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| September 26, 2003 |
The first two stories here are both fairly short. Both are brother-sister stories, by _. Both have a playful feel to them. Not much else to say other than provide a brief description. TITLE: Costume Sex
At a costume party, a teenager and his sister have some fun squeezing into her oversized costume together. LENGTH: 2,300 words
! @ # $ TITLE: Nudity & Sex
Growing up in a clothing optional household leads to plenty of learning opportunities for Jack and his sister, Kat. LENGTH: 2,200 words
! @ # $ TITLE: Chat: Learning to Be Nice
NOTE: Two of the three main characters in this story are only referred to by their screen names, redapple and SxGrrl. The other is redapple's father. At the suggestion of an online friend, SxGrrl, redapple seduces her father. There are a couple things that strike me about this story. First, I like the role reversal. Originally, SxGrrl is the one giving redapple shocking advice. As the story progresses things change. By the end, redapple is the one shocking SxGrrl with her account of her incestuous romance with her father. Second, I like how the author weaves two plot lines together. Redapple's online chat sessions with SxGrrl (plot 1) and redapple's seduction of her father (plot 2). Each is good enough to be a story in its own right, but I think the author made the right call in merging them into one story. It is also nice to see that the chat reads like chat usually does, and not like dialogue. There are misspelled words, abbreviations, little if any capitalization, etc. LENGTH: 13,300 words LINK: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=105575 ! @ # $ TITLE: Nearness of You
Danny's sister, Sandy, insists on a heart-to-heart after catching him in a rather compromising situation, by himself. Hint, hint. There is more intimacy than sex, by my count, in this story. It works. Personally I found it to be very arousing. LENGTH: 9,200 words
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| September 13, 2003 |
I've read quite a few stories since I last wrote. I wasn't impressed with all of them, so I'll just write about the ones that I liked. TITLE: Daddy's Big Little Girl
Sarah helps her father get over her mother's death. Although disgusted by the idea at first, Sarah eventually warms to the idea of taking her mother's place in her father's life; at least for a time. LENGTH: 3,200 words
! @ # $ TITLE: Chrissy Teaches Shelly
Chrissy teaches her younger sister (Shelly) about sex. First it's just the two of them, then Chrissy's boyfriend (Alex) joins the fun and later Shelly's friend (Cheryl). Despite the large quantity of sex in this story, and my poor summary, it is actually quite good. It does not devolve into one long sex scene. The characters do have feelings, worries, hang-ups, etc. LENGTH: 14,900 words CHAPTER 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=78492
! @ # $ TITLE: The Twins' Tangled Web
Kelly and Cathy, twin sisters, switch places without informing their father. Additionally Kelly fails to tell Cathy that she has been having sex with Dad on a regular basis and that he might be expecting to "get some". Another good "twins" story, i.e., one that is about more than just one man with two identical lovers. It also has a rather shocking ending. Not exactly what I expected; more realistic than most. LENGTH: 8,700 words CHAPTER 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=85437
! @ # $ TITLE: The Wreck
After the wreck, he has to take of his step-daughter's every need while her hands heal and his wife is in the hospital. Innocent, honest, intimate. He's feeling it, but restrains himself. Subsequently, his wife gets him even hornier by telling him a story while he is visiting her in the hospital. Finally, after the wife gives him the green light, he gives in to temptation. NOTE: Since reading this story I have noticed that the author has posted a second chapter. My evaluation of it is based on the first chapter. I have yet to read the second chapter. LENGTH: 9,300 words
NOTE: You need to be logged into http://www.storiesonline.net/ for this story link to work. Membership is free. ! @ # $ That's it for this week folks! Comments or questions? Use the Feedback Form. |
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