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#1 Golfmann

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Posted 03 January 2014 - 02:43 AM

So, I started this project in the summer, but took til now to get it to an actual publishable level.

 

Link to fimfiction: http://www.fimfictio...554/dominus-nox

 

 

Description:

Many years ago, the land of Equestria was ruled by Chaos; Discord, as he was known. The two Princesses representing the Sun and the Moon rose up to defeat Discord with the unbridled power of the Elements of Harmony. So it was brought forth: a new age of peace and prosperity to Equestria that was previously unknown to its inhabitants.

It was not to last.

The history books tell us of Nightmare Moon and her attempt to seize the throne. But what they don't tell us, is who she really was, and about the cascade of events that led to her unprecedented uprising, and eventual downfall. What really happened before she was locked away in the moon? Tracing back old wives' tales and folklore, they tell us that she was sealed away with the Elements of Harmony against her will. What really happened in those ancient times?

Follow the story of a young group of recruits in the Royal Guard as they are thrown into history, lived through it all, fought Nightmare Moon, and reclaimed Equestria.

 

 

Aaand then there's the cover art I did for it:

 

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Hope you enjoy! More chapters are soon to come. Critiques and criticisms are welcome.


Edited by Golfmann, 04 January 2014 - 03:31 AM.


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 03:47 AM

Bumping because nobody cares? I would still enjoy some critiques. Otherwise i'll just let this die


Edited by Golfmann, 16 February 2014 - 03:48 AM.



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