| MetalHooves #82181 1 year ago |
I felt kinda iffy about this one; not sure everypony will like it. I tried to work within the believable scope of character, but I may have fucked that up. XD
Next fic I write will be the Derpy ending to this plot arc; after that, the Gilda ending, then it's back to singular fics. :) |
| MyLittleJosieph #82183 1 year ago |
And then you can do watermelon fics of everypony! :D |
| Leo_X #82192 1 year ago |
Needs more fire. |
| Gnollbard #82199 1 year ago |
Was good. Very good. It... stretched my suspension of disbelief, but it was still good. |
| Soundateer #82222 1 year ago |
I D'awed to death ;____;
Definitely a great lime here. I don't suppose Derpy involves sex. XD |
| Anonymous #82229 1 year ago |
Really liked it. For some reason, I can imagine Trixie being like this. |
| Anonymous #82235 1 year ago |
Very good characterization of a character we've seen for like one episode.
Well done, though the last paragraph seemed awkward. |
| Ponymaru #82239 1 year ago |
No, actually, Gilda being tough because she thinks she needs to be actually works for me. It... makes sense, really. I wouldn't be surprised if it turns out to be canon, if she reappears in the show. |
| Gentleanon #82249 1 year ago |
I say! This is feverishly exciting material! We must keep this out of the hands of the gentry lest they be incited into riotous lust.
A well written example of contemporary erotica! Truly, in lesser hands, such material would be presented in an unsettling manner but I find myself compelled to read more, Master MetalHooves! |
| Anonymous #82292 1 year ago |
I like it.
And I'm not even a Gilda fan. |
| Anonymous #82369 1 year ago |
metalhooves, remember when i said you're approaching the singularity of awesome? i think you just crossed that impossibility.
can't wait for the finale, hope you still tease us with gilda and derpy stuff afterwards, and...yeah. good work. |
| Anonymous #82407 1 year ago |
Way to portray the other side of characters MH. I'll be waiting for your next fic. |
| Anonymous #82769 1 year ago |
A relationship with Gilda? DO NOT WANT!!! Do one about Spitfire. I like her. |
| Anonymous #82923 1 year ago |
I am surprised how much you are polishing Gilda's romance. Would you say she might be your biggest personal prefference? |
| Anonymous #83057 1 year ago |
It's goooooooood. |
| MetalHooves #83163 1 year ago |
I personally saw a lot of potential with Gilda as a character from the beginning, but not as she was originally portrayed. I'm glad my interpretation of her was well received. :D |
| Anonymous #84872 1 year ago |
hey MH, what if you make one with Carrot Top |
| MetalHooves #84985 1 year ago |
I'll consider it. I've got a few in consideration, actually, including Lyra, Rose, another one with Scratch, another one with Trixie, Luna, Celestia, Spitfire, and maybe the mane cast. I guess I'll add that to the list; I don't expect all of these to come to be realized, in all honesty.
By the by, working on the Derpy ending to the plot arc now. I feel like it's a bit predictable. :/ |
| Anonymous #85003 1 year ago |
okay, it was just a suggestion |
| MetalHooves #85192 1 year ago |
NEW derpy's finished, everyppony. I'll upload it after a few hours of sleep. I'm tired as hell right now. |
| DrunkVege #158614 1 year ago |
Hm... Odd....
I don't remember reading this? |