Is that better?
#1
Posted 31 March 2012 - 05:18 AM
Is that more to an admin's liking?
#2
Posted 31 March 2012 - 09:26 PM
#3
Posted 31 March 2012 - 11:26 PM
Ok I will!We're going to let you improve this house. The entrance hallway needs some furnishings, and the kitchen and bathroom could be a bit nicer. The attic is currently wasted space- it's just bookshelves. You could turn that room into something useful. Also add some lighting inside. Please make the recommended changes and post here when you are done.
I promise!
#4
Posted 06 April 2012 - 09:49 AM
#5
Posted 07 April 2012 - 04:30 PM
Yes but unfortunately Ill need more time on the house...sorry.Sorry does this mean you are ready for a second review of the house?
my mother took me to rehoboth beach for spring break and the house we're staying in has no internet connection at the time so I cannot login to the brohoof server at this time. I will be coming back home on sunday so I would like to please ask for an extention on my deadline for the house.
Thanks for the consideration!
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#6
Posted 08 April 2012 - 05:30 PM
#7
Posted 08 April 2012 - 11:09 PM
#8
Posted 14 April 2012 - 01:37 AM
#9
Posted 14 April 2012 - 02:58 AM
Firstly, it seems that you had overhanging roofs at one point, but then you decided to remove them, so now it looks a bit wierd. The outside could also have used more wooden supports.
The foyer could have used a little more furniture/decoration, maybe a rug or closet. The kitchen seems like you took one of every block generally found in a kitchen and just placed them together without too much thinking about it. Would have also liked to see a better/more defined living room area.
For the second floor, it would have been nice if you had separated the stairwell from the bedroom with a wall, and perhaps furnished the bedroom more, it is very bare. Same with the third floor.
Edited by iffie668, 14 April 2012 - 02:59 AM.
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