| MetalHooves #73370 1 year ago |
This one is more of b'aw fic; it better sets the plot arc that has loosely spanned all previous fics, which are, in order, the first derpy lime, the gilda lime, the trixie lime, the mayor mare lemon, the gilda lemon, and now this lime. :)
Sorry it's not clopfiction; hope its well received. Enjoy! |
| Anonymous #73373 1 year ago |
Um...what...
Derpy + Gilda + Lime = WTF |
| Ponymaru #73382 1 year ago |
... awwww....
Now I have to go invent a fourth-wall-breaking-device just so I can go hug Derpy. |
| Soundateer #73386 1 year ago |
D'aw MetalHooves.
Have you actually been taking my advice on matters? ;___; I love the integration with the father and such. Anywho, from one writer to another, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK D; |
| Anonymous #73402 1 year ago |
well, you have derpy done well... though I'm not sure how much Gilda is drifting. I can understand being flustered, but she is borderline OOC. Still good and all, I'm just saying there's something you might not have noticed.
She can still be sincere yet brash, you know. |
| Anonymous #73408 1 year ago |
choose derpy please. but at the same time i fell bad for gilda damn you M.H. stop toying with me.
I really like your stuff you put a lot of effort into this stuff, more than most of us deserve. and i must say i like your lime fic's better than you lemons. |
| Kaptain_Kildarby #73411 1 year ago |
Hmm. If Pinkie Pie were here we would have key lime pie by now. I <3 key lime pie. (read: I heart key lime pie) |
| Anonymous #73412 1 year ago |
So will Mac be fitting anywhere in this narrative or is he a separate continuity thing? |
| Anonymous #73417 1 year ago |
Yay, you used my pic! =D Nooo, sad Derpy :C
I have to say, as much as I loves me some clopfiction, your Derpy fics are my favorites by far. Keep up the great work! |
| Anonymous #73420 1 year ago |
^^ I like both, though I think some of his lemon fics should be 2 parters with a very intense lime to build up proper emotion. Unfortunately the lemon fics tend to fall a little flat without the immediate buildup the lime fics have. |
| Anonymous #73442 1 year ago |
NO! NONONONONO! I want more! I wanna see the end of this! I want Derpy happy! And... I want Gilda happy too... Gah! Nooooo! |
| Anonymous #73452 1 year ago |
congratulations on breaking my heart, metalhooves. no matter what happens, someone gets hurt, and i like both derpy and gilda a lot - though, obviously, for different reasons.
Please don't be too cruel on the dumpee in either version of your finale, or I. WILL START. BAWLING. |
| Anonymous #73453 1 year ago |
This was simply beautiful. Thank you, MetalHooves, for writing and sharing this with us. :) |
| PoniTamer #73455 1 year ago |
Hey MetalHooves, what are you gonna do once this story ends, will you continue to write? |
| MetalHooves #73554 1 year ago |
I promise promise promise that nobody will be hurt, mainly because I'm writing two endings [after the next gilda lime], both of which end in both ladies being happy; not sure exactly how I'll write it yet, but I have a good idea.
And fear not, fillies and gentlecolts. After I finish my plot arc, I'll tackle all the other characters I've been wanting to do. Luna, Celestia, the mane cast, maybe even spitfire and maybe even some background ponies [i have a major crush on Rose for some reason] and after THAT I'll start writing some sci-fi/alt dimension stuff! :D |
| Anonymous #73579 1 year ago |
MetalHooves, never stop writing these. I don't care if nopony boinks ever again, I just love reading them! |
| Anonymous #73601 1 year ago |
I like this.
It gave the whole thing some depth. |
| Anonymous #73609 1 year ago |
I trust yeh Metal, you know how to please a lot of folks. I of course would go with Derpy (I'm a sucker for kindness), but Gilda also comes to mind since you can obviously see she acts much different from the first time you saw her. I think it's a positive shift. Oh man, that's gonna be difficult. Well, I'll assume it's like each ending still involves you being a good friend to the secondary choice. |
| Anonymous #73664 1 year ago |
so MH, you will write a end for the others?, like Mayor or somepony else |
| Anonymous #73687 1 year ago |
@ Metalhooves
Wait, do where do the Zecora, Mac, & Scratch fics fit in? |
| Anonymous #73693 1 year ago |
^
What I mean is, how many continuities do you have going right now? |
| MetalHooves #73745 1 year ago |
All other fics are extraneous, kinda like fappable DLC. XD If everypony so desires, I may be able to write an ending for each previous character, but that feels repetitive, kinda recycled. I'll think about it.
In the mean time, anypony who's new to these, read them all! :D |
| Anonymous #73869 1 year ago |
you don't have to write endings for the side-characters; since you devoted multiple fics to derpy and gilda, it makes sense to have an ending. but the one-offs? not necessary.
This pony also hopes you'll write one-offs for gilda and derpy even after you finish with the finale. they are, far and away, your best work; the derpy for surprising sweetness and honest sentimentality, and the gilda for...i want to say for building a character, but also a pretty large amount for the insanely hot sex. also, on a side note: thanks for NOT doing the mane cast. that would have been awkward, i think; and though i don't doubt that you would have the skill to pull it off, i'm glad that you went into territories that have more to explore. |
| Anonymous #73902 1 year ago |
^
Yes, I too enjoyed the fact that you avoided the mane cast. |
| Kaptain_Kildarby #73951 1 year ago |
Haha! We are no longer banging rocks together here! We know how to make a quantum space hole. I like that when you finish your clopfics you are going to do scifi. The only thing that could be any better is scifi clopfic. Oh, and Portal 2. |
| Anonymous #73954 1 year ago |
MH, I'm a bit curious: do you happen to listen to music while writing your fics, to set the mood or otherwise? I read once that some artists use this to get into a creative mindset...
...and if it's true, what do you listen to, and for who? |
| Anonymous #73957 1 year ago |
^ignore captain kildarby, what this public demands is ponies. |
| Anonymous #73999 1 year ago |
to MetalHooves:
I'm looking forward to your luna and celestia stories. |
| Anonymous #74011 1 year ago |
Beauteful. Keep it up. |
| DoctorDreidal #74047 1 year ago |
I've said it before I had an account here and I'll say it again: Derpy is the nicest milf in the history of...*pulls up a bowl of sponges* Pinkie, you wanna take it from here?
*Pinkie pie pops out* "For-EV-er!" |
| Anonymous #74161 1 year ago |
Dude you rock |
| Anonymous #74412 1 year ago |
keep up the good work :D |
| Anonymous #74803 1 year ago |
Metalhooves...will you continue to write with derpy and gilda after the finale? maybe a couple of short subjects on the matter? they're your best work; not that i would mind the other shorts that you've written (in particular, zecora comes to mind), but...eh. fanboys gonna fan. |
| MetalHooves #74827 1 year ago |
It's cool, guys, Kildarby is my waifu.
I do listen to music sometimes; I have a playlist containing everything from Flogging Molly to Cannibal Corpse. And I may do more stuff with Derpy and Gilda, like holiday stuff or stuff pertinent to specific episodes just to entertain you guys. And me. :D |
| Anonymous #74895 1 year ago |
This rocks. Plain and simple. You're an awesome writer. |
| Anonymous #75251 1 year ago |
Trixie |
| Anonymous #75337 1 year ago |
I started reading this series for the fap material. I now read it for the plot.
It seems like no matter what is wrong with me, be it lust, hate, loneliness... Ponies makes it better. MH you are a hero. |
| Anonymous #77233 1 year ago |
How'd this get a questionable tag? For light kissing?
Makes no sense. |
| MetalHooves #77893 1 year ago |
^Probably for being my work in general; the rest of my work is, well, explicit, so the tag was probably a knee-jerk reaction. I'm not one to argue with the readers though. :) |
| Anonymous #78002 1 year ago |
No gilda please....
Also, how about a lime/lemon around some of the main cast? |
| Anonymous #78004 1 year ago |
I meant no more gilda |
| Anonymous #78245 1 year ago |
No story today?
I really hoped for one *sigh* |
| MetalHooves #78919 1 year ago |
It's not up yet. I may have it up by 10. :) |
| Anonymous #79817 1 year ago |
MORE GILDA |
| Captain_Carnation #80293 1 year ago |
Derpy makes everything right. <3 |
| MetalHooves #80326 1 year ago |
Gilda should be up tonight, everypony. Sorry about the delay, I've had literally four projects to do in the past 3 days. |
| Anonymous #80780 1 year ago |
^Who were you gonna do after Gilda? Trixie? |
| Anonymous #81322 1 year ago |
scraaaaaaatch :D |
| MetalHooves #81802 1 year ago |
After I finish this plot arc, I'll start doing singular works again. Also, IF Gilda's goin up tonight, I doubt it'll be before midnight... Sorry everypony, schoolwork calls. :/ |
| MetalHooves #102830 1 year ago |
You're quite welcome! :) |
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| DrunkVege #158601 1 year ago |
hmm... I guess this is the one I snapped totally.
Weird. All my comments I find are No gilda please.... I meant no more gilda I remember I snapped badly and spammed some nasty stuff here. |
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