
| Rayo #91488 1 year ago |
Trixie= Let me go.
Pinkamena Diane Pie= HoW's iT fEeL bEinG tHe vIcTiM? Trixie= Please untied me!! RA- Pinkamena Diane Pie= qUiTe pLeAsE! Trixie= Where did you... gulp... got that.... Knife?! Pinkamena Diane Pie= oH tHiS tHiNg. hIs mY fAvOrItE ToY hIs nAmE iS CuPCaKe mAkEr. wE gOinG tO haVE fUn..... fRiEnD. Applejack= Pinkie Pie Please stop you are scaring me.... Pinkamena Diane Pie= pInKiE PiE iS nOt hEre. Rarity= Darling Please, this is not right. Pinkamena Diane Pie= nO oNe I sAiD nO oNe HuRtS mY FrIeNdS! Rainbow Dash= Please Pinkie Don't kill her front of us please... Pinkamena Diane Pie= i WoN'T KiLL HeRe I JuSt WaNt sEe HeR OrGaNs. Fluttershy= Sniff...... Please......sniff PLEASE STOP PINKIE!!! Pinkamena Diane Pie= oh LOoK wHat YoU dId tRiXiE YoU MaDe FluTTerShY CrY NO ONE NO ONE MAKES FLUTTERSHY CRY!!!!!! Trixie= Rayo....Help me.... Rayo= &$3@ The Door is lock, Look like I'm going have to teleport Inside. (Rayo used his magic to teleport himself to the look room) Rayo= Trixi- aaaargh! Pinkamena Diane Pie= OoOoOPsIe! (Pinkamena Diane Pie stap the knife half way on Rayo chest) Trixie= RAYO!!!!! Pinkamena Diane Pie= i'M sOrRy You sTutTtEr mE plEaSe GiVe mE mY kNiFe bAcK. i NeEd to CuT OpEn tRiXiE. Rayo= s-s-shadow blast! (Rayo used a powerful dark magic to sent flying Pinkamena Diane Pie cross the room that she got slam on the wall. Then he used his magic to untied Trixie) Trixie= Are you okay!? Rayo...... I think so. huh? Trixie= She disappeared!? Rayo= Stay next to me, Trixie. (Pinkamena Diane Pie Jumps on top of Rayo and graps the knife on his chest) Pinkamena Diane Pie= gIvE Me My CuPCaKe MaKeR bAcK!! ( Pinkamena Diane Pie Is pushing the knife deeper on Rayo chest Rayo trying to buck her off). Rayo= AAAAAAAAAH! (Rayo Finally buck Pinkamena Diane Pie off from his back while Pinkamena Diane Pie holding the knife on her mouth) Pinkamena Diane Pie= dId yOu mIsS YoUr MoMmY? Rayo= SHADOW BLAST!!! (Rayo use all his power to Knock Pinkamena Diane Pie with his magic) Trixie= RAYO!!! Are you okay? Rayo= I don't know? Trixie= Is she death? Rayo= No I just knock her out. Trixie= Her hair is Back to normal. What are we going to do her- RAYO! OMG! You are bleeding a lot! Rayo= Don't worry I just need to lay down.... you might have to forget having your revenge on her and give her the forget-me- not potion now. Just in case.... Trixie= Okay but don't talk let me get my Healing magic book! Please don't die. (Trixie ran up stairs) Applejack= What happen to Pinkie? Rayo=.... She just snap.....She lost her mind because her..... friends are.... being torture. Rainbow Dash= Pinkie.... Rayo=..... She will be....okay You have the greatest friend ever Rarity= what to you mean? Rayo=.......she..... sacrifice... her sanity to.....try to rescue her....friends.. Hurting.....Fluttershy ..... was the last....straw....... Fluttershy= Pinkie... Please Mister Rayo you are not a bad person please let us go....Mister Rayo.....Rayo... Rayo=........that....is....not...my..... decision to choose Trixie= I found my healing magic book.....Rayo.. Rayo=...... Trixie= Rayo! WAKE UP!! RAYO WAKE UP YOU %$#@ MINION!!! sniff.. RAYO!!! Rayo=........... |
| Anonymous #91490 1 year ago |
whatthefuckamilookingat.jpg |
| Anonymous #91495 1 year ago |
Dear Mr Stu,
Let me make love to you like a bleeding walrus. Your faithful lover, Fernando. |
| Anonymous #91497 1 year ago |
Here cracks a noble heart. Goodnight sweet Rayo. And Flights of Angels sing thee to thy rest.
Now...who wants cupcakes? |
| Anonymous #91500 1 year ago |
The reason he did that is to make the FUCKING trolls happy! |
| Anonymous #91501 1 year ago |
^
So his work finally made someone happy? |
| Anonymous #91502 1 year ago |
^sad But true |
| Obscure #91507 1 year ago |
I await the ending.
I think there's one more story left. |
| Anonymous #91525 1 year ago |
"Trixie= is she death?"
I rofl'd |
| Anonymous #91527 1 year ago |
What is this? I dont even want to know. Yeah anon3 I can use some cupcakes. |
| Anonymous #91530 1 year ago |
I read these purely for the hilariously bad english.
"Rayo=.... She just snap.....She lost her mind because her..... friends are.... being torture." |
| Anonymous #91533 1 year ago |
I gotta say, for the story being what it is, i do find this guy pretty damn funny do to the English as a second languge thing (not maing fun or anything, but it's still funny)
Also, the pictures by them selves are acctaully decently well done. Think it would have a chance of being a decent fic once it was finished and cleaned up. *And no oc, sorry bronie* |
| Anonymous #91534 1 year ago |
^troll |
| Anonymous #91571 1 year ago |
Do not want. fucking OC |
| Anonymous #91584 1 year ago |
How about someone re-writes it so it makes sense and cuts out the OC ? |
| Anonymous #91591 1 year ago |
Oh... It's not so bad...
*Eyes turn* |
| Anonymous #91594 1 year ago |
FUCKING OC RACISTS!!! |
| Anonymous #91653 1 year ago |
There's so many of these floating around I think I'm starting to forget her real characterization. |
| Albatross #91664 1 year ago |
...*Sigh*
Is it just me or are OC's part of what's killing the fandom? |
| Anonymous #91801 1 year ago |
^ just the bad OC's... and really there aren't many... and really they aren't killing anything.. and really OCs have been a major part of MLP since Gen 2 toy modding was officially sanctioned by hasbro. |
| Anonymous #91806 1 year ago |
Did anyone else read Pinkamena's words in Torgo's voice? |
| Anonymous #91815 1 year ago |
The only thing that's 'killing the fandom' are people going 'round complaining about things that 'are killing the fandom'. Lighten up. |
| Skywind #91987 1 year ago |
YEAH RAYO IS DEAD YEAH!!!!!
im going to party |
| Anonymous #92148 1 year ago |
^holy crap I'm actually cheering alongside skywind o_o |
| Anonymous #92164 1 year ago |
OCs are not in and of themselves a problem; a setting with sufficient verisimilitude always attracts them. The danger is allowing the OCs to
1) stand in for "yourself" in a wish-fulfillment way 2) bend or break the rules of the setting 3) integrate themselves into the lives of the main characters via contrived coincidence or overstated importance |
| Anonymous #92166 1 year ago |
also I feel like "Mama Bear" Fluttershy would have been a much better way to put an end to this series than "Cupcakes" Pinkie Pie, since the stare doesn't require her to move or use directed magic. |
| Anonymous #92172 1 year ago |
PiNkIe TalKs LiKe GaMzIe WhEn ShE hAs SoMe MuRdErIn To Do.
HoNk HoNk :o) |
| Anonymous #92373 1 year ago |
THE DOOR IS LOCK
lol |
| PynkyPy #92381 1 year ago |
No wonder why she couldn't hack! Look at that blade! Totally blunt! |
| Skywind #92753 1 year ago |
the more blunt the more pain which means MORE PLEASURE |
| Anonymous #93622 1 year ago |
Looking at this, a thought came to mind...
Someone should make Pinkamena in the same style of this: ![]() |
| Anonymous #95877 1 year ago |
So wait....the one with the exposed skull gets yanked but this stays? Confuse... |
| Anonymous #95931 1 year ago |
Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy
(Hey, what up girl?) Grab my glasses, I'm out the door, I'm gonna hit this city (Lets go) Before I leave, brush my teeth with a bottle of Jack 'Cause when I leave for the night, I ain't coming back I'm talking pedicure on our toes, toes Trying on all our clothes, clothes Boys blowing up our phones, phones Drop-topping, playing our favorite CDs Pulling up to the parties Trying to get a little bit tipsy Don't stop, make it pop DJ, blow my speakers up Tonight, I'mma fight 'Til we see the sunlight Tick tock on the clock But the party don't stop, no Don't stop, make it pop DJ, blow my speakers up Tonight, I'mma fight 'Til we see the sunlight Tick tock, on the clock But the party don't stop, no Ain't got a care in world, but got plenty of beer Ain't got no money in my pocket, but I'm already here And now, the dudes are lining up cause they hear we got swagger But we kick em to the curb unless they look like Mick Jagger I'm talking about everybody getting crunk, crunk Boys tryin' to touch my junk, junk Gonna smack him if he getting too drunk, drunk Now, now, we go until they kick us out, out Or the police shut us down, down Police shut us down, down Po-po shut us Don't stop, make it pop DJ, blow my speakers up Tonight, I'mma fight 'Til we see the sunlight Tick tock on the clock But the party don't stop, no Don't stop, make it pop DJ, blow my speakers up Tonight, I'mma fight 'Til we see the sunlight Tick tock on the clock But the party don't stop, no DJ, you build me up You break me down My heart, it pounds Yeah, you got me http://www.elyricsworld.com/tik_tok_lyrics_ke$ha.html With my hands up You got me now You got that sound Yeah, you got me DJ, you build me up You break me down My heart, it pounds Yeah, you got me With my hands up Put your hands up Put your hands up Now, the party don't start 'til I walk in Don't stop, make it pop DJ, blow my speakers up Tonight, I'mma fight 'Til we see the sunlight Tick tock on the clock But the party don't stop, no Don't stop, make it pop DJ, blow my speakers up Tonight, I'mma fight 'Til we see the sunlight Tick tock on the clock But the party don't stop, no |
| Caramel #95944 1 year ago |
^ Ke$ha is bad, and you should feel bad for posting that. |
| Rayo #100040 1 year ago |
^agreed |