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#1 Xylax

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Posted 13 January 2013 - 05:38 PM

Plot S35 please tell me what is good and what i could do better.

 

 

Edit: I just submitted it but still please do give it critique while the admins review it.


Edited by Xylax, 13 January 2013 - 08:15 PM.


#2 greebster

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Posted 13 January 2013 - 11:08 PM

While most of the exterior looks OK, the windows appear to be of various sizes and shapes. There's no continuity there, also they are placed awkwardly because of the frame.

 

The ground floor has some good furniture, but it prominently appears to be made of wood. I would recommend some experimentation, or even check out /warp ikea for ideas. The first floor has an elevated part with some furniture on it. There's a lot of wooden furniture here too, and it all just seems to be seating. Maybe there could be some form of entertainment or storage in the house. And does the floor need to be so elevated? The loft room is sparsely furnished, a desk in the corner and a bed. More decor maybe.

 

Maybe you could think up some ideas for filling in the gaps, even if it is just a small accent to give the place a nice look. Also, maybe consider separating the floors into different rooms. I also recommend maybe moving your bathroom somewhere else and making your kitchen bigger. Just an option.




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