'blog: FEB 2004

February 2004

February 29, 2004 | 12:23 PM

I've updated the web site and now I am looking again. Here's what looks interesting:

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February 29, 2004 | 10:40 AM

I finished reading Sara's Panties the other night. First I will summarize: Tom has been a widower for about a year when he receives a phone call from his youngest child, Sara. Her mother was Tom's first wife. They got divorced quite a few years back. Sara is now in her early twenties and, due a restraining order his first wife obtained, he has only seen her once since she was a baby. Sara is about to start working on her Phd in psychology at a university close to where Tom lives. She calls because she wants to see him and because she wants to stay with him while she works toward her Phd. That's the setup.

Doesn't sound like much of a sex story so far, but there's more to it than what I just described. Let me explain: Sara doesn't like to wear much around the house, especially in the morning. Tom has a hard time not admiring her curves. Since he does the laundry this leads to him sniffing her panties. A little strange, disturbing, but he's horny and he isn't forcing himself on her or even trying to initiate a incestuous relationship. Then one day he gets caught by Sara in mid-sniff. The story continues from there. I think I have said enough to give you the jist.

Now for some commentary: This is a good effort, but I feel that it is lacking in at least one area. I wish there was more dialogue. The story is narrated by Tom and the author does a good job with the narration. Tom's inner conflict comes across very clearly. His discussions with Sara even bring out her inner conflict. Both, of course, are resisting the urge to give in to lust and trying to (unsuccessful though they might be) maintain a normal father-daughter relationship. Still, I wish that as a percentage of the total story, there was more dialogue.

This may be the first chapter in a longer story. At the end the author asks for feedback and recommendations as to whether he should continue. If you read this story and enjoy it you may want to drop him a line and let him know.

Links: Sara's Panties (Incest/Taboo) by youbadboy - Dad, his daughter, and her panties. [20,000 words]

I also read Ivy Cottage in the past couple days. It is about and narrated by Jim, who is about to start attending the university close to where his Aunt Cleo lives. The summer before his first year at uni, Cleo, who is single and just seven years older than Jim, invites him to come stay with her for a few weeks. She has been more like an older sister or cousin to him (than an aunt) for most of his life. During those few weeks she becomes more like a lover (than an aunt or older sister or cousin) as Jim struggles with the moral implications of having sex with Cleo.

This is not a stroke story, but there is some sex in it. It is a well crafted story and I like how the author has broken it down into little chapters. If it has a short-coming (no pun intended) in my opinion it is the fact that Cleo doesn't seem to have any qualms or second thoughts about seducing her nephew. There is some external conflict towards the end of the story between Cleo and Jim. It isn't all peachy keen, but I think I would have enjoyed this story more if the author had illustrated that Cleo had some sort of inner conflict or dilemma, even if it wasn't the same or similar to Jim's. The potential was definitely there.

Links: Ivy Cottage (Novels and Novellas) by Moondrift - Jim and Cleo make a baby. [14,300 words]

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February 26, 2004 | 7:58 PM

What looks good?

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February 24, 2004 | 9:50 PM

I haven't gotten around to reading that new story by youbadboy, but I did read a couple quickies by Krraaazzzzyyyyy. Both enjoyable and worth my time.

What looks good tonight?

  • Kissins Cousins (Incest/Taboo) by nickels - Cousins Realize Family can be fun

  • Ivy Cottage (Novels and Novellas) by Moondrift - Jim and Cleo make a baby.

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February 23, 2004 | 9:57 PM

Would'ja look at that? youbadboy posted a new story. First one in over three months. It has the name Sara in the title as do his last two, but from taking a quick look it seems unrelated to the other two.

  • Sara's Panties (Incest/Taboo) by youbadboy - Dad, his daughter, and her panties.

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February 13, 2004 | 7:13 AM

It's been a while since I wrote anything much about a story, but I think I finally found one. Ranie and Sheri by destinie21 is about two sisters, Lorraine (Ranie) and Sheridon (Sheri). Narrated by the older one, Ranie, the story revolves around two things: Ranie's antagonistic relationship with Sheri and her attraction to Sheri.

The story opens with Ranie receiving a phone call from her mother. Sheri is traveling to New York (where Ranie lives) and needs a place to stay. Nevermind that Sheri is a big name recording artist and can afford to stay at a nice hotel, Mom wants her to stay with Raine for the couple weeks that she will be in town. Reluctantly, Raine agrees.

As planned, Sheri shows up a couple days later. To her own horror and despite her jealousy, Raine finds herself sexually attracted to her sister. She tries to ignore it. She tries to turn to a gal pal, Asha, with whom she once had a romantic relationship for relief. Nothing seems to work. Eventually, Sheri puts one and one together and realizes why her sister is acting so strange.

This story is very nicely paced. The author does not rush things or cut to the chase too quickly. The longing passion that Raine feels for her sister burns throughout the story; no matter how much Raine tries to quench the flame. In the end there is only one thing that will sate her yearning for her sister. That alone makes this a good story, but there is more to it than just Raine's longing and Sheri's teasing (once she finds out).

There is also the past history that these two women share. They haven't spoken much in recent years. They have each been doing their own thing and it isn't easy for them, Raine especially, to pretend like they never competed for their parents' attention. That by itself would make for a good story. Mix in the sexual attraction and you have a potent combination that is both entertaining and arousing.

There is one draw back here: typos. There are more than just a few and normally that would be a problem for me, but I was enjoying the story so much that I managed to overlook them, for the most part.

Links: Ranie and Sheri (Incest/Taboo) by destine21 - Sex between sisters.. [10,700 words]

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February 10, 2004 | 8:38 PM

I looked at the ASSM archive for the first time in a while. Actually, I tried literotica and Stories Online first. I think I found a couple things that look interesting. Tonight I plan on reading Tiffany by Ciad Itu.

Link: Ciad's Erotica

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