Unusual Ponies Application ( First RP )
#101
Posted 16 February 2014 - 02:08 PM
#102
Posted 17 February 2014 - 12:02 AM
Name: Escher
Gender: Mare
Race of pony: Unicorn
Age: 55 human years
Description: Grey body. Black mane is made up of flat hair, causing it to flow down her and tail, Grey eyes.
Cutie Mark: White Impossible Triangle, hides it with an illusion of a normal triangle, and claims her talent is geometry.
Short bio: When she was young, she received forbidden knowledge about space. Not Outer space, but spatial Concepts. This was due to her parents who preformed an rather unsavory ritual, both of which were rendered deceased by that ritual. She moved on to became an master architect, designing Manors, Fortresses, and Castles for those who could pay. She decided to retire recently so that she could focus on her own art projects. There was a rumor going around concerning her private collection, as well as she herself possessing rather unnatural abilities, but those are just rumors, right?
Power: Alien Geometry, The true meaning of her Cutie Mark. She is capable of creating things that violate the laws of physics and engineering. She is, of course, able to make normal structures with her talent as well, referring to it as "Just not using your talent."
Personality: Strict, Calculating. Intelligent. Loves Gothic architecture.
((Is it okay to have a character who's special talent is their power?))
Edited by Dominic, 17 February 2014 - 12:03 AM.
#103
Posted 17 February 2014 - 02:52 AM
... saw this just as I had a second OC planned
#104
Posted 17 February 2014 - 03:08 AM
Then Submit it Razored Edge!
Also Razored Edge, How did your character know that Mora had a special ability?
In other news
I plan on all of my characters being active, as they each bring something different to the RP.
Edited by Dominic, 17 February 2014 - 03:09 AM.
#105
Posted 17 February 2014 - 03:17 AM
It was less of precise knowledge and more like intuition/Pinke sense, and if you read back his sparks bring different effect to his power, not having Crystal spark active he only gets a slight shock when he sees another powerful pony, so he didn't know for sure but his hunches seem to be usually correct so he went for it.
#106
Posted 17 February 2014 - 03:19 AM
Ah, Thank you for explaining, I had been convinced that you were meta gaming, and I am very glad that I was incorrect.
Edited by Dominic, 17 February 2014 - 03:28 AM.
#107
Posted 17 February 2014 - 03:41 AM
lol I know my basic Rp rules meta/godmodding is a big mistake
#108
Posted 17 February 2014 - 04:00 AM
Good to know, I had been having difficulty reading your posts with regards to that scene, as I had no clue what spark you were referring to at that time.
#109
Posted 17 February 2014 - 07:51 AM
#110
Posted 17 February 2014 - 11:21 AM
not bad, actually, I like that! (Why didn't I think of thatSimple Physics, How about the ability to change the Acceleration of an object? In other words you jump on a small red wagon and Bam! Your now moving at 65 miles per hour. Not super speed, you just add Acceleration to an object, You could jump higher by adding upward acceleration to yourself.
Note that Acceleration would not easily let you levitate things, As Acceleration is a constant force in a direction. However, flight would be possibly, just rather terrifying if your not good at controlling it.
#111
Posted 17 February 2014 - 11:44 AM
#112
Posted 17 February 2014 - 12:14 PM
Oc name: Connemara
Gender: Mare
Race of pony: Earth Pony
Age: 14
Description: Turquoise coat, Yellow eyes, Long Pink hair
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: A book with a quill in an ink pot / Writing books
Short bio: Grew up in Trottingham so she has a slight English accent.
Moved to Ponyville when she was 10 after discovering her talent for writing books when she was 8.
She is quite a well known author all over Equestria.
Power that you are going to discover: Dowsing ( finding things and ponies with their minds, look it up )
Personality: Cheerful, knowledgeable, friendly, helpful.
Edited by roserocks01, 17 February 2014 - 12:16 PM.
#113
Posted 17 February 2014 - 03:42 PM
Name: Edge of Light
Gender: Mare
Age: 25
Race: Alicorn (Flying)
Description: Edge of Light
Cutie mark: Metal thorn wrapping a purple heart/helps ponies recover mentally from tragedies.
Short Bio: Having moved around alot She grew to aloof to the ponies around her, eventually believing she is above all others refers to herself as an Elitecorn, or as the ultimate pony. Celestia was horrified by this, Celestia stripped Edge of Light of her princess status, Edge of Light made it clear that she now disowns Celestia as part of her family, She now is forced to stay in ponyville to learn about friendship, a facet of life which she despises.
Power: Transmutation and can bypass Law of Conservation (it took me 3 tries to remember that word!)
Personality: Outwardly: Critical, Cold, Caculating, Opressive, Actively goes out of her way to make others stay away from her. Offensive, Smiles at others discomfort, Easily obsesssed. Personally: Kind, Empathetical, Bored, and still Obsessive.
((Hopefully if I play her right everypony will distrust her at first, and it will be Twilight Vs Disguised Chrysalis again, While Brightest takes to her like a moth to a flame heh Vinyl Vs. Edge.))
Edited by Razored Edge, 18 February 2014 - 12:59 PM.
#114
Posted 17 February 2014 - 04:23 PM
Edited by roserocks01, 17 February 2014 - 04:23 PM.
#115
Posted 17 February 2014 - 04:36 PM
Yea! now we have a filler for Brightest
All who in favor of her new app say "I"
Me: I
Edited by Razored Edge, 17 February 2014 - 04:37 PM.
#116
Posted 17 February 2014 - 05:10 PM
I
#117
Posted 17 February 2014 - 05:45 PM
I'm gonna bring another one of my ocs in!
Oc name: Connemara
Gender: Mare
Race of pony: Earth Pony
Age: 14
Description: Turquoise coat, Yellow eyes, Long Pink hair
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: A book with a quill in an ink pot / Writing books
Short bio: Grew up in Trottingham so she has a slight English accent.
Moved to Ponyville when she was 10 after discovering her talent for writing books when she was 8.
She is quite a well known author all over Equestria.
Power that you are going to discover: Dowsing ( finding things and ponies with their minds, look it up )
Personality: Cheerful, knowledgeable, friendly, helpful.
Accepted! I know I'm the owner of the rp here but I need three yes' for my new app!
Good to see you using this interesting new rule.
Yes from me.
Yes including Razor as well
Edited by Dominic, 17 February 2014 - 05:46 PM.
#118
Posted 17 February 2014 - 05:48 PM
#119
Posted 18 February 2014 - 04:23 AM
Edited by Razored Edge, 18 February 2014 - 04:24 AM.
#120
Posted 18 February 2014 - 06:04 AM
Holy crapple I started to feel a little OP with Brightest's Power but now that I read Escher's power in action I felt way less bad and it makes me a little ready to drop another OP bomb that will be able to combine Brighest and Edges power to something possibly scary.
Better idea, think about your characters abilities and what they can do separately, This is not an arms race over who can have the best power, I took the liberty of creating a list showcasing the powers your OC's have based on my interpretation of the description for it.
Also, Most of the Characters in this are Powerful, which is not a bad thing in this case.
In the end, it's how you play your character that determines how powerful they are, as well as what their personality is like. Escher can't make matter, She can only bend and stretch it. Here are Examples:
Edited by Dominic, 18 February 2014 - 07:09 AM.
#121
Posted 18 February 2014 - 11:02 AM
Yeah, maybe so. Also, I got lost in the story again and can't post. Can someone help me with that? Also, I have plans for bloom to have more power.
Edited by Guardian, 18 February 2014 - 02:36 PM.
#122
Posted 18 February 2014 - 11:50 AM
#123
Posted 18 February 2014 - 12:36 PM
Ahah So she was based on MC Escher cool!
And I will have to reword Edge's powe it's FMA style Alchemy(transmutation) but she is not bound by the law of conservation
Example: can turn a a stack of bricks into a stack of gold with the same size of original bricks but the same density as gold. the only difference is that more mass a been introduced in to the equation that was not supposed to be there.
Edited by Razored Edge, 18 February 2014 - 01:00 PM.
#124
Posted 18 February 2014 - 01:00 PM
Thanks for clearing that up!
And I was surprised no one made the connection sooner to Maurits Cornelis Escher.
#125
Posted 18 February 2014 - 01:30 PM
I was going to submit a new OC but first I must ask one question... have any of you seen the movie jumper?
Edited by Nightshift, 18 February 2014 - 01:34 PM.
#126
Posted 18 February 2014 - 01:55 PM
Teleportation through time?
#127
Posted 18 February 2014 - 01:55 PM
#128
Posted 18 February 2014 - 02:10 PM
#129
Posted 18 February 2014 - 02:46 PM
To clear it up, I got lost in the story completely. I'm busy in life again, also joining in a pre-con writing contest in MLPForums. So excitent since it's my bread and butter.
And wow, Multiple characters already. I'm soooo going to get lost in the story in a snap. Mostly with Razored Edge's super long post about himself. No offense.
#130
Posted 18 February 2014 - 03:59 PM
To be honest, I just skim the posts to see if they involve any of my characters, as well as get a general idea about where everyone is.
#131
Posted 18 February 2014 - 09:49 PM
Gender: Colt
Age: 10
Race: Alicorn (flying)
Cutie mark: doesn't have one yet.
Talent: building/designing go karts (like wooden ones in Angry Birds Go!) for friends and family
Short description:Woody's skin/fur is the same colour as rainbow dash's and his mane is the same as buttons' (if you don't know who he is then watch a video by JanAnimations called:Buttons' adventures) but has a dark blue and bright blue colour scheme for his mane and tail. His tail is the same as vinyl scratch's and yet again has the same colour scheme as I mentioned just now. His eyes are dark midnight blue and he wears a simple midnight blue cap. His magic Auera (don't know how to spell it, so let's just say the stuff around his horn) is bright blue
Power that you will discover: He can transform into other things. (He just thinks of something or creates something in his mind and he turns into it)
Personality: All around: basically a mixture of all of them , but mainly shyness and bravery show most)
Bio: Woody moved to ponyville on his own when his parents had to move to the Chrystal empire for an unknown reason (to you and to woody) so he is on his own. He recently join the CMC and he lives in a small house near Sweet apple acres. He loves to help out with anything from cooking to fixing a kart. He goes to Cheerlie's school and will allways protect his friends and family.
He will even try and stop crimes!
That's all....my short description wasn't very short lol!
(Is there anything that i need to change?)
#132
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:07 PM
Not sure how I feel about this one.
#133
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:09 PM
#134
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:11 PM
#135
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:18 PM
We may need to adjust the power slightly. How about he can only shapeshift into one animal/thing? Then he wouldn't be like a changeling. If we could adjust a little, you're accepted!
#136
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:20 PM
#137
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:39 PM
I love Button Mash! It's spelt aura btw.
We may need to adjust the power slightly. How about he can only shapeshift into one animal/thing? Then he wouldn't be like a changeling. If we could adjust a little, you're accepted!
Sure! And can the thing he changes to be different everyday? But he has a dream where he gets to choose?
Do crystal ponies only come in earth? Cause I don't remember any pegasus or unicorn ponies aside from Sombra.
But they arnt Chrystal ponies. In the bio I said they moved there
#138
Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:58 PM
Sure! And can the thing he changes to be different everyday? But he has a dream where he gets to choose?
But they arnt Chrystal ponies. In the bio I said they moved there
Oh wait I got confused.
But yeah , his parents moved there.
#139
Posted 18 February 2014 - 11:34 PM
Me two.
Please check yourself for grammar, as it can add confusion into an RP.
#140
Posted 18 February 2014 - 11:57 PM
Side note; I wonder what the government is like in Saddle Arabia... Just curious
#141
Posted 19 February 2014 - 08:03 AM
#142
Posted 19 February 2014 - 08:08 AM
Please check yourself for grammar, as it can add confusion into an RP.
Thanks for Pointing that out =)
#143
Posted 19 February 2014 - 08:53 AM
Edited by Razored Edge, 19 February 2014 - 08:53 AM.
#144
Posted 19 February 2014 - 12:39 PM
I don't nitpick Razored. The difference is that with the word "two" instead of "to" the meaning changes drastically.
Edited by Dominic, 19 February 2014 - 12:40 PM.
#145
Posted 19 February 2014 - 12:44 PM
#146
Posted 19 February 2014 - 10:26 PM
I questioned some of my brony friends IRL and they found Edge's back story a little confusing.
So if you have any questions or want some elaboration, not just on Edge but on Brightest too, just ask ![]()
#147
Posted 21 February 2014 - 01:05 AM
Oc name: Agatha
Gender: Female
Race of pony: Earth
Age: 26
Description: Pitch black coat with a crimson mane that she secures in a bun on top of her head, her eyes are an icy blue color.
Cutie Mark and meaning/talent: an eye. Her talent is being able to see through the eyes of animals. When doing this, her body is forced into a comatose state until the animal whose sight she "borrowed " is at a distance of a mile away from her.
Short bio: Born in the griffin kingdom Agatha left her family and moved to Equestria in an effort to escape problems caused by political upheaval that was occurring in the country. Upon arriving in Equestria, she found herself unused to the bright wide open areas and the subsequent hustle and bustle of activity that usually went on in the major cities leading her to seek out Ponyville in hopes of finding piece at last. With her is a crow she brought with her from the griffin kingdom.
Power that you are going to discover: the ability to see movement and flow of thalmatic (magic) energy around herself and others.As well as how it interacts with it's surroundings. Please note, that this ability is only occurs with things in her immediate surroundings and the ability doesn't transfer when she looks at something through the eyes of an animal.
Personality: No nonsense, polite, resourceful
If there's a problem with my OC let me know and I'll change it .
#148
Posted 21 February 2014 - 02:48 AM
Due to knowing raptorvelo personally I am incapable of giving this application a yes or no, as I am Bias. I will however recommend accepting this app.
Also, Razored Edge, What lead Edge to decide to overthrow Celestia?
#149
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:08 AM
So all in all, through your cutie mark you have effectively given her two vision based powers.
Cutie Marks are talents and specialties not powers eg. Rarity can sow not because of her cutie mark, but because it is her passion too.
As a better example, Fluttershy doesn't necessarily knows what the animals are saying to the T, she just naturally understands them.
Cutie marks represent the things you find you are good at, not bestowments of power/gift. (Cutie pox does not count as it is a magical ailment that causes spontaneous talent that have no rhyme nor reason.)
How about acute visual perception instead? It encompasses the magic sight with various other kinds. Or how about farsight/mindsight? Allows one to see far off of their position through a medium.
Please alert me if I missed something that renders it all invalid.
Edited by Razored Edge, 21 February 2014 - 03:33 AM.
#150
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:19 AM
Btw I'm going to take out the part about her personal side, it would simply be to hard and confusing for me to do and for somepony to interact with.
#151
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:35 AM
Personally (just me though so don't freakout) I feel her cutie mark is a power Ipso facto, because by the mentioning of a crow brought with her the crow could be assumed a trained crow, and would allow her to send it to spy, watch over things, etc. The very fact you delineated the described power from the cutie mark lends one to see an obvious familiarity with the cutie mark ability. As considers the two a common trait begins to appear, an advanced visual perception power allowing her to see far, or see deeper. Now seeing far is a bit of a stretch with the one mile radius limit, or the requirement of the crow being trained.
So all in all, through your cutie mark you have effectively given her two vision based powers.
Cutie Marks are talents and specialties not powers eg. Rarity can sow not because of her cutie mark, but because it is her passion too.
As a better example, Fluttershy doesn't necessarily knows what the animals are saying to the T, she just naturally understands them.
Cutie marks represent the things you find you are good at, not bestowments of power/gift. (Cutie pox does not count as it is a magical ailment that causes spontaneous talent that have no rhyme nor reason.)
How about acute visual perception instead? It encompasses the magic sight with various other kinds. Or how about farsight/mindsight? Allows one to see far off of their position through a medium.
Please alert me if I missed something that renders it all invalid.
When you say medium do you mean like a crystal ball or by using a bowl of water or something to see things happening at a distance?
I can remove the crow if it makes you feel uncomfortable.
Edited by raptorvelo, 21 February 2014 - 04:01 AM.
#152
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:38 AM
By medium, I really meant anything if you want it could be an all rounder that can see from anything/ anypony.
But like I said I can totally be way off base here by missing something important.
Edited by Razored Edge, 21 February 2014 - 03:39 AM.
#153
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:40 AM
To Dominic, really just Celestia kind and loving personality, it made Edge sick and if Chrysalis' plan seemed sound enough, which it would have been if not for the mane six, Edge would have gotten the Equestria half, due to the pointless ness of try to steal from her virtually non existent true love, (the only love being in power) it would logically been safer to let Edge go if she was willing to work with Chrysalis, which she was! Her lust for power would have made her easier for Chrysalis to control. Overall Edge of Light is a power hungry mad mare who would overthrow their aunt, who literally was the only pony that displayed some level of compassion towards Edge. Edge is for now pure evil, that is until a certain pegasus reigns back control of his house, she will be.
Btw I'm going to take out the part about her personal side, it would simply be to hard and confusing for me to do and for somepony to interact with.
So Edge dislikes others that are nice?
Does She desire Celestia to Suffer? Or does she just want the throne?
The issue can be solved by asking the local pony Law enforcement, considering that Edge just broke into someones house. Twilight would not let that occur.
#154
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:52 AM
Let's see,
1st. To a point not just nice ponies… more of like softness to a point where they let things slip by, eg Celestia not handing down a crueler punishment during Lesson Zero, Edge would have been much worse by doling out only capital punishments to a misuse of magic in that situation (only after questioning why she sent Twilight to learn about friendship, the event that kicked off the series.)
2nd. The throne, she could care less about Celestia suffering, it would only have been seen as a mild distraction from anything else she had going on.
Spoiler for planned events!
Edited by Razored Edge, 21 February 2014 - 03:55 AM.
#155
Posted 21 February 2014 - 03:55 AM
*Embarrassed at the copious amount of mistakes*
enough power and wits to stop her
Of course he will already be one step ahead of her nonsense.
Don't feel bad, I'm trying to help your character grow.
A good portion of the OC's in this have the power and the wits to, I am looking forward to the team up.
How?
Edited by Dominic, 21 February 2014 - 04:09 AM.
#156
Posted 21 February 2014 - 04:09 AM
More spoilers!
His cutie mark talent, him being able to weigh the idea of being her friend and all good that can come of it, and all the bad of letting her psycho self loose. Even letting the law enforcement do it's job would end terribly at this point now that she understands her power. Once he realizes her power, even without specifics, he would not leave somepony so obviously messed up to their own devices. He would do what he can to impede her from doing anything he is not comfortable with and effectively neutralize her.
Brightest is not an idiot, he catches on to the evils of her fairly quick.
Plus, not seeing the fault from the last edit you made.
Edited by Razored Edge, 21 February 2014 - 04:13 AM.
#157
Posted 21 February 2014 - 04:11 AM
The crow is fine, (it needs to be about 20% cooler…)
By medium, I really meant anything if you want it could be an all rounder that can see from anything/ anypony.
But like I said I can totally be way off base here by missing something important.
You seem to have misinterpreted me a little the one mile radius is not how long the vision lasts, It's the distance the animal has to be at before she can stop using her special talent. Basically meaning that she could be laying on the ground in a deathlike trance for hours, days, or even months. Especially if someone were to move the body to a hospital which I would think anypony would do if they found one of their own collapsed on the ground in a deathlike state. Effectively trapping her in the body of the animal whale it flew around randomly as she has no way of influencing its decisions or direction of travel.
The crow idea was something I had decided on as it would at least ensure that I don't end up trapped in a form that is incapable of anything above what could be barely seen as interaction for the rest of the rp.
Although I rather liked the idea of the mirror thing and may decide to use that instead if I end up scrapping the bird idea.
#158
Posted 21 February 2014 - 04:13 AM
More spoilers!
His cutie mark talent, him being able to weigh the idea of being her friend and all good that can come of it, and all the bad of letting her psycho self loose. Even letting the law enforcement do it's job would end terribly at this point now that she understands her power. Once he realizes her power, even without specifics, he would not leave somepony so obviously messed up to their own devices. He would do what he can to impede her from doing anything he is not comfortable with and effectively neutralize her.
Brightest is not an idiot, he catches on to the evils of her fairly quick.
Ah, that makes sense.
I am looking forward to the team up of the characters to defeat this foe, as our characters will assist. ![]()
Edited by Dominic, 21 February 2014 - 04:18 AM.
#159
Posted 21 February 2014 - 04:35 AM
Also happens to be that kind of idiot who is really smart and will make it very difficult to do so.
To Raptorvelo,
First off the crow is fine.
I understood the mile as a kind of AoE type set up. I also was under the impression she can exit when she wishes, unless she requires either the animal to over extend boundaries or an external awakening force. (The latter would explain the point of the crow.)
My only problem is with the cutie mark being to much like a power that's all. Like I said, cutie marks are revelations of natural talents, not bestowments. I realised it would seem that way from the seeming skill increase but that's to be expected once you focus in that area of talent.
Cutie Pox again doesn't count. (Thats to every pony that calls Cutie Pox legitimate!)
In the end you could compile it into a single broad power (I did on both of mine, shush!), and change the cutie mark.
Plus what is this about mirrors? I definitely missed something.
As always, tell me if I am missing something rendering this argument invalid.
#160
Posted 21 February 2014 - 05:26 AM
Ehh she's more of just a discontent idiot that Brightest will take down a peg or two.
Also happens to be that kind of idiot who is really smart and will make it very difficult to do so.
To Raptorvelo,
First off the crow is fine.
I understood the mile as a kind of AoE type set up. I also was under the impression she can exit when she wishes, unless she requires either the animal to over extend boundaries or an external awakening force. (The latter would explain the point of the crow.)
My only problem is with the cutie mark being to much like a power that's all. Like I said, cutie marks are revelations of natural talents, not bestowments. I realised it would seem that way from the seeming skill increase but that's to be expected once you focus in that area of talent.
Cutie Pox again doesn't count. (Thats to every pony that calls Cutie Pox legitimate!)
In the end you could compile it into a single broad power (I did on both of mine, shush!), and change the cutie mark.
Plus what is this about mirrors? I definitely missed something.
As always, tell me if I am missing something rendering this argument invalid.
She can not exit when ever she wants the creature whose sight she is using MUST be, at the most, a mile away from her before she can reawaken meaning if the bird or animal is 2 miles away then she will still be in her comatose state until the animal gets closer.
Also I was simply using the mirror as an example of using the medium thing you mentioned although I would take precautions to ensure that it isn't op meaning that the only ones she could see would be those that she has already met. keep in mind that that idea would only be implemented if I decide against using the crow.
#161
Posted 21 February 2014 - 05:45 AM
Ehh she's more of just a discontent idiot that Brightest will take down a peg or two.
Also happens to be that kind of idiot who is really smart and will make it very difficult to do so.
Yes, thus the other characters will help as well!
((so like an Idiot savant? I'm confused.
http://en.wikipedia....Savant_syndrome))
Edited by Dominic, 21 February 2014 - 05:46 AM.
#162
Posted 21 February 2014 - 05:59 AM
Or, somewhat like Team Rocket, in the cases of their very well designed machines, just the wrong people to pilot said machines.
Raptorvelo
I see the distance clarification now, O.K. that makes sense.
Now I know where mirrors occur from. It would make sense if she had seen the pony whose sight she were to use.
Finally, OP? That term doesn't exist here! Brightest is living proof as is Edge! Like I said both powers are legitimate so bundle them under one overreaching idea. Make her cutie mark something sensible and you will be set to go.
If that is changed then my recommendation goes out to you! And if some pony doesn't understand I'll explain it to them!
Edited by Razored Edge, 21 February 2014 - 06:13 AM.
#163
Posted 21 February 2014 - 08:17 AM
#164
Posted 21 February 2014 - 12:13 PM
Finally, OP? That term doesn't exist here! Brightest is living proof as is Edge! Like I said both powers are legitimate so bundle them under one overreaching idea. Make her cutie mark something sensible and you will be set to go.
And Mora, And Vocal, and...Well, I already made the post show casing how everyones power is OP. Though I have noticed in Raptors Case the player seems concerned with not violating previously held standards, and for that I am okay.
2.) Just keep this in mind.
#165
Posted 21 February 2014 - 01:01 PM
I think raptor's app is fine! Accepted!
So does this mean i'm in, or do I need 2 more yeses before I can enter the rp?
Edited by raptorvelo, 21 February 2014 - 01:01 PM.
#166
Posted 21 February 2014 - 01:02 PM
#167
Posted 21 February 2014 - 02:27 PM
#168
Posted 22 February 2014 - 05:31 AM
Possible Side-Villain that I have had planned.
Edited by Dominic, 22 February 2014 - 05:39 AM.
#169
Posted 22 February 2014 - 05:44 AM
#170
Posted 22 February 2014 - 05:54 AM
Sometimes the nicest people can be the most cruel when behind closed doors.
#171
Posted 22 February 2014 - 06:20 AM
Yes from me!
#172
Posted 22 February 2014 - 07:59 AM
#173
Posted 23 February 2014 - 06:10 AM
new oc here need confermation on if it's ok
Name: mari rose
Gender: Mare
Race: pegasus
Age: 10
Description:she has a white coat, messy green hair with one blue streak going through it, same goes for tail, lime green eyes.
Cutiemark: melting/dripping bass clef heart, stands for her talent in making heavy bass oriented music and love music
Power: ability to create sonic blast waves/bubbles that could stun or be destructive if she focused enough
Bio: Mari had always been over active when it came to playing or writing music since she was a little filly. she moved to ponyville to take lessons from her mentor who her parents hired to help her reach her full potential.when she was young she use to have an anger problem but solved that by blocking all her problems out with music but now she can't go 10 minutes without it or she starts getting headaches an exibiting violent behavior. She can always be seen with a red and black jacket on no matter what the temperature and listening to music with her ear buds.
Personality: hyper active, can be very quiet at time but is loud most of the time
(p.s. the bio is more me than my last oc)
Edited by Nightshift, 23 February 2014 - 03:10 PM.
#174
Posted 23 February 2014 - 08:34 AM
#175
Posted 23 February 2014 - 12:58 PM
#176
Posted 23 February 2014 - 01:03 PM
#177
Posted 23 February 2014 - 01:13 PM
#178
Posted 23 February 2014 - 01:58 PM
#179
Posted 23 February 2014 - 02:58 PM
#180
Posted 24 February 2014 - 02:20 AM
I plan on having Aurora undergo some character development. How does hosting a show that details the great talents within equestrian towns sound?
Edited by Dominic, 24 February 2014 - 02:26 AM.
#181
Posted 24 February 2014 - 03:27 AM
Now the feeling he gets when he sees unusual ponies was not intended for him to find ponies, it was to alert him to something he can't change and the nature of the object. So when he looked at Edge, she couldn't be changed because she had powers, and the evil feeling because that's her nature. The feeling is represented as being shocked hence me referring to it as a spark (of electricity)
The black door represents a challenge to get better, to be worthy of his power getting new sparks. It would be treated like a dungeon filled with puzzles that relate to the spark to be gained, like finding alternate was to get passed an obstacle that could be easily passed with the sought after spark.
Every time he dreams at night he is able to choose a new power and converse with hisself in order to have multiples of the same head working together. This area of dream state is the Silent Core, a place being resemblance to Ponyville bu dominated by a large lake where he drinks from different sections to receive his new spark for the following day. Each spark is physically represented at the time for him to converse with on the details of their sparks or for general chat on things he already knows consciously or subconsciously.
Actual sparks are additions to his power, they change someway he is allowed to use his power, this is an attempt to limit his already OP power. Here is a current run down of his sparks plus any to be added. (Will update as neccessary.) note the ponies behind the spark are not actually physical forms he takes in the waking world, just a representation.
Crystal spark: allows a preview into what the changes are in the form of a double vision. The current world more prominently held forth while the dormant world is present like a ghost image.
Earth spark: allows his changes to affect ponies. Example, if he focused on Vinyl and forced a apple to grow in a otherwise barren tree (barren not dead) she will be able to see the apple and interact with it. This doesn't allow for him to change ponies themselves.
Alicorn spark: allows for a wider control over the environment. Such as turning leaves purple, or the color of objects and state of objects. Example: the lake water is normally cold but he can change it to hot like lava, if he concentrates or touches it while he goes back it will carry over the change for a short time. Require intense focus though if not in contact. (Leaves are intrinsicly green yes but he is changing what it receives from light, so that the photons that cause purple bounces off it where green attuned photons are absorbed.)
Pegasus spark: reigns it down to a more controllable state. It only allows for simple choices but he can interact more freely with the discrepancies. Example, the simple states of an unlocked door is open or closed, if the door is closed in the natural world it is open in the reverse, he can now pass through it. But he can not take ponies with him, but when he exits reverse he is now on the other side of the door. (Due to the nature of locks he cannot breach them yet even with Human spark."
Unicorn spark: changes what magic does to him, or render him immune to magic all together. Example, if Trixie had the Alicorn amulet once again and tried to electrocute Brightest he would coldness and pleasure as opposed to the heat and pain that electricity generates. This also refers to any injury he might sustain at the fault of magic, a healing spell could hurt whereas a harmful spell could cure.
Changeling spark: by focusing on a target and a known thought he can give them nudges into alternate thoughts. But he is unable to change any thoughts pertaining himself. Example, Brightest knows Twilight wants a certain book, but he wants her to look at a different book, by focusing on this thought and her he can give her the alternate idea. This power requires Brightest to already know a thought in the persons head before hand and will only provide the suggestion, the outcome will then be dependent on the target if they actually follow the idea or not.
Pending.
Human spark: this allows deeper dives into the natural world and he can change how basic building blocks of the world work. Such as making liquids hard, so that Brightest may walk atop water, or say that the arrangements of atoms and molecules in rocks make them hard he can rearrange them to be softer or more rubbery. The barest he must know is a degree of how elastic he wants it. This power only works if Brightest gets to a certain level specific, to much generality will cause it to backfire by making Brightest sick to his stomach, even stretching to a point where physical injury is possible.
Planned:
Extension of Pegasus, may not like it because it is a bit much. Bat-pony spark: robs him of his ability to changes thing but he can leech information out of what's around him. As in if he focuses on a object he will gain information on how he is allowed to change it. He leeches it in the way that it be destroyed in the process. Certain objects like ponies or the sun that are too deeply rooted into the natural world maybe read but not destroyed, or in some cases neither be destroyed nor read.
Ask if something is not clear about Brightest or his power please ask.
Edited by Razored Edge, 24 February 2014 - 03:40 AM.
#182
Posted 24 February 2014 - 03:30 AM
No Human ability, Change it to Everfree, which is worlds more unnatural then a human ever could be, due to the natural of the place with regards to the rest of Equestra. Also, How will you RP with everyone else when your busy going on these quests for more power to add to your current power? By making long posts that has little to do with anyone else? I'm Bringing this up because I'm concerned that you will miss out on a large percentage of other characters having fun while Brightest goes off to become more powerful, so that he can defeat what I am starting to think might be his personal villain Edge.
Edited by Dominic, 24 February 2014 - 03:45 AM.
#183
Posted 24 February 2014 - 03:40 AM
Because I'm a Nubcake I have to add in:
Every time he dreams at night he is able to choose a new sparkand converse with hisself in order to have multiples of the same head working together. This area of dream state is the Silent Core, a place being resemblance to Ponyville bu dominated by a large lake where he drinks from different sections to receive his new spark for the following day. Each spark is physically represented at the time for him to converse with on the details of their sparks or for general chat on things he already knows consciously or subconsciously.
#184
Posted 24 February 2014 - 03:54 AM
That's all a bit too complicated. ((Drink from the mirror pool or something, have your character have to go someplace unnatural in his dream quest.))
I'll be honestly haven't been paying perfect attention to your posts, as they make almost no sense, given the context. It honestly feels like your RPing with yourself only, and that can't be fun. ![]()
[[Just realize that Escher's home has been rendered pretty unnatural do to her powers...]]
Edited by Dominic, 24 February 2014 - 04:18 AM.
#185
Posted 24 February 2014 - 04:27 AM
I mostly move in and Rp with others when I see an opportunity to and mostly wait for invitation or somepony opens up to it. As for fun are you saying in regards to me or others? Because I find it enjoyable. (Not the being alone part, the part of me making my character questing about seems fun for me.) but if it's hurting everyone else I'll destroy other parts that require Brightest to go galavanting and force more socialness. Besides I'm making Edge annoy everypony so they all form a vendetta against her. I find it easier to control both of them when they inhabit similar spaces hence them living together only for my convenience, not to form personal grudges against each other. Plus I want to take everypony with Brightest so they can work together in the Abyssal Hall (name of the place behind the door.) but it feels a bit, selfish and forceful to take everypony into a dungeon understood solely by myself. I make him stumble across these things frequently but don't ever get too indepth with it by creating a storyline that I always preplan out, that I know not everyone agrees with. Take the Brightest going in the woods for example he was to be out there much longer whilst Edge created turmoil. But I realized it would be very seperate from everyone so I brought him back. As for his power complexity, I naturally dislike simple powers as they are flat and well… simple.
Rehashing: I wait for an opening to interact. His powers are complex due to my infatuation for complex power structure. Edge is everyone's problem.These creative quests are fun for me, but if they hurt everyone I'll stop. Possible options for enhanced interactiveness from him I thought of are:
1.) I can make his personal quests open as a more purposeful event that rotates more with others.
2.) destroy these quests entirely to allow for more sociability, and his strengths could come forth in a simpler manner.
Edited by Razored Edge, 24 February 2014 - 04:27 AM.
#186
Posted 24 February 2014 - 04:49 AM
At no point do I want you to destroy an aspect of your character that makes your character who he is.
As for the Everfree journey, you could shorten your posts by just hinting at what has occurred between them.
such as first just having him enter the forest. Then, your next post describes him, battered and bruised from trying to navigate the harsh terrain, arriving at the destination, and his thoughts on the matter. Finally have him preform the action needed at that location.
As for Brightest being separate, look at Vocal Cast, He's been at Ghastly Gorge practicing his power. I have been using Escher as a means to evolve story with two other players. Use Edge, make her do what ever it is that makes her bad.
What determines Good and Evil with regards to the spark? For Edge it makes sense because she is bad. But what of Aurora, who believes that what she views as good is the correct course of action, even though, based on someone else's thoughts, it may not be.
Also, I am eager to see the meeting between Edge and Aurora. Two Villains. Wonder what will happen?
That and the rest of my characters.
Edited by Dominic, 24 February 2014 - 04:51 AM.
#187
Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:02 AM
as for his power… it will still be complex but I'll find something to replace human as it seems to bother everyone.
#188
Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:21 AM
wow just wow
#189
Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:25 AM
#190
Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:26 AM
looooong post
#191
Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:33 AM
Your right I can just consolidate details of a journey more, I only go into greater detail when asked. What defines good and evil? So many things, that's why he can't change that. And using Edge to interact more was her purpose. And I'd see those two as natural enemies, unless Aurora is fine being Edge's lackey, Edge's only equal companion whom she respected died.
as for his power… it will still be complex but I'll find something to replace human as it seems to bother everyone.
Don't expect Aurora to be a lackey
...Some time soon, if everything works out, I'll reveal just want makes Aurora so evil.
Edited by Dominic, 24 February 2014 - 05:35 AM.
#192
Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:34 AM
#193
Posted 27 February 2014 - 02:48 AM
Name: Midnight Havok (self imposed name doesn't know her real first name.)
Gender: Mare
Race: Unicorn
Age: 19
Description: a dark shadowy smoke color body. Her eyes are a piercing toxic purple with a outer spiked corona of coal black, the corona enlarges the dark the area gets eventually leaving only solid purple disks in total darkness, it recedes in the light though. Her body always holds a shimmery appearance that seems to threaten to vanish, this is due to her wrapping her shadows around herself leaving her no shadow.
Back story: After a tramatic event she can not remember she fled from home at an early age to the Far East, there she learned the combat tactics of the Shinobi. It was there she learned all forms of Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu which she combined with shadow powers she developed. After she rescued a princess who lived to ascend to be an Empress, furthered her studies to learn even older forms of combat and learned Eastern cultural style magic. When the Sengoku started the empress sent Midnight away fearing for her safety, now she comes to Ponyville to rediscover her lost culture. Even though Japonies is her best language she became quickly fluent in Equstrian, while much of western culture is still lost upon her. She always has a Japonies copy of "Black Lightning Tempest!" On her at all times.
Personality: Zero visible emotion, virtual poker face all the time. Acts with purpose and swiftness, always seeks to better herself through rigorous often unreasonably brutal training. Takes what she's told very seriously and terrible and swift retribution is carried out on those who maliciously deceives her. Capable of reading the atmosphere and react accordingly often not reacting at all, if she is surprised you would never know it.
Power: Total Shadow Control, by the day she can only create non-solid objects, but at night or in dark places her shadows become terrifyingly real.
(Can she already have mastered a bit of her power?)
Edited by Razored Edge, 27 February 2014 - 03:35 AM.
#194
Posted 27 February 2014 - 03:11 AM
no offense.
#195
Posted 27 February 2014 - 03:15 AM
Finaly another actually offensive power other than my character's
no offense.
Heh not just offense, She is basically a ninja, shadows can do many things.
Woops I am a Nub, I forgot her description!
#196
Posted 27 February 2014 - 03:38 AM
Edited by Nightshift, 27 February 2014 - 03:39 AM.
#197
Posted 27 February 2014 - 03:41 AM
#198
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#199
Posted 27 February 2014 - 04:40 AM
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