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#1 Buttons

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Posted 27 January 2016 - 02:40 AM

To all you admins

my house is completed

 

plot No.72   or

 

/warp s72

 

 

 

Cheers

Buttons AKA MiningCooper51



#2 R9000

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Posted 29 January 2016 - 04:29 AM

Hi,

we've decided to give you an Improve on this house. This means you get one more week of CMC to make it better, after which you either pass or fail.

Your house was generally a good start. Your space is well-used, windows are nicely sized, and it's an ok-shaped house. Here's what you could improve, however:

-Your rooms do lack some basic amenities, such as proper kitchen cupboards, clothes storage in the bedroom, etc. Imagine you had to live in this house - what would you need?

-The upper floor could use a proper ceiling, rather than just being able to see the inside of the roof from there. You could even create more attic space that way.

-Speaking of attics, your attic study could be improved. Rather than just a wall of bookshelves, try adding some other elements that you'd want. Perhaps more chairs, a little writing desk, and such.

-Your house uses largely just oak wood. Maybe make the stairs or floors a different colour?

-Perhaps you could also add some greenery in the way of house plants around?

Good luck. Reply here when you're done, and take your time to get plenty of builder critiques.



#3 Buttons

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Posted 03 February 2016 - 03:05 AM

hi admins my house is finished again and ready for evaluation ether to succeed or fail

 

my house is in submissions and is plot 72

 

/w s72

 

cheers Buttons AKA MiningCooper51



#4 Buttons

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Posted 04 February 2016 - 08:53 PM

hi admins my house is finished again and ready for evaluation ether to succeed or fail

my house is in submissions and is plot 72

/w s72

cheers Buttons AKA MiningCooper51

#5 Shroom Agent

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Posted 04 February 2016 - 09:44 PM

One thread please

#6 Buttons

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Posted 04 February 2016 - 11:11 PM

hi admins my house is finished again and ready for evaluation ether to succeed or fail

my house is in submissions and is plot 72

/w s72

cheers Buttons AKA MiningCooper51

#7 Shroom Agent

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Posted 04 February 2016 - 11:15 PM

Stop making new threads or I'll auto-reject you.

#8 Buttons

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Posted 05 February 2016 - 05:20 AM

sorry my phone was glitching out



#9 Shroom Agent

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Posted 07 February 2016 - 01:36 AM

Sorry, but we are rejecting your house.


Ladders don't belong in ponyville houses. You have too many cobwebs in your attic.

Visit /w ponyville to see example houses.


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