Leon galloped after Black.
Shattered Minds (Forum RP) (Grimdark) (Non-Gameplay)
#101
Posted 16 July 2013 - 02:18 AM
#102
Posted 16 July 2013 - 02:21 AM
James entered a house , he grabbed the colt behind him and tied him, he put him in a corner and went to the upstairs of the house, now awaiting to ambush them.
#103
Posted 16 July 2013 - 02:36 AM
((how is the colt tied up?))
#104
Posted 16 July 2013 - 02:43 AM
(ahh hogtie)
#105
Posted 16 July 2013 - 12:34 PM
While in the corner the little colt began to whimper in pain as more more magic was forced through his horn suddenly four wire strands unwound from his horn then entwining themselves they forced them selves into the knot forcing it apart.
Once free the little colt continued his whimpering sobs as the strands slowly wound themselves back around his horn. Once they were back in position he shakily got to his hooves and looked around.
#106
Posted 16 July 2013 - 03:38 PM
Potipah stood still, watching as James dragged the black colt away. Looking around to see if anyone had followed, she noticed Black Widow and Leon by him, shouting threats. James didn't deserve that... It wasn't his fault. Rage lit up in her eyes and she raced across to the group, now pursuing those that were in the right. They had been bad, and they would have to be punished. She drew out her knife.
((Can Putiph and Jehms be partners in killing pones?))
#107
Posted 16 July 2013 - 04:26 PM
(yeshhh we are now a teem)
James sat down, shaking his head. "GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT!!!" James stopped, he looked around the room, desperate.
#108
Posted 16 July 2013 - 04:41 PM
Edited by Haxorizer145, 16 July 2013 - 04:44 PM.
#109
Posted 16 July 2013 - 05:32 PM
Black Widow was gasping for breath.
"We're trapped now, dumbass!" She yelled.
#110
Posted 16 July 2013 - 05:34 PM
((How does Leon know she's infected if she has bandages over her bite? Also, STAY OUTTA MA SHEED))
"LEAVE HIM ALONE! DON'T HURT HIM!" Potipah snapped at Leon and Black Widow. Tears welled up in her eyes as she reached the now closed door and bashed her hoof upon it. "You stupid little shits... If you hurt him I cannot be held bucking responsible for what I will do to you." Her eyes were bloodshot, but it did not hide her fear.
She gulped and looked around at her surroundings, hoping not to encounter any psychos. She could see one skulking about in an alleyway not too far away from the house she was at. If he heard her and came running, she was long gone. It looked up to her, eyes wide and black. A grin grew on its face.
"LET ME IN!! PLEASE, OH CELESTIA!! I DON'T WANT TO DIE!"
#111
Posted 16 July 2013 - 05:38 PM
"You should of thought of that before chasing us into this shed." Black Widow commented.
"What do we do? Kill her or let her in?" She whispered to Leon.
#112
Posted 16 July 2013 - 05:39 PM
#113
Posted 16 July 2013 - 05:49 PM
Potipah whimpered as the half-mind approached her.
Hearing Leon's remark, she slid down the door into a seated position, holding her knife close to her body as defense. This was it... Maybe she would die out here. The half-mind up ahead of her straggled towards her, its messy tail dragging behind its body. The pony was hardly recognizable.
"If you're gonna change your mind, make it quick.." Her voice was badly paced and her breath hurried. She spoke like there was a noose around her neck.
#114
Posted 16 July 2013 - 05:51 PM
#115
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:07 PM
Potipah whimpered. She wasn't ever going to get a good deal out of this flankhole. "Well, when you see my mauled body out here I hope you pay me some respect, you dick. On the contrary, ANYPONY ELSE IN THERE THAT AIN'T A FLANKHOLE WANT TO OPEN UP THE DAMN DOOR?!"
#116
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:16 PM
#117
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:19 PM
((I'm assuming Leon and Black are in the same general area as my OC right?))
#118
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:20 PM
#119
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:27 PM
Potipah groaned, having nothing to do but wait for her demise.
#120
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:44 PM
"GHK!!" Black WIdow spat the can out.
"The buck man!? She could be uninfected!" She struggled with her magic to take apart the barricade.
#121
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:48 PM
#122
Posted 16 July 2013 - 06:50 PM
Black Widow responded to Leon with a direct smack to the face.
"You better count your lucky stars that I didn't put my knife in that hoof! How do I know you're not infected, huh? Maybe you kissed an infected mare! Maybe you drank contaminated water! How do I know, huh!?" She screamed.
#123
Posted 16 July 2013 - 07:08 PM
#124
Posted 16 July 2013 - 07:13 PM
"STOP ARGUING AND MAKE UP YOUR DAMN MINDS."
The half-mind came yet closer, pursuing her next victim.
#125
Posted 16 July 2013 - 07:19 PM
#126
Posted 16 July 2013 - 11:40 PM
"What made you let me come with you and not her, huh? If you're just going to go around wasting anypony we meet, I'd rather be out there!" Black Widow went out and slammed the shed shut behind her.
"Where's the half-mind?" She asked Potipah.
#127
Posted 17 July 2013 - 12:16 AM
#128
Posted 17 July 2013 - 12:29 AM
Whimpering, the colt found his way to a window. Prying it open the window creaked loudly as he managed to squeeze himself out landing with a dry crackling noise on the dead plants below. Then getting to his hooves he ran out to find the mare that had tried to save him earlier.
Edited by raptorvelo, 17 July 2013 - 12:29 AM.
#129
Posted 17 July 2013 - 06:21 PM
Potipah whimpered. If the half-mind got closer than 15 foot to her she would scream.
"I-It's getting closer.. Right there." She lifted a hoof to where the half-mind was. It staggered towards her, its grey mane trailing along the floor. Its body was a pale, creamy colour. Potipah couldn't help but feel she knew this pony well... Its cutie mark was an open scroll.
"M-Mayor Mare..?"
#130
Posted 18 July 2013 - 12:53 AM
Black Widow lifted her knife.
"Ma'm.. I don't want to hurt you... just turn and leave now..."
#131
Posted 18 July 2013 - 02:01 AM
Seeing the mare from earlier he ran up yo her "C-can you help me" he asked. Then seeing the bandage on the other mares leg. "W-what happened?" he asked in concern. "Did one of the monsters bite you?"
#132
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:14 PM
Potipah twitched on hearing the colt's unbroken voice. "Just shut up, foal. I.. I'm not bitten. And I ain't helping you, not at the moment. Get somewhere safe."
#133
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:20 PM
#134
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:25 PM
"Yes!" Ed pipped up. scrambling over to the door and placing his front hooves against the doors wooden surface. "C-can you help me?"
Edited by raptorvelo, 18 July 2013 - 03:26 PM.
#135
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:29 PM
#136
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:43 PM
"Of course, just 'cos it's a bucking foal everyone gets all lighthearted. You've got your priorities sorted, haven't you? Dick." Potipah seemed to be agitated for no real reason.
Edited by Squint, 18 July 2013 - 03:56 PM.
#137
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:53 PM
"I-I know M-mommy and D-daddy started acting f-funny he sobbed. T-then they stopped moving. I went outside and saw another one, s-she....stopped..moving.. to." he said the thin wire cords glinting dully in the dim lighting, like gossamer threads, as they slowly wound themselves back around his horn.
At the mares remark he whimpered. "She's acting funny...will she stop moving soon?" he asked looking up at the stallion with a look of fear in his big brown eyes.
Edited by raptorvelo, 18 July 2013 - 04:10 PM.
#138
Posted 18 July 2013 - 03:55 PM
#139
Posted 18 July 2013 - 04:17 PM
Huddling close to the stallion, the colt shivered. "Y-you don't act..funny...like the others. C-can I stay with you?" he asked innocently as the wires tightened around his horn.
#140
Posted 18 July 2013 - 04:19 PM
#141
Posted 18 July 2013 - 04:42 PM
The colt nodded then looking towards the door. "W-what about the red head? Sh-shouldn't we help her" he asked innocently.
#142
Posted 18 July 2013 - 04:46 PM
#143
Posted 18 July 2013 - 08:37 PM
"It's about time you asked," Potipah grumbled, looking up to Leon from her seated position, "maybe I will." She stood up and brushed herself off. Nearly forgetting about the half-mind, she turned to it.
Mayor Mare seemed to have stopped. She stood, slouched, a grin on her face. Her grey hair looked like it had been partly ripped out. Her eyes were fixed on Potipah, and she raised a hoof towards her. Shakily, but certainly.
The Mayor laughed slowly. "Bang.. I got you. Have fun.."
((Mayor Mare is the one that bit Potipah.))
#144
Posted 18 July 2013 - 08:39 PM
#145
Posted 18 July 2013 - 09:14 PM
((can we not have everyone knowing potipah is infected cos ugh that would be so tricky))
"I am not infected. How many times have I got to repeat the same buckin' thing to everyone... There is somepony infected right in front of you, asshole. Shoot the Mayor, if anypony." Potipah growled.
#146
Posted 18 July 2013 - 09:21 PM
"Don't attract more." Black Widow looked at the two. She then turned to the mare, trying to calm her.
"Mayor, please, don't hurt her. Turn and leave." She drew her knife.
#147
Posted 18 July 2013 - 09:23 PM
#148
Posted 18 July 2013 - 09:31 PM
"She hasn't lifted a hoof to harm me yet. Let's give her a chance."
#149
Posted 18 July 2013 - 09:36 PM
#150
Posted 18 July 2013 - 09:59 PM
"She's gone funny...hasn't she?" he asked the stallion as two thin wires slowly unwound from his horn. Like strands of silk they floated through the air. Reaching out, as if they were looking for something.
Edited by raptorvelo, 18 July 2013 - 09:59 PM.
#151
Posted 18 July 2013 - 10:04 PM
#152
Posted 19 July 2013 - 01:21 PM
"I've had my fun already..." The Mayor's voice was hoarse. She walked towards Potipah, somehow unthreateningly. She held no weapon, but wore a waistcoat with pockets that she reached into, and withdrew...
The Mayor's eyes glazed over. Her mouth hung open, and blood began to run from it.
Potipah's horn was lit up with a green glow. Blood began dripping from the Mayor's chest, where a knife with the same green glow that surrounded Potipah's horn had been pierced into her heart. The cream-coated mare raised a hoof to the Mayor and pushed her corpse off of the knife.
"Well you aren't getting any more fun. Bitch." Potipah glared down at the Mayor, who now had a puddle of red around her. "That idiot attacked me. Tried to kill me.. Didn't bite me, though." She spat on the corpse, then turned to go inside.
#153
Posted 19 July 2013 - 01:22 PM
#154
Posted 19 July 2013 - 01:27 PM
"So I kill someone and you open the door to me? Maybe I should kill more often.." Potipah said, trotting indoors smoothly. She put the bloodied knife back into her saddlesack, where it left a red stain. "Thanks, though. It's about time."
#155
Posted 19 July 2013 - 01:36 PM
The colt poked his head curiously out the door and eyed the body hearing what the unicorn with the bandaged leg said he turned. "You made her stop moving?" he asked the silken tendrils reached towards her swimming through the air like twin snakes through water.
#156
Posted 19 July 2013 - 01:41 PM
"Yeah, she won't be moving any more from now on. Don't need to worry about her. One down." Potipah chuckled to herself.
#157
Posted 19 July 2013 - 02:01 PM
Suddenly one of the thin gossamer threads fell loosely around the neck of the bandaged unicorn. Slowly it began to wind itself around her neck like a necklace of living filament, while the other moved towards her bag and slowly dragged out the crimson blade. "What. No! don't!" the colt screamed in panic.
As if sensing it's masters panic the tendril around the neck of the mare tightened sharply causing the skin on either side of the coils to bunch up and crease like the fabric of an overstuffed pillow.
Edited by raptorvelo, 19 July 2013 - 02:02 PM.
#158
Posted 19 July 2013 - 03:08 PM
((whut?? please don't kill poti i love her ;; ))
Potipah choked as she felt the rope winding around her neck. She would have yelled out, shouting at the foal to stop doing whatever he was doing, but no sound came out. The rope around her neck caused her skin to break and begin bleeding. She lifted a hoof and tried to ease the rope off.
#159
Posted 19 July 2013 - 03:27 PM
#160
Posted 19 July 2013 - 03:54 PM
((Its called grimdark for a reason))
"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Don't leave me!" he screamed in distress as the coils tightened. "Noooo! Stop it! don't hurt her!" he cried as the wired tendril holding the knif tried in vain to sever the connection between the killing thread and its user.
Distracted by the slap the coils loosened and went limp causing the knif to fall to the floor with metallic clatter. Slowly the tearful colt backed into a corner the blood slicked wire leaving damp trail as it dragged along the floor.
"I'm sorry. I'm sorry." he continued to whimper "It was an accident." he moaned as the strands slowly wrapped themselves back around the his horn. "I didn't mean to." he cried burying his face in the corner.
((thank you for intervening))
Edited by raptorvelo, 19 July 2013 - 04:32 PM.
#161
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:04 PM
((grimdark isn't shock, it's creepiness and blood. i'm not here to bicker though
do what you want man))
Potipah gasped for air, her limbs limp. Once she had caught her breath, she placed a hoof on her neck where a scar had been left by the thread. She took her hoof away, and observed it. It was covered with blood. She raised the hoof to her mouth and licked the blood off, then looked over to the foal who was now shaking in fear.
"Someone-- tie his horn up.." She was finding it hard to speak and her voice was incredibly hoarse. "Someone could die.."
#162
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:06 PM
"Why are you licking the blood?"
#163
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:10 PM
"I.. I don't want it getting-- all dried up on my hoof.." Potipah lied. If that colt knew she was bitten, she knew he wouldn't let her see the end of it.
#164
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:24 PM
James got up, he sighed, the mind control was over, for a bit at least. He went downstairs and noticed the colt gone. He sighed in relief and exited the house. He noticed a little shed, and heard something, he turned to the shed, and sat down infront of it, trying to not make a sound.
They know.. They know i'm a monster..
He looked at Mayor mare, he backed away a bit, gulping.
#165
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:26 PM
#166
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:35 PM
"You're real cold.." Potipah stood up shakily. "Tie his horn up for me.."
#167
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:41 PM
Slowly the little colt got to his hooves as a single strand of wire slithered from his horn and wrapped around the knife's blade. "I'm sorry I hurt you." he said sadly his ears drooping. "Hears your knife back." he said innocently as the wire tendril carried the object towards her. The blade's handle handle pointed in her direction.
Edited by raptorvelo, 19 July 2013 - 04:44 PM.
#168
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:45 PM
Potipah took the knife from the foal and put it back in her saddlebag. "It's.." She sighed. "Just be careful with that weird wire thing."
#169
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:51 PM
James pushes the corpse of mayor mare aside, getting his hoofs stained in red, he gulped, and knocked on the door, what came next was a soft voice, different from before. "Uh.. I-is... Anyone... In?"
#170
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:56 PM
#171
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:56 PM
Potipah's ears perked up on hearing James at the door. She went towards it and encased the door in her magic, then shot a questioning glance at Leon. "Should I let him in? Doesn't sound like a threat.."
Edited by Squint, 19 July 2013 - 04:57 PM.
#172
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:57 PM
"But it's my special talent the colt replied innocently". looking up at her with his big, teary, brown eyes.
Then hearing somepony at the entrance he whimpered. "Its the scary one! Its the scary one!" he cried getting behind the unicorn mare and curling unto a trembling ball.
Edited by raptorvelo, 19 July 2013 - 04:57 PM.
#173
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:58 PM
#174
Posted 19 July 2013 - 04:58 PM
James scratches the back of his head, gulping. "Uh." James heard the colt, and his ears flapped down, and his head hanging low. "I.. I'm.... Sorry.."
#175
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:04 PM
"He uses a rope. T-tied it a-around m-m-my t-tale pulling-p-pulling-the bad pony pulled my tale." the colt cried as the wire cured around his body protectively.
Edited by raptorvelo, 19 July 2013 - 05:05 PM.
#176
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:10 PM
Potipah looked toward James. She felt exactly the way he did, even if she hadn't hurt anypony else except the Mayor. "Not your fault."
#177
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:11 PM
James hears the colt and began to tear up a bit, "I-its not me, i-its him i swear!" He then heard potipah and smiled slightly, "I-it.. It wasn't my fault..."
#178
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:18 PM
The colt's crying faltered "N-n-not your f-fault?" he asked hesitantly hiccuping as he a few more tears rolled down his cheeks. Slowly he peaked out from behind the unicorn mares leg as the thin wire slowly uncurled from his body and returned to his horn.
Edited by raptorvelo, 19 July 2013 - 05:19 PM.
#179
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:25 PM
Black Widow was quiet as the others talked. She was simply thinking. Where would they go? How would they survive? Was anypony infected? What if all of these ponies are diseased, and leading her into a trap? Or what if she's the infected one, and they're all sane?
"So where do we go from here?" She asked, observing the others.
#180
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:49 PM
"We can't go jumping to conclusions about anypony." Potipah said in response to Black Widow. "We need supplies, too.. I'm willing to go out, as long as they're willing. Oh, and somepony take care of the foal.."
#181
Posted 19 July 2013 - 05:55 PM
"Edward" the colt said softly. Then a little louder "M-my name is...Edward" he said shyly.
#182
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:01 PM
James looked at the corpse of mayor mare, "Uh.. I'm still outside.. Uh.. I.. Yknow i could.."
#183
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:02 PM
"Alright. Someone take care of Edward, then." Potipah said, slightly irritated but not showing it in her tone as she was still in vague control of her other mind. "Don't want him to be not moving." She lied.
Potipah looked again to James. "Go get some stuff? I'll come with, if you're gonna go get supplies."
Edited by Squint, 19 July 2013 - 06:03 PM.
#184
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:05 PM
"Uh.. Sure.. Whatever rolls your boat.." James' ears flapped up and looked at the door.
#185
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:07 PM
((*floats your boat get it right omfg bucking n0b))
Potipah trotted outside to meet James. "You got a weapon?" She tried to act normally, but really she just wanted to get away from the group so she could talk to James about being bitten. She needed to tell somepony.
#186
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:09 PM
(fok u noob)
James nodded, he looked in his saddlebag and showed her two large sized knifes.
#187
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:15 PM
(( wot did u jest say m8 ))
"Nice one.. I've only got this little thing." Potipah opened her saddlebag and showed him her bloodstained knife. "Used it twice already today."
#188
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:22 PM
"We should move now." A slight smile was forming in james' face
#189
Posted 19 July 2013 - 06:27 PM
Noticing James' smile, the sides of Potipah's mouth curled upward. "We should. Should we go into a house, or a shop?"
#190
Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:18 PM
"Shops, come on.. I got a spot we can search for." James walked towards the quill and sofa shop.
(i think that was canon idk)
#191
Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:23 PM
((thet is canon yes good jub))
Potipah followed James. "Uh, you know that furniture and stationery isn't going to be all that helpful at the moment, right?"
#192
Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:35 PM
"There should be other materials." James looked at Potipah. "Uh.." He then looked at his leg.
#193
Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:36 PM
"Yeah, maybe.. It is kind of specific, though." Potipah opened the door to Sofas and Quills. She sat on one of the display sofas, exhaled, then noticed James looking worriedly at his leg. "Got bit?"
#194
Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:10 PM
"Y-yes.." James felt guilty, and looked around the store.
#195
Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:19 PM
Potipah opened her mouth to talk again, but then bit her lip as tears welled in her eyes. Getting bitten was an irreversible process. "I.. I got bitten too.." She whimpered. Her horn lit up, and the bandage around her bitten hind leg unwound. "Couple days ago.." She put the bandage back on.
#196
Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:23 PM
James smiles a bit at Potipah. "We.. should look for stuff now."
(poti x jams pls otp)
#197
Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:27 PM
((ok))
"Like.. Food and weapons, right? And cures to this bucking thing." Potipah chuckled. She looked up to James and smiled back at him.
#198
Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:33 PM
(blush infected mode activate)
James blushes, and turns to one of the drawers and starts to look aroumd, finding nothing but dust.
#199
Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:36 PM
Potipah's cheeks caught on fire.
Potipah leapt over the counter and began searching the shelves. Her cheeks, she noticed, felt a little hot.. Was she blushing?
#200
Posted 19 July 2013 - 09:20 PM
Black Widow stayed, looking at Edward.
"So... rough day?" She asked, looking where Potipah and James left to.
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