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#1 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 21 April 2015 - 08:10 PM

(This story is heavily based on the Archie Sonic comics. I recommend you at least read a summary if you want to understand the story more)
 
Story/Setting
 
In a future Equestria, on the planet known to its inhabitants as Equis, lies the Kingdom of Magic. Based on ideals of being in a pre-industrial state to preserve nature, they thrive as a kingdom. Across the lands lies the land of the Overcorns. Overcorns are slightly mutated unicorns who are very limited in magic. Because of this, they use heavy polluting technology to make up for it. The Kingdom and the Overcorns eventually clashed in an all out Great War for five years, resulting in many losses and casualties.  After an Overcorn named Doctor Mobius was banished from the Overcorn city of Techopolis, he was taken in by the ponies of the Kingdom. With his information of technology and Overcorns in general, the Kingdom of Magic was able to win the war. Despite advanced technology and training, the Overcorns, confused on how they lost, mysteriously disappeared.
 
Shorty after the war's end, Mobius, who had gained the trust of King Astro Star, built an army of robots and proceeded to attempt a coup on the Kingdom. Despite trying to fight back, the Kingdom was taken over by Doctor Mobius, and with the use of a device known as the Robotizer, started to enslave the population and turned them into mindless robots.
 
A fraction of the population were secretly moved to a hidden village on the edge of the Everfree called Rootville. As years went on, brave ponies known as the Liberators sent themselves on missions to try to harass the new dictator, who had changed the city Canterlot into a robots' slave city known as Roboterlot. Despite this, the Equestrians were never able to take back their city due to their low population in Rootville.
 
Ten years have passed since the coup. A new generation of Liberators have arise. Now with better technology as the kingdom's previous ideals are over, these ponies will do anything for their freedom. You are one of these ponies, and you will stop at nothing to reclaim Canterlot from the evil Doctor Mobius.
 
RP Information:
 
The Overcorns

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The Kingdom of Magic
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The Kingdom of Magic, in short, is basically Equestria in the future. Instead of having two princesses, however, there is a King and Queen. They rule the country in a monarchy. Because of their culture of preserving nature, they have refused to advance in technology. Stuck in a pre industrial age, they love peace and will do a lot to keep it. After a total misunderstanding, the Kingdom and the Overcorns declare war on each other. After getting exposed to more and more technology, especially after Mobius is rescued by the Kingdom, they officially break out of pre industrial-ness to catch up with their enemies. With their new age and advice from Mobius, they win the war against the Overcorns. However, Mobius stages a coup on the Kingdom, and the King mysteriously disappears while the Queen and younger son were sent to another land, but were never heard from again. The residents who weren't robotized took off to Rootville, trying to fight back
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As I think of more things and the characters explore more places/groups, I will be adding on to this
 
Character Applications:
 
Simply explain things about  your character according to this app template. If you have more than one character, please make another app for that character as well (unless its' history can be related to the character itself ie: companion)
In game name(IGN):
 
OC Name:
 
Race (Can be an Overcorn, if you describe how in bio)
 
Gender:
 
Age(You are most likely young, as in teenager/younger adult. If you wish to be older, I suppose I'll allow that for good reason)
 
Appearance(Picture or description will do)
 
Special Talent/Personality:
 
Bio(doesn't have to be very long)
 
Other:
 
Rules:
 
RP rules apply
Due to this being an in-game RP, things are more quick and don't need tons of explanation.
Please be mature. I'm always a short distance of a call away from an admin, and I hate resorting to that option.
 
Example app:
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What this RP Holds:
 
This is an adventure RP. Once I have found suitable places to begin, it will be centered on more action and such. But there can always be that little SoL section every once in a while, depending on the situation.
 
Current RP Story So Far:
 
In the beginning, it has been 10 years since the coup. The Liberators are about to set off on a mission to sabotage a power station in Roboterlot. Here, before characters can meet/get together, and more description can happen before the mission. As the Liberators go on one of their first missions, they must try to get to the objective along with protecting themselves.
 
Other Stuff:
 
Now I've been wondering whether this RP would fare better in-game, forum, or... neither. Being my first REAL forum application I'm posting, I obviously don't have tons of experience of being the GM of a highly organized RP. But, as they say, practice makes perfect.
 
Anyone in the RP, if they have ideas for new character/scenarios/villains/etc. please tell me, and I'll most likely add it in because I'm terrible at creating ideas (hence my terrible wordplays in the setting)
 
List of Characters:

Solar Star

Dappled Wisp

Mysty Glimmer

Thunder Dash


Edited by Solar Star, 22 April 2015 - 12:45 AM.


#2 Spotsy

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Posted 21 April 2015 - 10:42 PM

IGN: Rocket_Jessie

 

OC Name: Dappled Wisp

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Gender: Female/Mare whatever

 

Age: 18

 

Appearance: 0la58ib.jpg

 

Special Talent/Personality: Can be quite emotional. Sometimes too confident and too proud to show any signs of weakness or kindness. Her special talent is her improved light sensitivity. Like, if the power goes out, she can see the very faint outlines of certain things and will become aware of her surroundings.

 

Bio: Born in a pretty decent class, Dappled Wisp and her siblings spent their entire free time wrestling and playing with fake weapons, pretending to be those who had fought in wars and battles and such. They thoroughly enjoyed roughhousing, but they also had to help with the food, money management and daily chores. They were also all home schooled during the war, so she didn't have the best education. (Their mother wasn't the brightest.) When she and her siblings were a bit older, their father taught them how to use actual weapons. Really, only the basic pistol and knife. Her daily routine got boring after years and years of always winning or losing the roughhousing matches, the daily routines that NEVER changed. Once she turned into a legal 'adult', she packed up a few things into a saddlebag, as in, food, some water, a knife and a small crappy pistol with limited ammo, and left her house behind in search of what she always wanted; a real adventure.

 

 

Other: Has a necklace with a light purple charm resembling a snowflake. Has two birth marks above her eyes and a small artificial mark below her left eye.



#3 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 21 April 2015 - 10:43 PM

Accepted! First person! Welcome to the RP, yay!



#4 Mystic

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 12:09 AM

Mysty Glimmer

Race
Unicorn

Gender
Female(dont judge me)

Age
15

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Talent/ Personality
Mysty Glimmer is very well talented in computers, and also talented in technology of all sorts, however she is sometimes very sensitive and doesnt know what to do in quick happening situations

Bio (sry its so short, need to finish a 9 paragraph report for tomorrow)
Mysty Glimmer is a very short mare born in the village of Rootville. She likes to go on crazy outgoing adventures even though they could most likely get her killed
When she was in her class once, they were learning about technology and programmed a device that can try and sense what pony's cutie marks might of possibly been.
After she made this and it worked she got her cutie mark which is a mini computerized gadget.
When she got older her parents died of the common cold since there immune system was terrible after the war, So she spent the rest of her days until now when she turned
15 years old. She currently has her own mini shack in Rootville where she repairs some technology that is in town and makes potions and tonics that will bring goodness and health to her people.
One of Mysty's mentors taught her how to use a knife for a main weapon and a shotgun, but she is extremely proficient with hand to hand combat, and ever since then she has always had the cloak and
vest that her father gave her so if anything ever happened she would always be prepared.

Edited by Mystic, 22 April 2015 - 08:08 PM.


#5 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 12:13 AM

Rootville is a small village on the edge of the Everfree, but she can be born there, sure.

 

Perhaps you could at least try to improve on your bio. Look at my bio or Spotted's bio and you'll see. At least expand it a bit more with details. Of course, don't rush yourself if you have an essay, we have a lot of time for RPing rather than school!



#6 Mystic

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 12:17 AM

Rootville is a small village on the edge of the Everfree, but she can be born there, sure.
 
Perhaps you could at least try to improve on your bio. Look at my bio or Spotted's bio and you'll see. At least expand it a bit more with details. Of course, don't rush yourself if you have an essay, we have a lot of time for RPing rather than school!

Ok, thanks for looking at it :D
I will make the adjustments once I am done finishing up this report for school

#7 Neon

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 12:22 AM

In game name:
 kilianke
OC Name:
 Thunder Dash
Race:
 Pegasus
Gender:
 male
Age:
 21
Appearance:
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Special Talent/Personality:
a true traveller that loves adventure and exploration, and wont mind running into some action. personality-wise he takes alot of time answering, to make sure he doesnt say weird things, and in general does not talk alot to strangers except when neccesary. when talking to friends, he can be very open about what he thinks and feels.
Biography:
born in the north of equestria, the neighagara falls region. did not have a very exciting youth, somewhat the average, he went to school, got decent grades etc. he studied and joined the north equestrian police force at young age, which was usuall in the north. however, during the time he started working, during a patroll in the woods, he ran into other ponies who tried to escape from Doctor Hans. he himself decided to not return to his hometown and started flying, which brought him to Rootville, which to him seemed to be the last place that remained untouched by Doctor Hans.
Other: 
Still wears his uniform on a daily scale in memory and respect of the place where he grew up.


#8 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 12:44 AM

Alright, accepted. I like your idea, with the guard/police idea. Welcome! Yay!



#9 Mystic

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 08:07 PM

Edited my post danke for letting me finish :pinkiehappy:



#10 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 11:14 PM

Alright, Mystical, you are accepted! *fluttershy yay this time cause fluttershy*



#11 Mystic

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Posted 22 April 2015 - 11:15 PM

Alright, Mystical, you are accepted! *fluttershy yay this time cause fluttershy*

Danke!

#12 Shining Rie

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Posted 23 April 2015 - 09:03 AM

Is This still going on? I'd love to see if I can enter in this o u o



#13 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 23 April 2015 - 10:35 AM

I still have a few things to do, but please! Feel free to apply!

#14 Flam The Buisness Pony

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Posted 06 May 2015 - 01:58 PM

I only have one question seeing this is in the futuer is it possiable to have an Android character they will have the same abilities as a normal one they will just be Synthetic and well can survive a few crazy thing unlike a normal character seeing as they are nonliving..... (by that I mean getting ripped in half or such other than that an explosion and fire will kill them aswell as magic but getting stabbed or somthing won't really pack a punch)


Edited by ChaoticSpirit, 06 May 2015 - 02:02 PM.


#15 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 06 May 2015 - 10:20 PM

Well, I'm not sure... perhaps try making a real application first, and then I'll decide whether your character would be able to join or not. As such, this RP has had little to no progress at all, but perhaps it will sooner or later.



#16 Flam The Buisness Pony

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Posted 07 May 2015 - 12:35 PM

n game name(IGN): TheChaosKing
 
OC Name: Bishop 
 
Race: Unicorn/Andriod
 
Gender: Male/Stallion 
 
Age: 25
 
Appearance: pony_discord_by_isa_isa_chan-d7i0k4n.png
 
 (he has no cutie mark and NO he is not discord lol)
 

Special Talent/Personality: Friendly, Curious, Bishop is talented in the Art of magic he is also very good with computers seeing as he is one.
 
Bio: Bishop was one of Dr. Mobius’s experiments and one of the most illegal ones. Bishop was created with the intention to spy on the Magic Kingdom. At a young life Bishop learned about math and science in Mobius’s lab he learn to speak and how to interact with others he learned about feelings and how people act. But the more Bishop learned and learned the more he noticed that his creator was not a hero but a ruthless villain with no sense of feelings Bishop always thought this was strange seeing as he was the synthetic one there and his creator was the real flesh and blood one yet Bishop had good feelings and didn’t think bad he soon came to think all ponies where like that, but he soon noticed this wasn’t true the day he escaped seeing the ponies in the town rootville in which the ponies took him in like one of their own.


Edited by ChaoticSpirit, 07 May 2015 - 09:05 PM.


#17 Doctor Charcoal

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Posted 07 May 2015 - 06:59 PM

Perhaps he could have been some runaway experiment from Doctor Mobius. Mobius was evil, and running away could have been a liable option, and the Liberators could have taken him in or something.

 

I'll think about this one, who knows, maybe I'll give it a chance.



#18 Flam The Buisness Pony

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Posted 07 May 2015 - 07:09 PM

Perhaps he could have been some runaway experiment from Doctor Mobius. Mobius was evil, and running away could have been a liable option, and the Liberators could have taken him in or something.

 

I'll think about this one, who knows, maybe I'll give it a chance.

Yeah I thought of that I wasn't sure... Oh well I guess I like that more than the one I put im using it :P




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