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Yo Everypony! I've Finished! /w s9


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#1 Sidicle

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Posted 23 December 2015 - 12:13 AM

Hello ponies of the server! I have finished my submission build! I worked really hard on it and would like you guys to check it out. I hope you all enjoy what I have created and I hope that you guys have fun! My warp is /w s9 so go down there and have a look to judge it!

Thank you for reading!

I hope you enjoy your day!

From Sidicle the Dwarf Pony!  :roll:



#2 R9000

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Posted 23 December 2015 - 01:08 AM

Hi! Well done, your house was approved!

Your house had an interesting original shape, and your use of furniture was varied and interesting. Your layout was generally well-thought out, and adequately filled.

A couple of things to improve:

-Some of your interior placement was a little odd. One of your shelves and a chest seemed inaccessible due to staircases.

-3-block-tall windows are a bit big if you use a lot. They're allowed, but don't use too many.

-Your roof is a little bit of a strange shape. Less of an 'A frame' and more of a dome.

-One of your walls is completely blank from the outside.




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