| SeveringJuan #491571 10 months ago |
Hi am the drawer of this comic...I upload it as anon and well I decided to make an acount
I want you to give me some usefull feedbag to upgreade my skills =) |
| Fluttershy- #491585 10 months ago |
@SeveringJuan: Practice some English classes. |
| Gittonsxv #491609 10 months ago |
meta as fuck |
| Dachimotsu #491626 10 months ago |
@SeveringJuan: Get an editor to look at these before uploading them. |
| SeveringJuan #491636 10 months ago |
Ok explain me
what the job of an editor??? and how and editor would help me??? |
| Anonymous #491659 10 months ago |
@SeveringJuan: An editor would check for proper grammar and spelling. By allowing the editor to proofread your work, he/she can detect and correct any errors, therefore improving the quality of your work. |
| Anonymous #491663 10 months ago |
Sorry, but these are pretty unfunny.
Nice try, though. |
| Jackarunda #491665 10 months ago |
@SeveringJuan
LOLOLOLOL |
| SeveringJuan #491670 10 months ago |
oooh ok I will check if someone over deviantart would help me as an editor =)
thanks for helping |
| Anonymous #491683 10 months ago |
@SeveringJuan: Lo que Dachimotsu quiso decir con eso de un editor es que trates de conseguir a alguien que sepa bien inglés para que corrija tus textos, porque tienen bastantes faltas de ortografía y gramática. |
| SeveringJuan #491701 10 months ago |
touché
OK buscare a alguien que me checke los comics funfact: muchos dibujantes speecy, CSIMadmax arreglan la otografía incluso después de subir un comic así que no estoy tan mal |
| Anonymous #491720 10 months ago |
^ Por supuesto |
| Anonymous #492040 10 months ago |
I found it pretty funny. |
| Van_Horsing #492190 10 months ago |
The concepts you have come up with have the potential to be quite funny, but like others have said, I suggest going to some sort of proofreader first to get the maximum funny out of your phraseology. Keep it up! :) |
| SeveringJuan #492261 10 months ago |
ok I'll find an editor or check it out the lines in a proofreader
thanks for the support next comic will be better |
| Lancer #492448 10 months ago |
For Ponibooru, this wasn't bad. A nice twist on the original show. |
| Anonymous #492629 10 months ago |
The joke is really good, though. I lol'd. |