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#1 greebster

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 12:08 AM

This is a story inspired by the lovely community of Brohoof, but in no way am I to directly refer to any brony related words, so tell me off if I accidentally do so.

If ANY of you do see a mistake, then be sure to let me know preferably via PM. I don't expect you guys to be nice, but at the same time I would hope you guys are professional and will not add unnecessarily scathing comments. Just give me the problem, I'll be happy to listen and alter the writing according to ERRORS. That means if you have something that you personally would like added to the story, then by all means mention it but don't get mad if I don't apply it.

http://www.brohoof.c...implementation/ <- Link to old Brohoof Chronicles Topic Post for me to refer to. Please do NOT necrobump it.

Here's what I need:

Character Name: (OC name)
Nickname(s): (any honorific titles or playful names e.t.c.)
Race: (Griffon, Unicorn, Pegasus or Earth pony. You can suggest another race, I may approve or disapprove of it depending on its power)
Cutie Mark:
Special Skill: (needs to relate to your cutie Mark)
Description of OC: (picture or written or both)
Bio: (your OC's life up to present day)
Favourite Weapon: (think steampunk or old school if you can, e.g. massive warhammer or a primitive machine-gun

It is present day in Equestria, meaning that the mane six exist. So try to keep your weapons within the range of what's already been said. I'm not going to put everypony's characters as members of the Harmonosphere as there's quite a lot as there is.

List of Characters Added
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Progress: 44 OCs out of target 3 (40)

List of Volunteers
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So without further ado, here's Harmonosphere

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A special thanks to Tom__EN and Fafflemaster for the beautiful Cover Illustration!
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Ooh, and while you're at it, unless you already came from there, check out Defective's: Massive Poster Project
It's real darn good!

Edited by Greebster, 19 February 2013 - 10:03 PM.


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Posted 18 November 2012 - 06:42 AM

Looks pretty damn good, and much less of an in-joke fiction, if you forgive my awful wording, this should be accepted, I hope it is!

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 07:48 AM

why thanks :D

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 08:37 PM

If the previous story was considered a masterpiece then i doubt i could think of a word to describe this. I have tried many times to think of a way to describe how i felt when reading this, and even with my extensive knowledge of the English language i fail to grasp at a sentence worthy enough.

You have obviously been doing a lot of research into strange forgotten words(for example "dais"),and have attained a new level of descriptive detail in your writing, detail i have not seen in any fan fiction and have only come across it in best selling novels(i'm not saying this because you're my friend or to be nice, i genuinely haven't seen this level of detail since Harry potter).

I could go on forever picking apart and describing every last little detail but this post would unfortunately turn into a boring wall of text that could have been solved with a simple sentence. So to end this drivel i shall simply say bravo to you sir and i eagerly await the next instalment of this riveting tale.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 09:35 PM

Aw, yeah! I'm so glad for that response! I was doing it wrong before, not looking through my character's eyes, now I am.

I'm also still adding OCs, so if you have an OC or have already made one, feel free to make changes or add one now. Don't forget your OC can be a Griffon. Now add them, quick!

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 09:57 PM

I suppose my character is very out of place, so instead here is a revision of my character:

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I've greatly reduced him from his previous incarnation to make him less over powered and to allow him to fit into the story.

Edited by Volvonski, 18 November 2012 - 10:05 PM.


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Posted 18 November 2012 - 09:59 PM

I suppose my character is very out of place, so instead here is a revision of my character:

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I've greatly reduced him from his previous incarnation to make him less over powered and to allow him to fit into the story.


This is very well imagined. So as usual, for showing great thinking, ACCEPTED! :D

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:02 PM

I can help preread if I have time among other things.

What do you need for OC submissions?

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:05 PM

Ah, well I suppose I'd best repost OC requirements XD thanks for reminding me Golfmann :)

EDIT: see the top for character requirements

Edited by greebster, 18 November 2012 - 10:08 PM.


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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:09 PM

Golfmann just use this:
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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:10 PM

Golfmann just use this:

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Sorry, beat you to it old pal :) but thanks for taking the initiative, just in case I hadn't

Edited by greebster, 18 November 2012 - 10:10 PM.


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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:12 PM

Ah blast ninja'd, oh well. I'll discuss my new character and how he will look at college, it will be a lot easier than just cluttering this place up with unessential posts.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:14 PM

Ah blast ninja'd, oh well. I'll discuss my new character and how he will look at college, it will be a lot easier than just cluttering this place up with unessential posts.


I don't see why not, I'd like to cater to everypony's needs as best I can.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:15 PM

one more question... I hope. What time period is this in exactly I've been reading but it's still foggy.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:17 PM

one more question... I hope. What time period is this in exactly I've been reading but it's still foggy.


Present day my friend :)

Ask as much questions as you need, I like to review what I've done and asking questiosn will help me do that. And thanks for offering to pre-read! I may need one more person to also pre-read.

Edited by greebster, 18 November 2012 - 10:18 PM.


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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:17 PM

Present day?, so that means the humans will have machine guns and stuff?. In all honesty i think late medieval fantasy would fit this better, considering the villains ability to cast magic and due to the ponies only being able to use medieval weaponry.

Edited by Volvonski, 18 November 2012 - 10:19 PM.


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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:18 PM

Sweet that works perfect then. I'll get my OC together ASAP :3

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:20 PM

You can have primitive guns, I thought that Golf was referring to if or not the mane six existed.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:22 PM

No, it was more so whether or not there are electronics kind of modern.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:23 PM

that'd be a no, cogs and steam yes, electricity no, unless it's a magic power involving electricity.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:23 PM

Primitive guns or not they would be no match against a crack team of human soldiers who are armed with assault rifles and light machine guns. Lord coltheart wouldn't need an army to take down equestria, all he would need is a small squad of highly trained spec ops.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:25 PM

Primitive guns or not they would be no match against a crack team of human soldiers who are armed with assault rifles and light machine guns. Lord coltheart wouldn't need an army to take down equestria, all he would need is a small squad of highly trained spec ops.


I'm sure the story will have something in the way of changing that possibility to make it an... impossibility.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:27 PM

I'm still not happy with your decision to set this in the present day, this story seems perfect for a fantasy medieval setting.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:28 PM

H'mm I might need to rethink this... gimme a little bit.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:29 PM

I don't think you understand, I meant present Equestrian day. Planet Earth is a completely different story, you wait and see...

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:30 PM

Now that makes more sense, you really should be more specific especially when you're talking to an idiot like me.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:31 PM

Now that makes more sense, you really should be more specific especially when you're talking to an idiot like me.


come now, we're all idiots :D
Except for all of us, let's face it, we are all clever and dumb at the same time... if that makes any sense.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:46 PM

May I ask where you got the name from? It's very unique.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 10:52 PM

I thought of how harmony could be a protective force bigger than the atmosphere, this is what the Harmonosphere intends.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 11:41 PM

Its funny as i was going to ask you about that, i couldn't find anything that could relate to such a title so i figured this was something you managed to conjure up from your brilliant imagination.

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Posted 18 November 2012 - 11:47 PM

Its funny as i was going to ask you about that, i couldn't find anything that could relate to such a title so i figured this was something you managed to conjure up from your brilliant imagination.


It wouldn't have been possible without the wonderful members of Brohoof. This has been a big lesson for me, it has helped me grow in experience and forge new friendships :)

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:06 AM

I hate OC's and ponysonas... they just annoy me. But I had to make one eventually for use in stories that was actually practical : | Here ya go...


Character Name: Callaway Wilson

Nickname(s): Golfman? Golfpony? Golfponyman?

Race: Unicorn

Cutie Mark: Golf ball with a tee... subtle I know

Special Skill: Golf
Description of OC:
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Bio: Wilson is a successful golfer on the PPGA. He has it all. A nice house, money, and fans. Despite all of these things, he's always wanted more excitement and adventure out of life. (That's all i got. This is crap, i know... My imagination is broken....)

Reason for Joining: After hearing about the Order and their conquest against evil, Wilson set out by himself to find them and join the cause.

Favourite Weapon: 2 golf clubs, a 3 wood and a 7 iron, strapped on his back.

Edited by Golfmann14, 21 November 2012 - 12:05 AM.


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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:08 AM

I suppose your character will show those evil baddies what fore (yes i did just make a terrible golf joke).

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:10 AM

I suppose your character will show those evil baddies what fore (yes i did just make a terrible golf joke).

OMFG CAN'T STOP LAUGHING xD

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:12 AM

I hate OC's and ponysonas... they just annoy me. But I had to make one eventually for use in stories that was actually practical : | Here ya go...


Character Name: Wilson Callaway


I could really experiment with your ponysona :) so why not? ACCEPTED

I suppose your character will show those evil baddies what fore (yes i did just make a terrible golf joke).


BAD

Edited by greebster, 19 November 2012 - 12:14 AM.


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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:13 AM

I could really experiment with your ponysona :) so why not? ACCEPTED

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 01:10 AM

I could really experiment with your ponysona :) so why not? ACCEPTED



BAD

I couldn't help myself, his OC practically opened the doorway to that joke.

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 01:11 AM

hehe, true

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 01:31 AM

Golf is a game where guts and blind devotion will always net you absolutely nothing but an ulcer.

Golf is wonderful

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:43 PM

Character Name: Trade Place
Nickname(s): Trader, No-place
Race: Unicorn
Cutie Mark: Posted Image
Special Skill: He specialises in talking, and being able to convince ponies to allow him to side with them, he never truly takes a side,
Description of OC: Posted Image
Bio: Born to a family of debators, he learned quickly the art of the silver tongue, and his upper-class family ensured that he was no low-level magic user. He Was always a talker, and continually argued his way out of any trouble, but what he couldn't solve with arguing, he solved by setting ponies against each other. He had a gift for inciting hatred between his enemies, and being able to convince them to let him go. Until now, he was a speech pony for whoever paid well, being a bit of a freelance.
Favourite Weapon: When words faied him, he always had one weapon to fall back on- a dagger. He never used it much, but he trained well with it, and can be quite handy up-close, if need be. He has tried to keep this little talent a secret.

This one looks better than the last one, and I tried making one that could cause some problems for you, just to make this more interesting, but if you don't accept it's perfectly alright.

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 12:56 PM

This looks good! I love his background story, very unique, so why not? ACCEPTED!
How I could use this...

He could be neutral in his sides, not huge loyalty but he could maybe feel inspired eventually to take a side...
Your character has destiny, I promise you that.
Also, I have some clever arguments for him to use, but if you have more to add then just pm me :)

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 04:04 PM

Character Name: Tech Sketch/ FaffleMaster
Nickname(s): Sketch, Faffle
Race: unicorn
Cutie Mark: two pencils overlapping in an X
Special Skill: Can draw intricate blueprints in the matter of minutes, good tactician, in small doses can use her magic to make the blueprint become real without any building required (only small things though.)
Description of OC: A white coat, with messy brown mane, light brown eyes, and an unevenly cropped tail
Bio: Sketch, an unstable wreck of a pony drew illustrations for books before the war. She was living in poverty until war broke out. She thought she could make a difference by providing blueprints for weapons and other machinery to help protect the empire
Reason for Joining: She'd give anything to have something to do that felt worthwhile and important to other people. She thought she could just make a difference.
Favourite Weapon: Anything she can get my hands on. And she mean anything
NOTE: Fairly unpredictable and secretive. Can dip into sociopath behaviors when at her darkest.

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 04:36 PM

Character Name: Tech Sketch/ FaffleMaster
Nickname(s): Sketch, Faffle
Race: unicorn
Cutie Mark: two pencils overlapping in an X
Special Skill: Can draw intricate blueprints in the matter of minutes, good tactician, in small doses can use her magic to make the blueprint become real without any building required (only small things though.)
Description of OC: A white coat, with messy brown mane, light brown eyes, and an unevenly cropped tail
Bio: Sketch, an unstable wreck of a pony drew illustrations for books before the war. She was living in poverty until war broke out. She thought she could make a difference by providing blueprints for weapons and other machinery to help protect the empire
Reason for Joining: She'd give anything to have something to do that felt worthwhile and important to other people. She thought she could just make a difference.
Favourite Weapon: Anything she can get my hands on. And she mean anything
NOTE: Fairly unpredictable and secretive. Can dip into sociopath behaviors when at her darkest.


ACCEPTED, of course :)

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 06:25 PM

Woop Woop!

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 07:13 PM

As a special treat i have decided to provide a narration voice over for the story and some of its characters, i have already consulted greebster about this and he is more than happy to have me go ahead with this.

So every day a chapter is released i shall be uploading a voice over on my channel(first one will be uploaded soon) and posting it here.

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 07:38 PM

Sweet. Volvonski you're wonderful.

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 08:08 PM

And the greatest news is that our beloved family is going to be reformed. Brohoof/Harmonosphere, one and the same. I know this has nothing to do with the narrative read, which I'm happy Volvonski is doing of all ponies :)

Edited by greebster, 19 November 2012 - 08:09 PM.


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Posted 19 November 2012 - 08:25 PM

Name: Zuzka Kartáče (zuzka brushes)

Race: Earth pony

Apearance: White earth pony, with a dark blue and magenta mane. Wears a dark magenta beret, black magenta socks and scarf.
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Cutie mark: two brushes crossed

Talent: Zuzka paints art. She is learned in chemistry, herblore and knows how to mix up ingredients to create unnatural basic magic

Bio: Zuzka's past is unknown, all information ponies have on her is that she came from far away where they practiced art as a living. she does not speak allot, especially in english but she is fluent in the language. She is shady and may look sinister at times but once you get to know her she makes a loyal friend. Master at spelunking.

Size: a bit under average to average

location: Unknown

weapon: various chemical bombs.

"Nesnažte se zjistit, kdo jsem. Já nevím, kdo jsem."

Edited by Distortion_, 24 November 2012 - 10:20 PM.


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Posted 19 November 2012 - 08:35 PM

Name: Zuzka Kartáče (zuzka brushes)

Race: Earth pony

Apearance: White earth pony, with a dark blue and magenta mane. Wears a dark magenta beret, black magenta socks and scarf.
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Cutie mark: two brushes crossed

Talent: Zuzka paints art.

Bio: Zuzka's past is unknown, all information ponies have on her is that she came from far away where they practiced art as a living.she does not speak allot, especially in english but she is fluent in the language.

Size: a bit under average to average

location: Unknown

"Nesnažte se zjistit, kdo jsem. Já nevím, kdo jsem."


I can do something with this, she seems almost mysterious, that's my inference kicking in. ACCEPTED

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 10:58 PM

If you need to bounce ideas i'm here :D

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 11:23 PM

I would add my OC but im nervous due to my Closet Brony-ness but i think the book has great potential and makes me want to make my own fan-fic thanks Greebster for giving me some inspiration and good luck publishing!

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Posted 19 November 2012 - 11:33 PM

I would add my OC but im nervous due to my Closet Brony-ness but i think the book has great potential and makes me want to make my own fan-fic thanks Greebster for giving me some inspiration and good luck publishing!


why thankyou skilby :D though you don't have to feel ashamed of enjoying what you do enjoy. But that is your choice to make of course :)

If you need to bounce ideas i'm here :D


I'll certainly keep you in mind :P

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 01:07 AM

haracter Name: Sound Wave
Race: Pegasus
Cutie Mark: Guitar with gear as body
Appearance:
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Special Skill: All physics revolving around soundwaves, and harnessing these in many ways.
Bio: I have been a loner forever. My life has never been worth anything to anypony. So i started studying, where it turned out my passion was in applications of sound waves for many useful purposes. For instance i have discovered a certain combination of multiple frequencies of sound which can literally make évery kind of magic stop working. i have lived many of my younger days just studying and have a lot of understanding over everything revolving around science. yet there are many things still unexplained and i want to be able to figure those out too. I have built a music shop, in which i mainly spend my time thinking about everything, figuring out frequencies which wield effects to the world around it. but mainly trying to discover new parts of the current science we now know today.
Favourite Weapon: Sound based weapons (sonic steam rifle for example)

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 01:11 AM

haracter Name: Sound Wave


That could be VERY useful you know. So I must say that you've been ACCEPTED :D

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 03:24 AM

Based on your poll....

I can also help with illustrations :3

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 02:40 PM

If you think you're up to it :)

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 05:09 PM

I can actually probably legitimately help with art this time. I'm putting my comic on hiatus for now because I reread the first chapter and realized it sucked, so I'll be happy to help with yer thang.

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 06:55 PM

I can actually probably legitimately help with art this time. I'm putting my comic on hiatus for now because I reread the first chapter and realized it sucked, so I'll be happy to help with yer thang.


Well I still like your steampunk comic :D but if you want to help, then I'd be happy to have you on the team. Just let me know if you're sure just so I can add you to the list of helpers :D

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 07:36 PM

Absolutely positively sure! :D

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 07:50 PM

I'll add you to the list now :D

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 07:53 PM

Right i've done some small practice sessions to try and get the voices right, i think i've found a good one for lord coltheart but i'll only use it if you're happy with me using it, if not then we'll stick with your version.

On a funny note during practice i accidentally came across discords voice so i spent a good 30 minutes talking like him, it was quite fun.

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 08:06 PM

Right i've done some small practice sessions to try and get the voices right, i think i've found a good one for lord coltheart but i'll only use it if you're happy with me using it, if not then we'll stick with your version.

On a funny note during practice i accidentally came across discords voice so i spent a good 30 minutes talking like him, it was quite fun.


haha, ok, well we'll talk more on it tomorrow, but I'm sure the voices you can do will be more than sufficient :D

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 08:34 PM

OC Name: Blazing Fire (AKA: Blaze)

Race: Unicorn

Cutie Mark: Fire

Special Skill: Possesses knowledge to harness and use fire.

Appearance:
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Bio: Was born and raised like any other pony in ponyville and married a wife and had 3 foals. after 2 months of living in harmony he was called on by the princess to save the world from the destruction of reality (reference to my own story :???:)

Reason for Joining: Always willing to be in the action and likes helping others and going on adventures.

Favorite Weapon: Anything that resembles a M1919 or MG42.

Note: UNPREDICTABLE!

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 09:01 PM

OC Name: Blazing Fire (AKA: Blaze)

Race: Unicorn

Cutie Mark: Fire

Special Skill: Possesses knowledge to harness and use fire.

Appearance:

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Bio: Was born and raised like any other pony in ponyville and married a wife and had 3 foals. after 2 months of living in harmony he was called on by the princess to save the world from the destruction of reality (reference to my own story :???:)

Reason for Joining: Always willing to be in the action and likes helping others and going on adventures.

Favorite Weapon: Anything that resembles a M1919 or MG42.

Note: UNPREDICTABLE!


We're not really using modern guns. But I can see about working to make something similar to a turret with such a style as this, firing flaming arrows maybe? Also, I took out the bit which said that OCs will be added to the Harmonosphere, but you can still expect to be in the story :D ACCEPTED

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 09:04 PM

We're not really using modern guns. But I can see about working to make something similar to a turret with such a style as this, firing flaming arrows maybe? Also, I took out the bit which said that OCs will be added to the Harmonosphere, but you can still expect to be in the story :D ACCEPTED


thanks! but remember that even though the M1919 is still in service the MG42 was retired back in 1968

(i spend too much time researching WW2 history now dont i? oh well...)

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 09:14 PM

Character Name: Arrow Lasher (DefectiveTurret)
Nickname(s): Simply "Arrow" will do, unless he earns another later on. xD Run it by me first tho.
Race: Earth pony, medium strength.
Gender: Stallion
Size: Medium build
Cutie Mark: The Mikras Laboratories logo
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Special Skill: The ability to piece things together and jury-rig things fairly well, if the right items are present. Definite skill with inventions and mechanisms. Oddly enough, no skill at all with the bow & arrow. xD
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Bio: One day not very long ago, Arrow had quite suddenly awoken and found himself in Ponyville, sore, aching, and disoriented. He wasn't sure where he had been before, or where he was then. It was a new place, and new people- ... wait, ponies. Those are ponies. Talking ponies. It took him a moment to realize he was just as much a talking pony as any of them, not sure how he had gotten there or why, but he soon settled in, fell in love with the place, and made it his home. A home he was willing to protect.
Favourite Weapon: Orchid Katana (if acceptable!)

...Also, as much as I'd like to help with art on this, I've got my hooves full with the OC project and real-life client jobs to work on. D: I hope to help sometime in the future when things lessen up, though! >w<

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 09:33 PM

Character Name: Arrow Lasher (DefectiveTurret)

...Also, as much as I'd like to help with art on this, I've got my hooves full with the OC project and real-life client jobs to work on. D: I hope to help sometime in the future when things lessen up, though! >w<


It's ok :D you don't need to help on this, having your OC is enough, but do you mind mentioning it to the people on your Poster thread? It'd definitely get more people into this story!

oh and ACCEPTED!

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 09:58 PM

well. apparently I am a voice to be used. still keep in mind (russian accent) place me where it fits :P

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:11 PM

well. apparently I am a voice to be used. still keep in mind (russian accent) place me where it fits :P


you've been added ^^

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:13 PM

oh hey, there is a voice over thing going? If you need a deep aussie voice just say the word, people I've skyped with know.

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:15 PM

Character Name: Flea Jumper (dazhito23)

Nickname: Whatever anyone wants to call him, although "Jumper" might be easier

Race: Earth Pony

Cutie Mark: Ukulele

Special Skill: Playing the Ukulele for any occasion.

Bio: Flea Jumper enjoys traveling around Equestria, entertaining crowds with his special ukulele, a custom-built ukulele with pictures depicting Seaponies. Hailing from the tropical Poniolo Islands, Jumper claims to have conversed with Seaponies themselves, although he has no proof to show of this (because no one believes they exist). Regardless, he is knowledgable in mythological Seapony Lore, as many of his songs depict the playfulness of Seaponies.

Favorite Weapon: Flea Jumper avoids violence when possible, but if cornered, he brings out his "weapon": Coconut Oil. He spreads it all over his body and engages in hoof-to-hoof combat that consists of submission locks, joint bending, and hard strikes to weakened areas. The coconut oil enhances his ability to grapple and solidifies his hooves for harder kicks. He doesn't use any actual weapons because he feels weapons "kill too easy".

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:19 PM

oh hey, there is a voice over thing going? If you need a deep aussie voice just say the word, people I've skyped with know.


I'll keep that in mind :D

Character Name: Flea Jumper (dazhito23)

Nickname: Whatever anyone wants to call him, although "Jumper" might be easier

Race: Earth Pony

Cutie Mark: Ukulele

Special Skill: Playing the Ukulele for any occasion.

Bio: Flea Jumper enjoys traveling around Equestria, entertaining crowds with his special ukulele, a custom-built ukulele with pictures depicting Seaponies. Hailing from a more tropical part of Equestria (don't know if I can just make up a place), Jumper claims to have conversed with Seaponies themselves, although he has no proof to show of this (because no one believes they exist). Regardless, he is knowledgable in mythological Seapony Lore, as many of his songs depict the playfulness of Seaponies.

Favorite Weapon: Flea Jumper avoids violence when possible, but if cornered, he brings out his "weapon": Coconut Oil. He spreads it all over his body and engages in hoof-to-hoof combat that consists of submission locks, joint bending, and hard strikes to weakened areas. The coconut oil enhances his ability to grapple and solidifies his hooves for harder kicks. He doesn't use any actual weapons because he feels weapons "kill too easy".


I like this, can't wait to work with your OC, thanks again!

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:21 PM

oh hey, there is a voice over thing going? If you need a deep aussie voice just say the word, people I've skyped with know.

Idea here, volvonski and I discussed it a bit. And we wanted to do it in mumble. Maybe we can make an exception for you to join the mumble? I mean you are pretty trusted on this server. But I guess its up to admins. Just an idea. Can create a private recording channel.

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:31 PM

Just to let you know, I would like to switch around my OC name to Callaway Wilson...

Or maybe Bridge Stone...

Perhaps Volvik Dunlop...

I can't decide xD so many golf puns

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 10:56 PM

Also, greeb. I shall add some additional information on Zuzka so she can fit into the story more properly. It'll be where I posted her earlier.

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 11:02 PM

Also, greeb. I shall add some additional information on Zuzka so she can fit into the story more properly. It'll be where I posted her earlier.


Sure!

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 11:16 PM

What do you think greeb.. Callaway Wilson

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Bridge Stone

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 11:19 PM

What do you think greeb.. Callaway Wilson

or

Bridge Stone


I like Callaway, it sounds unique, but it's up to you :D

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Posted 20 November 2012 - 11:45 PM

Idea here, volvonski and I discussed it a bit. And we wanted to do it in mumble. Maybe we can make an exception for you to join the mumble? I mean you are pretty trusted on this server. But I guess its up to admins. Just an idea. Can create a private recording channel.

Might be simpler to create a private recording mumble server than faff around trying to get me privileges that could cause problems for others.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:05 AM

I like Callaway, it sounds unique, but it's up to you :D

I like it too. Just letting you know. I'm going to change the name on my application so there's no confusion.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:08 AM

I'll need someone to do the recording as my mic doesn't pick up system sounds, unless mumble has an in built recording system.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:13 AM

Name: Diamond Digger

Nickname(s): Mineral since she never gives out her real name

Race: Earth Pony

Gender: Mare

Cutie mark: A diamond

Special skill: Knows about minerals very much.

Bio: She was born on a little farm just outside of Appleloosa, after reaching 13 she enrolled in a school in Baltimare, she was then dropped out because she nearly choked another classmate, she then found some mines where she worked until he was 20.
She then finished his job, she conserved a pickaxe, a gas mask, and goggles when she worked in the mine. Also that is really greedy, and be convinced to do something if payed.

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Size: a normal mare, but alittle bit taller

Favorite Weapon: Pickaxe

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:14 AM

so wait, what gender?

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:42 AM

Fixed and checked, Mare she was a stallion originaly but then I changed it.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 12:45 AM

Name: Diamond Digger
Nickname(s): Mineral since she never gives out her real name


ACCEPTED. Good story for your character.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 01:05 AM

It's ok :D you don't need to help on this, having your OC is enough, but do you mind mentioning it to the people on your Poster thread? It'd definitely get more people into this story!

oh and ACCEPTED!


Consider it done! OuO /)

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 01:30 AM

Shall this pass?

Character Name: Miles
Nickname(s): None really, but Crimson Colt would work if you really needed one.
Race: Pegasus
Cutie Mark: Lightning bolt
Special Skill: Flying and bowmanship
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Favourite Weapon: His longbow.


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Posted 21 November 2012 - 01:32 AM

thanks :D more ponies needed in this story

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Character Name: Miles
Nickname(s): None really, but Crimson Colt would work if you really needed one.
Race: Pegasus
Cutie Mark: Lightning bolt
Special Skill: Flying and bowmanship


That's good enough for me ^^
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Posted 21 November 2012 - 01:36 AM

I'm sorry, idk what's up with that post, it keeps changing it up and adding a font color and size crap and changing up the order of my brackets, I'm not doing it and it won't stop doing that for some reason, but there's the info. It's also on the second or third page of the rp oc thread if you need that.

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And here's the picture, which works in this for some raisin :/

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 01:44 AM

I'm sorry, idk what's up with that post, it keeps changing it up and adding a font color and size crap and changing up the order of my brackets, I'm not doing it and it won't stop doing that for some reason, but there's the info. It's also on the second or third page of the rp oc thread if you need that.

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And here's the picture, which works in this for some raisin :/


very cool :D

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 04:48 AM

Cool, I think I'll jump on the band-wagon!

Character Name: Stormy Skies
Nickname(s): none
Race: Pegasus
Cutie Mark:
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Special Skill: Loves racing/clear night sky
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Bio: Cirrus earned his cutie mark in a similar fashion to Rainbow Dash, by winning a race in flight school. Though that may be what earned him his cutie mark, his other true love is the night sky. His fascination with the moon and the stars led him to join up with the Royal Night Guard for a time, in hopes of meeting the Princess who makes the view that pleases him so. He is currently working in Manehattan as a Weather Pony.
Favourite Weapon: His own two hooves are good enough for him.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 06:30 AM

Character Name: Silver Haze
Nickname(s): Hazy by close friends; Silver as informal
Race: Pegasus
Cutie Mark A sun mostly obscured by a thundercloud.
Special Skill: Has to unique ability of creating, controlling and handling large and dangerous thunderstorms.
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Bio: A lazy but well meaning mare born from cloudsdale that just so happens to harbor a reincarnating spirit. She of course has no awareness of this, or any memory of past lives. She manages stray thunderstorms that appear across the wilderness She grew tired of her mundane life and signed up for several science experiments to gain fame. What happened after that would take a book to explain, but she has nearly died 3 times and lost 6 months of her life by becoming amnesiac.
Her most recent brush with death was being de-aged. After being cured from de-aging in the nick of time, she still seeks some form of fame. But certainly not from the doctor that had nearly killed her more than once.
Favourite Weapon: Lance

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 07:15 AM

Cool, I think I'll jump on the band-wagon!
Character Name: Cirrus Raincatcher

ACCEPTED!

Character Name: Silver Haze


and also ACCEPTED! Two really good characters right there.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 08:12 AM

Edit to my earlier post, I've come up with a much better name.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 08:17 AM

alrighty then :)

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 10:41 AM

So I couldn't get down to college today, therefore I have a whole day to work on this story! I'll be online if anyone wishes to post a pony.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 10:47 AM

I'll need someone to do the recording as my mic doesn't pick up system sounds, unless mumble has an in built recording system.

I can try attempt coltheart if you want. I can do evil voices. The only problem is, is that my voice is not extremely deep as in evil fitting. but the way I talk I can definately make it sound evil. hope it mixes well. but yea. If you'd like I can do that.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:12 AM

Is there a Poll decision for I FUCKING LOVE IT!? anyway, here's my entry.

Character name: Silver Thorn (I know that there is already another Silver but oh well, we can try to work around it)
Nicknames: Death Scorpion, Scorpion or Poison (you'll find out why in a sec)
Race: Unicorn
Cutiemark: Scorpion
Special Skill: Zoology, Knowledge of dangerous animals, Cryptozoology, Knowledge of "Mythical" animals. knows how to track animals and what their habits are.
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Bio: Silver has a love of dangerous animals, especially giant scorpions. He has many near death experiences with creature like manticores and basilisks, therefore he knows a lot about them. He has a small library in his own house. Most are on Animals, how to track them, study them and if necessary... Kill them. He got his nickname, the death Scorpion after and encounter with a giant scorpion where he got stung and nearly died. But before going catatonic and headed to the hospital, he managed to break of the scorpions stinger and hang onto it. After he left the hospital he had it fashioned into a sword that he could put the extremely deadly Scorpion poison in. He takes it with him every time he leaves to study dangerous animals, just in case they need to be subdued. He also uses the stinger sword to take out other scorpions easily (y'know how the stinger penetrates the scorpion better than any regular sword) and uses their poison for his sword and, depending on which species he kills, he may make acidic bombs (but that is really difficult). he also spends a lot of time in the Everfree forest (for obvious reasons)
Weapon Of choice: Well duh, Scorpion Sword.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:38 AM

I can try attempt coltheart if you want. I can do evil voices. The only problem is, is that my voice is not extremely deep as in evil fitting. but the way I talk I can definately make it sound evil. hope it mixes well. but yea. If you'd like I can do that.

By all means go ahead, i can do evil voices but if someone can do it better than me then i don't see why their voice can't be used.

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Posted 21 November 2012 - 11:46 AM

OI VOLVO! If you want/need and extra voice, you're open to send me a PM. that is, if it's okay with you?


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