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Anonymous
#110532
1 year ago
I graded a lame fanfic based off cupcakes.

Origional
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/15800
Satan
#110536
1 year ago
do something productive with you life.

like make cupcakes.
Anonymous
#110550
1 year ago
Hm, Anon1, even though I agree with your remarks, you just forgot spacing after YOUR punctuation :

"Not enough detail,rushed plot"...
Anonymous
#110556
1 year ago
@anon 2
Oh shit, I you're right.
Well I feel like a asshole..
Anonymous
#110558
1 year ago
@anon 3
And I just made another fuck up...
I think is cause I've been up for like, 24 hours now.
I'm going to bed...
Anonymous
#110559
1 year ago
Obviously, the author use Russian Punctuation in english text. That's wrong, But yes, we love " , "
Turin_Aramaia
#110567
1 year ago
It's not that hard to read, though.
ihatecupcakes
#110573
1 year ago
Oh wow,I'm sorry if you don't like my typing,english is not my primary language.Besides,I've never written a story before so excuse me if it's bad.
Asshole.
MagicMarker
#110622
1 year ago
That's not how you accept criticism, or deal with trolls Mr. ihatecupcakes. :3c

U mad?
Anonymous
#110626
1 year ago
I finished school about 13 years ago, but I don't recall there being such a grade as F-
Flammie
#110629
1 year ago
I don't see anything wrong with this!
ihatecupcakes
#110635
1 year ago
@MagicMarker
I'm a girl,just to clarify.
Satan
#110644
1 year ago
ms. ihatecupcakes eh?

make me cupcakes.
Caramel
#110645
1 year ago
See my original comments "Cupcakes" on your upload version. It should straighten things out on why so many people are "Being so mean"
wvryn
#110672
1 year ago
Oh, dude, I read this last night. It wasn't THAT bad, granted the story seemed rushed all to hell, there were many punctuation errors, and the whole gun thing is dumb. I guess she could have used one if she was a alicorn or unicorn, but she never stated
she was either of those things. Not to mention the fact that she just seems like a character made to
fix a story she didn't like. My conclusion, Not bad for a first try, but don't quit your day job.
MagicMarker
#110705
1 year ago
Oops, sorry. 'Ms.' ihatecupcakes. <:3

I still stand by what I said, getting upset and calling the guy an asshole isn't how you respond to this kind of stuff. You've gotta respond calmly, and in a way that won't feed the trolls. :3
KLLRDG
#110723
1 year ago
See post #15862 for my edited version.
I don't even know why...
StreakTheFox
#110837
1 year ago
chill dawg
Mastahopo
#111145
1 year ago
I told him/her there will be haters :I
Anonymous
#112151
1 year ago
As much as I enjoy Pinkie dying a violent death, I just don't like this fic.
Anonymous
#113020
1 year ago
In the word of Strong Bad, "not good enough, F--".