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Can someone Critique my house please


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#1 Moondust Night

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Posted 12 February 2016 - 11:20 PM

its at ./w s56



#2 Trotsky

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Posted 13 February 2016 - 01:38 AM

So here were the things I thought you could improve.

 

The mail sign on the front of the mailbox might look better on the side of the mailbox.

The kitchen sink could use a faucet, either lever or tripwire hook.

The Jungle wood column looks somewhat out of place.

A painting or some additional color in the main bedroom would be nice.

Grass could be expanded with bone meal all around the house.

The red and white picnic cloth, though quite attractive, is slightly out of context. Maybe add a flower pot or some other little things? hard to say.

 

Other than that I must say that I think this is a very nicely done house, it shows a level of intricate complexity, while not being overwhelming. Best of luck.




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