Wow this is a good build. There's only one major thing is the lamps outside. The levers on the side look really bad. If you can find a way to power the lamps without showing the redstone workings, then it'd be good, otherwise I recommend a different lighting method.
The one minor thing would be that the fencing touching the wall on the second floor doesn't look terribly good.
Other than those two things this is really well done. Not many builders can pull off a balcony either, but you did it! Good luck!
Edited by Edward, 24 November 2015 - 03:12 AM.