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#301 Aurora

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Posted 01 July 2014 - 09:41 PM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 17 September 2014 - 01:03 AM.


#302 Logyboy77

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Posted 01 July 2014 - 09:43 PM

Oc name: Sarge
Gender: Stallion
Race of pony: Pegasus
Age:22
Description: A green pony with a black mane and tail and brown eyes.
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: His cutie mark is the seargents stripes he got in the Wonderbolts symbolizing leadership.
Short bio: Sarge is a pegasus originally from Cloudsdale but moved to Ponyville in search of new things to do and new friends to meet.
Power that you are going to discover: He can turn invisible at will.
Personality: Brave, Courageous, Kind



#303 roserocks01

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Posted 02 July 2014 - 06:50 AM

Oc name: Sarge
Gender: Stallion
Race of pony: Pegasus
Age:22
Description: A green pony with a black mane and tail and brown eyes.
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: His cutie mark is the seargents stripes he got in the Wonderbolts symbolizing leadership.
Short bio: Sarge is a pegasus originally from Cloudsdale but moved to Ponyville in search of new things to do and new friends to meet.
Power that you are going to discover: He can turn invisible at will.
Personality: Brave, Courageous, Kind

Could the bio be a bit more detailed?

And Aurora, that does sound odd in an rp. If the potion could be made in a day, that's fine!

Edited by roserocks01, 02 July 2014 - 06:52 AM.


#304 Aurora

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Posted 02 July 2014 - 06:57 AM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 17 September 2014 - 01:20 AM.


#305 roserocks01

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Posted 02 July 2014 - 02:57 PM

1?

#306 Aurora

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Posted 02 July 2014 - 03:42 PM

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Edited by Aurora, 17 September 2014 - 01:20 AM.


#307 Technical Mercy

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Posted 02 July 2014 - 08:54 PM

I don't know, it depends on how often/easy it is to find the ingredients, it could take me a day to make one, or a day to make 10

 

EDIT: I would rather have magical capabilities than being good at potion brewing

 

EDIT: Could I just be a lion, period? No wings/horn, just a slashing spell and Psychokinesis

 

EDIT: ^^^ I just realized how weird that would be in the RP

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Edited by Dominic, 15 July 2014 - 06:53 PM.


#308 xXUnoriginalNameXx

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Posted 28 July 2014 - 06:17 AM

OC name: J. Paul McColtney
Gender: Male
Race of pony: Pegasus
Age: 17
Description: Cobalt Blue body, with mostly round dark brown hair, and the same colour eyes. He also wears clothes/stands on back legs when allowed. [ First Left from Middle: http://i1.wp.com/www...a/690409_01.jpg ]
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: A guitar with wings [ This means he is good at the guitar, and is also about the band Wings. ]
Shortish bio: Born in 1942 to James and Mary McCartney, Paul had been cloned an hour after his birth, with the newborn clone being taken to Somewhere in Equestria. There, he was found by a couple by the names of Night Light and Twilight Velvet, and taken in. Then, in 1957, he met John Lennon. They're now in a band called the Quarrycolts.
Power that you are going to discover: Eeeemergency Temporal Shiiiift?
Personality: Pessimistic, Shy (though not nearly Fluttershy level), Internal Conflict prone, Relies on reasoning, Forgetful.



#309 roserocks01

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Posted 28 July 2014 - 07:28 AM

OC name: J. Paul McColtney
Gender: Male
Race of pony: Pegasus
Age: 17
Description: Cobalt Blue body, with mostly round dark brown hair, and the same colour eyes. He also wears clothes/stands on back legs when allowed. [ First Left from Middle: http://i1.wp.com/www...a/690409_01.jpg ]
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: A guitar with wings [ This means he is good at the guitar, and is also about the band Wings. ]
Shortish bio: Born in 1942 to James and Mary McCartney, Paul had been cloned an hour after his birth, with the newborn clone being taken to Somewhere in Equestria. There, he was found by a couple by the names of Night Light and Twilight Velvet, and taken in. Then, in 1957, he met John Lennon. They're now in a band called the Quarrycolts.
Power that you are going to discover: Eeeemergency Temporal Shiiiift?
Personality: Pessimistic, Shy (though not nearly Fluttershy level), Internal Conflict prone, Relies on reasoning, Forgetful.

Accepted!

#310 Crystal Vision

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Posted 28 July 2014 - 08:18 AM

Oh why not, I won't rp too often but I guess it'll be fun! ^^

 

OC Name: Moon Chaser

Gender: Mare

Race of pony: Pegasus

Age: 18

Description: Purple pegasus with a magenta and light pink mane and tail, yellow/golden eyes.

Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: Cutie mark is a golden crescent moon with a little star, when she was a filly she met Princess Luna, during her brief chat a villain attacked, MoonChaser leaped in to the battle to save her beloved princess. Cutie Mark represent her love for the night and bravery.

Bio: She was born in 1996 in Cloudsdale, earned her cutie mark when she was a filly, she met Princess Luna in Canterlot, during their brief chat, a villain attacked, MoonChaser leaped in to the battle to save her beloved princess from harm. Eventually moved to Ponyville...

Power that she is going to discover: Size Manipulation (grow when angry, shrink when scared or nervous, eventually she can change size at will rather than her emotions)

Personality: When it comes to defending her friends and family she is brave, but can be a little shy when first meeting people.



#311 roserocks01

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Posted 29 July 2014 - 11:42 AM

Accepted!

#312 JenaTheAngelicDemon

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Posted 29 July 2014 - 11:21 PM

OC Name: Jena Starbloom

Gender: Female

Age: 24

Race: Pegasus

Description: Light pink pony with a light scar across her right side, Jena has a chocolate colored mane with a streak of a lighter brown, she has a left mechanical/prosthetic limb. She has blue-grey eyes that always look like she's troubled when she isn't. She doesn't like to use her wings much, so she isn't a very good flyer.

Cutie mark and talent/meaning: One teal 5 pointed star and a 4 pointed red star; She is a very skilled acrobatic, especially at night. She likes try and "touch the stars". 

Bio: She was born in 1990 in Manehatten. She spent most of her life there until her father, uncle, aunt and cousin decided to move to Cloudsdale, when she was 18, her and her cousin started to adventure together, when she was 23, she had an incident and had to have her left foreleg removed... She eventually moves to Ponyville.

Powers she will discover: She can predict the future, only within the next 30 minutes

Personality: She can be a bit harsh and quiet, but once you know her, she can be really nice

 

I hope it isn't OP or anything xP this is basically my first rp aswell.



#313 roserocks01

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Posted 30 July 2014 - 08:45 AM

Accepted! It's not really op!

#314 Discord_Modd

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Posted 01 August 2014 - 01:01 PM

yay! more ponies to RP with! :D Welcome!

#315 Keldeo

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Posted 10 August 2014 - 01:48 AM

Ah man.. I'm so excited for this!  So this one is quite unusual, but hey, this is an RP about unusual ponies!  So I'm going to go with my favorite character.  Not exactly a my little pony, but close enough. :/

This character is Keldeo.  (yes, that one pony-like guy from pokemon. :P )  I'm using him because I can write him well, since I have a pretty good understanding of the character.  I hope it fits in this RP, though I could see it somewhat fitting.

 

 I should mention that Keldeo will follow his self-motives, so be sure to check out his backstory.  (this doesn't mean that he will ignore the other ponies' struggles, obviously.  And I don't think he'd mind letting other ponies help him out!)

 

 

Name: Keldeo (Has the cover name: Rapid River, rapid for short.)

Gender: Male

Race of pony: Unicorn.  (He is limited in knowledge of magic, however.)

Age: 18

Description:

 

Is cream/pale white in color, has very large and bushy red mane, a light-blue and furry tail, has a long furry collar with the same light blue color as his tail, The tips of his hooves are dark-blue and on the bottom are holes.  He has two dark-blue, backwards-facing, wreath-like ‘horns’.

 

You can use my avatar for reference! :P  Here are full body pictures of him.  Here's his normal form, and here's his resolute form.

Cutie Mark and meaning/talent:

 

 Keldeo, unfortunately has no cutie mark.  As a result, he has a very mysterious reputation among ponies.  The reason behind his lack of one is because he does not hail from Equestria, and has not been around long enough to obtain one.  However, it does not mean that he cannot obtain one.

Short bio:

 

  Keldeo does not come from Equestria.  In an attempt to find portals to different world, Keldeo's world was discovered by portal pony researchers at Canterlot.  The portal found a place near Keldeo, and the magic being emitted from Equestria attracted him due to his similarity in form to that of a unicorn.  He was able to travel freely between his world and Equestria, but due to a certain incident involving the travel of a pony to Keldeo's world, the connection established between the two worlds was lost, leaving Keldeo trapped in Equestria.  As of now, he is trying to find a way to help the portal ponies reestablish connection by searching for any materials or other specific elements needed for travel between worlds.  Also, Keldeo has taken up a bit of an interest to Equestria, and, having gotten over the initial shock of discovering a world full of talking ponies, has begun to tour and learn more about Equestria.
  Keldeo is not known very well in Equestria, and his mysteriousness often gets the better of his reputation, but he is on good terms with the princesses in Canterlot, even though he never spoke with one of them himself.
  Keldeo's life back in his world was interesting.  When he was very young, he was left an orphan due to a fire in his home area.  When addressed of this, he tends to become angry and reject the asker.  He is part of a very small group called the "Swords of Justice," where the root of his justice-upholding personality comes from.  This group treats him like family and raised him up after he was left without parents by the fire.  The main reason why Keldeo hopes to return to his world is so that he can rejoin his family.

 

Power:

-    Has the ability to fire water from his hooves.  Using this, he can hover a small distance from the ground, though it is much more easily used to traverse liquid surfaces.

-    His main special power is his ability to ‘change form’, where his backwards-facing horns fold up to form a larger, and more jagged central horn. His hair tends to drop down over his eyes a bit when he undergoes this form. (It’s a very slight change, not too much else to see.)  He calls it ‘resolute.’

-    The change in form usually requires a trigger of sorts.  This trigger mostly happens when Keldeo is threatened, angry, or incited by some kind of challenge.  The form change increases his determination and tends to make him a bit more athletic.  Once the threat or incident is over, Keldeo will change back into ‘normal’ form.


Personality:

  Positives:  Keldeo is determined and loyal.  Most times, he is solitary, but under some circumstances, he will stay near ponies, if he knows, trusts them, or is bored.  He will quiet often stand up for friends in need, sometimes going a bit overboard in defense of them.  He will oppose wrongdoers outright, often confronting them directly.  He’s a bit prideful at times, but does his best not to show, even though other ponies can see it.  He's humorous and kind towards his friends.
  Physical Strength:  He knows how to fight, and will use his horn like a sword, much to the amusement of other ponies.  He will only fight, however when he is challenged outright.  He does not fight, because of anger or other small things.  He is very good at physical fighting and sparring, but cannot always hold his own.  Usually, his resolute form gives him a boost in strength when he is in a pinch.
  Knowledge and Magic:  He has no clue how to use magic, and is extremely bad at it, most times he gets himself hurt when trying.  He understands the basics of Equestria, and can understand science and other technical things to a decent degree.  But might end up being confused, most especially on the topic of magic.  Occasionally, he messes up on his grammar, saying "everybody" instead of "everypony," weirding other ponies out a bit.  If a pony mentions something about Equestria, he or she might have to explain it to Keldeo. (sometimes because I am not exactly completely knowledgeable on the topic myself!)
  Negatives:  He is very stubborn, sometimes causing him to get into bad situations.  He is a bit quick to jump to conclusions, and can definitely be considered reckless.  When in a situation that’s way over his head, he'll often get a bit scared or stressed.  Usually, it takes a bit of effort to earn his respect.  When faced with awkward situations, he'll often get the most laughed at.  He's also not very good at comforting others, or calming others down.  He’s got a bad reputation among ponies for being mysterious, strange, and unheard of.  There are often rumors that wherever he goes, trouble follows.

 

 

 

Aaand that's about it, all you need to know to begin with!  There's so much to read, I know! Sorry about that, I usually write in detail.  I spaced it out to make it easier to read!


Edited by F1r3w0rks, 10 August 2014 - 01:51 AM.


#316 roserocks01

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Posted 11 August 2014 - 05:01 PM

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Accepted! Just make sure you don't make him too op during the rp :)

#317 Keldeo

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Posted 11 August 2014 - 06:00 PM

Accepted! Just make sure you don't make him too op during the rp :)

Thanks!  And I never make any character OP, not my style. xD  Anyways, I'll need to catch up on the story and stuff, but I'll get to my first post as soon as I can!

 

*Edit*  Oh, wait... I think I'm getting a bit ahead of myself here.  Don't I need a few more people before I'm accepted?


Edited by F1r3w0rks, 11 August 2014 - 06:54 PM.


#318 roserocks01

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Posted 11 August 2014 - 08:51 PM

Nope! As the GM, I say you're in. It's if I'm not here that you need other people to say you're in :)

#319 Discord_Modd

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Posted 20 August 2014 - 01:00 PM

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hope he isn't gone too much longer... :(
Is there any way to continue my part of the RP with out him? just in case he doesn't get back for a while...

#320 roserocks01

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Posted 20 August 2014 - 09:50 PM

hope he isn't gone too much longer... :(
Is there any way to continue my part of the RP with out him? just in case he doesn't get back for a while...

I hope so too, something could happen where his character gets taken by something, like a Timber-Wolf then you can carry on?

#321 Discord_Modd

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Posted 26 August 2014 - 04:06 AM

I hope so too, something could happen where his character gets taken by something, like a Timber-Wolf then you can carry on?

:/ this might actually send Astro down a dark path.. being that he just made a new friend and his new greatest fear is losing that one friend he has...
that would make more sense for Gravitous to have more control, so I can use Astro's "Power" for the first time... though, I am not sure how bloom would be "taken" by a timberwolf... maybe we need a new villain, being that neither of them had seen the timberwolf yet... I could make it not a timberwolf...

#322 Guardian

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Posted 27 August 2014 - 12:43 PM

Sorry if I'm not that Online anymore. I have College... and it is a pain in the flank. Where is everyone now? I'd like to jump in again



#323 Keldeo

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Posted 27 August 2014 - 12:48 PM

Sorry if I'm not that Online anymore. I have College... and it is a pain in the flank. Where is everyone now? I'd like to jump in again

Phew!  There you are.  You should probably jump in and continue your RP with Astro, before you get carried off by a timberwolf or something.



#324 Discord_Modd

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Posted 27 August 2014 - 05:03 PM

Sorry if I'm not that Online anymore. I have College... and it is a pain in the flank. Where is everyone now? I'd like to jump in again

yay! your back! you and I are still in the everfree hearing sounds of something large approaching...

#325 Wolf I.E.

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Posted 06 September 2014 - 07:43 PM

eh might as well.

 

Oc name: Wolfstrike
Gender: Female
Race of pony: Earth Pony
Age: 22 (About the Mane6's age)
Description: Dark, black frizzled hair with dark yellow eyes and a dark grey pelt
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: Pawprint of a wolf, for rescuing as many wolves as she can
Short bio: Ah, yes, Apploosa.. The sweet air of fresh apples and freshly watered sprouts would always linger in the air, leading to a day as smooth as honey. However, little Wolfstrike didn't like bucking apples, growing them, or anything like that. No, instead, her interest went into wolves, although the only thing they really had was coyotes in Appleloosa. While other fillies got scared and ran from the wolves, Wolfstrike tried to befriend him. However, the wolves would never allow Wolfstrike to come near them. So, sadly, Wolfstrike was stuck with learning about wolves, each and every night wanted to become one. She wanted to live the life of a wolf.

 

 

Finally, on her fourteenth birthday, her parents decided to move to ponyville. There, she could study the life of both a wolf and a brand-new kind of wolf, a Timberwolf.

 

As days past, her intrest for wolves only became stronger. She was tired of waiting for a wolf. She had decided to go into Everfree and meet a wolf for the first time. As she got deeper and deeper in the thick shadows of Everfree. Lost, confused, and worried, Wolfstrike sat down, completely giving up. Then she heard a tiny whimper. The whimper escalated into a howl, then a yelp, then a bark for help. Wolfstrike dash towards the pained yips. There, before her eyes, she saw a beautiful, grey dog sitting before her eyes. But it was wounded and so weak. Doing the first thing that comes to mind, which was to mend to it's wounds, she worked quickly to help save the wolf's life. And right there, she got her cutie-mark. At that point she knew what to do. 

 

She had to save the wolves.

((Sorry for short bio, i'm stumped on ideas))

 

 

Power that you are going to discover: Can turn into a wolf at any times.
Personality: Kind and generous to animals, otherwise sometimes feisty and hard-headed. 


Edited by Timberwolfie, 15 September 2014 - 10:01 AM.


#326 roserocks01

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Posted 06 September 2014 - 11:06 PM

Accepted! Love the bio :)

#327 Discord_Modd

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Posted 07 September 2014 - 12:04 AM

eh might as well.
 
Oc name:
Gender: Female
Race of pony: Earth Pony
Age: 22 (About the Mane6's age)
Description: Dark, black frizzled hair with dark yellow eyes and a dark grey pelt
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: Pawprint of a wolf, for rescuing as many wolves as she can
Short bio: Ah, yes, Apploosa.. The sweet air of fresh apples and freshly watered sprouts would always linger in the air, leading to a day as smooth as honey. However, little Wolfstrike didn't like bucking apples, growing them, or anything like that. No, instead, her interest went into wolves, although the only thing they really had was coyotes in Appleloosa. While other fillies got scared and ran from the wolves, Wolfstrike tried to befriend him. However, the wolves would never allow Wolfstrike to come near them. So, sadly, Wolfstrike was stuck with learning about wolves, each and every night wanted to become one. She wanted to live the life of a wolf.
 
 
Finally, on her fourteenth birthday, her parents decided to move to ponyville. There, she could study the life of both a wolf and a brand-new kind of wolf, a Timberwolf.
 
As days past, her intrest for wolves only became stronger. She was tired of waiting for a wolf. She had decided to go into Everfree and meet a wolf for the first time. As she got deeper and deeper in the thick shadows of Everfree. Lost, confused, and worried, Wolfstrike sat down, completely giving up. Then she heard a tiny whimper. The whimper escalated into a howl, then a yelp, then a bark for help. Wolfstrike dash towards the pained yips. There, before her eyes, she saw a beautiful, grey dog sitting before her eyes. But it was wounded and so weak. Doing the first thing that comes to mind, which was to mend to it's wounds, she worked quickly to help save the wolf's life. And right there, she got her cutie-mark. At that point she knew what to do. 
 
She had to save the wolves.
((Sorry for short bio, i'm stumped on ideas))
 
 
Power that you are going to discover: Can turn into a wolf at any times.
Personality: Kind and generous to animals, otherwise sometimes feisty and hard-headed.

O.O rethinking part of what I was about to do to a timberwolf... you could start near where Astro is now... he was struck down by a timberwolf just now, waiting for Guardian (AKA Bloom) to post, but I think you could have a good role in what is happening there... so Gravitous doesn't kill the Timberwolf... I would rather not kill anything to be totally truthful... dang good thing you could join us! :D

#328 Guardian

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Posted 07 September 2014 - 01:00 PM

Man... College is killer. Sorry if I'm not that active. Please forgive me if I'm just a hindrance



#329 Discord_Modd

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Posted 07 September 2014 - 02:08 PM

nah, its fine... worry about your education first :)

#330 Wolf I.E.

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Posted 08 September 2014 - 08:23 AM

Accepted! Love the bio :)


Thank you! :D

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Posted 08 September 2014 - 03:05 PM

But still, I feel a bit bad though



#332 Spawn Inc.

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Posted 13 September 2014 - 07:45 PM

not really a bump, but a bit of a bump. are you still accepting applications? I'm wondering if I can possibly join this.



#333 roserocks01

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Posted 13 September 2014 - 08:34 PM

Yup, we're still accepting!

#334 Keldeo

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Posted 13 September 2014 - 08:56 PM

Well, I hope you make a good character! Good luck getting accepted.

Also, I'm excited for Dominic to post. Ready to see what happens now. Will Aurora try to kidnap Mora or something? I have a feeling that she wants to use Mora's powers for herself. I hope you post soon!

#335 Spawn Inc.

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Posted 14 September 2014 - 12:47 AM

Spoiler


Will this do?

 

edit: well, I've added to and partially rewritten the Bio.


Edited by Spawn Inc., 14 September 2014 - 12:08 PM.


#336 roserocks01

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Posted 14 September 2014 - 09:35 AM

In the bio, does Spawn have parents or a home town?

#337 Spawn Inc.

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Posted 14 September 2014 - 11:23 AM

I forgot about that. give me a bit to edit.
 
edit: done.
 
edit2: am I the only one that happened to notice the OC Name part was left blank, most likely by accident?
 

eh might as well.
 
Oc name:
Gender: Female
Race of pony: Earth Pony
Age: 22 (About the Mane6's age)
Description: Dark, black frizzled hair with dark yellow eyes and a dark grey pelt
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: Pawprint of a wolf, for rescuing as many wolves as she can
Short bio: Ah, yes, Apploosa.. The sweet air of fresh apples and freshly watered sprouts would always linger in the air, leading to a day as smooth as honey. However, little Wolfstrike didn't like bucking apples, growing them, or anything like that. No, instead, her interest went into wolves, although the only thing they really had was coyotes in Appleloosa. While other fillies got scared and ran from the wolves, Wolfstrike tried to befriend him. However, the wolves would never allow Wolfstrike to come near them. So, sadly, Wolfstrike was stuck with learning about wolves, each and every night wanted to become one. She wanted to live the life of a wolf.
 
 
Finally, on her fourteenth birthday, her parents decided to move to ponyville. There, she could study the life of both a wolf and a brand-new kind of wolf, a Timberwolf.
 
As days past, her intrest for wolves only became stronger. She was tired of waiting for a wolf. She had decided to go into Everfree and meet a wolf for the first time. As she got deeper and deeper in the thick shadows of Everfree. Lost, confused, and worried, Wolfstrike sat down, completely giving up. Then she heard a tiny whimper. The whimper escalated into a howl, then a yelp, then a bark for help. Wolfstrike dash towards the pained yips. There, before her eyes, she saw a beautiful, grey dog sitting before her eyes. But it was wounded and so weak. Doing the first thing that comes to mind, which was to mend to it's wounds, she worked quickly to help save the wolf's life. And right there, she got her cutie-mark. At that point she knew what to do. 
 
She had to save the wolves.
((Sorry for short bio, i'm stumped on ideas))
 
 
Power that you are going to discover: Can turn into a wolf at any times.
Personality: Kind and generous to animals, otherwise sometimes feisty and hard-headed.


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Posted 14 September 2014 - 09:32 PM

I noticed too but I read the name further on in the application.
Also, accepted! Make your opening post whenever!

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Posted 14 September 2014 - 10:55 PM

alrighty then.



#340 Wolf I.E.

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Posted 15 September 2014 - 10:00 AM

 am I the only one that happened to notice the OC Name part was left blank, most likely by accident?
 

 

 

'Twas by accident. I'll fix that now, oops



#341 Night_Shade/Rhythm

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Posted 15 September 2014 - 02:11 PM

Rhythm

Mare

yellow Eyes

Blue Scruffy Mane With Lighter coat colour

Age: 19

Cutiemark: Spider's Web

Is A Music Pony Whos Also good at math and licks things randomly



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Posted 15 September 2014 - 02:17 PM

Rhythm

Mare

yellow Eyes

Blue Scruffy Mane With Lighter coat colour

Age: 19

Cutiemark: Spider's Web

Is A Music Pony Whos Also good at math and licks things randomly

Just saying now, you're gonna need a longer bio. Explain how they came to ponyville, how they were born, how they got their cutiemark, for example



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Posted 15 September 2014 - 05:06 PM

Yes, you'll need a bio, a cutie mark backstory and a bit more personality. You can use the template on the first post if need be.

#344 Night_Shade/Rhythm

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Posted 15 September 2014 - 06:29 PM

Just saying now, you're gonna need a longer bio. Explain how they came to ponyville, how they were born, how they got their cutiemark, for example

 

Cool i didnt want to just spam a massive bio and you all go 0.0, since you asked then i now can

 

 

Real Name: Night Shade

Stage Name: Rhythm

Gender: Mare (female)

Class: Unicorn

Age: 19

 

Description: Rhythm is a lightly blue coloured mare who has amber coloured eyes (yellow to you or me). Her mane is a much darker shade of blue then her coat colour however she has styled it into three small tips resulting in having a messy appearance however it is quite clean. Rhythm's Cutiemark is a Spider's Web and she acquired it long after she was a mare and had already picked her career path.  

 

Habits: Rhythm is slightly superstitious which comes from being brought up in a small village by the evergreen forest and one of her annoying habits is licking other ponies and stationary objects alike. Rhythm also stomps her hoof before entering and leaving a room believing from her upbringing that it will scare away any evil spirits present within the room.

 

Personality: Rhythm is a rather easy going mare who doesn't mind what she's doing however the one thing that will upset her would be commenting on her upbringing and telling her that stomping her hoof along with other things she does won't scare away any evil spirits. Rhythm has always liked music, anything with a good temp is what she likes however even if the music is made by a famous artist if the rhythm doesn't match the tempo she wouldn't like it.

 

Bio: Rhythm grew up inside a small community on the outskirts of ever tree forest.. As a filly she was educated at the local hall like the other children however due to the tradition when a pony gets their cutiemark they are set to work around their cutiemark, if a pony reaches adulthood and still don't have their cutiemark they are given several duty's to perform in the hope of getting their cutiemark and this tactic normally works however for the rare occasion a pony still doesn't get their cutiemark they are given the freedom to choose their own career path and one of these ponies was Rhythm. Rhythm at the age of 14 (using human equivalent age)  still hadn't got her cutiemark which had led her to be used around the village for several odd temporary jobs, normally lasting a few weeks at a time however after she had done most of the jobs she found being a entertainment pony a good career path but she still hadn't gained her cutiemark from this job so she was forced to do several other jobs until she reached the age of 17 which was when she officially became a mare and could chose her own career and she soon began being a entertainment pony. At 18 she switched her career wanting to be a music mare after listening to several songs from a artist known as DJpon3 and Octavia. Despite Rhythm's plan in her village their was no need for a full time music mare as their were not enough ponies living their to be able to make a livelihood out of it so this is why Rhythm left and travelled to Ponyville so she could make a name for herself as a musician.

 

Strengths: Easygoing, Rhythm doesn't get upset or angry easily. Conversation Starter: since she is a musical lover she can easily start a conversation with music and is happy to talk with other ponies, she doesn't mind abit of small talk either. Magic: Being a unicorn means Rhythm has the ability to levitate objects along with some other basic spells that other ponies would not be able to have

 

Weaknesses: Size: Rhythm is slightly smaller then other ponies so she is physically weakened compared to other larger ponies, Limited Education: being brought up in a small village resulted in her not getting the best education, she wouldn't have a good knowledge of spells apart from the simple ones she was taught or learned though her daily life also she is only qualified up to the book of spells grade 5 which is where school ends. University offers up to level 9 spells and after that is restricted due to fears of abuse.

 

 

How She Got Her Cutiemark?, well it has something to do with walking into the evertree forest but i shall reveal it in the rp.

 

is that good?

 

 


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#345 Keldeo

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Posted 15 September 2014 - 09:16 PM

Cool i didnt want to just spam a massive bio and you all go 0.0, since you asked then i now can

 

 

*snip*

 

is that good?

 

 

I think you did great!  But you're missing the part in this thread's application about the special power.  If you don't want to give it all away, you can just reveal a tiny bit about it.  Although I'm not too sure if having a special power is required, maybe you'll have to ask rose about that.

 

 Either ways, I think it's pretty good.



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Posted 15 September 2014 - 10:04 PM

I think you did great!  But you're missing the part in this thread's application about the special power.  If you don't want to give it all away, you can just reveal a tiny bit about it.  Although I'm not too sure if having a special power is required, maybe you'll have to ask rose about that.

 

 Either ways, I think it's pretty good.

 

I can summon spiderwebs thats rather special, anyway i saw a pony be able to make a singularity and thats rather op nothing beats a black hole, unless i can summon white holes

 

But how about i can summon spiderweb's which cannot be removed by other ponies, thats a good special power and goes with my cutiemark



#347 Discord_Modd

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Posted 16 September 2014 - 01:25 AM

I can summon spiderwebs thats rather special, anyway i saw a pony be able to make a singularity and thats rather op nothing beats a black hole, unless i can summon white holes
 
But how about i can summon spiderweb's which cannot be removed by other ponies, thats a good special power and goes with my cutiemark

the power is restricted due to Astrorious...

#348 Living Ordyin

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Posted 24 September 2014 - 04:54 PM

Name: Living Ordyin

Gender: Colt

Race: Unicorn

Appearance:

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Description: Medium size, thin, and grey coated. Has red eyes and red wavy hair. As a unicorn has limited strength.

Age: 17

CM: Medicine (specifically Medicinal Magic)

Ability: Soul Manipulation-

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Powers: Ability+Magic (Medicinal, Levitation, and teleportation of small distances)+Knowledge of Medicine...about it.

Short Bio: Living is a teenage unicorn studying medicine in cantalot, and as part of studies he was researching medicinal magic including that of the properties of the varied herb and plant population in equestria but while researching in ponyville using the local plants and library blue discs appeared on his front hoofs based on rumors of mysterious and odd powers springing up among the local populace he decided to stay in order to discover what was happening. ((power not yet discovered))

Personality: Kind, thoughtful and friendly, has aggressive tendencies ((hehe beware Keldeo :3))

 

((Is it ok if I can use the ability to slowly but cumulatively accelerate soul formations within an sphere to create compressed sonic booms? Or is that too op...probably is(once reached ability mastery))


Edited by Living Ordyin, 24 September 2014 - 05:46 PM.


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Posted 24 September 2014 - 05:15 PM

Ok I heard somepony can make black holes so I'm just gonna go hunt for app to check for myself its actual op-ness

 

-EDIT: I checked and since he can't really control the black hole power nor is able to use at any moment I guess it's alright...however a black hole would most likely suck the creator into it soo.....


Edited by Living Ordyin, 24 September 2014 - 06:07 PM.


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Posted 25 September 2014 - 04:26 AM

Lol, so many ponies trying to get black hole super powers. This is what I feel like right now.

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Anyways, looking forward to you introduction, living! Let me know here or through pm how you want interactions with Keldeo to go. Keldeo is really defensive when it comes to aggressiveness, so I think that he might lose his soul (literally) if they butt heads. :P

#351 Living Ordyin

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Posted 25 September 2014 - 06:36 AM

t lose his soul (literally) if they butt heads. :P

I'll try to be gentle...and not maim you. Plus he hasn't even got the power yet and not even tried using it so...ya :I



#352 Discord_Modd

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Posted 25 September 2014 - 11:58 AM

Ok I heard somepony can make black holes so I'm just gonna go hunt for app to check for myself its actual op-ness
 
-EDIT: I checked and since he can't really control the black hole power nor is able to use at any moment I guess it's alright...however a black hole would most likely suck the creator into it soo.....

ok, again do I have to clarify this...
I have said before that Gravitous is never in control of Astrorious 100%, and never will be.
Gravitous is technically not even a pony, but a life force connected to a black hole, giving him the power to have some control over it, and use some of its power in spells, however, he understands that mass genocide is immoral, so don't worry about him "spawning" one at the center of Equestria, so far he has only "spawned" one, and it was only the size of an atom... (note, he technically does not spawn them, he takes part of the existing black hole and teleports it.)

#353 Aurora

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Posted 26 September 2014 - 02:42 AM

I updated my character, (completely revised it because I didn't like it and I hadn't introduced the old character (Scar) yet) and I'm gonna make my intro post, but first, where is everypony, and what are they doing?



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Posted 26 September 2014 - 06:43 AM

((and I still haven't been accepted/rejected))



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Posted 26 September 2014 - 07:36 PM

((and I still haven't been accepted/rejected))

Astro has some problems about some ponies powers, so I'm going to let you and him sort it all out here. When you've come up with something that works, you'll be accepted.

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Posted 26 September 2014 - 08:05 PM

Rose, you forgot about Night Shade's application. Also, I think Living changed his power to the manipulation of souls.

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Posted 26 September 2014 - 10:02 PM

Astro had a problem with Night Shade's power too. A lot to do with black holes and stuff, huh?
Anyway, Living, you are accepted if Astro thinks you power will not interfere with his. The same with Night Shade.

Edited by roserocks01, 26 September 2014 - 10:02 PM.


#358 Keldeo

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 02:14 AM

I updated my character, (completely revised it because I didn't like it and I hadn't introduced the old character (Scar) yet) and I'm gonna make my intro post, but first, where is everypony, and what are they doing?

  Well, as far as what people have planned out for future events with their characters, I don't really know.  But I do think I have a general understanding of what's going on, so I'll compile it here for you.  (and maybe everyone else here, for reference and guidance.)  I might not be onto the whole story and what you're trying to get at 100%, since this is my perspective, but I'll try.

 

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#359 Discord_Modd

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 04:03 AM

Astro had a problem with Night Shade's power too. A lot to do with black holes and stuff, huh?
Anyway, Living, you are accepted if Astro thinks you power will not interfere with his. The same with Night Shade.

Astro has some problems about some ponies powers, so I'm going to let you and him sort it all out here. When you've come up with something that works, you'll be accepted.

its not me who has a problem with other ponies powers... its them who have a problem with a situation that is 100% under control due to Astrorious' morals... Gravitous would not even hurt a fly on purpose...

#360 Living Ordyin

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 10:39 AM

Rose, you forgot about Night Shade's application. Also, I think Living changed his power to the manipulation of souls.

errrr Living has nothing to do with black holes???????

the ability is 'soul manipulation' and that never changed

I was just questioning his ability to use black holes-I don't have nor want the power

Where did me using black holes come from???

the only thing I could possibly do similiar to a black hole is 'slowly accelerate soul formations within an sphere to create compressed sonic booms'


Ok I heard somepony can make black holes so I'm just gonna go hunt for app to check for myself its actual op-ness

 


Edited by Living Ordyin, 27 September 2014 - 10:39 AM.


#361 Discord_Modd

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 11:25 AM

Welp, looks like I am going to have to write a fanfic now because somepony can understand that OP powers are kind of a big trend in ponies in this RP...
I will admit that the power to manipulate* singularities is a bit OP, but that is why Gravitous is not a single pony alone with his own mind. he shares it with Astro, a much higher intellect, and therefore able to over-power Gravitous if he ever tries to do anything not moral. Gravitous knows that it is not in his best interest to do anything too OP, so why the buck are you still so upset that my power is more thought out than yours? I think your jealous that I am able to take something OP, and make it more balanced so I cant do anything I want to, I am limited by Astrorious' character traits, even when I am playing Gravitous. the true power both Astrorious and Gravitous have, is that they can co-exist in relative harmony.

*note: I said this before, he is only able to manipulate but NOT create black holes/singularities. there are also non-negative advantages to this, for instance the ability to travel across a vast area of space-time without traveling that far by bending space-time itself, but Gravitous can only do this on distances only a km or so... so its balanced too....

#362 Keldeo

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 12:13 PM

While you guys are debating over OP powers, I discovered how best to describe Keldeo's power. The easiest way to describe it would be that it is very similar to Wolverine's claws. However, there are certain restrictions and differences, obviously. Most notably that he can only activate it under pressure. There's also the boost in energy, explained probably due to a large increase in adrenaline. Also, I should mention that his power, when used, will alter his personality slightly by making him very resolute. (or maybe just stubborn) Don't worry about him being OP when using his power, since his resolute form doesn't manipulate anything physical besides his horn.

As for Keldeo's power where he can fire water from his hooves, I still need to figure out how to explain that... Darn Pokemon logics. Though I'm almost certain it shouldn't be overpowered unless someone's character will die if touched by water.

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 01:24 PM

I'd like to pose a simple question that coincides with the nature of this RP and it's status in the community.

 

Is the term OP defined by a player towards his own character, or by the community towards it?

 

If it's by the community, then no amount of explaining can ever change their opinion towards what they consider as OP, unless you deal with the problem at it's root and change it.

 

And if it's by the player, then they would just be blatantly using it as an excuse to create long-winded stories that seem to counterbalance it, but still retain the object of criticism nonetheless.

 

I can generate entire worlds to explain how I'm RPing as an alicorn OC, involving up to making an entire genome and it's unique mutations which led to why I have wings and a horn, and then spend days saying, 'oh, but I can't do this and this and this', to make it seem like it would work.

 

But in the end, I still am playing as the same old alicorn OC, which was what people were calling me OP for in the first place.


Edited by High Orbit, 27 September 2014 - 01:25 PM.


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Posted 27 September 2014 - 03:09 PM

I'd like to pose a simple question that coincides with the nature of this RP and it's status in the community.
 
Is the term OP defined by a player towards his own character, or by the community towards it?
 
If it's by the community, then no amount of explaining can ever change their opinion towards what they consider as OP, unless you deal with the problem at it's root and change it.
 
And if it's by the player, then they would just be blatantly using it as an excuse to create long-winded stories that seem to counterbalance it, but still retain the object of criticism nonetheless.
 
I can generate entire worlds to explain how I'm RPing as an alicorn OC, involving up to making an entire genome and it's unique mutations which led to why I have wings and a horn, and then spend days saying, 'oh, but I can't do this and this and this', to make it seem like it would work.
 
But in the end, I still am playing as the same old alicorn OC, which was what people were calling me OP for in the first place.

Difference is, I was accepted already 3 times for all 3 of my characters (two of which share the same body and mind). I am not against their powers, and everyone in this RP is OP in one way or another... but there are still balances for everyone

#365 High Orbit

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Posted 27 September 2014 - 03:49 PM

and everyone in this RP is OP in one way or another

 

If there are no trees in a forest, it's not a forest.

 

If everyone is OP, no-one is.

 

Thing is with apps of this sort, all of you seem to have the mentality of "I'd better check the most powerful character here, and then make my character more powerful than him in some way, but I'll nerf his powers so that they get approved, but I'll still win in a fight"

 

Certainly, you were accepted as you complied with the GM's own standards, and indeed they cannot change that unless the GM revokes her ruling. For that, at least, you are in the right.

 

But I have to ask all of you here another question.

 

Is it that important to have your OC be the most powerful, or controlling the most powerful things in an RP, even if you'll never use them because you said they can't be used to any effect anyways? Does sticking wings on an Earth Pony and calling it a pegasus change who it is in essence?

 

The reason why this RP isn't so popular with the 'seniors', per say, is that quite often, a lot of us miss the things that make an OC unique, that make it special. Being a unique OC doesn't mean you need to have all sorts of add-ons or skills so that others can notice you, it just means that you need to understand at times that perhaps being the best isn't all there is to RP.

 

I have had my fair share of memorable moments in my time here, and I can truthfully say that they weren't the ones where I knew my character could decimate the playing field if only someone got him to crack this way, but instead the kindness he showed others born out of a crushing realization that he could and would never be like them, and the kindness he got in return.

 

If it's not needed, you may as well lose it. Your character's skills don't define who he is, it's his life and how he interacts that defines who he is.

 

That's step one of creating what we call a 'good' OC.



#366 Aurora

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Posted 28 September 2014 - 12:40 AM

*snip*


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#367 Living Ordyin

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Posted 28 September 2014 - 08:19 AM

 

errrr Living has nothing to do with black holes???????

the ability is 'soul manipulation' and that never changed

I was just questioning his ability to use black holes-I don't have nor want the power

Where did me using black holes come from???

 

so did anybody see this?



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Posted 28 September 2014 - 11:42 AM

so did anybody see this?

I don't know where you using black holes came from.... to be honest, I just responded to people saying my power was too OP... it was a misinterpretation I think.

*extreamly long post criticizing this RP and everyone in it, basically calling us noobs, also attacking our non-cannon OCs that we either made or modified for this RP*

ok... I cant tell if you are trolling or serious...
this RP is here and you cant do anything about that fact... if you don't like it, why are you posting?

Welp, looks like I am going to have to write a fanfic now because somepony can understand that OP powers are kind of a big trend in ponies in this RP...
I will admit that the power to manipulate* singularities is a bit OP, but that is why Gravitous is not a single pony alone with his own mind. he shares it with Astro, a much higher intellect, and therefore able to over-power Gravitous if he ever tries to do anything not moral. Gravitous knows that it is not in his best interest to do anything too OP, so why the buck are you still so upset that my power is more thought out than yours? I think your jealous that I am able to take something OP, and make it more balanced so I cant do anything I want to, I am limited by Astrorious' character traits, even when I am playing Gravitous. the true power both Astrorious and Gravitous have, is that they can co-exist in relative harmony.

*note: I said this before, he is only able to manipulate but NOT create black holes/singularities. there are also non-negative advantages to this, for instance the ability to travel across a vast area of space-time without traveling that far by bending space-time itself, but Gravitous can only do this on distances only a km or so... so its balanced too....

Dihydria Oxidia (my other OC) already has the power of water in this RP... (and for High Orbit: is this not an OP power? oh, wait, its normal for an OP power to be something you understand, and not something that people usually fear, but can be used for good... wait... water can be that too... is manipulating singularities really that different from controlling water?)

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Posted 28 September 2014 - 12:32 PM

Astro, Orbit never criticized anything you guys do in your rp, and the fact you shortened it down proves you didn't read it properly.

 

The thing he's criticizing is all of you guys' mentality that you must make your character capable of doing the most dangerous thing, but you won't make your character do it, therefore making it "balanced". He's fine with you having your rp here.



#370 Living Ordyin

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Posted 28 September 2014 - 12:34 PM

Astro, Orbit never criticized anything you guys do in your rp, and the fact you shortened it down proves you didn't read it properly.

 

The thing he's criticizing is all of you guys' mentality that you must make your character capable of doing the most dangerous thing, but you won't make your character do it, therefore making it "balanced". He's fine with you having your rp here.

Oh hai there Blazer-senpai!



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Posted 28 September 2014 - 12:39 PM

*blazzer senpai notices living*

 

Ohai liv

 

Also yes I am still gonna join this rp but only because I wanna rp with living



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Posted 28 September 2014 - 12:53 PM

*blazzer senpai notices living*

 

Ohai liv

 

Also yes I am still gonna join this rp but only because I wanna rp with living

s-s-senpai! baka! I'll just join the runners (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ had a look over and once I get the hang of it it'll be fun!

((still doing this one don't worry))



#373 Blazuhira Miller

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Posted 28 September 2014 - 12:58 PM

Appreciate it

 

I'm still joining, though.

 

Any opportunity to give a character lactokinesis I will take.



#374 Spawn Inc.

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 12:42 AM

I'm going to have to despawn from this roleplay. I'm much too inactive to keep an actual pace, so..

 

yeah. sorry.



#375 Keldeo

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 03:50 AM

*snip*

Gonna miss you. Too bad you never really did get to roleplay with us.



Anyways, I was thinking of adding a villain. There are only a few so far, and I think having another would make things a bit more interesting. Anyways, if you want to know more about what I may have planned, just ask me here or through pm. I won't post an application just yet, but I will give a few details.

- This villain will be a "trapper-like" character. He seeks out rare things for self-gratification, money, and for his own reputation, but will do so at the cost of other's expense.

- He is not especially powerful, and he reveres those with more money and than him. However, he despises those who are below and less wealthy than him.

- He has personal hired bodyguards, they are nothing special, but they are strong and well-trained in the art of quick takedowns. His other followers are mostly slaves imported from other areas; they help him out with simple tasks, but despise and fear him.

- As for his power, I'll need to work that one out. I was also thinking of making him French... Will that work? I'll need to study a bit of French language. He will primarily be targeting Keldeo in the roleplay since he is "not a pony" and extremely valuable to him. If anyone else *wants* to be added to his target list, let me know.

Sooo... Yep. I'll need to work on it a bit more. His unusual strength will probably be a power most suited to his profession. I'll probably have to make it hand-in-hand with his personality and why the pony is so greedy and corrupt as well. Please let me know what you all think!

#376 Guardian

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 05:31 AM

Hmm.. Astro? Can we ship Bloom and Astro? Just a thought.

#377 Aurora

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 11:50 AM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 15 December 2015 - 11:14 PM.


#378 Keldeo

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 11:56 AM

I think the new antagonist should be British, why? Because the Brits make great bad guys!

Hehehe... *cue British accent* Something about them just sounds so right.

Maybe I could do that. By making him French, I was just hoping to make him a bit unique from the rest of the characters. We haven't really established what everypony's accent is. And Keldeo is all-American when it comes to accents and stuff. (He's even red, white, and blue lol)

Edited by Keldeo, 29 September 2014 - 11:57 AM.


#379 Discord_Modd

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 12:26 PM

Hmm.. Astro? Can we ship Bloom and Astro? Just a thought.

sure

#380 Aurora

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 01:21 PM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 15 December 2015 - 11:15 PM.


#381 Keldeo

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 01:39 PM

Well, my character is a robot, so he isn't really given a definite accent, but he can mock most accents because of this. And very creative with the all-American character!
French bad guys make sophisticated bad guys as well as "likable" or "romantic" bad guys. Russians also make good bad guys with British.

  Oh yeah, by the way, you should probably just repost your application so that we don't have to scroll back so far to read it.  It would help rose out a lot more if you were to do that.

 So does your character sound like a robot?  Not monotone, but kind of like a vocaloid? (where it sounds natural, but you can tell it is fake by the tone between words.)

 

  And as for bad guys, I don't think that where they're from has to be big issue in determining their character, but it definitely helps the audience and other players characterize and visualize the character better.  I probably will just make him French; suave, witty, and no small amount of French pride.



#382 Blazuhira Miller

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 02:56 PM

I think the new antagonist should be British, why? Because the Brits make great bad guys!

Alright, I'll make my character this dude:
 

6f072b7c-26d9-44cc-8062-8385091cc2d8.jpg

 

Oh, yeah, I'm also gonna play a bad guy.



#383 Keldeo

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 03:26 PM

Oh, yeah, I'm also gonna play a bad guy.

Oooh, yes please.  We need more villains as it is.  Will you be a loner bada** villain or some kind of general?  Can't wait for you to join us. :D



#384 Blazuhira Miller

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 03:28 PM

Loner.

 

Also he's gonna have an extremely lame super power but he'll still own all of you.



#385 jimme neutron corndog

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 03:36 PM

Appreciate it
 
I'm still joining, though.
 
Any opportunity to give a character lactokinesis I will take.


if you join im going to make a fucking op character and nerf it and make it an alicorn and make it cool and wear sunglasses ofmg that was dead for 100000 years and got resusitated by the rainbow alicorn princess luna dead mom and then make it the villain

#386 Living Ordyin

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 05:08 PM

if you join im going to make a fucking op character and nerf it and make it an alicorn and make it cool and wear sunglasses ofmg that was dead for 100000 years and got resusitated by the rainbow alicorn princess luna dead mom and then make it the villain

...that's too op for this rp sorry catbutt

tri agen plz



#387 Aurora

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 08:58 PM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 15 December 2015 - 11:16 PM.


#388 roserocks01

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 09:04 PM

I think the new antagonist should be British, why? Because the Brits make great bad guys!


I'm British :D

#389 Living Ordyin

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 10:15 PM

Astro has some problems about some ponies powers, so I'm going to let you and him sort it all out here. When you've come up with something that works, you'll be accepted.

So am I accepted then? As Astro nor Shade seem to have a problem with Living's powers (even though they have nothing to do with black holes :I)



#390 Discord_Modd

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Posted 29 September 2014 - 10:59 PM

So am I accepted then? As Astro nor Shade seem to have a problem with Living's powers (even though they have nothing to do with black holes :I)

yea, please accept him roserocks01 :)

#391 Keldeo

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Posted 30 September 2014 - 12:00 AM

Astro had a problem with Night Shade's power too. A lot to do with black holes and stuff, huh?
Anyway, Living, you are accepted if Astro thinks you power will not interfere with his. The same with Night Shade.


She accepted you a little while ago, it just got covered up by over two pages of posts.

Anyways, I'm just waiting for either Dominic or Rose to post. I'll probably end up leaving Twilight's library at some point to get involved with Dominic's OCs.
By the way, Astro, Gravitous isn't evil (or at least more on the chaotic side) is he? I know that Astro's morals still hold up against Gravitous, but wat's Gravitous' plan? (You don't have to reveal it, I'm just curious.

#392 Guardian

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Posted 30 September 2014 - 01:47 AM

Well.... College is hell...

#393 Discord_Modd

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Posted 30 September 2014 - 01:22 PM

She accepted you a little while ago, it just got covered up by over two pages of posts.

Anyways, I'm just waiting for either Dominic or Rose to post. I'll probably end up leaving Twilight's library at some point to get involved with Dominic's OCs.
By the way, Astro, Gravitous isn't evil (or at least more on the chaotic side) is he? I know that Astro's morals still hold up against Gravitous, but wat's Gravitous' plan? (You don't have to reveal it, I'm just curious.

Gravitous initially wanted to destroy Equestria (this was back when Astro first got his cutiemark). over the years, Astro reformed him by showing all the good things he would be destroying. Gravitous was corrupted by power, but Astro taught him that power isn't everything, and that being an actual living thing was better than being half alive wandering the universe in search of more power that was not going to be used. Something like that...

#394 Aurora

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Posted 01 October 2014 - 12:01 AM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 15 December 2015 - 11:16 PM.


#395 Keldeo

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Posted 01 October 2014 - 12:37 AM

Keldeo, if you were wondering, listen to this:

http://livingtombsto...-every-night-to

And just noting, the "scree" in the middle and end, Foxy can do, but yes that is what Foxy sounds like.

Holy biscuits... I just realized that your character is actually Foxy from five nights at Freddy's... Slow realization on my part I guess. Uh... So he's... Evil then? Probably not, maybe just misunderstood, right?

Then again, he is probably gonna try to stuff somepony in his mechanical body... 0_0

Edit:

So... Aurora, I think you might need to work on your character a bit. Not because so think he is strange OC, but because several things you describe about him seem to be a bit contradictory to realism an stuff.

For instance, if Foxy has a mechanical body and razor sharp teeth, (not to mention crazy running skills), how exactly does everypony in Ponyville just accept and be happy with his presence? If that is how you would describe him (you say he has several wires sticking out, scars, not to mention an eye patch) then everypony would literally be running for their lives from him. If you think I'm wrong, imagine the kind of treatment Zecora got when she was in Ponyville. And we're just talking Zecora, not a terrifying looking fox robot with razor sharp teeth, an eye patch, and insane speed.

I can imagine you being able to get away with this if he had a nice personality, just be careful about the gruesome way you describe him; ponies might not like what they see.... And by ponies, I mean our OCs.

Your description of his personality doesn't make sense to me, but this my personal nitpick. I usually pictured Foxy to be a hyperactive guy who can't stop running, but I might be wrong in that perspective.

Also, I think the super power of emotions would be a bit strange. He already has a brain, he should feel emotion... Unless emotions were something... Something else...! *choir in background plays*

I also wonder... Since it's Foxy... Maybe he could have some kind of split-personality during the night where he's a cold blooded killer... *shudders*

Edited by Keldeo, 01 October 2014 - 02:35 AM.


#396 Aurora

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Posted 01 October 2014 - 03:06 AM

*snip*


Edited by Aurora, 15 December 2015 - 11:17 PM.


#397 Technical Mercy

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Posted 01 October 2014 - 04:10 AM

Oh! another villain has joined the fray?


Edited by Dominic, 01 October 2014 - 04:30 AM.


#398 Living Ordyin

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Posted 01 October 2014 - 03:27 PM

 -snip-

Nevermind :P


Edited by Living Ordyin, 01 October 2014 - 05:12 PM.


#399 Technical Mercy

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Posted 02 October 2014 - 03:22 PM

Well.... College is hell...

My :heart: goes out to you. I understand the feeling Entirely.


Edited by Dominic, 02 October 2014 - 03:29 PM.


#400 Blazuhira Miller

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Posted 02 October 2014 - 08:13 PM

Oc name: Brian "Milkman" Harris

Gender: Male 
Race of pony: Earth Pony
Age: 23
Description: A pony of a normal sized build. Brian has a mane that is practically entirely shaved - a thin line of red-orange hair. He wears a decently nice suit most of the time. He usually wears a straight faced, staring-into-space expression.
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: Milk bottle. Talent with anything based around dairy.
Short bio: Lived a normal, mundane life in Trottingham, until his mother and father divorced each other, leaving him with his father to move into his old home in Ponyville, where he worked in his uncle's cafe as a family barista and server. He found his cutie mark in dairy products when he started to bake more and more things for the cafe. Eventually he bought his own house, and lived a normal life for a pony with his cutie mark, which mostly cycled him through odd jobs. He still sometimes wondered if milk was the right thing for him.

 

This all changed when the surge of superpowers moved through Equestria. He found, indeed, that milk WAS the right thing for him, unfortunately. He managed to use it as a party trick: He could get publicity and the people loved seeing it, he was like a milk magician. This all went fine, until a pony who'd constantly tried to take his special somepony away gained super strength, and then he successfully took her.

 

Brian didn't react well. He discovered that he could still manipulate dairy within a living creature, and after sitting down to talk with his ex and her new boyfriend, he gave them coffees, then manipulated the milk into their tracheas, causing them to die choking on milk.

 

He decided that if people wouldn't appreciate him, he'd make them appreciate him - starting with those with powers.
Power that you are going to discover: Lactokinesis (Complete manipulation (not creation) of dairy and dairy based products)
Personality: After gaining his power, he became attention-seeking, and when a few others revealed their powers, he grew far more so. Brian's discovery of what his power could actually do, he became vain and desperate to feel relevant towards those with more interesting or "powerful" powers.




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