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#1 Luigi

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Posted 29 March 2013 - 05:53 AM

The plot is s78. Looking forward to see what you think! :)



#2 Hazzat

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Posted 05 April 2013 - 09:49 PM

It's nearly there, but not quite. We'd like you to make some improvements please!

  • Things like a sofa right inside the entrance hall feel very strange. We see this sort of thing a lot - builders see empty space and want to fill it with furniture and they generally fill it with chairs. I know I wouldn't feel particularly relaxed or comfortable sitting on a sofa right opposite the front door. There's a similarly out-of-place chair/desk on the floor above.
  • The sandstone ceiling throughout doesn't look very nice. There's just sandstone everywhere
  • The kitchen and bathroom could be developed a bit more. The kitchen is quite simple and could do with some more countertops/cupboards. We nearly didn't notice he bathroom's bathtub because it's the same material as the rest of the floor. And the toilet is a hole in the ground...

You've been given another week to make your changes. When you're done, post in this topic again and we'll come looking.



#3 Luigi

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Posted 05 April 2013 - 09:56 PM

Ugh. Of all times my internet has to be acting up now (using my phone right now). I'll make the changes as soon as I can.

#4 Luigi

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Posted 06 April 2013 - 02:02 AM

Changes made.



#5 Hazzat

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Posted 07 April 2013 - 08:30 PM

Approved! :D




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