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#1 Doc Whooves

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Posted 25 March 2013 - 08:08 AM

My House Needs Your Feedback!

 

 

If You Have The Time I Would Love It If You Dropped By My Submission House Its Number Is In The Details Below! 

 

 

Details:

Plot Number: S60

World: Submissions

Builder: mr_cheese9999

 

Hope To See You There!


Edited by Dontreus, 25 March 2013 - 08:10 AM.


#2 High Orbit

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Posted 25 March 2013 - 11:29 AM

Ok, there are several mistakes with your house, and they might need paying attention to. Let's start off with the exterior.

  • The road shouldn't have to wrap around the house like that. It looks funny.
  • Umm... floating tree? Bad idea.
  • The main block palette for Ponyville houses have more sandstone than logs in a construction.
  • Might just be me, but pony house windows are normally 2x2.
  • Lack of shutters on second floor.
  • Windows on third floor, unless it's going to be utilized later.
  • Large blank sandstone expanse on third floor/roof.

 

Now on to the interior...

 

  • Furniture needs more variety and color, it's too dull.
  • Kitchen boundaries not defined, perhaps carpets?
  • Kitchen too bland, this isn't survival where the furniture must be practical.
  • Second floor deserted, add more rooms.
  • No bedroom/toilet/study. Third floor?

 

And that's about all the pointers I can give, sadly. Remember, only one critique ain't going to help much, so take my advice with a pinch of salt.



#3 Lazaruz95

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Posted 25 March 2013 - 01:44 PM

I've given this a once over, and I must say I agree near completely with the critique Ymlong gave, so look there for my opinions.

 

Only one I object to is the general critique on window sizes, as anything from 1x2 to 3x2 is acceptable from what I know

what matters is that you don't overuse any of them, which is the feeling I'm getting in particular from your top floor.

You don't need a window everywhere

 

I'd also like to emphasis that the lack of a bedroom and bathroom is something I'd recommend you remedy as soon as possible, since according to the requiremnts I'm familiar with, it's a condition for instant rejection if the house cannot support someone living in it.


Edited by Lazaruz95, 25 March 2013 - 01:44 PM.



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