Just like my last post, I would like to be rated and given constructive criticism on this story, as I still feel I have a long way to go in the ways of description. If I’m redundant, I apologize, but I can realize when I need help.

However, if you don’t like the story, or feel that it’s ‘unoriginal’, unless you have some constructive advice, I don’t want to hear it. Please give a noob that respect.

-The Dark Trianni