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Anonymous
#151388
1 year ago
hmmm, after thinking for some time im ok with this oc, you may continue
Anonymous
#151412
1 year ago
i'd read it but you had to use fucking retarded font... it wouldnt be so bad if you'd at least didnt use 80% transparent bubbles
StarlightSpark
#151415
1 year ago
They are 70% transperent.
I am working on the readability issue.
Anonymous
#151417
1 year ago
^
StarlightSpark
#151421
1 year ago
Also if anyone has a suggestion for a better font please let me know.
It's my first take at a comic and i need to figure things like this on the fly =(
Anonymous
#151428
1 year ago
Its cute, but honestly, you should maybe stick to just barely opaque text bubbles. That'd fix any problems with the font.
Kohdok
#151435
1 year ago
No. Don't use colored fonts that can blend in with the background. The words need to be readable before they need to be pretty. There is no shame in using black text on solid white bubbles. Marvel and DC do it, so why not? You can also use white text on darkly colored bubbles, but I wouldn't recommend that here as that's more of a Deadpool ting.
StarlightSpark
#151442
1 year ago
Yeah i thought of dropping the transerpent bubbles anyway. or at least bring them up to 95% white.
I only did them cause i didnt want to mask off whole parts of the image i drew xD.
The colored text wa sbecause on Page 2 there is a panel were you couldnt tell who is speaking otherways. But as you say readability is most important.
Anonymous
#151454
1 year ago
This is a really cute comic. I highly approve, and want to see more of these two.

As for the bubbles, I think the font color is a bigger problem than the transparency. See how it looks in all black, then if needed, tweak the word balloons.
Anonymous
#151468
1 year ago
Good comic.
Good characters.
Bad font.
That is all.
StreakTheFox
#151474
1 year ago
I have 0 issues with OC ponies.
In fact, I find it rather refreshing to see people make up their own pony characters.
I sometimes have a bit of an issue when they start interacting with canon, though usually not...
And though I won't rage about it, I highly disagree with OC + canon pony shipping. That's just selfish.
Anonymous
#151479
1 year ago
I think that if the layout and the organisation of your page, your bubbles, your characters... is fine, you don't have to worry about coloring the text to let the readers know who's talking.

Other than that, I like your comic :D
Anonymous
#151525
1 year ago
Black text would definitely more readable. I don't think there would be that much confusion as to who is saying what.

Great art, good OC's but you should be careful of Strawberry Spice becoming a clone of Pinkie.
StarlightSpark
#151621
1 year ago
Also if you find anything in the dialog that sounds wired let me know.
I have a feeling there might be some flaws in my english.
StarlightSpark
#151624
1 year ago
Oh and dont worry Strawberry Spice inf act has a totaly different personality than Pinkie Pie.
Strawberry Spice actualy is a guest Character created by the person who runs the Equestria Gaming website who also uses this name.
I got permission from him to use his Character in my Story. For information on Strawberry Spice refer to the Bronie Wiki. Also check out Equestria Gaming
garm
#151639
1 year ago
Wow. OCs I don't want to demolish with my fists.
Anonymous
#151953
1 year ago
Is it just me, or does Starlight feel like the lovechild of Rainbow Dash and Twilight?
Anonymous
#152015
1 year ago
Great little OC comic but it's damn hard to read.
Anonymous
#153619
1 year ago
English suggestions:

"Strawberry Spice, you here at this hour?"

"Maybe I am just not fit to be in this team"

or

"Maybe I just don't belong in this team."
StrawberrySpice
#155497
1 year ago
Amazing, the only problem I had was being able to read, I'm not exactly sure what the problem is, but it's hard to read :P

Oh! And it's spelled Maybe x3
Prisoner416
#186316
1 year ago
Too bad I can't read it.
Anonymous
#1191990
3 months ago
I cant read it >w<