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Nomeg_Stylus
#126600
1 year ago
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Gemakai
#126604
1 year ago
That is the intention - Didn't realize how big the picture was until I posted it, so I'll scale that down too
Anonymous
#126610
1 year ago
They're way too thin and out of proportion. Maybe that's the style intended but it looks bad.
You should probably clean up your drawings before posting them too.
Anonymous
#126612
1 year ago
And Dash has messed up "feet".
Nomeg_Stylus
#126633
1 year ago
I love it when anons critique great works of art like they know shit about anything.
Gemakai
#126641
1 year ago
It's okay. It's good criticism. I know it's far from the best picture ever. Though I don't think they're that thin, I respect the input.

Also, the final product will be much more cleaned up
Anonymous
#127452
1 year ago
Gemakai: you may want ease up on the outline of Applejack's left shoulder on the inside, and maybe adjust it a little. It looks a little disconnected at the moment.
Anonymous
#131510
1 year ago
In that one Final Fantasy pic, I wondered why Pinkie was the Fighter (besides 8-Bit Theatre's "Fighter Mc Fightington"), and not the Bard.
Anonymous
#295779
1 year ago
Okay, from one artist to another, and since I'm anon you can go and ignore all of this if you want. None of the following is intended as a insult.
Yes, they are too thin. Pinkiepie has no substance on her beyond the skin that covers bones. The others are all wearing clothes, but have the proportions of someone who is naked. Flesh them out a bit, and your models wont look so stiff. They do because we can see the workings of the joints. This is not good. If you have a thing for these types of females, I am not going to tell you to not draw them like that, I would just suggest that you pick one or two to look like that, and try to flesh out the rest, that way you have contrast, it looks intentional, and you will learn how to draw natural forms as well as your personal preferences. I would suggest spending a while just drawing hands. Get a piece of paper and draw only hands on it. Then another piece of paper, etcetera. All artists have to do this at some point. I can see that's the stage you're up to. Your art is getting somewhere interesting, and you need to make some steps to learn the difficult fiddly bits before you move past it. Feet are a lot easier than hands, so maybe start there?
Then look at some reference art of people wearing baggy clothing. I have a lot of difficulty with the folds of fabric, so I generally draw nudes, but that's just me being lazy. You want to learn where the creases sit.
You are getting creative with positions, this is fantastic! Too many artists get stuck with one or two positions that they know and sit in the safe zone. Don't let that happen to you!

Good work, keep it up!