Jump to content


Photo

The Story of Annalya


  • Please log in to reply
8 replies to this topic

#1 HazelEclipse

HazelEclipse

    MeepPony

  • Pony
  • 17 posts
  • minecraft:
    alannajewel

Posted 02 January 2016 - 05:39 AM

imdone._.


Edited by Annalya, 02 January 2016 - 06:50 PM.


#2 BackwaterOtter

BackwaterOtter

    10% Less Edgy Than 2016

  • Builder
  • 798 posts
  • minecraft:
    OtterOfBackwater

Posted 02 January 2016 - 12:40 PM

Question:

 

How many times has she been mistaken for Celestia?



#3 HazelEclipse

HazelEclipse

    MeepPony

  • Pony
  • 17 posts
  • minecraft:
    alannajewel

Posted 02 January 2016 - 05:25 PM

Question:

 

How many times has she been mistaken for Celestia?

not at all actually.... :/

i draw her with her hair flat instead of like celestia's



#4 Blazuhira Miller

Blazuhira Miller

    Granter of bad times.

  • RP Moderator
  • 3614 posts
  • minecraft:
    iDazzumHD

Posted 02 January 2016 - 05:33 PM

She looks like many other deviantart ocs. Maybe you should think about having her appearance fit in more with MLP's setting? Any sort of 'unique' factors to her appearance (stuff like the gradients, the rainbow mane and tail, and the earrings) should be few, usually one to a character or so, and should be something you could expect to find in the show. It makes it look more fitting. Also, seeing as there are thousands of OCs with rainbow manes, having one without makes it stand out. Amidst that group, at least.



#5 HazelEclipse

HazelEclipse

    MeepPony

  • Pony
  • 17 posts
  • minecraft:
    alannajewel

Posted 02 January 2016 - 06:43 PM

not to be rude, but i didn't really ask for criticism on my oc, i just posted a story about her.....



#6 Blazuhira Miller

Blazuhira Miller

    Granter of bad times.

  • RP Moderator
  • 3614 posts
  • minecraft:
    iDazzumHD

Posted 02 January 2016 - 06:48 PM

I know. Still, if there's room for improvement (and there always is) criticism should be expected.



#7 greenjoe12345

greenjoe12345

    The one with the blind OC

  • Builder
  • 143 posts
  • minecraft:
    greenjoe12345

Posted 02 January 2016 - 08:40 PM

where did said story go? you remove it?



#8 jimme neutron corndog

jimme neutron corndog

    Is a woman

  • Builder
  • 1822 posts
  • minecraft:
    Sierif

Posted 02 January 2016 - 10:30 PM

(maybe you shouldnt remove your story just because someone offered freindly critcism and you denied it and ignored everything they suggested, sorry if im sounding rude :-( )

#9 HazelEclipse

HazelEclipse

    MeepPony

  • Pony
  • 17 posts
  • minecraft:
    alannajewel

Posted 03 January 2016 - 03:35 AM

(maybe you shouldnt remove your story just because someone offered freindly critcism and you denied it and ignored everything they suggested, sorry if im sounding rude :sad: )

it wasn't very friendly if you ask me T.T

sorry if im being dramatic 

also im not going to change how my oc looks, just becuase someone says that its unoriginal.(if that is what you mean by ignoring what they suggested) 

its my oc and if i wanted to change it, i would

also the story obv sucks so no one has to read it anyway

srry ._.




0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users