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Stargaser
#403712
11 months ago
Spitfire: Soarin?...hey...SOARIN.

Soarin: Buh? "blinks" huh, oh sorry Spitfire kinda just dozed off i guess.

SP: "giggles" you were thinking of her, weren't you?

S: HUH? me...who?

SP: Oh you know who. that mare from the gala.
S: don't know what you're talking about.

SP: Oh really. the one that sold you that pie. with the hat and if i remember what you said correctly, "the most beautiful eyes you had ever seen"

S: "blushes" uhm i...i just remember the good pie she sold me...and i was thinking of...uh..new tricks for the next show...that's all.

SP:RIIIIIIGHT. that's all. so you wouldn't be interested to try and find her then?

S: uhm...no, the wonderbolts come first and i gotta be focused on the show..and the team "looks into the clouds below".

SP:"sighs" if that's how you feel.

S: Besides, she could be anywhere now, would be like finding a pin in a haystack.

SP:Oh really, cause i was talking to Rainbow dash no so long ago.

S: The mare that performed the sonic rainboom and saved our flanks?

SP: The very same,well she was telling me about her friends and one of them sounded like your pie dealer.

S: R..really...uhm...did she tell you her name or anything. Just to know who to thank for the pie of course.

SP: Mhm. her names Applejack, and she lives and works at Sweet Apple Acres farm.

S: Oh thanks...Apple acres huh... Hey uh, i'm just gonna go try some new tricks and then hit the hay, that ok with you?

SP: hehe go ahead.

"Soarin jumps off the balcony into the clouds below"

SP:"giggle" what a dork.....HEY SWEET APPLE ACRES IS JUST OUTSIDE PONYVILLE.

S:"in the distance" thank yoooouu.

SP:Go get her loverboy " smiles and goes back inside"

END

dont hurt me, dont hurt me,
I am NOT a writer. just saw this picture and couldn't get this thing out of my head, and then it became much longer then i thought.
probably got spelling errors and stupid stuff like that. hell i havent written anything fictonal since... early high school or something, probably even before then, just...just don't hurt me.
Sparkling
#403728
11 months ago
^actually, very nice wirtten. Ever thought of an fan fic about an pic?
NK_6060
#403811
11 months ago
^^ Not bad. Very cute indeed. ;)

^ I've written an AppleSoar story myself if anyone's interested, though it's old and pending a re-boot.

http://stinger-vxr42.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3i518l
Anonymous
#404396
11 months ago
Lives of the quick and famous.
bustoblaster
#404940
11 months ago
@Star: Normally I avoid all fics regardless of quality, but I've gotta say that that was pretty good. Now I really want a comic version of that.
WhiteSocks
#405039
11 months ago
::applauds the mini-story::
Parp555
#405505
11 months ago
Kudos to you stargazer. That was pretty good. and I usually hate fanfiction
Stargaser
#406679
11 months ago
O_o you liked it?...i didnt expect it but thanks. Probably couldn't write a whole fic, probably be a nervous wreck to get everything right. but if i see something that makes a spark again...i just might write it down. thanks guys :)
Anonymous
#413425
11 months ago
The artist's scenario is better imo.