I like how this chapter starts.� We don't have sex or dialog but I love how
this start to the chapter shows the length of Laura's saga and how so much life
is contained in it.� We start with Laura
reflecting on Shelley and how she loves to fuck in certain positions and the
vagaries of her life and how it intertwines with Laura's.� What is so cool is the fact that this is
happening at all.� You are the only
author that does this and you are the only author that can.� For Laura to let the reader know that Nyomi
loves it doggy style and how hard she cums in this position and how, she,
Shelley loves Margaret so much.� I just
love the fact that this is possible.�
Only a story that has Shelley appear in multiple chapters can show
this.� You have to have the previous sex
episodes for this to work.� This is what
is so awesome about your story.� We have
the these past chapters that allows you to build on them to advance the story
forward.� I love the fact that Laura gets
to fuck her women over and over again.�
One shot stories simply cannot do this.�
Other stories that had length still kept the time focus short or did not
really focus on the women themselves.� I
love that these women will fuck Laura and then fuck her again chapters
later.� This is like real life when you
fuck various women and men if bi.� I have
always thought that your story reflects life.�
We see how Laura has a life and how these women come in and out her
life.� I just love this about your
story.� I also love how you allow your
women to be so individualistic.� With
Shelley we see that she loves doggy and being fucked hard from the rear.� I cannot think of another author that has her
women have individual traits and likes in the bedroom.� Other authors just have sex which is okay in
itself but each woman has her favorite sex acts and you give your women
this.� This shows that you love your
characters by giving them each their own personality and preferences in the
sack.�
You also show us some dynamics of Shelley's life with
Margaret.� This is something that you
don't really have to do.� The story is
about how Shelley interacts with Laura but you show clearly how much Shelley
loves Margaret and will not fuck with other women when she is in town like
Laura will not with Makeeda in town.� I
find that heinous! but I understand that for these two women it is what is
right for them.� I love how you do this.� In some way this probably restricts where
this story could go.� To have them
totally open in their relationships would allow more possibilities but you keep
your women more conventional in their personality and preferences .� I have to smile at how they fucked so
intensely for a week before Margaret comes back in town.� I so love to fuck women that are trying to
get in as much sex as possible in a given time frame.� I have only had a few relationships where
this is the dynamic.� Mine tend to be
more finding the opportunity to fuck when the husband or boyfriend is
away.�� I also have some waiting for the
significant female is out of the picture so I can fuck her girlfriend or
sometimes husband or boyfriend.� Not one
other author gives their characters this kind of depth.� It is just sex with willing sluts that don't
have any concerns like this.� I have to
deal with it and like reading it in your stories.� I so love to fuck a woman who is desperate
for hot, hard fucking.� I do have to
smile where Shelley takes the day off from fucking the day before Margaret
comes back.� That is cute.� I am so thankful that I don't have to worry
about that.� My archangels are just like
me.� They all want to fuck as much as
they possibly can.� They want to fuck
every day possible just like me.� I will
fuck like a bunny the morning of their arrival before my babies come back from
work or seminars and then take a long soaking shower and a power nap and then I
am so ready to fuck their brains out when they come back.� I have always shaken my head at Laura and
Makeeda not fucking others constantly and together but for them it is
right.� I would just love to see them
fuck women together but that is not for them.�
I don't think their relationship could take it.� Laura would start to feel her stomach curdle
again and the green eyed monster would once more be raging.� I don't want Laura to lose Makeeda like she
did Sara.� It is just cool that I can
think along this line.� Only you have the
story and the sheer amount of time in her story that one has a history that the
reader can reflect on.� I often think I
hope Laura does this or that because of the history of the story.� When I see that a certain woman is in the
story I will get excited because of past interactions and remembering their
past fucks and how I hope that this or that will occur when they fuck.� I can only do this with your story.� One needs repeated experiences with your
characters to get to know these women and to connect with them like I do.� I feel that Laura's Story could easily make
the leap to the screen because you make the women so real.� The sex would be gonzo without the story you
have built around these women.� Gonzo sex
is great but it would not make a series.�
Laura's Story could be a series on the small screen.� You would have sex, great plots and
outstanding dialog that I know you could easily expand for the screen.� Such a sweet dream.
Laura is such a sweet soul.�
She fully agrees with Shelley's thinking when it comes to her
sweetie.� She feels the same way about
Makeeda.� I am so different.� I need to fuck others with my archangels and
have the freedom to fuck others when they are at home.� We have always believed in total freedom to
fuck others.� We so love to share women
with each other and with Dodie hot studs to pound our fuck holes to
oblivion.� I guess this is one of the
main difference between Laura and myself.�
I can understand her feelings with Makeeda.� This is what they need to make their
relationship work.� Kind of like
part-time monogamy.� I am smiling as
Laura is feeling a sense of loss over not seeing Shelley since their last
tryst.� I too know that feeling of loss
when I sense that women fall out of my life but that is part of life.� Circumstances change and new angels come into
my life to take the sting out.� I love
the fact that you allow the reader to get inside Laura's thoughts at
times.� I feel like I am there with her
when you do this.� I am smiling as she
daydreams of holding Shelley's lean body in her arms and pulling her tight.� I can just feel her body pressed so hard to
mine as our arms enfold each other and our tits are mashed and bellies wallow
and cunts rub and grind against thighs, hips and pussies.� Gagging as our bodies begin to sweat and
tongues are dueling and sliding down throats as love once flows as we gag in love
into each other's mouths as cunts grind and juice on our lover's body.� Then you give the reader the wonderful
details that I so love in your story.� I
am smiling so big with Laura telling us about Shelley's "kittenish sexual
whimpering".� This is the kind of detail
that I never get from other authors about the women in their story.� With them I have a hard time even finding out
how tall they are.� I so love the little
things that make us different and the type of sounds we tend to make is one of
the things that distinguish us from each other.�
Things that make us unique.� I am
smiling more as Laura reflects on how Shelley goes on about Margaret catching
them doing the nasty and, thus, losing her.�
I could not live with that hanging over my head but I am surprised how
many are.� I think a lot love the
excitement of getting strange and working it where the significant other never
knows (they hope).� Others are so
desperate for great sex and the love that it brings they must seek out the
pleasures that their mate is no longer providing them.� I see it a lot where monogamy has produced
stale sex and relationships that are beginning or have become poisonous.� I know I have helped save some relationships
but adding spice and verve back into their relationships.� Some of them I got to fuck both partners and
really spiced up their boring lives.�
Great sex can help revive a relationship if they are willing to work on
the other areas of their life.
As I say, I love the history of Laura's Story.� We now see Laura haunting Macy's hoping to
see Shelley at work.� What is great is
the past history.� I am thinking that
this could be a one shot story where Laura is seeking out a woman that has
haunted her thoughts.� You could set it
up and make it great.� But this is so
much better.� Laura reflects on how she
first met Shelley.� How Shelley was the
aggressive one.� This would work as a one
shot but the fact that she is now on the hunt where Shelley was the hunter to
begin with.� It goes to another level
when this is the fourth act so to speak.�
They have a history that will make this fuck so much sweeter.� You are the only author that does this.� You had to create this world where Laura can
meet these women and interact with them over many chapters to make each fuck
special and each women unique and so freaking vibrant.� I love the sex of course (boy do I!!) but it
is the life surrounding the sex that totally blows my mind.� It moves each chapter from a story about sex
to� moment in Laura's life that is simply
mind blowing when the sex occurs.� With
the last new story I read I was at home alone and I cummed so hard when Gina
had her fist anal 'gasm.� I was on the
bed my shoulders digging into the mattress as I used the balls of my feet to
hump my twat high in the air as I worked my clit with one hand and pounded my
cunt hole with three fingers of my left hand as I made sure to not knock my
laptop off my bed as had happened in the past.�
I was raggedly up humping as my mind relived what I had just read and my
middle finger rubbed my clit so hard.� My
cunt jerked up so hard and I started to scream all caps GGGGOOOODDDAMMMMNNNNN!
over and over as my womb exploded and I loved how the sounds of my sloshing
cunt filled the room as I cummed along with Gail reveling in her first anal
'gasm.� Gods, you made me so happy.� The fact that we are seeing Laura going to
Macy's to reconnect with Shelley is so much more powerful than a one shot of
them coming together for the first time.�
I guess it could be Laura trying to repair their relationship but
without the history you provide such a one shot would be kind of
contrived.� It is the history that makes
your sex so great with so many of your women.�
Of course your seductions of newbies is great too because again you
provide a history to their seductions.�
Some women fall right into your clutches but usually it takes time if
seducing a woman you have meet not a club or a chat room.� You have taken chapters for the woman to fall
into Laura's bed.� Again, that history
that I so love.� You know how to pace a
seduction and make it so hot and real world.
Attention:� Long Digression
I do not believe in the gods or fate really but I do know
how to make things happen like Laura here.�
My father always says you make your own luck.� I keep my senses tuned for making great new
sexual pairings happen.� I so love
breaking down society's barriers erected to keep all of us but especially women
under control.� One thing I have not had
much use for is the taboos against incest.�
The only one that I believe in is parental abuse of incest.� Parents cannot have sex with any charge under
their care until that person is old enough to make the choice to have
intercourse with their parental figure.�
For me that goes for Step or Foster parents.� It has to be a choice freely given after that
I support any pairings that express love and joy of fucking.� And I really have no problem with siblings
and close cousins fucking.� It is almost
always same age group and if totally consensual (nothing wrong with intense
seduction) then it is great.� As long as
no abuse occurs then people should be free to love whom they choose.� The only reason people really freak about
incest is the inbreeding that successive mating's can produce when recessive
genes come out.� If you believe the bible
then who did Cain and Abel mate with.�
There sisters of course!� About
three months back I stopped at a black college pickup bar for the university
across the river after a love fuck night and day with Kapri, Diamond and a
Latina co-worker of Kapri's, Melissa.�
Gods, that woman can suck good pussy and knows how to use a
strap-on.� Love her dark hue and so dark
eyes and hair.� I like to go into such
bars and just sit and wait to see the predators approach.� I love all the attention because I am in full
attention whore mode.� I was soon swarmed
with plenty of mostly college girls and studs with some older potential lovers
thrown in.� I was struck by Tylissa.� She has that body that makes me instantly
wet.� Really dark skin and midnight
eyes.� High cheekbones and forehead with
her hair wavy and to her neck with nice full lips.� I was swooning over her 34dd tits and
voluptuous body with full hips, ass and awesome shoulders showing in her
blouses top.� There were plenty of other
beautiful women that made my pussy quiver but her intelligence and witty one liners
hooked me.� I was soon back in her
apartment as she simply devoured me over and over to wailing, flipping
orgasms.� Then I inhaled her juicy,
swollen cunt and made her wail and jackknife wildly as I sucked her clit off
and her pussy inside out.� Then I brought
out my strap-on and discovered she is no PC lesbian.� I pounded her into the bed to a squealing
orgasm and then she did me cowgirl and I swooned when she took my cock out her
flowing twat and stuffed into her asshole and rode me so good.� Then I really went to heaven when she pulled
off my cock and sat between my legs and bent forward lifting my cock.� Her eyes glued to mine as he swallowed my
cock and did ATM with obvious relish moaning how good her ass tasted.� Gods my eyes rolled back so hard and spasmed
so long as I whinnied my pleasure.
I have taken her to my babies and some other angels and some
of my studs like Anthony, Eric and Steven and Tyron and the brothers
three.� I have so loved watching her get
dp and tp fucked with such obvious love of hammering cock.� I like to think of her as a black version of
me.� I was politically correct at that
age but I sure knew the pleasure of starp-ons fucking in all three fuck
holes.� I soon learned that she had seen
her almost seventeen year old brother and two white friends fucking several
girls in their mother's home which she crashes at from time to time.� She brought them up because her brother has
an elven cock as well as his blond, white friends who are identical
brothers.� I felt my eyes slit and my
pussy get wet.� I asked her breathlessly
if she had fucked them. She gave me a weird look and an eeewwwuuuuuu
sound.� She went on about incest and how
weird the thought was even and how could I think that way.� I gave her my rational and she just laughed.� I got her to show me her brother's picture
and found him damn handsome and asked about the surf board he was holding.� She smirked and told me the girls all loved
the brotha that surfs.� She had seen them
fucking several girls with hard, deep solo, dp and tp fucking with tons of atm
and a2p.� Gods I so love porn teaching
kids so early now what is possible.� She
still spends most nights at her mother's house and spies on them from her loft
bedroom looking down into the high vaulted living room.� She couldn't help but spy on them and enjoy
the hard fucking below her.� She thought
they knew she was up there spying but she could not be sure.� I am simply surprised that no one has made a
move to seduce someone.� I tried to
weaken her to incest and fucking high schoolers but she just found it "weird"
which was beginning to tick me off but I didn't have time to make things
happen.� I did not have any opportunities
to make love happen.� I so hate people
letting society brain wash us.
That finally changed two weeks past.� Her mother was at a conference and she
invited me to her mother's house to fuck in her loft.� We were to meet at 5:00 Friday for some
glorious fucking.� As I was near the
house I got a text from Tylissa telling me she had to work until 6:00 put she
would make it worth my while.� She had
told me where the key was and to let myself in.�
I had to smile hoping that maybe someone else would be there.� Tylissa had told me her brother and friends
were going down to the Outer Banks to do some surfing.� They were supposed to be already be gone but
Tylissa had already shown me that she is often on Nigger time as black people
say (always late).� I let myself in and
had to smile as sure enough Treyshaun and his blond friends where still there
with their stuff all in disarray near the door.�
They were startled at my entrance I could tell and then I could see them
eyeing me with obvious interest though they were trying to hid it.� Poorly I may add.� I was in tight cut offs and a tank top
without a bra since Tylissa loves seeing my tits bounce and swirl in tight tops
without a bra.� They were so cute being
polite and trying to be suave.� I
introduced myself as a girlfriend of Tylissa and she was going to be home
later.� I told them we had a date.� I loved seeing their eyes bulge at the
meaning my tone made clear.� I found out
the brother's names were Patrick and Norman.�
They were drop dead good looking (Tylissa hadn't told me that) and had
the deepest blue eyes.� They were about
five foot ten as well as Treyshaun.� They
were all lean and muscled with that greyhound look.� Lean and mean as they say.� I got to know them and found them sweet and
well mannered.� My nipples were rock hard
by now and I gave them sultry looks that flustered and made them act so
cute.� A MILF was seducing them and they
were not sure how to act.� I offered to
help them pack and move stuff out to the car showing my muscles and tight body
and making sure to rub up against them all as they shivered and I loved how
their trunks showed their bulging cocks.��
I had to chuckle at myself.� They
were too unsure to make the first move.�
I am also sure that me being taller than all of them was also throwing
them off their game.� I love intimidating
shorter men.
I helped them get some order to their disarray and we talked
some I liked their manners and found them nice and pleasant.� After a few minutes of work I decided that
enough time was being wasted.� Plus, I
wanted to make sure I had the fucking going for when Tylissa came home.� It would make her seduction so much
easier.� I had planted the seeds and now
it was time to make them flourish.� I
stretched arching my back my arms above me and watched them oogling me and I
asked them "Like what you see?"�
Treyshaun and Patrick merely nodded with big wolfish eyes and Norman
said "Yeah!"� Articulate they are
not.� I was beside Treyshaun on my knees
folding some shirts and I reached out and clutched his rigid cock.� He gasped as I quickly unzipped his jeans and
pulled out his raging boner out his shorts.�
I moaned and husked, "Goddamn you have a beautiful black dick Treyshaun
� so big!"� I swallowed his bulbous
dickhead and started to bob slowly undulating my head as I moaned tasting his
maleness.� I fondled his balls and
squeezed them softly making him groan hard.�
I loved sucking on teenage cock.�
Norman whooped "goddamn" and started to strip prompting his brother to
follow suit.� Soon they were naked their
eleven inch white dicks thick and rock hard waving for me.� They moved close as I sucked hard on Treyshaun's
dick bobbing to the back of my throat as I sucked with cheek hollowing
sucks.� I undulated my head working it up
and down as I rode his dick up and down my tongue as I hard sucked.� I lifted and quickly stood and stripped as
Treyshaun shucked his shorts and shirt off and I fell between the twins and
grabbed Norman's dick and stuffed his beautiful pink dickhead into my mouth and
bobbed on his dickhead for a minute before tacking it to the back of my throat
with hard bobs of my head.� I then
swallowed Patrick's cock and bobbed hard and fast to start with and slowed down
to slow suck as my lips clung to his thick shaft moaning as my lips traveled
over thick veins roping his dick.� I gave
sloppy heads on their cocks going back and forth� drooling spit on them so I could pump the
shafts of the cocks I was not currently sucking.� I loved feeling their thick shafts sliding
through my fists as I pumped them and seeing my spit rope and drool off their
cocks.
i was in heat sucking on big cock.� I loved sucking on black and white dick at
the same time.� Treyshaun's dick was
thicker than his friends cocks.� Norman
and Patrick's dickheads more bulbous with the heads ballooning out above the shafts.� I loved latching my lips to their bulge and
sucking hard on just their dickheads and pumping my head as I deep throat
sucked on their cock crowns.� After a
while they moved in and formed a triangle around me standing close.� I loved it feeling their thighs brushing me
as their dickheads rode over my face when I was not sucking them.� I loved their confidence not caring that
their dick heads brushed over each other at times they were so close.� I moved my head right and left and moved
forward to suck on cock.� I moaned when I
would feel a dick sliding over my cheek or forehead all wet with my spit and
pre cum as I concentrated on the dick in my mouth. They were now confident and
jamming their dicks into my cheeks and jabbing my lips seeking their turn as I
gave head to their friend or brother's dick.�
I was fisting and jerking thick cocks as I sucked hard bobbing dickheads
to the back of my throat making me caw and drool out thick strands of
spit.� I would guide the two cocks coming
in from the sides and the cock in front of me to allow me to lick the three
dick heads at the same time my long tongue slithering over a cockhead and
sliding it over to the next one.�
Latching onto a dick head and suck on just his dickhead and bob a few
times before moving over and doing the same to the next dick.� I was smiling up at the teenagers letting
them know what a slut I am.� They would
move back a step and allow me room to suck and bob on their dicks taking their
dicks to the back of my throat as I sucked hard with hard bobs getting their
cocks soaked in my spit and roping off as I pumped the shafts of the dicks
waving to the sides of my face.� I moaned
and murmured how big their dicks were and good their dicks tasted in my
mouth.� I reveled feeling my hair getting
lank with sweat as I felt it starting to bead on my heated body as I bobbed hard
my body swaying to my dick sucking.� They
would then move in again allowing me to work all three dickheads at the same
time as I drooled spit on their dickheads and licking all over and lipping
before sucking their dickheads with short bobs as I loved tasting their
maleness in my mouth.
I love men controlling me.�
Treyshaun told his friends to take me over to the back wall that was
mostly windows.� I noticed a European
style divan.� It was low and long enough
to sleep on and wide enough to allow good fucking I could see.� The back was nice and angled about two feet
long.� I loved the fact that I was going
to be fucked where anyone outside could see me but I saw it was a canal outside
with trees on the other side.� Still, who
knows.� Norman was the leader I could see
and he laid me down on the divan and pulled my groin to the edge and pushed my
legs back and guided his prick to my fuck hole and pushed it in deep with one
stroke making me back arch and pussy clutch his dick as it sank deep into my
pussy.� His bulbous cockhead made my cunt
petals clutch and spasm as he pumped his cock with strong strokes.� The friction his seventeen year old cock in
pussy made me gag and shiver in deep pleasure.�
Treyshaun got on the other side and got a knee on the divan and other
knee on the floor and pushed his dick into my cheek and I turned my head and
swallowed his beautiful black dick and pumped my head hard.� Norman gripped my ankles high to open my
pussy for his hard pumps.� I was moaning
on Treyshaun's cock taking his dick to the back of my throat as he now gripped
the back of my head holding it in place to drive his cock hard into my throat
making me caw and gurgle.� Patrick moved
in when Norman pulled out and got beside my head on the other side of the divan
and I now turned that way as he stepped up on the divan and squatted down to
let me feast on his cock tasting my cunt on it.�
Patrick pumped my pussy hard for a few minutes making my womb spasm as
he arched his back to slam his bulbous dickhead into my womb hard over and
over.� Soon it was Treyshaun plowing my
pussy like this as I feasted on white cock.�
After a few minutes he laid down on the divan his back on the slope and
I mounted him reverse missionary as he pounded my pussy hard.� I gripped the divan back and held my body up
as he sucked and wolfed on my nipples making me whinny and head thrash.� I was swirling my hips on the up struck and
slamming forward and down to impale my womb on black cock.� Suddenly my cunt exploded on his cock as he
pounded up into my down slamming groin.�
I had full body spasms as Treyshaun pulped my tits as he mashed my tits
together and sucked my rock hard nipples together as I screamed "You're making
me cum Treyshaun! � aarrgggghhhhnnnnn! � oohhhnnnnggggggggg � oh
goodddammmnnnnnn!".�� I had to smile
hearing Patrick say "What a fucking MILF � goddamn she cums hard!"�
I rode out my orgasm and weakly croaked out as strong
aftershocks made me body spasm hard and belly clutch so hard my body would fold
"Tylissa has watched you all fuck sluts�fuck me hard like them�tp me.� I wanted them to know Tylissa had seen them
fuck.� I was planting the seeds.� I felt the divan sink down as Norman mounted
it with his feet on the divan and I felt him gripping an ass cheek opening my
bung hole.� I looked back with a slutty
smile and watched him spit into my rosebud and take his dickhead and push his
spit and cock into my sphincter.� I
keened when his dick pushed into my ass and sank in four inches.� I hissed and groaned in pain and watched him
start to plow my asshole my butt sending out shards of pain but already pulses
of pleasure directly to my clit and nipples making me thrust back into the
cocks now seesawing in and out my fuck holes.�
Patrick was watching the show pumping his shaft waiting his turn.� They fucked me so good.� Treyshaun was slow plowing my cunt as the
anchor as the twins took turns raping my asshole.� They slammed their cocks into my shit hole
making my jolt forward into Treyshaun's hard body my tits crushed and mashed
making my nipples shout in pleasure.� The
twins would rape my asshole and move off and the other would mount me.� Norman moved to my head with a hopeful look
on his face.� He was waiting I saw.� I croaked "I want to taste my asshole on your
dick, Norman".� He moaned "fuuucckkkkk
yeah!" as he moved forward and I gripped his cock and swallowed his dickhead
soaked in my shit cream and undulated my head as I sucked clean with hard cheek
hollowing sucks.� I cleaned the twins
cocks when they came around after trying to ruin my asshole.� I was soaked in sweat now along with my fuck
mates.� After long minutes they moved me
reverse cowgirl with Treyshaun's cock now pounding my asshole from behind and
the twins now moving up on the divan and getting on a knee and one leg over me
with a bent knee to now pound my cunt.� I
was gagging feeling their cockheads sliding roughly over each other with the
down angle of the white twins dicks sliding into the black dick pounding my
asshole.� i was gripping the twins ribs
to help pump my body forward to take the cocks deep up my fuck holes.� I loved how I was being fucked so good by
teenage cocks.� I was sucking clean the
cock out my pussy as the other twin would fuck my cunt hole so hard and
good.� After about five minutes I felt
the delicious tension forming deep in my belly.�
I was looking up at Patrick pounding my pussy with burning eyes as I
gripped his ribs and worked hard my groin forward to bury their cocks deep into
my pussy and ass.� I could feel my lank
hair jerking with my body being slammed fucked.�
I felt the sweat running down my face and ribs and then my head snapped
back as I wailed and my body spasmed with full body spasms and jackknifed my
ass wallowing on Treyshaun's belly.� I
wailed and screamed my pleasure as my body was hit with four killing spasms
that throttled me to near senselessness.�
"What the fuck!" I heard beside us.� I blearily looked over and saw Tylissa in a
Subway outfit her top all bulged out with her big 34dd tits.� She was staring at us with shock but I could
also see something else.� I noticed she
had crossed the room before making her presence known.� Plus, she was not really freaking out.� She was going on now what the fuck was I
doing and yelling at Treyshaun but I could see the truth.� I weakly rolled off Treyshaun and was on my
knees leaning on the divan.� I barked at
Tylissa "Tylissa shut the fuck up!"�� She
did and looked at me with a mixture of being miffed and exasperation.� I told her that her brother and friends were
fucking me so good.� Treyshaun was up now
I went for it full speed.� "Take your
clothes off Tylissa!"� When she did not
move I yelled "Now!!"� I smiled great big
when her fingers went to her top and began to unbutton the straining fabric her
face sort of dazed looking.� I love
controlling sluts.� "Help her Treyshaun"
I husked.� He looked at me as if in dream
but slowly went over an helped her take her top off and looked at her tits
straining in her bra hungrily.� She was
fumbling with the zipper to her pants when Patrick moved over and helped her
get them down and off along with her shoes.�
She reached back and undid her bra her gourd tits spilling out and
jiggling as they settled.� We all stared
at them in fuck hunger.� I knew to keep
things moving forward fast at this stage.�
"Push her down onto her knees Treyshaun."� He did and she only resisted a few moments
and now her mouth was in front of his thick, black dick jerking in front of her
mouth.� She looked at his cock with
rising hunger.� The silly walls were
faltering I could see with a big smile on my face.� "Suck his cock Tylissa � you know you want
too � suck your brother's dick Tylissa � do it, do it, do�" Her head moved
forward her mouth opening wide and swallowed her brother's dick and we all moaned
at the sight and Treyshaun in pleasure.�
She quickly gripped his ass cheeks and sucked away hard her head bobbing
her hair jerking.� She moaned and lifted
a second and told me "God I love tasting your ass on Treyshaun's dick" and
immediately swallowed his dickhead and bobbed to the back of her throat as her
head twisted and undulated like a snake working his dick up and down her tongue
as her cheeks hollowed out with her sucks.�
She slurped on his cock running her tongue all over his dickhead
drooling spit before lowering her head again and slowly twisting and undulating
her head working his cock around in her mouth as it rode her tongue to the back
of her throat.� All the time she
murmured, moaned and made wet sucking sounds as she bobbed now hard and fast
her hair flouncing.�
She sucked long and good and moved over to Patrick's cock
when he moved in.� it was so beautiful
seeing her dark mouth clenched tight on his white cock as she sucked hard.� She too loved sucking on his extra-large
bulbous dickhead her head twisting on just his dickhead as she sucked.� Lifting her mouth and licking her tongue all
over the pink dick head and running her tongue in circles over the crown and
along his glans before swallowing again and bobbing with slow sensual love sucks.� Norman had moved in and gotten me leaning on
the divan my knees on the floor and invaded my asshole roughly and began to
fuck me with hard punishing strokes making my tits grind and wallow on the
divan making them scream in pleasure.� I
moaned watching Patrick get on the floor and Tylissa straddled him and sank his
prick all the way into her already dripping cunt.� She slow stroked at first his dick into her
womb as her heavy tits wallowed on his chest.�
Treyshaun laid down on his side on the divan I sucked on his cock as
Norman pile drove my asshole making my head lunge up Treyshaun's cock without
having to bob.� I loved being fucked so
good in the ass as I sucked on black dick.�
I heard Tylissa chuffing and crying out in pleasure.� I was fucked hard for a few minutes when
Norman and Treyshaun went to change positions.�
I now saw that Tylissa was missionary and Patrick up on his palms
slamming her ass into the floor with his pile driving hips sinking his dick all
the way into her cunt.� Her legs were
clutching his hips and Tylissa had gripped his ribs with one hand and the other
a bicep.� Her head was up off the floor
her eyes sightless.� Suddenly her head
snapped hard into floor and she cried out in shattering bliss.� Long torturous groans cawed out her throat as
her head thrashed and tits jolted and jiggled with Patrick's slamming
prick.� Her groin humped into his
impaling thrusts as she wailed and convulsed.�
Her face a constant mask of slashes and grimaces of shattering
pleasure.� I loved seeing full body
spasms throttle her sweet voluptuous body.
I soon had a gagging orgasm as Treyshaun pounded my asshole
and I sucked on Norman's prick.� I
screamed on Norman's cock as my asshole exploded scalding bliss to my soul with
rolling waves of ecstasy flooding my veins.�
I finally recovered and saw that Tylissa was sucking my ass off her
brother's dick with slow bobs of her head her lips so tight to his veined
shaft.� I told them I wanted to watch
them tp her and sat on a chair as Norman laid back on the divan and Tylissa
mounted with a slow long whinny of pleasure.�
It was so beautiful watching his long, thick white dick sink balls deep
into her cunt and the way her ass juddered with pleasure feeling his prick
invade her belly.� Treyshaun climbed up
on the divan and pierced her asshole with his massive thick shaft and she cried
out in pain as he invaded her asshole and pushed his dick deep into her willing
asshole.� Soon she was being slammed
fucked with prick as they took turns pounding her booty hole and she sucked her
ass off their cocks thoroughly cleaning her ass off Treyshaun and Patrick's
cocks.� I watched them reverse her.� Her back to Norman her ass resting on his
groin her arms outstretched behind her gripping the divan.� Now Norman was pounding her ass as her
brother and Patrick climbed up on the divan and slammed her cunt with their
down thrusting pricks.� I loved how they
manhandled her so roughly.� Norman pulled
his prick out her spasming asshole her shit juice leaking down her back.� He tilted her back and up by his grip behind
her knees and Treyshaun pushed her back some more, her asshole now high in the
air and slammed his prick into her shitter and pumped savagely for a few
minutes.� They then lowered her and
Norman shoved his dick into her ass again and Treyshaun punched his dick into
her cunt soaked in her asshole.� Him and
Patrick took turns when Norman pulled her back to pound her asshole and then
stuff their shit juice soaked cocks hard and deep into her pussy and pump hard.� Their bulbous dickheads slamming deep into
her womb with each savage thrust of their manhood.� They did this to her repeatedly the boys
taking turns on the divan to let their bodies take her weight as they fucked
her so hard.� Sweat was sluicing off her
body all over now and her hair was in disarray.�
I watched her have two awesome anal 'gasms that had her body jackknifing
and flopping wildly as she cummed with full throated wails of ecstasy.� She was crying out "Goddamn you're fucking me
so good Treyshaun!" and encouraging the twins "Goddamn, I love your white cocks
� unngggghhhhrrrrrr � oh god I love your dicks fucking me!"� She knows how to encourage her male
lovers.� I loved how her body would
stiffen in her orgasms and then judder violently as the next spasm rocked her
soul with crushing bliss.
I moved in and sucked on their cocks straight out her ass my
cheek on her ass cheek as they did her classic dp now on the divan and then
floor.� I was swooning seeing up close
their cocks sliding out her asshole soaked in her shithole and then sliding up
her ass cheek into my watering mouth and clamping tight as I sucked hard with
head bobs to the back of my throat savoring her sweet shithole.� I watched the boys looking at each other and
knew they were ready to ejaculate.� I
husked to Treyshaun who was again pounding his sister's ass that I wanted him
to cum in my mouth.� He smiled at me and
pulled out his dick thickly creamed in shit cream.� I swallowed and sucked hard as I bobbed and
fisted his thick shaft.� I saw out of the
corner of my eye Norman move in and take Treyshaun's place and the twins were
now savagely fucking Tylissa.� She
croaked out for them to "fuck me up � pull my hair and slap my black ass and
face."� The twins were happy to
comply.� Norman started to slap her
sweaty ass with loud smacks his other hand fisted in her hair jerking her head
cruelly back with vicious pulls positioning it perfectly for his brother.� Patrick slapped her sweaty face making it
jolt hard to the side.� The rough
pummeling made her breathing quicken even more with ragged shuddering
breaths.� Her body started to hitch and
jerk with approaching orgasm.� I was
twisting my head hard now sucking with all my might my lips glued on his glans.� His hands were now clawed into my scalp and
his fingers spasming.� I now did slow,
slow bobs as I twisted my head slowly too and deep throat sucked.� I kept glancing up to watch my effect on him,
smiling as I saw the pleasure I was giving his prick.� His head rocked down his face slashing like
he was being garroted his eyes squeezed shut.�
"Fffffuuuucckkkkk�you goddamn slutttttttt �. UUNNNGGGHHHHNNNNNN!"� I felt his dick spasm between my lips and I
groaned feeling his prick spasm hard spurts into my throat his dick blasting
out hot semen.� I choked swallowed his
three heavy spurts and sucked his dick as it finished spasming emptying his nut
sack in my mouth.� When I finished I
could concentrate on Tylissa and her end fuck.�
The twins were slamming her body so hard her body jolting forward her
head cruelly jerked and forward and back.�
Patrick was slapping her face at random times.� Her breathing was so ragged now.� Norman stopped slapping her ass and gripped
it and the other hand twisted her head back as he slammed his hips into her
thick ass making it jolt as she now started to shake violently and half choked
out torturous groans out her partially constricted throat.� Her body began to buck and jackknife as the
dicks pummeling her fuck holes sent her to nirvana.� Her fingers clawed the carpet as her body
surged back into the dicks slamming her cunt and asshole.� She now wailed and cursed as her body
convulsed violently.� Her spasming fuck
holes sent the twins over the edge.� They
both growled and surged hard as they lunged their cocks as deep as they could
into Tylissa's body.� I am always
observant on how men cum.� Some tend to
pile drive their cock in and out your fuck hole as their cock blasts semen into
your womb or up your ass.� The brothers,
at least this time, did the bury your cock and hold it there cum.� They arched and strained their bodies to slam
their cocks deep into Tylissa's violently shaking body and hold them
there.�� I loved watching the brothers
shake violently and curse each time their cocks spasmed dick seed deep in
Tylissa's belly flooding her womb and colon with white semen.�� The way their faces slashed even more as
their dicks convulsed semen into Tylissa's dark black belly.� Their exploding cocks made her have another
orgasm that she choked shriek and flipped through as the twins shook violently
as their nut sacks emptied their semen into her spent fuck holes.� I smiled at how Tylissa was prostrate on
Patrick's chest her eyes sightless still lost in her dying orgasm.�� I crawled over and looked up expectantly as
they smiled lewdly at me and pulled their cocks out Tylissa's slack fuck holes
and I eagerly sucked her cunt, ass juice and their semen off their still rigid
cocks.� I moaned and hummed as I happily
slurped clean their dicks filling my mouth as I sucked and wormed my lips up
and down their veined shafts covered liberally in cunt and shit juice.
The three bucks washed up and finished packing and left as
Tylissa and I went upstairs to her loft and got in her small shower stall.� I soon had her revived as I fingered fucked
her hard and deep as I kissed her deeply and pulped her gourd tits in turn
lifting and wolfing down her thick nipples as I deep throat loved suck until
she cummed slamming into me and the wall violently.� I slammed my fingers deep into her exploding
box until she was sagging against the shower wall spent and bleary eyed.� I sucked on her nipples a long time with wolf
sucks making her cry out to stop.�
"You're killing my Clit!"� I would
back off a few moments and then deep throat the nipple stuffed in my mouth as I
went back and forth between her nipples making her cry out again and again and
spasm so hard into me and wallow against the wet wall.� She begged me to stop all the while gripping
my shoulders pushing me back weakly.� I
loved feeling her weak pushes, and then her fingers in my hair to drive my
mouth deep into her ample bosom suffocating me in her bounty as I continued to
deep throat suck her nipples and stretch them out my sucking lips until they
snapped out my lips as she cried out in helpless pleasure.� I had to smirk how this tableau played over
and over again.� Her begging me to stop
and weakly pushing me away and then driving my face deep into her tit as I
loved wolfed sucked her diamond stiff nipples.�
I then got us out and half way dried off and got her on the bed and went
down on her sucking her off with total love and focus tongue fucking her pussy
and deep throat sucking her cunt until she was on the balls of her feet her
hands clawed into my scalp as she screamed and humped hard up into my devouring
mouth as she jackknifed violently, her head slamming and wallowing into the
mattress.� She then rode my face so hard
as she cummed so hard yet again.� I loved
looking up and seeing her tits flopping and swirling as rode me hard and then
slapping up and down as she bucked through her orgasm soaking my face in her
steamy divine cunt nectars.� We sucked,
tribbed and finger fucked deep into the night exhausting each other in sweet
lesbo love.� I smiled when she cooed and
thanked me for getting her to fuck her brother and his friends.� She couldn't wait to fuck them regularly and
wanted me join them as much as I could.�
I love this slut.
End of long
Digression
I like how Laura goes to Macy's regularly hoping to see
Shelley behind a counter.� I just know
other authors would have it happen the first visit.� You know how to prolong.� Finally, Shelley is at Macy's and Laura
carefully sneaks up on her.� Again, I
wonder if another author would have this cute scenario.� I can just see Laura slowly moving from stand
to stand looking around as she approaches Shelley.� Cute.�
Now you show how dialog can so move a story forward and show the women's
humor and love of each other ["I'm going to grab your lovely braids
and carry you off to my castle and have my way with your beautiful body,"
she whispered, being careful to jump back a little as Shelley's head whipped
around in surprise. Even so, some of the long mane of thin braids
skittered across her forearm.������� "Laura!
Oh god, you scared the shit out of me!"������� "I hope not," Laura
laughed.������� Shelley's face burst into
the kind of smile that lit up the week in a flashing supernova glow.
"I don't know what to say. I'm . . . turning to hot jelly right
here. I was afraid I'd never see you again."]� You are the only author to have this kind of
interaction between their characters.� I
have come to be so disappointed with the lack of dialog between characters in
other stories.� The silence has come to
be deafening to me.� I just want to
scream to fill in the void.� This dialog
shows their familiarity with each other which shows a history and love for each
other.� The way Shelley reacts to Laura
scaring her shows again their familiarity.�
I am smiling at their mirth.� Then
the way you can turn a phrase with the use of "supernova glow".� Gosh, I love your use of language.� I just love dialog and this kind of
interaction just makes me happy to read.�
Then you show us clearly just how�
much Shelley has missed Laura.�
Other authors since they don't have dialog would have to tell us all
this information you have in basically four sentences.� They would probably have to use much more
kilobytes to give us this information.�
Plus, I would not have any pop.�
It would be plot device and moving the story forward.� With dialog it is natural to the story and
makes the women alive and real to me.�
You make the women real and show their emotion for each other.� I think this can only be done with
dialog.� I can just see the smile on
Shelley 's face and the love in her voice.�
Plus, I love the little details that add nothing to the basic story but
makes the story endearing.� This moment
is Laura moving back so when Shelley reacts her lip won't get split.� I have done this very thing and thought this
same thought backing up when I am startling someone.� This is the little moments in life that make
life special and draws you closer to the women in your life.
Like I say, you
know how to capture the subtle nature of an intimate relationship.� [For a moment they didn't say anything
but simply seemed to let their eyes resonate and pulse together. They had
been ardent lovers, and then, through no fault of their own, had been forced by
prior commitments to separate for months. Now their feelings were
intermingling again, right in the middle of a busy department store. The
feelings, Laura realized, were too deep, mixed, and complex to express in mere
words. And neither knew how to broach the subject of a more intimate
intermingling. Was it still possible?]� Needless to
say, I have never seen this dynamic in another story.� The silent communication of long time lovers
that have not fucked in too long.� I have
seen one shot stories of women who have parted coming back together but never
seen the intimate simmering energy that you capture.� They just don't make it special like you
do.� You can just see the depth of
emotions in their eyes as they reconnect with each other and their nipples are
tingling and getting semi-hard and pussies are getting wet in want.� You have always mastered the unspoken
communication.� Other authors just say
they feel it but you actually show it and it adds everything to the story.� I too know that inability to put into words
just how bad I want you.� How my body
aches to once more have you in my arms and my tongue once more sinking deep
into your cawing mouth and then your wet pussy and tight asshole.� I know that feeling of how to reconnect.� If you have fallen away from each other
because of life and its circumstance sometimes it is difficult to reconnect as
fast as aching pussy is pulsing to me to get us back in bed and fucking
gloriously.� What is cool is that without
the history this would not resonate with the reader like it does.� If this was a one shot story about
reconnecting it would just be words on the screen.� History period.� But having lived these episodes with Laura I
feel the past glorious fucks and know how their other loves have complicated
their love.� I have lived it with them,
thus, I can feel this connection between them now.� You then make the moment even more special by
sprinkling in some humor to make this moment divine.� Shelley is confusing Makeeda's name.� I think it is a little dig but one can never
be sure.� I am famous for mixing up
peoples and division names.� Yesterday I
was in Bill's office talking about work stuff and several times he smiled at me
and I know to ask "What did I say?"� Once
I got the person's name wrong and the other time it was the division.� Still, it is cute to see Shelley get the name
wrong and Laura finding it humorous.�
Plus, you add the little societal comment with Shelley making the
comment that the white girls get all the best gigs.� I definitely know things are better since I
was a girl but societal racism is still out there.� Not like it was in the past but still out
there like homophobia.� The world is
changing quickly for the better but society still has a way to go.� You then show Laura being directly funny with
her comment about Makeeda making a point to stay away from any Macy underwear
models while she is in Vancouver.� I find
women just melt for me when I am witty and funny.� I have loved seeing this in Laura's arsenal
of weapons to seduce her willing sluts.
I love how you make it clear that they both want each
other so bad in the store.� I too know
that having to not show my open affection to my women in public.� I guess in today's world you can but I am
still nonplussed when I am out with Dodie or Joann and they are openly stroking
and kissing me.� I also find that
teenagers today are so freaking bold in showing their affections at times.� I love how the world is moving.� They are soon back at Shelley and Margaret's
place and doing what I love to do once the door is closed [Just
inside the door they were kissing and clawing each other voraciously.������� "It's been too long!" Laura
panted, sucking her neck.��� ����"Don't leave any marks on me!"
Shelley panted. "Margaret will see!"] �You are the only author to show the full body
clench.� You tell the reader they are
clawing each other.� We know that they
are doing the full body clench with arms pulling tight and thighs jamming twats
that are humping in need.� I so love to
pull you tight and feel your body jammed up against mine.� I love how you show this.� Other authors never show the raw need of
lovers falling on each other like starving wolves.� I can feel my fingers digging into your back,
shoulders or gripping your head to help mate our mouths tight as tongues plunge
in rising love.� I love to kiss and love
moments like this and love reading it.� I
have to chuckle at Shelley worrying about getting a hickey.� Shelley is fairly dark and can more easily
hide such marks but maybe Margaret is the type to inspect Shelley for such
marks.� Shame she is so jealous.� Laura is a skilled lover and I know she knows
how to suck a neck without leaving a mark.�
I love getting hickeys and sure love making my sluts scream when I plant
the love kiss on their succulent necks.�
I have to love the fear in Shelley's voice.� I could never live that way.� I love my babies for being so open in their
letting me seek love just like they do.�
I so hate being at swing parties where the guy is getting pussy and
their mate is only allowed to watch the proceedings.� Pigs.
You now give the readers cute little slice of life
dialog.� I so love these little moments
of banter between your lovers.� Other
authors only give dialog that is necessary to setup the story and let the
reader know what the plot is.� You give
us dialog that has nothing to do with the actual story.� You have already setup the story for this
chapter and now we get the pleasure of just seeing them interact.� With your dialog you can show just how much
Laura loves and desires Shelley.� Without
dialog this could not really be conveyed to the reader.� Telling the reader is one thing but hearing
the women converse and interact adds such a layer of intimacy to the stories
that I just shiver reading it.� Your
dialog is so natural and real life.�
These conversations are happening all over the world every day I know.� ["I want to swallow you," Laura
panted, kissing her neck again, her ear. "I want to kiss and lick
that delectable little scar of yours. Before I fuck the screaming mee
mees out of you."������� Shelley
pulled away, teasing Laura, making Laura follow her deeper into the
apartment. "I forgot what a freak you are. You and your kinky
little needs."������� If you only
knew, darling, Laura snickered inwardly. "I love your body."������� Shelley flirted, ever the
coquette. "Even my scar? Nobody ever wanted to lick my scar
before. Not even Margaret."�������
Laura drew her close again and encircled her slender waist with both
arms, perching her folded-together hands on the beautifully out-jutting ledge
of Shelley's magnificent swelling rump. She nuzzled Shelley's smooth
brown cheek. ��������"I am
kinky that way," she confessed. "I even want to kiss that
adorable little birthmark on the side of Katie Couric's neck, every time I see
it. I'm a little scar-and-birthmark freakazoid. Whenever I see her
giving the news I'm mesmerized."]� This dialog does not move the story
forward.� It is just a believable dialog
between two women.� Dialog that is
dependent on the ebb and flow of this tryst.�
Tomorrow and different dynamics would produce a totally different
conversation.� This is real life.� I like the little things that show
intimacy.� I know that "mee mees" is a
little term that they only use with each other.�
Then Shelley teasing Laura on her kinky ways.� Knowledge that she could only have because of
their past time together.� Only you show
the way the past flows into to the present.�
Your dialog has always been so spot on and natural to the story.�� Plus, you show the intimacy of women.� I have never met a man who took the time to
love my scars and skin blemishes that I have.�
I have had various women over the years kiss, lick and lip my scars and
murmur how they love mapping them with their lips.� I too love to trace your scars with my lips
and fingers and find out from you how you got this scar and that one and I too
love kissing birth marks.� They add
character and I love bucking up women who are self-conscious about such
marks.� I am so like Laura in this.� I so love how so many black women have the
inoculation scar on one shoulder or the other and I love to kiss and coo over
them.� It is these little details that
add so much to your stories.� Recently, I
have read a few stories and the sex was amazing in how little there was.� One or maybe two sentences of going down on
the woman and then one sentence telling the reader that the woman cummed.� Say what!?!�
That is an orgasm?� They make it
so freaking boring and bland!� Here you
give the detail of Laura encircling Shelley's waist and placing her clasped
hands on her divine bubble butt.� This is
so totally opposite of what you get from other authors.� They give me nothing really and you give me
these little moments that are so precious and add so much to the fuck.� I have begun to wonder about whether most
people truly embrace each fuck like I do.�
Let the sensations and sensory details cascade into my soul.� I was with Dodie last week and she has a new
male lover, Khalifa.� He is so very
black.� He was born in Sierra Loene and
his parents immigrated over when he was three to escape the fighting.� He is now twenty-nine and my height and so
good looking.� He works out and is buff
and best yet has a twelve inch, thick so black uncircumcised cock.� He is an investment banker that knows how to
make you money if you have money.� Lisa
had recommended him to Dodie telling her that he provided "special"
services.� Dodie had fucked him several
times and first shared with Frankie and now I was over.� I soaked up his African features and the way
he enunciated his words so perfectly.� He
just exuded confidence and charm.� I told
them I wanted to watch him fuck Dodie first and film them.� I was in lust seeing Dodie fish out his
already rock hard cock and the way she dove on it and sucked fiercely on his
large deep black bulbous dickhead.� Her
dusky face sucking on large on large black dick that pumped in and out her
Hollywood perfect face.� The way she
pumped his shaft and seeing his foreskin ride up and down his massive cock and
the way she lipped and licked his foreskin before twisting and pumping her head
so hard her hair flouncing and seeing the sweat starting to bead on her forehead.� I loved seeing his dick ramming the back of
her throat and the cawing and choking sounds she made and the spit roping off
his cock and soaking her face, throat, tits and belly.� Mounting her and driving his black dick so
deep into her cunt as he did her missionary and slamming her into the bed.� Dismounting and moving up using one hand to
support himself and lowering his cock barking at her to clean his cock "you
fucking Jewish whore."� His other hand
cupped the back of her head and hearing Dodie whinny in excitement as he lifted
her head to latch her mouth to his cockhead and twisting her head hard sucking
it clean.� The way her head jerked to a
stop with her lips glued to his cockhead on the up stroke of his dick.� She looked so slutty gripping his hip to help
keep her head up to suck on his thick shaft her lips glued so tight as she
slurped and murmured around his thick cock working up and down her tongue to
the back of her throat now.� The way her
now sweaty hair was lank and jerking with her hard head bobs.� How Khalifa fucked her missionary and his
thick cock spiked deep into her clutching cunt stretching her out and her inner
lips clinging tight to his dick on the outstroke.� He slammed fucked an orgasm out her exploding
cunt spearing her ass to the bed her whole body jolting down with the power of
his strokes her ankles locked over his ass as her thighs clutched his hips and
her hands clawed his back and her head rocking back as guttural caws and groans
filled the room her head thrashing and face slashing.� How the sweat was running in rivulets off
Khalifa's body and Dodie's body covered in sweat and running off her face like
a slut.� These are things I so notice in
each fuck and only you give me these kind of sweet details in each of your
fucks.� You give details at the beginning
of the ramp up and other authors don't even give me details during the end
fuck.� So sad!
You continue to
show the intimacy that I so adore in your story.� Intimacy that only comes with time,
familiarity and great shared fucks.� The
vast, vast majority of stories can't really do this because they are one shot
or two or three stories based upon a first story.� With such short time lines you can't really
develop the characters enough to show the familiarity that only comes with
shared experiences.� Of course sex is so
important but to really become close to someone you have to share many facets
of yourself with each other and you show this with your women.� Laura shares herself with her lovers and it
shows with sweet intimate moments.� Other
stories I have tried to read recently just don't have these moments.� The author tells you they are intimate but
they don't give me any moments.� They
don't give us sweet moments.� Like
Shelley here teasing Laura that she thought she was her only "unique" love with
her birthmark with Laura's mentioning of Katie Couric.� This kind of gentle repartee only comes with
a woman that you have shared great fucks and love with.� I get so tired of trying to read other
stories and they are so bland and they don't give me the little moments that
make one smile and make your pussy quiver with rising love and need.� You make each of Laura's relationships so
unique and special.� It is these moments
that makes us the reader fall so hard for each of these women and glory in
their great fucks.� Now you show why
sharing such moments are so divine.� They
come together and kiss ravenously.� You
have setup this coming together and I just know that they are doing a full body
clench of clutching hands and enfolding arms as tits mash and cunts hump thighs
and hips filling their bodies with raw need.�
You so show how when you come together at first it is pure animalistic
physical attraction but after the first blush it is the sweet moments of women
sharing that keeps ones pussy wet, asshole clenching and nipples
throbbing.� Of course your body still
aches for your slut but it is the sharing that keeps the fucking intense and
orgasms mind blowing.� I love the detail
of them stripping on the way to the bedroom and embracing once on the bed.� Then Laura reveling in Shelly's tan lines
since she is light enough to show this.�
Even dark black women show the part of their skin exposed to sun as it just
that little bit more dark.� I so love
contrast and love tan lines and how black women's skin can have different hues
and shades.� I have always loved how
Laura complements her women and we see the effect on Shelley [Shelley
merely smiled and giggled softly with delight. She did indeed have a
marvelous body, and marvelous tan lines, achieved by sunbathing on her small
deck in her bikini. Though not light-skinned, like for example Shontay,
she was certainly not dark like Frankie, or Carmela, or Dee Dee, none of whom
could ever have these amazing patches of skin that were paler than the
surroundin territory. It looked as if Shelley were still actually wearing
the bikini, though it was completely transparent, so that you could see her
mouth-watering, large, dark brown nipples through it, and the small shiny black
patch of pubic hair in her crotch, concealing the treasure Laura sought.]� All women love to be complemented and I love
see Laura's women preen and strut when she compliments them.� I sure know that my angels love it and makes
them so wet for me and become putty in my hands and willingly give me their
sweet pussies and shit holes.� I love how
you go into the shades of black women.� I
read two interracial stories and I did not get a real good feel for their skin
color.� How sad.� I so love reveling in women of color skin
colors.� I love comparing them against
each other just like Laura here.� It
makes them all kind of intertwine for me and my love for them all just builds.� I am smiling as Laura's eyes love all of
Shelley but zero on in on her charms.� I
too would have my mouth watering seeing her thick nipples and her swollen cunt
begging for my fingers and mouth.� I so
love letting the little moments build to the sweet coming together that leads
to such hot fucking and womb and asshole rending orgasms.
You so know how
to show the little moments.� You show the
total loving again that I totally love.�
Laura begins to kiss Shelley's birth mark but she also gathers Shelley's
tits in her hands and love squeezes them as she begins to kiss the birth
mark.� You are the only author to capture
this total loving.� I get so tired of the
boring one act fucking that other authors give me.� It is this total loving that completely
overwhelms ones lovers.� Shelley is
almost mesmerized by Laura's total focus on her.� I love how you show Laura's women being
overwhelmed by her focused loving.� I so
love seeing and listening to my sluts whimper and plead for me to fuck them
totally and so deep and hard.� I get them
so addicted to me by the total loving that you show here.�� Other authors would just say that Laura is
sucking on Shelley's nipples.� You
instead give us the detail of Laura lifting her full globes in her hands and
lowering her mouth and swallowing Shelley's thick nipples deep into her mouth
and love sucking them with deep throat love sucks.� I am so there as you give the detail of the
sounds the devourer is making ["Mmmnnggg," Laura merely made
happy and hungry sucking and eating sounds as she devoured the woman's luscious
young breast.]� I have always been saddened by how other
authors never show the noises we make in making love.� They make it seem that when we are going down
on our women we are purposefully not making any sounds as we dine on sodden,
sopping wet, red cunt meat.� I am always
murmuring, snuffling, chuffing and love cooing to my sluts.� I love the sounds my tongue makes as it plows
her cunt slit and how the sounds of my hard love sucks on her clit and squishy
sounds as I pile drive my head back and forth punching my tongue deep into her
pussy or through her tight sphincter and deep into her rectum.� It is not silent.� Only you capture the sounds of love making
and I adore your writings because of it.�
You continue to show the tenderness of lovers with a history.� It is so sweet how Shelley strokes Laura's
hair as she sucks on her tits and love coos how wonderful Laura is.� When I am stroked thus I just focus all the
more to love you with all my skill and focus to get more compliments and know I
am giving you such divine pleasure.� Like
I say, it is these little moments merging with the main sex that makes lesbian
sex so rad and devastating when our wombs rip themselves apart in shattering
ecstasy.
I also love how you
show other positions than the standard porn positions.� They are sitting on the bed embracing as
Laura bends down to suck on Shelley's nipples as she cradles and massages them.� I can just guarantee that other authors would
just say that Laura is sucking on her nipples and I would just assume the
standard Shelley lying on her back and Laura loving her that way.� I love how you show all the positions of love
making.� I have always believed in upper
persuasion for lower invasion like this [Shelley stroked Laura's hair
while Laura sucked her nipples, more and more passionately. They were wet
with Laura's saliva, the centers protruding stiffly as she lashed them with her
tongue. Shelley panted softly, then more and more rapidly.������� "I'm a runny river," she
panted into Laura's ear. "I think you need to fuck me fast."]
�I love how you show the ramping up that
occurs even during foreplay.� Only you
show this again.� Other authors are just
so bland and boring in their same never changing pace.� You show how excitement in our veins just
make us ramp up and move the sex forward like love does.� Then you detail Laura's actions on how she is
sucking on Shelley's nipples which is making my nipples pulse reading it
because I can put myself in Shelley's place with your details.� I can feel an angel's lips sucking fierce
pleasure from my rigid nipples making my tits jolt and sear me with burning
pleasure.� Love how you tell me they are
saliva wet.� That is spot on!� Then I hear from Shelley what I long to hear
from my love sluts.� I am making them so
wet for it.� I just preen and feel my
love and pride swell when my women tell me how hot and wet I am making them.� I live for such words and encouragement.� I love how you show this encouragement.� It just inspires one to give your all to your
woman.� Since you have dialog in your
stories you can show this.� Other stories
with their silence simply can't do it.� I
am simply sadly amazed anymore at the silence of other stories.� The silence of no dialog and no sounds of
love making.� I like reading Laura's
thoughts as they now move into a tribbing position.� I like how she is recollecting trying to
remember if she had tribbed with Shelley in the past.� I would know!�
Plus, you show how ones thoughts can wander a little.� Laura is contemplating and remembering how
Shelley loves to be rammed fucked doggy style.�
Love how you bring the aural into the reminisces.� Laura reflects on how beautiful a woman is as
she squeals and cries out in shattering bliss.�
You reinforce how important hearing is in love making.� I love thinking about how I am going to fuck
a slut or how men are going to take me however they want as they fuck me like
the total slut and whore I am for them.�
I so adore feeling their strength dominating me as they slam their big,
thick cocks so hard and deep up my tight pussy and asshole.� Feeling them jam their cocks down my throat
as I stroke their nut sacks and seal my lips so tight on their shafts as they
slide up and down my throat as they gurgle, moan and snarl for me feeling my
throat massage their dickheads.
You so know how to move the fuck forward [Laura
raised her face to Shelley's, sucking her lips before kissing her
ravenously. "Push your pussy into mine," she gasped, suddenly
feeling their wet crotches meet.������� Shelley
gasped and actually sagged briefly, almost imperceptibly, in Laura's arms,
before digging her fingers into Laura's back and pushing her wet, warm pussy
even more aggressively into Laura's. "Oh . . . yes!" she gasped
urgently.������ They kissed feverishly,
and Laura could feel Shelley's damp nipples, damp from her own warm spittle,
pushing into her own breasts, while Shelley stabbed her tongue deep into
Laura's mouth, squirming and whimpering as they both pumped, faster, faster,
pushing their aching wet cunts together, pumping, churning.] Again
you show us the little things in fucks that make the journey so fucking rad and
pleasurable and makes the orgasm so harrowing and womb rending.� I so love to work your lips, wrestle your
tongue wetly and then plunge my tonguet down your cawing throat making you hump
helplessly into my thrusting body.� Thank
you for showing the little things.� They
you show actual communication between your lovers.� To make a fuck flow smoothly you need this
communication.� It can be nonverbal with
eye contact and motions but often we husk, murmur or moan our needs to make the
fuck more perfect and you show this.� I
love how they are sitting and embracing as they jam and hump their sodden cunts
into each other.� I always love the "love
clench" and I am thankful that one writer has this.� Is so love to enfold my woman in my arms and
her me as our tits mash and bellies wallow and in this position cunts hump
lewdly into each other.� I love how again
you are showing the ramping up that occurs all along in sex.� Each step taking you higher as your belly and
thighs begin that delicious tightening that tells me again that my pussy or
asshole or both are about to scald me senseless again with shattering ecstasy. �You so show the totality of great
lovemaking.� They are embracing and
clutching as tongues wrestle and plunge down throats.� I can see their wallowing bodies.� I so love to feel tits mash and nipples drag
and poke hard into wallowing tits.� Love
again the detail of feeling salvia wet nipples on my tits or belly.� I can truly say I have never read another
author show this.� Truly amazing.� I so thank you for giving me Shelley stabbing
her tongue down Laura's throat.� When you
give me such details I immediately bring in my recent experiences of such
kissing and my pussy is getting wet and nipples rock hard as I remember Joann
and Maria last night slamming their tongues down my throat in turn and raping
my nipples trying to suck them off as they pulped my tits as I need it.� How my tits were soaked in their spittle and
soon enough my own sweat running in rivulets down my tits as their spit began
to intermingle with my sweat binding us in renewed love.� I have read stories that had like two
sentences for the sex leading to the orgasm.�
Thus, no details.� Here just
telling me they are squirming and whimpering adds so much to the story because
it is showing their rising need.� This is
so important to make it clear they are such hot lovers.� You give the details and thus your sex is
simply devastating when the orgasms get here just like in real life.� I so love how you are again showing
ramping.� I get so tired of no ramping of
hot fucking in other stories.� They take
away all the specialness of sex with their boring, bland writings.�
Another thing I adore about your writing is the fact that
your women don't stay glued in one position.�
With other authors once their characters assume a position the women
stay in that position and never move.�
Often we don't move much during a phase of fucking but then again we
also move a lot according to how the fuck is progressing.� I love how you so perfectly capture the flow
and variation of great sex.� Here we hear
Laura ask Shelley if she can cum from tribbing.�
I am always reading my angels bodies.�
But if I need to inquire of them how to better pleasure them I will ask
and try to lead the fuck in ways I think will shatter them with crushing
bliss.� i again must say that you are the
only author that ever shows this dynamic of women actually communicating to
each other.� How women always strive to
bring their partner ultimate pleasure.� I
have often wondered why other female authors fail to show this.� It is a rare women who is totally self
absorbed like most men are.� I am smiling
when Shelley excitedly says she can cum from tribbing.� Again I revel in the communication you have
in your stories with Shelley telling Laura to fuck her harder with pure
excitement in her voice.� I so love
putting desperation in my women's voices and knowing I put it there as they
plead to me to fuck them harder, deeper and often meaner to take them to heaven
yet again.� Now you show how the fuck
often morphs.� They had been sitting
tribbing and Laura pushes Shelley on her back and mounts her straddling her
cunt and pelvis with her knees and jams her cunt down into Shelley's swollen,
open cunt.� I so adore the fact that you
show changing positions in your stories.�
The passion is rising and Laura wants more leverage and tighter mating
of their twats so she can really grind down.�
That is one reason I love tribbing so.�
By changing positions you can increase or decrease the amount of direct
stimulation of one's cunt and clit.� When
sitting like they started, with the humping is more imprecise.� You can sweep and get some clit rubbing or
even direct clit to clit rubbing and one gags in helpless love and then you
don't get the direct rubbing but that is great in itself.� Not knowing how each sweep of our twats will
rub and mash.� How just having your vulva
mashed and wormed around stimulates your clit from so many angles.� How the V of the groin or a good rub right
over your muff and clit makes your eyes bulge and womb flip in pure pleasure.� Then moving to a position where you can
really engage your cunts and just mash and grind your cunt meat and crush your
clit into her clit or mound and just whimper in love as mounds grind and crush
each other and soak each other's twats in hot love juice.� That is why I so love rising up and throwing
your calf on my shoulder and just grinding and sweeping my cunt down into yours
as I crush our cunts into each other as clits drag and rake each other and our
vulvas are all mashed and labia lips are crushed and dragged around stretching
one's clitoral hood putting that pressure on your clit that makes you scream in
helpless pleasure.� I so love to watch
women trib as I sit beside them and watch their cunts mash, grind and pulp each
other as bodies jolt and judder in rising love and need.� You show that total loving with Laura bending
down to pulp tits with her hands and kiss Shelley savagely.� I so love to totally overwhelm my sluts like
this as I fill all her erogenous zones with flooding pleasure.�� I just adore trib and all its
variations.� Variations which only you
bring to the reader.�� I am so bored with
other authors not allowing their characters to touch each other like you
show.� They just suck, fingerfuck or trib
without any other touching and exploring of sweaty, wanton bodies.� They make their fucks sad where you put so
much life and love into your fucks that it makes one giddy reading them.
Attention:� Long Digression
One thing you do with your flood of details is allow me to
be the voyeur that I so love in real life.�
I am there with Laura as she fucks her divine women.� I just love to watch women fuck and soak it
all in.� I was at Frankie's dance studio
working on loading some software a Tuesday afternoon.� I had taken off a half day and was happy
doing some IT stuff for her.� I had on
the security monitors the cameras keeping watch on the classes ogling the
instructors and females taking classes.�
The afternoons tend to be more business but one never knows when you
will see some snogging, heavy petting or hot hard fucking if I am lucky on the
cameras or in person!� It is summer time
and I was seeing more teenagers doing day classes.� De'shante was teaching one of her hip hop
classes and I was loving looking at her and the women all sweaty.� She had two guys in the class sweating too
and I even ogled them some.� After class
I watched a cute blond teenager come up to De'shante and they were talking
about the classes and steps and movements by their hand motions and body
language.� I love reading people's
bodies.� De'shante took her to one of the
breakout rooms.� I could now hear them
and found out the cute teen's name was Jennifer.� She was about five foot three and had cute
barely b-cup titties jiggling as she moved in her braless leotard outfit.� She seemed guileless and De'shante was all
business as she put some music on and went through some routines and helped the
girl get her hips in motion with more vigor and shake her cute butt.� I was watching now intently hoping for some
sex but thinking I was not going to get any.�
Tiffany was not coming onto De'shante and I think De'shante was playing
it safe I guess.� She kept her hands out
of the no strike zone.
After about
twenty minutes they were done and suddenly Tiffany told De'shante that she felt
a tightness in her thigh and winced.� I
sat up and leaned closer to the monitor.�
De'shante paused and tisked and asked if the girl wanted her to massage
the muscle to "make it feel better".� I
could see that De'shante was now very focused on the teen.� The girl bit her lower lip and said yes shyly
and sat on the small sofa and stretched out her legs leaning back.� De'shante got between her legs and found out
it was the left leg and started to massage the muscle with her expert fingers.� The girl relaxed and her eyes lidded.� After a few minutes of slow sensual massaging
De'shante asked her if her leg felt better and the girl moaned softly
"yesssssss".� She then told De'shante
that the muscle felt sore at her groin pointing to the V of her thigh and torso
and asked De'shante to "make it feel
better."� I loved watching De'shante
looking deep into Jennifer's eyes with now undisguised lust rising.� She only hesitated a moment to move her hands
up.� I was getting hot watching
De'shante's hands moving up and messaging up to the girl's groin and seeing her
mound now humping up.� My breath caught
when De'shante boldly moved her hands up and gripped the girl's bottom and
quickly pulled them down exposing her shaved mound and strong legs.� All pretense was now gone and hot fucking was
about to happen I excitedly saw.� The
girl sat up and peeled her top off hurriedly as De'shante stood and
stripped.� Nude they eyed each other as
De'shante got on her knees and Tiffany leaned forward.� I loved seeing her pale face and De'shante's
light gold face tilt and lips lock and open wide and I could tell tongues were
swirling hotly as they moaned and clenched each other mashing titties as hands
stroked heating flesh.� Tiffany called
out softly "Make love to me De'shante."�
She husked back "I'm going to take you to heaven white girl.� You ever fucked a nigger before?"� Tiffany's eyes widened at the racial slur and
nodded "no".� "Once you go black you
never go back" she crowed.� They kissed
heatedly again as De'shante pushed her back into the sofa and leaned down and
siphoned her tits into her mouth stuffing almost all into her large mouth as
she sucked voraciously and would back up to tongue lash and give hard short
sucks on her areolas before swallowing deep into her mouth rubbing the nipple
against the roof of her mouth I am sure as the girl thrashed and groaned
gutturally.� De'shante sucked so hard on
the girls tits and popped her mouth off with wet sucks as Tiffany thrashed and
moaned like a whore.� She worked the
girls tits and kissed up locking lips and devouring her mouth.� Soon she was kissing down the girls heaving
belly to paradise.
She settled
between Jennifer's legs and pushed them out and drove her face deep into the
girls pink pussy her labia lips engulfing De'shante's brown lips as she now lapped
and licked up and down the girls slit making her jolt and judder.� Tiffany planted a hand on top of De'shante's
head and clutched as she moaned like a slut.�
The black woman worked her slit and then moved up and sucked in her clit
with a hard suck and worked it through her lips and then sucked it in deeper
and sucked on it with cheek hollowing sucks as Tiffany's head thrashed her face
now sweating and hair becoming lank with sweat.�
De'shante worked two fingers into the girl's hungry twat and slow pumped
her juicing quim and loved sucked on her clit.�
Tiffany ass was worming on the sofa and her other hand gripping the sofa
edge to help her swirl her wet cunt into De'shante's mouth.� I was naked now and masturbating to the hot
show slowly working my aching cunt and titties.�
I could see the storm rising in the teenager's body as she began to
spastically hump up into the black woman's mouth and grunted "suck it De'shante
� god you are so beautiful � suck my white pussy" as she moaned and began to
cry out.� Suddenly she wailed and slammed
back into the sofa and rocked forward both hands gripping the back of
De'shante's head as she snuffled and sucked hard on the teenager's exploding
clit.� I was so happy seeing the full
body spasms blasting the white girl with shattering ecstasy.� Her body jackknifed forward only to slam back
hard several times into the sofa back..�
Finally, the girl spent herself her womb shattered.� She was leaning back mewling when De'shante
moved up and locked lips kissing deeply their mouths mated so tight.� I loved seeing Jennifer's nostrils flare as
she sucked on De'shante's tongue soaked in her cunt nectars her head gently
rocking as she suckled on De'shante tongue jammed deep in her mouth her lips
glued to the black woman's tongue where it entered her lips.� Gods this teenager was a pure slut whore
after my own heart.�
After a few
minutes they were hugging and cooing and now Tiffany pushed De'shante down onto
her back on the sofa and one foot on the floor and laid down on the sofa and moved
her face forward and sucked in De'shante's clit into her mouth and began to
munch and suck making De'shante cry out and immediately hump hard into the
sixteen year olds mouth.� I am so amazed
at how skilled and passionate teenage girls are now in fucking.� She was gripping De'shante's hips munching
hard on black pussy.� She would munch and
suck and then flatten her tongue and begin to tongue stroke her pussy from her
perineum to her clit and back down and then back up as De'shante gurgled and
raggedly humped up.� "Eat me out you
fucking goddamn Lilly white Bitch!" De'shante grunted out.� Jennifer lapped and tongued hard her mouth
making hot wet watery noises as she then sucked De'shante's clit with wet sucks
that pulled her clit and popped off her turgid clit making the black slut's
hips jolt and De'shante's head thrash and jolt up on her neck suddenly corded
tight and rocking before slamming her head back into the sofa as she moaned in
lost pleasure.� I loved how she lowered
her head and began to tongue the black woman's rosebud and then pushed her legs
back opening her asshole for invading.�
She began to tongue fuck De'shante's asshole and soon had her tongue
buried deep up her shit hole and French kissed her shit hole.� De'shante growled and gyrated her ass into
the teenager's devouring mouth.� Jennifer
now tongue fucking De'shante's asshole driving her tongue deep into the
instructor's clenching rectum.� "Oh
goddamn you eat good asshole Jennifer!" De'shante excitedly croaked.� The teenager smiled getting a lip lock on the
black woman's shit hole and wormed her tongue in deep I could see with her
lamprey lock on De'shante's rosebud.� She
twisted her head and I could see her sucking in hard as her tongue flailed in
De'shante's asshole.�� Getting her mouth
full of shit juice and then moving her tongue up and burying her face in
De'shante's twat and lapping with a tongue soaked in De'shante's ass.� She worked both of De'shante's fuck holes
with her pink tongue.� She worked her
slit and asshole for long minutes before sucking in her entire clitoral hood
and deep throat sucking it in her mouth.�
Her head rocking, stretching out De'shante's cunt meat in her mouth as
she munched it with her lips and slapping tongue her cheeks showed.� De'shante now wailed and twisted right and
left on the sofa her eyes looking wild with need.� Tiffany wormed two fingers into De'shante's
shit hole and pumped them hard twisting as she pumped.� She pulled them out and plunged them deep
into De'shante's twat and fucked her hard in her wet, sloshing, slurping
cunt.� She sucked with vicious sucks on
her clit as her fingers pumped her pussy and then her asshole again.� She worked back and forth with her pumping
fingers working asshole and pussy for a minute before plunging deep in the other
fuck hole.� She had her fingers slamming
up De'shante's ass and her mouth buried deep in her cunt the black woman's clit
deep in her mouth sucking for all she was worth.� Now both of De'shante's hands were clawing
the teenager's scalp.� Her hips pumped up
hard into the girl's devouring mouth and plunging fingers up her ass.� "Oooohhhhhhhhh Goodddammmnnnnnnnnnn!" she
screamed as her womb ruptured and she now went into full body convulsion that
had her thighs rippling wildly and her arms jerking as she clawed Tiffany's
scalp with spasming fingers.� De'shante
was so cute her pushed back legs kicking the air as her toes curled.� Her pelvis leaping up off the sofa cushions
in spastic humps of desperate need and love.�
She wailed and screamed her shattering pleasure.� I was screaming along with De'shante as I
masturbated to a crushing orgasm timing myself to cum along with De'shante.
She was very groggy after her cum and Tiffany moved up
holding her fingers up soaked in shit juice.�
She sucked her index finger clean looking hard at De'shante and moaned
when De'shante pulled her middle finger to her mouth and sucked it in cleaning
sweet shit juice off it.� They lazily
kissed and cooed and stroked heated flesh.�
They murmured new love and listened to De'shante find out that Tiffany
loved anal sex.� Gods, a slut after my heart.� After about five minutes, or so, Tiffany
moved them to the floor and got in sixty-nine with her on the bottom.� They were immediately attacking each other's
twats with sucking and lapping mouths.�
De'shante had her head bent down sucking on pink teenage pussy.� Tiffany was lapping up and down De'shante's
slit.� My camera angle showed me how she
had the black woman's dark labia lips splayed out and was working her tongue up
and down her slit from her clitoral hood up to her perineum and back and forth
with fast strong strokes of her tongue.�
I loved how wet De'shante cunt was.�
She was latched onto Tiffany's clit and sucking while her head pumped
stretching out her cunt meat with wet slurps before moving down and tongue
fucking her wet fuck hole with loud obscene plunges of her tongue.� After a few minutes De'shante was up on palms
grinding back and down into Tiffany's teenage mouth as the girl clawed De'shante's
taunt ass to help drive her cunt into her mouth.� De'shante head was thrashing around then
rocked back and she screamed as another orgasm ripped her womb to shreds.� She jammed her cunt down spastically into Tiffany's
face jamming her head into the floor mat.�
I know Tiffany loved the pain because she was gripping De'shante's ass
in death grip and jamming down to help slam her cunt into her face.� Her face was soaked in Nigger cum by the time
De'shante collapsed on top of Tiffany but quickly recovered.� She moved around and jammed her face into
Tiffany's cunt and began to lap and suck wildly and soon had the teenager
jackknifing and flipping hard through a devastating orgasm as guttural moans
flowed out her spasming throat.
They were in heat now as Tiffany pulled De'shante up onto
the sofa and leaned her body down across the sofa.� De'shante's legs were up on the back of the
sofa and her head on the edge of the sofa.�
Tiffany positioned her cunt over De'shante's mouth and lowered her body
and humped hard into the black woman's mouth.�
Her cunt flared around De'shante's mouth.� It is so hot watching a vulva bulge around
the mouth devouring as De'shante tongued and sucked the succulent cunt meat
riding over her mouth.� I watched her
extend her tongue and Tiffany now ran her cunt up and down burying it deep into
her cunt and then running the stiff tongue over her rigid clit making her cry
out in ecstasy.� She humped and gyrated
her cunt hole driving the tongue deep up her tight sixteen year old twat.� I loved how active De'shante was with her mouth.� She would lap up and down Tiffany's slit
lapping her tongue up and down her slit and lashing the girl's bulging clit
making her squeal.� Then she would work
her head sideways her mouth engulfed by Tiffany's vulva as her tongue wormed
around deep in Tiffany's cunt hole and I would see her head still and rock back
as I hear her slurp deep throat suck in cunt meat for munching and pulling on
making the fair haired teenager thrash and caw her rising ecstasy.� De'shante kept varying her sucking and
lapping making Tiffany's legs quiver and her body jolt.� De'shante tilted her head back to get her
mouth clear of teenage cunt meat "Call me a Nigger Jennifer � call me a
baboon�a fucking Koon".� Jennifer stared
down at her.� "It turns me on Jennifer�Do
it�call me a Nigger Jennifer � curse me like the piece of shit I am" she
husked.� Jennifer reached down with one
hand pulled De'shante's mouth back into her cunt and ground down gurgling out a
hard moan.� "Suck my pink cunt Nigger! �
suck it good you goddamn fucking Nigger!" she growled out as De'shante inspired
was now lapping hard up and Jennifer' soaking wet slit.� For another few minutes or so De'shante
worked Jennifer's dripping snatch.�
Jennifer was grinding her cunt down wilder and wilder as her orgasm
approached.� Jennifer started to grind
her small titties hard into her chest grinding her tits flat and mashing her
little hard nipples.� Then she would grip
her tits in her hands and pulp with hard pulp squeezes as her head snapped
forward and back as she cried out louder and louder.� She was pulping her tits when her right hand shot
down and gripped the back of De'shante's head and jammed it up hard into her
spasming cunt.� "Suck it GODDAMN IT!� Suck it you fucking NIGGER! � (her whole body
now convulsing with hard tremors) Suck Suck Suck � Suck Nigger! �� "Unngghmmmnnghiieee! � unhhh � unnnhhh �
ANNRRNNNNGGGHHHOOOOWWWWNNNGGGGGG!"
she gave a full throated scream of shattering ecstasy.� Her body convulsed so hard as her legs almost
folded as she ground her cunt so hard.� I
loved looking down at her nipples seeing her little nipples fully engorged and
rock hard.� I love it when most women
orgasm their nipples get so fully engorged and rock hard and they get that cute
light color on the end of their nips.�
Even black women's nipples get lighter colored on the tips when they
orgasm as a rule.� I so to love see this
and pouring on the heat to take them over the precipice into shattering ecstasy
as they scream and jackknife wildly.�
De'shante rocked her head sucking with cheek hollowing sucks and then
backed off when Jennifer's clit got sensitive as Jennifer now pushed with her
hand on De'shante's forehead to get her to take it easy.� De'shante now gently lathed her tongue up and
down the teenager's spent slit.�
They again laid down on the sofa
and stroked tired flesh and loved cooed.�
After about five minutes De'shante got up and went to a small stand and
opened the bottom draw and pulled out an anal glass dildo and a string of four
1 � inch anal beads.� She handed them to
Jennifer who smiled.� She quickly got
De'shante on her knees facing the sofa and pushed her down her little titties
mashed into the sofa cushions.� Jennifer
put her toys by De'shante and got on her knees.�
She smiled and ran her hand underneath De'shante and began to rub her muff
as her face mashed into De'shante's ass crack and started a lapping motion her
tongue working the woman's asshole rimming her out as De'shante began to coo
and hitch.� Jennifer lapped and then
began to pump her head working De'shante's bung hole seeking access into her
shit hole once more.� Her hand that had
been jerking De'shante came up and Jennifer's hands clenched De'shante's ass
cheeks and pulled her taunt buns apart and I could now see her tongue starting
to penetrate De'shante's ass.� I was
masturbating furiously again watching.�
Soon Jennifer's tongue was sinking deep into De'shante's ass.� I loved watching Jennifer drive her tongue so
hard and deep and then she would mash her face into her ass crack and keep it
buried as she worked her tongue deep in the black woman's ass.� De'shante's face was slashing with pleasure
and she ran her hand to her pussy and began to rub her muff.� Jennifer worked De'shante's asshole for
another few minutes when she reached down and grabbed the anal dildo and pushed
it all the way to the handle up De'shante's asshole.� She started to pump the glass dildo hard and
fast the ribs jabbing the sphincter with constant friction as the dildo was
slammed into her shit hole over and over.�
De'shante was shuddering and gibbering as her asshole was pounded and
she rubbed her muff furiously.� Jennifer
was stroking De'shante's body with her free hand.� We both could see that De'shante was
close.� "Cum for me Nigger! � Cum you
goddamn Nigger!"� This made De'shante
squeal and undulate harder jamming her ass back into Jennifer's now savage
thrust of the glass dildo into her butt hole.�
I loved how her hand slapped into her ass crack so hard and made
beautiful music with each slam into De'shante's ass.� De'shante's head rocked back on her now stiff
neck and juddered hard.�
"Aaaaaiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeee!" She screamed so loud as her fuck holes
exploded and scalded her soul with shattering bliss as her body had full body
spasms and her head at first rocked back hard and then she started to slam her
face into the sofa cushion over and over as continued to wail in ecstasy.
I had timed my orgasm to explode
along with De'shante's and we both hitched and sighed through our devastating
orgasms and blissful strong aftershocks.�
Jennifer had pulled out the anal dildo and stuffed it into her mouth and
moaned cleaning off De'shante's ass cream and told her slut how "sweet" her
asshole tasted. �The beauty of the female
body was now evident.� We cum so often
and so fucking hard too!� The slut was
not done with De'shante.� She got down on
her ass and scooted back her face upturned and latched her mouth onto
De'shante's cunt like a lamprey.�
Jennifer using the sofa as a backstop for her head as she sucked
voraciously on De'shante's swollen pussy as her tongue sank deep up her fuck
hole and move up slowly to suck hard on De'shante's clitoral hood with hard
long sucks.� De'shante began to hump into
the mouth devouring her quim.� She kept
murmuring how much she loved what Jennifer was doing to her pussy.� I could see De'shante's juices running down Jennifer's
lower face and down her neck as she sucked and lapped.� After five minutes or so she reached around
and found the anal beads.� She kept
sucking and using feel only slowly pushed the four thick beads into De'shante's
asshole making her squeal as each one was pushed into her asshole.� Jennifer gripped De'shante's ass and worked
her swirling groin harder into her face as she sucked with expert skill.� Soon again, De'shante was ramping up.� She was now jamming her cunt down into
Jennifer's face who was snuffling and as she sucked hard on De'shante's
distended clit with hard short noisy sucks.�
"Suck my cunt Bitch � unhgggg unnggggg � Suck it you White Bitch!"� Jennifer surged her head and sank her mouth
as deep into her twat as she could and deep throat sucked on her clit.� ""Ungghh Auunnnggghhhhh �
GODDAMMNNNNNNIIITTTTT you fucking WHORE! � Auungghiinnnieeeee!"�� Her body went into convulsions that made her
whole body spasm.� Again she started
slamming her face into the sofa still screaming.� Jennifer moved her hand up and found the pull
ring on the anal beads and pulled out the beads in a quick rhythm out
De'shante's spasming asshole.� "
ANNGGHIIIEMMNGGEEEE!� � ANNGGHIIIEMMNGGEEEE!"
De'shante wailed as a second orgasm exploded on top of the first orgasm.� Her body bucked slamming her cunt into
Jennifer's hungry mouth.� She jammed her
face into the sofa and wallowed her face and then turned her face to the side
and drooled her eyes showing her stunned condition.� Jennifer backed off when she sensed
De'shante's clit was now on hyper condition.�
She sat up and slowly lowered each anal bead into her mouth and worked
it all around in her mouth cleaning them each with lots of obscene noises and
happy moans.
De'shante slinked off the sofa
with slut eyes and embraced Jennifer and they kissed deeply tongues wrestling
hard I could see by their working cheeks and mashed mouths.� After a few minutes of kissing and grinding
Jennifer got up and went to the stand and looked in the drawer and looked up
pissed "There is no fucking strap-on.� I
want you to fuck me in the ass!� I want
you to be the first Nigger to fuck me in the ass De'shante!" she whined.� De'shante smiled softly at her and her love
for the teenage so clearly on display.� "God
I love it when you call me a Nigger Jennifer." De'shante moaned back.� She softly murmured "I can still fuck you in
the ass better than any cock?"� Jennifer
looked at her curiously and De'shante helped up her fist and kissed it looking
hard at Jennifer.� I had to smile when
Jennifer croaked "Oh god."� Her bosses
and I have totally addicted De'shante to deep anal fisting.� De'shante patted the sofa and Jennifer walked
over and got her torso on the sofa and her ass presented for exploitation.� Her initial shock over, Jennifer showed her
sluttiness with her ass swirling in love and need.� Gods I love how the Internet and porn have
made teenagers so open for all the ways that women can love each other.� De'shante now mirrored Jennifer earlier
burying her face in her ass and soon plunging her tongue deep and hard into the
teenager's hungry asshole.� Her shit hole
so tight on her tongue.� De'shante moaned
and groaned along with Jennifer eating sweet asshole.� De'shante murmuring how good Jennifer's ass
tasted.� She then brought up her hand and
sank her middle finger into the teenager's asshole.� Jennifer's head rocked and looked back and
moaned how good it felt.� De'shante
smiled kissing her ass and pumped her butt and soon worked two more fingers
into the girl's ass and worked them in and out and twisted them slowly as
Jennifer pumped her ass back into the fingers invading her ass.�
De'shante worked her ass slowly
working in her little finger and then thumb after another few minutes working
the girl's shit hole as Jennifer groaned gutturally and a few times cried out
when a sudden spike of pained pleasure ripped her boy.� De'shante has dainty hands so the invasion
was not overly large.� She kissed the
girl's ass and lower back her other hand now working the girl's cunt.� Jennifer was moaning and chuffing as
De'shante slowly twisted her hand down until her knuckles were working the
teenager's rosebud.� Jennifer looked back
suddenly "I don't think I can take your fist � it is too big �
unnngggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr". She cried out as De'shante jammed her hand
forward and sank her fist into the girl's shit hole.� Jennifer's head sagged down as she moaned and
softy chuffed.� I watched De'shante twist
her hand and I know she was slowly forming her fist.� She started to pump he hand sinking her fist
three or four inches into her bung hole.�
She would pump it and then jam back hitting her sphincter hard making
Jennifer cry out in pleasure.�� De'shante
then pulled her hand out the girl's clinging asshole.� I loved how it glistened with shit
juice.� De'shante licked it clean as
Jennifer croaked how nasty De'shante was.�
De'shante then worked her hand back in and pumped the girl's shitter and
sank her fist slowly deeper into the teenager's ass.� About six inches now up the girl's ass.� De'shante pulled her hand out and then fisted
Jennifer's hair with her other hand and pulled her roughly around and smeared
her shit juice soaked hand on the teeanger's face.� I loved Jennifer's whorish groans and the way
she tilted her head back to get fully soaked in shit juice.� They then kissed heatedly and De'shante
licked Jennifer's face half clean and pushed her back around and down
Jennifer's face still smeared in ass cream like a total whore.� Several more times De'shante fisted
Jennifer's asshole working six inches in and jamming her sphincter before
pulling out and totally soaking Jennifer's face in shit juice.� Now she did not clean any off and Jennifer's
face and hair were totally smeared and soaked in her asshole.�
Now De'shante went for her brass
ring.� She worked her hand in and formed
her fist and started to pump the girl's sixteen year old ass.� She then pulled her fist against the girl's
sphincter and gripped the girl's ass cheek with her free hand hard.� She lunged her fist up the girl's ass until
her elbow was jamming the girl's ass.�
"Unnngggggghhhhhhhhhhh!" Jennifer grunted and moaned so hard.� Her face had such a slutty look on it as she
kept her ass in place for deep, hard anal fisting.� Jennifer was so beautiful I watched
De'shante's golden forearm sink up her shit hole.� The way her bolted jolted and her head rocked
as she moaned so hard her face a picture of deep anal induced pleasure of
slashes and half rolled back eyes.� De'shante
sank her arm up the girl's ass and then slowly slunk it back down to her
sphincter and then lunging it deep again and again.� "Oh goddamn De'shante� � I love feeling your fist in my belly �
unnngghhhhhhhh � oh god oh god � you're such a Fucking Nigger De'shante."� De'shante smiled at the racial slur and
slammed her fist all the way up the girl's ass twisting her fist as she
lunged.� After a few long minutes or so of
deep anal fisting I could see that Jennifer was on the way to heaven.� She had started to rub her muff hard and was
chuffing and begging De'shante "Keep fisting my asshole Nigger!� Oh god, fist me deep you Goddamn Fucking
Nigger!"� De'shante lunged her fist hard
into the girl's ass her elbow jamming her asshole hard with plunge up her
shitter.� Suddenly Jennifer screamed full
throated screams of unbridled ecstasy.�
Her body flipped and jackknifed wildly as De'shanted continued to lung
her fist up the girl's asshole to prolong the girls ecstasy.� I could see a second orgasm explode out her
spasming asshole.� The girl simply wailed
and flopped anew as she was shattered with bliss.� She finally started to come down from her
orgasms and begged for De'shante to keep her fist buried in her ass.� De'shante kissed Jennifer's ass and lower back
while stroking the girl's sweaty back and ribs with her free hand as strong
aftershocks made the teenager's breath catch and strong tremors shake her hard
as she loved cooed to her new Nigger lover.�
"Goddamn, you made my asshole cum so hard De'shante" Jennifer cooed to
her new lover.�� De'shante nipped her ass
and crowed "Once you go black you never go back.� You been fucked right Cracker!"� After a few minutes she finally cooed that
De'shante could take her fist out.� I
loved watching Jennifer's body clench and then shudder hard as De'shante
slipped her fist out the girl's stretched sphincter.� Jennifer slowly slunk off the sofa and they
embraced with De'shante again soaking the teenager's face and hair in shit
juice whipping her arm and hand all over the girl's face and hair as Jennifer
held her face still up tilted and moaned "Oh god yessssss! � soak my face in
shit baby!".� After De'shante finished
soaking the teenager's face in shit juice they kissed deeply.� Then De'shante slowly licked Jennifer's totally
shit juice soaked face clean.� It was so
obscene the way she tenderly cupped Jennifer's sixteen year old face and used
broad, long, slow strokes of her pink tongue to lick the shit cream off
Jennifer's innocent looking face.� They
purred as they tiredly dressed and went to shower.� I was so happy to watch new love and having
masturbated to their new love
End of Long Digression:
I have talked
about how you so capture the sounds of fucking.�
This is so true but I have focused on the communication of women during
the fuck and how you so capture the end game.�
But reading the next part it hit me how you capture the sounds of the
sex itself.� By that I mean the sounds of
lovemaking itself. The sounds of rutting.�
I love the communication of women and how men command me but there are
long stretches where we are just fucking.�
Even the more quiet persons still make the sounds of the rut.� The sounds of soft moans, groans, huffing, whinnies� and cawing.�
The sounds you make as you swirl your cunt into a shaft plunging deep
into your belly.� The sounds you and your
lover make as you work your lover.� The
sounds of het fucking or tribbing really lead to this.� Even when you are going down on your woman
you murmur and snuffle as you dine on succulent, soaking wet cunt meat.�� Lesbian sex is often more sedate than het
sex but you still make those short, staccato sounds of pleasure.� Needless to say, other authors can't capture
the sounds of sex during the interaction of lovers they definitely don't
capture the sounds of the rut like you do.�
Those short sounds and moaned words that only seem able to capture
["Unghhh! Ungghh!"�������
"Oh! Laura! Oh!"������� "Ungghh!"������� "Oh! Oh dear!"]� It does not take make much to capture this
dynamic.� By giving us this, we then
supply our personal rutting sounds and the sounds our lovers make when they
rut.� This allows us to marry our
memories to your story and make the story so much more.� You know how to draw the reader into the
story.�� You capture the sounds of the
fuck itself and this draws the reader into the story.� When we remember the sounds of rutting we
then remember the way our body are moving and hitching during the rut.� The rhythmic humping or swirling of ones
groin into your lover's ministrations.�
The way our heads thrash or lull.�
The way our tits are swirling or sloshing.� This allows us to bring it all into the
fuck.� By doing this you have the reader
primed for the love kill when it is delivered to Laura or her to her angel and,
thus, vicariously the reader.� How can
one not feel their cunt spasm and get so wet and nipples throb so hard reading
this after being setup so expertly [Laura saw the spark of Shelley's orgasm
deep in her eyes a split second before Shelley herself realized it was piercing
her. The next few seconds were a violent maelstrom of thrashing,
groaning, and loud cries as they collided in a perfect storm of coming. ��������"Anngghiiiee . . . ohhhggmmnn . .
. ahhhnnnggiiieee!" Shelley erupted in wild screams, her lovely svelte
body surging and straining up into Laura's down-thrusting hips, mashing her
pussy into Laura's and gurgling as wave after wave of her climax wrenched her.������� Laura was equally overpowered by her
own orgasm, which clenched her in a hot, quick fist of killing pleasure before
releasing her to fall forward onto Shelley's panting body.
"Unngghhhh . . . oh god . . . annngghhhhh!" she groaned, still
feeling the popping and flashing in her womb and pussy as the trailing spasms
diminished.]� Sigh, this is fucking
perfection.� i am so in love with your
vocalizations of women having strong, mind blowing orgasms.� This was the first thing that captured my
avid fandom when I discovered your stories.�
Those first chapters that I discovered with Karen and Rick just totally
blew me away.� I had never found any
stories with dead on sounds of orgasm and hard rutting and here I was being
crushed with sounds I didn't even know I was missing at the time.� I went insane masturbating my poor little
kitty to total fucking exhaustion.� I was
in heaven reading chapter after chapter of divine fucking and totally hot
sounds of fucking.� Here we are at
chapter 332 and I am still reveling in hot love making and totally awesome
vocalizations of divine orgasms as Laura and Shelley take each other to
nirvana.� Of course I am blown away by
the spot on vocals but I love how you frame them.� The way you use the English language.� Other authors really just tell us that their
women are cumming hard and that is it.�
They don't frame the orgasm.� You
use words like "maelstrom of thrashing; loud cries; erupted in wild screams;
svelte body surging and straining; clenched her in a hot, quick fist of
killing pleasure."� I know I highlighted
these words earlier but I wanted to show clearly how these phrases show a
harrowing orgasm.� When other authors
just say she cummed hard and you give me this then nothing else really needs to
be said.� They imply while you show me
her devastating orgasm that allows me live it with her that makes me so happy,
especially my pussy!� Plus, you show the
pulsations of the orgasm.� I so love
orgasms because I just get pummeled with wave after wave of shattering
pleasure.� I just feel heaven in my veins
as I just get seared with shattering ecstasy over and over as my womb and or
shit hole explode boiling ecstasy into my veins throttling me with pure fucking
bliss for so long as my body convulses wildly and I often flip almost out of
control as I writhe and buck in helpless pleasure.� Then you give me those divine little details.
�You tell the reader that Laura saw the
flash of orgasm in Shelley's eyes just before it hits her.� I so know that!!!� I so love to be looking in a slut's eyes and
see this.� I really focus on this when I
am in position and I have seen her body tensing and her vocalizations reach
that next level and I know she is hanging on the precipice.� You don't always see it but so often you
do.� I feel myself falling so much deeper
in love when I get to see this and almost feel like I am sharing in her orgasm
I am giving her.� Three days back I drove
over and picked up Roshanda and Chantel and drove them back over to Dodie and
Frankie's house.� They spent the next
days at their house as Dodie and Frankie and some of the staff at Frankie's
dance studio fucked them blind day and night.�
We did straight lesbo for the first session and then Frankie took
Chantel to another bedroom.� Dodie and I
pounded Roshanda with our big dicks fucking her hard and deep.� She had two orgasms and now we doing her dp
so hard.� We were in classic dp as she
straddled me and I pounded her tight pussy with short hard thrusts anchoring
her down for Dodie's punishing ass rape.�
I was in heaven feeling her body lurch forward and her thick nipples
jabbing and digging into my full tits.�
Her sweaty body sliding hard over mine her belly sliding over mine as I
loved the friction it made.� I love this
position because her face is so close to mine as we do dp or reverse
missionary.� I loved seeing Dodie rise up
and move up to our heads and see her knees beside me as she pushed her dick
down and watching Roshanda swallow her dick so greedily and suck hard as her
head bobbed and twisted.� A few times
Dodie pushing her dick harder and I opened my mouth wide and moaned swallowing
her dickhead soaked in Roshanda's shit juice and bobbing with short bobs to
clean her dick head my lips tight on her dick.�
Then letting Roshanda finish cleaning. Now I could see the tension
building in Roshanda's body as she whinnied loudly and her head juddered and
jerked her eyes wide looking directly into my eyes in deep love.� I could see Dodie behind gritting her teeth
and her body lurching hard to pile drive her dick balls deep up the thirteen
year's old asshole.� Then I saw it.� I call it the "flare".� She has midnight eyes but I could still see
it so clearly.� Her eyes pulsed and
flared and then bulged open wide.� I
reveled in hearing her "Unnggghhhhhiiiiiieeeee � Unnggghhhhhiiieeeeee �
Arrggghhuuaaaaaaa!" so gutturally.� Her
body was bucking and convulsing wildly.�
Dodie was slapping her ass hard filling the room with the sound giving
Roshanda the pain she craves during her orgasms.� I was spiking my dick into her flooding pussy
that was soaking my groin, thighs and belly in her pulsing steamy cum.� We pounded her hard to prolong her
orgasm.� Dodie growled and chuffed and
gritting out "Cum again you fucking NIGGER!" as she slammed her dick as hard as
she could into Roshanda's teenage ass.� I
could see Dodie's body arching and her sweaty lank hair jerking hard as she
coiled her body to pull her dick out the girl's shit hole and then plunge it
fully up her ass the sound of her sweaty thighs slapping hard into Roshanda's
ass cheeks making her body jolt forward up my sweaty body.� Roshanda had weakened her head sagged down on
my shoulder but she suddenly surged up on her hands her fingers clawing into
the sheets her body tensing again as we slammed our cocks into her black ass
and cunt.� Dodie leaned forward a little
and gripped her shoulder with one hand to jam her back and the other fisted her
hair and jerked back into slamming thrusts.�
"Yeah, that's right you fucking Brillo Pad � you fucking Field Nigger!
.. take my white dick up your ass Bitch!"�
I chuffed "Cum Roshanda you fucking black cow � cum you fucking Jig�you
fucking worthless Nigger!"� Her eyes
flared again and she screamed "Ungghhh!�
Unnnggghhh! � AUUNNGGGHHHH! AUUNNGG�" her screamed choked off as
my hands now wrapped around her throat and squeezed off her breath.� Her eyes bulged so wide as her right hand
clawed at my strangling grip and I jerked her head as now her womb and asshole
exploded yet again as her body convulsed so wildly as her body slammed up and
down as another orgasm exploded on top of her current orgasm.� Her head thrashed and her body bucked and her
eyes rolled completely back and spasmed so hard.� I choked her with hard squeezes of my fingers
as her body convulsed and she slowly began to lose consciousness as her head
lulled over and tongue spasmed and eyes continued to spasm in their
sockets.� A hard spasm shook her cruelly
and she passed out.� I finally stopped
strangling her as she gasped and juddered as she rasped in harsh breaths and
convulsed still lost in the haze of semi-unconsciousness as she started to lift
into that twilight of almost consciousness that floods the brain with pure
fucking ecstasy as you come back to full consciousness.� Her mouth open drooling all over my shoulder
and her eyes spasming and rolling around lost in the heavens of a devastating womb
and asshole shredding orgasm.� She finally
regained full consciousness and just moaned and cried out as her ruined asshole
pulsed and still clenching cunt pulsed out strong aftershocks to her stunned
brain and soul.� She moaned and cooed.� We finally pulled our dicks out and got on
our knees as she still hitched and shook with random aftershocks.� Dodie gripped her hair and pulled her up
roughly until she was on her knees.� She
blearily focused on Dodie's dick soaked in her shit cream.� She smiled that big smile that only Roshanda
has and bent down opening her mouth wide and moaned so long as she sucked her
shit off Dodie's cock that had a shit hole ring near the base of it that
Roshanda cleaned off with long strokes of her tongue.� She finished cleaning Dodie's cock and moved
over to mine and looked up "God, I love the taste of my shit on Dodie's white
cock � I'm such a fucking Nigger Barbara � god I love how you choked me so
hard, so good Barbara�you white Bitch!" she husked with a smile in her voice
and eyes.� She lowered her head and
swallowed my cockhead and began to bob and slurp it clean of her thick cunt
cream as she moaned and gurgled her pleasure sucking our cocks so clean.� Gods, it was so sweet how latter that night
it was Roshanda hands around my throat strangling me till I passed out as my
womb and asshole simply kept exploding scalding ecstasy into my veins as I
bucked wildly.� I was pinned down my by
Roshanda cock slow pumping my flowing twat and Dodie raping my asshole.� I began to shriek as my womb and asshole
exploded with shattering pleasure.� I was
flipping convulsively by belly grinding down on Roshanda's sweaty belly up on
my palms my head thrashing hard.�
Roshanda� reached up to choke me
as she spiked her cock up my flooding pussy.�
I was crying out and suddenly it choked off as her fingers strangled me
cutting off all air as my eyes bulged hard.�
I reached up with one hand and tore at her clutching fingers which only
made her grip harder totally chocking me.�
I felt my body jerking and spasming wildly as a second orgasm exploded
out of nowhere.� I slammed my belly into
hers over and over.� I was being pummeled
senseless by with shattering pleasure exploding out my shit hole and hot
pulsing clit.� My mouth working as I
soundlessly screamed my pleasure my tongue flailing spastically as I choked for
breath.� I started to get tunnel vision
form lack of oxygen.� One gets so hyper
aware when the body instinctively fights to stay conscious.� I could feel Dodie pulling her dickhead
partially out my sphincter and the rough feel of her dickhead punching out my
clutching sphincter and then the screaming pleasure of her cock slamming fully
up my shit hole her sweaty thighs slamming my ass making me jolt forward over
Roshanda's sweaty body.� I felt her
dickhead bumping over Roshanda's dickhead deep in my belly making my belly and
womb spasm hard each time their dickheads jolted over each other.� I could feel each finger strangling me so
hard.� I was hyper sensitive.� I looked into Roshanda's thirteen year old
eyes and seeing pure excitement and love as she squeezed harder making me black
out as I felt another massive convulsion shaking me, scalding my very soul with
piercing, scalding bliss as I slipped into unconsciousness.� Coming to as my body was still cumming
weakly.� I felt my sightless eyes rolling
around and eyelid fluttering as I raggedly heaved in breath, drooling heavily
all over Roshanda's neck as my open mouth cawed out groans as I heaved for
breath feeling piercing pleasure as now heavenly aftershocks throttled me.� Roshanda meanly fisted my hair pulling my
head up.� That focused my vision as I
whinnied in pain.� I looked down into her
dark eyes with pure love.� She moved my
mouth over and brought it down as I now gagged and felt my eyes again roll back
and spasm so hard as she took my mouth with her expert tongue wrapping around
mine and slithering like a serpent making more strong aftershocks ripple out my
tired belly.� So much pure love binding
us.
You have given us a great sex scene and now you show that
sweet post coital time.� I do see this
with other stories at times but it is just usually cuddling.�� That is great of course but they never show
the sweet bonding that occurs after great sex.�
Other authors know the parts of relationships but they just don't show
how the parts work.� How they fit
together.� How great fucks bind souls
together and the little moments and post coital time glue it all together.� Our lovers are cuddling of course but you
give us sweet details.� Shelley shows her
jealousy a little commenting about how lucky "Makira" is.� That is cute and endearing how she can't
quite get the unusual name correct.� I
like how Laura gently deflects and redirects the conversation.� I too have to do this with new lovers at
times.� I make it clear that i have my
archangels and we can share great moments and share each other but my inner
heart belongs to others.� That is why I
love sharing my newbies with others to show them the world I know and
cherish.� To give and receive love
freely.� I do wish that Shelley would
fuck more.� I so love opening new worlds
to women who have been sexually repressed or just don't know.� They are like little girls in the candy store
as the discover great sex with my other angels and sometimes my cocksmen pile
driving their big dicks deep into her screaming and writhing body as they pound
orgasms out her exploding cunt and shredding asshole.� We find out that Shelley and Laura have
consumed each other in about five minutes.�
I call that taking the edge off as raw wanton lust has us fucking like starving
tigers bringing down their prey and consuming ravenously.� Getting my clit settled down for more hot
fucking and not having that edge to make the fucking longer and more intense.� I love the sweet embrace of post coital time
[She
began making up for lost time with her insatiable mouth. Shelley was
still on her back, with Laura slumped loosely forward on her, and their legs
were still entangled, their wet crotches close but now less urgently glued
together. Laura kissed her neck and shoulders and throat, and her little
puffed up shiny scar again.������� "Can't
keep your lips off it, can you," Shelley giggled softly. "Katie
Couric, eat your heart out. Laura loves my scar."������� "It's just the thing that makes
you perfect, you know," Laura purred, now disentangling their bodies so
that she could get her mouth on other parts of Shelley's delicious flesh, so
smooth and brown, so damp with the sweat of their recent exertions.]� Sigh, I so love the full body contact you
show here.� I love to feel your weight
lying on me as we kiss languidly in love and our tits are mashing and bellies
wallowing.� I really love the detail of
intertwined legs that help pull bodies tight as sweaty bodies slip and slide.� Then you show that total body loving I so
adore.� I get so tired of not seeing this
from other authors.� I love to kiss your
whole body and you are the only author to show this.� I get so tired of reading only the lips,
nipples and pussy being kissed in other stories.� They miss so much and rob the reader the
pleasure of totally exploring your woman's body.� Like the scar worship anew.� I love worshipping the things that make you
unique.� When you do this you make women
go limpid and so yielding for you.� I
will worship you totally.� I have gotten
so many booty holes and sweet atm and a2p cherries by totally loving my newbie
sluts and soon having them begging me to deflower their tight assholes with my
total loving and worship.� Then the
little compliments which is part of the total body loving.� I make love to your body and mind which
captures your soul.� I am so happy to
find one protagonist who makes love like I do.�
I love to compliment my sluts and see them preen and puff up with pride
as their shoulders square just that little bit and they give me that big goofy
smile.� Love the detail of the sweat
filming Shelley's brown skin.� I so love
to lick and kiss up your sweat and slide our sweaty bodies together as tits and
pussies grind against pressing bodies.��
Gods I love kissing and worshiping black women and their so dark
bodies.�
You now show how
with women especially you can get such a change of pace.� This is again like life.� I am they type of girl when I get going I
hate to have cool off and slow down like Shelley wants now.� I may not it like and will try to keep the
fuck flowing but I am easy in the end.� I
will mentally roll by eyes and huff and puff and then follow my angel if she
really wants to digress.� For me this is
sort of getting the Honey-Do list Saturday morning and finding out they really
need it done today.� Why didn't you tell
me earlier so I could plan things.� Geez,
that really steams me.� You show Laura [She
waved a hand in front of her face like a fan. This made her marvelous
breasts jiggle, and Laura could not keep her hands, or her notorious mouth, off
them. For several hot seconds she sucked Shelley's large brown nipples
into wet stiff cones again.]� Laura is doing what I like to
do; pour on the heat to make my slut putty in my hands.� I am so oral.�
I also love titties and I can just see Shelley's tits jiggling and how
my mouth would water and I would be devouring them like Laura here.� I so love to grip tits like Shelley's and
pulp them in my strong hands and sometimes slap hard back and forth as my slut
whimpers and writhes.� Working them hard
and then stuffing deep into my mouth as I deep throat love suck and tongue bat
as my slut whimpers and cry outs in shocking pleasure.� I love how you use language to add to the
story.� Laura being "notorious" tells the
reader just how good she is with her mouth.�
She is a superstar like I like to think I am.� I make women whimper and men groan with
fierce pleasure when I go down on them.�
Plus, you give us the small details that I so love reading.� You tell the readers how Shelley's nipples
are again fully erect and ready for hot sucking.� You show the reader how the loving affects
your women and I get so tired not getting this with other authors.� Like I say you show how lovemaking is not
scripted.� With other authors once something
has started it will be finished.� I think
most people are like this but your woman gets to have a say and Shelley does
here.� I see that Shelley has a little of
the exhibitionist in her.� She takes
Laura out on her deck in the nude.� She
then tells Laura about a man a little way off with a telescope that likes to
look at her nude body when she displays it.�
I do not seek out such situations but I don't mind if people see me
being fucked like happens at Celeb and Joshua's apartment sometimes.� You then put that little bit of humor into
the story that makes me smile.� Shelley
has seen some slasher movie it seems and imagines the voyeur coming down and
killing her.� I can see her eyes big as
she tells Laura her dark fantasy.� I am
too practical for such fantasizes and have to smile when some angel or another
of mine has these thoughts.� You add to
the humor of a cold beer dampening the mood when Laura wants to kiss and the
cold can coming against her skin makes her gasp and jump.� These are the moments that are not all that
funny at the moment but when you remember them later you can see the humor with
a smile.� This long interlude really
brings out the difference between men and women,.� Men never delay the sex and hot fucking.� I had not had a chance to fuck Al alone.� I had fucked him with Hillary and Odessa and
few times at Celeb and Joshua's pad during a fuck fest.� We had texted and I sent him some nude photos
to let him know my intentions and I smiled getting some pictures of his rigid
ten inch cock back.� We agreed to meet
two nights later and he treated me to a nice dinner at a high end
restaunt.� We just had a nice time and I
flirted shamelessly.� We got back to his
house and as soon as the door closed he took me in his arms and kissed me
deeply his thick, long tongue sliding down my throat making me instantly wet
and my nipples getting so hard.� We
hurriedly undressed and I loved the raw hunger I saw in his eyes as he devoured
my swaying tits and bald cunt inflaming us with my thick musk.� I was about to fall to my knees to suck his
cock into my mouth.� He took my arm and
led me to the sofa and sat me down and settled between my legs and bent
in.� My head jammed back as she sucked my
cunt meat into his mouth and started to suck hard on my rigid clit and worked
up and down my slit snuffling as he devoured my labia lips and sucked in my
inner petals and munched on them.� I
cried out in pleasure as he sucked my cunt so good.� I love men who love pussy.� I find men are not subtle or sublime in their
pussy eating but focused like a laser in devouring your swollen cunt and
snuffling loudly as they do.� They may
not use their fingers like I wish they would and are single minded but it is
nice to have your cunt devoured by a male lion in heat.� I was gurgling and humping hard into his dark
black face and he started to tongue fuck me hard as I drove my cunt into his
pistoning head my hands now clawed into his scalp.� His mouth moved and sucked my entire upper
cunt into his mouth and stretched it as his mouth deep sucked and his tongue
was madly slapping my clit.� I screamed
with all my might as my womb exploded and I flipped wildly and bucked out of
control as my belly spasmed so hard as full body spasms rocked my soul.� I folded forward and slammed back into the
sofa over and over as scalding waves of bliss throttled me.� I screamed several more times as my cunt
soaked his face in my steamy cunt nectars my hands grinding his mouth into my
spasming out of control clit.
I was spent when
the wrenching spasms finally faded into delightful aftershocks that made me
gurgle and spasm softly over my whole body.�
I was groggy as he got me on my knees on the floor and fisted my hair
and poked my mouth with his bulbous black dick head.� I was still stunned and he gripped his shaft
at the base and started to dick whip my face hard as I cried out in pain and
quickly recovered.� He so knows by now I
love to be totally dominated by my male lovers.�
I know my face was marked with his hard whacks of his cock across my
face.� He again jammed his dick into my
lips and I was ready and swallowed it and immediately began to bob hard.� I sucked and undulated my head with twisting
turns sucking his cock with all my skill.�
I sucked and bobbed for several minutes and then he led me to the sofa
and I straddled him as he sat down my knees on the sofa beside his hips.� I guided his cock to my slit and rubbed it up
and down and then positioned his bulbous dickhead at my cunt hole and gagged
feeling him push his cock deep up my tight, slippery cunt.� I moaned feeling his ten inches slide up my
dripping snatch.� He immediately started
to pump his shaft hard into my belly and gripped my tits and pulped them and
wolfed down my aching nipples.� I humped
and loved feeling my body jolt as he up slammed his cock into my womb over and
over.� I dismounted twice to suck my
juices off his cock and had my feet on the floor and was slamming down as he
slammed up our sweaty bodies slapping hard.�
I watched my tits flop and roll around as they dripped sweat and felt
that first delicious tension forming in my belly.� I cried out to Al to fuck me harder and he
gripped my hips to really slam me down as I gripped his shoulders for support
and swirl my hips to impale my cunt on his savagely upthrusting prick.� My head whipped back and I wailed as my womb
yet again exploded and spasmed wildly.� I
bucked and twisted as my head thrashed and I groaned deep in my chest as wave
after wave shattering bliss destroyed me with shattering pleasure.� I was stunned again as he got me laid down on
the sofa as he got spoon and lifted my upper leg.� He barked at me "Pull your Saltine ass open
for my black dick Bitch!"� I groaned deep
in my chest hearing him racially demeaned me making my belly spasm in
want.� I moaned reaching back and sinking
my fingers into my ass cheek and pulled hard opening my ass crack showing him
my spasming brown rosebud.� He wasted no
time and pushed his thick dickhead into my sphincter and started to push hard
as it resisted for a few seconds and then jammed up my rectum.� I gagged again and my head lulled down as he
pumped my shitter.� I gibbered feeling
him work my sphincter slack and feeling his bulbous cockhead sliding deep into
my belly as his entire shaft was pumped in and out my asshole.� Soon he was pounding my shit hole so good
packing my shit hard.� I was moaning
feeling my tits flop and swirl with his thighs slapping my ass hard.� He pushed me forward slipping his dick out my
spasming asshole.� He pushed my hip and I
rolled off the couch and pivoted and lifted his dick soaked in my ass twitching
on his stomach.� "I looked him in the eye
"I love sucking my shit off black cock Al.�
I'm a total Nigger Digger ba-bee!" I husked as I lowered my head and
swallowed his dick soaked in my shit cream.�
I moaned as I bobbed slowly sucking hard and rising up to butterfly his
dickhead making him moan and groan as I then dove on his dickhead and supper
sucked as I slide six inches into my throat slowly and then pushed down hard
burying his dick into my throat all the way feeling his bulbous dickhead
bulging my throat as I slow stroked it up and down my throat.� "Goddamnnnnnnn you fucking slut!" he love
snarled as I did slow deep throat strokes up and down my gullet.� I mashed my nose into his sweaty stomach each
time I slide his black dick down my throat.�
I cawed out spit when his dickhead slide to my lips, letting it drool
down his shaft as I worked his dickhead with my clenched lips as I rotated on
it sucking fiercely.� Then I slide his
cock fully down my throat feeling him stiffen in pleasure feeling my throat
massaging his cock and bulbous dickhead.�
Over and over I deep throated his beautiful black dick.� Soon I was back on sofa as he pounded my
asshole.� His strong strokes making my
tits swirl and jolt as he used one hand snaked underneath me to pulp my hooters
in turn and grinding his palm and clenching my areola and nipples and pulp
grinding them his fingers sinking deep into my tits as he pulped my
nipples.� I cried out in searing pained
pleasure with his mauling my tits so expertly.�
Pain makes me cum so hard.� Twice
more I was pushed off his cock and I cleaned his thick cock with my throat
taking his dick down my throat as he now clenched my hair to jam my nose into
his belly as he did short upthrusts of his hips to spike his dickhead down my
trachea making me gag and choke out spit I used it to pump his shaft as it slid
out my throat.� He gripped my hair to
roughly to get me up on the sofa when he was ready to take my shit hole again
and got me spoon and invaded my asshole hard and deep.� I felt the tension starting to build in my
womb and trembling sphincter.� I was
writhing against him as he now slammed so hard into my shitter sensing my
approaching orgasm.� He lunged while now
gripping my shoulder with one hand and hip with the other and slammed his
thighs into my ass as he smoked my asshole with rapid drilling thrusts.� My head was rocking forward as my eyes bulged
as I felt the precipice now here.� I
gripped the edge of the sofa and jammed back hard into Al's punishing
strokes.� "Oh goddamn � fuck fuck �� AAARRRGGGHHHHUUNNNNNNN!" I screamed as my
asshole exploded in screaming shattering pleasure.� Al roared and slammed forward with all his
strength as his cock spurted hot semen almost ten inches up my ass.� I screamed again and again as his cock
spurted hot semen into my ass as he slammed his dick into my ass each time he
spasmed and jetted semen up my ass as I flipped and jackknifed out of
control.� I writhed and bucked until
spent.� I was stunned again as he pulled
his dick out and I felt ass juice and semen leak out my asshole as I sat on the
floor soaking the carpet with my obscene leaking asshole.� I rested my forehead on his sweaty belly as I
recovered and then tilted my head and used my tongue to lift his dickhead into
my mouth and clamped onto it and began to undulate my head as I sucked and
bobbed with slow head twists.� "Goddamn
you're a fucking slut Barbara � suck my cum and your asshole off my black dick
you fucking White Bitch!"� I smiled
happily at the cursing and racial slurs.�
I sucked hard my cheeks hallowing out as I sucked.� I needed to taste all the shit cream and
semen on his cock as I licked up his cock from base to dickhead cleaning it all
before again sucking in his dickhead and slow twisting on his dickhead as I
lovingly slow bobbed.� Males and their
direct approach has it advantages!� Again
and again we fucked that night as he fucked all three of my fuck holes to utter
exhaustion.�
I like that you
show some sweet bonding during their post coital time.� Again, other authors only give the bland and
always the same drowsily embracing each other with some sweet cooing.� There is nothing wrong with this, except� this is what they always give me.� i know that bonding where we lazily stroke
and embrace as we coo to each other exhausted from heated fucking.� But I miss them not giving me times like
this.� Where you are bonding and sharing
after the exhilaration of a just happened great fuck.� This is a time where you are still giddy and
so happy after great fucking and hard orgasms and sharing of souls with your
love slut(s).� I love this time of sweet
sharing and learning new things about your newbies and just basking in the
presence of your regular angels.� It is a
time of sharing and laughing.� Sex is
such a binder of souls and a balm to frazzled nerves.� You always show all the aspects of
relationships.� You have a nice echo from
Laura's past where she and Shelley reflect on the voyeur with the
telescope.� I like hearing that Shelley
has not fucked a man in close to eight years.�
I love my cock but I am always happy for women who have fully committed
to the lesbian way.� I love cock and
men's hard body but I simply am bored to tears with them as mate material.� I seriously don't know how het women put up
with them.� I have to smile at Laura
mentioning Robert Michum.� I guess I can
see that.� I guess I go for the young
Robert Redford.� Nice little
interlude.� I have to smile at Laura
saying it is time to go in and start round two.�
I know her jealousy would get the better of her if the man was to
suddenly appear and Shelley were to give him her attention.� Laura has controlled her green eyed monster
but there is no reason to rouse the slumbering beast.
I have to think
about Shelley not giving up the booty hole.�
I am always seducing virgin assholes and feeling my eyes roll back when
I get newbies to suck shit juice off my and other's cocks if they are
present.� I so love to work women to my
will and soon having them pulling their ass cheeks wide to let me yet again
invade what was once a virgin asshole.� I
would love to seduce Shelley to the charms of anal sex but alas it is not to
happen.� Laura is too gentle and loving
to really try and take her anal cherry.��
I am chuckling with Laura crowing to herself that she is fucking Shelley
in Margaret's absence.� I for some reason
don't have this competitive streak with other women or even men.� I just want to fuck whom I want and if I
committing adultery I don't feel like I am winning per se.� If your partner is pretty or handsome I would
love to bring them in if the dynamics were to work out.� I just want to love you.� I am just happy that Laura has tamed this
tendency.� I can remember her past where
she went nuts with being so competitive with others and seeing her fall apart
and her "stomach curdle".� I used to
really feel sorry for her and wanted to grab her and shake and tell her stop
it!� Over the years you slowly grew Laura
as a person to where she is now.� She
still feels the competitive juices and has her jealous streak but she has them
under control.� Her growth and inner
understanding was slow in coming and shows how personal growth occurs.� Rarely does one have an epiphany that changes
one over night.� I have seen it but it is
rare.� I like to think one of my
strengths is my ability to change and grow and become better as I age.� I don't lock myself in just because "it is
the way I have always done it or thought it".�
I am open to change.� Though I am
open to change it usually takes time and I see this in Laura.� You show real life again in how a good person
can become better but that it takes time and inner reflection.� I guess this is part of why I love Laura so
is this true real life growth I have seen in her.
I like how you
show that Laura so adores her women.� As
they go back inside she once devours Shelley's body with her eyes.� I so love to bask in the physicality of my
lovers.� I get so blasted tired of other
stories not giving me any details about their women.� They are like mannequins and it just kills
most stories for me.� They never show what is about the women that
attract them to each other.� They give me
a no description of their most basic looks and that is it.� How can I worship you with just their bland
descriptions.� This is why I adore my
lovers [At a small distance the marvelous tan lines accentuating the
curves of Shelley's body were wildly tantalizing. When you were closer to
her, holding her, nuzzling and caressing and kissing her body everywhere, you
didn't notice them as much, but when she was a few steps away, they were enchanting
and simply made Laura want to eat her alive.]� I just bask
in their individual beauty that makes my pussy wet and nipples ache to love you
totally and deeply.� You give us all
these adverbs(?) in how Laura wants to worship and consume Shelley.� With your language you make it so clear how
much Laura truly loves her angels.� I so
want to pull you into the full body clench as we roll around naked on the bed
our tits mashing and bellies wallowing as hooked ankles and arms pull tight as
mouths are mated so tight as tongues duel and plunge down throats in deepening
love.� I so love full body contact and
thus adore your writings for it.� This is
why I love het fucking.� The feel of
bodies slapping and jamming hard into each other.� I love to feel my body jolt with the power of
men making my tits swirl and whiplash and doing this to my sluts.� I love having the power to fuck women like
men do.� It makes them cum so hard for
me.� I especially love spoon and the
missionary positions since this allow our bodies to wallow and hump all over
each other as I spear my cock deep into you cunt or up your tight ass.� Same goes for dp and tp sex since I am
literally being buffeted by bodies from front and back as I groan deep in my chest
as I feel your cocks pounding my fuck holes and rubbing over each other in my
belly.� Other authors just miss so much
by not showing this.� Last Thursday night
Maria was back in town before heading to the LA again to check up on the
business and see me!� We had fucked
heatedly for a long time and then had sweet post coital time.� I then put some pillows against the headboard
and leaned against it and had Maria lean back against me her back resting on my
titties and belly.� She tilted her head
over as I kissed her deeply and played with her tits pulping and working her
nipples making her writhe and whimper.�
Then working her ribs and belly with one hand still working her heavy
hooters as she looked me so lovingly in the eye before we would mate mouths tight
kissing so deeply my tongue sliding down her throat making her gag in love for
me.� I now started working her pussy with
one hand working her clit and slit and worming her labia lips between my
fingers as her cunt humped up in small circles.�
I worked her tighter as I whispered to her what a fucking slut she was a
and goddamn Mexican whore.� She whinnied
and humped harder.� I husked to her to
milk her tits as I now worked her shaved, swollen, totally soaked cunt.� Working her labia lips open showing her
soaking wet seam and bulging clit.� I was
rubbing and forking her clit as I pumped two fingers in and out her flowing
pussy with my other hand.� Maria was like
a live wire now using her heels to jam against me and writhe up and down my
sweaty chest her face slashing constantly now.�
I tapped her clit and circled it.�
I was saving a direct assault for the love kill.� Her hands pulped her tits and crushed her
nipples and areolas.� She was huffing and
moaning constantly now.� I now pumped
three fingers in and out her sloshing cunt that made such sweet obscene
noises.� My hands were soaked in her
juices.� I forked her clit hard now
making it bulge up and totally exposed and pulled my fingers out her clutching
cunt and started to rub her clit back and forth hard and fast my slicked
fingers a blur.� Sigh.� She suddenly slammed back into my body hard
driving me into the headboard her heels digging into the mattress for
purchase.� Her head slammed back into my
shoulder and juddered out of control.�
"AAAARRRRRGGGHHUUUUUNNNNN!" She screamed in shattering ecstasy.� She bucked and jackknifed back into me
totally out of control her head spasming forward and slamming back into my
shoulder over and over as her hands now balled into fists slammed the mattress
over and over.� She screamed out her
groans and cried out "GGGGOOODDDAMMMMNNNNNNNN!" so sweetly with her last
shattering throttling spasm of crushing bliss. I just reveled in the full body
contact of her out of control body slapping into my torso and pounding my tits
making me groan and love Maria so much more if that was possible.� She wallowed and jackknifed until totally
spent and collapsed all sweat soaked back into my nurturing body as I now
stroked her aftershocking body that rippled and hitched her beautiful gourd shaped
hooters giggling and jolting with her spasms of fading bliss.� Our love cementing as her sweat dripping face
now turned over to look me languidly in the eyes with total love as I lowered
my face and our tongues twined and mated tight as our mouths devoured each
other in renewed love.
They go back
inside and now it is time for some sweet het fucking.� I so love to read your het fucking because I
know you will give me the details I crave and make the moment of penetration so
fucking rad.� It is kind of cool how you provide so much detail
based upon your ability to create this world and give it individual
character.� I do come across strap-on
stories and all you ever really know about the dildo is that it generic and of
standard or maybe something a little bigger.�
This is kind of the standard or maybe of longer length and girth like I
like.� But again the dildos are blandly
described as the women themselves are in other stories.� Here you use past experience or imagination
to go outside the box.� Like this [Shelley
got the strap-on dildo she kept just for such a purpose as this 'ram fucking'
out of her dresser drawer and handed it to Laura. The cock itself, Laura
now remembered when she saw it, was thicker and shorter and stubbier than any
she had ever seen before, and yet she also knew from experience that it
certainly did the trick for Shelley, who had climaxed like the end of the world
the last time Laura had done this to her.]� I have to smile at "stubby" dildo.� Like I say, you give details that are not the
ole tried and true.� I have to love how
you infer just how Shelley likes to be fucked by "ram fucking".� Where other authors would just say that they
fucked hard I like to qualify it by using terms like "ram fucking" to show how
I like to ram fuck my sluts.� I grip
their hips, ass, shoulders or ribs hard as I arch my back if doggy and swirl my
hips to pump my cock.� I pump hard to
pound my cock as deep as possible into your tight cunt or asshole.� I definitely love the bigger dimensions for
my cock, dildos, and strap-ons.� I am
definitely a size whore.� It is true that
true skill does not need length but I love to feel that stuffed feeling when a
big cock is penetrating me and I feel my sphincter and cunt all stretched out.� Also, I love to feel that cock deep in my
belly which the standard lengths just don't provide me.� When I do swing parties they all have the
lair where the big cocks live and that is where I go for my male fucking.� I do fuck men with "normal" sized cock but I
do not really seek them out or want to add them to my harem.� I do men for sport fucking and only want them
for their cocks and the orgasms they can give me.� I love to feel dominated by my men and having
big cocks just really plays into this.�
Also, it is like a concert violinist said about a Stradivarius violin. �He said that the actual sound was not that
much better than other superior violins but he liked having the "reserve" power
that they have to be used when needed.� I
want that reserve that big cocks give true cocksmen.� I have fucked well endowed men once and then
never again.� You have to know how to use
your sword.� Some men just want to stab
at your pussy or ass and have no skill or imagination.� They think their big cock is enough in and of
itself.� Not!� The bores just get you usually missionary and
stab at your pussy in a boring, repetitious stroke that doesn't do anything for
you.� You have to use your superior
weapon with skill and imagination if it is to be of any value.� It is like the difference between your
writings and the dreck of other writers.�
While I would never buy such a dildo they do make a nice change of
pace.� A couple months back Dodie and I
were at Belissa and La'Tonya's place.�
They are definitely into large dildos, anal beads, queue balls and such
for anal pleasure.� They had just gotten
a "horse" cock.� It looked a lot like a
fisting dildo to me but it was accurate.�
Dodie went nuts over it.� Our
hosts used it manually to pound our shit holes to oblivion and shattering anal
'gasms.� A couple weeks back I was at
Dodie's with the sisters Hillary / Camille and Galaisha / Sade'.� Frankie was with Sally fucking a new recruit
to Sally's dance studio.� We did lots of
hot and heavy lesbo fucking and we were now lounging in the living room and
just yapping and laughing.� I noticed
Dodie leave and she came back in with her own horse cocked hooked up and ready
to go on her harness.� This was as big
and a slight up swing and the cock head just protruding from its sheath.� The black mares were all immediately enamored
and on their knees and drooling and stroking Dodie's horse dick.� She was whinnying like a horse and pawing the
carpet with her foot and crowing she was the "Black Stallion" shaking her black
hair.� She also pawed the air with her
hands like a stallion kicking its front feet in the air all the time whinnying
and preening and shaking her cock all around.�
She told us mares to get ready to get fucked by our stallion.� The freaking sisters were all mesmerized worshipping
her studness.� I wanted to lol and roll
around on the floor but controlled it to keep the mood but I couldn't help but
smirk and chuckle.� She saw this as she
let Sade's spit on her dick and start sucking on her extremely large cockhead
as Hillary ran her lips up and down the shaft.�
Dodie barked at me "Get your ass over here you ole Nag!"� That pissed me off!� She knows I am sensitive about being called
old like that in front of young sluts.� I
straightened my back and kneed over with a defiant look as she now smirked for
all to see.� Bitch!� She ordered the other mares to attack me and
get my ass ready for fucking.� I screamed
as I was overwhelmed by black bitches as they gladly subdued me and I soon had
my ass high in the air as Camille and Hillary pushed my face and shoulders into
the carpet and spit on me and ground my face hard and the Caribbean cows were
holding my ass up high and gripping my ass and hips and jerking me hard to keep
in position.� They laughed at me as I
screamed at them to let me up and "Fuck You!" at anyone would listen which was
no one. The sluts spit into my asshole and used tongues and fingers to open up
my butthole for Dodie.� I love the "show"
as my pussy flowed nectars down my thighs and my clit spasmed in raw
anticipation of the ass rape about to commence.�
Now I was crying and screaming as Dodie worked her horse cock slowly
into my resisting sphincter and cruelly penetrated my stretched out shit
hole.� The sisters held my limbs and
torso in place holding my shit hole in place to be impaled by Dodie's horse
cock.� I made a show of jerking my limbs
and humping trying to get away which allowed the sisters to manhandle me
roughly to "force" me down and in place.�
I juddered feeling my clit pulse so hard and my nipples so hard and
throbbing.� I looked back at Dodie and
she gave me her Hollywood smile that is so beautiful.� She then jammed and pushed hard penetrating
my asshole with her horse cock as I cried out and bit the carpet and clawed at
the carpet as my asshole was stretched open and her dick sunk into my shit
hole.� I moaned and whinnied as she
worked my asshole open pumping slowly to work my sphincter loose and sinking
her cock deep into my spasming belly and clutching butt hole.� Gods, she fucked me so hard and good as I had
two orgasms that simply destroyed me with fucking pleasure.� Then it was the black mares turn as Dodie
pleasured them to screaming, shattering orgasms as she spent the night ruining
our assholes with her horse cock making us her obedient and horse cock addicted
sluts.�
You now give us that sweet dialog that I have always loved
in your stories.� I am smiling seeing
Shelley begging Laura to do her
immediately because she is dying for it.�
I so love getting my women like this where they are begging for it and
pleading for me to go down on them if straight lesbo or if het like this.� Begging for me to sink my cock balls deep
into their pussy or up their asshole.� Just
the fact that you give us dialog makes me so thankful.� I am reading some stories with teenagers,
incest and atm which makes me happy but again no true dialog.� Just some at the beginning to setup the fuck
and then normal talk at the end of the fucks that show the rising need and how
we converse at the home plate.� But again
no true communication between the women during the fuck.� Where just a small word here or an expressed
need there adds so much to the fuck.� It
inflames me when a slut is begging and whimpering for me thrust my cock hard
and deep into her belly and only you show this.�
For all other authors the middle of the fucks are just so silent like
the wind swept prairie of old.� Plus,
such communication shows the connect between Laura and her women.� How they are comfortable enough with each
other to let each other know their needs because they know they will be
listened too.� You may try to bend the
fuck your way but that is the two way of communication.� The give and take of lovers in love.� Only you capture this.� The loving moans and pleading of desires to
be fulfilled.� Shelley's desires are
about to be fulfilled [Laura couldn't help grinning. "I
won't tell her. But you are my fuck slave. Lie down on your back
and spread your legs, my darling. Auntie Laura wants to eat."������� Shelley gave her a pouty but
flirtatious smile and did as asked. She loved being desired. You
lucky dog, Margaret, Laura thought. All you have to do is love her and
she turns into this marvelous, pliant, sweet, gorgeous, quivering feast of
beautiful smooth brown warm flesh for you, I bet. But you don't get her
right now. I do.]� This shows the communication and how we still
try to get our way also.� Shelley showing
her het background is really pleading for getting "pounded" and is begging for
it to the exclusion of all else.� Laura
hears her and will comply, but a little later.�
She needs some titty dining and cunt gobbling first.� I am like that.� I will pound the living hell out of you with
my love cock but I need to get some sweet gash first.� I need to devour pussy at the start of a fuck
to get your sweet essence in my mouth.�
If my slut is anal I usually l like to work my tongue into your shitter
to get the sweet taste of your asshole in my mouth too knowing soon all of my
cock will be buried up your ass and you will be sucking your shithole off my
cock as I feel my eyes roll back in atm love.�
I just enjoy seeing true interaction between women.� All other stories just seem so scripted
because the women are never able to communicate like you show in each and every
chapter.� Plus, you give me the details I
crave where other authors just leave this part of the fuck blank which robs the
reader of so much.� I love the direct
ordering of Shelley and how Laura makes it clear who is in control.� I just get so wet when a strong slut or man
orders me around like this.� Plus, I love
the familiarity that you show between them.�
Only the flow of time and great fucks bring this kind of easy going
dialog that only your story can provide because of the time arch and effort you
have put into making these women so unique, vibrant and alive.� I do see the controlled jealousy that I
mentioned earlier.� Laura has learned how
to keep her green eyed devil in check.�
Me, I would be trying to get Margaret into the fuck but she has the
Green Eyed Monster!!� Then you use
language again to add so much to show how Shelley is ready and waiting for
Laura.� The words "plaint, quivering"
make it clear that Shelley is in need of immediate hard fucking.� And as always, I love how you always bring
front and center these black women's delicious skin color that I have am so
addicted too.
You now besot
the reader with the wonderful details of loving that makes the reader just fall
into the story.� You provide details
without trying to overwhelm the reader with them.� This allows the reader to fill in the gaps so
to speak with their own experiences and how they would be consuming their slut
and just really draws the reader in without them really realizing it.� Like a great crime fiction writer telling of
a murder but leaving a lot of the details sparse so the reader puts in their
thoughts and how such a scene would look and this draws the reader in.� I have thought for a long time that your
erotica is more like great fiction than just sexy stories on the Internet.� I love how I can see in my mind's eye Laura
half laying on Shelley and hefting up her medium cup titties and simply
devouring her nipples with hard love sucks and lathing and batting tongue.� You have given me enough detail of Laura
lying Shelley on her back and moving in that I now put in the rest of the
details and see how I would be loving her tits.�
Letting Shelley feel my weight as I heft and pulp her tits making her
writhe and whimper as I suck them deep into my throat and deep throat love suck
as I rasp her engorged teats with my curling and slapping tongue.� You give the detail of how her nipples get
all engorged and puffy as Laura and I vicariously devour them and get them wet
with my salvia as I stretch them out in my pulling lips and sucking mouth
making her caw in helpless love.�� You
give me just enough detail to inflame me and make me devour your story and
Shelley at the same time.� Then you
detail how Laura kisses down her abdomen and works slowly south to the paradise
that lies between Shelley's legs.� I fear
no other author comes close to giving me these kinds of sweet details [But
oh what delicious preliminaries. Shelley's wet, thickening, dark nipples
stood in puffed up, stiffened cones against her lips.� She
descended, kissing the marvelous firm sweep of the girl's midriff down to her
lower belly, and then scooted even lower, quickly pressing her lips to the
blossoming nether mouth of Shelley's oozing pussy.������� "Oh! Ohhhhhh . . .
yessssss!" Shelley sighed, her head falling back, her hands sliding up to
her own firm breasts, which Laura had only moments ago abandoned, squeezing
them herself and twisting her jutting, saliva-damp nipples. "Oh . .
. Laura . . . just a little, please! I'll come! I'll come too
soon!"]� Sigh, no one else would use "marvelous firm
sweep" in their stories.� You just make
Shelley's torso sound so sublime and divine.�
This is how I think of my sluts as I worship their bodies.� I try to find the perfection in all bodies I
am loving which totally focuses me on giving you my all.� I want to devour you totally if a woman and
give my body totally to my male lovers and dominate female lovers.� Other authors just avoid the areas of woman's
body that lie outside the main erogenous zones.�
It is like only a woman's mouth, breast and vagina exist on her
body.� You have always loved the whole
body.� it is this total loving that makes
a woman your total slut in bed and so willing to give you her whole body.� Such loving has given me many virgin
assholes.� I love how you open our
imaginations to the loving that Laura is giving Shelley now.� I so love to kiss your sternum area if small
titties and if larger hefting up and kissing the secret areas.� Working down to your ribs and kissing down
your ribs and muzzling and kissing the valley between them.� Kissing, lipping and sucking your belly and
down your inner thighs making my sluts whine for my mouth on their flowing
pussy, feeling their hands in my scalp urging me down.� Normally I move on South but sometimes I just
explore.� I often move my hand down and
swirl, fork and rub your clit and work your slit up and down and play with your
labia lips as I work your belly and ribs making my sluts hitch and hump into my
fingers as they are soaked in love juice.�
Then sinking my fingers deep into your pussy and playing with your inner
petals and rub your g-spot making your cry out in helpless pleasure.� I want your sweet gash in my devouring mouth
but I get so intoxicated feeling your cunt pulsing hot love juice over my
fingers and down my hand as I work your sodden cunt and pull out to work your
clit with my cunt greasy fingers.� I work
your pussy harder as it flows from a stream to a river.� I often have to deliver the love kill
now.� Forking your clit and working it
with my thumb or pounding my fingers deep into her cunt as it sloshes and makes
obscene noises and spatters cunt juice all over the place as I smile seeing
your cunt juice so much for me.� Or I
will flip my hand over and use my ring and middle finger to rake your g-spot
hard as your pussy squishes so loudly for me.�
My other hand squeezing a tit or pressing in hard on your belly as I use
my swirling palm to pressure your g-spot and womb.� I just smile with such love as my angels wail
and flop so wildly on the bed their cunts flowing hotly and spattering
everywhere with such large drops of love juice if I am pounding away.� I always know that I can soon dine on sodden,
swollen, red cunt meat for more sweet orgasms that now cum in my hot devouring
mouth.� I have primed the pump!
I really love how
you say "But oh what delicious preliminaries."��
First that is sweet use of the English language.� You are the only author that uses our native
tongue to its fullest advantage.� Other
authors have no poetic meter to their writings.�
It is all so boring and bland.� A
simple word can add so much to a story and you show this over and over again.� Then you never forget to show the woman being
pleasured showing her pleasure.� I get so
bored and tired of never hearing women in other stories sigh and moan from
being pleasured during lovemaking.� I get
deafening silence except maybe for the end game and then it is so formulaic and
same ole, same ole.� I get so tired of
the all caps spoken sentences.� I do that
at times but not every time!� Only you
have the sounds that Shelley has now "Ohhhhhhh and Yeessssss."� Simple sounds and yet they add so much to the
story.� This is the sound of great love
making.� Another thing that you show that
I love so much is the woman being pleasured adding to her own pleasure.� Other authors just don't show this.� The women never use their hands to add to
their own pleasure.� You show here
Shelley pleasuring her own breast now that Laura has headed South for sweet wet
gash.� I like how you show us Shelley
plucking and pulling on her nipples still wet with Laura's salvia.� That turns me on so much to watch my slut
adding to the pleasure I am already giving her.�
I love to watch women work their nipples like this.� Sometimes watching them grind and pulp their
nipples and pulling their nipples so hard their tits are stretched out as their
bodies jolt and hump up spastically into my devouring mouth as our combined
efforts make her keen and work more quickly towards nirvana.� I love seeing women frigging their clits as I
or others are pumping their pussies or butt holes doggy or spoon.� I love to feel� a woman worming their hand between our hard
humping bodies in missionary.� I feel her
fingers and knuckles worming around to get her fingers in position to frig her
clit as I pound her flowing box.�
Laura is ready to
move the fuck forward but you still give the reader some sweet last details of
Laura going down on Shelley.� You always
make it so clear that Laura loves gobbling hot, soaking wet cunt meat.� Other authors just say that the one woman is
doing the other oral.� They never show us
the pleasure of the woman doing the gobbling feels in savoring wet cunt meat in
her mouth.� They never show the woman
being eaten swooning from your loving ministrations.� You show this all the time in each and every
chapter that you write.� Like I say, I
love hearing Laura telling Shelley she is going to fuck her exactly like she
wants it.� I never hear in other stories
the aggressor telling her slut that she will give her all she can handle and
then delivering the love kill.� I love to
tell my sluts and delivering.� I so love
to be the submissive one too.� Having my
cocksmen telling me how they are going to pound the shit out of me makes my
cunt contract and gush cunt nectars all over my groin and thighs.� I pulse even harder when women tell me
exactly how they are going to fuck me senseless and take me totally and
deeply.� Having their face just in front
of my humping� twat and making hot eye
contact and telling me just how good they are going to eat me out.� I just hump harder and whimper and beg them
with� whimpering "pleaseeeeeeee".� I so love to be taken.� You always make the moment of penetration so
special.� [But in
truth, she too didn't know if they would make it to that desired moment.
Shelley was swooning in the grip of a delirious sexual mania, slowly gyrating
her hips now, sliding her pussy across Laura's lips, gasping in sharp little
bursts as Laura sucked and tongue-stroked her bulging, swollen clit. ������"Oh! Oh!"������� She was so beautiful in this state that
Laura had to restrain herself from delivering the full measure of her skillful
love assault, knowing she could make the lovely girl pop in seconds, if she
wanted to. ��������"Oh!
Oh!"���������� "Here . . . honey . .
. turn you over . . . yes . . . like this . . . so we can get to the part you
want so much . . . okay . . . that's it . . . yes . . . like that . . ."������� "Unngghhh!" Shelley groaned a
little louder, looking back over her shoulder and wincing as Laura, crouching
behind her smooth round buns, slid the dildo into the soupy warm cauldron of
her uptilted pussy, pushing it in as deep as it would go. "Ungggghhh
. . . oh shit, yes!"]� Gods, I love your details of sweet pussy
gobbling.� I am swooning over the
details.� I wish others would give me
this kind of sweet fucking details.� I
get so tired of not getting anything.� It
is really quite shocking to me really.�
If real sex was like this I doubt anyone would want to fuck.� I just love how you tell us that Shelley is
"swooning" over Laura's loving ministrations.�
It is such a pleasure to read of the woman being fucked getting so much
pleasure from her partner.� It is
maddening to not see this with other stories.�
I live to hear my slut moan for me and to hear me grunt and curse as
they slam their dicks deep into my belly or I am sucking and bobbing on their
thick, veined shafts.� I live to see my
lover reacting to my loving.� just
hearing you is enough to make me flow like a river.� It just makes me fuck you so much harder and
deeper when you moan and groan and make the sweet little noises that you so
perfectly capture.� It is the little
whinnies that flow throughout sex and you show this perfectly like everything
else you capture.� Last night I was
finishing off a great fuck with Eric and Anthony.� They had fucked me so hard and good, raping
my cunt and asshole to heaven and back.�
I was heaven hearing them grunt and curse me as I sucked them off in
turn.� Feeling their bodies clench and
shake as I sucked on their dickheads and bobbed their dickheads up and down my
tongue with hard sucks.� Feeling their
thighs clench and spasm as I clenched them holding my head in place to suck
them off as I bobbed hard.� Looking up
and seeing their faces slash and snarl with fierce pleasure.� I loved how Eric's head rocked back and he
yelled out GGGGGGOOODDDAMMNNNNNNNN! To the ceiling as I looked up at his corded
neck.� His head juddered as his cock
flooded my mouth and throat with hot nigger semen.� I loved feeling his thighs spasm so hard in
my clenched hands as semen pumped up his shaft overflowing my mouth and
dribbling down my face.� Each cum is so
different.� Anthony had his hands clawed
in my scalp pumping his thick shaft in and out my clenched lips as I deep
throat sucked his cock.� I was pumping
his shaft with one hand and massaging his nut sack with the other as I twisted
my pumping head.� Gods I loved feeling my
lank hair jerking over my tits and ribs.�
Looking up and seeing Anthony's grimace with the pleasure I was sucking
from his dick.� I loved feeling his hard
grip on my head controlling and urging me to pump hard my cheeks hollowing out
with deep throat sucks.� His head was
twisting and jerking spastically now and he growled out his body now shaking
hard "Oh Goddamn you Fucking Sssslllutttttt!" he snarled / cried as his hips
punched jamming his dickhead to the back of my throat as it convulsed semen
down my throat and filled my mouth with hot semen that flowed out my
mouth.� I relished feeling his body spasm
with each spurt of hot Nigger semen into my greedy white mouth.� I smiled on Anthony's dick when Eric said
"Goddamn you suck good dick, Barbara!"
You have always shown the
transitions of sex very well.� Most great
fucks have more than just one position during the tryst.� There is a least some variation.� I get so tired of other stories always starting in a position and
staying in that position throughout the whole fuck.� Because of the communication between your
women here we have to have some positional changes.� Shelley wants being rammed from behind and
Laura wants some classic gash gobbling.�
Both women have expressed their needs and are working in tandem to
satisfy both of their needs.� Only you
show this communication and working to satisfy both women's wants and
desires.� Women just want to try and
satisfy their partners.� Both working in
love to make the other happy.� I love
reading how Laura is using her hands to lift and guide Shelley into the doggy
position.� I can honestly say outside of
you I am not sure I have seen this.� In
het stories you get change of positions but never the detail of how you grip
your lover's body to guide it into the new position.� It just happens.� These are the details I love reading in
stories and only you give them to me.� I
love the feel of a sweaty body against me and in my hands.� I so love to manhandle a sweat soaked slut
and move her around for more hot fucking or gripping a hard, sweaty male body
as I grip them to keep my balance in some position or to help me change
positions myself.� Then as always you
make the moment of penetration so freaking divine.� I love how you give the detail of Shelley
looking back at Laura so she can watch Laura penetrate her swollen, dripping
snatch.� I love how you show this.� Women who have learned to shuck their
inhibitions love to watch themselves being fucked by dicks.� I love to look back like this or riding a
dick and looking back if necessary and down my sweaty back to see that cock or
strap-on sliding in and out my snatch or butt hole.� It is pure hedonism and I love watching sluts
watching women showing their sluttiness.�
Love the little "wince" as she feels that divine penetration that only
you show.� I so gag in pure need, feeling
that bulbous cockhead and shaft penetrating my asshole and sliding up my ass or
deep into my spasming pussy.� Like I say,
only you give us that divine moment of feeling the penetration and divine
feeling of being pierced by a thick, hard cock.�
And you give me so many audial queues.�
I just get so tired of no sounds in other's sex stories.� Almost, all women moan when being
penetrated.� It just feels so fucking
good.� You have always shown the pleasure
of women being penetrated.� You show this
pleasure by the fact that Shelley is moaning louder and more strenuously.� You showed the little sounds of sex during
the flow of sex when it is in the settled rhythm of great fuck.� But when the sex is amped up, like when you
are penetrated, you just moan louder and harder.� You become more vocal and you show this.� Have to love the potty mouth.� I find that younger women are just so natural
and easy with their foul language.� They
curse in every day conversation and really ramp it up during sex when they hear
me with my potty mouth.� They just cut
loose.� I will curse like a sailor on
leave in the proverbial bedroom.� I do
have to admit I am a little nonplused how causal college and teenagers are
today with their language.� Not all of
course but women have become liberated and I don't see that much difference
between girls and boys in the next generations.�
We are becoming more equal.� I
guess I am still a little bit of prude compared to them.� They will curse freely in public which I just
find crass.� I know, I am being a
hypocrite and unfair.� It is funny how
the times leave one behind.
Attention:� Long Digression
I have loved how Laura is willing to bend
to the situation to give her woman what she needs and to also make sure she
gets pussy.� Last week I had worked late
into the night and got off the next day as recompense.� It was scheduled and I had arranged to spend
the day with Odessa since she is between summer sessions.� I so wanted to once more devour her lovely
bosom abundance and sink my face deep into her fat mound and devour her dark
black pussy.� I was across the tunnel
when I received a text from Chantel begging me to meet them asap.�
They needed me so bad and sexted me some new pictures of them
masturbating and cumming hard.� I had an
idea.� I called Odessa and explained my
just received messages and asked her if she wanted some thirteen year old pussy
and asshole.� She was breathing harder
just thinking about it and she said "Yeessss!".�
I then called Chantel and explained that I was off and on her side of
the water and what I had already planned and she and Roshanda could join me and
come to Odessa's home.� Needlessly to say
I got the same enthusiastic yes with teenage squealing and questions about
Odessa.� I pulled into a parking lot and
got out my ipad and sexted them some photos of Odessa fucking Hillary, Camille
and myself and then some of Kapri, Diamond and myself and then some with Odessa
getting fucked by the brothers three and a few other het pairings.� They called me nearly shouting for more
photos and movies pleassseeee!� I had to
laugh and tell them later and I would be there soon.� I was soon at Roshanda's house and picked
them up.� I had to shoo their hands away
as we got in the car.� I am so at times
exasperated by their enthusiasm and how I have to hiss at them that they can't
touch me like that in public especially in the day time.� It took us another fifteen minutes to get to
Odessa's apartment.� The horny bitches
had been all over each other in the back seat lying down kissing and sucking on
each other's tits having rolled up their shirts and not wearing bras.� They were very mused up when we got out of
the car and walked into the complex and climbed the stairs and I rang the door
bell.
Odessa answered
the door opening it wide showing her beautiful voluptuous body on display in
only a thong bikini her 34E tits spilling out her barely existing top and her
ass cheeks so large but still taunt.� The
dark stair well making her feel safe to display herself so brazenly.� She invited us in and the girls were simply
staring at her perfection as we entered her living room.� She pirroated for her young admirers and
asked them if they liked what they say.�
They both nodded mutely staring at her big titties and looking at her
fat mound making her bikini bottom bulge.�
She then asked them if they wanted to fuck her.� They were actually drooling and squealed yes
and hurriedly stripped out of their tops and tight bottoms and sneakers having
gone commando.� Odessa had stripped her
bikini off having used it to get the show started quickly.� We were there to fuck.� I slowly stripped moving over to the love
seat to watch the hot show I know was about to commence.� Odessa stood waiting to be worshipped with a
wanton smile on her face.� She knows she
is hot.� The teenagers came up to her and
are about the same height as her but much more slight.� Chantel moved behind Odessa and pressed in
grinding her erect nipples into Odessa's back.�
She cupped Odessa's heavy tits pumping them her fingers disappearing
into Odessa's bosom making her moan.� I
could already smell the musk of excited black pussy filling the air.� Roshanda moved in and embraced her circling
her arms around Odessa's neck and mashed their mouths tights and stabbed her
tongue down her throat I could see making Odessa groan hard into her mouth as
her tits rolled all over Roshanda's small tits and chest as Chantel's still
clenched Odessa's tits and now pulped hard as Odessa started to herk and jerk
in pleasure.� Roshanda broke their kiss
spit roping between their mouths.� They
both looked a little dazed as the teenagers led her to the sofa and sat her
down.� Chantel climbed up on sofa and now
kissed Odessa tilting her head back on the sofa back and tilting her head and
slamming her tongue deep into Odessa's mouth wrestling wetly with her tongue I
could see with their working mouths.�
Odessa moaned like a whore, her twat humped on the edge of the
sofa.� Roshanda had been settling herself
on the floor, getting in a nice comfortable position.� She now mashed her face into Odessa's cunt
and her lips disappeared into Odessa's vulva as she immediately started to lap
and tongue the woman's furrow and clit furiously.�
Roshanda was soon
grunting and snuffling as she ate the twenty-three year's old sloshing
twat.� Her mouth would glue to her clit
meat and suck voraciously stretching out her sodden red cunt meat and tongue
slap and then move down and spear deep into her spasming cunt folds.� Odessa's eyes were so hot as she looked over
at me and moan so hard at the loving attention she was receiving.� Chantel had moved down and was devouring her
nipples and stuffing as much of the bounty she could into her mouth.� Odessa's large areola exceeding her ability
to suck all in.� Chantel pulled on the
teats in turn stretching them and lip mauling.�
I was softly masturbating saving my orgasms for the teenagers.� I husked over that Odessa liked her sex rough
like me and they understood.� Chantel now
gripped the tit she was sucking just behind the areola and pulped it making the
nipple bulge and sucked it deep into her mouth and began to love suck.�� Roshanda started to slap Odessa's large firm
thigh hard with loud smacks making Odessa squeal in pain that she loves and
humped harder into the girl's mouth.�
Roshanda was tongue fucking and French kissing Odessa's fuck hole and
lapping her furrow before attaching to her clit like a lamprey and munching and
sucking hard.� The loving assault made
Odessa cry out and twirl her hips up into Roshanda's face and her hands were
now gripping Chantel's head and pleading for to suck her tits harder and then
jerking her head up for deep French love kissing before roughly pushing
Chantel's head back down to her cleavage and commanding "Suck!"� The girl gripping a tit in both hands and
manhandling the thick nipple deep into her mouth for love sucks and grinding
against the roof of her mouth I had taught them that Laura had taught me so
long ago.� Another minute of this and
Odessa now had a hand clawed in each teenager's scalp as her ass writhed on the
sofa her eyes bulging in building pressure and ecstasy.�� Roshanda wormed her hands underneath
Odessa's ass and helped her hump hard into her devouring mouth.� She now sucked her entire upper cunt into her
mouth and deep throat sucked with her head undulating stretching the cunt meat
as much as you could without snapping it out your mouth and Chantel was trying
to suck the nipple off that was stuffed deep in her mouth.� "Unnnggghhhrrrrrrr!� � Unnnggghhhhhhhhh �
Fffffffffuuuuuuuucccckkk!"� Odessa
screamed as her cunt ruptured and squirted hard into Roshanda's throat.� The teenager immediately released her suck as
she was startled by the heavy squirt.�
She started to vibrate Odessa's clit with a hand she quickly freed from
clawing Odessa's ass.� She lowered her
face perfectly and the next squirt hit her right between the eyes hard
splashing all over the place.� Two more
powerful squirts hit Roshanda right between the eyes as she kept her head in
place to receive the squirts.� Her open
mouth lapped up cunt droplets all the while moaning just like Odessa.� Each squirt made Odessa have full body earthquakes
of flips and jackknifes of shattering bliss.�
I was impressed.� I had only seen
Odessa squirt from devastating anal 'gasms with lots of clit rubbing and once
from a dp fuck Dodie and I administrated as she soaked all three of us and the
bed.� I filed this away knowing what was
possible going down on Odessa.� She must
have been really primed fucking the teenagers.
Chantel had
watched the squirt show and moved down to lick Roshanda's face clean and then
move into her place sitting between the college grad student's now cum soaked
thighs as I saw sweat beginning to trickle down her ample bosom and only now
not heaving belly and ribs.� I told
Chantel that Odessa rarely squirted and to not be disappointed.� She was in challenge mode and sucked in her
clit and started to rhythm suck it making Odessa cry out her head jerking back
into the sofa back at the sudden stimulation on her still trembling clit.� Chantel released her clit and worked her slit
and tongued her sloshing cunt hole deeply letting her clit rest a few more
minutes.� Roshanda climbed onto the love
seat with me and moaned as I licked Odessa's cunt off her face and then kissing
her deeply as she purred.� She took
control and plunged her tongue down my throat and pulped my tits gripping each
heavy tit behind the areola and squeezed hard making my nipples bulge for her
voracious sucks.� I had to moan out
fffuuucckkk and godddammmnnnnn over and over as she tormented my love aching
nipples and then kissed down my heaving belly and started to lap my� trembling cunt.� She did all the nasty wonderful things to me
that she had to Odessa.� I cried out when
she stretched out my cunt meat and was slapping my clit with powerful slaps of
her tongue.� I lulled my head and pulped
my tits and lifted them in turn and sucked hard on my thick, hard nipples.� Chantel was now plowing Odessa's slit hard
with her rudder like tongue and then lifting a little and flattening her tongue
and rasping it over the woman's now bulging and ready clit.� Her head pumping hard back and forth working
the college student's clit.� Odessa was
looking down and now copying me using two hands to lift her large tit and
swallowing her thick, long nipple, deep into her greedy mouth and she deep
throat sucked her cheeks hollowing out with her head pumps and active tongue
visible through her cheeks.� Chantel
worked two fingers into Odessa's swollen cunt and went right for g-spot I could
see by her upturned fingers flexing as she pumped.� I saw Odessa's eyes bulge nearly out her
skull.� I was impressed.� I knew what was going to happen soon.� Chantel knew too with the smile on her face
as she sucked voraciously on the clit deep in her mouth.�
Roshanda had
formed a wedge and was slamming her hand into my tight cunt as she slammed it
repeatedly into my now splattering and trembling cunt.� Slowly rotating her hand right and left
slightly as she wedged fucked my cunt hole and her mouth was sometimes gently
sucking and tongue lathing my rigid clit and then sucking it hard in and out
her thick lips as she tongue slapped my beginning to strain clit.� Both Odessa and I were jolting hard now at
random moments as our wombs tightened.�
We continued to suck on our own tits looking at each other with sultry
eyes as we watched each other hedonistically suck or own nipples and watching a
thirteen year old suck us to paradise.�
Chantel was working hard to suck and fingerfuck Odessa to her
orgasm.� Her head rocking and now
swirling stretching out the clit meat in her mouth and then mashing her mouth
forward her lips engulfed in Odessa's fat mound as she sucked the clit so deep
into her mouth her head rocking back involuntarily with the force of her deep
throat sucks on the rock hard large berry sized clit deep in her mouth.� "Oh god, oh god, oh god" Odessa croaked her
eyes now frantic with need.� Suddenly
they flared as Chantel did something extra with her mouth, fingers or
both.� Odessa's body lurched forward and
juddered almost bent over and slammed back so hard into the sofa back.� She had stopped her sucking on her nipples
with her first forward jerk and now her tits flopped up high in the air and
then slammed down� hard onto her sweaty
chest.�� This had freed her hands to slam
on Chantel's head as she screamed "AAAAIIIIEEEYYYYYEEEEEEEE � oh
goddammnnnnnnn�unnggggghhhhhhhhh ��
you're killing me you fucking NNNIIGGGGAAAAAAAA!" as her cunt simply
started to erupt in scalding spasms of squirting bliss.� Chantel the slut had known exactly what she was
doing.� Her body in perfect sync with
Odessa's.� She had released the grad
student's clit and rubbed it with her fingers now lowering her face like
Roshanda had.� Odessa had five heavy
spurts this time and all five hit Chantel right between the eyes soaking her
face and hair in hot steamy cunt juice.�
I watched her cunt spurts splatter all over the place and run down
Chantel's neck and soak her swaying tits.�
I was ramping up along with Odessa but my control had held up to this
point but I now let go.� I screamed at
Roshanda to never stop and what a fucking goddamn nigger bitch she was as I
wailed and flopped out of control of my body as her wedge fuck and incessant
sucking on my exploding clit sent me multiple that had be seeing stars as I
slammed so hard into the sofa back and then lifted on the balls of my feet and
humped up in the air as Roshanda clenched my taunt buns to keep her love suck
on my spent clit as she backed off to lathing sending me into long delirious
spasms of fucking bliss.� I watched in
this state as Chantel laid down on Odessa who had collapsed onto the sofa and
was mewling and trembling all over softly still.� Chantel cooed and stroked her sweaty flesh
and kissed all over Odessa's beautiful face.��
Now Roshanda crawled up and we kissed in deep renewed love.� I finally saw Odessa recover and begin to
kiss and lick Chantel's face clean as she purred and hugged the girl to her
like a precious diamond.� I had to think
of Makeeda and her long powerful orgasms.
We fucked all the
day long sucking, finger fucking and tribbing and finally stopped around dinner
time to shower, put on some clothes and eat a wonderful tuna casserole that
Odessa fixed for us.�� We sent the
teenagers off as we cleaned up.� Odessa
marveled to me how good the thirteen year olds were and how sweat they
tasted.� We were sitting and talking
about Hillary and Camille when we heard Roshanda call out that they had
something to show us.� Curious we went
back into the living room.� I had seen
them bring a valise with them and my suspicions were right.� Nude they both sported towering black
strap-ons.� Roshanda had a copy of mine
while Chantel had an eleven inch thickly veined cock with bulbous dick
head.� Odessa didn't waste a moment as
our nipples were already getting rock hard and our cunts starting to juice and
swell.� We pulled off our shirts and shucked
our bottoms and stood nude before our teenage lovers waiting to be deep
dicked.� Roshanda cocked her finger at
Odessa who walked over and feel to her knees guiding her thick cock into her
greedy mouth.� I walked over to Chantal
and followed suite and now had her dick pumping hard into my mouth as sucked
and bobbed hard feeling her slam the back of my throat with hard thrusts into
my forward thrusts.� Odessa was
undulating her head and rotating it around on Roshanda's cock sucking so hard
and then pumping hard.� We both sucked
hard and gripped their asses to help them fuck our mouths.� After five minutes they pushed our heads off
and motioned for us to get on the floor.�
They quickly got between our spread legs and rubbed their thick dick
heads in our already soaking wet and lubricated for fucking with our flowing
juices.� Our musk signaling our
need.� My head rocked back feeling
Chantel sliding her dick deep up my cunt as long moans flowed from my
throat.� I looked over and saw that
Roshanda had mounted Odessa and was already stroking her dick deep in and out
her clinging cunt.� Odessa and I looked
over at each other and smiled as our thirteen year old overs pleasured our
cunts with expert dick fucking.��� I was
soon gagging feeling Roshanda spear her cock into my womb with savage pumps of
her hips.� I was swooning as she gripped
my tits and stuffed them into her mouth and then bunched together to suck at
the same time my rigid love aching nipples.�
Odessa was whooping and crying out as Chantel had rolled her over spoon
and was pummeling her flowing box from behind so hard she was making Odessa's
tits jolt and giggle heavily.� Chantel
had jerked her upper leg up and now Odess held it up allowing Chantel to easily
plunder her quim.� I now had my ankles
locked above Roshanda's back my thighs gripping her hips as I opened my womb
for her dick wishing she could flood it with semen.� I rocked up and bite her shoulder in need my
eyes squeezing shut as nirvana approached.�
She whispered in my ear "Cum bitch � cum you fucking Lilly white bitch �
take my big nigger dick you goddamn fucking white whore!"� That sent me over the edge as I screamed "I
loooovvveeee youuuuuuuu Roshanddaaaaaa!"�
and I went into wild convulsions as searing waves of shattering bliss
convulsed through my veins.� I loved
feeling heaving spasms mash my belly into her down thrusting belly and my big
tits enveloping and mashing all over Roshanda's rigid nipples grinding deep
into my tits flesh.� I finally spent
myself as Roshanda slowly pumped me through my aftershocks and suddenly Odessa
wailed as her body bucked and jerked back into Chantel's spoon body.�� Chantels' cupped palms pulping and grinding
both of Odessa 's nipples as her hips flexed to spear her cock into Odessa's
womb as it exploded and soaked her groin and belly in cunt nectars.�
Soon we were doggy
facing each other our face beside each other's hips.� The teenagers were behind us spearing our
flowing pussies once more.� We reached
out to squeeze each other's nipples and pulp hanging, flopping hooters.� I could see the teenagers had agreed to work
in basic sync.� First Roshanda removed
her cock from my pulsing pussy and I felt her slimy dick head move over my perineum
and push into my rosebud and quickly sink in since Anthony, Eric and Steven had
pounded it mercilessly the night before.�
I cried out in pained pleasure as my asshole clutched at the invader
that was already balls deep up my shit hole.�
Roshanda stroked half its length in and out my clutching asshole.� I heard Odessa chuffing and looked over and
saw that Chantel was straddling her ass and pushing hard into her tight
sphincter and jammed hard and the thick dick head punched into the black
asshole.� She gurgled and immediately
pushed her ass back into the invading thrusts and moaned "deeper" and� "fuck my black ass Chantel" who needed no
encouragement.� Soon her shaft was also
working in and out balls deep into her shitter.�
I could see that Chantel's dick was quickly soaked in shit cream and I
knew Roshanda's was as well.� My mouth
was watering in anticipation.� Soon I saw
Chantel pull her cock out Odessa's ample ass and step over to me as I felt
Roshanda pull out my spasming asshole and I heard her talking to Odessa.� Chantel told me "Suck Odessa's shit off my
dick you fucking white Bitch! � suck that Nigger's shit off my black dick
bitch!"� I moaned opening my mouth wide
and filling my mouth with her cock soaked in shit juice.� I moaned and bobbed once more tasting a
woman's sweet shit cream in my mouth.� I
heard Odessa moaning and cawing sucking my ass off Roshanda's cock.� Again and again the teenagers pounded our
asses and we cleaned the other's shit juice off the cocks that had just
finished plundering our assholes.��
Odessa got in perfect sync as the girls plundered our asses and then
started doing a2p as we they took us higher.��
We were both on edge now our asses being simply pounded to oblivion by
our thirteen year old lovers.� I was
gibbering mindlessly I could hear myself.�
Odessa was croaking "Pound my black asshole goddamn-it � pound it pound
it pound it!"� We glanced at each other's
slashing faces and at our bodies jolted forward with the savage anal dicking
our tits flopping wildly beneath us.� We
both erupted into wild screams of blistering bliss as our bodies flipped and
jackknifed explosively as the teenagers straddles us now and slammed down with
all their might into her exploding shitters.�
They had death grips on our ass cheeks making us surge down and forward
with each savage thrust.� I saw that
Odessa was jerking her clit wildly and sure enough she really screamed loud
this time as I watched four long squirts of cunt juice splash onto the carpet
soaking it in cunt juice which she now collapsed onto as Chantel straddled her
big ass her legs spread and on her palms still slamming her cock into her
exploding shitter.� I had gone into a
second orgasm that had me collapsing my face and arms onto the floor my ass
high in the air with Roshanda still raping it with pile driving thrusts
prolonging my second orgasm with several more searing spasms of� burning ecstasy.� I was now half loopy with fuck delirium as
Odessa had a third orgasm that hard her humping up and slamming her groin down
into the sopping wet mess her cunt had made and I saw on the up hump that she
was gushing again.� She finally collapsed
spent into her big wet pool of cum on the floor.� She mewled and drooled sightlessly at me with
long full body spasms rippling out her spent ruined shit hole.
She was out for the
count.� I helped her to her bed and went
back into the living room where I was savagely dp fucked and the cunts did
double vag and anal back and forth making me cum twice more.� Now I was down for the count.� Late that evening I texted in I was feeling ill.� The next morning I washed Odessa up in her
tub as the shower cleaned us off and I sucked her off to start her day
right.� The girls were giddy to have
another day of fucking before them with women so much older than them.� Their mother's thinking they were with a
mutual friend.� Now Odessa and I sucked
them off repeatedly in the morning.�
After dinner we got strapped in and fucked them senseless.� I made sure that the little sluts got a lot
of double vag and anal fucking like I had last night.� They cummed so hard.� Late in the night, I had Roshanda up in the
air.� Her thighs gripping my ribs and her
arms holding on tight around my neck as Odessa cupped her ass to help me support
Roshanda.� I so loved feeling her sweaty
body rubbing and jolting hard into mine as we torpedoed our dicks savagely into
her down plunging fuck holes.� Hefting
her up to let her weight slam her body down onto our impaling dicks squiring
her fuck holes to the hilt as she cried out in ecstasy.� Her rigid, thick nipples grinding into my
tits all over as she wallowed and I felt her ankles kicking wildly behind
me.� I was fucking her cunt as Odessa did
her ass and Chantal sucked her lover's ass off Odessa's cock.� I could feel Chantel's hand working the cock
out Roshanda's spasming asshole roughly and then hear her murmurs and moans
sucking her lover's asshole off Odessa's cock.�
After a few times of this I moved my cock to her asshole and Odessa did
not pause a moment to invade her shit hole also with her dick.� Roshanda jolted hard and screamed as Odessa
forced her cock into her resisting sphincter but finally got the head into her
O ring and jerked up hard with her dick to sink several inches up her ass as
the teenager really screamed in pain.�
Soon we were seesawing our dicks in and out her ass.� We pounded her booty hard with our savagely
up thrusting cocks as head lulled first on my shoulder and then leaning back
onto Odessa's torso as she cawed in lost ecstasy her face constantly slashing her
eyes squeezing shut in fierce pleasure.�
We let her down to clean our dicks along with Chantel.� The slut hopped up into my arms locking her
legs around me and reached down and guided my dick to her asshole and shoved it
in groaning and again crying out as Odessa now easily punched her dick into her
ass.� We slammed our cocks into her black
ass as she groaned so gutturally in rising pleasure, her head thrashing and
face slashing so close to mine as I soaked up her crushing pleasure as we
punched our cocks into her spasming asshole.�
Soon she had a multiple orgasm wallowing all over me as she bucked and
convulsed wildly spending herself on our love dicks.� I so reveled feeling her rubbery nipples and
areolas raking and digging into my tits as she convulsed wildly in my
arms.� The way her thighs spastically
clutched my ribs and her forehead juddered against my neck as her cunt and
shitholes exploded shocking bolts of bliss into her boiling veins making her
whinny against my ear as her body wallowed all over mine.�� Chantel was right below her when we pulled
our dicks out, she moaned and exclaimed excitedly as Roshanda's ass poured shit
nectars all over face and into her open mouth.�
Chantel wanted the same standing fuck but I am only so strong so we did
classic dp and soon were doing savage dp and double vag on her.� She had two orgasm but croaked she wanted
more.�� I had to smile.� Often, when you do double anal on her she is
like Denise now.�� She pleads for you to
not fuck her with two dicks in her ass.�
She is too small, we are too big, please have mercy, show compassion and
such pleadings.� She will try to scoot
away even though she is anchored down with a dick in her ass already and put a
hand on top of the dick already fucking her ass.� It simply turns her on to the max to have the
person getting ready to invade her ass roughly take her shit hole.� She loves for you to grip her arm and rip her
hand to the side and slap her ass so hard as she tries again to protect her
asshole.� I so loved her role playing as
I now got that arm into an arm bar and twisted back hard behind her back making
her scream in pain and slapping her ass viciously for daring to defy me.� I gripped her hair and jerked her head back
and up still sensing resistance and turning to the side to slap viciously over
and over.� I loved feeling her head jerk
down with my fisted knot in her now fucked up hair each time my palm slapped
her face so hard making her face explode down.�
I would jerk her head back up for more vile abuse.� She cried such big tears and pleaded to me,
"Why are you hurting me!" *Smack* --harsh sobs *Smack* -- Pleassseeeee *Smack*
*Smack* God help meeeeee! *Smack*Smack*Smack* ohhhhh godddddd!
(weakly)*Smack*Smack" more deep sobs and big tears running down her
cheeks.� Odessa below her urging me on
"fuck that ghetto nigger up Barbara!"� I
slapped her until I had exhausted her will and she couldn't fight anymore.� I threw her exhausted head down her will
broken.� Her head lying prostrate on
Odessa's shoulder her body jolting with each savage thrust of Odessa's cock deep
into her ass.� I loved hearing her weak
murmurs and whinny's of exhausted pleasure.�
Then I savagely shoved my dick into her asshole along with Odessa's
cock.� Chantel's head rocked up as her
throat screamed loud in asshole shredding pain as I took her asshole along with
Odessa.� Her head soon sagged back down
again as she gibbered and moaned.� Her
body wallowing all over Odessa's as we pounded her thirteen year old asshole with
savage thrusts of our thick cocks.� I so
loved seeing our cocks seesawing in and out her ass sliding in deep as she
cawed and had spastic jolts of anal pleasure shook her lean body.�� Our cocks soaked in beautiful creamy shit
juice.� After a few minutes of intense,
punishing anal pounding I could see her body tensing and juddering.� Her eyes sightless in lost pleasure,� "oh god, oh god!, oh god! � shit! �
aaaaiiiiyyyyyyyyeeeeeeee" she began to wail over and over as her asshole
exploded in shocking ecstasy.� Her orgasm
was horrific in how it throttled her thirteen body and went multiple with
killing spasms that simply rent her soul to shreds in crippling ecstasy that
had her wailing and jackknife violently her belly slamming down so hard into
Odessa's belly and her tits mashed into Odessa's massive mounds.� We pounded her throughout her orgasm to
prolong it.� We fucked her until she was
completely spent and prostrate on Odessa's voluptuous body.�� Odessa stroked her sweat soaked back cooing
to her and kissed her face and neck as the teenager had a long bout of womb
rending aftershocks making her gasp and hitch for a long minute.� We finally pulled our dicks out her spent
shit hole and I felt my belly clench seeing a huge pulse of shit juice gush out
her slack ruined shitter and flowing down and soaking her cunt in hot steamy
shit juice.� I laid on the floor beside
Odessa our dicks soaked in shit cream lying on our sweaty bellies.� Chantel had rolled onto her back on the floor
looking up at the ceiling with a beatific smile on her face.� Odessa husked "Get your black ass over her
Chantel and suck your shit off our dicks you Fucking ghetto Nigger!"� Chantel smiled a lewd half-smile and rolled
over and crawled over and slowly gripped our large cocks lifting them as she
sat between our sweaty bodes and slowly her head lowered.� I love the little variations in great
fucks.� Instead of immediately diving on
one of our cocks she took the shafts and rubbed them all over her face.� Rubbing the length of the shafts over her
cheeks and bending her head to run the shafts over her forehead and then all
over her nose, eyes, lower face and neck.�
Her whole face now soaked in shit cream and beaded sweat.� She murmured to Odessa, "This is how ghetto
niggers fuck Odessa � nasty."� She now
lowered her head and swallowed my big dick head swirling her head slowly
sucking hard.� I loved watching her slow
serpentine undulations as her head slowly rocked, her cheeks hollowing out as
she lovingly sucked her shit cream off my dick as her head slow bobbed.� She lifted and leaned over to Odessa's cock
and drooled thick stands of spit onto the dick head making a beautiful cocktail
of spit and shit juice.� She then
extended her tongue swirling it all over Odessa's dickhead slowly moving her
mouth down so slowly as her tongue slithered all over Odessa's cockhead until
she finally swallowed it and undulated her head as she sucked her checks
hollowing out with her cleaning sucks.�
She was so beautiful sucking our cocks clean.� I so know that such hot fucks as this totally
addicted me to sex when I was her age.�
New love always makes me feel so alive and ready for more hot
fucking.�
End of long digression:
You now capture an
important facet of great fucking which is pacing.� Like I always complain so many others (almost
all others all the time) don't give any details.� How you can reduce a hot fuck to four
sentences is really beyond me.�
Obviously, when sex is reduced to this paltry amount of sentences not
much is really possible is it.� You
capture so much in three or four sentences that doesn't really have anything to
do with the direct fucking per se.� But
though it is not really the hot fucking it is the little things that blend with
the primal physical that makes sex so fucking awesome.� I don't think I do this but it is cute how
Laura is holding her breath as she sinks her cock deep into Shelley's pussy
with her cock.� I so love how you make
the moment of penetration so special.� Is
so feel my belly spasm and clench when I feel my lover's cock sinking into my
pussy or up my asshole.� Only you make
the sweet observations. �Like Laura
watching the sublime pleasure crossing Shelley's face feeling herself being
penetrated.� How she begins to swirl her
ass and pelvis back into Laura's cock as she begins the slow rhythm of
fucking.� Like I say only you capture
this.� Most don't even come close to
capturing this divine moment.� Only you
show why we groan like whore's and up tilt or pussies so we can get our lover's
cock deeper into our bellies as we moan and undulate in fucking pleasure and rising
love for our lover(s).� Plus, you show as
always that total loving that I adore.�
How Laura is running her hands up and down Shelley's back stroking it
along with her cock in Shelley's pussy.�
This might not seem like much to the unskilled lover but this stroking
of the back and shoulders is so sensual and sends ripples of sensations to
one's clit make it pulse with stronger pulses as it sends waves of pleasure
throughout your body.� How such stroking
along with your dick makes your nipples harden and pulse so hard to your clit
and brain that it makes you hitch and catch your breath at times in pure
pleasure.� When other authors forget this
or just don't know it, it robs so much from the story and what it should
be.� Fortunately, you never forget this.
So many writers
and poor lovers really think that stroking their dick unimaginatively is all
there is to great sex.� All this does is
send horny, frustrated women to my and other 's arms so we can show them what
great het fucking truly is.� I love
opening a bored housewife's eyes to what great sex truly is and have her go
absolutely crazy humping into my mouth or crying out as I plunder their pussies
and assholes to crushing repeated orgasms.�
One thing that great sex brings out is the aural part of sex.� Even the more quiet lovers will at least
grunt, exhale sharply, sigh and gurgle as you plow their quims.� I find it easy to get them more verbal as I
fuck them to heaven repeatedly.� I get so
tired of other stories always being so silent during the sex before the
orgasm.� Most even forget to have any
sounds in this time but some do, but do so unimaginatively that I have come to
almost scream sometimes in frustration.�
You never forget like here ["Unnn . . . unnnnn . . .
uunnmmmm . . ." she began to grunt softly, after a minute of this slow
churning.������� "Oh god, darling,
you are beautiful," Laura murmured, bending forward, and dropping down,
mashing her own dangling breasts into Shelley's long naked back as she kissed
the tops of her shoulders and frenched her delectable brown ear, breathing hotly
into it. "You are so beautiful . . . I love fucking you . . ."�������� "Unnggggg . . . unnmmmgggg . .
."]�� You show how flooding your slut with such
sweet pleasure and sensations begins to make her produce the divine sounds of a
whore being fucked good.� I so love to
hear my women moan like this form me.� I
live to get them croaking like this because I know I am pleasuring them deeply
as is my job.� I can just see my slut
groaning and cawing as I sink my cock deeper and harder into her pussy or
asshole as she begins to jam back harder and harder.� I love how you show Laura using her entire
body to love Shelley.� I so love to rub
and gyrate my body into yours as we fuck. To feel the friction and rubbing of
skin.� Especially as we sweat and our
bodies slip and slide in sweaty love.� I
know Shelley must be gagging feeling Laura's hard nipples dragging across her
back.� It bakes me mewl and my cunt pulse
hot fuck juice soaking my groin and thighs and those of my lover if grinding
down into my groin and pussy.� I really
have to love Laura Frenching Shelley's ear.�
I simply squeal and melt for you when you love my ears.� They are big erogenous zone for me.� I love to feel your tongue wiggling and
exploring my ear� making my ear wet with
your passion as you whisper to me how you rare going to fuck me so good.� Plus, I love how Laura is actually telling
her lover how much she loves her and how beautiful Shelley is to her.� I am always complimenting my lovers and love
how they preen if females and swelling up if male as their egos swell even
more.� Reading these love grunts I can
absolutely say that I have not seen one other author show this ever.� I find this strange.� I mean these grunts are such a basic part of
lovemaking that I can only wonder how only one author captures this.� Silence is one thing but always shouting out
whole sentences in all caps is equally boring and stifling.� One thing I really anticipate in each new
story is what sounds will you capture this time.
Like I said
earlier you capture the flow of great sex and the ramping that occurs for the
love kill.� Here you show how after the
initial excitement and heated penetration you fall into the "middle" of the
fuck.� This occurs when going down on
your slut or during het fucking.� That
delicious middle time when you are rhythmically pumping your dick into her
sodden pussy or slow stroking your dick into her flowing pussy or juicing shit
hole.� With new lovers you will often hit
the sheets in overdrive and slam fuck or inhale her cunt into your mouth and
make her cum almost immediately.� But
after the edge has been taken off or when regular lovers who have fucked often
in the past you normally fall into this rhythm of love fucking.� Slow bump and grinding and devouring of pussy
if going down on her.� You show though
that this "gentle" time is only building up the pressure in her womb and slow
stroking pleasure into her spasming pussy or clenching asshole.� Plus, you show as always how Laura is
stroking and clutching Shelley's body.� I
use everything I can to make my female lovers bodies coil and tense ever harder
and higher with rising need.� Like doggy
here you show Laura clenching and stroking Shelley's body.� I love how she moves her hair aside to kiss
her neck.� I love doing that as I nip her
neck and suck in her skin bruising it as she yelps and cries out in helpless
pleasure.� How you can cup her face and
turn her head for heated French kissing to swirl tongues as spit is traded and
tongues slide all over each other as we gag in love and need.� I love pressing my heavy tits into your back
like Laura does and while kissing your back and grinding my nipples up and down
your sweaty back reaching underneath you in doggy and pulping and milking your
tits hard as I work your nipples grinding and pulping them and the tit meat of
your upper titties as you cry out and scream in pained pleasure.� You are fucking Shelley totally and I so love
reading it.� Sigh you capture the middle
rut and how it slowly morph into the racing, climbing end fuck and love kill ["Ungghh!
Owwwnnggg!"������� "Oh honey .
. . oh honey . . . !" Laura panted.�������
"Make it deeper!" Shelley whimpered.������� "Oh . . . really deep?"������� "Yes. Yes! Do it . . .
again! Ungghhh! Owwnnmmggg!]� I love you capturing the sounds
Shelley is making and how the fucker is working to pleasure her lover.� How Laura is panting which is showing she is
working hard to fuck Shelley expertly and how one's own passion is inflaming
Laura the fucker.�� Gods, your sounds are
so varied and spot on.� I think it was these
sounds that immediately hooked me to your stories because I had never before or
since seen them in print.� It was
devastating when I first found them and nearly masturbated myself into a stupor
when I first found your stories.� I too
find a lot the women who at first are telling me that they don't want it hard
and deep or up the ass and I always find that soon they are crying out for me
to slam my cock balls deep into the pussy or ass.� I especially swoon when they are crying out
for me to pound their assholes to ruin when not thirty minutes earlier they
were telling me that I could never fuck them in the ass.� Fucking them to their first anal 'gasm making
them shriek and buck wildly and then as they are still stunned and hitching
with aftershocks.� Then pulling out their
asshole and moving up and pushing them down and gripping my cock at the base
and tracing their lips husking to them suck their shit off my dick.� Many dive on it with immediate gusto and
relish but I love it when I have to work my dick on their lips and love coo,
cajole and whimper beg for them to suck their shithole off my dick.� How� I
feel my belly tensing and clenching as I see the will to resist erode away and
their mouths opening wide and swallowing a shit flavored dickhead for the first
time.� How they moan in pure fucking
pleasure and start to immediately bob and undulate their head moaning in pure
happiness.� Running their tongue all over
my dickhead and murmuring as they drool spit on my cock and look at my dick
with their head so close to my cock and diving on it again moaning so loud as
they go back for sloppy seconds of shit juice atm love.� My eyes roll back and spasm so hard having
seduced another het newbie to lesbian anal het fucking and ass to mouth.� How soon, they are rolling off me and eagerly
bending down lifting my dick to swallow it when it is coated thickly with shit
cream and sucking so clean and telling my their assholes taste like "shit
honey" as my newbie Cathy (another neglected / bored housewife) told me last Tuesday
night.� I knew I had to remember that one
for my verbal arsenal.�
Funny how sometimes I write something and
then kind of see it later in the story.�
I love big dick for just the observation that Laura makes here [Laura
realized, though it was too late to do anything about it, that any of her own
lengthier strap-on dildos would have given Shelley even more of the thrills she
craved. This little, short, thick one did the trick, but Shelley seemed
to want deeper penetration than it was capable of.]� This is why I use a big
strap-on myself.� I want its 9 � inches
to deliver the deep dicking that my sluts love and adore.� A skilled cocksmen can fuck the hell out of
me with their normal sized pricks but I get that extra something being
stretched out and feeling your dick deep in my belly as my pussy, asshole or
both are plundered hard and deep.� Big
cocks are simply awesome and I seek them out.�
I love to have them filling my mouth and letting my lips trace their
girth and features.� All cocks are nice
but the longer and larger cocks just generate that little bit more friction and
sensation as it plows your pussy or asshole.�
Also, you can just feel it deep in your belly driving you insane with
pleasure as it strokes your love aching fuck holes.� With normal sized penises I am able to do
deep throat in my sleep.� I want to feel
your cock sliding down my throat and making it bulge obscenely.� I so love to feel a large bulbous dickhead
pushing my uvula back and then sliding down my trachea and feeling your dickhead
rubbing along it as it slides deep into my throat.� I want to have my gag reflect triggered and
choke out that spit and have it drooling all over your cock and roping all over
my throat, tits and belly.�
Attention:� Long Digression
Last week Anthony called me with a hot
tryst he had set up.� At work he had been
working with Jaleen for a while.� He is a
tall good looking back man with a buff build.�
They had been good work mates getting along well.� A couple weeks back while draining their
snakes they discovered each were well hung.�
Now Jaleen started feeling Anthony out about swinging and swapping wives
or girlfriends. Anthony was bemused at how carefully Jaleen was bringing it up.� When he finally made contact so to speak
Anthony told Jaleen he was totally open to such "relationships".� He found out that Jaleen's wife's name was
Malika and showed him pictures of her.�
She is tall at five foot eleven and medium brown with nice frizzy
hair.� Anthony asked if she was bi and
Jaleen smiled and said yes and that she especially loved white pussy.� If she had loved black pussy then he would
have picked his girlfriend Shanice.� But
since Malika loves white pussy he called me.�
Of course I was game.� He made me
whistle when he told me that Jaleen has a 12 � cock that is thick and
veined.� He gave me their facebook page
and the passwords to get into their private pages.� To start, Jaleen and Malika wanted Anthony to
fuck Malika and of course I would be fucked by Jaleen.� At home I saw that I had to have them.� I knew looking at Jaleen's mighty cock I
would not be able to deep throat him but I would have to try.� His wife was so beautiful I knew I would
sucking on her pussy over and over and driving my tongue deep up her shit
hole.� Some of the photos and videos showed
her ass being deep fucked by Jaleen and another of two white big dicked men dp
fucking her so hard and deep.� Malika is
tall at five foot elven she said and I loved her medium brown hue and facial
features that showed some white mingling in the past.� Two nights later I was at their place with
Anthony.� I was happy to be Anthony's
wifey for the new couple.� The truth
could come out later after a night full of hard fucking.� I was smitten with Malika's beauty and loved
her large curls that cascaded to her shoulders.�
I devoured her large titties bulging her tight top.� Her braless nipples hardening as Anthony and
I devoured them with our eyes.� I looked
over Jaleen's hard body and handsome features and the bulge showing his large
cock waiting to plunder my body and soul.�
I loved his baggy shorts with draw strings out, ready for me.� I loved how Malika devoured me and Anthony
with her eyes as Jaleen devoured my tits and ass with his dark eyes.� We made pleasantries and I found them to be
intelligent, funny and down to Earth.�
Malika made hot eye contact that promised much pussy gobbling and hot
titty sucking.� I could see her large
tits bulging her tight fitting top, her hard nipples poking out, making my
mouth drool.� I could not wait to devour
them and her lovely pussy and asshole.
But first things first.� I had been stroking Jaleen's thigh and
leaning into his shoulder making kitten eyes at him as Malika did the same
thing to Anthony.� With women you always
have foreplay but with men you often go for the gold immediately.� Malika started to undo Anthony's jeans as I
now undid Jaleen's draw strings loosening his shorts.� I gripped his massive cock as it pulsed on
his thigh as I watched Malika pull Anthony's jeans off his legs and now grip
his boxers and he lifted his ass and she jerked them off freeing his elven inch
cock to slam on his belly twitching.� She
moaned lifting his thick cock and opening her mouth wide, lowered her mouth and
swallowed his cock and slow bobbed moaning and humming lewdly.� I now shucked Jaleen's pants and boxers down
and his cock sprang out pulsing up off his stomach.� I was actually intimated by his girth.� His dick is definitely thicker in proportion
to Anthony's cock.� It was like a thick
anal dildo except this one was alive and pulsing for me.� I moaned seeing his bulging veins on his
dick.� I lifted his cock and clamped my
mouth tight onto his prick and started to slow bob and pump his shaft as I drooled
and spit on his cock to lubricate it as I now sucked harder and bobbed deeper
taking his cock to the back of my throat.�
I gripped his thick cock and pumped it with my hand using my spit as lub
for the pumping.� I was making obscene
noises as I sucked his prick and lifted to lick with butterfly strokes on his
bulbous dick head and then traced his cock crown loving his dipped piss hole
and then sucking his dickhead into my mouth slowly as his head rocked back and
he groaned as I sucked on just his dickhead.�
I loved pulling his cock crown through my lips feeling the ridge as I moved
my head up and down his shaft.� I came up
for air and watched Malika suck and bob on Anthony's own towering prick. His
shaft slicked with spit and then Malika moved her head down and sucked his
testicles one at a time into her mouth and worked them making Anthony growl in
pleasure his face slashing.� Jaleen now
stood up and told me "suck my balls Barbara".�
I did feeling their heavy weight in my mouth his balls huge like his prick.� I stretched out his nutsack and supper sucked
his testicles making him rock his head back as he gripped his forehead for
control.� I licked up his shaft after
working both nuts and swallowed his bulbous cockhead and bobbed hard as my hair
flounced and my tits swirled with my sucks.�
We are all naked by now and I was in heaven.� I cupped my tits and he fucked the valley as
my mouth sucked on his dickhead on the upstroke.� I purred feeling his thick prick sliding up
and down through my cupped tits.� I loved
feeling his thick dickhead surging up through my cupped tit meat and poking out
the top.� Pumping and then stopping on an
up stroke to allow me to lower my head and hard suck his black dickhead jutting
up out of my mashed together titties.�
Malika not be to outdone now titty fucked Anthony's prick and sucked on
it as he held it up for her through her cupped tits to let her twist and
undulate her head before slow stroking his cock through her tits.� We sucked and bobbed for another few minutes
when our studs took control.
Anthony took Malika to the floor and
pushed her legs back and slowly pile drove his cock up her clutching cunt his
knees straddling her ass.� He slow
stroked his prick in and out her tight pussy as it clutched his shaft and her
pussy soon coating it with pussy juice.�
Jaleen sat on the sofa and I straddled him my feet on the floor as I
guided his prick to my pussy hole and I sank down slowly.� I juddered and felt my eyes bulge as he
stretched me out so fucking good.� I
heard myself whinny and I shook all over feeling his cock slowly slide deeper
into my belly.� We began to hump, me
swirling down as he pumped up hard.� I
bent down and loved watching my lips clinging to his thick prick as it fucked
my cunt and I watched my juices lubricating his cock with my whitish love cream.� I moaned deep in my chest feeling my inner
cunt lips clinging tight to his thick cock as it slide in and out my
lubricating pussy. How my stretched inner labia lips clung to his black dick on
the outstroke all pink and soaking wet and then seeing them punched back into
my fuck hole as I keened and gurgled my pleasure.� I would watch myself being fucked until a
spasm would rock me making me throw my head back in fierce pleasure whinnying
before looking down again to watch black dick fucking my white pussy.� I kept looking over at Malika and watched
Anthony first pile drive and then move to missionary and pounded Malika to the
floor.� She was moaning "yesssssss" and
"harder" as Anthony was now slamming her twat as she swirled her pussy up into
his powerful thrusts.� I was juddering as
I felt Jaleen's massive cock now slamming into my womb with his powerful up
strokes as I slammed my ass into his clenched thighs.� I was gagging as my tits slapped up and down
and I clenched his shoulders and sofa back for purchase to work my pussy good
as it sluiced cunt juice all over his prick and soaking our groins in fuck
juice as I felt sweat now pouring off my body.�
I lifted off and sank to my knees beside him and shoved his cock into my
mouth and sucked my juices off his upper shaft and then rubbed his shaft all
over my face as he groaned "Goddamn you're a fucking Slut!"� As I mounted him I watched Malika now have
her legs pulled back and up with her grip on her ankles totally opening her
cunt hole to Anthony's now wild, savage thrusts into her womb as she tilted her
groin up to take his cock as deep as possible into her clutching cunt.� He slammed her pussy hard his groin slamming
into her tilted groin as she moaned and began to jolt and head thrash.� She released her grip on her ankles and
clutched Anthony to her body her arms around his back and thighs on his hips as
her eyes went sightless and her body began to buck wildly up and down as she
cried out over and over with squealing moans.�
Gods she was beautiful cumming so hard.�
I twisted around and had my back to Jaleen and he slammed up into my
flowing cunt as I slow pumped letting him do the work of pounding my pussy as I
hefted my tits up and sucked hard on my rock hard throbbing nipples.� I was starting to feel my belly tighten when
Jaleen tilted me back on his torso by his grip on my legs behind my knees and
began to slam fuck my juicing spasming cunt.�
My head lulled back on his shoulder as he hammered fucked my cunt with
slamming thrusts.� My tits now sloshed
back on my chest and rolling with his thrusts.�
I gripped the sofa to keep position and he now tilted me to the right
and lunged his cock into my now convulsing cunt one arm behind my legs and the
other gripping my hip to keep me tilted over.�
I love how new positions make my muscles twist and tighten.� The change in position worked his cock at a
different angle, producing hot friction deep up my now convulsing cunt.� A minute of his pounding my cunt in this
position, made it simply explode on his hammering cock "Uuuunnggghhhhhhhhh �
Unngg Goddamit�Unnggghhhhiiiiieeeeeeeee!" I wailed as my womb erupted in
spewing molten bolts of love lava broiling through my veins.�� I whinnied and bucked wildly in his strong
grip my ankles flailing and belly seizing up as killing spasms throttled me
with fucking bliss.
He kept me in place hammering my exploding
twat as I thrashed and moaned until spent.�
He pulled me back and let me down on the floor.� I pivoted around and lifted his massive cock
and swallowed his thick black cock soaked in my hot cunts juices.� I sucked and bobbed savoring my pussy on his
bulbous cockhead and veined shaft.� I
watched Malika now getting fucked spoon Anthony lifting her leg to open her
pussy for his pounding strokes his hips slamming her ass making her tits roll
and body jolt.� I licked and lipped
Jaleen's shaft and kitten rasped his dickhead with the flat of my tongue
cleaning his prick of my thick cunt nectars.�
He got me on the floor doggy and impaled my cunt with one hard thrust
and gripped my hips pounding me back into his hammering thrusts.� I loved feeling my tits swirl and whiplash as
my head thrashed as my pussy once more filled my veins with hot pleasure as
Jaleen slammed fucked my cunt.� I watched
Anthony hammer hard and then slow stroke his dick with arches of his back into
Malika's tight pussy her lips clinging to his piston cock working in and out
her flowing box.� Her head lulling down
her hair all mused up now and then rocking up as demented groans of pleasure
ripped out her grimacing mouth as sweat powered off her face and rolling
tits.� Anthony grimacing in fierce
pleasure his prick milked by her tight, clutching cunt I could see.� Malika began to jam back into his hard
thrusts her face slashing more and more.�
She plucked her nipples and her body jolted as fierce bolts from her
nipples jarred her.� I was jolting
forward and my pussy dripping as I got hammered by Jaleen's thick cock.� I felt my cunt all stretched out and spasming
and my lips pulled and stretched by his thick shaft pumping so deep into my
womb.� After another couple minutes I was
in heaven and I watched Malika begin to judder so hard.� Her eyes bulged wide open and her head
suddenly snapped down hard and her legs stiffened and vibrated so hard her toes
curling.� "OOOHHHHH GGGOOODDDAMMMNNNNNN!
�. AAARRGGHHHHHHH! �unnhhh unngghh � ffffuuuccckkkkk! � unnngggghhhhhhhhhhhh!"
She was so beautiful as she flipped and jackknifed her tits rolling wildly as
Anthony gripped her shoulder and hip to hammer piston his eleven inches into
her exploding pussy driving her insane with pleasure.�
I was being slammed fucked with thick
black dick doggy jolting forward my tits flopping beneath.� Sometimes supporting myself with one hand to
pull my nipples hard making me gag with pleasure.� I loved feeling Jaleen's strong hands gripping
my ass hard to slam me back into his impaling thrusts.� I watched Anthony slow stroke Malika's
temporarily spent pussy as she recovered and then started up his rhythm of hard
fucking as she revived.� I loved seeing
her head twist back and their deep tongue kissing as she whimpered with this
thick tongue deep in her mouth and his dick pumping her twat hard.� Jaleen pulled out my pulsing cunt and fell to
his knees in front of me his massive cock waving before my lips.� I opened my mouth wide and swallowed his huge
dickhead moaning at how it filled my mouth and the thick coating of my love
juices on it.� I bobbed and slurped
happily.� He gripped my hair after a
minute and pistoned his cock hard into my throat making me gag and drool and
savor every inch riding up and down my tongue flooding my mouth with the
essence of my pussy and his manhood.�
Several times he pulled out my pussy and feed me his dick as I felt the
tension beginning to form in my belly again.�
I watched Anthony grip Malika's ass and roll her over more spoon and
pull his dick out and move it up to her shit hole and begin to push it in. Her
head sagged and she keened and then her head rocked back as his dick slide a
few inches up her shitter.� He began to
stroke it slow and easy letting her asshole open up and slowly sink his dick
into her ass.� Jaleen was now gripping my
ass and shoulder slamming me back into his cock as my head thrashed and sweat
dripped off me.� I felt my belly hitching
and my fingers clawing the carpet.� I
begged him to fuck me harder and he did making me catch myself with his
hammering thrusts jolting me hard as I widen my stance a little to take his
dick hammering my womb.� Gods, my womb
suddenly went from tensing to exploding wildly making me shriek and flip
uncontrollably as I bucked up and down crying out in screams of shattering
bliss.� I collapsed to the floor slowly
and he straddled me to hammer my flowing twat as my clit ground into the carpet
which caused as second orgasm to explode out my flowing cunt.� I screamed "Shhiiitttttttt�Goddamn it! �
uunngggghhhhhrrrrrrr � Aarrrggghhhhuuunnnnn � oh gods I cumming so hard!"�� Crushing spasms made me hump up and down
spastically as my fingers clawed the carpet.�
The next spasm made my head rock up and judder so hard as I drooled all
down my face, my eyes rolled back spasming as I was lost in blissful waves of
searing pleasure rocking my soul.� I
heard myself groan so gutturally as my head kept spasming hard on my juddering
neck feeling my tendons corded so tight as my head spasmed hard.�
When I regained my senses, I saw that
Jaleen was on his back beside me and he croaked "I want to fuck your ass!"� I saw that Malika was now getting fucked
doggy in the ass her tits swaying and rolling her ass cheeks jiggling with each
slam of Anthony's dick into her shitter.�
I groggily but happily got up on my hands and knees and straddled
Jaleen's hips and gripped his thick shaft and swirled it around my rosebud that
was soaked in sweat and cunt juice.� My
shit hole lubricated for invasion.� I
pushed down and my eyes widened at the thickness of his dick.� I felt my shitter screaming in pain as I
forced my body down and humped gently and my head rocked back as I keened in
pain and pleasure feeling his dickhead slip into my rectum.� I pulled up to let his dickhead pull out and
I felt my asshole spasm wildly as I immediately pushed his dick into my ass
again to feel that wonderful pain of thick invasion.� I worked my sphincter like that twice more as
Malika hissed what a slut I am.� I smiled
as I now swirled my ass and worked my groin up and down slowly working my
sphincter loose and his dick deeper up my shitter.� I was in heaven feeling that shaft slowly
sink up my asshole until my ass cheeks were grinding his groin.� I now began to hump and down as he worked his
dick up in rhythm with my fuck ride.� I
was gagging and groining as I began to work it hard, my tits now doing their
swirl and flop up off my chest and slamming down to flop wildly before swirling
up again for another cycle.� I so love the
nasty sound of heaving tits and the hedonism of watching them flop and slap in
the air and on my chest.� I had not seen
Malika do ATM but I felt my belly lurch when Anthony pulled out her ass and
stepped over her shoulder with one leg and push his dick down to her
mouth.� She looked me in the eye and
swallowed his cock soaked in creamy shit cream and moaned so loud as she bobbed
her head undulating.� She licked up his
shaft cupping a side and hucked "I love the taste of my shit on your dick
Anthony" before swallowing again and bobbing hard now.� He was soon plowing her ass hard doggy as she
jolted her whole body rippling with his powerful thrusts into her ass.� I was doing most of the work at first but I
tired and leaned forward and let Jaleen pound my asshole with rabbit fast deep
thrusts up my shitter.� I love to change
angles and positions because it works my ass and colon diffently sparking new
sensations and pleasure jolts.� I revived
and sat up and again and we slammed hard into each other my tits rolling and
whiplashing.� I gagged and whimpered and
then leaned back between his legs on my palms to swirl slam my asshole on his
thick shaft as the position strained my shitter making me keen in helpless
pleasure.� I looked Jaleen in the eyes
and lifted up and felt his dickhead work my sphincter slipping free to slap his
stomach.� I sat on my ass between his
spread legs and gripped his shaft lifting it making kitten eyes as his eyes
glittered knowing I was about to do ATM on him.�
I glanced over at Malika who was watching me with excitement and I made
slut eyes at her and turned my slut gaze back to Jaleen.� I extended my tongue slithering it all over
his cockhead making him groan hard his head up on stiff neck watching me.� I stroke his cockhead with my pink
tongue,� drooling spit onto his dickhead
and slurping it up with pursed lips sliding all over his cockhead sucking and
murmuring.� I then took his cock to the
back of my throat my lips clenched tight bobbing hard as I made wet obscene
noises sucking hard with cheek hollowing sucks.�
I loved hearing Malika husk "Goddamn you're white whore bitch!"� I sucked his dick clean and remounted him as
both Malika and I did ATM over and over sucking our lovers dicks clean over our
sweet assholes.� Jaleen asking me how my
asshole tasted.� I murmured "Like sweet
shit candy � (I ran his dickhead soaked in ass juice all over my lips) I love
the taste of my shit hole Jaleen" looking up at him as now lowered my head oh
so slowly and again swallowed his cock covered in my shit cream.� Too soon Malika and I had awesome anal 'gams
that had us crying out in helpless pleasure or bodies flipped and jackknifed so
hard as bodies were filled with pummeling bliss.� I went multiple when I rubbed and forked my
clit furiously as I now shrieked and felt my toes trying to curl off.� Then Malika and I got on our knees and sucked
our lovers off.� I loved seeing her eyes
jolting open wide when Anthony's cock spewed his hard bolts into her throat
making her choke and spill his semen all over her lower face and throat.� Jaleen does not spurt as hard but his large
testicles produce copious amounts of semen flooding my mouth to
overflowing.� Our messy faces allowed me
and Malika to kiss and lick each other's faces clean and twirl tongues in
rising love.
The beauty of fucking couples is fucking
both sexes.� Our bucks were drained of
semen for now so we went upstairs to continue our fun and games.� I told Malika I wanted us to shower before
going to bed which made her smile sultry.�
Soon I was on my knees sucking her off as she swirled her pussy hard
into my devouring mouth.� I sucked her
clit so hard and French kissed her fuck hole sucking in cunt meat and munching
on it as she cried out in ecstasy.� She
at first clenched my head to drive my mouth into her cunt.� My lips smothered by her fat vulva.� Munching on cunt meat and then working up her
slit sucking on her labia lips before tongue rasping her clit with flat tongue
strokes before inhaling deep into my mouth and deep throat love sucking.� Her head pounded the shower wall as she
grunted "fuck, fuck, fuck" softy.� She
released my scalp and hefted her perfect tits up and started to suck with cheek
hollowing sucks on her thick, long nipples.�
She huffed and chuffed as she sucked and gyrated her pussy so hard into
my mouth.� I supper sucked her clit now
and she mashed her tits together to suck on both nipples simultaneously as her
whole body started to vibrate.� Sigh,
muffled wails filled the shower as she at first was able to continue sucking
her nipples as I sucked and tongue slapped her rigid, throbbing clit.� A hard spasm made her fold forward and then
slam the wall and she lost control of her arms dropping her tits as her arms
jerked like a dying insect.� She screamed
full caps as I tried to suck her clit off her body again folding forward and
slamming back so hard her tits whipped up and flopped down.� Sigh she flooded my mouth with so much hot
cunt ambrosia intoxicating me with new love for her.� Then she was on her knees lapping away at my
pussy her tongue rasping over my bulging clit and then long tongue strokes up
and down my slit before lashing my clit again.�
She spent several minutes tonguing my pussy.� I was in heaven feeling her butterfly tongue
strokes.� She was tonging my pussy folds
when she suddenly mashed her face forward and sucked my fuck hole with
voracious sucks sucking in cunt meat and munching on it making me cry out in
shocking pleasure.� She sucked and
munched and moved up and sucked with long, strong love sucks on my clit.� Her thick lips mashing and worming over my
pulsing clit.� She began to slurp and
pull on my clitoral hood and making so much obscene noises I was going crazy
with deepening love for Malika.� She
released my clit for a second "Start calling me a Nigger.� It turns me on."� I was only too happy to oblige.� "Suck my clit you goddamn Nigger! � suck it
with your boot lips you fucking goddman Jig!"�
I loved how her eyes flared with sensual heat as I racially insulted her
as she sucked with renewed vigor.� I was
soon screaming "Sssuuuccckkkk it Malikkkaaaa!�You GGGOODDDAMMMNNNN
NNIIGGGEERRRRR!"� I wailed and then
groaned gutturally over and over as my body buckled and flipped back into the
shower repeatedly as she now wormed three fingers up my spasming twat and hard
rotated them right and left over and over.�
She sucked my upper cunt deep into her mouth and loved sucked so hard
her head pulling back with her love sucks as she now rammed her knuckles into
my vulva as she hard rotated her hooked fingers through my inner cunt meat and
vaginal walls.� Her pure love and
ministrations made a second orgasm explode on top of dying first one.� "GGGGOOODDDDAAMMMM--FUUCCCKKK-ITTT � a
crushing spasm throttled me � MMAALLLIKKKKAAAA YOU FUCKING GODDAMMMMMMMM
NIGGGERRRRR!" I screamed so long and hard as I folded over and jerked up and
down helplessly as killing spasms had my back seemingly broken as I jerked up
and down all hunched over as I shrieked my killing bliss.� She had to help me collapse down the wall and
she moved in and we kissed lazily in new love as she cuddled against my
collapse form against the wall.� I was
swooning feeling her tongue deep in my throat and twisting around my tongue as
she murmured she was already falling in love me with me.� I whispered back I was falling in love her
back as she smiled goofily before mating out mouths so tight as we tilted heads
to drive tongues down whimpering throats as the need for more intense fucking
rose in our bodies.�
The beauty of women making love is that it
just flows and continues without the need to recharge after a killing cum.� Soon I had her on their king size bed, her
body stretched out as I went down on her,�
I was in heaven eating her out sucking on her turgid, blueberry sized
clit and slurping and pulling on her long labia lips (she whined for me to suck
her "mud flaps") as she bucked and moaned.�
Then tongue fucking her steamy fuck hole as nectars flowed out and her
pussy made divine wet, obscene sloshing noises as I tongued her hard and then
while sucking on her clit I got my middle finger deep into her clutching pussy
and finger fucked with hard strokes.�
Twisting and then vibrating fast just to make squishy wet noises as I
felt her cunt splatter juice on my neck and upper chest.� I worked her clit and fuck hole back and
forth with total love taking her higher and feeling her muscles tense and
judder in need.� She rose up on her
elbows and worked her tits with pulp squeezes and lifting up at times to suck
on a bulging teat with harsh needy sucks.�
I sensed it was time for the love kill.�
I clamed my mouth to her fuck hole and sucked in her inner cunt meat and
munched on her sodden folds while my hand now vibrated her clit with rapid
strokes back and forth her wet pussy lubricating my fingers for easy jerking
her clit off.� I saw her eyes bulge out
and her legs suddenly slammed into my side and stiffened as her hands slammed
into the sheets her fingers clawing.� She
started to scream and wail her body vibrating like a million volts of killing
ecstasy were surging in her veins.� Her
heels started to kick the mattress beside my ankles and just kept pounding in
the coolest fast rhythm her hands now tearing at the sheets in spastic
pulls.� I moved my mouth clamping onto
her clit and deep throat sucked her turgid clit between my lips tongue batting
as ground my chin into her soaking wet slit and labia lips prolonging her
orgasm with six full body spasms that made her kick her heels up and down
hard.� She whinnied and cawed her
shattering bliss.� She finally collapsed
spent as her body rocked with strong aftershocks as I softly lipped and stroked
her spent clit with my pink tongue.� She
mewled and drooled.� She finally
recovered and pulled me up to straddle her face and gripped my ass with
clenched fingers and urged me to ride her face hard.� She snuffled and used her tongue to plow my
pussy as it rode her face up and down and then swirling down to drive my cunt
hole or clit deep in her mouth.� I gagged
and raggedly breathed as her mouth sucked my pussy so good.� I ran my hands all up and down my totally
sweat soaked body and plucked my nipples and then run my fingers through her
hair and stroked her face as she sucked me off.�
I rode her face now more urgently as I whinnied and groaned and gurgled
as I swirled my pussy down into her mouth devouring me so passionately and
skilled.� She tilted her head back and
husked "Get ready to go to heaven you White Bitch � I'm going to show you how a
Nigger sucks a white pussy off!" she inhaled my clit deep into her mouth and
wormed two fingers into my rosebud and twisted them through my clutching
asshole.� She sank them in to the hilt
and started to pound my ass with her plunging and twisting fingers working my
sphincter into a frenzy of spasming pleasure pulses to my bulging clit.� I began to hitch and twitch uncontrollably
and jammed my hands underneath Malika's head and jammed her face deep into my
spasming pussy.� My teeth gritted and I
felt my face slashing horribly as my head began to thrash.� My cunt exploded in her devouring mouth my
clit pulsing hotly deep in her sucking mouth.�
I felt my sphincter clutching and pulsing on her twisting, pounding
fingers sending shockwaves flooding out my ass into my clit broiling me in
ecstasy.� I felt my cunt gushing heavily
flooding her mouth soaking her lower face, neck and flowing off her neck I saw
in droplets splotching the bed.� My head
kept snapping down spastically as I wailed and cursed fuck and shit over and
over as my womb ruptured and scalded me in broiling waves of searing bliss as
my whole body would spasm hard and then freeze up and then spasm again as my
face kept slashing and I shrieked out my fucking ecstasy.� Sigh and the night was young.� We fucked heatedly with tribbing and rutting
and more orgasms.� Twice more we drained
out studs nutsacks of hot nigger semen before we once more fucked with hot
lesbo loving to get the best of both worlds.
End of Long Digression:
You now show the
ramping up that I am always talking about.�
You have shown the slow ramping that occurs during the middle fuck that
slowly leads to the end game and the love kill.�
Your start to work her pussy with your mouth and maybe your finger with
that extra magic to make her go wild with need.�
Or you are doing what you do here with your cock.� This is why it is so important to fuck your
love slut with your total body and focus.�
By working her body with all of your body, that means more than your
cock, you make her start to go crazy as you have worked her body with total
focus and love.� you have twisted the
spring tight and now it is time to make it release with shattering affect.� You are so right as you show Laura thrusting
harder and deeper into Shelley's pussy.�
By starting slower and not as urgent you build the tension to then take
her higher and make her womb simply explode with shattering affect.� I so love to see my love slut doing what you
show Shelley here.� Working her body
harder as you slam you dick as deep as the position will allow into her flowing
cunt or spasming asshole.� I love to
clutch and stroke your body and pulling close if the position allows as I swirl
my hips to slam my dick over and over into your belly.� Only your stories� show the sheer wild passion flowing from
Shelley's body.� They never show the
thrill of feeling your belly tighten and pussy spasming with imminent eruptions
of scalding bliss.� Their stories are
just bland and have no sense of the rapture of great fucking.� They rob the fuck of any specialness.� They make it almost ordinary with their bland
and lifeless sentences.� Those that tell
you something just tell you she is getting excited and ready to cum but they
just forget to actually show you like you do here.� Yes her body is getting more excited but
how.� It is this how that other authors
just forget to tell you.� Here you tell
us with words like "more aroused and wild", "gasping and gurgling".� Then you tell us that Laura is slamming her
cock into Shelley's flowing and spasming pussy with "punishing thrusts".� Other authors never qualify how the fucker is
working their cock.� This tells me that
Laura is flexing her hips and slamming her dick so hard into Shelley's cunt
over and over her back arching and hair jerking as she pounds Shelley's hot box
with total focus and love.� Plus, you
don't let Shelley lay there like other authors make it seem.� She is actively fucking back into Laura's
savage thrusts.� I know her tits are
swaying and flopping underneath her and the sweat dripping off her heated and
excited body.� You are showing me why
this fuck is going to be so dire, extreme and so devastating as Shelley's womb
ruptures and floods her veins with screaming ecstasy. ��[And her increased force had the
desired effect. Shelley grew progressively more aroused and wild,
writhing and groaning under Laura's punishing thrusts, gasping and gurgling,
mewling and twisting, pushing her whole pelvis back and up into each sharp,
pistoning lunge of Laura's. Oh, we're almost there . . . almost there . .
. Laura panted to herself. She knew Shelley was nearly at the peak, that
a few more piercing thrusts would boost her over.]� With other
authors I never get a sense of how the fuck is flowing.� Most simply don't give me the information to
really know.� When even the orgasm is
bland and I'm just told she cummed; then knowing how the fuck progresses to the
orgasm is almost impossible.� Those
authors that do give some idea of the fuck simply make it all seem one
speed.� This is not how it goes all the
time.� Again, it is the all the time that
bothers me.� Of course sometimes it is
"balls to the wall" and you are fucking with wild abandon from the start but
this is not the norm.� I want to see the
norm.� I find that you have the initial
passion of coming together and the middle more sedate middle fuck and then the
grand flourish of the end fuck.� Other authors
just don't capture this.� You do.� By telling the reader of "increased force"
and "Shelley grew progressively" we see that the fuck is ramping up to a womb
scalding explosion of fucking bliss.� The
reader gets sucked in with your vivid verbs and adverbs and then you showing
how the fuck just intensifies and focuses as one works toward nirvana.� I just love how you show the increasing
passion of great fucking.
You show how Laura is
expressing herself unconsciously as she works and strains to deliver the love
kill.� I so adore the little details that
you give like here ["Unhhhh . . . unhhhh!' she heard herself grunting
as she now grabbed Shelley's twisting hips and plunged the dildo as deep as it
would go into her clinging pussy.]�
It is these details that add so much to your stories and how great
fucks truly flow.� To deliver the thrusts
that your lover needs to reach heaven you need to grab her body in this
position to slam her back as you lunge forward.�
She will be lunging back into
your thrusts but you need to add your strength to make the deep dicking just
that more divine and make her womb explode that much harder.� It is always the details that make anything
awesome and devastating and you so deliver time after time.� All this work and effort of total loving is
delivered just for this ["Awwoongggg!" Shelley threw her
head back, her long, svelte body almost buckling under Laura's powerful, almost
masculine thrusts. "Yesssss! Awwonnngg! Yesssss!
Ungghhh! Yesssss!"������� And
then she was whooping crazily, and then she was coming in fierce, shocking
jolts, her lovely naked body shaking and quaking violently, flexing and
spasming from the impact of severe orgasmic eruptions.������� "Annngghhnnniiigggeee!" she
cried out, flipping and shuddering as Laura continued to slam the dildo hard
and deep into her pussy, holding the base of it with one hand and clutching
Shelley's shoulder with the other, ramming her, ramming her mercilessly.
"Annngghhnnniiigggeee!" Shelley cried out again, then pitched forward
onto the mattress, her cries subsiding into long, almost painful moans as the
force of her climax died away slowly.]� Sigh, this is why we fuck.� To be simply destroyed with fucking bliss as
wave after searing wave of crushing bliss simply pummels you into nirvana.� You make your cums so beautiful.� You capture the hard cums so expertly.� Orgasms that make you feel like your womb is
going to tear itself inside out as your muscles tense so tight you feel like
they will tear themselves off the bone as your body flips and jackknifes out of
control as you wail and scream you fucking bliss.� Only you capture this.� I have to love how you describe Laura's
thrusting as "almost masculine".� I am an
Amazon and use my stature and strength to deliver fucks like a man that simply
make my sluts wail and shriek in shattering ecstasy and flip so hard underneath
or spoon as I pull you tight to feel your body jamming and wallowing all over
me as you scream over and over as I whisper to you to let it out and let the
gods hear your screams.� You tell us
expertly how Shelley's body is "buckling" which means it is coiling to surge up
in fucking spasm of epic strength.� You
again are telling us how she is cumming.�
I love how you capture the various qualities of how we express our
orgasms.� We never make the same sounds over and over and over like other
authors do.� I am always curious as to
how I will express my next orgasm.� I
simply have no idea how I will be inspired.�
Will I scream, whinny, curse or shout out the all cap sentence.� I simply don't know.� You show this but keeping each expression of
cumming unique and varied.� This was
something I recognized immediately in your stories and told me I was onto
something special and I was so right!�
And the details that you provide.�
Where other authors give me such a paucity of detail you just give them
one after another in your stories.� You
show us a love kill fuck.�� You show how
to prolong the fuck.� Like Laura here
slamming her dick as hard as she can into Shelley's exploding cunt as she now
grips Shelley's shoulder for that extra purchase to enable her to lunge her
dick into Shelley's exploding box.� Then
you give us the cries of excoriating pleasure being ripped from Shelley's womb
by Laura's hard dicking.� I so love to
feel men and strong women grip my body hard, jamming me back so hard as my tits
flop and sweat splatters.� My lank hair
jerks as they slam me back into their pile driving thrusts feeling their groin
slam down hard into my groin or into my ass cheeks if from behind.� This makes me cum so fucking hard and just
keeps the spasms flowing during my orgasms.�
I love the end game long cries of pleasure that you so capture.� The quality of the end fuck is different and
you capture this also.� How you fuck
until your womb and body are spent and you collapse in spent worn out pleasure
as now sweet aftershocks rent your body and soul.�
I
love the sweet post coital time you show here.�
They have both collapsed with Laura now half lying on Shelley's
body.� I love that close skin on skin
contact after a great fuck.� Our sweaty
bodies melding and rubbing as our love flows through our very pores into each
other's soul.� I love this time of
sharing and luxuriating in the feel of the female body.� With men I like lying on their hard bodies
but I don't get that boding with them.�
But I do love feeling their cock pressed hard in my belly or thigh as I
move down and lift their still hard cock and suck clean of all the pussy and
ass juice and lick / suck off the semen slicking it.� I love how their bodies judder and shake from
aftershocks as I suck them clean.� I have
to smile at Shelley telling Laura in awe what an awesome fuck she is.� I smile and thank them but tell them I know
other who can fuck them like I just did.�
I so love to share and keep the circles so fresh with my lovers.� I love how they fuck repeatedly and share
more love.� Like the fact of Shelley
angling for more hot fucking but Laura has to go home to prepare for her work
day.� I always want to fuck to utter
exhaustion but often the world intrudes as you show.� Sad but true.�
I love the silly love banter at the end of story of Laura killing the
peeping Tom with the telescope.� It is
this kind of love banter that draws women so much closer after a great
fuck.� Plus, Laura knows how to deflect
women when they want to get to close and direct.� I have to make sure my angels know where they
stand and I like seeing Laura from time to time having to do
likewise.�