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#1 "princess_luna"

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Posted 17 December 2012 - 04:51 AM

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#2 Philly

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Posted 18 December 2012 - 06:35 AM

We are going to give you a chance to improve your house; it's a great start, but it could use a bit more to make it great!
For starters, your roof is way to thick. 3 blocks is thick for a roof! Most people make theirs 1 or 2 blocks thick.
Next, you used a lot more wood than sand. Remember that Ponyville houses are tan with brown accents, not the other way around. Try to cut back on the wood and use more sand.
The inside of your house was very cramped and somewhat under decorated. The kitchen for example was very bare minimum. Try to add more stuff as though it were a real kitchen such as counters and cabinets. The upstairs had two extremely cramped bedrooms. We'd rather see one really nicely done bedroom than two bare minimum ones, so maybe you could combine the two into one and show us some more creative furniture.
Please look at /warp ponyville if you need more ideas for your house, and /warp ikea for furniture suggestions!

#3 "princess_luna"

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Posted 19 December 2012 - 11:45 PM

We are going to give you a chance to improve your house; it's a great start, but it could use a bit more to make it great!
For starters, your roof is way to thick. 3 blocks is thick for a roof! Most people make theirs 1 or 2 blocks thick.
Next, you used a lot more wood than sand. Remember that Ponyville houses are tan with brown accents, not the other way around. Try to cut back on the wood and use more sand.
The inside of your house was very cramped and somewhat under decorated. The kitchen for example was very bare minimum. Try to add more stuff as though it were a real kitchen such as counters and cabinets. The upstairs had two extremely cramped bedrooms. We'd rather see one really nicely done bedroom than two bare minimum ones, so maybe you could combine the two into one and show us some more creative furniture.
Please look at /warp ponyville if you need more ideas for your house, and /warp ikea for furniture suggestions!

ive added new stuff to the house but there isnt much i can do for space anywho theres still a child area for the bedroom thought that was nice so i kept it
i fixed up the stairs so theyre not takin up too much room i fixed the roof added cabnets and a desk and stuff so ya check out the house when youre ready i hope im good enough to pass ty and have a nice day

#4 Hazzat

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Posted 23 December 2012 - 09:44 PM

Rejected (although it was very close).
  • The house is still pretty cramped.
  • The furnishings (like the kitchen) are still pretty simple.
  • The bedroom is lacking, it feels like a waste of space having two beds in one room like that. You could have used the space to make an extra room.
Keep practising, you were really close. Best of luck for next time.


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