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#1 MrTrollCakez

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Posted 07 April 2013 - 11:21 PM

I just made the newest submission house, looks beast and it doesnt look like a $#%& house like my old one if you checked that one out. #BronyFTW #PonyVilleHouseComplete     ( /warp s53 ) ( Plot 53 )   :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P  :-P



#2 Cyborganic_Pies

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Posted 08 April 2013 - 08:59 PM

Okay, Let's get down to business!

 

Exterior:

I'm sorry, but this exterior isn't going to cut it. You have the theme right but the design isn't right. If you look at pictures of houses in the show you can see that most houses are 2 stories with a gabled or A-frame roof. Your house is only 1 floor with a flat roof, but you have made it look like hay so that's good. There are plenty of good houses in Ponyville with great roof designs. You want to use sand and logs for the walls, not quarts. sand, sandstone and the light wood all work for the walls. The shape is fine, but I like to go for more interesting shapes, my house in Ponyville is a very odd shape and can't be defined, whereas yours is an L shape.

 

Interior:

Your interior isn't that good. What you should do is separate all your rooms with walls, have a hallway splitting off into all your rooms or have all rooms with access to one room. Your floor choice is very odd, I wouldn't use logs for your floor, I would use planks, if you want to make it more interesting you can add a carpet in places (like in front of the door). There are good examples of furniture at /warp ikea. If you want to see how to layout your furniture I recommend that you explore Ponyville and see how builders have done it. 

 

Final Notes:

I have made a warp for you to a great Ponyville house its /warp 'Ponyvilleexample1' (kakapo's build). I'm also going to give you the warp to my house so you can see the odd shape I have made, the warp is '/warp cyborg'. Aswell as the exaples I have given you I also encourage you to look for good examples in Ponyville yourself. I believe that if you were to submit this house in its current condition then it would fail.

 

Good luck!


Edited by Cyborganic_Pies, 08 April 2013 - 09:01 PM.



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