/warp s66
My house is complete
Started by CaptianBlueberry, Jan 20 2016 10:30 PM
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Posted 20 January 2016 - 10:30 PM
#2
Posted 23 January 2016 - 01:30 AM
Sorry, but are rejecting your house.
The shape of your house could be better. There are walls that are flat for three stories. Some parts of the house are too wide in one area, and too thin in another. It feels out of proportion. The balcony also looks bad, it's too big, and isn't well supported. The entrance doesn't seem very ponyville like as well. You used only one type of flower for use in pots when there are plenty to choose from.
There is a large window in your attic. Use a different material, such as wood, for the interior walls.. The bedroom is very sparse in terms of furniture.
Visit /w ponyville for example houses.
The shape of your house could be better. There are walls that are flat for three stories. Some parts of the house are too wide in one area, and too thin in another. It feels out of proportion. The balcony also looks bad, it's too big, and isn't well supported. The entrance doesn't seem very ponyville like as well. You used only one type of flower for use in pots when there are plenty to choose from.
There is a large window in your attic. Use a different material, such as wood, for the interior walls.. The bedroom is very sparse in terms of furniture.
Visit /w ponyville for example houses.
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