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#1 Starman

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Posted 06 January 2013 - 09:19 PM

I have only about 2 days left to build, and currently have a completed house on plot s65. I need critique on it, as this is my last attempt for builder. Please help me. Thank you.


Edited by Shiver, 07 January 2013 - 07:18 PM.


#2 Cyborganic_Pies

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Posted 08 January 2013 - 05:35 PM

Exterior:

It has quite an odd shape to it but its clear you know the theme, because of the shape the roof looks a bit weird also. You have 3 triangle frame roofs, I would recommend using a gabled roof as that is the ones used in the show, you can find some great examples in the suburbs of Ponyville. Some of your walls have minor detailing (one blank wall with only one window).

 

Interior:

Your interior isn't that bad but it does lack detail. The kitchen is good but the rest of the house is a bit bare. I recommend putting decoration on the walls, (don't spam paintings!) have a seating areas, fireplace, etc. Just pay more attention to detail. I also noticed that the second set of stairs has no banister, thats a fall hazard.

 

Final Recommendations:

Plan your builds thoroughly before you start, you want to have enough space for interior with out having the exterior bare or looking odd. Pay more attention to detail- even adding rafters across the ceiling or plants around the house makes a difference. Making drastic changes like what I have recommended is simply unreasonable, but you can change the design of the roof, work on the interior and try and make those boring, flat sandstone walls more interesting with a vine or a part of the house extruding( that also makes the roof look better). I hope you take my criticism into account, good luck!




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