
| Karazor #430784 10 months ago |
I really liked that story; nice to see it getting some art. |
| Anonymous #430806 10 months ago |
That's awesome. Love the attention to detail in the scene (the beneviolots on the floor, Rainbow's scarf). Only criticism is that the markings on Rainbow's face, or at least the one on the bottom of her chin and the ones around her eyes, make it kind of hard to make out her expression.
Still waiting for the sequel, Jetfire... |
| Marrock #430819 10 months ago |
Seconded. |
| Anonymous #430859 10 months ago |
Dash looks kinda funky. Something about her face. |
| Mushi #430893 10 months ago |
only read untill the chapter five. now i wanna read the rest |
| Anonymous #431026 10 months ago |
Wow, this makes absolutely no sense when you haven't read the story. |
| Calpain #431130 10 months ago |
^
I didn't understand it either, but I heard it was a well liked story and it's drawn decently so I thought I might as well upload it. |
| Anonymous #431230 10 months ago |
So wait... what's up with all the markings? |
| Anonymous #431273 10 months ago |
This scene...
Among the most powerful I've ever read in *any* writing, fanfiction or not. This is a good story and will be worth every minute spent enjoying it. I recommend it. http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/its-dangerous-business-going-out-your.html |
| JP #431392 10 months ago |
I've never read the story (maybe I'll do now), but I wouldn't mind if Dash wrapped her wings around me |
| WizardWannabe #432149 10 months ago |
Man, that fanfic is one of the best.
Can't help but see Old Age Dash thanks to the markings all over her. |