
| NetherLips #290652 1 year ago |
inspired by the work of metalhooves |
| ChickNeighney #290661 1 year ago |
Oh, ffs, lol. |
| MetalHooves #290663 1 year ago |
Gee thanks, now I feel like an ass for thinking "Wow, this is really well written". XD |
| NetherLips #290669 1 year ago |
i'm glad you think its good because i'm going to enter it into a local short story competition at the Daphne DuMaurier Literary Festival this summer.
I'm keeping the ending. |
| AdrianBrony #290680 1 year ago |
purple prose at it's"finest" |
| Aquaman52 #290683 1 year ago |
This may not be my most favorite thing ever, but it's definitely on the list of runner-ups. |
| NetherLips #290695 1 year ago |
you have to read this in the voice of a victorian grandfather and whenever a sentence ends you have to scoff |
| DaisyHead #290711 1 year ago |
and here i was thinking that this was going to be like beautiful, soulful thought that was going through big macs mind as he watched the seasons go by. |
| Anonymous #290821 1 year ago |
I could tell this was some sort of joke because of the ridiculously thick purple prose |
| magique #290864 1 year ago |
*initiates slow clap from 80s teen movie* |
| NetherLips #292656 1 year ago |
@anon21
not also the fact it ends with "he also had a boner" |