can you look at my house /warp s72
critic
#1
Posted 09 January 2013 - 01:11 AM
#2
Posted 09 January 2013 - 01:34 AM
Well let's see
Exterior
First thing I notice is that your house looks kind small
Second I'm not very fond of the vines everywhere and the flowers completely surrounding your house (Put flowers but don't go overboard)
Third it has a box shape not a good option for the shape of the house (You can always try different shapes like a L or something)
Fourth You have a pyramid Roof and that's no good on a ponyville house (Don't ever use pyramid roof it almost always a instant fail)
Fifth your windows are kind of odd (Maybe due to the fact that the house is too small)
Interior
First your first floor is a big empty room with a couple of bookshelves and a stair (Try making a kitchen and a dining room and separate those room evenly)
Second your second floor is just the same a complete empty room aside from a bed and more bookshelves (Again try to redecorate ato give more depth and make more rooms like a bathroom)
From what I can see you need a lot of improvement but I'm sure if you work hard you'll pass
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