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Wolfie's Cmc House- Take Two


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#1 Wolf I.E.

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Posted 10 August 2014 - 08:13 AM

/warp s51

Also be sure to include if it will pass.. I need to know so I can redo it

Also anyone can critic this house, although builders are preferred.



#2 hxfthxft

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Posted 10 August 2014 - 10:58 AM

On the ground floor, there is now way to see through the windows. Try adding another layer of wood to it (or whatever block you used for the floor)



#3 Squint

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Posted 10 August 2014 - 08:00 PM

  • Your ground floor ceiling is too high.
  • The ground floor is lacking in decoration and furniture.
  • The staircase leading to the first floor is awkward, the final steps should be at least one block from the wall. There also isn't anything to stop a pony from slipping and falling down the stairs once they're at the first floor.
  • Again, the main room of the first floor is lacking in decoration. It doesn't feel lived-in.
  • On the second floor, there is again no fence of any kind stopping a pony from falling down the stairs.
  • The second floor feels too big and empty. Maybe make it feel less like this by giving it proper walls and a ceiling instead of just having the roof material exposed.
  • The glowstone blocks surrounded by trapdoors is a really boring way of lighting up. Don't be afraid to use torches, just don't have them as your only light source. Try using beacons, they can look very nice.
  • The fences above the kitchen seem a little weird. Give them more of a purpose, I don't really know why they're there.
  • There's no way to get to the garden?
  • Use some more plants outside, not just in the window boxes. With 1.7 we've got lots of flowers, don't make that update a waste of time.
  • The leaves growing on top of the house are too consistent.

Yea, I think that's enough of my nit-picking. It might just pass at the moment, but it needs more work as is. It just looks very briefly cobbled together, it needs more effort.




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