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#1 Seabreeze

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 05:11 AM

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The arrow of time moves from past to future. Try to change what’s set in stone, and causality loops as a circle. But introduce a paradox and reality twins. The journey of life doubles, and what might have become, is...

Much further downstream the river of time, a desperate experiment has unexpected consequences. An unwilling traveler of time and space, Twilight Sparkle becomes face-to-face with herself in an Equestria utterly unfamiliar to her. Gargantuan machines scar the land as they march into the chaos of war, great engines drive the sun and moon across the unfamiliar sky, and the spectre of Discord’s thousand-year reign haunts the landscape, threatening to drown all that stands. The legacy of the mysterious disappearance of Princesses Celestia and Luna over a thousand years ago.

For one Twilight Sparkle, it is all she knows. But the other can see all that is wrong with the world. Equestria shattered, the Elements of Harmony broken, a world torn by unrelenting storms of chaos magic. Through the earth-shaking tremors of a Rune War, Twilight Sparkle must teach her other self the power of friendship, and bring dawn to a dying world...

 

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#2 Solar Flare

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 05:48 AM

Hmmm a fanfic made by you? This should be interesting. :)

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 07:18 AM

You didn't know tsar wrote fanfics? I remember him telling about mostly grim dark fics. but anyway tsar, read the first chapter and it looks good! I'll continue reading.

Edited by Distortion_, 10 December 2012 - 07:19 AM.


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Posted 10 December 2012 - 08:01 AM

I just finished chapter two, I must say I like it Tsar. Good story-telling skills.

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 08:33 AM

need an to be a vid my eyes hurt X,X i only looked at the 1st part it also needs pics

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 10:54 AM

need an to be a vid my eyes hurt X,X i only looked at the 1st part it also needs pics


Am I the only one who couldn't comprehend this 100% ?

Also, sounds like an interesting concept. I'll give it a read after I finish the rest of the fanfics on my plate :D

#7 Solar Flare

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 01:32 PM

You didn't know tsar wrote fanfics? I remember him telling about mostly grim dark fics. but anyway tsar, read the first chapter and it looks good! I'll continue reading.


I've heard about him making fics, but this is actually the first one I'm reading

#8 Golfmann

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Posted 10 December 2012 - 02:24 PM

EQD takes almost a month to get back... at least from my experience....

#9 Seabreeze

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Posted 11 December 2012 - 11:01 PM

EQD got back, apparently I just need to fix some grammar.

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Posted 12 December 2012 - 03:11 AM

EQD got back, apparently I just need to fix some grammar.

WOO! :3 That was mainly my problem too. 'Cept it was more on the side of punctuation than grammar but in any case that's awesome Tsar!

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Posted 12 December 2012 - 07:29 AM

Neat!

I'm also going to upload Harmonosphere to there, so I tell you good luck with your next submission :)

#12 Seabreeze

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 07:38 PM

http://www.equestria...y-fragment.html

Now on EQD.

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 09:37 PM

http://www.equestria...y-fragment.html

Now on EQD.

Sweeeeeeet. That's awesome Tsar!

Congrats!

Btw, in your google Docs, who is the 010101 fellow?

Edited by Golfmann14, 04 January 2013 - 09:47 PM.


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Posted 04 January 2013 - 09:59 PM

Tsar does something aside from building?? This ought to be good.

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 10:08 PM

Actually now that i read the description more in-depth, It seems like a better close cousin of my sorry attempt at a fic. Except with a different direction, and writing style, and better written. o3o

Well done!

Edited by Golfmann14, 04 January 2013 - 10:20 PM.


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Posted 05 January 2013 - 12:32 AM

Well done Tsar :D
I must admit, I like your writing. It's hard to find something one can actually read.

#17 Seabreeze

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Posted 07 January 2013 - 02:49 AM

Sweeeeeeet. That's awesome Tsar!

Congrats!

Btw, in your google Docs, who is the 010101 fellow?

 

The 010101 fellow is an anonymous reviewer from ponychan.  

 

Due to the requests from the EQD post I've uploaded it to FimFiction:http://www.fimfictio.../75082/fragment



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Posted 07 January 2013 - 02:55 AM

The 010101 fellow is an anonymous reviewer from ponychan.  

 

Due to the requests from the EQD post I've uploaded it to FimFiction:http://www.fimfictio.../75082/fragment

 

Liked and faved! is your Fimfiction Heliostorm?



#19 Seabreeze

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Posted 07 January 2013 - 02:55 AM

Yup, and thanks.



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Posted 09 January 2013 - 08:24 PM

Just realized that the structure in the background of that image was the centerpiece of a town in Maneland.

You've been workin' on this for a while, haven't you?

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Posted 09 January 2013 - 09:30 PM

EQD got back, apparently I just need to fix some grammar.

HA



#22 Seabreeze

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Posted 15 January 2013 - 08:19 PM

Small update, the links have been moved to Fimfiction. If you have an account there, likes and views would be much appreciated.

 

 

Just realized that the structure in the background of that image was the centerpiece of a town in Maneland.

You've been workin' on this for a while, haven't you?

 

The idea's been with me for a long time, yes.



#23 Golfmann

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Posted 15 January 2013 - 09:07 PM

Wow, I just noticed that...

 

That's pretty sneaky.



#24 Seabreeze

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Posted 17 January 2013 - 03:31 AM

What, that the links were moved to Fimfiction or that the image was of my first ever build on the server?

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Posted 17 January 2013 - 03:33 AM

What, that the links were moved to Fimfiction or that the image was of my first ever build on the server?

The image. That's pretty cool.




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