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#1 Aria

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Posted 07 April 2014 - 08:14 AM

Other than Equestria, there were different worlds. One was the mysterious "Hidden Key" in which was divided into three certain tribes. The Tribe of Crowded Water, Sunning Rock, and Crooked Tree. But then, a new days dawns, blustery and freezing. Without a doubt, winter has now swept across the land.

Occasional snowfalls lightly coat the ground in a white powder; something a Tribe's pony has never seen before. Strong, bitter winds blast across the territories, and each night the ground of covered with sparkling frost. At night, the temperatures drop to below freezing, and the cold air creeps into the campsites. Herbs have shriveled up and died, making the ponies vulnerable to sickness. No pony left the area, since the tribes has stored food throughout the past seasons. As always, this season promises hardships and difficulties for both the Tribe ponies.There is currently peace between the Tribes, and no battles have started.

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1. No god modding! God modding is when your character acts unnaturally perfect, in a way that they cannot ever be harmed and can do any task flawlessly.
2. No controlling other roleplayers' characters! Always ask your fellow roleplayers what they are and aren't comfortable with!
3. If you have a question please ask me and I will try to answer you as much as I can.
4. Cursing is allowed, but please don't go overboard with it!
5. Please wait for mating season before finding a mate. You may flirt before mating season, though.
6. If someone's character does not like yours, it does not mean the actual person doesn't like you! It is just roleplaying.
7. This is a literate group! That means you must be able to roleplay with more than 3 sentences!
8. No text language! That means you must spell words as accurately as you can.
9. Respect all roleplayers!
10. Your character's name MUST mean something in the language Swahili! You may use Google Translate if needed.
11. No 'perfect' characters or completely 'evil' characters either! Give your character different personalities.
12. No more than three accessories please.
Please join! :)

Edited by Aria, 08 April 2014 - 01:25 PM.


#2 jimme neutron corndog

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Posted 08 April 2014 - 03:15 AM

I cant read this, the letters are to small and thin, really?

#3 Aria

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Posted 11 April 2014 - 10:59 AM

((I am going to start it now...))

 

A wisp of cold air sweeps across the snow, caressing his pale cheeks with an icy, light scented touch and he silently heaves a deep sigh. The warm breath freezes the moment it touches the sudden drop of temperature of the outside world, trailing a swirl in midair in the form of a miniature puff of cloud. Outside their camp territory, the once colour-dyed world has all been painted by a shade of pure white snow, solemn, tranquil and clean. Without enough heat of sunlight warming the land, the world feels even colder than it should be for the time.

 

It was morning, as usual Kafil woke before the stars had gone to sleep whilst the sun rose in far horizon. He yawned, stretching  and giving himself a grooming before walking around the village. He levitated his scarf and wrapped it all around his neck. He set off to the village, saying quiet good morning to those who were waking,  ponies setting out to take the place of those who watched the village on night guard. Though sleep ached at their half lidded eyes and hunger growled at their bellies, they still went on about their duties. Kafil smiled but it was plainly clear in his eyes how worried he was for the tribe's survival. He went back to his home.

 

He sighed, watching figures walk out into the morning light and he turned, walking past the patch of land that held a few wheat and daffodils. Kafil grabbed some and held them in his magical grip. From there he walked to his cottage, in where Kafil and his tyro lived. It had been made when she had first decided to join, giving her the space she needed away from judging eyes as she was first brought in. He often wondered if she ever wanted to join the other tyros in the Tyro House, but to this thought he felt an ashamed protective thought, hinting at a strange possessive feeling. He entered and went up the stairs. He opened the door, opposite to his, and walked in. He placed some daffodils on her bed table and turned on her fireplace. Kafil went beside her bed, where she slept. He liked being near her, and to this he shook his head clearing it once more. “She is only my tyro...nothing more”. He settled himself just beside her bed, figuring he'd wait for her to wake up. Kafil suddenly remembered, he had mentioned to her that they would be setting out for some journey the night before.

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afil sat thinking of where he could bring her. The ways of a sentry were often simple enough but danger could turn a simple watch dangerous. His tail curled around him, hunger nagging at his belly, and decided to eat a few daffodils in his magical grip. That held his stomach, as he waited for his dear Yamile to wake up.

 

{Sorry if it's so long...}



#4 ۞ єтєяηαℓ ԍαℓαχу ۞

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Posted 11 April 2014 - 12:20 PM

Yamile woke up to see her mentor, Kafil. Her eyelids slowly fluttered open as she let out a small soft yawn. He always seemed to smile when he saw her and, lowered his ears, "Good Morning Yamile... Ready for some training...?" Kafil walked towards the door. Yamile whispered a soft 'Morning' in response. The cream pony had became one with the tribe just late Spring, and was given the room beside him as to avoid conflict or discomfort with the other tribe members. That was the original worry, now though, there was little to no longer any tension between the once rogue pony with Sunning Rock's members.
She was accepted as one when she officially became a sentry tyro five moons after her joining. She walked over towards her mentor before tilting her head up. Her amethyst eyes shifted towards the unicorn as she glanced down on his now thinner figure, the weather had not been kind onto the land's creatures, their tribe was not facing much of a famine, due to the food stored up by members of Sunning Rock.
Although everypony could be hungry or starved at some point, Yamile being little in size only needed little to eat and to fuel her energy. Kafil, in contrast, with a larger body size, definitely needed more food which they were quite having. She secretly wondered if it would affect his health much. She hoped not.

“Get those daffodils before you starve, Yamile.”
“How about you?”
“I’m alright. I had just finished.”
“Okay.”
She held the daffodils in her magical grip and munched them. She levitated her shawl and placed it over her neck and shoulders. It’s lavender color seemed as if it was glowing.
“By the way, where are we going, Kafil?”
“You’ll see, dear Tyro.”
The equine poured water on her fireplace and the fire ceased. They went out of her room and down the stairs. Kafil was certainly worried about the tribe. “Stay here, I need to check something outside.” He looked off to the center of town. He suddenly said, “Let’s go.” She grabbed their saddlebags, which had some water, a few daffodils, and some hoodia. They were on a long trip.

(( I talked to Aria and she said that no one gets their gift until they go to the Whispering Waterfall or something... I also need to go to the province for one week so sorry if I don't respond fast... :( ))

Edited by ۞ єтєяηαℓ ԍαℓαχу ۞, 12 April 2014 - 02:58 AM.


#5 Aria

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Posted 12 April 2014 - 03:02 AM

((Yeah))

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Posted 19 April 2014 - 01:09 AM

The wind was strong and everypony were gathered around the big bonfire. The duo went down to a big waterfall which was warm. It was the so called Whispering Waterfall.

Edited by Aria, 19 April 2014 - 01:11 AM.


#7 deeperhau5pony

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Posted 19 April 2014 - 01:47 AM

what is this?? how does it work?



#8 мαяє-ισиєттє

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Posted 19 April 2014 - 01:49 AM

Trembling of the cold, Parafujo blew onto her icy hooves. Snuggling herself deeper into her yellow woolen quilt, she counted the sparks that the fire shot out.

1, 2.  She heard the wind whistling and the snow blow off the trees. She covered her ears with her cracked hooves. 3. An icicle cracked and was blown into the wind, outside in the clearing. She knew it was safer in the denser trees, where the snow was blocked somewhat. 4, 5. A bird shrieked in the distance, probably an infant born early in this horrible time.

 

The fire began to die down, to a point where there was more smoke than actually heat being produced. Still wrapped in her quilt, Parafujo stalked slowly to the pile of dried assorted needles of conifer trees. She bent over, huddling in the warmth of the cloth against her fur, and, opening her muzzle, picked some up. 

 

The instant she dropped them into the fire, the flames soared. It stayed that way for a while, until it eventually died down again. She was to tired to get up to get some more. The wind swirled outside, in the clearing of the Tribe of Crooked Trees. 

 

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-- deeperhau5pony

 

This is a roleplay, in which we pretend to be ponies. To join, read the topic over here

 and follow the corresponding steps. Move your out of character questions over to Aria next time, please. Thank you!


Edited by Mare-ionette, 19 April 2014 - 01:54 AM.


#9 Varisity

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Posted 19 April 2014 - 02:59 PM

Haiba felt the soft snow against his hooves, the cold breeze against his face and the warmth of his coat against his coat. The place was deserted, the only sound the high pitched whistling of the wind. On the back of his coat were dozens upon dozens of sticks which were tied together with a band of string. He walked among the other tribe members huts. As it was his pleasure to serve others, he felt it only his duty to make sure others kept away from the cold and bitterness of the winter. As his load became less and all the huts had a reasonable amount of sticks outside of them he started to make his way home. He went inside, loaded the last sticks beside the door and looked at the pony in the room.

Smiling, Haiba looked over his patient. She was sleeping and was a young filly who had broke her hoof. His hut was quite small and was split into two rooms. He had always felt the need to be closer to his patients. She was whimpering slightly in her sleep. Though this was something Haiba knew would happen as the mixture on the bandage slowly helped the wound heal. Suddenly, she gave out a fit of sneezes. Haiba sighed and covered her with a quilt he had sewn himself. He could sometimes get impatient with those he cared for.

In his room, Haiba was slowly mixing honey and water together. Once it had been evenly mixed it was poured into a pot. He placed the lid on the pot. He shook the pot. He opened the lid and looked inside. This was his secret mixture for which his Mothers family had known for generations. His Father, skilled in many a craft, had made the pot himself. Both of his parents were kind and helpful. His family was very close and were all Earth Ponies.

Deciding his work was done, Haiba went to his patient. He gently shook her until an eye opened. The filly got up and Haiba took the bandage off. She did a few tests to see if her hoof was better. She quickly saw that it was fully healed. She thanked Haiba before racing out of the hut. He smiled. It was these moments which made his work so inspiring, so fulfilling. He would not do any other job unless he could get the same feeling from it.

He then took the sticks into his own room, the fire in that room already roaring, and put it in his fireplace. He also put some dry grass over it. He took one of the sticks, and rubbed it hard in it. It was not too soon that high flames erupted from it, roaring sparks. He sat by it, his quilt wrapped tightly around him, and watched the fire.

Edited by Golden Sparks, 19 April 2014 - 03:00 PM.


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Posted 01 May 2014 - 12:16 AM

Yamile went under the the waterfall. She saw a vision. Inside was a white tall pony. It was more of the pony's silhouette. It suddenly duplicated again and again, revealing ten ponies that looked like each other. They had bright blue eyes, a platinum blonde mane and tail. "We are the Council of Keepers.", they said in harmony. "Yamile, we have seen great favor in you. We have seen great potential in you since fillyhood. The day you convinced your mother to let you hunt for food for her in the Great Famine, the day you made the lost filles sleep to stop panicking and returned them to their mother, and we know you will never forget that day when your whole coalition was gone due to the big fire, burning your whole family and friends. Is it all true?", they asked. "Yes, Council of Keepers.", she replied. "You are worthy of two gifts, Controlling Words and Lullaby Songs. Your destiny awaits you.", they implied, then vanished. Yamille left the water, but she was never wet. She earned a red mark on her forehead. It was the Gifted Mark. It would glow at times of need, allowing to let the user make use of the gift.

#11 Aria

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Posted 01 May 2014 - 01:37 AM

"You finally earned your gifted mark, dear Yamille. I earned mine at your age. You must never speak of what you see, or a great punishment may come to you.", Kafil said.


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