I have finished my submisisons house and my plot is s80
Finished submission house
Started by Raven Feather, Aug 20 2015 08:12 PM
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Posted 20 August 2015 - 08:12 PM
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Posted 21 August 2015 - 08:11 PM
Sorry but this is rejected. I'm going to give you a detailed post what you did wrong and maybe you can improve it later if you take the cmc test again.
- Exterior first. The house was absolutely huge. Way bigger than any pv house we have in out canon world currently. And it was too boxy. PV houses usually have various shapes.
- The walls in the front were a bit decorated but the pack of the house was plain. Keep in mind we look at every corner of pv houses.
- The roof is a shape I've never seen before, and not in a good way. It's hard to explain how to make good roofs so I suggest looking at /w ponyville for good roof examples.
- You windows are huge. PV houses usually have 2x2 windows or in special ocasions 1x2 or 2x3
- Okay now the interior. First never ever make the ground floor only one huge room. PV houses have seperated rooms with walls.
- Your interior seems to focus more on survival, but we don't need that, we need a house with interior and exterior that fits a house in real life. The includes rooms like kitchen, bathroom, bedroom, dinner ect. And I haven't seen any of those rooms besides the bedroom with the enchating table in it.
- I haven't seen much furniture but the ones you made were a bit old. Go to /w ikea2 to see new designs for furniture.
- Also pv houses usually have a ground floor and at least one floor above. And the rooms are usually 4 blocks high. Not less or more.
I hope this will help you in the future. Go to /w ponyville to see examples of good pv houses. Good luck next time.
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