
| KLLRDG #110709 1 year ago |
Again, I'm sorry.
I wasn't expecting to get it to sound even remotely "good". What was I thinking... |
| Satan #110710 1 year ago |
apology denied |
| Anonymous #110715 1 year ago |
You don't have to be sorry for your mistakes. Don't mind those ponies rating it terribly. |
| DragonRage #110720 1 year ago |
AND THEN THEY BOTH
The End That actually made me laugh. Good job, sir. |
| Anonymous #110724 1 year ago |
..."HAD CRAZY AWESOME SEX"?
Let me guess, Dash is your waifu? |
| KLLRDG #110726 1 year ago |
I didn't write it. I edited it. |
| KLLRDG #110728 1 year ago |
Original story belongs to "ihatecupcakes". |
| Anonymous #110731 1 year ago |
What's the point of editing it? There is none. |
| KLLRDG #110735 1 year ago |
I was curious to see what a bad story would look when written properly.
Results - Not favorable... |
| Facelessguru #110746 1 year ago |
nope.avi
even perfectly shaped poop is still just poop though nice try |
| ihatecupcakes #110747 1 year ago |
@KLLRDG
Well I commend you for at least writing this crap properly.Sorry for posting the original,I'm not good at writing stories. |
| KLLRDG #110753 1 year ago |
Try writing a strictly canon story, perhaps with one OC, and have it themed around something show-related instead of crazy gun-toting bloodbaths...
Crazy Pinkie writes itself, true, but this was a bit overboard... |
| MetalHooves #110786 1 year ago |
Non-strictly canon can go over well if you put some effort into it; look at all of mogu's stuff. |
| KLLRDG #110865 1 year ago |
For a beginner, I'd still say use canon as guidlines until you can start formulating your own OC stories... |
| NathanExplosion #110876 1 year ago |
Ah, I love Mogu's fics. Been watching the SFG thread for a long time, none of the new guys quite measure up lol. |