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#1 Npaws

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 10:28 PM

This is a short fanfic I am working on based off of the OC's of some people here.  No I am not doing OC requests though.

 

Here is the product so far.

Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

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Chapter 3

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Chapter 4

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Edited by Npawesome, 16 March 2013 - 03:24 AM.


#2 Haxorizer145

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 10:48 PM

Good story! Who's OCs are you including?

#3 Hieros Godhead

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 10:55 PM

Well then, I'm somewhat interested to see where this one goes...

 

Good work on this!



#4 Npaws

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 10:57 PM

I am doing Dannyb300's which is soulstring's

 

Mine, which is Spark

 

And the others I just made up their names since the people didn't tell me about their OC's.



Well then, I'm somewhat interested to see where this one goes...

 

Good work on this!

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Thank you!  I have been working on my writing and I guess it has paid off in this story.



#5 Hieros Godhead

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 10:59 PM

I would be Gen, but I don't have an OC suitable for this kind of story, so I'll let you go with this.



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Posted 18 February 2013 - 02:03 AM

Nice story, the characters do seemed a bit rushed but it's no big deal. Can't wait to read more :)



#7 Npaws

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Posted 18 February 2013 - 03:59 PM

The final chapter 2 is out.

 

EDIT: Apparently chapter 2 sucked so I'm just going to let Danny write it.


Edited by Npawesome, 18 February 2013 - 06:34 PM.


#8 Npaws

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 04:00 PM

Alright I don't know if I am going to have time to continue this story. School and such. I will try and make time though.

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 06:00 PM

Chaoter 3 is currently in the works.  I think you guys will like the twist.



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Posted 23 February 2013 - 12:08 AM

Okay!  Chapter 3 has been added!  Tell me what you think.



#11 Hieros Godhead

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:44 AM

Woah, a surprising turn for the story. me likey!



#12 Npaws

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 05:23 AM

Thank you!



#13 Parchment-Pen

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 06:35 AM

Yay! My town is featured! :3 I am Willow Leaves FYI.. But now Imma kinda dead.. and a soul sucker so... XD And dtgen, DON'T READ MEH BOOK YET! Turns out Acerbus is a girl. ._.



#14 Npaws

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 07:39 PM

I am currently sucked out of Ideas for chapter four.  If anyone wants to submit a suggestion you can do so by PMing me on these forums.



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Posted 24 February 2013 - 07:43 PM

You could have someones OC show up and cause shenanegans.



#16 Npaws

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 08:01 PM

hehehe I could couldn't I?



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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:42 PM

indeed..?



#18 Hieros Godhead

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Posted 25 February 2013 - 01:46 AM

Yay! My town is featured! :3 I am Willow Leaves FYI.. But now Imma kinda dead.. and a soul sucker so... XD And dtgen, DON'T READ MEH BOOK YET! Turns out Acerbus is a girl. ._.

Well then. There goes any assumptions I had.



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Posted 25 February 2013 - 01:53 AM

Maybe Spark doesn't want to be risen, and kills himself all over again. Maybe a bit dark, but all is fair in love and war.



#20 Npaws

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Posted 25 February 2013 - 01:51 PM

I said PM them to me people! >.<


Edited by Npawesome, 25 February 2013 - 06:10 PM.


#21 Npaws

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Posted 16 March 2013 - 03:23 AM

The ending chapter four is out!!!!!



#22 Npaws

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Posted 19 March 2013 - 02:05 AM

Bump.... :/

#23 Hieros Godhead

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Posted 19 March 2013 - 02:13 AM

Eeeh, kind of an antclimax there. I liked the action scene, but it felt kind of rushed all in all. It's a pretty good fic, but it needs work.



#24 Npaws

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Posted 19 March 2013 - 02:18 AM

Thanks. I'll work on not rushing the things in my next story.

One thing though. I was thinking of using Spark for other stories. Is it lazy to use the same character like that?

#25 Hieros Godhead

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Posted 19 March 2013 - 02:18 AM

Not if the story is good enough. But try not to have one OC in all your fics as the main character, it gets weird.



#26 Npaws

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Posted 19 March 2013 - 02:22 AM

Yeah not ALL of them... But I've been in a few really good RP's with Spark and I would love to make them into fics.


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