Well, I finaly finished it.
After 2 hours of work
Here is where you can find it, I wrote down the Astronomical Cordinates.
X - 158
Y - 71
Z - 151
Well, I hope its good!
Eldar Moonshine's house Submission
Started by Eldar Moonshine, Nov 17 2011 10:04 PM
6 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 17 November 2011 - 10:04 PM
#2
Posted 17 November 2011 - 10:20 PM
Well, congrats! We can't even decide!
Lets go over this one. The exterior, blew me away! I really liked this one! awesome job! everything was symmetrical, and well planned! Bonus points for that!
The interior, not so amazing. The first thing that caught my eye was the carpet. It was not bad, but it was different. Climbing the ladder, so see that it does not really go anywhere, is kind of disappointing. The first floor has everything presses against the wall, which makes everything look empty. I like the idea how you have the house split up! Nice idea! But what were you planning to do with this room? As I mentioned before, the room looked empty. I thought there would be a kitchen, which is not a good thing to lack. The house itself is enormous! The ceiling lasts forever! And then I saw your beds.. That is not a good way of placing your beds. I would hate to toss and turn, and fall off of that thing! It was unique and creative, but I really think you should reconsider.
My recommendations, make a second floor! You have TONS of space to do so! You can even make a couple rooms into some pretty awesome bedrooms! I would like to see a kitchen as well! I know you can fit one in! If you would like any interior designing ideas, don't be afraid to take a look around Northern Ponyville!
We are going to go ahead and let you retry immediately. This has too much potential! Post back when you are done! You can do it!
Lets go over this one. The exterior, blew me away! I really liked this one! awesome job! everything was symmetrical, and well planned! Bonus points for that!
The interior, not so amazing. The first thing that caught my eye was the carpet. It was not bad, but it was different. Climbing the ladder, so see that it does not really go anywhere, is kind of disappointing. The first floor has everything presses against the wall, which makes everything look empty. I like the idea how you have the house split up! Nice idea! But what were you planning to do with this room? As I mentioned before, the room looked empty. I thought there would be a kitchen, which is not a good thing to lack. The house itself is enormous! The ceiling lasts forever! And then I saw your beds.. That is not a good way of placing your beds. I would hate to toss and turn, and fall off of that thing! It was unique and creative, but I really think you should reconsider.
My recommendations, make a second floor! You have TONS of space to do so! You can even make a couple rooms into some pretty awesome bedrooms! I would like to see a kitchen as well! I know you can fit one in! If you would like any interior designing ideas, don't be afraid to take a look around Northern Ponyville!
We are going to go ahead and let you retry immediately. This has too much potential! Post back when you are done! You can do it!
#3
Posted 17 November 2011 - 10:24 PM
Thank you!
Now i thought the exterior needed mroe flavor to it
I will add on to the interrior, carpet was a combination of my 2 favorite colors. Second, I am going to edit the second level so its more of an extra "Multipurpose" Room. That was just a little relaxation shack.
And to fall off that bed would be TERRIBLE, So i edited that as well!
I expect to have a second floor soon.
And no, Im not done, I just posted the reply.
Well thanks for the feedback!
Now i thought the exterior needed mroe flavor to it
I will add on to the interrior, carpet was a combination of my 2 favorite colors. Second, I am going to edit the second level so its more of an extra "Multipurpose" Room. That was just a little relaxation shack.
And to fall off that bed would be TERRIBLE, So i edited that as well!
I expect to have a second floor soon.
And no, Im not done, I just posted the reply.
Well thanks for the feedback!
#4
Posted 17 November 2011 - 11:35 PM
Quick question though, Did this count as one of my reveiws? Because you guys didnt reject it, Do i still have my 2 reveiws? or do i one because of how it wasnt accepted yet?
#5
Posted 17 November 2011 - 11:36 PM
You haven't been rejected, so this doesn't count as one of your reviews. If you get rejected this time, you still have one more go.
#6
Posted 17 November 2011 - 11:38 PM
Thanks, Well my house is ready for inspection, Come on and teleport to me, Im right outside it.
And yes, this IS eldar moonshine!
And yes, this IS eldar moonshine!
#7
Posted 17 November 2011 - 11:54 PM
Accepted!
One thing to note though, some better planning might be useful in the future; the rooms themselves look okay, but their location in the house is a bit awkward. For instance, kitchens do not go on the top floor. Other than that, you're good.
One thing to note though, some better planning might be useful in the future; the rooms themselves look okay, but their location in the house is a bit awkward. For instance, kitchens do not go on the top floor. Other than that, you're good.
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