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KLLRDG
#110709
1 year ago
Again, I'm sorry.
I wasn't expecting to get it to sound even remotely "good".
What was I thinking...
Satan
#110710
1 year ago
apology denied
Anonymous
#110715
1 year ago
You don't have to be sorry for your mistakes. Don't mind those ponies rating it terribly.
DragonRage
#110720
1 year ago
AND THEN THEY BOTH

The End

That actually made me laugh. Good job, sir.
Anonymous
#110724
1 year ago
..."HAD CRAZY AWESOME SEX"?
Let me guess, Dash is your waifu?
KLLRDG
#110726
1 year ago
I didn't write it. I edited it.
KLLRDG
#110728
1 year ago
Original story belongs to "ihatecupcakes".
Anonymous
#110731
1 year ago
What's the point of editing it? There is none.
KLLRDG
#110735
1 year ago
I was curious to see what a bad story would look when written properly.
Results - Not favorable...
Facelessguru
#110746
1 year ago
nope.avi

even perfectly shaped poop is still just poop though nice try
ihatecupcakes
#110747
1 year ago
@KLLRDG
Well I commend you for at least writing this crap properly.Sorry for posting the original,I'm not good at writing stories.
KLLRDG
#110753
1 year ago
Try writing a strictly canon story, perhaps with one OC, and have it themed around something show-related instead of crazy gun-toting bloodbaths...
Crazy Pinkie writes itself, true, but this was a bit overboard...
MetalHooves
#110786
1 year ago
Non-strictly canon can go over well if you put some effort into it; look at all of mogu's stuff.
KLLRDG
#110865
1 year ago
For a beginner, I'd still say use canon as guidlines until you can start formulating your own OC stories...
NathanExplosion
#110876
1 year ago
Ah, I love Mogu's fics. Been watching the SFG thread for a long time, none of the new guys quite measure up lol.