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#1 Rori

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Posted 30 September 2013 - 01:57 PM

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(made by me)

http://izzywowza.dev...-Deep-404130007

 

 

 

Hi guys.

I've improved heaps since my last stories here.

Here is the fimfiction page of my story:

http://www.fimfictio...gel-of-the-deep

 

Here is chapter one, in spoilers:

Spoiler

 

 

Hope you enjoyed the FIRST CHAPTER!


Edited by ϟsıɹƎϟ, 30 September 2013 - 11:05 PM.


#2 Rori

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Posted 30 September 2013 - 11:07 PM

Story and description edited because it did not meet standards.

 

Hope you enjoy the minor improvements!

 

(the changes occured to spacing of speech, and the last two paragraphs of the chapter.)


Edited by ϟsıɹƎϟ, 30 September 2013 - 11:08 PM.



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