Hey all! I'd really like my plot to be checked out, I haven;'t had all the time yet but as far as I know that doesn't matter. My Plot number is s51. I know you might not but I'm going to ask, can I keep my house so I can make it on another server, it's my best house I've ever made and it kinda means alot. Thanks for reading!
Humphreydumpty
My submission
Started by Humphreydumpty, May 03 2012 04:32 PM
6 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 03 May 2012 - 04:32 PM
#2
Posted 05 May 2012 - 01:25 PM
Rather than simply passing or failing this as it is we'd like you to improve it please, we can see it has potential.
The look of the outside is mostly good. But the pyramid shape of the roof at the back is not something we'd expect to see on a Ponyville house, a gabled style of roof would be better here. The walls could possibly use a bit more detail.
Inside we'd like you to split up the space a bit better, each floor is mostly a single large room. Some of your decorations are good, but the bedroom makes no sense at all, so we'd recommend you redo that floor completely. Maybe take some advice from other builders while you work.
The look of the outside is mostly good. But the pyramid shape of the roof at the back is not something we'd expect to see on a Ponyville house, a gabled style of roof would be better here. The walls could possibly use a bit more detail.
Inside we'd like you to split up the space a bit better, each floor is mostly a single large room. Some of your decorations are good, but the bedroom makes no sense at all, so we'd recommend you redo that floor completely. Maybe take some advice from other builders while you work.
#3
Posted 05 May 2012 - 02:32 PM
Ok, will do! Thanks for not failing it, I'll get on soon when it isn't full and edit it!
EDIT:It's been a week, so my time is up.
EDIT:It's been a week, so my time is up.
Edited by Humphreydumpty, 05 May 2012 - 02:32 PM.
#4
Posted 05 May 2012 - 02:33 PM
I added another week to your account.
#5
Posted 05 May 2012 - 04:24 PM
Thanks =D
#6
Posted 11 May 2012 - 05:50 PM
Please may my house be re examined, thanks
#7
Posted 11 May 2012 - 07:30 PM
We are accepting this house, but in the future you should make your bedrooms better. It makes no sense for it to be filled with cobwebs.
Edited by Tsarbomb, 11 May 2012 - 07:31 PM.
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