
| necroponnyxddd #557597 9 months ago |
taking a break, i got a feeling that i'm fucking up on something here and i don't have an idea what it is that it just looks odd, |
| MaroonBunyip #557606 9 months ago |
looks like regular ol' rarity to me |
| DeeperMadness #557616 9 months ago |
I think it could be the square snout that makes it look a little odd. Your eyes are probably a little tired; try getting a flannel or facecloth, heating it in hot water, and bathe your 'em. It does wonders when you want a quick recharge. Then look again with fresh eyes. It might help. Probably. It'll at least get the blood flowing again when you stand up.
I think the left side of her mouth sags a little, too. Mind you, I'm not sure if that's the look you're after, dude. |
| necroponnyxddd #557751 9 months ago |
hmm, you might be right. imma try that when i get back to it, i never got the hang of drawing snouts, though what you said could help out a lot. yeah i had a feeling somethign's up with the mouth
thanks man! |
| Anonymous #557795 9 months ago |
Also, the left ear looks a little large, and not quite connected, and the horn is a bit...against the hair, the shapes a little indistict, and a little bit flaired towards the middle. a little more definition might help.
Nice work by the way. Gore's not my thing, but if I have to see it, I'd prefer excellently made gore, like this. |