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#1 Cloudy Craft

Cloudy Craft

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Posted 11 October 2015 - 11:57 PM

Name:  Cloudy Craft

Gender: F

Race: Pegasus

Age: 12

Appearance: light blue fur (#5195ef) and very light purple, messy, bangs (#b5acfa). Her eyes base around a sea green (#42EFC4).

Cutie Mark and Special Talent: She doesn’t have a cutiemark yet, but her talent is cloud sculpting.

Personality: A cute little filly who loves the idea of the surface, though has never been there. She loves to play with clouds and wind, and is generally friendly. She hopes one day, before she dies, they can go back to the surface.

Biography: years after Typhon attacked, Her mother and her father met and had a short affair. After finding out she was pregnant, her father fled, not wanting to deal with a foal. Because of this, both she and her mother despise him. She grew up in a small pegasus only town, and learned her favorite pass time, sculpting clouds. Her Mother taught her about the surface, and since she had been mesmerized. When she turned 9 her father returned for a short period of time to meet her but was met with disgust and he left in less than 30 minutes. Since she turned 10 she has been exploring Symphoria, and now that she is 12 her mother decided she is old enough to visit the surface, but is very weary of going often.

Other: Though she may seem like she has lots of friends, she tends to stick to her own but she loves her friends and family more then anything.



#2 R9000

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Posted 04 November 2015 - 12:57 PM

Not sure why I didn't see this application earlier, thanks for being patient.

 

Premise is good, and it's always interesting to see hex codes for the colours you use. :) Unfortunately, the bio is quite bare-bones. Could you please flesh it out a bit, for example with some more story about Cloudy Craft? Maybe just a story about an interesting event that happened in her childhood. It doesn't have to be anything world-shaking, just something that affected her personality or development as a young filly, other than the obvious events with her father. Also watch out for some incorrect capitalisation, especially in the first sentence.

 

You can just edit your post here rather than making another thread.




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