 replies to this topic

#1 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 04 August 2011 - 11:34 PM

Here's a couple of pics of my medical building of my character, plus a 3-d model OF my pony oc as well

http://s204.photobuc... ... rent=5.png
http://s204.photobuc... ... nt=4-1.png
http://s204.photobuc... ... nt=3-1.png
http://s204.photobuc... ... rent=2.png
http://s204.photobuc... ... nt=1-1.png

and my ponysona model sprite I created http://s204.photobuc... ... nysona.png

#2 lumpunzik

lumpunzik

    lump

  • Retired Admin
  • 832 posts
  • minecraft:
    lumpunzik

Posted 04 August 2011 - 11:59 PM

Protip: press f1 to toggle your camera mode, then f2 to take a screenshot. It will save in your .minecraft directory.

Can you post some coordinates?

#3 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 05 August 2011 - 12:48 AM

look for the building with the big red cross on it for the building, I won't go into ALL the coordinate numbers for it but here's it to a certain length

x- 363.17376
y- 45.62000
z- 429.62069
f- 1

As for the model of my pony guy the coordinates are

x- 137.50274
y- 45.620000
z- 432.23755
f- 1

I hope I got the coordinates right :shock:

#4 Orshcmann

Orshcmann

    Moderator

  • Retired Admin
  • 627 posts
  • minecraft:
    Orshcmann

Posted 05 August 2011 - 01:27 AM

x- 363.17376
y- 45.62000
z- 429.62069
f- 1


Ah yes, the often overlooked f-axis.

#5 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 05 August 2011 - 01:34 AM

so did I do it right? I hope I did, my model isnt exactly done though, never got around to getting his other 2 legs, or his wings

#6 Ratty

Ratty

    Background Pony

  • Ratty
  • 15594 posts
  • minecraft:
    Ratty

Posted 05 August 2011 - 01:47 AM

People call those a "sprite" if they're just a billboard, a model would be those 3D models. And as I put in the read this first post in this forums, no sprites. Those take no skill, just time.

Onto the building.. The consensus was the interior of your building isn't bad, but the exterior needs work. It needs some flair so its not so boxy.
If you can fix that up, we'll look at it again.

#7 Orshcmann

Orshcmann

    Moderator

  • Retired Admin
  • 627 posts
  • minecraft:
    Orshcmann

Posted 05 August 2011 - 01:53 AM

Adding onto what Ratty said: You might want to rethink your use of glass for the roof. Glass is one of those materials that doesn't always look great when used in a large amount, and considering that 99% of the other buildings in Ponyville have wool roofs, a glass roof just doesn't flow nicely with the aesthetic theme of the town.

#8 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 05 August 2011 - 02:06 AM

alright then will work on that, but I'll definitely work on the ceiling, just thought being able to watch the clouds and sun go by while you're healing would be artistically pleasing for hurt ponies, but I'll change that, tbh the real reason I did it was so I wouldn't have to put so many glowblocks up, the glass lets in plenty of light

#9 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 05 August 2011 - 03:32 AM

redid pretty much almost everything on the walls and roof, will post this in a new journal as well, as for the sprite model I made, that actually WAS very difficult for me, because I never did one before and was working from a picture I made of him

#10 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 05 August 2011 - 03:32 AM

look for the building with the big red cross on it for the building, I won't go into ALL the coordinate numbers for it but here's it to a certain length

x- 363.17376
y- 45.62000
z- 429.62069
f- 1


I remade my roof everybody, somebody please tell me if I've done better on it, I've added red and white wool and glowstone, kept SOME glass roofing to make roof windows, like what they have in some stores and hospital care centers, hopefully that'll fix it, if not then I'd appreciate some feedback on what to change.

Also for the model I made, I know it takes more time then skill, but it WAS actually kinda difficult for me cause I have never done that before and I only had 1 pic I made of him to work off of

#11 Ratty

Ratty

    Background Pony

  • Ratty
  • 15594 posts
  • minecraft:
    Ratty

Posted 05 August 2011 - 04:11 AM

They took a vote and I'm afraid it came out negative.

#12 Dr. BloodWing

Dr. BloodWing

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 13 posts
  • minecraft:
    Tridonious

Posted 05 August 2011 - 04:29 AM

for the sprite right? or the house also? o.o....if yes then do I have to redo the building as well?

#13 Ratty

Ratty

    Background Pony

  • Ratty
  • 15594 posts
  • minecraft:
    Ratty

Posted 05 August 2011 - 04:47 AM

The sprite was irrelevant, nobody should be making sprites for reviewing anyway.
The building wasn't really good enough, and its not like it was a little thing here or there.
I get the hard job here, and this is the result of a lot of discussion, but you're not going to get approved.

#14 Ratty

Ratty

    Background Pony

  • Ratty
  • 15594 posts
  • minecraft:
    Ratty

Posted 07 August 2011 - 02:45 AM

In case I wasn't clear, you were not approved, stop asking the admins have to look at your buildings.


0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users