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Seeking Critiques at S2, Aoloebio's CMC Test


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#1 Aoloebio

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Posted 04 May 2013 - 06:35 PM

Heyas everypony,

I have put in a significant deal of effort into my submissions house and am seeking some critiques for areas I can improve on to make the house even better. If you would be so kind as to go visit my house at /w s2 and leave a review here, I would be very appreciative.

 

Thanks in advance,

~Aoloebio


Edited by Aoloebio, 04 May 2013 - 06:36 PM.


#2 Lieutenant Delta

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Posted 05 May 2013 - 06:58 PM

I actually like this house but of coarse a couple of things:

 

1. Get rid of the ice window in the bathroom

 

2. Work with the glowstone lighting, it's too low

 

3. Remove whatever the black wool thing is on the second floors deck

 

4. Remove the red and white wool thing on the roof, maybe add something else there

 

5. Work around a bit with clutter



#3 Matt

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 05:11 PM

Overall its a pretty nice house, nice shape, gabled roofs, made using sensible building materials (although I am not that sure on the ice window).

Inside, I really like the kitchen however, it does feel a tad dark and, the lighting glitches caused by minecrafts rather interesting lighting engine hardly help with that. It is why I personally, rarely use half slabs on the ceiling as it can stand out.

Upstairs, the blue wool does look a bit strange from the staircase, the block does look a bit out of place but apart from that the interior decor is nice and it does feel like a house with distinct rooms.


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