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House completed
#1
Posted 25 April 2014 - 01:42 AM
#2
Posted 26 April 2014 - 05:35 PM
plz reply results soon ![]()
#3
Posted 03 May 2014 - 04:49 AM
We are giving you a chance to improve this. The problems are mostly in the interior, but the outside balcony is also a bit large. The interior is quite empty, the log floor is very ugly, and you have pretty much just beds and nothing else. Fix these problems and post again here when you are done.
#4
Posted 04 May 2014 - 07:40 PM
does this count as my 2nd chance?
as in after this no more chances
#5
Posted 05 May 2014 - 06:15 PM
Nope. This is still your first chance.
#6
Posted 08 May 2014 - 07:58 PM
ok thanks
#7
Posted 08 May 2014 - 08:24 PM
ok so I added a more to the bedrooms, added some things to the bottom floor, and the attic, I got rid of the logs floor and replaced it, and I shortened the balcony.
please post my results soon.
Edited by Gliese, 08 May 2014 - 08:25 PM.
#8
Posted 10 May 2014 - 04:00 PM
Sorry Gliese, your house is close, but not quite there. I think you have the ability to pass on your second try.
We noticed that there is still very few interesting pieces of furniture in your house. You have big rooms with small offshoots of bedrooms that only contain beds and bookcases. They don't look like real bedrooms; they lack wardrobes and drawers. I'd suggest you look at /warp ikea to get some ideas for better furniture. I also suggest you use your space a little better. The large rooms have nothing in them but a carpet, and your bedrooms are very small. Plan your layout better to include more space in your rooms so you can add the extra details like drawers. You also didn't include lights in several rooms (like your bathroom). Remember that it's these touches that make your house seem real.
We would have passed your house even with the problems inside if the exterior had been especially good; next time, I would also suggest you have a more interesting shape for your house (you had the same shape on each side of the house, making it look rather like a plus sign). You also went a little overboard with leaves and windows. Make sure windows aren't taking up all of the space on the sides of your house, you need some walls!
Hope this helps, I really think you'll nail this the second time around, and I can't wait to see your second submission. You should look at some houses in Ponyville (/warp ponyville) to get ideas for house designs.
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