
| Anonymous #110532 1 year ago |
I graded a lame fanfic based off cupcakes.
Origional http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/15800 |
| Satan #110536 1 year ago |
do something productive with you life.
like make cupcakes. |
| Anonymous #110550 1 year ago |
Hm, Anon1, even though I agree with your remarks, you just forgot spacing after YOUR punctuation :
"Not enough detail,rushed plot"... |
| Anonymous #110556 1 year ago |
@anon 2
Oh shit, I you're right. Well I feel like a asshole.. |
| Anonymous #110558 1 year ago |
@anon 3
And I just made another fuck up... I think is cause I've been up for like, 24 hours now. I'm going to bed... |
| Anonymous #110559 1 year ago |
Obviously, the author use Russian Punctuation in english text. That's wrong, But yes, we love " , " |
| Turin_Aramaia #110567 1 year ago |
It's not that hard to read, though. |
| ihatecupcakes #110573 1 year ago |
Oh wow,I'm sorry if you don't like my typing,english is not my primary language.Besides,I've never written a story before so excuse me if it's bad.
Asshole. |
| MagicMarker #110622 1 year ago |
That's not how you accept criticism, or deal with trolls Mr. ihatecupcakes. :3c
U mad? |
| Anonymous #110626 1 year ago |
I finished school about 13 years ago, but I don't recall there being such a grade as F- |
| Flammie #110629 1 year ago |
I don't see anything wrong with this! |
| ihatecupcakes #110635 1 year ago |
@MagicMarker
I'm a girl,just to clarify. |
| Satan #110644 1 year ago |
ms. ihatecupcakes eh?
make me cupcakes. |
| Caramel #110645 1 year ago |
See my original comments "Cupcakes" on your upload version. It should straighten things out on why so many people are "Being so mean" |
| wvryn #110672 1 year ago |
Oh, dude, I read this last night. It wasn't THAT bad, granted the story seemed rushed all to hell, there were many punctuation errors, and the whole gun thing is dumb. I guess she could have used one if she was a alicorn or unicorn, but she never stated
she was either of those things. Not to mention the fact that she just seems like a character made to fix a story she didn't like. My conclusion, Not bad for a first try, but don't quit your day job. |
| MagicMarker #110705 1 year ago |
Oops, sorry. 'Ms.' ihatecupcakes. <:3
I still stand by what I said, getting upset and calling the guy an asshole isn't how you respond to this kind of stuff. You've gotta respond calmly, and in a way that won't feed the trolls. :3 |
| KLLRDG #110723 1 year ago |
See post #15862 for my edited version.
I don't even know why... |
| StreakTheFox #110837 1 year ago |
chill dawg |
| Mastahopo #111145 1 year ago |
I told him/her there will be haters :I |
| Anonymous #112151 1 year ago |
As much as I enjoy Pinkie dying a violent death, I just don't like this fic. |
| Anonymous #113020 1 year ago |
In the word of Strong Bad, "not good enough, F--". |