
| Anonymous #395773 11 months ago |
Internet, you have corrupted me.
The first thing I noticed was how she keeps her tail in the first two panels. |
| Anonymous #395782 11 months ago |
I know how she fells, I love to read too but I get writer's block like crazy. |
| angelkiller777 #395797 11 months ago |
Twilight's braingasm is the hottest thing on this site. |
| Kawa #395808 11 months ago |
It is. |
| Lance #395840 11 months ago |
DW Twi, NaNoWriMo's coming soon. And remember, for that it's quantity over quality. You can iron it out later. |
| smartz118 #395843 11 months ago |
Silly Twilight, writing books isn't your cutie mark. |
| Anonymous #395911 11 months ago |
D'aww, don't feel sore about it, Twilight, I may not be anywhere near as smart as you, but I've been in the same place before.
The solution is to do your usual activities and let an idea come to you! (This is super well drawn! 4th panel Twilight is best Twilight) |
| Vree #395918 11 months ago |
Whoa careful Twilight, you gonna spill your happy all over the floor. |
| Anonymous #395973 11 months ago |
I love the artwork, twilight is adorable!....but I must ask if your first language is english. It's a tiny little thing, but there is some strange usage there. |
| Anonymous #395983 11 months ago |
Considering how well she did at the slumber party, maybe she should try her hand at horror :3 |
| Anonymous #395986 11 months ago |
err...hoof :p |
| Anonymous #396102 11 months ago |
Artist here. I'm french and I learned english alone with the internet. Sorry about the errors I can make, I had a hard time with that 3rd panel in particular.
I also wrote "scientifical" in one of my Twilights strips. |
| MetalHooves #396146 11 months ago |
It's okay, Twi. I'll teach ya. :D |
| tygerbug #396748 11 months ago |
It was a beutiful spring daty in equestrias when tilight sparkle was in her study where she lived. Spike! She sayd, come here spike! And spike camed over to her, What do you want Twilight spike said and twilight said "Spike I need you to gt me the book of magic ok spike said I will get it for you and he went over to the bookshelf to get the book for Twilight Sparkle. It was a dusty book and spike almost sneezed but he didn't.
He gaved the book to twilight and she said thank you spike go away now" and spike said ok I will go away and he slided away like a dragon. TWlilight opened the pook to chapter 5 and said ok magic please happen and the magic began happening in her horn and she did the spell! it was a magic spell and she knew that it was magic which is why she casted it because her cutie mark is magic because she is a uunicorn. The spell made everything bigger and eight. "why is everything bigger and eight?>?" wilight said. oh it is because i am a spider now :( |
| Long_Fallen #396953 11 months ago |
@Artist
The usage of english is for the most part spot-on, the only real 'weird' usage was how "culture" was used in the sentence |
| BILL_POOTIS #396996 11 months ago |
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| StalkerZHS #397439 11 months ago |
That frame, with the "YES YES YES YES" is so cute |
| Anonymous #401987 11 months ago |
Twilight, you are such an aspie sometimes <3 |
| XebastianX1 #402104 11 months ago |
Twilight, leave the écrit to me.
*écrit = writting. |
| imnotgivingmynametoamachine #405591 11 months ago |
^why did I read that in Light Yagami's voice, lol |
| Vree #406233 11 months ago |
@Artist
Honestly, as someone with a life-long ambition to be able to speak other languages on a literary level (and non-English myself), I thought the text was seriously impressive - it had nice flow, grammar and vocabulary. I can't claim to be able to spot what would sound unnatural to a native speaker, but when it comes to showing Twi as someone who knows and uses a lot of words, you could've fooled me! |