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| August 27, 2003 |
Just new stories this week, or at least ones that I read for the first time. TITLE: Camping with the Girls
Ben goes camping with his two best friends, Brenda and Susie. In case you are curious, all three characters in this story are college students. This is a playful little romp. It's not short, but it's not too long either. Nothing too freaky here, this one is rather vanilla. There is some sex and some exhibitionism. There is also a lot of foreplay. LENGTH: 15,000 words
! @ # $ TITLE: Nothing To Be Ashamed Of
Anne helps her sister, Jamie, make sense of her mixed emotions. This one is all female. There is a third character in the story, Jamie, a friend of Anne's sister. The ages of the characters is a little fuzzy, although given that the story was posted to Literotica the characters are all supposed to be at least 18. I guess what I like most about this story is the dialogue. There's a lot of it and it really helps to move the story and flesh out the characters. I also like the fact that the story is not too straight forward. LENGTH: 5,400 words
! @ # $ I was going to write about a story I didn't like, here, but I have chosen not to. It got high marks at Literotica. It looked good, but unfortunately it was riddled with typographical errors and misplaced or missing words. I tried to overlook the mistakes, but they got to be so numerous that it just got to be too distracting. ! @ # $ TITLE: A Visit With My Daughter
After not seeing her for two years, Hank finally fulfills his daughter Chantal's fantasy while visiting with her at college. That's how the story begins. There's more to it than just that. The author was nice enough to break it down into little chapters. I love it when they do that. There are a couple twists, some hot sex, Chantal's roommate (Trisha), hot sex with Chantal's roommate (Trisha), and even a little drama. There is no mention of Hank's wife. Of course, if incest stories are not your thing then you will probably want to pass on this one. LENGTH: 6,700 words
NOTE: You need to be logged into http://www.storiesonline.net/ for this story link to work. Membership is free. ! @ # $ I was going to write about another story here, but I don't like the tone of it. The main character blames his wife for his infidelity with their daughter. His reason? Her weight problem, his wife's weight problem that is. As well as being rather cruel and insensitive, this reasoning overlooks a lot of other factors that come into play. ! @ # $ That's it for this week folks! Comments or questions? Use the Feedback Form. |
| August 17, 2003 |
TITLE: Jared and Amanda Naked in School
I tried to finish Jared and Amanda Naked in School this week, unsuccessfully. It didn't get too mushy. It did get a bit too realistic. Well, maybe realistic isn't the right word. The focus shifted away from the story's main kink, exhibitionism. Jared and Amanda got into a fight. Then there is some stuff in there about sex and love. I don't know. I think maybe it was the fact that I felt like I was being told too much. Instead of showing and letting the reader draw his/her own conclusions I felt like I was being told was really going on. Maybe that's what it was. I haven't given a lot of thought to it, but that's what I think now. I'm going to try to finish the story, possibly next week. LENGTH: 71,900 words LINKS Frank Downey's Naked in School Stories
ASSTR Naked in School Collection
# TITLE: Entrapment
It takes a little cajoling from Pam, his wife, who is wearing a cop's uniform to the Halloween party, but Mark finally agrees to go dressed as a hooker. Hot, kinky, role-reversal story. Probably not everyone's kettle of fish, but I enjoyed it. LENGTH: 5,600 LINKS Entrapment
Couture's Erotica
# TITLE: My Son, My Love
Mother takes care of her son, Brendan, while his arms heal. I originally read this story in May. Hot stuff. Not too long. Blah, blah, blah... LENGTH: 6,000 words
# TITLE: Mute Jess
Man takes care of Jess, his friend Tony's sister. Tony's been looking after her, but he has also been abusing her. This starts off rather intense, but ends on a much lighter, romantic note. LENGTH: 1,900 words
NOTE: You need to be logged into http://www.storiesonline.net/ for this story link to work. Membership is free. # TITLE: Mother's Hard Choice
Billy's been attracted to his mother, Sharon, for quite some time, but it isn't until he catches her in a compromising position with her business partner, Madeleine, that things change. The title is a bit misleading. Sharon doesn't have a hard time deciding. She more or less goes to town on his cock the first time he lets her touch it. I'm being nitpicky, but this is the only nit I have to pick with this story. LENGTH: 8,400 words
# TITLE: My Baby
Widower tries to resist his 21-year-old daughter's charms, but eventually gives in to his own lusty desires. LENGTH: 1,600 words
NOTE: You need to be logged into http://www.storiesonline.net/ for this story link to work. Membership is free. # TITLE: Good Morning!
His daughter, who can't get enough, surprises him in bed one morning. LENGTH: 1,500 words
NOTE: You need to be logged into http://www.storiesonline.net/ for this story link to work. Membership is free. # That's it for this week. Comments or questions? Use the Feedback Form. |
| August 10, 2003 |
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A bit of editorializing first. Sometimes I wonder what people (I know in the real world) would think if they knew about the stories I read, why I read them, etc. Would the fact that I write about them make a difference? People form images of you from what they know about you, from what they have seen and heard and experienced. These stories are an escape just like most fiction is. They allow me to be somewhere else, someone else. They arouse me (usually) and help me to attain the release I seek from the real. Sometimes they work better when they are very unrealistic or not in keeping with my conception of reality and other times they work better if they are down to earth and conform to what I understand the world to be. I can equivocate, try to make sense and rationalize my reasons for reading the stories but ultimately that does not help me to answer the question. I worry (sometimes) about people finding out about my hobby. Face it, porn and masturbation are not topics that people discuss openly and seriously in a positive light. Well, most people do not. I could stop writing about these stories, stop thanking authors for their efforts and encouraging them to write more, but it would open a hole in my life. As long as these stories are available for free and I have private access to the internet I probably will continue to read them. As long as I will read them I will feel the need to write; in large part because I can't discuss them seriously in a positive light with the people I know. # TITLE: Tracy's Family
I finished reading this story/serial earlier this week. The last few chapters did not do much for me. After a point it just seemed like sex, sex and more sex. I did enjoy the earlier chapters. LENGTH: 158,000 words
# I read four short stories by Laura Davis that I either had not read before or did not print out. As with most of Laura Davis' stories, the attraction for me is the pacing and the kinks. They are all very rapidly paced and pull you in very quickly. They involve women who for one reason or another end up in submissive relationships with other women. Well, not all of these stories fall into this category. The exception is School Girls which involves a little bit of BDSM, but for the most part is more romantic than the other three. TITLE: Crucified
Karin, with the help of Elise (her lover) and some friends, re-enacts the crucifixion of Jesus, with herself in the starring role. They don't nail her to the cross or pierce her side, but they do just about everything else, with a couple of twists. LENGTH: 1,100 words
# TITLE: Enslaving Laurie
Laurie Harmon is an investigator for the DA's office. She is looking into claims of abuse at a girl's boarding school. She quickly gets in over her head, falls for one of the students (Jenny Stark), and ends up quitting her job to be Jenny's slave. As I am writing this, the main character's name makes me think of Angie Harmon, who used to be on Law & Order. I wasn't thinking of her when I was reading it. LENGTH: 4,100 words
# TITLE: Ellen
Ellen is twenty-nine, two-months pregnant, and her husband has just left her. While taking a walk in the park she meets Louise, who treats her as less than an equal but in a very special way. LENGTH: 2,900 words
# TITLE: School Girls
Sally, a sophomore in high school, falls for Ingrid, one of her teammates. LENGTH: 1,800 words
For more stories by Laura Davis: LINK 1: ASSM Archive
# TITLE: Cousin Kara
Kara, Mike's cousin from Ohio, comes to stay with him while she is attending Berkley. I cannot remember if I have ever recommended any of his stories before, but I read this one based on my prior experiences with his fiction. Not much sex in this one; much more romantic and/or slow than some of his other stories. A good read, but I was hoping for something a little more fast paced. Going from Laura Davis' stories to this one was like slamming on the brakes while speeding down the highway. LENGTH: 9,500 words
# TITLE: Hot Desires
Since her mother left, Wendy has lived alone with her father. Over time she becomes aware of the lustful looks he has been giving her and dresses to please and tease him. I originally read this story back in April. It was just as good, hot, sexy the second time around. LENGTH: 5,200 words
# TITLE: Incest Is Best
Nudism leads to experimentation between an 18-year-old and his older sister. Mom catches them, but does not object. Before you know it... Yes, the author's name is _. LENGTH: 3,200 words
If you enjoy this ones you also might enjoy two of Pookie's stories: Melissa Tells All and Mark Tells His Story. LINK 1: http://www.asstr.org/~rogue-reviews/spotlights/author_p.html#Pookie
# TITLE: Twins
After Janet catches her twin daughters pulling the ol' sitcheroo on their boyfriends she does the same with her twin sister on their husbands. This one gets a little complicated. There are a lot of names thrown around without some of the characters getting fleshed out. Still, I enjoyed it and had no problem overlooking the fact that the men in this story are less than brilliant. LENGTH: 9,300 words
If you enjoy this one you might also want to try reading My Twin Loves by Christo. It tells a similar story, but from the point of view of a man who is having trouble differentiating between his girlfriend and her twin sister. LINK: http://www.asstr.org/~rogue-reviews/spotlights/020401.html # Finally, I got an e-mail from an author (ChazT) whose work (Ms. Frankenstein) I spotlighted a couple years ago, but who subsequently pulled his stories from the web. It turns out he pulled them because they were going to be included in a collection which is now available for sale. I don't know about the rest of the stories in this collection, but I enjoyed Ms. Frankenstein. Visit http://www.candyconcussion.com for more information about the book. # OK, That's it for this week. Comments or questions? Use the Feedback Form. |
| August 2, 2003 |
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I haven't read much this past week. Nothing new. I did continue to read Tracy's Family by Gary Johns. I'm in the home stretch now. Forty-two chapters down, six to go. I might get to them this weekend, but I'm not sure. So what has happened in the chapters I read this week? Well, more sex and incest. Some of the female characters are now pregnant: some by men they are related to and others by men they aren't related to. If I haven't mentioned it before, the author never finished this story. He just stopped writing or at least stopped posting chapters. LINK: http://www.storiesonline.net/ I also re-read Melissa Tells All by Pookie. It is one of the better incest stories out there and it even has a sequel, Mark Tells His Story. It was a fun read, again. I wrote a rather extensive spotlight of it last year. See the link below for my spotlight and a link to the story itself, as well as the author's web site. LINK: http://www.asstr.org/~rogue-reviews/spotlights/021002.html The only other news is that I am planning on taking down my web site in another month. It will continue to be archived at ASSTR, but the other location on pair's server will drop out of existence sometime next month. Comments or questions? Use the Feedback Form. |
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