
| Anonymous #412970 11 months ago |
No words for this one..... |
| Anonymous #413011 11 months ago |
this comic was a waste of my time. the whole is poorly written. |
| Anonymous #413017 11 months ago |
Really nice comic, i'm up to see more. |
| schutzstallion #413020 11 months ago |
It had a good premise but it was poorly executed. Why in the hay would they say "man down", for example? |
| Anonymous #413031 11 months ago |
I accidentally read a few in the wrong order. It's drawn okay, but appears messy, though that's clearly part of the style.
I don't like the way it depicts Celestia though, that's pretty brutal... |
| TooOldForThisShow #413051 11 months ago |
Waterfalls of tears = good drama. |
| Anonymous #413069 11 months ago |
^seriously whats up with that faucet of tears? does this artist think that this is how everyone cries? |
| Anonymous #413094 11 months ago |
ohh... oooh God... |
| TooOldForThisShow #413100 11 months ago |
^^ It's narmtastic, that's what. |
| Anonymous #413115 11 months ago |
BOOM |
| Anonymous #413122 11 months ago |
RAPE FACE |
| Detective_Chmilewsky #413140 11 months ago |
Pinkie Pie had faucet tears in the show. Why not in the comic? |
| Detective_Chmilewsky #413145 11 months ago |
Also, she just set a guy on fire and cut another guy in half, and yet somehow crying too much is a problem? |
| ChickNeighney #413153 11 months ago |
That hurt to read. |
| Anonymous #413163 11 months ago |
^ fake emotions on such a serious/dark comic is stupid. When pinkie pie cries a waterfall it is because its cartoon physics and it is also a mood changer. This waterfall seen in this comic does nothing but ruin the already mediocre comic. |
| Yorec #413187 11 months ago |
To me, this comic just doesn't give any context as to why this would be happening in the first place. I mean yeah, its implied by one of the ponies that Celestia may have gone off the deep end because of some troubled times, maybe there is some kind of pony civil war or something.
And why would she send a team of ponies armed with assault rifles to assassinate a small family in a residential area? Wouldn't the neighbors call the pony equivalent of 911 or something after hearing the gunfire? Not exactly the subtlest of assassination attempts. Unless he plans to expand on this thing and provide some back-story to this comic, then I consider it a hastily put together reason to have Twilight's parents get killed in a gruesome way and to show that Celestia is a sadistic bitch. Maybe I'm reading into it too much. :\ |
| TooOldForThisShow #413250 11 months ago |
Fountains of tears like you see in cartoons are inherently comical, which is why it doesn't work in something that's intended to be serious like this is. Subtlety is a virtue, this comic has none. |
| Gittonsxv #413281 11 months ago |
WTF, no really, you make a comic about armed assassins killing twilights mum and dad so celly can find a replacement......THE FUUUUUUUUCK |
| AppleDashWINS #413399 11 months ago |
reminds me of FEAR when alma kills/liquefies those soldiers in the school(?) don't remember
Still, notsureifiwant.jpg |
| Anonymous #413532 11 months ago |
Well, that was a waste of time. |
| TooOldForThisShow #413762 11 months ago |
So many sycophants on that DA page. |
| AdamNovagen #415822 11 months ago |
^ And so many raging haters on this PB page. |
| d715 #415917 11 months ago |
This whole story was crap
all it was is just some pointless grimdark and no plot Celestia being evil both overused and tried This is also every reason why GrimDark is the worst type of fan whatever, it replaces plot and characters with gore in hopes it will shock the viewer into no noticing. |
| Anonymous #417525 11 months ago |
I like it!... the other coments are crap...problem? |