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>So she could partay,and prevent me! from meeting my true lovee, how could uuu.
Ah yeah back when her whining was also mixed in with a playful and sarcastic vibe rather than just bitching. She's still a vain and shallow cunt though. Still needs a huge overhaul to her character.
Over with Rarity's dream sequence. Next up is Fluttershy.
I like how the camera is shown from Angel's perspective in this shot.
This is also the first time Angel makes his appearance, rather introduction. Nobody asked what Angel wanted to do at the gala. Assertive little bunny; nabbing tickets, encouraging Fluttershy and not afraid of anything. Albeit his visual design is kinda boring and his head is too big for his body.
>Rarity: You?! you want to go to the gala!?!
>(Translation: You?! the autismus maximus pony who goes completely numb when in social situations?)
I like Fluttershy's baby voice and the baby music playing during her dream. The original Posey earth pony had her very own garden to take care of. Flutterhy was a garden pony along with her animal care skills, I wonder why they didn't combine that.
Weirdly enough the gala happens at night, yet all the dream sequences happen in broad day light. Fluttershy even mentions "that night, and only that night alone will they all be in bloom" it's fucking daylight.
Anyway. The backgrounds are really boring as usual of the show's Microsoft Paint backgrounds fitting of Flash. Backgrounds cost money. The flowers don't even have outlines, the birds are recycled, there's no pollen in those flowers, only that one bunch of leaf plants have a gradient and are a bit more detailed. Fluttershy's storytelling and descriptions also aren't too exciting.
>Twilight: Wow Flutershy... that is probably the dumbest and dullest use for the tickets, even dumber than Pinkie's.
Well at least her dream sequence was short. Moving on.

Oh wow I'm finished with all the dream sequences. Holy shit they're over!! Fuck yes.
Sadly Twilight doesn't get her own dream sequence, neither Spike. Weird how the main-main character doesn't have her own dreams and goals.
The timer is 10 minutes in. 11 after Twilight yells at them.

So after they all bitch again(Including Fluttershy, stay shy damnit! stay! you're never extroverted when it counts!, dumb dog pony.) and Twilight gets angry, yet she doesn't keep the tickets for herself again cause she's a beta/wimp.
We continue to part 2 of the episode which I don't enjoy very much. It's very dull and the thing people complain about S1's plots being boring and empty.
>Now c'mon, shoo!
Not you too, Spike.

Instead of going to Canterlot, they stay in Ponyville. Canterlot and Ponyville should have been interchangeable locations and Twilight should have went back to Canterlot every episode, it's her home and it's where we started from.
The plot for Ticket Master and Best Night Ever could have been paired together in the same episode. Or just don't make BNE the finale, make it a pre-finale. 
They really could have used the dream sequences as foreshadowing and then made the ponies go to Canterlot and mess the gala up all in one episode, would be more entertaining. Instead we get the same pacing again with each pony trying to convince Twilight to give her ticket to them. It's the same repetitive by the numbers pacing, there is no secondary plot and new discovery//game changer to keep things interesting.

Ah yes the pony restaurant for ponies. 
Nice mushroom stools, floral vases and the hay chairs. Looks cute. It's fitting in theme with Equestria. It looks nice and peaceful, like a restauraunt out in the country and meadow. Much better to eat outside in the fresh air than eating inside.
The french pony adds a nice touch as well. Cute and culturally enriched. Unlike S4's hay burgers and french fries. Jesus. 

Ah yes horses eat flowers and grass. Posey never ate them though. Eating the petals, eating daffodil and daisy flowers. They really should have made these ponies eat grass. I guess that'd be too animal of them. They're well educated horses now, they eat from clean sparkly plates rather than the ground.
>Spike: rubies, offer some gemstones.
My first reaction was that Spike is crazy. Then I understood he eats gems since Over The Barrel and gems are easy to come by in Equestria. Seriously how would you react if this tiny dragon entered a jewelry store and then asked: "Hey can I eat those?" Nigga you crazy. Sure you can eat them for half a million dollars. Raising a dragon must be expensive as fuck.

>Madam, are you going to eat your food in ze rain.
I like that he doesn't call her miss, that shows that they have an age, after all with jobs and stuff.
The rain could have also slowly built up in the background rather than suddenly appear.
Rainbow's bullshit eating is so cute. Same for her piggy face and big rosey eyes. And that angelic sound effect while in the sun. "As god as my witness, I will spout all the lies I can muster"
>I would do it for any pony
Uh huh. Rainbow isn't exactly that friendly of a pony once you get to see her arrogance, her cute non yelling arrogance.
Do the pegasus ponies just start rain storms whenever they want? all willy nilly without a care?
>I'm not comfortable accepting unwanted favors.
Should have asked them personal favors like I said earlier. Sure would have brushed off the repetitive plot a bit and changed the game. Ask them to clean your books, order them alphabetically, be your test subjects, make them go in the everfree forest for something, etc.
>Close that cloud; zips cloud comedically.
Bad idea, bookworm. The belly ache sub-plot continues, she can't get something to eat till the episode ends off screen.

I don't understand why she doesn't take advantage of them and accept all their unwanted favors and then later take a shit on them and say they never did anything. I guess that'd be too alpha of her. Or too shitty of a thing to do for a children's show. Pfftt yeah right like forcefully making friends with strangers you just met and said strangers asking for free stuff the next day isn't shitty. 
Grow a fucking backbone you girly cheesy pony show. Most cartoons have guts in them and a lot of rule of funny to excuse the characters doing uncaring things like my suggestions.

>Twilight! It's raining. Come with me before you catch a cold.
No shit, Sherlock. Can magical horses even get sick? They never had an episode where one of the ponies was sick with the flu and had to stay in bed. Oh hey an umbrella+saddle combo, that way she doesn't hold it with her magic or hoof. Good job.
>Wet Rarity.
How did this not become a thing, yet the one in S2 E5 instantly got spammed and copied. I guess nobody likes Rarity with straight hair like Pinkamena.
>After all we are the best of friends.
Listen lady, we just met yesterday. Listen I know you helped me save the world and all, but that doesn't make us the best friends. We have nothing in common. We'd make for horrible social gets outs together.
>And you know what the best of friends do, right?
Nope.avi
>Makeovers!!
You fucking Barbie stereotype. Is she 5? I think she's 5. No grown-up woman spazzes over make-overs and ponies.