Jump to content


Photo

Shadow's Application


  • Please log in to reply
2 replies to this topic

#1 Shadow Stormer

Shadow Stormer

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 7 posts
  • minecraft:
    januaryeddierock

Posted 21 November 2014 - 01:59 AM

Name: Shadow Dragon

Gender:Colt

Race: Alicorn                

Age:13

Appearance: Black mane and tail, Black body

Cutie Mark and Special Talent: Moon with a Sword through it. He protects the moon 

Personality: Shy but creative and noble

Biography: Shadow Dragon was born in Canterlot and is Luna's brother. When Luna was banished to the moon Shadow followed he got his Cutie mark on the moon when saving Luna countless times from evil. When Luna went crazy and turned into Nightmare Moon went to Ponyville and turned it to night forever Shadow was stuck on the moon. On Nightmare night he finally found a way to get off from the moon.

 

Once Shadow was off the moon he moved to Cloudsdale and lived there for many years. He soon became the leader of Cloudsdale until the day he was traveling to Canterlot for the Grand galloping gala for the chance to see his sister. The balloon he was riding in malfunctioned and crashed into the weather factory and destroyed half of Cloudsdale he was banished from the city and escaped. Without him Cloudsdale soon went into madness and chaos. During those time Cloudsdale and Ponyville were overcome by discord. The new leader of Cloudsdale thought flooding the mainland would be the answer so they flooded the mainland. When Shadow came back to Equestria he discovered there was no Equestria anymore. Now he is sailing around trying to find his sister and find a new home

 

 


Edited by Shadow Stormer, 21 November 2014 - 02:02 AM.


#2 Starlight of the Stars

Starlight of the Stars

    Blade Unicorn (Level 60)

  • Builder
  • 373 posts
  • minecraft:
    First_Light

Posted 23 November 2014 - 03:15 AM

Off the bat, using an alicorn is generally looked down upon since most players cant really pull them off. Even so, the colonization's server does not allow non-admins to use that class. I would advise you go to https://www.brohoof..../49598-classes/ and pick another one of the classes here.

 

In regards to the Bio: The bio is has quite a few problems. The first and foremost: having your character directly related to one of the princesses is a general "no" in the rp world.everything else that stems from that also falls under the same catagory. Id suggest redoing the entire bio.



#3 Shadow Stormer

Shadow Stormer

    Background Pony

  • Pony
  • 7 posts
  • minecraft:
    januaryeddierock

Posted 23 November 2014 - 07:09 PM

Ok thanks I will fix it


0 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users