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#101 greebster

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:49 AM

Is there a Poll decision for I FUCKING LOVE IT!? anyway, here's my entry.

Character name: Silver Thorn (I know that there is already another Silver but oh well, we can try to work around it)


ACCEPTED, I also have a plan for your character already.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:51 AM

hm, this will definitely keep me reading wont it Greeb?
EDIT: Oh i forgot, his work is dangerous and he prefers to be alone... he hates seeing other ponies in pain, especially when he decided to bring them to help study. Hope this doesn't f*ck things up. Oh and one more thing, I really don't care if my character dies. In fact, I would gladly kill my character in an RP to make it more awesome.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:57 AM

hm, this will definitely keep me reading wont it Greeb?


I hope so :D

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:54 PM

OI VOLVO! If you want/need and extra voice, you're open to send me a PM. that is, if it's okay with you?

If i ever need a voice that you can provide i'll let you know.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 01:05 PM

Just make sure that you really want to help with the reading, because then I can add you to the list of volunteers. If you don't want to, then no biggie :)

Sorry to single you out scorpion, but I noticed you chose no for having illustrations. That is fine of course, I just would like to know your reasons, if ok :)

Edited by Greebster, 21 November 2012 - 01:09 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2012 - 02:05 PM

Here is a villian

Name: Snatcher

Race: Unicorn

Gender: Colt

Special talent: Can steal an unicorns magic powers. By every magic absorbed he becomes powerfull. (only way to get the magic back is to defeat him)

Bio: It's a villian. No backstory. He's bad and needs to be stopped. Very agile and dangerous. He loves surprise attacks. Even in close combat very dangerous. By one touch by his fore hoofs or by his horn, a unicorn looses his magic powers. (can't steal an alicorns magic powers)

Description: A bit tall. White with black mane. Covers his face and body with a black robe.

Favourite weapons: His magic is his best weapon. Destruction spells. Illusion spells like fury, fear and calm too. Anti magic sphere. Stop time (only for 5 sec.), teleport, possess a pony (enters a ponys mind and by doing that can travel without being detected. Once left a ponys mind he won't be able to do it again for at least a day), sleepless nightmare (ponys wake up not fully rested because of nightmares), trauma (can make a ponys mind sick, can make the bravest and toughest royal guard cry like a little filly, attacking a ponys weakest point making him fight with himself and his mind, without a cure or medical help the affected person will stay like that forever), mind control (only for 1 minute (can't control alicorns)) Void Shif (If at low health or alomst beaten Snatcher is able to enter the Void but only for 5 sec. allowing him to run without being hit or harmed (he is not invisible just like a ghost)) Borrowed Time (after absorbing an unicorns magic he is able to turn time back for about 15 sec. This is passive. After he absorbed the magic can hold it till he needs it (eg if accidently makes a mistake in combat and gets hit turns back time and prevent it to happen)

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 02:06 PM

Here is a villian

Name: Snatcher


definitely ACCEPTED! Good to have you on the team Hxfthxft :)

Edited by Greebster, 21 November 2012 - 02:07 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2012 - 02:07 PM

Here is a villian

It kinda sounds like a corrupt colt Twilight. OOOOOH!
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Posted 21 November 2012 - 04:06 PM

Oooh. Not bad, not bad at all.
Here's mine, if you're still accepting.

Name: High Orbit

Race: Pegasus (Unable to fly due to a hole in his wing distrupting aerodynamics)

Gender: Colt

Special talent: He sees all. All possible outcomes of an event are played in his mind, but he cannot do anything about it unless he plays a part in the event itself. As such, he prefers to stay away, and watch. Also has a talent for tinkering, meaning give him a weapon, ANY weapon, and he'll be able to dissessamble and reassemble it into pretty much anything.

Bio: Have you ever felt the sorrow of not only being the last in class to get a Cutie Mark, but because your wings are just not normal? Have you felt the pain when your Cutie Mark finally appeared, but it had NOTHING to do with what you loved? Have you felt the heartache when your last refuge is the sky, and yet you are unable to meet it?

This is High Orbit. Exiled pegasus. Shunned outcast.

Description: Like in my profile pic, but older and much more melancoly.After all, he's been despised by his own kind as far as he can remember. Also with a hole in the second flight feather of his left wing.

Favourite weapons: He thinks fast, and acts faster. Wielding a twin repeater crossbow as a saddle, he is able to match the fire rates of most weapons. Besides that, he can easily incorporate new weapons into his arsenal. That is, IF and ONLY IF, you can persuade him to come out and help, as he is highly distrustful of others due to being feared and shunned by most.

"They told me to make some friends. So, I made some."

Orbit's repeater crossbow saddle, unknown to most, houses an intricate artificial intelligence, known as the Multicore Unaided Fully Functional Identification/Neutralization System. While unable to perform other tasks, or talk, it is Muffins who guides the crossbow for Orbit, and is his most trusted ally. Ask him. He'll tell you. That is, if he doesn't kill you first.

((Orbit hates everyone and everypony. But the hate for the humans WILL be stronger. Just a little. A LITTLE. Means he won't blink about killing his own kind if he is still required to.))

Edited by High Orbit, 21 November 2012 - 04:20 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2012 - 04:52 PM

Favourite weapons: He thinks fast, and acts faster. Wielding a twin repeater crossbow as a saddle,


Wait... his repeater is a saddle? wat?

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 05:53 PM

Is it too late to throw one of my OC's in? Oh, I hope not!
Just in case I still can...


Character name: Ta'buhl Yu Syk

Nickname: Ta'bby, Ta'buhl

Race: Alien pony. :3

Cutie Mark: Her cutie mark is the Mark of Gua'ruhl - the ancient God of Vision (you can see it in the picture link below).

Special Skill: VERY acrobatic, agile. Also, her body is filled with a special nerve that acts as an enhanced optical sensory nerve, allowing her to "see" whats around her at all times (within a certain distance) - asleep or awake.

Description of OC: Here is the picture.

Bio: Well, she goes from planet to planet, gathering intel. on the planet's defenses. Once she does that, she either destroys some of the defenses and/or calls in comrades from her home planet to come and destroy the planet.

Edit: Oh! Alternativly, she could be an experiment from a lab that got loose or something. That seems like it's MUCH easier to work with.
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However, you can use her for her for whatever you need. I won't mind.

Favourite Weapon: The tip of her tail is charged with electricity - she can do anything from a small static shock, to paralysis, to stopping and starting your heart. All mostly silently, as it's not lightning.

Let me know if this character is too un-usable. I can change whatever it is that is doing that.

Edited by Hallfrost00, 21 November 2012 - 05:58 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2012 - 07:02 PM

Oooh. Not bad, not bad at all.
Here's mine, if you're still accepting.

Name: High Orbit


ACCEPTED, another bad guy? Or maybe verging on dark just temporarily. I think I know how he could be persuaded to join the right side in the end.

Is it too late to throw one of my OC's in? Oh, I hope not!
Just in case I still can...


Character name: Ta'buhl Yu Syk

Nickname: Ta'bby, Ta'buhl


Hmm, I don't know... is this your normal OC? I suppose so, I'll have to use your alternative bio though, I don't want alien OCs sadly. It doesn't stay in theme of the story. But... ACCEPTED! :)

Don't forget to tell your friends about this, everypony! Next target is 40 OCs, we have 27 so far!

Edited by Greebster, 21 November 2012 - 06:56 PM.


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Posted 21 November 2012 - 08:22 PM

Looks pretty good, but there were some occasional spelling/grammar issues that required me to roll back a few lines and read something again, which interrupted the flow. Be sure you get a few grammar nazis to proof-read your stuff as you write it. It's never a good idea to let miniscule errors get in the way of a great story.

Anyway, I've got 3 OC concepts I think I could flesh-out for this story; however, I'll need some time to work on them (mostly because I'm about to go on vacation for Thanksgiving).

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 08:24 PM

I tried to read the fic, I truly did... but my grinding attention made me wanna kill myself while reading it, so I stopped... Sorry D:

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 09:22 PM

Looks pretty good, but there were some occasional spelling/grammar issues that required me to roll back a few lines and read something again.

could you help pre-read?

#116 Jaylex

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 09:22 PM

Just make sure that you really want to help with the reading, because then I can add you to the list of volunteers. If you don't want to, then no biggie :)

Sorry to single you out scorpion, but I noticed you chose no for having illustrations. That is fine of course, I just would like to know your reasons, if ok :)

Oh no, I'm fine with the Illustrations. I just thought that it may be better if the reader can use his imagination to make their own scenario. It works either way, I just weighed out the options of having the and not.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 09:23 PM

I tried to read the fic, I truly did... but my grinding attention made me wanna kill myself while reading it, so I stopped... Sorry D:


That's ok, reading isn't for everyone :)

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 09:27 PM

That's ok, reading isn't for everyone :)

The thing is, I love reading.

#119 Jaylex

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 09:27 PM

Well everything's not for everyone.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:13 PM

Holy shit, 40 OCS?

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:28 PM

that's the target :)

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:37 PM

y no post chapter 2?

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:51 PM

You can't rush perfection Haxor.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 12:11 AM

Replying to a pretty old post of distortions, I can do a deep evil voice, and apparently my evil laugh is greatly desired, so if you need a voice like that, I'm good for that.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 04:57 AM

@golf Similar to Fo:E. In this case, he has a saddle with two large crossbows on his left and right flanks.

I can help proofread, if you need one.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 07:46 AM

Not too late?
Name: Smiley Jack
Race: Pegasus
Cutie mark: Yellow smiley face
Talent: Originally make ponies smile
Description: http://i.imgur.com/025ym.jpg
Bio: Smiley Jack grew up in Manehattan. He was always a good with jokes. His cutie mark appeared when he told a joke during stand-up in school. Everyone laughed at his jokes. But his jokes started to get old. Smiley couldn't think of new one. He became crazy about jokes. One day his crazyness won. He went out into the street and started shooting. Fortunately he didn't killed anyone, only wounded five ponies. For that crime he was banished to Everfree forest for life.
Favourite weapon: Revolver

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 08:32 AM

Following the non-canon rules, if an OC is unable to perform his talent due to psycological factors, his cutie mark will shatter, resulting in dementia.

Not required, but it would look nice if he had a shattered smiley face...

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 08:37 AM

Replying to a pretty old post of distortions, I can do a deep evil voice, and apparently my evil laugh is greatly desired, so if you need a voice like that, I'm good for that.

I or Volvonski will let you know if my voice is right for the role. personally if it's not that big of a problem that my voice wont be like a deep voiced narrator, I can make a pretty evil agressive russian sounding villain. We'll first test this on tuesday in mumble.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 08:46 AM

I or Volvonski will let you know if my voice is right for the role. personally if it's not that big of a problem that my voice wont be like a deep voiced narrator, I can make a pretty evil agressive russian sounding villain. We'll first test this on tuesday in mumble.

alright then, it shall be settled then.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 10:31 AM

Following the non-canon rules, if an OC is unable to perform his talent due to psycological factors, his cutie mark will shatter, resulting in dementia.

Not required, but it would look nice if he had a shattered smiley face...

Hmmm... Why not?

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 10:38 AM

Not too late?
Name: Smiley Jack


Ok, ACCEPTED :P

Progress on the story is looking good. And OCs are gonna start popping in :)

y no post chapter 2?


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Posted 22 November 2012 - 02:34 PM

Look at my christmas prezzie my girlfriend bought me :) a T-shirt

Reduploaded, thanks hx, I forgot you can't see an image if uploaded from facebook, only the owner can see it:

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 02:38 PM

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Awesome T-shirt :)

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 04:01 PM

:D AAAAH AWESOME SHIRT

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 04:03 PM

I would've added an OC to this... then I saw the OPness of some of the characters... my characters would be really underpowered compared to like all of them.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 04:07 PM

I would've added an OC to this... then I saw the OPness of some of the characters... my characters would be really underpowered compared to like all of them.

My guy is a golfer... i think you'll be ok....

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 04:07 PM

I would've added an OC to this... then I saw the OPness of some of the characters... my characters would be really underpowered compared to like all of them.

Don't worry. my character isn't much of a fighter. all she does is do art and herblore. besides. greebster is a good writer. surely he'll find some cool spot for you.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 04:10 PM

Don't worry. my character isn't much of a fighter. all she does is do art and herblore. besides. greebster is a good writer. surely he'll find some cool spot for you.

Maybe. Maybe.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 05:12 PM

I've only let bad guy characters be OP.

So you should have no problem fitting in with the story, your character might not even be fighting or stuff like that. He/she will still have an important role

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 05:13 PM

Awesome.

Now to think up a solid character for this...

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 05:13 PM

It's not all about the power of strength in the end, it's the power of friendship. And that's what I'd want to illustrate here and in the story :)

Edited by Greebster, 22 November 2012 - 05:14 PM.


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Posted 22 November 2012 - 05:47 PM

Hmm, I don't know... is this your normal OC? I suppose so, I'll have to use your alternative bio though, I don't want alien OCs sadly. It doesn't stay in theme of the story. But... ACCEPTED! :)

Don't forget to tell your friends about this, everypony! Next target is 40 OCs, we have 27 so far!

No, it's not my normal OC. It's just that my normal OC doesn't have as fleshed-out of a personality.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 06:28 PM

It's not all about the power of strength in the end, it's the power of friendship. And that's what I'd want to illustrate here and in the story :)


Hmm... then you will need lauds of power in the end to defeat my villain! He's smart and tricky. Approach with caution.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 06:34 PM

Hmm... then you will need lauds of power in the end to defeat my villain! He's smart and tricky. Approach with caution.


indeed! XD
I'd really like to get Kilorat and Verdana's actual OCs in on this. Should I ask? I could just ask if they wouldn't mind me borrowing them. What do you guys think?

No, it's not my normal OC. It's just that my normal OC doesn't have as fleshed-out of a personality.


No problem then, just a science thingamajig

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 06:53 PM

I'd really like to get Kilorat and Verdana's actual OCs in on this. Should I ask? I could just ask if they wouldn't mind me borrowing them. What do you guys think?

Pretty sure Verdana would like something like this. unsure about ratty. do you think you can get the chance to ask him?

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 07:01 PM

Pretty sure Verdana would like something like this. unsure about ratty. do you think you can get the chance to ask him?


I could pm him, in the meantime, keep things rolling peeps :) don't forget to share this with other members of Brohoof.

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 07:50 PM

I got two admins in!

OC Name: Calistovolan

Gender: Mare

Race: Pegasus

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Cutie Mark: A short knife

Bio: Calisto is a mercenary who isn't concerned what side she chooses as long as she gets her fill of the blood and glory.

Weapon: Small selection of knives.




OC Name: Verdana

Gender: Colt

Race: Earth Pony

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Cutie Mark: Jigsaw Puzzle Piece

Bio: Verdana is a toy maker. He likes to make toys, play games and solve puzzles/riddles. He is really good at putting things together.

Weapon: Ummm...

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 08:19 PM

This means I have to reapply, doesn't it? Copy Pasting from old thread:

Character Name: Nightingale
Nickname(s): Nah, unless you wanna think of one based on her personality
Race: Pegasus
Special Skill: Her cutie mark is for her musical ability, but she has an amazing memory, especially of patterns or codes, and has an eye for detail in plans and such and how effective they'll be. (Based off of remembering music and music writing) For these reasons, she's great with creating and executing plans.
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Bio: Nightingale was a regular pegasus who lived in Ponyville for most her life. When the war broke out and everything was thrown into oblivion she couldn't do anything, for she was too young to join the soldier's ranks. (She's probably going to be one of the youngest ponies there now) When the war was over, and she got older, she still couldn't let go of a burning desire to give help to those who need it.
Reason for Joining: When Nightingale saw for herself the dangers of Equestria, she knew that she couldn't sit and watch them. Her mind would not stop dwelling on the thought of these dangers hurting others. She was always one to act rather than sit back and watch, so she soon learned of the Brothers of the Hoof, or Brohoof, and set out to join their ranks.
Favourite Weapon: Wing Blades (A blade attached to the edge if the wing that can be used to slash at enemies)
Personality: Nightingale is a clever, practical thinking pony who prefers to keep to herself. However, she does enjoy company and can have intelligent discussions, despite her young age. One thing is her tendency to subconsciously shy away from company, and she tends to zone out a lot and become deep in thought, even if she's in the middle of a conversation (or planning, for she'll zone out to think about how to make it more effective)

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 08:25 PM

This means I have to reapply, doesn't it? Copy Pasting from old thread:


I've already taken the OCs from the old thread :) but you're ACCEPTED all the same ^^

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 09:32 PM

Oh okay XD

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 01:38 AM

I'd like to volunteer to be an illustrator! Here is my DA if you want to see what I can do OuO

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:57 AM

I redesigned my CM into something more fitting and more original so can you please use this if my OC is used?

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I hope changing my CM isn't much of a hassle :P

EDIT: I thought the posts would have merged, sorry for the double posts.

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 07:07 AM

I'd like to volunteer to be an illustrator! Here is my DA if you want to see what I can do OuO

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Sure! I'll add you to the list of help. I looked at your DA, some good art there. At the moment I need a cover image, so I might have to pm you the OCs, a few ponies in a group and a pan of the world at their feet, that could just be some trees and a small model of canterlot. Below that is the words: "Harmonosphere". But of course experiment how you want, it's not like it has to be exactly that way. I'll pm the OCs, no favouritism just random selection. This is still up to you of course.

I redesigned my CM into something more fitting and more original so can you please use this if my OC is used?

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I hope changing my CM isn't much of a hassle :P


Naw not really, I'm still on chapter two, but nearly finished, soon Fleetfire will be in grave danger of meeting Smiley Jack...

OOPS, damn spoilers!

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 10:24 AM

Bad greebster!

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 12:29 PM

Ok greeb two things.

first. should I add a weapon of choice to my oc? seems everyone is adding it hehe.

second. I am not a great artist. but I am capable to illustrate some things. especially if I take my time and try my best. anyway my point is. I would love to be a backup artist, since you already have two great ones. if faffle or tom are having trouble with time or are too busy. you can ask me! I have some art on my profile and my DA link on it too. if you think it's good enough feel free to contact me about it :).

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:24 PM

Keep on adding information to your OC if you want. Bear in mind if you change a weapon after I wrote about your character, I'll just make a note of it and describe the character using the weapon later in the story. Add more, sure :)

also, I'll take a look at your DA later :)

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:36 PM

This is totally unrelated but I thought I'd ask: Is Harmonosphere a wordplay on Harmonisphere?

Edited by Tom_EN, 23 November 2012 - 03:36 PM.


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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:03 PM

This is totally unrelated but I thought I'd ask: Is Harmonosphere a wordplay on Harmonisphere?


Nope, I kinda just put harmony with atmosphere, insinuating that the ponies of this group will protect for peace. Define Harmonisphere.

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:07 PM

Harmonisphere is the "sacred" symmetry in music. In a way that fits so I can't help but relate the two.
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EDIT: I have no idea what that means, it just came up as a suggestion when I tried to spell Harmonosphere.

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 05:05 PM

ah. Ok then :)

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 06:44 PM

wait greeb. did you already write about my oc or can I still alter the weapon? if you already started I won't add anything.

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 07:03 PM

wait greeb. did you already write about my oc or can I still alter the weapon? if you already started I won't add anything.


nope, the only OC I've mentioned yet is Smiley Jack (ZiomalQ)

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#163 ziomalQ

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 09:47 PM

My OC will be in second chapter?! Just don't kill him at the first place :)

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 11:28 PM

Your OC is safe...

For now :P

I need more OCs so be sure to mention this project to others :)

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 12:38 AM

A little question:

How dark will this fic be?

You see, I chose the more grimdark bio for Orbit, but if the story isn't as dark as that, he might end up a little too OP.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 12:41 AM

Whoa,whoa,whoa. Are all OCs going to debut in ONE single chapter?

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 12:43 AM

Probably not. When does a book smother you to death with it's entire cast in a single chapter?

But with such a huge cast, I presume the story will end up being a collection of multiple smaller plot-lines from each character's viewpoint.

It' s like a mini-story in a story.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 12:51 AM

How dark will this fic be?


At some points, pretty dark. Like "Lord of the Rings" no hope left style. So your OC can be OP because it is a bad character. I like the design too.

Whoa,whoa,whoa. Are all OCs going to debut in ONE single chapter?


nope.avi

Imagine this is a real book. The type you buy from Waterstone's.

Probably not. When does a book smother you to death with it's entire cast in a single chapter?

It' s like a mini-story in a story.


Well kind of. The characters will all meet up at some point. We are all going to be spread throughout this story with small tales of our own. Don't expect a whole chapter based solely upon your character though. It will be more like one character is introduced and i will go through parts of their ponysonality as the story progresses.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 12:55 AM

What envolvement do OCs have?

Can we add their traits and personalitys to afix them to the story?

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:00 AM

What envolvement do OCs have?

Can we add their traits and personalitys to afix them to the story?


You can do so in your bio section :)
I recommend it actually. Dont mark yourself as part of any of the factions mentioned in the story, just show good or bad in your OC and whatever else that will not twist the story out of the roughly planned path.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:11 AM

You can do so in your bio section :)
I recommend it actually. Dont mark yourself as part of any of the factions mentioned in the story, just show good or bad in your OC and whatever else that will not twist the story out of the roughly planned path.


Hmmm interesting im still not sure about adding my OC though

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:14 AM

You don't have to if you're not feeling sure, after all no-one is forcing you to join this story.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:30 AM

What vol said. This is - I hope - going to be a unique story, but I don't wish others to feel like they have to put in their OC.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:33 AM

I'm quite surprised at the number of OC characters you are hoping to get.

On other notes, I am working out the cover scene you asked.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:43 AM

I'm quite surprised at the number of OC characters you are hoping to get.

On other notes, I am working out the cover scene you asked.


hh thanks! I'll message you a few OCs to involve in it if that is ok, not everypony, unless you think you can do that.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:50 AM

hh thanks! I'll message you a few OCs to involve in it if that is ok, not everypony, unless you think you can do that.


If you can PM me the OCs to include, that'll be awesome. I don't feel like picking out OCs right now :P

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 01:54 AM

If you can PM me the OCs to include, that'll be awesome. I don't feel like picking out OCs right now :P


ok then, not a prob :D I'll collate some now.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 02:26 AM

Do you need any more proof-readers? If so, I would like to offer my grammar-nazi-ism to the cause should you require it.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:29 AM

This is the first draft of the cover art for Harmonosphere. I wanted to have the angle low because using a worm's-eye view gives the (nonexistent) characters more power and dominance. The selected OCs will be placed on top of that rock, looking forward. As for the background, I was thinking of having the Canterlot Palace protruding out of the mountains on the right of the canvas, or I could just leave it white for minimalism's sake. As for the text, I kind of went "creative" with it and figured that a runic font would fit best. Nothing is final as of now except for the rock (because it was hard to draw and I developed a connection with it along the way).

Tell me what you guys think. I'd like as much thoughts about this as possible because this is for everyone to enjoy OuO

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:35 AM

it needs a night sky. Like, turn the letters white and turn the sky black with one of the letters a moon.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:40 AM

it needs a night sky. Like, turn the letters white and turn the sky black with one of the letters a moon.


Good idea :D I'd have to see if Greeb wants it day or night, then I'd have to mess with the exposure settings to get a proper mid-night look.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:59 AM

This is the first draft of the cover art for Harmonosphere. I wanted to have the angle low because using a worm's-eye view gives the (nonexistent) characters more power and dominance. The selected OCs will be placed on top of that rock, looking forward. As for the background, I was thinking of having the Canterlot Palace protruding out of the mountains on the right of the canvas, or I could just leave it white for minimalism's sake. As for the text, I kind of went "creative" with it and figured that a runic font would fit best. Nothing is final as of now except for the rock (because it was hard to draw and I developed a connection with it along the way).

Tell me what you guys think. I'd like as much thoughts about this as possible because this is for everyone to enjoy OuO

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It looks like there should be something on top of the rock... a sword maybe?

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 05:02 AM

It looks like there should be something on top of the rock... a sword maybe?


The original plan was to have the OC characters standing there, but having a sword there might actually work better - more symbolic. Not a bad idea.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 06:25 AM

Oh hey, if you have any questions about how my OC would act in a situation (due to her dips into sociopathy and such) juuuuuust aaaaaaaaask!

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 08:18 AM

If you have a DA account and would prefer discussing there instead, here it is on DA


That is amazing! I must thank you again Tom for offering to help. I'm hyped now :D I will place what's been done so far upon the front of the thread for all to see.

Oh hey, if you have any questions about how my OC would act in a situation (due to her dips into sociopathy and such) juuuuuust aaaaaaaaask!


I'll keep that close in mind my good faffle :)

Good idea :D I'd have to see if Greeb wants it day or night, then I'd have to mess with the exposure settings to get a proper mid-night look.


I suppose night will work, though day or sunset will still look nice, do what your art mind thinks is best Tom :) And the sword... Up to you, sword or OCs :)

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 08:52 AM

Do you need any more proof-readers? If so, I would like to offer my grammar-nazi-ism to the cause should you require it.


I need another grammar Nazi my friend. You're hired! That is, if you wish to help :)

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 03:52 PM

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:22 PM

I need another grammar Nazi my friend. You're hired! That is, if you wish to help :)


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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:40 PM

So your OC can be OP because it is a bad character.


._. Try not to get him killed TOO early in the story. Or convert him over to the good side.

Having a universal OC, I have to run his bio through some RP's just to see if they fit, and I can't do that if he dies too early. :/

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:49 PM

Wen is neu chpter?

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 04:52 PM

Wen is neu chpter?

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 05:31 PM

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:26 PM

Don't make me slap you, perfection can't be rushed.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:26 PM

O_O you guys...

Are awesome! I'll be uploading a new chapter soon. I hope :)

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:47 PM

Make my villian bring fear to everyone, make him deadly, make him steal their magic and never let them rest well.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 07:48 PM

Well my OC is screwed against this guy, without magic he can't do anything.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 08:04 PM

That's the joy of it. The bad guys will have their ways of doing things: dark magic, control over armies of another world, binding innocents to do their will. The good guys do things the less easy but lighter way.

Dark is always hoarding of evil power
Light is always prevailing against the Dark.
Or so we all think.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 08:14 PM

While that's true its still annoying knowing that my character has the ability to stay alive for over 2000 years, is a master at arcane warfare and the last paladin of an ancient empire, only to have some villain come over and basically kill him with the single touch of a hoof(regardless of how many times said villain can use power).

It's like watching a knight train for a lifetime and be an absolute master at swordsmanship, only to be taken down by a lowly peasant who only trained for 3 weeks with a crossbow.

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Posted 24 November 2012 - 08:27 PM

I should have explained better my OC special talent. He is only able to take someones magic after the target has been weakened in a battle. Let's say by "showing mercy" he won't kill an unicorn. Just take his magic. But if they meet again, he is ever ready to kill.

Mind if i put some other magics on my OC. I won't make him OP. Just make his way of killing and combat a bit interesting.

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