
| Wrongness #358631 11 months ago |
I'm not sure how this came out so what do you guys think?
I wanted to do a comic and now I hate them lol. The reason the first three panels are much worse than everything after is that I had it inmy head that I was going to finish this before I left for vacation and rushed them. Anyway this is just a short comic with a little twist on a constant theme with Derpy with a little d'aww thrown in. I feel like it came out pretty meh |
| Anonymous #358632 11 months ago |
daw |
| Anonymous #358638 11 months ago |
I love Derpy's face on panel 7! |
| Van_Horsing #358646 11 months ago |
It's a cute concept, and not a bad drawing for a first attempt. It's better than anything I could have drawn. |
| StreakTheFox #358649 11 months ago |
inb4 i already raided it again |
| Anonymous #358665 11 months ago |
As valiant as your artistic efforts are, get better before posting publicly. A tablet might help. |
| Wrongness #358667 11 months ago |
I am particularly fond of Carrots face in panel eight and Derpys face in panel 13. |
| Wrongness #358676 11 months ago |
A tablet would be a great help they the lines are much better in my sketchbook.
They always loose quality when I trace them with my mouse. |
| Wrongness #358682 11 months ago |
Subtract that "they" from my last comment ioneven know how that got in there. |
| TooOldForThisShow #358687 11 months ago |
Ehhhhhhhhh the art's okay.
I think you did well with their expressions though, and the proportions looks consistent. It's also pretty funny. |
| TooOldForThisShow #358693 11 months ago |
It as in the concept.
And I'd disregard Anonymous #3, this isn't that bad. |
| CranialHeartache #358698 11 months ago |
I can't raid an empty fridge either.
I just don't have that super power. |
| Wrongness #358699 11 months ago |
I should have gone back and redrawn the first panel but this whole project
has already taken so long I just couldn't make myself do it. |
| Wrongness #358703 11 months ago |
Also Carrots hair is completely wrong because I could not find a reference pic of her from the front until I had finished all the sketches and inked half of them.
I'll draw her hair right next time I draw her. |
| Drasvin #358733 11 months ago |
Pretty good for a first comic, Wrongness. The lines are a little shaky, yes. But ass TooOld said, you did great with the expressions and keeping the proportions consistent. And the script is really funny and heartwarming. Just need some more practice. A tablet might be able to help, but I personally never had much luck with tablets. Though that was because I had trouble coordinating my drawing when I wasn't watching my hand sketch out the lines. |
| ArcCahlon #359236 11 months ago |
very nice man I like this its very funny. they have a genuine flow that shows there friendship. |
| sodomitor #359269 11 months ago |
Awww it's funny and cute. Thanks.
I don't reallly care about quality as long as picture has meaning. |
| DeeperMadness #359295 11 months ago |
Looking at your other work, I'm classing it more as your personal and particular style of drawing. The characters are identifiable, the colours are strong and you built it all around a good joke.
I hope this is the first of many more comics to come. |
| Anonymous #359671 11 months ago |
I say go for it. Do more comics and even if you don't like them yourself, post them here for feedback. Once you're happy with it send it to Seth or post it on other websites. A booru isn't usually that well-travelled, so anything that isn't worthy will either get skipped or buried. |
| eureka #360371 11 months ago |
:D good job |
| Qtoy #360478 11 months ago |
Wrongness, it's excellent. I loved it. |