
| Anonymous #182383 1 year ago |
tl;dr |
| Anonymous #182427 1 year ago |
The LockStep Monster?
It's a little weak, but then aren't all ghost stories? |
| Anonymous #182829 1 year ago |
SPOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOKKKKYYY |
| MetalHooves #182925 1 year ago |
Well done, in my opinion. Not exactly a creepypasta in that I don't think I'll worry about seeing a strange pony running around, but if it had the right image to go with it, it could cause a momentary shiver. |
| Lockstep #184021 1 year ago |
@anon2: Argh! It totally sounds like 'Loch Ness' monster, doesn't it? I didn't even notice! ;_;
@everyone: It's meant to be a ghost story by and for Ponyville residents, so I went light on violence and tried more for something I thought the ponies would imagine up for themselves. Gotta keep the foals from following strangers and all that. |
| Anonymous #184077 1 year ago |
Creepy enough, and yeah, it fits as a story told in-setting. |
| Anonymous #188417 1 year ago |
A clearly long dead foal, galloping along at high speeds to an unknown destination, limbs visibly failing at the joints, burn marks everywhere, coat all but singed off. And yet, head still held high, possibly still showing the same expression from when they left heir homes however long ago.
Actually kinda creepy when you think about it. |