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#1 Bronwyn_Rainbox

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Posted 18 October 2015 - 11:35 PM

s67



#2 R9000

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Posted 19 October 2015 - 12:23 AM

Ok, this house is definitely better than your last, but it's still not quite up to our standards. For this reason, we've chosen to give you an improve. This means you get another week of CMC rank to improve your house, and after that you either pass or fail, depending on if your work is good enough or not.

 

Things you should fix:

Your roof is better, but still quite messy. It should be better shaped to your house, and not so square on top.

Your furniture placement (for example in your bathroom) could be a lot better. Also, don't go overboard with carpet.

Your attic is quite cramped and featureless, but you use a few too many paintings elsewhere in the house.

Your kitchen is very small. Where do you put all your food? It should be more realistically sized.

 

Look in Ponyville (/warp ponyville) for other tips on how you should improve, and take your time. This isn't a race, and if you submit after only one or two days, you're effectively wasting most of the week we give you. Make the most out of your CMC test, there's no benefit from submitting early, and nothing lost by taking your time. Good luck.

 

Post again in this thread when you're ready to re-submit your house.


Edited by R9000, 19 October 2015 - 03:40 AM.


#3 Bronwyn_Rainbox

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Posted 20 October 2015 - 09:51 PM

/w s67

Edited by Shroom Agent, 20 October 2015 - 11:26 PM.
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#4 Shroom Agent

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Posted 23 October 2015 - 12:37 AM

Sorry, we are rejecting your house.

Your house is too small, which makes everything inside feel cramped. The top of your roof if also flat. Plus, you didn't make any noticeable changes in your improve.

Check /w ponyville for example houses.


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