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#1 Haxorizer145

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Posted 10 October 2013 - 02:05 AM

Everybody knows that feeling of walking down the street, waving at your friends and and family as you pass by the streets covered in busy chatter and the clippity-clop of hooves in the dirt or stone.

 

But that was SO long ago.

 

Back when ponies were just simple living beings. Not like our creations.

 

We're Project 634, or, Project Perfect Pony. After Twilight was declared a princess 100 years ago, everything went booming. Cities full with high tech buildings, cars, computers, T.Vs, and so on. But they didn't know of our existence.

 

Our basic objective is create a new race, like alicorns, but weaker, and PERFECT. By using our “special“ treatment of the subjects, they were destined to create a new species, a new generation, but no.

 

It all went downhill.

 

All of our subjects died, or became more insane than us. But one of them survived, the treatment went wrong by pumping too much chemicals into her nerves, especially the right fore hoof, the overload caused her to “die“ by becoming a much paler color, and her wings seemed to leak some of the shadowy chemicals that we implanted into her, the most horrifying thing though, was her hooves. They became weak, slim and wobbly, except for the fore right one, which became a humongous shadow like claw...

 

We gave up doing the project of Perfect species.

 

But we still have some fun with some of the untested subjects.

 

Hehehehe...

 

Long story short, An industry revolution happened, this project tried to make a new species, they failed, but they are still disfiguring ponies for fun and science, or so they say, you are one of those ponies, who are trying to get out of the Project's hooves and gain their freedom. But that will not be easy...

 

One thing I gotta say first.

 

This might contain Gore, blood, or grimdark.

 

so watch out.

 



#2 Coloratura

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Posted 10 October 2013 - 02:29 AM

Hmm... It looks good. I might join.



#3 Haxorizer145

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Posted 10 October 2013 - 02:34 AM

Thanks!



#4 Captain Inconvenient

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Posted 10 October 2013 - 08:46 PM

Love the story and I think this has potential. If this gets made then I'm joining :)

#5 Haxorizer145

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Posted 10 October 2013 - 08:49 PM

If this gets more interested individuals then yes, it will b made.



#6 Ashcloud

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Posted 11 October 2013 - 11:14 PM

is this FOE related? cause im up for that. 



#7 Haxorizer145

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 01:01 AM

Uh... Well.. it's on a futuristic Equestria, but uh, it's about experiments.



#8 RunningWolf251

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 01:58 PM

Uh... Well.. it's on a futuristic Equestria, but uh, it's about experiments.

Is this being somewhat based on SCP Containment Breach?



#9 High Orbit

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 02:03 PM

Does have the potential, and Orbit can be tweaked to fit.

 

If it gets enough attention, I'll consider.



#10 Haxorizer145

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 08:36 PM

Is this being somewhat based on SCP Containment Breach?

Not at all.

 

And thank you Orbit.



#11 Captain Inconvenient

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 11:03 PM

Are normal OCs going to be used or will they be special? Where it says "like alicorn but weaker" is what I'm referring to

#12 Haxorizer145

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Posted 12 October 2013 - 11:26 PM

Thanks for asking that question:

 

The project abandoned it, but they are just experimenting for science, or so they say.

 

There's some types of experiments: Adaptation, Enhancer, Link, and Replica.

 

Adaptation is like a stomach mouth, they add something to the pony's body.

 

Enhancer is obviously enhancing the pony's ability, which is good and bad. (Ex. Hearing enhancing makes the user more sensible to loud sounds, plus, they probably numbed touch and blinded him. Good because if they try to sneak in, the user can hear people coming or guards.)

 

Link is that they modify the body to be linked with elements, like fire, water, electricity, etc.

 

Replica is exactly what it says on the can, they add or remove stuff to resemble whatever they want (Mythological creatures, animals, things, and so on.)

 

Shadow claw is disregarded, or failed.



#13 Captain Inconvenient

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Posted 13 October 2013 - 09:16 PM

Well I'm all up for this, how many people are you looking for before you make this?



#14 jimme neutron corndog

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Posted 13 October 2013 - 09:20 PM

aye im in i guess



#15 Haxorizer145

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Posted 13 October 2013 - 09:44 PM

Alright!

 

around 4 or 3 it's fine


Edited by Haxorizer145, 13 October 2013 - 09:45 PM.


#16 jimme neutron corndog

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Posted 13 October 2013 - 09:51 PM

theres more then four people here. start thread pls



#17 Haxorizer145

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Posted 13 October 2013 - 09:54 PM

Orbit said that he'll consider, and running didn't say anything about joining, but let me get the rules and story and shit.




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