http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/srb/www/ Don't read if under 18 or illegal in your little corner of the world, like you'll listen. This should appear only on my site http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/srb/www/ F3, Futanari Palace, Pal's archive site, through Pal's yahoo group, on Pal's Forum... well, it basically should be wherever Pal's stuff is. Also at the Grey Archive, and some other places they might end up, they know who they are. The character of Terra is copyright srb, SRB, SomeRandomBastard, or me. I own it entirely in perpetuity for all time and through kingdom come. The character of Terra belongs to Theromen, and is entirely his own, I am just borrowing, without permission I might add, Mei to have some fun, just as he has done with the pictures he has expertly created. If he don't like it, this goes down. Just a bit of work I kicked outta my head, some real good sex in there too. This is a bit of thanks for Theromen for helping beta, drawing incredible pictures, and more importantly always being there to read and reply to my stuff. I ducked my major beta readers davidka1 and Theromen, so as not to ruin the surprise. Sorry guys. Thanks go out to my beta for this piece, SerenadedAbyss(AKA ZenKid here). This story contains futa/futa, oral Mei and Terra Sitting in a Tree (K-I-S-S-I-N-G) Terra sat there, perched on a branch. The sun was setting, although it was still a big orange ball on the horizon. The tree was big and sturdy, and the breeze was nice. The leaves on the trees had turned the pretty shades they do in the fall. The breeze would catch in her flowery sundress, blowing it up occasionally, giving a nice view to whomever might pass by. "Hey!" A voice came from below. Terra interrupted her view as she looked down below. There was a girl there, she looked like she was Chinese, or at least part Chinese. She was wearing a beautiful Chinese dress, with her black hair flowing freely in the breeze. "Hello," Terra said warmly, looking down at the girl. "What are you doing?" she asked. "Watching the sun set," Terra said, as a matter of fact. "Want to join?" she asked, patting on the branch. "Looks sturdy." "I, I guess," she said, climbing up the tree. It wasn't a large tree, and it didn't take much effort to pull her up, she didn't even scratch her dress. "I'm Terra," Terra said, as she watched the girl wiggle over near her. "I'm Mei," the girl said. "Nice to meet you," Terra said, her head turning towards the sun. "Nice to meet you too. I don't mean to sound silly, but where are we?" Mei asked, not recognizing any of nearby stretch of land. Or how she got here. Or where she was last. She didn't have amnesia, she could remember her family, her friends, her life. 'Maybe it's short term amnesia?' she thought, before dismissing it as too much of a soap opera cliché. "Earth, definitely," Terra rationalized. "The sun is too big." "Where else would we be?" Mei asked. "Mars? I don't know," Terra replied. She herself suffered from the same lack of information Mei did. "Oh, right," Mei said skeptically. "Let me try asking something else, do you remember where you were before now?" "Nope," Terra said, putting a hand on Mei's. "I'm sorry but I can't seem to come up with what I was doing for the life of me." "Uhm, okay, do you have something else to be doing?" Mei asked, her inquisitive nature trying to find some information from Terra, to no avail. "You know, I should, but I just seem to want to sit in the tree," Terra said, sliding her body over a little bit more. "Seems like you're here for that too." "I guess," Mei said, not really understanding. She accepted it nonetheless, as a child might accept magic as an explanation, as she stared out at the setting sun. "You're cute," Terra said, sliding her body over even more. She was right up next to Mei, their legs and thighs pressed together. "Thanks," Mei said, noticing in the corner of her eye the redhead staring at her. She turned her head, in her movement missing Terra's face come against hers, kissing her square on the lips. It was a soft kiss, the delicate one a new lover gives to another, unknowing at first how much pressure, how much force, how much attention to give at first. It felt nice to Mei, who at first was surprised, but pleasantly so. She didn't stop to question why she was so accepting. She was just going with whatever happened. "You're welcome," Terra said, wiping Mei's saliva off her mouth with her hand, before licking her finger clean. "That's, that's not what I meant," Mei said, staring at this near complete stranger she had just kissed. The redhead looked the same age as she did, but felt like a character out of a book. She was just different, like from a different place and time. "Look, I'm flattered, really, but it's just I'm," Me started out, before being interrupted. "Not into girls?" Terra asked, one arm reaching around to her shoulder, while the other rested high on her leg. "It's not that," Mei said, pulling her head back as Terra came over to kiss. "I'm, I kind of have something extra," She said. Terra's hand began exploring the top of her leg, reaching down in between. "Just what I thought," Terra said before muttering a Japanese word Mei didn't recognize. She leaned over farther than what was comfortable for her, to kiss Mei again. Mei was surprised by this girl's complete acceptance of her condition. Plenty of girls had accepted it before, but it had taken them some time to see it and understand it, but with her it was like saying 'I dyed my hair' or "I like Coke over Pepsi" or something else completely innocuous. Mei stopped struggling, finding herself just going with the entire oneiric scene occurring in front of her. She could feel the girl straining to meet her lips, and reached over, ever mindful of the branch below her, as she leaned back over. Their kisses turned from playfully exploring to sensual deep kissing. Terra seemed to Mei to be an unselfish lover, slowly taking the tip of her tongue while exploring Mei's mouth. All the while her hands were exploring the print on her dress. Mei could feel herself getting aroused, feeling this Terra girl's hands rubbing through the material of her dress, making her hidden trouser monster all the more painfully erect. Terra said to Mei, "We can sit in this tree, kissing, but why don't we let ourselves down?" "Where?" Mei asked, looking for some kind of house, or apartment. She would settle for a tree fort right now. "Over here!" Terra said, as her body dropped from the branch. Mei almost fell with her, as she looked down. There was a blanket sitting next to the tree, and with no effort Terra unfurled it, spreading it across the grass. Mei was no stranger to having public sex she just hadn't expected it. "Where did that come from?" Mei asked, dropping herself slowly from the branch. She wasn't afraid, it wasn't a long drop, but she really liked the dress, and she didn't want to ruin it. It was a gift and was something she cherished. "I don't know," Terra shrugged her shoulders, looking at it. Despite the autumn breeze it seemed to stay put, as though held by some unseen force. She walked over, kissing Mei for a moment as she undid the restraints keeping the dress on. Mei was surprised at this girl's forwardness, although it wasn't the first time a girl had come on strong to her. Mei was surprised at how strongly she felt towards this stranger, she was already chomping at the bit to screw this redheaded girl. Mei began to tug at her dress, trying best as she could to undo it without causing any damage. Terra had been very gentle to the garment, and hadn't hurt the dress in the least bit. Mei set it down, making sure to keep it off of any mud or water that could otherwise ruin the garment. Terra pulled her body away for a moment, pulling the straps on her dress to the side of her shoulders, and wiggling out of the sundress. Mei was so busy pulling her own dress off that she barely had time to take stock of Terra's body. The redheaded girl was pretty, with the youthful looks of innocence. Her body was slightly pale, and Mei wondered if she had stayed in doors all summer or if she just didn't like color. In any case, standing out in the open and wearing the bra and shorts, she had the body of a wet dream. Terra looked on this little half-Chinese girl, enjoying every inch of what her body had to offer. Mei's breasts were smaller than hers, but fit on her more demure body. She had the face of an angel, and her tight athletic body was entrancing. Her body was tinged with a delicious color of yellow all over. Terra couldn't help herself; this little lotus flower in front of her enthralled her. She rekindled their heated deep kissing in an instant, feeling her warm body press up against her as she shielded the girl from the autumn wind. Her skin was incredibly soft, and silky smooth, pressed up nearly naked against Terra it was alluring to her, especially as the soft skin of her hands massaged her back, fumbling with the straps of her bra. Mei felt a sense of accomplishment as she undid Terra's bra. She opened her face up to a magnificent set of breasts in front of her, which seemed to defy gravity, as they seemed to suspend artificially. Mei pulled her hands forward, lovingly cupping the breasts in her hand, confirming her belief that they were in fact natural. Not only were they real, but they were spectacular. With all of her attention drawn up, she was too preoccupied to think on her erection, still throbbing in her underpants, pressed up tight against Terra's thigh. Mei reached down, wiggling her body as she working her clothes off. 'What the fuck?' she thought to herself, as she felt something strange against her leg. She stopped for a second, reaching down. At first she had simply thought that it was her own body, building up inside her panties, but as she reached down, she realized that it was something foreign down there. She stopped dead cold, evoking a puzzled look from Terra. Mei knelt down, bringing herself face to genitals with Terra. She peeled back the boxer shorts, which she had neglected to question earlier, and was amazed when she found a huge cock buried under there. She had to rip them down to Terra's knees to examine her in detail. "Y, y, you're a, I thought me and my sire were the only ones!" Mei shouted, amazed. "Yeah, I'm a futanari, I thought you knew that honey," Terra said so blasé. "What's a futanari?" Mei asked, examining the hardening shaft in front of her. She half expected it to be some kind of strap on, but the feel was unmistakably human skin. She could feel Terra's increasing heartbeat, which was infusing it with size and girth with each passing beat. "Me, you, your mom I guess, Na-adia!" Terra said, surprised as she felt Mei reach around underneath her heavy ball sack, hitting her sensitive clit and finding her soaking wetness. Mei was still amazed; now she knew what all the girls who had been with her must have been thinking. Terra couldn't get another word out; Mei was working her body like a puppeteer. She had one hand constantly working the shaft of her throbbing cock while the other hand was positioned under, massaging the wetness between her legs. Terra cupped her own breasts, reveling in the feelings coursing through her body. The autumn wind was blowing against her softly, the cool breeze tingling her wetness and sent a shiver down her spine, and exacerbating her quickly stiffening nipples. Mei had her hands full, and her brain was trying to coordinate everything through the persistence haze of lust and desire. She was crouched down, but spread her legs open to reduce the tension. This had the additional effect of spreading her legs far apart, leaving everything between her legs completely exposed and open to the same breeze that was arousing Terra. She was already soaking wet and as hard as steel. Terra moved her body back slightly, watching with some perverse delight as a strand of her thick white fluid stick to Mei's hand before severing off. Terra lowered her body, getting on her hands and knees and practically diving between Mei's legs. Mei let out a soft coo as she felt Terra's tongue tease the tip of her girl cock. Mei's legs couldn't keep up against the attention she was getting. They gave out, her backside thudding against the ground, cushioned by the blanket and grass she only noticed the relief on her legs. She spread her legs farther apart, giving Terra more access to her body. 'Whoever this girl is, she knows what she's doing' her mind thought. Resting her hands between Mei's legs, Terra was able to work both hands at the delicate opening to Mei's flower while keeping herself propped up. Terra's tongue was slowly working its way along the delicate head of Mei's cock, encircling it before putting her tongue on the tip, tasting the girl's pre cum, which was dribbling out in copious measures. She began to work the tip of her girl cock in as her fingers worked their way into her gorgeous honey pot. Terra began to rub the outer lips, gliding the already moist lips up and down in deliberate rhythm with her mouth. She could feel the girl squirm as she inserted two fingers into her tight slit. Mei relished the pleasure that this girl was running through her body. Her skill was expert, knowing all of her erogenous zones and working them all in concert. 'It's like she knows what to do because she's a, a, whatever she called herself' Mei thought shaking as she felt the fingers working deeper and deeper in side with each progressive circle. Terra pulled her head back, much to Mei's disappointment. She laid her body back, her legs opening. She pulled her hard cock towards her stomach, offering Mei an unfettered view of her snatch, glistening in the golden glow of the setting sun. Terra didn't think she needed to say a word. She could not have been more right. Mei dove over to Terra so fast that she tripped herself on the blanket. She caught herself a moment before she flopped completely, but her head landed square between Terra's breasts. Terra laughed for a moment, enjoying the impromptu hug, as well as the mass of dark hair coving her midsection. Mei giggled for a moment, before returning to action. Terra kept her member lifted, and Mei had little trouble finding the sweet spot. Terra was more than ready, her pussy was positively soaked, and the smell and the pheromones coming off of this redheaded Aphrodite were intoxicating to Mei. Mei pushed her hips forward, relishing the firm feelings of Terra's tightness. She felt Terra's legs wrap around her hips, inviting her in. Mei was one to take a hint, and eagerly began to rock her hips back and forth. She was amazed at the tightness of this girl, she seemed so experienced but her body seemed like a virgin. Or at least as tight as those others she had deflowered in the past. She could tell that this girl was no spring chicken, she knew too much. Her legs were pushing her on quicker than Mei thought appropriate, but the lust in her body told her to continue. Mei leaned over, kissing Terra on the lips. Terra let out a moan into her mouth, as she felt Mei changing from exploration to full on passionate lovemaking. Mei was by no means new to intercourse either, but she had always been a kind and compassionate lover, always doing all that was necessary to take care of whomever she was with. Terra wasn't the kind of girl that seemed to need the consideration that some of her previous conquests did. If anything, Terra had seemed to ready her. Now, as she felt the redhead's mouth nibbling on her ear, and as she worked herself in and out of Terra, her whole body was burning with passion. Mei felt Terra's hands cupping her breasts, small by comparison, but proper on her body, working the hard nubs that were her nipples. Mei bit her lip to silence the screams of ecstasy as she picked up her tempo, trying best as she could to settle herself. She wanted to enjoy each moment of their lovemaking for what it was worth, not just trying to get herself off. She felt Terra's hands move down, gliding across the arch of her back before they reached down lower, each one lifting and enfolding one of her ass cheeks. Terra unlike Mei, knew that from experience with other futanaris the intense pleasure from toying with her erogenous zones. Her fingers quickly located their intended target, and arched forward. Terra could feel Mei's body shudder as she inserted both index fingers into her, as she herself was still jack hammering her girl cock in Terra. Not one to be outdone, Mei picked up her pace, thrusting her in and out at a more rapid gait. She pulled herself out almost all the way out before filling Terra up to the hilt. She worked herself faster and faster, all the time trying to hold back the cum that yearned so desperately to be free. Terra's tight snatch was gripping and clamping down on her, driving her wild with lust as she felt Terra insert two more fingers, both working themselves in faster than Mei thought possible. Terra's legs were wrapped around Mei's back, pulling her in faster and harder with each thrust. Terra came hard, her body shaking, her mind reeling. Mei continued, sweat dripping across her brow while she pounded into Terra, enjoying every moment watching Terra's orgasm. She finally let herself go, increasing to a pace she thought impossible before, wanting to finish herself off. Her body seemed like a blur, her mind was filled with passions of flesh against flesh, of constant unending pleasure. Terra's orgasming body below her proved too much, and Mei came hard, shooting load after load of hot sticky cum deep in Terra. Terra's body continued to tremble, milking Mei's cumming shaft for all that it was worth. Mei felt fireworks of pleasure explode in her mind with each stream of swimmers erupting from her. Terra could feel the hot load filling deep inside of her as her orgasm began to subside. She looked into Mei's face, watching the Chinese girl's expression change from the silly scrunched face one makes during orgasm to one of serene happiness. Her body hunched over, kissing Terra once more on the lips. Mei removed her slowly softening penis, and Terra could feel the intermingling of their love juices gush forth, forming a puddle between the cheeks of her bum. Mei smiled as she turned herself over, laying on her back on the blanket. She was glowing in her post orgasmic heaven. Terra looked at her, smiling at the gorgeous girl. Her hand reached over, finding Mei's soaked pussy. It took Mei a few moments to look over, wearing only that content smile on her face. Terra motioned with her eyes down. Mei panned her eyes down, and saw the longest cock she had ever seen. Terra's fingertips were running up and down the shaft. The whole scene looked like something that Gordi would have pulled up on his computer, like something out of the mind of some perverted bastard. Her mind was in a dreamy state, but as she looked down at that monster, her only thoughts were 'That's never fitting in me.' She thought, wondering how many times girls her age had thought the same thing. "I hope you weren't going to turn over and fall asleep?" Terra asked. "N, no, I, I just don't think that I could take that," Mei said, looking over. "Well, if you want to stop, tell me," Terra said reasonably. "I promise I won't hurt you." "I'm not afraid of that," Mei said, sure of her own fighting skills. "I just, I don't think that's ever gonna get into me!" "Get on top," Terra said. "Then you can control it." Mei looked at her dubiously, but was willing to try before giving up. She had to stand almost all the way up just to get the behemoth between her legs to the tip of her body. Terra was holding her cock, already slathered in pre cum, up to assist, seeking to complete her own climax. She could feel the girl position her body and could feel the trepidation in the girl as she readied herself. She arched her knees slightly, and Terra could feel the tip of her cock enter into the Chinese girl's lotus. For Mei, it felt like cramming a two-liter bottle inside of her. Terra was being considerate, and for her part lay there motionless, biting her teeth as she sought to make love to this girl. It wasn't just the length of the shaft; it was also its massive girth. Terra's girl cock seemed to press against every nanometer of Mei's tender pussy, pushing the walls of her love canal to the limit. It hurt, but in a good way, Mei just didn't know how much she could deal with. She was wetter than she had ever remembered, and Terra cock was practically marinated in pre cum, but it wasn't a matter of lubrication. Terra looked over at the girl, obviously struggling to work her monolithic member inside Mei's tight snatch. Terra could see in the girl's face her desire, and wished despite herself that she could do something to ease the pain. The girl had managed to get three inches in relatively easily, but that was the tip of the iceberg. Mei was going crazy, she wasn't even close to halfway done and she didn't know if she could fit any more in her. She felt Terra's body beneath her slowly start to move. Her eyes bugged out in fear, but she realized a moment later that Terra was trying to slowly thrust in and out of her, not impale Mei. The feeling of having it moving felt better than just impaling herself on some rigid immobile phallus. Terra reached her hands over, grabbing onto Mei's semi-hard cock. She slowly began to work the shaft, feeling the organ, sticky with their love juices, responding almost instantaneously. Mei's body seemed to change its focus; her mind's changing away from trying to fit something too large into her. Terra would never want to do anything to this girl that she didn't want. Feeling Terra's hands work her over, Mei's body relaxed, and as her arousal grew larger and larger, Mei could feel her body yield more. Terra had always had been a caring and understanding lover, and Mei was relieved to find out how thoughtful and unselfish she was while making love. Mei didn't know if she could lie there with a girl hovered about her cock, slowly working her way in her. It wasn't long before Mei had fit nearly half of Terra inside of her. Terra's body continued to rock, her motions becoming longer as Mei's body began to open up more. Mei felt funny, but she loved every moment of it. She looked down at Terra below her, grasping her cock. It seemed to be bigger. Not a little bit bigger, it looked a lot bigger. Mei's thought her mind must be playing tricks on her, an optical illusion being so high up on the girl, and largely ignored it. Her body seemed more accepting of the fat bulky cock, and Mei was relieved as the feelings of pain, however masked by pleasure, seemed to dissipate into the thin air. She didn't bother to question it, like everything going on this evening she was just going with whatever came her way. Her nipples seemed to burn with desire, and as Mei's mitts met them she was surprised at how playful her breasts seemed. Terra continued to stroke Mei's shaft with one hand while she stole one, reaching down under one leg, rubbing against her own soaked slit, still sopping with their combined juices. Her head was swimming in pleasure. Keeping track of what was happening was becoming difficult. Her mind was on autopilot, her body in constant motion as she struggled trying to stay her sexual desire to screw Mei silly. Mei looked down, seeing how much she had fit. She amazed herself, Terra was almost in her completely. Even with Terra closing in on her cervix, all the pain had gone, and she was awash with only pleasure now. She felt the autumn wind blowing gently on the sweat covering both of their bodies. It did nothing to stay the heat of their passion. Terra removed her hand from Mei's thick cock, smiling at the girl. Mei looked down, confused. Terra's eyes pointed her down, and Mei looked, surprised that she was stuffed with all but a quarter inch of Terra's monster. Terra pushed her body up slightly, feeling the tip of her head inside of Mei's cervix. Mei looked down, feeling fulfilled beyond description. Terra smiled, putting her hands on Mei's shoulders and gently drawing her near. Terra kissed the girl on the lips, tasting her mouth. Terra resumed her penetrating thrusts again, feeling Mei's body working with her. Her body was so tight, tighter than anyone that Terra had been with. Her vice like vaginal muscles made their lovemaking all the more passionate, Terra had to work not only to please herself but also her lover. Mei broke their embrace, kissing Terra's cheek, her neck, and then reaching down she began to kiss the futa's larger breasts. She was amazed at how inhumanly perfect they seemed, they were perfect twins that felt exquisite to the touch. Her nipples seemed small, but only so on breasts of this size, and Mei instinctively fastened her mouth to one, licking, and gently biting the nipple. Terra moaned out loud at Mei's unexpected move. She began to increase her hand's speed, working the tender but firm meat of Mei's cock, hearing murmurs muffled by her mammary. Terra increased her own pace, rubbing her clit furiously as she began to finger fuck herself. Mei was getting more and more accustomed to Terra and her incredible girth, and her body was feeding off the feelings coming from inside of her. What had first started out as concern, downright fear at its size had been replaced entirely by desire and lust. Mei speed up her pace, milking every inch of Terra's cock and loving every moment of it. Terra for her part picked up her own tempo, both her cock inside of Mei and her hand outside. The two of them seemed to be almost competing to finish each other off. Terra's body was moving like a blur, constantly giving Mei's body more attention than she knew what to deal with. Mei's body squirming around Terra was driving her to the brink, and Terra could tell. She wanted to hold in tighter for dear life, but she knew she was close, she just wanted to cum together. Mei was trying to hold back her own orgasm, seeking to cum with Terra at the same time as well. Both girls were staving off their orgasms, trying with all their might to get the other one off, never realizing they were both teetering on the edge. Terra's futa taming monster with every piston-like drive into Mei's gripping orifice that sent pleasure ripping through her body like arcs of electricity. Mei's tight snatch with a vice like grip squeezed out every inch of ecstasy from Terra's cock, filling her body with burning passion. The two of them came simultaneously. Terra's cried out loud as she came, filling Mei's cervix and womb up in moments. Wads and wads of creamy white swimmers poured out of Terra's body, as she trembled and shook in ecstasy. With each contracting stream of cum Terra seemed to have a new orgasm, each was one powerful and tearing her body into a near catatonic state of lust. Mei's body had too much, as her own orgasm sent her into convulsions. She had never cum this hard, and began to spasm around Terra's gigantic cock. Terra's hand job had more than done the trick, and she felt her own cock shooting hot, sticky wads of cum all over her and Terra's tummies and breasts, painting them white. Her entire body trembled, her head was flush with pleasure, and Terra didn't have long before she had filled Mei up with more of her semen than should ever be in a futa. With one hand still furiously working the last drops of cum from Mei's cock, Terra pulled her body down, feeling a torrent of cum following the head of her cock. She pulled out of Mei with an audible pop, followed by the gushing cum. Terra wasn't anywhere close with being done however, and continued to shoot off blast after blast of high- powered sperm out as fast as her hand could squeeze them. It shot into the air, some of it coming back down onto Terra's body, some of it hitting Mei's cute backside, while some of it arching up and hitting her back. Mei was surprised as he cock seemed to never stop cumming, she had shot her load only a little while ago but now she was blowing what seemed like a hundred loads at once. Terra's stomach and breasts were absolutely covered in white, as was much of Mei. Her backside was covered in copious amounts of Terra's cum as well. Mei let out a content sigh before laughing. She lay down next to Terra, covered in her own cum. She looked down at their two bodies, smiling at the mess that the two were in. She laughed, it looked like a hundred guys had a bukkake party on top of them, something Gordi had shown her, not that she had liked it, even if it was several futas on a girl. Terra surprised her a bit by taking a finger, drawing up a dollop, and bringing it to her mouth. Mei watched as the girl ate her cum, it was strange but all so erotic at the same time. Mei looked down at their two cocks, neither of which had begun to shrink. Mei looked down, surprised at herself. She had to reach down and grab it with her hands to be sure. Her cock was BIGGER! "What the fuck happened to me?" She asked, interrupting Terra's late day snack. Her cock was almost half a foot longer! She sat up, looking down between her breasts. Reaching up, she shouted "My tits are bigger too!" "MMM? Oh, I thought you had the nanos," Terra said, shrugging. "It's not a bad thing, is it?" Terra asked, kissing Mei on the lips. Mei could taste her cum on Terra's mouth. "Besides, we can always make you whatever you want to be." "No, but, but how?" Mei asked, confused didn't begin to explain things. She had just cum a hundred times the volume than she ever had before, her cock was bigger, her breasts had ballooned to almost a cup size larger, it was like she was in some crazy fairy tale. "How did we get here?" Terra asked absentmindedly. She pulled the blanket over the two of them, watching the sunset "How about we wait for a while and figure things out?" "Okay," Mei said, watching the sun fall completely below the horizon. "But I want answers." "Me too Mei, me too," Terra said, pulling up her sundress, and using it as a makeshift pillow for the two of them. She knew they would have to get their clothes on and find someplace to go, she just wished she knew where. But for now, she just wanted to enjoy the moment. The End? (This file was created by SomeRandomBastard (at) yahoo (dot) com, so send all flames there. Don't use without permission, and don't claim it's yours. 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