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#1 Moshipig

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Posted 05 August 2014 - 11:03 PM

I have built a new practice house, keeping in mind my last critiques. I have made the shape non-uniform but (I think) in-theme, and created the house with actual living conditions in mind.

 

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I would appreciate any new critiques. Thanks! :)


Oops! This is on the wrong forum account. Pretend it's derpy__hooves! ;)

 

*to clarify- Derpy__Hooves is my brother's account -moshi*


Edited by Moshipig, 05 August 2014 - 11:25 PM.


#2 Rulerofblocks

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Posted 05 August 2014 - 11:36 PM

I'll critique this when I get back!

EDIT : Okay it might be a day or so before I get to this but don't worry, I'll do it.


Edited by Rulerofblocks, 06 August 2014 - 03:43 AM.


#3 Ol' Vortex

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Posted 06 August 2014 - 01:30 PM

The exterior looks nice, though the roof is a bit too flat. Other than that, it's good.
The interior, however, is very spacious and has little decoration. Try adding more paintings, bookshelves, etc.
The attic is clearly too big and has too many cobwebs which may cause difficulties with moving around it. Also, things are scattered around the attic rather that being neatly organised in the corners. Attics can have rooms just like any other floor. You can add a guest room there.
I also have a feeling that the rooms and the entire floors are too high. If you reduced the floor height to 3 blocks, your house would definitely seem less bulky.
That's all I can think of now. Keep practicing  :)




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