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#1 scifidude47

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Posted 27 July 2014 - 04:53 AM

Plot:

 

We all know the story. Of how Nightmare Moon wanted to bring about eternal night, her jealousy of her sister bringing her to almost taking out her wrath on our very world. We thankfully know that Celestia, our princess of the sun, was able to prevent this, saving our empire and perhaps our world. 

 

But what if she failed?

 

What if she was unable to save the sun? What if the world was brought into eternal night? What if we lost everything we held dear to the following darkness?

 

This is the story of what happened... in a world without light...

 

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It has been a month since the sun had been extinguished from our sky. an eerie darkness blankets the landscape constantly. It is impossible to tell night from day, if such things existed anymore. The only small sources of light are the stars, far off in the heavens. It is cold, and it grows colder every day that the world is without a sun. The Royal sisters have disappeared, and their whereabouts are unknown. Perhaps they were killed along with the light of this world...

 

Ponies are rarely seen anymore. Most have either fled underground or have done their best to survive on the surface of the world. The only light seen that isn't from stars is from candles, flashlights, or makeshift torches. The only abundant flammable material left is the forests of the world that have begun to whither and die. Ponies on the surface constantly move, scrounging around the abandoned corners of the world like crows trapped in the bowels of hell. Primitive torches are made, and are the only sign of life in the dark world of Equestria, spare for the occasional bump in the night. When ponies cannot move, they die, simple as that. There is no such place as "home" anymore, only places to stay and leave. As the world grows colder and colder, ponies must scrounge more clothing, wearing many layers of tattered cloth just to survive. 

 

While the end of the world is a harsh one indeed, the most common and simple way to get by is to scavenge resources from old buildings. Planting crops is impractical, as there is no sunlight with which to grow them, so those that cannot find their own food have to resort to much more horrid methods to survive, whether taking supplies from other survivors, or much more...

 

Bandits frequent the ruins of Equestria, and have become rather commonplace throughout the wastes. Survivors who cannot defend themselves tend to die quickly. With guns becoming more and more scarce and impractical to use, many ponies resort to using crudely made melee weapons to fight against whatever threats arise in the darkness.

 

You have survived this long, eking out an existence from whatever things you have managed to gather to stay warm and fed. One night, you see flashing lights in the distance. They look like lightening, but are far too green to be lightening and too straight and calculated to be flares or fires. Running out of supplies, and almost out of hope, it's up to you to discover what this light is...

 

Through a world blanketed in darkness, through snow-covered fields, bitter cold, and dangerous beings, you must survive.

 

This is our last hope.

 

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RULES:

1. Follow any forum RP rules as you would find in any other forum RP.

2. Excessive gore must be put in a spoiler with an obvious warning. Remember, if it doesn't make your post look any better, it isn't neccesary.

3. Only sign up to play as a race you would find in normal equestria. No Alicorns.

4. If it needed sunlight in the past, it doesn't exist anymore. No solar-powered items, no seeds, no finding above-ground greenhouses that serve as the last bastion for life. In short, be reasonable with what you find.

5. There is no law in this world. Don't expect to be greeted kindly, and don't try to be too kind either. If you've lived this long, you've seen some pretty nasty stuff.

 

Character Sheet: (Fill one of these out to join)

 

Name:

Gender:

Race:

Age:

Appearance: (Description or picture will do)

Starting Item: (Assume you start with some decent clothing, some source of light, and some rations, along with a backpack. This is for a little something extra; be it a weapon, tool, medical kit, or something else you wish to take with you. No guns, no exceptions.)

Talent:

Short Bio: (How did you manage to survive a month without the sun?)

 

Here's mine:

 

Name: Doc
Gender: Stallion
Race: Unicorn
Age: Late 30s

Appearance: Grey coat, with a light silver mane. Almost always wears reading glasses. His Cutie mark is a pony skull with a giant screw going through it. 
Starting Item: A small first aid kit, only including some bandages, and a small first aid guide.
Talent: Medical treatment
Short Bio: Doc was quite the introvert before the apocalypse began. He usually kept to himself in his laboratory, performing basic experiments that he doesn't discuss with others. When the sun died, he survived how most others did, looting whatever stores he could find in the chaos and boarding himself up in his home, doing what little he could with the little he had to keep him sane. When he was low on food, he found that his knowledge on pony physiology served him well, as he learned to trade his medical expertise in exchange for supplies. He usually keeps to his home, but with supplies becoming rarer, ponies in need of treatment or trustworthy becoming more scarce, and marauding bandits becoming more common, Doc is not left with much. One night, after seeing green lights to the north, Doc is going to do the only thing he has left worthwhile to do; pack his supplies, leave Ponyville, and trek north to find the source.

 

Character List:

Doc: scifidude47

James Pavlovich: James is Catbutt

Potipah Squint: Squint

Skye: Runningwolf251

Strike Hawke: tudexd

Cedar: ~HelixSpectrumTopazGamer


Edited by scifidude47, 05 August 2014 - 01:20 PM.


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Posted 30 July 2014 - 06:46 AM

Bumping this to the top. The first approved submission for an RP since the new system was brought in.

#3 scifidude47

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Posted 30 July 2014 - 07:40 AM

Do I get a cookie?

 

Thanks for getting this in btw, Greeb :3


Edited by scifidude47, 30 July 2014 - 07:42 AM.


#4 scifidude47

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Posted 30 July 2014 - 06:38 PM

Bump?



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Posted 30 July 2014 - 08:00 PM

Sounds like a cool, unique RP.

 

I shall join this, but i will have to type the App later



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Posted 30 July 2014 - 08:51 PM

Name: James Pavlovich
Gender: Male
Race: Earth Pony
Age:16
Description Very lightish yellow messy fur, coupled with long green messy mane and long tail, he has alot of bruises covering most of his body, He wears a black cotton trench coat that covers his cutiemark and is torn and dirty. He also uses a black hood cape on top of the trenchcoat.
Starting Item: An ice pick
Talent: Cooking most sort of foods.
Short Bio: James spent his childhood with his parents, in Canterlot, where he lived a happy life, findind his talent as a cook when he cooked dinner for the family. He also had a sister, named Emily which was younger. When the apocalypse began, he was separated from his parents, at the age of 16, and weeks later, her sister passed away infront of him, due to food poisoning. After a few days of staying beside her sister and almost dieing of exhaustion, a group of ponies rescued him and took him into their group, equipping him with some clothes to protect him from the bitter cold. One day later, the group had just vanished, leaving James alone. After a few hours of roaming around, he saw the shining lights, and decided to go for it.

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Posted 30 July 2014 - 09:55 PM

Name: James Pavlovich
Gender: Male
Race: Earth Pony
Age:16
Description Very lightish yellow messy fur, coupled with long green messy mane and long tail, he has alot of bruises covering most of his body, He wears a black cotton trench coat that covers his cutiemark and is torn and dirty. He also uses a black hood cape on top of the trenchcoat.
Starting Item: An ice pick
Talent: Cooking most sort of foods.
Short Bio: James spent his childhood with his parents, in Canterlot, where he lived a happy life, findind his talent as a cook when he cooked dinner for the family. He also had a sister, named Emily which was younger. When the apocalypse began, he was separated from his parents, at the age of 16, and weeks later, her sister passed away infront of him, due to food poisoning. After a few days of staying beside her sister and almost dieing of exhaustion, a group of ponies rescued him and took him into their group, equipping him with some clothes to protect him from the bitter cold. One day later, the group had just vanished, leaving James alone. After a few hours of roaming around, he saw the shining lights, and decided to go for it.

adding.



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Posted 31 July 2014 - 12:21 AM

Maybe a little too close to my last failed RP, but I'll join regardless.

 

Name:

Potipah Squint

Gender:

it a gril

Race:

Earth pony

Age:

15

Appearance:

See my profile or your memories

Starting Item:

A large map of Equestria, folded and rolled up into a neat scroll and bound with a green ribbon.

Talent:

Potipah knows a lot about death for her age and has immense knowledge of pony anatomy. Because of this, she can locate most pains. However, her knowledge falls flat when it comes to actually treating ailments.

Short Bio:

Potipah grew up in Trottingham, the daughter of a doctor and his loving wife. There's nothing that particularly stands out about her life. She had a good upbringing and was in school when the bell in Trottingham Castle rung out, imply that the sudden darkness that had come a little before was something to worry about. They were all sent home straight away and given very little reason to. However, her parents had both been out at the time and the young mare found herself very alone in her large home. With the food inn the pantry running low, she tried to get more from the local shop to no avail. However, on her way back home, she spotted a light in the distance and followed it with some slither of hope kindling inside of her.



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Posted 31 July 2014 - 12:27 AM

hey gril want to procate a spore from the spore creature creatir

that means be jamesos franed

Edited by James is Catbutt, 31 July 2014 - 12:27 AM.


#10 Squint

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Posted 31 July 2014 - 12:28 AM

james horse has a dumb second part of his name

 

so no



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Posted 31 July 2014 - 12:31 AM

james horse has a dumb second part of his name
 
so no


ur name is pot haha u kush

#12 RunningWolf251

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Posted 31 July 2014 - 12:35 AM

Just wanted to let you know that I changed the title of this to include "Applications" to avoid confusion.



#13 scifidude47

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Posted 31 July 2014 - 12:41 AM

Maybe a little too close to my last failed RP, but I'll join regardless.

 

Name:

Potipah Squint

Gender:

it a gril

Race:

Earth pony

Age:

15

Appearance:

See my profile or your memories

Starting Item:

A large map of Equestria, folded and rolled up into a neat scroll and bound with a green ribbon.

Talent:

Potipah knows a lot about death for her age and has immense knowledge of pony anatomy. Because of this, she can locate most pains. However, her knowledge falls flat when it comes to actually treating ailments.

Short Bio:

Potipah grew up in Trottingham, the daughter of a doctor and his loving wife. There's nothing that particularly stands out about her life. She had a good upbringing and was in school when the bell in Trottingham Castle rung out, imply that the sudden darkness that had come a little before was something to worry about. They were all sent home straight away and given very little reason to. However, her parents had both been out at the time and the young mare found herself very alone in her large home. With the food inn the pantry running low, she tried to get more from the local shop to no avail. However, on her way back home, she spotted a light in the distance and followed it with some slither of hope kindling inside of her.

adding. Sorry, I never meant to copy any other RPs :P



#14 tudexd

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Posted 31 July 2014 - 01:19 AM

Gow does the race bat ponies fit into this? Most people assume they see in the dark, so don't they kinda defeat the point?

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Posted 31 July 2014 - 01:26 AM

That doesn't make them immune to the deathly cold, or the bandits, or starvation, or literally anything else.

 

It's a tiny advantage, not to mention it could be safe to assume that some ponies that have survived have developed better eyesight. 



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Posted 31 July 2014 - 02:09 AM

Oh I see, so the darkness isn't much of a problem as is an annoyance

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 03:45 AM

Bump, this needs more people, i really like this concept

#18 scifidude47

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 07:06 AM

If push comes to shove, one of us can make a second character.

 

Maybe once we develop the story a little bit, people may be more comfortable joining.

 

I want to get this show on the road as much as you do, but I would like a fair number of participants before we go. 



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 11:36 AM

Gow does the race bat ponies fit into this? Most people assume they see in the dark, so don't they kinda defeat the point?

That's not how bats work

 

Bats have top good hearing and top good high pitch noise making

 

Who the hell said they see in the dark, bats can't see for shit



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 01:23 PM

Bats yeah that sonar thing but the fandom assumed Batponies see in the dark. Its not my fault the fandom doesn't know jack about the bat's biology

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 01:31 PM

Stupid idiots

 

Right so are we gonna say for this the sound thing? It could be kinda cool, but ofc keep in the shit eyesight thing



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 01:35 PM

I dunno, scifi is the one that has a say in it

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 02:24 PM

Name: Skye
Gender: Mare
Race: Pegasus
Age: 26
Appearance: Skye is a scruffy gray pony with black hair and deep blue eyes. She wears a heavy black coat with her ragged pack strapped over her back and a piece of dark torn cloth wrapped around her face and muzzle.
Starting Item: Small knife
Talent: She enjoyed making music and singing before the sun disappeared.
Short Bio: When the sun disappeared, Skye was asleep at home. By the time she woke up, the sun had been gone for hours. At that point her house had gone cold and dark as well and she was left shivering on the bedspread, alone and scared. For a few days she stayed locked away in her house listening to the panicked screams of ponies outside trying to claw their way in or trying to find out what was going on. The screams started to play tricks on her mind and she knew she had to get away from it lest she be turned mad like the rest of them. She quickly grabbed a bag and threw what little food she had left inside, along with a lighter and a knife. Donning a dark-colored coat, she set out into the streets and shoved past the insane ponies. She wandered for days in hopes of finding some answers, but she only found herself getting more and more lost every day. Her supply lasted for a week or two before she ran out and had to make due with whatever little scraps she could find along the road or in abandoned houses. These were not enough to satiate her, though, and she was still quite hungry as the days went on. As she rounded a hill she noticed faint lights off to the North. Seeing nothing else of interest, she began to head towards them.
 
I might change the talent later, I always struggle with names and talents.


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Posted 02 August 2014 - 03:47 PM

Interesting OC... I know what you mean with names and talents, I always come up with those after the design's been made. I probably would've made her talent something typical of a pegasus (clouds and stuff), but I dunno. Potipah's talent still isn't even final and I've been RPing with her for a year or something...



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 03:51 PM

Name: Light Spectrum

 

Gender: Mare

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Age: 19

Appearance:

Spoiler
 

 

Starting Item: Twin Katanas

 

Talent: N/A

 

Short Bio: Light Spectrum was an orphan. She was adopted by a ninja master, and spent most of her life, before the sun died, training to become a ninja. She mastered many fighting styles and stealth maneuvers, but her emotions always got the better of her. Her rage and impatience would cause her to overlook easy obstacles and forget important things. She tried to overcome these obstacles, but they still burdened her. After a while, Spectrum moved out of the dojo. She lived in a quiet little home near the Everfree Forest, where she had a beautiful garden filled with berries, fruits, and vegetables of all kinds. However, when the sun was extinguished, she initially panicked. But she was able to calm herself down and focus on the task at hand. She harvested as much of the food as she could, and then fanned out, trying to find supplies. After collecting what she could, Spectrum pulled out her ninja equipment and prepared herself. Now, after surviving a month, Spectrum is out on a raid once again.


((I'll edit this to make the Bio longer))


Edited by ~HelixSpectrumTopazGamer~, 02 August 2014 - 05:59 PM.


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Posted 02 August 2014 - 04:00 PM

Wait she's a ninja yet, she has multicolored mane and her coat is flamy orange. Wat.

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 04:04 PM

Name: Light Spectrum

Gender: Mare

Race: Pegasus

Age: 19

Appearance:

Spoiler
 

Starting Item: Twin Katanas

Talent: N/A

Short Bio: Light Spectrum was an orphan. She was adopted by a ninja master, and spent most of her life, before the sun died, training to become a ninja. She mastered many fighting styles and stealth maneuvers. She lived in a quiet little home near the Everfree Forest, where she had a beautiful garden filled with berries, fruits, and vegetables of all kinds. However, when the sun was extinguished, she initially panicked. But she was able to calm herself down and focus on the task at hand. She harvested as much of the food as she could, and then fanned out, trying to find supplies. Now, after surviving a month, Spectrum is out on a raid once again.
((I'll edit this to make the Bio longer))


isnt this just some deus ex machina so your charecter is overpowered in every situation in the roleplay?

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 04:11 PM

It's not a deus ex, it's the wrong OC for the RP.



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 05:23 PM

Wait she's a ninja yet, she has multicolored mane and her coat is flamy orange. Wat.

 

 

isnt this just some deus ex machina so your charecter is overpowered in every situation in the roleplay?

 

 

It's not a deus ex, it's the wrong OC for the RP.

 

1. Yes...problem?

 

2. How am i overpowered? my food has run out, I'm hunting just like everyone else, and pretty much the only things that you could call OP that i have are my swords.

 

3. How is this the wrong OC?



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 05:43 PM

How is this the wrong OC?

Considering that combat skills are something that would make this situation easier for an OC, I find it hard to see a way that this situation could be an inconvenience to them aside from the issue of food, which could be easily solved by using her stealth manoeuvres. Of course, it's a little hard to judge the OC as it is since you don't seem to have mentioned or implied any flaws they would have out of this situation. Maybe she's too brash, which could make some of her attempts at ninja-ing go awry? 



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 05:49 PM

Not finished typing the Bio, just quick posting 4 now.



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 05:57 PM

Alright then, fair enough!



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 06:44 PM

If you didnt finish it, why do you even bother to post, that just looks like another excuse to protect your op character

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 06:47 PM

If you didnt finish it, why do you even bother to post, that just looks like another excuse to protect your op character

 

Because i have things to do, and i really like the idea of this RP. I want to make sure that my OC has a spot in it.



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 07:42 PM

If you didnt finish it, why do you even bother to post, that just looks like another excuse to protect your op character

Shut up James, he did say initially he was going to update it and I've posted stuff without finishing it plenty of times. I actually did it pretty recently in RP Subs (that RP isn't happening btw, it was a shitty idea).



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Posted 02 August 2014 - 07:48 PM

I love you james, im a dumb! he did say initially he was going to update it and I've posted stuff without finishing it plenty of times. I actually did it pretty recently in RP Subs (that RP isn't happening btw, it was a shitty idea).


ive never noticed your stuff not finished

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 07:52 PM

Shut up James, he did say initially he was going to update it and I've posted stuff without finishing it plenty of times. I actually did it pretty recently in RP Subs (that RP isn't happening btw, it was a shitty idea).


I was actually looking forward for that one, given I only knew the name one could wonder what was about.

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Posted 02 August 2014 - 07:56 PM

I was actually looking forward for that one, given I only knew the name one could wonder what was about.

Eh, I'll post the description in random thoughts for you. It was pretty dumb, I was mashing together two things that wouldn't mash.



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Posted 04 August 2014 - 12:59 AM

Stupid idiots

 

Right so are we gonna say for this the sound thing? It could be kinda cool, but ofc keep in the shit eyesight thing.

Sounds fine to me. 

 

 

 

Name: Skye
Gender: Mare
Race: Pegasus
Age: 26
Appearance: Skye is a scruffy gray pony with black hair and deep blue eyes. She wears a heavy black coat with her ragged pack strapped over her back and a piece of dark torn cloth wrapped around her face and muzzle.
Starting Item: Small knife
Talent: She enjoyed making music and singing before the sun disappeared.
Short Bio: When the sun disappeared, Skye was asleep at home. By the time she woke up, the sun had been gone for hours. At that point her house had gone cold and dark as well and she was left shivering on the bedspread, alone and scared. For a few days she stayed locked away in her house listening to the panicked screams of ponies outside trying to claw their way in or trying to find out what was going on. The screams started to play tricks on her mind and she knew she had to get away from it lest she be turned mad like the rest of them. She quickly grabbed a bag and threw what little food she had left inside, along with a lighter and a knife. Donning a dark-colored coat, she set out into the streets and shoved past the insane ponies. She wandered for days in hopes of finding some answers, but she only found herself getting more and more lost every day. Her supply lasted for a week or two before she ran out and had to make due with whatever little scraps she could find along the road or in abandoned houses. These were not enough to satiate her, though, and she was still quite hungry as the days went on. As she rounded a hill she noticed faint lights off to the North. Seeing nothing else of interest, she began to head towards them.
 
I might change the talent later, I always struggle with names and talents.

 

Sounds awesome. Adding.

 

 

Name: Light Spectrum

 

Gender: Mare

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Age: 19

Appearance:

Spoiler
 

 

Starting Item: Twin Katanas

 

Talent: N/A

 

Short Bio: Light Spectrum was an orphan. She was adopted by a ninja master, and spent most of her life, before the sun died, training to become a ninja. She mastered many fighting styles and stealth maneuvers, but her emotions always got the better of her. Her rage and impatience would cause her to overlook easy obstacles and forget important things. She tried to overcome these obstacles, but they still burdened her. After a while, Spectrum moved out of the dojo. She lived in a quiet little home near the Everfree Forest, where she had a beautiful garden filled with berries, fruits, and vegetables of all kinds. However, when the sun was extinguished, she initially panicked. But she was able to calm herself down and focus on the task at hand. She harvested as much of the food as she could, and then fanned out, trying to find supplies. After collecting what she could, Spectrum pulled out her ninja equipment and prepared herself. Now, after surviving a month, Spectrum is out on a raid once again.


((I'll edit this to make the Bio longer))

Ok, look.

 

The others are right. This OC is not fit for this RP. Ninjas are pretty OP, even if they din't don black clothing in a world where EVERYTHING IS BLACK.

 

There are two things, well, three, you can do here.

 

1. Give this character a LARGE rehaul (I will not accept a rainbow-maned character, nor a ninja)

 

2. Use an entirely different character.

 

3. Find another RP.

 

I'm not sure if you're a fan of piano music, but if you want an idea of what the general mood of this RP is going to be, listen to this.

 

 

When you listen to this, the last thing you'd think of is a ninja. Maybe listening to this could help you make a better character for this RP.

 

Also, last note, dual katanas are pretty OP as well.

 

I WILL GET THE FORUM THREAD FOR THIS READY IN A BIT, PEOPLE


Edited by scifidude47, 04 August 2014 - 01:00 AM.


#40 jimme neutron corndog

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Posted 04 August 2014 - 03:13 AM

yEs yeS MYUUJI

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Posted 04 August 2014 - 03:47 AM

Name: Strike Hawke
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Race: Batpony
Apperance: White coat and a dark blue short mane and tail. Not that you can see it under the heavy snow clothing he's using. The best way to describe it would be the clothes that the rebels from Star Wars wear when they are in Hoth. Its a beige jacket. White pants. Two pair of white boots. An ultiity belt. A white cap that has straps to cover the side of his face and mouth. And a pair of snow glasses.
Starting item: Map of Equestria.
Talent: Ecolocation. He is an expert in using his bat sonar. (To elaborate it works just like real bats is not all around him its a sound wave that goes only forward and them back at him giving him whatever is in front of him)
Short Bio: Strike lived on the Alps on the far north just outside Equestria. His colony lived inside one of the mountains. The colony itsef was a series of tunnels either natural ones or dug by the batponies themselves. Strike worked as a finder for new tunnels due to his talent. One day he was called by the colony chiefs about a matter that never happened before. There they told Strike that the sun never rose that day. Suspicious of some evil afoot, they sent Strike on a mission. Strike were to reach their cousins in Canterlot Mountain and figure it out what had happened. So Strike set out on his Journey, saddly he couldn't carry a whole lot of food just enough to make to Equestria. After a month he finally crossed the border and he was in Equestris. After a couple more days roaming the dark snowy landscape, Strike notices a faint light just South of him. Its been a while since he felt the warm of the light so he headed in its direction.

#42 scifidude47

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Posted 04 August 2014 - 04:08 AM

Sounds good, adding.

 

I'm going to at least get a starting post up tonight. 



#43 scifidude47

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Posted 04 August 2014 - 04:40 AM

Real thread's up, if anyone's ready



#44 TemmixDaHelix

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Posted 04 August 2014 - 07:19 PM

Name: Cedar

 

Gender: Stallion

 

Age: 20

 

Race: Goat

 

Appearance:

Spoiler

 

Starting Item: Several sets of Winter gear. (Heavy coats, tall boots, thick socks, etc.)

 

Talent: Goats don't have cutie marks, but he is a fast sprinter.

 

Bio: Cedar was born and raised in Equestria. He was normally an object of bullying at his school, because he was a goat. However, as he is now, he normally had a very careless attitude. In school, he would always be the first one finished with tests or exercises, because he was never normally distracted. He always knew what he had to do and got it done. After graduating high school, however, he became a little more laidback and easygoing, a little. However, he quit school after and started farming and doing manual labor as work.

   When the sun disappeared, he dashed out to the stores, like everypony else. However, instead of heading to the bank or the food stores, he entered a clothing store and took several sets of heavy winter gear. After, he took up residence in an abandoned house. Since then, he has set out of many raids for food and sources of fire. Now he is looking for some other ponies to join their group. He sees some lights in the distance and goes to investigate.


Edited by ~HelixSpectrumTopazGamer~, 05 August 2014 - 12:10 PM.


#45 scifidude47

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Posted 05 August 2014 - 03:59 AM

Helix, isn't that kind of just copying off of bat ponies with the added abilities of unicorns?

 

Still a bit OP, in my opinion. 



#46 TemmixDaHelix

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Posted 05 August 2014 - 11:57 AM

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#47 scifidude47

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Posted 05 August 2014 - 01:19 PM

Sounds good. We don't see too many goat OCs, so this could be interesting.

 

adding.



#48 scifidude47

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Posted 10 August 2014 - 04:24 PM

Bump?

 




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