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#1 MrButternubs

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Posted 05 November 2013 - 07:11 PM

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minecraft name: Mr_Butternubs

 

While waiting for my cmc house to be judged, I decided to work on another Ponyville house!

Feel free to say anything about it that you don't like or what could be better. 

Builders/nonbuilders: any suggestions are helpful!

 

Thanks in advance!

 

ps: Critique AshleyChristina's house 1st since its a cmc build not a practice

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Edited by MrButternubs, 20 November 2013 - 02:37 AM.


#2 AshleyChristina

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Posted 27 November 2013 - 07:08 PM

OK so when circling round your house i noticed that there are breaks in the hedge fence when ever there is a planter....this takes away from the purpose of the hedge fence, try taking away the trap door and putting leafs instead. i really like your choice of furniture, and how you decorated your signs and didn't just leave them blank, in doing that it really shows that you put in time and effort to make you house the best it can be. you also did a good job fitting the stairs in with the houses floor-plan. however on the second floor there is a "wall" of fence-posts bye the stairs, i think that would look much better if replaced with regular blocks (A.K.A wood). also on the second floor there is a corner in the living room that is unused. try putting a lamp or something there. all in all i think you have a very nice house. (kinda ironic that im critiquing it though ;) )




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