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#1 RRyyas

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Posted 12 January 2013 - 09:37 PM

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#2 Gorgor27

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Posted 14 January 2013 - 02:29 AM

Exterior:

 

- there's a lot more you could do with this aesthetically.

 

- the perimeter of your house on the ground looks very plain.

 

- i would suggest adding some sort of over hang on the roof.

 

- your chimney doesn't rally look like a chimney on the outside, instead more of just a massive extension of the roof.

 

- ponyville houses generally don't have huge balconies.

 

Interior:

 

- I would very very highly suggest adding alot alot more furniture. your rooms look very bare. 

 

- i would also highly suggest changing up the materials a bit, you've used pretty much the same type of wood for everything.

 

- some of the rooms are very large as well. As result of this, the bedroom doesn't really feel like a room.  Id suggest maybe splitting some rooms to make for smaller ones. 

 

- also the chimney is pretty large and pretty obtrusive.

 

Overall:

 

No offence, but i think you need to spend a little bit more time on this if you want it to pass.




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