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#1 NewoPlaysMC

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Posted 23 August 2014 - 04:56 PM

I need help figuring out if my house is perfect or not please state anything that is weird about my house below. Thanks :)
/warp s72

#2 Moshipig

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Posted 26 August 2014 - 12:40 AM

Hello there! I'm moshipig, and I'm checking your house today. 

 

a + means something good, a - means something bad, and a + - is something that you can choose whether or not you wish to change.

 

Exterior:

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Interior:

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Overall:

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#3 Rulerofblocks

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Posted 26 August 2014 - 01:32 AM

Hello there! I'm moshipig, and I'm checking your house today. 

 

a + means something good, a - means something bad, and a + - is something that you can choose whether or not you wish to change.

 

Exterior:

Spoiler

 

Interior:

Spoiler

 

Overall:

Spoiler

Using my style of house critiquing are you?

I agree with all of this, this house definitely isn't a pass. Good luck on trying to fix it, and if that doesn't work out, come back again after practicing!



#4 Captain Char

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Posted 26 August 2014 - 11:58 AM

I have looked over your house, and I have to agree with the first reply.
My biggest suggestion, ask builders in game as well if they could look at it and also give you tips as not everyone reads the forums

Edited by Captain Char, 26 August 2014 - 11:58 AM.



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