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#1 CmdrBrannick

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 11:11 PM

Hey, just wondering if anyone wanted to critque my submission house.

The Warp is /warp s7

Please and Thank You in advance.

#2 Cyborganic_Pies

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Posted 05 January 2013 - 11:47 PM

Overall its nice, but you should have it more structural instead of a curve. The roof looks a little odd compared to ones in the show, I would recommend making a gabled roof on a more structural house, having curved walls makes the roof harder to build. The interior is good but you may want to separate it into some rooms instead of having the first floor open plan. I hope you take these notes into consideration!

#3 CmdrBrannick

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Posted 09 January 2013 - 11:53 PM

Hey, just wondering if anypony would like to critique my submission house. I would be really greatful for any help.



#4 Herpy__Dooves

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 08:36 PM

Merged those two posts since they are about the same house



#5 RunningWolf251

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Posted 11 January 2013 - 05:22 PM

Alrighty, I'll start outside.

 

I would suggest to place an extra block of yellow wool on the north and south faces of the roof to give it the look of a roof overhang. This is simply a decorative thing and if you're not sure what I mean there are a couple of submission houses that have this around you.

 

The entrance and hallway leading to the stairs is good, but it might be beneficial, in my opinion, to place a doorway between the large open kitchen area and the entrance hall. The reason being that it feels like it's all too open. An alternative to this could be to place a wall between the kitchen counter and the small office-like area directly across from it since it doesn't seem to really coincide with the kitchen.

 

Moving upstairs, the bathroom is looking good, I don't see anything needing changed there.

 

I like the little den area as well, but I've never seen a pinball machine in a ponyville house. If there was something more canon that you could switch that out for, that might be a good thing to think about.

 

And from there, the bedroom looks good as well.

 

Also, as I walk through the house, I see a lot of paintings on the walls. I would almost say there might be too many of them, but that's also my own personal opinion. I see them as something to place only if the wall seems bare or you're using it for a specific decoration.

 

I hope this helps somewhat!




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