Could a builder please critique my house for me? I know it's kind of odd but it's how I like it

Posted 19 January 2016 - 08:35 AM
Could a builder please critique my house for me? I know it's kind of odd but it's how I like it

Posted 20 January 2016 - 05:10 PM
First of all, the house is extremely small for this size of the plot. You took at least 1/4 of the plot to make a garden which is not recommended. If you really need a garden, smaller shapes will do.
The exterior walls do not indicate where the first and second floor would be, as seen from outside (the log pillars). This is something that is used in many ponyville houses therefore it's recommended.
The proportion of windows won't cut it. Additionally, the windows feel naked as they don't have covers (or in other words, trapdoors).
The overhangs are solely dependent on wooden fences. I don't think they're strong enough to carry the weight of overhanging rooms.
The roof needs to be steeper than it is now, as the house looks too small in comparison to regular ponyville houses. Also, the roofs on the overhanging walls are cut off.
What's the use of hay blocks under the overhangs? Change that to a sitting area with benches or something. The garden of tulips itself is plain with just one colour and it does show that you didn't put much effort.
Now, moving on to the interior... I nearly died. I thought you requested critique because the house was finished. But I don't know what to think anymore.
Lack of interior will get you automatically denied - This brings me to a question: Have you ever looked at ponyville houses on our server?
Let me remind you, bathroom, kitchen, living area and a bedroom are basic necessities for an interior in case you can't fit any extra purpose rooms.
The attic should not be left to the yellow roof as the ceiling - Admins dislike the feel of the interior being unfinished.
Also please do remember to balance the yellow carpet with wooden floor - By that I mean, there should be wooden floor visible.
My overall advice for now is to visit /w ponyville and have a good look around both exteriors and interiors of ponyville houses. Ciao.
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