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#1 darknessninja575

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Posted 14 January 2013 - 03:50 AM

i've made a test house in derp world 2 that i would liked someone to look at and give there 2 cents on. you can find it at x142 z105


Edited by darknessninja575, 14 January 2013 - 04:33 AM.


#2 Xeadin

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Posted 14 January 2013 - 07:13 AM

I will give you some feedback on your house:

 

The exterior layout of the building looks alright, though a little creative touch-up might make it look even better, such as using a third construction block, or you could also substitute sand for smooth sandstone, but that's not exactly a requirement. The building structure, itself, is a good start, but, for future reference, it'd be better for you to steer a little bit away from the traditional square-ish construction (try to experiment with T or L shapes, and add in extensions and overhangs).

 

The interior layout is fairly laid out and looks comfortable for a Ponyville home, although there are a few bare spaces that could be filled in with a couple more furnishings-- most notably, the attic.

 

As a summary, you've made a good start with building in the Practice realm, and, hopefully, this gives you a good idea on what to do next. My personal suggestion is to take a good look at other houses to get an idea on the structural layout (a stroll through Ponyville might be a good way to exercise your creativity), and don't be afraid to ask for other player's opinions :)


Edited by Xeadin, 16 January 2013 - 04:28 PM.



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