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#1 Princess Goldheart

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 01:56 AM

Name: Goldheart Metali (A.K.A. Gold)

 

Race:  Unicorn

 

Cutie Mark/ Special Talent: Flame with a yellow heart in it. Geologey and Archeologey

      

Appearence: Pale Yellow Coat, Golden Mane, Medium Brown Eyes

 

Personality:  Kind, Loving, Firm, Hardy, Adventureous

 

Age: 21

 

Bio: Goldheart is a kindhearted mare, though she can be very demanding at times.

 

 

       Gold was born in a small village near Cloudsdale to Silversoul and Titaniumwind Metali. At a very young age, she became interested in geology and archeology. When she was seven, her mother taught Gold and her sister magic that could aid them while searching for fossils. Only two years after that, she discovered a large gold deposit, and earned her  cutie mark! Sadly, her mother died when she was 13. The same thing happened with her father a few years later.

 

        Since then, she's been searching for more fossils and a gold deposit as large as the one

she found when she earned her cutie mark. One of the many fossils she has found was a

creature called "Archeops", a large dino that roamed the land far before. Not only that,

but she's found small gold deposits at least once a year. She won't give up until she finds

the large one she's searching for!

 

         Goldheart has also recently gotten into adventuring and exploring. Although she

hasn't found the big one, Gold will keep searching and exploring untill she finds it!

 

 



#2 Seabreeze

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 04:01 PM

I'll give you a chance to improve this, just a little more detail is all. Also, don't bold everything.




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