I need a critique on my practice build. /warp Mjay1 if anyone has the time, please? Thank you! Please tell me your full opinion! :3
I need a critique, please.
#1
Posted 17 September 2013 - 08:47 PM
#2
Posted 17 September 2013 - 10:51 PM
The interior of your building is very well done. The only thing that really bothers me is that the stairs are a bit awkward. Other than that, just have a look around and see if you can add any more small details. I have a few more concerns with the exterior though. First of all, the awning over the door makes a really low entrance. Either get rid of it, or move it up. Second, keep your overhangs to 2 blocks or less and try adding some support to them. Third, the log pattern you've used a bit odd. Log patterns usually create lines rather than shapes.
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Edited by Electifried, 17 September 2013 - 10:51 PM.
#3
Posted 18 September 2013 - 12:20 AM
It feels a bit too empty. You've used your available space conservatively, but you only have a kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, and living room. You've got the right idea, just try adding a little bit more. The maximum block height is 30 + 3 for a weathervane, if I remember correctly. Your house is only 17 high, and that's not necessarily bad, but it means you have a lot of extra wiggle room to make the house feel complete.
Also, I agree with Diamond Lover about the stairs. It's generally a good idea to keep stairs at least two blocks wide. I found myself falling off the side a couple times trying to get up.
#4
Posted 08 October 2013 - 02:06 PM
you need a sharper roof
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