The warp is /warp s71 Pease review it Thank You!
Please review!
#1
Posted 05 January 2015 - 05:42 AM
#2
Posted 07 January 2015 - 08:15 PM
Sadly, this build doesn't look too good at all!
-It shouldn't be square
-The ceiling's much too high on the second floor
-You need to be more creative with furniture: use different types of wood, maybe
-A pillar of water is not a bathroom
-The floor shouldn't have glowstone on it
-A fridge and a furnace in a wall are not a kitchen
-You need a barrier so that ponies don't fall down your staircase
-There's no furniture in the hallway of the second floor
-The yellow roof shouldn't be exposed inside
-The roof needs to overhang the walls on all sides
You've got a long way to go! Nailed the materials, though. I'd say take a break after this one and do some practice builds in one of the derp worlds. Good luck!
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