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#1 Seribro

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Posted 12 July 2014 - 11:37 PM

Name: Seribro

 

Gender: Male

 

Race: Changeling

 

Age: 17

 

Appearance: He has the appearance of a normal Changeling only with few differences. His mane and tail are a tad longer and his wing/eye color is a dark purple. His Fangs are also smaller than normal and he has half of one of his wings missing.

 

Cutie Mark and Special Talent: N/A

 

Personality: Seribro is a very sullen character. He keeps to himself and doesn't interact with the other Changelings often. He is mocked by others due to this behavior and his appearance.

 

Biography: Seribro longs to get away. He longs to be free from the other changelings' ridicule and mocking...and his chance may have arisen. All his life he had been ordered around. "Do this, do that,” He hated all the other changelings for bossing him around like he was an incompetent slave. He kept to himself most of the time; he never spoke with other changelings. He hated them. They all looked down upon him, like he was freak. "Maybe I am a freak," he thought to himself daily.

Now ponies have come to colonize the land he calls home. He is one of the selected few to observe the foreigners for the rest of the Changelings. This is his chance, perhaps his only chance, to escape the nightmare that is his life; to start anew with these ponies. Maybe he can join them. Maybe he can finally find someone to accept him. Maybe he can find a family...

 

Other: Due to him being treated horribly by other Changelings has caused him to resent his kind. He will not become friends with, ally with, or listen to other Changelings.


Edited by Seribro, 14 July 2014 - 12:07 AM.


#2 Aoloebio

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Posted 13 July 2014 - 01:31 AM

This is off to a good start, however the biography is still too short in it's current form and there are a few spelling errors present. Please add some more to the biography and fix the errors, then reply to this thread when you have made the changes.




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