
| Iona #409042 11 months ago |
Awww. |
| ThePowerofANON #409049 11 months ago |
Wow, I had a teardrop in the corner of my eye while reading this. |
| Gittonsxv #409050 11 months ago |
is this part of a series? i like it anyway :3 |
| zralf #409060 11 months ago |
i teared up a little. also i noticed a joke: the last panel has a pony witha a hammer as a cutie mark, a reference to the CMC i presume. |
| Anonymous #409061 11 months ago |
Nice but .... Rapiddash Celestia ? really ?
I guess twilight rapiddash is not *original* anymore. |
| Gittonsxv #409067 11 months ago |
anon, celly is a SUN GOD...so...fire is her thing |
| PonyRIG #409072 11 months ago |
waaaaa! so sad! |
| Sunspark #409078 11 months ago |
That's just so incredibly wonderful. I... I just don't even know what to say. |
| AdrianBrony #409083 11 months ago |
after this, the royal baths were equipped with doors. |
| Kein #409085 11 months ago |
New Ego was born. |
| Kooner #409087 11 months ago |
This is .... wonderfull |
| Kein #409089 11 months ago |
@Gittonsxv
>>47769 part 1 |
| AdrianBrony #409099 11 months ago |
#409083
crap, I just realized how dirty that could be taken. |
| Anonymous #409102 11 months ago |
#409083 - I would make a *And than they ...* joke but am not going to. |
| gashunk #409112 11 months ago |
"nag"
...teehee...horse puns. |
| Calbeck #409123 11 months ago |
First I d'awwed.
Then I b'awwed. |
| Turin_Aramaia #409129 11 months ago |
Doors would make the gossip situation worse, so they're not needed. If they wanted that much privacy, they'd have more guards, even black umbrellas. |
| Anonymous #409145 11 months ago |
This is not the true Celestia ...
Also did everypony forget that Celestia Banished Luna to the moon ? |
| nyxabuse #409147 11 months ago |
This is good work, but I hope that series two doesn't have anything like it. The idea of Luna being a pure victim, completely unconscious to the evil NMM was committing, doesn't appeal to me. Isn't the story as presented in the pilot - that Luna's loneliness led her to madness - a much better fit to the themes of the show? Isn't it much more poignant for Celestia to have to banish her sister for the greater good - as opposed to some daemon using her sister's body?
And yes, I know that Faust said that there were outside forces working on Luna; but I would like to think of them as venomous 'friends' instead of reality-warping body-snatchers. That could even be a good message for an episode: not everyone who seems friendly is, in fact, a friend. But with all that said, please continue, this is good. |
| nemryn #409269 11 months ago |
The guard may have a low opinion of gossips, but it's not like he's going to let that stop him from listening in himself or anything. |
| Anonymous #409319 11 months ago |
Holy fire-breathing Celestia! |
| elementofchaos7 #409430 11 months ago |
I'm not crying.
There's just something in my eye. ...Both eyes. ... ;_; |
| Anonymous #409444 11 months ago |
Awww, even the guard is tearing up. |
| StreakTheFox #409511 11 months ago |
wut?
this seems OOC to me for some reason o.O |
| Anonymous #409578 11 months ago |
i cried like a baby...
so sad.... TT |
| Anonymous #409622 11 months ago |
Awesome comic |
| Captain_Carnation #409991 11 months ago |
Luna seems to have lost her wings for a second there.
But yes. It's beautisad. |
| Anonymous #410131 11 months ago |
This just fit too damn well...
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| DR_SHRUBBERY #410422 11 months ago |
i love how the guard just rolls his eyes instead of shooing them away.
and then he sheds a manly tear. |
| fixman88 #410751 11 months ago |
The idea is interesting but Celestia's emotional Yo-Yoing between happy and sad in the space of 2 seconds seems oddly unnerving to me... |
| d715 #410760 11 months ago |
its looks more like she's tring to cover up the fact she's still hurting over the fact she sent her sister to the moon |
| Anonymous #411249 11 months ago |
^
More like she locked her inside it. Why do people always get that wrong? |
| StalkerZHS #417014 11 months ago |
we need more bath/shower ponies |
| Emo-kingbeat #417045 11 months ago |
I prefer this version of Celestia over 'I'm A Mean BITCH!' Celestia. She's kind, loving, protective of her sister, but can't resist teasing her a bit, like all siblings sometimes do. |
| Anonymous #418509 11 months ago |
TIIIIIIIIIII-YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! |
| Anonymous #419225 11 months ago |
Why the fuck are they all watching them bathe? |
| Anonymous #419230 11 months ago |
And what then happend?
BATHTIME! |
| Anonymous #419233 11 months ago |
#419225
Becouse they enjoy it |
| Jimmytrius #419270 11 months ago |
Manly tears were shed :_____( |
| Anonymous #419297 11 months ago |
When Celestia tryes to save Luna they look like growed RapiDash |
| AppleDashWINS #419327 11 months ago |
>Even the guard.
lol at first, i thought Dusty snickered because she put something in the bath! Anyway, i've been waiting for Pt 2 for a while! Plus, royal maid ponies are cute ponies. Now that they exist, we must make MOAR. FOR CUTENESS. Green-haired one's either like, "what's the big deal" or looking at Dusty's ass XP |
| Anonymous #419378 11 months ago |
Celestia bursting out of the castle to save her sister is what makes this for me. Fuck yeah sisterly love. |
| Lockstep #419575 11 months ago |
It just captured her? She didn't invite it into her heart or anything? Sorry, but canon says she grew jealous--even if it was some kind of outside magic that took hold of her, it didn't just come out of nowhere. |
| Darnelg #419607 11 months ago |
Guess we will wait for part 3. It probably will 'infect' her, making her jealous. But yeah, back on track, awesome comic, burst from the castle tower and tears.... ;_; |
| Brollyhero93 #419637 11 months ago |
Oh god.... This was so heartwarming, but sad at the same time... T-T
The one who made this little comic, I salute you! ;) |
| ChiefRampancy #419843 10 months ago |
I can't be the only one who REALLY likes those maid ponies |
| Anonymous #419899 10 months ago |
Privacy? In Equestria?
There is no such thing! |
| Anonymous #420338 10 months ago |
Manly tears. |
| Anonymous #420669 10 months ago |
Man, Trollestia sure is a good actor... |
| Anonymous #420899 10 months ago |
Dear Game Freak: Rapidash needs ONE MORE evolution! |
| Hemidactylus_turcicus #421184 10 months ago |
That whole "miasma" boogie man rapist cloud idea is plain stupid. It is far more tragic if it was Luna's fault as it stands in canon, otherwise this whole forgiveness thing is moot. |
| Artencot_Arken #421374 10 months ago |
damn it,that hit the target |
| FireEel #421415 10 months ago |
I like this style, but one issue I take is that it was Luna crying out for forgiveness in ep 2, not Celestia. Ep 1 already made it clear that it was Luna's jealousy of her sister's popularity that led her to become Nightmare Moon, not some outside force.
Lauren Faust mentioned dark magic, she didn't mention "outside force" or "possession". It could very well be evil magic Luna chose to use on herself. |
| Roselite #421801 10 months ago |
@Everyone being so critical: This is just a comic and one artist's interpretation, just let it be. We know Luna was jealous, but who is to say (besides Lauren Faust) that Luna hid that, something possessed her and brought out that jealousy with more intensity? It happened in Sailor Moon with Chibi-Usa being turned into Black Lady, it could happen here. We don't know until they reveal it either in Season 2 or by the series creators outside of the show.
Luna feels bad for not being able to take control back from whatever turned her and Celestia feels bad for having to take such drastic measures to protect the world and (in the case of this comic) for not being able to stop the miasma from taking hold of her beloved sister. |
| Anonymous #422018 10 months ago |
^Also dicks. |
| FireEel #422087 10 months ago |
I am stating my opinion on why I disagree with this comic. How am I being critical? I merely stated that unless Lauren Faust or S2 shows it, there is absolutely no evidence that Luna's corruption was anything more than her own fault. |
| Pinkamena_The_Aeons_Torn #422351 10 months ago |
FireEel, Lauren Faust has stated that when she was Nightmare Moon, Luna was in fact under the influence of a dark magic that originated outside of herself. in short, she was possessed. |
| Ian #422394 10 months ago |
Daaaaaawwwwwww |
| FireEel #422400 10 months ago |
Actually Lauren Faust's exact quote was, "Luna is not yet full grown, and some sort of evil magic turned her into Night Mare Moon."
Nowhere does it states it was outside of her control, nor does it mention it originates outside of herself. What we DO know is that Luna was indeed jealous of Celestia 1000 years ago, and that upon her return as Luna, she was the one who was in tears and crying for forgiveness. |
| fluffywuffy #422412 10 months ago |
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| Snowmeow #422859 10 months ago |
Somepony replace that maids with the Mane 6 (And the guard with Big Macintosh), it would be funnier. |
| Sean-of-BRONY #423783 10 months ago |
HA |
| DPV111 #424145 10 months ago |
I don't care if it's cannon of fannon or OC. It's fucking beautiful and I want to fucking hug all the fucking ponies. |
| DemiDeus #424953 10 months ago |
The guard pony...fucking man tears... |
| Anonymous #424966 10 months ago |
Too bad it didn't happen that way |
| Anonymous #425198 10 months ago |
poor guard. he's surrounded by estrogen. |
| Anonymous #425575 10 months ago |
This is so beautiful and fantastic in so many ways I don't even know where to begin. Nimaru is official Lord of Bronydom for the week.
@Everyone arguing There is no reason why it can't be both, Luna's envy prompting her to use "some sort of evil magic" which she controlled at first, but slowly overwhelmed her as her power grew. Think of it like the Dark Side of the Force: fear ("Nopony likes my night, maybe they don't like me...") led to anger ("How dare they not like me?!") led to hate ("I will show them ALL the majesty of the night!") led to suffering ("The night... will last... forever!"), her desires were twisted beyond what she originally intended, but she apologised because she caused it in the first place. |
| Anonymous #426113 10 months ago |
manly tears..... |
| Anonymous #426652 10 months ago |
@Roselite: Luna was jealous of her sister, that is true, but Lauren did claim that she was possessed by an outside force. So perhaps Luna's negative feelings made her vulnerable to the evil force that made her into Nightmare Moon. |
| Anonymous #426708 10 months ago |
If this isn't the best comic I've ever read, I honestly haven't a clue what is. |
| nyxabuse #428654 10 months ago |
^^&^^^^: But that's not what happened in this comic... |
| WhiteLycan #428668 10 months ago |
feelsbadguard |
| Anonymous #429542 10 months ago |
10/10 |
| Anonymous #430278 10 months ago |
Errr. Meh. I didn't really feel anything for this one. For one, it's not as good as Egophiliac's Luna/Celestia comics. It reads like a really cheesy, sappy Lifetime movie. It also goes against the grain of what actually happened and is established in the show. |
| Anonymous #430686 10 months ago |
I just hope they never include melodrama or sad-emo stuff in FIM
And Lauren isn't the director anymore, so i doubt your ol'd symbiote would pop up in the show |
| Anonymous #439174 10 months ago |
That guy from Brain Dead 13: Whoa, dude. This is more depressing then Steve Irwin's death.
Me: I know, and we............. Hey wait, How do you keep getting in my house? |
| Anonymous #439180 10 months ago |
Congratulations, Celestia! You have just won the academy award for best performance! |
| Anonymous #473654 10 months ago |
Bahaha, I love I how even the soldier is crying. |
| Anonymous #482121 10 months ago |
@ #425575: I love your theory about that "dark side" equivalent, it brings the two POVs together and makes a lot of sense, besides, it makes sense inside of the overall universe of the series... kudos to you! |
| nimaru #511997 10 months ago |
Hey everyone. I just found this and thanks for those who loved it and for those who don't, no worries.
I just wanted to say that the series is complete (four parts) if you want to see the rest. |
| Anonymous #1049567 4 months ago |
A teardrop just fell down my cheek..
And i'm a frickin' guy. |
| Anonymous #1242419 3 months ago |
I cried manly tears of manly happiness/sadness ( i couldnt tell which at the time) Dont blame yourself celstia. and it wasnt luna's fault either! Its all okay! (wants to hug them both as well) |