Hey, I need a bit of criticism on my house. I (obviously) want it to look the best it can before I submit it, so I can make the admins go 'This guy would make a good builder.' or at least 'Meh, he'll do.' I don't care if you look at it for a minute or an hour, I just appreciate your criticism.
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Posted 01 May 2013 - 12:19 AM
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Posted 01 May 2013 - 04:49 PM
I had a look at your house and had this to say:
The design of your house has some complexity to it, it isn't (like some others) a box or a rectangle. You've got a good design but it's rather small. Perhaps you could give yourself more by making the house taller. The roof is a bit messy, i see you've gone for an A frame roof but in the middle where it connects it's very messy and could be joined up better. I'd also say perhaps add some windows to the Ground floor exterior so it doesn't look so bare. Overall the exterior is a bit bare actually so perhaps add something around the house or actually on it. The chimney is quite big aswell so it could be scaled down a bit. Moving on to the inside the ground floor has a rather basic layout and furniture, the kitchen looks a bit empty although i see that you've actually added more than just furnaces, try to make it look brighter though as it blends so it doesn't look right. There's lots of snow on the floor of which i will assume is representing a carpet, if so then there are better alternatives and it looks rather messy if there's a long streak of snow going through the living room. The chimney looks square on the inside, try to make it look more like a connection to the room rather than a section on the side. The stairs looks very flimsy and unsupported, try to make it look realistic by adding a support, even if it's just some logs or fence. The second floor looks very open and under furnished, there's a massive wall of bookcases which look ugly and you can't even get to some of them as they're hovering over the stairs. The bedroom looks empty as you've only got a bed, table and plant. Try to add more complex furniture made of multiple blocks which look nicer, remember you can always see examples in Ponyville, /warp ikea and /warp ikea2. Finally, the attic is very open and only consists of chests, if you've got the space why not add something there to make it look less empty. Overall you need to work on the complexity of your interior and the furniture to give the house a better style rather than mostly consisting of wood and sand.
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