
| Anonymous #25774 1 year ago |
For all the grammar flubs and awkward sentence construction, it`s still somewhat boner inspiring. |
| Turin_Aramaia #25788 1 year ago |
Rather colorful, isn't this one? Pretty good lime here. |
| Anonymous #25799 1 year ago |
It`s always kinda funny reading about these kind of awkward, unintentional situations.
It`s actually really easy to imagine Twilight being really clingy and slightly aggressive when she`s in an unguarded sleep. |
| Anonymous #25896 1 year ago |
What the fuck did I just read?
PROTIP: When a story is written second-person, "you" is supposed to mean YOU. The reader. Not some detective having a random sleepover(?!?!) |
| Anonymous #25897 1 year ago |
^ I think the detective stuff was supposed to be something "you" were thinking about while the girls kept distracting you with their... err... presence, lol. |
| Anonymous #25914 1 year ago |
Lol?
Loved it. But not Mogu, right? o.O |
| Anonymous #25918 1 year ago |
This is gold. I was expecting wingboner, or [from all the colorful language], maybe even an outright real boner. This could use some grammatical revision, but I think it's great! |
| Anonymous #25944 1 year ago |
^ Outright real boner right here. 0.o |
| Anonymous #25960 1 year ago |
LMAO XD i know this wasn't supposed to be a comedy but i honestly enjoyed reading it! (Luna was watching you)...
plus my 2 favorite characters! so that was fun. |
| Anonymous #25970 1 year ago |
Unintentional threesome. Hawt. |
| Anonymous #26114 1 year ago |
Why is it so easy to get a boner for Dash?
This isn't right. XD |
| Anonymous #51076 1 year ago |
This was Hilarious!!! Epic win.
It sounds like heaven, but then again it would be very, very ankward. |