
| Anonymous #142789 1 year ago |
Hoo boy. Let's see.
She's way too expensive. 2UU or even UUU would be more appropriate. +2 ability doesn't play nicely with zones when it resolves. It should be worded: "Look at the top two cards of your library. If one of those cards is a Pony, you may reveal it and put it into your hand. Put the remaining cards on top of your library in any order." -1 ability is lolfail. It could easily cost 0. Ultimate is good, but it doesn't sync with the +2 properly. Planeswalkers are always designed so that, assuming they don't take any damage, their primary + ability will overshoot the cost of their ultimate. After two +2 uses, she's at exactly 8, which means she has to use +2 again before she can use her -8 without dying. The cost should be changed to -9, or her starting loyalty to 5, to ensure she syncs properly. |
| yawg07 #142917 1 year ago |
Yeah, don't usually say this about user-created cards, but... way too underpowered. |
| Anonymous #143058 1 year ago |
Definitely underpowered. The only thing I would change about what Anon1 suggested is that I would keep the second ability at -1, but change it to "Draw two cards, then put a etc etc" |
| Invisible_Pink_Unicorn #143725 1 year ago |
In addition to the points raised by the previous posters, I'm also missing a stronger tie-in to flavor. While this card does feel like a pony wizard, it doesn't feel like Twilight specifically. Making her a Planeswalker also doesn't quite seem to fit. Maybe the picture of an "awakened" Twilight Sparkle with glowing eyes could bridge the gap?
That being said, I am happy to see more FiM:tG cards on Ponibooru. Assuming the card was uploaded by the designer: don't let the criticism get you down - the people who take the time to comment the cards usually just have high standards and compare them to cards that have been concepted and polished by a team of professionals over a timespan of several months. So just keep going, and you'll land a hit or two as you get better. Listening to the feedback helps; most of it is quite pertinent, and, at the very least, makes you ponder different approaches. |