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Anonymous
#90959
1 year ago
wheres that pinkie pie fic we're waiting for?
MetalHooves
#90965
1 year ago
Well, it's here. I overhauled everything I thought was wrong with the last one. This one seems more believable, less utopian, in MY opinion. Can't wait to see what you all think. This does conclude my singular plot arc, though; it's been a pleasure, fillies and gentlecolts. I'll be writing more stuff not related to this arc soon. :)
MetalHooves
#90967
1 year ago
^^ Jesus H, I literally JUST finished this one, hold your horses. XD
Leo_X
#90977
1 year ago
Eh. Not enough fire.
Bongo
#90980
1 year ago
Can't wait for Pinkamena Diane Pie! She is going to be so happy!
Anonymous
#91024
1 year ago
Human/gryphon hybrids, lol. Are we ever gonna get human/pony offspring, I wonder?
Anonymous
#91032
1 year ago
Glad things worked out in the end. Also please take your time on the others, we can wait if we must.
Anonymous
#91171
1 year ago
Aww~ it all worked out! Felt a bit rushed, but you seem eager to get back to the one-offs, so I'm not totally surprised. I'd guess any future stories, at least the... explicit ones, will be with a different character?
Anonymous
#91192
1 year ago
*Slow clap*

damn it Metal, y u make me feel bubbly?
Captain_Carnation
#91197
1 year ago
MetalHooves: Holding horses is what we do best around here.
Anonymous
#91268
1 year ago
My only criticism would be that to really maintain a successful relationship with someone like Gilda you'd have to be the type of person to not take a single punch like a bitch and go home. That and the child stuff was a little weird.

Otherwise, I just want to say I don't usually even like this kind of thing but your writing ability has managed to keep my attention throughout. I never thought I'd be reading a second-person fic about pony relationships. Fuck this fandom and everything it's doing to me.
Anonymous
#91305
1 year ago
Hey metalhooves what about cheerlie they didnt even get to meet again. I am disapoint.
Anonymous
#91386
1 year ago
When I started reading about the griffon-human hybrid child, I couldn't stop myself from exclaiming out loud "DO NOT WANT!"
Anonymous
#91388
1 year ago
If I knocked up FiM pony via some kind of weird magic goings on, I think I'd rather the offspring just be a pony.

Hybrids are kinda weird, lol. And ponies are cuter than humans.
DoctorDreidal
#91513
1 year ago
very sweet ending. I'm kind of sad that you're only doing the two finales with this arc, but you've still delivered some well written stuff. Son, I am not disappoint
MetalHooves
#91689
1 year ago
I'll probably be starting on the Pinkamina one tonight, but I more than likely will not finish it tonight; with finals swiftly approaching, I've got to put some effort into not failing math. XD So the list goes: Pinkamina, Lyra [this one will be a little surprise], Rose [squee!] and... hm. Who else?
Anonymous
#91752
1 year ago
^Trixie? Heck if I know, but please take your time so it doesn't seem rushed.
Anonymous
#91850
1 year ago
ohhhh yandere fic :D
MetalHooves
#91856
1 year ago
^^Ooh, that's an idea. I'll make it an extension of the original Trixie one, so it still fits in the plot arc but doesn't change anything.

^ Ish, but it sorta comes full circle; everything was awesome in the end. :D
Anonymous
#91913
1 year ago
Gilda...
NOT AGAIN!!!!!
WAKE UP MH!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT WANT DAT GRIFFON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
#91957
1 year ago
*gilda having a breakfast with me*
DAMN!! It's Gilda again...

*Gilda being a bitch*
Not a single fuck was given that day

*Braking up with Derpy so I could be with Gilda*
oh HELL NO!!! GOSH FUCKING DAMNIT!!!

*Gilda being an total asshole and days of depression*
Is this a lime or a middlefinger pointing at me?

*Gilda being my GF again*
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

*Me and Gilda planning on child and Celestia made it possible*
If this is going to be it, I'm trough reading MetalHooves'es limes and lemons.
Anonymous
#91977
1 year ago
^
Dude, if you don't like this ending settle for the Derpy ending.
Anonymous
#92056
1 year ago
To all the whiners:
There's a reason for 2 endings.

I still want a Celestia one, would be great.
Anonymous
#92329
1 year ago
haters gonna hate, gilda is awesome.

Great overhaul, MH. definitely an improvement over the last one; i approve.
Anonymous
#92597
1 year ago
@haters: LOL U MaD bRo!?!?!?!?
MetalHooves
#93374
1 year ago
I'll probably start the Pinkamina fic tomorrow; I'm so swamped with work right now. Sorry, everypony.
Anonymous
#93463
1 year ago
MH, please never stop with the gilda. I was honestly not expecting something this tender and passionate from someone who clearly has derpy as a waifu, and I really, really liked this.

Maybe a couple of "shorts" of derpy lime or gilda lemon when your workload eases up a bit? I'd really appreciate it.
MetalHooves
#93584
1 year ago
I'll probably revisit Gilda and/or Derpy. In a utopian world, Derpy would be my waifu, but I'm aware enough of my failures and shortcomings as a person to know I could never have a future with someone as pure and innocent as Derpy; therefore, Gilda is my waifu.

As I'm sure you all can tell, I spend a shitton of time checking for new feedback... I wish I had a facebook-type networking system for my penname. XD
Anonymous
#93659
1 year ago
some of us anons spend time checking for your feedback on our feedback. just sayin'.

and don't put yourself down, MH. Derpy may be innocent but that doesn't mean that she's an uppity moralist who insists that her boyfriends would be PERRRRFECT. in fact, she's probably the opposite, so go ahead and put her back on your waifu list. As for Gilda, leave her to those who want to see powerful women with dark past lives who can reveal a surprisingly tender side when pressed, a la Jack from Mass Effect 2... or those who just enjoy really rough sex.

Finally, if you do decide to network, let us know. I'd/We'd love to be able to pick around your brain and give you feedback on your writings.
MetalHooves
#93694
1 year ago
Yeah, but... I dig tough girls. XD

Hm... it feels a bit self-righteous to make an MH facebook page. I mean, i have like what, 5-10 frequent readers? I'll mention it when I put up the Pinkamina fic, which I may finish tomorrow... see what everypony thinks... XD
Anonymous
#93858
1 year ago
Hey MH, this end is great, i really dont expect a hybrid
In any case, great work
Anonymous
#94702
1 year ago
"haters gonna hate, gilda is awesome. "
Personally, I don't like women that act like they're tough. Gilda is a jerk, remember the episode? She's not like "if I love her enogh she will change" no. She's a total asshole and deserves my hate.
Anonymous
#94800
1 year ago
Beautifully written. I honestly teared up at the end.

Weird that people seem to take offense at a fic where he ends up with someone that doesn't suit their tastes, though. Especially when there's already another ending.
MetalHooves
#94859
1 year ago
^Yeah, given the feedback on the gilda stuff in the past, i kinda wonder where all the hate is coming from this time around. Eh, oh well. Sorry I couldn't please everypony. :/
Anonymous
#94865
1 year ago
^
I assumed it was because of these two things:
1) Being a dick to Pinkie Pie
2) Making Fluttershy cry.
MetalHooves
#95767
1 year ago
Everypony seemed to kinda look past that when I posted the clopfics about Gilda. XD
Anonymous
#95816
1 year ago
basically MH, there's one anon trolling you. forget about that loser, since my +1 upboats to you effectively cancels it out.

again, More of gilda and derpy would be appreciated; you don't have to make one of the endings canonical, or you CAN make one of the endings canonical...whatever floats your boat. Either way, a change from this heartfelt sentimentality back into clopfiction would be nice. Not that there's anything wrong with what you're doing now...in fact, it's great. but OUR BODIES ARE READY.
Anonymous
#96537
1 year ago
...you know what, MH? if you're willing to advertise yourself on facebook, I'll be there. I'd love to give you feedback and (warranted) praise.

For the record: you'll recognize me when i address myself as Batty, and when i demand more Gilda clopfiction. and that's as far as I'm willing to reveal on a site such as ponibooru.
MetalHooves
#96686
1 year ago
^
^ Lol, I was being trolled? I hadn't even noticed; I thought people were giving honest opinions, which I always welcome, be they praise or criticism.

^And my idea wasn't to link everypony to my ACTUAL fb, but a MetalHooves page specifically where my 3 or 4 fans could find all my work and give feedback/ideas/etc. Additionally, I'd like to start doing some art/literature collabs with willing drawfriends so I can make my work a bit more unique, and I feel a central place for that too would help. Finally, if any of you would like to know, an fb page would give you all a peek into the theme park that is my mind; it'd be a place where I could learn more about you the readers and vice versa. Of course, all original fics would still go up on Ponibooru, so nothing would really change in that aspect... yea? nay?
Anonymous
#96789
1 year ago
Yea, of course.
Anonymous
#97548
1 year ago
Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
MetalHooves
#97773
1 year ago
I'll mention it when I post my next fic, we'll see what the general consensus is.
Anonymous
#102330
1 year ago
Someone explain how to convert a word doc to an image, please.
MetalHooves
#102520
1 year ago
Put the shit in paint; it works for me! XD
Anonymous
#145022
1 year ago
You can always make a blog....
MetalHooves
#145661
1 year ago
^ I made a flankbook. :P
DrunkVege
#158636
1 year ago
No wait... THIS was the one I snapped in.
I wonder what was the other one...?

Anyways.

I was very, very dissapointed because I didn't like Gilda because she was so jerk in the episode.

Hmm... Where's my comments...?

Gilda...
NOT AGAIN!!!!!
WAKE UP MH!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT WANT DAT GRIFFON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*gilda having a breakfast with me*
DAMN!! It's Gilda again...

*Gilda being a bitch*
Not a single fuck was given that day

*Braking up with Derpy so I could be with Gilda*
oh HELL NO!!! GOSH FUCKING DAMNIT!!!

*Gilda being an total asshole and days of depression*
Is this a lime or a middlefinger pointing at me?

*Gilda being my GF again*
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

*Me and Gilda planning on child and Celestia made it possible*
If this is going to be it, I'm trough reading MetalHooves'es limes and lemons.


Oh my....
I snapped for good.
DAMN.
Anonymous
#313623
1 year ago
*reads premonition of human/grypon hybrid*
*first thought: Flash Gordon hawkmen*

...I need to get out more.