My submission.
Started by Wuverul, Feb 22 2012 10:25 PM
11 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 22 February 2012 - 10:25 PM
I'll admit, I'm a bit scared to submit this (due to the 2 chance limit), but I figured that I might as well take a risk. I put my all into it, and that's the best I can do at this point, so I might as well send it in. After all, without taking risks you can't get anywhere.
Plot s52.
X= -117
Y=5.6
Z=-146
F=2
Plot s52.
X= -117
Y=5.6
Z=-146
F=2
#2
Posted 23 February 2012 - 01:05 PM
Hold on, guys. Just noticed a HUGE error in my house. Modifying.
#3
Posted 23 February 2012 - 02:02 PM
Alright. Everything is fixed up and ready to go! :3
#4
Posted 23 February 2012 - 02:26 PM
One more quick change.
Alright. Put in the room I forgot. XD
..Experimenting with different materials >.>
Alright. Put in the room I forgot. XD
..Experimenting with different materials >.>
#5
Posted 23 February 2012 - 02:48 PM
ALRIGHT. This time it should be alright.
#6
Posted 23 February 2012 - 08:37 PM
We think this house can be brought up to standard, but you have quite a bit of work to do on it. I'll make some suggestions here, and you can get some tips from builders in game. Maybe take a look around /warp suburbs for inspiration too.
The outside does not look great. The shape is fine, but without any log beams in the wall it doesn't look much like the hosues in Ponyville. The hedges running all the way around it at each level also don't look good, and the red flowers are a bit excessive too. The place the roof merges into the wall also looks very odd.
Inside was better, but you spoiled it a bit with the very quirky furniture. The waterfall over the fire and the thing that was like a mass of enchanting tables are not features we would expect to find in a typical Ponyville house. The paintings everywhere are a bit excessive, and the bedroom feels rather bare.
Please work on the house some more, and post again here when you have made your changes and would like us to take a final look at it.
The outside does not look great. The shape is fine, but without any log beams in the wall it doesn't look much like the hosues in Ponyville. The hedges running all the way around it at each level also don't look good, and the red flowers are a bit excessive too. The place the roof merges into the wall also looks very odd.
Inside was better, but you spoiled it a bit with the very quirky furniture. The waterfall over the fire and the thing that was like a mass of enchanting tables are not features we would expect to find in a typical Ponyville house. The paintings everywhere are a bit excessive, and the bedroom feels rather bare.
Please work on the house some more, and post again here when you have made your changes and would like us to take a final look at it.
#7
Posted 23 February 2012 - 08:42 PM
Just to make sure of something, when I resubmit, will that could as my second chance out of our two, or still part of my first?
#8
Posted 24 February 2012 - 10:38 PM
This would still be considered part of your first chance.
#9
Posted 25 February 2012 - 02:07 AM
Alright.. I completely redid nearly all the furniture, removed most of the paintings, and changed the exterior design. Hope this fits better! :3
#10
Posted 26 February 2012 - 02:21 AM
Hold on, fixin some stuff up
Alright.
Alright.
#11
Posted 26 February 2012 - 02:47 AM
Everything should be ready.
#12
Posted 26 February 2012 - 09:25 PM
Rejected.
The house hasn't really improved much. The house is still too square, the rooms are still too big and the whole place is still too open-plan.
Next time, don't just make a square inside the plot to build on. Go for a more irregular shape, and don't make it as tall. 3-block high ceilings are all you need.
You can try again in a week.
The house hasn't really improved much. The house is still too square, the rooms are still too big and the whole place is still too open-plan.
Next time, don't just make a square inside the plot to build on. Go for a more irregular shape, and don't make it as tall. 3-block high ceilings are all you need.
You can try again in a week.
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