Review submission
#1
Posted 18 August 2015 - 01:15 PM
#2
Posted 18 August 2015 - 05:30 PM
Exterior:
It feels the same the last time I critiqued it. Try and not use the 1x1, 1x2, and 1x3 windows. The windows on the second floor you also need to be careful because how they are positioned makes it look like the pony can not look out of the window.
Interior First Floor:
Still feels a bit cramped as last time, but it's an improvement. The bar again I feel it's a bit off. The placement of the chairs I feel like are placed in the wrong area considering it's by your entrance. I'm not exactly sure what the enchantment table with bookshelves suppose to be. The Kitchen is good, but maybe extend it a bit so it doesn't feel cramped. Also add some decor like flowers or something to lighten up the area a bit.
Interior Second Floor:
Does feel the same. I do feel it a bit empty considering you just have a carpet in that main room on the second floor. The bedroom I feel is a bit incomplete considering it only has a bed in it. The bathroom I feel is good, but it's missing a few key elements for a bathroom. Also add some decor to lighten up the rooms
I will give you the benefit of the doubt since we know so little about Ponyville houses. Also consider using that back side of the plot like i told you before.
And do consider asking more builders.
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