A Fan's Notes

(reflections while reading Laura's Story)

[used by permission]

 

 

I like how this chapter starts.We don't have sex or dialog but I love how this start to the chapter shows the length of Laura's saga and how so much life is contained in it.We start with Laura reflecting on Shelley and how she loves to fuck in certain positions and the vagaries of her life and how it intertwines with Laura's.What is so cool is the fact that this is happening at all.You are the only author that does this and you are the only author that can.For Laura to let the reader know that Nyomi loves it doggy style and how hard she cums in this position and how, she, Shelley loves Margaret so much.I just love the fact that this is possible.Only a story that has Shelley appear in multiple chapters can show this.You have to have the previous sex episodes for this to work.This is what is so awesome about your story.We have the these past chapters that allows you to build on them to advance the story forward.I love the fact that Laura gets to fuck her women over and over again.One shot stories simply cannot do this.Other stories that had length still kept the time focus short or did not really focus on the women themselves.I love that these women will fuck Laura and then fuck her again chapters later.This is like real life when you fuck various women and men if bi.I have always thought that your story reflects life.We see how Laura has a life and how these women come in and out her life.I just love this about your story.I also love how you allow your women to be so individualistic.With Shelley we see that she loves doggy and being fucked hard from the rear.I cannot think of another author that has her women have individual traits and likes in the bedroom.Other authors just have sex which is okay in itself but each woman has her favorite sex acts and you give your women this.This shows that you love your characters by giving them each their own personality and preferences in the sack.

You also show us some dynamics of Shelley's life with Margaret.This is something that you don't really have to do.The story is about how Shelley interacts with Laura but you show clearly how much Shelley loves Margaret and will not fuck with other women when she is in town like Laura will not with Makeeda in town.I find that heinous! but I understand that for these two women it is what is right for them.I love how you do this.In some way this probably restricts where this story could go.To have them totally open in their relationships would allow more possibilities but you keep your women more conventional in their personality and preferences .I have to smile at how they fucked so intensely for a week before Margaret comes back in town.I so love to fuck women that are trying to get in as much sex as possible in a given time frame.I have only had a few relationships where this is the dynamic.Mine tend to be more finding the opportunity to fuck when the husband or boyfriend is away.�� I also have some waiting for the significant female is out of the picture so I can fuck her girlfriend or sometimes husband or boyfriend.Not one other author gives their characters this kind of depth.It is just sex with willing sluts that don't have any concerns like this.I have to deal with it and like reading it in your stories.I so love to fuck a woman who is desperate for hot, hard fucking.I do have to smile where Shelley takes the day off from fucking the day before Margaret comes back.That is cute.I am so thankful that I don't have to worry about that.My archangels are just like me.They all want to fuck as much as they possibly can.They want to fuck every day possible just like me.I will fuck like a bunny the morning of their arrival before my babies come back from work or seminars and then take a long soaking shower and a power nap and then I am so ready to fuck their brains out when they come back.I have always shaken my head at Laura and Makeeda not fucking others constantly and together but for them it is right.I would just love to see them fuck women together but that is not for them.I don't think their relationship could take it.Laura would start to feel her stomach curdle again and the green eyed monster would once more be raging.I don't want Laura to lose Makeeda like she did Sara.It is just cool that I can think along this line.Only you have the story and the sheer amount of time in her story that one has a history that the reader can reflect on.I often think I hope Laura does this or that because of the history of the story.When I see that a certain woman is in the story I will get excited because of past interactions and remembering their past fucks and how I hope that this or that will occur when they fuck.I can only do this with your story.One needs repeated experiences with your characters to get to know these women and to connect with them like I do.I feel that Laura's Story could easily make the leap to the screen because you make the women so real.The sex would be gonzo without the story you have built around these women.Gonzo sex is great but it would not make a series.Laura's Story could be a series on the small screen.You would have sex, great plots and outstanding dialog that I know you could easily expand for the screen.Such a sweet dream.

Laura is such a sweet soul.She fully agrees with Shelley's thinking when it comes to her sweetie.She feels the same way about Makeeda.I am so different.I need to fuck others with my archangels and have the freedom to fuck others when they are at home.We have always believed in total freedom to fuck others.We so love to share women with each other and with Dodie hot studs to pound our fuck holes to oblivion.I guess this is one of the main difference between Laura and myself.I can understand her feelings with Makeeda.This is what they need to make their relationship work.Kind of like part-time monogamy.I am smiling as Laura is feeling a sense of loss over not seeing Shelley since their last tryst.I too know that feeling of loss when I sense that women fall out of my life but that is part of life.Circumstances change and new angels come into my life to take the sting out.I love the fact that you allow the reader to get inside Laura's thoughts at times.I feel like I am there with her when you do this.I am smiling as she daydreams of holding Shelley's lean body in her arms and pulling her tight.I can just feel her body pressed so hard to mine as our arms enfold each other and our tits are mashed and bellies wallow and cunts rub and grind against thighs, hips and pussies.Gagging as our bodies begin to sweat and tongues are dueling and sliding down throats as love once flows as we gag in love into each other's mouths as cunts grind and juice on our lover's body.Then you give the reader the wonderful details that I so love in your story.I am smiling so big with Laura telling us about Shelley's "kittenish sexual whimpering".This is the kind of detail that I never get from other authors about the women in their story.With them I have a hard time even finding out how tall they are.I so love the little things that make us different and the type of sounds we tend to make is one of the things that distinguish us from each other.Things that make us unique.I am smiling more as Laura reflects on how Shelley goes on about Margaret catching them doing the nasty and, thus, losing her.I could not live with that hanging over my head but I am surprised how many are.I think a lot love the excitement of getting strange and working it where the significant other never knows (they hope).Others are so desperate for great sex and the love that it brings they must seek out the pleasures that their mate is no longer providing them.I see it a lot where monogamy has produced stale sex and relationships that are beginning or have become poisonous.I know I have helped save some relationships but adding spice and verve back into their relationships.Some of them I got to fuck both partners and really spiced up their boring lives.Great sex can help revive a relationship if they are willing to work on the other areas of their life.

As I say, I love the history of Laura's Story.We now see Laura haunting Macy's hoping to see Shelley at work.What is great is the past history.I am thinking that this could be a one shot story where Laura is seeking out a woman that has haunted her thoughts.You could set it up and make it great.But this is so much better.Laura reflects on how she first met Shelley.How Shelley was the aggressive one.This would work as a one shot but the fact that she is now on the hunt where Shelley was the hunter to begin with.It goes to another level when this is the fourth act so to speak.They have a history that will make this fuck so much sweeter.You are the only author that does this.You had to create this world where Laura can meet these women and interact with them over many chapters to make each fuck special and each women unique and so freaking vibrant.I love the sex of course (boy do I!!) but it is the life surrounding the sex that totally blows my mind.It moves each chapter from a story about sex tomoment in Laura's life that is simply mind blowing when the sex occurs.With the last new story I read I was at home alone and I cummed so hard when Gina had her fist anal 'gasm.I was on the bed my shoulders digging into the mattress as I used the balls of my feet to hump my twat high in the air as I worked my clit with one hand and pounded my cunt hole with three fingers of my left hand as I made sure to not knock my laptop off my bed as had happened in the past.I was raggedly up humping as my mind relived what I had just read and my middle finger rubbed my clit so hard.My cunt jerked up so hard and I started to scream all caps GGGGOOOODDDAMMMMNNNNN! over and over as my womb exploded and I loved how the sounds of my sloshing cunt filled the room as I cummed along with Gail reveling in her first anal 'gasm.Gods, you made me so happy.The fact that we are seeing Laura going to Macy's to reconnect with Shelley is so much more powerful than a one shot of them coming together for the first time.I guess it could be Laura trying to repair their relationship but without the history you provide such a one shot would be kind of contrived.It is the history that makes your sex so great with so many of your women.Of course your seductions of newbies is great too because again you provide a history to their seductions.Some women fall right into your clutches but usually it takes time if seducing a woman you have meet not a club or a chat room.You have taken chapters for the woman to fall into Laura's bed.Again, that history that I so love.You know how to pace a seduction and make it so hot and real world.

Attention:Long Digression

I do not believe in the gods or fate really but I do know how to make things happen like Laura here.My father always says you make your own luck.I keep my senses tuned for making great new sexual pairings happen.I so love breaking down society's barriers erected to keep all of us but especially women under control.One thing I have not had much use for is the taboos against incest.The only one that I believe in is parental abuse of incest.Parents cannot have sex with any charge under their care until that person is old enough to make the choice to have intercourse with their parental figure.For me that goes for Step or Foster parents.It has to be a choice freely given after that I support any pairings that express love and joy of fucking.And I really have no problem with siblings and close cousins fucking.It is almost always same age group and if totally consensual (nothing wrong with intense seduction) then it is great.As long as no abuse occurs then people should be free to love whom they choose.The only reason people really freak about incest is the inbreeding that successive mating's can produce when recessive genes come out.If you believe the bible then who did Cain and Abel mate with.There sisters of course!About three months back I stopped at a black college pickup bar for the university across the river after a love fuck night and day with Kapri, Diamond and a Latina co-worker of Kapri's, Melissa.Gods, that woman can suck good pussy and knows how to use a strap-on.Love her dark hue and so dark eyes and hair.I like to go into such bars and just sit and wait to see the predators approach.I love all the attention because I am in full attention whore mode.I was soon swarmed with plenty of mostly college girls and studs with some older potential lovers thrown in.I was struck by Tylissa.She has that body that makes me instantly wet.Really dark skin and midnight eyes.High cheekbones and forehead with her hair wavy and to her neck with nice full lips.I was swooning over her 34dd tits and voluptuous body with full hips, ass and awesome shoulders showing in her blouses top.There were plenty of other beautiful women that made my pussy quiver but her intelligence and witty one liners hooked me.I was soon back in her apartment as she simply devoured me over and over to wailing, flipping orgasms.Then I inhaled her juicy, swollen cunt and made her wail and jackknife wildly as I sucked her clit off and her pussy inside out.Then I brought out my strap-on and discovered she is no PC lesbian.I pounded her into the bed to a squealing orgasm and then she did me cowgirl and I swooned when she took my cock out her flowing twat and stuffed into her asshole and rode me so good.Then I really went to heaven when she pulled off my cock and sat between my legs and bent forward lifting my cock.Her eyes glued to mine as he swallowed my cock and did ATM with obvious relish moaning how good her ass tasted.Gods my eyes rolled back so hard and spasmed so long as I whinnied my pleasure.

I have taken her to my babies and some other angels and some of my studs like Anthony, Eric and Steven and Tyron and the brothers three.I have so loved watching her get dp and tp fucked with such obvious love of hammering cock.I like to think of her as a black version of me.I was politically correct at that age but I sure knew the pleasure of starp-ons fucking in all three fuck holes.I soon learned that she had seen her almost seventeen year old brother and two white friends fucking several girls in their mother's home which she crashes at from time to time.She brought them up because her brother has an elven cock as well as his blond, white friends who are identical brothers.I felt my eyes slit and my pussy get wet.I asked her breathlessly if she had fucked them. She gave me a weird look and an eeewwwuuuuuu sound.She went on about incest and how weird the thought was even and how could I think that way.I gave her my rational and she just laughed.I got her to show me her brother's picture and found him damn handsome and asked about the surf board he was holding.She smirked and told me the girls all loved the brotha that surfs.She had seen them fucking several girls with hard, deep solo, dp and tp fucking with tons of atm and a2p.Gods I so love porn teaching kids so early now what is possible.She still spends most nights at her mother's house and spies on them from her loft bedroom looking down into the high vaulted living room.She couldn't help but spy on them and enjoy the hard fucking below her.She thought they knew she was up there spying but she could not be sure.I am simply surprised that no one has made a move to seduce someone.I tried to weaken her to incest and fucking high schoolers but she just found it "weird" which was beginning to tick me off but I didn't have time to make things happen.I did not have any opportunities to make love happen.I so hate people letting society brain wash us.

That finally changed two weeks past.Her mother was at a conference and she invited me to her mother's house to fuck in her loft.We were to meet at 5:00 Friday for some glorious fucking.As I was near the house I got a text from Tylissa telling me she had to work until 6:00 put she would make it worth my while.She had told me where the key was and to let myself in.I had to smile hoping that maybe someone else would be there.Tylissa had told me her brother and friends were going down to the Outer Banks to do some surfing.They were supposed to be already be gone but Tylissa had already shown me that she is often on Nigger time as black people say (always late).I let myself in and had to smile as sure enough Treyshaun and his blond friends where still there with their stuff all in disarray near the door.They were startled at my entrance I could tell and then I could see them eyeing me with obvious interest though they were trying to hid it.Poorly I may add.I was in tight cut offs and a tank top without a bra since Tylissa loves seeing my tits bounce and swirl in tight tops without a bra.They were so cute being polite and trying to be suave.I introduced myself as a girlfriend of Tylissa and she was going to be home later.I told them we had a date.I loved seeing their eyes bulge at the meaning my tone made clear.I found out the brother's names were Patrick and Norman.They were drop dead good looking (Tylissa hadn't told me that) and had the deepest blue eyes.They were about five foot ten as well as Treyshaun.They were all lean and muscled with that greyhound look.Lean and mean as they say.I got to know them and found them sweet and well mannered.My nipples were rock hard by now and I gave them sultry looks that flustered and made them act so cute.A MILF was seducing them and they were not sure how to act.I offered to help them pack and move stuff out to the car showing my muscles and tight body and making sure to rub up against them all as they shivered and I loved how their trunks showed their bulging cocks.�� I had to chuckle at myself.They were too unsure to make the first move.I am also sure that me being taller than all of them was also throwing them off their game.I love intimidating shorter men.

I helped them get some order to their disarray and we talked some I liked their manners and found them nice and pleasant.After a few minutes of work I decided that enough time was being wasted.Plus, I wanted to make sure I had the fucking going for when Tylissa came home.It would make her seduction so much easier.I had planted the seeds and now it was time to make them flourish.I stretched arching my back my arms above me and watched them oogling me and I asked them "Like what you see?"Treyshaun and Patrick merely nodded with big wolfish eyes and Norman said "Yeah!"Articulate they are not.I was beside Treyshaun on my knees folding some shirts and I reached out and clutched his rigid cock.He gasped as I quickly unzipped his jeans and pulled out his raging boner out his shorts.I moaned and husked, "Goddamn you have a beautiful black dick Treyshaun � so big!"I swallowed his bulbous dickhead and started to bob slowly undulating my head as I moaned tasting his maleness.I fondled his balls and squeezed them softly making him groan hard.I loved sucking on teenage cock.Norman whooped "goddamn" and started to strip prompting his brother to follow suit.Soon they were naked their eleven inch white dicks thick and rock hard waving for me.They moved close as I sucked hard on Treyshaun's dick bobbing to the back of my throat as I sucked with cheek hollowing sucks.I undulated my head working it up and down as I rode his dick up and down my tongue as I hard sucked.I lifted and quickly stood and stripped as Treyshaun shucked his shorts and shirt off and I fell between the twins and grabbed Norman's dick and stuffed his beautiful pink dickhead into my mouth and bobbed on his dickhead for a minute before tacking it to the back of my throat with hard bobs of my head.I then swallowed Patrick's cock and bobbed hard and fast to start with and slowed down to slow suck as my lips clung to his thick shaft moaning as my lips traveled over thick veins roping his dick.I gave sloppy heads on their cocks going back and forthdrooling spit on them so I could pump the shafts of the cocks I was not currently sucking.I loved feeling their thick shafts sliding through my fists as I pumped them and seeing my spit rope and drool off their cocks.

i was in heat sucking on big cock.I loved sucking on black and white dick at the same time.Treyshaun's dick was thicker than his friends cocks.Norman and Patrick's dickheads more bulbous with the heads ballooning out above the shafts.I loved latching my lips to their bulge and sucking hard on just their dickheads and pumping my head as I deep throat sucked on their cock crowns.After a while they moved in and formed a triangle around me standing close.I loved it feeling their thighs brushing me as their dickheads rode over my face when I was not sucking them.I loved their confidence not caring that their dick heads brushed over each other at times they were so close.I moved my head right and left and moved forward to suck on cock.I moaned when I would feel a dick sliding over my cheek or forehead all wet with my spit and pre cum as I concentrated on the dick in my mouth. They were now confident and jamming their dicks into my cheeks and jabbing my lips seeking their turn as I gave head to their friend or brother's dick.I was fisting and jerking thick cocks as I sucked hard bobbing dickheads to the back of my throat making me caw and drool out thick strands of spit.I would guide the two cocks coming in from the sides and the cock in front of me to allow me to lick the three dick heads at the same time my long tongue slithering over a cockhead and sliding it over to the next one.Latching onto a dick head and suck on just his dickhead and bob a few times before moving over and doing the same to the next dick.I was smiling up at the teenagers letting them know what a slut I am.They would move back a step and allow me room to suck and bob on their dicks taking their dicks to the back of my throat as I sucked hard with hard bobs getting their cocks soaked in my spit and roping off as I pumped the shafts of the dicks waving to the sides of my face.I moaned and murmured how big their dicks were and good their dicks tasted in my mouth.I reveled feeling my hair getting lank with sweat as I felt it starting to bead on my heated body as I bobbed hard my body swaying to my dick sucking.They would then move in again allowing me to work all three dickheads at the same time as I drooled spit on their dickheads and licking all over and lipping before sucking their dickheads with short bobs as I loved tasting their maleness in my mouth.

I love men controlling me.Treyshaun told his friends to take me over to the back wall that was mostly windows.I noticed a European style divan.It was low and long enough to sleep on and wide enough to allow good fucking I could see.The back was nice and angled about two feet long.I loved the fact that I was going to be fucked where anyone outside could see me but I saw it was a canal outside with trees on the other side.Still, who knows.Norman was the leader I could see and he laid me down on the divan and pulled my groin to the edge and pushed my legs back and guided his prick to my fuck hole and pushed it in deep with one stroke making me back arch and pussy clutch his dick as it sank deep into my pussy.His bulbous cockhead made my cunt petals clutch and spasm as he pumped his cock with strong strokes.The friction his seventeen year old cock in pussy made me gag and shiver in deep pleasure.Treyshaun got on the other side and got a knee on the divan and other knee on the floor and pushed his dick into my cheek and I turned my head and swallowed his beautiful black dick and pumped my head hard.Norman gripped my ankles high to open my pussy for his hard pumps.I was moaning on Treyshaun's cock taking his dick to the back of my throat as he now gripped the back of my head holding it in place to drive his cock hard into my throat making me caw and gurgle.Patrick moved in when Norman pulled out and got beside my head on the other side of the divan and I now turned that way as he stepped up on the divan and squatted down to let me feast on his cock tasting my cunt on it.Patrick pumped my pussy hard for a few minutes making my womb spasm as he arched his back to slam his bulbous dickhead into my womb hard over and over.Soon it was Treyshaun plowing my pussy like this as I feasted on white cock.After a few minutes he laid down on the divan his back on the slope and I mounted him reverse missionary as he pounded my pussy hard.I gripped the divan back and held my body up as he sucked and wolfed on my nipples making me whinny and head thrash.I was swirling my hips on the up struck and slamming forward and down to impale my womb on black cock.Suddenly my cunt exploded on his cock as he pounded up into my down slamming groin.I had full body spasms as Treyshaun pulped my tits as he mashed my tits together and sucked my rock hard nipples together as I screamed "You're making me cum Treyshaun! � aarrgggghhhhnnnnn! � oohhhnnnnggggggggg � oh goodddammmnnnnnn!".�� I had to smile hearing Patrick say "What a fucking MILF � goddamn she cums hard!"

I rode out my orgasm and weakly croaked out as strong aftershocks made me body spasm hard and belly clutch so hard my body would fold "Tylissa has watched you all fuck sluts�fuck me hard like them�tp me.I wanted them to know Tylissa had seen them fuck.I was planting the seeds.I felt the divan sink down as Norman mounted it with his feet on the divan and I felt him gripping an ass cheek opening my bung hole.I looked back with a slutty smile and watched him spit into my rosebud and take his dickhead and push his spit and cock into my sphincter.I keened when his dick pushed into my ass and sank in four inches.I hissed and groaned in pain and watched him start to plow my asshole my butt sending out shards of pain but already pulses of pleasure directly to my clit and nipples making me thrust back into the cocks now seesawing in and out my fuck holes.Patrick was watching the show pumping his shaft waiting his turn.They fucked me so good.Treyshaun was slow plowing my cunt as the anchor as the twins took turns raping my asshole.They slammed their cocks into my shit hole making my jolt forward into Treyshaun's hard body my tits crushed and mashed making my nipples shout in pleasure.The twins would rape my asshole and move off and the other would mount me.Norman moved to my head with a hopeful look on his face.He was waiting I saw.I croaked "I want to taste my asshole on your dick, Norman".He moaned "fuuucckkkkk yeah!" as he moved forward and I gripped his cock and swallowed his dickhead soaked in my shit cream and undulated my head as I sucked clean with hard cheek hollowing sucks.I cleaned the twins cocks when they came around after trying to ruin my asshole.I was soaked in sweat now along with my fuck mates.After long minutes they moved me reverse cowgirl with Treyshaun's cock now pounding my asshole from behind and the twins now moving up on the divan and getting on a knee and one leg over me with a bent knee to now pound my cunt.I was gagging feeling their cockheads sliding roughly over each other with the down angle of the white twins dicks sliding into the black dick pounding my asshole.i was gripping the twins ribs to help pump my body forward to take the cocks deep up my fuck holes.I loved how I was being fucked so good by teenage cocks.I was sucking clean the cock out my pussy as the other twin would fuck my cunt hole so hard and good.After about five minutes I felt the delicious tension forming deep in my belly.I was looking up at Patrick pounding my pussy with burning eyes as I gripped his ribs and worked hard my groin forward to bury their cocks deep into my pussy and ass.I could feel my lank hair jerking with my body being slammed fucked.I felt the sweat running down my face and ribs and then my head snapped back as I wailed and my body spasmed with full body spasms and jackknifed my ass wallowing on Treyshaun's belly.I wailed and screamed my pleasure as my body was hit with four killing spasms that throttled me to near senselessness.

"What the fuck!" I heard beside us.I blearily looked over and saw Tylissa in a Subway outfit her top all bulged out with her big 34dd tits.She was staring at us with shock but I could also see something else.I noticed she had crossed the room before making her presence known.Plus, she was not really freaking out.She was going on now what the fuck was I doing and yelling at Treyshaun but I could see the truth.I weakly rolled off Treyshaun and was on my knees leaning on the divan.I barked at Tylissa "Tylissa shut the fuck up!"�� She did and looked at me with a mixture of being miffed and exasperation.I told her that her brother and friends were fucking me so good.Treyshaun was up now I went for it full speed."Take your clothes off Tylissa!"When she did not move I yelled "Now!!"I smiled great big when her fingers went to her top and began to unbutton the straining fabric her face sort of dazed looking.I love controlling sluts."Help her Treyshaun" I husked.He looked at me as if in dream but slowly went over an helped her take her top off and looked at her tits straining in her bra hungrily.She was fumbling with the zipper to her pants when Patrick moved over and helped her get them down and off along with her shoes.She reached back and undid her bra her gourd tits spilling out and jiggling as they settled.We all stared at them in fuck hunger.I knew to keep things moving forward fast at this stage."Push her down onto her knees Treyshaun."He did and she only resisted a few moments and now her mouth was in front of his thick, black dick jerking in front of her mouth.She looked at his cock with rising hunger.The silly walls were faltering I could see with a big smile on my face."Suck his cock Tylissa � you know you want too � suck your brother's dick Tylissa � do it, do it, do�" Her head moved forward her mouth opening wide and swallowed her brother's dick and we all moaned at the sight and Treyshaun in pleasure.She quickly gripped his ass cheeks and sucked away hard her head bobbing her hair jerking.She moaned and lifted a second and told me "God I love tasting your ass on Treyshaun's dick" and immediately swallowed his dickhead and bobbed to the back of her throat as her head twisted and undulated like a snake working his dick up and down her tongue as her cheeks hollowed out with her sucks.She slurped on his cock running her tongue all over his dickhead drooling spit before lowering her head again and slowly twisting and undulating her head working his cock around in her mouth as it rode her tongue to the back of her throat.All the time she murmured, moaned and made wet sucking sounds as she bobbed now hard and fast her hair flouncing.

She sucked long and good and moved over to Patrick's cock when he moved in.it was so beautiful seeing her dark mouth clenched tight on his white cock as she sucked hard.She too loved sucking on his extra-large bulbous dickhead her head twisting on just his dickhead as she sucked.Lifting her mouth and licking her tongue all over the pink dick head and running her tongue in circles over the crown and along his glans before swallowing again and bobbing with slow sensual love sucks.Norman had moved in and gotten me leaning on the divan my knees on the floor and invaded my asshole roughly and began to fuck me with hard punishing strokes making my tits grind and wallow on the divan making them scream in pleasure.I moaned watching Patrick get on the floor and Tylissa straddled him and sank his prick all the way into her already dripping cunt.She slow stroked at first his dick into her womb as her heavy tits wallowed on his chest.Treyshaun laid down on his side on the divan I sucked on his cock as Norman pile drove my asshole making my head lunge up Treyshaun's cock without having to bob.I loved being fucked so good in the ass as I sucked on black dick.I heard Tylissa chuffing and crying out in pleasure.I was fucked hard for a few minutes when Norman and Treyshaun went to change positions.I now saw that Tylissa was missionary and Patrick up on his palms slamming her ass into the floor with his pile driving hips sinking his dick all the way into her cunt.Her legs were clutching his hips and Tylissa had gripped his ribs with one hand and the other a bicep.Her head was up off the floor her eyes sightless.Suddenly her head snapped hard into floor and she cried out in shattering bliss.Long torturous groans cawed out her throat as her head thrashed and tits jolted and jiggled with Patrick's slamming prick.Her groin humped into his impaling thrusts as she wailed and convulsed.Her face a constant mask of slashes and grimaces of shattering pleasure.I loved seeing full body spasms throttle her sweet voluptuous body.

I soon had a gagging orgasm as Treyshaun pounded my asshole and I sucked on Norman's prick.I screamed on Norman's cock as my asshole exploded scalding bliss to my soul with rolling waves of ecstasy flooding my veins.I finally recovered and saw that Tylissa was sucking my ass off her brother's dick with slow bobs of her head her lips so tight to his veined shaft.I told them I wanted to watch them tp her and sat on a chair as Norman laid back on the divan and Tylissa mounted with a slow long whinny of pleasure.It was so beautiful watching his long, thick white dick sink balls deep into her cunt and the way her ass juddered with pleasure feeling his prick invade her belly.Treyshaun climbed up on the divan and pierced her asshole with his massive thick shaft and she cried out in pain as he invaded her asshole and pushed his dick deep into her willing asshole.Soon she was being slammed fucked with prick as they took turns pounding her booty hole and she sucked her ass off their cocks thoroughly cleaning her ass off Treyshaun and Patrick's cocks.I watched them reverse her.Her back to Norman her ass resting on his groin her arms outstretched behind her gripping the divan.Now Norman was pounding her ass as her brother and Patrick climbed up on the divan and slammed her cunt with their down thrusting pricks.I loved how they manhandled her so roughly.Norman pulled his prick out her spasming asshole her shit juice leaking down her back.He tilted her back and up by his grip behind her knees and Treyshaun pushed her back some more, her asshole now high in the air and slammed his prick into her shitter and pumped savagely for a few minutes.They then lowered her and Norman shoved his dick into her ass again and Treyshaun punched his dick into her cunt soaked in her asshole.Him and Patrick took turns when Norman pulled her back to pound her asshole and then stuff their shit juice soaked cocks hard and deep into her pussy and pump hard.Their bulbous dickheads slamming deep into her womb with each savage thrust of their manhood.They did this to her repeatedly the boys taking turns on the divan to let their bodies take her weight as they fucked her so hard.Sweat was sluicing off her body all over now and her hair was in disarray.I watched her have two awesome anal 'gasms that had her body jackknifing and flopping wildly as she cummed with full throated wails of ecstasy.She was crying out "Goddamn you're fucking me so good Treyshaun!" and encouraging the twins "Goddamn, I love your white cocks � unngggghhhhrrrrrr � oh god I love your dicks fucking me!"She knows how to encourage her male lovers.I loved how her body would stiffen in her orgasms and then judder violently as the next spasm rocked her soul with crushing bliss.

I moved in and sucked on their cocks straight out her ass my cheek on her ass cheek as they did her classic dp now on the divan and then floor.I was swooning seeing up close their cocks sliding out her asshole soaked in her shithole and then sliding up her ass cheek into my watering mouth and clamping tight as I sucked hard with head bobs to the back of my throat savoring her sweet shithole.I watched the boys looking at each other and knew they were ready to ejaculate.I husked to Treyshaun who was again pounding his sister's ass that I wanted him to cum in my mouth.He smiled at me and pulled out his dick thickly creamed in shit cream.I swallowed and sucked hard as I bobbed and fisted his thick shaft.I saw out of the corner of my eye Norman move in and take Treyshaun's place and the twins were now savagely fucking Tylissa.She croaked out for them to "fuck me up � pull my hair and slap my black ass and face."The twins were happy to comply.Norman started to slap her sweaty ass with loud smacks his other hand fisted in her hair jerking her head cruelly back with vicious pulls positioning it perfectly for his brother.Patrick slapped her sweaty face making it jolt hard to the side.The rough pummeling made her breathing quicken even more with ragged shuddering breaths.Her body started to hitch and jerk with approaching orgasm.I was twisting my head hard now sucking with all my might my lips glued on his glans.His hands were now clawed into my scalp and his fingers spasming.I now did slow, slow bobs as I twisted my head slowly too and deep throat sucked.I kept glancing up to watch my effect on him, smiling as I saw the pleasure I was giving his prick.His head rocked down his face slashing like he was being garroted his eyes squeezed shut."Fffffuuuucckkkkk�you goddamn slutttttttt �. UUNNNGGGHHHHNNNNNN!"I felt his dick spasm between my lips and I groaned feeling his prick spasm hard spurts into my throat his dick blasting out hot semen.I choked swallowed his three heavy spurts and sucked his dick as it finished spasming emptying his nut sack in my mouth.When I finished I could concentrate on Tylissa and her end fuck.The twins were slamming her body so hard her body jolting forward her head cruelly jerked and forward and back.Patrick was slapping her face at random times.Her breathing was so ragged now.Norman stopped slapping her ass and gripped it and the other hand twisted her head back as he slammed his hips into her thick ass making it jolt as she now started to shake violently and half choked out torturous groans out her partially constricted throat.Her body began to buck and jackknife as the dicks pummeling her fuck holes sent her to nirvana.Her fingers clawed the carpet as her body surged back into the dicks slamming her cunt and asshole.She now wailed and cursed as her body convulsed violently.Her spasming fuck holes sent the twins over the edge.They both growled and surged hard as they lunged their cocks as deep as they could into Tylissa's body.I am always observant on how men cum.Some tend to pile drive their cock in and out your fuck hole as their cock blasts semen into your womb or up your ass.The brothers, at least this time, did the bury your cock and hold it there cum.They arched and strained their bodies to slam their cocks deep into Tylissa's violently shaking body and hold them there.�� I loved watching the brothers shake violently and curse each time their cocks spasmed dick seed deep in Tylissa's belly flooding her womb and colon with white semen.�� The way their faces slashed even more as their dicks convulsed semen into Tylissa's dark black belly.Their exploding cocks made her have another orgasm that she choked shriek and flipped through as the twins shook violently as their nut sacks emptied their semen into her spent fuck holes.I smiled at how Tylissa was prostrate on Patrick's chest her eyes sightless still lost in her dying orgasm.�� I crawled over and looked up expectantly as they smiled lewdly at me and pulled their cocks out Tylissa's slack fuck holes and I eagerly sucked her cunt, ass juice and their semen off their still rigid cocks.I moaned and hummed as I happily slurped clean their dicks filling my mouth as I sucked and wormed my lips up and down their veined shafts covered liberally in cunt and shit juice.

The three bucks washed up and finished packing and left as Tylissa and I went upstairs to her loft and got in her small shower stall.I soon had her revived as I fingered fucked her hard and deep as I kissed her deeply and pulped her gourd tits in turn lifting and wolfing down her thick nipples as I deep throat loved suck until she cummed slamming into me and the wall violently.I slammed my fingers deep into her exploding box until she was sagging against the shower wall spent and bleary eyed.I sucked on her nipples a long time with wolf sucks making her cry out to stop."You're killing my Clit!"I would back off a few moments and then deep throat the nipple stuffed in my mouth as I went back and forth between her nipples making her cry out again and again and spasm so hard into me and wallow against the wet wall.She begged me to stop all the while gripping my shoulders pushing me back weakly.I loved feeling her weak pushes, and then her fingers in my hair to drive my mouth deep into her ample bosom suffocating me in her bounty as I continued to deep throat suck her nipples and stretch them out my sucking lips until they snapped out my lips as she cried out in helpless pleasure.I had to smirk how this tableau played over and over again.Her begging me to stop and weakly pushing me away and then driving my face deep into her tit as I loved wolfed sucked her diamond stiff nipples.I then got us out and half way dried off and got her on the bed and went down on her sucking her off with total love and focus tongue fucking her pussy and deep throat sucking her cunt until she was on the balls of her feet her hands clawed into my scalp as she screamed and humped hard up into my devouring mouth as she jackknifed violently, her head slamming and wallowing into the mattress.She then rode my face so hard as she cummed so hard yet again.I loved looking up and seeing her tits flopping and swirling as rode me hard and then slapping up and down as she bucked through her orgasm soaking my face in her steamy divine cunt nectars.We sucked, tribbed and finger fucked deep into the night exhausting each other in sweet lesbo love.I smiled when she cooed and thanked me for getting her to fuck her brother and his friends.She couldn't wait to fuck them regularly and wanted me join them as much as I could.I love this slut.

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I like how Laura goes to Macy's regularly hoping to see Shelley behind a counter.I just know other authors would have it happen the first visit.You know how to prolong.Finally, Shelley is at Macy's and Laura carefully sneaks up on her.Again, I wonder if another author would have this cute scenario.I can just see Laura slowly moving from stand to stand looking around as she approaches Shelley.Cute.Now you show how dialog can so move a story forward and show the women's humor and love of each other ["I'm going to grab your lovely braids and carry you off to my castle and have my way with your beautiful body," she whispered, being careful to jump back a little as Shelley's head whipped around in surprise.  Even so, some of the long mane of thin braids skittered across her forearm.������� "Laura!  Oh god, you scared the shit out of me!"������� "I hope not," Laura laughed.������� Shelley's face burst into the kind of smile that lit up the week in a flashing supernova glow.  "I don't know what to say.  I'm . . . turning to hot jelly right here.  I was afraid I'd never see you again."]You are the only author to have this kind of interaction between their characters.I have come to be so disappointed with the lack of dialog between characters in other stories.The silence has come to be deafening to me.I just want to scream to fill in the void.This dialog shows their familiarity with each other which shows a history and love for each other.The way Shelley reacts to Laura scaring her shows again their familiarity.I am smiling at their mirth.Then the way you can turn a phrase with the use of "supernova glow".Gosh, I love your use of language.I just love dialog and this kind of interaction just makes me happy to read.Then you show us clearly just howmuch Shelley has missed Laura.Other authors since they don't have dialog would have to tell us all this information you have in basically four sentences.They would probably have to use much more kilobytes to give us this information.Plus, I would not have any pop.It would be plot device and moving the story forward.With dialog it is natural to the story and makes the women alive and real to me.You make the women real and show their emotion for each other.I think this can only be done with dialog.I can just see the smile on Shelley 's face and the love in her voice.Plus, I love the little details that add nothing to the basic story but makes the story endearing.This moment is Laura moving back so when Shelley reacts her lip won't get split.I have done this very thing and thought this same thought backing up when I am startling someone.This is the little moments in life that make life special and draws you closer to the women in your life.

Like I say, you know how to capture the subtle nature of an intimate relationship.[For a moment they didn't say anything but simply seemed to let their eyes resonate and pulse together.  They had been ardent lovers, and then, through no fault of their own, had been forced by prior commitments to separate for months.  Now their feelings were intermingling again, right in the middle of a busy department store.  The feelings, Laura realized, were too deep, mixed, and complex to express in mere words.  And neither knew how to broach the subject of a more intimate intermingling.  Was it still possible?]Needless to say, I have never seen this dynamic in another story.The silent communication of long time lovers that have not fucked in too long.I have seen one shot stories of women who have parted coming back together but never seen the intimate simmering energy that you capture.They just don't make it special like you do.You can just see the depth of emotions in their eyes as they reconnect with each other and their nipples are tingling and getting semi-hard and pussies are getting wet in want.You have always mastered the unspoken communication.Other authors just say they feel it but you actually show it and it adds everything to the story.I too know that inability to put into words just how bad I want you.How my body aches to once more have you in my arms and my tongue once more sinking deep into your cawing mouth and then your wet pussy and tight asshole.I know that feeling of how to reconnect.If you have fallen away from each other because of life and its circumstance sometimes it is difficult to reconnect as fast as aching pussy is pulsing to me to get us back in bed and fucking gloriously.What is cool is that without the history this would not resonate with the reader like it does.If this was a one shot story about reconnecting it would just be words on the screen.History period.But having lived these episodes with Laura I feel the past glorious fucks and know how their other loves have complicated their love.I have lived it with them, thus, I can feel this connection between them now.You then make the moment even more special by sprinkling in some humor to make this moment divine.Shelley is confusing Makeeda's name.I think it is a little dig but one can never be sure.I am famous for mixing up peoples and division names.Yesterday I was in Bill's office talking about work stuff and several times he smiled at me and I know to ask "What did I say?"Once I got the person's name wrong and the other time it was the division.Still, it is cute to see Shelley get the name wrong and Laura finding it humorous.Plus, you add the little societal comment with Shelley making the comment that the white girls get all the best gigs.I definitely know things are better since I was a girl but societal racism is still out there.Not like it was in the past but still out there like homophobia.The world is changing quickly for the better but society still has a way to go.You then show Laura being directly funny with her comment about Makeeda making a point to stay away from any Macy underwear models while she is in Vancouver.I find women just melt for me when I am witty and funny.I have loved seeing this in Laura's arsenal of weapons to seduce her willing sluts.

I love how you make it clear that they both want each other so bad in the store.I too know that having to not show my open affection to my women in public.I guess in today's world you can but I am still nonplussed when I am out with Dodie or Joann and they are openly stroking and kissing me.I also find that teenagers today are so freaking bold in showing their affections at times.I love how the world is moving.They are soon back at Shelley and Margaret's place and doing what I love to do once the door is closed [Just inside the door they were kissing and clawing each other voraciously.������� "It's been too long!" Laura panted, sucking her neck.��� ����"Don't leave any marks on me!" Shelley panted.  "Margaret will see!"] You are the only author to show the full body clench.You tell the reader they are clawing each other.We know that they are doing the full body clench with arms pulling tight and thighs jamming twats that are humping in need.I so love to pull you tight and feel your body jammed up against mine.I love how you show this.Other authors never show the raw need of lovers falling on each other like starving wolves.I can feel my fingers digging into your back, shoulders or gripping your head to help mate our mouths tight as tongues plunge in rising love.I love to kiss and love moments like this and love reading it.I have to chuckle at Shelley worrying about getting a hickey.Shelley is fairly dark and can more easily hide such marks but maybe Margaret is the type to inspect Shelley for such marks.Shame she is so jealous.Laura is a skilled lover and I know she knows how to suck a neck without leaving a mark.I love getting hickeys and sure love making my sluts scream when I plant the love kiss on their succulent necks.I have to love the fear in Shelley's voice.I could never live that way.I love my babies for being so open in their letting me seek love just like they do.I so hate being at swing parties where the guy is getting pussy and their mate is only allowed to watch the proceedings.Pigs.

You now give the readers cute little slice of life dialog.I so love these little moments of banter between your lovers.Other authors only give dialog that is necessary to setup the story and let the reader know what the plot is.You give us dialog that has nothing to do with the actual story.You have already setup the story for this chapter and now we get the pleasure of just seeing them interact.With your dialog you can show just how much Laura loves and desires Shelley.Without dialog this could not really be conveyed to the reader.Telling the reader is one thing but hearing the women converse and interact adds such a layer of intimacy to the stories that I just shiver reading it.Your dialog is so natural and real life.These conversations are happening all over the world every day I know.["I want to swallow you," Laura panted, kissing her neck again, her ear.  "I want to kiss and lick that delectable little scar of yours.  Before I fuck the screaming mee mees out of you."������� Shelley pulled away, teasing Laura, making Laura follow her deeper into the apartment.  "I forgot what a freak you are.  You and your kinky little needs."������� If you only knew, darling, Laura snickered inwardly.  "I love your body."������� Shelley flirted, ever the coquette.  "Even my scar?  Nobody ever wanted to lick my scar before.  Not even Margaret."������� Laura drew her close again and encircled her slender waist with both arms, perching her folded-together hands on the beautifully out-jutting ledge of Shelley's magnificent swelling rump.  She nuzzled Shelley's smooth brown cheek.  ��������"I am kinky that way," she confessed.  "I even want to kiss that adorable little birthmark on the side of Katie Couric's neck, every time I see it.  I'm a little scar-and-birthmark freakazoid.  Whenever I see her giving the news I'm mesmerized."]This dialog does not move the story forward.It is just a believable dialog between two women.Dialog that is dependent on the ebb and flow of this tryst.Tomorrow and different dynamics would produce a totally different conversation.This is real life.I like the little things that show intimacy.I know that "mee mees" is a little term that they only use with each other.Then Shelley teasing Laura on her kinky ways.Knowledge that she could only have because of their past time together.Only you show the way the past flows into to the present.Your dialog has always been so spot on and natural to the story.�� Plus, you show the intimacy of women.I have never met a man who took the time to love my scars and skin blemishes that I have.I have had various women over the years kiss, lick and lip my scars and murmur how they love mapping them with their lips.I too love to trace your scars with my lips and fingers and find out from you how you got this scar and that one and I too love kissing birth marks.They add character and I love bucking up women who are self-conscious about such marks.I am so like Laura in this.I so love how so many black women have the inoculation scar on one shoulder or the other and I love to kiss and coo over them.It is these little details that add so much to your stories.Recently, I have read a few stories and the sex was amazing in how little there was.One or maybe two sentences of going down on the woman and then one sentence telling the reader that the woman cummed.Say what!?!That is an orgasm?They make it so freaking boring and bland!Here you give the detail of Laura encircling Shelley's waist and placing her clasped hands on her divine bubble butt.This is so totally opposite of what you get from other authors.They give me nothing really and you give me these little moments that are so precious and add so much to the fuck.I have begun to wonder about whether most people truly embrace each fuck like I do.Let the sensations and sensory details cascade into my soul.I was with Dodie last week and she has a new male lover, Khalifa.He is so very black.He was born in Sierra Loene and his parents immigrated over when he was three to escape the fighting.He is now twenty-nine and my height and so good looking.He works out and is buff and best yet has a twelve inch, thick so black uncircumcised cock.He is an investment banker that knows how to make you money if you have money.Lisa had recommended him to Dodie telling her that he provided "special" services.Dodie had fucked him several times and first shared with Frankie and now I was over.I soaked up his African features and the way he enunciated his words so perfectly.He just exuded confidence and charm.I told them I wanted to watch him fuck Dodie first and film them.I was in lust seeing Dodie fish out his already rock hard cock and the way she dove on it and sucked fiercely on his large deep black bulbous dickhead.Her dusky face sucking on large on large black dick that pumped in and out her Hollywood perfect face.The way she pumped his shaft and seeing his foreskin ride up and down his massive cock and the way she lipped and licked his foreskin before twisting and pumping her head so hard her hair flouncing and seeing the sweat starting to bead on her forehead.I loved seeing his dick ramming the back of her throat and the cawing and choking sounds she made and the spit roping off his cock and soaking her face, throat, tits and belly.Mounting her and driving his black dick so deep into her cunt as he did her missionary and slamming her into the bed.Dismounting and moving up using one hand to support himself and lowering his cock barking at her to clean his cock "you fucking Jewish whore."His other hand cupped the back of her head and hearing Dodie whinny in excitement as he lifted her head to latch her mouth to his cockhead and twisting her head hard sucking it clean.The way her head jerked to a stop with her lips glued to his cockhead on the up stroke of his dick.She looked so slutty gripping his hip to help keep her head up to suck on his thick shaft her lips glued so tight as she slurped and murmured around his thick cock working up and down her tongue to the back of her throat now.The way her now sweaty hair was lank and jerking with her hard head bobs.How Khalifa fucked her missionary and his thick cock spiked deep into her clutching cunt stretching her out and her inner lips clinging tight to his dick on the outstroke.He slammed fucked an orgasm out her exploding cunt spearing her ass to the bed her whole body jolting down with the power of his strokes her ankles locked over his ass as her thighs clutched his hips and her hands clawed his back and her head rocking back as guttural caws and groans filled the room her head thrashing and face slashing.How the sweat was running in rivulets off Khalifa's body and Dodie's body covered in sweat and running off her face like a slut.These are things I so notice in each fuck and only you give me these kind of sweet details in each of your fucks.You give details at the beginning of the ramp up and other authors don't even give me details during the end fuck.So sad!

You continue to show the intimacy that I so adore in your story.Intimacy that only comes with time, familiarity and great shared fucks.The vast, vast majority of stories can't really do this because they are one shot or two or three stories based upon a first story.With such short time lines you can't really develop the characters enough to show the familiarity that only comes with shared experiences.Of course sex is so important but to really become close to someone you have to share many facets of yourself with each other and you show this with your women.Laura shares herself with her lovers and it shows with sweet intimate moments.Other stories I have tried to read recently just don't have these moments.The author tells you they are intimate but they don't give me any moments.They don't give us sweet moments.Like Shelley here teasing Laura that she thought she was her only "unique" love with her birthmark with Laura's mentioning of Katie Couric.This kind of gentle repartee only comes with a woman that you have shared great fucks and love with.I get so tired of trying to read other stories and they are so bland and they don't give me the little moments that make one smile and make your pussy quiver with rising love and need.You make each of Laura's relationships so unique and special.It is these moments that makes us the reader fall so hard for each of these women and glory in their great fucks.Now you show why sharing such moments are so divine.They come together and kiss ravenously.You have setup this coming together and I just know that they are doing a full body clench of clutching hands and enfolding arms as tits mash and cunts hump thighs and hips filling their bodies with raw need.You so show how when you come together at first it is pure animalistic physical attraction but after the first blush it is the sweet moments of women sharing that keeps ones pussy wet, asshole clenching and nipples throbbing.Of course your body still aches for your slut but it is the sharing that keeps the fucking intense and orgasms mind blowing.I love the detail of them stripping on the way to the bedroom and embracing once on the bed.Then Laura reveling in Shelly's tan lines since she is light enough to show this.Even dark black women show the part of their skin exposed to sun as it just that little bit more dark.I so love contrast and love tan lines and how black women's skin can have different hues and shades.I have always loved how Laura complements her women and we see the effect on Shelley [Shelley merely smiled and giggled softly with delight.  She did indeed have a marvelous body, and marvelous tan lines, achieved by sunbathing on her small deck in her bikini.  Though not light-skinned, like for example Shontay, she was certainly not dark like Frankie, or Carmela, or Dee Dee, none of whom could ever have these amazing patches of skin that were paler than the surroundin territory.  It looked as if Shelley were still actually wearing the bikini, though it was completely transparent, so that you could see her mouth-watering, large, dark brown nipples through it, and the small shiny black patch of pubic hair in her crotch, concealing the treasure Laura sought.]All women love to be complemented and I love see Laura's women preen and strut when she compliments them.I sure know that my angels love it and makes them so wet for me and become putty in my hands and willingly give me their sweet pussies and shit holes.I love how you go into the shades of black women.I read two interracial stories and I did not get a real good feel for their skin color.How sad.I so love reveling in women of color skin colors.I love comparing them against each other just like Laura here.It makes them all kind of intertwine for me and my love for them all just builds.I am smiling as Laura's eyes love all of Shelley but zero on in on her charms.I too would have my mouth watering seeing her thick nipples and her swollen cunt begging for my fingers and mouth.I so love letting the little moments build to the sweet coming together that leads to such hot fucking and womb and asshole rending orgasms.

You so know how to show the little moments.You show the total loving again that I totally love.Laura begins to kiss Shelley's birth mark but she also gathers Shelley's tits in her hands and love squeezes them as she begins to kiss the birth mark.You are the only author to capture this total loving.I get so tired of the boring one act fucking that other authors give me.It is this total loving that completely overwhelms ones lovers.Shelley is almost mesmerized by Laura's total focus on her.I love how you show Laura's women being overwhelmed by her focused loving.I so love seeing and listening to my sluts whimper and plead for me to fuck them totally and so deep and hard.I get them so addicted to me by the total loving that you show here.�� Other authors would just say that Laura is sucking on Shelley's nipples.You instead give us the detail of Laura lifting her full globes in her hands and lowering her mouth and swallowing Shelley's thick nipples deep into her mouth and love sucking them with deep throat love sucks.I am so there as you give the detail of the sounds the devourer is making ["Mmmnnggg," Laura merely made happy and hungry sucking and eating sounds as she devoured the woman's luscious young breast.]I have always been saddened by how other authors never show the noises we make in making love.They make it seem that when we are going down on our women we are purposefully not making any sounds as we dine on sodden, sopping wet, red cunt meat.I am always murmuring, snuffling, chuffing and love cooing to my sluts.I love the sounds my tongue makes as it plows her cunt slit and how the sounds of my hard love sucks on her clit and squishy sounds as I pile drive my head back and forth punching my tongue deep into her pussy or through her tight sphincter and deep into her rectum.It is not silent.Only you capture the sounds of love making and I adore your writings because of it.You continue to show the tenderness of lovers with a history.It is so sweet how Shelley strokes Laura's hair as she sucks on her tits and love coos how wonderful Laura is.When I am stroked thus I just focus all the more to love you with all my skill and focus to get more compliments and know I am giving you such divine pleasure.Like I say, it is these little moments merging with the main sex that makes lesbian sex so rad and devastating when our wombs rip themselves apart in shattering ecstasy.

I also love how you show other positions than the standard porn positions.They are sitting on the bed embracing as Laura bends down to suck on Shelley's nipples as she cradles and massages them.I can just guarantee that other authors would just say that Laura is sucking on her nipples and I would just assume the standard Shelley lying on her back and Laura loving her that way.I love how you show all the positions of love making.I have always believed in upper persuasion for lower invasion like this [Shelley stroked Laura's hair while Laura sucked her nipples, more and more passionately.  They were wet with Laura's saliva, the centers protruding stiffly as she lashed them with her tongue.  Shelley panted softly, then more and more rapidly.������� "I'm a runny river," she panted into Laura's ear.  "I think you need to fuck me fast."] I love how you show the ramping up that occurs even during foreplay.Only you show this again.Other authors are just so bland and boring in their same never changing pace.You show how excitement in our veins just make us ramp up and move the sex forward like love does.Then you detail Laura's actions on how she is sucking on Shelley's nipples which is making my nipples pulse reading it because I can put myself in Shelley's place with your details.I can feel an angel's lips sucking fierce pleasure from my rigid nipples making my tits jolt and sear me with burning pleasure.Love how you tell me they are saliva wet.That is spot on!Then I hear from Shelley what I long to hear from my love sluts.I am making them so wet for it.I just preen and feel my love and pride swell when my women tell me how hot and wet I am making them.I live for such words and encouragement.I love how you show this encouragement.It just inspires one to give your all to your woman.Since you have dialog in your stories you can show this.Other stories with their silence simply can't do it.I am simply sadly amazed anymore at the silence of other stories.The silence of no dialog and no sounds of love making.I like reading Laura's thoughts as they now move into a tribbing position.I like how she is recollecting trying to remember if she had tribbed with Shelley in the past.I would know!Plus, you show how ones thoughts can wander a little.Laura is contemplating and remembering how Shelley loves to be rammed fucked doggy style.Love how you bring the aural into the reminisces.Laura reflects on how beautiful a woman is as she squeals and cries out in shattering bliss.You reinforce how important hearing is in love making.I love thinking about how I am going to fuck a slut or how men are going to take me however they want as they fuck me like the total slut and whore I am for them.I so adore feeling their strength dominating me as they slam their big, thick cocks so hard and deep up my tight pussy and asshole.Feeling them jam their cocks down my throat as I stroke their nut sacks and seal my lips so tight on their shafts as they slide up and down my throat as they gurgle, moan and snarl for me feeling my throat massage their dickheads.

You so know how to move the fuck forward [Laura raised her face to Shelley's, sucking her lips before kissing her ravenously.  "Push your pussy into mine," she gasped, suddenly feeling their wet crotches meet.������� Shelley gasped and actually sagged briefly, almost imperceptibly, in Laura's arms, before digging her fingers into Laura's back and pushing her wet, warm pussy even more aggressively into Laura's.  "Oh . . . yes!" she gasped urgently.������ They kissed feverishly, and Laura could feel Shelley's damp nipples, damp from her own warm spittle, pushing into her own breasts, while Shelley stabbed her tongue deep into Laura's mouth, squirming and whimpering as they both pumped, faster, faster, pushing their aching wet cunts together, pumping, churning.] Again you show us the little things in fucks that make the journey so fucking rad and pleasurable and makes the orgasm so harrowing and womb rending.I so love to work your lips, wrestle your tongue wetly and then plunge my tonguet down your cawing throat making you hump helplessly into my thrusting body.Thank you for showing the little things.They you show actual communication between your lovers.To make a fuck flow smoothly you need this communication.It can be nonverbal with eye contact and motions but often we husk, murmur or moan our needs to make the fuck more perfect and you show this.I love how they are sitting and embracing as they jam and hump their sodden cunts into each other.I always love the "love clench" and I am thankful that one writer has this.Is so love to enfold my woman in my arms and her me as our tits mash and bellies wallow and in this position cunts hump lewdly into each other.I love how again you are showing the ramping up that occurs all along in sex.Each step taking you higher as your belly and thighs begin that delicious tightening that tells me again that my pussy or asshole or both are about to scald me senseless again with shattering ecstasy. You so show the totality of great lovemaking.They are embracing and clutching as tongues wrestle and plunge down throats.I can see their wallowing bodies.I so love to feel tits mash and nipples drag and poke hard into wallowing tits.Love again the detail of feeling salvia wet nipples on my tits or belly.I can truly say I have never read another author show this.Truly amazing.I so thank you for giving me Shelley stabbing her tongue down Laura's throat.When you give me such details I immediately bring in my recent experiences of such kissing and my pussy is getting wet and nipples rock hard as I remember Joann and Maria last night slamming their tongues down my throat in turn and raping my nipples trying to suck them off as they pulped my tits as I need it.How my tits were soaked in their spittle and soon enough my own sweat running in rivulets down my tits as their spit began to intermingle with my sweat binding us in renewed love.I have read stories that had like two sentences for the sex leading to the orgasm.Thus, no details.Here just telling me they are squirming and whimpering adds so much to the story because it is showing their rising need.This is so important to make it clear they are such hot lovers.You give the details and thus your sex is simply devastating when the orgasms get here just like in real life.I so love how you are again showing ramping.I get so tired of no ramping of hot fucking in other stories.They take away all the specialness of sex with their boring, bland writings.

Another thing I adore about your writing is the fact that your women don't stay glued in one position.With other authors once their characters assume a position the women stay in that position and never move.Often we don't move much during a phase of fucking but then again we also move a lot according to how the fuck is progressing.I love how you so perfectly capture the flow and variation of great sex.Here we hear Laura ask Shelley if she can cum from tribbing.I am always reading my angels bodies.But if I need to inquire of them how to better pleasure them I will ask and try to lead the fuck in ways I think will shatter them with crushing bliss.i again must say that you are the only author that ever shows this dynamic of women actually communicating to each other.How women always strive to bring their partner ultimate pleasure.I have often wondered why other female authors fail to show this.It is a rare women who is totally self absorbed like most men are.I am smiling when Shelley excitedly says she can cum from tribbing.Again I revel in the communication you have in your stories with Shelley telling Laura to fuck her harder with pure excitement in her voice.I so love putting desperation in my women's voices and knowing I put it there as they plead to me to fuck them harder, deeper and often meaner to take them to heaven yet again.Now you show how the fuck often morphs.They had been sitting tribbing and Laura pushes Shelley on her back and mounts her straddling her cunt and pelvis with her knees and jams her cunt down into Shelley's swollen, open cunt.I so adore the fact that you show changing positions in your stories.The passion is rising and Laura wants more leverage and tighter mating of their twats so she can really grind down.That is one reason I love tribbing so.By changing positions you can increase or decrease the amount of direct stimulation of one's cunt and clit.When sitting like they started, with the humping is more imprecise.You can sweep and get some clit rubbing or even direct clit to clit rubbing and one gags in helpless love and then you don't get the direct rubbing but that is great in itself.Not knowing how each sweep of our twats will rub and mash.How just having your vulva mashed and wormed around stimulates your clit from so many angles.How the V of the groin or a good rub right over your muff and clit makes your eyes bulge and womb flip in pure pleasure.Then moving to a position where you can really engage your cunts and just mash and grind your cunt meat and crush your clit into her clit or mound and just whimper in love as mounds grind and crush each other and soak each other's twats in hot love juice.That is why I so love rising up and throwing your calf on my shoulder and just grinding and sweeping my cunt down into yours as I crush our cunts into each other as clits drag and rake each other and our vulvas are all mashed and labia lips are crushed and dragged around stretching one's clitoral hood putting that pressure on your clit that makes you scream in helpless pleasure.I so love to watch women trib as I sit beside them and watch their cunts mash, grind and pulp each other as bodies jolt and judder in rising love and need.You show that total loving with Laura bending down to pulp tits with her hands and kiss Shelley savagely.I so love to totally overwhelm my sluts like this as I fill all her erogenous zones with flooding pleasure.�� I just adore trib and all its variations.Variations which only you bring to the reader.�� I am so bored with other authors not allowing their characters to touch each other like you show.They just suck, fingerfuck or trib without any other touching and exploring of sweaty, wanton bodies.They make their fucks sad where you put so much life and love into your fucks that it makes one giddy reading them.

Attention:Long Digression

One thing you do with your flood of details is allow me to be the voyeur that I so love in real life.I am there with Laura as she fucks her divine women.I just love to watch women fuck and soak it all in.I was at Frankie's dance studio working on loading some software a Tuesday afternoon.I had taken off a half day and was happy doing some IT stuff for her.I had on the security monitors the cameras keeping watch on the classes ogling the instructors and females taking classes.The afternoons tend to be more business but one never knows when you will see some snogging, heavy petting or hot hard fucking if I am lucky on the cameras or in person!It is summer time and I was seeing more teenagers doing day classes.De'shante was teaching one of her hip hop classes and I was loving looking at her and the women all sweaty.She had two guys in the class sweating too and I even ogled them some.After class I watched a cute blond teenager come up to De'shante and they were talking about the classes and steps and movements by their hand motions and body language.I love reading people's bodies.De'shante took her to one of the breakout rooms.I could now hear them and found out the cute teen's name was Jennifer.She was about five foot three and had cute barely b-cup titties jiggling as she moved in her braless leotard outfit.She seemed guileless and De'shante was all business as she put some music on and went through some routines and helped the girl get her hips in motion with more vigor and shake her cute butt.I was watching now intently hoping for some sex but thinking I was not going to get any.Tiffany was not coming onto De'shante and I think De'shante was playing it safe I guess.She kept her hands out of the no strike zone.

After about twenty minutes they were done and suddenly Tiffany told De'shante that she felt a tightness in her thigh and winced.I sat up and leaned closer to the monitor.De'shante paused and tisked and asked if the girl wanted her to massage the muscle to "make it feel better".I could see that De'shante was now very focused on the teen.The girl bit her lower lip and said yes shyly and sat on the small sofa and stretched out her legs leaning back.De'shante got between her legs and found out it was the left leg and started to massage the muscle with her expert fingers.The girl relaxed and her eyes lidded.After a few minutes of slow sensual massaging De'shante asked her if her leg felt better and the girl moaned softly "yesssssss".She then told De'shante that the muscle felt sore at her groin pointing to the V of her thigh and torso and asked De'shante to "make it feel better."I loved watching De'shante looking deep into Jennifer's eyes with now undisguised lust rising.She only hesitated a moment to move her hands up.I was getting hot watching De'shante's hands moving up and messaging up to the girl's groin and seeing her mound now humping up.My breath caught when De'shante boldly moved her hands up and gripped the girl's bottom and quickly pulled them down exposing her shaved mound and strong legs.All pretense was now gone and hot fucking was about to happen I excitedly saw.The girl sat up and peeled her top off hurriedly as De'shante stood and stripped.Nude they eyed each other as De'shante got on her knees and Tiffany leaned forward.I loved seeing her pale face and De'shante's light gold face tilt and lips lock and open wide and I could tell tongues were swirling hotly as they moaned and clenched each other mashing titties as hands stroked heating flesh.Tiffany called out softly "Make love to me De'shante."She husked back "I'm going to take you to heaven white girl.You ever fucked a nigger before?"Tiffany's eyes widened at the racial slur and nodded "no"."Once you go black you never go back" she crowed.They kissed heatedly again as De'shante pushed her back into the sofa and leaned down and siphoned her tits into her mouth stuffing almost all into her large mouth as she sucked voraciously and would back up to tongue lash and give hard short sucks on her areolas before swallowing deep into her mouth rubbing the nipple against the roof of her mouth I am sure as the girl thrashed and groaned gutturally.De'shante sucked so hard on the girls tits and popped her mouth off with wet sucks as Tiffany thrashed and moaned like a whore.She worked the girls tits and kissed up locking lips and devouring her mouth.Soon she was kissing down the girls heaving belly to paradise.

She settled between Jennifer's legs and pushed them out and drove her face deep into the girls pink pussy her labia lips engulfing De'shante's brown lips as she now lapped and licked up and down the girls slit making her jolt and judder.Tiffany planted a hand on top of De'shante's head and clutched as she moaned like a slut.The black woman worked her slit and then moved up and sucked in her clit with a hard suck and worked it through her lips and then sucked it in deeper and sucked on it with cheek hollowing sucks as Tiffany's head thrashed her face now sweating and hair becoming lank with sweat.De'shante worked two fingers into the girl's hungry twat and slow pumped her juicing quim and loved sucked on her clit.Tiffany ass was worming on the sofa and her other hand gripping the sofa edge to help her swirl her wet cunt into De'shante's mouth.I was naked now and masturbating to the hot show slowly working my aching cunt and titties.I could see the storm rising in the teenager's body as she began to spastically hump up into the black woman's mouth and grunted "suck it De'shante � god you are so beautiful � suck my white pussy" as she moaned and began to cry out.Suddenly she wailed and slammed back into the sofa and rocked forward both hands gripping the back of De'shante's head as she snuffled and sucked hard on the teenager's exploding clit.I was so happy seeing the full body spasms blasting the white girl with shattering ecstasy.Her body jackknifed forward only to slam back hard several times into the sofa back..Finally, the girl spent herself her womb shattered.She was leaning back mewling when De'shante moved up and locked lips kissing deeply their mouths mated so tight.I loved seeing Jennifer's nostrils flare as she sucked on De'shante's tongue soaked in her cunt nectars her head gently rocking as she suckled on De'shante tongue jammed deep in her mouth her lips glued to the black woman's tongue where it entered her lips.Gods this teenager was a pure slut whore after my own heart.

After a few minutes they were hugging and cooing and now Tiffany pushed De'shante down onto her back on the sofa and one foot on the floor and laid down on the sofa and moved her face forward and sucked in De'shante's clit into her mouth and began to munch and suck making De'shante cry out and immediately hump hard into the sixteen year olds mouth.I am so amazed at how skilled and passionate teenage girls are now in fucking.She was gripping De'shante's hips munching hard on black pussy.She would munch and suck and then flatten her tongue and begin to tongue stroke her pussy from her perineum to her clit and back down and then back up as De'shante gurgled and raggedly humped up."Eat me out you fucking goddamn Lilly white Bitch!" De'shante grunted out.Jennifer lapped and tongued hard her mouth making hot wet watery noises as she then sucked De'shante's clit with wet sucks that pulled her clit and popped off her turgid clit making the black slut's hips jolt and De'shante's head thrash and jolt up on her neck suddenly corded tight and rocking before slamming her head back into the sofa as she moaned in lost pleasure.I loved how she lowered her head and began to tongue the black woman's rosebud and then pushed her legs back opening her asshole for invading.She began to tongue fuck De'shante's asshole and soon had her tongue buried deep up her shit hole and French kissed her shit hole.De'shante growled and gyrated her ass into the teenager's devouring mouth.Jennifer now tongue fucking De'shante's asshole driving her tongue deep into the instructor's clenching rectum."Oh goddamn you eat good asshole Jennifer!" De'shante excitedly croaked.The teenager smiled getting a lip lock on the black woman's shit hole and wormed her tongue in deep I could see with her lamprey lock on De'shante's rosebud.She twisted her head and I could see her sucking in hard as her tongue flailed in De'shante's asshole.�� Getting her mouth full of shit juice and then moving her tongue up and burying her face in De'shante's twat and lapping with a tongue soaked in De'shante's ass.She worked both of De'shante's fuck holes with her pink tongue.She worked her slit and asshole for long minutes before sucking in her entire clitoral hood and deep throat sucking it in her mouth.Her head rocking, stretching out De'shante's cunt meat in her mouth as she munched it with her lips and slapping tongue her cheeks showed.De'shante now wailed and twisted right and left on the sofa her eyes looking wild with need.Tiffany wormed two fingers into De'shante's shit hole and pumped them hard twisting as she pumped.She pulled them out and plunged them deep into De'shante's twat and fucked her hard in her wet, sloshing, slurping cunt.She sucked with vicious sucks on her clit as her fingers pumped her pussy and then her asshole again.She worked back and forth with her pumping fingers working asshole and pussy for a minute before plunging deep in the other fuck hole.She had her fingers slamming up De'shante's ass and her mouth buried deep in her cunt the black woman's clit deep in her mouth sucking for all she was worth.Now both of De'shante's hands were clawing the teenager's scalp.Her hips pumped up hard into the girl's devouring mouth and plunging fingers up her ass."Oooohhhhhhhhh Goodddammmnnnnnnnnnn!" she screamed as her womb ruptured and she now went into full body convulsion that had her thighs rippling wildly and her arms jerking as she clawed Tiffany's scalp with spasming fingers.De'shante was so cute her pushed back legs kicking the air as her toes curled.Her pelvis leaping up off the sofa cushions in spastic humps of desperate need and love.She wailed and screamed her shattering pleasure.I was screaming along with De'shante as I masturbated to a crushing orgasm timing myself to cum along with De'shante.

She was very groggy after her cum and Tiffany moved up holding her fingers up soaked in shit juice.She sucked her index finger clean looking hard at De'shante and moaned when De'shante pulled her middle finger to her mouth and sucked it in cleaning sweet shit juice off it.They lazily kissed and cooed and stroked heated flesh.They murmured new love and listened to De'shante find out that Tiffany loved anal sex.Gods, a slut after my heart.After about five minutes, or so, Tiffany moved them to the floor and got in sixty-nine with her on the bottom.They were immediately attacking each other's twats with sucking and lapping mouths.De'shante had her head bent down sucking on pink teenage pussy.Tiffany was lapping up and down De'shante's slit.My camera angle showed me how she had the black woman's dark labia lips splayed out and was working her tongue up and down her slit from her clitoral hood up to her perineum and back and forth with fast strong strokes of her tongue.I loved how wet De'shante cunt was.She was latched onto Tiffany's clit and sucking while her head pumped stretching out her cunt meat with wet slurps before moving down and tongue fucking her wet fuck hole with loud obscene plunges of her tongue.After a few minutes De'shante was up on palms grinding back and down into Tiffany's teenage mouth as the girl clawed De'shante's taunt ass to help drive her cunt into her mouth.De'shante head was thrashing around then rocked back and she screamed as another orgasm ripped her womb to shreds.She jammed her cunt down spastically into Tiffany's face jamming her head into the floor mat.I know Tiffany loved the pain because she was gripping De'shante's ass in death grip and jamming down to help slam her cunt into her face.Her face was soaked in Nigger cum by the time De'shante collapsed on top of Tiffany but quickly recovered.She moved around and jammed her face into Tiffany's cunt and began to lap and suck wildly and soon had the teenager jackknifing and flipping hard through a devastating orgasm as guttural moans flowed out her spasming throat.

They were in heat now as Tiffany pulled De'shante up onto the sofa and leaned her body down across the sofa.De'shante's legs were up on the back of the sofa and her head on the edge of the sofa.Tiffany positioned her cunt over De'shante's mouth and lowered her body and humped hard into the black woman's mouth.Her cunt flared around De'shante's mouth.It is so hot watching a vulva bulge around the mouth devouring as De'shante tongued and sucked the succulent cunt meat riding over her mouth.I watched her extend her tongue and Tiffany now ran her cunt up and down burying it deep into her cunt and then running the stiff tongue over her rigid clit making her cry out in ecstasy.She humped and gyrated her cunt hole driving the tongue deep up her tight sixteen year old twat.I loved how active De'shante was with her mouth.She would lap up and down Tiffany's slit lapping her tongue up and down her slit and lashing the girl's bulging clit making her squeal.Then she would work her head sideways her mouth engulfed by Tiffany's vulva as her tongue wormed around deep in Tiffany's cunt hole and I would see her head still and rock back as I hear her slurp deep throat suck in cunt meat for munching and pulling on making the fair haired teenager thrash and caw her rising ecstasy.De'shante kept varying her sucking and lapping making Tiffany's legs quiver and her body jolt.De'shante tilted her head back to get her mouth clear of teenage cunt meat "Call me a Nigger Jennifer � call me a baboon�a fucking Koon".Jennifer stared down at her."It turns me on Jennifer�Do it�call me a Nigger Jennifer � curse me like the piece of shit I am" she husked.Jennifer reached down with one hand pulled De'shante's mouth back into her cunt and ground down gurgling out a hard moan."Suck my pink cunt Nigger! � suck it good you goddamn fucking Nigger!" she growled out as De'shante inspired was now lapping hard up and Jennifer' soaking wet slit.For another few minutes or so De'shante worked Jennifer's dripping snatch.Jennifer was grinding her cunt down wilder and wilder as her orgasm approached.Jennifer started to grind her small titties hard into her chest grinding her tits flat and mashing her little hard nipples.Then she would grip her tits in her hands and pulp with hard pulp squeezes as her head snapped forward and back as she cried out louder and louder.She was pulping her tits when her right hand shot down and gripped the back of De'shante's head and jammed it up hard into her spasming cunt."Suck it GODDAMN IT!Suck it you fucking NIGGER! � (her whole body now convulsing with hard tremors) Suck Suck Suck � Suck Nigger! �"Unngghmmmnnghiieee! � unhhh � unnnhhh � ANNRRNNNNGGGHHHOOOOWWWWNNNGGGGGG!" she gave a full throated scream of shattering ecstasy.Her body convulsed so hard as her legs almost folded as she ground her cunt so hard.I loved looking down at her nipples seeing her little nipples fully engorged and rock hard.I love it when most women orgasm their nipples get so fully engorged and rock hard and they get that cute light color on the end of their nips.Even black women's nipples get lighter colored on the tips when they orgasm as a rule.I so to love see this and pouring on the heat to take them over the precipice into shattering ecstasy as they scream and jackknife wildly.De'shante rocked her head sucking with cheek hollowing sucks and then backed off when Jennifer's clit got sensitive as Jennifer now pushed with her hand on De'shante's forehead to get her to take it easy.De'shante now gently lathed her tongue up and down the teenager's spent slit.

They again laid down on the sofa and stroked tired flesh and loved cooed.After about five minutes De'shante got up and went to a small stand and opened the bottom draw and pulled out an anal glass dildo and a string of four 1 � inch anal beads.She handed them to Jennifer who smiled.She quickly got De'shante on her knees facing the sofa and pushed her down her little titties mashed into the sofa cushions.Jennifer put her toys by De'shante and got on her knees.She smiled and ran her hand underneath De'shante and began to rub her muff as her face mashed into De'shante's ass crack and started a lapping motion her tongue working the woman's asshole rimming her out as De'shante began to coo and hitch.Jennifer lapped and then began to pump her head working De'shante's bung hole seeking access into her shit hole once more.Her hand that had been jerking De'shante came up and Jennifer's hands clenched De'shante's ass cheeks and pulled her taunt buns apart and I could now see her tongue starting to penetrate De'shante's ass.I was masturbating furiously again watching.Soon Jennifer's tongue was sinking deep into De'shante's ass.I loved watching Jennifer drive her tongue so hard and deep and then she would mash her face into her ass crack and keep it buried as she worked her tongue deep in the black woman's ass.De'shante's face was slashing with pleasure and she ran her hand to her pussy and began to rub her muff.Jennifer worked De'shante's asshole for another few minutes when she reached down and grabbed the anal dildo and pushed it all the way to the handle up De'shante's asshole.She started to pump the glass dildo hard and fast the ribs jabbing the sphincter with constant friction as the dildo was slammed into her shit hole over and over.De'shante was shuddering and gibbering as her asshole was pounded and she rubbed her muff furiously.Jennifer was stroking De'shante's body with her free hand.We both could see that De'shante was close."Cum for me Nigger! � Cum you goddamn Nigger!"This made De'shante squeal and undulate harder jamming her ass back into Jennifer's now savage thrust of the glass dildo into her butt hole.I loved how her hand slapped into her ass crack so hard and made beautiful music with each slam into De'shante's ass.De'shante's head rocked back on her now stiff neck and juddered hard."Aaaaaiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeee!" She screamed so loud as her fuck holes exploded and scalded her soul with shattering bliss as her body had full body spasms and her head at first rocked back hard and then she started to slam her face into the sofa cushion over and over as continued to wail in ecstasy.

I had timed my orgasm to explode along with De'shante's and we both hitched and sighed through our devastating orgasms and blissful strong aftershocks.Jennifer had pulled out the anal dildo and stuffed it into her mouth and moaned cleaning off De'shante's ass cream and told her slut how "sweet" her asshole tasted. The beauty of the female body was now evident.We cum so often and so fucking hard too!The slut was not done with De'shante.She got down on her ass and scooted back her face upturned and latched her mouth onto De'shante's cunt like a lamprey.Jennifer using the sofa as a backstop for her head as she sucked voraciously on De'shante's swollen pussy as her tongue sank deep up her fuck hole and move up slowly to suck hard on De'shante's clitoral hood with hard long sucks.De'shante began to hump into the mouth devouring her quim.She kept murmuring how much she loved what Jennifer was doing to her pussy.I could see De'shante's juices running down Jennifer's lower face and down her neck as she sucked and lapped.After five minutes or so she reached around and found the anal beads.She kept sucking and using feel only slowly pushed the four thick beads into De'shante's asshole making her squeal as each one was pushed into her asshole.Jennifer gripped De'shante's ass and worked her swirling groin harder into her face as she sucked with expert skill.Soon again, De'shante was ramping up.She was now jamming her cunt down into Jennifer's face who was snuffling and as she sucked hard on De'shante's distended clit with hard short noisy sucks."Suck my cunt Bitch � unhgggg unnggggg � Suck it you White Bitch!"Jennifer surged her head and sank her mouth as deep into her twat as she could and deep throat sucked on her clit.""Ungghh Auunnnggghhhhh � GODDAMMNNNNNNIIITTTTT you fucking WHORE! � Auungghiinnnieeeee!"�� Her body went into convulsions that made her whole body spasm.Again she started slamming her face into the sofa still screaming.Jennifer moved her hand up and found the pull ring on the anal beads and pulled out the beads in a quick rhythm out De'shante's spasming asshole." ANNGGHIIIEMMNGGEEEE!� ANNGGHIIIEMMNGGEEEE!" De'shante wailed as a second orgasm exploded on top of the first orgasm.Her body bucked slamming her cunt into Jennifer's hungry mouth.She jammed her face into the sofa and wallowed her face and then turned her face to the side and drooled her eyes showing her stunned condition.Jennifer backed off when she sensed De'shante's clit was now on hyper condition.She sat up and slowly lowered each anal bead into her mouth and worked it all around in her mouth cleaning them each with lots of obscene noises and happy moans.

De'shante slinked off the sofa with slut eyes and embraced Jennifer and they kissed deeply tongues wrestling hard I could see by their working cheeks and mashed mouths.After a few minutes of kissing and grinding Jennifer got up and went to the stand and looked in the drawer and looked up pissed "There is no fucking strap-on.I want you to fuck me in the ass!I want you to be the first Nigger to fuck me in the ass De'shante!" she whined.De'shante smiled softly at her and her love for the teenage so clearly on display."God I love it when you call me a Nigger Jennifer." De'shante moaned back.She softly murmured "I can still fuck you in the ass better than any cock?"Jennifer looked at her curiously and De'shante helped up her fist and kissed it looking hard at Jennifer.I had to smile when Jennifer croaked "Oh god."Her bosses and I have totally addicted De'shante to deep anal fisting.De'shante patted the sofa and Jennifer walked over and got her torso on the sofa and her ass presented for exploitation.Her initial shock over, Jennifer showed her sluttiness with her ass swirling in love and need.Gods I love how the Internet and porn have made teenagers so open for all the ways that women can love each other.De'shante now mirrored Jennifer earlier burying her face in her ass and soon plunging her tongue deep and hard into the teenager's hungry asshole.Her shit hole so tight on her tongue.De'shante moaned and groaned along with Jennifer eating sweet asshole.De'shante murmuring how good Jennifer's ass tasted.She then brought up her hand and sank her middle finger into the teenager's asshole.Jennifer's head rocked and looked back and moaned how good it felt.De'shante smiled kissing her ass and pumped her butt and soon worked two more fingers into the girl's ass and worked them in and out and twisted them slowly as Jennifer pumped her ass back into the fingers invading her ass.

De'shante worked her ass slowly working in her little finger and then thumb after another few minutes working the girl's shit hole as Jennifer groaned gutturally and a few times cried out when a sudden spike of pained pleasure ripped her boy.De'shante has dainty hands so the invasion was not overly large.She kissed the girl's ass and lower back her other hand now working the girl's cunt.Jennifer was moaning and chuffing as De'shante slowly twisted her hand down until her knuckles were working the teenager's rosebud.Jennifer looked back suddenly "I don't think I can take your fist � it is too big � unnngggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr". She cried out as De'shante jammed her hand forward and sank her fist into the girl's shit hole.Jennifer's head sagged down as she moaned and softy chuffed.I watched De'shante twist her hand and I know she was slowly forming her fist.She started to pump he hand sinking her fist three or four inches into her bung hole.She would pump it and then jam back hitting her sphincter hard making Jennifer cry out in pleasure.�� De'shante then pulled her hand out the girl's clinging asshole.I loved how it glistened with shit juice.De'shante licked it clean as Jennifer croaked how nasty De'shante was.De'shante then worked her hand back in and pumped the girl's shitter and sank her fist slowly deeper into the teenager's ass.About six inches now up the girl's ass.De'shante pulled her hand out and then fisted Jennifer's hair with her other hand and pulled her roughly around and smeared her shit juice soaked hand on the teeanger's face.I loved Jennifer's whorish groans and the way she tilted her head back to get fully soaked in shit juice.They then kissed heatedly and De'shante licked Jennifer's face half clean and pushed her back around and down Jennifer's face still smeared in ass cream like a total whore.Several more times De'shante fisted Jennifer's asshole working six inches in and jamming her sphincter before pulling out and totally soaking Jennifer's face in shit juice.Now she did not clean any off and Jennifer's face and hair were totally smeared and soaked in her asshole.

Now De'shante went for her brass ring.She worked her hand in and formed her fist and started to pump the girl's sixteen year old ass.She then pulled her fist against the girl's sphincter and gripped the girl's ass cheek with her free hand hard.She lunged her fist up the girl's ass until her elbow was jamming the girl's ass."Unnngggggghhhhhhhhhhh!" Jennifer grunted and moaned so hard.Her face had such a slutty look on it as she kept her ass in place for deep, hard anal fisting.Jennifer was so beautiful I watched De'shante's golden forearm sink up her shit hole.The way her bolted jolted and her head rocked as she moaned so hard her face a picture of deep anal induced pleasure of slashes and half rolled back eyes.De'shante sank her arm up the girl's ass and then slowly slunk it back down to her sphincter and then lunging it deep again and again."Oh goddamn De'shante� I love feeling your fist in my belly � unnngghhhhhhhh � oh god oh god � you're such a Fucking Nigger De'shante."De'shante smiled at the racial slur and slammed her fist all the way up the girl's ass twisting her fist as she lunged.After a few long minutes or so of deep anal fisting I could see that Jennifer was on the way to heaven.She had started to rub her muff hard and was chuffing and begging De'shante "Keep fisting my asshole Nigger!Oh god, fist me deep you Goddamn Fucking Nigger!"De'shante lunged her fist hard into the girl's ass her elbow jamming her asshole hard with plunge up her shitter.Suddenly Jennifer screamed full throated screams of unbridled ecstasy.Her body flipped and jackknifed wildly as De'shanted continued to lung her fist up the girl's asshole to prolong the girls ecstasy.I could see a second orgasm explode out her spasming asshole.The girl simply wailed and flopped anew as she was shattered with bliss.She finally started to come down from her orgasms and begged for De'shante to keep her fist buried in her ass.De'shante kissed Jennifer's ass and lower back while stroking the girl's sweaty back and ribs with her free hand as strong aftershocks made the teenager's breath catch and strong tremors shake her hard as she loved cooed to her new Nigger lover."Goddamn, you made my asshole cum so hard De'shante" Jennifer cooed to her new lover.�� De'shante nipped her ass and crowed "Once you go black you never go back.You been fucked right Cracker!"After a few minutes she finally cooed that De'shante could take her fist out.I loved watching Jennifer's body clench and then shudder hard as De'shante slipped her fist out the girl's stretched sphincter.Jennifer slowly slunk off the sofa and they embraced with De'shante again soaking the teenager's face and hair in shit juice whipping her arm and hand all over the girl's face and hair as Jennifer held her face still up tilted and moaned "Oh god yessssss! � soak my face in shit baby!".After De'shante finished soaking the teenager's face in shit juice they kissed deeply.Then De'shante slowly licked Jennifer's totally shit juice soaked face clean.It was so obscene the way she tenderly cupped Jennifer's sixteen year old face and used broad, long, slow strokes of her pink tongue to lick the shit cream off Jennifer's innocent looking face.They purred as they tiredly dressed and went to shower.I was so happy to watch new love and having masturbated to their new love

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I have talked about how you so capture the sounds of fucking.This is so true but I have focused on the communication of women during the fuck and how you so capture the end game.But reading the next part it hit me how you capture the sounds of the sex itself.By that I mean the sounds of lovemaking itself. The sounds of rutting.I love the communication of women and how men command me but there are long stretches where we are just fucking.Even the more quiet persons still make the sounds of the rut.The sounds of soft moans, groans, huffing, whinniesand cawing.The sounds you make as you swirl your cunt into a shaft plunging deep into your belly.The sounds you and your lover make as you work your lover.The sounds of het fucking or tribbing really lead to this.Even when you are going down on your woman you murmur and snuffle as you dine on succulent, soaking wet cunt meat.�� Lesbian sex is often more sedate than het sex but you still make those short, staccato sounds of pleasure.Needless to say, other authors can't capture the sounds of sex during the interaction of lovers they definitely don't capture the sounds of the rut like you do.Those short sounds and moaned words that only seem able to capture ["Unghhh!  Ungghh!"������� "Oh!  Laura!  Oh!"������� "Ungghh!"������� "Oh!  Oh dear!"]It does not take make much to capture this dynamic.By giving us this, we then supply our personal rutting sounds and the sounds our lovers make when they rut.This allows us to marry our memories to your story and make the story so much more.You know how to draw the reader into the story.�� You capture the sounds of the fuck itself and this draws the reader into the story.When we remember the sounds of rutting we then remember the way our body are moving and hitching during the rut.The rhythmic humping or swirling of ones groin into your lover's ministrations.The way our heads thrash or lull.The way our tits are swirling or sloshing.This allows us to bring it all into the fuck.By doing this you have the reader primed for the love kill when it is delivered to Laura or her to her angel and, thus, vicariously the reader.How can one not feel their cunt spasm and get so wet and nipples throb so hard reading this after being setup so expertly [Laura saw the spark of Shelley's orgasm deep in her eyes a split second before Shelley herself realized it was piercing her.  The next few seconds were a violent maelstrom of thrashing, groaning, and loud cries as they collided in a perfect storm of coming.  ��������"Anngghiiiee . . . ohhhggmmnn . . . ahhhnnnggiiieee!" Shelley erupted in wild screams, her lovely svelte body surging and straining up into Laura's down-thrusting hips, mashing her pussy into Laura's and gurgling as wave after wave of her climax wrenched her.������� Laura was equally overpowered by her own orgasm, which clenched her in a hot, quick fist of killing pleasure before releasing her to fall forward onto Shelley's panting body.  "Unngghhhh . . . oh god . . . annngghhhhh!" she groaned, still feeling the popping and flashing in her womb and pussy as the trailing spasms diminished.]Sigh, this is fucking perfection.i am so in love with your vocalizations of women having strong, mind blowing orgasms.This was the first thing that captured my avid fandom when I discovered your stories.Those first chapters that I discovered with Karen and Rick just totally blew me away.I had never found any stories with dead on sounds of orgasm and hard rutting and here I was being crushed with sounds I didn't even know I was missing at the time.I went insane masturbating my poor little kitty to total fucking exhaustion.I was in heaven reading chapter after chapter of divine fucking and totally hot sounds of fucking.Here we are at chapter 332 and I am still reveling in hot love making and totally awesome vocalizations of divine orgasms as Laura and Shelley take each other to nirvana.Of course I am blown away by the spot on vocals but I love how you frame them.The way you use the English language.Other authors really just tell us that their women are cumming hard and that is it.They don't frame the orgasm.You use words like "maelstrom of thrashing; loud cries; erupted in wild screams; svelte body surging and straining; clenched her in a hot, quick fist of killing pleasure."I know I highlighted these words earlier but I wanted to show clearly how these phrases show a harrowing orgasm.When other authors just say she cummed hard and you give me this then nothing else really needs to be said.They imply while you show me her devastating orgasm that allows me live it with her that makes me so happy, especially my pussy!Plus, you show the pulsations of the orgasm.I so love orgasms because I just get pummeled with wave after wave of shattering pleasure.I just feel heaven in my veins as I just get seared with shattering ecstasy over and over as my womb and or shit hole explode boiling ecstasy into my veins throttling me with pure fucking bliss for so long as my body convulses wildly and I often flip almost out of control as I writhe and buck in helpless pleasure.Then you give me those divine little details. You tell the reader that Laura saw the flash of orgasm in Shelley's eyes just before it hits her.I so know that!!!I so love to be looking in a slut's eyes and see this.I really focus on this when I am in position and I have seen her body tensing and her vocalizations reach that next level and I know she is hanging on the precipice.You don't always see it but so often you do.I feel myself falling so much deeper in love when I get to see this and almost feel like I am sharing in her orgasm I am giving her.Three days back I drove over and picked up Roshanda and Chantel and drove them back over to Dodie and Frankie's house.They spent the next days at their house as Dodie and Frankie and some of the staff at Frankie's dance studio fucked them blind day and night.We did straight lesbo for the first session and then Frankie took Chantel to another bedroom.Dodie and I pounded Roshanda with our big dicks fucking her hard and deep.She had two orgasms and now we doing her dp so hard.We were in classic dp as she straddled me and I pounded her tight pussy with short hard thrusts anchoring her down for Dodie's punishing ass rape.I was in heaven feeling her body lurch forward and her thick nipples jabbing and digging into my full tits.Her sweaty body sliding hard over mine her belly sliding over mine as I loved the friction it made.I love this position because her face is so close to mine as we do dp or reverse missionary.I loved seeing Dodie rise up and move up to our heads and see her knees beside me as she pushed her dick down and watching Roshanda swallow her dick so greedily and suck hard as her head bobbed and twisted.A few times Dodie pushing her dick harder and I opened my mouth wide and moaned swallowing her dickhead soaked in Roshanda's shit juice and bobbing with short bobs to clean her dick head my lips tight on her dick.Then letting Roshanda finish cleaning. Now I could see the tension building in Roshanda's body as she whinnied loudly and her head juddered and jerked her eyes wide looking directly into my eyes in deep love.I could see Dodie behind gritting her teeth and her body lurching hard to pile drive her dick balls deep up the thirteen year's old asshole.Then I saw it.I call it the "flare".She has midnight eyes but I could still see it so clearly.Her eyes pulsed and flared and then bulged open wide.I reveled in hearing her "Unnggghhhhhiiiiiieeeee � Unnggghhhhhiiieeeeee � Arrggghhuuaaaaaaa!" so gutturally.Her body was bucking and convulsing wildly.Dodie was slapping her ass hard filling the room with the sound giving Roshanda the pain she craves during her orgasms.I was spiking my dick into her flooding pussy that was soaking my groin, thighs and belly in her pulsing steamy cum.We pounded her hard to prolong her orgasm.Dodie growled and chuffed and gritting out "Cum again you fucking NIGGER!" as she slammed her dick as hard as she could into Roshanda's teenage ass.I could see Dodie's body arching and her sweaty lank hair jerking hard as she coiled her body to pull her dick out the girl's shit hole and then plunge it fully up her ass the sound of her sweaty thighs slapping hard into Roshanda's ass cheeks making her body jolt forward up my sweaty body.Roshanda had weakened her head sagged down on my shoulder but she suddenly surged up on her hands her fingers clawing into the sheets her body tensing again as we slammed our cocks into her black ass and cunt.Dodie leaned forward a little and gripped her shoulder with one hand to jam her back and the other fisted her hair and jerked back into slamming thrusts."Yeah, that's right you fucking Brillo Pad � you fucking Field Nigger! .. take my white dick up your ass Bitch!"I chuffed "Cum Roshanda you fucking black cow � cum you fucking Jig�you fucking worthless Nigger!"Her eyes flared again and she screamed "Ungghhh!Unnnggghhh! � AUUNNGGGHHHH!  AUUNNGG�" her screamed choked off as my hands now wrapped around her throat and squeezed off her breath.Her eyes bulged so wide as her right hand clawed at my strangling grip and I jerked her head as now her womb and asshole exploded yet again as her body convulsed so wildly as her body slammed up and down as another orgasm exploded on top of her current orgasm.Her head thrashed and her body bucked and her eyes rolled completely back and spasmed so hard.I choked her with hard squeezes of my fingers as her body convulsed and she slowly began to lose consciousness as her head lulled over and tongue spasmed and eyes continued to spasm in their sockets.A hard spasm shook her cruelly and she passed out.I finally stopped strangling her as she gasped and juddered as she rasped in harsh breaths and convulsed still lost in the haze of semi-unconsciousness as she started to lift into that twilight of almost consciousness that floods the brain with pure fucking ecstasy as you come back to full consciousness.Her mouth open drooling all over my shoulder and her eyes spasming and rolling around lost in the heavens of a devastating womb and asshole shredding orgasm.She finally regained full consciousness and just moaned and cried out as her ruined asshole pulsed and still clenching cunt pulsed out strong aftershocks to her stunned brain and soul.She moaned and cooed.We finally pulled our dicks out and got on our knees as she still hitched and shook with random aftershocks.Dodie gripped her hair and pulled her up roughly until she was on her knees.She blearily focused on Dodie's dick soaked in her shit cream.She smiled that big smile that only Roshanda has and bent down opening her mouth wide and moaned so long as she sucked her shit off Dodie's cock that had a shit hole ring near the base of it that Roshanda cleaned off with long strokes of her tongue.She finished cleaning Dodie's cock and moved over to mine and looked up "God, I love the taste of my shit on Dodie's white cock � I'm such a fucking Nigger Barbara � god I love how you choked me so hard, so good Barbara�you white Bitch!" she husked with a smile in her voice and eyes.She lowered her head and swallowed my cockhead and began to bob and slurp it clean of her thick cunt cream as she moaned and gurgled her pleasure sucking our cocks so clean.Gods, it was so sweet how latter that night it was Roshanda hands around my throat strangling me till I passed out as my womb and asshole simply kept exploding scalding ecstasy into my veins as I bucked wildly.I was pinned down my by Roshanda cock slow pumping my flowing twat and Dodie raping my asshole.I began to shriek as my womb and asshole exploded with shattering pleasure.I was flipping convulsively by belly grinding down on Roshanda's sweaty belly up on my palms my head thrashing hard.Roshandareached up to choke me as she spiked her cock up my flooding pussy.I was crying out and suddenly it choked off as her fingers strangled me cutting off all air as my eyes bulged hard.I reached up with one hand and tore at her clutching fingers which only made her grip harder totally chocking me.I felt my body jerking and spasming wildly as a second orgasm exploded out of nowhere.I slammed my belly into hers over and over.I was being pummeled senseless by with shattering pleasure exploding out my shit hole and hot pulsing clit.My mouth working as I soundlessly screamed my pleasure my tongue flailing spastically as I choked for breath.I started to get tunnel vision form lack of oxygen.One gets so hyper aware when the body instinctively fights to stay conscious.I could feel Dodie pulling her dickhead partially out my sphincter and the rough feel of her dickhead punching out my clutching sphincter and then the screaming pleasure of her cock slamming fully up my shit hole her sweaty thighs slamming my ass making me jolt forward over Roshanda's sweaty body.I felt her dickhead bumping over Roshanda's dickhead deep in my belly making my belly and womb spasm hard each time their dickheads jolted over each other.I could feel each finger strangling me so hard.I was hyper sensitive.I looked into Roshanda's thirteen year old eyes and seeing pure excitement and love as she squeezed harder making me black out as I felt another massive convulsion shaking me, scalding my very soul with piercing, scalding bliss as I slipped into unconsciousness.Coming to as my body was still cumming weakly.I felt my sightless eyes rolling around and eyelid fluttering as I raggedly heaved in breath, drooling heavily all over Roshanda's neck as my open mouth cawed out groans as I heaved for breath feeling piercing pleasure as now heavenly aftershocks throttled me.Roshanda meanly fisted my hair pulling my head up.That focused my vision as I whinnied in pain.I looked down into her dark eyes with pure love.She moved my mouth over and brought it down as I now gagged and felt my eyes again roll back and spasm so hard as she took my mouth with her expert tongue wrapping around mine and slithering like a serpent making more strong aftershocks ripple out my tired belly.So much pure love binding us.

You have given us a great sex scene and now you show that sweet post coital time.I do see this with other stories at times but it is just usually cuddling.�� That is great of course but they never show the sweet bonding that occurs after great sex.Other authors know the parts of relationships but they just don't show how the parts work.How they fit together.How great fucks bind souls together and the little moments and post coital time glue it all together.Our lovers are cuddling of course but you give us sweet details.Shelley shows her jealousy a little commenting about how lucky "Makira" is.That is cute and endearing how she can't quite get the unusual name correct.I like how Laura gently deflects and redirects the conversation.I too have to do this with new lovers at times.I make it clear that i have my archangels and we can share great moments and share each other but my inner heart belongs to others.That is why I love sharing my newbies with others to show them the world I know and cherish.To give and receive love freely.I do wish that Shelley would fuck more.I so love opening new worlds to women who have been sexually repressed or just don't know.They are like little girls in the candy store as the discover great sex with my other angels and sometimes my cocksmen pile driving their big dicks deep into her screaming and writhing body as they pound orgasms out her exploding cunt and shredding asshole.We find out that Shelley and Laura have consumed each other in about five minutes.I call that taking the edge off as raw wanton lust has us fucking like starving tigers bringing down their prey and consuming ravenously.Getting my clit settled down for more hot fucking and not having that edge to make the fucking longer and more intense.I love the sweet embrace of post coital time [She began making up for lost time with her insatiable mouth.  Shelley was still on her back, with Laura slumped loosely forward on her, and their legs were still entangled, their wet crotches close but now less urgently glued together.  Laura kissed her neck and shoulders and throat, and her little puffed up shiny scar again.������� "Can't keep your lips off it, can you," Shelley giggled softly.  "Katie Couric, eat your heart out.  Laura loves my scar."������� "It's just the thing that makes you perfect, you know," Laura purred, now disentangling their bodies so that she could get her mouth on other parts of Shelley's delicious flesh, so smooth and brown, so damp with the sweat of their recent exertions.]Sigh, I so love the full body contact you show here.I love to feel your weight lying on me as we kiss languidly in love and our tits are mashing and bellies wallowing.I really love the detail of intertwined legs that help pull bodies tight as sweaty bodies slip and slide.Then you show that total body loving I so adore.I get so tired of not seeing this from other authors.I love to kiss your whole body and you are the only author to show this.I get so tired of reading only the lips, nipples and pussy being kissed in other stories.They miss so much and rob the reader the pleasure of totally exploring your woman's body.Like the scar worship anew.I love worshipping the things that make you unique.When you do this you make women go limpid and so yielding for you.I will worship you totally.I have gotten so many booty holes and sweet atm and a2p cherries by totally loving my newbie sluts and soon having them begging me to deflower their tight assholes with my total loving and worship.Then the little compliments which is part of the total body loving.I make love to your body and mind which captures your soul.I am so happy to find one protagonist who makes love like I do.I love to compliment my sluts and see them preen and puff up with pride as their shoulders square just that little bit and they give me that big goofy smile.Love the detail of the sweat filming Shelley's brown skin.I so love to lick and kiss up your sweat and slide our sweaty bodies together as tits and pussies grind against pressing bodies.�� Gods I love kissing and worshiping black women and their so dark bodies.

You now show how with women especially you can get such a change of pace.This is again like life.I am they type of girl when I get going I hate to have cool off and slow down like Shelley wants now.I may not it like and will try to keep the fuck flowing but I am easy in the end.I will mentally roll by eyes and huff and puff and then follow my angel if she really wants to digress.For me this is sort of getting the Honey-Do list Saturday morning and finding out they really need it done today.Why didn't you tell me earlier so I could plan things.Geez, that really steams me.You show Laura [She waved a hand in front of her face like a fan.  This made her marvelous breasts jiggle, and Laura could not keep her hands, or her notorious mouth, off them.  For several hot seconds she sucked Shelley's large brown nipples into wet stiff cones again.]Laura is doing what I like to do; pour on the heat to make my slut putty in my hands.I am so oral.I also love titties and I can just see Shelley's tits jiggling and how my mouth would water and I would be devouring them like Laura here.I so love to grip tits like Shelley's and pulp them in my strong hands and sometimes slap hard back and forth as my slut whimpers and writhes.Working them hard and then stuffing deep into my mouth as I deep throat love suck and tongue bat as my slut whimpers and cry outs in shocking pleasure.I love how you use language to add to the story.Laura being "notorious" tells the reader just how good she is with her mouth.She is a superstar like I like to think I am.I make women whimper and men groan with fierce pleasure when I go down on them.Plus, you give us the small details that I so love reading.You tell the readers how Shelley's nipples are again fully erect and ready for hot sucking.You show the reader how the loving affects your women and I get so tired not getting this with other authors.Like I say you show how lovemaking is not scripted.With other authors once something has started it will be finished.I think most people are like this but your woman gets to have a say and Shelley does here.I see that Shelley has a little of the exhibitionist in her.She takes Laura out on her deck in the nude.She then tells Laura about a man a little way off with a telescope that likes to look at her nude body when she displays it.I do not seek out such situations but I don't mind if people see me being fucked like happens at Celeb and Joshua's apartment sometimes.You then put that little bit of humor into the story that makes me smile.Shelley has seen some slasher movie it seems and imagines the voyeur coming down and killing her.I can see her eyes big as she tells Laura her dark fantasy.I am too practical for such fantasizes and have to smile when some angel or another of mine has these thoughts.You add to the humor of a cold beer dampening the mood when Laura wants to kiss and the cold can coming against her skin makes her gasp and jump.These are the moments that are not all that funny at the moment but when you remember them later you can see the humor with a smile.This long interlude really brings out the difference between men and women,.Men never delay the sex and hot fucking.I had not had a chance to fuck Al alone.I had fucked him with Hillary and Odessa and few times at Celeb and Joshua's pad during a fuck fest.We had texted and I sent him some nude photos to let him know my intentions and I smiled getting some pictures of his rigid ten inch cock back.We agreed to meet two nights later and he treated me to a nice dinner at a high end restaunt.We just had a nice time and I flirted shamelessly.We got back to his house and as soon as the door closed he took me in his arms and kissed me deeply his thick, long tongue sliding down my throat making me instantly wet and my nipples getting so hard.We hurriedly undressed and I loved the raw hunger I saw in his eyes as he devoured my swaying tits and bald cunt inflaming us with my thick musk.I was about to fall to my knees to suck his cock into my mouth.He took my arm and led me to the sofa and sat me down and settled between my legs and bent in.My head jammed back as she sucked my cunt meat into his mouth and started to suck hard on my rigid clit and worked up and down my slit snuffling as he devoured my labia lips and sucked in my inner petals and munched on them.I cried out in pleasure as he sucked my cunt so good.I love men who love pussy.I find men are not subtle or sublime in their pussy eating but focused like a laser in devouring your swollen cunt and snuffling loudly as they do.They may not use their fingers like I wish they would and are single minded but it is nice to have your cunt devoured by a male lion in heat.I was gurgling and humping hard into his dark black face and he started to tongue fuck me hard as I drove my cunt into his pistoning head my hands now clawed into his scalp.His mouth moved and sucked my entire upper cunt into his mouth and stretched it as his mouth deep sucked and his tongue was madly slapping my clit.I screamed with all my might as my womb exploded and I flipped wildly and bucked out of control as my belly spasmed so hard as full body spasms rocked my soul.I folded forward and slammed back into the sofa over and over as scalding waves of bliss throttled me.I screamed several more times as my cunt soaked his face in my steamy cunt nectars my hands grinding his mouth into my spasming out of control clit.

I was spent when the wrenching spasms finally faded into delightful aftershocks that made me gurgle and spasm softly over my whole body.I was groggy as he got me on my knees on the floor and fisted my hair and poked my mouth with his bulbous black dick head.I was still stunned and he gripped his shaft at the base and started to dick whip my face hard as I cried out in pain and quickly recovered.He so knows by now I love to be totally dominated by my male lovers.I know my face was marked with his hard whacks of his cock across my face.He again jammed his dick into my lips and I was ready and swallowed it and immediately began to bob hard.I sucked and undulated my head with twisting turns sucking his cock with all my skill.I sucked and bobbed for several minutes and then he led me to the sofa and I straddled him as he sat down my knees on the sofa beside his hips.I guided his cock to my slit and rubbed it up and down and then positioned his bulbous dickhead at my cunt hole and gagged feeling him push his cock deep up my tight, slippery cunt.I moaned feeling his ten inches slide up my dripping snatch.He immediately started to pump his shaft hard into my belly and gripped my tits and pulped them and wolfed down my aching nipples.I humped and loved feeling my body jolt as he up slammed his cock into my womb over and over.I dismounted twice to suck my juices off his cock and had my feet on the floor and was slamming down as he slammed up our sweaty bodies slapping hard.I watched my tits flop and roll around as they dripped sweat and felt that first delicious tension forming in my belly.I cried out to Al to fuck me harder and he gripped my hips to really slam me down as I gripped his shoulders for support and swirl my hips to impale my cunt on his savagely upthrusting prick.My head whipped back and I wailed as my womb yet again exploded and spasmed wildly.I bucked and twisted as my head thrashed and I groaned deep in my chest as wave after wave shattering bliss destroyed me with shattering pleasure.I was stunned again as he got me laid down on the sofa as he got spoon and lifted my upper leg.He barked at me "Pull your Saltine ass open for my black dick Bitch!"I groaned deep in my chest hearing him racially demeaned me making my belly spasm in want.I moaned reaching back and sinking my fingers into my ass cheek and pulled hard opening my ass crack showing him my spasming brown rosebud.He wasted no time and pushed his thick dickhead into my sphincter and started to push hard as it resisted for a few seconds and then jammed up my rectum.I gagged again and my head lulled down as he pumped my shitter.I gibbered feeling him work my sphincter slack and feeling his bulbous cockhead sliding deep into my belly as his entire shaft was pumped in and out my asshole.Soon he was pounding my shit hole so good packing my shit hard.I was moaning feeling my tits flop and swirl with his thighs slapping my ass hard.He pushed me forward slipping his dick out my spasming asshole.He pushed my hip and I rolled off the couch and pivoted and lifted his dick soaked in my ass twitching on his stomach."I looked him in the eye "I love sucking my shit off black cock Al.I'm a total Nigger Digger ba-bee!" I husked as I lowered my head and swallowed his dick soaked in my shit cream.I moaned as I bobbed slowly sucking hard and rising up to butterfly his dickhead making him moan and groan as I then dove on his dickhead and supper sucked as I slide six inches into my throat slowly and then pushed down hard burying his dick into my throat all the way feeling his bulbous dickhead bulging my throat as I slow stroked it up and down my throat."Goddamnnnnnnn you fucking slut!" he love snarled as I did slow deep throat strokes up and down my gullet.I mashed my nose into his sweaty stomach each time I slide his black dick down my throat.I cawed out spit when his dickhead slide to my lips, letting it drool down his shaft as I worked his dickhead with my clenched lips as I rotated on it sucking fiercely.Then I slide his cock fully down my throat feeling him stiffen in pleasure feeling my throat massaging his cock and bulbous dickhead.Over and over I deep throated his beautiful black dick.Soon I was back on sofa as he pounded my asshole.His strong strokes making my tits swirl and jolt as he used one hand snaked underneath me to pulp my hooters in turn and grinding his palm and clenching my areola and nipples and pulp grinding them his fingers sinking deep into my tits as he pulped my nipples.I cried out in searing pained pleasure with his mauling my tits so expertly.Pain makes me cum so hard.Twice more I was pushed off his cock and I cleaned his thick cock with my throat taking his dick down my throat as he now clenched my hair to jam my nose into his belly as he did short upthrusts of his hips to spike his dickhead down my trachea making me gag and choke out spit I used it to pump his shaft as it slid out my throat.He gripped my hair to roughly to get me up on the sofa when he was ready to take my shit hole again and got me spoon and invaded my asshole hard and deep.I felt the tension starting to build in my womb and trembling sphincter.I was writhing against him as he now slammed so hard into my shitter sensing my approaching orgasm.He lunged while now gripping my shoulder with one hand and hip with the other and slammed his thighs into my ass as he smoked my asshole with rapid drilling thrusts.My head was rocking forward as my eyes bulged as I felt the precipice now here.I gripped the edge of the sofa and jammed back hard into Al's punishing strokes."Oh goddamn � fuck fuck �AAARRRGGGHHHHUUNNNNNNN!" I screamed as my asshole exploded in screaming shattering pleasure.Al roared and slammed forward with all his strength as his cock spurted hot semen almost ten inches up my ass.I screamed again and again as his cock spurted hot semen into my ass as he slammed his dick into my ass each time he spasmed and jetted semen up my ass as I flipped and jackknifed out of control.I writhed and bucked until spent.I was stunned again as he pulled his dick out and I felt ass juice and semen leak out my asshole as I sat on the floor soaking the carpet with my obscene leaking asshole.I rested my forehead on his sweaty belly as I recovered and then tilted my head and used my tongue to lift his dickhead into my mouth and clamped onto it and began to undulate my head as I sucked and bobbed with slow head twists."Goddamn you're a fucking slut Barbara � suck my cum and your asshole off my black dick you fucking White Bitch!"I smiled happily at the cursing and racial slurs.I sucked hard my cheeks hallowing out as I sucked.I needed to taste all the shit cream and semen on his cock as I licked up his cock from base to dickhead cleaning it all before again sucking in his dickhead and slow twisting on his dickhead as I lovingly slow bobbed.Males and their direct approach has it advantages!Again and again we fucked that night as he fucked all three of my fuck holes to utter exhaustion.

I like that you show some sweet bonding during their post coital time.Again, other authors only give the bland and always the same drowsily embracing each other with some sweet cooing.There is nothing wrong with this, exceptthis is what they always give me.i know that bonding where we lazily stroke and embrace as we coo to each other exhausted from heated fucking.But I miss them not giving me times like this.Where you are bonding and sharing after the exhilaration of a just happened great fuck.This is a time where you are still giddy and so happy after great fucking and hard orgasms and sharing of souls with your love slut(s).I love this time of sweet sharing and learning new things about your newbies and just basking in the presence of your regular angels.It is a time of sharing and laughing.Sex is such a binder of souls and a balm to frazzled nerves.You always show all the aspects of relationships.You have a nice echo from Laura's past where she and Shelley reflect on the voyeur with the telescope.I like hearing that Shelley has not fucked a man in close to eight years.I love my cock but I am always happy for women who have fully committed to the lesbian way.I love cock and men's hard body but I simply am bored to tears with them as mate material.I seriously don't know how het women put up with them.I have to smile at Laura mentioning Robert Michum.I guess I can see that.I guess I go for the young Robert Redford.Nice little interlude.I have to smile at Laura saying it is time to go in and start round two.I know her jealousy would get the better of her if the man was to suddenly appear and Shelley were to give him her attention.Laura has controlled her green eyed monster but there is no reason to rouse the slumbering beast.

I have to think about Shelley not giving up the booty hole.I am always seducing virgin assholes and feeling my eyes roll back when I get newbies to suck shit juice off my and other's cocks if they are present.I so love to work women to my will and soon having them pulling their ass cheeks wide to let me yet again invade what was once a virgin asshole.I would love to seduce Shelley to the charms of anal sex but alas it is not to happen.Laura is too gentle and loving to really try and take her anal cherry.�� I am chuckling with Laura crowing to herself that she is fucking Shelley in Margaret's absence.I for some reason don't have this competitive streak with other women or even men.I just want to fuck whom I want and if I committing adultery I don't feel like I am winning per se.If your partner is pretty or handsome I would love to bring them in if the dynamics were to work out.I just want to love you.I am just happy that Laura has tamed this tendency.I can remember her past where she went nuts with being so competitive with others and seeing her fall apart and her "stomach curdle".I used to really feel sorry for her and wanted to grab her and shake and tell her stop it!Over the years you slowly grew Laura as a person to where she is now.She still feels the competitive juices and has her jealous streak but she has them under control.Her growth and inner understanding was slow in coming and shows how personal growth occurs.Rarely does one have an epiphany that changes one over night.I have seen it but it is rare.I like to think one of my strengths is my ability to change and grow and become better as I age.I don't lock myself in just because "it is the way I have always done it or thought it".I am open to change.Though I am open to change it usually takes time and I see this in Laura.You show real life again in how a good person can become better but that it takes time and inner reflection.I guess this is part of why I love Laura so is this true real life growth I have seen in her.

I like how you show that Laura so adores her women.As they go back inside she once devours Shelley's body with her eyes.I so love to bask in the physicality of my lovers.I get so blasted tired of other stories not giving me any details about their women.They are like mannequins and it just kills most stories for me.They never show what is about the women that attract them to each other.They give me a no description of their most basic looks and that is it.How can I worship you with just their bland descriptions.This is why I adore my lovers [At a small distance the marvelous tan lines accentuating the curves of Shelley's body were wildly tantalizing.  When you were closer to her, holding her, nuzzling and caressing and kissing her body everywhere, you didn't notice them as much, but when she was a few steps away, they were enchanting and simply made Laura want to eat her alive.]I just bask in their individual beauty that makes my pussy wet and nipples ache to love you totally and deeply.You give us all these adverbs(?) in how Laura wants to worship and consume Shelley.With your language you make it so clear how much Laura truly loves her angels.I so want to pull you into the full body clench as we roll around naked on the bed our tits mashing and bellies wallowing as hooked ankles and arms pull tight as mouths are mated so tight as tongues duel and plunge down throats in deepening love.I so love full body contact and thus adore your writings for it.This is why I love het fucking.The feel of bodies slapping and jamming hard into each other.I love to feel my body jolt with the power of men making my tits swirl and whiplash and doing this to my sluts.I love having the power to fuck women like men do.It makes them cum so hard for me.I especially love spoon and the missionary positions since this allow our bodies to wallow and hump all over each other as I spear my cock deep into you cunt or up your tight ass.Same goes for dp and tp sex since I am literally being buffeted by bodies from front and back as I groan deep in my chest as I feel your cocks pounding my fuck holes and rubbing over each other in my belly.Other authors just miss so much by not showing this.Last Thursday night Maria was back in town before heading to the LA again to check up on the business and see me!We had fucked heatedly for a long time and then had sweet post coital time.I then put some pillows against the headboard and leaned against it and had Maria lean back against me her back resting on my titties and belly.She tilted her head over as I kissed her deeply and played with her tits pulping and working her nipples making her writhe and whimper.Then working her ribs and belly with one hand still working her heavy hooters as she looked me so lovingly in the eye before we would mate mouths tight kissing so deeply my tongue sliding down her throat making her gag in love for me.I now started working her pussy with one hand working her clit and slit and worming her labia lips between my fingers as her cunt humped up in small circles.I worked her tighter as I whispered to her what a fucking slut she was a and goddamn Mexican whore.She whinnied and humped harder.I husked to her to milk her tits as I now worked her shaved, swollen, totally soaked cunt.Working her labia lips open showing her soaking wet seam and bulging clit.I was rubbing and forking her clit as I pumped two fingers in and out her flowing pussy with my other hand.Maria was like a live wire now using her heels to jam against me and writhe up and down my sweaty chest her face slashing constantly now.I tapped her clit and circled it.I was saving a direct assault for the love kill.Her hands pulped her tits and crushed her nipples and areolas.She was huffing and moaning constantly now.I now pumped three fingers in and out her sloshing cunt that made such sweet obscene noises.My hands were soaked in her juices.I forked her clit hard now making it bulge up and totally exposed and pulled my fingers out her clutching cunt and started to rub her clit back and forth hard and fast my slicked fingers a blur.Sigh.She suddenly slammed back into my body hard driving me into the headboard her heels digging into the mattress for purchase.Her head slammed back into my shoulder and juddered out of control."AAAARRRRRGGGHHUUUUUNNNNN!" She screamed in shattering ecstasy.She bucked and jackknifed back into me totally out of control her head spasming forward and slamming back into my shoulder over and over as her hands now balled into fists slammed the mattress over and over.She screamed out her groans and cried out "GGGGOOODDDAMMMMNNNNNNNN!" so sweetly with her last shattering throttling spasm of crushing bliss. I just reveled in the full body contact of her out of control body slapping into my torso and pounding my tits making me groan and love Maria so much more if that was possible.She wallowed and jackknifed until totally spent and collapsed all sweat soaked back into my nurturing body as I now stroked her aftershocking body that rippled and hitched her beautiful gourd shaped hooters giggling and jolting with her spasms of fading bliss.Our love cementing as her sweat dripping face now turned over to look me languidly in the eyes with total love as I lowered my face and our tongues twined and mated tight as our mouths devoured each other in renewed love.

They go back inside and now it is time for some sweet het fucking.I so love to read your het fucking because I know you will give me the details I crave and make the moment of penetration so fucking rad.It is kind of cool how you provide so much detail based upon your ability to create this world and give it individual character.I do come across strap-on stories and all you ever really know about the dildo is that it generic and of standard or maybe something a little bigger.This is kind of the standard or maybe of longer length and girth like I like.But again the dildos are blandly described as the women themselves are in other stories.Here you use past experience or imagination to go outside the box.Like this [Shelley got the strap-on dildo she kept just for such a purpose as this 'ram fucking' out of her dresser drawer and handed it to Laura.  The cock itself, Laura now remembered when she saw it, was thicker and shorter and stubbier than any she had ever seen before, and yet she also knew from experience that it certainly did the trick for Shelley, who had climaxed like the end of the world the last time Laura had done this to her.]I have to smile at "stubby" dildo.Like I say, you give details that are not the ole tried and true.I have to love how you infer just how Shelley likes to be fucked by "ram fucking".Where other authors would just say that they fucked hard I like to qualify it by using terms like "ram fucking" to show how I like to ram fuck my sluts.I grip their hips, ass, shoulders or ribs hard as I arch my back if doggy and swirl my hips to pump my cock.I pump hard to pound my cock as deep as possible into your tight cunt or asshole.I definitely love the bigger dimensions for my cock, dildos, and strap-ons.I am definitely a size whore.It is true that true skill does not need length but I love to feel that stuffed feeling when a big cock is penetrating me and I feel my sphincter and cunt all stretched out.Also, I love to feel that cock deep in my belly which the standard lengths just don't provide me.When I do swing parties they all have the lair where the big cocks live and that is where I go for my male fucking.I do fuck men with "normal" sized cock but I do not really seek them out or want to add them to my harem.I do men for sport fucking and only want them for their cocks and the orgasms they can give me.I love to feel dominated by my men and having big cocks just really plays into this.Also, it is like a concert violinist said about a Stradivarius violin. He said that the actual sound was not that much better than other superior violins but he liked having the "reserve" power that they have to be used when needed.I want that reserve that big cocks give true cocksmen.I have fucked well endowed men once and then never again.You have to know how to use your sword.Some men just want to stab at your pussy or ass and have no skill or imagination.They think their big cock is enough in and of itself.Not!The bores just get you usually missionary and stab at your pussy in a boring, repetitious stroke that doesn't do anything for you.You have to use your superior weapon with skill and imagination if it is to be of any value.It is like the difference between your writings and the dreck of other writers.While I would never buy such a dildo they do make a nice change of pace.A couple months back Dodie and I were at Belissa and La'Tonya's place.They are definitely into large dildos, anal beads, queue balls and such for anal pleasure.They had just gotten a "horse" cock.It looked a lot like a fisting dildo to me but it was accurate.Dodie went nuts over it.Our hosts used it manually to pound our shit holes to oblivion and shattering anal 'gasms.A couple weeks back I was at Dodie's with the sisters Hillary / Camille and Galaisha / Sade'.Frankie was with Sally fucking a new recruit to Sally's dance studio.We did lots of hot and heavy lesbo fucking and we were now lounging in the living room and just yapping and laughing.I noticed Dodie leave and she came back in with her own horse cocked hooked up and ready to go on her harness.This was as big and a slight up swing and the cock head just protruding from its sheath.The black mares were all immediately enamored and on their knees and drooling and stroking Dodie's horse dick.She was whinnying like a horse and pawing the carpet with her foot and crowing she was the "Black Stallion" shaking her black hair.She also pawed the air with her hands like a stallion kicking its front feet in the air all the time whinnying and preening and shaking her cock all around.She told us mares to get ready to get fucked by our stallion.The freaking sisters were all mesmerized worshipping her studness.I wanted to lol and roll around on the floor but controlled it to keep the mood but I couldn't help but smirk and chuckle.She saw this as she let Sade's spit on her dick and start sucking on her extremely large cockhead as Hillary ran her lips up and down the shaft.Dodie barked at me "Get your ass over here you ole Nag!"That pissed me off!She knows I am sensitive about being called old like that in front of young sluts.I straightened my back and kneed over with a defiant look as she now smirked for all to see.Bitch!She ordered the other mares to attack me and get my ass ready for fucking.I screamed as I was overwhelmed by black bitches as they gladly subdued me and I soon had my ass high in the air as Camille and Hillary pushed my face and shoulders into the carpet and spit on me and ground my face hard and the Caribbean cows were holding my ass up high and gripping my ass and hips and jerking me hard to keep in position.They laughed at me as I screamed at them to let me up and "Fuck You!" at anyone would listen which was no one. The sluts spit into my asshole and used tongues and fingers to open up my butthole for Dodie.I love the "show" as my pussy flowed nectars down my thighs and my clit spasmed in raw anticipation of the ass rape about to commence.Now I was crying and screaming as Dodie worked her horse cock slowly into my resisting sphincter and cruelly penetrated my stretched out shit hole.The sisters held my limbs and torso in place holding my shit hole in place to be impaled by Dodie's horse cock.I made a show of jerking my limbs and humping trying to get away which allowed the sisters to manhandle me roughly to "force" me down and in place.I juddered feeling my clit pulse so hard and my nipples so hard and throbbing.I looked back at Dodie and she gave me her Hollywood smile that is so beautiful.She then jammed and pushed hard penetrating my asshole with her horse cock as I cried out and bit the carpet and clawed at the carpet as my asshole was stretched open and her dick sunk into my shit hole.I moaned and whinnied as she worked my asshole open pumping slowly to work my sphincter loose and sinking her cock deep into my spasming belly and clutching butt hole.Gods, she fucked me so hard and good as I had two orgasms that simply destroyed me with fucking pleasure.Then it was the black mares turn as Dodie pleasured them to screaming, shattering orgasms as she spent the night ruining our assholes with her horse cock making us her obedient and horse cock addicted sluts.

You now give us that sweet dialog that I have always loved in your stories.I am smiling seeing Shelley begging Laura to do her immediately because she is dying for it.I so love getting my women like this where they are begging for it and pleading for me to go down on them if straight lesbo or if het like this.Begging for me to sink my cock balls deep into their pussy or up their asshole.Just the fact that you give us dialog makes me so thankful.I am reading some stories with teenagers, incest and atm which makes me happy but again no true dialog.Just some at the beginning to setup the fuck and then normal talk at the end of the fucks that show the rising need and how we converse at the home plate.But again no true communication between the women during the fuck.Where just a small word here or an expressed need there adds so much to the fuck.It inflames me when a slut is begging and whimpering for me thrust my cock hard and deep into her belly and only you show this.For all other authors the middle of the fucks are just so silent like the wind swept prairie of old.Plus, such communication shows the connect between Laura and her women.How they are comfortable enough with each other to let each other know their needs because they know they will be listened too.You may try to bend the fuck your way but that is the two way of communication.The give and take of lovers in love.Only you capture this.The loving moans and pleading of desires to be fulfilled.Shelley's desires are about to be fulfilled [Laura couldn't help grinning.  "I won't tell her.  But you are my fuck slave.  Lie down on your back and spread your legs, my darling.  Auntie Laura wants to eat."������� Shelley gave her a pouty but flirtatious smile and did as asked.  She loved being desired.  You lucky dog, Margaret, Laura thought.  All you have to do is love her and she turns into this marvelous, pliant, sweet, gorgeous, quivering feast of beautiful smooth brown warm flesh for you, I bet.  But you don't get her right now.  I do.]This shows the communication and how we still try to get our way also.Shelley showing her het background is really pleading for getting "pounded" and is begging for it to the exclusion of all else.Laura hears her and will comply, but a little later.She needs some titty dining and cunt gobbling first.I am like that.I will pound the living hell out of you with my love cock but I need to get some sweet gash first.I need to devour pussy at the start of a fuck to get your sweet essence in my mouth.If my slut is anal I usually l like to work my tongue into your shitter to get the sweet taste of your asshole in my mouth too knowing soon all of my cock will be buried up your ass and you will be sucking your shithole off my cock as I feel my eyes roll back in atm love.I just enjoy seeing true interaction between women.All other stories just seem so scripted because the women are never able to communicate like you show in each and every chapter.Plus, you give me the details I crave where other authors just leave this part of the fuck blank which robs the reader of so much.I love the direct ordering of Shelley and how Laura makes it clear who is in control.I just get so wet when a strong slut or man orders me around like this.Plus, I love the familiarity that you show between them.Only the flow of time and great fucks bring this kind of easy going dialog that only your story can provide because of the time arch and effort you have put into making these women so unique, vibrant and alive.I do see the controlled jealousy that I mentioned earlier.Laura has learned how to keep her green eyed devil in check.Me, I would be trying to get Margaret into the fuck but she has the Green Eyed Monster!!Then you use language again to add so much to show how Shelley is ready and waiting for Laura.The words "plaint, quivering" make it clear that Shelley is in need of immediate hard fucking.And as always, I love how you always bring front and center these black women's delicious skin color that I have am so addicted too.

You now besot the reader with the wonderful details of loving that makes the reader just fall into the story.You provide details without trying to overwhelm the reader with them.This allows the reader to fill in the gaps so to speak with their own experiences and how they would be consuming their slut and just really draws the reader in without them really realizing it.Like a great crime fiction writer telling of a murder but leaving a lot of the details sparse so the reader puts in their thoughts and how such a scene would look and this draws the reader in.I have thought for a long time that your erotica is more like great fiction than just sexy stories on the Internet.I love how I can see in my mind's eye Laura half laying on Shelley and hefting up her medium cup titties and simply devouring her nipples with hard love sucks and lathing and batting tongue.You have given me enough detail of Laura lying Shelley on her back and moving in that I now put in the rest of the details and see how I would be loving her tits.Letting Shelley feel my weight as I heft and pulp her tits making her writhe and whimper as I suck them deep into my throat and deep throat love suck as I rasp her engorged teats with my curling and slapping tongue.You give the detail of how her nipples get all engorged and puffy as Laura and I vicariously devour them and get them wet with my salvia as I stretch them out in my pulling lips and sucking mouth making her caw in helpless love.�� You give me just enough detail to inflame me and make me devour your story and Shelley at the same time.Then you detail how Laura kisses down her abdomen and works slowly south to the paradise that lies between Shelley's legs.I fear no other author comes close to giving me these kinds of sweet details [But oh what delicious preliminaries.  Shelley's wet, thickening, dark nipples stood in puffed up, stiffened cones against her lips.She descended, kissing the marvelous firm sweep of the girl's midriff down to her lower belly, and then scooted even lower, quickly pressing her lips to the blossoming nether mouth of Shelley's oozing pussy.������� "Oh!  Ohhhhhh . . . yessssss!" Shelley sighed, her head falling back, her hands sliding up to her own firm breasts, which Laura had only moments ago abandoned, squeezing them herself and twisting her jutting, saliva-damp nipples.  "Oh . . . Laura . . . just a little, please!  I'll come!  I'll come too soon!"]Sigh, no one else would use "marvelous firm sweep" in their stories.You just make Shelley's torso sound so sublime and divine.This is how I think of my sluts as I worship their bodies.I try to find the perfection in all bodies I am loving which totally focuses me on giving you my all.I want to devour you totally if a woman and give my body totally to my male lovers and dominate female lovers.Other authors just avoid the areas of woman's body that lie outside the main erogenous zones.It is like only a woman's mouth, breast and vagina exist on her body.You have always loved the whole body.it is this total loving that makes a woman your total slut in bed and so willing to give you her whole body.Such loving has given me many virgin assholes.I love how you open our imaginations to the loving that Laura is giving Shelley now.I so love to kiss your sternum area if small titties and if larger hefting up and kissing the secret areas.Working down to your ribs and kissing down your ribs and muzzling and kissing the valley between them.Kissing, lipping and sucking your belly and down your inner thighs making my sluts whine for my mouth on their flowing pussy, feeling their hands in my scalp urging me down.Normally I move on South but sometimes I just explore.I often move my hand down and swirl, fork and rub your clit and work your slit up and down and play with your labia lips as I work your belly and ribs making my sluts hitch and hump into my fingers as they are soaked in love juice.Then sinking my fingers deep into your pussy and playing with your inner petals and rub your g-spot making your cry out in helpless pleasure.I want your sweet gash in my devouring mouth but I get so intoxicated feeling your cunt pulsing hot love juice over my fingers and down my hand as I work your sodden cunt and pull out to work your clit with my cunt greasy fingers.I work your pussy harder as it flows from a stream to a river.I often have to deliver the love kill now.Forking your clit and working it with my thumb or pounding my fingers deep into her cunt as it sloshes and makes obscene noises and spatters cunt juice all over the place as I smile seeing your cunt juice so much for me.Or I will flip my hand over and use my ring and middle finger to rake your g-spot hard as your pussy squishes so loudly for me.My other hand squeezing a tit or pressing in hard on your belly as I use my swirling palm to pressure your g-spot and womb.I just smile with such love as my angels wail and flop so wildly on the bed their cunts flowing hotly and spattering everywhere with such large drops of love juice if I am pounding away.I always know that I can soon dine on sodden, swollen, red cunt meat for more sweet orgasms that now cum in my hot devouring mouth.I have primed the pump!

I really love how you say "But oh what delicious preliminaries."�� First that is sweet use of the English language.You are the only author that uses our native tongue to its fullest advantage.Other authors have no poetic meter to their writings.It is all so boring and bland.A simple word can add so much to a story and you show this over and over again.Then you never forget to show the woman being pleasured showing her pleasure.I get so bored and tired of never hearing women in other stories sigh and moan from being pleasured during lovemaking.I get deafening silence except maybe for the end game and then it is so formulaic and same ole, same ole.I get so tired of the all caps spoken sentences.I do that at times but not every time!Only you have the sounds that Shelley has now "Ohhhhhhh and Yeessssss."Simple sounds and yet they add so much to the story.This is the sound of great love making.Another thing that you show that I love so much is the woman being pleasured adding to her own pleasure.Other authors just don't show this.The women never use their hands to add to their own pleasure.You show here Shelley pleasuring her own breast now that Laura has headed South for sweet wet gash.I like how you show us Shelley plucking and pulling on her nipples still wet with Laura's salvia.That turns me on so much to watch my slut adding to the pleasure I am already giving her.I love to watch women work their nipples like this.Sometimes watching them grind and pulp their nipples and pulling their nipples so hard their tits are stretched out as their bodies jolt and hump up spastically into my devouring mouth as our combined efforts make her keen and work more quickly towards nirvana.I love seeing women frigging their clits as I or others are pumping their pussies or butt holes doggy or spoon.I love to feela woman worming their hand between our hard humping bodies in missionary.I feel her fingers and knuckles worming around to get her fingers in position to frig her clit as I pound her flowing box.

Laura is ready to move the fuck forward but you still give the reader some sweet last details of Laura going down on Shelley.You always make it so clear that Laura loves gobbling hot, soaking wet cunt meat.Other authors just say that the one woman is doing the other oral.They never show us the pleasure of the woman doing the gobbling feels in savoring wet cunt meat in her mouth.They never show the woman being eaten swooning from your loving ministrations.You show this all the time in each and every chapter that you write.Like I say, I love hearing Laura telling Shelley she is going to fuck her exactly like she wants it.I never hear in other stories the aggressor telling her slut that she will give her all she can handle and then delivering the love kill.I love to tell my sluts and delivering.I so love to be the submissive one too.Having my cocksmen telling me how they are going to pound the shit out of me makes my cunt contract and gush cunt nectars all over my groin and thighs.I pulse even harder when women tell me exactly how they are going to fuck me senseless and take me totally and deeply.Having their face just in front of my humpingtwat and making hot eye contact and telling me just how good they are going to eat me out.I just hump harder and whimper and beg them withwhimpering "pleaseeeeeeee".I so love to be taken.You always make the moment of penetration so special.[But in truth, she too didn't know if they would make it to that desired moment.  Shelley was swooning in the grip of a delirious sexual mania, slowly gyrating her hips now, sliding her pussy across Laura's lips, gasping in sharp little bursts as Laura sucked and tongue-stroked her bulging, swollen clit.  ������"Oh!  Oh!"������� She was so beautiful in this state that Laura had to restrain herself from delivering the full measure of her skillful love assault, knowing she could make the lovely girl pop in seconds, if she wanted to.  ��������"Oh!  Oh!"���������� "Here . . . honey . . . turn you over . . . yes . . . like this . . . so we can get to the part you want so much . . . okay . . . that's it . . . yes . . . like that . . ."������� "Unngghhh!" Shelley groaned a little louder, looking back over her shoulder and wincing as Laura, crouching behind her smooth round buns, slid the dildo into the soupy warm cauldron of her uptilted pussy, pushing it in as deep as it would go.  "Ungggghhh . . . oh shit, yes!"]Gods, I love your details of sweet pussy gobbling.I am swooning over the details.I wish others would give me this kind of sweet fucking details.I get so tired of not getting anything.It is really quite shocking to me really.If real sex was like this I doubt anyone would want to fuck.I just love how you tell us that Shelley is "swooning" over Laura's loving ministrations.It is such a pleasure to read of the woman being fucked getting so much pleasure from her partner.It is maddening to not see this with other stories.I live to hear my slut moan for me and to hear me grunt and curse as they slam their dicks deep into my belly or I am sucking and bobbing on their thick, veined shafts.I live to see my lover reacting to my loving.just hearing you is enough to make me flow like a river.It just makes me fuck you so much harder and deeper when you moan and groan and make the sweet little noises that you so perfectly capture.It is the little whinnies that flow throughout sex and you show this perfectly like everything else you capture.Last night I was finishing off a great fuck with Eric and Anthony.They had fucked me so hard and good, raping my cunt and asshole to heaven and back.I was heaven hearing them grunt and curse me as I sucked them off in turn.Feeling their bodies clench and shake as I sucked on their dickheads and bobbed their dickheads up and down my tongue with hard sucks.Feeling their thighs clench and spasm as I clenched them holding my head in place to suck them off as I bobbed hard.Looking up and seeing their faces slash and snarl with fierce pleasure.I loved how Eric's head rocked back and he yelled out GGGGGGOOODDDAMMNNNNNNNN! To the ceiling as I looked up at his corded neck.His head juddered as his cock flooded my mouth and throat with hot nigger semen.I loved feeling his thighs spasm so hard in my clenched hands as semen pumped up his shaft overflowing my mouth and dribbling down my face.Each cum is so different.Anthony had his hands clawed in my scalp pumping his thick shaft in and out my clenched lips as I deep throat sucked his cock.I was pumping his shaft with one hand and massaging his nut sack with the other as I twisted my pumping head.Gods I loved feeling my lank hair jerking over my tits and ribs.Looking up and seeing Anthony's grimace with the pleasure I was sucking from his dick.I loved feeling his hard grip on my head controlling and urging me to pump hard my cheeks hollowing out with deep throat sucks.His head was twisting and jerking spastically now and he growled out his body now shaking hard "Oh Goddamn you Fucking Sssslllutttttt!" he snarled / cried as his hips punched jamming his dickhead to the back of my throat as it convulsed semen down my throat and filled my mouth with hot semen that flowed out my mouth.I relished feeling his body spasm with each spurt of hot Nigger semen into my greedy white mouth.I smiled on Anthony's dick when Eric said "Goddamn you suck good dick, Barbara!"

You have always shown the transitions of sex very well.Most great fucks have more than just one position during the tryst.There is a least some variation.I get so tired of other stories always starting in a position and staying in that position throughout the whole fuck.Because of the communication between your women here we have to have some positional changes.Shelley wants being rammed from behind and Laura wants some classic gash gobbling.Both women have expressed their needs and are working in tandem to satisfy both of their needs.Only you show this communication and working to satisfy both women's wants and desires.Women just want to try and satisfy their partners.Both working in love to make the other happy.I love reading how Laura is using her hands to lift and guide Shelley into the doggy position.I can honestly say outside of you I am not sure I have seen this.In het stories you get change of positions but never the detail of how you grip your lover's body to guide it into the new position.It just happens.These are the details I love reading in stories and only you give them to me.I love the feel of a sweaty body against me and in my hands.I so love to manhandle a sweat soaked slut and move her around for more hot fucking or gripping a hard, sweaty male body as I grip them to keep my balance in some position or to help me change positions myself.Then as always you make the moment of penetration so freaking divine.I love how you give the detail of Shelley looking back at Laura so she can watch Laura penetrate her swollen, dripping snatch.I love how you show this.Women who have learned to shuck their inhibitions love to watch themselves being fucked by dicks.I love to look back like this or riding a dick and looking back if necessary and down my sweaty back to see that cock or strap-on sliding in and out my snatch or butt hole.It is pure hedonism and I love watching sluts watching women showing their sluttiness.Love the little "wince" as she feels that divine penetration that only you show.I so gag in pure need, feeling that bulbous cockhead and shaft penetrating my asshole and sliding up my ass or deep into my spasming pussy.Like I say, only you give us that divine moment of feeling the penetration and divine feeling of being pierced by a thick, hard cock.And you give me so many audial queues.I just get so tired of no sounds in other's sex stories.Almost, all women moan when being penetrated.It just feels so fucking good.You have always shown the pleasure of women being penetrated.You show this pleasure by the fact that Shelley is moaning louder and more strenuously.You showed the little sounds of sex during the flow of sex when it is in the settled rhythm of great fuck.But when the sex is amped up, like when you are penetrated, you just moan louder and harder.You become more vocal and you show this.Have to love the potty mouth.I find that younger women are just so natural and easy with their foul language.They curse in every day conversation and really ramp it up during sex when they hear me with my potty mouth.They just cut loose.I will curse like a sailor on leave in the proverbial bedroom.I do have to admit I am a little nonplused how causal college and teenagers are today with their language.Not all of course but women have become liberated and I don't see that much difference between girls and boys in the next generations.We are becoming more equal.I guess I am still a little bit of prude compared to them.They will curse freely in public which I just find crass.I know, I am being a hypocrite and unfair.It is funny how the times leave one behind.

Attention:Long Digression

I have loved how Laura is willing to bend to the situation to give her woman what she needs and to also make sure she gets pussy.Last week I had worked late into the night and got off the next day as recompense.It was scheduled and I had arranged to spend the day with Odessa since she is between summer sessions.I so wanted to once more devour her lovely bosom abundance and sink my face deep into her fat mound and devour her dark black pussy.I was across the tunnel when I received a text from Chantel begging me to meet them asap.They needed me so bad and sexted me some new pictures of them masturbating and cumming hard.I had an idea.I called Odessa and explained my just received messages and asked her if she wanted some thirteen year old pussy and asshole.She was breathing harder just thinking about it and she said "Yeessss!".I then called Chantel and explained that I was off and on her side of the water and what I had already planned and she and Roshanda could join me and come to Odessa's home.Needlessly to say I got the same enthusiastic yes with teenage squealing and questions about Odessa.I pulled into a parking lot and got out my ipad and sexted them some photos of Odessa fucking Hillary, Camille and myself and then some of Kapri, Diamond and myself and then some with Odessa getting fucked by the brothers three and a few other het pairings.They called me nearly shouting for more photos and movies pleassseeee!I had to laugh and tell them later and I would be there soon.I was soon at Roshanda's house and picked them up.I had to shoo their hands away as we got in the car.I am so at times exasperated by their enthusiasm and how I have to hiss at them that they can't touch me like that in public especially in the day time.It took us another fifteen minutes to get to Odessa's apartment.The horny bitches had been all over each other in the back seat lying down kissing and sucking on each other's tits having rolled up their shirts and not wearing bras.They were very mused up when we got out of the car and walked into the complex and climbed the stairs and I rang the door bell.

Odessa answered the door opening it wide showing her beautiful voluptuous body on display in only a thong bikini her 34E tits spilling out her barely existing top and her ass cheeks so large but still taunt.The dark stair well making her feel safe to display herself so brazenly.She invited us in and the girls were simply staring at her perfection as we entered her living room.She pirroated for her young admirers and asked them if they liked what they say.They both nodded mutely staring at her big titties and looking at her fat mound making her bikini bottom bulge.She then asked them if they wanted to fuck her.They were actually drooling and squealed yes and hurriedly stripped out of their tops and tight bottoms and sneakers having gone commando.Odessa had stripped her bikini off having used it to get the show started quickly.We were there to fuck.I slowly stripped moving over to the love seat to watch the hot show I know was about to commence.Odessa stood waiting to be worshipped with a wanton smile on her face.She knows she is hot.The teenagers came up to her and are about the same height as her but much more slight.Chantel moved behind Odessa and pressed in grinding her erect nipples into Odessa's back.She cupped Odessa's heavy tits pumping them her fingers disappearing into Odessa's bosom making her moan.I could already smell the musk of excited black pussy filling the air.Roshanda moved in and embraced her circling her arms around Odessa's neck and mashed their mouths tights and stabbed her tongue down her throat I could see making Odessa groan hard into her mouth as her tits rolled all over Roshanda's small tits and chest as Chantel's still clenched Odessa's tits and now pulped hard as Odessa started to herk and jerk in pleasure.Roshanda broke their kiss spit roping between their mouths.They both looked a little dazed as the teenagers led her to the sofa and sat her down.Chantel climbed up on sofa and now kissed Odessa tilting her head back on the sofa back and tilting her head and slamming her tongue deep into Odessa's mouth wrestling wetly with her tongue I could see with their working mouths.Odessa moaned like a whore, her twat humped on the edge of the sofa.Roshanda had been settling herself on the floor, getting in a nice comfortable position.She now mashed her face into Odessa's cunt and her lips disappeared into Odessa's vulva as she immediately started to lap and tongue the woman's furrow and clit furiously.

Roshanda was soon grunting and snuffling as she ate the twenty-three year's old sloshing twat.Her mouth would glue to her clit meat and suck voraciously stretching out her sodden red cunt meat and tongue slap and then move down and spear deep into her spasming cunt folds.Odessa's eyes were so hot as she looked over at me and moan so hard at the loving attention she was receiving.Chantel had moved down and was devouring her nipples and stuffing as much of the bounty she could into her mouth.Odessa's large areola exceeding her ability to suck all in.Chantel pulled on the teats in turn stretching them and lip mauling.I was softly masturbating saving my orgasms for the teenagers.I husked over that Odessa liked her sex rough like me and they understood.Chantel now gripped the tit she was sucking just behind the areola and pulped it making the nipple bulge and sucked it deep into her mouth and began to love suck.�� Roshanda started to slap Odessa's large firm thigh hard with loud smacks making Odessa squeal in pain that she loves and humped harder into the girl's mouth.Roshanda was tongue fucking and French kissing Odessa's fuck hole and lapping her furrow before attaching to her clit like a lamprey and munching and sucking hard.The loving assault made Odessa cry out and twirl her hips up into Roshanda's face and her hands were now gripping Chantel's head and pleading for to suck her tits harder and then jerking her head up for deep French love kissing before roughly pushing Chantel's head back down to her cleavage and commanding "Suck!"The girl gripping a tit in both hands and manhandling the thick nipple deep into her mouth for love sucks and grinding against the roof of her mouth I had taught them that Laura had taught me so long ago.Another minute of this and Odessa now had a hand clawed in each teenager's scalp as her ass writhed on the sofa her eyes bulging in building pressure and ecstasy.�� Roshanda wormed her hands underneath Odessa's ass and helped her hump hard into her devouring mouth.She now sucked her entire upper cunt into her mouth and deep throat sucked with her head undulating stretching the cunt meat as much as you could without snapping it out your mouth and Chantel was trying to suck the nipple off that was stuffed deep in her mouth."Unnnggghhhrrrrrrr!� Unnnggghhhhhhhhh � Fffffffffuuuuuuuucccckkk!"Odessa screamed as her cunt ruptured and squirted hard into Roshanda's throat.The teenager immediately released her suck as she was startled by the heavy squirt.She started to vibrate Odessa's clit with a hand she quickly freed from clawing Odessa's ass.She lowered her face perfectly and the next squirt hit her right between the eyes hard splashing all over the place.Two more powerful squirts hit Roshanda right between the eyes as she kept her head in place to receive the squirts.Her open mouth lapped up cunt droplets all the while moaning just like Odessa.Each squirt made Odessa have full body earthquakes of flips and jackknifes of shattering bliss.I was impressed.I had only seen Odessa squirt from devastating anal 'gasms with lots of clit rubbing and once from a dp fuck Dodie and I administrated as she soaked all three of us and the bed.I filed this away knowing what was possible going down on Odessa.She must have been really primed fucking the teenagers.

Chantel had watched the squirt show and moved down to lick Roshanda's face clean and then move into her place sitting between the college grad student's now cum soaked thighs as I saw sweat beginning to trickle down her ample bosom and only now not heaving belly and ribs.I told Chantel that Odessa rarely squirted and to not be disappointed.She was in challenge mode and sucked in her clit and started to rhythm suck it making Odessa cry out her head jerking back into the sofa back at the sudden stimulation on her still trembling clit.Chantel released her clit and worked her slit and tongued her sloshing cunt hole deeply letting her clit rest a few more minutes.Roshanda climbed onto the love seat with me and moaned as I licked Odessa's cunt off her face and then kissing her deeply as she purred.She took control and plunged her tongue down my throat and pulped my tits gripping each heavy tit behind the areola and squeezed hard making my nipples bulge for her voracious sucks.I had to moan out fffuuucckkk and godddammmnnnnn over and over as she tormented my love aching nipples and then kissed down my heaving belly and started to lap mytrembling cunt.She did all the nasty wonderful things to me that she had to Odessa.I cried out when she stretched out my cunt meat and was slapping my clit with powerful slaps of her tongue.I lulled my head and pulped my tits and lifted them in turn and sucked hard on my thick, hard nipples.Chantel was now plowing Odessa's slit hard with her rudder like tongue and then lifting a little and flattening her tongue and rasping it over the woman's now bulging and ready clit.Her head pumping hard back and forth working the college student's clit.Odessa was looking down and now copying me using two hands to lift her large tit and swallowing her thick, long nipple, deep into her greedy mouth and she deep throat sucked her cheeks hollowing out with her head pumps and active tongue visible through her cheeks.Chantel worked two fingers into Odessa's swollen cunt and went right for g-spot I could see by her upturned fingers flexing as she pumped.I saw Odessa's eyes bulge nearly out her skull.I was impressed.I knew what was going to happen soon.Chantel knew too with the smile on her face as she sucked voraciously on the clit deep in her mouth.

Roshanda had formed a wedge and was slamming her hand into my tight cunt as she slammed it repeatedly into my now splattering and trembling cunt.Slowly rotating her hand right and left slightly as she wedged fucked my cunt hole and her mouth was sometimes gently sucking and tongue lathing my rigid clit and then sucking it hard in and out her thick lips as she tongue slapped my beginning to strain clit.Both Odessa and I were jolting hard now at random moments as our wombs tightened.We continued to suck on our own tits looking at each other with sultry eyes as we watched each other hedonistically suck or own nipples and watching a thirteen year old suck us to paradise.Chantel was working hard to suck and fingerfuck Odessa to her orgasm.Her head rocking and now swirling stretching out the clit meat in her mouth and then mashing her mouth forward her lips engulfed in Odessa's fat mound as she sucked the clit so deep into her mouth her head rocking back involuntarily with the force of her deep throat sucks on the rock hard large berry sized clit deep in her mouth."Oh god, oh god, oh god" Odessa croaked her eyes now frantic with need.Suddenly they flared as Chantel did something extra with her mouth, fingers or both.Odessa's body lurched forward and juddered almost bent over and slammed back so hard into the sofa back.She had stopped her sucking on her nipples with her first forward jerk and now her tits flopped up high in the air and then slammed downhard onto her sweaty chest.�� This had freed her hands to slam on Chantel's head as she screamed "AAAAIIIIEEEYYYYYEEEEEEEE � oh goddammnnnnnnn�unnggggghhhhhhhhh �you're killing me you fucking NNNIIGGGGAAAAAAAA!" as her cunt simply started to erupt in scalding spasms of squirting bliss.Chantel the slut had known exactly what she was doing.Her body in perfect sync with Odessa's.She had released the grad student's clit and rubbed it with her fingers now lowering her face like Roshanda had.Odessa had five heavy spurts this time and all five hit Chantel right between the eyes soaking her face and hair in hot steamy cunt juice.I watched her cunt spurts splatter all over the place and run down Chantel's neck and soak her swaying tits.I was ramping up along with Odessa but my control had held up to this point but I now let go.I screamed at Roshanda to never stop and what a fucking goddamn nigger bitch she was as I wailed and flopped out of control of my body as her wedge fuck and incessant sucking on my exploding clit sent me multiple that had be seeing stars as I slammed so hard into the sofa back and then lifted on the balls of my feet and humped up in the air as Roshanda clenched my taunt buns to keep her love suck on my spent clit as she backed off to lathing sending me into long delirious spasms of fucking bliss.I watched in this state as Chantel laid down on Odessa who had collapsed onto the sofa and was mewling and trembling all over softly still.Chantel cooed and stroked her sweaty flesh and kissed all over Odessa's beautiful face.�� Now Roshanda crawled up and we kissed in deep renewed love.I finally saw Odessa recover and begin to kiss and lick Chantel's face clean as she purred and hugged the girl to her like a precious diamond.I had to think of Makeeda and her long powerful orgasms.

We fucked all the day long sucking, finger fucking and tribbing and finally stopped around dinner time to shower, put on some clothes and eat a wonderful tuna casserole that Odessa fixed for us.�� We sent the teenagers off as we cleaned up.Odessa marveled to me how good the thirteen year olds were and how sweat they tasted.We were sitting and talking about Hillary and Camille when we heard Roshanda call out that they had something to show us.Curious we went back into the living room.I had seen them bring a valise with them and my suspicions were right.Nude they both sported towering black strap-ons.Roshanda had a copy of mine while Chantel had an eleven inch thickly veined cock with bulbous dick head.Odessa didn't waste a moment as our nipples were already getting rock hard and our cunts starting to juice and swell.We pulled off our shirts and shucked our bottoms and stood nude before our teenage lovers waiting to be deep dicked.Roshanda cocked her finger at Odessa who walked over and feel to her knees guiding her thick cock into her greedy mouth.I walked over to Chantal and followed suite and now had her dick pumping hard into my mouth as sucked and bobbed hard feeling her slam the back of my throat with hard thrusts into my forward thrusts.Odessa was undulating her head and rotating it around on Roshanda's cock sucking so hard and then pumping hard.We both sucked hard and gripped their asses to help them fuck our mouths.After five minutes they pushed our heads off and motioned for us to get on the floor.They quickly got between our spread legs and rubbed their thick dick heads in our already soaking wet and lubricated for fucking with our flowing juices.Our musk signaling our need.My head rocked back feeling Chantel sliding her dick deep up my cunt as long moans flowed from my throat.I looked over and saw that Roshanda had mounted Odessa and was already stroking her dick deep in and out her clinging cunt.Odessa and I looked over at each other and smiled as our thirteen year old overs pleasured our cunts with expert dick fucking.��� I was soon gagging feeling Roshanda spear her cock into my womb with savage pumps of her hips.I was swooning as she gripped my tits and stuffed them into her mouth and then bunched together to suck at the same time my rigid love aching nipples.Odessa was whooping and crying out as Chantel had rolled her over spoon and was pummeling her flowing box from behind so hard she was making Odessa's tits jolt and giggle heavily.Chantel had jerked her upper leg up and now Odess held it up allowing Chantel to easily plunder her quim.I now had my ankles locked above Roshanda's back my thighs gripping her hips as I opened my womb for her dick wishing she could flood it with semen.I rocked up and bite her shoulder in need my eyes squeezing shut as nirvana approached.She whispered in my ear "Cum bitch � cum you fucking Lilly white bitch � take my big nigger dick you goddamn fucking white whore!"That sent me over the edge as I screamed "I loooovvveeee youuuuuuuu Roshanddaaaaaa!"and I went into wild convulsions as searing waves of shattering bliss convulsed through my veins.I loved feeling heaving spasms mash my belly into her down thrusting belly and my big tits enveloping and mashing all over Roshanda's rigid nipples grinding deep into my tits flesh.I finally spent myself as Roshanda slowly pumped me through my aftershocks and suddenly Odessa wailed as her body bucked and jerked back into Chantel's spoon body.�� Chantels' cupped palms pulping and grinding both of Odessa 's nipples as her hips flexed to spear her cock into Odessa's womb as it exploded and soaked her groin and belly in cunt nectars.

Soon we were doggy facing each other our face beside each other's hips.The teenagers were behind us spearing our flowing pussies once more.We reached out to squeeze each other's nipples and pulp hanging, flopping hooters.I could see the teenagers had agreed to work in basic sync.First Roshanda removed her cock from my pulsing pussy and I felt her slimy dick head move over my perineum and push into my rosebud and quickly sink in since Anthony, Eric and Steven had pounded it mercilessly the night before.I cried out in pained pleasure as my asshole clutched at the invader that was already balls deep up my shit hole.Roshanda stroked half its length in and out my clutching asshole.I heard Odessa chuffing and looked over and saw that Chantel was straddling her ass and pushing hard into her tight sphincter and jammed hard and the thick dick head punched into the black asshole.She gurgled and immediately pushed her ass back into the invading thrusts and moaned "deeper" and"fuck my black ass Chantel" who needed no encouragement.Soon her shaft was also working in and out balls deep into her shitter.I could see that Chantel's dick was quickly soaked in shit cream and I knew Roshanda's was as well.My mouth was watering in anticipation.Soon I saw Chantel pull her cock out Odessa's ample ass and step over to me as I felt Roshanda pull out my spasming asshole and I heard her talking to Odessa.Chantel told me "Suck Odessa's shit off my dick you fucking white Bitch! � suck that Nigger's shit off my black dick bitch!"I moaned opening my mouth wide and filling my mouth with her cock soaked in shit juice.I moaned and bobbed once more tasting a woman's sweet shit cream in my mouth.I heard Odessa moaning and cawing sucking my ass off Roshanda's cock.Again and again the teenagers pounded our asses and we cleaned the other's shit juice off the cocks that had just finished plundering our assholes.�� Odessa got in perfect sync as the girls plundered our asses and then started doing a2p as we they took us higher.�� We were both on edge now our asses being simply pounded to oblivion by our thirteen year old lovers.I was gibbering mindlessly I could hear myself.Odessa was croaking "Pound my black asshole goddamn-it � pound it pound it pound it!"We glanced at each other's slashing faces and at our bodies jolted forward with the savage anal dicking our tits flopping wildly beneath us.We both erupted into wild screams of blistering bliss as our bodies flipped and jackknifed explosively as the teenagers straddles us now and slammed down with all their might into her exploding shitters.They had death grips on our ass cheeks making us surge down and forward with each savage thrust.I saw that Odessa was jerking her clit wildly and sure enough she really screamed loud this time as I watched four long squirts of cunt juice splash onto the carpet soaking it in cunt juice which she now collapsed onto as Chantel straddled her big ass her legs spread and on her palms still slamming her cock into her exploding shitter.I had gone into a second orgasm that had me collapsing my face and arms onto the floor my ass high in the air with Roshanda still raping it with pile driving thrusts prolonging my second orgasm with several more searing spasms ofburning ecstasy.I was now half loopy with fuck delirium as Odessa had a third orgasm that hard her humping up and slamming her groin down into the sopping wet mess her cunt had made and I saw on the up hump that she was gushing again.She finally collapsed spent into her big wet pool of cum on the floor.She mewled and drooled sightlessly at me with long full body spasms rippling out her spent ruined shit hole.

She was out for the count.I helped her to her bed and went back into the living room where I was savagely dp fucked and the cunts did double vag and anal back and forth making me cum twice more.Now I was down for the count.Late that evening I texted in I was feeling ill.The next morning I washed Odessa up in her tub as the shower cleaned us off and I sucked her off to start her day right.The girls were giddy to have another day of fucking before them with women so much older than them.Their mother's thinking they were with a mutual friend.Now Odessa and I sucked them off repeatedly in the morning.After dinner we got strapped in and fucked them senseless.I made sure that the little sluts got a lot of double vag and anal fucking like I had last night.They cummed so hard.Late in the night, I had Roshanda up in the air.Her thighs gripping my ribs and her arms holding on tight around my neck as Odessa cupped her ass to help me support Roshanda.I so loved feeling her sweaty body rubbing and jolting hard into mine as we torpedoed our dicks savagely into her down plunging fuck holes.Hefting her up to let her weight slam her body down onto our impaling dicks squiring her fuck holes to the hilt as she cried out in ecstasy.Her rigid, thick nipples grinding into my tits all over as she wallowed and I felt her ankles kicking wildly behind me.I was fucking her cunt as Odessa did her ass and Chantal sucked her lover's ass off Odessa's cock.I could feel Chantel's hand working the cock out Roshanda's spasming asshole roughly and then hear her murmurs and moans sucking her lover's asshole off Odessa's cock.After a few times of this I moved my cock to her asshole and Odessa did not pause a moment to invade her shit hole also with her dick.Roshanda jolted hard and screamed as Odessa forced her cock into her resisting sphincter but finally got the head into her O ring and jerked up hard with her dick to sink several inches up her ass as the teenager really screamed in pain.Soon we were seesawing our dicks in and out her ass.We pounded her booty hard with our savagely up thrusting cocks as head lulled first on my shoulder and then leaning back onto Odessa's torso as she cawed in lost ecstasy her face constantly slashing her eyes squeezing shut in fierce pleasure.We let her down to clean our dicks along with Chantel.The slut hopped up into my arms locking her legs around me and reached down and guided my dick to her asshole and shoved it in groaning and again crying out as Odessa now easily punched her dick into her ass.We slammed our cocks into her black ass as she groaned so gutturally in rising pleasure, her head thrashing and face slashing so close to mine as I soaked up her crushing pleasure as we punched our cocks into her spasming asshole.Soon she had a multiple orgasm wallowing all over me as she bucked and convulsed wildly spending herself on our love dicks.I so reveled feeling her rubbery nipples and areolas raking and digging into my tits as she convulsed wildly in my arms.The way her thighs spastically clutched my ribs and her forehead juddered against my neck as her cunt and shitholes exploded shocking bolts of bliss into her boiling veins making her whinny against my ear as her body wallowed all over mine.�� Chantel was right below her when we pulled our dicks out, she moaned and exclaimed excitedly as Roshanda's ass poured shit nectars all over face and into her open mouth.Chantel wanted the same standing fuck but I am only so strong so we did classic dp and soon were doing savage dp and double vag on her.She had two orgasm but croaked she wanted more.�� I had to smile.Often, when you do double anal on her she is like Denise now.�� She pleads for you to not fuck her with two dicks in her ass.She is too small, we are too big, please have mercy, show compassion and such pleadings.She will try to scoot away even though she is anchored down with a dick in her ass already and put a hand on top of the dick already fucking her ass.It simply turns her on to the max to have the person getting ready to invade her ass roughly take her shit hole.She loves for you to grip her arm and rip her hand to the side and slap her ass so hard as she tries again to protect her asshole.I so loved her role playing as I now got that arm into an arm bar and twisted back hard behind her back making her scream in pain and slapping her ass viciously for daring to defy me.I gripped her hair and jerked her head back and up still sensing resistance and turning to the side to slap viciously over and over.I loved feeling her head jerk down with my fisted knot in her now fucked up hair each time my palm slapped her face so hard making her face explode down.I would jerk her head back up for more vile abuse.She cried such big tears and pleaded to me, "Why are you hurting me!" *Smack* --harsh sobs *Smack* -- Pleassseeeee *Smack* *Smack* God help meeeeee! *Smack*Smack*Smack* ohhhhh godddddd! (weakly)*Smack*Smack" more deep sobs and big tears running down her cheeks.Odessa below her urging me on "fuck that ghetto nigger up Barbara!"I slapped her until I had exhausted her will and she couldn't fight anymore.I threw her exhausted head down her will broken.Her head lying prostrate on Odessa's shoulder her body jolting with each savage thrust of Odessa's cock deep into her ass.I loved hearing her weak murmurs and whinny's of exhausted pleasure.Then I savagely shoved my dick into her asshole along with Odessa's cock.Chantel's head rocked up as her throat screamed loud in asshole shredding pain as I took her asshole along with Odessa.Her head soon sagged back down again as she gibbered and moaned.Her body wallowing all over Odessa's as we pounded her thirteen year old asshole with savage thrusts of our thick cocks.I so loved seeing our cocks seesawing in and out her ass sliding in deep as she cawed and had spastic jolts of anal pleasure shook her lean body.�� Our cocks soaked in beautiful creamy shit juice.After a few minutes of intense, punishing anal pounding I could see her body tensing and juddering.Her eyes sightless in lost pleasure,"oh god, oh god!, oh god! � shit! � aaaaiiiiyyyyyyyyeeeeeeee" she began to wail over and over as her asshole exploded in shocking ecstasy.Her orgasm was horrific in how it throttled her thirteen body and went multiple with killing spasms that simply rent her soul to shreds in crippling ecstasy that had her wailing and jackknife violently her belly slamming down so hard into Odessa's belly and her tits mashed into Odessa's massive mounds.We pounded her throughout her orgasm to prolong it.We fucked her until she was completely spent and prostrate on Odessa's voluptuous body.�� Odessa stroked her sweat soaked back cooing to her and kissed her face and neck as the teenager had a long bout of womb rending aftershocks making her gasp and hitch for a long minute.We finally pulled our dicks out her spent shit hole and I felt my belly clench seeing a huge pulse of shit juice gush out her slack ruined shitter and flowing down and soaking her cunt in hot steamy shit juice.I laid on the floor beside Odessa our dicks soaked in shit cream lying on our sweaty bellies.Chantel had rolled onto her back on the floor looking up at the ceiling with a beatific smile on her face.Odessa husked "Get your black ass over her Chantel and suck your shit off our dicks you Fucking ghetto Nigger!"Chantel smiled a lewd half-smile and rolled over and crawled over and slowly gripped our large cocks lifting them as she sat between our sweaty bodes and slowly her head lowered.I love the little variations in great fucks.Instead of immediately diving on one of our cocks she took the shafts and rubbed them all over her face.Rubbing the length of the shafts over her cheeks and bending her head to run the shafts over her forehead and then all over her nose, eyes, lower face and neck.Her whole face now soaked in shit cream and beaded sweat.She murmured to Odessa, "This is how ghetto niggers fuck Odessa � nasty."She now lowered her head and swallowed my big dick head swirling her head slowly sucking hard.I loved watching her slow serpentine undulations as her head slowly rocked, her cheeks hollowing out as she lovingly sucked her shit cream off my dick as her head slow bobbed.She lifted and leaned over to Odessa's cock and drooled thick stands of spit onto the dick head making a beautiful cocktail of spit and shit juice.She then extended her tongue swirling it all over Odessa's dickhead slowly moving her mouth down so slowly as her tongue slithered all over Odessa's cockhead until she finally swallowed it and undulated her head as she sucked her checks hollowing out with her cleaning sucks.She was so beautiful sucking our cocks clean.I so know that such hot fucks as this totally addicted me to sex when I was her age.New love always makes me feel so alive and ready for more hot fucking.

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You now capture an important facet of great fucking which is pacing.Like I always complain so many others (almost all others all the time) don't give any details.How you can reduce a hot fuck to four sentences is really beyond me.Obviously, when sex is reduced to this paltry amount of sentences not much is really possible is it.You capture so much in three or four sentences that doesn't really have anything to do with the direct fucking per se.But though it is not really the hot fucking it is the little things that blend with the primal physical that makes sex so fucking awesome.I don't think I do this but it is cute how Laura is holding her breath as she sinks her cock deep into Shelley's pussy with her cock.I so love how you make the moment of penetration so special.Is so feel my belly spasm and clench when I feel my lover's cock sinking into my pussy or up my asshole.Only you make the sweet observations. Like Laura watching the sublime pleasure crossing Shelley's face feeling herself being penetrated.How she begins to swirl her ass and pelvis back into Laura's cock as she begins the slow rhythm of fucking.Like I say only you capture this.Most don't even come close to capturing this divine moment.Only you show why we groan like whore's and up tilt or pussies so we can get our lover's cock deeper into our bellies as we moan and undulate in fucking pleasure and rising love for our lover(s).Plus, you show as always that total loving that I adore.How Laura is running her hands up and down Shelley's back stroking it along with her cock in Shelley's pussy.This might not seem like much to the unskilled lover but this stroking of the back and shoulders is so sensual and sends ripples of sensations to one's clit make it pulse with stronger pulses as it sends waves of pleasure throughout your body.How such stroking along with your dick makes your nipples harden and pulse so hard to your clit and brain that it makes you hitch and catch your breath at times in pure pleasure.When other authors forget this or just don't know it, it robs so much from the story and what it should be.Fortunately, you never forget this.

So many writers and poor lovers really think that stroking their dick unimaginatively is all there is to great sex.All this does is send horny, frustrated women to my and other 's arms so we can show them what great het fucking truly is.I love opening a bored housewife's eyes to what great sex truly is and have her go absolutely crazy humping into my mouth or crying out as I plunder their pussies and assholes to crushing repeated orgasms.One thing that great sex brings out is the aural part of sex.Even the more quiet lovers will at least grunt, exhale sharply, sigh and gurgle as you plow their quims.I find it easy to get them more verbal as I fuck them to heaven repeatedly.I get so tired of other stories always being so silent during the sex before the orgasm.Most even forget to have any sounds in this time but some do, but do so unimaginatively that I have come to almost scream sometimes in frustration.You never forget like here ["Unnn . . . unnnnn . . . uunnmmmm . . ." she began to grunt softly, after a minute of this slow churning.������� "Oh god, darling, you are beautiful," Laura murmured, bending forward, and dropping down, mashing her own dangling breasts into Shelley's long naked back as she kissed the tops of her shoulders and frenched her delectable brown ear, breathing hotly into it.  "You are so beautiful . . . I love fucking you . . ."�������� "Unnggggg . . . unnmmmgggg . . ."]�� You show how flooding your slut with such sweet pleasure and sensations begins to make her produce the divine sounds of a whore being fucked good.I so love to hear my women moan like this form me.I live to get them croaking like this because I know I am pleasuring them deeply as is my job.I can just see my slut groaning and cawing as I sink my cock deeper and harder into her pussy or asshole as she begins to jam back harder and harder.I love how you show Laura using her entire body to love Shelley.I so love to rub and gyrate my body into yours as we fuck. To feel the friction and rubbing of skin.Especially as we sweat and our bodies slip and slide in sweaty love.I know Shelley must be gagging feeling Laura's hard nipples dragging across her back.It bakes me mewl and my cunt pulse hot fuck juice soaking my groin and thighs and those of my lover if grinding down into my groin and pussy.I really have to love Laura Frenching Shelley's ear.I simply squeal and melt for you when you love my ears.They are big erogenous zone for me.I love to feel your tongue wiggling and exploring my earmaking my ear wet with your passion as you whisper to me how you rare going to fuck me so good.Plus, I love how Laura is actually telling her lover how much she loves her and how beautiful Shelley is to her.I am always complimenting my lovers and love how they preen if females and swelling up if male as their egos swell even more.Reading these love grunts I can absolutely say that I have not seen one other author show this ever.I find this strange.I mean these grunts are such a basic part of lovemaking that I can only wonder how only one author captures this.Silence is one thing but always shouting out whole sentences in all caps is equally boring and stifling.One thing I really anticipate in each new story is what sounds will you capture this time.

Like I said earlier you capture the flow of great sex and the ramping that occurs for the love kill.Here you show how after the initial excitement and heated penetration you fall into the "middle" of the fuck.This occurs when going down on your slut or during het fucking.That delicious middle time when you are rhythmically pumping your dick into her sodden pussy or slow stroking your dick into her flowing pussy or juicing shit hole.With new lovers you will often hit the sheets in overdrive and slam fuck or inhale her cunt into your mouth and make her cum almost immediately.But after the edge has been taken off or when regular lovers who have fucked often in the past you normally fall into this rhythm of love fucking.Slow bump and grinding and devouring of pussy if going down on her.You show though that this "gentle" time is only building up the pressure in her womb and slow stroking pleasure into her spasming pussy or clenching asshole.Plus, you show as always how Laura is stroking and clutching Shelley's body.I use everything I can to make my female lovers bodies coil and tense ever harder and higher with rising need.Like doggy here you show Laura clenching and stroking Shelley's body.I love how she moves her hair aside to kiss her neck.I love doing that as I nip her neck and suck in her skin bruising it as she yelps and cries out in helpless pleasure.How you can cup her face and turn her head for heated French kissing to swirl tongues as spit is traded and tongues slide all over each other as we gag in love and need.I love pressing my heavy tits into your back like Laura does and while kissing your back and grinding my nipples up and down your sweaty back reaching underneath you in doggy and pulping and milking your tits hard as I work your nipples grinding and pulping them and the tit meat of your upper titties as you cry out and scream in pained pleasure.You are fucking Shelley totally and I so love reading it.Sigh you capture the middle rut and how it slowly morph into the racing, climbing end fuck and love kill ["Ungghh!  Owwwnnggg!"������� "Oh honey . . . oh honey . . . !" Laura panted.������� "Make it deeper!" Shelley whimpered.������� "Oh . . . really deep?"������� "Yes.  Yes!  Do it . . . again!  Ungghhh!  Owwnnmmggg!]I love you capturing the sounds Shelley is making and how the fucker is working to pleasure her lover.How Laura is panting which is showing she is working hard to fuck Shelley expertly and how one's own passion is inflaming Laura the fucker.�� Gods, your sounds are so varied and spot on.I think it was these sounds that immediately hooked me to your stories because I had never before or since seen them in print.It was devastating when I first found them and nearly masturbated myself into a stupor when I first found your stories.I too find a lot the women who at first are telling me that they don't want it hard and deep or up the ass and I always find that soon they are crying out for me to slam my cock balls deep into the pussy or ass.I especially swoon when they are crying out for me to pound their assholes to ruin when not thirty minutes earlier they were telling me that I could never fuck them in the ass.Fucking them to their first anal 'gasm making them shriek and buck wildly and then as they are still stunned and hitching with aftershocks.Then pulling out their asshole and moving up and pushing them down and gripping my cock at the base and tracing their lips husking to them suck their shit off my dick.Many dive on it with immediate gusto and relish but I love it when I have to work my dick on their lips and love coo, cajole and whimper beg for them to suck their shithole off my dick.HowI feel my belly tensing and clenching as I see the will to resist erode away and their mouths opening wide and swallowing a shit flavored dickhead for the first time.How they moan in pure fucking pleasure and start to immediately bob and undulate their head moaning in pure happiness.Running their tongue all over my dickhead and murmuring as they drool spit on my cock and look at my dick with their head so close to my cock and diving on it again moaning so loud as they go back for sloppy seconds of shit juice atm love.My eyes roll back and spasm so hard having seduced another het newbie to lesbian anal het fucking and ass to mouth.How soon, they are rolling off me and eagerly bending down lifting my dick to swallow it when it is coated thickly with shit cream and sucking so clean and telling my their assholes taste like "shit honey" as my newbie Cathy (another neglected / bored housewife) told me last Tuesday night.I knew I had to remember that one for my verbal arsenal.

 

Funny how sometimes I write something and then kind of see it later in the story.I love big dick for just the observation that Laura makes here [Laura realized, though it was too late to do anything about it, that any of her own lengthier strap-on dildos would have given Shelley even more of the thrills she craved.  This little, short, thick one did the trick, but Shelley seemed to want deeper penetration than it was capable of.]This is why I use a big strap-on myself.I want its 9 � inches to deliver the deep dicking that my sluts love and adore.A skilled cocksmen can fuck the hell out of me with their normal sized pricks but I get that extra something being stretched out and feeling your dick deep in my belly as my pussy, asshole or both are plundered hard and deep.Big cocks are simply awesome and I seek them out.I love to have them filling my mouth and letting my lips trace their girth and features.All cocks are nice but the longer and larger cocks just generate that little bit more friction and sensation as it plows your pussy or asshole.Also, you can just feel it deep in your belly driving you insane with pleasure as it strokes your love aching fuck holes.With normal sized penises I am able to do deep throat in my sleep.I want to feel your cock sliding down my throat and making it bulge obscenely.I so love to feel a large bulbous dickhead pushing my uvula back and then sliding down my trachea and feeling your dickhead rubbing along it as it slides deep into my throat.I want to have my gag reflect triggered and choke out that spit and have it drooling all over your cock and roping all over my throat, tits and belly.

Attention:Long Digression

Last week Anthony called me with a hot tryst he had set up.At work he had been working with Jaleen for a while.He is a tall good looking back man with a buff build.They had been good work mates getting along well.A couple weeks back while draining their snakes they discovered each were well hung.Now Jaleen started feeling Anthony out about swinging and swapping wives or girlfriends. Anthony was bemused at how carefully Jaleen was bringing it up.When he finally made contact so to speak Anthony told Jaleen he was totally open to such "relationships".He found out that Jaleen's wife's name was Malika and showed him pictures of her.She is tall at five foot eleven and medium brown with nice frizzy hair.Anthony asked if she was bi and Jaleen smiled and said yes and that she especially loved white pussy.If she had loved black pussy then he would have picked his girlfriend Shanice.But since Malika loves white pussy he called me.Of course I was game.He made me whistle when he told me that Jaleen has a 12 � cock that is thick and veined.He gave me their facebook page and the passwords to get into their private pages.To start, Jaleen and Malika wanted Anthony to fuck Malika and of course I would be fucked by Jaleen.At home I saw that I had to have them.I knew looking at Jaleen's mighty cock I would not be able to deep throat him but I would have to try.His wife was so beautiful I knew I would sucking on her pussy over and over and driving my tongue deep up her shit hole.Some of the photos and videos showed her ass being deep fucked by Jaleen and another of two white big dicked men dp fucking her so hard and deep.Malika is tall at five foot elven she said and I loved her medium brown hue and facial features that showed some white mingling in the past.Two nights later I was at their place with Anthony.I was happy to be Anthony's wifey for the new couple.The truth could come out later after a night full of hard fucking.I was smitten with Malika's beauty and loved her large curls that cascaded to her shoulders.I devoured her large titties bulging her tight top.Her braless nipples hardening as Anthony and I devoured them with our eyes.I looked over Jaleen's hard body and handsome features and the bulge showing his large cock waiting to plunder my body and soul.I loved his baggy shorts with draw strings out, ready for me.I loved how Malika devoured me and Anthony with her eyes as Jaleen devoured my tits and ass with his dark eyes.We made pleasantries and I found them to be intelligent, funny and down to Earth.Malika made hot eye contact that promised much pussy gobbling and hot titty sucking.I could see her large tits bulging her tight fitting top, her hard nipples poking out, making my mouth drool.I could not wait to devour them and her lovely pussy and asshole.

But first things first.I had been stroking Jaleen's thigh and leaning into his shoulder making kitten eyes at him as Malika did the same thing to Anthony.With women you always have foreplay but with men you often go for the gold immediately.Malika started to undo Anthony's jeans as I now undid Jaleen's draw strings loosening his shorts.I gripped his massive cock as it pulsed on his thigh as I watched Malika pull Anthony's jeans off his legs and now grip his boxers and he lifted his ass and she jerked them off freeing his elven inch cock to slam on his belly twitching.She moaned lifting his thick cock and opening her mouth wide, lowered her mouth and swallowed his cock and slow bobbed moaning and humming lewdly.I now shucked Jaleen's pants and boxers down and his cock sprang out pulsing up off his stomach.I was actually intimated by his girth.His dick is definitely thicker in proportion to Anthony's cock.It was like a thick anal dildo except this one was alive and pulsing for me.I moaned seeing his bulging veins on his dick.I lifted his cock and clamped my mouth tight onto his prick and started to slow bob and pump his shaft as I drooled and spit on his cock to lubricate it as I now sucked harder and bobbed deeper taking his cock to the back of my throat.I gripped his thick cock and pumped it with my hand using my spit as lub for the pumping.I was making obscene noises as I sucked his prick and lifted to lick with butterfly strokes on his bulbous dick head and then traced his cock crown loving his dipped piss hole and then sucking his dickhead into my mouth slowly as his head rocked back and he groaned as I sucked on just his dickhead.I loved pulling his cock crown through my lips feeling the ridge as I moved my head up and down his shaft.I came up for air and watched Malika suck and bob on Anthony's own towering prick. His shaft slicked with spit and then Malika moved her head down and sucked his testicles one at a time into her mouth and worked them making Anthony growl in pleasure his face slashing.Jaleen now stood up and told me "suck my balls Barbara".I did feeling their heavy weight in my mouth his balls huge like his prick.I stretched out his nutsack and supper sucked his testicles making him rock his head back as he gripped his forehead for control.I licked up his shaft after working both nuts and swallowed his bulbous cockhead and bobbed hard as my hair flounced and my tits swirled with my sucks.We are all naked by now and I was in heaven.I cupped my tits and he fucked the valley as my mouth sucked on his dickhead on the upstroke.I purred feeling his thick prick sliding up and down through my cupped tits.I loved feeling his thick dickhead surging up through my cupped tit meat and poking out the top.Pumping and then stopping on an up stroke to allow me to lower my head and hard suck his black dickhead jutting up out of my mashed together titties.Malika not be to outdone now titty fucked Anthony's prick and sucked on it as he held it up for her through her cupped tits to let her twist and undulate her head before slow stroking his cock through her tits.We sucked and bobbed for another few minutes when our studs took control.

Anthony took Malika to the floor and pushed her legs back and slowly pile drove his cock up her clutching cunt his knees straddling her ass.He slow stroked his prick in and out her tight pussy as it clutched his shaft and her pussy soon coating it with pussy juice.Jaleen sat on the sofa and I straddled him my feet on the floor as I guided his prick to my pussy hole and I sank down slowly.I juddered and felt my eyes bulge as he stretched me out so fucking good.I heard myself whinny and I shook all over feeling his cock slowly slide deeper into my belly.We began to hump, me swirling down as he pumped up hard.I bent down and loved watching my lips clinging to his thick prick as it fucked my cunt and I watched my juices lubricating his cock with my whitish love cream.I moaned deep in my chest feeling my inner cunt lips clinging tight to his thick cock as it slide in and out my lubricating pussy. How my stretched inner labia lips clung to his black dick on the outstroke all pink and soaking wet and then seeing them punched back into my fuck hole as I keened and gurgled my pleasure.I would watch myself being fucked until a spasm would rock me making me throw my head back in fierce pleasure whinnying before looking down again to watch black dick fucking my white pussy.I kept looking over at Malika and watched Anthony first pile drive and then move to missionary and pounded Malika to the floor.She was moaning "yesssssss" and "harder" as Anthony was now slamming her twat as she swirled her pussy up into his powerful thrusts.I was juddering as I felt Jaleen's massive cock now slamming into my womb with his powerful up strokes as I slammed my ass into his clenched thighs.I was gagging as my tits slapped up and down and I clenched his shoulders and sofa back for purchase to work my pussy good as it sluiced cunt juice all over his prick and soaking our groins in fuck juice as I felt sweat now pouring off my body.I lifted off and sank to my knees beside him and shoved his cock into my mouth and sucked my juices off his upper shaft and then rubbed his shaft all over my face as he groaned "Goddamn you're a fucking Slut!"As I mounted him I watched Malika now have her legs pulled back and up with her grip on her ankles totally opening her cunt hole to Anthony's now wild, savage thrusts into her womb as she tilted her groin up to take his cock as deep as possible into her clutching cunt.He slammed her pussy hard his groin slamming into her tilted groin as she moaned and began to jolt and head thrash.She released her grip on her ankles and clutched Anthony to her body her arms around his back and thighs on his hips as her eyes went sightless and her body began to buck wildly up and down as she cried out over and over with squealing moans.Gods she was beautiful cumming so hard.I twisted around and had my back to Jaleen and he slammed up into my flowing cunt as I slow pumped letting him do the work of pounding my pussy as I hefted my tits up and sucked hard on my rock hard throbbing nipples.I was starting to feel my belly tighten when Jaleen tilted me back on his torso by his grip on my legs behind my knees and began to slam fuck my juicing spasming cunt.My head lulled back on his shoulder as he hammered fucked my cunt with slamming thrusts.My tits now sloshed back on my chest and rolling with his thrusts.I gripped the sofa to keep position and he now tilted me to the right and lunged his cock into my now convulsing cunt one arm behind my legs and the other gripping my hip to keep me tilted over.I love how new positions make my muscles twist and tighten.The change in position worked his cock at a different angle, producing hot friction deep up my now convulsing cunt.A minute of his pounding my cunt in this position, made it simply explode on his hammering cock "Uuuunnggghhhhhhhhh � Unngg Goddamit�Unnggghhhhiiiiieeeeeeeee!" I wailed as my womb erupted in spewing molten bolts of love lava broiling through my veins.�� I whinnied and bucked wildly in his strong grip my ankles flailing and belly seizing up as killing spasms throttled me with fucking bliss.

He kept me in place hammering my exploding twat as I thrashed and moaned until spent.He pulled me back and let me down on the floor.I pivoted around and lifted his massive cock and swallowed his thick black cock soaked in my hot cunts juices.I sucked and bobbed savoring my pussy on his bulbous cockhead and veined shaft.I watched Malika now getting fucked spoon Anthony lifting her leg to open her pussy for his pounding strokes his hips slamming her ass making her tits roll and body jolt.I licked and lipped Jaleen's shaft and kitten rasped his dickhead with the flat of my tongue cleaning his prick of my thick cunt nectars.He got me on the floor doggy and impaled my cunt with one hard thrust and gripped my hips pounding me back into his hammering thrusts.I loved feeling my tits swirl and whiplash as my head thrashed as my pussy once more filled my veins with hot pleasure as Jaleen slammed fucked my cunt.I watched Anthony hammer hard and then slow stroke his dick with arches of his back into Malika's tight pussy her lips clinging to his piston cock working in and out her flowing box.Her head lulling down her hair all mused up now and then rocking up as demented groans of pleasure ripped out her grimacing mouth as sweat powered off her face and rolling tits.Anthony grimacing in fierce pleasure his prick milked by her tight, clutching cunt I could see.Malika began to jam back into his hard thrusts her face slashing more and more.She plucked her nipples and her body jolted as fierce bolts from her nipples jarred her.I was jolting forward and my pussy dripping as I got hammered by Jaleen's thick cock.I felt my cunt all stretched out and spasming and my lips pulled and stretched by his thick shaft pumping so deep into my womb.After another couple minutes I was in heaven and I watched Malika begin to judder so hard.Her eyes bulged wide open and her head suddenly snapped down hard and her legs stiffened and vibrated so hard her toes curling."OOOHHHHH GGGOOODDDAMMMNNNNNN! �. AAARRGGHHHHHHH! �unnhhh unngghh � ffffuuuccckkkkk! � unnngggghhhhhhhhhhhh!" She was so beautiful as she flipped and jackknifed her tits rolling wildly as Anthony gripped her shoulder and hip to hammer piston his eleven inches into her exploding pussy driving her insane with pleasure.

I was being slammed fucked with thick black dick doggy jolting forward my tits flopping beneath.Sometimes supporting myself with one hand to pull my nipples hard making me gag with pleasure.I loved feeling Jaleen's strong hands gripping my ass hard to slam me back into his impaling thrusts.I watched Anthony slow stroke Malika's temporarily spent pussy as she recovered and then started up his rhythm of hard fucking as she revived.I loved seeing her head twist back and their deep tongue kissing as she whimpered with this thick tongue deep in her mouth and his dick pumping her twat hard.Jaleen pulled out my pulsing cunt and fell to his knees in front of me his massive cock waving before my lips.I opened my mouth wide and swallowed his huge dickhead moaning at how it filled my mouth and the thick coating of my love juices on it.I bobbed and slurped happily.He gripped my hair after a minute and pistoned his cock hard into my throat making me gag and drool and savor every inch riding up and down my tongue flooding my mouth with the essence of my pussy and his manhood.Several times he pulled out my pussy and feed me his dick as I felt the tension beginning to form in my belly again.I watched Anthony grip Malika's ass and roll her over more spoon and pull his dick out and move it up to her shit hole and begin to push it in. Her head sagged and she keened and then her head rocked back as his dick slide a few inches up her shitter.He began to stroke it slow and easy letting her asshole open up and slowly sink his dick into her ass.Jaleen was now gripping my ass and shoulder slamming me back into his cock as my head thrashed and sweat dripped off me.I felt my belly hitching and my fingers clawing the carpet.I begged him to fuck me harder and he did making me catch myself with his hammering thrusts jolting me hard as I widen my stance a little to take his dick hammering my womb.Gods, my womb suddenly went from tensing to exploding wildly making me shriek and flip uncontrollably as I bucked up and down crying out in screams of shattering bliss.I collapsed to the floor slowly and he straddled me to hammer my flowing twat as my clit ground into the carpet which caused as second orgasm to explode out my flowing cunt.I screamed "Shhiiitttttttt�Goddamn it! � uunngggghhhhhrrrrrrr � Aarrrggghhhhuuunnnnn � oh gods I cumming so hard!"�� Crushing spasms made me hump up and down spastically as my fingers clawed the carpet.The next spasm made my head rock up and judder so hard as I drooled all down my face, my eyes rolled back spasming as I was lost in blissful waves of searing pleasure rocking my soul.I heard myself groan so gutturally as my head kept spasming hard on my juddering neck feeling my tendons corded so tight as my head spasmed hard.

When I regained my senses, I saw that Jaleen was on his back beside me and he croaked "I want to fuck your ass!"I saw that Malika was now getting fucked doggy in the ass her tits swaying and rolling her ass cheeks jiggling with each slam of Anthony's dick into her shitter.I groggily but happily got up on my hands and knees and straddled Jaleen's hips and gripped his thick shaft and swirled it around my rosebud that was soaked in sweat and cunt juice.My shit hole lubricated for invasion.I pushed down and my eyes widened at the thickness of his dick.I felt my shitter screaming in pain as I forced my body down and humped gently and my head rocked back as I keened in pain and pleasure feeling his dickhead slip into my rectum.I pulled up to let his dickhead pull out and I felt my asshole spasm wildly as I immediately pushed his dick into my ass again to feel that wonderful pain of thick invasion.I worked my sphincter like that twice more as Malika hissed what a slut I am.I smiled as I now swirled my ass and worked my groin up and down slowly working my sphincter loose and his dick deeper up my shitter.I was in heaven feeling that shaft slowly sink up my asshole until my ass cheeks were grinding his groin.I now began to hump and down as he worked his dick up in rhythm with my fuck ride.I was gagging and groining as I began to work it hard, my tits now doing their swirl and flop up off my chest and slamming down to flop wildly before swirling up again for another cycle.I so love the nasty sound of heaving tits and the hedonism of watching them flop and slap in the air and on my chest.I had not seen Malika do ATM but I felt my belly lurch when Anthony pulled out her ass and stepped over her shoulder with one leg and push his dick down to her mouth.She looked me in the eye and swallowed his cock soaked in creamy shit cream and moaned so loud as she bobbed her head undulating.She licked up his shaft cupping a side and hucked "I love the taste of my shit on your dick Anthony" before swallowing again and bobbing hard now.He was soon plowing her ass hard doggy as she jolted her whole body rippling with his powerful thrusts into her ass.I was doing most of the work at first but I tired and leaned forward and let Jaleen pound my asshole with rabbit fast deep thrusts up my shitter.I love to change angles and positions because it works my ass and colon diffently sparking new sensations and pleasure jolts.I revived and sat up and again and we slammed hard into each other my tits rolling and whiplashing.I gagged and whimpered and then leaned back between his legs on my palms to swirl slam my asshole on his thick shaft as the position strained my shitter making me keen in helpless pleasure.I looked Jaleen in the eyes and lifted up and felt his dickhead work my sphincter slipping free to slap his stomach.I sat on my ass between his spread legs and gripped his shaft lifting it making kitten eyes as his eyes glittered knowing I was about to do ATM on him.I glanced over at Malika who was watching me with excitement and I made slut eyes at her and turned my slut gaze back to Jaleen.I extended my tongue slithering it all over his cockhead making him groan hard his head up on stiff neck watching me.I stroke his cockhead with my pink tongue,drooling spit onto his dickhead and slurping it up with pursed lips sliding all over his cockhead sucking and murmuring.I then took his cock to the back of my throat my lips clenched tight bobbing hard as I made wet obscene noises sucking hard with cheek hollowing sucks.I loved hearing Malika husk "Goddamn you're white whore bitch!"I sucked his dick clean and remounted him as both Malika and I did ATM over and over sucking our lovers dicks clean over our sweet assholes.Jaleen asking me how my asshole tasted.I murmured "Like sweet shit candy � (I ran his dickhead soaked in ass juice all over my lips) I love the taste of my shit hole Jaleen" looking up at him as now lowered my head oh so slowly and again swallowed his cock covered in my shit cream.Too soon Malika and I had awesome anal 'gams that had us crying out in helpless pleasure or bodies flipped and jackknifed so hard as bodies were filled with pummeling bliss.I went multiple when I rubbed and forked my clit furiously as I now shrieked and felt my toes trying to curl off.Then Malika and I got on our knees and sucked our lovers off.I loved seeing her eyes jolting open wide when Anthony's cock spewed his hard bolts into her throat making her choke and spill his semen all over her lower face and throat.Jaleen does not spurt as hard but his large testicles produce copious amounts of semen flooding my mouth to overflowing.Our messy faces allowed me and Malika to kiss and lick each other's faces clean and twirl tongues in rising love.

The beauty of fucking couples is fucking both sexes.Our bucks were drained of semen for now so we went upstairs to continue our fun and games.I told Malika I wanted us to shower before going to bed which made her smile sultry.Soon I was on my knees sucking her off as she swirled her pussy hard into my devouring mouth.I sucked her clit so hard and French kissed her fuck hole sucking in cunt meat and munching on it as she cried out in ecstasy.She at first clenched my head to drive my mouth into her cunt.My lips smothered by her fat vulva.Munching on cunt meat and then working up her slit sucking on her labia lips before tongue rasping her clit with flat tongue strokes before inhaling deep into my mouth and deep throat love sucking.Her head pounded the shower wall as she grunted "fuck, fuck, fuck" softy.She released my scalp and hefted her perfect tits up and started to suck with cheek hollowing sucks on her thick, long nipples.She huffed and chuffed as she sucked and gyrated her pussy so hard into my mouth.I supper sucked her clit now and she mashed her tits together to suck on both nipples simultaneously as her whole body started to vibrate.Sigh, muffled wails filled the shower as she at first was able to continue sucking her nipples as I sucked and tongue slapped her rigid, throbbing clit.A hard spasm made her fold forward and then slam the wall and she lost control of her arms dropping her tits as her arms jerked like a dying insect.She screamed full caps as I tried to suck her clit off her body again folding forward and slamming back so hard her tits whipped up and flopped down.Sigh she flooded my mouth with so much hot cunt ambrosia intoxicating me with new love for her.Then she was on her knees lapping away at my pussy her tongue rasping over my bulging clit and then long tongue strokes up and down my slit before lashing my clit again.She spent several minutes tonguing my pussy.I was in heaven feeling her butterfly tongue strokes.She was tonging my pussy folds when she suddenly mashed her face forward and sucked my fuck hole with voracious sucks sucking in cunt meat and munching on it making me cry out in shocking pleasure.She sucked and munched and moved up and sucked with long, strong love sucks on my clit.Her thick lips mashing and worming over my pulsing clit.She began to slurp and pull on my clitoral hood and making so much obscene noises I was going crazy with deepening love for Malika.She released my clit for a second "Start calling me a Nigger.It turns me on."I was only too happy to oblige."Suck my clit you goddamn Nigger! � suck it with your boot lips you fucking goddman Jig!"I loved how her eyes flared with sensual heat as I racially insulted her as she sucked with renewed vigor.I was soon screaming "Sssuuuccckkkk it Malikkkaaaa!�You GGGOODDDAMMMNNNN NNIIGGGEERRRRR!"I wailed and then groaned gutturally over and over as my body buckled and flipped back into the shower repeatedly as she now wormed three fingers up my spasming twat and hard rotated them right and left over and over.She sucked my upper cunt deep into her mouth and loved sucked so hard her head pulling back with her love sucks as she now rammed her knuckles into my vulva as she hard rotated her hooked fingers through my inner cunt meat and vaginal walls.Her pure love and ministrations made a second orgasm explode on top of dying first one."GGGGOOODDDDAAMMMM--FUUCCCKKK-ITTT � a crushing spasm throttled me � MMAALLLIKKKKAAAA YOU FUCKING GODDAMMMMMMMM NIGGGERRRRR!" I screamed so long and hard as I folded over and jerked up and down helplessly as killing spasms had my back seemingly broken as I jerked up and down all hunched over as I shrieked my killing bliss.She had to help me collapse down the wall and she moved in and we kissed lazily in new love as she cuddled against my collapse form against the wall.I was swooning feeling her tongue deep in my throat and twisting around my tongue as she murmured she was already falling in love me with me.I whispered back I was falling in love her back as she smiled goofily before mating out mouths so tight as we tilted heads to drive tongues down whimpering throats as the need for more intense fucking rose in our bodies.

The beauty of women making love is that it just flows and continues without the need to recharge after a killing cum.Soon I had her on their king size bed, her body stretched out as I went down on her,I was in heaven eating her out sucking on her turgid, blueberry sized clit and slurping and pulling on her long labia lips (she whined for me to suck her "mud flaps") as she bucked and moaned.Then tongue fucking her steamy fuck hole as nectars flowed out and her pussy made divine wet, obscene sloshing noises as I tongued her hard and then while sucking on her clit I got my middle finger deep into her clutching pussy and finger fucked with hard strokes.Twisting and then vibrating fast just to make squishy wet noises as I felt her cunt splatter juice on my neck and upper chest.I worked her clit and fuck hole back and forth with total love taking her higher and feeling her muscles tense and judder in need.She rose up on her elbows and worked her tits with pulp squeezes and lifting up at times to suck on a bulging teat with harsh needy sucks.I sensed it was time for the love kill.I clamed my mouth to her fuck hole and sucked in her inner cunt meat and munched on her sodden folds while my hand now vibrated her clit with rapid strokes back and forth her wet pussy lubricating my fingers for easy jerking her clit off.I saw her eyes bulge out and her legs suddenly slammed into my side and stiffened as her hands slammed into the sheets her fingers clawing.She started to scream and wail her body vibrating like a million volts of killing ecstasy were surging in her veins.Her heels started to kick the mattress beside my ankles and just kept pounding in the coolest fast rhythm her hands now tearing at the sheets in spastic pulls.I moved my mouth clamping onto her clit and deep throat sucked her turgid clit between my lips tongue batting as ground my chin into her soaking wet slit and labia lips prolonging her orgasm with six full body spasms that made her kick her heels up and down hard.She whinnied and cawed her shattering bliss.She finally collapsed spent as her body rocked with strong aftershocks as I softly lipped and stroked her spent clit with my pink tongue.She mewled and drooled.She finally recovered and pulled me up to straddle her face and gripped my ass with clenched fingers and urged me to ride her face hard.She snuffled and used her tongue to plow my pussy as it rode her face up and down and then swirling down to drive my cunt hole or clit deep in her mouth.I gagged and raggedly breathed as her mouth sucked my pussy so good.I ran my hands all up and down my totally sweat soaked body and plucked my nipples and then run my fingers through her hair and stroked her face as she sucked me off.I rode her face now more urgently as I whinnied and groaned and gurgled as I swirled my pussy down into her mouth devouring me so passionately and skilled.She tilted her head back and husked "Get ready to go to heaven you White Bitch � I'm going to show you how a Nigger sucks a white pussy off!" she inhaled my clit deep into her mouth and wormed two fingers into my rosebud and twisted them through my clutching asshole.She sank them in to the hilt and started to pound my ass with her plunging and twisting fingers working my sphincter into a frenzy of spasming pleasure pulses to my bulging clit.I began to hitch and twitch uncontrollably and jammed my hands underneath Malika's head and jammed her face deep into my spasming pussy.My teeth gritted and I felt my face slashing horribly as my head began to thrash.My cunt exploded in her devouring mouth my clit pulsing hotly deep in her sucking mouth.I felt my sphincter clutching and pulsing on her twisting, pounding fingers sending shockwaves flooding out my ass into my clit broiling me in ecstasy.I felt my cunt gushing heavily flooding her mouth soaking her lower face, neck and flowing off her neck I saw in droplets splotching the bed.My head kept snapping down spastically as I wailed and cursed fuck and shit over and over as my womb ruptured and scalded me in broiling waves of searing bliss as my whole body would spasm hard and then freeze up and then spasm again as my face kept slashing and I shrieked out my fucking ecstasy.Sigh and the night was young.We fucked heatedly with tribbing and rutting and more orgasms.Twice more we drained out studs nutsacks of hot nigger semen before we once more fucked with hot lesbo loving to get the best of both worlds.

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You now show the ramping up that I am always talking about.You have shown the slow ramping that occurs during the middle fuck that slowly leads to the end game and the love kill.Your start to work her pussy with your mouth and maybe your finger with that extra magic to make her go wild with need.Or you are doing what you do here with your cock.This is why it is so important to fuck your love slut with your total body and focus.By working her body with all of your body, that means more than your cock, you make her start to go crazy as you have worked her body with total focus and love.you have twisted the spring tight and now it is time to make it release with shattering affect.You are so right as you show Laura thrusting harder and deeper into Shelley's pussy.By starting slower and not as urgent you build the tension to then take her higher and make her womb simply explode with shattering affect.I so love to see my love slut doing what you show Shelley here.Working her body harder as you slam you dick as deep as the position will allow into her flowing cunt or spasming asshole.I love to clutch and stroke your body and pulling close if the position allows as I swirl my hips to slam my dick over and over into your belly.Only your storiesshow the sheer wild passion flowing from Shelley's body.They never show the thrill of feeling your belly tighten and pussy spasming with imminent eruptions of scalding bliss.Their stories are just bland and have no sense of the rapture of great fucking.They rob the fuck of any specialness.They make it almost ordinary with their bland and lifeless sentences.Those that tell you something just tell you she is getting excited and ready to cum but they just forget to actually show you like you do here.Yes her body is getting more excited but how.It is this how that other authors just forget to tell you.Here you tell us with words like "more aroused and wild", "gasping and gurgling".Then you tell us that Laura is slamming her cock into Shelley's flowing and spasming pussy with "punishing thrusts".Other authors never qualify how the fucker is working their cock.This tells me that Laura is flexing her hips and slamming her dick so hard into Shelley's cunt over and over her back arching and hair jerking as she pounds Shelley's hot box with total focus and love.Plus, you don't let Shelley lay there like other authors make it seem.She is actively fucking back into Laura's savage thrusts.I know her tits are swaying and flopping underneath her and the sweat dripping off her heated and excited body.You are showing me why this fuck is going to be so dire, extreme and so devastating as Shelley's womb ruptures and floods her veins with screaming ecstasy. ��[And her increased force had the desired effect.  Shelley grew progressively more aroused and wild, writhing and groaning under Laura's punishing thrusts, gasping and gurgling, mewling and twisting, pushing her whole pelvis back and up into each sharp, pistoning lunge of Laura's.  Oh, we're almost there . . . almost there . . . Laura panted to herself.  She knew Shelley was nearly at the peak, that a few more piercing thrusts would boost her over.]With other authors I never get a sense of how the fuck is flowing.Most simply don't give me the information to really know.When even the orgasm is bland and I'm just told she cummed; then knowing how the fuck progresses to the orgasm is almost impossible.Those authors that do give some idea of the fuck simply make it all seem one speed.This is not how it goes all the time.Again, it is the all the time that bothers me.Of course sometimes it is "balls to the wall" and you are fucking with wild abandon from the start but this is not the norm.I want to see the norm.I find that you have the initial passion of coming together and the middle more sedate middle fuck and then the grand flourish of the end fuck.Other authors just don't capture this.You do.By telling the reader of "increased force" and "Shelley grew progressively" we see that the fuck is ramping up to a womb scalding explosion of fucking bliss.The reader gets sucked in with your vivid verbs and adverbs and then you showing how the fuck just intensifies and focuses as one works toward nirvana.I just love how you show the increasing passion of great fucking.

You show how Laura is expressing herself unconsciously as she works and strains to deliver the love kill.I so adore the little details that you give like here ["Unhhhh . . . unhhhh!' she heard herself grunting as she now grabbed Shelley's twisting hips and plunged the dildo as deep as it would go into her clinging pussy.]It is these details that add so much to your stories and how great fucks truly flow.To deliver the thrusts that your lover needs to reach heaven you need to grab her body in this position to slam her back as you lunge forward.She will be lunging back into your thrusts but you need to add your strength to make the deep dicking just that more divine and make her womb explode that much harder.It is always the details that make anything awesome and devastating and you so deliver time after time.All this work and effort of total loving is delivered just for this ["Awwoongggg!"  Shelley threw her head back, her long, svelte body almost buckling under Laura's powerful, almost masculine thrusts.  "Yesssss!  Awwonnngg!  Yesssss!  Ungghhh!  Yesssss!"������� And then she was whooping crazily, and then she was coming in fierce, shocking jolts, her lovely naked body shaking and quaking violently, flexing and spasming from the impact of severe orgasmic eruptions.������� "Annngghhnnniiigggeee!" she cried out, flipping and shuddering as Laura continued to slam the dildo hard and deep into her pussy, holding the base of it with one hand and clutching Shelley's shoulder with the other, ramming her, ramming her mercilessly.  "Annngghhnnniiigggeee!" Shelley cried out again, then pitched forward onto the mattress, her cries subsiding into long, almost painful moans as the force of her climax died away slowly.]Sigh, this is why we fuck.To be simply destroyed with fucking bliss as wave after searing wave of crushing bliss simply pummels you into nirvana.You make your cums so beautiful.You capture the hard cums so expertly.Orgasms that make you feel like your womb is going to tear itself inside out as your muscles tense so tight you feel like they will tear themselves off the bone as your body flips and jackknifes out of control as you wail and scream you fucking bliss.Only you capture this.I have to love how you describe Laura's thrusting as "almost masculine".I am an Amazon and use my stature and strength to deliver fucks like a man that simply make my sluts wail and shriek in shattering ecstasy and flip so hard underneath or spoon as I pull you tight to feel your body jamming and wallowing all over me as you scream over and over as I whisper to you to let it out and let the gods hear your screams.You tell us expertly how Shelley's body is "buckling" which means it is coiling to surge up in fucking spasm of epic strength.You again are telling us how she is cumming.I love how you capture the various qualities of how we express our orgasms.We never make the same sounds over and over and over like other authors do.I am always curious as to how I will express my next orgasm.I simply have no idea how I will be inspired.Will I scream, whinny, curse or shout out the all cap sentence.I simply don't know.You show this but keeping each expression of cumming unique and varied.This was something I recognized immediately in your stories and told me I was onto something special and I was so right!And the details that you provide.Where other authors give me such a paucity of detail you just give them one after another in your stories.You show us a love kill fuck.�� You show how to prolong the fuck.Like Laura here slamming her dick as hard as she can into Shelley's exploding cunt as she now grips Shelley's shoulder for that extra purchase to enable her to lunge her dick into Shelley's exploding box.Then you give us the cries of excoriating pleasure being ripped from Shelley's womb by Laura's hard dicking.I so love to feel men and strong women grip my body hard, jamming me back so hard as my tits flop and sweat splatters.My lank hair jerks as they slam me back into their pile driving thrusts feeling their groin slam down hard into my groin or into my ass cheeks if from behind.This makes me cum so fucking hard and just keeps the spasms flowing during my orgasms.I love the end game long cries of pleasure that you so capture.The quality of the end fuck is different and you capture this also.How you fuck until your womb and body are spent and you collapse in spent worn out pleasure as now sweet aftershocks rent your body and soul.

I love the sweet post coital time you show here.They have both collapsed with Laura now half lying on Shelley's body.I love that close skin on skin contact after a great fuck.Our sweaty bodies melding and rubbing as our love flows through our very pores into each other's soul.I love this time of sharing and luxuriating in the feel of the female body.With men I like lying on their hard bodies but I don't get that boding with them.But I do love feeling their cock pressed hard in my belly or thigh as I move down and lift their still hard cock and suck clean of all the pussy and ass juice and lick / suck off the semen slicking it.I love how their bodies judder and shake from aftershocks as I suck them clean.I have to smile at Shelley telling Laura in awe what an awesome fuck she is.I smile and thank them but tell them I know other who can fuck them like I just did.I so love to share and keep the circles so fresh with my lovers.I love how they fuck repeatedly and share more love.Like the fact of Shelley angling for more hot fucking but Laura has to go home to prepare for her work day.I always want to fuck to utter exhaustion but often the world intrudes as you show.Sad but true.I love the silly love banter at the end of story of Laura killing the peeping Tom with the telescope.It is this kind of love banter that draws women so much closer after a great fuck.Plus, Laura knows how to deflect women when they want to get to close and direct.I have to make sure my angels know where they stand and I like seeing Laura from time to time having to do likewise.

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