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Abouya's OC Backstory Writing Request Thread

21 April 2016 - 02:52 AM

OC BACKSTORY REQUEST SHOP

 

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The utter blackness of the light raged on quietly as the light of a small shop still fluttered with dim lights. Sunberry Creame Sparklefartface took a deep breath, and walked inside, dripping from rainwater from the pouring rain outside, which made her fur heavy and sag as if she was an apple about to fall off a tree...

 

Yes, I'm finally doing something for once. But let's establish some ground rules

 

1. Please have some common sense. If you think you're going to do something stupid like post and my shop is closed, then think twice. I've seen many innocent souls get suspended just because of that.

 

2. Remember to be considerate. While I can guarantee you a backstory, it will depend on my life and how much time I have. My schedule fluctuates constantly.

 

3. As with normal Brohoof rules, I'm not allowed to do any grimdark or explicit writing. Sorry.

 

4. I think that's pretty much all I can think of. Oh! This is mostly for practicing my writing skills, so if you have any sort of complaints or want a redo of your story, I'll be happy to meet your requests.

 

Format:

 

OC Name:

 

Description/Picture:

 

A common mood or personality. (This will help me define who your character is so I can write a better story, based on what you want):

 

Other (If you want the story to have any specifics, like for example if you want a specific workplace for your OC, then put it here):

 

 

This is my first time doing something of the sort, so don't blame me if looks improper or unprofessional. Like I said before, it's mostly for practice and so you guys don't have to do the dirty work of figuring out how your OC lives and stuff like that.


From the Underground (Forum RP) (OOC/Apps)

09 March 2016 - 01:39 AM

When comparing everyone, there isn't a doubt that they want freedom. The only difference is how they act to get it.

 

During the times of the Mane 6, the world has always been protected and brought unto peace by their actions. Would be warlords were prevented, armies were defeated, and even god like beings were suppressed. But after years of being hailed as the world saviors, they perished, as all things do. Without successors, the world was open to all out war and corruption. Within months of the last Mane 6's death, a neighboring country declared war on their enemies, the Kingdom of Equestria. It wasn't long before Canterlot was taken over, and the Equestrians were on the brink of complete loss.

 

An exile from the warmongering country, who was named Maximilian, was taken in by the Equestrians. He exchanged valuable military tactics and skills to the Equestrians in return for a place to stay and live in. The Equestrians realized that this pony was the answer to all their problems, and so made him the head of the entire military. With his authority, he miraculously lead the remaining Equestria armies to victory against their enemies. Realizing that their enemy was defeated, the Equestrians rejoiced and were happy that the war was over. For Max, however, it wasn't over yet. 

 

After years of trying to gain real power back at his former home, and his apparent exile from his homeland, he had vowed to himself to continue his plans for world domination. Utilizing technology (as by this point, technology is a thing), he initiated his plan. With his robotic army salvaged from his former home, he successfully overthrew the two unaware Princesses, banishing them to Tartarus and enslaving a very large portion of the Equestrian population. With Canterlot as the new capitol of his empire, he began taking over other parts of Equestria and the surrounding regions, strengthening his evil grasp on the area. Rechristened Emperor Volucris, he never stopped at trying to take over places by any means necessary, as he was mad with power.

 

Not everyone had lost to him, however. Those who were evacuated in time before his take over, mainly women and children, were taken to a remote village, hidden within a great forest. With the princesses gone, and Volucris leading his empire through ruthless conquest, they weren't able to do much in terms of striking back. However, the former inhabitants of Equestria weren't going  to sit around and do nothing. Some stood up and formed a group of freedom fighters, and would do anything they could to rally not just themselves, but the world to fight back Volucris and his evil empire.

 

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Around ten years has past since Volucris's take over. This roleplay is going to be pretty straight forward. This RP is sort of a continuation to the other rp that didn't take off, Liberators of Freedom.

 

Characters are generally going to be freedom fighters, those willing to step up and fight Volucris. That doesn't always need to be the case. If you want an OC that is evil, go for it. If you want a character that is different in any other way, give me a good character app and I'll see what I can do. Any further questions will be answered in this thread.

 

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Character Application: (Totally not copied and modified from blazer's RP thread)

 

Name:

 

Gender:

 

Race: (Just the standard races such as Earth pony, Pegasus or Unicorn, or maybe something else. Put it here and we'll see. No alicorns. )

 

Age:

 

Picture and/or description:

 

Position/Talent: (What do they do? If they were to join the group, what would be their specialty?)

 

Personality:

 

Gear: (This can include anything your character would wear/carry)

 

Backstory: (Who is your character? Where did they come from, and how did they get to where they are now?)

 

Other Important Info:

 

 

Example App:

 

 

Spoiler

 

 

(Doing something like this is new to me, despite in all my time roleplaying. Be mindful if you see mistakes or anything of the sort)


NationStates

21 February 2016 - 08:56 PM

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Those of who you enjoy politics and country simulators or whatnot, this game is actually pretty fun for a browser game.

 

https://www.nationstates.net/

 

I suggest you take a look at it. For those who want a small example, I made my own nation: https://www.nationst...harcoaltropolis

 

A couple of people and I from Brohoof decided to check it out, and I deemed it worthy of having some recognition here on Brohoof. All discussion of it should generally go here, of course.

 

 


House done. /warp s80

09 October 2015 - 07:00 PM

Here it is. The time has finally come.

 

/warp s80


Critique My House, Please

08 October 2015 - 02:28 AM

Hooray, I'm finally doing it. And I'm doing it quite quickly. But now is the time for correction. If anyone has any suggestions or anything, please tell me them so I can make this house my finest. I appreciate your help.

 

/warp s80