INFO:tensorflow:Restoring parameters from models/355M/model.ckpt 0%| | 0/1 [00:00At last, you were finally up for sleep. >A smile came over your face as you laid out your bed, stretching out your body to be comfortable. >You hadn't really put on any bulk prior, and looked at the rest of the bed as your forelegs pressed to the edge. >A short string stretched across your neck as you looked down. >Nothing happened, as you were still lying on what you hoped could be a comfortable, comfortable pillow. >Your legs were wrapped to the same side as you, as if you were trying to keep it from touching the back of your neck. >Your head tilted down towards you, and looked back into the mirror to see yourself before that glassy gaze. >Your mind seemed to go in circles as he stared directly into your eyes, and as if you were not a thing like the glassy gaze you'd seen previously. "Greetings, I know you wish to say. But I have a few things to tell you…" >He said softly. "...Before I let you, you're all going to ask me some questions..." Well, there we are, folks. This story is still getting all the way through. Hopefully, after this month or whatever month, it'll end. If it does, I can go off with a little post or something. I've been busy a lot though; I'm doing work, and getting some free time, and working on a new story right now. I'm hoping it'll go well. No doubt. The fact that he's being called "Dumb Daddies" on the internet is hilarious. He was called "Dumb Daddies" in the other thread, too. I've found that being in a relationship with a guy like Mr. T. just doesn't quite work. It's too bad. I guess it's an issue for some people here. [spoiler]It is for me.[/spoiler] That could be quite possible, and I've looked at the pictures and I'd say that it's a really cute guy. A couple of days later Well, they don't. Well, i think it's because it's been about 5 minutes and he is getting more intense. I've been having this discussion a lot, and i'm trying my best. N >Not knowing what you are meant when you say "It's a bit of a...thing." >You reply. >"I understand that. I was looking for a reason to believe that your beliefs in this matter did not conflict with the truth. Your actions and the truth you seek do." >He leans in to help you and you can see that his hands are wrapped up in his lap. >He seems to feel something on your skin and reaches for you. >Before you can respond, he grabs your wrists in his fingers. >You attempt to resist, but he seems to pull you down. >He begins to slowly drag his hand across your chest. >This is where he starts to pull in deeper and deeper into your body. It looks like you're going to be straining against his free hand. >The hand has been on steady downward for a few minutes now, and he's making sure to keep his hand on your chest, but it is still being pulled. >You can see you can feel things getting wet on his skin. >You try to use your hand to keep yourself dry with your arm, but it's having no success. >Your hand starts to feel wet and you can feel it dripping from your palm. >You try to pull your hand out while he's slowly dragging his hand down your chest. >You can feel that his body is moving up and down. After his hand pulls you down, you feel it start to get wet. >Your hand starts to feel warmer on his skin, and you can hear it on his body. >The hand you pulled out looks like it's being pushed a little, and his hands have been moved out a little. >His hand, and his movements seem somewhat similar to yours. >It looks like he's trying to pull you down a little bit. >He's pulling you up, and it looks like your body is moving up. >You do as you're instructed now, and feel yourself getting wet as he's getting you up. >A little further down, you get a nice change of clothes. >He's using both hands now to try to get you up just as well. >The hand you were using is now inching up to the top. >The hand he used now is rubbing the top of your shirt. >You can see the hand he used to pull you down onto the side of his hand. >He's rubbing your hand over your stomach. > [600 | 567.91] loss=3.56 avg=3.58 [700 | 656.66] loss=3.45 avg=3.56 [800 | 745.44] loss=3.81 avg=3.59 [900 | 834.26] loss=3.12 avg=3.54 [1000 | 922.97] loss=3.76 avg=3.56 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== To you, a man" >Celestia's eyes bulge at you Goddammit. That's what I've found. >Alicorn, a pony, and you >Celestia is not a horse [spoiler]The horse is actually a human.[/spoiler[/spoiler] >Celestia makes a small, yet still very interesting, speech >Celestia "Mmmph" >You make this a point to everyone >everyone listens to your speech, except you >you can't really have too much friends due to all of them having family in Canterlot >but you really like being in Equestria by yourself >[spoiler]You still like being left alone[/spoiler][spoiler]But that's alright, you can have fun with Princess Fluttershy and Twilight and you'll be more socially connected than anyone else.[/spoiler][spoiler;t[spoiler]'s also really cool as fuck.[/spoiler][spoiler]'s for those interested as well if you want it.[/spoiler]'s my dick.[/spoiler][spoiler]"Mmmph"[/spoiler]'s a good one" The only time I have ever seen Pinkie Pie with the Princess of Friendship before was the episode of Starry and Sonata and they were great >All these people trying to get your waifu It's fucking awesome >Implying you are into all that porn >"You'll find out in your sleep, and I can't wait to try." >Pinkie sighs "Yeah, I guess I will sleep now" >Bumping on an unresponsive laptop >It goes "NOOOOO I'M FILLED!" You try to get it out, and your mouth is full of chocolate brown liquid >It has gone "I'M GONNA NEE NOW" you feel as it is slowly falling to the floor >The door opens, and a big girl with green hair walks over to you and kisses you on the lip >You can feel your heart beating in your chest, but the kiss just makes you feel more excited >You quickly kiss back, and you feel more happy than before Now what would you do? >Pinkie and Cadence walk over to your bed >They wrap yourself up and warm you up in their arms >"Hey! Pinkie, what have you been doing out today?" >You nod >"I just thought it would be fun to see you getting some sleep, and I was wondering if you could join me" >You roll your eyes >Cadence nods back >"I thought you were gonna stay on here tonight," >"Okay! No problem! Just sleep for a while, maybe we can do this again later" >"Oh, okay. We should go to our room. I'll get you there." >She gets off the bed and looks at the tv. "We need to watch some show" She puts her hoof to the back of her chair and takes a seat, "What's the show about?" You shake your head >Cadence looks at you, "You didn't like it?" >"I think it was a cartoon that I watched in my house. I got the whole thing on YouTube" >She blinks, and looks at you, "Theres a lot of shows on YouTube. But is it really 'fun' to watch them if you have something you like?" She asks a few days ago >You nod, and sit beside her on your bed, just laying there on your back >She puts her hands on your shoulders, and they are trembling a bit >There are probably a lot of things to watch on TV, but it will only draw you in. >You feel like it can be fun >But it's time to get up >When you get up, you walk down a set of stairs, and head into your room. There are still three books on your shelves, however >You grab one, and read it >Now what would you like? >Anon, on the other hand >You look at her, >She has a bunch of stuff you can collect from her >She has stacks of games and some DVDs "You want me to read these first." >You laugh, and you get her to sit down >You get up, and you take your books in front of you >Now here's the bad news. >It hasn't had a play set available in awhile. "Sure, give me one." I'm gonna go to Equestria and work in a bookshop. N >I guess it did work for you The only time you did a thing that happened and [1100 | 1033.39] loss=3.68 avg=3.57 [1200 | 1122.15] loss=3.46 avg=3.56 [1300 | 1210.94] loss=3.60 avg=3.56 [1400 | 1299.68] loss=3.28 avg=3.54 [1500 | 1388.40] loss=2.93 avg=3.50 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== hasn't your standard one, in which case it's not your fault >you're the idiot who wants an excuse for your lack of a social connection, an excuse that just made you look like a faggot >you're the stupid one who thinks that having a friend for a waifu doesn't make you friends I can understand where you're coming from. Bump I see. I'll post some of my more recent pictures to see what everyone thinks. We've seen some. >"Alright, fine, but heh. Why not? Theres some good art to find. How do you make the rest better?" >the first few questions are directed your way, you're pretty sure someone's already given up on you already >"Not that he'd mind seeing you." The artist said as she took a few last steps, not wanting anything to do with you as well >"Alright let us have a look though. I need you to do a few more shots before the school ends, so it'll help." >you take a look at the remaining ones of the series, mostly because they've never seen your work >but for the most part it'd probably go unnoticed I'll be here with the next ones at least, just not until someone actually says it >not wanting a waifuu I just wanna see some more of it from my waifu. Why doesn't that pic have any wings? I can't see the wing. Even the wings would only end up being part of her torso, but that doesn't make sense... I'm actually fairly happy about this. I think the only reason that you left is to avoid the "I'm sorry for being a fat fuck, you get what you deserved" bullshit that everybody's been going through in these threads. I'm even kinda ashamed that I left because I believed that people didn't want to see something that they liked. >But that won't make you a 'faggot'. Even if I was one of those individuals, that wouldn't matter, since I only became a furry after I changed my waifu. I'd be the first on the team if I said that I wasn't proud about the fact that I'm faggot, but I'd have someone else else believe me, so I'm still up for anything. It should be said that I've grown a lot since then, and don't look at people that don't want to become a faggot just because that is something that you haven't considered. That's just not right >You don't even know that the show is cancelled, so when you think about it, you're surprised that I haven't even remembered you. >You just found that out about Rarity. >But that's no reason to stay upset. >Even though you didn't know at first, you are now extremely certain that you have the facts. >Besides, what does the show look like? >So if Twilight is dead, Rarity becomes an invalid and not a valid parent to her kids. >You are really starting to wonder what is going on, considering I just met up with Twilight as she headed up to see her new brother and sister, and that it was only a matter of time before she made a public statement to Twilight herself. >Well, you are probably right, but if I was her only son, your little brother, why would she say such a thing? >You don't need to know anymore, that is for certain. >At this point, you would do anything to try and save her, but all your attempts to help her have been nothing but that, so you're not going to try to save your sister and Twilight's life. >In the end, that's all that matters, the situation is resolved and Twilight is happy. >"Anon! What is with all the trouble with you?" "It's just the usual, but it's been a little bit of a problem on the internet lately." >"Anon, it's not the internet anymore!" Twilight said as she pointed the way for you. >You point to where you were and hold out your laptop. >You're glad that she didn't look at it from her perch. >If she had, she would have been suspicious when you brought it all the way down to her hooves, but that was never your intent. >I guess that's okay for a while, right? >You turn and stare at her. >She sighs and turns back to the others. >You can't blame her just because you brought it up earlier. >You can't really blame her either, though. >But you have a feeling that whatever your reason may be, she should understand as well. >You're not exactly the best friend either, but you can't deny [1600 | 1499.11] loss=3.71 avg=3.51 [1700 | 1587.84] loss=3.12 avg=3.49 [1800 | 1676.52] loss=3.52 avg=3.49 [1900 | 1765.28] loss=3.14 avg=3.47 [2000 | 1854.02] loss=3.40 avg=3.46 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== him, she can do it all herself. The two do nothing but stand there, and have the other girl talk to each other. Crying into the wall is the closest thing to an end of all things. >You take the glass away from him. >As one hand on the table, you put your other hand where one of the three of them were on. >If a good spell will be cast on me, so be it. >They begin to walk away with a heavy, uneasy silence. >She moves forward, but it goes like clockwork. >The other girl, if a good spell will be cast on me, so be it. You move forward, and keep her close. >The other girl, if a good spell will be cast on her, so be it. >The other girl, if a good spell will be cast on her, so be it. >You walk forward, and keep her close. >The two girls, if a good spell will be cast on them, so be it. >But it's one spell after another, each one more terrifying thanthe others. >They move forward, slowly, but with a certain calmness. >You move forward, and keep her near. >After a long moment of silence, they finally move to the other girl. >The other girl, if a good spell will be cast on her, so be it. 4/12 Bumping because I need to grab some juice I'll be having shortly But they arent allowed by the fans, even though it's obvious The only place I can find them is on youtube and from the pony games or something along those lines. >Trap"Awwww~" >Trap"Sorry I was having a nice time~" >Trap"We have to come to a good agreement~" >Trap"I can not say if I can say, but I am sure we come~" >Trap"Yes~" >Trap"~~~~" >Sitting in between you are 3 other guys, and they are having a really good time. >They get a lot on with their "sex" and all kinds of other shenanigans, and you get a lot on with your "sex" and how you should put your dick in them. >The four of you come to an agreement to get you in bed in the morning and lay in your beds. >If you want, you can tell them that you want to have sex in bed, or you can tell them that you want them to be happy in bed. >Sitting in between you are 3 other guys, and they are having a really good time. >They get a lot on with their "sex" and all kinds of other shenanigans, and you get a lot on with your "sex" and how you should put your dick in them. >Sitting in between you are 3 other guys, and they are having a really good time. >They get a lot on with their "sex" and all kinds of other shenanigans, and you get a lot on with your "sex" and how you should put your dick in them. >The four of you come to an agreement to get you in bed in the morning and lay in your beds. >If you want, you can tell them that you want to have sex in bed, or you can tell them that you want them to be happy in bed. >Sitting in between you are 3 other guys, and they are having a really good time. >They get a lot on with their "sex" and all kinds of other shenanigans, and you get a lot on with your "sex" and how you should put your dick in them. >Sitting in between you are 3 other guys, and they are having a really good time. >They get a lot on with their "sex" and all sorts of other shenanigans, and you get a lot on with your "sex" and how you should put your dick in them. >The four of you come to an agreement to get you in bed in the morning and lay in your beds. >If you wish, you can tell them that you want to have sex in bed, or you can tell them that you want them to be happy in bed. >Sitting in between you are 3 other guys, and they're having a great time. >They get a lot on with their "sex" and all sorts of other shenanigans, and you get a lot on with your "sex" and how you should put your dick in them. >The four of you come to an agreement to get you in bed in the morning and lay in your beds [2100 | 1964.41] loss=3.49 avg=3.47 [2200 | 2053.14] loss=3.55 avg=3.47 [2300 | 2141.89] loss=3.59 avg=3.48 [2400 | 2230.68] loss=3.49 avg=3.48 [2500 | 2319.45] loss=3.58 avg=3.48 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== here's anon you gonna fucking faggot." "No, because I didn't do anything to you." >You smile, before you continue to the kitchen. I think he got a little bit too close to Pinkie, what if? >You open to get a better look at Twilight. >She is staring at you with a face that is completely different from her usual red. >You look down to see her wearing pink. >"Hey, you okay? Who's the last person that doesn't? I was the same way." >"Sorry, I was trying to help Spike." >You start to speak up, only to hear Twilight speak up again, you couldn't imagine. >"What's wrong with that?" "It was all my fault. You were in it too." >"I... Well, it was good." >You stand up, you were getting ready to go to class. "If I can help you, I can help you." >You walk towards the kitchen. >"Well, I know where it is!" >You walk towards the kitchen door, still in the same location. >"Okay, you're going to be the first to thank me for this." >You walk up and pull out the key. >You can't think straight when you get back to class. What sort of a man does something for someone who loves him? >Not wanting to fuck my own sweet little waifu >Not wanting to fuck Dash Fuck off faggot. I'm sorry, I don't know about Fluttercuffs >You've started looking in the drawer again >Nothing >You take out a pair of earrings >You've got to remember these are earrings You will never kiss her >You've got a cup of juice >You were going to, but Twilight started looking at her from the bathroom. >You didn't know how to talk back >You had to "Whelp up?" >You couldn't figure him out for the next month >If you have to tell her, then it's your fault >You can't have an apple for every cup of juice >You started to get out of the bathroom but you found the room was now littered with dishes >A note was left behind in the toilet bowl The room was also now littered with some of the things she loves most in the world. >You came down the hallway to see an empty bowl on the ground, her room was gone This >You walk out the door and head up the stairs. >Twilight is standing by the kitchen door, your bag in hand. >"What an awkward silence then, Anon!" >You take on a different side when you close the door. >"Whew." >Your friend and girlfriend look at each other before turning their attention to you. >"Anon! Anon and Dash are out for a walk." >You are a little startled at her voice as you both close the door to your little home. You want your life to end tonight Anon. You want to tell Dash to go to her room It's about fucking that one girl... Yeah, it's about being a bad guy... >you'll be in bed every night until she wakes up >You're having a great time It was like you were being led to believe there were only two sides. It has nothing to do with my opinions or comments. If I don't write, you are a bad person. This is a good thing. [spoiler]You're not even allowed to use your ID and you can't use your username and password[/spoiler] I'm still not sure, but I wouldn't mind if the ponies were still loyal or if they turned on their friends as well. And we should think of Dash getting the boot for it, so long as it means Anon won't be in Ponyville anymore. He'll be gone forever! They'll need to find another filly. But I'm glad he'll get out of Dash, Anon! I'll take a seat, If you get me a seat I'll take a seat, And if you start shitting on you, you're a bitch, anon, you're probably gonna be in all your fucking way. >I'm not trying to go up in the night It's true you're the worst one of all, Anon! A long time I've had the pleasure of seeing you all so sad, and so full of shit! I know when you are going through something, it'll be so much better if you sit down and shut all down. I know when it's too late, Anon! Maybe it [2600 | 2430.56] loss=3.67 avg=3.49 [2700 | 2519.36] loss=3.28 avg=3.48 [2800 | 2608.12] loss=3.29 avg=3.47 [2900 | 2696.90] loss=3.44 avg=3.47 [3000 | 2785.64] loss=3.45 avg=3.47 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== you've done, your mind is back on what's right. "Ah, you've done well, then. I still have some time." She smiles at you, not a little bit to appear in that state. She is just there to be noticed. Or maybe she is just enjoying her break from her usual routine of going through her day. >Aria is staring at you like she's getting ready to ask what you are going to do on it, but that feels like she's in a hurry to get to work. "Well uh... I'm glad you have the opportunity to visit me again, dear." >You shake your head. This is quite unexpected coming from your sweet princess. "You too, Aria. I've always been worried you could be of use to us." "Of course?" Well it's really a good thing you're so much more than a friend, your father is so cool. N bastard who is this guy a cuddle [spoiler]What has the universe in general done to piss off this board so far, anon?[/spoiler] Not every Anon is a cuddle fetishist though I think it's worth an additional post if you're interested. >The smell of stale food on the back deck. "What is with all this food?" >The smell of rotting meat on the grill. "It's just me doing all these weird things and eating a little too much food and that's all I want to get out of it." >You rub your face and look up at him. You smile and look down at it. It's a little bit of everything from a little to a lot. "Yeah... I just always have my weird eating habits." >You shrug. "Not that it stops being weird." >He shrugs even before you notice his change of expression. You have your own point! >The smell of stale food on the grill >Not every asshole will be so cuddly, but that's the point of going to college. You know? >Even then, don't you think you may be a little bit of a freak with a mouthful of food. >"I'm trying not to put on my pants, Anon." >He shakes his head, but it's clear it hurts. "Sorry, it's just... that's not how I do it." >He sighs. "You're not supposed to." You can't say that anymore I'm glad I wrote this story. >that faggot http://www.equestriadaily.com/2015/08/28/what-is-it-with-this-filly-sensation-when-she-makes-she-nails-pony-pony-pony-pony-nails/ I agree That is what he was actually looking for "Ah, that's cool." "I was just asking if you could help me take care of this dragon's problems." "Aye, so are you a dragon? Why, yes. I'm that way for one day. That's it really." We're now on record, and you probably shouldn't be around to read it on a day/night basis. >Not the one that was stuck in the middle of the sky, who'd never want to see me fall for a pony. >Never see me act like that, so why did it hurt, to be in the same situation as everyone else. >Have never ever really been in this situation before. >Never come to this realization. >Even have someone that is not a dragon have come to your place and helped you with what you'd been going through." Yeah that was it >You stare at Anon like he's a child. >You feel like you've fallen for a mare, just waiting when the time comes. >The girl is just there to be noticed by you. She smiles at her and she is just there to be noticed. "Well, that's it, you're done for one week. We'll have another go then." "Yes, I will have you know, don't you ever have a bad time. We should be having our next round when this is all over, and you'll be back." >Anon just stares at the ceiling while you look at the two of them. "Just as well, if you like, we'll have another round next season then?" >He smiles a little bit. "Well, sure." >You both nod, and you hug your parents and sit down and play a little. Boom. Now it's real >Anon and Dash both look at you with a [3100 | 2896.24] loss=1.56 avg=3.40 [3200 | 2984.93] loss=3.67 avg=3.41 [3300 | 3073.68] loss=2.58 avg=3.38 [3400 | 3162.37] loss=3.27 avg=3.38 [3500 | 3251.09] loss=3.12 avg=3.37 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== Yeah you're not fucking stupid, he has his own thread >she's a horsefucker I think you'll see soon enough. Good work anon I bet the man behind them would be a pony Bump The second one is good if you don't go all rape. [spoiler]I'm not a pony but I'd fucking eat her[/spoiler] [spoiler]But then it'd be a pony. Like with apples, like that apple thing [/spoiler] Good question anon. I don't usually go for stories where a character does something that feels like the next scene is the opening section of the story. They tend to just go for one or two shots and then it's done. Good job anon. Bump >It's the one on the left. There's literally nothing wrong with that one. >In an alternate universe with a bunch of pony kids, what kind of kids? Yes. Pony kids. >You are a horsefucker. >You should not go all rape. Filly can't even ride. >The third one is good if you don't go all rape They don't play that trope. We were all riding. They are clearly playing with fire. Also, I think you can see where you're coming from. It's more to point out that we're not pretending the original universe had a different life. This was created solely through our collective efforts. [spoiler]I would do it but I am too lazy to do it.[/spoiler] >Why did they do it anyway I think it's because they found out the second, and third, part of the first arc's plotline had something to do with the first arc's plotline. So they wanted to give more incentive to the audience with the third arc. The fact is that for the most of the series to reach its conclusion, there were enough conflicts with the comic that it was necessary to extend it in a way that it wasn't compromised just because it was good but it wasn't necessarily the only option to the end. So I assume that the same is true for every story. In fact, we have to consider a lot of different factors when it comes to our choices and what we think the audience wants to see. There are a lot of people that have more or less accepted us as a whole as canon and have been happy with the canon so long as it's in a way that has been kept under wraps for us. And, of course, then there are those fans who don't. There are a lot of people we have yet to talk about because we aren't canon, or that we're working on canonically. I think what's really important to consider with this is what the fans really want and who they actually want. The people who actually write stuff to put us in the fandom want to write stuff that they truly think we'd be good at. And if that means putting some parts of it into the show, that means that we have to accept that we might not all be what we're made for as writers. We can be good at what we do. We only have good taste. Of course, we can always agree to a certain degree. And as long as we don't have a lot of people who think that way and don't feel like we're canon, then we wouldn't be accepted. But I'm just suggesting something that will cause that to change at least somewhat. I can appreciate the argument, but the point is that everyone has to get off their asses if they want to get on this horse. N N Yeah I was thinking... But we all know what we're going to do with the manticore. I just don't find it at least I'd have to keep looking for somewhere else to do the work. I am a horsefucker then. I know where I'd be right now if this thread was still going at the same time! N And they should let their own thread do the heavy lifting. I just didn't think it would. I'm sorry. As much as I hate to say it, I think I've improved. So... What the fuck do you think a horse is wearing N >you will never hear from Fluttershy and she's a slut as well I think that's it, anon is on the way >tfw you are a little too sensitive You're one step above that person who is upset that you can't see through your ass >Anon's mom She's probably the one. "Well...I guess I'd be up for it too." >Anon, you didn't have much time this morning either. Why should you rush [3600 | 3361.43] loss=3.07 avg=3.36 [3700 | 3450.11] loss=3.23 avg=3.35 [3800 | 3538.85] loss=3.27 avg=3.35 [3900 | 3627.66] loss=3.24 avg=3.35 [4000 | 3716.48] loss=2.95 avg=3.34 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== . >The smell of raw meat still fills you a strong enough to pass to get a glimpse of her. >You lift your head slightly closer and peer into her. >You see her sitting at a table surrounded by various weapons and a bunch of glass bottles full of what looked like some sort of liquor. >You lift your other hand and hold it in front of her face, her eyes darting between the weapons. "Look. Where's the booze?" >She stops, eyes locked to yours. >"It goes on at the end. It's just that I want to see all of them together." So, it's a story with Dash taking up a sword and getting it destroyed, and she finally meets an end with a sword. I'm going to need some more. >The other boy didn't have a problem. >His face was glowing as he walked back and forth to see the other kids, as if in a trance. >You had to keep your eyes away from his as he looked back at you. "What is that?" >He had just finished running out of the room as he got ready for his next step. >The door open slowly as Twilight walks out of the back. >This time the pony took a few steps back as she stared at you. >"I'd thought I'd see him... But I guess they've been looking for me." >You look at Twilight, and you both feel your cheeks burn. "What?" >"I mean the others... They'll think I'm a thief if I do that." So... How come? >The other student stood up and opened the door. >Twilight was still staring at you as he walked out of the room. >You felt your mouth open slightly and take a moment to stare at your sister. >You were only thinking of the little details about her. >Twilight seemed to be really happy in making it. >She had no way of being happy. >It was not until you heard about this that you came to realize the power she had given you. >You had been here to do exactly whatever? >To get free? >What else was there? >The questions that lingered inside your mind. >How could she ever ask you questions? >She had been doing this to you for as long as you could remember. >You knew it was something you wanted to know more about. >You hadn't noticed the things she'd asked you before, but now there was so much information in front of you. >Twilight did have a good reason... >She had asked you questions about yourself. "When was that?" >She seemed a bit sad - you remember she hadn't been this happy after all. >"How did I do?" "Why didn't she tell you anything about the past. Didn't she tell you? >You shrugged her off. "I figured... You figured you'd want to know it anyway." >She smiled and crossed her arms. "Well... It was a long story." >You couldn't help but chuckle at the moment. >"My friends... My cousins!" >"Oh my." >Twilight was looking at you with a look of absolute content. >"You remember your brothers?" >You looked down at her; you had never seen her, but in that moment of reflection she was a little bit less. >You gave a small smile. "My family's been here for the longest, and it's really nice to have them around. >You had wanted to introduce her friends... >"Oh, it's been so long... I... I guess you get a hard enough time..." >You shrugged again. "I remember when I was a child" >"Well, you could look at me and say that they all look so... I-I'm sorry about being away. But..." >The words were out. >You didn't remember much of your family until now... >A memory? >"But you remember the first time you met me. How you looked when I was born?" >The blush had all but melted away as you looked at her. "Well... We were together like six months. >You both hugged for a long while as the door opened and a few children came out. >"Well how's little sister?" >Twilight looked on in amusement for the moment. >"She's cute!" >You blinked at her with a grin. "I don't know." >She shrugged as you looked down and stared at the ground beneath you. >"So you had a cute little brother, huh?" >You nodded and looked back to her. "I.. I guess." >Her lips were a [4100 | 3826.77] loss=3.48 avg=3.34 [4200 | 3915.52] loss=3.14 avg=3.33 [4300 | 4004.28] loss=3.48 avg=3.34 [4400 | 4092.98] loss=3.26 avg=3.34 [4500 | 4181.70] loss=3.34 avg=3.34 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== as▒ And you don't get it! This is a very important and vital decision and it is going to be made on the basis of who you love and how you choose to interact with her. You need to be honest about that and be honest for yourself first. If not for her then for her children. For example, if you are gay, you must love her, but if you are bi you must love her child as well. I'm sorry Anon. I'm too tired to go to sleep tonight. Hopefully you'll know me well enough later today. I got your back. I'd love to see more of this kind of thing. It's one thing to play games, another thing else to write. >You need a special password to unlock the door. >Aww... >You look at the door and look down at the two of them in confusion. >Ain't a good time for some new, funtime. >The two gryphons look back at the door and look up at you. >You walk over to them and slide open the door. >They give each other a brief but sweet smile in return or just stare at each other. >They wave before moving their seats across the room to their respective stalls. >You hear the sound of passing cars and some loud, booming noises coming from behind it. >You turn around to see Twilight and Sunbun sitting against the wall, holding her arms. >She looks up at you. "Oh hey. Anon." >You turn back to see Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo waiting for a different car. >The three of them are staring at eachother. >"Oh hey, Anon. Nice evening. How are you today?" >She looks up at you. >"Huh?" >The two of them turn their eyes to the car and wait. >"Howdy, Anon! How do you wanna go?" >She looks out the window to see a couple cars, two on one side and a bunch of other cars on the other. "Yeah. Why don't you grab the first one?" >"Oh I've got a car there, and it's yours!" "What!" >"You got me a car too!" "So, how about that?" >"The second one?" >Twilight looks around the room. "Ya got nothing on me, or any of the others?" >Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo look at eachother. "I see not." >She looks at you. >"It's yours." >You give a thumbs up to the other. "You're going to take care of me too?" >"Ya got it. Now I'm waiting." >You turn around and see this time, Scootaloo is sitting beside you. "Here, have yourself a seat." >She trots by and sits next to you. >Her big, soft, soft, beautiful, warm ass sits on your lap. >She's wearing a pink tank top. >It's a little too small for her, but it still looks like that. "Here you go, Big Mac." >You push open the door and they walk across the room, a small smile on their face. I want to be in a gangstered game with these four ponies It looks fun on Android and it's pretty fun on iOS. >I don't have a waifu and I wouldn't fuck it unless you're making her a good time. >implying that's a bad thing I hope you're still alive and have some fucking hot-ass babes to fuck. [spoiler]She was a great friend, for better or worse and she knows too much about you and so much about her time that she won't tell you, for a really obvious reason.[/spoiler] >I mean, that's not what makes you a great guy, is it what you stand up for? >The only way to tell her you stand up for nothing is to let her know and then to continue standing up for her. >She doesn't want to stand up for herself and so has to be the guy who stands up for others. >Yeah but I mean, you had to have at least stood up with her before you got her, right? >So you don't really have that baggage, right? >If I went after the guy that stood up for her but I'd have to tell the truth behind what I stand up for and who I stand up for? I think this one had a lot more red underblouse art than the pic of the first one You're fucking shit. I can't take the bait. If you really were your father's waifu, then why [4600 | 4292.16] loss=3.51 avg=3.34 [4700 | 4380.90] loss=2.74 avg=3.33 [4800 | 4469.66] loss=3.02 avg=3.32 [4900 | 4558.40] loss=2.67 avg=3.30 [5000 | 4647.14] loss=3.38 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== to the last minute to ensure you're doing what's best for you and your family. It might sound a bit strange to know so few people actually have an idea, but you might be wrong. You were right about this time period. If you were here today you would have had an idea by now, but you were a bit skeptical. I hope someday this will be true. Anyway, I'd like to take a look at where your story went. It's pretty much at a complete stop in a long time, so what makes you think it will take such long? We could talk about it. Perhaps, if you want, one of us will take a look at the story for you. >not liking to be near a girl for her own sexual gratification (I don't mean that in a physical way. Don't make me go back to making sure every one of her fetishes goes off in our room.) >not liking to be near a girl for her own sexual satisfaction (I don't mean that in a physical way. Don't make me go back to making sure every one of her fetishes goes off in the room.) If you want my permission to touch you, just say so, or just leave. N N >No one does this in real life >no >it's your life >not that of a woman who buys a cat This >Implying >Im actually working on a story right now that I'm sure people will like. >That's good enough for me anyways. N I really don't appreciate this. Why did you have to lie? >that one moment where you were doing the same job >that very instant after you turned in to Anon >it was only like 45 minutes later >he'd probably been working for 3 and a half hour >after a bit of work on the phone you'd probably be over at him N N N I was supposed to do a thing with my little brother a bit ago. We had a little chat about the show. There was some stuff i like, i think thats it. I just wanna tell him to stay on, and when he gets done, I have a bit of a story. Anyways, if anyone wants more Twilight stories, i'd be happy to throw in any of her That shit is great too. >you will never get to have a baby with a woman >you will never be able to raise a child in your family >you will NEVER be a mother to your children >you will never ever have a family >you will never be a mother yourself >and you will never have the joy of growing old and beautiful in all the glory of your own, with a family >and you will never be blessed with the love your heart desires >for I will never let you be alone with one of your own >never even meet your child and let them be >Never have a baby with your own >Ever >ever >in all the glory of the throne >even if it comes to pass you will never ever make love to my child >that is so precious >I will never let you grow old and sad and be in the place of the one who loves you, >and your children will never grow up and become their mother [spoiler]but who would be more than happy to take care of them, my child or my wife?[/spoiler] >mfw i was born in the morning >mfw i'm waiting >mfw now that I'm almost dead there's nothing left to do >mfw i'm waiting >mfw i'm not even in bed with you, and i'm not in the bedroom with you >mfw i don't even know your last name >mfw i'm waiting >mfw you tell me what's a little boy, and i tell you what's a little girl B-BUT WAIT A FEW MINS, B-BUT I'M JUST AS LONELY AS YOU LEAN IN A LION AND STAYIN IN A LONELY, I'M JUST WISH SOMEONE ELSE HAD A LIFE AND I'VE NEVER BEEN SO LONIDDIN'S NUTTERY GAYl >I know you're just trying to put a bad name on your work >but please... >the fact that people keep telling you to work for your boss has to come from somewhere >the fact the fact you work for your boss is your "job" isn't necessarily wrong >I could've told her that, but no I wouldn't >instead, you're not only wasting precious sleep trying to figure out what my wife wants with her life, but she's also not giving you your own money [5100 | 4757.45] loss=3.14 avg=3.30 [5200 | 4846.18] loss=3.32 avg=3.30 [5300 | 4934.96] loss=3.39 avg=3.30 [5400 | 5023.64] loss=3.42 avg=3.30 [5500 | 5112.37] loss=3.41 avg=3.31 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== P▓ and a little mixtape. http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=jWyB5K3uV3A >Not in the first place if they had one of the many other names >That does not get much play. You do not have to be in Equestria for that to happen! But if Celestia wants to make it, why not let us be her? It is too important. I like it as well. bump Yes, but the only one without hair. I'm glad I'm not the only one who was offended by that "bitch" joke. He's not a bitch. Well it's not that surprising. I'm just saying, for the sake of argument, the show is a bad comic from the very beginning because it just doesn't add anything to Celestia or her story. She is the most interesting character because she is the only human in the show that does not relate to the main characters much. As far as I can see, not the case here. If you look at the main 6, her main personality is her being very introspective, but she also has a crush on Luna, and Celestia is like the most open-minded, friendly, and kind of normal person, Luna being the best example. It's not really a bad thing, unless I think you mean the ponies that were killed. The most notable being Chrysalis and Chrysalis's sister. The only character you listed that seemed to be a better character and one I really liked is Twilight. She is the epitome of the "cute, innocent princess" that could happen to Twilight when she thinks about them. >you will never help a friend in this situation >your friends will never save a friend. Yes... >The three men arrive to see Celestia seated in a throne room. >They are greeted respectfully >"Hello there. We are Anonymous and his three companions, and we brought to you the gift of the Elements of Harmony." The trio replies simultaneously. >Sapphire Glue's head turns as he's approached >"We have been given these items due to our friendship with you. The Elements of Harmony are magical artifacts of some sort that are created by the Queen, however, we have requested that they be given here by the Queen herself. The items were given to us by our friend, the Princess, and we are currently at work to make them as they are." I'm gonna go for a gulp. I just can't get rid of it. This makes no sense, though. The only reasonable alternative would be to kill them. Well, I think I could really use this. >you will never put your dick in a unicorn's pussy and use it to fuck her senseless >you will never make her cry >she will never be so happy that you've made her cry >you will never fuck your new waifu a luna will never like you >you will never be able to find love. the only possible way to find love is through a waifu >you will never be able to make her cry >you will never fuck her senseless >You will never find love >You will never find love >You will never find love >The only possible way to find love is through a waifu >You will never find love >the only thing you will ever be able to do is fuck her senseless I don't like him at all, he's just a shitty pony. >no wings >no hooves. >"Well, what can I use you for?" I have a dream about having my wings >that was a joke I made up and I would never give a fuck >I was never going to have my dreams >but I wanted to have dreams so I made them >I would take the train >have dreams without waking up, sleep without waking up... >"Good. Here is your room. We'll watch a few episodes." >I was never going to let my dreams die to me! >I would live in my dreams, live them all over again. This is the kind of ass that I'm going to have to be on a regular basis, Anon. "Yeah I heard that before, actually." >He looks at you with an eyebrow. "Really? You really think that?" >You laugh at his laugh. "Well, I always knew that. The whole... I-it seems really silly, even." >He's getting angry. >"Really?!" >You look at a large, fat, balding hand with what looks to be a pair of big, round, very sharp teeth and he gets in your face. "Heh, you are making fun of me, anon." 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That would be fine, it's just not mine. >In a flash the door slides open, she is immediately aware of the two ponies in waiting >As she walks forward she takes hold of her jacket, pulls out her book from its clasp, and carefully looks around >Her friends are standing there looking like they were waiting for her >She realizes them aren't waiting for her, her friend, they're looking at her as if she's some kind of crazy insane mad scientist >She smiles to herself, then looks at the ponies to find the ones just staring at her >After a second she walks over to them and hugs them, trying to comfort them >But they keep staring >She finally breaks down, her face bright red and pained looking and trying to do as much as she can to comfort them >Before leaving the hospital it takes her a moment to process what just happened >It all goes to shit when she realizes what's going on her friend >As she walks through the hallway towards the bedroom, the night turns green >Suddenly the light from the room shimmers and turns yellow, and a sudden burst of flames erupts around you >You get a bad look at what just happens next, that's too funny for words >Laying on your back, you can almost see the pink flames that surround you >One of the flames jumps you and you let out a surprised squeak, you don't understand why, but you just jump >You hear a loud bang before another burst of flames bursts from between your legs and you stand >A blue flame erupts into a ball around you and engulfs you completely, engulfing everything that you touch >One of the two flames surrounds your tail, and it explodes just as fast as it does >At the same time, you feel your back burn from the sudden flash and your tail explodes just as it did after >You can't see your tail, so when you look up you see that it's engulfed in blue flames >You hear some sort of noise that echoes into the night, it's just a loud cracking sound >The sound of the burning is all around you and you're being pushed down the hall before you even try to make a turn >You start to panic, the flames around you in the darkness make everything feel like it's on fire and your body explodes as it takes hold of the flame >You get blasted backwards and you feel a burning pain in your back >You try to reach to your back to try and get out of the burning that engulfs your body >No luck, it just keeps growing and burning on top of your tail and it's growing around your tail >You feel the blue flames growing bigger and hotter and faster, and you try to push down on the fire of your tail, but it's burning harder as you make it out of the burning >Your friends and the ponies around you walk over to what was burning and hold their forelegs in front of you >The burn is still there, burning you and spreading up around you, it's very visible now and it makes your tail explode. It didn't even have a scratch on it >You reach down and rub your muzzle, it's burned red, it is burning like hell >You try to get at it, but you're stuck in the burning of your tail >As you come back up to your hands, trying to get some of it off, you make a loud popping noise and a flame bursts from it and goes out >You feel a flash and suddenly your tail explodes >Then it burns all around you and burns into a pink ball >You feel numbness and pain everywhere, so you can't take it >But you don't want to be stuck there, so you slowly turn your tail around >You can't get it off, so you try to use your hands to put it down >You can't >You try to grab the thing that [6100 | 5688.48] loss=3.59 avg=3.31 [6200 | 5777.28] loss=3.41 avg=3.31 [6300 | 5866.16] loss=3.55 avg=3.32 [6400 | 5954.88] loss=3.25 avg=3.32 [6500 | 6043.69] loss=3.46 avg=3.32 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== raging's and the other a lot of its own, but in its own way we can't complain that you couldn't make more of an interesting character if you just stuck your dick into the ass. We have enough ass-slapping and dick-staring with your name as you're probably going to find. I don't know how much time I could probably get away with that without getting into trouble again and for that I'm sorry. I'm pretty sure all those new kids in school can learn by doing. >I think I can safely say there's a lot of potential in [spoiler]the show and the show itself, and all three are great characters, but I would not give up on them[/spoiler] Oh hell no. >You will never be forced into a relationship you weren't prepared for. >I want to fuck Twilight Sparkle and then I want sex with Twilight Sparkle. You are not welcome here >you will never make a friend through your words i will never have sex with her [spoiler]as long as i can physically touch her[/spoiler] what the fuck >implying youre not in the minority bump What the fuck. There are people posting on twitter that use the term "nigga" that the show would have some kind of connection to? You mean just make a picture that was photoshopped onto a pony and post the pic and people will buy it as if it's real? What the fuck are you on? >Dubs show >Trying to look at a picture without seeing it first I can only hope. [spoiler]I can't blame the show for having that problem in its show. That's one thing that a show about MLP does not have, aside from being funny.[/spoiler] >that bump Pony says if you look at her and say "I love you, but can no longer look at you..." and try to look away, she will say "It's okay, just don't look at me." >You have a few more words, the one you're really nervous about. "I-it's... it's actually a really good... deal!" >You smile and try a hoof out. "Thanks!" >She runs off like a madman. >Oh, she ran off again. >You feel so weak. >You look up, in the sky above you, and see a cloud coming in. >You don't like this feeling anymore. >It feels so... wrong. >This feeling, like your own feeling. >Right there is a feeling like "there's something wrong." >It looks like a strange face, a face that looks up at you and makes some kind of face. >You roll your shoulders, trying to keep your eyes open. >Suddenly, you see that face. >"Hey! Anon, what's up?" >You look at the sky. >You see a purple colored cloud hovering above the clouds. >The pony, as if in a sort of 'what the fuck?' sort of way. >"What's up? Can't you see that? Do you see anything out there?" "No." >She sighs, and her voice grows serious. >It's one of exasperation. >"If I have nothing to do with the cloud, and it is the only reason for the clouds, then you'll have this feeling wrong. This feeling won't go away unless you do something. Don't do this." "What if I just have something I CAN do?" >A strange look crosses her face. >"No idea, but it's nice to know that someone else can do something about it." >Something you hadn't expected. "Then... how am I supposed to do something?" >"Look on the moon!" >You look around, and all you see is nothing but stars. >She seems to notice that at least something on the moon has been discovered. >She says to you, "Hey there, Anon." 2/4 >You sit back and try not to cry. >A cold glass of champagne, a few bottles of wine and a can of hard cider have taken up the space you had been trying to get so. >There was this one bottle of cider that had been sitting on the table for quite some time. >You hadn't been able to make it of your own accord. >A bottle was empty and staring at you. "You... are... crazy." >"... we... we all have a little something to do." >The two of them sit next to each other for a moment. >Finally, they start, >"We... need some help." > [6600 | 6155.40] loss=3.71 avg=3.33 [6700 | 6244.39] loss=3.66 avg=3.33 [6800 | 6333.38] loss=3.29 avg=3.33 [6900 | 6422.39] loss=2.96 avg=3.33 [7000 | 6511.31] loss=3.28 avg=3.32 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== , >the air is sweet >you and Twilight are lying in bed the only sound in the room you could hear is a quiet breathing coming from the bed >you are so horny this can't get any more intense >you take off your pants and underwear with Twilight and pull down your underwear with her >Twilight stops and gasps for breath as you go to take off your shirt >it turns you and your hot, sweaty, cum-filled semen balls slapping against each other's hot, warm, smooth lips >as they slowly rise, you start to get up out of bed >now that you're both up, it's finally time for Twilight to go to sleep >just as she is about to go on, an idea pops into her head >the idea being how you both are going to make an epic ass of yourself right before the girls all go to sleep >since they know you are both going to get in their bed tonight, it gives you both a chance to spend some quality time doing something you've been wanting to try out in quite some time before >instead of sleeping in a comfy bed, you have decided to just cuddle together until the next time you both sleep at the same time I don't know. I mean, I want her to be happy in the mornings, but I know when it's going to die down she's going to look to me for comfort. I mean, I don't know what she's expecting, and in the end, I want to know how she'll think of her new friends after they see her naked and have the courage to ask her out. But, Twilight is probably right, I'm always a bit more of a faggot than she is. I mean, who wouldn't?! But, I just want her to know I'm a normal person to her, so we can make this a very productive relationship, and just don't ever go to sleep at the same time. And yeah, I still have my issues. I'm the kind of guy who would make an "off to bed" statement if I was in bed with her right now. Yes, I would But that's kind of why she's here. We'd be a lot more comfortable if she just had me by the balls. But I mean, we would have a whole life together and our relationship would be going strong as fuck. I'll just make it my business to do all kinds of shit. I love her like a wife. She just makes me horny when she's alone, and her eyes on me. So... I'll just try to be the best guy in the world. >She cuddles up to you with a big smile >"That's it? You're ready for this, aren't you?" My dick [spoiler]and maybe more[/spoiler]. >mfw she gets mad at me because I'm gay >mfw she doesn't care I want to see her in a compromising position. She knows that. We wouldn't have sex. >that post on /mlp/ I can not. I can't. I want this to happen and I want it to happen RIGHT NOW. This. I'm so lonely at night. I wonder what's happening at the moment. I wonder if they're all doing some kind of "bimbo action" in the night? >Rape Anon >I am ready >rape >rape >rape >rape >rape >rape >rape >rape >rape >rape I want to see Anon being raped. I want to see him be raped by Twilight. I want to see him being taken over by my dick. I want to see him being raped by Pinkie. I want to see him be raped by Rainbow. I want to see him being raped by Fluttershy. I want to see a rape scene in my head happening, or just seeing the scene happening. I want to hear another girl being raped by her rapist. I want to see a rape scene in the bedroom. I want to see her raped by her rapist. I want a rape scene happening somewhere, on the bed. So she's thinking of me for some reason. >implying it isn't this thread Well, that was fast. This whole thing took forever to write. >implying I don't have a very small dick Oh... well. This is a thing, you get a life or another. It was pretty, I guess >implying a man isn't a sexual deviant This guy is the true one >he gets angry [7100 | 6622.87] loss=2.67 avg=3.31 [7200 | 6711.91] loss=3.32 avg=3.31 [7300 | 6800.95] loss=2.83 avg=3.30 [7400 | 6889.93] loss=2.78 avg=3.29 [7500 | 6978.87] loss=3.44 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== and I wish I was able to play the old console games before their arrival. I played some classic SNES titles back in 2013, and it could've been really cool to put the SNES title on a platform that didn't support it. I've already got a Wii U hooked in. My waifu is going to end up being a shit and I'm sure I will have some shit in my head about that. N >That guy behind the counter >he said "I'm sorry but we can't have you doing this stuff" >he said "you have nothing to do with making decisions about this stuff, right?" >throws up his fucking phone >he starts laughing >says he was never like that >he knows what he's done >he knows he's not like that >he's just making us look bad >he wants to look bad but he doesn't >he knows we look bad >he knows we look bad >he knows that we look bad >he starts laughing >he says >"I know it was just a joke." >he says >"I'll get you next month" >he gets a phone call from the salesponies >"this is Anonymous now" >he says "hey" >he says "goodbye" >he hangs up You have been a part of MY heart since you first laid eyes on the princess. You've taken into consideration her own needs. You know she loves you, but she cannot accept that you care only for her. I know you're a noble, innocent princess, but you cannot be evil or do anything for a pony. She will live only for her friends and her subjects. I know that you must want to protect them, but if they are taken from you, your own children will suffer. You are a queen, but this is a crown I took from a pony, for power. If the ponies are taken from you, you will live on your own. The true king is always yours, Anon! But it is not like that. If you want power, then that's fine. >tfw a female character has a boyfriend It's like [spoiler]futa[/spoiler] but to be more accurate, they're just a couple of friends. As much as she's used to it from the start, she still manages to accept that Twilight may not be the best pony at best and is fine with it. She will be okay with a change eventually though. They are actually pretty good at not screwing things up. They seem to just let things roll. I've seen some ponies fail to get along and end up killing themselves. That isn't to mention that Spike seems to still be learning the basics. She's pretty much a rookie. Not a veteran, just a beginner. I still want Rainbow Dash to get into it because I think being in on someone else's head for so long is pretty fun. Even in a story that was supposed to be about Dash, I'd still go in. I really enjoy writing her. I guess what I'm saying is that I think that Twilight is one of the really cool writers, really doing something new on her characters, and that makes me feel like I know just where I'm going. Honestly, if I knew all this stuff about them from the beginning, I would have just put down the mic and shut up. >She says he said not to ask unless he has something personal to say/show-off, he's already asked me about it. >"Hey!" >she says as she comes over to a random seat. >She walks over to the front and says "How do you think they can't just talk about stuff that's on their radar?" >He says >"Well, if they're doing something, they'd have to give us a heads up." "Uh, okay then. We'll see you later." >She says as she gets to her seat >you'll see her tomorrow. if not, it's ok. she's the same person you know from the past week anyway. >what is best episode? i dunno, but it just seemed so really good. >You realize your face is sweating. >A few times have you passed out from crying. >"Anon!" >Rumble says. "Rumble, you okay?" >"Y-Yeah, just got up." >You get closer to him and say "Did you really get so emotional about that? I thought you would be the nicest and most understanding friend." >"Oh yes I did. It was just a little joke. I meant to say sorry." "Hey look at me, I'm not that bad." Your words are interrupted [7600 | 7090.70] loss=3.33 avg=3.30 [7700 | 7179.69] loss=3.50 avg=3.30 [7800 | 7268.72] loss=3.08 avg=3.30 [7900 | 7357.76] loss=3.13 avg=3.29 [8000 | 7446.78] loss=2.79 avg=3.28 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== are but I guess that's what makes her stand out even more. I can probably just copy past this shit if my computer doesn't have any problems Is it a good idea to put them on this ship? >T: "That is a nice line, I'll give you that. I hope you can." "I will take it and you will tell. See?" >"Thanks, Anon. I had nothing on you personally, but I suppose there must be something for me to accomplish with this..." "I'd love to have her over for dinner as well. Perhaps a little bit in between meals. >"I see. Well... I shouldn't be surprised you won't be able to make it. >You turn away from the wall behind you and walk towards the doors. There's little security against the guards here. You're basically guessing the situation here for yourself... >Well, that's a big problem. >You can't just... say "no." >There's so much shit up here that the guard doesn't feel threatened. >... >... >... >... >.. >What could you hope to accomplish with any of this? >... >... >I never once said what I would do... >.."We're here to say 'no.'" >I... I don't know. >I don't know what I would do to... if a guard on duty came here. "Okay, I can understand you not wanting to do anything here... but how would you actually take the throne? I mean, who is this 'Princess'. Who is this royalty?" >"Princeship..." >... >You're not sure what to say. >The guard looks around. >"Princess Celestia?... I guess that's not important. What's on?" "Uh uh... I guess I would like some privacy in the Palace. You wouldn't mind?" >"Yes, darling. Of course. I know how much of a biggie that is." "Well... it's an opportunity. I'd rather not try to sneak in or out without paying." >You sigh. "Okay, fine.. but I would need more security there for one." >She chuckles. >"Alright, but it's important." >... "How do you think I got that high?" "...Well, if you were to get in and out like this normally..." >You stare out the window, and you see a faint blue streak. "Well, I'm in. Is it just a thing?" "No-uh-uh." >The guard nods. >It's then like you're inside the house as the guards slowly emerge, and enter the room. >And there's a door. >Huh. >They can see you. >The guards pull one of the guards into the room. >They lock them inside a door. >They then quickly leave. >You turn to the princesses. >You and the guard. >You think about your options. >You could use them. >You're going to do this. >You don't want to think about what to do at the time. >But you have something to do at the moment. >You want to make sure that if anything happens to the princesses while you're under their protection, you'll be a hero. >Or, to be exact. >And you're not sure if you'll have the courage to say so. "Is that so hard for two royal guards to take the Princess's crown with them?" >... >But you have to be brave with her. >Or else she'll turn on you... [spoiler]Ponies will be the main characters of this story[/spoiler] [spoiler]Fucking yeah.[/spoiler] >Mfw I don't have a waifu because I don't want to be a pathetic loser. N N >tfw I can imagine Rarity as a little filly Why do you keep trying it again? >"Aww, Pinkie, what's that? It's so cute!" He's so perfect, I'd give him a kiss to see him happy in my face. Bump. >tipping Oh god my ass if this were about ponies. >It's all over the whole screen. >As the guard pulls out a revolver, he holds it up and pulls the trigger. >"Muh gun!" >The bullet lands somewhere outside the window. >A few seconds later, the guard pulls it out and starts to close the window. >Then suddenly, the screen freezes. >"MURDER! Murder! Murder [8100 | 7558.35] loss=3.24 avg=3.28 [8200 | 7647.36] loss=3.50 avg=3.29 [8300 | 7736.46] loss=2.81 avg=3.28 [8400 | 7825.48] loss=3.61 avg=3.28 [8500 | 7914.52] loss=3.69 avg=3.29 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== . >"I'm not one of those people who tries to get in too much of your face," >"I get it." >"Hey, you're an idiot." >"I'll have the mop dry and get some soap. After that, what else are you going to do with all of this?" >You sit up and stare at Trixie in disbelief. >You look down at a piece of the cake, and immediately feel a bit of shame. >You don't think you'll make it again... >At the end of the day you're not gonna win a bet with that little shit "So, how's your dad?" >"Uh..." "Your dad's a big hero." >"Thank You...I wish to be of service to You." >"That's...a good thing." >You smile and lean back in the cushy couch. >You close your eyes, and think about how great your dad is. >Not everyone gets to inherit your fortune. >He's only given it to you because you've got it, and he's the only one on earth who can do it. >...And what if you get too big with it? "Heh." you say in a jolly manner. >"Heh." "Good." You rub your face and smile. >"Good!" He chuckles. "We should go home and get some sleep, too?" >"I'll try." >You wink, and nod your head and face away from Trixie. >You can see the smile that was created in your heart at thinking that, and you laugh. >You lean back down and close your eyes. >Trixie's mom is right over here watching you, and you turn about to the mother and hug her close when her words are interrupted. >"Dad. You just remember everything...that happened...at the diner last week." >He pats his right hand on his lap. >Your hand slides on the table and slides up his chest, taking your shirt off of you. >Trixie's mom lets out a squeak. >"...Well, there's some...history...in that diner." "I'm not gonna tell that to you, so just...help me out," you say, and the hug disappears. >Trixie's mom is looking down at the clock in the kitchen, and her expression is one that indicates she's waiting for a few moments. [spoiler]Pony][spoiler]Spark[/spoiler] This guy can do it in real life, Anon. You could use some kind of story where the main character finds out and is forced to go through it, and goes through many more experiences. Yeah they're right. I'm glad you liked it. >"My god, is this place an absolute monster?" >"Ohhh, how did you get in it?!" >"Who knows what's going to happen next..." Twilight's voice whispers into your ear. >"My mom wouldn't let me watch my brother play with them in the backyard." >"I would...I would. That was one of my earliest memories." >"I remember how my dad used to use it as his thing...when he played around without his buddies around...he used to act so...excited on the mound, and I thought, wow, that's amazing." >"Well, this stuff isn't really in my range, but it's fun." >"No I wasn't...I'm just gonna play in the backyard." >"I know." >"I had...the urge ever since my dad started playing with them...I wanted to get him out of there before it's too late." >"And I didn't have any friends..." >Your dad's words are cut off by Twilight's words. >"Why did you run away from home? What did you do?" you ask. >"I wasn't. So my mom...wanted to see me..." >Trixie's mom looks towards the kitchen. >A flash of light catches your eye. >Your eyes fall back to the floor. >Suddenly, the light flashes once again. >You're shocked out, as do all of Trixie's friends. "What the hell is going on?" >"...I was the one to leave after my mom tried to run me away from home," Trixie's voice trails off. "I ended up in the house, and I tried to talk to my father...but then I lost contact and my dad started to come out to visit me. "What's wrong with me?" >"My dad wouldn't let me have a friend that he wasn't willing to go with. He always wanted me to spend time with other people...and I couldn't [8600 | 8026.13] loss=3.44 avg=3.29 [8700 | 8115.17] loss=3.23 avg=3.29 [8800 | 8204.22] loss=3.34 avg=3.29 [8900 | 8293.27] loss=3.31 avg=3.29 [9000 | 8382.31] loss=3.58 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== h▓▓ Daring Do: My Little Pony: Twilight Sparkle. This, so far. >trixie makes a mistake, her friends and friends, and friends, and friends, and friends are all friends. I like that idea. I don't like that idea! I know. I don't know. I know! That was great. You're doing good work for a general, and for the mare who did it. Don't stop! You make them sound like shit, though >tfw you will never be able to play vidya as Trixie with Trixie's ass I really hope that works as well. She's good. I don't know, it could be that a lot of the people on 4chan are actually jerks. I think she'd make a fine friend. Maybe even an ideal one. She'd be a good lover too. >The ponies stop going on walks. >"That wasn't it?" "W-well, the others were." >"They weren't supposed to be here." "I can't believe you. That was like ten times worse." >You don't feel anything, only the ground outside >The earth is frozen and you see no more >The ponies are all gone now >Why haven't you ever found yourself outside the castle? >Why haven't you ever come here at all? >Why can't you ever just go to Rarity's or Rarity's or Rarity's or Rarity's? >Why does Twilight keep coming back here? >Why can't you ever want to come home? >Why couldn't you ever be nice to her? >Why isn't she more like you? >Why can't you be there for Fluttershy? >... >You can see them. They're standing before you. >No way back to the castle. >You can't just leave it like this. Never again. >... >They're standing in your mind >It's one of you >The rest of you >The thought of it makes you sad >This place is getting too real >"Wanna come?" they say, standing up and smiling at you >You look at them >"Uh, sure?" Twilight says, looking at you. That's cute. >You give them the best of shakes >That's adorable >They're cute >It's all you can do if you can't come back later that night >And you know it >The door opens >Rarity puts you down >You sit up >Twilight and Rarity walk to the front door >... >Rarity grabs the key "It's open? >Twilight: "Oh no it isn't." "Really?" >Twilight is a mess. She looks hurt, but she holds her head in her hoof >"Oh.. yeah" >She looks a bit ashamed then >You let out a giggle "Hey guys. Sorry about that" >The girls make out >You hear a click and turn your head "You know what we are talking about?" you ask >Twilight: "What's up?" "Twilight, you said that you know how to make people happy, you know how to be your own boss. Do I understand or do you not understand these things?" >Twilight: "What about a boss?" "What about your boss, Twi?" you ask her to take the blame >"Yeah!" she says. "You know I told you that, right?" >Twilight nods "Ok then Twi, I have to do this!" you jump into action, throwing your shirt open. >Twilight: "Don't get me wrong Twi - you still don't understand these things" >Twilight is looking at you with her big mouth >The shirt is torn open by Rarity, and Twilight's heart has stopped beating as you slam right across her belly >The pink pony is crying on you, and you're crying too >You try to fight back tears that fall from your eyes as Twi falls to the floor, sobbing uncontrollably >You grab Twilight's shirt and drag her down the stairs >... What the fuck was that about again? "Twilight?" >Twilight: "H-His name's-" ">Oh no Twilight, that's an order for you to find out later. You don't know what I want to know" "What the hell was I planning on doing?" you ask Twilight. "Oh. Nothing." >You feel Twilight's hand on your shoulders >She pulls you close to her >... Wait... >Who the hell is Twilight? "Twilight [9100 | 8494.04] loss=3.74 avg=3.31 [9200 | 8583.05] loss=3.18 avg=3.30 [9300 | 8672.05] loss=2.98 avg=3.30 [9400 | 8761.05] loss=2.95 avg=3.29 [9500 | 8850.03] loss=3.56 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== large as you go over things, you eventually find yourself at the ground again, looking to see where you left off. Your body is covered with a large blanket, you can hardly see anything with one eye closed, the ground is quiet as hell, and you are breathing heavily. However, your breathing does not go far. You are unable to move in real life. "Gaaaaa" "It must be all right, there's nothing wrong. You don't have to stay here..." "No ma'am, it is only that I'm so tired I can't move at all, and I just want to sleep." "And for what reasons?" "Well, I feel tired as well...my hands feel like they've been kicking and--" "My heart?" "Yes...and my heart is pounding...please don't kill me, I still need you for my heart." Your arms slowly start to wilt, and you turn your attention to the ground. "Mmm..I'm so happy...my name is Rainbow Dash, what kind of name is Twilight Sparkle?" >You look up at her, your breath becoming slightly warmer. "Mm-hmm. Well let me guess, she was just thinking of you, but the first name you gave me was "My heart"?!" >You feel it in your throat, and suddenly, a voice speaks at you. "You shouldn't have to tell anyone about it, you just got out of her...I just can't wait to read your name again..." >"Yeah...I've been looking for you ever since I got here, Rainbow." "Well if you want a title, then why did you take the one with the most famous name in Equestria? How would we even do that with your name?" >You laugh lightly, and your body tenses as your mind tries to process your existence in this state. "Because I...have no idea about it, but, whatever. I'm fine, anyway. But anyway, I don't think I need that as an explanation for why you can barely move like this." You look away from Twilight, looking down the distance as you think your body does nothing. >The clouds start to slowly drop to the horizon. You notice that the sky is beginning to darken a bit, and you take a moment to relax. "So, where's Twilight?" >Pinkie seems a bit sad, but you're beginning to really like her. "Hmm...well... I think you might have something special planned for the holidays." "Pinkie...I...I don't think I can say that without getting an erection." >"Well let me tell you that you do not have to do any of the chores, Anon," Twilight says in a cheerful voice. >You sigh, and look to the left for a moment, and your eyes quickly adapt to the lighting. You have a somewhat hard time picturing a house without its windows in it, but you're still grateful. >As you look on the horizon, you realize that there's only one way to go. It isn't that far away. It's probably just several miles out. "Okay, Twilight..." You take off the blanket, and make way with the sky to a parking lot, where you find another tree stump. It appears to be empty. >You look over it to see a large circular tree stump that looks like a tree. You look at it closely. It's just a stump. >"Oh, hey, you didn't see him, right?" Twilight asks. "He isn't the one doing the digging." >"Well, it doesn't matter as no one ever seems to have a bother with digging up a pony from the air. Unless they are a goblin, or a monster." Twilight says with a sigh, looking up at the tree stump. The stump seemed to be full of stones, and it looked at you with a cold, sad stare. >"That...that doesn't make sense, Anon." Twilight seems to be saying. >"Pinkie...no, dear, no...no...no...no...It's not right anymore!" You say in a hushed tone. >You feel as though you are about to fall out there. Twilight sighs loudly and begins to drag herself out. "Anon. I'm so sorry..." "Do what you can for Pinkie." You gesture at your hoof. "I don't think I want to hurt you any longer, Pinkie." You walk over to Twilight, who does a somersault and lands on the stump just as it's already been dug up. "I'll give my all!" Twilight yells. What do? I'll try and post the best I got at the time. I don't know a very common thing but I agree with this. It can be like a single person with a [9600 | 8961.86] loss=3.62 avg=3.30 [9700 | 9050.85] loss=3.49 avg=3.30 [9800 | 9139.88] loss=3.77 avg=3.31 [9900 | 9228.95] loss=3.26 avg=3.31 [10000 | 9317.95] loss=3.31 avg=3.31 Saving /content/gdrive/My Drive/colab/gpt2out/MLPPosts1/run1/model-10000 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== 't the end of their run? Well, I didn't notice him on the train, didn't notice him on his boat. Didn't notice him on Skyline Express before seeing anon on the train either. Is it a bit late to say? http://pastebin.com/X9XFh2Pk http://pastebin.com/9KXQW6U http://pastebin.com/6n3Q9H7 http://pastebin.com/gPXn8r7Z http://pastebin.com/u8g2J7Z N I'd say he's the one from the first one I posted, but he has a new phone so maybe not. N Well, my brother was on an island for four months and it turned into some fucking disaster; we spent $7000 on a plane that cost us $2k, it's not a fucking way to make a living, and everyone wants to steal it. So I had to get on the bus. I had like 100 bucks and an apartment as I grew up. [spoiler]My parents gave me money on the bus because I had some shit friends, and I was hanging with my sister and she didn't want to live anywhere I had no money for.[/spoiler] >"What?" >"What?" >"What's up?" >"What's wrong?" >"What did I ask?" >"Do you have a problem with that shit?" "I can't fucking believe you're asking this to me." >"I know your family, and I knew about the fact that you and your sister weren't the only humans in the world." "But my mom doesn't know, I don't know, I don't even know if you're...?" >"Please, Anon. It's okay. I love you." >"Please don't say that-" >"Please please, Anon!" >You are just shaking because she keeps yelling at you, while looking at you with a look of such pity, and then she yells at you again. "Please don't make me do this. Please don't make me go through that. I want to be the one you want to make your partner be." >"Please don't do that too." She says in a sad voice >"Please, Anon." >You feel like shit; you want to say something but you're too tired, and you don't know how to say something. >You're too exhausted and you feel like someone is dragging you down. >Your mom's look gets you thinking again "How long have you been like this, Anon?" >"I-I don't know? I mean you've been so cold, Anon..." >You can't think of anything right now. >Your father's voice rings out "I don't think I can't hear you, Anon." >You turn around and go back to your car. >You take your hat off and put it on you head. >You get dressed and start to warm, you take your sunglasses off first and throw them on, then you make your way out the door. >Anon's look of concern doesn't go unnoticed "You're okay, Anon." >"I'm fine." He says with a smile "Do you want to go out? I can take my car there." >"I like it..." "Okay..." >You slowly start to walk on the other side of the school yard towards the school where the bus is going. >It's not long until the door opens. >"Hey baby!" >A bright colored kid starts to sprint away. Shame it's always so quiet in here. I've never gone full quiet. http://i.imgur.com/sVpYGgR.png http://i.imgur.com/eK0j4q0.png http://i.imgur.com/yOu8G2D.png http://i.imgur.com/yP4Yr7c.png http://i.imgur.com/j6jYX7f.png http://i.imgur.com/v2j1m5c.png http://i.imgur.com/Q0gCz7y.png You have made my day. You guys should really do more. Ponies are best pets. Do you want to go to a sleepover, or to a wedding? You can't do both, can you? Gotta say, good job. Bump >Implying we shouldn't be excited to buy a V7 >implying this isn't a joke >Implying you would be the only [10100 | 9446.78] loss=3.59 avg=3.32 [10200 | 9535.90] loss=3.07 avg=3.31 [10300 | 9624.92] loss=2.99 avg=3.31 [10400 | 9714.04] loss=3.45 avg=3.31 [10500 | 9803.07] loss=2.80 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== �▓ on the couch, and she's leaning over looking at you >"Awww. Is there juice in those bottles?" Sunset asks "What in the hay are they selling?" "Mmm.." >"Oh you are! Wait! They left out some sugar!" Sunset looks at you confused "What happened!?" "No, I was just telling you what it's for. You wanted to get me to help?" >"I don't know, you were trying to keep me entertained." "I can't give you more than a few words." >"Oh well I'll show you if you want too." Sunset hands you a jar of blue raspberry juice and a small bottle of coke "Wow! You have a lot of experience for something like that. I bet if I helped you just one drink now then you're gonna be so hooked that you just gonna drink ALL of those bottles and then you'll drink all of those drinks." >"Okie Dashi!" Sunset pulls out some green raspberry juice from her pocket "Now drink in your bottles and enjoy the magic." >You take the bottle and pour it all into one bottle. Sunset gives you all the bottles and drinks it all in one go "Wow...You taste so much better." Sunset says in between bites of her snack >"It looks so much better...You taste like something. It tastes like sugar." >You feel a little sick as your stomach groans from the sugar. >You drink some while you wait for Sunset to give you another cup. Sunset brings you back another bag of ice and some chocolate milk. Sunset has another bowl, and a whole bottle of soda, in her bag. >You take your bottle out of the ice bag and place it into the bowl. I'd like to thank you for the suggestions I'll see what I can do this weekend I don't remember anything I'm just about to write something that you'd like but it can't be done How do the ponies react to Celestia being the first princess in Equestria? Bump >It takes a while, but you end up being able to get Rarity. The night is finally over. She's got a bag containing the other two bottles she brought. >There's only one one way to find out what you wanted. You put the bags into the bathroom, and head out. >You walk down the long hallway that leads into the main hall. The door opens, and you see the pink alicorn mare standing there with a bottle of juice in her mouth. >"I know I said I could never leave Canterlot, but it seems I can." >You stare at Rarity >She turns to you. >"What's the matter?" She says. "What can I get for you?" >"We got something else," Rarity says. "I can't get you a bottle of wine, that kind." "Of course not! I'm always going to drink!" >"If you want to see a party?" Rarity says. "Of course!" You shout, throwing Rarity's bottle out the door. >You turn around and see Twilight next to her. >"Thanks, Anon. I wish you good luck." "Of course I'm going to get some wine," you reply. >You get Rarity's bottle and look inside. The bottles are all gone. You take your bottle and walk out of the castle, out on the streets. "Hey, Rainbow?" >She walks past you. >You turn around and see Twilight. Her dress is all out of place. >"Hello!" She says, walking over and hugging you. >You hold it and feel it, and look at it. "What's this?" >"It's just a game we've been playing together for months, and we're all ready for it." "And how?" >"It's for you, Anon. It's so important that you can do this. You'll see how far you can..." You say, holding up the bottle. "Auntie?" Twilight asks. >"Of course, Anon," she says. "Come back this week, or it's late when I get off work for the school day." "You too Sunset, Twilight." >"Right." She walks away from you and goes home. >You walk back to town hall. As you walk back to town hall, you notice a group of other students who are dressed as per usual. I'm not exactly sure who I'm looking at, but it looks like they're looking at something rather strange. >I walk to the bathroom and see a bottle of white wine still in the kitchen. I turn my head back to see if they are looking at me. They stop talking and start walking about something or some shit. What do you see? >"Alright Mr. Anon. That's [10600 | 9915.12] loss=3.48 avg=3.30 [10700 | 10004.28] loss=3.38 avg=3.31 [10800 | 10093.37] loss=3.22 avg=3.30 [10900 | 10182.51] loss=3.85 avg=3.31 [11000 | 10271.56] loss=3.21 avg=3.31 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== club to try out new things >I get to take notes on everything and do all the work, the only time anon has to see this is the beginning of chapter 1, when he does a new character, or something like Pinkie Pie >Twilight's a teacher, like everything >I'm a student, so she's like the professor here >But I have my research, and I can be the one who's doing the research >I'm the one who's actually making the decision, not him >I'm the one who's writing the report >But what about the research? >I have no idea what he's talking about (besides the fact that I would never have a role) >I'm the one who's the one to decide to go with it >There's nothing to worry about, so let's just do our homework and get out of there Well it still didn't look good, but at least we're not really using it. Maybe try more colors? I haven't drawn pony and a lot of people insist on drawing things at the same size. Well, I suppose if you ask the general. I've been in this thread for a while and I've heard that people were actually pissed on /mlp/. I'm not that great of an editor but I'm sure we will be able to make this a better place, and the pastebin is the new version. I was honestly hoping he'd try to fix it sometime soon [spoiler]Oh you? That is the one?[/spoiler] [spoiler]Yes, I feel the same. Like I haven't been here in quite a long time.[/spoiler] This pic just made my day >You are a young Griffon, a young filly of your mother's, and a filly of your father's. You're about to walk up the stairs to your father's house when you hear your dad talking with him to you. You didn't even know you were in there. >"Mom-I just walked in and saw you there, so there, my sweet, cute, little Griffon. I didn't know it had you here." "Dad, you're just as I am, and I'm just as you are- wait!" >"M-Mom? Where am I?" "I think I found dad." >"Oh, father, I've seen him." "I've seen dad." >Your dad smiles and shakes your shoulders. You were only about a foot away from his face when he took a step in front of you. You were shocked into silence. Then again your body was surprised to see your dad in front of you. So, why was he still there? "Oh, he's a mare." "You don't have a mare." >You laugh to yourself. That could be a big surprise for somepony. You realize your dad's the first thing you notice. In fact it's no surprise you're standing there, you've seen dad on the couch a number of times, and he's always gone out the back door. You can't see his face, but you can feel the fear in your heart that he's about to come out. It gives you a small chuckle and you continue running up the stairs. >"D-Daring, I had to use the back door for you-" "F-For you." >Then your dad catches you and he pulls you aside and throws your shirt over your head. "Sorry about that, my boy." >He tells you you need to calm down. He's worried about you, but he's concerned about you too. He was worried about you and you couldn't help but be scared. He told you you'd be alright. Then a moment passed and you feel your heart stop pumping through your veins. >"You're going to have issues and issues," Dad whispers. "But you're going to do your homework-" >You hear his voice fall silent. >"It's not going to work. I know you can do your research. I know you have your problems, and I know you are going to have your issues too. But you are going to do your homework. Do your homework and work for it." >He whispers out to you. "You will never be the mare like me. The father never knew you were a mare, and he will never know you are a mare either." >Your heart is tearing up. You wish you could scream but you can't. >You look at Dad. He is breathing heavily and you're just standing there and trying to hide your feelings. He is holding you by the side. >You look at your dad and you smile again. >How can he have no idea that you're scared of him? >"Don't worry about it [11100 | 10383.55] loss=3.64 avg=3.32 [11200 | 10472.66] loss=3.49 avg=3.32 [11300 | 10561.78] loss=3.24 avg=3.32 [11400 | 10650.83] loss=2.80 avg=3.31 [11500 | 10739.89] loss=3.51 avg=3.31 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== ., and have it in, too!" I thought. >The thought had gotten to me. >"Well, look at the mess I made tonight. It was embarrassing. Now, I just need to get back to that place. Not you, not me, not all of these people. I have this bad rep, and it's gonna get worse." [spoiler]I'm working on my new story right now. Will continue to be an idea, but I feel like I'll have to go back and forth between that and writing for other threads.[/spoiler] >Be in my kitchen, while all my other people are away, making food. >For some reason, not that I'm complaining, I feel as though I'm supposed to be a cook too. >My coworkers are so kind, and generous when it comes to letting their coworkers and friends over >That's really kind of them. >They even let me do it. >They're even kinder than I was. >The idea of helping me out here in town is just amazing. >I get to the kitchen, open up the oven, and wait for it to go up to temp. >After a long minute or so, there's no sign that things haven't stopped. >"Yeah, it's a bit hot at the moment." >I turn off the oven, and walk out to the street. >It's not that long, and you don't get all hot and bothered until the car comes by. >It's really nice to get someone out of their car to help someone. >We get to my own place, and start making our own food. >At this point, I'm not even hungry anymore. >"Hey baby it's nice to see you after I put away all these dishes. I've been waiting for you to come here. Thanks." >I can't believe I'm spending this time with an unknown man with such little dignity. >"Sorry to interrupt, but we have a big production tomorrow." >I decide to go talk to someone who I really like. >I walk to a nearby restaurant and sit down at a table next to a girl who's very pretty. >He's talking to me and is showing me around. >"So, when are you two gonna go to the concert?" >He looks at me suspiciously, and the mare looks back at me with a worried look. >I make my way to the restaurant. 1/2 I have to agree, I don't think so. I think the difference is that most of these threads are only ever a few hundred words, yet this one is more than 100 thousand words at least two posts. [spoiler]But the difference in quality isn't even as great. I don't think anybody at the time would read the first few paragraphs of any piece of text that has 400k words or more. And even that can't fix your grammar when they still use an inoffensive language.[/spoiler] >"I don't mean 'you are not a man, it would be better to be a woman' and 'you do have a penis, you will be hard as stone if you had a vagina'," she responds with a smug grin, "I mean I'm not gay, I'll probably marry you when you're ready." "I don't feel ready. Why did you even go through with this? It's a horrible feeling." [spoiler] >Anon, could you help me? This one is getting pretty bad. I need a hand or something[/spoiler] >he's looking into your eyes and nodding to you, an unconcerned grin spreading, >"No seriously, if you want, that's what I mean." >You turn away and go to grab your stuff, some coffee, and a slice of pizza, before giving the girl a big kiss, but you get nothing. >She stares at you, unsure what's happening, you were trying to be a nice guy >She quickly backs away out of your embrace, but you hold your arms up in a sign that she isn't getting anywhere with you, you are just being a nice man and asking for the girl's approval of you being nice. >She gets up and trots back to her car, letting you out. >She drives away, your mind telling you this is over, but it seems to still be true >You walk into the restaurant, and see a few people there, ordering, waiting for you with smiles on their faces and eating with you >As you walk out the door, you hear your car's horn on at a distance, with the driver's side window open to let out the little voice of the car, asking if you want to get in. >You nod, and drive [11600 | 10851.89] loss=3.02 avg=3.31 [11700 | 10940.96] loss=3.31 avg=3.31 [11800 | 11030.02] loss=3.39 avg=3.31 [11900 | 11119.09] loss=3.01 avg=3.30 [12000 | 11208.07] loss=3.40 avg=3.31 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== >"Ugh... I guess I am fine if I stay here. Maybe I should get some sleep, let's give up on making money... I'm trying to spend more time with you... Ah... nah..." >"... I never said that." >...You know you don't need to be so nice... >"What?" >...I'm kidding! >"Don't you think?" >... >"...I did!" >...I was kidding. "Huh...?" >Oh no, don't give me an excuse, I mean you're right. "Wh-what?" >...I'm kidding... >"...I'm sorry." "WHAT?!" >Don't you think that's a bit funny? "..." >N-no, that's not my fault... "Wh-what?!" >W-what do you mean?! "Wh-what?!" >B-but... "WHEN ARE YOU STARTING TO GET SO MANY PEOPLE who aren't interested?!" >"Because that's the one thing everyone has to do to get out of bed." "..." >"What's the big deal?" "..." >I-I mean it was- "Hahahaha! That one's a dumbass!" >"Oh, that's why you weren't able to make it!" >... >You're just going to have to live with that shit for the rest of your days, you know it. "..." >... >You're just going to have to live with the bitch for the rest of your life. "..." >... >...Nope, it wasn't my fault. She just was a bitch at times, you know. N N You'd be surprised of how many faggots try to insult an anthro character. I do think your art is a bit shit, though. Oh boy, did it change into some sort of anthro OC? No >Nah. He was a godly man. >He is the only god on this universe. >As the only god and thus the only man. >He rules over all creation. >He rules over life. >He controls the stars in which lives exist. >He has no soul. >He is immortal. >The only god who can be killed in a thousand,000 years. >He is immortal. >What would life be like in Equestria? For me, it's going to take a while. I'm working on one. This can't be real! You are the one who has done some truly amazing things. >Be Anon. >Be in the royal guard, and lead the guard against the monster >The heady night of the night, as in the early sixties. >You're out of your barracks, ready to leave the Princess. >You're getting ready, your guard is still waiting for you. >You are Anon, but you are a man amongst men. >Mostly men of different countries, and nations... >It's just, you have a bit of time, and you are tired of the constant demands to do things. >But you aren't like your guards, just a man, walking into the palace where you're required to go and get your uniform. >This place is more suited to serving man and woman for the greater good anyways. - >You sit down in your room. >You walk to the dining room. >Your head rests on your shoulder, and your body rests on your lap. >Your back is forward and your back was resting against the wall. >Your skin is smooth. >You can't tell when you sleep. >A warm glow envelopes your body, with its warmth making you a little sleepy while relaxing your body. >"Yes, Anon, it's good to see your body so used to it..." >You can't help but snout from your neck. >It's not the moon. It's Celestia. It's still bright despite the moon. >The princess opens your eyes and smiles into yours. >She closes your eyes and then closes them again at the sight of the moon. >It appears to have the same markings as the sun. >They seem to be the same colors of the moon, the same shape and that's it from what you see. >You go to sleep in peace and don't see the moon for an entire year. >Your guardsmen come, and your guardsmen return to be ready. >You [12100 | 11319.86] loss=3.66 avg=3.31 [12200 | 11408.90] loss=3.42 avg=3.31 [12300 | 11497.96] loss=3.60 avg=3.32 [12400 | 11586.94] loss=2.91 avg=3.31 [12500 | 11675.89] loss=3.31 avg=3.31 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== spinning this shit and I'll be damned if it didn't end up taking down a decent chunk of you." "Yeah.." The door is closed and the one that closed it is also opened. "Now then lets begin by the next path. You are to find the source of it, it will help us get it back into normal range or we'll be done for." She says a bit of hope in her voice. She looks behind her and takes a look back... "I think I found it! Now let us set off on the next one. It seems we're almost upon a cliff. You have a course to go in to gain access." The sun does not rise in her sight. "Oh...okay~" >..What I think I'm trying to say is that I'd rather not keep that up for the rest of the day, or so what is happening in this place? "Hmph and I've come to the conclusion that we have to leave now, there's no point, I don't think I can go forward now. The more I think about it the more a sense of regret is taking hold and regret is spreading out into anger and a desire to make them stronger, I'm sure that I'm right, we can't let something get the better of us." I am so glad it happened that I just knew this would really happen. Still I can't hear any more of her words, it feels like we're a ghost gone with a different voice that is in the same body. In some kind of way I wish I didn't have this conversation, as it makes me realize I'm not going to stand for this. However, it won't get better, I know that you're right now. I'm off into the forest. No real trees, no more branches and no trees. It's the same situation all over again. There is only one road out from the forest, but to do that you need to explore it. You'll have a chance to make it far though this season in the long and short term. At least your time of wandering will be spent for the time being. That's a good thing. I wouldn't be surprised if I don't even want to come back for a bit. I'll be sure to put that all into a new thread soon. I don't know what we're supposed to do now. I guess we should leave and head home while avoiding any attention. Or maybe head over into the forest and try to get somewhere else, then. I guess maybe if I were to have one of these plans I'm going to just have to come back for it when the time is right. N Oh you, Anon. >Implying I'm going to get any work done for you right now. Don't be a fucking douche. I know what the fuck the fuck I'm going through and the shit am just going on too far. Fuck you. N >Implying I won't get it into him. >implying I don't already be the most hardcore shit-stain of the fandom. I want to go back to when I was a filly for Twilight but she only wants to fuck a filly. What? Are you saying that Celestia is actually this good? That's like fucking saying God was good. God is the same. >you will never live in a tree covered in roses >You'll never go for a wild horse and see every single one of his limbs >You'll never get to see the musky fur and the soft skin >You'll never get the chance to see his musky fur, and the soft skin of any horse that doesn't have some horse dick of his own I want to live in a bush and use them as pillows What is it that keeps people from making that kind of choice? And I don't know if it's because I want this to be more than "just something to get the creative juices flowing" or maybe because I just want it to be something it's not. >This is what she wants, isn't it? Her body is ready to be used and put to great service. I'm sorry to everyone who I'm sure has the same opinion. I've got a really long, rather ambitious, project in my works with a large scope to do things that just aren't possible with what is here. It's a long time coming, Anon. There's actually a story thread for those sorts of "wants", and I think in time this is going to become a general. It would be a shame we didn't get to see more of you all in that regard, because you have been good at doing a good job so [12600 | 11787.99] loss=3.03 avg=3.31 [12700 | 11877.03] loss=3.53 avg=3.31 [12800 | 11966.07] loss=3.14 avg=3.31 [12900 | 12055.12] loss=2.96 avg=3.30 [13000 | 12144.14] loss=3.37 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== You can't have all the girls you want. This. Bump This is good work It wasnt that, it was that someone made a new board and posted it here with a new username. I'm very sorry about that. We need more /pol/ It's not like he's going to post or anything I agree. But when they have a thread like that, they are just fucking stupid. >mfw they have a full house We already know it's coming. Well, it is coming... We'll have to watch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j3V8jH2qE8Y It's the end. Well it's not like he's been around long time either. N N >That would be bad, as is usual. Why don't you kill yourself? >this thread You should go back to r-right? Bump So, how do you guys get the girl in your head? And are there any other guys on the ride? >all these people in this thread [spoiler]That's pretty fucking rad, I guess.[/spoiler] N >The next day, you had your first date with Sunset in a matter of hours at her place. >The last one, she was having so much fun that she couldn't keep all those emotions in check for too long. >It's the biggest, freest and most romantic thing you've had. >In fact, it's the largest thing you've done today, and you've probably been watching porn too. >Sunset started by getting on your shoulders and telling you it was going well. >You felt your cheeks flush, and your chest got a tingle. >After that, she proceeded to pull off her clothes. >Finally, you could let Sunset do the driving. >In fact, you'd rather not say anything. >But she would probably hear it later. >In fact, it wasn't even her fault that she wanted a first date. >She's been really good at this stuff in the past. >You've even taken a few girls for herself. >She told you it was because she wanted to see how long it would take for her. >The day you walked in the door, she pulled on her pants and asked you for a kiss. >You told her that you had a pretty bad feeling about her. >It was a little embarrassing looking at her eyes, but you had no idea what to make of it. >That's not as bad as you think. >The kiss was a little rough and it was kind of hot actually. >The whole thing was kind of hot for a change. >However, after a few minutes of kissing, you knew you were a good kisser. >Especially with her tongue sticking out like that, you realized it was now all going to hell. >After a few more minutes of kissing, you broke from the kiss and she pulled you back in. >It was good to see her again. >She pulled you off so fast you fell on the floor and you both collapsed. >Sunset tried to kiss you out from the pain, but it was so nice being embraced by her. 1/30 I love the way it does contrast with the show's other depictions of love, like in Friendship is Magic. You guys can't be here anymore. If it was just ponies fucking everything would be completely fine. I have seen some things so horrible I have to give it up, like seeing that one guy fucking that girl. [spoiler]For me anyway.[/spoiler] >She's also [spoiler]happy that you're here.[/spoiler] This is nice but the part you keep mentioning is the most important part. N >This shit thread N PONY NEEDS YOUR HELP N I'm not going to sleep. This thread will keep going until I can find some green in this thread. Any ideas on when to post? N The reason I want to cum inside Rainbow Dash is because she always has an orgasm, always. So, can't get over that? I'm sad and I'm not here for it. N He's just having fun. So, how do you guys get the girl in your head? And are there any other guys on the ride? [spoiler]I've been here for months; that is a pretty impressive accomplishment. I'm in the army all day without even using the bathroom and I haven't even tried sleeping, this is very impressive.[/spoiler] Not too sure, but you don't have any of these guys to tell you your tastes are [13100 | 12255.90] loss=3.17 avg=3.30 [13200 | 12344.90] loss=3.11 avg=3.30 [13300 | 12433.90] loss=3.35 avg=3.30 [13400 | 12522.82] loss=3.62 avg=3.30 [13500 | 12611.91] loss=3.06 avg=3.30 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== pay for you. She's not real, because she couldn't be. Just a fake. >you had an accident on your trip to your sister's. The most serious accident you can remember. That's some cute horse butt right there, and some hot air and an okay cup of tea. I'm fine with it though. N >not enjoying a pony in the first place is a form of autism I'm curious to see where that line comes up, and would rather not give this general a name anymore as it's been a common name. Is Anon, Anon, Anon. No. She is pure. It's just that, with some other ponies, she can't be happy with the same feelings. How can you love a character so often and easily? How can you love a person so much and be so accepting to love them without any shame for it? Just love them, love them so hard, that you can see the light inside their eyes? Do you love their heart, in all their imperfections, and will you accept them without doubt as they are an amazing, beautiful and sweet companion? Love is the love that the best pony in the world can never love. Thats the love of love, of love for others, love for others, and love for each other. This is a pony we love and care about dearly, and that is a character we cherish. Love that fills in the gap, that fills in the dark, of the lonely, of pain, and that fills in the emptiness of the mind. It hurts to live the true life, but we must. To know truth, and to see it clearly, can you love a person as sincerely, as deeply, as with as many facets of life you could love? It can be love, of joy, of happiness, and most of all, love of our best friend and companion. Love is nothing to be ashamed of. It is an act of love, an act of faith, and a true confession of our self-love. How could you love someone so intimately as a human being? How could you love someone so intimately as a pony? How could you love someone so deeply and lovingly as your friend? Love is an essential part of our being, an essential part that can never be taken away from the world, but cannot be separated from it. You will never experience pure, pure, infinite happiness, for in it is the true and unique love of life, of true love. That's cute, though. What if she took you back to the moon You wake up to find you were in a space far to far away from where you went off. You find yourself in a small city just in time to see, someone is holding on to the door. The door itself is only in one of the four directions, though, you don't know how. "We're here..." you sigh out in relief. >The room itself is a small room with small walls. A table and a chair. A bed with some sheets in it.. >There seems to be some furniture left in this room. Some shelves, a closet or closet. >There is some light pouring out. >As you look around, you see a familiar man. You can't be sure if you're seeing things, but you know not how. >He's with another man just waiting to help "Oh good..." >"You must be new here...." he says, turning to you. >"I was trying to help you, but before i could i lost my place in you, i'll try to make you feel welcome in this place." "...You don't seem the same?" >"I can't think about what a life I had before this. What I had before this i had to save for was for the one i don't know." >He laughs again. >"And that's why we got this place where i can give others something of my time." He says. >"Yeah i did.." "You're such a good guy huh?" >"Yeah.." He says while walking with you. >You walk slowly, and as you reach the end of the alley the light comes back. >"We're here sir." He says without hesitation. >"Thank you for staying here Mr.. I really really appreciated your help..." "Well, just as i thought, we are here..." You lean over and scratch his behind. "I will try and have more.. " >"Just keep telling yourself that story to yourself" 1 hour post in the morning. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bH7SdWvCxQ N No fuck you, he's a whiteknight for that fucker. https://www.youtube [13600 | 12724.23] loss=2.99 avg=3.30 [13700 | 12813.30] loss=2.97 avg=3.29 [13800 | 12902.34] loss=2.60 avg=3.28 [13900 | 12991.42] loss=3.41 avg=3.29 [14000 | 13080.56] loss=3.30 avg=3.29 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== were the little boys these days. >You’re not particularly interested in the human girls these days, but they’re all right. >”You’re so cute when you’re happy.” >She’s still in your face as she says “Now that’s pretty sad you’re getting hit with this illness, I don’t know if anyone will be able to understand you or if you’re still too cold and the girls won’t notice the change, but if you feel like it like me, just let them.” >”You're so nice, ‘Anon...’ she says while looking at you with sad sad eyes. >You put down your bottle and continue drinking as she makes her way to her bedroom. >As she enters the room, she turns around and walks to her bed. >No matter what you do, you can’t win this fight. >Her body falls in your arms. >You cry quietly with her until she wakes up. >”I need to take a break, I can’t keep losing my wade every time you get mad at me...” >she turns around and leaves with a sigh and her head tilted >”I'm gonna keep being a friend and listen to you in peace, and then if you feel sad enough please let me know and I will make sure you don’t leave me alone with such a big fan of yours.” >you can’t do anything but lie in the fetal position, staring off into the distance. >she stands next to you as her eyes finally settle down >you start to walk across the bridge that you took in the first place, and you look down before you can get into any trouble >You finally make your way over to the main hall >the door opens and you look at Celestia, but she ignores you >there is a massive crowd of people standing in the hallway, surrounded by pony fans >cant have you seen everything? >the song ended, and the crowd slowly dispersed >there's a large hole in the ground and she begins to rise to her feet. >the ponies are all in a huddle >they all stare at you, and almost everyone seems to be chanting something >Celestia looks up, her face still covered into a hood that obscures most of her face >and slowly begins talking >"we just had to act a little like this," she says "the more that he has to think about things that he is incapable of feeling for, the more he thinks nothing of his sister, and the more that she has to think hard about what he feels she should do," this time focusing on the girls as she speaks, "and with what I am going to do in the morning before she has any of those feelings she is going to try and make it hard for me. It's a bad combination and I don't want to put those around me." So she's the main character and she's always been. It's the only explanation for how a pony in a human costume wouldn't be a pony in a human costume though. It's because they're both magic horses that have magical properties like magic that cannot be explained by magic. Because he's probably not a regular horse in a human costume, and that's really shitty logic. I got the same idea but I was thinking more out of character for Rarity because being around Rarity is one of her best traits, and maybe it's a nice touch with a character. I actually like her as character, but I suppose that's just a personal taste, so I might not be completely wrong. I've always liked my waifu. She was also my favorite pony from any of my waifus in the show N N bump That's it for today, we're not really able to see the rest of the story unfold at the moment. What are your thoughts so far? And I think this is the most I've got of a typical day/week cycle in just a week. If I could ever figure out some way to be on a more productive schedule, I'd spend it with her, but I'm not actually sure to what. That's all for now. See you next time, and stay tuned. N N "Yeah. Why are you going to be on such an alert?" >She giggles >You look at her confused, but intrigued "You're a spy, right?" >You walk over and stare for a moment, then slowly shake your head "I'm not a spy, I'm not a spy, I know who I am, I'm an American, I'm not [14100 | 13192.48] loss=3.05 avg=3.28 [14200 | 13281.62] loss=3.60 avg=3.29 [14300 | 13370.74] loss=3.10 avg=3.28 [14400 | 13459.70] loss=3.03 avg=3.28 [14500 | 13548.64] loss=3.01 avg=3.28 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== few at that. There was this one guy who was actually able to do the first 3 and last time we saw him he was just sitting on a park bench and just drinking. You're a big guy. Are you a big girl? [spoiler]Oh my god...[/spoiler] [spoiler]Makes me feel like I should kill my wife[/spoiler] >Cadence is a very girly pony. That is, if you can call her a girl on the show, and if you want to continue making her more sexy. You would start her off as a shy, quiet character to the point of a normal man looking down on her. Then after a few years, you would discover that she is actually the hottest mare in equestria. You would realize she is a sexy mare that no one has ever seen before. A real girl. All the girls, ever. You would become so confident they would reject you. It's a long story. >implying I need that old link to start it >pic related >that Well, you know, they do, even if they do it in a way that makes no sense. I mean, if you're going to do anthro and porn they seem to have their own ideas about what is the best and what should be excluded. It's a pretty neat plot. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8_zmGk-8aXA Well, then I'd say, we should be able to use this as a reference. I was trying to make them all have the color gradient of the mane 6 except maybe for Sunset, but that's kinda tricky. You'll find it at the top of the page, after the first thread This post is from a newfag. It's not the same as a faggot, it's just not a faggot as usual. >It was a bit like the first few faggots, like faggots who were still able to post pictures. >A man. >That guy with the "I'm just going to kill and eat my friends" stare. >And as someone who posted anthro, I was pretty sick at that time. >There's the occasional guy with the red lips. >And the occasional "I really want anthro" guy looking at a picture. >And the occasional guy with purple hair. >And the occasional guy with a weird green haired man. >And all that stuff. >Faggots and other people who would come here and post pics. But seriously, people who were here at one point are likely to see you and the people that were in a group aren't likely to say anything. >You never want an artist to draw anthro. >"Well my friend told me he was in a group that was probably on 4chan trying to make an all-ages card..." >"This is supposed to be a card." >"Hey guys" >"Do you want to pick this up?" >"I can't. I've never actually been in a group before." Well she needs to have an ass. And that's all he needs. It says: "All of her, except Rainbow Dash" [spoiler]I hope someone will draw it[/spoiler] I'm thinking of that the picture with the orange dildo for obvious reasons. Not sure if it's good or bad, but my brain has come up with a good, simple one. I have a feeling it would look like that, if you were to draw it. >Faggot [spoiler]Nigga what happened? Just got off my sofa and a faggot?[/spoiler] This board does not belong to the fandom not until they let us start a fucking cult >D'awww. >I had to drag this shit out. Not just as an adult, but every time you see someone use that phrase. She is pretty hot He doesn't deserve your help I can't handle the thought of how she looks in that picture, now. It's so ugly and so horrible, but my face when seeing her was to much. >she looks like an ugly woman... >i get it Bump >in /x/ Bump. >no hooves >she is so fucking ugly bump i hope someone draws it [spoiler]No one. They just made a black screen. It was the only good thing in EQG4.[/spoiler] bump Oh shit The end What kind of fucking faggot that would post under your name? He was the one [14600 | 13660.18] loss=3.54 avg=3.28 [14700 | 13748.92] loss=2.64 avg=3.27 [14800 | 13837.63] loss=3.12 avg=3.27 [14900 | 13926.47] loss=3.28 avg=3.27 [15000 | 14015.19] loss=3.35 avg=3.27 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== D▒ If that ever happens, then the next two episodes will be the longest ones yet. I'd [spoiler]piss her so hard.[/spoiler] But she's too cute He does have a point... >not enjoying your story [spoiler]and possibly making you mad because your being so dense[/spoiler] N N N >pic N >tfw will never be able to join my guild Ponies are like horses, right? N >Anon being tortured for love for all to hear. >Anon being made to eat a human body and having to beg for it. >Anon being eaten. Anon being tortured for love. >Anonymous is raped by a group of ponies for the sole purpose of pleasure. >Anonymous is forced to lick the ponies as the torture starts by the ponies. >Anonymous is dragged out of the dungeons into the streets of Manehatten to perform for a crowd that's already beginning to gather around the city. >The crowd is filled to the brim with ponies, holding pony related signs and ponies that look like their own characters to the onlookers. >Anonymous and the crowd are mobbed with ponies of all different races and sizes, most of which look similar to stallions and pegasi. >Anonymous and the crowd are chased by ponies that look exactly like themselves. >Anonymous and the crowd are surrounded by ponies of all kinds, wearing all kinds of animal related costumes. >Anonymous and the crowd are surrounded by the ponies in every imaginable category imaginable. >Anon is forced to walk the streets of Manehatten. >Anons are calling him a faggot, a faggot who is ruining lives off the backs of ponies. >Anonymous is made to walk past ponies and out of the city. >Anonymous is given the choice. >He should say no. http://archive.moe/mlp/thread/19818953/#19818953 I still think the show is overrated by a factor of about 1.5. >Anons being the most autistic I'd like to call him out for it, but he may have had some sort of traumatic experience with the fandom. He could at least acknowledge it instead of feeling embarrassed and then making excuses for it. This way he can see he's actually a rational person, and not a total moron who just thinks everyone hates a certain character and wants her gone. I guess that means I'll have to get over her as quickly and painlessly as next. Also the pic is very cute. I'd definitely recommend it. [spoiler]I got the same story for you. The OP's story will be the one with the bunny and the flower. It's the only one that doesn't take up much of the thread. Hope you all enjoy it.[/spoiler] >You are Anon, an ordinary high school student from a small town in Ponyville >You've always known it was bad for you >Just that your friends had warned you not to fuck up >You got one last class before you head to your old highschool, which has almost completely fallen into ruin >So close to your heart, so close >You're going to have to be very careful here, though... >It's so close... >You don't even think it can even be this close >You're going to have to walk a lot >You don't want to be too hard, but you'd honestly be scared too >That wasn't fun for any of your friends there. >As you walk up to the schoolhouse, you check to make sure no bad people are around >The windows are mostly boarded up at the front, there's a few windows open with doors, but they're locked and locked well back from all angles >You're afraid you might pass out from boredom when you open up the door, with the door not being close you feel as if you'd fall back into the ground 1. Run from the doors. 2. Open door from the outside. 3. Grab a bag and carry them around and back inside. 2/2 Oh, I thought this was a story about something related. I didn't read the comics because I never watched my first episode. Here's the link to the video. bump Well, he'd rather fuck than suck at any job he's had before. I want to puke inside her because she is the most pure creature on the planet Well, you can have one hell of a good time. I just need to get something down. N N >no matter how hard you try, she's still making out with you >one [15100 | 14125.88] loss=3.00 avg=3.27 [15200 | 14214.70] loss=3.87 avg=3.28 [15300 | 14303.52] loss=3.62 avg=3.28 [15400 | 14392.29] loss=3.06 avg=3.28 [15500 | 14481.07] loss=3.15 avg=3.28 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== ▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▀▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▓▒▓▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒░░▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▓▓▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒▒ [15600 | 14592.44] loss=2.90 avg=3.27 [15700 | 14681.20] loss=2.83 avg=3.27 [15800 | 14770.03] loss=3.11 avg=3.26 [15900 | 14858.85] loss=3.17 avg=3.26 [16000 | 14947.59] loss=3.12 avg=3.26 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== finding a way out. >"You need to go to the hospital, I just want to get some rest." "What?" >"A little more." "That's all I need of my time." >"I can stay around a while, I guess? I'll be out by tomorrow." "Well it's alright, you guys will be here for us." >"I think you just killed a man, and got me to do what you wanted." "I know, and you should feel really awful." >Suddenly >"You just got the best of me!" "What happened? Did it hurt?" >"What?" "You want to know what to do, you fucking cunt. I told you I didn't do it and that it's okay to want it, you fucking cunt." >"I can handle this." "Don't worry, you bitch, I got this." >"I have to do it anyway." "What the fuck." >"The only way to stop me from doing it is to say a fucking thing. This bitch needs that shit out of my fucking mouth now." I'm just saying, don't think that he will ever use it. >I know where you guys like to play, don't you? I was talking to Twilight and she suggested that if I do a lot of lewd and I do a lot of lewd, she can show me something to get rid of the bad stuff after a while. That sounds like the sort of thing we could all agree on. N Pony says that you would be better off if you only joined the military. No one ever wanted to do something in the first place. Don't you think? >It's the same joke I've told for the last 20 years and then some. >Cringe-o-tricks http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/10/quit-laying >Likes MLP porn http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/09/equestreaming This is exactly what I hear from the general population over and over again nowadays, and even in a society where we've probably come into the best of times, no one will ever be the more logical part of a couple. I really don't find that argument convincing at best, and I doubt anyone worth their salt on this would even try to make one, anyway. Fuck this is going to get bump >implying i can see past a certain screen [spoiler]I can[/spoiler] >tfw no cute pone [spoiler]sucking my dick while i watch some horse shit and it doesnt matter[/spoiler] I didn't really mean that I didn't. I'm still not going to say it myself, but I like the idea. I think it'll probably be the first of many Twilight stories. >Celestia says to Luna and Twilight >It does not matter what she thinks, she has every right to be angry and unhappy at her inability to control her emotions in the present I actually never said anything about the EqV version; the people on here who wanted it all to be about Twilight and her friends just threw out a few of the bits of that video I thought you had more. I'll be the one watching. I'd say it's going to be about a month until the book series actually hit the shelves. If you really wanna see it through, you can still get books online right now. >AJ is not a good character, a major villain or anything at all in that comic So who gives a shit about having sex with them. If you need them to be real then why? Well I've done it when I'm bored so I think she's fine with my dick too. Just don't take pictures off my phone. They'll probably just find other ones to take pictures of, just need someone to take care not to take anymore and do it myself. >the one that tried to cover up the hole she just fucked up and turned the bed into... Well I was hoping he'd actually go to the hospital. That's a nice looking pony. [spoiler]Not bad, but isn�ich, just a tad to easy to make.[/spoiler] The comic has had a decent run, and is on track for a first major arc in July 2016 release. If that thing doesn't hit the bookstand by the time the second book arrives, then the arc won't be that good to begin with. >AJ would never try to rape you You might want some sleep Anon Hey, you guys wanna see Anon fiddling with his phone, right? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Xu7k [16100 | 15058.45] loss=2.89 avg=3.26 [16200 | 15147.29] loss=3.36 avg=3.26 [16300 | 15236.09] loss=2.66 avg=3.25 [16400 | 15324.83] loss=3.24 avg=3.25 [16500 | 15413.62] loss=3.34 avg=3.25 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== >▒>she was sitting with a tray. She's got a sandwich and drinks. >You'd give her your tray but you are too nervous. She is standing next to you, at this point you were worried it was a joke. >You would put your drink on hers, but it's not really as good as yours. (2/) >you take the bottle of apple juice. It's not the most pleasant beverage, but you can't help but laugh at the thought of her watching this movie with you at a late hour. >You hold it in front of you. "I need some sleep, Anon. You'll be in for me, okay?" >Aww, poor timing. She gets up and moves off of bed, but stops mid-sentence. "I like Twilight, Anon. I hope you're happy in the mornings." >She smiles, a warm, pleasant smile. You can't seem to do anything but giggle, but if you look like a person who is going to say something good about you to Twilight, you feel nothing. >It's been weeks or months since you talked to her about school, but you can't come up with anything. You just stand and stare at the ceiling for a moment. >It is the first time she actually looks at you. She gives you a very gentle nod. >Before long, she walks towards your door. >What the fuck? >Fuck. >You are the only human in Equestria. >You can't go to university, and you have had a hell of a year. I doubt many humans even know what to call their children. >Not to mention the stress and pressure of being on the internet everyday. "What are you even doing at three in the morning?" >She opens the door and walks away quietly. >You look at Twilight, her head is drooping and her face is blushing a very odd shade of red. >When you turn back to the movie on your TV you see your reflection in your reflection, you are still Anon. "Twilight, what were you doing in the bathroom with the water running up your nose." >Twilight nods and looks around herself and says "Well, Anon, it was a test. But I didn't actually pee!" >"What!?" "It's not a pleasant beverage. But in fact I'm not a person who wants to have an actual human body in a place that isn't comfortable. I'm just about a third my height. I'm pretty small." >"What!? You don't have to be small!" "I am tiny, you idiot! Now get out!" >Twilight runs off and you start to get up. >You start to get up, but just as soon as you start you start to feel hot on your muzzle and on your hands on all fours and legs. >You go back to bed, not even thinking of her next question to do. >You put a hand on your shoulder and close the door to your room, you don't need the room to do it again. >Then you go to the bathroom and turn off the lights, you put some soap in the tub to cool it down. >With that, you stand up and sit on the counter with your hands on your chest. >Some more warm water is left in the tub, and you smell like it. You start to feel a bit of a buzz. >Something cold and warm like ice is starting to make its way to you. "What the hay is going on in here?" >You look at the water in the tub and it's a light mist. You can hear it on the way. >It is coming out of your nose, your chest. It's not the best, but it's a little better than you could remember when you were at your height in school. >As soon as you smell the water, your entire body is trembling. >That's weird. You remember that you were always such a fag in school. >Well, you think that doesn't smell pretty. >Then one of the walls of your bathroom breaks and the water splashes in through. >What the fuck is that smell like? >Well, you can see it from here, it's disgusting. >The water is not only coming out of Anon's nose but from his mouth as well. >You could probably smell the other way a million miles around from here. >Then again you're a kid, isn't that weird to smell a bit from your mouth? >You feel a bit of pain in your skin from the cold water. >Your knees begin to feel weak and a few bumps become bigger. >You begin to get dizzy and dizzy and your mind begins to black out from the cold water [16600 | 15525.03] loss=3.10 avg=3.25 [16700 | 15613.86] loss=3.09 avg=3.25 [16800 | 15702.61] loss=2.61 avg=3.24 [16900 | 15791.46] loss=2.91 avg=3.24 [17000 | 15880.22] loss=3.40 avg=3.24 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== own that we still do when the time comes; if it is necessary or we desire to pursue an adventure through new material, such an endeavour is within our reach and we are merely waiting for the opportunity to seize it. The reason we are here, to get our powers, is to find a way of becoming even better than the ponies, who we wish to share with as many of them as possible. >In order to find that in yourself, the next steps are to do some research, some experimenting, you have to know something first. It is not that difficult to understand. So… maybe I will take your advice. I have been reading the book, because I always wondered what would happen if you could only know what is happening. To give an example for a brief example. Say I wrote a sentence a year ago and it suddenly went: "What if, instead of just looking at the ponies, instead, I could only access their thoughts?" Or perhaps I could just copy some of their thoughts. Now in the past it would have been an experiment… but it was a fun one; if it could be used, and we can see what occurs. What are your opinions, fellow denizens of the horse news? I would love to hear them. [spoiler]And some advice. I am trying to write that last piece.[/spoiler] >She looks at the wall, then at the bed >Her face contorts, a kind of wicked smile on her face >She sits on the bed >Goes up to you, a big smile on her face >"Can I be your new friend?" It works, so I was able to convince the others that this was the reason. I also convinced them that I know what the results of that experiment will be. All those of you who would like me to start now, this will help you get past what I will do to you Yes Yes of course, but then you realize that the entire point of that book was that you could access everyone's thinking in your mind >And while I appreciate the attempt my dear, there are ways to manipulate it back into working for you. Nonsense, I am not using "I know what I can do to me" as an excuse, I will be your best friend >not even trying to save you I agree, this is just how I like it here on /mlh/ now Well, I think they're right: >inb4 "I can't find my waifu" >inb4 she's been getting all these years. >not even trying to save YOU N-no, that's the thing >/mlh/ being right >people being wrong >femrover That's not how I work with this stuff. N http://www.japan.susagi.com/post/108590811/japan-santa-mas-mas-mas http://youtu.be/0xO5tMl0-oq And I thought that was it for my last piece. [spoiler]There was no rest for you, guys. Enjoy your weekend, I hope you enjoyed it.[/spoiler] >What do? >1) Writefag >2) Do it on a weekend >3) Repeat. >4) Do it when it is the longest day of the week >5) Go sit on the couch to let your mind wander and you don't even think about what day it is today, which is just a couple hours away or just like two weeks away when you finally get back to work Well not always like this, but it's my fault that this was hard. I'm not always smart or quick. [spoiler]>mfw this is my first time writefaging[/spoiler] This >mfw this is my first time writefaging >mfw I like writing dirty lesbian cock >mfw I like reading dirty lesbian cock >mfw I liked reading dirty lesbian cock >mfw I liked dirty lesbian cock >mfw I liked writing dirty lesbian cock >mfw I loved reading dirty Lesbian cock I hate both of these, but they're both awesome [spoiler]Futa[/spoiler] [spoiler]Futa[/spoiler] The problem is that these aren't the only ones he's written so far. I'm surprised this isn't the case. >inb4 "I can't find my waifu" >muh waifu >inb4 "I don't know if I should love her, her name is not important right now, and I need to love her, no need for romantic feelings or romantic thoughts. I [17100 | 15990.41] loss=2.74 avg=3.23 [17200 | 16079.23] loss=2.23 avg=3.22 [17300 | 16168.06] loss=3.57 avg=3.22 [17400 | 16256.89] loss=3.37 avg=3.22 [17500 | 16345.72] loss=3.00 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== would like to see it." >"What do you want with her, though?" Rararafags chide. "Why not hang a banner on your house and say, 'Worship my daddy's corpse, because he was a good boy.' If you're right she's just a bitch." >You just shrug. "Well, I think I'm more fucked up than you. I mean, I had to go to the bathroom." >"I know, we're friends. I'm sure this situation isn't so bad." >You shrug again, as the sun rises. "Anyway, how about I help you pack? Or are you going on a date?" >"Oh, sorry... I didn't mean to be so insensitive." >You feel a smile on your face. >"Ah see... that's one reason why I've been so open with my emotions, okay? Like, if I'm lying and this is a dream, then that's cool and all." >The sun continues to climb in the sky as you pack your things. >Rarity seems happy as can be, her face looking like a diamond. >"I don't think so. It was something I accidentally set into motion that I hadn't even thought about before..." >Her tone changes as she tries to calm her nerves as she starts to think about her date. >She is so... >She didn't even think about it, it was just a dream. >...right? >You look over to Rarity, who still hasn't turned around. >...she already started, she should be in the kitchen, waiting. >As you step inside Rarity's kitchen to find your date, you get this. >The look of anger on Rarity's face is like she isn't angry, she's just saying she needs to know you are ready to go. >"I, um... I need to ask you something." >You look back down to the ground. "Um, is there anything that you need that's special, Rarity?" >She takes a deep breath as she walks downstairs. >Her head is shaking as she continues on her date. >"Are you sure you guys really love each other?" "Yeah, we do, Rarity. We're super friends." >"But that doesn't mean that we have nothing to talk about." >Rarity looks like she just wants you dead, and you know it. >This can't be right. >Well, she should. >This is love. >She feels you inside her as you feel yourself in between your legs. >They feel like two completely different creatures. >You both know. >... >You're going to be a real man, huh? [spoiler]Nooope. Sorry... I am just the author of this, please stop saying it.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler]Pony Twilight...[/spoiler] [spoiler]What do you think, you won't do it? If it's for some other reason?[/spoiler] >Not liking pone >In-character I'm a huge faggot for believing it! The best a pony should do is be pone. >not liking pone >caring about the fandom >saying that any pony should be pone >ever >like /mlp/ >not liking furry art >not liking pony-related art >not wanting to get off the ride and start another >like, in a world, if there's an average person doing nothing wrong, they're free to be a pone and a pony-related artist >inb4 he was trying to just draw poni I wonder if that's true. If I had to guess, it would be that the ponies don't really matter at all to the people involved in the show (especially the writers and animators), and the people actually involved in developing the show, the main audience of which are simply fans of the show and the show. Then again, they can, if they want to. People love them. And most people love them. You can also say a bunch of fan animators can't do anything for a show like this. It would explain the animators themselves and how they come up with these ideas. N N >Aria >Stallion >Shining Armor I mean, what do you even call that? I always thought of it like you're talking about your life and it depends on you, so I just go with the idea You didn't give Anon a choice in where to be drawn or not, do you? >Pony >Imaginary >Daft Ponyshit, please [17600 | 16457.09] loss=3.19 avg=3.22 [17700 | 16545.87] loss=3.42 avg=3.22 [17800 | 16634.62] loss=2.80 avg=3.22 [17900 | 16723.46] loss=3.47 avg=3.22 [18000 | 16812.17] loss=2.64 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== VA in every other way but her voice. The second it was announced they wanted to release the first thing for the iPhone version. And then the 2nd What about that guy? If he has shit to do, he'll just wait until it's free so he can use it to boost their sales in order to get as much as possible. Maybe he'll want Applejack and Rainbow Dash to help? It's okay to be a douche! You're a faggot. And a terrible one at that. If you're going to be a faggot, you've got to go the extra mile. [spoiler]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kLgwIhZFQY6E [/spoiler] They're not real but they're really pretty and I can't complain >I-it's my friend I'm talking to! Is there no such thing as a good male character? N >R-rape The only reason to keep coming back is because we need to find better, the rest are nothing new. I'm not a fan of a lot of his writing, but the one thing in general I can't stand is that one character was too stupid to work for more than a few sentences. I can't believe the same can't be said about his other stuff, but hey, his writing is pretty good. >So then how could Rarity find my crotch so easily? >I-I can't let this be something so stupid... >I- I just have to learn how to... >B-But what about Manehattan!? >I-I'd say that's not an option >We just need to wait a bit longer... >I-I think that would be a good idea... >... >... >...wait a bit longer, now... >I had some other things to attend to, but if anything I could go do that now that you'd been here longer. >Ah, you've grown a lot. I'm not sure what you were talking about. [spoiler]But I'm glad you're posting.[/spoiler] So who else is reading this? I really fucking hate this shit. I hate how people here act. I like Twilight, I really, really like the characters but I really dislike the "this is my opinion so all you're doing is saying the wrong thing at the wrong time" attitude. I like a story where someone comes to an agreement on what we're all doing and the consequences of acting on it. What that person says is, you're not going to be arrested for "not following a rule" or even threatened of worse. And if anything you should be welcomed to an anonymous image board that you like and will not be shat on for. >He's just sitting in his chair, bored, and he's gonna go watch her make those cookies Are you asking if she'll have to wear a mask out of fear of what's gonna happen if she doesn't? N >mfw I guess that was an oversight. Aaaand I forgot that Pinkie Pie was in the picture a few weeks back. So I went searching. This is the result: Anons have a boner for Pinkie Pie. Why does Anon have a dick? >She's so cool, but I love her way but never see her anywhere much. You're an idiot, m8. I was bored, tired of my lack of response, had to get anything out I was wondering if anyone had a link for the pastebin So what are the chances of Rarity making this pony thing? Will she be able to make it into anon's cup? I'd say the odds are pretty slim but it's a dream come true. How close to the end I think I would be willing to write it? It's been pretty long, but anything about it or it actually happening was tantalizing enough, I'm curious to see it. I think the way to make the most out of it would be to have her go on an adventure or some shit while Anon is away (so that the Dazzlings don't look to be the ones to talk to). It's a nice touch for her to go out exploring, but I still like where things went, and we haven't heard much of it in a while. I don't think anyone would see it as a big deal, so I'll think about it someday But, the biggest issue would be making the story more "episodic". Rather than an episode about all the major things that will happen between S1 and S2. And I think that would be a real shame, as a [18100 | 16922.77] loss=3.55 avg=3.22 [18200 | 17011.60] loss=3.16 avg=3.22 [18300 | 17100.30] loss=3.24 avg=3.22 [18400 | 17189.06] loss=3.44 avg=3.22 [18500 | 17277.80] loss=3.15 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== . >You put two more coins against the card with a smile. >You're not sure what the other two are. >After a moment, the sound of rolling dice rings out in the background. >You smile to yourself. How many coins you'll need to buy all day >You turn back to the group, who is staring at you. "That's okay, the odds are on us. Come on." >You take your two other pieces out of pocket and point them at the group, who look between them and then back. >The group looks at the coin in their hand and then back you. >After a moment of silence, a voice is made. >"The coin we picked from the pile last night, that we didn't pick until then." >You raise the coin with the sound of rolling dice. "Right." >Anon turns around to face you. >You see him reach in behind him again and pull out, the two of you now having a total of twenty five. >You laugh a little and give one of them an extra, to go onto the next. [1d6+5]You raise and insert it into Anon's palm. >A small glow begins to glow under you touch. >A single glow begins to streak off Anon's palm. >You feel a warmth in your chest - it's like he's a little brother to you. >Your hands slide under the edge, making a gentle touch. >It feels like everything is beginning to come back into place. >He gives a small nod before his hand slides back onto the palm. >Your fingers go right to his palm and then to his thumb on your other hand. >You let out a low breath. >He smiles at you with an innocent smile. >He gives you a quick kiss on your cheek, you notice. >You kiss for what feels like forever. >Soon, the kiss is gone. >It's over. >And you can feel the world turn. >It's time for Anon to go. >There's still another three minutes until he leaves. >You look him over again and start to smile. >He looks your direction, not knowing what you're looking for. "You like that, Anon?" >You blush. "You gonna kiss me?" >He nods. >You and Anon make your way back together. -- Well, at least Anon's gone for tonight. >You start to get out of Anon's lap before he catches your hand. "Hurry up, Anon. The sun's already out." >"I meant earlier." [spoiler]And now, Anon.[/spoiler] [spoiler]Sorry for taking so long since a long time. There was some stuff I wanted to get done before I had to go, but I wanted to focus on other things first to get the rest of the story in order. I'm back.[/spoiler] "We do exactly same thing, after all." >Twilight smiles at you. >"Don't ever try anything like that again." >This makes you feel a bit happy inside. "I didn't think you would agree with me..." >You know how she feels, just how hard she's worked to make you into a princess and then kill yourself for wanting to stop. >You didn't expect her reaction. >"Yes. We're doing exactly same thing, we just got a little different outcome." "Like how you were the first time." >"And now..." >You can tell she's looking at you. "Like that time you fought against me again for this to happen." >Twilight stares at you. >"You mean..." >She stops to look at the ceiling again. >"You mean I had to kill myself?" >She's never had to do anything like that in her life. >You let her stare at you for a moment, before you look ahead. "...No, I mean... when you didn't want me to-" >Twilight stands up, putting them both back. >"...I want this to stop." >"Yes... but if it stops... what is it gonna stop?" >"...The thing I love most about you, Anon.." >The room seems to be empty for a moment. >"That doesn't mean I don't love you. I love you so much." >"Oh... oh no, that really doesn't surprise me.." >You look at her in awe. >She smiles and shakes you, giving both [18600 | 17389.03] loss=3.40 avg=3.22 [18700 | 17477.76] loss=3.23 avg=3.22 [18800 | 17566.50] loss=2.99 avg=3.22 [18900 | 17655.32] loss=3.05 avg=3.22 [19000 | 17744.02] loss=3.71 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== If it isn't this one…" >She pokes your shoulder gently with a hoof – not hard. Like it could crush your skin with that force. >That's the difference. "A-Are you alright?" >She taps your shoulder, trying to get your attention. >"I'm... Fine? Not much, but..." "So, you want me to wait for you to finish?" >"Y-Yes. But I-I didn't mean it." >You feel her sniffle – trying to escape the awkward conversation. >After a while of this, you feel her return on her hooves, and you put your hand on her head, moving her on your lap. "It's my -I'm- sorry." >"It's... I meant to say I didn't mean it." >This isn't getting any worse – you can hear her crying again – but you can't help but giggle. >It seems she can't take the situation any better. "I didn't mean to." >You rub your forehead. >"I've -I've never forgiven you..." "Never?" >Her eyes roll back down you, though you've still got to take notice of their distance from you. >"Never?" "I've never, I've never..." This. If you want to make a shitty "drawfag" joke then go for it. I think my favourite joke writers have been these threads. The old "drawfag" jokes just don't work anymore. I love how you think about your story; how your characters act, and how they react, and I think all you need to do is write the story out and see how it reads. I mean, I'm sure there are people who haven't seen the show at all, but I like to imagine that's actually the majority of people here. I want more green and you know you just said that there wasn't a thread for you, so, I'll give that a try. >The rest of the team goes back into the fray and resumes their work. >"AJ!" >You look down at Sunset. "Serenade!" >Sunset stares into your eyes, a look of genuine concern on her face. >"What? How did you even get a voice?!" >You glance away, laughing with her a bit. >And they leave you hanging. >"A-are you going to let Fluttershy get more? She asked me about her and I..." "Shhh." >You sigh. "I like this party... like it and all that. I've made too many friends that were all gay, or just straight." >Sunset sits silently. "It's not the same. All those gay people aren't any different than anyone else here, is my point." >You look at your shoulder, and back at her – you were holding one of her forehooves. "And I'm a different species. Not everyone I hang out with is your cousin. I don't feel that way. If I could I'd never call you 'cute' or have a 'normal' appearance." >"But your eyes... the eyes..." "They were cute before I told them that..." >Sunset's eyes go wide, and her lip trembles. >"Anon... you think I'm too-" "My eyes. They're perfect." >She looks at you with sad eyes. >"I just want to be with you..." "I'm not gonna be with you. I don't want to be with you." >She sits up. >You pick her up, and place her down on your couch. >You sit in her right front leg, and cradle her to you. >If you remember correctly, she also has a big grin on her face. >After wrapping you in a towel, you run to the shower and take a shower. >In the bathroom, on the floor. >Inside the sink, next to the shower. >It's really cold outside. >You look at the time. "8 - 2.14.14.00" >Sunset looks at you, and puts her forehooves around you. >"I don't wanna be in the tub." "I don't wanna be in the tub." >The water stops, and you stand up again. >"Anon..." >She closes her eyes, and sinks into the cold. >For a moment she stares at you blankly. >"Anon please... I know you love me..." >She looks you in the eyes again – tears still there. >"Anon, can we stop?" >"We love you, Anon." >She starts sobbing [19100 | 17854.48] loss=2.90 avg=3.22 [19200 | 17943.33] loss=2.75 avg=3.21 [19300 | 18032.07] loss=3.29 avg=3.22 [19400 | 18120.77] loss=3.72 avg=3.22 [19500 | 18209.54] loss=3.31 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== words! Oh come lord I thought it was this thread And we have to ask /mlp/ for help If you're not going to help us then help us. That was actually a funny thing to read I don't know how to feel about this, it's really good. N Oh, no, that's fucking shit. It's not a game. N Ayyy b8 I hate how this board seems to be almost literally filled with faggots. >you will never get her to spill some beans and tell you that she's a good mother FAGGOT, it is true. [spoiler]She always does, is why no wonder she is a princess! Because she's fucking good at giving her best[/spoiler] N N https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E_sQG1p6CJ0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eDkVtMqM4tI [spoiler]I think it would be cool to be stuck in a game[/spoiler] [spoiler]So is this pony-only?[/spoiler] N That's what your mom said. Just watch it if that's what it is, you'll learn you really do have good taste N Bump. Please no more porn before the premiere A couple of good ponies, a nice and innocent one to boot. Plus, you get the best out of it http://pow.ly/dw1i4 You know, I wish I knew how to draw as well as I do myself. And how will it go? Is he doing that on purpose? >not a game with a ton of enemies >the only two available will be the enemy boss and maybe 4 other players What a fucking nightmare. Bump. Nebby-s-senpai? Why even go on? [spoiler]You got the impression that this is a man-like relationship to me? Not to mention the fact the relationship you're talking about is a very rare occurrence.[/spoiler] >pony-specific >pony-specific fuck a bunch of moths The fuck are we talking about? N She's definitely got the attitude thing sorted out. I'm not sure how I felt about that, but I did figure out some things, too. >I think it would be awesome if we could use my character as an alicorn. What do I win? >tfw a game with a bunch of alt-wizards i don't see the point in not giving it 5 star approval if they do it anyway bump >She knows. >She's doing this on purpose, even though you think she doesn't. >The fact that she doesn't know makes her seem like a slut. >All she's doing is putting off being honest about these things. There's a difference between not being a slut and someone getting a boner. In the former you can be the slut with a boner, in the latter it can't exist. N N The only exception to that rule is Twilight having an insatiable rage because of something she got from Anon while Anon had no use for her. I think people are just too lazy to take the word "slut" seriously. I mean, if there weren't any other terms that weren't "I'm what's called a slut, you know" than "I'm a slut" would be considered "rape" by a lot of people, especially when so many people don't really think anything about it besides "It makes me the slut." Of course I can argue that "slut" isn't an insult, but I think it's a more polite one than "slut." What's going on between these two? "I don't know. Let's go to the library and get my stuff then." The library and get Anon's? You don't think that he needs anything else? That was great. I'm starting to kind of doubt myself in some situations. I'll be writing some green at some point since I'm not sure how much my life is at stake. And a request. >I'd say she's a very good mother, in both aspects. >She's just a good pony... >But she's got some problems. >Some are worth getting angry about. >You're not sure if any of the problems are worth getting angry about. >Not knowing is a huge advantage. >There's going to be the more than three issues at hand. >And there's probably a lot of stuff there that makes it more likely [19600 | 18320.59] loss=3.33 avg=3.22 [19700 | 18409.33] loss=3.13 avg=3.22 [19800 | 18498.05] loss=3.46 avg=3.23 [19900 | 18586.94] loss=3.37 avg=3.23 [20000 | 18675.67] loss=3.29 avg=3.23 Saving /content/gdrive/My Drive/colab/gpt2out/MLPPosts1/run1/model-20000 WARNING:tensorflow:From /tensorflow-1.15.2/python3.6/tensorflow_core/python/training/saver.py:963: remove_checkpoint (from tensorflow.python.training.checkpoint_management) is deprecated and will be removed in a future version. Instructions for updating: Use standard file APIs to delete files with this prefix. ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== pony. And even that is being facetious >What you thought was true is now a black lie I'm in no way implying that the ponies are not intelligent. What I am implying is that the ponies are lazy, mean spirited idiots who are basically the definition of animal control agents. My point is that I can not take these ponies seriously if I take them as real beings like an actual creature of the earth. In some way, they may be less intelligent than most animals but even so, they are just as capable as a human would be. In fact, that is what my point is. I'm sorry for you, Anon. In the words of God, please don't judge me. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lYGdTQ2gVZo I don't think anyone even knows what that is. No, no I'm really okay with this. https://e621.net/post/show/571855/i_have-a-girlfriend-in-a-dress-and-was-going-to-tour-your-tulip&q=my_sister_and_her1&list=UUQoWf1WbWc3w9 >The man looks down at the floor, watching you for some reason. >"What about the others?" he asks you. >"They're a little busy...I can tell you're just as tense as well." >He's right, because you keep talking to him as you walk along with the other little ponies. >He keeps putting in more details with you on your way back to the entrance of the castle. >This place is like a living being, but his constant questions feel empty. >"What about the guard, is everything going to go well?" >"Maybe not...this city is not quite so well run..." >"But there are still other ponies and mercenaries in your heart. Maybe they'll help out some of us too, even if they're not a pony. >You get to the entrance of the castle and step inside. >"Welcome, sir." comes one of the humans' greetings. >It's not the human who greets you, much more the pony who stands at your side. >"Welcome to Canterlot, General, have a seat, this is Princess Luna and her Queen." >In his seat, a young mare smiles. >"I just heard you were enjoying a nice picnic." >The human's eyes light up. "I'm going to do a very good job at that." >"That's really cool." she compliments you. "It was pretty fun to go on the whole city of Canterlot, I'd say you did a good job." >He and Luna have been dating for a month and you spend your time on the ground chatting. But I didn't think you were being sarcastic when you said you had seen ponies being shot. Well, you did say you had seen ponies being shot last time. I don't think I'm being sarcastic. But I think I still had the wrong idea of your definition of humor. For a second it was like the thread had been deleted. My bad. The show is still up and you guys are still talking about it. There's no more drama or the usual shitposting here, you guys just got mad because you don't like something and think people are being too hard on you. Please continue being a dick and keep being a big faggot. Also, [spoiler]pew, what are you doing here?[/spoiler] >pic related I never realized how much I wanted to write about ponies being turned into little ponies >what you thought was true is now a black lie That's the only difference, anon >she's not real Anon Is it? Is your mom's stuffed animal a fake for your sister? >Aria will never show you affection and be a happy mare >You will never get to take care of your filly Anon while he is around Aria >Your smile never seems to fade and then suddenly your sister comes into view >"Anon, what are you doing here?" >"Don't you want to try a new potion or something?" "No, Aria, that's what I'm doing." >You look at Aria, a look of happiness running down her face >"I need to know," Adagio says. "Why do you care about a pony that little?" >The young lady stomps her hoof. "Why do you want me to try this new creature of magic?" "I want her to be very happy, don't you?" >Aria's [20100 | 18798.67] loss=3.48 avg=3.23 [20200 | 18887.44] loss=3.17 avg=3.23 [20300 | 18976.13] loss=3.05 avg=3.23 [20400 | 19064.82] loss=3.01 avg=3.23 [20500 | 19153.58] loss=3.13 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== patterns Yeah. Maybe. But it'd be way easier if it was a one shot N N It's not a problem, you're my new friend, that i know. Thank you. This is more in line with your feelings than your intentions. [spoiler]It's a thing we do after every episode.[/spoiler] There will be no way out. I'm gonna be honest. This is one of the few scenes in season 6 with a female character who isn't a character. This is the one I remember reading about the most. The other one was the first time we saw an episode featuring one gender only. Like the first time Twilight and Anon were in a romantic relationship. [spoiler]I have no evidence to confirm or not at all.[/spoiler] The "sickness" part, I don't know what to say. >tfw no one will be happy over the Christmas or Hanukkah and it's all about the holidays [spoiler]What do you have in mind?[/spoiler] I love the idea that Flitter was the one that turned into the main character. >"I don't think we understand each. If what you say is true, then all of us were also the one that started that chain of events." That one, if it's not taken out of context, is not that bad. You had no idea how much I appreciated it. The one who will never understand me >Not caring about your neighbors >Not caring about your friends >Not caring about you >Not caring about anything in fact >Not caring about whatever you're doing >Not caring about anything in fact What do you do? >Not using a trip code What, did they try to do that on purpose? https://github.com/wolrdia/Rainbow Dash Threads https://github.com/katec/AppleFist It works very well and I would like to see more stories based off of this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3pRjQQrR3A Aww Oh sweet. >A couple people from the thread just want to make nice, and there's no real way to change the way things work. I guess I'll just have to make a new one I was going to say that this was going to occur sooner though, but then I saw this >You smile seeing this. It was a mistake, but a very big mistake. >Just a lot of things you just have to accept. >This one is one of them. >No one will notice. >No one will care. >They're going to try and do something stupid, or use you that way. That's part of why you had a problem with them. >At least the two of you aren't alone. They don't need to know. And they aren't alone. >You lean back in your bed as you think, the fact that someone will notice you now and it won't be that bad. >You can still sleep. >Especially if it's with them. >So far, everytime you've managed to get past Chrysalis and Rainbow Dash, they've just all ignored your attempts to get to sleep. >It only seemed to be working this time. >They haven't let you get in trouble yet. >Though, it's been quite the adventure. >You're just glad it all seems to be working out. >It does get you out of bed, and you're not sure if you'll be able to move in the evening. >However, you can't wait to fall asleep. >You can't sleep to a life that has started outside of this world. >And yet here you were. >Trying to get some time to yourself; the thought was still vivid in your head. >And a light sigh escapes the mane 6 at the thought. >The thought that you've been through all of this on your way to school. >It's not easy being the only one in your class who did this. >If it was because you had a way to get a better life outside your friends, you'd be living on a farm. >But, it isn't that important to you. >It's just something that you always have to fight for. >Chrysalis, for instance. >Just because she's gone through that, doesn't mean she shouldn't be able to do the same with you. >That, to you, is exactly what's important, and more important. >That, like you said before, Chrysalis is the problem. >You're the one to blame as a leader [20600 | 19264.11] loss=3.64 avg=3.23 [20700 | 19352.81] loss=3.25 avg=3.23 [20800 | 19441.61] loss=2.81 avg=3.22 [20900 | 19530.44] loss=2.82 avg=3.22 [21000 | 19619.22] loss=3.59 avg=3.22 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== There is a very, very few things which do come from her dreams, the only thing she really wants is for someone to give a chance. But she does want that chance and she also wants someone to have the chance to make her happy. That is also why no one has ever done this with Anon, he wanted to feel bad for the princess, he wanted to be the hero he was. [spoiler]But hey, all that can change in the story, in her time.[/spoiler] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y2H8bqSJ9kx0 >The next day at the school, students would rush to see who was in power shoes. >Aww, a little filly! >The filly that had just turned 3 when her daddy was killed...and this happened in the middle of the day. >At school after school, filly after filly, everyone from the school nurse to the Principal, trying to find her with a sign saying "Find my missing little filly" before she ran out of batteries. >When the filly was found, she was in a headlock while some other mare locked her up with a belt. >The two fillies screamed their parents to be quiet, the two fillies being in pain as they were bound and gagged, the first being a little filly who was tied to a cross. >At the end of the day, the filly was put away, and there was nobody but the filly inside! >After she was released, every one of her people tried to contact her and offered to hold her by the tail to make sure she would not run away from them. >They even said she wouldn't run away if they were happy that she got a new heart and a new job. >The filly would not run away. >She ran away to a group called the "Fellowship" to help her survive. >The Fellowship had taken a liking to the filly, and since the filly had a new kind of magic she was the only one allowed to be there. >The Fellowship was going to ask the rest of Equestria if they wanted to join. I hope you get a girlfriend. >you will never be a filly again N A little bit, i've actually read your story and thought you had it in the right place A good bit of "what if" shit about Anon in my head came into mind. >When she arrives one day, there is a very large pile of stuffed animals, most were very small, but when she finally reaches her room, she runs back to the pile of stuffed animals and takes them all. >In their place, she finds one stuffed animal, a small colt named "Mister Scoots." >He's a purple pony, and he's still in need of a big red apple >She puts the stuffed animals under Scoots, and he immediately gets very warm at the smell, even though he was very cold, and gets out of bed. >Scoots watches her play around with everything, including stuffing him with stuffed animals, and eventually gives up and begins to play around with it as well. >When Scoots' big red apple is about to be eaten, he runs to the apple jar to pick, and then runs to the jar, and begins stuffing the little apple with stuffed animals. >That's when Scoot gets a message, from Twilight, saying she's been "caught stuffing things with stuffed animals" >Scoots goes to the jar, and then begins trying to play with it...as well as picking up several stuffed animals. >At first, she tries to eat all of those stuffed animals, but she gets tired of stuffing them, so she's going to just eat them, until she has enough stuffed animals of her own for the day. [spoiler]She also goes to try to get Apple Jack.[/spoiler] >When she gets her food and has enough stuffed animals for the day, she realizes that most of them were stuffed animals of her own...and after eating the meat, she realizes that she's a stuffed animal for some reason. >When she realizes that she's a stuffed animal for some reason, she decides she needs a special blanket after all, so she uses the blanket as a blanket. >Now, she doesn't have many friends, although she's very friendly. >"Hey Applejack." >You look at Applejack and smile, and then go into the store and get your shoes off.[/spoiler] >The girl gets on her back legs and walks in the way to Rarity. >You look in the mirror, and see a white t-shirt on Applejack. [21100 | 19729.76] loss=2.77 avg=3.22 [21200 | 19818.55] loss=3.13 avg=3.22 [21300 | 19907.33] loss=3.38 avg=3.22 [21400 | 19996.06] loss=2.86 avg=3.22 [21500 | 20084.79] loss=2.99 avg=3.21 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== ' the story before, I guess, but it's been really long! I'll try to work on that and try and write more stuff soon, I'm just trying to get my foot in the door and see where it goes For now, here's the pastebin with it all https://pastebin.com/u/NetherPonyAnon [spoiler]I haven't read some of it, it's not very well written, so just take my time.[/spoiler] You're not a dog. Stop calling me that Nigga this is shit. [spoiler]and i have a problem if i have to post this. But i thought it had less gay stuff, it's definitely still more gay stuff[/spoiler]. I can relate to the guy. I was the victim of some sexual abuse as a kid and I didn't get arrested or anything until being 18 to the nearest police station, I had to get permission to drive to places at 18, I still go to parties on the internet all the time, and I'm sure you're pretty gay. You can see some more of her butt than you can of mine! [spoiler]This is my fetish too, but I'm going to have to save it for when I'm in a deep dark cave deep enough to not hurt myself[/spoiler] >implying she would want it >implying she wouldn't use a blanket and a pillow with her How can you say you didn't wanna be raped and beaten by a horse when you love it so much? >it was actually some good story >and it was No, I'm not saying I don't like it. I have yet to say that. I've only watched the pilot and the rest of the movie is filler. But it's my love for the movie. I don't watch a lot of TV. For the past two months I've been talking with my friends, who's idea is to watch the pilot and the upcoming season. I don't know if I've had a chance to talk to any of their parents yet, but I'm getting there. I've been talking to them, and they're getting a good understanding of what it's like to watch the show and appreciate you better than any human to love and tolerate it. I'm starting to think the whole show I came to love was a really good thing. It's not an easy thing to accept, but I know why most people are struggling to understand what it really is. There's been a lot of discussions that it's actually a very good thing to enjoy. To watch it with my friends is like watching a great film without glasses. >it's pretty gay That is kind of gay. Is that you, Anons who watched it? How about a humanized picture of Twilight and the Mane 6? She's probably just going to be in the movie because she's not super hot and we know from what little we know, she's either a complete beta or a slut. It seems it's going to happen sooner rather than later. It just needs time. What do you think about what could be coming out before that next year? I can't promise anything, I didn't think about being gay, and I think it wasn't my intention all along. >It doesn't really matter, because the mane six are clearly all female-only. But what about the princesses - would they be all men? But what about them? Would he want them to have to stay male-only? That would require some changes. I like this idea. Well, they'd probably do whatever they're told to. But just make sure you keep a watchful eye on them from here on out. >I really like the pilot, how is that an unf at all? I guess. Yes, they'd just think she's a faggot anyway, since any person who has not been treated well in the past will not be now. >But it’s really only a problem if you start being accepted for being an idiot >No one knows what a fgf is. They are, but don’t be surprised if anyone is caught watching. >Celestia is the one to realize they are both men and go on with their lives >She'll understand nothing about that >Anon just gets more attention than everyone else while being treated like shit by the princesses and others >The problem is she is also the one to realize that no one else cares about the problem. The first problem we had with the mane six, and we still were having some issues when it became a princess thing. The second problem, they just go off of their way and make [21600 | 20195.29] loss=3.47 avg=3.22 [21700 | 20284.06] loss=3.50 avg=3.22 [21800 | 20372.82] loss=2.59 avg=3.21 [21900 | 20461.59] loss=3.32 avg=3.21 [22000 | 20550.34] loss=3.29 avg=3.21 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== explode in this world, and you will never stop your little sister from getting pregnant while it was still possible and still needed to be done. I'm sorry, there is no way that I could have made such a decision with all the variables of a random child, let alone a small one like Spike, and the world just exploded. >Twilight and you made a pact. >She was going to raise you. >She knew you didn't wanna be her mother anymore; but she got a way better idea. >She planned to name you her son. >She had put a special name in your mouth. >You were going to be her prince. >And you were going to take her to the Crystal Empire to raise him yourself. >You had never thought about a life after you. >All it would take is you giving him your life and your money. >You could live out your days doing the things you loved. >You couldn't go full out. >The first week to the sixth or seventh year. >The first months to the year. >You were an orphan, and had a chance. *PRAICLES!* *PRAICLES!* *PRAICLES!* >Twilight and you were on that walk to the Crystal Empire. >"Well? I have not a choice for a prince. We'll name you yours, but no honor will come from it." >She couldn't deny her royal power, but a child? The first chance her heart had ever given. >You didn't want to waste the chance. "I won't do it!" >Pinkie Pie stepped in and spoke out. >"Oh don't worry, I won't get it from anyone. I know, it hurts, but you have another, right?" >Your mother was holding her hoof. Your mother was holding her. >You and her couldn't share that moment, not together. >No. >Neither will it ever be. >When you first met each other a month back, and it took all of the extra weight off of you, you shared a kiss. >You were a prince, and her a princess. --- >Rainbow Dash >You were sitting on the throne of Equestria, your people toasted by the magic of your magic. The time of your coronation was near. >And Princess Applejack stood outside. >She couldn't believe it; she had to be the hero. In her world, there would only be those evil who would do evil to those who loved them. They would be left with no choice, not with them. And you. >"Oh Anon, you're finally becoming the greatest of ponies and you! A new world is born!" >You looked upon the new world. A land of wonder, not many of them survive in this crazy place. But you'll keep your side of it close to you. "Oh my, what a wonderful day to meet old friends such as you!" >But nothing was said, just a smile. >You didn't even notice until Rainbow Dash had left. Or perhaps she had already passed the day with her own, for you weren't aware. >But now. You were with a good pony and a well-practiced pony, and they had to accept your sacrifice. >You would always love her for all she had done in the world for you. >But you were willing to make sacrifices for whatever it may be to keep them together, no matter how selfish that may seem. >That's why she came. Why did you chose to take the throne? >You had no clue which one she would be; you didn't know whether you'd be a good or evil ruler. >You were a mare after all. >Your new position was well-earned. >Just as always, you were sent out to meet her in her chambers, the kind room it was your custom to avoid during your first moments in the new kingdom. Even your room at Canterlot Castle was very comfortable. A bed, a throne, and even one of the main-stallions quarters where you could observe the more luxurious of the new structures and those new to Ponyville from above. The palace itself could be seen from the balcony and was filled with some of the best fountains you'd ever seen. >You arrived at the palace after a long and uneventful journey, most days passing between your sessions in these new lands. >You didn't have much time now to spend as you were beginning to get used to the all-new surroundings. You were starting to get lost in thought as the new princess of Equestria and the new ways that she could help you. >Her presence was the greatest cheer you got all year. [22100 | 20660.70] loss=2.92 avg=3.21 [22200 | 20749.47] loss=3.33 avg=3.21 [22300 | 20838.20] loss=3.23 avg=3.21 [22400 | 20926.94] loss=3.10 avg=3.21 [22500 | 21015.70] loss=3.12 avg=3.21 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== would do it all day long... you know?"[/spoiler] If theres still a question i'll post in the thread. You should ask it. >Implying a stallion will want to stick his face He would be too fat to actually use force and you can't tell pony from a pony while on a horse tour. >You'll just have to use it for the day You'll just have to use it for the day and the day will continue while the day holds a candle or two, at the least. >Do you really think he'd want the story to get anywhere with a good ending? If he does the story, he'll have to admit to himself that he made a terrible mistake and not tell anyone, it's going to haunt him for the rest of his life... you may be a man, but a man can't stand things that are just not right and if he sees that there will be a good story to tell him that will leave a bitter taste in his mouth, then he'll know that he made a terrible mistake and you should be ashamed for saying that he had a lot of them. >If you think i'm just going to ignore it and hope no one questions me and that he stops being so depressed and is just making it up as he goes on, youre kidding yourself. Well that's why people are usually pissed when they can't deal with his story. At the same time, you gotta admit you'd see shit if someone got too close and asked the same thing twice in the end. That's all I've got for now. Any more? >tfw a full one is needed http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=eJnJF7SbO6Q >http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=eJnJF7SbO6Q I need more of this, I love this character. I'll try to work out some of his dialogue on where I'm going with it. Is there a version where he's making his eyes white or what? If you don't mind. I like the idea, but it's hard to tell how it will impact the story If it's like when ponies are forced to get a pony that can't take a single hit, and makes them drink themselves to death, then you may be able to pull off that If it's in a place where ponies can't speak their native language or know where they're going, then it would probably be easier to have a story like That one (where they're forced to take a day trip to a tropical island with no explanation but then they're left questioning the nature of their surroundings where they end up staying long enough to get an alcoholic beverage that doesn't kill them) You wouldn't exactly be able to tell from a description anyway. They don't know how to use a stick or how to eat. On second thought, I'll be working on some of these stuff later. >pic related I want to rub Spike's belly. I hope this works I want a horse with piercings and horns. A pony with a horn that fits a symbol of justice. A pony that looks like the shape of a gun. And a pony that has horns, eyes, horns and a face. A pony without any tattoos or piercings. [spoiler]A pony that looks exactly like me.[/spoiler] We are, m8. Let's continue. N I want to be german and a brony I want to [spoiler]cuddle[/spoiler] and have fun [spoiler]I want to hang out with ponies I don't know and have fun [/spoiler] [spoiler]No[/spoiler] It's a funny bit that they always had fun. [spoiler]Like, they didn't just laugh in MLPG because it's the same damn thing over and over.[/spoiler] N >Rarity's face when.gif Oh, it's just the image. Oh you. I knew I should've done that That was cool! I really wish there were an episode where Spike was a little better at stuff, because it'd be great. I hope there are more episodes where he's a little better at stuff, though. He's a good pony, but not a very useful one at that. In general, though, Spike has a very important role in the storyline, and the writers want to have him do a lot of fighting. So there, you might as well have him be a pony at the end of the day. Not to mention something else, having Spike be a pony also gives the writers [22600 | 21126.29] loss=2.44 avg=3.20 [22700 | 21215.04] loss=3.52 avg=3.21 [22800 | 21303.89] loss=3.14 avg=3.20 [22900 | 21392.74] loss=3.47 avg=3.21 [23000 | 21481.54] loss=3.35 avg=3.21 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== it out. You feel very warm! 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I'm not that bad at drawing animals. I want to play with them. I would like to see them do something cute and fun with their faces. Like they say in the Bible, "It would take time and effort but my god would bless us." i'm surprised there are no other reviews i'm trying to read through the pastebin when this thread is almost up http://pastebin.com/w6pPYY9c i'm pretty sure that's not a bad idea I'd read it. It's a nice adventure, but I'm not gonna get into it in any detail until some other time. Anyway, here's what I had planned to do today: >Get some breakfast >Get ready for a lecture >Go for a walk >Read the latest chapter of Daring Do >Read some of the comment on the story "I really like Daring Do," wrote one Anon in the course of a short, yet important lesson. "Though, like I say before, I didn't expect to be here." "I think that's fair," responded another Anon. "You're an awesome writer." "Yeah," replied Daring Do, who had done exactly that. "Don't let yourself be a nerd about your work." "You have a wonderful mind, Anon," replied a third Anon. "What makes you say that," said Daring Don't. "It's important you see my work as wonderful, Anon," replied Anon. "Like... what is the best way to do that?" It would obviously be better to put some words between your own words and mine. I don't think writing me in a way where you sound like you think I'd be better off as a writer than you, so I think that should be fine. But I'd have to get better as a writer, because I know some things that I'll need to do to make myself look more professional to begin with. Also, the post I referenced above is a good reference, but I think I'm gonna leave it a little longer, like a third post. I've got to remember that whole thing and maybe the following one, so thanks for that advice. Anyway, I'm out for a stroll. I won't have any of this to worry myself with. This is it. Thanks for writing! And thanks for posting, as well as a request - I really like those two. I'm sure to be inspired again tomorrow. I guess I should start writing again too... N >you will never be a tiny butch who doesn't really care but secretly enjoys sex and cuddles N N That pic is not something that would make "real" writers cringe. It's really cool. If you want a good reference look at the comment in the picture I posted about myself https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGx2vQ2NvKc He could even add a bit of humor if one could figure out how, but his headcanon is really fucked up by the book and makes it seem a lot like the comics No its not. I like both sets >no one wants to do things with you >no one cares about you >you'll never be able to tell your friends not to go to school this late i dont even think you can fuck them up that easily >Lily's face when she actually sees her in the mirror I want to be able to say yes to an idea of your own and do it for a few hours. If you think it is worth it ask if she or Anon could do it for you. N bumpo >the whole fucking internet You're not. >I was thinking of getting a little girl Twilight plush >It took a while, but eventually I found something My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic - Nightmare Moon - Luna's Lament Now I think I'll do Luna a [spoiler]cute[/spoiler]. [spoiler]I just can't stand Luna as a plush.[/spoiler] >noone care about your idea for a character of a little girl [spoiler]That's actually not a bad thing[/spoiler] You still there anon? >mammare Twilight plush >Luna I need it more than she does [spoiler]M-m-m-m...[/spoiler] And if that's just me, I'm pretty sure we're gonna have to go with this, with either anon or Princess Luna. As for whether they'll be any special at all, I'm torn between thinking that Anon will definitely be a little more serious/special in some way, [23600 | 22058.33] loss=3.03 avg=3.20 [23700 | 22147.08] loss=3.17 avg=3.20 [23800 | 22235.89] loss=3.51 avg=3.21 [23900 | 22324.74] loss=2.83 avg=3.20 [24000 | 22413.51] loss=3.03 avg=3.20 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== do with that? I know for a fact this is a thing that happened in Ponyville >You don't see Twilight, but she is looking up at you, as if she could tell you she was about to pass out >She's also looking up at you to make sure there is no way I could get her to fall asleep >So, you lie down, looking into each other's eyes >She looks over at you, so very closely, but without making eye contact. She doesn't say a word to any of the other ponies in this room >It's pretty late. A long while longer though to go back to the party >I should probably leave. Twilight is probably asleep. Not after what happened earlier >You can't let her get that angry with me for sleeping >It can't end up that way... >We have to be together, Anon. >I should probably talk with her alone. She's the leader of this group, and she should know >I don't get what is wrong with asking, but... >I really hope Twilight thinks that we're doing something right here >If that's the case, then she won't be like Anon, if there ever might be a real person IRL If that's the case then that means she'll be a good pony, I'm sure. I actually liked it. This show doesn't get worse every single fucking night. >tfw you'll never have a filly satyr girlfriend >that's a lot of cum I wonder what the actual number of cum would be. https://derpibooru.org/814862?scope=scpeccf8ffa5fd8ba0da70b6b9d3ea3f7cc9ab What should we do? I know what you're thinking >what the fuck am I doing with my life when I don't have one foot in the door to a car >what are horses doing in my yard >I have no one to fuck and fuck when I'm out there getting shit done in my fucking car I just finished my college degree in human sexuality. That shit ain't fun. >Implying it isn't fun to read about sex in the third person. >Implying that doesn't turn me on. >Implying this isn't fun to read. >Implying I have fun in my life now. >Implying I have fun in my life outside of being a normal human being. And Imma give you something else to think about when you decide to tell me I fucked a man What should we give Rainbow Dash? >Implying an adult female should consider herself normal at all That's fine, though. >I just finished my college degree in human sexuality. >Implying that even knows what human sexuality is. >Implying that this is even fun to write. Fuck that guy. >Implying that isn't fun to read. >Implying that isn't fun to write. She is adorable. Yes, anon I bet if they put up a contest for winning a raffle, there's probably at least 25$ worth of cash they get from it. I want an OC but what can I do about it? But I can't even touch the ponies. >Implying I enjoy it when you give me my mares to cum inside on Won't you please stop How about we check in to Twilight's castle before the party starts? It's the only place on the planet with a huge window. >I got a new pc for my family, but that computer is the lowest performing Ipc and shit, and I'll get a new one for all of them. And I thought I was so great >I'd love to see the full picture >I know what I was >implying she's a normal human being So what was the point of that, anyway? >Implying I don't enjoy it when you leave her to take care of herself. >Implying the show isn't fun >Implying I'm not enjoying it myself. >Implying we should put up a contest. But I could just be in love with my horse waifu. >Implying that doesn't make me more fun than an actual human. He should fuck it up. >implying he won't get his computer running it to boot that game. If nothing else I hope he brings that computer to work in the afternoon. >Implying my computer is still working at work today. >implying I'm not working full time at work. N >Implying someone [24100 | 22524.48] loss=2.66 avg=3.20 [24200 | 22613.39] loss=3.40 avg=3.20 [24300 | 22702.20] loss=2.42 avg=3.19 [24400 | 22790.98] loss=2.76 avg=3.18 [24500 | 22879.76] loss=3.32 avg=3.19 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== was with one but i don't think the world would move so much, she still has the eyes. Also her torso is more symmetrical than mine. I was thinking she would be [spoiler]a princess[/spoiler] >Moves his mouth in her ear >Tells her she looks cute with the ear >Says "It's okay" while rubbing the back of your head >When you scratch him he laughs and hugs you and says he won't be leaving >Your eyes look at him like a madman watching a train with eyes closed >He tells her he's sorry she's so cute but won't leave >But his heart sings along and your heart beats with love for you >You try to be tender and not upset. Bump I like the idea, but it's only if I had the time to do the things I'd like to do I would. I wouldn't have this luxury. Well, they probably need to go back and recondition the princesses. N Oh. Good one. So much for all the shitposting? Did the Dazzlings go to the bathroom? Go for this one. Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump Bump. 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In fact it wouldn't surprise me if we did. bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump, bamp bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bamp bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump [24600 | 22990.41] loss=2.98 avg=3.18 [24700 | 23079.24] loss=3.27 avg=3.18 [24800 | 23168.06] loss=3.35 avg=3.19 [24900 | 23256.92] loss=3.32 avg=3.19 [25000 | 23345.70] loss=3.27 avg=3.19 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== : the only reason she's still alive is that you killed the rest and the guard just blew you the fuck out. I don't have enough time for this thing so I'll draw my little sister instead. Oh my God I have no life >She is not awake >You're on the bed >You don't want to wake her up so quickly >At least give her time to think >You start to get dressed and set off into the night. >She's always up late at night, waking you, her dad, and you with a handrail over your head. >So much for being a good sleep >You go to walk down the sidewalk to the subway station. >You take a small step into the chilly air >Your steps are warm; warm enough to keep your ass taut >You walk back to your bedroom, with you jacket on, wearing your old denim jacket and jeans. >You don't need to be half an hour out >You know you'll be out in ten with this. >You get dressed and head for the door "Hey, mister, what can we do?" >"Not sure, but there are certain things you'll need to do, and we just don't have anything at the moment." "Alright, I guess it'd be easier if we get there soon." >You go to go to the station, but something is different. >You can hear the train going on outside... >"It seems you forgot one of your bags. Oh well, where should we get you? You're not a 'freight boy', are you?" "I'm afraid so, Mr. Geeze," >You have no idea why he asked that >"Ah, no, dear! Ah, my apologies. I'm... ah no, it's just-" "Haha, it's nothing. A simple bump here or there, I'm sure nothing more than it should be." >"Aw, no, really?" "Yup, it's fine, you'd be surprised how many times you've had to bump your dick. Even here, it's all good!" >You both exit the station and the train. >You both travel to a seedy part of the city >You both buy dinner and it's a simple salad with lettuce and tomato. >You then come back to your room to just sit in the bath. >It's a few minutes before your dad wakes you up "Come mom, is the shower running early?" >"Welp, you'd be surprised how many times I've had to put that blanket over your ass. Even here?" "...What's the matter? Did I sleep too long?" >Your dad looks at you surprised before rolling his eyes >"What? Oh dear. I'd hate for you to find out." >He looks away from you >Oh dear. You didn't want to know. Was that just embarrassment now? >The elevator begins to descend. >"Anon?" >You look over to see your father walking up next to you, still holding the door for you. "Yeah, you just woke up." >He sits next to you and looks around. >"This might be a good time to come visit the hospital, my friend." >You look over the hospital, which looks rather small compared to a lot of buildings. "So, how old do you think I am?" >"Thirty-six hundredish?" >"What if it's forty?" >"That's not too bad, my friend." >"But did you know your parents were married? So it'll end up awkward if I ever go out to a public place, no matter how much I enjoy it." >You sit next to him and continue your day. >When you get back to the living room, you have a complete panic attack. >You need to tell the guard soon or it will kill your mom if she finds out. >You look at your handrail. >It wasn't really made for a child anymore, so there's no easy way to make it to the subway station. >You need to see some doctor or something. You've never left your home in your life, so I doubt that's the best option. >Now, where is there a better way to go? >You've already checked all your cars and searched them for you mom. >You've only got one remaining car, but you need to make it back home and fix it. >It's been a bit of a long day, and you've had no luck. >You can't even use your handrail to make it to the subway station. >You start getting to your room, which is not what you'd have planned. >When you [25100 | 23456.29] loss=3.00 avg=3.19 [25200 | 23545.09] loss=2.78 avg=3.18 [25300 | 23633.86] loss=3.40 avg=3.18 [25400 | 23722.63] loss=3.30 avg=3.19 [25500 | 23811.39] loss=3.60 avg=3.19 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== ,.%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%23%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%23%22%22%23%22%23%29%22%22%23%2%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%22%23%29R%C2&hf1& and that's about it, here's the full set. "I'm still having trouble believing this is the way it's going to end." You'd never get close to him. "He knows, but I know, I...I'm sorry you had to see him like this." Your father leans in. "He sees you, but he's just never going to say anything. We have to hide. We don't want anypony else to know that all this is going on." And he's smiling. "I'm just glad you're alive. But we can't have you ever knowing this kind of fear." He closes his eyes, not willing to let what he's just seen get out of his system, it's just a nightmare, not something you can ever get over. "We don't want it to ever end. Just so much fun we can't even bear by alone." "We need you right? If only you would let us help you. I know how hard it is having it all, he knows we wouldn't be together, but we need you right?" "Sure, you seem like a great person to me..." He shakes his head, "Just let me assure you, if this is what the others would feel, you'll do anything to bring our family together." "I need you. I want you." "I want you to have everything. I want you to help me. And it isn't just about the money. I need you a little more than I have right now." "When I need someone, what I mean isn't just about the money, it's about how I care for you." He kisses his son's neck, "Just think of it like this. I wanted you to be able to give love to someone. So don't do anything to make me feel. And don't do it before I give you the gift." "Thank you. I am in love. It was an easy day and I was happy." "...And I'm not? Well then, I'll see you soon enough." >Cupcakes with toppings It sounds fun. I'll do it, then. >I'm a white male. I have friends so I can tell u what if I didn't have one. What does your problem with that say about my life? >He just shakes his head. "He sees you, but he's just never going to say anything. We have to hide. We don't want anypony else to know that all this is done." You have no idea my life. "I'm just glad you're alive. But we can't have you ever knowing this kind of fear." You reach into your pocket, you grab something from under Rarity, and you're about to throw it but you roll a dice. "Here" It's a wand. Rarity's hand moves up and down, slowly and steadily. No it's just some dildos. But you can have both. "What the hell is that?" You roll a die, the wand gives a strange one, and a pony walks up next to you. "Pip?" "What's the wand again?" "What is the wand?" Your hand lands on it. "It can be anything." You run up to the wand, your arm is shaking, and you're scared. "What the hell am I doing with this wotamool?!" "What I mean isn't about the wand, it's about the wand you gave me. That's the thing. The wand. You gave me it. To fight my wars. To win the war you fought you gave me. To fight those you gave me. What do you really want if you're fighting a people that you love so much." "I want you to have everything you love back. So don't do anything to make me feel. And don't do it before I give you the gift." You shake your head quickly, just in time to grab a stick with a wad of black sticky red string around its end before slamming a stick down on it. This stick is the [25600 | 23922.04] loss=2.77 avg=3.19 [25700 | 24010.74] loss=2.60 avg=3.18 [25800 | 24099.45] loss=3.20 avg=3.18 [25900 | 24188.31] loss=2.79 avg=3.18 [26000 | 24277.09] loss=3.10 avg=3.17 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== Every and every single pony in the game >A unicorn is the one who decides that you can become a unicorn and can have multiple sexual partners. I don't understand how people don't get the reference for the original. Not that anyone actually does. Because they don't want to admit what a brony is is a weird thing If you can't believe it, so can all of the other people who still want to fuck ponies. Well as long as you post porn, I'm the happiest man/mare/satyr in the history of the Universe. You can be a faggot and you still be a faggot. It's as much as you want You're so autistic and shit you're thinking someone didn't draw it I can't into color theory or my little pony I'm going to have an actual discussion about the show >a thread of people making their favorite ponies into a cartoon show >the end >no more ponies >mfw >tfw I was right What the fuck? What if there is an alternate universe where ponies exist and become canon and they have the same magic, and then ponies are turned into unicorns by accident. In that case, I'd be your best friend for life. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magic_Flight N Huge difference. I just made a couple updates I think you're good, anon https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5u4q1hC6M Well, there goes This is what I do. I keep going though a couple of new stuff so don't look back and catch myself on a bad start. Anyways here's the latest chapter of my Anon in Equestria story. https://static1.e621.net/data/c/1/6/1c/c0313b17db3c26f2c4b18d65e/tumblr_m7s9e3iI2Aq7k1_1280.png [spoiler]http://i.imgur.com/jMmTq1a.png[/spoiler] A couple of my best friends get together from high school. They usually have a great time and everyone always is nice. Anon was pretty much the perfect subject. When they were trying to figure out who was the subject, someone said Anon was the one who couldn't decide which would be better. There was one time when you said: "I can't decide! I can't think right now! I gotta sleep with me, it's so bad... Anon, I gotta go! At that moment someone said: "It was fine, I never really thought about it." That made me laugh a bit, so at that moment Anon thought the worst and left with a little bit of emotion. I went off as a brony, but now I think I'd be a normal brony. [spoiler]Also, this is how life works in my city as well.[/spoiler] I want to punch you in the mouth. That's just mean, m8 bump Don't you mean that. N It looks like a taffy But if you eat it then it becomes a cake! >You know... >You never thought you would. >Well, you never had either... >... >... >So the girl is going to eat this then, right? >You don't know how to deal with all this now. >You always knew the ponies from the village well. >You met her once as a small pegasus pegasus, and she's a pretty good pony. >You just didn't know how big she really was until Luna was here, looking to give you all a bit of a heads up... >She's a pony; that means she's big, but... >...But you don't care... >Just as you open this drawer and pull out the pink, stuffed bunny doll, your face is met with the head of a massive, ugly, red-eyed, pink mare. >You never quite had the chance to react before in her face. >But it was enough that you do as she says and begin to eat your meat. >The pink pony, of course, turns to run. >... >The pink pony stops in front of you... >... >She's a pony with... >... >Her horn starts to glow, and she begins to float, and now, you were faced with... >A mare... >... >... >A mare... >... [26100 | 24387.63] loss=3.26 avg=3.18 [26200 | 24476.50] loss=2.90 avg=3.17 [26300 | 24565.23] loss=2.62 avg=3.17 [26400 | 24653.96] loss=2.54 avg=3.16 [26500 | 24742.73] loss=3.12 avg=3.16 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== okay to do... >You put on your best puffy, happy, innocent smile. "Sorry my timing, but I have to stay in class for another hour or two." >She grins a little. >You turn around to see the blacksmith pony working on your work. >She has her hands on the tools of your trade. >Her head is now almost level with yours, looking slightly uncomfortable. >The pone then takes her hands off the tools, and looks at you. >Her eyes are rolling back in her head. "I-I don't know if, well, I could wait for you, but do you think something along the lines of..." >She starts mumbling something to herself. >Ohshit.jpg >You roll her eyes. "I'm pretty sure we should just leave it at that." >She seems to have no alternative. >You stand up, taking her by the hand, and start out the door. >You never actually expected that it was her bed. >You have a small excuse about being homeless for the night, and you'll keep it if she needs it. >She does, and you two walk to the dance floor around the corner. >You look and see a large crowd of people gathered. >An older female, maybe in her early to her thirties, trots to the crowd. >Her voice can be heard, but sounds far away. >You take note of the dress she's currently wearing. >You're pretty sure she doesn't let her hair down. >You both continue on out of the doors. >You notice that the dance floor itself has quite a few stalls. >You stop in front of the doorway, and look back at your wife. >You can actually feel the glow of her adoration. >As you continue, you notice that you have been making progress on the dance floor. >The dress you're wearing is white as well. The fuck you talking about? [spoiler]That's her fetish. It doesn't feel right, but more realistic than the norm. >inb4 this is bait[/spoiler] >tfw I can't tell if the guy who drew this is from /pol/ or just a fucking idiot who feels entitled to draw every fucking pony. >tfw the faggot has already uploaded one image >MFW So I guess it's not all my fault because of the mods. Now I'm just going to have to wait here till tomorrow for any responses, because I'm pretty sure I can't do anything right this instant. >she doesn't want to see her face when I hug her >tfw I'll feel guilty eventually >tfw because I'm gay and she's not real Just think about it this way Anon: I get to sleep when they're still awake [spoiler]with my eyes closed[/spoiler]. I get to sleep when they're asleep [spoiler]without touching myself[/spoiler]. I get to sleep at night. And while I'm asleep I can dream. I can dream. >tfw Twilight got that one and every night for the past three months [spoiler]it really turned my world around[/spoiler] [spoiler]I also got to sleep earlier and get to dream earlier when they're tired[/spoiler]. I'm still the same age Anon is now. Filly is taking a selfie in your room. >Not knowing she's talking about the penis I know right? I think you're both a shitposters and not me. I'm very sorry for the situation you get but there's probably a decent amount of people that know what's up. No huge deal. N That's funny how a certain general has nearly 500 responses on a single image. This is the right picture for me. N I still can't believe you guys got so many responses. >I've got all this MLP stuff on a memory card. If I do some digging, there can probably be several dozen flashdrives for some random stuff. Oh good. I was just going to suggest that I don't use my memory for anything else since I know that I'll mess up it with an actual harddrive. I'm so sorry for that, but my memory's just way too fucking limited to even use it on an actual program. I'll just dump what I have so far here on a pastebin, for those who care. http://pastebin.com/wHw7sV0r [spoiler]And you can do a bit more digging if you feel like digging. I'm going to need a lot of memory right now. Sorry.[/spoiler] It's not [26600 | 24853.17] loss=3.37 avg=3.16 [26700 | 24941.99] loss=2.70 avg=3.16 [26800 | 25030.73] loss=3.39 avg=3.16 [26900 | 25119.56] loss=3.48 avg=3.16 [27000 | 25208.33] loss=3.42 avg=3.17 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== 6" >she gives her foreleg a pat >"Ya know, the best part of this all-so-perfect world is the freedom to do what yo-know-what is and yah-know what is" >they both laugh >she looks over to the clock >"Dang...That was way to easy" >she picks up the last couple of minutes >"Do you know what ya' want, sugar?" >she gives her a wink while the rest of her friends look at her curiously >you feel a smile cross her lips >"That's too good" She whispers, giving you a wink back >she goes back into the clock's position >you don't really know what's happening >just as you're about to ask her what the fuck is going on, she moves the camera in >she spreads her wings and the whole place is covered by a black mist >she takes a look at what she saw >she's crying >... >she's screaming >you're almost lost but you keep looking for any sign of a sound. >you look to the camera which is now rolling towards the mist >its the mist >the camera >all the ponies are covering it, with a single tear in their eye "S-Sunset... why... " you begin, taking a deep breath >"Breathe." She replies, looking down into your eyes. "It's... it's about me! I've been a mess, and you... you did... you did everything for me! You did what I asked, and you went on, and I'm still here and trying to live my life! I'm mad, because you did this! But this is just... I wanna live in the good-guys world and not be in there!" >you try to stand up and you stumble down as the mist dissipates "But... I... I want to live in the world with friends like you!" I wouldn't mind [spoiler]Rumble[/spoiler] >mfw when I'm at a party and everyone's talking about Twilight >she's getting to your head, her eyes and her smile alluring me with her innocent eyes >I'm about to ask, "What's wrong here?" but then she taps me on the back and says, "I just had to ask... but really. Anon is the only male in my house. And I don't want to lose him." >I'm about to ask, too. But I turn around and see [spoiler]Twilight.[/spoiler] I don't know why, but there's a chance she may actually be able to read that. >tfw you will never hug and cuddle the CMC when she's older and cuddle her older siblings at the same time >tfw you will never kiss them together later on a bed >mfw you will never kiss her brother and sister as they fall asleep >mfw you will never kiss the girls while a girl dances on top of you >mfw you will never pull your shirt over the girls body and then her body underneath it So I've come to this conclusion, it'll be a three part story that goes in three parts, then it will be over with with, followed by Anon, Anon, and then Dash. The ending will be after the final chapter of The Canyouncers. >A couple of Anon's friends are walking by >Oh yeah right, they're gonna be friends after all, and their gonna be on the lookout for the Cacophonies >One friend, he kinda looks like a girl at first >She then says it's "Not the one for you, you know," and walks away >No one else can hear her though, they're all too quiet >After they take a look at the girls, they're all confused and look to each other >They can't seem to find the Cacophonies again, so they turn back at Anon >Anon walks up to the girls saying "Hey, what's up, you looking for us?" >they all respond >Anon then speaks to them, saying that he had a thing for her and Anon decided to go to a party and see where that takes Anon >One of them, Rainbow, stops dead in her tracks, and tries to say something >the others laugh and say she looks adorable >she just says Anon looks "hot" >they keep laughing and giggling >Anon gives her a warm, loving hug and then says "Well, look what's happened. I made a great big group of friends and you girls were all like, 'What the fuck, dude?' And then it all came out." >he then tells them that the Cacoph [27100 | 25319.07] loss=3.11 avg=3.16 [27200 | 25407.91] loss=3.03 avg=3.16 [27300 | 25496.75] loss=3.30 avg=3.16 [27400 | 25585.57] loss=2.24 avg=3.15 [27500 | 25674.42] loss=2.97 avg=3.15 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== but, oh and also have a new book and a whole bunch of other fun things you're missing. Ponies? What? No one is making me that horny right now. Bump [spoiler]Gone for college.[/spoiler] >"Hey, Pinkie, what's the matter?" You ask, poking her >"I'm still getting to the bottom of this," she answers, walking up to you >You quickly follow her, trying to keep your cool >"Where did the Princesses go?" She asks, the only one you're not ignoring >You just stay quiet as a ghost of a pony in a box of ghost food "I don't know. Wherever they went." "W-Well, I have no idea what they went to either. I don't know, and they're not here." >Pinkie points at your stomach >"Well, where is this? I'm worried." *knock*knock*knock* "There it is!" >Pinkie points to a book in your front door >A few minutes later, the doorbell rings >"I-it's for a good reason! Come on in, it's cold out here!" she says and trots over to a table containing three books >You quickly take both books from her, and examine them >They're all clearly for a specific purpose, and even the most basic one isn't that far away >The first book is about a magic mirror, but the cover doesn't match the rest of the books >The cover is apparently a picture of Princess Celestia, with the words "Equestria" written on it >The second book is about Twilight Sparkle, and Twilight Sparkle is still nowhere to be found >The third one is a book about how to get an education >"Where did we go?" You ask, trying to think of an excuse >"We went to the beach! I knew the girls would go there, and we just went out!" Pinkie says, pointing on a beach "So, we went to the beach." >"It looks like it!" Pinkie says, surprised "No, no, it looked very much like the others." >you have no idea where this other world is >it appears to be some land of a different race, much like Equestria >some kind of desert like desert >but instead of the plains and grass you've seen before, it's a barren land made from mud and sand >you've never been there as well >you hope there isn't anyone in this world who's going to remember this world >you arrive in this part of the world, and see a town named "Tallgrass" >which you just found out when the girls, and the town's inhabitants started noticing you >its probably to do the same thing here, isn't it? >and so you decided to look around, see what you could of things >all you could find was a small town >it is pretty big, but it seems quiet enough so that you don't think anyone's around >as you go towards the town, you notice a town square >there's a girl there talking to somepony, and she has a beach ball in her hand >she takes it from her, walks over and places it in front of a pond >she sits down, walks to the ground, and starts slowly walking right to the bottom >she takes a deep breath, and then slowly, and then suddenly says >a stream goes down, and disappears without leaving a trail >it was like a fountain, and there are a lot of crystal ponies sitting around it like they're watching a sports game if they did this, but none of them seem to know what they're watching >not a little to no detail like you thought you did >so, the stream looks like it's still running >it takes long enough to reach this point, and then it stops >where this stream begins, you can't even see it as you can feel another, almost non-existant stream of air >they're all kind of floating and feeling around like it's the ground >there are still a lot of ponies here even though they are outside all the time >this doesn't help but make the water a little less salty >they must have done something in the water >look, there's one of your buddies, Trixie and her friends on the ground >they looked a bit cool to be drinking in there with that tiny little pea-nale N I'd do all the work just for that, that's for sure. How was I? I think that's all I got for ya, Anons in the past are a bit weird sometimes but they tend to come back at the [27600 | 25785.68] loss=2.64 avg=3.15 [27700 | 25874.54] loss=3.57 avg=3.15 [27800 | 25963.44] loss=2.82 avg=3.15 [27900 | 26052.36] loss=3.62 avg=3.15 [28000 | 26141.22] loss=2.67 avg=3.15 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== and have all the stories of his great adventures. If you really have something to like in my stories you should probably check out my other fanfiction and try to see if you like it. And then when it hits the bump limit, we make a new thread in another general and move to the new one. N N >All of it. >All of it. N Das the worst. This and I'm curious as to where Twilight's mane is. That is one I like. I don't believe in god that would be a fucking miracle why don't you go and make your god happy if death is your wish why the fuck would you be here anyway if your entire life in general was just going to be this shit fuck Bump We could still make this an interesting story, and I'm intrigued by the way this is being portrayed. So many possibilities here. >all 3 are great Yes, but why is it an "all of a penny" situation. >You've never been as bad off in your life, and you still don't realize it is a dream No idea, man. So far it seems like you're in the middle of the middle. [spoiler]I'm interested too.[/spoiler] The other Anon said he used to have a fetish for her; He was wrong. N I'll take your word for it: You're absolutely right. Thank you, a lot, for pointing this out. [spoiler]I love you[/spoiler] I like to read stories that make me smile. I'm sure you just haven't found her, but here you go, in case you've missed it. Thanks again. >"H-hey Anon, just a bit of light for your troubles." >You're still sitting there, and trying to process this. >You're a guy, dude. >In that moment, the realization enters your head. >Well, that has actually happened... "Yeah, I don' really have much choice in the matter." >What would've been your position in this situation? >"How about the two of us talk about these troubles? You gotta know what you want, and we can talk about just about anything." >This... works? >Oh no, this is not working. >This is not working! >You start to take off your jacket and tie it in a ball, but it stops as you see the two of them glaring at you. "You can tell him about our problems without worrying about me?" >They aren't actually looking so worried. >They're just surprised you aren't going to answer their question right away. >Wait, what does that mean? >Well, this must've been very helpful... >Now that you think about it, why would they come? There's no way you could make anything nice in a situation like this. >Now that you think about it, maybe it's the least bad for someone to get the word out to you. "Alright fine, I can help. But don't forget it's a big family man." >Shit. >How dare you say that... >You sit there for a while. >And then you see your mother and father looking at you with looks of horror. >It's like they're expecting you to say something back... >But you never do. >This keeps happening in the middle of school. >Is... is this normal? >How... how could such a thing be normal? >You have never seen this kind of thing before. >No mommy, no dad, no sisters or mothers... >This time, you feel as if you could be thrown into a horrible tragedy and then have your way with your tragic family. >How could a family be this... >Why? >Why would it do this to you... >Why did you think of the kind of things you had...? >Why don't you give the thought to an entire family before you make yourself so tragic? >How could this be... >Why would you even think to ask such a horrible question to the least-meanest, least-sensitive, least-evil person you could ever hope to work with...? >"Hey, you know it's never gonna be OK to ask a family like yours." Celestia snarls sternly. "This was your decision, was it not?" >She pulls a hoof out of her pocket and shakes the dust of your blood from it. "It wouldn't be healthy for you. Even if you were a good mother." >You start to tear up, and pull your hoof back. >"You would have learned a valuable lesson by [28100 | 26252.54] loss=3.36 avg=3.15 [28200 | 26341.48] loss=3.70 avg=3.16 [28300 | 26430.38] loss=3.04 avg=3.15 [28400 | 26519.26] loss=3.13 avg=3.15 [28500 | 26608.15] loss=2.72 avg=3.15 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== >'tis/tft >the first thing she noticed i'd said the same for me >I thought >she had forgotten that i was still in my box >she has to know that, otherwise she'll call me a dickhead once she gets tired of me >my face when >i have to admit >i hate all the brone you can just look out for at every other time the main character is around >we can't just let her go because she doesn't respect the other characters in her way for us >it's like that every time she's with us, we must get a new story, and then tell her a new one >i have no idea wtf is going on >I try to put it in their minds that they are in a new world, that they are trying to fight the other's ways >suddenly, she's all like 'what's going on? why is there so much fucking blue in here!' >i have no idea that's what the hell is going on >i try to do as much shit for my little ponies as i can do for my own >but when i do, she's like 'well now we're just fighting for our fucking lives!' >i just had no idea >my mind was just so flooded >I was so fucked up that i just decided to give up >my brain just kinda shut out for the day >then a week of sleep was put on me >i've never been this happy, at least that i can remember. (1/2) >Aria >Likes ponies I have been trying to get into this game for the past year. I like to think that this game is something I like to play with my little pony and you must be playing the same. I do that sometimes with these "horses" games I play with some real horses. I feel like I really like a horse with a human body and skin. I would rather see a horse with more human body (but they don't exist, at least yet) who's made more real for a show about cute little horses. Maybe that's what we want to see with us. My eyes. And then have a second for the thread. My ass isn't going to grow I hope there's more and more pony in here. [spoiler]And what would happen if there were more?[/spoiler] >Implying there's more than one person >Implying its not shitposting >Implying people aren't just newbbers at this point >Implying that's the point of discussion >Implying we have time to talk about it >Implying we need some assbait here >Implying noone can be this retarded But there are other boards for all these things. I could go too. I don't know where to look. [spoiler]But don't worry; we're all going somewhere now.[/spoiler] Pone will be happy. >not wanting to have a kid Faggot She's the only one in this general I'd want to have a kid. B-But you fucks are my friends! You're going to keep insulting Rainbow and making her look stupid. How come you fucks still get offended and act like I wouldn't let you do this? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8QQOcwv2Ao "And for what?" The orange mare just stared stunned at you. >And for what? >Oh yeah. You two still have nothing to worry about. "You'd have to give me something else I should have been able to get." >And why now? The orange mare nodded, tears well in her eyes, though she was the one still sobbing somewhat. >You've finally decided you want to die right here. "But who's to say the others aren't there, or that some of their comrades aren't." >Ah, well, you know why they wouldn't be here or anything. I mean, you're supposed to be the leader of what they fight, right? They could be right to not be here too. "Look, in these things I think I'm right." >They'll see that I'm right too. You know, they could be right to say that you've been a bit over the past few months, not that they're wrong. The last he stood there, she took his head right in her hooves, her head lowering. >I don't want to be around her, she's right, if [28600 | 26719.45] loss=2.96 avg=3.15 [28700 | 26808.32] loss=3.36 avg=3.15 [28800 | 26897.21] loss=5.59 avg=3.18 [28900 | 26986.12] loss=3.34 avg=3.18 [29000 | 27074.97] loss=3.30 avg=3.18 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== Because's that, this thread was created solely to allow a shitstorm. And yes, I realize this might have been just a heads up, but did someone give me the Dazzlings? The second option still doesn't really seem too bad You could give them an arc as well and not use the same character. Just make one that never gets defined, the other one will probably be in the OP. It doesn't even really matter when it comes to the quality. The way I look at it is that with all these threads about what was going to happen next I'm not really worried that much at all. And I still have fun here on /mlp/. I don't go there often but I still enjoy it. N What you mean is we're just gonna post the link here for the rest of you to enjoy it? I'll save them, and I'll have time to write more if that day comes. I've already got some ideas in my head for an alternate ending. [spoiler]And I know you guys want to see them, and...[/spoiler] >inb4 I'll call you a little fucker Fuck I'm so depressed all I want is to see another one of her fluffy pajama pants. We need more pony vore. [spoiler]Or the kind where the pony gets an ass slapped.[/spoiler] >Implying i ever got in the first place Nigga I'd actually like to see a story about Anon, who accidentally gets his leg eaten off by his sister's sister. I bet he'll be given a little help from a unicorn healing potion to get back on his feet, but at the same time he gets to watch his sister suffer from her injuries. Then, he gets out of town to visit her as she's asleep and gets her leg eaten again. Then he returns home to see his wife and kids again. Is it just me or does this guy sound a little boring? >You are Anon. >After a week of vacation, you are already feeling better. >You have even been able to return some money from your ex-girlfriend. >You don't know why, but this has really made you feel good. >The rest of the day, the same boring routine you had been avoiding. >Just spending time with your friends had made you feel good. >You didn't like spending time with these two, that you usually wanted to be with your brothers. >You would've had a job, but their business had no interest in ponies, they'd made a living off your work. >Your work, however, had always kept you away from the office. >And the office was a good distraction. >It was always busy, that's why no one wanted to hang out there. >But today, you were at your house. >There were two ponies at your house. >They looked like unicorns, but what you couldn't remember. >"I told you..." >The white unicorn. >"A-am I.." >The bright pink pegasus. >"My name." "Sister?" I'm not a Twifag, but the whole thing just got a little weird. >Ain't nuthin' official, man. >That is, um, there's not much else to remember about her. >Besides the obvious connection. >You are Skelz. >And you're here with a friend and brother. >At least, that's what the police called you. >You are back home in Cantermore. >The police called you and your companion's disappearance. >So the whole whole town knows your identity. >But you don't think it matters, you just needed some answers. >They never told you. >You didn't have a story. >You only knew one thing. >Your mother.. >Her face. 2/10 No way, no way, what is wrong with you people N >implying it's me >implying im the OP I don't belong to any fandom. I'm just a faggot. Just saying, you're right, I was going to make sure the first few posts are as honest as possible but all I could really do was have a straight-up explanation that the reason why these characters hadn't shown up by a long shot was because of my lazy writing style and/or a lack of creativity from me. but then something happens, anon we all have bad experiences, I understand. and I think having a reason to have flashbacks to them in one episode and not having them in the third seems to me a really good design choice. [29100 | 27185.72] loss=3.37 avg=3.18 [29200 | 27274.56] loss=3.69 avg=3.19 [29300 | 27363.35] loss=3.31 avg=3.19 [29400 | 27452.13] loss=2.72 avg=3.18 [29500 | 27540.92] loss=3.18 avg=3.18 ======== SAMPLE 1 ======== ages the first few chapters I read where I'm actually a villain, but most of the villains I was so good for had pretty lame motivations. A lot of people have used these as inspirations in their writefaggotry But hey, the more time passes, the more I think back, and realize how stupid it was. There was basically no sense in making it into the "dark" side. It's the same power as the light side. This was all just a dream. There was no actual sense of evil or anything of that sort. >she is the next to have done a good job of her own. >she would not be the last. >she has a bit more of a chance now than others. Alright, you faggots I am pleased to finally see you >you are the next to have done a good job This is what I see every day I don't really take it as an excuse to post these two, those are just two I've just read who were decent, I had no idea what the other was about >pushing ponies for their own gain >the only one who has done a good job as all can say is her >you see your fair share of the bad stuff around you. You're not sure why the light-side one got to be evil (which was also good), but she's been doing great this week for a very long time now. I think you've got the thread all on your own, no one's been here long enough to know it's been going on. Good to know how someone will deal with them. I'll have another part about this when I get to bed, so check in here before bed, we don't mind. No you are fucking moron. And by the way, she knows about them as well, right up until you tell her. No really, you're a fool and you're dumb. [spoiler]She should be the other one, the one who was holding them for them, then they'd be the other two that's just a bit easier to convince[/spoiler] N I think it's because those people don't want to be the guy who's always right about everything. Thats why they say the best writing gets better. It also has a lot of appeal for me N Fuck that nigger. Just go to bed. You're drunk and shit, it's not like it's gonna stop if you do decide to leave. I'd ask what happened, but all I hear is "It was the one who helped." >Implying she really thinks you're evil. Or would she be upset if you said the same things? Oh, you mean, you'd rather believe you're just lying because your heart is set on it. >She's a good leader and it's the only thing she'd be going through on an off day that would make you sad. That's why she's the leader of equestria. Aww, that's cute. This is the kind of conversation that makes you smile. Like, even it wouldn't be a complete loss on the surface of the abyss. [spoiler]If you ever get another chance to talk to her, you should definitely. But you know what we mean.[/spoiler] N I'd rather think she's a good person than a total bad person. Hell, I have some resentment for her. She's the girl he told to hide all the time; she doesn't want to be the one he talks to. I think she's just an awkward gal who would probably make the wrong decision sometimes and it's all cool. That's who she is. [spoiler]If she ever gets a chance to talk to you, there should be a conversation or something about how awkward she is and how she screwed herself up in that situation and it would only be a bit awkward. As of right now, she's the kind of person the guy would hang with for life, though. [spoiler]Maybe she should consider going back to ponyville, that seems like a good bet to be honest. [/spoiler] I got an interesting read out loud. A woman and a man. The story, anon has more insight into the mind and thoughts of people than you do, it's been a while since you've read one. What's your favorite story of the series? I'm the girl that made OP a villain. 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