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Posted 28 March 2014 - 05:13 AM

"Getting it out now helps compared to when others interupt, such as, recall a time when you were talking and somepony interrupted." Spitfire said.

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Posted 28 March 2014 - 11:07 AM

Brightest's sharp ears picked it up what Spitfire had said and he relaxed.

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Blastia shrugged, "Hmph, if you say so.." She turned back to her book and carried on reading.

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Posted 29 March 2014 - 11:04 PM

Shimmerspeed rolled her pencil around on the desk a little.
"Are you any good at this stuff, Hex?"

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Posted 01 April 2014 - 01:06 AM

Blastia finished the book she was reading, and began to draw. She smiled warmly as she got deeper into her work. The page was becoming a maze of curls and spirals, hard corners and straight lines. She looked at her work in progress, falling in love with it she titled it "Tarquraon, the Piller of Hope, a hope that one day all will unite under one name as friends, hoof in hoof." After her illustriously designed title was finished she continued her work.

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"It seems we can talk safely, so Lab um, what's up?" Brightest phrased the last part oddly, He was very unfamiliar with the phase.

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Posted 01 April 2014 - 03:01 AM

"I don't know. It's only second period and the first was me just writing and watching." Lab said.

Spitfire looked at the clock. "Stop what your doing now." She said.

Sew looked at Sweet, and raised an eyebrow.

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Posted 01 April 2014 - 03:17 AM

She just shrugged at Sew.

 

'What just happened?' she formed the words with her mouth.



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Posted 01 April 2014 - 03:26 AM

Brightest snapped to attention, sitting ridged in his seat.

 

Whereas Blastia slowly looked up from her drawing silently annoyed, as she put it into her satchel. Once finished she leaned back in her seat with a bored, detached attitude.



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Posted 01 April 2014 - 05:26 AM

Sew shrugged in return.

"This is, as the board said, Language Arts. As a few of you have asked me, that was as I call 'Grace Period' meaning, you can talk, read, fold paper, take a nap, whatever for a few minutes as the late students come in. Grace Period is every day. This does not mean to come in very late." Spitfire said. She got up and got some chalk. 'Do NOT come in after Grace Period without a pass.' Spitfire wrote on the board. "If you come in without a pass, you will be counted absent." She said calmly.

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Posted 01 April 2014 - 06:16 AM

She faced back at Sew.

 

"So... does this mean we're not going to learn anything from here," she asked. "It is free period, right?"



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Posted 01 April 2014 - 06:24 AM

"No, it's a few minutes I'm giving you to be a free period." Spitfire said. She sat back down. "Any other questions before I start class?" Spitfire asked.

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Posted 01 April 2014 - 10:21 AM

"What is the exact time length for the "Grace Period"?" Blastia asked.

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Posted 02 April 2014 - 10:21 PM

"Grace period is about three or four minutes unless it's a short day. In that case it's a minute or two." Spitfire said. "Any more questions?" She asked.

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Posted 03 April 2014 - 12:33 AM

Blastia shook her head, "No, ma'am."

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Posted 03 April 2014 - 04:17 PM

Shimmerspeed sat up properly and folded her wings up. She waited eagerly for the lesson to start.

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 08:10 AM

"Pre-tests! Fun. We're doing these for the first week or so so I don't review things too easy for you." Spitfire said. She handed them out to the students. "Start when you get your test. If you don't know it, put a frown face or 'I don't know' or something." Spitfire said. After the tests were all passed out, she went to her desk and began reading.

Sew started the test and quietly hummed a tune.

Lab started the quiz and went a little fast.

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 09:50 AM

"Heh, this will be fun," she muttered as she started scanning the test. 

 

Hmm, G. E. about Equestria... she thought. Thank you Guardian for this lesson.

 

She started scribbling down her answered.



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Posted 08 April 2014 - 12:22 PM

Shimmerspeed picked up her pencil in her mouth and started writing.
She took the occasional glance at other ponies but didn't want to be thought she was cheating so she put her head back down and answered each question.

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 02:14 PM

Brightest readied his pencil, calmed his thoughts, began the test.

Blastia grimaced at the test, 'Not fun, but really whatever.' She thought as she lazily worked her way through the test.

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 03:31 PM

Sew looked around the classroom as if the walls would give her inspiration. She looked back at her test and continued. 'This is mainly pretty easy.' Sew thought. ((Most of the things Spitfire says is what my humanities teacher has said or done.))

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Posted 10 April 2014 - 01:58 AM

Brightest went through the test slowly, he didn't get too much of the material, but thats why it was a pre-test he supposed, e was not meant to know these things right off the start.

 

Blastia however was answering each question with general ease, any question she didn't kno she would just put down a logical assumption as what she believed it would be. As part of one of her small quirks the more she focused the her wings started to expand, right know the were about at half length.



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Posted 11 April 2014 - 07:36 AM

"Don't talk or I assume you are a big giant cheater-face." Spitfire said. "When you are done with your test, put it on my desk." She said.

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Posted 11 April 2014 - 08:25 AM

After a few more minutes of scribbling, she finished the test. She went up to her desk and place her test paper.

 

"Done."

 

She then returned to her desk.



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Posted 11 April 2014 - 08:43 AM

Shimmerspeed finished her test and flew over to the desk silently.
"Done."
She put the test on the desk and sped back to her own. She reached into her saddlebag and brought out a Daring Do book. Daring Do and the Griffon's Goblet. She opened the book and started reading.

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Posted 11 April 2014 - 12:38 PM

After she saw everyone else finishing she dragged herself to the desk and laid the completed test out. She then recovered her sketch, and set to work.

Brightest slowly finished struggling at the more complex material. After work on through it he put the test on the table and sat down.

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Posted 11 April 2014 - 03:55 PM

Spitfire put her book away and started to grade the papers. "Blastia, can I talk to you for a minute?" She asked as she looked at Blastia's paper.

Lab finished and put it on the desk. He went back to his desk and started drawing.

Sew finished and put it on Spitfire's desk. She returned to her seat and read.

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Posted 11 April 2014 - 08:19 PM

Blastia set her drawing pencil down with an exasperated sigh, but stopped half way. 'Maybe my pretest was so bad the teacher is gonna kick me out! Yes!' She thought as she walked up to the desk barely containing her hopes.

Brightest looked at the approaching pony slightly in awe, 'compared to me she looks like she make a better Lunar Guard then me!' He thought slightly disappointed.

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Posted 12 April 2014 - 02:36 AM

"At first glance, it looks like you know all of the information on this page, did you know all of it?" Spitfire asked loud enough for just Blastia to hear. ((There's a kid in my class like that... I'm jealous of her...))

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 01:52 AM

((She is right at the teacher's desk you didn't have to say it aloud... plus she is based off of me.))

 

Blastia's hopes fell completely, "Wait? What?! No... No no I knew nothing, I thought I failed it!" Blastia facehoofed herself mentally, she did not mean to say that out loud. "I mean.... I tried my best?..." she blatantly lied.

 

Brightest's sharp ears angled towards the conversation, his slotted eye's narrowed in visible annoyance, 'How could someone try to fail on purpose... and fail that?' He was not annoyed by her lack of motivation, just at her failure to fail. "Baka..." He whispered to himself.

 

Blastia's equally sharp ears picked up on the comment, her slotted eyes' narrowed considerably at the insult, but she ignored it. the only visible sign of her annoyance was her slightly extended bat wings.

 

((The reasoning behind their appearance changes should unknown to anyone else, but feel free to comment on their looks.))



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 01:58 AM

"You purposely tried to fail?" Spitfire asked. "Go in the hallway, I need to talk with you." She said to Blastia.

Lab heard and raised an eyebrow. 'Now why in Celestia's name would she do that?!' He thought.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 02:22 AM

Brightest laid his head on a desk, 'Lunar Guard ponies like me are crazy...'

 

Blastia relaxed her eyes returned to normal as a plan worked up into her mind, 'Hah! if I act like a ne'er do well she'll get annoyed, and I'll be sent home for misconduct, Nailed It!' she thought, her wings extent, and her body shivered with excitement, "Sure teach, whateva." she said stupidly as she walked out to the hall. 



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 02:35 AM

Spitfire sighed as Blastia walked out. She got up and walked into the hallway. "Either you start doing things right or you get put into a lower leveled class. If that doesn't work, you'll be sent home and that'll ruin your life for Cloudsdale." Spitfire said to Blastia. "Got it?" She asked.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 02:52 AM

Blastia paused, "Ruin my life in Cloudsdale? What do you mean? I live in Las Pegasus, besides everyone there who knows me never expected me to do well in the first place, I'm only here because my mom wants me here. Everything I have in that class room is everything I brought, I never expected to stay here past the first day. I have a head for art and architecture, not a head in the clouds like my family or the rest of you pegasi. " Blastia said defensively. "So, getting kicked out will only benefit me, as it would free up more time from artistry, and creativity. Not flight formations or wing power." She finished.

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As soon as the left the room Brightest looked over at Lab, "That pegasus is a little like my sister. She as a goal for failure, but fails at failing. Smart and hard headed, she gonna try to defy the teacher at every turn, but ultimately fail at getting kicked out." he said, "Only difference is that my sister was way more vile, but strangely pleasant to be around. Curious."



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 02:57 AM

"If you want to be on the weather team they might see something like your lazy so they won't hire you. Good luck disappointing your mother." Spitfire said. "Oh, if you even do stay, at this rate you'd just get yourself a tutor teaching you things you already know." She said as she walked back in the classroom.

"Interesting. We'll talk later, who knows when the conversation will be over." Lab said.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:03 AM

Hex finished writing his name on his paper and walked up to spitfires desk and placed his test down on it returning to his seat, when he sat down he poked around in his bag until he pulled out one of the long books that he had put in it and buried his nose in it hoping he could finish it before the day was done.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:11 AM

Sweet tried to talk to Sew while Spitfire was out.

 

"So, how was the test?" she asked.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:13 AM

"Some of it was hard but mainly it was easy." Sew said to Sweet. "You?" She asked.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:31 AM

"Quite easy, I guess," she said. "My friend gave me a lecture about that, so I know it. Maybe I can beat Lab to being a top student."



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:33 AM

"Not in math, trust me." Sew said. She looked at the door.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:34 AM

"Weather team? As if, I don't share the same interests as other Pegasi, and my father said I am a creative Unicorn trapped in a superior Pegasus's body" she said, "besides my parents were disappointed in the fact that I am not like them. They never once expected me to succeed here, my mother lying in a hospital bed said so herself."

 

Brightest grew quite as he waited for class to start back up. He watched as the Pegasus who attempted to fail enter and pass by, their eyes connecting, His open and thoughtful, hers narrowed and cold.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:39 AM

"Heh, I can try," she said. "I was a star student back then. I'm not letting that down."



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 03:46 AM

((Guardian, three way thread hopping. I am stupid.))
"At least try to make your parents happy. I think you just can't do it. Your giving up when you haven't even tried." Spitfire said. 'Hopefully I encouraged her to stay and work hard.' She thought.

"Lab's talent is math, I don't think you can beat that." Sew said.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 04:35 AM

Blastia was confused, "Try to make my parents happy... but you think I can't do it? Thats what I have been saying... I can't, I'm not like them or you, My heart is EarthBound, not soaring high above. Those blockheads at home mostly pressured me to this. Ugh, why should you care, I am just another student, and there is a class in there you need to focus on more then just me." She said, now lost in her personal thoughts. as she left Spit fire entering the class room.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 04:59 AM

"We'll just have to wait and see," she said. "I'm also a wiz in Math, so don't doubt my skills. Plus, friendly competitions are great."



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 06:42 AM

'There goes my chance of her saying she thinks I have doubt in her.' Spitfire thought. "Have you at least tried to make them happy or proud?" She asked. "I was saying that you probably couldn't pass this class if you tried." Spitfire said. 'I might have lit the spark, let's find out.' She thought.

"Lab's cutie mark literally has a division sign on it, I don't know. We'll find out later." Sew said.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 09:05 AM

"Trust me," she said, smirking. "I'll give him a run for his money."



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 09:58 AM

"Anyways, what's new?" Sew asked.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 11:37 AM

"I really don't know," she said. "Judging by the fact Spitfire's having an outburst in the halls, That mare's failing."



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 01:56 PM

((There was a better angle fro Spitfire to approach this one, but I'll wrap it up now.))

 

"Reverse psychology then? I'm not stupid. I can see what you are attempting to do." Blastia closed er eyes concentrating, "So I honestly don't want to go home, but I don't want to stay here. But "here" doesn't have my parent's constant arguing with me over how I don't want to be 'part of the family tradition'... So I'll play this game, pass your little tests and stay here." She said decisively.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 04:01 PM

((I might have thought of it if I wasn't tired.))
"Now, do you want me to give you a new test where you actually try?" Spitfire asked.

"Maybe it's a motivational speech about failing." Sew laughed.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 05:03 PM

"Only if you have to." she resigned.

 

Brightest grimaced at the other student's comment.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 05:24 PM

Spitfire gave Blastia a new test and pointed to the desk in the hallway. She walked back into the class and sat back down. "If any of you have a spare blank book, bring it here tomorrow." Spitfire said.

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Posted 13 April 2014 - 09:39 PM

Blastia now looked at the test with a level of seriousness, it turned she did know the material. She quickly began answering each answer with relative ease silently luaghing at the test's seemingly inherent simplicity. As the questions increased with difficultly she gave closer looks to each question with out breaking her pace. Within a short period after Spitfire had left Blastia finished the test. She walk into the classroom quietly setting the test paper on the desk with a short grim look at it.



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Posted 13 April 2014 - 11:44 PM

"Now, I will give you sentences and you have to make a paragraph about it." Spitfire said as she passed papers out. She passed out index cards upside down with a sentence on it. ((It's just overused sentences like I was really scared, the snow was cold, the flowers were colorful, exc.))

Sew turned her index card over and started writing. She looked around the room for inspiration and then wrote more.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 12:44 AM

She just shrugged. As class was starting, she looked out at the sentences written on the board.

 

 

Again... Basic... she thought.



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 01:06 AM

"The story or paragraph must relate to the sentence." Spitfire said. "Like if you were in space, you wouldn't say anything about a walrus in the ocean." She said. "Have fun, and don't talk, others are working too." Spitfire said.

Lab started writing and took small breaks to think.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 01:18 AM

Brightest  took pause at the sentence he received, "I feel alive." He froze 'What could I do with this? everyone feels alive every... Luna.' He focused and began to write about what he had read in Luna's journal. as he wrote more a smile spead the best it could across his face as he enjoyed what he was writing.

 

Blastia  looked at the sentence assigned to her, "There I stood." She closed her eyes and opened them to looked at her current work in progress picture for inspiration. Her eyes where drawn to the top of a tower where a terrifying but awe-inspiring Pegasus mare stood at the top, unnoticed by the ponies below her at the base of the tower. She started to right a paragraph describing the event taking place at the tower.

 

((Are we to go into detail?))



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 01:33 AM

((Not yet, but save the ideas for later, I have a plan for them.))
Lab re-read his paragraph and made a few changes. He went on to the next paragraph.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 02:08 AM

Paragraph formation... Thanks Poet... she thought.

 

She started scribbling down paragraphs, making a story out of the sentences in front of her.

 

Hmm... Basically, I feel alive is an expression that means really happy. This is too easy!!

 

((She has lots of friends, Mainly my OCs))



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 02:10 AM

((Kay))

 

Brightest came out of his flurry of inspired writing to stretch his neck before falling back to his paper.

 

Blastia was balancing time carefully between completing her picture and the assignment. She took a moment to grimace to  at the fact her story was centering itself more than she preferred on the pony and not on the entire scene. She fixed it by only shrugging and continuing on with the story.



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 04:49 AM

"When you are done, look at your neighbor and see if they are finished, if they are, quietly give them your paper and have them read it, after that you evaluate them and tell them what they need to work on and what you liked about their paper." Spitfire said. She went back to her grading.

Lab looked at Brightest. He re-read his paper real quick.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 05:12 AM

Brightest was hesitant about putting the last period on his paper, it was a good stopping point but there was much more He wanted to say. With a resigned sigh he put down the period and made small edits and clarifications to the page, when he finished he looked at Lab as Brightest pushed his paper to the edge of his desk.

Blastia did a quick head count of the present ponies, and sat back as she counted six, making her seven, the odd one out. She shook her head and continued work.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 05:34 AM

((We will probably come back to the story later and there's other students there, but they're fake so just evaluate your own paper by a fake student.)) Lab passed Brightest his paper and grabbed Brightest's. ((Can you put in a spoiler what his says and I'll do the same. Also, Lab's and Sew's are based on ones in my class but Sew's is the one I did.
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I messed around with part of it but that's all I could remember. :/ The original was by a kid named Ethan.))

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 06:01 AM

"Here," she said, giving Sew her paper. "I'm not much of a writing freak, but my friend taught me the ropes."



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 06:33 AM

((Spoiler what it says so she can evaluate better.))
Sew passed Sweet hers and kept Sweet's paper. She started reading it.
((Here's Sew's, I did this at school and this is what I remember:
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That's about as far as I got in school, I might take a picture of the real thing and show you guys.))

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 07:08 AM

Shimmerspeed looked at her paper and chewed her pencil, thinking of what to write. Then some inspiration came to her and she wrote down a paragraph.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 07:23 AM

((Hmm... I think here's mine.

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"Hmm..." she said. "It's pretty nice."



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 05:32 PM

Brightest took Lab's paper and began to read it.

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Once Blastia finished both the drawing and the paper she looked it over herself.

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 10:32 PM

Lab read it and made a few edits. "There are a few things that need editing. Mainly a few spelling mishaps and capitalization." He said.

Sew made a few edits. "You could use a few more explanatory words, like at the end saying 'I was safe, for now.' Or something." She said

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 11:01 PM

"Oh, ok," she said, giving back her paper and taking hers. "Also, you should erase the words you crossed out. makes it more neat that way."

 

She began to edit hers.



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Posted 14 April 2014 - 11:11 PM

"This isn't the final copy anyways, I'm keeping it there just in case I decide I want that word again." Sew said. She started to edit her own paper again.

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Posted 15 April 2014 - 02:31 AM

Brightest nodded at Lab's comments, "Same to yours, but instead of capitalization its just punctuation."

 

Blastia put her paper down, adjusted a few details, clarified on others, and checked her spelling. Satisfied with her work she returned to her drawing.



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Posted 20 April 2014 - 09:16 PM

Shimmerspeed finished her paragraph and put her pencil down. She got out her book again and read it.

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Posted 11 May 2014 - 01:53 AM

"Thanks, anything else I need to work on?" Lab asked. He put punctuation where they were needed.

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Posted 11 May 2014 - 02:37 AM

"No, Not that I could see." Brightest said correcting his mistakes, Hey, where are we going after this? I didn't get to see the scheduled."

 

Happy with her line art she carefully began to clean it up erasing unnecessary marks, and removing pointless guidelines. after she had finished she began to pick from a flourish of colors as she began to fill in the design. 



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Posted 11 May 2014 - 05:31 AM

"I have no clue, I just follow the rest." Labyrinth said. "So, any clue on what you'd want to change with the school if you could?" He asked.

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Posted 11 May 2014 - 07:30 AM

"So sew," she whispered. "What's next after this?"



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Posted 11 May 2014 - 11:20 AM

"Nope, I haven't seen enough of it to dislike any of it." Brightest replied


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Posted 11 May 2014 - 03:22 PM

"Math." Sew replied. "Any idea of how hard it will be?" She asked.

"Well, that's nice to know." Lab said.

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Posted 12 May 2014 - 01:00 AM

"Well know it if we get there," she said. "I'm pretty good anyways."



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Posted 12 May 2014 - 10:25 PM

"Have fun competing against Lab." Sew said.

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 12:17 AM

((just me, but I think we should move on... in the class I mean.))

 

Blastia raised her hoof, bored with just sitting there.



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 12:18 AM

"You know I will," she said, giggling. "Time to make him sweat."



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 05:12 AM

"Oh really now? His talent is literally math!" Sew giggled. "He can do so many things that I can't comprehend." She continued.

Spitfire walked over to Blastia. "Yes?" She said.

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 06:38 AM

"I can at least give him a run for his bits," she said. "I'm pretty good myself."



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 12:40 PM

"What are we doing next?" Blastia asked, polite albeit bored.



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 10:59 PM

"Have fun with that." Sew said.

 

"I'll tell you when we get to that." Spitfire said. "Any more questions?" She asked.



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Posted 14 May 2014 - 01:37 AM

"No, I'll just wait till then," Blastia conceded.




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