Hi Please help me my plot is
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Please help me im a really bad builder
Help
Started by Willbonsle123, Jan 04 2013 09:33 AM
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#1
Posted 04 January 2013 - 09:33 AM
#2
Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:59 AM
Ok, first of all, it helps if you don't say things like you're a bad builder, it makes you look like you don't care. You're asking people to devote their time into looking at your building and trying to find practical tips to give. If you don't care enough to try hard, then its kind of rude to ask us to do all this work for someone that doesn't care. Show us you care!
I'll add something to the info post about this.
I'll add something to the info post about this.
#3
Posted 04 January 2013 - 11:48 PM
Okay, the first thing about this house that I noticed is the fact that the door is incredibly hidden. I had to circle around the house a couple times to find it. Secondly, the house is fairly empty. Third: I'd recommend looking at how some of the ponyville houses use windows. I also wouldn't recommend the the rectangular windows.
Although, in my opinion I do think the exterior is very good (other than the windows).
Also, not a huge fan of the compliment fishing your doing with that sign. However, I wouldn't just take my opinion, since I'm not the best at ponyville houses myself.
Although, in my opinion I do think the exterior is very good (other than the windows).
Also, not a huge fan of the compliment fishing your doing with that sign. However, I wouldn't just take my opinion, since I'm not the best at ponyville houses myself.
Edited by NICOLAS CAGE, 04 January 2013 - 11:56 PM.
#4
Posted 05 January 2013 - 12:54 AM
[any locations will be given relative to the front of the plot.}
Exterior
> The house consists of two intersecting rectangles--very plain architecture.
> The chimney is massive
> The walls are very plain. Your combination of sand and sandstone does little to add detail.
> The general shape of the roof is correct but it was poorly executed.
> Most Ponyville houses have a whitewashed look to them. You should try using oak logs (17) instead of the darker spruce logs for the framing.
> The house lacks detail. The windows are scarce and there is absolutely nothing to break the "flatness" of the walls.
> The door was difficult to find. It looks more like a door out to a backyard than a front door.
> There are no areas in the plot dedicated to something besides the house--such as a garden.
> It would look much better if the path leading to the house were connected to the door.
Interior
> the 1st floor is one big room. This is okay if done properly, but you haven't.
> there is very little color variety--it is mostly shades of brown.
> The little furniture there is is bad. Try /warp Ikea to get ideas for furniture.
> Nothing that you would expect in a house is present--kitchen, dining room, bathroom, etc.
> The fireplace is unrealistic, obtrusive, and ugly.
> The windows are too large. They don't belong in a house set in the medieval time period.
Recommendations
> The interior needs to be completely redesigned.
> The shape of the house needs to be modified.
Verdict
In its current state, this house will NOT pass. I strongly recommend heavy modification before you submit otherwise you won't pass.
Additional notes
Your negative attitude will severely impede your ability to build a submission house that is up to standards.
Exterior
> The house consists of two intersecting rectangles--very plain architecture.
> The chimney is massive
> The walls are very plain. Your combination of sand and sandstone does little to add detail.
> The general shape of the roof is correct but it was poorly executed.
> Most Ponyville houses have a whitewashed look to them. You should try using oak logs (17) instead of the darker spruce logs for the framing.
> The house lacks detail. The windows are scarce and there is absolutely nothing to break the "flatness" of the walls.
> The door was difficult to find. It looks more like a door out to a backyard than a front door.
> There are no areas in the plot dedicated to something besides the house--such as a garden.
> It would look much better if the path leading to the house were connected to the door.
Interior
> the 1st floor is one big room. This is okay if done properly, but you haven't.
> there is very little color variety--it is mostly shades of brown.
> The little furniture there is is bad. Try /warp Ikea to get ideas for furniture.
> Nothing that you would expect in a house is present--kitchen, dining room, bathroom, etc.
> The fireplace is unrealistic, obtrusive, and ugly.
> The windows are too large. They don't belong in a house set in the medieval time period.
Recommendations
> The interior needs to be completely redesigned.
> The shape of the house needs to be modified.
Verdict
In its current state, this house will NOT pass. I strongly recommend heavy modification before you submit otherwise you won't pass.
Additional notes
Your negative attitude will severely impede your ability to build a submission house that is up to standards.
Edited by Laser_Lens_4, 05 January 2013 - 12:56 AM.
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