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#1 Cosmo Gaze

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Posted 15 January 2013 - 05:01 AM

Can you please be a critic on my practice house? just do /warp bobprac.

Thanks!

EDIT: Now check the house at warp s55, added a bit, thank you.

Edited by boboy76, 16 January 2013 - 10:26 PM.


#2 Xeadin

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Posted 15 January 2013 - 07:47 AM

I will give you some feedback on your house:

 

Focusing on the exterior, it looks really well done, although it would probably be beneficial to limit the use of the trapdoors (they do make nice shudders, I admit, but there comes a point where it can become excessive). It looks like you were going for the old European look, which is great.

 

On to the interior, all the rooms are quaintly and cleverly laid out. I don't think I have much else to say, other than job well done on your practice submission.

 

As a summary, you have a good attention to detail, which is a great skill to have in cases such as these, and I, personally, believe that you may have no problems with passing the submissions test. As a general rule-of-thumb, don't be afraid to ask for other player's opinions :)


Edited by Xeadin, 16 January 2013 - 04:29 PM.



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