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#1 Keldeo

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Posted 28 August 2014 - 10:08 PM

Hello!  I've built a couple of Ponyville style houses, and was planning on having it critiqued by all of you builders out there.  So this is just a note, I'm very new to this style of building, so if it's a bit messy / not flowy / complete junk, let me know how to fix it up!  I tend to overdetail things too, so please critique me on that if needed.  (There's more than one, so you can critique a couple more if you'd like.)

 

Also, the reason why I'm posting here is that I'd like to see from as many builders as possible if my builds are builder rank-worthy.

 

  Use /warp F1r3build to see my house(s) for yourself!

 

Pictures!

 

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#2 Spotsy

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Posted 28 August 2014 - 11:19 PM

someone correct me if im wrong on anything, but heres overall. (this is the first one your warp takes you to.)

 

Exterior:

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(lol shortness on exterior.)

 

Interior:

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That is all :3


Edited by Lux Jade, 28 August 2014 - 11:20 PM.


#3 Moshipig

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Posted 31 August 2014 - 03:53 AM

IMHO (In my humble opinion), the exterior of the house is just a bit too much. I do like the fact that you've added some unusual shapes, but it doesn't look quite right to me.

 

As for the interior, the way you've done the ceilings makes it feel a bit cramped.

 

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