| misnamed #384859 11 months ago |
poison joke makes him smile? |
| Maya #384939 11 months ago |
I can hear him criying inside |
| Anonymous #384951 11 months ago |
We need to kill the batmare. |
| Dustbunny #384984 11 months ago |
*snicker* For a second there I thought he was a victim of the Joker or something. ^_^ |
| WesternBirds #384997 11 months ago |
^ I tried to make it really out of place for ahab to be smiling (it is the poison joke's doing after all) it just happens to look REALLY creepy with ahab's face and bad teeth. |
| GreyAcumane #385412 11 months ago |
I think this was well done. You often go too far out of your way to set the joke up so it ends up beaten into the ground before the punchline, or you don't set it up enough which leaving readers confused, but this one worked.
I'm still left wondering how he managed to run into poison joke, but stranger things happen on the high seas. |
| Anonymous #386484 11 months ago |
^as this guy said, this is one of the very few OC ponies that i love the most, they always make me smile :3 and yes, as i said quite a few times already, some gags may need a lil improvement. Now im not saying you should do exactly what others say, but perhaps you may need some feedback on the rough sketches b4 the final product comes up, so the gag gets improved a lil b4 they show up here to the merciless slaughtering of the anonymous vox populis (aka haters)
keep up tha good work bro ^^ |