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#1 shoeberrypie

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Posted 02 December 2011 - 03:40 AM

My house is ready!

x: 22
y: 70
z: 82

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#2 Rahludan

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Posted 02 December 2011 - 03:48 AM

This house seems empty. I will admit, the exterior kicks ass! However, there is nothing inside really! You have no kitchen, no bedroom, and hardly any furniture! I would suggest trying to add some furniture in the first floor. Maybe take off one of the door ways, and add some furniture around, and improvise a bit. The top floor is completely empty. Try adding a bedroom, and lets see how it looks then. Get some things added around to make it a little more occupied, and let us know!

#3 shoeberrypie

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Posted 02 December 2011 - 04:04 AM

I was told not to edit my house after submitting this. But I suppose you give me leave to fix up the inside.

#4 Rahludan

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Posted 02 December 2011 - 04:13 AM

Yes.
You were editing after you posted. You are not supposed to do that. Our verdict was to let you improve. I am letting you make changes. Please make them, and then post back. Thanks!

#5 shoeberrypie

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Posted 02 December 2011 - 04:43 AM

Okay, I finished up the furniture. It's awesome!

(Edit: Wait, I forgot the kitchen! One moment...)

#6 shoeberrypie

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Posted 02 December 2011 - 05:18 AM

THERE!

COMPLETE!

I think I overdid it...

#7 Rahludan

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Posted 03 December 2011 - 01:59 AM

Approved.
You made some pretty nice improvements. However please, next time make it bigger! The house was just about too cramped, but you managed to pull it off. Plots in Equestria are 16x16. Keep that in mind :o


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