Actually it isn't I've been doing my best to keep it alive, but I've been busy. By the way Colgate, do you have your next lesson plan ready?
The Royal Academy, a school for royals (OOC Chat and Application Thread)
#101
Posted 27 September 2013 - 02:27 AM
#102
Posted 27 September 2013 - 02:31 AM
I do.
#103
Posted 27 September 2013 - 02:34 AM
Good, I sent out a pm to the other students and I'm going to send my student OC to serve her detention.
#104
Posted 27 September 2013 - 02:49 AM
#105
Posted 27 September 2013 - 02:50 AM
I felt as if I needed a second character
You never had a character here in the first place..........
#106
Posted 27 September 2013 - 09:31 PM
yes I did
#107
Posted 27 September 2013 - 11:45 PM
#108
Posted 28 September 2013 - 12:17 PM
#109
Posted 01 October 2013 - 04:06 AM
Um, my character was never accepted. Is there any major flaws I must fix in my character in order to be accepted?
#110
Posted 01 October 2013 - 04:07 AM
I can't see anything wrong with it really, its just that the GM got distracted with the other app. If I were the GM I would accept it, but it is not in my power.
#111
Posted 01 October 2013 - 04:51 AM
The owner of this RP is on vacation.
#112
Posted 01 October 2013 - 05:54 AM
In that case lets do a three vote system
#113
Posted 02 October 2013 - 05:15 AM
I accept your application, Nurse. I can still use sometimes
#114
Posted 06 October 2013 - 11:52 PM
Name: Mi Fiato Zeffiro
Nickname: Zephyr
Appearance (picture or description): http://stormcloudmlp...allery/45976614
Cutie Mark/Talent: A moon with bats flying over it. She can turn into a bat, and excels in normal and dark magic.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Bat-alicorn. She has the wings of a bat, and her horn is invisible.
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess
Kingdom: The Moon Empire
Personality: She is a mystery. She tries to keep her history secret, and will reveal it if pressured. Most ponies think of her as naturally evil, because of her parents, but she is actually quite nice.
Bio:
Occupation(opt.) : She works as Luna's personal guard
Other: Because of her mother's curse, she has one as well. Sometimes, a Nightmare: Nightmare Wind, takes control of her. She can not stop it.
#115
Posted 07 October 2013 - 12:28 AM
Name: Mi Fiato Zeffiro
Nickname: Zephyr
Appearance (picture or description): http://stormcloudmlp...allery/45976614
Cutie Mark/Talent: A moon with bats flying over it. She can turn into a bat, and excels in normal and dark magic.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Bat-alicorn. She has the wings of a bat, and her horn is invisible.
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess
Kingdom: The Moon Empire
Personality: She is a mystery. She tries to keep her history secret, and will reveal it if pressured. Most ponies think of her as naturally evil, because of her parents, but she is actually quite nice.
Bio:
SpoilerOccupation(opt.) : She works as Luna's personal guard
Other: Because of her mother's curse, she has one as well. Sometimes, a Nightmare: Nightmare Wind, takes control of her. She can not stop it.
First, please delete the whole backstory, It's ridiculous, King Sombra and Princess Luna? as Parents? I'm sorry but that's a little much. Try to keep the backstory short, simple, and to the point.
Also, your age would be 1018 if you keep the times consistent, This RP happens after Luna's return.
Why would a princess be a mere guard?
Luna is not naturally evil. It's Canon that Nightmare Moon was Luna possessed by a hostile entity, did the act of them joining give you this hostile entity like a disease?
Why bother having an invisible horn?
Change all of these, and I'll give you an Yes.
PS: Mi Fiato Zeffiro translates to "I winds Zephyr"
Edited by Dominic, 07 October 2013 - 12:29 AM.
#116
Posted 07 October 2013 - 01:03 AM
Sadly Dominic has made some rather important points, so I'm sorry to say that I agree with him If you want examples of proper back story length please see the submissions contained on the first page of this thread. If you can get your bio around the same length as those, then we'll accept you.
Edited by raptorvelo, 07 October 2013 - 01:14 AM.
#117
Posted 09 October 2013 - 03:58 PM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Florenza Demi Aqua Ciel
Nickname: Flo
Appearance (picture or description):
Cutie Mark/Talent: She has wings as her cutie mark. Her talent if flying because she became such a good flier at a very young age.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn
Age: 9
Gender: F
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess Florenza
Kingdom: Jeyan Kingdom
Personality: Bubbly and sweet. She is eager and sensetive. She is energetic.
Bio: Florenza is the only child of Queen Alexdrina and King Simone. She was nutured to be loving and not stuck up. She was treated like any normal little filly would. She loved her parents dearly and when she found out she had to go to The Royal Academy she was devastated.
If anything is wrong please tell me.
Edited by ponyz00, 12 October 2013 - 11:28 AM.
#118
Posted 09 October 2013 - 04:06 PM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Florenza Demi Aqua Sky
Nickname: Flo
Appearance (picture or description): Flo has a light green coat and dark green wavy hair. She has deep dark blue eyes which are very expressive and they can get her out of almost any situation.
Cutie Mark/Talent: She has wings as her cutie mark. Her talent if flying because she became such a good flier at a very young age.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn
Age: 4
Gender: F
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess
Kingdom: Jeyan Kingdom
Personality: Bubbly and sweet. She is eager and sensetive. She is energetic.
Bio: Florenza is the only child of Queen Alexdrina and King Simone. She was nutured to be loving and not stuck up. She was treated like any normal little filly would. When she neared her fourth birthday she was told she was going to The Royal Academy. She took this harshly and was very sad to leave her parents.
Sounds good, all you need now are two more votes for yes, or for the RP leader to accept you in and you'll be able to make your opening post.
#119
Posted 09 October 2013 - 10:11 PM
The age is a bit young, but otherwise I'm okay with it. Neutral for now.
#120
Posted 09 October 2013 - 11:14 PM
#121
Posted 09 October 2013 - 11:32 PM
then it's settled ponyz00 make your character a bit older and then we will be able to let you in.
For reference, the current youngest age is 9 while the oldest is 16. So pick an age that's between those two numbers and we will give you a yes.
Edited by raptorvelo, 09 October 2013 - 11:33 PM.
#122
Posted 10 October 2013 - 02:56 AM
Oldest age is actually 26, Arthur's character. Unless you mean active ones, then its 16.
Edited by Colgate The Unicorn, 10 October 2013 - 02:56 AM.
#123
Posted 10 October 2013 - 03:28 AM
Oldest age is actually 26, Arthur's character. Unless you mean active ones, then its 16.
I was referring to the students so the age would have to be between 9 and 16.
Edited by raptorvelo, 10 October 2013 - 03:29 AM.
#124
Posted 10 October 2013 - 05:19 AM
#125
Posted 10 October 2013 - 05:29 AM
Edited by petmarket24, 10 October 2013 - 05:30 AM.
#126
Posted 10 October 2013 - 08:46 PM
Name: Soulful Rhyme
Nickname: Dawn
Appearance (picture or description):
Cutie Mark/Talent: She has a few talents, but her main talents are singing, writing and some drawing. Her cutie mark is a quill and an ink pot; signifying her talent for writing.
Species: Alicorm
Age: 15
Gender: Mare
Title: Princess (Princess Soul)
Kingdom: The Crystal Empire
Personality: (I'll post tomorrow, have to go now.)
Bio: Born into a wealthy family, Dawn grew up in the Crystal Empire. She was born an alicorn naturally, and she hid her wings each day when she went to school using a simple spell, as she didn't want to be made fun of because she had a horn and wings. At the age of 8, one day, a pony discovered her wings, and she was taken to a private school. At the age of 15, she is now going to the Royal Academy to learn more about being a princess, no matter how much she doesn't want to be girly.
#127
Posted 11 October 2013 - 12:26 AM
Name: Soulful Rhyme
Nickname: Dawn
Appearance (picture or description):
Spoiler
Cutie Mark/Talent: She has a few talents, but her main talents are singing, writing and some drawing. Her cutie mark is a quill and an ink pot; signifying her talent for writing.
Spoiler
Species: Alicorm
Age: 15
Gender: Mare
Title: Princess (Princess Soul)
Kingdom: The Crystal Empire
Personality: (I'll post tomorrow, have to go now.)
Bio: Born into a wealthy family, Dawn grew up in the Crystal Empire. She was born an alicorn naturally, and she hid her wings each day when she went to school using a simple spell, as she didn't want to be made fun of because she had a horn and wings. At the age of 8, one day, a pony discovered her wings, and she was taken to a private school. At the age of 15, she is now going to the Royal Academy to learn more about being a princess, no matter how much she doesn't want to be girly.
I have a few questions:
Whats the point of making her an alicorn if your just going to hide the wings? Why not just make her a unicorn? It would allow your character to do magic, and they wouldn't need to know a spell that has absolutely nothing to do with their cutie mark.
Also if her family's wealthy, why wouldn't they send her to privet school to begin with?
What does singing have to do with writing? I'd understand it if she was good at writing songs, but what does singing have to do with it?
Edited by raptorvelo, 11 October 2013 - 12:28 AM.
#128
Posted 11 October 2013 - 02:46 AM
Yeah. Jump in whenever. Hey Dominic, is it alright if I changed the spell to maybe German or French or something like that for the barrier but still have the stone effect to make it a little less overpowered?
French could work, as it its derived from Latin, although I suggest that you double translate it, if you use a translator. Translate from English to French, then translate the French Result back to english to see if it's still the same meaning.
As it's derived from Latin, it would still have the same magical root, but not as much force.
Edited by Dominic, 11 October 2013 - 02:46 AM.
#129
Posted 11 October 2013 - 04:26 AM
#130
Posted 11 October 2013 - 05:37 AM
Name: Mia Luna Zephyr
Nickname: Zephyr
Appearance (picture or description): http://stormcloudmlp...allery/45976614
Cutie Mark/Talent: A moon with bats flying over it. She can turn into a bat, and excels in normal and dark magic.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Bat-alicorn. She has the wings of a bat, and her she can perform magic without a horn.
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess
Kingdom: The Moon Empire
Personality: She is a mystery. She tries to keep her history secret, and will reveal it if pressured. Most ponies think of her as naturally evil, because of her parents once being evil, but she is actually quite nice.
Bio:
Occupation(opt.) : She used to work as Luna's personal guard, until she learned about her royalty. Now she helps her mother light up the stars at night.
Other: Because a little bit of Nightmare Moon remains in Luna, Zephyr inherited a little bit of it as well. Sometimes, a Nightmare: Nightmare Wind, takes control of her. She can not stop it. Nightmare Wind is Nightmare Moon's daughter.
I fixed it up a little. I hope this is better.
#131
Posted 11 October 2013 - 06:21 AM
Edited by ponyz00, 11 October 2013 - 07:08 AM.
#132
Posted 11 October 2013 - 07:11 AM
She was a guard. She isn't anymore. Now she helps Luna light the stars. What is bad about Luna and Sombra being her parents, and why does my bio have to be short? It only asked for a bio, not a short bio, and the 'canon only rule' only applies to in-game RPs. In this RP, she is probably not going to become Nightmare Wind. It is only to tell everything about her.
#133
Posted 11 October 2013 - 07:51 AM
I have a few questions:
Whats the point of making her an alicorn if your just going to hide the wings? Why not just make her a unicorn? It would allow your character to do magic, and they wouldn't need to know a spell that has absolutely nothing to do with their cutie mark.
Also if her family's wealthy, why wouldn't they send her to privet school to begin with?
What does singing have to do with writing? I'd understand it if she was good at writing songs, but what does singing have to do with it?
1. She hid her wings so she wouldn't be jeered at by the other ponies in her school.
2. Her parents wanted her to stay with them, and there weren't really any private schools nearby.
3. She just likes singing, I never said that it had anything to do with her cutie mark.
#134
Posted 11 October 2013 - 02:04 PM
First, please delete the whole backstory, It's ridiculous, King Sombra and Princess Luna? as Parents? I'm sorry but that's a little much. Try to keep the backstory short, simple, and to the point.
Also, your age would be 1018 if you keep the times consistent, This RP happens after Luna's return.
Why would a princess be a mere guard?
Luna is not naturally evil. It's Canon that Nightmare Moon was Luna possessed by a hostile entity, did the act of them joining give you this hostile entity like a disease?
Why bother having an invisible horn?
Change all of these, and I'll give you an Yes.
PS: Mi Fiato Zeffiro translates to "I winds Zephyr"
You changed one of these points. I say no.
#135
Posted 11 October 2013 - 03:09 PM
Edited by Golden Sparks, 01 January 2014 - 10:36 AM.
#136
Posted 11 October 2013 - 07:46 PM
Zephyr you should probably read this.
She was a guard. She isn't anymore. Now she helps Luna light the stars. What is bad about Luna and Sombra being her parents, and why does my bio have to be short? It only asked for a bio, not a short bio, and the 'canon only rule' only applies to in-game RPs. In this RP, she is probably not going to become Nightmare Wind. It is only to tell everything about her.
Now with regards to the rest of your OC's the back story. I honestly agree with Dominic and Colgate on this one. Mostly because the character having King Sombra and Princess Luna as parents is not only not cannon. But seeing as the only thing that would influence your OC's behavior is the parents positions of power, and the relationship between each other and their daughter. Their names shouldn't even really be mentioned.
If you rewrite your back story so that it's shorter and answers these five questions:
How was the character raised?
What was the families economic background?
Where did their parents work?
When were they born (Aka your age)?
Why are they being sent to this school?
As well as remove the nightmare wind stuff then I'll give you a yes.
Edited by raptorvelo, 11 October 2013 - 07:47 PM.
#137
Posted 13 October 2013 - 02:36 PM
...I guess mine isn't accepted, then.
#138
Posted 13 October 2013 - 06:08 PM
...I guess mine isn't accepted, then.
It's not that she isn't accepted it's just that I've been really busy I'm sorry for not addressing your post earlier.
1. She hid her wings so she wouldn't be jeered at by the other ponies in her school.
2. Her parents wanted her to stay with them, and there weren't really any private schools nearby.
3. She just likes singing, I never said that it had anything to do with her cutie mark.
My question is since alicorns are viewed almost like all powerful gods in MLP as far as I can tell why would others make fun of her? I mean wouldn't unicorns and earth ponies admire her because she could fly while pegasi would admire her because she could do magic?
Now if her parents wanted her to stay close to them that's all well and good. but why is she coming here if they are so attached to her. Did she apply behind their backs was it her idea to come here in the first place?
If you want you could make her special talent Entertainment, that way it would encompass writing, drawing, and singing as those are considered forms of entertainment.
The reason I'm asking this is because I really do want to let you in, in fact if you can answer these questions or alter your submission sheet to reflect these things then I'll give you a yes.
#139
Posted 15 October 2013 - 02:22 PM
#140
Posted 15 October 2013 - 02:43 PM
It's not completely up to me it's up to whether your OC's get three votes for yes by other participants in this rp.
If you want, I can quote your other OC applications in a spoiler in case they were overlooked.
Edited by raptorvelo, 15 October 2013 - 02:43 PM.
#141
Posted 15 October 2013 - 02:48 PM
#142
Posted 15 October 2013 - 03:07 PM
These are two OC's that were up for consideration but, to my knowledge were overlooked. They seem alright to me, but I'd like others opinions on the matter before making the definite decision.
Edited by raptorvelo, 15 October 2013 - 03:09 PM.
#143
Posted 18 October 2013 - 07:12 PM
Yes to Candy, And I am looking forward to the portray of the blind.
The librarian...well, we do need a Librarian...No clue how a soothing voice helps though, Libraries don't tend to let you read out loud...anyway. Accepted.
--Due to Colgate absence, I will be inserting some extra substitutes, If he fails to show, I will take over the class.--
Name: Aurora Howling
Appearance: White unicorn, Light green hair, Mirror cutie mark
Talent: Reflecting Non-melee things
Age: 21
Gender Mare
Personality: Pridefull, Egotistic, Showoff
Bio: Daughter of a Canterlot Noble
Occupation: knowledgeable in the fields of economics, language, and posture. Substitute teacher.
((It seems sort because teachers are meant to help the students along, they are not the most important part of the rp))
Edited by Dominic, 22 October 2013 - 03:45 AM.
#144
Posted 04 November 2013 - 02:29 AM
I'm so sorry I missed a lot of the RP!! How can I join the RP now??
#145
Posted 04 November 2013 - 07:08 PM
I'm so sorry I missed a lot of the RP!! How can I join the RP now??
Just join in and I'll catch you up to speed as we go.
#146
Posted 15 November 2013 - 02:09 AM
Should we have a mascot? I don't know, I think it would be fun to make a mini cheerleading group and after school activities to do such as: basketball, book club, medical learning, and some more normal after school activities. A mascot could be something as simple as the royals where the colors are white and blue representing the main princesses that we all know and love.
#147
Posted 16 November 2013 - 06:36 AM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Miss Opalis Lunar
Nickname: Opal Moon
Appearance (picture or description): Opal Moon is a white Pegasus with pink Pinkamena make and tail that fades to purple.
Cutie Mark/Talent: Raising the stars once she becomes a Alicorn, in training by Luna
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus (soon to become a Alicorn)
Age:14
Gender:Filly
Title (Duke, Princess):Princess
Kingdom: Lunus- a more secretive castle, very close to Canterlot
Personality: Rebellious, outgoing, crazy, a bit blonde, goes to her own beat
Bio: Opal Moon is the daughter of Princess Gemstone Eclipse, Celestia and Luna's sister. Her mother is shy of announcing her family to the public. She has several brothers and sisters, with a three-year-old little brother Pegasus who constantly annoys her. She is the only rebellious sibling, the rest of the foals tend to follow Celestia and Luna's orders. However, her only dream is to become a Alicorn like her big sister Topaz Moon. Her cousin, Sparklelight, sister of Cadance, was kicked out of school last year because of crashing through a wall while goofing around and flying. She is usually in some kind of trouble, as the teachers are a bit harsh on her.
#148
Posted 16 November 2013 - 07:32 AM
Wow.. I am not the game master here but here's some advise: it's not canon that Luna and Tia have another sister. One rule here is that we do not touch the show's canon. Same with Cadence. Raising stars is Luna's job. Once again touching the canon. Bad zone to be in... If you need more detail on finding them all I can help. Along with a lot if the others in here.Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Miss Opalis Lunar
Nickname: Opal Moon
Appearance (picture or description): Opal Moon is a white Pegasus with pink Pinkamena make and tail that fades to purple.
Cutie Mark/Talent: Raising the stars once she becomes a Alicorn, in training by Luna
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus (soon to become a Alicorn)
Age:14
Gender:Filly
Title (Duke, Princess):Princess
Kingdom: Lunus- a more secretive castle, very close to Canterlot
Personality: Rebellious, outgoing, crazy, a bit blonde, goes to her own beat
Bio: Opal Moon is the daughter of Princess Gemstone Eclipse, Celestia and Luna's sister. Her mother is shy of announcing her family to the public. She has several brothers and sisters, with a three-year-old little brother Pegasus who constantly annoys her. She is the only rebellious sibling, the rest of the foals tend to follow Celestia and Luna's orders. However, her only dream is to become a Alicorn like her big sister Topaz Moon. Her cousin, Sparklelight, sister of Cadance, was kicked out of school last year because of crashing through a wall while goofing around and flying. She is usually in some kind of trouble, as the teachers are a bit harsh on her.
Edited by petmarket24, 16 November 2013 - 07:33 AM.
#149
Posted 16 November 2013 - 07:34 AM
#150
Posted 16 November 2013 - 07:44 AM
Ah, sorry, the last RP I was in was with friends ![]()
Let me revise that.
#151
Posted 16 November 2013 - 07:52 AM
#152
Posted 16 November 2013 - 07:52 AM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Miss Opalis Lunar
Nickname: Opal Moon
Appearance (picture or description): Opal Moon is a white Pegasus with pink Pinkamena make and tail that fades to purple.
Cutie Mark/Talent: Crescent moon with stars surrounding it. She got her cutie mark while stargazing, her problem now is finding out the talent that goes with it! She'll find out soon, it's certain.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus (soon to become a Alicorn)
Age:14
Gender:Filly
Title (Duke, Princess):Princess
Kingdom: Lunus- a more secretive castle, very close to Canterlot
Personality: Rebellious, outgoing, crazy, a bit blonde, goes to her own beat
Bio: Opal Moon is the daughter of Princess Gemstone Eclipse. Her mother is shy of announcing her family and castle to the public, yet lets her children attend the school She has several brothers and sisters, with a three-year-old little brother Pegasus who constantly annoys her. She is the only rebellious sibling, the rest of the foals tend to follow orders. However, her only dream is to become a Alicorn like her big sister Topaz Moon. Her cousin, Sparklelight, was kicked out of school last year because of crashing through a wall while goofing around and flying. She is usually in some kind of trouble, as the teachers are a bit harsh on her.
Okay, here's my revised Opal Moon ![]()
Edited by Opal Moon, 16 November 2013 - 08:42 PM.
#153
Posted 16 November 2013 - 07:56 AM
Better, becoming alicorn is almost impossible with stargazing but other than my opinion there I give it a yes, what about one other? If they say yes then your in Opal.Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Miss Opalis Lunar
Nickname: Opal Moon
Appearance (picture or description): Opal Moon is a white Pegasus with pink Pinkamena make and tail that fades to purple.
Cutie Mark/Talent: Crescent moon with stars surrounding it. She got her cutie mark while stargazing, her problem now is finding out the talent that goes with it!
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus (soon to become a Alicorn)
Age:14
Gender:Filly
Title (Duke, Princess):Princess
Kingdom: Lunus- a more secretive castle, very close to Canterlot
Personality: Rebellious, outgoing, crazy, a bit blonde, goes to her own beat
Bio: Opal Moon is the daughter of Princess Gemstone Eclipse. Her mother is shy of announcing her family and castle to the public, yet lets her children attend the school She has several brothers and sisters, with a three-year-old little brother Pegasus who constantly annoys her. She is the only rebellious sibling, the rest of the foals tend to follow orders. However, her only dream is to become a Alicorn like her big sister Topaz Moon. Her cousin, Sparklelight, was kicked out of school last year because of crashing through a wall while goofing around and flying. She is usually in some kind of trouble, as the teachers are a bit harsh on her.
Okay, here's my revised Opal Moon
#154
Posted 16 November 2013 - 08:00 AM
#155
Posted 16 November 2013 - 08:00 AM
Better, becoming alicorn is almost impossible with stargazing but other than my opinion there I give it a yes, what about one other? If they say yes then your in Opal.
I'm going to add in where she finds a more *alicorn worthy* talent with her Cutie Mark, since she isn't sure what her talent actually is.
#156
Posted 16 November 2013 - 08:23 AM
Edited by petmarket24, 16 November 2013 - 08:23 AM.
#157
Posted 18 November 2013 - 11:31 PM
Erk, hey, not trying to be annoying, but can I join yet? It's been 2 days and I'm not completely sure..
#158
Posted 19 November 2013 - 03:34 AM
I said yes and Purple said yes, your in.
#159
Posted 01 January 2014 - 04:15 AM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Starry Sky (when he was a foal, he was taken to an orphanage (see bio) before being named, so that's why his name isn't royal-sounding)
Nickname: Starry
Appearance: blue with a yellow mane and dark blue glasses
Cutie Mark/Talent: 3 stars/creative, bright, and cunning (its symbolic because stars are bright just like him)
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn (although he's pretty much a unicorn but with wings. He's a terrible flier and bad at melee combat)
Age: 10
Gender: stallion
Title (Duke, Princess): prince
Kingdom: Astratos
Personality: confident, obnoxious, and easygoing
Bio: He just found out he was a prince because a spell was cast on him when he was born to hide his wings for some reason, and when he got his cutie mark the spell broke, revealing his wings, and therefore his title (before he thought he was a regular unicorn and an orphan). All that happened recently, which is why he just arrived
Edited by MrSpyro, 01 January 2014 - 05:01 AM.
#160
Posted 01 January 2014 - 04:30 AM
You're Royal name is not Royal. Add a Title onto that
Your Cutie Mark makes no sense. I would suggest a book, to represent Intelligence.
Magic is normally used in defense class, so your parents never needed to ask.
Edited by Dominic, 01 January 2014 - 05:05 AM.
#161
Posted 01 January 2014 - 04:36 AM
Better? By the way the cutie mark is symbolic (like Cheerilee's) not literal, because Cheerilee doesn't grow smiley-faced flowers
Edited by MrSpyro, 01 January 2014 - 04:46 AM.
#162
Posted 01 January 2014 - 04:54 AM
As Dominic has pointed out his parents never needed to ask that he use magic in defense class since magic is normally used there anyway although you may keep the the handicap.
Out of curiosity, what is the cutie mark symbolic for and how?
If he's so bad at melee then why not just make him a unicorn since he's already limited to using magic in combat by his poor skill in melee attacks.
#163
Posted 01 January 2014 - 04:58 AM
How about now? ( kept the Alicorn-ness because then i would have to change the bio if he was a unicorn. Deal with it.)
Edited by MrSpyro, 01 January 2014 - 05:02 AM.
#164
Posted 01 January 2014 - 05:03 AM
Then I am going to need a reason for the spell seeing as alicorns are looked up to by all of the pony races what reason would someone have for hiding this fact from him?
Edited by raptorvelo, 01 January 2014 - 05:09 AM.
#165
Posted 01 January 2014 - 05:12 AM
Raptor, I can think of several reasons as to why someone would Hide it from him, all of them Political
Further more, the bad at melee makes the perfect weakness for him, It means he can't make use of the Earth pony's strength.
It's like with Tantibus and his weakness at magic
Edited by Dominic, 01 January 2014 - 05:15 AM.
#166
Posted 01 January 2014 - 05:21 AM
Raptor, I can think of several reasons as to why someone would Hide it from him, all of them Political
Further more, the bad at melee makes the perfect weakness for him, It means he can't make use of the Earth pony's strength.
It's like with Tantibus and his weakness at magic
This is true alright I'll allow it, you need two more votes for yes before you can join though. I'll re post your entry so others can see it.
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Starry Sky (when he was a foal, he was taken to an orphanage (see bio) before being named, so that's why his name isn't royal-sounding)
Nickname: Starry
Appearance: blue with a yellow mane and dark blue glasses
Cutie Mark/Talent: 3 stars/creative, bright, and cunning (its symbolic because stars are bright just like him)
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn (although he's pretty much a unicorn but with wings. He's a terrible flier and bad at melee combat)
Age: 10
Gender: stallion
Title (Duke, Princess): prince
Kingdom: Astratos
Personality: confident, obnoxious, and easygoing
Bio: He just found out he was a prince because a spell was cast on him when he was born to hide his wings for some reason, and when he got his cutie mark the spell broke, revealing his wings, and therefore his title (before he thought he was a regular unicorn and an orphan). All that happened recently, which is why he just arrived
#167
Posted 01 January 2014 - 05:39 AM
Count my vote.
#168
Posted 01 January 2014 - 05:49 AM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Starry Sky (when he was a foal, he was taken to an orphanage (see bio) before being named, so that's why his name isn't royal-sounding)
Nickname: Starry
Appearance: blue with a yellow mane and dark blue glasses
Cutie Mark/Talent: 3 stars/creative, bright, and cunning (its symbolic because stars are bright just like him)
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn (although he's pretty much a unicorn but with wings. He's a terrible flier and bad at melee combat)
Age: 10
Gender: stallion
Title (Duke, Princess): prince
Kingdom: Astratos
Personality: confident, obnoxious, and easygoing
Bio: He just found out he was a prince because a spell was cast on him when he was born to hide his wings for some reason, and when he got his cutie mark the spell broke, revealing his wings, and therefore his title (before he thought he was a regular unicorn and an orphan). All that happened recently, which is why he just arrived
Two votes yes you need one more.
#169
Posted 01 January 2014 - 05:58 AM
#170
Posted 01 January 2014 - 10:37 AM
Nickname: Candy
Appearance (picture or description):
Cutie Mark/Talent: http://jj-bb.deviant...-mark-330947803 / Her cutie mark is a candy because she brings joy and happiness to everypony, much like candy does.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Earth
Age: 12
Gender: Mare
Title (Duke, Princess): Duchess
Kingdom: Dawn Kingdom/Empire
Personality: She is happy and exitable. She enjoys life to the fullest.
Bio: Candica was born blind. She couldnt help it. When she found out she was different she vowed that she would always enjoy life to the fullest, and make sure others did too. When she was told she was going to The Royal Academy she was really happy. She looked on the bright side of things; new friends, new classes and new things to enjoy!
#171
Posted 01 January 2014 - 12:21 PM
Nickname: Shimmer
Appearance (picture or description): Pale pink, darkish blue hair with two yellow streaks, brown eyes ( profile pic )
Cutie Mark/Talent: Red rose for friendliness and love. She great at making friends and keeping friendships.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn
Age: 14
Gender: Mare
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess Shimmerspeed
Kingdom: Rosania
Personality: Friendly, helpful, studious
Bio: Used to be a pegasus, lived in Cloudsdale until she was 12, moved to Ponyville, discovered that she was VERY distantly related to the Princesses and she still became an alicorn. Magic is her weak spot though.
Is that okay?
Edited by roserocks01, 02 January 2014 - 09:03 PM.
#172
Posted 01 January 2014 - 02:43 PM
So I can start roleplaying? I assume its a yes.
Edited by MrSpyro, 01 January 2014 - 03:01 PM.
#173
Posted 01 January 2014 - 06:03 PM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Candica Lomiti Cortex
Nickname: Candy
Appearance (picture or description):Spoiler
Cutie Mark/Talent: http://jj-bb.deviant...-mark-330947803 / Her cutie mark is a candy because she brings joy and happiness to everypony, much like candy does.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Earth
Age: 12
Gender: Mare
Title (Duke, Princess): Duchess
Kingdom: Dawn Kingdom/Empire
Personality: She is happy and exitable. She enjoys life to the fullest.
Bio: Candica was born blind. She couldnt help it. When she found out she was different she vowed that she would always enjoy life to the fullest, and make sure others did too. When she was told she was going to The Royal Academy she was really happy. She looked on the bright side of things; new friends, new classes and new things to enjoy!
Nice! (if she isn't in, i vote yes, if i'm allowed, and sorry for double posting)
Edited by MrSpyro, 01 January 2014 - 06:06 PM.
#174
Posted 01 January 2014 - 10:07 PM
#175
Posted 02 January 2014 - 03:06 AM
you have to either get a "yes" from 3 people or an "accepted" from the GM and the talent could be more specific
Edited by MrSpyro, 02 January 2014 - 04:21 AM.
#176
Posted 02 January 2014 - 04:31 AM
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Candica Lomiti Cortex
Nickname: Candy
Appearance (picture or description):Spoiler
Cutie Mark/Talent: http://jj-bb.deviant...-mark-330947803 / Her cutie mark is a candy because she brings joy and happiness to everypony, much like candy does.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Earth
Age: 12
Gender: Mare
Title (Duke, Princess): Duchess
Kingdom: Dawn Kingdom/Empire
Personality: She is happy and exitable. She enjoys life to the fullest.
Bio: Candica was born blind. She couldnt help it. When she found out she was different she vowed that she would always enjoy life to the fullest, and make sure others did too. When she was told she was going to The Royal Academy she was really happy. She looked on the bright side of things; new friends, new classes and new things to enjoy!
I agree with Spyro on this one make that two votes yes
#177
Posted 02 January 2014 - 04:42 AM
I say yes, your in!Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Candica Lomiti Cortex
Nickname: Candy
Appearance (picture or description):Spoiler
Cutie Mark/Talent: http://jj-bb.deviant...-mark-330947803 / Her cutie mark is a candy because she brings joy and happiness to everypony, much like candy does.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Earth
Age: 12
Gender: Mare
Title (Duke, Princess): Duchess
Kingdom: Dawn Kingdom/Empire
Personality: She is happy and exitable. She enjoys life to the fullest.
Bio: Candica was born blind. She couldnt help it. When she found out she was different she vowed that she would always enjoy life to the fullest, and make sure others did too. When she was told she was going to The Royal Academy she was really happy. She looked on the bright side of things; new friends, new classes and new things to enjoy!
#178
Posted 02 January 2014 - 09:03 PM
you have to either get a "yes" from 3 people or an "accepted" from the GM and the talent could be more specific
I've added a better talent
#179
Posted 02 January 2014 - 09:41 PM
I've added a better talent
Works for me! Yes, that's a vote
Edited by MrSpyro, 06 January 2014 - 10:58 PM.
#180
Posted 08 January 2014 - 03:57 PM
Edited by roserocks01, 08 January 2014 - 03:58 PM.
#181
Posted 08 January 2014 - 11:22 PM
I say yes, you need one more yes then your in.Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Shimmerspeed
Nickname: Shimmer
Appearance (picture or description): Pale pink, darkish blue hair with two yellow streaks, brown eyes ( profile pic )
Cutie Mark/Talent: Red rose for friendliness and love. She great at making friends and keeping friendships.
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Alicorn
Age: 14
Gender: Mare
Title (Duke, Princess): Princess Shimmerspeed
Kingdom: Rosania
Personality: Friendly, helpful, studious
Bio: Used to be a pegasus, lived in Cloudsdale until she was 12, moved to Ponyville, discovered that she was VERY distantly related to the Princesses and she still became an alicorn. Magic is her weak spot though.
Is that okay?
#182
Posted 09 January 2014 - 07:40 AM
Edited by roserocks01, 18 January 2014 - 08:19 PM.
#183
Posted 18 January 2014 - 06:06 PM
Student Form:
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Flos Est Glacies
Nickname: Aura
Appearance (picture or description): Orange coat, white mane, pale green cloudy pupil less eyes
Cutie Mark/Talent: a wave of water, talent is swimming
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus
Age:9
Gender:female
Title (Duke, Princess):Princess
Kingdom: Regnum Glacies
Personality: kind, friendly
Bio: Aura was born blind, she wishes to be a good ruler so she can inherit the throne from her mother when the time is right
#184
Posted 18 January 2014 - 06:27 PM
Edited by Golden Sparks, 18 January 2014 - 06:31 PM.
#185
Posted 20 January 2014 - 10:52 PM
can my character be a mute? just wondering.
#186
Posted 20 January 2014 - 11:35 PM
I don't see why not as long as it's well executed.
#187
Posted 20 January 2014 - 11:50 PM
can my character be a mute? just wondering.
That sounds cool, maybe a servant nearby to say what's needed for them.
#188
Posted 21 January 2014 - 12:17 AM
yay
#189
Posted 21 January 2014 - 01:38 AM
Student Form:
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Helix Arros
Nickname: Hex
Appearance (picture or description): dark red-brown(see profile picture for reference) deep red mane and tail with 2 blue streaks(think almost vinyl's), icy blue eyes, shorter than most his age
Cutie Mark/Talent: two crossed rapiers twisted into a double helix, talent is fencing and science
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus
Age:9 1/4
Gender:male
Title (Duke, Princess):prince
Kingdom: Corsantis Mora
Personality: friendly, cheerful, reserved
Bio:since he was born mute his parents where always worried about him because of that reason but they stopped when he showed how well he could fence and handle himself even in a fight, but even when he knew how to write his parents still wanted someone to go with him but he refused and told them that if he had trouble then they could send someone to speak for him at the school.
P.S. he communicates mostly with gestures (i.e. shakes of the head) and writing on a notepad he keeps in his saddlebag.
Edited by Nightshift, 23 February 2014 - 07:46 PM.
#190
Posted 21 January 2014 - 01:52 AM
I say yeah. Two more yeses for you then your in.Student Form:
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Helix Arros
Nickname: Hex
Appearance (picture or description): dark red-brown(see profile picture for reference) deep red mane and tail with 2 blue streaks icy blue eyes
Cutie Mark/Talent: two crossed rapiers twisted into a double helix, talent is fencing and science
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus
Age:8
Gender:male
Title (Duke, Princess):Duke
Kingdom: Corsantis Mora
Personality: friendly, cheerful, reserved
Bio: his parents where always worried about him because he was mute but they stopped when he showed how well he could fence and handle himself even in a fight, but even when he knew how to write his parents still wanted someone to go with him but he refused and told them that if he had trouble then they could send someone to speak for him at the school.
#191
Posted 21 January 2014 - 02:16 AM
Student Form:
Name (Royal Name,Ex. Mi Amore Cadenza): Helix Arros
Nickname: Hex
Appearance (picture or description): dark red-brown(see profile picture for reference) deep red mane and tail with 2 blue streaks icy blue eyes
Cutie Mark/Talent: two crossed rapiers twisted into a double helix, talent is fencing and science
Species (Unicorn, Earth): Pegasus
Age:8
Gender:male
Title (Duke, Princess):Duke
Kingdom: Corsantis Mora
Personality: friendly, cheerful, reserved
Bio: his parents where always worried about him because he was mute but they stopped when he showed how well he could fence and handle himself even in a fight, but even when he knew how to write his parents still wanted someone to go with him but he refused and told them that if he had trouble then they could send someone to speak for him at the school.
Out of curiosity how did he become a mute?
Did something happen to him in his past that took away his ability to speak?
#192
Posted 21 January 2014 - 02:24 AM
he was born a mute
#193
Posted 21 January 2014 - 02:38 AM
Fair enough, you have my vote. You just need one more and your in.
#194
Posted 21 January 2014 - 04:10 AM
i just read more of the rp and i saw that the school allows the students to carry weapons for self-defense do the students have to be a certain age to do it or can they come to school with them strapped to their back, side, or under their wing and not be questioned
#195
Posted 21 January 2014 - 04:39 AM
The school doesn't let them bring their own weapons.
#196
Posted 21 January 2014 - 04:55 AM
oh....ok sorry i can't read correctly sometimes ![]()
#197
Posted 21 January 2014 - 06:10 PM
#198
Posted 23 January 2014 - 01:24 AM
ok i just edited my bio to clear up any confusion about communication or back story.
#199
Posted 23 January 2014 - 01:45 AM
I was thinking about that, with the gestures. Although I was more thinking almost like sign language. But, I still say yes, you need one more yes due to raptor also saying yes.
#200
Posted 23 January 2014 - 03:27 AM
yay i got three yeses does that mean im in?
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