December 17 - 22, 2003

December 22, 2003 | 9:34 AM

I read one more story worth mentioning in the last few days: It Itches! by Dawn Diamond. It is about a Patty and her Daddy. According to the author it is autobiographical. It is written from Daddy's point of view, but given the author's name I tend to think that it is "Patty" writing the story, not her Daddy. Also, she, Dawn Diamond, is working on a sequel that fills in more of the story and is written from Patty's POV.

Patty is twelve. She live with her two younger brothers and her mother, in addition to her Dad. She has a problem with an itch, which later turns out to be an ingrown pubic hair or two. Her mother won't help her so she turns to Dad. Patty's itch ends up significantly changing her relationship with her Dad, but not too quickly. A grope here, a kiss there. Patty is eager, but her Daddy doesn't lose all his common sense when he sees his little girl naked. He even cautions that he probably shouldn't be helping her with this problem; but Patty wants his help and he is too aroused by and paternally concerned about her to say no.

I don't always or usually go for stories with characters as young as twelve. I liked this one and think it better than most. The fact that Patty's Daddy shows some reluctance to give in to his baser desires certainly has something to do my approval of this story. Actually, it probably isn't so much the fact that he is reluctant to do so as much as it is the fact that he has dilemma. Characters with dilemmas, whose paths are simple and clear-cut, are much more interesting.

• It Itches! (Mf teen cons pedo inc fath dau) by Dawn Diamond - A little story that tells how a daughter and her dad resolved some of the issues of growing up. [10,200 words]

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December 22, 2003 | 9:00 AM

I read another robot story last night, by DB or DB_Story, whatever it is he calls himself. Maybe I should e-mail him and ask which he prefers? Anyway, I read Samantha's Tale last night. Samantha is the main character and narrates part of the story. She is a robot, but unlike her name and her appearance (when clothed) imply she isn't a fembot, i.e., a robot that looks and acts like a female human.

When the story begins Samantha, or Sam as she prefers to be called, is temping at a Fortune 50 company, doing data entry. She has been through the hands of a number of owners, both male and female; none of whom have been able to accept her for what she is; a robot that has both male and female sexual organs: a hermabot. Then, she meets Dave. She likes him. He seems to like her. They go on a few dates. Sam doesn't alow things to progress too quickly. Despite being a robot, she doesn't deal well with rejection and she has experienced more than her fair share of it.

I don't usually read or care for stories involving hermaphrodites, not that I run across too many of them available at the sites I visit. The fact that Sam is a robot makes it different somehow. Of course this seems to indcate some sort of prejudice on my part. I cannot accept a hermaphrodite if it is a human, but if it is a robot that's ok. Kind of like accepting people of a particular ethnic, cultural or religious background provided they act in a certain way, but not if they act otherwise. Food for thought.

About a week ago I read another story by DB, Aunt Lonnie and Me. Like Samantha, Aunt Lonnie is a robot. Unlike Sam, she is a fembot. Walter wondered what had happened to her. While growing up he hadn't realied she wasn't human. Roughly a year after her disappearance, while staying with his uncle Burton for the summer, he "discovers" her, deactivated, in the attic.

Assuming that his uncle wouldn't be too pleased with his find, he keeps it a secret from him. He starts making regular trips up to the attic to visit with Lonnie. He even brings her downstairs on occasion. Lonnie and Walter's relationship picks up in a different place from where it left off when she vanished. Inevitably, the summer comes to an end but neither Lonnie nor Walter want to break things off.

Both of the stories I just descrobed are very readable. In other words, they have been well-written and edited. They contain a bare minimum of typos, if any. There is also more to them than just sex. The author takes the time to develop the plot and the characters. As with all of his stories that I have read so far, there is an emphasis on the robot brain/soul; discussion of how robots evolve and becom self-aware. Of course, this is all science-fiction but that's part of what made these stories so pleasureable to read.

• Samantha's Tale (M/Herm-'bot, rom) by DB Story [10,600 words]
  
  
• Aunt Lonnie and Me (m/Fembot, dom, rom) by DB Story [10,200 words]

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December 19, 2003 | 9:18 PM

There are some stories that aren't very good but that appeal to me. Usually they aren't technically deficient. By technically I mean that they are well edited for typos, the plot isn't impossible to follow, etc. Still, these sorts of stories lack plot and character development, even if the sex is piping hot. Sometimes they are what I need, and other times they turn me off. When I come to my senses I feel guilty about recommending them, but I can't deny that I didn't enjoy them.

The problem isn't so much that these stories are not good, as much as it is that they aren't as good as I remember them being. When I enjoy them they are usually just the right story at the right time. Timing, that's the key element. I think I disclose this fact sometimes, but others I don't. Of course sometimes I think the story is great and am unaware that the only reason I enjoyed it is because it was the right story at the right time.

Anyhow, here's what looks good tonight:

• A Special Gift [Part 1 . Part 2] (Incest) by Cphucker

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December 18, 2003 | 9:40 PM

What looks good:

• One in the Oven, and a Big One in... (MF true cons cheat wife oral solo lac preg) by Tom Land

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December 18, 2003 | 8:30 PM

Last night I read a couple stories.

Jealous Girl by jessy19 is about Desiree and her brother Tyler. Tyler narrates. He is 20. She is 18. She always ticks off his dates, when he brings them home; has prevented him from getting laid on more than one occasion. After one of Desiree's episodes, a vocal argument between she and her brother first physical and then amorous. There's not much else to say about this story. It resembles some of this author's other brother-sister stories. It isn't too long. I enjoyed it.

It's a hard Life by Robert is little bit different than Jealous Girl, but I didn't enjoy it as much. It is about Bobby, 12, who helps his mother to teach his sisters Dawn, Sherry, and Suzie all about sex. They are respectively 16, 14, and 11. In the process somethings happen. You can probably guess what sort of things.

What bothered me about this story are the characters ages and the lack of plot or character development. If the characters were older and the plot was more involved, I might feel differently.

• Jealous Girl (MF 1st cons inc bro sis het oral pett) by jessy19 - Desiree runs out all of her big brother's girlfriends because she has her own eyes set on him! [4,000 words]

• It's a Hard Life (mf mF Mult inc mother bro sis oral preg) by Robert - A boy's first sexual experiences as he and his sisters learn from their mother. [4,700 words]

Looking for more good brother-sister stories? Try the stories of Losgud.

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December 7 - 16, 2003

December 16, 2003 | 9:57 PM

Well, I never got back to my bit about robots, and now I'm not sure I ever will. I will probably read some more stories by DB_Story in the future. Maybe then I'll write more about robots and sex.

Last night I did read an interesting story called Triplet Troubles by Jefferson. It is the story of Daniel, a father who is blackmailed by his three 14-year-old daughters (Sara, Kara, Lara) into finding their mother. The triplets want to know what happened to Mom since she walked out on them ten years before and go to some rather extreme lengths to convince their father to try harder. I won't go into details other than to say it involves blackmail.

What probably impressed me the most about this story (what drove me to refer to it as an interesting story) is the fact that the plot isn't just a pretext for sex. It actually continues after the sex begins and ends. Lust does not become the overarching emotion. Is lust an emotion? I'm not sure, but the fact of the matter is that there is more to this story than just sex, and at the same time I found it to be arousing. That makes it noteworthy in my book.

• Triplet Troubles (Mf 1st teen lolita reluc Blkm inc fath dau lght) by Jefferson - A story about a single father who cheated on his wife ten years ago and the vengence his three young daughters took on him for his crimes against them and their mother. [17,200 words]

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December 12, 2003 | 9:14 PM

I read Part 5 of Higher Education on Tuesday night. I enjoyed it as I have enjoyed the entire story, so far. Like the previous part this one is diveded into three chapters. The first one involves Molly and is fairly short. The second involves both Katie and Abigail: Jim gets to see a side of Katie that he has only heard about before. The final one involves just Katie. The only real disappointment was the last couple paragraphs of the final chapter, or should I say of the story because apparently it is the last chapter.

I did not sense it was the final chapter, when I was reading it, but the epilogue makes it fairly clear that it is. Given the length of some of the other stories this author has written I do feel a bit cheated. This was a really good story. At the very least, I was enjoying it. I wasn't ready for it to end and the epilogue was very abrupt. I'm not sure what happened, but my guess is that the author lost interest in writing this story. Maybe I should be a little more thankful, he didn't just leave his readers hanging. He did bring it to a definite ending. Still, I'm not completely satisfied.

On Wednesday night I read Brother, My Brother. Not a very long or involved story. Nothing exceptional, but not awful either. The author doesn't rush things and the story evolves at (what I consider to be) a reasonable pace. This story doesn't belong at the top of my list of stories to read, but if you enjoy brother-sister incest stories then you might want to try this one.

Also on Wednesday night, I read Daddy's Little Girlfriend. Also fairly short, this one evolves a little more quickly. By the third paragraph, it is apparent that Daddy has the hots for Heather, his 18-year-old daughter. Heather likes to tease her Daddy. They live alone. There are plenty of opportunities. A long story would have afforded her even more opportunities to tease him, but the story works at its current length. There is some hint that the author might write a sequel. I will probably read it if/when it is published, depending on what else I have to read/do at the time.

Thursday night I read another story by DB_Story, My First Robot. Actually, I never finished the first one, which is about ten times longer than the one of his that I started, Lisa's Story (see: Dec. 1, 2003). Both are sci-fi stories that take place in a world where life-like robots exist. Naturally, there is an abundance of female robots, but there is only one in this story.

Don inherits a robot, Jenni 731, from his Great Aunt Kate. Jenni seems more than eager to please Don sexually, but she comes with some baggage. It's the baggage that makes this story interesting. All that I will say here is that Don's great aunt wasn't her first owner. But, it isn't so much her past as much as it is watching Jenni and Don deal with the present; watching their relationship begin to develop.

• Higher Education [MF coll cons oral anal] by Gary Johns - James Adams gets a job as a college teacher at a school with a 70% female population. [44,300 words]

• Brother, My Brother (Incest) by Christie Ellison - "Little" sis goes home to love, life, & brother. [4,000 words]

• Daddy's Little Girlfriend (Incest) by WisdomousOne - She's wanted her daddy for a long time... [3,400 words]

• A Trip to Shell Island (Exhibitionist & Voyeur) by petertowers - Mother-in-law wants to see the nudist beach... [4,400 words]

• My First Robot (MF ScFi rom cons robot) by DB Story - When a young man inherits a female robot, she turns out to be a bit more than he expected. [6,400 words]

Musings

I don't usually read robot stories, but I really enjoyed this one and it got me thinking. Why robots? Why not people? What does it say about me that I enjoyed this story? Enjoyed the fantasy of having a robot like Jenni? I'm not sure, but I do wonder.

I like science fiction stories that present some of the ethical and moral dilemma's that accompany the introducion new technologies. This story naturally makes me think of other robot stories, in particular:

• I, Robot (short story collection) by Isaac Asimov
• Caves of Steel, and The Naked Sun (novels) by Isaac Asimov
• The Robots of Death (tv) - Doctor Who c. 1984 (which was probably inspired by Asimov's novels)
• A.I. (movie) directed by Stephen Spielberg

I could probably name quite a few more, like Bladerunner (movie) directed by Ridley Scott. Some focus heavily on the moral issues surrounding technological innovation and other keep it in the background or only deal with it briefly. Still, they all interest me because they inspire thoughts and ideas.

The appeal of robot stories is that the deal with the issue of humanity. What makes us human? The ability to reason?

Note to Self: Finish this later you need to get to bed and you are running out of steam...

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December 8, 2003 | 8:24 PM

I finished reading How Do You Spell Relief? by Bobby T. It's one of those silly kind of stories, made for the crowd that likes a mother-son story. I'm not so sure how much it would appeal to others. It is well edited, just a handful of typos, but there isn't a whole lot to the plot other than Tommy getting blowjobs and handjobs from his Mom, in various locations.

There is some role-playing. There is also a librarian at Tommy's high school who his Mom convinces that Tommy has a medical condition that requires he ejaculate on a very regular basis. At first Mom is just giving him handjobs, that leads to blowjobs, which eventually leads to Tommy losing his virginity to his mother. So there is some progression and it is well paced. It is just that there isn't a whole lot to this tale other than foreplay and sex. It is a nice stroke story, but a bit lacking in the plot and character development departments.

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December 7, 2003 | 9:18 PM

Sequels, etc.

Gary Johns has written a fifth and final chapter to Higher Education and eroslit has written a sequel to Traci & Jim, called Midnight.

• Higher Education (MF coll cons oral anal) by Gary Johns - James Adams gets a job as a college teacher at a school with a 70% female population. He learns the true meaning of "higher education".

• Midnight (Incest) by eroslit - Traci and her Mom spend New Year's Day together.

What else looks good?

• Christmas Wish (Incest) by beaverhunter76 - A flashback to the perfect Christmas, before it went bad.

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December 1 - 7, 2003

December 7, 2003 | 8:30 AM

Time Out of Time (Chapters 102 - 106) by Crimson Dragon

OK, I haven't read any more of Time Out of Time, since Friday, but here's what I think. I like the story for the most part, but it is starting to go down a familiar road that I don't care to take. In these chapters the main character, who so far is still nameless, has started to treat the women he has enslaved with more kindness. He has let a couple of them wear clothes, kept the punishments in the mild to non-existent range, and in general has been nice to them.

What's wrong with him being nice to them? Well, it's almost the opposite of how he was treating them before. There is no explanation as to why. He just seems to have changed. His thoughts don't reflect any thought as to why. He just seems to be acting differently. There are twenty four chapters left in the story, but I have a feeling that this is going to be the trend from here on out.

The main character's behavior leaves a mushy, sickly sweet taste in my mouth and I don't like it. it reminds me of the ending of Call Girl Cheerleaders. For the first twenty-five chapters, or so, of CGC the order of the day seemed to be hot sex with teenage females. There were some light touches that I would think of as romantic, but they were blended in with the sex. As the story developed the author got away from the overwhelming focus on sex and added some other elements that one doesn't always find in a sex story, such as plot and character development. I think it was a good idea to add these sorts of elements, but I would have preferred if the story hadn't changed so much in the process.

I should probably take into account the fact that both TOoT and CGC are serial stories. Chapters were published as they were written. Presumably, the author does not know where the story is going to end when he starts writing it. Still, there seems to be a pattern here. Start with lots of sex and then eventually cool things down, until they are lukewarm (my opinion) instead of boiling hot (like they were before). Personally, I would prefer to see the story work in the other direction. Start things off lukewarm and end it when things are boiling hot. Of course, some people might disagree that the story cools down as the sex slowly dissipates, but that's my read or interpretation.

Time Out of Time (MF+, bond, control, sci-fi) by Crimson Dragon - When one man discovers the secrets of Time and exerts his new found control over the world, what will become of Christi, Jane, Elizabeth, Amy, and Sheila?

What else have I read?

I started in on How Do you Spell Relief? (Incest) by Bobby T. There are three chapters and I've only read the first two, so I think I'll hold off on commenting on it until I have finished it. The fact that I want to read the third chapter says something about my reaction to the story.

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December 5, 2003 | 5:12 AM

Recent Reads

A Mother-in-Law's Valentine (Anal) by TheScribe

Not quite what I had hoped for. Not a bad story, but I didn't care how the author spent a percentage of the story describing the video of anal sex that Luke and his mother-in-law, Jackie, watch while his wife, Julie, is in the hospital. It isn't so much that he is cheating on his wife as it is the lengthy description of the contents of the video that I object to. Just for the record, Julie has just given birth to their second child. Jackie is helping Luke out with number one while her daughter is recovering from the c-section the doctors had to perform.

Anyhow, anal isn't my favorite variety of story. I read this more for the relationship existing between the two main characters than I did for the sort of sex they end up engaging in. Secretly I was hoping that would turn out to be just part of their illicit entanglement, but it wasn't. That was the whole enchilada. Jackie certainly teases Jack before he decides to throw caution to the wind and accept her advances, but other than that there isn't a whole lot that seems worth the read to me.

Brother & Sister Sexcapades (Incest) by TheSandman

I think I passed on this one a while back. If I remember correctly it was because the main character is neither the brother nor the sister. What a stupid reason. I'm glad I came to my senses, or at least was moved to read it last night.

David gets two roommates when he was only looking for one. Gene moves in, to share the rent but his twin sister, Sheri, soon follows. To say that Sheri is uninhibited would be putting it mildly. Gene's girlfriend, Shelly, has a lot in common with Sheri; more than just a similar sounding name. Before the story is over David is spending Thanksgiving with Gene and Sheri's extended family, including Shelly, their Mom, and their friend Jared.

There is a little bit of male homosexual activity, but not a lot. I thought it worked in the group setting most of the sex takes place in. My only significant problem with the story is the final sex scene where it gets a bit confusing as to who is doing what to whom. All six characters that I mentioned above are in it. At that point in the story you don't want to slow down to try and figre out who is where and what parts they have touching to whom. Unfortunately that is what I found myself having to do, given the number of players and body parts, and the fluidity with which the author moves between them.

Time Out of Time (Chapters 102 - 106) by Crimson Dragon

I'm out of time. Ha! Ha! I'll write about this later.

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December 3, 2003 | 8:40 PM

Last night, I started to write about an incomplete story that I read over the past couple nights. The final installment should be out soon. The story is And The Children Shall Lead Them (Incest) by Excitedmind. It's far from perfect but it does have a couple things going for it, in my book. There is lots and lots of foreplay and teasing. Other than some gropes and fondling there hasn't been any penetrative sex through the first four chapters (27,400 words). I also appreciate the fact that the story is dialogue heavy. There were also a couple moments when I was surprised by the turns the story took. That doesn't happen too often with genre fiction.

On the down side the story could stand to be edited better. There are a number of typos, including the homophonic variety: there instead of their, we're instead of were, etc. The story also has a rushed feel to it. I say that because there isn't much in the way of pauses in the action. Given its length I think the story could be better paced, although I think this is being written episodically instead of as one single piece, so that might explain the rushed feeling.

So what is it about? Jeff and his sister Karin plot to seduce their parents. That's the gist of the story. As they say, the devil is in the details. As it turns out, their parents are reluctant, for various reasons, but not as reluctant as they try to make it seem they are.

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December 1, 2003 | 8:40 PM

Not much to report tonight. I started reading Lisa�s Tale: A Courtesy Suites Story by DB_Story. I found it at Stories Online, but apparently the author also has a web page. I'll locate the URL at some point, but maybe not tonight. It is science fiction story about Matt, a human, and Lisa, the android he falls for.

I only read the first two chapters. So far it is not stroke material, but it is well written. The story has a couple of realistic seeming characters, even if one of them isn't human. The author gets into a bit of the android psyche. Lisa and her android-friend Darci both seem very human, not enjoying the way they get treated by some men and getting lots of pleasure from the care, consideration, and attention Matt gives them.

Lisa�s Tale: A Courtesy Suites Story (MF ScFi rom cons robot) by DB_Story - In a luxury hotel of the future staffed by beautiful, obedient robots, Matt goes looking for more than the typical guest.

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