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#1 Stitcherooo

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Posted 19 January 2016 - 10:29 PM

Hello Admins,

 

Since my first submission failed, I am now using you suggestions to create a new house. I am done and would like to be reviewed. Thank you :-D .

 

Sincerely,

Stitcherooo @ plot s78


Edited by Stitcherooo, 20 January 2016 - 12:04 AM.


#2 Shroom Agent

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 01:11 AM

Sorry, but we are rejecting your house.

Your house is very blocky, in a sense. The shape doesn't really fit Ponyville, house looks a bit like a square with a chunk cut out, but a chunky block of a dining room left in its place. A boring L shape, if you will. Your stairs have no structural support. Your fireplace and chimney are excessively large. There is just a general feeling of a lot of empty space in your house. Consider adding more paintings and carpets to the ground floor.

Visit /w ponyville to see example houses.


Edited by R9000, 23 January 2016 - 01:13 AM.



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