Posted 18 January 2014 - 01:34 AM
Lets get right to it shall we?
Exterior:
I like this, the design is still slightly boxy, but the elements are there, you used a texture like pattern embedded with your sand exterior walls, and highlighted the structure with spruce, theres also an attention to detail with the little supports under the overhangs, which I find nice to see. there is a few areas of bareness on your walls but I give you credit for using
flower beds. The roof itself isn't a standard shape either, which is nice, the peaks or gables could have been taller just to make it stand out more, but its not a cross shaped roof.
Overall I like the exterior of this house, it does have a pony feel to it to me, it just seems like something is missing though. there as also a lack of shutters.
Interior:
when you first walk in, it seems weird to have a couch and table right there, not only that but piston tables are usually only used in the kitchen.
bathroom is all there, only issue I have is, why is the tap on the countertop?
the Kitchen seems somewhat over sized or cramped oddly your counters are bare and plain, and again the tap is on the counter, also most fridges are openable via button, but that's a detail.
The second floor is ok decorated, however jungle wood is typically not used in construction, however you've seemed to make it work ok here.
the biggest issue I have with your second floor, its more a maze to navigate due its layout, but not a huge issue, the beds seem overly wide and not long enough to make up with that width.
The rooms are furnished nicely however.
The attic, its nice to see you've used this space as well instead up wasting it, some houses however don't require an attic, but if your going to have the room, might as well use it.
the first issue I saw was way to much glowstone being used, also the entire attic area seems bare, the one gable is being used for storage, but overall this looks like a staged room, there's no signs of life or anything really living here.
potted plants in your home would help, since it would show someone is living there tending to them, remember the home should look lived in, or be currently lived in, Overall its not bad Id
say get more feedback from other builders