
| Anonymous #343246 11 months ago |
inb4 Doctor_Whooves |
| DoctorWhooves #343251 11 months ago |
wow, this is actually pretty well made! personally, i'd add in a bit of color correction, smoke, try NOT to use the citadel explosion effect since it's too memorable (due to unique textures and lots of unexperienced posers using it) and looks bad anyways, modify the atmosphere a little bit with just some color dabs with a brush, use a better font than the first one your image editing program shows you for the text, add some fire + smoke to the plane that looks like it's going down, and make twilight hold the gun with her magic.
that may seem like a big list of things, but it's actually pretty small since most of them wouldn't take too much time at all - but most of what i see here actually is pretty good! but please, for your own sake - don't use gm_construct for your next picture! |
| DoctorWhooves #343253 11 months ago |
OH GOD DAMN IT ANON |
| DoctorWhooves #343259 11 months ago |
anyways, yes, while i do announce most poses are bad or effortless, it's because they really seem like the person plopped ragdolls in and called it a comic - this looks like someone really put effort in! so kudos to whoever made this pic (: |