
| Kein #214697 1 year ago |
Well... I still have no idea what's happening on this comic. May be I'm too sleepy to get it. Gonna re-read again. |
| Bongo #214702 1 year ago |
It's 1:10 in the morning. I am dead pan tired as hell, and I must say... what the hell is this!? |
| Anonymous #214703 1 year ago |
No, it's not just you. I'm quite lost myself. |
| MetalHooves #214708 1 year ago |
Okay, from what I can gather, Lyra is going away with Octavia to... be famous or some shit. And then she kicks Octavia's ass and decides not to be famous or some shit. |
| Epicplatypus #214711 1 year ago |
I get it
Lyra is octavias sister, the band in the final episode is the band lyra was going to play in, she was going to leave bonbon and her foal to go and travel with the band. but octavia said "live a normal life again" insulting Lyra and her family, so lyra was all like "FUCK YOU BITCH!" and had a change of character, so instead of leaving, shes going to stay with the foal and bonbon. hence why she live in ponyville in the episode while octavia is in a traveling band. |
| Anonymous #214713 1 year ago |
The paneling is quite odd, but from what I can make of it, Octavia, who appears to be Lyra's sister, is trying to make Lyra go on tour with the band from "The Best Night Ever!". On the way out the door, Octavia lets slip that she disapproves of Lyra's relationship. Lyra gets PISSED. |
| Anonymous #214714 1 year ago |
What order are these panels read in? I can't make heads or tails of this. This is some serious page layout failure. |
| Obscure #214715 1 year ago |
Octavia and Lyra are in a quartet and are sisters apparently.
Lyra and Bonbon are a couple and have a kid apparently. Lyra is choosing her familial responsibilities over her working responsibilities. This strip refers to things off page like crazy. Like reading a single issue of Spiderman. You have to generate a lot of phantom stories when you read it in order to get it. |
| Epicplatypus #214716 1 year ago |
^my writing is terribad because its 317 AM but you get the gist of it. |
| Anonymous #214717 1 year ago |
#214713 here; I got sniped. Good show old chap. |
| Epicplatypus #214722 1 year ago |
theres 4 major pannels with some pannels inside those pannels.... its like comic inception |
| Wrongness #214723 1 year ago |
I believe Octavia and Lyra are supposed to be sisters in this pic and Octavia is trying to get Lyra to leave Bonbon and Tootsie because she thinks being a lesbian is wrong and Lyra says "Fuck you I'm staying!" |
| Wrongness #214724 1 year ago |
whoa I got super ninjad. |
| Drasvin #214764 1 year ago |
Ninja ponies. That would be awesome to see.
Back on topic: Whoo! Go Lyra! |
| Obscure #214789 1 year ago |
A lot of passion in the writing. A musician/family squabble spread across 4 participants is challenging material to write for.
Line work and composition is solid. A lot of motion in the comic. Excellent use of over lapping the frames. I can tell a lot of step by step thought has been put into the precise order of events. This is an entirely acceptable piece of work. |
| Anonymous #215014 1 year ago |
I would agree if I had some freaking arrows to follow...... right now I'm confused..... still neat overall, but I'm terribly confused. |
| Doodleman #215154 1 year ago |
>>28195 Is the first page set to the comic. After reading that, >>26101 , and >>26956 , the story gets more clear.
If someone wouldn't have been such an impatient pants, then I could've uploaded the two in succession. <<" |
| Anonymous #215566 1 year ago |
The comic looks very well-drawn and dramatic, but I'm (like others) also a bit confused about (1) which order the panels go in, and (2) whether the pony and foal in the upper-left are supposed to be Derpy and Dinky, or someone else. |
| Anonymous #215616 1 year ago |
Okay, I think I figured out the paneling.
First is top left, then top right, then bottom left, and bottom right. |
| Anonymous #216176 1 year ago |
How about an edit with the four pages under each other instead...
Anyway. nice story! |
| Drasvin #217247 1 year ago |
@anon 566 That's supposed to be Tootsie, Lyra and Bonbon's foal. Though Tootsie is a good friend of Dinky. |
| Anonymous #315312 1 year ago |
I think Octavia is actually trying to take Lyra to a "reform" camp to make her not a lesbian, and Lyra stands up and says no. |