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#1 Xonmean

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Posted 30 March 2013 - 05:11 PM

I've got a house in submission at plot s73 (/w s73) That I've been working on for the past couple of days (I started about 10:00 PM Thursday.) I'm especially worried about my exterior, I've gotten some feedback from Liiink and Cheezman already, but I am always welcome to more

Changes I made from original build (Updated 4/2)

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Outside the house (updated 3/31)
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Living Room
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Kitchen/Dining Room/Entry Room
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2nd Floor
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Attic Playroom
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IN THE BATHROOM -ding-
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(3/31) - Responded to Cyborganic_Pies suggestions, feel free to tell me more would just reply, but thread says I'm not allowed so I'll just edit as necessary. (also I misspelled "necessary" so bad it suggested carsickness. Wat.) All Edits will have a date next to them, in chronological order
(3/31) - Also, Just in case anyone needs to know, my due date is April 4th, Thursday
(4/1) - Thank you Xeadin for reviewing my house. 
(4/2) - RedHolm gave me many needed pointers, thank you so much!

Sorry for the spoiler tag spam, but there are many screenshots in them. Modified to add the photos.
Once more the warp/plot number is s73


Edited by Xonmean, 04 April 2013 - 01:55 AM.


#2 Cyborganic_Pies

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Posted 31 March 2013 - 05:37 PM

Okay! I'll give you some feedback!

Exterior:

Well, overall, its nice- but I think you should change somethings: You have supports made of fence, personally I don't like this because it looks to stringy and as though it wouldn't be able to support the weight above it, I recommend supports coming from the wall instead of stilts. Some of your windows look a little odd and a bit too large. I see roofs like yours often, and it probably won't be a problem, but it looks too structural- remember, the roofs are made of hay. Also, the roofs in the show are gabled or A frame, yours curves inwards.

Interior:

Your interior is actually quite good, I could only find a few problems: I don't like the stairs on the second floor that are made of steps, I think if you are going to do a spiral staircase, your floor is already wood so I would continue to use that with the staircase. Your only bathroom is in the attic, I would recommend putting it on the first floor or on the second floor, you have quite a big house so moving this wouldn't be a problem. Your flooring is an unusual choice, are you sure about logs and cobblestone? I like your bedroom and your dining room and it does look good.

 

Good luck! I hope this helps.



#3 Xeadin

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Posted 02 April 2013 - 12:36 AM

Taken a look at it in-game, and it looks like you have made much better improvements since Cyborganic_Pies review.




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