
| Stargaser #403712 11 months ago |
Spitfire: Soarin?...hey...SOARIN.
Soarin: Buh? "blinks" huh, oh sorry Spitfire kinda just dozed off i guess. SP: "giggles" you were thinking of her, weren't you? S: HUH? me...who? SP: Oh you know who. that mare from the gala. S: don't know what you're talking about. SP: Oh really. the one that sold you that pie. with the hat and if i remember what you said correctly, "the most beautiful eyes you had ever seen" S: "blushes" uhm i...i just remember the good pie she sold me...and i was thinking of...uh..new tricks for the next show...that's all. SP:RIIIIIIGHT. that's all. so you wouldn't be interested to try and find her then? S: uhm...no, the wonderbolts come first and i gotta be focused on the show..and the team "looks into the clouds below". SP:"sighs" if that's how you feel. S: Besides, she could be anywhere now, would be like finding a pin in a haystack. SP:Oh really, cause i was talking to Rainbow dash no so long ago. S: The mare that performed the sonic rainboom and saved our flanks? SP: The very same,well she was telling me about her friends and one of them sounded like your pie dealer. S: R..really...uhm...did she tell you her name or anything. Just to know who to thank for the pie of course. SP: Mhm. her names Applejack, and she lives and works at Sweet Apple Acres farm. S: Oh thanks...Apple acres huh... Hey uh, i'm just gonna go try some new tricks and then hit the hay, that ok with you? SP: hehe go ahead. "Soarin jumps off the balcony into the clouds below" SP:"giggle" what a dork.....HEY SWEET APPLE ACRES IS JUST OUTSIDE PONYVILLE. S:"in the distance" thank yoooouu. SP:Go get her loverboy " smiles and goes back inside" END dont hurt me, dont hurt me, I am NOT a writer. just saw this picture and couldn't get this thing out of my head, and then it became much longer then i thought. probably got spelling errors and stupid stuff like that. hell i havent written anything fictonal since... early high school or something, probably even before then, just...just don't hurt me. |
| Sparkling #403728 11 months ago |
^actually, very nice wirtten. Ever thought of an fan fic about an pic? |
| NK_6060 #403811 11 months ago |
^^ Not bad. Very cute indeed. ;)
^ I've written an AppleSoar story myself if anyone's interested, though it's old and pending a re-boot. http://stinger-vxr42.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3i518l |
| Anonymous #404396 11 months ago |
Lives of the quick and famous. |
| bustoblaster #404940 11 months ago |
@Star: Normally I avoid all fics regardless of quality, but I've gotta say that that was pretty good. Now I really want a comic version of that. |
| WhiteSocks #405039 11 months ago |
::applauds the mini-story:: |
| Parp555 #405505 11 months ago |
Kudos to you stargazer. That was pretty good. and I usually hate fanfiction |
| Stargaser #406679 11 months ago |
O_o you liked it?...i didnt expect it but thanks. Probably couldn't write a whole fic, probably be a nervous wreck to get everything right. but if i see something that makes a spark again...i just might write it down. thanks guys :) |
| Anonymous #413425 11 months ago |
The artist's scenario is better imo. |