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#1 RainbronyDash

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Posted 06 February 2013 - 06:25 PM

S67 is the plot



#2 gamermanj4

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Posted 13 February 2013 - 12:59 AM

Quite simply put, that's a nice pagoda you have there. Unfortunately for you the builder test is to make a ponyville house.



#3 rossnub

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Posted 13 February 2013 - 02:51 AM

It is very empty on the inside, and from what I can see there is no bathroom, or kitchen. The attic is very empty also there is just two beds hunched in the corner. The entry doesn't even have a door and I understand you might like to RP but when you are building submission houses leave the the RP out of it, I am talking about the sign at the front "Deadflyer by the way i built this with a broken hoof" more then likely in minecraft breaking something didn't actually effect you in-game. The rogue little area at the back with just tall grass with no detail and no way to get to it is something to be considered changed. The first floor was basically the same. I understand I am the same way for everything to be in the right place. But everywhere is not found in ponyville style houses. For example actually look at your room right now, you might be on a desktop or you might be on the couch.. Look infront of you do you see a computer/couch exactly the same in the right place and the same lamp in the same place infront of you? It is more then likely not. The roof you had the right idea but the sort of X on the front and back isn't found in any ponyville houses and also many real life designs. You are building a house not a windmill remember that. The pink wool is also an un-needed "Touch". Also try to make the design of the house unique. Not just a box. I'm sure you saw/heard this many times but believe me it helps a ton. Go to /warp ponyville right down some notes. Your computer probably has some way of typing into a program. Write many notes about the house so you don't have to go back and forth. The second floor is just sort of "hanging" with a balcony filled with bookshelves on it. But lastly the stairs felt like a falling hazard. The criss cross pattern isn't really the best design to have in a house.

 

I think you have potential but try to bring it out with effort not just throwing stuff down and saying it is done.


Edited by RossNub, 13 February 2013 - 05:13 PM.



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