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#1 Galaxy_Thomas

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Posted 26 September 2013 - 05:00 PM

plot s66

 



#2 hxfthxft

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Posted 28 September 2013 - 02:13 PM

There are some problems with this house so we can't approve it as it is. We'd like you to work on it a little more please, to fix the problems we noticed.
 
The shape of the house was alright but if you remove the overhangs, it would be blank and boring. Please think of something else to improve the exterior walls. The decoration of the exterior walls was seriously lacking, we'd like to see something other than just blank walls. 
Same goes for the interior. It needs some work too. Most of the rooms had furniture that were out of theme. And some rooms didn't make sense. Like the attic for eg.
 
We have given you another week to work on the house. Please take as much time as you need to make changes in line with the feedback we've given you. Don't forget you can ask other builders for feedback before you submit. Post a reply here when you're ready for a second review. 
 
You might want to take a look at the houses in /warp ponyville and the furniture designs in /warp ikea to get some ideas.


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Posted 29 September 2013 - 04:50 PM

you told me i stil have a week to improve my house but now im freebuilder on the server so i cant work on it is this normal or so i need to ask an admin for cmc again

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Posted 02 October 2013 - 04:41 PM

Sorry about that, I have given you another week to work starting now.



#5 Galaxy_Thomas

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 03:14 PM

im ready for another review plot s66

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Posted 19 October 2013 - 06:14 PM

i dont know if you saw my previous post but this one is just to make sure.
Im ready for another review plot s66

#7 Seabreeze

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Posted 09 November 2013 - 09:28 PM

We are rejecting this. Most of the interior and the furniture still doesn't make much sense. For example, there are no cupboards or a sink or hard surfaces in the kitchen, just a stove and a fridge. Staircases do not go in bedrooms, nor are DJ booths appropriate for an attic.




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