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#1 Xenos

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Posted 20 July 2013 - 11:29 PM

I'm currently writing a fanfic giving backstory for my three Roleplay characters, Eclipse, Leo, and Blood Moon. It is a story of love, of war, of hatred and harmony, where the three, having left each other in their childhood, come back together to fight a foe greater than any of them could face alone.

I'm going to start posting them here, hopefully, once a week, and a chapter each week, or whenever I get a new chapter available. Criticism is by all means welcome, for that is how a writer grows and flourishes.



#2 Xenos

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Posted 22 July 2013 - 09:44 PM

            Leo walked up to Celestia’s library, and nodded to the guards, who opened the door for him. He passed through a ray of sunlight slanting in through the window as he stepped forward, and it glinted yellow off the golden color of his crown. He heard the sound of rustling pages, and as he stepped in, he saw Celestia, sitting at the table, reading a book. He continued to walk forward, and she looked up, smiling as she saw him. “Hello, Leo” she said softly. They touched horns with each other as he stepped up to sit beside her, and he smiled, looking back to the book. “I see you’re reading the book Kathrin wrote.” “Yes. I am. It’s a very interesting read” she said. Leo smiled again, his purple eyes glinting. “Yes.. it is always a good idea to reflect on one’s past”. “Could you read it for me?” She asked. “I enjoy having you read to me, especially since you can imitate voices so well” “Certainly, my dearest.” He replied, smiling, as he started to read.


Edited by Golden Mane, 22 July 2013 - 09:45 PM.



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