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Andante
#585899
9 months ago
A worthy cover if the story ever gets its own page on Equestria Daily
Anonymous
#585919
9 months ago
so is this fic any good? I.e. how does it compare to kkat and somber's stories?
Shader
#585929
9 months ago
@#585919

It's not AS good. Puppysmiles seems to, imo, jump between a 7 year old and 12 year old, maturity wise.

If the writer takes it in such a direction, could easily be soul crushingly depressing. Story hasn't gone there, though... Yet.

Still a pretty good read.
Anonymous
#585939
9 months ago
^^ It's certainly not as dark (yet) as FOE and FOE:PH, or I'd better say that it manages to stay mostly light hearted in the same dark setting, silly at times (sometimes excessively so) which is a good contrast. A good, entertaining story. I say try the first few cahpters and see if it's your thing.
Anonymous
#585941
9 months ago
Ill just wait for the movie then
Calbeck
#585969
9 months ago
OMFG this is awesome.
Anonymous
#586068
9 months ago
i love the small details, especially how her life meter is empty
"Subject deceased. Condition stable. All clear." - Mr. Voice
Atiarotias
#586075
9 months ago
I think it looks a bit too clean though (I haven't read the fic so i don't really know the character setting)
Anonymous
#586216
9 months ago
Anon #585919:
The story is definitely more lighthearted than other Fallout Equestria stories, but this is one of its triumphs. Though horrible things continue to happen to and around the main character, her childish optimism and determination have so far managed to win the day, bringing some hope to the wastelands.

The character concept is interesting, the story by turns hilarious and heart-achey, and the writing engaging despite some easily forgivable grammatical and spelling errors.

I recommend it.
Anonymous
#586220
9 months ago
^ Should also add that this cover art is pretty fantastic. Great job!
Anonymous
#587347
9 months ago
she doesnt look like a ghoul

or is it just the suit?
WavemasterRyx
#587373
9 months ago
Wow, this picture is fantastic... Definitely a great cover, I know it makes me want to put the story higher on my reading queue.
Shader
#591349
9 months ago
@#587347

She doesn't look like one in the story either. Could be explained away by the fact she's literally attached to a repair talisman.
Anonymous
#591506
9 months ago
Anonymous #587347:

As Shader said, the main character is a ghoul in-so-far as she is no longer technically alive. The megaspell that killed her fused her body with the rad-suit, giving her advanced self-healing and repair abilities.
Anonymous
#602949
9 months ago
anon 585919 here: so I'm halfway through the story, and overall, I like it. The dialog and story is entertaining and interesting, and despite the main character's childish mannerisms, it doesn't get annoying. My only gripe is that the author is *really* bad at narrating stuff. The dialog portions read fine, but the moment he/she tries to describe a pony/person/sequence of events the quality level drops significantly. Its almost as if someone else decided to start writing. But overall, id give it a B; It kept be glued and never got boring.
Anonymous
#603523
9 months ago
needs to get to EQD via pre-readers and loadsa fixes.
Isshiki_Kotonashi
#619632
8 months ago
More than that, she seems to be possessed by some kinda dark force or something.