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#1 thecat9999

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 10:27 PM

Name: Firework Crackle
Gender: Female/Mare
Race: Pegasus 
Age: 16
Appearance: Orange with a bright red mane and tail. *She has Fluttershys mane and Rainbow Dash's tail.* Heres a picture of her -----> http://imgur.com/HiSxNh5
Cutie Mark and Special Talent: Her special talent is making fireworks. Cutie mark ----> http://imgur.com/R8lRYmg
Personality: Caring and kind but can be a bit show-offish at times. 
Biography: As a filly Firework Crackle searched constantly for her talent, Baking,Skating,Building, you name it shes tryed it and whenever she did she always failed at it..... She was constantly picked on at school feeling like a outcast she became very shy. Until one day her mother Dawn Shimmer took her out to a firework show. The fireworks were beautiful they came in all shapes sizes and colors Firework Crackle was amazed at them and took a class in firework making. Her first firework was not the best but she did not give up and kept trying. When she finally finished her firework she invited some of her friends over to see. As she set off the first firework her friends clapped and cheered for her, She felt so inspired she decided to make more and more. As her skill in fireworks grew so did her self esteem, Then one day she got a letter from the headmaster of a elite firework school asking her if she would like to join them. Firework Crackle happily agreed and begun her studys at the school, Eventually she became so great that that the Wonderbolts asked her to preform at their next concert! Ever since then she has been traveling equestria preforming. 
Other: Firework Crackle has created a signature firework called the "Sonic Rainboom" A huge bold rainbow firework.



#2 Seabreeze

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 03:49 AM

It's a good start but it needs much more. Naming a firework "Sonic Rainboom" is lame and unoriginal, as is building her design off of parts of canon ponies.




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