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#1 GeoFlitter

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Posted 15 December 2015 - 02:23 AM

Hello. my plot is ready to be judged at /warp s72



#2 R9000

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Posted 17 December 2015 - 02:22 AM

Sorry, but we're rejecting your house. For next time, here are some things you can improve:

-Your house shape is very odd. The shape is a little too bulky and basic, lacking any real exterior detail. A smaller, more detailed exterior would have been a better choice.

-Your roof is a bit of a mess. It's too flat and disjointed. Ideally, the edges of your 'A frame' should go down a few blocks further.

-The furniture in your house is a little strange too. There seems to be no toilet in the bathroom, your carpet use is a little excessive, and your upstairs 'attic' room is oddly placed and can only be accessed by a ladder, which doesn't make much sense for ponies.

-You only used red and yellow flowers. There's a lot more variety in flora in the game these days.

-Your windows are only one block tall, leaving them looking a little claustrophobic. Windows should normally be at least two blocks tall.

 

Better luck next time. Take a closer look at some of the houses in /warp Ponyville to improve your building style.




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