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#1 Sky Jazz

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Posted 05 January 2015 - 04:13 AM

Plot s81, just looking for some pointers and other things, I'm going to work on lighting a bit more tomorrow when I have some time.



#2 The_Miner_Nick

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Posted 08 January 2015 - 12:22 AM

I think the biggest problem with this house right now is how symmetrical it is. The left and right side of the house, with the exception of one having a bathroom/sitting room and the other a kitchen/dining room, are identical as far as I can tell. The sides, too, are perfectly mirrored. Ponyville houses are asymmetrical in most cases, and while you've done a good job furnishing the interior, the exterior is uninspired. In addition, the back of the house lacks detail. I would recommend trying to make the house into an L or T shape with what you have and rearrange the upstairs to not just be two identical bedrooms. Best of luck to you.




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