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#1 -Hawk-

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Posted 08 March 2014 - 12:37 AM

good day everyone!

this is the first chapter of a new fic called "The shadow of truth", which will feature everypony's favourite elite-flying-team-that-are-not-the-wonderbolts as they find themselves displaced to Equestria, where they will try to uncover the truth behind their return, the attack of Nightmare moon, and what really happened during the dark queen's first bloody reign a thousand years ago. along the way they will try to come to terms with what happened, and discover that Equestria isn't always as it seems, both now and in the past . . .

 

I hope you will all enjoy it, and I would appreciate it if you could leave a comment whether you liked it or not, and why. thanks in advance.

 

 

please find the story at the following link:

 

https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing
 




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