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#1 Varisity

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    Hi, why are you are even looking here?

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Posted 22 March 2014 - 08:53 AM

Here's a story I've been working on. There is only the prologue currently. Part of Chapter One done!

Prologue:
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First Chapter
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Critique is welcome. Also, I know it's fast paced though the pace will slow down quite a bit during the first chapter.

Edited by Golden Sparks, 26 March 2014 - 07:34 AM.


#2 Varisity

Varisity

    Hi, why are you are even looking here?

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Posted 29 March 2014 - 07:04 AM

Second Chapter
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Edited by Golden Sparks, 29 March 2014 - 08:06 AM.



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