This story has been renewed as:
Harmonosphere
http://mlpf.im/harmonosphere
Edited by greebster, 19 November 2012 - 09:00 PM.
Posted 16 October 2012 - 11:50 AM
This story has been renewed as:
Harmonosphere
http://mlpf.im/harmonosphere
Edited by greebster, 19 November 2012 - 09:00 PM.
Posted 16 October 2012 - 07:06 PM
Posted 16 October 2012 - 08:46 PM
Posted 16 October 2012 - 10:57 PM
Edited by Volvonski, 16 October 2012 - 11:08 PM.
Posted 17 October 2012 - 06:08 AM
( in other words the descriptive text was of professional quality and succeeded in enticing the imagination to provide images of what that scene would look like, something only really good books can do).
I swear though if you mess my character up i'll come to your house and murder your socks!.
Edited by greebster, 17 October 2012 - 06:09 AM.
Posted 17 October 2012 - 06:43 AM
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Posted 17 October 2012 - 09:26 AM
Are you just putting Admins into the Fic or will you be putting in some builders too?
Great job on the fic!
Edited by greebster, 17 October 2012 - 09:27 AM.
Posted 17 October 2012 - 11:28 AM
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Edited by greebster, 17 October 2012 - 11:48 AM.
Posted 17 October 2012 - 12:35 PM
Posted 17 October 2012 - 01:25 PM
This is great.
Posted 17 October 2012 - 03:01 PM
Edited by Volvonski, 17 October 2012 - 05:58 PM.
Posted 18 October 2012 - 07:59 AM
Just realised that the use of chronicles is used wrong here, chronicles being a detailed account of historical and factual events in a chronological order which this story is not.
So instead i've made the logo as the brohoof saga,a saga being a long involved/detailed story or tale about heroic achievements(which is what our main hero fleetfire is doing, based on the short description greebster gave me).
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Posted 19 October 2012 - 07:11 AM
IT's possible that it was rejected because it is related to our server instead of just being regular OCs
Yes but then again there are those people from EQD which are just generally depressing and can't see a good fic if Lauren Faust admitted it was good, they don't realise they missed a big opportunity here and it'll be great to see their reaction when this fic becomes huge which I'm sure it will be!
Edited by greebster, 19 October 2012 - 07:13 AM.
Posted 19 October 2012 - 08:48 AM
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Posted 19 October 2012 - 01:36 PM
I hope you added that none of the characters are based on people from here, that may have been why they rejected it in the first place.
Posted 19 October 2012 - 01:51 PM
That might do it, just as long as they don't know who Kilorat is, or what brohoof.com is.I said that the characters are inspired by friend's OCs
Posted 20 October 2012 - 12:20 AM
That might do it, just as long as they don't know who Kilorat is, or what brohoof.com is.
Posted 20 October 2012 - 01:29 AM
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Posted 20 October 2012 - 04:16 PM
I always had little respect for EQD. There was a time when I was sending pictures to them in hopes of being posted, but each one got rejected without an explanation as to WHY. Now, most of the art on EQD is incredibly good (Beyond my skill level) but then there are the few that...... aren't. So yeah the point is, I don't submit my anything to EQD. Or that entire post looks like rambling. Oh well.
Edited by greebster, 20 October 2012 - 04:19 PM.
Posted 20 October 2012 - 04:26 PM
Posted 20 October 2012 - 04:34 PM
Awwww thanks
Posted 20 October 2012 - 04:40 PM
lol xDI just had a reply from Fimfiction. I failed...
But only because I forgot to publish the first chapter LOL! I resubmitted it though, so all's well! Look out for it on the newest stories list
Posted 20 October 2012 - 04:47 PM
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Posted 20 October 2012 - 07:13 PM
Ok this just pisses me off, they won't allow a great story like this but they will allow crap like this?: http://www.equestria...demon-king.html
Ok EQD that's the last straw, if i ever finally make Naponyonic Warfare i am not submitting it there, hell if i ever make anything pony related i'm not submitting it, simply because EQD doesn't deserve to have my work grace its pages.
Posted 20 October 2012 - 07:20 PM
Posted 20 October 2012 - 07:22 PM
That's more like it, they really should pay more attention to what is being submitted and not simply reject because of a misunderstanding.
Posted 20 October 2012 - 07:26 PM
Posted 20 October 2012 - 08:09 PM
That shouldn't be a problem for such a talented writer such as yourself, i'm sure you'll have it all fixed post haste!.
Posted 20 October 2012 - 08:19 PM
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Posted 20 October 2012 - 08:57 PM
am I in it?
can i be a princess?
hazzah!
Now I'm even more excited for part 2! I very rarely like fanfics (Bland nouns, adjectives, verbs, dumb story) But I can't stop rereading this.
So good.
Edited by greebster, 20 October 2012 - 08:58 PM.
Posted 20 October 2012 - 08:57 PM
erm no lol, go ahead and read it if you wish
Posted 20 October 2012 - 09:01 PM
Posted 20 October 2012 - 09:21 PM
I recognise talent when i see it, and when i see it i'll do anything in my power to see that talent flourish, even if its the most simplest of things like logos, advice, names etc.
As others have said i look forward to the next part, just make sure you proof read it before submitting it anywhere this time.
Posted 21 October 2012 - 08:25 PM
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Posted 24 October 2012 - 06:30 AM
Now I know what it feels like to wait for a fanfiction!
Now I feel bad and will update my comic soon.
Edited by greebster, 24 October 2012 - 06:31 AM.
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Edited by greebster, 28 October 2012 - 02:13 AM.
Posted 30 October 2012 - 11:55 AM
‘Nova Vokunah. He’s a renowned demon-hunter. He’s the brains on beasties and other critters you wouldn’t want to meet when the sun’s down. Not that it’s stopped him.’ Nova, a sapphire-mane Unicorn with a grey coat flashed Fleet an electric grin. He had as equally disturbing a love for lighting as Flaming had for fire...
Edited by Nova_StarHunter, 30 October 2012 - 12:00 PM.
Posted 30 October 2012 - 08:36 PM
I find this... electrifying.
10.
20. Go To 10, Stop At Line End
Edited by greebster, 30 October 2012 - 08:36 PM.
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Edited by Golfmann14, 03 November 2012 - 03:21 AM.
Posted 03 November 2012 - 03:32 AM
I agree with volvonski. Also, very clever names you came up with! I would be willing to try and help with grammar screening if need be.
Posted 03 November 2012 - 03:35 AM
Aw!I suppose I have a lot to thank you guys for, what with the server issues and challenges of personal strength (meaning that I felt down on the fact I didn't do as good as EQD wanted), I suppose with all the support you have all helped me become stronger in this skill and stronger in friendships. I no longer feel weakened by the fact that my work wasn't perfect, I'm happy now, knowing this will help me in my ambitions to be better at what I do.
Edited by Golfmann14, 03 November 2012 - 03:36 AM.
Posted 03 November 2012 - 03:39 AM
Posted 03 November 2012 - 03:46 AM
Hahaha! I got all mad because I thought I knew all my Elder Scrolls. I think we both needed a little time to mature a tad.Golfmann, you're the best
I will remember you for sure, the guy who told me to shut up that time on the Pony Scrolls thread, how things have changed. I deserved to be told that, I was being a complete snob, please forgive me for that past messup.
Thanks for your support and for the advice, I can tell for sure you know your fiction omnibus.
Edited by Golfmann14, 03 November 2012 - 04:19 AM.
Posted 03 November 2012 - 10:15 AM
By the way, how long did EqD take to respond to your fic?
Posted 03 November 2012 - 02:13 PM
Posted 03 November 2012 - 02:55 PM
Didn't they have a problem with any reference to Brohoof? From greeb's explanation it seems they want zero reference to that sort of thing...I've just realised that because the group is being changed the title of the story won't make sense, unless the battlecry of the order would be "Ordinis ungulam adunare, pro Brohoof!" (Order of the Hoof unite, for brohoof!).
Of course for that battlecry to work you would have to make up another character named "Brohoof", he could be the original grandmaster of the order who during an epic battle was injured and put in stasis for 1000 years. He would then appear later on as the order starts to break(for whatever reason, i'll leave that to you) and rally them against the enemy in one final battle(lord of the rings style).
Posted 03 November 2012 - 03:38 PM
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Posted 03 November 2012 - 05:39 PM
I've already provided another name for them(previous page).Then what of the Antibrony?
Posted 03 November 2012 - 07:17 PM
Edited by greebster, 03 November 2012 - 07:21 PM.
Posted 03 November 2012 - 07:48 PM
Posted 03 November 2012 - 07:59 PM
King Somber ROFL! xDIf you guys have names or ideas related to the main villain, please feel free to share, just keep it related it to Canon Equestria and MLP only, no Brony stuff included.
Posted 03 November 2012 - 09:05 PM
I've already provided another name for them(previous page).
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Posted 09 November 2012 - 12:56 PM
I must admit I have been rather inactive of late, but my mind is well set on the task as of today. I promise to give you your new chapter very soon
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