comme and look at my test submission house
it's at /warp s80
thank you
Posted 21 May 2013 - 06:40 PM
comme and look at my test submission house
it's at /warp s80
thank you
Posted 23 May 2013 - 04:56 PM
Edited by Matt, 23 May 2013 - 05:00 PM.
Posted 26 May 2013 - 11:40 AM
Exterior:
Your block choice is excellent, but I have to point out that it feels a bit jumbled and disorganised. I understand this is the trend of Ponyville cottages, but it is far more controlled. The cobweb smoke is unsightly, but I suppose that's just a matter of opinion. I think you should try adding more details, such as vines. You definitely have the right idea though.
Interior:
Again, you have a good block choice but your presentation is still letting you down. Downstairs I suggest you split the area up into two or three smaller rooms, because like Matt said it feels very empty. The paintings definitely add to it, though, and on the subject of detail, I think exactly what you need is a few little features like a larger dining area and some flower pots like the ones you have at the front door.
Overall, I think your house just needs a couple of homely details to make it seem more lived-in. At the moment it feels synthetic.
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