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MetalHooves
#106412
1 year ago
Alright, a few things.

First, I went way out of character on purpose; hope you all like my interpretation of Cupcakes Pinkie vs Normal Pinkie.

Second, deds to my buddy, theplatinumcolt, and any other awesome FunnyJunk Bronies here on the 'booru. :D

Thirdly, I've been considering making a MH facebook page. A bit self righteous, I know, but I figure it'd be a great place to get all my work in one place and have better communication between myself and the readers for the following reason

I am seeking to collaborate with a few drawfriends and take advice and criticism from writefriends in order to improve my writing; i feel like I'm getting stale. Additionally, I wanna be ponified by a drawfriend. :D

Also, I'm thinking to drag the entertainment out as long as possible, I'll start writing longer fics in installments [i have a great idea for a fourthwall breaker that could run for a while] and only release new installments on fridays.

Lemme know what you all think about all of this.

As always, hope this is well recieved!
Anonymous
#106438
1 year ago
That was....hot.
Anonymous
#106439
1 year ago
Ah, so we've just made it with a cannibalistic psychopath. :P
MetalHooves
#106444
1 year ago
^You can't tell me that's not sexy on some level. :P
Anonymous
#106449
1 year ago
0_o
D-did I just have sex with Cupcakes Pinkie?
Anonymous
#106451
1 year ago
I suppose, lol. Is this before or after Cupcakes, though?
Bongo
#106453
1 year ago
Finally, Pinkamena Diane Pie gets some love! Thanks MetalHooves. The only thing I fear for now is Rainbow Dash...

This requires to finish my meme I created during the Pinkamena Diane Pie and Prince Blueblood cupcakes thing. Remember, some asked that Pinkamena have a Clopfic made with her in it by MetalHooves? That was me...
MetalHooves
#106458
1 year ago
Technically speaking, it's within the scope of a world in which cupcakes pinkie exists, but i refuse to specify what exactly is going on in that basement. Of course, she isn't killing anypony important or likeable, cuz then they couldn't be shipped anymore, but we can infer that she's at least psychotic and cannibalistic. Maybe she's just cleaning up the excess background clones. XD
Bongo
#106462
1 year ago
^ looks like somepony remembers Applejack's leftover clones from the Great Meme War of Ponibooru
MetalHooves
#106467
1 year ago
I was thinking more like incidents with literally 9 on screen colgates and such, but hell, that works too. XD
Leo_X
#106559
1 year ago
Still not enough fire.
Anonymous
#106582
1 year ago
As long as this world's Pinkamena doesn't do to Dash what she did in Cupcakes, I guess I'm okay with banging her.
Anonymous
#106584
1 year ago
Oh god, Pinkamena was my favorite character before, but now.

*wipes a bit off drool off the corner of his mouth*

Also, I love the taste of blood >_>
SpecialAnon
#106639
1 year ago
This is the start of a new arc, right? Is it after the marriage fics, or are these kinda like in-betweens? I know you'd be doing the main cast and applause to you for this one, but just wanted to know if it was following the first arc or not.
Anonymous
#106733
1 year ago
I'm guessing this guy never got a chance to read 'Cupcakes' before being thrown through the abstract plane?
DoctorDreidal
#106812
1 year ago
Damn you, metal. I want to clop to this, but I can't shake the feeling, oh Celestia, the memories are coming back!
Anonymous
#107005
1 year ago
What does the beginning remind me of?
Anonymous
#107337
1 year ago
In favor of mh facebook page
TophatWaffle
#107351
1 year ago
But what happened to derpy??
Anonymous
#107367
1 year ago
probably my favorite fic so far :D
Anonymous
#107434
1 year ago
Holy sh- that was hot.
Anonymous
#107568
1 year ago
Oh my godness.....
Ponies aren't fully vegetarians anymore.
Pinkie is a cannibal.....
I can't watch ponies the same way ever again........

My life doesn't have a purpose anymore. :'(

Confound you MH!!
I used to love your previous works, but now it's all gilda and the cannibal ponies.
I'm off to cut myself now.
Anonymous
#107577
1 year ago
(I'm the sameperson as above)
Oh MH, what have you done?
I really can't love ponies ever again.
I'll have to go back to the angsty depressional life I had before finding the show, and it's all beause of you and your sick fetish!!

Do you have any idea how I feel right now?
It's like the only thing you could completely trust has just turned against you and tries to kill you.
That's how I feel.

There is nothing you can do for me, I'm a lost case now.
I'm not apptempting sucide but I think I'll never be as happy as I used to.
PynkyPy
#107591
1 year ago
Me likie this story!
Anonymous
#107596
1 year ago
^^ EDIT: completely trust and love
PynkyPy
#107604
1 year ago
Another thing just crossed my mind here... If anything, Pinkamena should be this guy's best friend for it's only source for meat ANYWHERE in Equestria. Humans need meat, protein to live. All he has to do is get over the fact it's horse meat.
McGack
#107687
1 year ago
hmm yes but she didnt promise one day that we would get to see the basement
Anonymous
#107727
1 year ago
^^ Meat isn't the only source of protein. Humans are fully capable of living without eating meat.
Caramel
#107729
1 year ago
^ However, meat is a very high source of protein, one of the best. Hence why we eat it.
PynkyPy
#107732
1 year ago
^ Hence why I separated the words! meat, protein. Unless they have soybean or lentils, you are pretty much screwed.
Anonymous
#107735
1 year ago
^ And I'm sure they do.

There's really no reason for a human in that world to alienate himself/herself by unnecessarily eating meat.
Anonymous
#107783
1 year ago
^^ Also, if you can't see the distinction between eating an animal as they exist in the real world, and partnering with Pinkamena in order to get "horse meat" from her murder victims who are just as intelligent as a human (and much more intelligent than you, personally), you're pretty fucked in the head.

But then that's kinda par for the course with you, I guess.
PynkyPy
#107798
1 year ago
^ Do as required for survival. Wort from the top down. When all else fails, question your morals and decide what you want to do. I personally wouldn't eat the horse meat. I would go into the Everfree Forest and hunt animals in there and eat. As for the way the dude is posted in the story, he might take the offer of horse meat, but also he probably wont.
Anonymous
#107808
1 year ago
^ It has noting to do with the fact it's goddamn horse meat, you idiot. The "horses" you're talking about happen to have human-level intelligence. You don't murder intelligent beings for "survival". You especially don't even consider doing so when you're living in a peaceful society (which Equestria is) and have full access to dietary alternatives.

Good god, Pynky; this is why you're so intolerable.
emeriin
#107811
1 year ago
Enough already. Debate but don't be rude.
PynkyPy
#107815
1 year ago
^ All animals are sentient too an extent. Just following Nature's laws of survival. I personally would not resort to cannibalism, nor eat the ponies. I feel like I can't
PynkyPy
#107816
1 year ago
For now, I'm shutting up anon
Anonymous
#107821
1 year ago
^ Sentience and Sapience are two different things. All animals are completely sentient, because technically all you need to qualify is to be able to respond to stimuli from your senses.

All animals are [i]not[/] sapient.
PynkyPy
#107828
1 year ago
^ Why is it you only attack me? THE ONLY person to attack me. Everyone here is REEEEEAAALLLY starting to hate you. So do yourself a favor and curl-up and die.
Anonymous
#107833
1 year ago
^This.
Anonymous
#107839
1 year ago
^^ Hardly the only person. I've seen others at it.

As for why; you're simply irritating. And your opinions aren't well thought-out, and usually blatantly ignore key concepts.

Also, I really don't care what people on the internet think of me. I know that's probably difficult for you to get, since you seem to care so much about having "fans" and whatnot, lol.
PynkyPy
#107847
1 year ago
^ You know the irony here anon? You may be anonymous, but your responses are so precise, so centered on me, you have in fact given yourself a face. You are an anon with a face.
Anonymous
#107856
1 year ago
your tinfoil hat is showing.
Anonymous
#107858
1 year ago
Nah, you guys are being dicks. Theres taking the piss because shes not that bright, and then there is being an outright asshole. Gives the rest of us bad names tbh.
Anonymous
#107861
1 year ago
well let's take a page from pynky's book and see how it works out:

There is only one anon supporting pynky.
MetalHooves
#107862
1 year ago
Okay, so, that's one in favor of the facebook page, and two in favor of arguing abstractly about a made up story.

So, who wants to be the one to ponify me? :D
Anonymous
#107879
1 year ago
^ There are a number of good artists that can do that on dA.

Just make sure not to get the guy who designed Skywind, lol.
NathanExplosion
#107884
1 year ago
MetalHooves, I'd be interested in a fb page, but I think a DA would work better on the whole.

Oh, and Anon (the mean one), maybe you should make yourself identifiable. Make an account so that we can openly abuse you.
Anonymous
#107917
1 year ago
hah yes the mean "one"

What evidence do you have of it being a single user besides your ridiculous presumptions, again?
PynkyPy
#107924
1 year ago
The sentence structure, the words used, and the content. Very reliable ways to recognize someone. It's almost like a signature.
NathanExplosion
#107929
1 year ago
None what so ever, I just find the thought of you being one person absolutely hilarious.
Anonymous
#107936
1 year ago
That actually is someone else now, lol. I'll debate a point with you 'til I'm blue in the face while it continues to be a relevant topic. But when everything that can be said on the issue has been said, I'm done. Thd distinction between sentience and sapient beings was the final point in this thread.
PynkyPy
#107944
1 year ago
^ I know! :) I was responding to THAT anon's question.
Anonymous
#107963
1 year ago
so you have nothing besides "I CAN TOTES RECOG U BRO" based in no small part part on whether the post is against you.

gg
emeriin
#107969
1 year ago
Would you please stop? This is accomplishing nothing.
PynkyPy
#107980
1 year ago
I know, hence why I stopped to Emeriin. Anyways, how are yo today sweetie?
emeriin
#107992
1 year ago
I'm okay love, just been lounging around and enjoying all the Rapture jokes. :p
Anonymous
#107998
1 year ago
when she stops being a gigantic attention whore I'll stop giving her attention.
PynkyPy
#108000
1 year ago
^ That's a recursive paradox.
Anonymous
#108013
1 year ago
hey you admitted you're an attention whore

one step closer to actually solving this problem!!!
emeriin
#108019
1 year ago
And again, enough! She's not being rude to you, so why not be the same likewise?
PynkyPy
#108025
1 year ago
No I didn't. Just stating the fact thats a paradox.
Anonymous
#108039
1 year ago
i think you all are looking at this the wrong way,

personally, i don't see how this is an attempt to draw attention

more as a joke between friends, this picture

that's just me. but apparently not everyone here agrees.
Anonymous
#108045
1 year ago
It's only recursive if you're an attention whore.

just sayin'.
MetalHooves
#108398
1 year ago
A DA page... there's an idea... it'd help me keep on base with any draw/write friends willing to collaborate with me and such. But the question is, would anyone go there?

And could we please stop all the arguing? I'm trying to get genuine feedback on my work, not host an internet boxing match. :/
Anonymous
#108556
1 year ago
MetaHooves, look at your old lemons and limes. It went downhill that exact point the Big Mac lime was made.
Just do what you did in the first place: reader having erotic night with ponies, no bdsm nor kinky stuff.
And keep the "bedmate" as an innocent character.

Honesty, I hate this and all three gilda's simpy because gilda is too punk for an MLP lime and a cannibal, WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!?!?
Anonymous
#108574
1 year ago
I think the main problem with something like a dA or Facebook profile would be that a lot of us would probably need to create alt. accounts of our own for any collaboration or whatnot, lol.

I mean, I've got a dA page. I haven't put Resonance up on it, lmao. I didn't major in English at University, but even so I'd hate to see the look on the face of anyone I know if they found out I wrote that. I did it for fun, and because I thought it was humorous... but that'd be difficult to explain to a lot of people.
Anonymous
#108583
1 year ago
To those who argued over with that meat-thing:
You're just too weak to stop eating meat. You have to be tough to be a vegetarian, most of you damn yanks are too obsessed with your giant burgers and you eat meat every day just for the fucking taste!!

I'm 96% sure they'd have high protein non-meat food. I'd ask Twilight right away what non-meat contains most protein in equestria.

Vegetarian for nearly a year bitches, I dare you to try. Not even missing meat.
Anonymous
#108599
1 year ago
continuing from above
Admit it! You can't stop eating meat because you like the taste! There's nothing to do with survivar you selfish assholes.
You have low level of morality.
your_waifu
#108603
1 year ago
^i assume he's trying to challenge himself as a writer.

and i, for one, enjoy pynkypy and friends' antics. anon is just full of hate. im a bit late to this parade, but w/e.
your_waifu
#108607
1 year ago
add a few ^s to that. there you go.
Anonymous
#108608
1 year ago
yeah the massive ego boost you get from being better than literally everyone you meet probably helps a lot there.

you give vegetarians a horrible reputation.
your_waifu
#108612
1 year ago
also i'd be a vegetarian if cheeseburgers weren't so fucking delicious.
Anonymous
#108613
1 year ago
I have no idea who anyone's even talking to anymore.

Can we just talk about the fucking lemon already?
Anonymous
#108634
1 year ago
^^^
It's not an ego boost, it's a rant because you try to expain you eating ponies with that "I need if for my survival"-bullshit an I've had a bad day anyways.

^^
That's exactly what I meant.
Anonymous
#108667
1 year ago
I'm the anon with the vege-rant.

I'll explain myself now.

I've had a horrible day. Okay?
Seeing people talk about that fucking "I need meat because soy tastes bad blah blah blah... I eat ponies just because I have to so I can survive and I don't give a shit abour their equal intellicense"
That's outraging.

I lust feel like shouting to you because you SEEM to be such assholes and are too ignorant to think about less tasteful protein-rich food and leave the damn ponies alive.

It seems so unfair.
Anonymous
#108670
1 year ago
Because it's just not right
Anonymous
#108674
1 year ago
Boo fucking hoo, you little pussy.
Anonymous
#108680
1 year ago
>He thinks people would actually eat ponies
>He thinks the ponies are real
Sagebrush
#108684
1 year ago
I subsist on a steady diet of gemstones and motor oil.
Anonymous
#108685
1 year ago

Fixed for you.
Anonymous
#108693
1 year ago
I would eat a few of these ponies; but not in the way anon is thinking.
Anonymous
#108696
1 year ago
^^^^
Weak. You can't stop eating meat. You are too weak.

^^^
Ponies DO exist Sherlock :D
They exist in real life too
Y U SO DUM
Anonymous
#108699
1 year ago
^^
I get it I get it... >:)
THAT way I could consider it too.
Anonymous
#108705
1 year ago
My god you are a dumbshit.
Anonymous
#108706
1 year ago
My god you are a dumbshit. Either that or a really bad troll.
Anonymous
#108708
1 year ago
>He thinks people would actually eat ponies
>He thinks the ponies are real

>People eat ponies. Ever heard about metwurst?
>Ponies are existing creatures you idiot :D
Anonymous
#108709
1 year ago
Nah bro. You're just too weak TO eat meat. B'awww, we gonna eat animals?? Oh no we're so fucking horrible!

You're the one who's whimpering on like a raped puppy.
Anonymous
#108715
1 year ago
^^
gidingmeh.jpg
Anonymous
#108716
1 year ago
Horse meat is pretty good. Better than beef in many respects.
Anonymous
#108717
1 year ago
@#108708
>We're talking about the people who were joking about it on this image.
> The ponies from the show you idiot.

SO MUCH FAIL.
Anonymous
#108719
1 year ago
^^
Weak.

Admit it.
Anonymous
#108720
1 year ago
^^^^^@anon
way to take it out of context, idiot.
Anonymous
#108723
1 year ago
>He thinks we're talking about real ponies
Anonymous
#108726
1 year ago
@#108717
>Idon'tgiveafuck.jpg
>I know they don't exist, but if they would
Y SO SOUR PUSSY?
Anonymous
#108727
1 year ago
Lol at veganon. Someone doesn't know what 'weak' means, considering he's butthurt over people eating meat on the internet.
Anonymous
#108728
1 year ago
#108726
You're the one who seems sour pussy, bro. c:
Anonymous
#108729
1 year ago
^^U mad
#108726
Anonymous
#108730
1 year ago
@#108723
Nope, just fucking around 20 till midnight after all the alcohol went righyt in my head.
Anonymous
#108734
1 year ago
I'm the vege, I'M DRUNK
I'M FUCKING DRUNK!!!!
Just... Ignore me...
Anonymous
#108735
1 year ago
>I know they don't exist, but if they would

You just fucked yourself over. The people wouldn't eat the ponies from the show, and when pointed out that is what we meant, you get analpained. Hilarious.
Anonymous
#108738
1 year ago
Then get off the internet, and go rescue a squirrel on the highway.
Anonymous
#108740
1 year ago
@#108735
I'M SO FUCKING DRUNK 'KAY?
AND IT'S FUCKING 11:52 PM HERE AND STUFF
Anonymous
#108747
1 year ago
@#108738
FUCK YOU!!!!!
I'LL FLY TO AMERICA AND STICK A LOG UP YOUR ASS!!
Anonymous
#108751
1 year ago
FUCK YOU ALL!!!!!!
I*M LEAVING!!!!!!!!
YOU'RE NOT EVEN TRUE BRONIES SIE YOU RESAD THIS SHIT WITH CANNIBALISM FUCKSHITCUNT½!!!!
Anonymous
#108754
1 year ago
LOL, implying I'm American.
Anonymous
#108756
1 year ago
That's no excuse for you to be a douchebag. If anyone's not a brony, it's you. It was people joking earlier, you're the one who whipped it out of context.
Anonymous
#108758
1 year ago
Anonymous
#108762
1 year ago
@#108756
I enjoy the show not the fucking GORE!!!

@#108758
U GOT A BROBLEM WITH THAT?!?!? *fist*
MetalHooves
#108765
1 year ago
"I wonder if I've gotten any good feedback on that new fic yet"

>Same troll from the Gilda fics
>Flame wars
>I may as well have posted an empty page for all the genuine criticism I'm getting

My god. We're no better than 4chan.
Anonymous
#108768
1 year ago
Sorry MH...
I'll go now.
If I ome bac I promise I'll be sober.
emeriin
#108770
1 year ago
@Metal It's the break. By the time the new season starts we'll have bombed the place.
MetalHooves
#108782
1 year ago
In all honesty, I think it's just human nature. My expectations of rationality and level-headedness, genuine kindness and open-mindedness, were far too high. The lack of new episodes only means we have to dig deeper for fic/art ideas, it doesn't mean we have to abandon the ideals of the show.

The worst part is, I was so convinced that this fandom, this site, was different. With the cliques and the hate and the trolls, it's just 4chan with another coat of paint.
Anonymous
#108792
1 year ago
I promised not to come bak but really, I'm really sorry REALLY REALLY sorry.
Sorry about the flamewar, they rally pushed it too far. SORRY SORRY
It's just an personal opinion I don't like gilda.
Also I'm just shocked beause I finally tought I've found a fictional sanctuary where everybody is a vegetarian an I wouldn't be so rejected. And all the sudden, BOOM one of my favourite ponies seems to be a cannibal and I get pissed off.
I'm sorry bro, I really am.

So sorry.

:'(
Anonymous
#108798
1 year ago
>they rally pushed it to far

Reading through the comments....no, that was you. Don't read Cupcakes.
Anonymous
#108799
1 year ago
But hey! Let's all make this a happy place again!
Lets stob being douchie vouchies and do what we should have done from the beginning: Be brothers.
Let's all be kind to eah others and listen to every opinion and give positive feedback.
If critic, then supportive.

I'll domypart, I hope you all do yours :3
Anonymous
#108803
1 year ago
^^
No no... You an't get me bak fighting my friend :) Let's put our differences aside and be friens my american friend!
your_waifu
#108804
1 year ago
calling samefag on all these anons. poor metalhooves.

you know what, i'll actually read this thing so i can give feedback. i don't like ponies that way, but I will do it FOR LOVE. wait a moment.
Anonymous
#108805
1 year ago
I love you all!! I really do!! :3
(Double checked from typos)
Anonymous
#108807
1 year ago
^^
U so funny :D
NathanExplosion
#108813
1 year ago
MetalHooves, I love 90% of your stuff, (I'm sure there are bits I haven't found yet) get a DA account, I'll gladly follow you :D
Anonymous
#108816
1 year ago
@your_waifu
It's not kind to call anyone fag :(
emeriin
#108824
1 year ago
@108816 It's a 4chan thing, I don't like it either but it's no big deal.
Anonymous
#108827
1 year ago
Bye now :3
Now let's not be douchie vouchies,
MetalHooves'es words really made me think, maybe we shouldn't be like 4chan! :3

Or maybe I shouln't :(

Maybe I was the only one being douchie vouchie after all :'(

I feel so guilty...
Spitfire
#108835
1 year ago
Anon, just try not to take things so seriously, because half the time people are only saying it to purposely piss you off, and they wouldn't really do it.

@Metalhooves
Another great story, as always. Oh Pinkie, you are SO RANDOM
Anonymous
#108840
1 year ago
Is wank material all you write?
Anonymous
#108846
1 year ago
^
But people shouldn't troll in a place this sacret! :(
Anonymous
#108850
1 year ago
I meant spitfire :D LOL
Anonymous
#108858
1 year ago
CONFOUND THOSE DOVER BOYS
THEY DRIVE ME TO DRINK

CONFOUND THOSE DRINKS
THEY DRIVE ME TO DRUNK

CONFOUND THE DRUNKNESS
IT DRIVES ME TO ASSHOLENESS

Sorry.
Anonymous
#108861
1 year ago
I just can't leave this place, can I? -_-
Anonymous
#108863
1 year ago
OMFG SORRY ABOUT ALL THE SPAM!!
I'll GO NOW! PROMISE!!!
Anonymous
#108882
1 year ago
...Why is the thought of evil Pinkamina so goddamn sexy?

I now want to be her little evil henchman, with benefits of course. <3

I'm not a fan of bondage or anything like that, but this... this is the exception. I want more Pinkamina! hehehe
Anonymous
#108888
1 year ago
^ Evil is Sexy.

Trope confirmed. Moar evil ponies.
PynkyPy
#108892
1 year ago
Then come join me in my bedroom anon #108882! >:)
PynkyPy
#108894
1 year ago
@Spitfire and Emerrin

Can't seem to go anywhere now without causing problems whether I mean to or not. :(
emeriin
#108903
1 year ago
@Pynky Don't worry about it sugar, we still love you.
MetalHooves
#108907
1 year ago
^Actually, you're a bit of a catalyst, Pynky. Your well known, and as with anyone well known, you've attracted people desperate to find anything wrong with you. It doesn't help that you respond when they try to troll you, to be honest. Between people hating you and disinterested trolling courtesy my little samefag, the thread has sort of de-railed. XD
DrunkVege
#108912
1 year ago
I promised to go but.....
AHH SCREW IT!!!

Anyways, I made it easier for you to regonise me if I get all douchie vouchie again. :3

And once again, MH I'm really, really sorry for what I did...
I hope you can forgive me.
PynkyPy
#108916
1 year ago
^ I For give you!
DrunkVege
#108920
1 year ago
Aww thank you pynky :3
*brohoof*
NathanExplosion
#108924
1 year ago
I'll brohoof you too DrunkVege!
*brohoof*
your_waifu
#108929
1 year ago
okay i was distracted a few times but i read it. i am definitely not your target audience man. v v. but you seem to have describing sex down to an art, so there you go. and i liked the little detail when the protagonist and pinkamena were done the event itself was turning her back into pinkie.

i do think that if you ever write anything that's not this kind of stuff, you should concentrate on being more subtle with your details. in the first few paragraphs you were describing things that the reader would most likely already have gathered for themselves. and i guess in this sort of narrative, you would want the reader to use their imagination anyway, since you're trying to place them directly in your world.

every instructor i've ever had used this saying, and you probably know it already, but i'll repeat it. "Show, don't tell." the basic outline of good storytelling.

tl;dr i am a dork and you wrote a clopfic. derp derp derp.
DrunkVege
#108932
1 year ago
Thanks bro :D
Anonymous
#108941
1 year ago
I find Pinkamina disturbingly easy to clop to.

Take that as you will.
PynkyPy
#108943
1 year ago
I might start writing clop fics now. I'm just not sure I can keep everyone in character.
Anonymous
#108945
1 year ago
MetalHooves, I'll follow you to the grave, fb or da I dont care, your stories are like vitamins to me, sincerly anon ^_^
MetalHooves
#108960
1 year ago
your_waifu: You have a valid point. I've spent more time writing than thinking, and that's been pretty stupid of me. That being said, I've gotta go back through the novel I'm writing and make sure I'm not making the same mistake, which I'm almost sure I am. XD

Hooray for 30 pages of editing tonight!
DrunkVege
#108963
1 year ago
I'm feeling clearer now between drunkness and hangover and waifu inspired me to re-review this fic.

Even tough I personally prefer other than bdsm and dark backstory going on, the story you made up was pretty cleaver and it had one of the most inportant essences, emotion.
You detailed everything good and you made me feel like the fic told me to "exept few personal issues such as going upstairs instead of downstairs and forgetting about the blood".
Improvement would be to make the reader choose the acts that you'd expect everyone to do, not only the character of the story. That's the very key in doing first person stories (that's also one of the things that got me pissed off :P not blaming you tough).

Also I stand behind my words, more innocense in these fics. That's what MLP stands for afterall :3

Even tough these are just clopfics, it doesn't mean they can't be civiliced.
Anonymous
#108988
1 year ago
If I may, I do love innocence in these, but... I don't know, something about insane Pinkamina sexing you up so you don't see something you shouldn't is just carnally intriguing to me.

If this humble anon may make a request? I'd like to see this expanded a bit, instead of just letting it be a throwaway sex thing. She did say you might get to see the basement sometime, hehehe.

...Although, I worry about the meaning of that a bit. I don't want any fucking cupcakes, I just want to see how insane Pinkie really is, and appease her so as to not fall prey to her... whatever she does.

Mwa ha ha ha ha!
Anonymous
#108999
1 year ago
I'm pretty sure the day she lets you see the basement is also the day you die. :P

If your number ever comes up, that is.

This general area does have some potential for expanded fanfics, though. What if there were another human transposed into this world; one who'd had the opportunity to read Cupcakes while on Earth. Then you could potentially have a case of trying to stop and/or help her; maybe splitting the personalities off into two different bodies.

Also, I wonder what would happen if the Pinkie personality reasserted itself right in the middle of sex, lol? I do kind of feel sorry for her, with Pinkamena using her body for god knows what.
Anonymous
#109009
1 year ago
^ Yeah, I assumed that's when your turn finally comes, if it ever does. Unless you can smooth talk your way out of it, aided by a little... er, you know what I'm getting at. I'm willing to be Pinkamina could be talked into giving you a little more time, with the right... persuasion. Who knows, maybe she'll tell you it's "Our little secret~"

And you know what happens if you betray Pinkamina's trust. ;)

I have a thing for the bad girls, so I find myself liking Pinkamina more than Pinkie all of the sudden, lol
DrunkVege
#109011
1 year ago
@anon
I really want to understand it, but I cant.
Drunk or sober, the morality goes above all with me. I can't understand why would anyone rather have sex with someone who obiously has done something awful with no regrets instead of uncovering the truth.

Damn, I'd risk my very life finding out pinkie's dirty secret.

But I'm totally accepting your point of view, it's just a fictional story after all.
DrunkVege
#109012
1 year ago
I mean the top of those three
PynkyPy
#109014
1 year ago
^ Then you'll like me hotshot! I'm a lot like Pinkamena, but with a little Pinkie Pie mixed in!
your_waifu
#109019
1 year ago
you're going to edit the story a dozen times before you're happy with it anyway. i know writers who have rewritten entire novels because they realized the pov was wrong. it has to be done.

editing is not the fun part of writing. i understand.
DrunkVege
#109023
1 year ago
#109009
That's not the time for smooth talk or charming her, she's a freaking psyckopath!!
I'd recomment tying her up and trying your best to aid her mental disorder with everynbody else.
DrunkVege
#109027
1 year ago
Sorry, I usually get the vibe for this kind of act when I imagine a situation with high adredalin.
Anonymous
#109029
1 year ago
@Pynky
A lot like Pinkamina? Don't know if I'm excited, or terrified. Or both? ;)

...Confound this fandom, it drives me to become insane.

@Drunk

Naw, I understand. At least, that'd be my RL reaction. But fanfiction drives me to insanity, and for some reason I want more Pinkamina. A lot. XD
Anonymous
#109030
1 year ago
Well, there's a pretty big difference between the "bad girl" and Pinkamena who, honestly, is a lunatic and psychopath, lol.

In reality, yeah, someone who's done what Pinkamena has would be revolting on pretty much every level.

Less insane "bad girl" types do have an appeal, though; and that's what this fanfic is taking advantage of. Because this is fiction, it's just slightly possible for people to get off on the idea of doing a girl like Pinkamena, even when it would disgust them IRL.
PynkyPy
#109034
1 year ago
Yeah! LOL I meant on the "Bad Girl" side. I wouldn't kill anyone for the world.
Anonymous
#109041
1 year ago
I actually quite prefer this version of 'Cupcakes', where the Pinkie character many of us have come to love is still maintained, and then we have the Pinkamena personality as the true antagonist.
Anonymous
#109042
1 year ago
Once again, I figured the exact things happening in the basement were up to interpretation. For all I know, she was just maybe squirrel cupcakes, not Rainbow cupcakes.

Least, that's what I'm sticking with. Let's me keep the bad girl fantasy going, hehehe.
DrunkVege
#109044
1 year ago
@#109030
I once had a thing for doing things differently in my "fantasies" than I would in RL, but after a lot of philosofical thinking, I started to imagine myself doing stuff in my "fantasies" as I'd totally do in real life unless I get a better idea while I'm at it.
DrunkVege
#109092
1 year ago
...and no-one gives a shit
Anonymous
#109110
1 year ago
Hehehe, I give a shit Drunk :P

Personally, I'm perfectly content to let my fantasies be fantasies, and my reality be reality. Letting myself merge them would be... not so good, hehehe. Suppose when I'm writing that could be a useful tool though.

Plus, as I've demonstrated here, I seem to have some weird fantasies. XD

...Still. Pinkamina <3

Er, as long as she doesn't murder me at least. Worth the risk though!
Anonymous
#109113
1 year ago
I do kinda get what you're saying, DrunkVege... but at the same time, we all fantasize about things we wouldn't normally do IRL.

Hell, I've had a number of weird dreams involving Rainbow Dash that I couldn't do IRL (probably not 'cuz I wouldn't; it's just that she's fictional, lol).
DrunkVege
#109162
1 year ago
Eeyup.
I prefer keeping one personality and one personality only. Well... I do have my kind self and psychopath self seperated but don't we all?
PynkyPy
#109168
1 year ago
Here's a good relevant quote! Can't remember who said it though.

The men who dream by night wake up the next morning to see it was all in vain. The men who dream by day are dangerous men. For THEY act out there dreams with open eyes.

I guess I'm one of the dangerous mares then...
DrunkVege
#109190
1 year ago
"The men who dream by day."
Why do I get a picture of someone sleeping during class?
PynkyPy
#109203
1 year ago
^ it's meant to be someone who acts out their daydreams.
DrunkVege
#109215
1 year ago
I know :D But still.
MetalHooves
#109707
1 year ago
Don't try to act dangerous. Blood lust and curiosity are two vastly different things, and only two things can tell you that: the smell of a great deal of blood, and dead, empty eyes staring up at you.

On a less creepy note, I do think I want to expound upon this. Maybe not in a plot arc way, but just as something to explore. Of course, the day the insert goes into the basement would be the day he dies; you can't walk into a room of death and not panic, and panic involves screaming and running and getting help and all the stuff that Pinkamina would really want to avoid, so... we'll see if I can make something happen. I don't know right now, I'm pretty tired. I wanna start working on a fic with Lyra, if for no other reason than I wanna try my hand on a two-part thing and I also wanna see if I can do something... different. I think some of you will like it and some of you will think I'm going way too far off course. But only time will tell.
Anonymous
#109826
1 year ago
This kind of scared me.

I got hard, then lost it, so... that hasn't happened before.

Good job?

But, uh, hopefully not all of the others will be like this...?
Anonymous
#109876
1 year ago
^It doesn't have to be meat, ya know. I have no idea whether ponies grow the right replacement crops, but there's always eggs.

I decided, about a third of the way in, that this guy deserves to be cupcakes via the Too Stupid To Live clause. He failed to obey the first rule of dating.
Do not. Stick it. In the crazy.
MetalHooves
#109966
1 year ago
^ By that logic, I deserve to be cupcakes as well. I find the danger of getting close to the crazies to be really fun. And psychotic chicks are REALLY good in bed, in my experience.

I like danger. I drive fast, I play with fire, I collect swords, and if given the option I will more than likely bang a crazy chick. Hell, if any of that's against the rules, I'm makin me some new damn rules.
Anonymous
#109974
1 year ago
I've been with a few crazy chicks, and damn is it hot.

A bit weird sometimes, but so worth it. :P
Anonymous
#110060
1 year ago
Anonymous
#110589
1 year ago
so all you write is wank material?
Anonymous
#111757
1 year ago
^
No, I didn't saw anything wankable.
It's clop material.
Stories for a special pony fetish.
Anonymous
#111829
1 year ago
I'm not dipping into your "special word for wanking" kool-aid.

It's wank material.
MetalHooves
#112168
1 year ago
^All I POST has been wank material so far. I fully intend to post some non-wank material eventually. XD And I'm working on some non-pony related stuff that isn't wank material. :D
NathanExplosion
#112175
1 year ago
Did you ever decide to make a DeviantArt account Metal?
Anonymous
#112190
1 year ago
^^ cool. I'll give you feedback when I see it.
MetalHooves
#112257
1 year ago
^^ I did not. Not yet at least. I've found someone to collaborate with, but I may just make it a duo thing for now. Idk.
MetalHooves
#112418
1 year ago
Ok, so, DA intimidates the shit outta me. Idk if I wanna do that. O_O
Anonymous
#112497
1 year ago
maybe FurAffinity would be more to your liking? or sheezyart I guess but they don't allow pornography like this. Neither does DA, actually, so I guess you're stuck with FA.

FA is awful by the way.
Anonymous
#112725
1 year ago
is facebook still an option?
Anonymous
#112859
1 year ago
^^ I honestly think that the DA page would be a wonderful idea Metal. It's alot more organized than ponibooru, and could potentially get you a broader audience.

Just as a side note though, when do you think we can see you do Octavia? Has anyone else suggested it?
MetalHooves
#113585
1 year ago
Is DA open to explicit content? I didn't really get that vibe from them. I guess I COULD make an fb page later but IDK if I'll do a DA just yet. I'll take another look at it later.

And yes, I do have Octavia on backlog, along with Rose, Lyra, and maybe Trixie, in addition to a larger project I'll be working on in installations.
Anonymous
#113899
1 year ago
...wow. I disappear for three days, come back to a massive anti-gilda rant, a flame war over cannibalism, standards of posting that i would expect on /b/ and MH calling us "no better" than them.

nice work, other anons.

MH: post up in FB, DA, FA or whatever the hell you please. I'm happy to toss ideas back and attempt to criticize constructively, but my drawing skills are somewhere below that of a twelve-year-old energy drink junkie, i.e. my lines are all over the place.

also, DO NOT stop posting here. Keep up the good work. If you want some kind of feedback that's semi-constructive, I would say you are at your best when not playing to the fetish crowd and not writing tenderfic - in other words, your early work. IN PARTICULAR, your first two gilda clopfics and your zecora clopfic were your best.
Anonymous
#113921
1 year ago
how the hell is insert not dead yet? I'm honestly surprised that he didn't BECOME the batch of cupcakes in this, for chrissakes. Surely, someone like Derpy or Gilda's going to notice when the bruises show up a few days later anyway, and then trouble's going to start.

maybe the permanent paridisiacal conditions in ponyville have rendered everypony terminally oblivious. it's got to be the only explanation for why nopony's furious about all of insert's cuckolding and pinkamina's murdergames.
MetalHooves
#114045
1 year ago
^^ I shall continue to post here no matter what. I MAY make a DA, I'm probably going to make an fb... hm.
PynkyPy
#114072
1 year ago
^ Please MetalHoove... POST HERE!!! Plwease for sweet littlr me... *blinky eyes*
PynkyPy
#114073
1 year ago
^ Please MetalHoove... POST HERE!!! Plwease for sweet little me... *blinky eyes*
Anonymous
#114083
1 year ago
#112168
Non-clop stuff?!
Don't EVER do this.
MetalHooves is a quality seal for a good clopfiction.
I don't want to see a new story of you that I can't clop too!

Btw:
I'm not actually clopping to those.
Is it even possible to clop to text?
PynkyPy
#114088
1 year ago
^Not hard for a girl, I almost did to this one.
MetalHooves
#114097
1 year ago
^^ Pynky, dear, flirtation and seduction are pretty much useless via the internet, especially when I don't even know what you look like; however, fret not, as I fully intend to continue posting here come hell or high water. Ponibooru is my home.

^ anon, First off, you don't want a story of me period, because I'm so ugly I'm a crime against nature. I do write well, though. :D And my nonclop won't be ENTIRELY unclopworthy, just... MOSTLY unclopworthy. I have an idea for a big project in mind, and it's total length should be about twice or thrice that of a single fic, so I'd upload it in chapters. Needless to say, not every chapter will be clopfiction, but at least one or two will be. :D I won't start that JUST yet though; next on the MH backlog is Lyra.

Enough of my senseless babbling. For now at least.
PynkyPy
#114112
1 year ago
^ Such a party pooper! :( But great to here you will be staying! :)
Anonymous
#114418
1 year ago
what are you 13
PynkyPy
#114426
1 year ago
^ who?
MetalHooves
#115320
1 year ago
^
^
^I'm not a party pooper, I'm a realist.

So, yes, a party pooper. Hehe, sorry; if it's any consolation, I'm more fun in real life. I think. Idk, most of the time I am.
Anonymous
#120385
1 year ago
Really liked this MH. Keep it up.
MetalHooves
#120719
1 year ago
I hope to start Lyra's fic this evening. It's gonna feature a couple of very special new things. :D
Anonymous
#122433
1 year ago
"very special" MH, i was fine with griffon anal, but i'm afraid you might actually be taking things too far. If this turns into some kind of sadomasochist three-way with bonbondage...ew. seriously.
HalcyonAndroid
#123136
1 year ago
Ha bonbondage
MetalHooves
#123151
1 year ago
^^No, it's actually probably steering further away from weird than I've ever gone.
Anonymous
#123970
1 year ago
Pinkie isn't cannabalistic....she's just acquired a taste for meat. (which in this universe, is probably just as bad) her already weak mental state couldn't handle what it is she was doing, so it created this crazy alter ego to take the blame.
Now that I have said it, IT MUST BE CANON!!
MetalHooves
#125707
1 year ago
^ How did she accquire a taste for meat? Killing and eating another being that could either be considered as a pet or neighbor due to displaying borderline sentience or emotions or simply being an object of emotional attachment would still be considered cruel, wrong, and evil, as much so as murder [as evidenced by people's reactions to Michael Vick's actions], so it's safe to assume the line between "animal" cruelty and murder in Equestria would be considerably more blurred than it would here. By that logic, there wouldn't be much difference in terms of stigma between someone who kills "animals" for meat and a cannibal.

Additionally, I've come up with a theory for Pinkie's psychosis: if her feelings are really hurt or she's left alone for far too long, she slips into insanity, evidenced by ep. 25 of the show and by her reluctance to go off by herself without RD in ep. 5. Her knowledge of (and shame of) this reality would explain why she constantly holds gatherings, parties, for all of her friends and lives in Sugar Cube Corner, presumably with or at least in constant company of Mr. and Mr. Cake.

On a related note, I've got to stop psychoanalyzing cartoon characters. Anyway, Lyra fic is coming along nicely, everypony. If I really sit down and work at it, I may have it up tomorrow! :D
Anonymous
#125874
1 year ago
^ and then back to hot gilda anal, correct?
Captain_Carnation
#126456
1 year ago
As much as I enjoy your writing, sir, I could never follow you on Facebook. DA or FA, sure, but I have family and friends, a few of whom already think oddly of me for watching the show in the first place, who I don't want saying, "Hm, what's thOH DEAR GOD." So yeah, pony lemons are out for me in that venue. Looking forward to more here, though. ;)
MetalHooves
#127210
1 year ago
^ I shall always post here. Always. I'll also be putting up my work on The Platinum Colt Society's site to help my buddy get it up and running. I still haven't gotten around to making a DA, but something tells me I will eventually. XD
DrunkVege
#130061
1 year ago
#125874@

In this message, I'll relase my true feelings freely and it might hurt feelings of many but i think keeping it inside would be mentally dangerous to me and physically dangerous to ppl around me.

You have been warned.

OH MY FUCKING GOODNESS!!
THESE ARE PONIES WE'RE TALKING ABOUT!!!!!
They're supposed to be INNOCENT AND CUTE and Gilda is the absolute ANTI-PONY and such an ASSHOLE!!!
Why on earthwould any living being have a fetish on her?
Well... That's what I tought before seeing all the adoring in the Gilda fics

"This is okay, but maybe you should keep doing stuff about ponies"
"Uhh... Gilda again? Okay I get it, you're just finishing the lime. But plz more ponies."
"Oh my goodness... HOW LONG DO YOU PLAN ON MAKING THESE?"

Do they listen, no.

All the sick people here who claim to be "bronies" are just lifeless scum having no other life than their fantasies that get sicker, and sicker all the time.
My goodness... I haven't seen anybody than me to critique the subject.
AM I THE ONLY BRONY ALIVE WHO DOESN'T LIKE GORE, BDSM, ANAL AND GILDA???

MY DEAR GOODNESS I HATE THIS MISERY SOME PEOPLE DARE TO CALL ENJOYABLE MATERIAL!!!

EVERYBODY HERE WANTS A PSYCHO TO CUT THEMSELF AS LONG AS SHE FUCKS HIM AND IF COURSE THEY WANT GILDA TO SHOVE A DILDO UP THEIR ASS!!!

YOU ALL WANT IT AND YOU ALL LOVE IT!!!!!!!

BURN TO DEATH YOU SICK BASTARDS AND STOP RUINING THE INNOCENSE THAT ONCE GAVE MY LIFE A PURPOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Huff...
huff...

huff....

huff........

I'm done.

I'm really really sorry for what you just had to read :'(
I couldn't keep that inside me.
I had to release it... Sorry.....
DrunkVege
#130071
1 year ago
My dark side get's control when I see something that takes negatively my full attention and passion.
Anonymous
#130846
1 year ago
God damn it. God damn it, Metalhooves. I just had a dream where I made out with Pinkie Pie and you just won't let that memory slide into oblivion.

whygirlboner.jpg

But on a more serious note, since you don't seem to be getting much in the way of artistic criticism (not that I blame anyone, this is the internet after all), this is pretty hot. May not be some people's cup of tea, but I can say it sure is mine. I actually would have been happier without the mention of the blood, but not because I'm freaking out about Pinkie being a cannibal. (Do we even know it's pony blood?) I just liked it better when you knew SOMETHING was going on in the basement but had no idea what. My brain generated about a dozen bizarre possibilities on its own. But once you mention blood that narrows it down. Minor thing.

Whipping and spanking was well done, as someone who's into that sort of thing. Handcuffs were a nice touch. I almost lost it when Pinkie started riding him. That was damn hot.

You write kinky sex almost as well as you write sweet, passionate sex, Metalhooves. I am a devout follower. Haters gonna hate, but you just keep on writing!
Anonymous
#130895
1 year ago
Technically, blood tastes like iron. She might have just been sucking on an iron pole or something...>_>

Eh...

Never mind...
Anonymous
#130900
1 year ago
Anon846: I've had numerous dreams like that, and also a few about Rainbow.

Not complaining, though.
MetalHooves
#131155
1 year ago
@Drunk Vege: Stallion Duck.

^^^ Why thank you. I intend to. I'm writing some Lyra stuff now... It's uncharted territory in terms of MH fics.

^^ Blood tastes more like copper than iron; take it from someone who's tasted way too much blood. XD

^ I envy you. I seem to have lost my ability to have enjoyable dreams.
Anonymous
#131792
1 year ago
In case you were wondering, that distinctly "biology class" smell is Formaldehyde. It's used for tissue fixation and more commonly for embalming. It's definitely one of those smells you never forget, like tear gas or the "new car" smell.
Anonymous
#132609
1 year ago
That was great Metalhooves, definitely not getting stale in the slightest! I'm sorry the comments section turned into a clusterfuck, but don't let that discourage you from continuing your writing :) Keep up the good work!
MetalHooves
#138620
1 year ago
^^ Yes, but I couldn't remember that at the time. Also, to use that word would have given a little too much away.

^Thank you. I shall.
Anonymous
#150893
1 year ago
.... Oh my god. In the few short minutes it took to read this, I very nearly became a pony-fapper. WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH ME?!? EVEN AFTER /b/ROWSING!
MetalHooves
#152866
1 year ago
^ There's 17 more to help you complete the transition, buddy. :P
DrunkVege
#153766
1 year ago
Yes, I'm still commenting here simply because I'm such horrible, horrible person.

@MetalHooves
Stallion duck? What the hay does that mean?
________________________________________

@#130846
Ah! Am I glad to have someone sided with me!
I wouldn't mind this cup of tea either, if it wasn't for taking pinkies innocense away making her alter ego a cannibal.
Sometimes I'm even cautious about my PP-toy and I keep repeating "She's not really that evil, it's just a silly cupcake" in my mind.
___________________________________

Great! I'm looking forward to the Lyra-fic!
I sure hope this kinky bad girls-era have ended and I can be a sincere fan again.

But MH I beg you, don't ever write the reader dying in that basement! Don't ever go so low that you start writing real cupcakes.
Oh my, I'm still traumatised by some of them.

Cupcakewriters are the scum of bronies, you still got hope not to become one of them!
You are a wonderful writer, stay as a wonderful writer.

Sincerely
-SoberVege
MetalHooves
#154571
1 year ago
Stallion duck; he's not afraid at all!
DrunkVege
#156591
1 year ago
@MetalHooves
I guess I'm not afraid :P

When I get mad, I'm not afraid of anything. I could punch an armed criminal in the face if I get furious.
I'd be pretty fucked after that...
DrunkVege
#158644
1 year ago
I don't think this needs more reviewing from me.
TexasBrony
#166934
1 year ago
PynkyPy, after this rant that the anon so needlesly drew out to flame you. I have fallen into a realm of amazing adoration for you ^_^. You are quite hilarious and you justify how amazing Pinkie really lol
TexasBrony
#166986
1 year ago
And to DrunkVege, why are Cupcakewriters the scum of bronies. I loved cupcakes. But I say, to each their own. That is the quote correct? Then it goes without saying that you have your way and I have mine. But to spontaneously rant about how horrible these people are that like or wrote this is pointless. And to Metalhooves, I love your stories and I praise you for you loving, sensual and compelling work.
MetalHooves
#168565
1 year ago
^Thanks, bro. :D
Anonymous
#179198
1 year ago
So DrunkVege, are you saying wayyyy up there that eating meat for survival is always wrong, because you should just go look for a high-protein alternative?

Because that's just stupid talk. :\
Anonymous
#287655
1 year ago
honestly any human with half a brain would relieze somthing is wrong when they tasted the blood and if this really were me the moment she releases my hands id have took her down and checked the basement out of worry well not before giving pinkamena a taste of her own mediciene
Doctor_Whooves
#287668
1 year ago
^ The main problem being that many humans, after being sufficiently aroused, possess what amounts to much less than half a brain, lol.
MetalHooves
#315496
1 year ago
^ yeah, I'm living proof of that assertion XD