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#1 hxfthxft

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:19 PM

I'm planning to write a fiction about Skyrim. Rahludans name gave me the idea cuzz it sounds like a dragon shout! RAH-LU-DAN!
I'm still planning what the shout does.
Rahludan will be an old long dead dragonborn who made that shout. I'm curently making the artwork for the story but i need characters. You can help me by making characters and i will include them into the story.
Here are the races you can choose:

Earth Pony
Unicorns
Pegasus
Changeling
Diamond Dog
Griffon
Minotaur
Timberwolf
Zebra

SMALL ADD: Buffalo

-Buffalo are creatures who vanished once in Equestria. No one know how or why... I assume for those who played the game will know that the buffalos are meant to be Dwarves from Skrim. This is just a small addon. For those who like to experiment with OC.


- Earth Pony: Abilitie: Resist Frost 50% Powers: Ponycry: Targets flee for 30 seconds, once per day- Unicorns: Abilitie: +50 Magicka Powers: Highborn: Regenerate magicka 25x faster for 60 seconds, once per day
-Pegasus: Abilitie: Resist Poison 50% - Resist Disease 50% Powers: The Look: Make an animal an ally for 60 seconds, once per day
-Changeling: Abilitie: Resist Fire 50%Powers: Queen's Wrath: Opponents getting too close take 8 points of fire damage per second for 60 seconds, once per day
-Diamond Dog: Abilitie: Resist Poison 50% Powers: Adrenaline Rush: Stamina regenerates 10x faster for 60 seconds, once per day
-Griffon: Abilitie: Resist Magic 25% Powers: Hydraskin: Absorb 50% of the magicka from hostile spells for 60 seconds, once per day-Minotaur: Abilitie: nope Powers: Minotaur Rage: You take half damage and do double damage for 60 seconds, once per day
-Timberwolf: Abilitie: Claws do 15 damage Powers: Timber Eye: Improved night vision for 60 seconds multiple times per day.
-Zebra: Abilitie: Zebras always find more gold Powers: Voice from the Home Land: Calms nearby creatures for 60 seconds, once per day
-If you gonna make a character plese make a description of it. Picture or text i'm ok with both. Make a short backstory of your character. Use the official equestria map if you want to tell where your character curently is.
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-You can make your character what ever you want, just don't make it "The boss of everyone". If you have played Skyrim then you will know what kind of people you will find in the wilds... bandits, vampires, hunters, killers, alchemists, mages... a lot of people.
-Decide if your character is going to be a friendly or bad character. You know... will he attack on sight or try to talk to you.
-All creatures can use magic. It's ok because in Skyrim everyone can. But unicorns are a tiny bit better when it comes to magic.

IMPORTANT! Just to make it clear. As i know stories the good guys almost always win. That means if you make an bad OC it will mean that he will die one time in the story. However if you make a tough OC it will mean that he will probably be the end boss in one of the quests.

Skyrim OC Outline.

Character name: (Your OC name)
Alias:(Optional if your character does not use their real name)
Race: (Earth Pony, Unicorn, Zebra, Griffin, Pegasus)
Gender: (Male, Female, or other)
Appearance: (Picture or Description)
Cutie Mark: (Ignore if not a Pony)
Talent: (Must be related to your cutie mark, ignore if not a pony)
Personality: (What is your OC like?)
Bio: (Your OCs back story)
Occupation: (Optional for if your OC has a job)
Skills: (List of skills your OC has picked up during their life, more generalized abilities then your talent)
Equipment: (The gear your OC carries)
Other: (Anything else that does not fit in the other sections, remove if not needed)

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:42 PM

Would it be a problem if my OC deals with dragons?

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:43 PM

Would it be a problem if my OC deals with dragons?

Well, regular people in Skyrim (according to the lore) cannot kill dragons. Only a dragonborn can. So I'm assuming not.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:44 PM

Well he's a dragon rider... so he doesn't kill them... unless he has to but he's mainly about peace

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:47 PM

Well he's a dragon rider... so he doesn't kill them... unless he has to but he's mainly about peace

Well, the current dragonborn was the first person ever to ride a dragon, so... No, I doubt it works like that, and dragons aren't really "nice" to people, they mainly just burn them.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:48 PM

Uh i don't think dragonborn ride them. They just share their blood. Maybe once in a while they might but not all the time like a dragon rider.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:50 PM

Uh i don't think dragonborn ride them. They just share their blood. Maybe once in a while they might but not all the time like a dragon rider.

Have you played Skyrim? during the main quest, the dovahkiin rides one once, the dragon in question was beaten and humbly accepted victory.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:53 PM

Have you played Skyrim? during the main quest, the dovahkiin rides one once, the dragon in question was beaten and humbly accepted victory.

Have you ever read Eragon? He rides Saphira his dragon almost everywhere. The only reason a dragon rider can do so is an egg hatching for them, then they are bound for life

Edited by Golfmann14, 15 September 2012 - 08:54 PM.


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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:55 PM

Have you ever read Eragon? He rides Saphira his dragon almost everywhere. The only reason a dragon rider can do so is an egg hatching for them, then they are bound for life

But... this has nothing to do with Eragon, the dragons came back without eggs, they came back to life, I'm not even sure Skyrim dragons come from eggs or if they even have a childhood.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:57 PM

How do you think they were first born? Time wouldn't be an issue either because they also live way longer than normal.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 08:58 PM

How do you think they were first born? Time wouldn't be an issue either because they also live way longer than normal.

Well... They're basically angels, in a way, they're all siblings and the offspring of a god... I doubt they needed to hatch.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 09:00 PM

We can debate dragons anytime i just want to know if this will cause any rifts in the story.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 09:02 PM

We can debate dragons anytime i just want to know if this will cause any rifts in the story.

I'm gonna say that it probably will, as I stated earlier, the dragonborn was the first one to ride a dragon, and the last, no one else has done it, and it's likely no one will.

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 10:11 PM

Golf, Go play Skyrim before you post again. Either that or sound like a moron in front of every pony. In sky rim the dovahkiin is the only person to ever ride a dragon. He beat a dragon in fair combat(unless you hacked) and the dragon accepted his defeat. The guards of whiterun then helped him get onto the back of the dragon and he rode away into the sunset! Not really he rode to yet ANOTHER ancient nord temple where he found his way to sovngaurde. And you were correct about the fact of the dovahkiin and dragons sharing blood, BUT the dragon born does not make peace with dragons. His sole purpose is to protect Skyrim from dragons, Therefore he is meant to slay them. If you play the game you notice that you are probably the only person who eve survives a dragon attack. Except for the people who can not die.

By the way, I would love to be in this! I just need to finish working on my new oc's "paper" i guess you could say. I have right now that his name is, Lunar Eclipse. That's literally it. And of course i have him as my desktop background. Thanks to PurestyleD!

Oh and he is a pegasus

Edited by _Solar Flare_, 15 September 2012 - 10:10 PM.


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Posted 15 September 2012 - 10:20 PM

Golf, Go play Skyrim before you post again. Either that or sound like a moron in front of every pony. In sky rim the dovahkiin is the only person to ever ride a dragon. He beat a dragon in fair combat(unless you hacked) and the dragon accepted his defeat. The guards of whiterun then helped him get onto the back of the dragon and he rode away into the sunset! Not really he rode to yet ANOTHER ancient nord temple where he found his way to sovngaurde. And you were correct about the fact of the dovahkiin and dragons sharing blood, BUT the dragon born does not make peace with dragons. His sole purpose is to protect Skyrim from dragons, Therefore he is meant to slay them. If you play the game you notice that you are probably the only person who eve survives a dragon attack. Except for the people who can not die.

By the way, I would love to be in this! I just need to finish working on my new oc's "paper" i guess you could say. I have right now that his name is, Lunar Eclipse. That's literally it. And of course i have him as my desktop background. Thanks to PurestyleD!

Oh and he is a pegasus


Good lord i've played the freaking thing twice. I know what happens. I just want to get in the story for goodness sake. Sheesh take a chill pill bro. Get mad over a stupid game. Furthermore, don't talk to me like i'm an idiot. I am two years older than you for buck's sake. Thanks for bringing to light what a jerk you really are. I won't make the same mistake twice. Good day.

Edited by Golfmann14, 15 September 2012 - 10:43 PM.


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Posted 15 September 2012 - 10:53 PM

Character name: Cannab
Race: Earth Pony
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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Cutie Mark: Bloody Red Cracked Skull
Talent: Cannibalizm (He's a bit fucked up)
Personality: He usually waits around in the forest until someone comes around for him to feed on, so he doesn't really have anything to be like (except being really creepy and fucked up)
Bio:Nobody knows about his past, but some say he got struck on the head too hard and got a religious shock which caused him to go cu-cu. I waits in the forests for someone to peek around and then he catches you, cuts you up and makes you his meal for the day.
Skills: Stealth, Archery, Hunting, Religion
Equipment: Spiritral Daggers, Bamboo Bow w/ Arrows


Is this ok?

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Posted 15 September 2012 - 11:39 PM

Good lord i've played the freaking thing twice. I know what happens. I just want to get in the story for goodness sake. Sheesh take a chill pill bro. Get mad over a stupid game. Furthermore, don't talk to me like i'm an idiot. I am two years older than you for buck's sake. Thanks for bringing to light what a jerk you really are. I won't make the same mistake twice. Good day.


No reason to get mad. The way you said it you had made it sound like you never played it before. BTW I've played it 3 times on my Machine and twice on my friends. XD

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 12:57 AM

No reason to get mad. The way you said it you had made it sound like you never played it before. BTW I've played it 3 times on my Machine and twice on my friends. XD


When you call someone a moron and talk down to them you can't expect them not to get mad

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:00 AM

I realized I'm the only one who actually made a character like he asked.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:10 AM

Hey, I asked. hxfthxft hasn't said anything otherwise I would have been the first one

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:15 AM

Hey, I asked. hxfthxft hasn't said anything otherwise I would have been the first one

just post somthing anyways.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:20 AM

Character name: Skyline
Alias:Same as name
Race: Griffon
Gender: Male
Appearance:
http://browse.devian...fset=0#/d4w1ezo
Personality: Always trying to help others, confident
Bio: Skyline was born in the Badlands and trained to be a hunter and currently hunts in the Everfree forest, and has a small home in the Everfree.
Occupation: Hunter
Skills: Bow and Arrow, Light Swords
Equipment: Griffon Bow and Arrow, silver sword, leather armor


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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:20 AM

I still need to write some of my bio then i might

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:28 AM

good.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:02 AM

Character name: Cannab
Race: Earth Pony
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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Cutie Mark: Bloody Red Cracked Skull
Talent: Cannibalizm (He's a bit fucked up)
Personality: He usually waits around in the forest until someone comes around for him to feed on, so he doesn't really have anything to be like (except being really creepy and fucked up)
Bio:Nobody knows about his past, but some say he got struck on the head too hard and got a religious shock which caused him to go cu-cu. I waits in the forests for someone to peek around and then he catches you, cuts you up and makes you his meal for the day.
Skills: Stealth, Archery, Hunting, Religion
Equipment: Spiritral Daggers, Bamboo Bow w/ Arrows


Is this ok?

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Character name: Skyline
Alias:Same as name
Race: Griffon
Gender: Male
Appearance:
http://browse.devian...fset=0#/d4w1ezo
Personality: Always trying to help others, confident
Bio: Skyline was born in the Badlands and trained to be a hunter and currently hunts in the Everfree forest, and has a small home in the Everfree.
Occupation: Hunter
Skills: Bow and Arrow, Light Swords
Equipment: Griffon Bow and Arrow, silver sword, leather armor

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PS: A white griffon, just perfect :D

I still need to write some of my bio then i might

Golf you can still post just take your time ^^ i'm still making the artwork

Edited by hxfthxft, 16 September 2012 - 07:03 AM.


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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:05 AM

Gonna ask, can my character be a werewolf?

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:26 AM

Gonna ask, can my character be a werewolf?

Hmm... since it's a big part of Skyrim i will allow that

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:28 AM

Nice. I'll make him reminiscent of my character just not the dragonborn or leader of any of the guilds or anything like that.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 08:59 AM

Character name: Toron Onan
Alias: The Eagle
Race: Griffin, Werewolf.

Gender: Male
Appearance: Posted Image
Personality: For a Dawnguard vampire hunter and a werewolf, Toron is often calm, laid back, and often refuses to get angry, he will almost always go for the best way to solve a problem, and the verdict he had on vampires was because he realized how bad they were, Toron has been meditating since he was attacked by a werewolf in order to at least have partial control when he turns, if not full.
Bio: Toron hails from Elsweyr, but has been living in Skyrim since his parents died, he had heard about a vampire hunting force after quite some time of being there, and decided he'd join up.

His first mission was to go with a more experienced member of the dawnguard to take out a group of vampires in a cave.

He and the older member ventured into the cave, they were expecting around three to five vampires looking for some kind of artifact, instead they found five vampires and two werewolves fighting, there were multiple vampire corpses on the floor, and one werewolf corpse, Toron and his temporary mentor grabbed their crossbows and fired at the vampires, killing most of them before they realized what was going on, they turned at the two, and the werewolves killed them while they weren't paying attention, then the two werewolves turned at the two, Toron and his senior shot down one of them, but the remaining one was on Toron with lightning speed, and bit at his armor, managing to get through with an infected bite, his mentor quickly bashed the werewolf with his crossbow to draw his attention, then hit him with his axe, the werewolf then attacked him, tearing through his armor and killing him, Toron used the opportunity to stab the werewolf's neck, killing it.

Toron headed to the library to gain some information on werewolves, he found out that through intense meditation, it was possible to lessen the werewolf's mind grip. He decided to stay calm in every situation possible, and when he was in his house, he would always have some mind exercise for himself, after a few months, he returned to the dawnguard, and went out to freelance and kill vampires.
Occupation: Freelance dawnguard
Skills: archery, silent killing, staying calm even in a near-death situation, using an axe, cooking, and forging.
Equipment: a Dwarven crossbow, a dawnguard axe, heavy dawnguard armor, light dawnguard helmet, food, crossbow bolts, and a forging hammer.

I probably won't get into the fic, I'm not the best when it comes to bios.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 10:04 AM

Character name: Toron Onan
Alias: The Eagle
Race: Griffin, Werewolf.

Gender: Male
Appearance: Posted Image
Personality: For a Dawnguard vampire hunter and a werewolf, Toron is often calm, laid back, and often refuses to get angry, he will almost always go for the best way to solve a problem, and the verdict he had on vampires was because he realized how bad they were, Toron has been meditating since he was attacked by a werewolf in order to at least have partial control when he turns, if not full.
Bio: Toron hails from Elsweyr, but has been living in Skyrim since his parents died, he had heard about a vampire hunting force after quite some time of being there, and decided he'd join up.

His first mission was to go with a more experienced member of the dawnguard to take out a group of vampires in a cave.

He and the older member ventured into the cave, they were expecting around three to five vampires looking for some kind of artifact, instead they found five vampires and two werewolves fighting, there were multiple vampire corpses on the floor, and one werewolf corpse, Toron and his temporary mentor grabbed their crossbows and fired at the vampires, killing most of them before they realized what was going on, they turned at the two, and the werewolves killed them while they weren't paying attention, then the two werewolves turned at the two, Toron and his senior shot down one of them, but the remaining one was on Toron with lightning speed, and bit at his armor, managing to get through with an infected bite, his mentor quickly bashed the werewolf with his crossbow to draw his attention, then hit him with his axe, the werewolf then attacked him, tearing through his armor and killing him, Toron used the opportunity to stab the werewolf's neck, killing it.

Toron headed to the library to gain some information on werewolves, he found out that through intense meditation, it was possible to lessen the werewolf's mind grip. He decided to stay calm in every situation possible, and when he was in his house, he would always have some mind exercise for himself, after a few months, he returned to the dawnguard, and went out to freelance and kill vampires.
Occupation: Freelance dawnguard
Skills: archery, silent killing, staying calm even in a near-death situation, using an axe, cooking, and forging.
Equipment: a Dwarven crossbow, a dawnguard axe, heavy dawnguard armor, light dawnguard helmet, food, crossbow bolts, and a forging hammer.

I probably won't get into the fic, I'm not the best when it comes to bios.


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The bio is fine. I always like to read some backstory :)

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 10:10 AM

ACCEPTED!
The bio is fine. I always like to read some backstory :)

Hooray!

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:33 PM

This is easily the strangest idea I've had in a while yet I'm growing increasingly fond of it

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 01:46 PM

This is easily the strangest idea I've had in a while yet I'm growing increasingly fond of it

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ACCEPTED!
I adore assassin type of characters and you made this really good. Just a tiny problem but no big deal. I will have to change his equipment cuzz there are no Elves in the story (it's Equestria) and that means no elven daggers. Unicorns are meant to be High Elves from skyrim so i assume you want "Unicorn daggers"
PS: The picture is epic

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 02:05 PM

*facehoof* I knew I missed something when proofreading the damn thing

Absolutely fine with me, It's what I was going for but my brain had a derp when writing it down (was thinking of the Elven dagger style)

With your permission, I'll see if I can crank out a few more OC's, as I do have a few more ideas in mind.

(YAY! hx likes my changeling OC)

Edited by Lazaruz95, 16 September 2012 - 02:08 PM.


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Posted 16 September 2012 - 02:09 PM

When is the cutoff for these hxfthxft?

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 02:52 PM

When is the cutoff for these hxfthxft?

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 03:39 PM

Well... They're basically angels, in a way, they're all siblings and the offspring of a god... I doubt they needed to hatch.


If you've played Skyrim, Golfman, you'd know that all dragons were descended from Alduin the World Eater (Nordic God of Destruction). If you haven't read all of them, I digress to the point of Eragon. Non-riders have ridden dragons, so go and read the other books.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 03:45 PM

We covered this already greebster i've read the books and i played the freaking game twice. A dragon rider is my OC. Now deal with it or shut up.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 03:48 PM

DRAGON BORN GOD DAMNIT!! HE NEVER FUCKING RODE ONE!!!

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 03:48 PM

If you've played Skyrim, Golfman, you'd know that all dragons were descended from Alduin the World Eater (Nordic God of Destruction). As you clearly haven't, I digress to the point of Eragon. Non-riders have ridden dragons, so go back and read the books.

Gonna have to point out your mistake, dragons are the children of Akatosh, Alduin merely resurrected them, they weren't descended from Alduin.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 03:49 PM

Gonna have to point out your mistake, dragons are the children of Akatosh, Alduin merely resurrected them, they weren't descended from Alduin.

You would know that if you played the game greebster which you obviously havent

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:07 PM

I was thinking to change the title of the story to "The Pony Scrolls V: Equestria" cuzz it will make more sence now. What do you guys think?

Edited by hxfthxft, 16 September 2012 - 04:09 PM.


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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:08 PM

Yeah, but how about The CELESTRIAN Scrolls V: Equestria?

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:13 PM

Yeah, but how about The CELESTRIAN Scrolls V: Equestria?


Celestian i think would roll off the toungue better

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:14 PM

Yay! I helped!

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:15 PM

Celestia is not even born back then... this happens long time before Celestias birth

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:17 PM

Well, that who WAS born?

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:20 PM

You will know when you read the story...
are you gonna make an OC owen?

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:25 PM

I already did. First page.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:30 PM

Character name: Emerald Dragon
Alias:(The) Dragon Rider
Race:Unicorn
Gender: Male
Appearance:See photo
Cutie Mark: See photo (Dragon symbol)
Talent: Ability to ride and communicate with his dragon
Personality: Brave, kind, humble, wise, and unrelenting in battle
Bio: Emerald grew up most of his life as an orphan. His parents had died of sickness when he was still a young colt. Through his "teenage" years he wandered equestria just trying to get by in life. One day, while gathering near the Everfree forest, He stumbled upon a strange orb, glowing in the grass. Thinking it might be worth something, he quickly scooped it up and took it with him. The next day when it was light out, he examined the orb further. When he reached out to feel it, a searing pain shot through his body. When he woke up from his unconscious sleep, he discovered a dragon symbol as his cutie mark and a baby dragon staring wide eyed back at him. Over the next few decades they honed each other's skills and when his dragon, Vermithrax was fully grown, they set out upon a new quest. A quest of returning peace to Equestria between pony and dragon kind.
Occupation: Peacekeeper i suppose you could say
Skills: Swordsmanship, wide range of magic, armorer, and archer.
Equipment: Sword, Bow, Saddle (for Vermithrax), and saddlebags
Other:
Vermithrax does have the ability to communicate telepathically however it is no different from verbal speaking. Just in the mind.
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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:32 PM

Omg i forgot to mention something... i forgot to tell you that bad OC's will die probably one time in the story. That means you can have at least 1 good OC and a few bad OC's

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:34 PM

I'm good.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:36 PM

Well that puts a damper on things xD my dude is for peace!

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:36 PM

What i wanted to say owen is, did you make a good OC but if you don't want to it's fine ^^

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:46 PM

i'm saying that im just here to help the cause.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:46 PM

I feel like such a derp!

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:47 PM

Character name: Emerald Dragon
Alias:(The) Dragon Rider
Race:Unicorn
Gender: Male
Appearance:See photo
Cutie Mark: See photo (Dragon symbol)
Talent: Ability to ride and communicate with his dragon
Personality: Brave, kind, humble, wise, and unrelenting in battle
Bio: Emerald grew up most of his life as an orphan. His parents had died of sickness when he was still a young colt. Through his "teenage" years he wandered equestria just trying to get by in life. One day, while gathering near the Everfree forest, He stumbled upon a strange orb, glowing in the grass. Thinking it might be worth something, he quickly scooped it up and took it with him. The next day when it was light out, he examined the orb further. When he reached out to feel it, a searing pain shot through his body. When he woke up from his unconscious sleep, he discovered a dragon symbol as his cutie mark and a baby dragon staring wide eyed back at him. Over the next few decades they honed each other's skills and when his dragon, Vermithrax was fully grown, they set out upon a new quest. A quest of returning peace to Equestria between pony and dragon kind.
Occupation: Peacekeeper i suppose you could say
Skills: Swordsmanship, wide range of magic, armorer, and archer.
Equipment: Sword, Bow, Saddle (for Vermithrax), and saddlebags
Other: Vermithrax does have the ability to communicate telepathically however it is no different from verbal speaking. Just in the mind.

There is a problem here. It looks like now the story will have like 2 dragonborns. I've seen you guys discussing about this and waited to see how your OC is gonna be. It clearly saiz that only the dragonborn can ride a dragon in Skyrim. Thats the only problem in your OC. You've got imagination, i like that. But readers and especially people who have played the game prefer when everyone keeps by the rules.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:50 PM

Aight. Thanks for the feedback. would have preferred if other people would butt out if its not their business. Thanks Hxfthxft

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:54 PM

I read it, Nice oc! I'm not so sure that it can be 20% Cooler. Mostly because of this error with the riding. I dislike this part because this is my favorite game of all time. Sorry. BTW Does anypony know if there is a hunger games fanfic? Please reply!

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 04:59 PM

Hey, that gave me an idea! A fanfic where each of the mane six and the secondary six must play The Hunger Games!

Since im not a fanfic writer, i bet someone else could

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 06:21 PM

I know it's too late for this but i edited the first post and added this:
IMPORTANT! Just to make it clear. As i know stories the good guys almost always win. That means if you make an bad OC it will mean that he will die one time in the story. However if you make a tough OC it will mean that he will probably be the end boss in one of the quests.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 06:28 PM

Don't really mind that Metamorph is on the chopping block.

Tailored that mofo to basicly be running on borrowed time already with the hole thing that he's a thrall withouth a master.


Got a few ideas in the works that I'll try to refine and post as soon as possible (cannot guarantee when as school is being hectic and I've been a naughty and neglected it)

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:14 PM

Don't really mind that Metamorph is on the chopping block.

Tailored that mofo to basicly be running on borrowed time already with the hole thing that he's a thrall withouth a master.


Got a few ideas in the works that I'll try to refine and post as soon as possible (cannot guarantee when as school is being hectic and I've been a naughty and neglected it)

You know your tipe of character live long (in stories and games) It makes a great enemy and challenge for the dragonbor so he will stay alive long i can guarantee you that. Assassin type of characters are meant to be cagey, agile, smart and of course... deadly. That's why they usualy live long in stories. But it depend...

If that kind of character is bad he usualy represents a challenge to the main character.
If he is good, then he usualy helps the main character or is a hero. Depends how you write... But if they die... it's usualy a really sad moment.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:20 PM

I wonder who'll kill Metamorph, maybe my character will...

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:27 PM

I wonder who'll kill Metamorph, maybe my character will...

You never know finnan :)
I'm actually drawing the picture of old dragonborn (need a name) who created the shout RAH-LU-DAN
EDIT: A mage who's favourite weapon was a sword (not a bow) :)
With the left hoof he use fire and the right hoof he used sparks. A sneaky type.

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Posted 16 September 2012 - 07:33 PM

Nice. Too bad he can't use a bow and magic at the same time.

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 01:18 PM

Is it weird if i make a character for myself since the main character won't be me, it's related to Rahludan...

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 01:22 PM

Not really

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 07:02 PM

Got an idea for a Timberwolf, though I'm afraid it horribly breaks what they replace(Kahjit unless I'm misstaken?), since it would be more like a
Dalish elf (For those familiar with Dragon Age:Origins) and not a Kahjit

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 08:10 PM

Yes the timbers are meant to be the Kajit. I just wanted something opposite. You know cat - dog. They are a good race for thieves. I can understand that it's a bit weird but i just don't want it to be all like in Skyrim. I'm also planning to make a Timber character.

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 08:15 PM

Khajiits were my favorite race in Skyrim, they were coool.

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 08:17 PM

Yeah, but after you steal everything the world feels empty.

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 08:22 PM

I spent more time redecorating then I did stealing.

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 08:57 PM

Khajiits were my favorite race in Skyrim, they were coool.

Khajiits were my favourite race too :D
Most time spent doing assassination contracts and sniped enemies with bow and arrow :D

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 09:01 PM

Khajiits were my favourite race too :D
Most time spent doing assassination contracts and sniped enemies with bow and arrow :D

I'd usually get the hit to fight a guard using an aggression spell XD.

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Posted 17 September 2012 - 09:31 PM

OK i started writing :)
It was about time... for those of you who still want to submit character you don't need to hurry up. I write slow but safe.
Laza take your time and think about your Timber character, I'd love to know how it will turn out ^^
Golf if you wanna be part please change some things on your OC and you can be part :)
And for the others thank you for submitting your characters :)

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 05:17 PM

Guess what, I think my timberwolf is done

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Got one more character idea in the works if you'd still accept it, though I'd imagine she'll take some time to refine.

Edited by Lazaruz95, 18 September 2012 - 05:22 PM.


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Posted 18 September 2012 - 05:24 PM

Guess what, I think my timberwolf is done

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Got one more character idea in the works if you'd still accept it, though I'd imagine she'll take some time to refine.

BIO is good...
Personality is good...
Appearance is good...
3 goods...
ACCEPTED!! ^^

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 05:47 PM

Added a new race but read the first post it explains everything.

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 08:48 PM

I has a question hxfthxft, your image (as when i posted this) shows Applejack wit her tounge sticking out holding an unidentified object. What is she supposed to be holding?

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 08:55 PM

I has a question hxfthxft, your image (as when i posted this) shows Applejack wit her tounge sticking out holding an unidentified object. What is she supposed to be holding?

A bit weird question but she's holding a rope... on her hoof... i think that a cowgirl outfit and yeah that's it. Here's a bigger picture
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Posted 18 September 2012 - 09:05 PM

Thankyou. That makes perfect sense.

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 09:24 PM

Thankyou. That makes perfect sense.

Does my profile pic look weird or something? :D

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 10:30 PM

HAHAHAH OMG

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Posted 18 September 2012 - 10:31 PM

You see it? It disturbs me.

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Posted 20 September 2012 - 03:56 AM

Aight I'm making a new oc, mine is kind of outdated and I realized how awkward it would be to put him in fics like this and etc. Still a work in progress. Can I submit what I know for now and fill in deets later?

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Posted 20 September 2012 - 12:22 PM

Aight I'm making a new oc, mine is kind of outdated and I realized how awkward it would be to put him in fics like this and etc. Still a work in progress. Can I submit what I know for now and fill in deets later?

Sure golf :)

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Posted 20 September 2012 - 10:50 PM

Just leave a spot for me somewhere in there :D

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 07:52 PM

Character name: Distortion
Alias: Distortion_
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Female
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Cutie Mark: Distortion logo/Pencil
<-- choose this one
Talent: Art
Personality: Straight forward in your face kind of pony. Chooses truth over feelings and is not afraid of a fight.
Bio: It is so long.. she learns to draw. the end.
Occupation: Chef but always longed to have a job as an artist.
Skills: Because she is a chef, she masters the knife. Silent footsteps and movement. hard to be spotted. very fast. can draw! and cook!
Equipment: A pencil, A scarf, A fedora hat. After work: Knife, beer
Other:
She is a rude, but good pony. May look like a bad pony but means good.

Edited by Distortion_, 21 September 2012 - 08:00 PM.


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Posted 21 September 2012 - 08:21 PM

Character name: Distortion
Alias: Distortion_
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Female
Appearance:
Cutie Mark: Distortion logo/Pencil <-- choose this one
Talent: Art
Personality: Straight forward in your face kind of pony. Chooses truth over feelings and is not afraid of a fight.
Bio: It is so long.. she learns to draw. the end.
Occupation: Chef but always longed to have a job as an artist.
Skills: Because she is a chef, she masters the knife. Silent footsteps and movement. hard to be spotted. very fast. can draw! and cook!
Equipment: A pencil, A scarf, A fedora hat. After work: Knife, beer
Other: She is a rude, but good pony. May look like a bad pony but means good.

Yes i can make something out of it. A cook, an artist and a beer dringind knife fighting maniac! Yes it's good! And you said it's an good OC! But i can't accept the hat and i'll have to change the pencil with a quill since it's Skyrim.
ACCEPTED!

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 04:38 AM

Okay, I think that I am ready
Name: Thunder Strike
Alias: Thunder
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Male
Appearance: (( Will be at the bottom of this post! ))
Cutie Mark: Lightning Bolt
Talent: Archery
Personality: Generally laid back and probably won't get into a fight unless his honor or his family is in immediate danger
Bio: He is a young stallion with an uncanny ability to shoot down and stalk his prey. But he was not always like this. From a young age Thunder was always outside playing in with his friends. When he went to flight school he wen t with most if not all of his pegasus friends. After spending some time in flight school he decided he liked it better on the ground, where is parents moved shortly after he was born. While on the ground his family was poor and could not afford to keep themselves fed, So he took it upon himself to learn how to shoot a bow. He learned to shoot apples out of the tree on the farm close to him. He soon was able to shoot his bow so well that he could slit an arrow in half down the middle of a shaft. He soon after joined the army protecting the land that he knew and loved. He has always been able to protect his family very well without breaking a sweat.
Abilities: Archery, Throwing knives, Sneaking, Lockpicking
Gear: Usually some light armor, A bow and a dagger or two. Along with some loose healing potions
Here is what he looks like:
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There you go hxft, You said you wanted me to be in it! For the empire!!!!!!

(( I hope I did this right, I just took what I knew from the game and applied it to ponies! xD ))

Edited by Thunder Strike, 23 September 2012 - 04:49 AM.


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Posted 23 September 2012 - 06:34 AM

Okay, I think that I am ready
Name: Thunder Strike
Alias: Thunder
Race: Pegasus
Gender: Male
Appearance: (( Will be at the bottom of this post! ))
Cutie Mark: Lightning Bolt
Talent: Archery
Personality: Generally laid back and probably won't get into a fight unless his honor or his family is in immediate danger
Bio: He is a young stallion with an uncanny ability to shoot down and stalk his prey. But he was not always like this. From a young age Thunder was always outside playing in with his friends. When he went to flight school he wen t with most if not all of his pegasus friends. After spending some time in flight school he decided he liked it better on the ground, where is parents moved shortly after he was born. While on the ground his family was poor and could not afford to keep themselves fed, So he took it upon himself to learn how to shoot a bow. He learned to shoot apples out of the tree on the farm close to him. He soon was able to shoot his bow so well that he could slit an arrow in half down the middle of a shaft. He soon after joined the army protecting the land that he knew and loved. He has always been able to protect his family very well without breaking a sweat.
Abilities: Archery, Throwing knives, Sneaking, Lockpicking
Gear: Usually some light armor, A bow and a dagger or two. Along with some loose healing potions

There you go hxft, You said you wanted me to be in it! For the empire!!!!!!

(( I hope I did this right, I just took what I knew from the game and applied it to ponies! xD ))

Yeap the character looks good. You said he was shooting apples from trees. I guess he lives near ponyville then. And i assume he's an empire soilder, correct me if i'm wrong.
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Posted 23 September 2012 - 12:44 PM

Yeap the character looks good. You said he was shooting apples from trees. I guess he lives near ponyville then. And i assume he's an empire soilder, correct me if i'm wrong.
ACCEPTED!

You are correct, He is a young mid ranking archer for the imperial army. xD FOR THE EMPIRE!!!!

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 05:26 PM

Someone hit me for making this monstrosity

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Edited by Lazaruz95, 23 September 2012 - 05:37 PM.


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Posted 23 September 2012 - 06:12 PM

Someone hit me for making this monstrosity

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I *ME GUSTA* that picture so much! And the backstory and bio too. Just amazing! She looks like young Zecora :D
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Posted 23 September 2012 - 11:35 PM

Character name: Snowberry
Race: Unicorn
Gender: Female
Appearance: Posted Image
Cutie Mark: Bow and Arrow
Talent: Hunting

Personality: Shy, good-hearted pony. She's afraid of large cities and lots of people. However, shes willing to risk her life for good ponies.
Bio: Snowberry lived with her older sister, her mother, and her father in Equestria all her life. They lived in a remote area in a forest. One day when she was a young foul, her mother accidentally left a set of clothing by the fireplace too long. It caught fire and the rest of the house began to catch fire. Snowberry's parents died because of being so close to the fire when it started. Snowberry, and her sister Bluebell were still alive. Snowberry was cornered by the flames. Her sister Bluebell was about to make her escape when she dived into the flames and tossed Snowberry to the door. Bluebell burned to death. Snowberry ran out the door with her saddlebag, which contained a knife, some food and a canteen. She ran away into the wilderness and learned about how living in the wild. She carved a bow after attempting several other carvings and strung it with a stringlike plant. When she was hunting one day she realized how much she enjoyed hunting and how good she was at it. Her cutie mark, a bow and arrow, appeared when she found that out. After years of isolation, she began to wander the roads of Equestria looking for a place where she belonged. She found a traveling mage who offered to teach her the basics of conjuration and illusion in exchange for some furs and meats. She learned how to summon a familiar and such. She continued to wander and help everypony in need of assistance. Because of her sisters act of thougtfulness, she rescued a pony being attacked by wolves. When the dragons started to appear, she began to travel more and more often. She would however avoid dragons as much as possible. Everypony thanked her for these acts of kindness and she became renowned among the ponies of Equestria. When ponies began to deliberately seek her out for petty tasks, she began to stop helping people and shy away from cities. Till this day, Snowberry has remained traveling the roads and solving problems of the ponies in their time of extreme need.
Occupation: None
Skills: Potion-making, Sneaking, Conjuration magic, Illusion magic, Carving wood
Equipment: Bow, Various furs, Berries and a set of fur armor.

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Posted 24 September 2012 - 05:34 AM

Character name: Snowberry
Race: Unicorn
Gender: Female
Cutie Mark: Bow and Arrow
Talent: Hunting

Personality: Shy, good-hearted pony. She's afraid of large cities and lots of people. However, shes willing to risk her life for good ponies.
Bio: Snowberry lived with her older sister, her mother, and her father in Equestria all her life. They lived in a remote area in a forest. One day when she was a young foul, her mother accidentally left a set of clothing by the fireplace too long. It caught fire and the rest of the house began to catch fire. Snowberry's parents died because of being so close to the fire when it started. Snowberry, and her sister Bluebell were still alive. Snowberry was cornered by the flames. Her sister Bluebell was about to make her escape when she dived into the flames and tossed Snowberry to the door. Bluebell burned to death. Snowberry ran out the door with her saddlebag, which contained a knife, some food and a canteen. She ran away into the wilderness and learned about how living in the wild. She carved a bow after attempting several other carvings and strung it with a stringlike plant. When she was hunting one day she realized how much she enjoyed hunting and how good she was at it. Her cutie mark, a bow and arrow, appeared when she found that out. After years of isolation, she began to wander the roads of Equestria looking for a place where she belonged. She found a traveling mage who offered to teach her the basics of conjuration and illusion in exchange for some furs and meats. She learned how to summon a familiar and such. She continued to wander and help everypony in need of assistance. Because of her sisters act of thougtfulness, she rescued a pony being attacked by wolves. When the dragons started to appear, she began to travel more and more often. She would however avoid dragons as much as possible. Everypony thanked her for these acts of kindness and she became renowned among the ponies of Equestria. When ponies began to deliberately seek her out for petty tasks, she began to stop helping people and shy away from cities. Till this day, Snowberry has remained traveling the roads and solving problems of the ponies in their time of extreme need.
Occupation: None
Skills: Potion-making, Sneaking, Conjuration magic, Illusion magic, Carving wood
Equipment: Bow, Various furs, Berries and a set of fur armor.


A'wwww why the sad face... anyways nice OC. I can make somethink of it! Thank you for postin it helps me a lot :)
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Edited by hxfthxft, 24 September 2012 - 05:34 AM.


#98 hxfthxft

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Posted 24 September 2012 - 08:06 PM

Chapter one is gonna be finished soon
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But still need to make some grammar checks :D

Edited by hxfthxft, 24 September 2012 - 08:10 PM.


#99 Spirit

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Posted 24 September 2012 - 08:12 PM

Why do people like that face so much?

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Posted 24 September 2012 - 08:28 PM

some like it just because of her face...
some like it because of *brushie brushie*
some like it cuzz it's RD...
some like it cuzz they like it...
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