
| Anonymous #28760 1 year ago |
O_O' |
| Anonymous #28780 1 year ago |
it's a window into your own mind, pinkie. what do you see? |
| Anonymous #28781 1 year ago |
Oh god why |
| Anonymous #28818 1 year ago |
Soon. |
| Anonymous #28834 1 year ago |
Ponies When They Cry...
This kinda disturbs me. Is Dash next? |
| Anonymous #28859 1 year ago |
^ Pretty sure she got Dash before Applejack. |
| Anonymous #28865 1 year ago |
I don't know what to say. Nothing good, nothing bad. I didn't nor will I read the story, so I remain in neutral. I could honestly only care for the first five seconds that pinkie had horribly mutilated and gored her friend, but in the end, I really don't care. |
| Anonymous #28881 1 year ago |
you should read the story man its pretty good (a lie) |
| Anonymous #28898 1 year ago |
The story isn't that bad, I don't see what everybody's so butthurt about. It's just a story. |
| Anonymous #28937 1 year ago |
as an irl writer i can tell you that the prose was a little sloppy. the author fell for the most common mistake fanfiction writers makes: too many descriptive nouns. it's always "the blue pegasus said" and "the injured pony screamed" and so on. It's usually a much better idea to simply use "she" or if you need to distinguish between two or more characters, their name. it makes the sentience flow much better. excessive nouns are distracting. your reader should be focusing on what is going on in the story, not your word choice. doing this is indulgent.
er, sorry for sperging. it's a pet peeve of mine. otherwise the story is just torture porn. if you've seen saw or hostel you know what to expect. i guess i can give the author props for knowing all the right ways to torture a pony and make it seem visceral. i don't think people are getting butthurt as much as having fun with the ridiculous topic. |
| Anonymous #28993 1 year ago |
^but sloppy pros is what makes a fanfic a fanfic. u clearly don't know the first thing about writing a good shitty fic sir. |
| Anonymous #29022 1 year ago |
FUCK :( you're right. i guess i'm not cut out for the harsh, uncompromising world of fan fiction writing |
| Anonymous #31681 1 year ago |
It was sloppy writing, yeah; but for people who are genuinely attached to the characters involved, it's easy to overlook poor writing and when your mind is constantly filling in the blanks for it.
As someone who finds Pinkie/Dash shipping adorable, I found Cupcakes to be revolting and highly disturbing. Thankfully, the alternate ending was very well-written. |
| Anonymous #31688 1 year ago |
At least we don't have a Pony version of My Immortal... yet. |
| Anonymous #35095 1 year ago |
cute |
| Anonymous #39561 1 year ago |
^^i can agree with you on that. after reading the fic, it stuck with me for a while. even if the tools involved are weak, the imagination in the story is strong. it does what it does well, which is why it has established itself as part of the community brainwave, whether people like it or not.
also, apple dash 4 lyfe, fuk you, ljksgklhsf |
| Anonymous #49366 1 year ago |
>Look out window
>See into mind >Laugh and go to bed Pinkie's life in three lines. |
| Anonymous #97608 1 year ago |
Fuck yo shit nigga, PinkieDash represent. |