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fluffikitten
#115764
1 year ago
heellp mee DX
Its not done obviously lol but I cant figure out whats wrong ive re drawn it twice...something just seems off...
dragonSpike
#115772
1 year ago
It's spitfire, right?
fluffikitten
#115774
1 year ago
no rainbow dash
feather
#115776
1 year ago
the angel of the rear leg is off. it looks like it's tilted toward the viewer which is very unnatural.

the wings could be in a differen position. is she flying?
Wrongness
#115779
1 year ago
needs pupils.. like seriously.... pupils...
feather
#115780
1 year ago
also she looks evil.
fluffikitten
#115782
1 year ago
@wrongness well yes but thats gona be colored in
feather
#115786
1 year ago
*angle.

and what wrongness said lol but I assume that's a later step
fluffikitten
#115791
1 year ago
@feather
Humm Isee what you mean there...what about her body tho? Is it too long or something?

@Feather Yah I was kinda going for mischievous
Wrongness
#115794
1 year ago
yeah sorry but pupiless eyes really bother me.
dragonSpike
#115797
1 year ago
Her hair looks too much like Spitfire's. That's the problem.
feather
#115805
1 year ago
well it could be too thick and her neck probably needs to be a little longer. and that's evil not mischievous lol. don't do the bottom line on the eye, just the top. close the mouth. use a reference for the shape of the wings as well, they're a little misshapen.
fluffikitten
#115897
1 year ago
Bwaah ^^ I think ive fixed eet!