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Scootsmod
#564739
9 months ago
Alright guys, your input is helping A LOT. What's wrong this time?
DPV111
#564906
9 months ago
I find the lower edge of her face in light could be a bit narrower. It kind of looks like her "chin: is off center.
Her ear could be somewhat higher and farther back from her eye.
Otherwise I see no specific "flaws" with this, but it depends on what your goals are. What are you trying to do with this piece? If you want tips on making it more show accurate I can offer those, otherwise there is nothing that stands out.
Scootsmod
#565058
9 months ago
My goal is to make something that doesn't look like shit. XD

Honestly, i started this out trying out new ways of filling in the line art that weren't as exhausting as my current coloring style.

And as an excuse to reuse the darker color pallete i used on an earlier picture.

Otherwise, i'm getting a feel for how to get lines and shading to work better.

So, mostly i was looking for comments on the shapes and lightning. which i've been getting.
DPV111
#566702
9 months ago
It certainly doesn't look like shit. It looks like Scootaloo.
Scootsmod
#567431
9 months ago
I was told to try working on the eyes next and to make the outlines thinner. Plus the things you said.

I think i will try to change the angle of the grin, too.