| Anonymous #100802 1 year ago |
again, such a great story, everypony is so well in character that it's just pure joy to read. i really laughed out loud a few times, and the excitement of pinkie is totally contagious.
and that ending sentence, man i almost fell out of my chair laughing. perfect 10/10 (oh yeah, but was she pregnant now or not?) |
| Anonymous #100856 1 year ago |
^ See part 4. Pinkie was just gaining weight. |
| Anonymous #100860 1 year ago |
^i read that part, but i wasn't sure regardless. thanks. |
| Anonymous #100924 1 year ago |
GOOD END |
| Anonymous #101123 1 year ago |
Satisfying ending |
| Anonymous #101582 1 year ago |
I have within myself 7 different persons that dictate how to do things, this were their reactions.
/b/ veteran: Faggotry, faggotry everywhere Overanalyzer: Not plausible, if following the nature of other lizards is any guide she would probably have been damage by the barbs. Artistic connoseiur: I have seen better pieces, this is just ok. Rationalist: This is irrelevant to me. Psycopath: I like where this is going. The cool guy to hang out with:Well written, nothing too out of the blue, nice transitions and good setting. Ceartainly not my cup of tea but I can understand why you wrote it. Fetishist: Needs more bondage.... and chockers...... and fluttershy....... and trixie..... |
| Anonymous #101597 1 year ago |
Oh.
Wow. I...I read all the other installments and honestly didn't see that coming OH WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME. |
| Anonymous #102308 1 year ago |
Oh god, that last sentence had me in stitches... heh heh |
| Anonymous #107497 1 year ago |
Tags have applejack and rainbow_dash?
What for? *removes them* |
| Anonymous #190897 1 year ago |
Dat ending. |
| Anonymous #197610 1 year ago |
the ending is extended now :P |