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#1 Nelson Denure

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Posted 21 December 2015 - 02:11 AM

Plot s72

 

 

 

Ready for the admins. :mrgreen:


Edited by Alybun, 22 December 2015 - 10:07 PM.


#2 Shroom Agent

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Posted 23 December 2015 - 12:33 AM

We're going to give an improve on this house.

Please make the following changes and reply to this thread when you have made them.
  • Redesign the TV, there are too many paintings on it. Either fix the TV, or replace it with something else.
  • Remove the 3x2 windows on the second floor. Try using smaller windows instead.
  • Do something about the high ceiling on the second floor. Consider adding an attic.
You have a week to make these changes.

Edited by Shroom Agent, 23 December 2015 - 12:40 AM.
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#3 Nelson Denure

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Posted 24 December 2015 - 02:33 AM

Done! Want a look? Plot s72



#4 Nelson Denure

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Posted 24 December 2015 - 09:26 PM

plot s72



#5 Shroom Agent

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Posted 24 December 2015 - 09:54 PM

One topic, please.

#6 Shroom Agent

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Posted 26 December 2015 - 02:22 AM

Sorry, but we are rejecting this house. While you did meet two of the improve requirements, we still feel this house is not up to standard.

- There is still a 3x2 window in the bathroom.
- The windows that are attached directly to the floor look bad. Make windows that have a block of space between the floor and the start of the window.
- The shape of your house is basic as well, the back wall of the house is complelty flat.
- The walls lack detail, for example you used only two types of flowers.


Visit /w ponyville for example houses. Good luck on future attempts.


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