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#1 Reverie

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:38 AM

I decided to create a practice house on the server finally instead of single player. I would greatly appreciate it if someone could take look and provide me with feedback.

 

The house is located at /warp practice Argeozonegon

 

Thanks for any time you can spare--



#2 Hepolite

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 07:42 PM

Alright, I had a look at your house, here's what I think of what I've seen:

 

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#3 Matt

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 04:45 PM

Starting outside, you have used nice, safe materials that would work well in ponyville. How you have used the sand and the log together makes an interesting pattern, although, like Hepolite has mentioned, being a bit more experimental with the pattern by adding diagonals may look good. I like the roof a lot, the shape is not plain and boring although, maybe a little less on your next house? One thing that does seem a bit odd is the lack of doors, and I am unsure about the path, stonebrick is a bit off theme.

Inside, there is a very nice use of furniture and lighting but, it doesn't really feel like a house. Open plan can work well on the downstairs but I would highly recommend trying different layouts. What you have made is good, it just needs to be displayed a bit better to the viewer.

Aside from the lack of the hand rail upstairs works well and the furniture is great; I really like the bedroom. However, the lack of doors and the same material for the floor, ceiling and the walls does make them blend together. Walls need to be distinct from floors. I suggest experimenting with different materials and even patterns - see what works :)

Overall, its a pretty nice house and with a bit of refinement it could look great.


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