
| Anonymous #30618 1 year ago |
Yes. |
| Anonymous #30619 1 year ago |
While I'm kinda getting tired of Luna being shown as lonely and the like...for this it works. Me like, you win Mogu |
| Anonymous #30623 1 year ago |
Mogu, if i could email you brownies, i would. |
| Anonymous #30626 1 year ago |
^Until we find out the reason why Luna just sort of... disappeared, you should probably just get used to it. Her appearance was quite brief, and she spent at least half of that being afraid or sad. She did seem surprised when she got a little attention during their return, but since then there hasn't been one word about her.
I believe it will pay off. It would have taken so little to add her to a background shot, or tossed in a line ala "Celestia writes that Luna is doing well." Or really, anything. Considering Derpy made an appearance, and Faust is well aware that a lot of people are curious about Luna, well... it seems likely that there is an epic reason behind it. |
| Anonymous #30647 1 year ago |
^ I hope when Luna does get her episode, we find out the reason she has been absent isn't because she's sitting up in her tower, feeling sorry for herself, but the exact opposite. Celestia is actually getting annoyed her newly freed sister wants nothing to do with running Equestria but is too busy being nighttime Pinkie Pie.
The amount of bronies who'll get an aneurysm from this would make it even better. |
| Anonymous #30697 1 year ago |
This only makes the choices tougher now dang it. |
| Anonymous #31018 1 year ago |
with luck they might mention her in the up coming episode since its about jealousy |
| Anonymous #31020 1 year ago |
Unfortunately Faust has already indicated that Luna's reemergence will be in a Season 2 episode. >>3504 So it's not the jealousy one. |
| UndyingSpirit #31266 1 year ago |
I applaud you good sir. Luna deserves love and friendship. |
| Anonymous #31874 1 year ago |
How come every time i hear the song "The Night" by Disturbed I think of Luna... |
| Anonymous #31899 1 year ago |
Luna stole my heart when I saw her the very first time. This just makes me like her more. |
| Anonymous #31908 1 year ago |
if I could hand mogu a bottle of the finest whiskey I could find I would. This was a fucking awesome story! People seem to forget that night is when everybody is out having fun, drinking with friends, partying (real partying), night games are the best kind, raves are ridiculously fun, and sex is more common at night. |
| Anonymous #32045 1 year ago |
Getting a little purple on the prose there, Mogu...
That said? The only thing this fic is missing is a telescope. :) |
| mogu #32621 1 year ago |
I thought the entire point of this kind of thing was in a way to make your prose as "purple" (overly extravagant, sensual, etc) as possible. I know in a normal fic it may be an issue, but in something like this I think I'll take that as a compliment.
And you guys' compliments are too nice. If you want to email me just yourself saying "you're cool" that's worth more than brownies could ever be!~ |
| TophatWaffle #36110 1 year ago |
Gosh darn you mogu! |
| MetalHooves #54384 1 year ago |
Mogu, you are one of my biggest inspirations as a fic writer, and work like this is exactly why. |
| Anonymous #80955 1 year ago |
Pretty good but the "Hornjob" was kind of creepy imo. |
| Anonymous #92517 1 year ago |
the end i thought of, which made me tear a little inside (not to over step you mogu, but i love sad endings)
after the many years of having the most pleasant dreams with the enchanting princess, she always held true to her promise. even after your passing, a few decades after the start of your love affair with the beautiful dark blue mistress, she would sneak away every night, just to sit on the grassy hill. after you had passed on, she announced your mutual love, and had one of the most prominent artists in equestria paint a large beautiful mural of you, with that fateful hill, gently placed in the back, with a clear, cool night as scenery. and since that day, she would look at the painting, and leave for the one hill. and everynight she would look out far into the night, tears welling up in her gentle eyes, staring at every beautiful twinkling star, wondering in the back of her mind, if her true lover's soul was out their in the great, wide beyond. and also wondering... if your soul was out there, staring back with the same tears and admiration as hers. hope you liked mogu... |
| Anonymous #123802 1 year ago |
Luna sure is fast in this one, she only knows the guy for few minutes and she already wants him to make her "feel sensational". |
| Anonymous #291612 1 year ago |
She only loves you because you're the first (and only?) person to love her.
What a weak foundation. |
| mogu #463621 10 months ago |
I still don't quite understand why so many people hated the 'backstory' attempt of this one. Everyone calls it weak, but most of these offered as much as "you're already in the room with the pony" or "some extremely small event got you in bed with the pony" and this time I actually tried to explain in a deeper way why that pony might want to be with you, yet it's the one that's by far criticized the most. Is this a sign that people would just rather do without the attempts at backstory for shorter sensual fics like this, or would they like me to try and piece together a more reasonable one within the limit I'd like to set? |
| Cherny_Pegas #526542 9 months ago |
^ To be fair, I loved that backstory here. The problem I had with your Twilight fic was that it started when "you" have already been dating her for some time, which was kind of like starting a book halfway through (although it was still a great fic, especially the horning part). That's why I prefer when the story is based around "you and the pony are just friends, but then some surprisingly convenient coincidence gets you two in intimate situation", even if it's not exactly a realistic approach (I admit I used it myself in my own limes) What makes this story special is that it doesn't fall under any of these two cathegories. "You" have been devoted Luna's fan for a long time, her feelings for you were growing slowly with each successive letter from you, and when you two meet she finally falls in love with you because you've always loved something that her life was devoted to. I think that's the best backstory that getting in lime situation with pony can have, especially for a pony like Luna. |