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#1 bausco97

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Posted 08 January 2013 - 01:08 AM

my plot is at s75. I would like as many green manes to look as possible. just to get it perfect. please stop by if you can



#2 343 Guilty Sparkle

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Posted 08 January 2013 - 03:30 PM

First reply in the critique thread YAY!

 

Alright. Here goes.

 

The exterior of your house looks pretty good. Nice shape, the roof is shaped well.

 

First floor, Is a wee bit cramped, if not kindof underfurnished. otherwise, its good.

 

the second floor and the attic look well enough. 

Final words, The first floor could use a bit more furniture, as well as some "Spacing", and the design of the second floor and the attic is well done.

Good luck. Hope this helps.


Edited by adwrynn, 08 January 2013 - 03:31 PM.



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