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#1 SparkleUnidog

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Posted 18 December 2015 - 12:52 AM

Hello, I'm posting a thread to confirm my completion of my Sub-house, ready to be inspected!

 

In-Game-Name: Sparkleunidog

World: Submission World

Plot number: Plot s56

 

Extra: I have built some of the house on/over the yellow lines of the plot

 

I hope I have done this correctly - apologies if I haven't.

 

Thank you in advance for giving it a look :)



#2 R9000

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Posted 19 December 2015 - 08:56 PM

Hi, sorry but we're rejecting your house this time.

It's definitely a very good start, but the style isn't what we're looking for. The shape mostly consists of one block, with a few little extensions and added details. Usually we look for houses with a more interesting shape and structure. The windows are also a little odd, as most seem to be only one block tall. Windows are usually at least 2 blocks tall on Ponyville houses.

Your furniture also seems very basic. Your kitchen and bathroom look good, but most of the rooms could use some more details to make them look more liveable. The use of wool for carpet is also largely needless now that we have proper carpet in vanilla now, I'd suggest using mainly wood for the floor, and only putting carpet where you need to.

 

Overall, it was a good attempt, just not quite what we were looking for. Don't be discouraged, and check out the houses in /warp ponyville again before you take another attempt.




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