
| fluffikitten #115764 1 year ago |
heellp mee DX
Its not done obviously lol but I cant figure out whats wrong ive re drawn it twice...something just seems off... |
| dragonSpike #115772 1 year ago |
It's spitfire, right? |
| fluffikitten #115774 1 year ago |
no rainbow dash |
| feather #115776 1 year ago |
the angel of the rear leg is off. it looks like it's tilted toward the viewer which is very unnatural.
the wings could be in a differen position. is she flying? |
| Wrongness #115779 1 year ago |
needs pupils.. like seriously.... pupils... |
| feather #115780 1 year ago |
also she looks evil. |
| fluffikitten #115782 1 year ago |
@wrongness well yes but thats gona be colored in |
| feather #115786 1 year ago |
*angle.
and what wrongness said lol but I assume that's a later step |
| fluffikitten #115791 1 year ago |
@feather
Humm Isee what you mean there...what about her body tho? Is it too long or something? @Feather Yah I was kinda going for mischievous |
| Wrongness #115794 1 year ago |
yeah sorry but pupiless eyes really bother me. |
| dragonSpike #115797 1 year ago |
Her hair looks too much like Spitfire's. That's the problem. |
| feather #115805 1 year ago |
well it could be too thick and her neck probably needs to be a little longer. and that's evil not mischievous lol. don't do the bottom line on the eye, just the top. close the mouth. use a reference for the shape of the wings as well, they're a little misshapen. |
| fluffikitten #115897 1 year ago |
Bwaah ^^ I think ive fixed eet! |