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#1 construction pony

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Posted 04 December 2015 - 09:34 PM

My house is completed & is at plot s76



#2 R9000

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Posted 10 December 2015 - 03:09 AM

Sorry, but we're rejecting this attempt. It's certainly a good start, but there were some things that sadly held it back:

-The house shape is fairly boring and boxy. It could've been a more interesting shape.

-The furniture, while being quite varied, is quite strange and not as well planned as it could have been. In particular, the fenceposts in the middle of the dining table make it look like it has some kind of parasol, and the array of bookcases and an enchantment table on the upper floor doesn't look like any piece of furniture in particular.

-The kitchen looks strange, having almost perfect symmetry along, and not having anything too cook food with, but instead two sinks.

-The upper-floor windows are all at floor level, which is a bit odd for a Ponyville house, especially when there's one right next to the toilet.

-There looks to be way too much carpet on the upper floor.

-The attic is both closed-off and empty. If you have this much roof-space, you should really use it.

Better luck next time :)




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