Can some admins come to check it out?
/warp s65
Posted 25 January 2016 - 08:52 PM
Can some admins come to check it out?
/warp s65
Posted 29 January 2016 - 04:08 AM
Hi,
sorry, but we're rejecting this house. You have a lot to learn about building Ponyville houses, but don't let that put you off. You still have three more attempts.
Here are some of the things we felt could be improved:
-Your house's shape was a little crazy. A super-tall house like this with a very small base wouldn't really fit in in Ponyville.
-Your furniture choice was incredibly basic. There are many new blocks nowadays that you can use to make your furniture look more detailed. Most of your rooms also felt quite empty.
-You used very few different types of wood for your interior. It would've been nice to at least see the floor in one colour wood, and the stairs in another.
-Your house had very few light sources in it, leaving the interior very dark, especially in the middle rooms.
-Your bathtub was the size of a small swimming pool.
In general, you need to try harder to make a house that you feel you could live in yourself. You need all the basic amenities and creature comforts a pony resident would need. Anyway, good luck next time, and remember to practice and go look at /warp ponyville for examples beforehand.
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