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#1 Terrorblade

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Posted 13 April 2013 - 02:45 PM

Hello. i would like to some to take a look at my house if its looks ok. would ge glad if someone did it :)

 

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#2 Seras Victoria

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Posted 13 April 2013 - 04:05 PM

I took a look at your and the exterior looks good and you've decorated it well but maybe a few too many leaves. The design and shape of the house is fine so no problems on the outside. Starting on the interior of the ground floor, it look's a bit open and you use some basic furnishings. Perhaps try to make different kinds of furniture using multiple blocks. The kitchen looks nice and you've filled it well, but the bathroom on the ground floor has no bath or shower, although it's not a major requirement i just wanted to make you aware. Moving on to the first floor the balcony if alright but as you come onto the landing it again looks a bit unfurnished at the end, you can always looks at houses in ponyville and /warp ikea for ideas if you need them. The bedroom looks nice but you could add something more where the cupboard is. Finishing in the second floor you have a 'Secret lab' remember you making a normal ponyville house like you would see in the background so i'm not completely sure if it's acceptable. The other room is just filled with bookcases and a chair so that will need some redesign. Overall you just need to work on the complexity of your furniture and fill areas a bit better than you already have but other than that it's a good sub.



#3 Ame

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Posted 28 April 2013 - 08:13 AM

Exterior: from looking around, i noticed that some awkward windows have been placed around the house (1x4, 1x2 windows) and those are always a turn down. And just like what Wrover101 said. to many leaves. other then that the exterior was well done. 

 

Interior: The interior was well done. but I spotted a couple mistakes here and there. one thing is that you must find a more creative way to light up your house. i found that you just placed torches everywhere. Some furniture are being "missed used." For example. on the first floor you have a tv set facing a fish tank and a bush. try and mess around with that area. Maybe, if you can turn that area into a dining room. for it is something your house lacks.

 

other then that I cant spot anything else. So all I can say now is Good luck.




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