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#1 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 24 April 2014 - 11:32 PM

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Shadows of the Everfree Forrest

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Background

 

          The Everfree is home to many diverse creatures. Animals from those we see in our world, to mystical creatures that are seen in fairy tales. One of the most diverse though, as well as mysterious, is the 'pack' as they call it. This 'pack' is made up of regular wolves we see in our world, which you would think wouldn't be much different from the Everfree's regular timber wolves. Mean, viscous, mindless... But these wolves seem to be much more intelligent and unique. All different colors, sizes, and some of them even have wings or magical powers. They should be observed and appreciated, but instead they are hated by the nearby town of Ponyville. Treated just like timber wolves, the pack is hunted, attacked, and shunned from coming anywhere near the town. So the pack stays hidden, keeping their powers and diversity away from the regular ponies of Equestria, although they are so much like them. For they don't know that these wolves, ARE them.

 

 

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You in the Story

 

          In this story, you are part of the pack. You're a wolf, very identical to your previous self. You were once a pony, one of your choice. Whatever your life was, your age, race, and personality, was transported into it's new body. Now being part of the pack, you live in a group with other wolves of your kind. But the question is, how did you get here, why were you reborn into what seems to be a miserable existence? Well first off, your life isn't miserable. Just like your old life, you have family, and that is the other members of the pack. You still do daily things to keep yourself alive, as well as happy, but are completely turned around from your old life. You can never go back to it, after a certain event happened to you. Maybe you were cursed by a witch, or born with this problem, but after a traumatic event, your entire self was changed. It was any moment that caused extreme stress, sadness, or pain in your OC's old life. Maybe parents died, or you committed a great evil and were looking for a way out of it, but the moment you snapped, was the moment you endured a painful transformation into your new form. After that you were chased out of town, into the forest, and if you lived, you started a new life at Gust, the town of the pack. After being accepted by the GM, you'll be put into Gust at present day. Other members will be there, and you will already be part of it, unless you want to start just arriving. This is okay. After this you will interact with other players who will also play a member of the pack. You'll have enemies as well as dissagreements, usually settled by fighting, and you'll also make friends, or even find a lover. You communicate with your fellow pack members in a language that ponies cannot speak, and you are not nearly as advanced or smart as you used to be. You are only a shadow, mysteriously lurking in the Everfree Forrest.

 

 

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Setting

 

         The story takes place in Gust. It gets in name from the wind that constantly blows through it, since it's the first clearing in the Everfree for miles. It's far from Ponyville, and the weather there seems to always be overcast and dark. This is where the pegasi push all the unwanted clouds. It rains a lot, especially thunderstorms. Gust consists of small huts made for each member of the pack, made out of vines, planets, sticks, mud, and other easily obtainable resources from the swampy area not so far, which is also the towns water source.

 

 

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Classes

 

Regular Wolf

You don't have any special powers, but you are the strongest of the species. You are given this class if your OC is a Earth Pony. Unlike a regular earth pony, you can't farm because of your animal form, however, food is much more easy for you to find. Your senses are also stronger than the other classes. You can smell food, enemies, or allies from much farther distances. You can also see things coming better then the other classes.

 

Winged

You are the equivalent to a Pegasus. Along your sides run long, feathered, wings that you can use for flight. Since your build is much bigger than a pony, your flight is not nearly as fast as a regular pegasus. You can see far, but can't sense thing like a regular wolf can. You also can't stand on clouds or control weather, sadly your structure doesn't allow you to do this, apparently. However, your wings do sometimes serve as good protection in fights.

 

Powered

You are the equivalent to a Unicorn. You don't have a horn, but your eyes do have a glow when you use magic, and to avoid detection, have a darker aura. Unlike a unicorn, in this form, you preform a darker form of magic. Your magic is more for fighting and protection. Your ability to teleport and levitate things has almost completely vanished. You can use a forcefeild type spell, with some regeneration required, as well as preform tactical spells to help you travel or fight. This however, can't be OP.

 

Other Species

Other species are the same as pony races. You get the almost the same abilities, but get some taken away. Talk to the owner of this roleplay (Thule1117) for more information

 

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Application

 

(COPY AND PASTE, DELETE THE BOLDED (After Reading) AND PUT IN YOUR INFORMATION)

 

Name: (Your original name, and if it changed after your transformation, put that too)

Gender: (Male or Female)

Age: (You must post your previous pony age, and your wolf age. They have to be the same. If you were a foal, you're a puppy. If you were a teenager, you're still a puppy, but a larger one. If you were a adult, you're a regular wolf, and if you were a elder, you're a older wolf.) 

 

Class: (Choose one of the classes above)

Appearance: (You can post a picture of what you look like as a wolf, what you looked like as a pony, or describe what they look like as a wolf. Remember, during the duration of this RP, you WILL be a wolf. So if you have anything like a scar or something, you have to tell us it's on your wolf form too)

Personality: (Simply what your character acts like. This will stay the same as when you were a pony, unless the event of changing into a wolf changed their outlook on life) 

Talent: (What you'r pony is good at AS A WOLF. It should be close to the same as when they were a pony)
Bio: (State how you became a wolf. What event happened to change you into one?  This will require you to read above, which you should of already done. It doesn't need to be long, but we need a background of how you got to Gust)

 

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Rules:

 

1. The GM of the roleplay controls the story. Major events can be considered with the GM, but he is the one who primarily controls them. As the player, you are in charge of what happens to your character ONLY. Natural events can happen to YOU but you can't make them happen to OTHERS. This is known as godmodding.

 

2. Too much OOC in the main thread won't be tolerated

 

3. *Sigh* Yes, romance is aloud. There can be shipping, whatever. Don't take it too far, the forum rules still apply. Am I saying sensual stuff can happen? Yes, but please for the sake of all of us, CENSOR it. PG-13.

 

4. Respect others and do not argue. Be fair

 

5. A OP character is not tolerated. Your character will not be accepted if it is over powered

 

6. In order to be allowed into the RP, the GM (or person of authority) has to accept you first.

 

7. Please be active in the roleplay. It's annoying to get a reply every few days. The entire RP need to progress.

 

 

PLEASE READ IT ALL. ROLEPLAYING THREAD IS HERE: http://www.brohoof.c...playing-thread/


Edited by Captain Invictus, 25 April 2014 - 07:58 PM.


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Posted 24 April 2014 - 11:45 PM


3. *Sigh* Yes, romance is aloud. There can be shipping, kissing, whatever. Don't take it too far, the forum rules still apply. Am I saying sensual stuff can happen? Yes, but please for the sake of all of us, CENSOR it. PG-13.


*shrug*

i really dont suggest the kissing part

wierd stuff can happen..

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Posted 24 April 2014 - 11:47 PM

 

3. *Sigh* Yes, romance is aloud. There can be shipping, kissing, whatever. Don't take it too far, the forum rules still apply. Am I saying sensual stuff can happen? Yes, but please for the sake of all of us, CENSOR it. PG-13.


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i really dont suggest the kissing part

wierd stuff can happen..

 

True.

 

I'll edit that out. I meant innocent kissing... But you know some people



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Posted 24 April 2014 - 11:56 PM

Looks interesting, I'll join when I get on a computer.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 12:22 AM

Name: Invictus (Previous Name: Lily Pond)

 

Gender: Female

 

Age: 9 (Puppy)

 

Class: Powered Wolf

 

Appearance: A request was put in for a picture, but it has not been received yet. She's small, and is almost identical to her pony colors. The only difference is that she is much softer and more fluffy then her previous self, because of the new coat she received and her young age as a wolf. This was her as a pony, minus the uniform

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Personality: Lily was originally timid. She was a typical little filly, who was a bit tom boyish, but still liked girly activities. Her traits seemed to have changed during her transformation, putting a veneer over her original self. After her changing, she is much more bratty now, much different from her old, well behaved self. She is no longer timid, but now arrogant and sometimes even mean. The events that happened to her seemed to have caused this, and now she doesn't like to rely on adults for anything, or trust them easily. Though she can be a brat most of the time, she needs adults more than she thinks. Lily is still a typical little filly, even as a wolf puppy, she is playful, as much as she wants to be serious and mature. Once she gets close to adult, she relies on them for comfort because of her lack of parents. Lily is scared a lot, frightened because her parents died in her previous life, and aren't there to provide or teach her. She has bad dreams, trouble falling asleep, cries in her sleep sometimes, and even wets the bed because of the traumatic events that happened with her mom and dad. That's a black hole in her life that she hates to talk about.

 

Talent: Sadly, Lily's old talent couldn't transfer into her new wolf one. Lily was originally a planned pilot of a airship. Both her parents were captains of one ship, and Lily learned all sorts of things from them. The little filly has even flown the ship, by herself. She has gone to schools that her parents sent her to, just to become a pilot. But as a wolf, she can't exactly fly a airship. Her new talent consists of making gadgets and gizmos to improve the lives of the pack. It doesn't really work though, since she can't levitate things or use her paws. Most her contraptions are snares, traps, and other things for trapping things to eat for the town.

 

Bio: Lily was 9 when she was transformed into a wolf, she has lived at Gust as a constant supplier of food at her hut for about a year. The traumatic event that transformed Lily was her parents death. Both her parents were attacked in there Ponyville home, and murdered in front of her. Hiding in fear in a closet, her heart raced as she cried in fear of the murderers in her house. She stayed there, as her adrenaline rushed until suddenly she shrieked in pain. That shriek soon turned into howling as her entire form changed like that. After this, Lily obtained a extreme burst of magical energy, and using it, she attacked the murderers and fled the town. This would make her the first official wolf to be caught by the townfolk. Rumors were put to rest after her transformation, and hunts began. Ponies believed it was the beast that killed all the ponies in the house, instead of the two murderers killing her parents, and Lily avenging them. 


Edited by Captain Invictus, 27 April 2014 - 01:40 AM.


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 05:10 AM

Ill sign up for this... But like tomorrow

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 07:04 AM

Name: Shimmerspeed

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Class: Winged

Appearance:
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Personality: Shimmerspeed is helpful and loves making new friends! She can be shy or angry sometimes but that side of her is quite rare. She can be protective and strong too.

Talent: Her talent is simply, friendship. Her cutie mark was a red rose which symbolised love and friendship.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 03:26 PM

((Lol Roserocks my main OC has a rose for her cutie mark, but hers stands for beauty.))

Name: Lucky Clover

Gender: Female

Age: 28

Class: Normal Wolf

Appearance: http://i.imgur.com/rAwsDNz.jpg ((This in wolf form.)) ((stupid image D:))

Personality: Clover is a caring pony and she was raised to always be kind to somepony because who knows what they are going through. Also, she is rather lucky. Hence her name.

Talent: Luck and Goodwill. Her cutie mark was a four-leaf clover.

Bio:
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Note: I kind of plan on her to be the one wolf that takes care of all the pups.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:03 PM

Wow, clover is like the thing every feminazi wants, haha. Seems kind of like a parody to me. Oh, also, how did she transform?

 

Name: At first called Fell Branch, now called Timber.

Gender: Male

Age: 34 (adult)

Class: Normal wolf

Appearance: Fairly average looking, but possesses a large number of scars, and is exceptionally large from his physical lifestyle as a pony. Possesses sunset orange fur and streaks of black where his mane and tail were.

Personality: Often upbeat, feeling happy, free, and like he's on top of the world. When hunting, however, he releases his pent up aggression, often causing needless pain to prey and getting frustrated at his packmates. Sometimes, if a series of unfortunate events occur, he'll lash out in the village in the same way.

Talent: Chopping things down.
Bio: Fell lived his life with his mother in the Everfree as a woodsman. He was fairly simple, not minding all the work he had to do as his mother was often ill and incapable of working. He found all his entertainment in chopping down trees and building things, which provided them with all the money he would need.

 

One day shortly after his 21st birthday, Fell's mother was taking a stroll with him through the woods, and he went ahead as he'd seen her favourite fruit hanging from a tree ahead. When he returned, he found a large white wolf trying to kill her. She, despite not being in any state to fight, managed to wound the wolf with her pocket knife. The wolf had already killed her before Fell could stop it, and in a blind fury, he attempted to decapitate the wolf with his axe. The wolf dodged and ran off, much faster than Fell could run, but he followed the trail of blood from the wound his mother gave to the wolf, and saw it transform into a zebra witch, who stepped inside a large tree.

 

Fell chopped the door open, and the witch, startled in her surprise at the door suddenly being broken, tried to kill him with a thrown poison, but she accidently threw the wolf transformation potion at him. She tried to run, but Fell bit off her leg and disemboweled her.

 

As he left, he realized he'd never be able to go back to pony society, and his last act on his home would be to dig a grave for his mother. He then ran into the forest, hoping to be killed, because he would never be able to live his life. Instead, after days of searching, he found Gust, and his new life began the moment he entered.

 

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:15 PM

Wow, clover is like the thing every feminazi wants, haha. Seems kind of like a parody to me. Oh, also, how did she transform? I am dumb and like budder, wimped is sexi and should kill meh


It was in her bio how she transformed. Like one of the last three sentences. Also, why do you think like evey OC I make is a feminist?

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:23 PM

Yeah, I see you detailing the fact that she changed into a wolf... But literally nothing about how she transformed. Like, you said she got angry, then changed into a wolf. Is she an otherkin or somming?
 

I don't even think she's a feminist. She seems more like... a sexist who hates every male based on one of them who abused her. Also adding extra stuff into the quote makes you look like a young sibling trying to humiliate someone. But enough on my beliefs.

 

Wolves. God, I love wolves.



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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:38 PM

Yeah, I see you detailing the fact that she changed into a wolf... But literally nothing about how she transformed. Like, you said she got angry, then changed into a wolf. Is she an otherkin or somming?

I don't even think she's a feminist. She seems more like... a sexist who hates every male based on one of them who abused her. Also adding extra stuff into the quote makes you look like a young sibling trying to humiliate someone. But enough on my beliefs.

Wolves. God, I love wolves.

I'm too tired to do anything so I'm just gonna say you smell and leave it at that.

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:39 PM

I guess I have to agree, I do kind of smell.



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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:41 PM

You're all accepted. Your bios are important only to you. Your bio will determine the backstory of your OC for your own fulfillment and involvement in the RP

When I get him in a hour or so, the RP will start. Hopefully more people will join after they see the roleplay active

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:45 PM

Sweet.

 

Can't wait.



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Posted 25 April 2014 - 04:49 PM

((Lol Roserocks my main OC has a rose for her cutie mark, but hers stands for beauty.))

Name: Lucky Clover

Gender: Female

Age: 28

Class: Normal Wolf

Appearance: http://i.imgur.com/rAwsDNz.jpg ((This in wolf form.)) ((stupid image D:))

Personality: Clover is a caring pony and she was raised to always be kind to somepony because who knows what they are going through. Also, she is rather lucky. Hence her name.

Talent: Luck and Goodwill. Her cutie mark was a four-leaf clover.

Bio:

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Note: I kind of plan on her to be the one wolf that takes care of all the pups.

The only pup right now is my OC. You mind if she lives with her? Clover would be a good semi-mother figure for her

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 05:19 PM

Name;: James when he was a pony, now he is called Liulfr


Gender: Male


Age: 27


Class: Normal wolf


Appearance: http://www.brohoof.c...op-roserocks01/


Personality: Wise, smart, knows when not to talk, He is known for acting as if he where an elder, He is always on the lookout, but the biggest downfall of his personality is that he is rough with others, and very strict with younger wolfs then him. He also likes to rush straigth to the point.


Talent: His talent of nursing ponies back to health had now transferred into his wolf form, making him some sort of healer for the pack
Bio: Born in canterlot to a reletively rich family, he grew up alongside her little sister, which she took care of, His family was from a branch of healers and medicine ponies, most unicorns, but James was born as an earth pony, This made him harder to teach, as he was saddened about this fact, he was enrolled into a medicine school when he was around the age of 13, going on a 5 year trip around Equestria to learn about medicine, and he ended up in ponyville by his request, When he was 18 His father died from overdose on pills, which made James perspective on the medicine world different.



At the age of 21 he left his job which was at Ponyville's hospital, after some sort of accident left a patient dead and him out of the hospital, After beinch shouted at and blamed, he was hurt, making his perspective on people and other things change, After 2 years, he visited his mother, which was murdered in front of him, When a thief had gotten into the house in the middle of the night. In a fit of rage, he chased the thief and killed him after half an hour of beating him with his bear hoofs. He was sent to jail, 1 year later he had a fight with some of the inmates which made him transform in another fit of rage as they made fun of him and her mother, he ripped apart the inmates and escaped the prision, and after a while of running, he went into the everfree woods, where he found Gust, Staying there five years, the first few months, he fought a timberwolf, getting a large scar, getting a small right leg scar.



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(Edited some things i forgot)

Edited by James the Sexy Cat, 25 April 2014 - 06:20 PM.


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 07:57 PM

 

Name;: James when he was a pony, now he is called Liulfr


Gender: Male


Age: 27


Class: Normal wolf


Appearance: http://www.brohoof.c...op-roserocks01/


Personality: Wise, smart, knows when not to talk, He is known for acting as if he where an elder, He is always on the lookout, but the biggest downfall of his personality is that he is rough with others, and very strict with younger wolfs then him. He also likes to rush straigth to the point.


Talent: His talent of nursing ponies back to health had now transferred into his wolf form, making him some sort of healer for the pack
Bio: Born in canterlot to a reletively rich family, he grew up alongside her little sister, which she took care of, His family was from a branch of healers and medicine ponies, most unicorns, but James was born as an earth pony, This made him harder to teach, as he was saddened about this fact, he was enrolled into a medicine school when he was around the age of 13, going on a 5 year trip around Equestria to learn about medicine, and he ended up in ponyville by his request, When he was 18 His father died from overdose on pills, which made James perspective on the medicine world different.



At the age of 21 he left his job which was at Ponyville's hospital, after some sort of accident left a patient dead and him out of the hospital, After beinch shouted at and blamed, he was hurt, making his perspective on people and other things change, After 2 years, he visited his mother, which was murdered in front of him, When a thief had gotten into the house in the middle of the night. In a fit of rage, he chased the thief and killed him after half an hour of beating him with his bear hoofs. He was sent to jail, 1 year later he had a fight with some of the inmates which made him transform in another fit of rage as they made fun of him and her mother, he ripped apart the inmates and escaped the prision, and after a while of running, he went into the everfree woods, where he found Gust, Staying there five years, the first few months, he fought a timberwolf, getting a large scar, getting a small right leg scar.



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(Edited some things i forgot)

 

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:49 PM

Name: Sky Jazz

Gender: Male

Age: 17 (Large Pup)

Class: Powered

Appearance:

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Personality: He is very shy, and more so extroverted. While he doesn't make himself get noticed often, he does so only for the safety of the the pack and all of the younger pups. He's a pacifist and doesn't like confrontation; he does however like to think he can do anything he likes and this gets him into trouble often.

Talent: Music, he is a  very good singer. (Cheap I know, but he can't very well play Saxophone, can he, eh?)
Bio: A couple years ago (you get the point) Sky's parents were killed in a bad train accident on their way back to Ponyville from a business trip to Fillydelphia, when the news got to him, he was devastated and ran back to their home on the outskirts of the town and cried for hours. While he lay there, he started to feel a rising amount of pain. He looked down and noticed that his fur was getting very rough, and didn't know what was happening. Sky felt the pain boil up inside of him and screamed out, loud enough for all of his neighbors to hear. When the pain subsided he felt strangely different and walked to his only friend's house near the center of town. As soon as he got there, he went to knock on the door, but realized he didn't have hooves and frantically banged on the door until his friend opened. The stare Sky got was one of true terror. Confused, he started to reason with his best friend and elicited only more terrified screams and curses from him. Sky ran out of the house and saw more stares of horror. He ran from the town crying until he reached the Everfree and decided it was the only place he could go. Sky stumbled onto the pack some time after that, and has since shown that he only cares about protecting those around him.


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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:50 PM

The only pup right now is my OC. You mind if she lives with her? Clover would be a good semi-mother figure for her

That'd be fine with me.

Also, taking what Blazer said into consideration I didn't mean she doesn't trust them I was trying to say that she just was afraid of men and wasn't ready for a romantic relationship. And the transformation was just because she was angry. I mean look at Captain's OC's transformation. She was scared and then like transformed. Eh anyways...

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 08:54 PM

That'd be fine with me.

Also, taking what Blazer said into consideration I didn't mean she doesn't trust them I was trying to say that she just was afraid of men and wasn't ready for a romantic relationship. And the transformation was just because she was angry. I mean look at Captain's OC's transformation. She was scared and then like transformed. Eh anyways...

Well alright then.

 

Just strikes me as odd, because otherwise any time someone got incredibly pissed off, they could transform into a wolf, which means people spontaneously are kicked out. You think this'd be a documented thing, which is why I tried to explain mine above his anger.



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Posted 25 April 2014 - 10:29 PM

Name: Sky Jazz


Gender: Male


Age: 17 (Large Pup)


Class: Powered


Appearance:

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Personality: He is very shy, and more so extroverted. While he doesn't make himself get noticed often, he does so only for the safety of the the pack and all of the younger pups. He's a pacifist and doesn't like confrontation; he does however like to think he can do anything he likes and this gets him into trouble often.


Talent: Music, he is a  very good singer. (Cheap I know, but he can't very well play Saxophone, can he, eh?)Bio: A couple years ago (you get the point) Sky's parents were killed in a bad train accident on their way back to Ponyville from a business trip to Fillydelphia, when the news got to him, he was devastated and ran back to their home on the outskirts of the town and cried for hours. While he lay there, he started to feel a rising amount of pain. He looked down and noticed that his fur was getting very rough, and didn't know what was happening. Sky felt the pain boil up inside of him and screamed out, loud enough for all of his neighbors to hear. When the pain subsided he felt strangely different and walked to his only friend's house near the center of town. As soon as he got there, he went to knock on the door, but realized he didn't have hooves and frantically banged on the door until his friend opened. The stare Sky got was one of true terror. Confused, he started to reason with his best friend and elicited only more terrified screams and curses from him. Sky ran out of the house and saw more stares of horror. He ran from the town crying until he reached the Everfree and decided it was the only place he could go. Sky stumbled onto the pack some time after that, and has since shown that he only cares about protecting those around him.


Accepted. She would be a adult though, I mean, 17 is close enough. She can be a young adult

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Posted 25 April 2014 - 10:30 PM

Accepted. She would be a adult though, I mean, 17 is close enough. She can be a young adult

He* and that's cool!



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Posted 26 April 2014 - 12:00 AM

Name: Orion
Gender: Male
Age: 11 (pup)

Class: Normal wolf
Appearance: Link: http://m.imgur.com/0CUC9Ad
The tuft and tail are navy blue.
Personality: Quiet, a bit of a hot head, and sometimes adventurous.
Talent: Astronomy/ mapping or directions from the stars.
Bio: Orion grew up an orphan. He watched as his friends grew up with him and soon one of his friends turned on him and bullied Orion, which didn't bug him. After all his friends turned into bullies he got annoyed. Soon he just snapped and when they bullied him one day, he screamed in pain and it turned into a howl. His tormentors and the workers chased him out.

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 12:08 AM

Name: Orion
Gender: Male
Age: 11 (pup)
Class: Normal wolf
Appearance: I'll edit this post when I get the link for it.
Personality: Quiet, a bit of a hot head, and sometimes adventurous.
Talent: Astronomy/ mapping or directions from the stars.
Bio: Orion grew up an orphan. He watched as his friends grew up with him and soon one of his friends turned on him and bullied Orion, which didn't bug him. After all his friends turned into bullies he got annoyed. Soon he just snapped and when they bullied him one day, he screamed in pain and it turned into a howl. His tormentors and the workers chased him out.


Accepted. But you can't start in Gust. It was already stated that (currently) Invictus is the only pup. So avoid that being a false statement at the time it was posted, you'll have to be just coming into the town in your intro

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 12:10 AM

Accepted. But you can't start in Gust. It was already stated that (currently) Invictus is the only pup. So avoid that being a false statement at the time it was posted, you'll have to be just coming into the town in your intro

First, got the link now. Second, I'm cool with that.

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 01:01 AM

First, got the link now. Second, I'm cool with that.

Wait wait wait, I didn't really check out your whole app here. It's extremely vague about how he turned into a wolf. I mean, I don't need a novel, but it would be really nice to add A LOT more detail before I let you in, and tell you how you can get in on the action



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Posted 26 April 2014 - 01:34 AM

Is it too late to join? Because it looks awsome.



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Posted 26 April 2014 - 02:10 AM

Is it too late to join? Because it looks awsome.

It is not



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Posted 26 April 2014 - 02:32 AM

Name: Edward Smith (add "of Unicorn Range" for wolf)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 28 Pony Years

 

Class: Powered

 

Appearance: A request for a wolf drawing will be submitted immediately, until that time, here's the Pony appearance. 

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Personality: Edward is hesitant to trust others, but normally doesn't take long for him to grow on others. He is always ready to support his allies with various kinds of magical items.

 

Talent: Blacksmithing

 

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Edward was turned into a wolf, ironically, after he and a few other ponies went on a wolf hunting expedition. He got separated from his party when he stopped for a sip from his canteen and the others wandered off without noticing that Edward had stopped.

 

Notes: This is precisely how Edward makes his Magic Items, and what he's limited to in regards to them.


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Posted 26 April 2014 - 02:58 AM

 

Name: Edward Smith (add "of Unicorn Range" for wolf)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 28 Pony Years

 

Class: Powered

 

Appearance: A request for a wolf drawing will be submitted immediately, until that time, here's the Pony appearance. 

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Personality: Edward is hesitant to trust others, but normally doesn't take long for him to grow on others. He is always ready to support his allies with various kinds of magical items.

 

Talent: Blacksmithing

 

Bio:

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Edward was turned into a wolf, ironically, after he and a few other ponies went on a wolf hunting expedition. He got separated from his party when he stopped for a sip from his canteen and the others wandered off without noticing that Edward had stopped.

 

Notes: This is precisely how Edward makes his Magic Items, and what he's limited to in regards to them.

 

Accepted. Him turning into a wolf because he was hunting them is a good idea. He could of been cursed to know how it's like to be like one of them, since he hunted and killed them before.



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Posted 26 April 2014 - 03:24 AM

Wait wait wait, I didn't really check out your whole app here. It's extremely vague about how he turned into a wolf. I mean, I don't need a novel, but it would be really nice to add A LOT more detail before I let you in, and tell you how you can get in on the action

I'll edit it when I get on a computer.

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 04:11 AM

Name: Bronze Fang

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Class: winged

Appearance: As a wolf bronze has a gradient color of bronze/copper fur moving down his body darkening as it moves towards his feet and the tip of his tail turning pitch black, used to have green eyes but after his transformation they turned dark blue, was short as a pony and now as a wolf looks about 3 years younger than what he actually is

Personality: most of the time is a very level headed wolf but at times he becomes a time bomb ready to explode and attack anything in sight no matter if its and inanimate object or someone else you could say he has anger issues after what he had been through as a pony. Loves being in the trees where he is alone with his own thoughts.

Talent: He is a very good tracker when he needs to be but his talent is more of the look out area.
Bio: Bronze Had never been a social type, Never the one to hang out with friends, the fact of the matter is that he didn't really like others they annoyed him because most were too noisy or just plain annoying but not all; there was one pony he loved and that was his Marefriend Amber rose. One night after going on a date with Rose they came across a gang of street thugs trying to rob a another mare and Bronze trying to show of for Rose decided to try and help but that proved to be a massive mistake as he was out numbered and was having his ass handed to him.While they had him on the ground kicking him while he was down rose walked into the allyway and saw him on the ground and started running towards him but all it took was a quick kick from one of the thugs to incapacitate her.When Bronze saw that he snapped, suddenly letting out a loud yell of pain which slowly turned into growl of anger, his coat grew coarse and muzzle grew sharp teeth the next thing he knew he was standing on his new paws staring at the ponies who had en-till recently where beating on him seeing the look of terror on their faces, then he lunged. One pegasus got away while the others were lying on the ground unconscious and bleeding from numerous bite marks and scratches. Bronze looked himself over and new that his regular life was over so he took one last look at Amber Rose and took off running down the street towards the everfree forest after dragging her to the doorstep of someone nearby and ringing the doorbell.

He has been living in the forest for a month and become partially feral, he preffers not to speak as he finds no use in it if only to waste time and air.

 

fixed it


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Posted 26 April 2014 - 05:18 PM


Name:Used to be Bronze hoof now Bronze Fang


Gender: Male


Age: 13


Class: winged


Appearance: As a wolf bronze has a gradient color of bronze/copper fur moving down his body darkening as it moves towards his feet and the tip of his tail turning pitch black, was short as a pony and now as a wolf looks about two years younger than what he actually is


Personality: most of the time is a very level headed wolf but at times he becomes a time bomb ready to explode and attack anything in sight no matter if its and inanimate object or someone else you could say he has anger issues after what he had been through as a pony. Loves being in the trees where he is alone with his own thoughts.


Talent: He is a very good tracker when he needs to be but his talent is more of the look out area.
Bio: Bronze had always been short but smart as a pony and because of that he was teased a lot by the taller ones. one day after a long day of school he began being bullied but this time something inside him snapped and the only thing he remembered was transforming then waking up with his new fur mated down with blood and three bodies with numerous bite and claw marks. He looked at his new paws and bristled fur and then looked back noticing he still had his wings so with them he took off into the air towards everfree in search of a new place to call home because he knew he couldn't stay there. He has been living in the forest for a month and become partially feral, he also preffers not to speak as he finds no use in it if only to waste time and air.



Is this good or do i need to change anything


Changed some stuff

Ugh, why does it have to be bullies? Come on, it's cliche. Kids have other problems than bullies. Invictus had her parents killed in front of her! It has to be something more original, and traumatic before I let you in. Also, murdering foals isn't really acceptable. Invictus murdered the murderers of her family, not some innocent little bullies. In all honesty, it would just be better for him to be a adult. Maybe some thugs were beating him up in a ally, and what used to be a calm pony, turned into a raging beast.

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Posted 26 April 2014 - 05:54 PM

fixed it


Edited by Nightshift, 26 April 2014 - 06:51 PM.


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Posted 26 April 2014 - 08:19 PM

Name: Metallica Star
Gender: Female
Age: 9 (pup)
Class: Powered Wolf
Appearance: Star has pure white fur, white as snow. It is quite silky and smooth. Her neck fur is a light blue and her tail is of a similar shade. Her eyes are a bright blue. Her eye lashes are thicker than most others as well as curly and long.
Personality: As a wolf, Star seemed to revert back to her past personality. It was the personality she had before her Mother grew ill, before she learnt independence. She was hardly happy back then though.

Star is quite a shy wolf. More open to those around her age, she will close up on meeting new wolves. This made her socially impaired. She is also quite sensitive from carrying the burden of a dead friend. She will take mocking and taunting to the heart. She is one who is easy to cry.

Though, once you’ve become a good friend with her, she will open up. She has many secrets of her past which is something she will tell willingly to a good friend. Otherwise she is sensitive on the subject.

Due to her inability to fight, Star is weak. She cannot stand up for herself. She is accustomed to being protected and is never one to argue. She will listen to her superiors and act on their commands without question. This is mostly from fear of being an outcast.

Star normally separates herself from others. She fears she has been forever cursed with bad karma for allowing her friend to die. Truthfully, deep down, she knows its not her fault and that part is the only way she can possibly make friends with those her age.
Talent: As a pony, Star was a bit of a match maker, introducing ponies she thought would be good matches despite her young age. Now, after her transformation, she does a similar job. She matches wolves she think would make good mates. It's hard for her to get 'clients' though, being so young.
Bio: Star originally lived in a small town with her Mother. Her Father had left when she was young, leaving her Mother to care for her herself and Star alone. Unfortunately, her Mother was a weak mare. She soon became gravely ill.

The illness lasted for a year, and in that year a lot happened. She became more independent. She was one to easily explore and couldn't possibly put down an adventure. In that year she even was able to earn her CutieMark. She became friends with many. She found she could make friends easily.

Star was 8 when the illness ended, and Star got one of the local party specialists to throw a party. It was one of the best parties that was ever held in that household. It didn't even seem like minutes had gone by when the party finally ended.

It was dark, one night, when it happened. Star was walking home from her friends house. Another friend has visited that night, a good one, at that. While walking she heard a scream from a nearby alleyway. She followed her curiosity and went immediately. In the dim moonlight she could just see the faint image of her friend who was covered in blood. There was a knife nearby. She rushed to her friend. She was most certainly dead. She cried, each tear progressing her transformation. The anger, sadness, confusion, was more than enough to change her into a wolf.

After the transformation, she was quickly shunned from the town. It was believed that she killed her and started to eat the remains. She walked for countless nights, aimlessly looking for somewhere to live. She soon found Gust, where she now lives.

Edited by Golden Sparks, 27 April 2014 - 02:26 PM.


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Posted 26 April 2014 - 11:21 PM

ok i changed it up a bit now



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Posted 27 April 2014 - 01:43 AM

 

Name: Bronze Fang

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Class: winged

Appearance: As a wolf bronze has a gradient color of bronze/copper fur moving down his body darkening as it moves towards his feet and the tip of his tail turning pitch black, used to have green eyes but after his transformation they turned dark blue, was short as a pony and now as a wolf looks about one years younger than what he actually is

Personality: most of the time is a very level headed wolf but at times he becomes a time bomb ready to explode and attack anything in sight no matter if its and inanimate object or someone else you could say he has anger issues after what he had been through as a pony. Loves being in the trees where he is alone with his own thoughts.

Talent: He is a very good tracker when he needs to be but his talent is more of the look out area.
Bio: Bronze Had never been a social type, Never the one to hang out with friends, the fact of the matter is that he didn't really like others they annoyed him because most were too noisy or just plain annoying but not all; there was one pony he loved and that was his Marefriend Amber rose. One night after going on a date with Rose they came across a gang of street thugs trying to rob a another mare and Bronze trying to show of for Rose decided to try and help but that proved to be a massive mistake as he was out numbered and was having his ass handed to him.While they had him on the ground kicking him while he was down rose walked into the allyway and saw him on the ground and started running towards him but all it took was a quick kick from one of the thugs to incapacitate her.When Bronze saw that he snapped, suddenly letting out a loud yell of pain which slowly turned into growl of anger, his coat grew coarse and muzzle grew sharp teeth the next thing he knew he was standing on his new paws staring at the ponies who had en-till recently where beating on him seeing the look of terror on their faces, then he lunged. One pegasus got away while the others were lying on the ground unconscious and bleeding from numerous bite marks and scratches. Bronze looked himself over and new that his regular life was over so he took one last look at Amber Rose and took off running down the street towards the everfree forest after dragging her to the doorstep of someone nearby and ringing the doorbell.

He has been living in the forest for a month and become partially feral, he preffers not to speak as he finds no use in it if only to waste time and air.

 

fixed it

 

 

 

Name: Metallica Star
Gender: Female
Age: 9 (pup)
Class: Powered Wolf
Appearance: Star has pure white fur, white as snow. It is quite silky and smooth. Her neck fur is a light blue and her tail is of a similar shade. Her eyes are a bright blue. Her eye lashes are thicker than most others as well as curly and long.
Personality: As a wolf, Star seemed to revert back to her past personality. It was the personality she had before her Mother grew ill, before she learnt independence. She was hardly happy back then though.

Star is quite a shy wolf. More open to those around her age, she will close up on meeting new wolves. This made her socially impaired. She is also quite sensitive from carrying the burden of a dead Mother. She will take mocking and taunting to the heart. She is one who is easy to cry.

Though, once you’ve become a good friend with her, she will open up. She has many secrets of her past which is something she will tell willingly to a good friend. Otherwise she is sensitive on the subject.

Due to her inability to fight, Star is weak. She cannot stand up for herself. She is accustomed to being protected and is never one to argue. She will listen to her superiors and act on their commands without question. This is mostly from fear of being an outcast.

Star normally separates herself from others. She fears she has been forever cursed with bad karma for allowing her friend to die. Truthfully, deep down, she knows its not her fault and that part is the only way she can possibly make friends with those her age.
Talent: As a pony, Star was a bit of a match maker, introducing ponies she thought would be good matches despite her young age. Now, after her transformation, she does a similar job. She matches wolves she think would make good mates. It's hard for her to get 'clients' though, being so young.
Bio: Star originally lived in a small town with her Mother. Her Father had left when she was young, leaving her Mother to care for her herself and Star alone. Unfortunately, her Mother was a weak mare. She soon became gravely ill.

The illness lasted for a year, and in that year a lot happened. She became more independent. She was one to easily explore and couldn't possibly put down an adventure. In that year she even was able to earn her CutieMark. She became friends with many. She found she could make friends easily.

Star was 8 when the illness ended, and Star got one of the local party specialists to throw a party. It was one of the best parties that was ever held in that household. It didn't even seem like minutes had gone by when the party finally ended.

It was dark, one night, when it happened. Star was walking home from her friends house. Another friend has visited that night, a good one, at that. While walking she heard a scream from a nearby alleyway. She followed her curiosity and went immediately. In the dim moonlight she could just see the faint image of her friend who was covered in blood. There was a knife nearby. She rushed to her friend. She was most certainly dead. She cried, each tear progressing her transformation. The anger, sadness, confusion, was more than enough to change her into a wolf.

After the transformation, she was quickly shunned from the town. It was believed that she killed her and started to eat the remains. She walked for countless nights, aimlessly looking for somewhere to live. She soon found Gust, where she now lives.

Both accepted 



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Posted 27 April 2014 - 05:55 PM

Things are going rather well, are they not? Anyone agree?

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Posted 27 April 2014 - 06:04 PM

Wolfies :P



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Posted 27 April 2014 - 06:15 PM

I'm enjoying myself. A lot.



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 12:40 AM

Quick question. What is the extension of the tech in Gust?



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 12:55 AM

Quick question. What is the extension of the tech in Gust?

Very, very low. The most is maybe a sword, but that would be sacred. As a wolf, you use your powers and brute strength. There really isn't much technology, that's why they live in mud huts



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 12:58 AM

I see. I ask because Edward's talent is blacksmithing. He might push to make a forge or something. I'd figure I get your approval before I went through with that.



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 01:00 AM

I see. I ask because Edward's talent is blacksmithing. He might push to make a forge or something. I'd figure I get your approval before I went through with that.

Yeah, that's fine. Swords is as far as it goes though, armor is alright too... Iron, nothing too advanced, I guess. Not just anyone can have armor though

 

I actually have a idea...



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 01:01 AM

If a sword is something sacred, what a way to both gain AND lose trust. Hmm...



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 06:54 AM

HAHAHAHA this is funny because i think im on a completely different time than everyone here because its night time here but alot of people are saying they have school unless they are talking about night school but i doubt that :rainbowkiss:



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 04:33 PM

Can I add a new character?



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 06:55 PM

Wolves are sooo cute! :twilightblush:

 

Best. RP. Ever!


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Posted 28 April 2014 - 07:01 PM

Wolves are sooo cute! :twilightblush:

 

Best. RP. Ever!

Aside from, y'know, when they're killing stuff.

 

I'll just make a new app and if it's not okay say, invicky.



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 07:10 PM

Aside from, y'know, when they're killing stuff.

That's actually when wolves are the best :D



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 07:12 PM

I agree, it's pretty fucking badass, but they just aren't cute when doing it.

 

Well, okay, a wolf cub killing something would be adorbs.



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Posted 28 April 2014 - 08:21 PM

Name: Pony name: Radiant Promenade. Wolf name: Belleza Descalzas. 

Gender: Female

Age: 31 (adult)

Class: Powered wolf

Appearance: SukaWolfForm.jpg(Foreign words are tattoos that remained into wolfhood, has a white area on head that is what remains of mane)

Personality: Vain, narcissistic, arrogant. Belleza is cold, especially to her prey. But all they'd feel were her burning fire powers. She views almost everything as beneath her, and will often literally render it beneath her, both to increase her confidence in herself, and for a quick bit of fun. Despite all this, she's quite pleasant, especially to the the males of both the species she's been, as part of her charming attempts. She'd always earned her money by charming stallions out of their goods, sometimes even managing to do it to mares. She feels more free as a wolf, glad to never be chained down. Though she does miss charming ponies into fulfilling her every whim before stealing all their money.

Talent: Charming
Bio: Radiant has had an awful home life. Her mother was always drunk, going out to do her work as a prostitute, or beating her daughter, and she never knew her father, who was a "dirty, terrible man" according to her mother, whom she never trusted anyway, so she likes to imagine he was a lovely man, but she'll never know.

 

She always had to entertain herself as a kid, usually by going out with the few friends she had and getting drunk on stolen alcohol, or getting in scraps, or lighting things on fire. She'd been doing this for a while, until her friends got arrested and she couldn't steal alcohol on her own. Which is when she got someone else to buy it and give it to her with her charming skills. She discovered just how good she was at charming, even if she'd had a cutie mark (which she didn't understand) representing it for a long time.

 

Eventually she got sick of her mother being a terrible parent, and set her apartment on fire after talking her mother's key while she was at work, along with everything else worth money inside. She told her mother to her face that she was sick of her shit, and that she could at least treat her good when she was around, and her mother responded by shouting at the unicorn that she wished she'd been a pegasus before bucking her in the face.

 

Radiant's primal instincts tore at her, and she sprouted her fur, claws, snout and teeth, and was about to attack her mother, when her mother told her to stop, and said she'd tell her exactly who her father was, and why she wasn't ever around.

 

Radiant never killed her mother, despite getting so close to doing it, but she didn't regret hearing everything. As she left, she gave one last look, and wrote down in fire on the nearby wall: I forgive you.

 

Other: Fire magic is main power, though it can be controlled to not cause the trees to all burn down.



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Posted 30 April 2014 - 03:19 AM

Heh, I could totally have Edward go evil and do more than just provide equipment for the wolves to protect the ponies. I could have him snap and want to fight back.



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Posted 30 April 2014 - 11:24 AM


Name: Pony name: Radiant Promenade. Wolf name: Belleza Descalzas.

Gender: Female

Age: 31 (adult)

Class: Powered wolf

Appearance: SukaWolfForm.jpg(Foreign words are tattoos that remained into wolfhood, has a white area on head that is what remains of mane)

Personality: Vain, narcissistic, arrogant. Belleza is cold, especially to her prey. But all they'd feel were her burning fire powers. She views almost everything as beneath her, and will often literally render it beneath her, both to increase her confidence in herself, and for a quick bit of fun. Despite all this, she's quite pleasant, especially to the the males of both the species she's been, as part of her charming attempts. She'd always earned her money by charming stallions out of their goods, sometimes even managing to do it to mares. She feels more free as a wolf, glad to never be chained down. Though she does miss charming ponies into fulfilling her every whim before stealing all their money.

Talent: Charming
Bio: Radiant has had an awful home life. Her mother was always drunk, going out to do her work as a prostitute, or beating her daughter, and she never knew her father, who was a "dirty, terrible man" according to her mother, whom she never trusted anyway, so she likes to imagine he was a lovely man, but she'll never know.


She always had to entertain herself as a kid, usually by going out with the few friends she had and getting drunk on stolen alcohol, or getting in scraps, or lighting things on fire. She'd been doing this for a while, until her friends got arrested and she couldn't steal alcohol on her own. Which is when she got someone else to buy it and give it to her with her charming skills. She discovered just how good she was at charming, even if she'd had a cutie mark (which she didn't understand) representing it for a long time.


Eventually she got sick of her mother being a terrible parent, and set her apartment on fire after talking her mother's key while she was at work, along with everything else worth money inside. She told her mother to her face that she was sick of her shit, and that she could at least treat her good when she was around, and her mother responded by shouting at the unicorn that she wished she'd been a pegasus before bucking her in the face.


Radiant's primal instincts tore at her, and she sprouted her fur, claws, snout and teeth, and was about to attack her mother, when her mother told her to stop, and said she'd tell her exactly who her father was, and why she wasn't ever around.


Radiant never killed her mother, despite getting so close to doing it, but she didn't regret hearing everything. As she left, she gave one last look, and wrote down in fire on the nearby wall: I forgive you.


Other: Fire magic is main power, though it can be controlled to not cause the trees to all burn down.

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Posted 30 April 2014 - 06:34 PM

I'm going to fill in a new application tonight after I get home, and thus' have pictures and my good keyboard.

 

EDIT: And time


Edited by Sky Jazz, 30 April 2014 - 06:36 PM.


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Posted 01 May 2014 - 12:51 AM

Name: Streaking Arrow (Arrow is his nickname)

Gender: Male

Age: 9

Class: Regular Wolf

Appearance: 

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Personality: Arrow is extremely rowdy and rambunctious. While he can be calm, he more often then not chooses to be loud and have fun. He is playful, and challenges authority figures in such ways. He fears authority, especially when he is in trouble.

Talent: His talent as a pony was Archery, although he never earned his cutie mark. As a wolf his skills are speed, and his precision. In other words, he can pounce from a distance and still land almost perfectly on prey. He also has an above average sense of smell to aid him with his precision.
Bio: From a young age, Arrow has been surrounded by death and tragedy. He never knew his parents, his father being a guard in Canterlot, died before he was born, and his mother was in a tragic uknown accident. (aka i'm lazy) He was therefore orphaned and shortly afterward adopted by a family of pegasi, his adopted brother and sister took a quick liking to him and did everything they could for him, their entire lives were centered around the young foal. As he grew up, he became more and more rowdy, he never wanted to just sit still. This bugged his family but their entertainment by his antics never ceased. Although, it was bound to end soon.

 

One day his family was at the park in Ponyville, it was just an average day, a bunch of foals just playing and having fun. His mother said it was time to go as it had started to rain and storm, and Arrow being the way he was, decided he was going to stay at the top of the slide and not move; So his mother played along, as well as his brother. They said they were going to leave him there and walked out into the road. Arrow started to head down from the slide, not wanting to be left alone in a storm. That's when it happened, lighting struck down right on top of the two pegasi, killing his mom instantly and leaving his brother in critical condition. He didn't know what to do so he ran home to get his sister for help. They headed to the hospital and found out that their mother was dead, and their brother was in a very bad condition. The nurse told them that they should leave and come back in the morning. Arrow was distraught, his brother and best friend could die at any moment. Throughout the rest of the evening, Arrow sobbed and sobbed, his sister trying to comfort him. When he went to bed, he started to feel immense pain, and screamed. His sister rushed to his room not to find Arrow in his bed, but a Wolf. Assuming that the young wolf had killed the foal, she grabbed a kitchen knifed and tried to kill it for harming her brother, little did she know that the wolf really was her brother. Frightened, Arrow ran out of the house and into the storm. He didn't know what to do, so he ran into the only place that looked safe, the everfree. He walked for days, and was starving; but he couldn't go back to ponyville to get some food, and on top of that he didn't feel like he should eat any pony food.

 

Other: I figured someone could find him during the hunt and give him a rabbit or something, I'm open to anything really. His adopted brother is also Sky's friend, I forgot to mention that. :P


Edited by Sky Jazz, 01 May 2014 - 12:24 PM.


#58 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 02 May 2014 - 07:26 PM

 

Name: Streaking Arrow (Arrow is his nickname)

Gender: Male

Age: 9

Class: Regular Wolf

Appearance: 

Spoiler

Personality: Arrow is extremely rowdy and rambunctious. While he can be calm, he more often then not chooses to be loud and have fun. He is playful, and challenges authority figures in such ways. He fears authority, especially when he is in trouble.

Talent: His talent as a pony was Archery, although he never earned his cutie mark. As a wolf his skills are speed, and his precision. In other words, he can pounce from a distance and still land almost perfectly on prey. He also has an above average sense of smell to aid him with his precision.
Bio: From a young age, Arrow has been surrounded by death and tragedy. He never knew his parents, his father being a guard in Canterlot, died before he was born, and his mother was in a tragic uknown accident. (aka i'm lazy) He was therefore orphaned and shortly afterward adopted by a family of pegasi, his adopted brother and sister took a quick liking to him and did everything they could for him, their entire lives were centered around the young foal. As he grew up, he became more and more rowdy, he never wanted to just sit still. This bugged his family but their entertainment by his antics never ceased. Although, it was bound to end soon.

 

One day his family was at the park in Ponyville, it was just an average day, a bunch of foals just playing and having fun. His mother said it was time to go as it had started to rain and storm, and Arrow being the way he was, decided he was going to stay at the top of the slide and not move; So his mother played along, as well as his brother. They said they were going to leave him there and walked out into the road. Arrow started to head down from the slide, not wanting to be left alone in a storm. That's when it happened, lighting struck down right on top of the two pegasi, killing his mom instantly and leaving his brother in critical condition. He didn't know what to do so he ran home to get his sister for help. They headed to the hospital and found out that their mother was dead, and their brother was in a very bad condition. The nurse told them that they should leave and come back in the morning. Arrow was distraught, his brother and best friend could die at any moment. Throughout the rest of the evening, Arrow sobbed and sobbed, his sister trying to comfort him. When he went to bed, he started to feel immense pain, and screamed. His sister rushed to his room not to find Arrow in his bed, but a Wolf. Assuming that the young wolf had killed the foal, she grabbed a kitchen knifed and tried to kill it for harming her brother, little did she know that the wolf really was her brother. Frightened, Arrow ran out of the house and into the storm. He didn't know what to do, so he ran into the only place that looked safe, the everfree. He walked for days, and was starving; but he couldn't go back to ponyville to get some food, and on top of that he didn't feel like he should eat any pony food.

 

Other: I figured someone could find him during the hunt and give him a rabbit or something, I'm open to anything really. His adopted brother is also Sky's friend, I forgot to mention that. :P

 

I would rather there not be more pups. They're cute and all, but they are often a hold back for any real action ever happening. We have enough characters for now anyway



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Posted 05 May 2014 - 11:14 PM

I would rather there not be more pups. They're cute and all, but they are often a hold back for any real action ever happening. We have enough characters for now anyway

I plan on Clover having pups (no idea on who with that will work itself out.) so maybe him and other pups that were not approved can be in the litter or whatever it's called.

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Posted 06 May 2014 - 07:52 PM

I plan on Clover having pups (no idea on who with that will work itself out.) so maybe him and other pups that were not approved can be in the litter or whatever it's called.

For some reason, I kinda assumed that she would have pups of her own. No idea who that will go on with. I guess that is a pretty good idea though.

 

But again, I really don't want anything sensual going on, even if it's with wolves. Not saying Clover can't get pregnant, but I don't want any scenes describing 'that' moment.

 

Also, her having puppies is going to be a big deal. No other wolf in the community has pups because they don't exactly know how (new species and all) and don't know what their offspring would turn out to be. Alpha says it's not exactly aloud because they would be passing the curse onto beings that don't deserve it. It's a miserable existence, and some still have hope they will turn back into ponies. Having puppies is the last thing on their mind, most of the time



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Posted 06 May 2014 - 10:46 PM

I plan on Clover having pups (no idea on who with that will work itself out.) so maybe him and other pups that were not approved can be in the litter or whatever it's called.

I'm cool with this, although good bye bio xD Personality still applies I assume



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Posted 06 May 2014 - 11:24 PM

(Important: This character is meant to be OP. He is not going to get in many fights with characters in the story, but he is high powered. This will not give me a advantage over anyone, but instead, as the GM, gives me some power over the course of where the story goes because of this characters importance and strength)

 

Name: Crip Washington (Alpha)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 20

 

Class: Winged and powered

 

Appearance:

 Winged_Wolf_(Wolf_with_Wings,_Flying_Wol

 

Personality: He was originally a cocky thug, who was extremely arrogant and rude. But although he was, well, a dick, he was always extremely clever and strong in his day to day survival. Once he became a wolf and was subject to all that happened to him, he lost that. Some of the rude and cocky behavior stayed, but not nearly as much arrogance or his old behavior as a thug in Manehattan. Now Alpha is rather... Mysterious, depressed, and annoyed most of his time around Gust and the Everfree. He doesn't have his young spirit anymore, now he's more of a grump who never experiences any emotions, only holds onto a dark past that gives him a cold heart.

 

Talent: It's unknown what Alpha is good at. He is surely a amazing brute fighter, but as a pony, he was mostly a thief and gang member. His talent as a pony was actually being a fighter, his cutie mark was a pistol and a knife when he participated in gang activity. However, now he doesn't have hooves to fight with. Alpha is highly skilled in magic, but not as good in flight. Somehow he has both powers, which is explained in his backstory.

 

Bio: 

 

    Alpha was always living a hard, cold life in the alley ways of Manehattan. Though life in Equestria seemed perfect to everypony else, Crip, and his brother Blood, were two orphans that were sunk in poverty because of their parents mistakes. Blood being the older, and Crip being the younger, the two brothers lived life begging, stealing, and fighting for means of survival. Other colts often hung around them, and they were very 'cool' but were a horrible influence. As foals, they lived with their mother, a opium abuser, until taken away by the state and put in a foster home. They would often escape when they reached the age of 5, and got a beating as punishment. As time went on, they never came back to the abusive foster home, but instead lived in the Manehattan allies. Blood and Crip would sleep at night in the streets, and be causing trouble by morning with the street vendors. As time went on, they got to be known in West Manehattan as the 'Troublesome Twins'

 

      They got in a lot of trouble with others, but Crip and Blood were always extremely close brothers. Of course, they both had rotten personalities, and could treat each other badly, but to the both of them it was just life. Crip would smack his weaker brother Blood, but Blood would play mean pranks on Crip and keep things from him when he was upset. This was the common fighting, but for all the times they work together to survive, they were equally as nice. Crip and Blood both would sleep together to keep each other warm in the cold streets, as well as comfort each other when their innocence caught up with them and they were scared. This would stay this way until they were older

When the two were older, they eventually grew up and found jobs. They were definitely not anything impressive, and the two of them would be getting new jobs often because of their mischief. With the bits made, they bought a decent sized shack in the heart of West Manehattan. They never left their rotten attitudes though. Crip and Blood participated in gang activities, therefore throwing themselves in jail or putting them in cop chases every other week. It passed the line when the two of them participated in a bank robbery. Thousands of bits were stolen from a local bank, and Crip and Blood used their skills with hand guns to shoot down 2 guards and 2 women in the bank. Successfully, the two of them murdered 4 ponies and were doomed for execution (Because murders in Equestria were unheard of). The both of them ran from the police as fugitives, escaping with many gunshot wounds and injuries. Crip and Blood were not going to make a trip all the way across the forest in their condition, and were almost doomed to die right there, but a figure approached them.

 

    A witch made the two brothers the first wolves in Equestria, ever. The witch, disguised as a beautiful white mare with a long, glowing mane and tail, thought this as a punishment for the twos actions. But as Alpha (Crip) later figured out, it was not exactly a punishment, but more of a restart on life. Being the first wolves ever formed, their powers were to evolve once they reached a state of enlightment. This showed some disagreement, as the brothers had gang business and money to spend in Manehattan. They instead wished for freedom and for them to get away from their murders. These requests were obviously ignored.

The brothers worked together, and over time more and more criminals were given a similar form of punishment. A small town formed, known as East, home to a group of approximately 10 wolves that got close to each other very quickly because of their similar pasts. The town was located in the wood outside Manehattan, so the group was prone to attack the city and cause havoc with their new forms. Over time, the group was chased deeper into the woods where the problems started

 

THE NEXT PARTS ARE IMPORTANT FOR THE ROLEPLAYS HISTORY:

           

     Crip and Blood were very close, still, although all their problems. They made all the choices, but once the town of East started to break-up because of their two different visions, arguments started and problems arose. To make a long story short, the remaining members of the town split into two groups. Crip was one side, wanting to get serious and put away their trouble making pasts to make a real town that wasn’t established on tyranny and abuse, where Blood wanted to base a town off a dictatorship with him on top, so that they could attack Manehattan and carry out revenge. To make things more interesting, and to the witches amusement, she promised a reward to whichever brother killed the other. She knew that splitting up the brothers, would surely end their chaos in the forms she couldn’t change.

           

     The two sides would constantly be at war. It was 5 against 5, with Clip and Blood (The strongest of them all) ending each fight with a deadly duel that would always end with a tie. This went on until the brothers grew tired when the conflict seemed to last forever. They found the common enemy, the witch, and decided to fight against her. They came up with a plan to act out one of the brother deaths, hopefully summoning the witch. This plan worked, and together, the two brothers abolished the witch after a long bloody fight. Though she seemed to be gone, close to where this battle happened, her powers waved out into Ponyville and started to infect new ponies when their certain ‘Trigger’ happened.

           

     Though the brothers beat the witch together, after so much fighting and death of friends, with views that never changed after the witch’s death, the two brothers broke off to form their own towns. Not only did killing the witch show that more of their kind were coming, but it also gave them the enlightened powers they never received. Both had wings, both had a decent range of spells, making them the equivalents to the godly sisters that led them once before. They weren’t nearly as powerful, but were basically the strongest of the species. Crip took the name of Alpha in Gust, the town he formed. As predicted, more wolves came. This was 5 years with Blood that he finally could start new in his wolf form and encourage good instead of the evil he witnessed his entire life.


Edited by BIG STUPID JELLYFISH, 06 May 2014 - 11:26 PM.


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Posted 06 May 2014 - 11:43 PM

I see your subtle allusion to real life with this Alpha, and I applaud it.


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Posted 09 May 2014 - 02:51 PM

Name: Evening Star (Vesta)

Gender: Mare

Age: 21

Class: Regular

Appearance:

Spoiler

Personality: Evening Star wears herself with pride, dignity, and calmness. Beneath her alluring appearance, she is very shy in the inside, though she is not a social butterfly nor a shut in moth. As the youngest in her family, she was pampered by her parents and siblings. Despite her held high pride and ego, she is very caring.  She is always seen with a mean, little look on her face, but cheers up everytime she has an accomplishment. She could be very stubborn, and selfish... and could be really jealous fast. She brings an air of mystery around her, and it usually brings herself into trouble.

Talent: She does not remember what her talent is, but knows that she is one with the sky. She knows every constellation, and is very interested in them. She is, or was, Evening Star.
Bio:  She was raised in a big mansion in Canterlot, and was very prim and proper. Her older sister, Munira, and her mother were always together, and would play together. She would frolick in the meadows behind her home, feeling free and pretends she has wings to fly up to the sky. Her father would scold her if she would come home dirty, due to every single time of falling into the mud with her sister. She discovered her cutie mark when she was ten, when she named a star, Jauhar. She showed it to her father, who was very proud of her, and held a great, big party. 

 

While the fun was on, the danger attacked. A certain pony tripped on the candlestick, and the fire spread very quickly. As the wood mansion fell, she ran as fast as her hooves can take her. She grabbed Munira and her mother, after seeing her father and brothers get crushed by the mansion. The three were headed down to a cliff, were  forest fire has also started below. It was the worst day Evening Star ever had, as she lost her whole family. Munira and her mother sacrificed their selves for Evening Star, and she wept until the night. The fire has stopped, due to the rain, matching the mare's feelings. The full moon rose up the horizon, and Evening Star started to transform, paws, fur, she transformed into a wolf. She ran out to the Everfree Forest, to find anyone who can help her, but looked up the stars. It told her to go north, and did, not knowing where it would take her. She found the village as the moonlit rays were reaching it, and immediately felt at home.


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Posted 10 May 2014 - 12:42 AM

Name (original pony name) : Icewing

 

Name (when she turned into a wolf) : Silver Wind

 

Gender : She-wolf (or female, or whatever term you wanna use)

 

Age (as a pony) : 22

 

Age (as a wolf)  : (Adult) 22   (if that counts as teenager or young adult, so be it)

 

Race (pony) : Unicorn

 

Race (wolf) : Powered Wolf.

 

 

Appearance (pony) : A  white unicorn with icy blue eyes with a white-and-grey mane and tail. ((I edited this OC so i could use her instead of making a new one similar to her))

 

Appearance (wolf) : She is a white wolf with icy blue eyes with grey (or silver-looking, but not shiny) streaks that looks like they were carved in from the wind along her spine, on her tail, and on her muzzle. She also has a strange mark that looks like a swirl on her forehead. Her fur is thin, and very sleek and sometimes glossy.

 

Personality:  she's very tough.. Other than that, she's very nice, unless some creature intimidates or challenges her.

 

Talent (pony) : Icewing can perform a spell that causes a certain area around her to turn the ground into ice, for ten seconds.

 

Talent (wolf) : She can run with the wind and look like a silver whirl of fur and blue dots at will, until the wind changes direction.

 

Bio : By the time Icewing realized that she turned into a wolf, she went into the Everfree Forest (not very deep inside, more like ten steps inside) to collect something that she chased into the forest. After she found what she chased, she saw that she had paws, not hooves.

        She thought she was hallucinating, so she found a nearby puddle and saw that she had... changed. She then ran off deeper into the Everfree Forest, thinking that the ponies back home would shun her for her... transformation.She tried to think of how she could've transformed, and then Icewing remembered one of her worst enemies muttered something to her in some weird language."I'll get revenge on them someday... Thanks to you, I can never go back home." Icewing thought. As she ran, the wind blew in the same direction she was running, and then she realized that she was going faster by the second. Suddenly, the wind changed direction, and uncontrollably, she fell into a large puddle. As she looked at the mess on her pelt, she saw that she was white, with grey streaks that look like wind gusts. She then decided to change her name to Silver Wind, so that she felt comfortable being called for her special power. (EDIT : I accidently hit enter while typing due to lag. so sorry if you reviewed this bio fragment.)

        She continued to walk in the same direction she always had, until she came upon a clearing among the trees, and weird scents hit her nose. As wolves' eyes reflected in the shadows of the undergrowth, she knew she had come upon a pack of wolves. Silver Wind asked to join them, trying to seem strong. Her life still continues within the pack.


Edited by Spottedberry175, 10 May 2014 - 02:18 AM.


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Posted 10 May 2014 - 02:23 AM

 

Name: Evening Star (Vesta)

Gender: Mare

Age: 16 - Teens

Class: Regular

Appearance:

Spoiler

Personality: Evening Star wears herself with pride, dignity, and calmness. Beneath her alluring appearance, she is very shy in the inside, though she is not a social butterfly nor a shut in moth. As the youngest in her family, she was pampered by her parents and siblings. Despite her held high pride and ego, she is a very caring nurse. And all nurses take care of their patients. She is always seen with a mean, little look on her face, but cheers up everytime she has a patient. She could be very stubborn, and selfish... and could be really jealous fast. She brings an air of mystery around her, and it usually brings herself into trouble.

Talent: She does not remember what her talent is, but knows that she is one with the sky. She knows every constellation, and is very interested in them. She is, or was, Evening Star.
Bio:  She was raised in a big mansion in Canterlot, and was very prim and proper. Her older sister, Munira, and her mother were always together, and would play together. She would frolick in the meadows behind her home, feeling free and pretends she has wings to fly up to the sky. Her father would scold her if she would come home dirty, due to every single time of falling into the mud with her sister. She discovered her cutie mark when she was ten, when she named a star, Jauhar. She showed it to her father, who was very proud of her, and held a great, big party. 

 

While the fun was on, the danger attacked. A certain pony tripped on the candlestick, and the fire spread very quickly. As the wood mansion fell, she ran as fast as her hooves can take her. She grabbed Munira and her mother, after seeing her father and brothers get crushed by the mansion. The three were headed down to a cliff, were  forest fire has also started below. It was the worst day Evening Star ever had, as she lost her whole family. Munira and her mother sacrificed their selves for Evening Star, and she wept until the night. The fire has stopped, due to the rain, matching the mare's feelings. The full moon rose up the horizon, and Evening Star started to transform, paws, fur, she transformed into a wolf. She ran out to the Everfree Forest, to find anyone who can help her, but looked up the stars. It told her to go north, and did, not knowing where it would take her. She found the village as the moonlit rays were reaching it, and immediately felt at home.

Other: Can she be like, Clover's assistant in helping the cubs or sommething?

 

 

 

Name (original pony name) : Icewing

 

Name (when she turned into a wolf) : Silver Wind

 

Gender : She-wolf (or female, or whatever term you wanna use)

 

Age (as a pony) : 22

 

Age (as a wolf)  : (Adult) 22   (if that counts as teenager or young adult, so be it)

 

Race (pony) : Unicorn

 

Race (wolf) : Powered Wolf.

 

 

Appearance (pony) : A  white unicorn with icy blue eyes with a white-and-grey mane and tail. ((I edited this OC so i could use her instead of making a new one similar to her))

 

Appearance (wolf) : She is a white wolf with icy blue eyes with grey (or silver-looking, but not shiny) streaks that looks like they were carved in from the wind along her spine, on her tail, and on her muzzle. She also has a strange mark that looks like a swirl on her forehead. Her fur is thin, and very sleek and sometimes glossy.

 

Personality:  she's very tough.. Other than that, she's very nice, unless some creature intimidates or challenges her.

 

Talent (pony) : Icewing can perform a spell that causes a certain area around her to turn the ground into ice, for ten seconds.

 

Talent (wolf) : She can run with the wind and look like a silver whirl of fur and blue dots at will, until the wind changes direction.

 

Bio : By the time Icewing realized that she turned into a wolf, she went into the Everfree Forest (not very deep inside, more like ten steps inside) to collect something that she chased into the forest. After she found what she chased, she saw that she had paws, not hooves.

        She thought she was hallucinating, so she found a nearby puddle and saw that she had... changed. She then ran off deeper into the Everfree Forest, thinking that the ponies back home would shun her for her... transformation.She tried to think of how she could've transformed, and then Icewing remembered one of her worst enemies muttered something to her in some weird language."I'll get revenge on them someday... Thanks to you, I can never go back home." Icewing thought. As she ran, the wind blew in the same direction she was running, and then she realized that she was going faster by the second. Suddenly, the wind changed direction, and uncontrollably, she fell into a large puddle. As she looked at the mess on her pelt, she saw that she was white, with grey streaks that look like wind gusts. She then decided to change her name to Silver Wind, so that she felt comfortable being called for her special power. (EDIT : I accidently hit enter while typing due to lag. so sorry if you reviewed this bio fragment.)

        She continued to walk in the same direction she always had, until she came upon a clearing among the trees, and weird scents hit her nose. As wolves' eyes reflected in the shadows of the undergrowth, she knew she had come upon a pack of wolves. Silver Wind asked to join them, trying to seem strong. Her life still continues within the pack.

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 05:26 PM

Name: Autumn Leaves

 

Gender: Female

 

Age: 21, so adult.

 

Class: Winged

 

Appearance: 

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But with wings, and they fade from yellow to scarlet red wing-tips.

 

Personality: Willing to make a fresh start in her new life, she is now warm-hearted and happy to make new friends. 

 

Talent: Seeing as Autumn's talent was blowing the leaves off the trees for winter at extreme speeds, I'll have to change it. Her special talent now is super-heightened hearing and smell. She is also exceptionally good at sensing changes in the wind.

 

Bio: Eeeh.. it's a bit long this time.

Spoiler

Hope this is okay now :)


Edited by DaBethster, 13 May 2014 - 08:03 PM.


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Posted 13 May 2014 - 05:49 PM

-Whoops, double post. Sorry  :twilightblush: -


Edited by DaBethster, 13 May 2014 - 05:54 PM.


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Posted 13 May 2014 - 06:41 PM


Name: Autumn Leaves


Gender: Female


Age: 9, so Filly -> Puppy


Class: Winged


Appearance:

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But as a pup, and with wings.


Personality: Shy, jumpy and not very willing to make friends. If she ever does make a close friend, she has an extremely comforting warm heart. Acts slightly mature for her age.


Talent: Seeing as Autumn's talent was blowing the leaves off the trees for winter at extreme speeds, I'll have to change it. Her special talent now is super-heightened hearing and smell. She is also exceptionally good at sensing changes in the wind.


Bio:

Born and raised in Ponyville, Autumn lived with her parents and two sisters. They were neither rich nor poor, they had the money needed to get by. Her father was a yellow unicorn with an red magic aura and her mother was a green pegasus. Autumn was always the one in class that never put her hoof up, never talked, and stayed by herself. She was the loner. The outsider. The reason for this? Her unusual wings and legs. She was bullied by the other pegasi in her class, being called 'Bloodwing', 'Nettlehoof' and other hurtful nicknames. It was traumatising, having to endure bullying of this extent. No-one believed her, not even her family. She had no friends, apart from maybe her little sister Clover. But she didn't know the full extent of it, either. As she aged, the only happy times she had was when she went outside at night, with no-pony else out there. She liked the night, with it's cool, peacefulness. Sometimes she wondered why other ponies didn't come out at this time. This was one of the reasons she respected Luna so much. One time, when she went out, in a warm, autumn's night, she let out all her hurt and anger by speeding through the forest, weaving in and out through the trees. The leaves were being whisked off the branches, and suddenly, she realised this was what she was meant to do. A small flash of light appeared behind her, and she turned around. Finally! Her cutie mark was here! And a pretty one, at that. She thought to herself. The next day, when she went to school, the only thing her cutie mark did was bring around even more bullying than before. 'What's that? Falling leaves? Hah! They're doing just what your career will be doing! Falling! Hahahaha!' Was one of the examples of the hurtful remarks. She decided she wasn't going to let the bullies torture her any more.

"You say another word, and I'll knock your teeth out." she said, almost growling.

"Ooh, someone's got a temper-tantrum! Ahahaha!" they called back, angering Autumn even more.

Snarling, she swiped at the bully, with her newly found claws. The other fillies and colts around them screamed, running away. After Autumn calmed down a bit, she looked at herself to see what had caused the other to run away screaming. She just stared, confused. What had happened? She was.. a wolf? With wings? After a few minutes had passed, she knew she couldn't stay. Spreading her wings, she flew, and flew, and flew. Her wings got tired much easier than before, so she had to land.. in the Everfree Forest.


Any chance she could join by coming into the camp in present time, so literally just transformed?

1. As of now, I am not accepting pups. We already have 2, and have had plenty others begging to get puppies in. Look, I really wanted action in this RP especially since it's slowing down, and pups really aren't a good formula for action. This is supposed to be a rather dark RP. Wimpy is already planing to have puppies too (That's 6 more!). Please move the age up to a minimum of 15, if Wimpy (or anyone) does have pups, you can play one of them if you really are upset by this

2. Even if I did accept you as a pup, everyone is using the bullies story. It's unoriginal, kids have other problems in life then bullies

Edited by BIG STUPID JELLYFISH, 13 May 2014 - 06:43 PM.


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Posted 13 May 2014 - 06:48 PM

Eh, okay. I'll try to edit :P



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 06:56 PM

Just to say, I'm trying to talk to the Alpha.

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 08:04 PM

Okay, I've edited it.

Age is changed to 21, so she's an adult now, and changed her personality.

Also changed the bio.

Basically, she got stalked for two years and snapped. Is it okay now?



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 08:07 PM

Okay, I've edited it.

Age is changed to 21, so she's an adult now, and changed her personality.

Also changed the bio.

Basically, she got stalked for two years and snapped. Is it okay now?

Yes, Accepted



#74 DaBethster

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 08:08 PM

Yay, thanks!



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Posted 13 May 2014 - 10:39 PM

Thule I am excited for the action part so I'm assuming that later on there will be like a war against that other town or something? I just think it'll be fun when there is more action.

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 10:42 PM

I'm not going to spoil things, but it will involve the Alpha's crap



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Posted 14 May 2014 - 10:33 PM

Guys, if you aren't active, please start posting again. The RP is going to start to pick up and develop a plot

 

It is going to involve the other town



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Shadows of the Everfree Forrest

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Background

 

          The Everfree is home to many diverse creatures. Animals from those we see in our world, to mystical creatures that are seen in fairy tales. One of the most diverse though, as well as mysterious, is the 'pack' as they call it. This 'pack' is made up of regular wolves we see in our world, which you would think wouldn't be much different from the Everfree's regular timber wolves. Mean, viscous, mindless... But these wolves seem to be much more intelligent and unique. All different colors, sizes, and some of them even have wings or magical powers. They should be observed and appreciated, but instead they are hated by the nearby town of Ponyville. Treated just like timber wolves, the pack is hunted, attacked, and shunned from coming anywhere near the town. So the pack stays hidden, keeping their powers and diversity away from the regular ponies of Equestria, although they are so much like them. For they don't know that these wolves, ARE them.

 

 

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You in the Story

 

          In this story, you are part of the pack. You're a wolf, very identical to your previous self. You were once a pony, one of your choice. Whatever your life was, your age, race, and personality, was transported into it's new body. Now being part of the pack, you live in a group with other wolves of your kind. But the question is, how did you get here, why were you reborn into what seems to be a miserable existence? Well first off, your life isn't miserable. Just like your old life, you have family, and that is the other members of the pack. You still do daily things to keep yourself alive, as well as happy, but are completely turned around from your old life. You can never go back to it, after a certain event happened to you. Maybe you were cursed by a witch, or born with this problem, but after a traumatic event, your entire self was changed. It was any moment that caused extreme stress, sadness, or pain in your OC's old life. Maybe parents died, or you committed a great evil and were looking for a way out of it, but the moment you snapped, was the moment you endured a painful transformation into your new form. After that you were chased out of town, into the forest, and if you lived, you started a new life at Gust, the town of the pack. After being accepted by the GM, you'll be put into Gust at present day. Other members will be there, and you will already be part of it, unless you want to start just arriving. This is okay. After this you will interact with other players who will also play a member of the pack. You'll have enemies as well as dissagreements, usually settled by fighting, and you'll also make friends, or even find a lover. You communicate with your fellow pack members in a language that ponies cannot speak, and you are not nearly as advanced or smart as you used to be. You are only a shadow, mysteriously lurking in the Everfree Forrest.

 

 

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Setting

 

         The story takes place in Gust. It gets in name from the wind that constantly blows through it, since it's the first clearing in the Everfree for miles. It's far from Ponyville, and the weather there seems to always be overcast and dark. This is where the pegasi push all the unwanted clouds. It rains a lot, especially thunderstorms. Gust consists of small huts made for each member of the pack, made out of vines, planets, sticks, mud, and other easily obtainable resources from the swampy area not so far, which is also the towns water source.

 

 

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Classes

 

Regular Wolf

You don't have any special powers, but you are the strongest of the species. You are given this class if your OC is a Earth Pony. Unlike a regular earth pony, you can't farm because of your animal form, however, food is much more easy for you to find. Your senses are also stronger than the other classes. You can smell food, enemies, or allies from much farther distances. You can also see things coming better then the other classes.

 

Winged

You are the equivalent to a Pegasus. Along your sides run long, feathered, wings that you can use for flight. Since your build is much bigger than a pony, your flight is not nearly as fast as a regular pegasus. You can see far, but can't sense thing like a regular wolf can. You also can't stand on clouds or control weather, sadly your structure doesn't allow you to do this, apparently. However, your wings do sometimes serve as good protection in fights.

 

Powered

You are the equivalent to a Unicorn. You don't have a horn, but your eyes do have a glow when you use magic, and to avoid detection, have a darker aura. Unlike a unicorn, in this form, you preform a darker form of magic. Your magic is more for fighting and protection. Your ability to teleport and levitate things has almost completely vanished. You can use a forcefeild type spell, with some regeneration required, as well as preform tactical spells to help you travel or fight. This however, can't be OP.

 

Other Species

Other species are the same as pony races. You get the almost the same abilities, but get some taken away. Talk to the owner of this roleplay (Thule1117) for more information

 

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Application

 

(COPY AND PASTE, DELETE THE BOLDED (After Reading) AND PUT IN YOUR INFORMATION)

 

Name: (Your original name, and if it changed after your transformation, put that too)

Gender: (Male or Female)

Age: (You must post your previous pony age, and your wolf age. They have to be the same. If you were a foal, you're a puppy. If you were a teenager, you're still a puppy, but a larger one. If you were a adult, you're a regular wolf, and if you were a elder, you're a older wolf.) 

 

Class: (Choose one of the classes above)

Appearance: (You can post a picture of what you look like as a wolf, what you looked like as a pony, or describe what they look like as a wolf. Remember, during the duration of this RP, you WILL be a wolf. So if you have anything like a scar or something, you have to tell us it's on your wolf form too)

Personality: (Simply what your character acts like. This will stay the same as when you were a pony, unless the event of changing into a wolf changed their outlook on life) 

Talent: (What you'r pony is good at AS A WOLF. It should be close to the same as when they were a pony)
Bio: (State how you became a wolf. What event happened to change you into one?  This will require you to read above, which you should of already done. It doesn't need to be long, but we need a background of how you got to Gust)

 

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1. The GM of the roleplay controls the story. Major events can be considered with the GM, but he is the one who primarily controls them. As the player, you are in charge of what happens to your character ONLY. Natural events can happen to YOU but you can't make them happen to OTHERS. This is known as godmodding.

 

2. Too much OOC in the main thread won't be tolerated

 

3. *Sigh* Yes, romance is aloud. There can be shipping, whatever. Don't take it too far, the forum rules still apply. Am I saying sensual stuff can happen? Yes, but please for the sake of all of us, CENSOR it. PG-13.

 

4. Respect others and do not argue. Be fair

 

5. A OP character is not tolerated. Your character will not be accepted if it is over powered

 

6. In order to be allowed into the RP, the GM (or person of authority) has to accept you first.

 

7. Please be active in the roleplay. It's annoying to get a reply every few days. The entire RP need to progress.

 

 

PLEASE READ IT ALL. ROLEPLAYING THREAD IS HERE: http://www.brohoof.c...playing-thread/

 



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Posted 15 May 2014 - 12:52 AM

Soooo... why did you quote the entire OP, exactly?



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Posted 15 May 2014 - 05:05 PM

Are you still accepting?



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Posted 15 May 2014 - 06:25 PM

Are you still accepting?


Yes.

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Posted 15 May 2014 - 11:56 PM

Name: C (short for Christopher)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 13 (large pup)

 

Class: Winged

 

Appearance: I truly do not know what I am going to write in this forum, so I'm just going to WINGed it. Ok. That was completely lame. And I don't think this is going to turn out well either.

 

Personality: Now, he is not affraid to meet people at all. He is very passionate about that. He will try the best to do what he is told when he is told. He likes pony's like everyone on the server. Almost. He is affraid of completely horroish nightmares, so to get rid of his, he KILL'S mobs. He is smart, extremely nice to people, get's ticked when he sweared at, but controls himself.

 

Talent: He is AMAZING at the piano, likes to sing, and he likes a bit of drama. (A bit, not a lot).

 

Bio: (1000 years ago) When he was a baby, when his parents were taking care of him, Discord came in the town and was destroying it.He was full of joy as he was doing so, turning every beautiful thing into chaos. Spells were flying all over the place as the unicorns tried to fight him, but with no success. C was woken by the flashes of magic that bounced off of Discord and dashed through the forest which he and his parent's were living in.

 

One massive blast shot through the hole of C's house, dashing all around the house ontil it hit his mother. She cried in pain silently then DIED, still twitching her life away. When his father saw what had happen, he hould as loud as he could for his wife. But what he didn't know is that Discord could hear him from the forest and was on his way. When he saw C's father, he did a disintegresion (I never get the word right) spell to shut him up.

 

And after that, Discord teleported him a place where he wouldn't care. C ended up at the door step of his parents friend's, who raised him in ALMOST good health. And now, he is out in the forest, has his own house, and seek's revenge on Discord for what he had done to him, and his family.



#83 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 16 May 2014 - 12:07 AM

Name: C (short for Christopher)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 13 (large pup)

 

Class: Winged

 

Appearance: I truly do not know what I am going to write in this forum, so I'm just going to WINGed it. Ok. That was completely lame. And I don't think this is going to turn out well either.

 

Personality: Now, he is not affraid to meet people at all. He is very passionate about that. He will try the best to do what he is told when he is told. He likes pony's like everyone on the server. Almost. He is affraid of completely horroish nightmares, so to get rid of his, he KILL'S mobs. He is smart, extremely nice to people, get's ticked when he sweared at, but controls himself.

 

Talent: He is AMAZING at the piano, likes to sing, and he likes a bit of drama. (A bit, not a lot).

 

Bio: (1000 years ago) When he was a baby, when his parents were taking care of him, Discord came in the town and was destroying it.He was full of joy as he was doing so, turning every beautiful thing into chaos. Spells were flying all over the place as the unicorns tried to fight him, but with no success. C was woken by the flashes of magic that bounced off of Discord and dashed through the forest which he and his parent's were living in.

 

One massive blast shot through the hole of C's house, dashing all around the house ontil it hit his mother. She cried in pain silently then DIED, still twitching her life away. When his father saw what had happen, he hould as loud as he could for his wife. But what he didn't know is that Discord could hear him from the forest and was on his way. When he saw C's father, he did a disintegresion (I never get the word right) spell to shut him up.

 

And after that, Discord teleported him a place where he wouldn't care. C ended up at the door step of his parents friend's, who raised him in ALMOST good health. And now, he is out in the forest, has his own house, and seek's revenge on Discord for what he had done to him, and his family.

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#84 DaBethster

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Posted 16 May 2014 - 03:36 PM

^^^

 

XD



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Posted 16 May 2014 - 04:01 PM

Name: C (short for Christopher)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 13 (large pup)

 

Class: Winged

 

Appearance: I truly do not know what I am going to write in this forum, so I'm just going to WINGed it. Ok. That was completely lame. And I don't think this is going to turn out well either.

 

Personality: Now, he is not affraid to meet people at all. He is very passionate about that. He will try the best to do what he is told when he is told. He likes pony's like everyone on the server. Almost. He is affraid of completely horroish nightmares, so to get rid of his, he KILL'S mobs. He is smart, extremely nice to people, get's ticked when he sweared at, but controls himself.

 

Talent: He is AMAZING at the piano, likes to sing, and he likes a bit of drama. (A bit, not a lot).

 

Bio: (1000 years ago) When he was a baby, when his parents were taking care of him, Discord came in the town and was destroying it.He was full of joy as he was doing so, turning every beautiful thing into chaos. Spells were flying all over the place as the unicorns tried to fight him, but with no success. C was woken by the flashes of magic that bounced off of Discord and dashed through the forest which he and his parent's were living in.

 

One massive blast shot through the hole of C's house, dashing all around the house ontil it hit his mother. She cried in pain silently then DIED, still twitching her life away. When his father saw what had happen, he hould as loud as he could for his wife. But what he didn't know is that Discord could hear him from the forest and was on his way. When he saw C's father, he did a disintegresion (I never get the word right) spell to shut him up.

 

And after that, Discord teleported him a place where he wouldn't care. C ended up at the door step of his parents friend's, who raised him in ALMOST good health. And now, he is out in the forest, has his own house, and seek's revenge on Discord for what he had done to him, and his family.

Is this, like, a joke?



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Posted 16 May 2014 - 09:32 PM

Name: C (short for Christopher)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 13 (large pup)

 

Class: Winged

 

Appearance: I truly do not know what I am going to write in this forum, so I'm just going to WINGed it. Ok. That was completely lame. And I don't think this is going to turn out well either.

 

Personality: Now, he is not affraid to meet people at all. He is very passionate about that. He will try the best to do what he is told when he is told. He likes pony's like everyone on the server. Almost. He is affraid of completely horroish nightmares, so to get rid of his, he KILL'S mobs. He is smart, extremely nice to people, get's ticked when he sweared at, but controls himself.

 

Talent: He is AMAZING at the piano, likes to sing, and he likes a bit of drama. (A bit, not a lot).

 

Bio: (1000 years ago) When he was a baby, when his parents were taking care of him, Discord came in the town and was destroying it.He was full of joy as he was doing so, turning every beautiful thing into chaos. Spells were flying all over the place as the unicorns tried to fight him, but with no success. C was woken by the flashes of magic that bounced off of Discord and dashed through the forest which he and his parent's were living in.

 

One massive blast shot through the hole of C's house, dashing all around the house ontil it hit his mother. She cried in pain silently then DIED, still twitching her life away. When his father saw what had happen, he hould as loud as he could for his wife. But what he didn't know is that Discord could hear him from the forest and was on his way. When he saw C's father, he did a disintegresion (I never get the word right) spell to shut him up.

 

And after that, Discord teleported him a place where he wouldn't care. C ended up at the door step of his parents friend's, who raised him in ALMOST good health. And now, he is out in the forest, has his own house, and seek's revenge on Discord for what he had done to him, and his family.

I'm so done I don't even want to look up the appropriate supernatural gif.



#87 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 16 May 2014 - 10:11 PM

Name: C (short for Christopher)

 

Gender: Male

 

Age: 13 (large pup)

 

Class: Winged

 

Appearance: I truly do not know what I am going to write in this forum, so I'm just going to WINGed it. Ok. That was completely lame. And I don't think this is going to turn out well either.

 

Personality: Now, he is not affraid to meet people at all. He is very passionate about that. He will try the best to do what he is told when he is told. He likes pony's like everyone on the server. Almost. He is affraid of completely horroish nightmares, so to get rid of his, he KILL'S mobs. He is smart, extremely nice to people, get's ticked when he sweared at, but controls himself.

 

Talent: He is AMAZING at the piano, likes to sing, and he likes a bit of drama. (A bit, not a lot).

 

Bio: (1000 years ago) When he was a baby, when his parents were taking care of him, Discord came in the town and was destroying it.He was full of joy as he was doing so, turning every beautiful thing into chaos. Spells were flying all over the place as the unicorns tried to fight him, but with no success. C was woken by the flashes of magic that bounced off of Discord and dashed through the forest which he and his parent's were living in.

 

One massive blast shot through the hole of C's house, dashing all around the house ontil it hit his mother. She cried in pain silently then DIED, still twitching her life away. When his father saw what had happen, he hould as loud as he could for his wife. But what he didn't know is that Discord could hear him from the forest and was on his way. When he saw C's father, he did a disintegresion (I never get the word right) spell to shut him up.

 

And after that, Discord teleported him a place where he wouldn't care. C ended up at the door step of his parents friend's, who raised him in ALMOST good health. And now, he is out in the forest, has his own house, and seek's revenge on Discord for what he had done to him, and his family.

anyone want to tear this OC apart limb by limb, explaining what is wrong with it....?



#88 Blazuhira Miller

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Posted 16 May 2014 - 10:29 PM

Lemme see.

 

Random capitalisation. Why.

 

backstory set 1000 years ago. Um, no, ponies aren't immortal.

 

Sort of boring, silly, convoluted backstory. Groan.

 

Discord wouldn't kill anyone. He's cruel and mean, but he's also funny and ironic.

 

You didn't understand you were meant to put what the fucking character looked like.

 

Born 1000 years ago, yet only 13.

 

Stupid, nonsensical nickname (C is the kind of nickname you use for a bank robbery)

 

You used the phrase 'mobs'. Mobs don't exist in this rp. It's not a minecraft rp.

 

His mother cried in pain... "silently", then DIED (oh gosh, she's dead now)

 

Suffers from... Whorish nightmares? Okay then, he dreams of prostitutes.

 

Gets ticked from swearing.... Fuck shit balls cunt bollocks testicals slag titty

 

Oh, and nothing saying he turned into a wolf.

 

Looking at that, it isn't actually an explanation. But damn, it felt good.

 

If anyone wants to actually explain, go ahead.



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Posted 17 May 2014 - 02:32 AM

i don't think anyone can explain, blazer. could we get an expert translator to um... translate this?

 

 

 

and thule, tearing this oc apart is too good for it.

 

 

 

but i'll attempt to explain...?

 

 

discord killing

 

 

"She cried in pain silently and DIED."   wow... thats so scary and phantom of the opera-ish.

 

this was from 1000 years ago, and yet this oc is 13. This isnt the middle ages? i guess?

 

oh who am i kidding? everything's wrong with this..... monsterpiece.


Edited by Spottedberry175, 17 May 2014 - 02:37 AM.


#90 jimme neutron corndog

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Posted 17 May 2014 - 03:01 AM

its a bad oc, but could you guys cut him some slack

#91 Sky Jazz

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Posted 17 May 2014 - 04:02 AM

its a bad oc, but could you guys cut him some slack

Honestly there is no excuse for chucking logic out a window and then proceeding to make an OC. I don't even see an OC here, just a floating biography with nothing for it to be a part of. Words don't make an OC, but the very least you should be able to describe them.



#92 Clover

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Posted 05 June 2014 - 03:14 AM

Are applications still open? owo



#93 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 05 June 2014 - 03:21 AM

Are applications still open? owo

yup



#94 Clover

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Posted 05 June 2014 - 03:57 AM

Name: Nightingale

Gender: Female

Age: 19 (Adult wolf, I suppose?) 

Class: Winged

Appearance: As of now I have no picture, but she is a brown, thin wolf with a long, thick coat of soft fur. Her eyes are a shade of deep green.

Personality: She is very independent and quiet, but she talks if need be. She usually drifts off easily and doesn't show her emotions, and she absolutely hates any kind of physical contact with anyone. If she is touched unnecessarily, she will freak out immediately until she feels that she can calm down. Being polite is her kind of thing, she is easily disturbed by those who are indecent.

Talent: She's very good at detecting things nearby and is great at sneaking up on others without making any noises.
Bio: Since she was a filly, Nightingale has always been independent. She was named Nightingale for her extremely calm, yet beautiful voice that matched perfectly with her serene, indecipherable expression she always had. Her parents let her get her own home when she was just 16, and she lived there studying nature and doing what she needed to do.

On one certain day, though, there was very dull weather outside, dark clouds and not a ray of sunlight to be seen. Nightingale was reading her nature books like she always does, but this one was specifically on wolves. She was quite interested in wolves at this time, something had sparked an interest in her for this species. Before she knew it, though, she was getting tired and eventually dozed off and fell asleep no matter how hard she tried not to. When she awakened, there was loud knocking on her door, and she shook off the fact that she felt odd. She opened up the door with one of her paws- somehow she didn't notice she had paws. The pony in front of her screamed, and she was startled as well. "A wolf!" The pony cried. This confused Nightingale a lot, but when the pony started acting hostile, Nightingale fled to the forest and has been living there ever since, searching for someone, something-- to talk to.


Edited by Clover, 05 June 2014 - 04:04 AM.


#95 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 05 June 2014 - 10:59 AM


Name: Nightingale


Gender: Female


Age: 19 (Adult wolf, I suppose?)


Class

: Winged

Appearance: As of now I have no picture, but she is a brown, thin wolf with a long, thick coat of soft fur. Her eyes are a shade of deep green.


Personality: She is very independent and quiet, but she talks if need be. She usually drifts off easily and doesn't show her emotions, and she absolutely hates any kind of physical contact with anyone. If she is touched unnecessarily, she will freak out immediately until she feels that she can calm down. Being polite is her kind of thing, she is easily disturbed by those who are indecent.


Talent: She's very good at detecting things nearby and is great at sneaking up on others without making any noises.
Bio: Since she was a filly, Nightingale has always been independent. She was named Nightingale for her extremely calm, yet beautiful voice that matched perfectly with her serene, indecipherable expression she always had. Her parents let her get her own home when she was just 16, and she lived there studying nature and doing what she needed to do.


On one certain day, though, there was very dull weather outside, dark clouds and not a ray of sunlight to be seen. Nightingale was reading her nature books like she always does, but this one was specifically on wolves. She was quite interested in wolves at this time, something had sparked an interest in her for this species. Before she knew it, though, she was getting tired and eventually dozed off and fell asleep no matter how hard she tried not to. When she awakened, there was loud knocking on her door, and she shook off the fact that she felt odd. She opened up the door with one of her paws- somehow she didn't notice she had paws. The pony in front of her screamed, and she was startled as well. "A wolf!" The pony cried. This confused Nightingale a lot, but when the pony started acting hostile, Nightingale fled to the forest and has been living there ever since, searching for someone, something-- to talk to.

Accepted

#96 Jay Gatsby

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Posted 09 June 2014 - 05:17 PM


Name: Nightingale


Gender: Female


Age: 19 (Adult wolf, I suppose?)


Class

: Winged

Appearance: As of now I have no picture, but she is a brown, thin wolf with a long, thick coat of soft fur. Her eyes are a shade of deep green.


Personality: She is very independent and quiet, but she talks if need be. She usually drifts off easily and doesn't show her emotions, and she absolutely hates any kind of physical contact with anyone. If she is touched unnecessarily, she will freak out immediately until she feels that she can calm down. Being polite is her kind of thing, she is easily disturbed by those who are indecent.


Talent: She's very good at detecting things nearby and is great at sneaking up on others without making any noises.
Bio: Since she was a filly, Nightingale has always been independent. She was named Nightingale for her extremely calm, yet beautiful voice that matched perfectly with her serene, indecipherable expression she always had. Her parents let her get her own home when she was just 16, and she lived there studying nature and doing what she needed to do.


On one certain day, though, there was very dull weather outside, dark clouds and not a ray of sunlight to be seen. Nightingale was reading her nature books like she always does, but this one was specifically on wolves. She was quite interested in wolves at this time, something had sparked an interest in her for this species. Before she knew it, though, she was getting tired and eventually dozed off and fell asleep no matter how hard she tried not to. When she awakened, there was loud knocking on her door, and she shook off the fact that she felt odd. She opened up the door with one of her paws- somehow she didn't notice she had paws. The pony in front of her screamed, and she was startled as well. "A wolf!" The pony cried. This confused Nightingale a lot, but when the pony started acting hostile, Nightingale fled to the forest and has been living there ever since, searching for someone, something-- to talk to.

I posted, sorry for the late reply, I'm juggling a few roleplays. Hopefully things pick up

#97 Wolf I.E.

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Posted 30 July 2014 - 07:20 AM

You're still open, right?

i like wolves so 



#98 Coloratura

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Posted 30 July 2014 - 06:13 PM

This died a while ago, but I wouldn't mind if it came back.




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