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#1 danypony

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Posted 10 April 2015 - 07:09 PM

Hi, i am taking my first attempt at the CMC test, but i am sure i will fail cause i am not an AMAZING builder, i am just above average, also the plot i chose was too small to add too much detail, whoops :twilightsheepish: i am continously improving it  over the 7 days time span tough. my plot number is S64, even if you have to tell me "Yeah... that is never gonna pass" any critique is accepted, just tell me what is wrong and how can i improve. Thanks in advance, danypony

 



#2 Wolf I.E.

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Posted 10 April 2015 - 07:51 PM

First off, your house is too boxy! There's no arches, or anything to signify that it's unique. Make sure that there is something about your house that separates it from the rest, interior or exterior. I highly recommend you spend more time practicing with shaping houses. Second off, your roof should be A-Shaped. Do /w ponyville for examples of 'A-Shaped' roofing. And some of the roofing dips down in the front of the doorway, which looks a bit off.




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