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#1 NotterribleIvan

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Posted 30 May 2014 - 04:02 PM

Last weeks/days I've been building a practice house and I need some feedback.

 

The house is at /warp Ivanpractice, I know it isn't supposed to be in that world, sorry for that. Next time I'll build it in the derp worlds.

 

If you don't feel like posting it all on the forums you can also tell it me personally if I'm on, or write it all inside an In-game book and put it in the mailbox in front of the house.

 

Thanks in advance, it's really appreciated.

 

 

Sincerely, -Ivan



#2 R9000

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Posted 30 May 2014 - 08:49 PM

Hello Ivan.

Please keep in mind that I am quite a new builder and this is my first critique, so you should get plenty of other builders' critiques too. That said, I'll do the best I can.

 

At a glance, it's a good start. But there's plenty of room for improvement.

 

Exterior:

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Interior:

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Overall, as I said, this is a good start, and you've got a lot of things right. Don't be discouraged by the bad points as I've been quite picky here. Just make sure you improve on them for next time. Also, to reiterate, always get as many critiques as possible (by asking politely of course). Good idea posting in the critique requests thread. If you need me to point out the location of, or elaborate on, anything I've said here, feel free to ask me in-game if I'm on. Best of luck!

 

-R9000


Edited by R9000, 30 May 2014 - 08:57 PM.


#3 The_Miner_Nick

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Posted 31 May 2014 - 12:56 AM

Ok, I haven't read any of R9000's critique, so some of mine might overlap, but here's what I think of the house:

 

 

Exterior:

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Interior:

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Overall:

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