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#1 Brightful

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 07:43 AM

Hai! I would like my Submission house to be Critiqued :D
The warp is: /warp s73
I have until 1/9/13 (9/1/13 for Canadian)
Which means only 2 days...
All feedback are welcomed as always :) Thanks for your time!

Ah, nevermind...


Edited by Sark of the Slough, 16 January 2013 - 11:40 PM.


#2 dazhito23

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 04:56 PM

This house is looking a lot better from the last time I checked this house, but now there's one more smaller annoyance I have with this house.

~The glass wall you built next to the stairs seems a little out of place. Generally any house, especially Ponyville houses, wouldn't have such walls unless there is some sort of framing, or some sort of interior wall that goes around the glass. If you can't get a good wall or framing, I recommend that you replace the wall with an interior wall.


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