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R9000's CMC Submission: Critique Request


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#1 R9000

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Posted 20 May 2014 - 12:17 AM

Hi all, my house is at /w s72.

Any and all critiques would be greatly appreciated. Please include any problems you find, and any suggested improvements, including matters of personal preference and such. I would like to get this house as close to perfect as possible, so please be as nitpicky as you can. If in dire need, I can completely redesign in the time I have left.
Please leave your critiques on this thread, or in the mailbox next to the house, or of course tell me in chat if I'm on. I would like to get as many critiques as possible.
I really appreciate your time, help and criticism.

-R9000



#2 Jay Gatsby

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    Brohoof's Very Own Gatsby

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Posted 20 May 2014 - 03:51 AM

Your building style is oddly close to mine. Since my building style is awesome, I think your house is awesome.

 

Just kidding... Not about your house, but my ego. No house is without sin, so here we go

 

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#3 Squint

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Posted 20 May 2014 - 05:06 PM

This is a very nice build. The ground floor, however, ought to be split up instead of being open-plan or have some form of separation that isn't just the fences. Perhaps a half wall or some columns would do the trick. However, this is a really great build overall and you'd pass!




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