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#1 Arne30maart

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Posted 07 January 2013 - 06:20 PM

check it please :)



#2 Luna Lens

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Posted 07 January 2013 - 07:51 PM

Exterior

> The roof is okay, but ir might benefit from a steeper slope (2/1) in some places.

> The exterior is repetitive with all the windows, framing and flower pots.

>^ There are way too many flower pots on the windows.

> The shape is good, but the walls are flat.

 

Interior

> The main are/sitting room is a bit empty

> the kitchen is okay.

> the furniture is very basic. Try /warp Ikea for furniture ideas.

> the 2nd floor layout is rather awkward.

 

Recommendations

> Modify the exterior to add contour. The shape itself is okay.

> refurnish 1st and 2nd floor.

 

Verdict

This house is somewhere between fail and improve mainly because of the interior, but you will need to concentrate both on the inside and outside in order to pass. 




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