This is most likely NEVER going to be completed. My intent was to rewrite the story from James's POV, so that you could hear his side of the story, and learn more about his character. Then I would tell Julie's tale. Followed by her husband Don's. (I only mentioned him once) If anybody would like to continue in this gargantuan endeavor, then be my guest. These are pieces of the storyline that I had already planned out, and even took the steps to incorporate into Anna's Story: JAMES'S STORY: When Anna tries to get James to eat normal food, he rushes to the bathroom. According to Anna, he pukes. But in reality, he's really faking it so that Anna would feed him. He later feels guilty about it. James has a dream similat to Anna's. He starts out at normal size, then drinks until he is small enough for Anna to fit him between her breasts, and leave him there. Then he wakes up. JULIE'S STORY: When Anna called Julie, she sounded distracted. That's becuase she was having sex with Don. Julie's story really begins when she injects Anna with the antivirus that turns James into a woman. Recall that she yelped in surprise? That's because milk had accidently squirted onto her face, and into her mouth. This part I planned but didn't write in Anna's Story: The milk Julie had accidently ingested, set the virus active in her body. She doesn't lactate, but has an intense craving for Anna's milk. In desperation, before her lab is shut down, she combines the virus present in Anna's body (she had samples) with her own DNA. She molds it into pill form, planning to secretly have Don eat it. But she becomes guilty about her decision and changes her mind. Don eats one anyway, thinking they were Tylenol. DON'S STORY: Hadn't thought of it. BTW, I love feedback! Send me comments! Send me suggestions! email: Innzanitee@yahoo.com ("Insanity" was already taken;)