
| Anonymous #461736 10 months ago |
New Mogu fanfiction, awesome! |
| Anonymous #461842 10 months ago |
TL;DR |
| Naruto2-point0 #461954 10 months ago |
did some one read it? is it good? cuz otherwise, ^this |
| Anonymous #462016 10 months ago |
Daaaamn, yo! |
| Xuncu #462086 10 months ago |
Out of a total of 5, i give this:
*clop*clop*clop*clop*cl |
| Anonymous #462278 10 months ago |
I have the most appropriate wing-boner right now. |
| Anonymous #462913 10 months ago |
i have the weirdest boner right now |
| Anonymous #462970 10 months ago |
Summary: "Heart thumping, hot breaths passing from your mouth to the stomach of the mare you so adore as if to warm her up for what's to come, you press your face against the supple mass, rubbing it serenely back and forth." |
| Anonymous #462975 10 months ago |
That Octavia, what a tease |
| Anonymous #463346 10 months ago |
Not sure if I like this. Octavia comes off as pretty pathetic if this was all because of some guy she liked not return her feelings. Really paints her in a bad light if thats the case. All that talent. All those years of work. . . wasted on a stupid one-sided love. |
| mogu #463613 10 months ago |
^ I appreciate your input, but understand that I write these to be simple one-shot stories that you don't have to know much beforehand (aside from what's offered in the show itself, at most) to read them. I try to set up complete little stories and I try, at least in some of them, to make some kind of actual backstory so the second-person pony's position makes sense, and he's not just randomly all over insert_girl_pony. However, I appreciate your input and can try to make more convincing or at least simpler backstories in the future -- my goal remains creating reasonably short and enjoyable 'sensual, but not explicit' stories. |
| Anonymous #463659 10 months ago |
Well, glad I could help then. |
| Ponymaru #463717 10 months ago |
*spoing*
Oh, erm, pay no attention to the wings, please... |
| MetalHooves #464318 10 months ago |
Oh look, my inspiration is back. :D |
| Anonymous #465204 10 months ago |
^ Its about time. |
| Anonymous #698742 8 months ago |
"I thought I told you to do what you will."
You stare down at the mare for a few seconds, tempted. Then you slowly shake your head. "No." "What?!" Her eyes pop open, her aloof mask shattering into an expression of shock and desperation. You keep her gently pinned in place with a hoof in the center of her chest. "I'm not your toy," you tell her softly, "and I don't take orders from you. But I WILL pick you up here tomorrow night for dinner at the Chez Panisse." You give her a chaste peck and turn for the door without another word, leaving her staring after you with a hoof pressed to her cheek. |
| Anonymous #1378010 2 months ago |
^Win, bro. Serious win. |