'blog: MAR 2004

March 2004

March 23, 2004 | 8:48 PM

1derful Tease by autoerotism: Kay gets jealous of her friend Erica, after Erica (intentionally but innocently) flashes Kay's dad. Prompted by Erica's behavior, Kay does her best to get more attention from her dad; the kind that Erica got when she flashed him.

As with most good incest stories of this sort this one is well paced, has horny but reluctant characters, and there is more to it than just sex. There is also more to the plot than what I mentioned in the summary above. Kay's mom is still around, although she is cheating on her husband with other men. Part of what leads Erica to flash Kay's dad is the knowledge of what his wife is up to. So maybe Kay's Mom is ultimately to blame for what happens?

What the author has written so far is a little open-ended, but I am more than satisfied with the story as is.

LINKS: 1derful Tease (Incest/Taboo) by autoerotism

  • Chapter 1 - Why Dad was teased. [6,000 words]
  • Chapter 2 - Dad is past the tease and calls the bluff. [4,700 words]

Totally Crazy by Cyan: This story reads like an episode of the Twilight Zone, an erotic episode that is. Deb's casual conversation with her friend Martha leads her to places that previously did not even exist in her wildest dreams. It begins with Martha explaining her relationship another woman, Bella, as a "spanking" relationship. At first Deb is shocked, but it isn't too long before Martha has her thinking about spanking her co-worker, Lisa.

This one reminds me of the stories of Laura Lynn Davis and Deirdre. Stories where characters are carried off their normal trajectory by a simple nudge and wind up in a situation that they never dreamed or feared was possible. I think the title sums up my opinion of the story. The seeming impossiblilty of the situation aroused me even when I didn't find some of the individual elements in the story arousing.

LINK: Totally Crazy (FF cons reluc les D/S span lght humil) by Cyan - When her friend tells her about spanking for fun, a seed is planted in her mind... [4,500 words]

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March 20, 2004 | 8:23 AM

It looks like I was a little premature in writing my review of Raine and Sheri by destinie21. She has written two more chapters, which I read last night.

Still narrated by Raine, chapter two picks up right where the first one left off. Raine and Sheri do their best to hide their new attraction to each other from their parents. They are staying with Mom and Dad over the Thanksgiving Day weekend. As it turns out one of their parents has a secret of her own. A secret she has shared with one of her daughters, but kept hidden from the other.

There is considerably more hot sex per page in these two chapters than there was in the initial one. If you want to understand this story I recommend that you read it from the beginning, but if you are just in it for the sex then you may want to jump straight to the end of the first chapter. The story will not make as much sense, but then if all you care about is the sex then I guess that's a moot point.

I don't know if the author plans on continuing the story any further. I'm not sure where she will take it if she does. There are all sorts of directions she could take it in, but I don't see an obvious choice. I just hope that if she does continue it that there is more plot and character development and not just more sex.

  • Raine and Sheri (Incest/Taboo) by destine21
    • Chapter 1 - Sex between sisters.. [10,700 words]
    • Chapter 2 - Raine and Sheri get closer. [6,100 words]
    • Chapter 3 - Mama's girls. [2,900 words]

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March 14, 2004 | 9:34 PM

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March 14, 2004 | 8:06 AM

What looks good?

  • Teacher, Teacher (Erotic Couplings) by linkznut - Middle-aged teacher is seduced by a former student.

  • Exploring My Bisexuality (Lesbian Sex) by Haley___F - She & Karen explore each other's bodies.

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March 13, 2004 | 11:05 AM

Read a couple stories that fall into a category that I don't normally go for. They are well written and true (according to the author). If you can stomach the kink then I recommend you give them a try.

  • Kathy and Her K-9 (true inc bro sis beast) by Wet Dream-Girl - This is the story of my first experience with canine sex. After trying out a girlfriend's dog, I knew I had to get my own! [4,600 words]

  • Carla's Introduction to Canine Sex (true voy beast) by Wet Dream-Girl - While visiting my girlfriend, she catches me having sex with her dog. Rather than being disgusted, Carla is curious. This leads to an opportunity to introduce her to the pleasures of canine sex. [3,500 words]

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March 6, 2004 | 11:10 PM

What looks good?

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March 5, 2004 | 8:28 PM

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March 1, 2004 | 10:00 PM

What looks good?

And someone sent me this link to Natalie Nessus Web Site. I only took a quick look at it. I'll try and find something to read from there another night.

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