I like how this chapter starts out.� It shows several things that only your story has and makes it so cool.� It starts out with the fact that this story arc has a length to it that is years in the time stream.� Other stories may tell of lovers coming together after a separation but they can only tell the reader that this is occurring.� A one shot only allows this.� Other stories that have multiple chapters are either still a short time frame like the "Sandy" story or the author that wrote of celebrities fucking.� Even though that story covered time he merely tried to explain the live events into the story (movie shooting schedules and what one could glean from the gossip magazines).� His story never tried to capture real emotion.� True lovers who must separate because of their lives destinies and how they come together.� This is real life that you are showing here.� Plus, before you explain the separation I already know why.� This story has shown me why with the chapters that have come before.� This story is like the turning of the page of a novel that takes us through the life of Laura one chapter at a time.� We live her life as these beautiful women come in and out of her life.� I love the fact that I get to see her real life and then see glorious fucking hat shows women fucking each other so gloriously making their wombs and asshole explode in fucking ecstasy.� I get the best of both worlds in your stories.� I have to smile at the observation that Laura and Makeeda no longer devour each other in the airport.� As wild as I am behind closed doors I am still not comfortable with public displays of affection.� When I pick up Joann and or Maria in the airport I am always a little flustered because I know they are going to jump in my arms and climb all over me and kiss me like a lover.� I always give my all back but I can feel the eyes on me.� It is weird.� We take lots of stills and videos of us fucking and save them for show and tell.� I love being in front of the camera then.� Love to look in the camera and let you see I am a slut loving it but in the open public I am a prude.� I wonder why that is.� Most be upbringing to keep one's personal business out of the public eye.� All those years ago when I first picked them up from the airport after a business trip and I did not show my affection it caused huge arguments.� They were hurt.� I learned to give myself to them whenever they wanted and needed it but still in the back of my mind I still squirm a little (not in a good way).

I just love the love that you show here.� Laura has her many angels like I do but I only have a few archangels.� There is that part of me that only they touch.� I give you my body totally but I only give the depths of my soul to Joann, Maria and Dodie.� I like that Laura has her special someone that she can share herself with.� I like the fact that in your story I see blistering primal rutting but also true soul fucking where you truly bind your soul to the special woman or women in your life.� I also like the humor in your life.� You show humor in two fashions that I am so in tune with.� One is the observations of life that are just funny.� The cats running for the hills when Makeeda comes home after a long absence.� I am smiling great big because I have seen cats do this.� When I am Shari, Cindy and Tameka's house and the fucking starts they are running let me tell you.� Not to be seen until bodies are finally exhausted after long hard fucking.� Plus, cats are just weird sometimes and go running off for the strangest reasons.� I love seeing a cat running and going around a corner and their flexible spins give them the cutest shapes as they gyrate around the corner.� Then you show the humor of a witty person [Makeeda smiled lazily in the half-darkness, the room lit only by streetlights filtered through the blinds. "Can you get off?"�� "Darling, I can get off just looking in your marvelous hazel eyes," Laura said dreamily. "Or at this incredible body." She stroked Makeeda's breathtaking naked flesh.�� "I mean work, silly." Makeeda pinched her, but lightly.]� I simply eat this up in your stories.� I love wit.� I was friends with a woman at work during college.� We never fucked but we spent all our free time ranking each other.� Her wit was devastating.� We just constantly threw one liners at each other.� Funny, when I first started working with her my first thought was "how can I work with a girl so plain" but her wit soon had me thinking "this girl is a fucking fox!"� We had become friends that I never wanted to cross the line with.� She was super straight who loved cock at the time and I was politically correct at the time.� Sigh, what a waste.� I should have been fucking her and her boyfriends.� So I love these witty remarks that just come up in life.� You let them happen in the story.� You never force the humor.� You just let it happen like a witty person does.� I can see why women fall for her.� I use my humor as such a love weapon.� I often can see a "straight" woman falling for me and mentally she is already disrobing for me as I use my wit to charm and seduce her.� I love putting that sparkle in a woman's eye with my humor and hear the tinkle of their laugh.� It makes my soul soar.� Of course I use it to seduce women and make lovers horny, but I am funny just because I love to laugh.� Laughing helps keep me young and from pulling my hair out with work anymore.� I love laughing and am willing to use self-deprecating humor to make people and myself laugh.� I have enough confidence to poke fun at myself I guess.� Plus, I like the observation of Makeeda's eyes and her smoking hot bot.� The intimacy of the comments are a joy to read.� This is not a woman trying to get in Makeeda's panties.� This is her woman expressing her heart felt love for her woman.� I just love this in your story.� You show sexual love and the true archangel love.� I simply can feel their love and the hot fucking that this love brings.

Then you show their fuck hunger.� No details but none are needed.� I like how their lives are mirroring mine right now.� Joann and Maria have been so busy for the last five years.� First working hard to make partner and then form their own business.� They work so hard and are so fucking good at what they do.� Like Laura, I am so proud of them.� They are building their own little empire.� This takes a lot of work and dedication though like Makeeda.� They spend a lot of time at conferences, training seminars and business trips all over North America and China.� They are making a name for themselves in China.� So many women there are entrepreneurs and so many are bi and gay!� So I too know the long separations.� Fortunately, we are totally committed to open relationships.� I love the fact they are fucking Chinese women half way across the globe and fucking women across America.� They fully know the fact that I love women here and accept my need for male cock.� Just change the sheets before they come home.� Absence does make the heart grow fonder.� Last Tuesday Joann came back from a trip to Chicago.� Maria was off in Vancouver getting a new account.� I picked her up at the airport and she jumped in my arms as I swung her around and around as our tongues dueled hotly in my mouth and moaned so loud feeling it slide down my throat as her little titties mashed into my chest her legs kicking.� I learn my lessons.� When we got home she was on me like a tick.� She literally ripped my clothes off.� I am smirking seeing in my mind her shoes flying across the large living room as she kicked them off.� She kissed me so deeply and devoured my tits like a starving baby.� She soon had me pushed into the corner of the sofa.� I was pushed back sitting up my body angled my twat hanging on the edge of the sofa.� She was on the floor simply devouring my aching pussy.� She was constantly moaning and growling eating me out.� She wiggled he face to get her mouth deep into my cunt my vulva engulfing her mouth.� I loved watching my mound flare out showing her tongue working up and down my slit.� I was watching her beautiful brown face concentrating working my aching cunt hole and clit.� She was lapping away like a dog on a bone working my slit and clit.� I loved feeling my face constantly slash and freeze in the pleasure she was giving me.� As I got wetter, the sounds of my squishy cunt filled the room more and more.� My musk flooding the room with the essence of my excited cunt.� She could sense my orgasm coming by how my cunt was starting to flow like a river.� She lapped hard on my clit the sounds of my sodden cunt now loud and wet.� She was looking up at me now fucking me with a finger working my soaked cunt folds her other hand up and squeezing my tit and grinding my nipple making me cry out and my ass squirm.�� I was moaning constantly now my body jamming back into the sofa corner feeling my womb coil in my belly.� My head was juddering on my neck gone stiff with tension my eyes bulging with need.� Her eyes slitted and she jammed her head down hard into my cunt and sucked my clit between her perfect lips deep and started to deep throat love suck.� Her cheeks hollowed out showing her tongue that was now slapping my bulging clit.� My womb shattered.� I screamed FFFFUUUUUCCCKKKKKKKKK as my back jammed into the sofa and wallowed spastically as my body jackknifed so hard as my cunt convulsed trying to tear itself inside out.� I wailed and flopped my fist slamming into the sofa over and over as I screamed "Suck it you goddamnn fucking Mexican cuunntttttttt!"� Her eyes burned and she sucked harder somehow and I had another crushing orgasm of devastating bliss.� Our love once more binding us.� Sex is such a loving bonding glue.� Like how later I was ramming my fist up her asshole over and over as my elbow jammed her ass crack.� I loved how yesterday she was in a boardroom commanding it and now she was having a multiple anal orgasm on my love fist buried up her shit hole to the hilt.� How I slipped my fist out her ass and soaked her face and hair in her shit juice over and over and we went to sleep with her cuddled in my arms her face, neck and hair soaked in her shit juice as we went to sleep murmuring our love to each other.

I like how we see a little of the dynamic of their relationship.� I have always been comfortable with the fact that my three archangels all make a lot more money than me.� But I know how it is to not be the primary bread winner.� Again no other story even begins to explore these issues.� The stories are all sex or just how the relationships form and that of relationships at ten thousand feet.� I can understand why Makeeda wants to make sure she is pulling her share financially.� It is often the more mundane facets of relationships that can cause problems.� Most persons do not like to feel like they are not pulling their part in a relationship.� I like the fact that this is brought up.� Again, it is mundane but it is part of their life.� I know sometimes Joann and Maria worry I feel like I am a kept woman but I am secure in myself.� They simply make a lot more money than me.� I have to smile at them getting away to fuck gloriously.� I so love going to a new place to fuck.� It adds spice to the fuck that I am always seeking.� That is the reason I carve new relationships and new pairings.� I need that constant spice in life to keep my soul humming with happiness.� I am smiling with Laura ruminating over their dalliances with others.� She is accepting of Makeeda having outside relationships.� Barely.� I always have to smile at Laura being on her best behavior so to speak when she contemplates Makeeda and her fucking women while they are separated.� I am so the opposite of Laura.� I crave to hear all the details of these relationships that my archangels, angels and newbies tell me.� I am happy that my lovers have other lovers and are experiencing as much pleasure as they can.� I am not greedy in that way.�� Plus, like Laura, I can't really say anything with my constant need for hot sex with different partners.� I miss my babies but I also love the time and freedom it gives me to fuck with others.� That is why we have bonded so well.� All three of us want and need to fuck others.� We constantly seek new cunt meat and me cock to satisfy our body's needs.� I love that Laura is like this but you show that we are in essence normal persons like everyone else.� We are just very sexual who crave and need constant fucks to keep us balanced and happy.� Laura is so wise.� Makeeda is indeed beautiful and of course has many suitors and I am so happy when she does fuck them.� Makeeda deservers this.� Trying to stay with one partner only makes life boring and so stale.� I just love the fact that you show this dynamic.� It is not needed for the story but you put it in.� You make them� more alive by showing their interpersonal dynamics.� It draws the reader into their lives and, thus, the fucks when they come.

I like seeing Makeeda's loving attitude brought forward so clearly.� She is totally accepting of Laura's need for pussy.� I love how you show the mental dialog that Laura knows would occur.� By showing us this we the reader are reinforced that they have an open relationship.� In the past Laura did not have this with her other lovers and their relationships suffered because of it.� Plus, you put some humor into the dialog with the comment about Makeeda's mother not caring since she has passed away.� You always know how to put that little bit of humor into the story that's makes me smile.� I love how you are showing a real relationship.� You are the only author who has length to their stories that shows life.� A few others keep it purely sexual which I love of course, but, the fact that you provide more really adds to the story.� I so love sex but sex without life would be meaningless.� I have to admit at first I was not a big fan of Makeeda but as I have come to know her over the chapters I have to love her more and more.� She is so rational and yet hot in the sack that I am drawn to her.� I would so love to be ramming my fist up her asshole making her howl in ecstasy.� Laura is so lucky to finally have found a woman that knows how to share love.� In the chapters we see these women all wanting Laura in their lives but they almost all want to have her to themselves.� They are greedy in their love.� I could never live in such an environment.� I need my freedom and my archangels give it to me and I to them.� I love how Makeeda knows this and accepts it.� I love finding this in a story.� You showed a progression to Laura arriving here.� This is life.� You are the only author to go here in the world of erotica.� In the slash world you find this exploration of the world but not a universal world of chapter after chapter expect for a few authors and they don't have the sex.� I eventually bored of those.� I needed the sex and those stories only focused on two characters and became boring in the repetition.�

I have to smile at Makeeda and her not so subtle ways of achieving what she desires.� [Two days after their return from their idyllic days in the Napa valley, Laura came home from work to find a computer-printed photograph lying on the bed, as she changed into her after-work clothes. Makeeda was in the kitchen making a salad. Laura picked up the picture.�� A very attractive young blonde woman, with large breasts. They were tied up tight, her large dark rose nipples popping and shiny, the center nubs long and erect. They were, from Laura's point of view, tied a little too tightly, since the skin of her breasts was already beginning to bloom violet with engorged blood. The rope encasing them was thick brown hemp, bristly and mean-looking. There were many tight loops around each breast; the tight coils made pinch marks in the skin. After tying her breasts, her tormentor had also tied her upper arms to her body, then her wrists behind her back. She had a shiny red ball gag in her mouth, her brow was furrowed in fear, her brown eyes stricken and terrified.�� Laura's pulse beat in her throat as she looked at the picture. Its message to her was unmistakable. Tie me up like this.]� I love this.� Of course I like the kink that we see through Laura's eyes but I love more.� You show the interactions between Makeeda and Laura.� Laura I fear is a little of a prude when it comes to letting her inner sadist out.� She feels she went too far in the past and now tries to control her inner impulses.� What I really like seeing here is the interaction between these two women.� Makeeda knows that bringing it up directly will only make Laura defensive as it has happened in the past.� The key word here is "past".� I have seen this in past chapters.� I have seen the history.� That is what is so cool about this story.� I see this and not have to be told of past interactions.� I have lived it with the women.� We are seeing how Makeeda knows one avenue of bringing up the idea of kink is denied her so she has devised another means of bringing it up.� I can't wait to see how this goes.� Plus, I love what I am reading.� I do not seek this out usually but never deny myself the opportunity for kink sex when it comes up.� I love hard core fucking and the pleasures it gives.� I felt my pussy quiver seeing this woman's breast to tightly tied up and feeling them burning and so sensitive to the pain I know is coming.� Makeeda is a slut who desires hard core sex.� I love sluts like this.� Denise is slut so like me at her age.� She loves hard core anal sex.� She simply craves double anal and anal fisting.� I knew who could satisfy our desires together.� I took her to Joseph, Joshua and Celeb.� They so love it when I bring them black whores to fuck.� They really pounded us good.� I loved how they "made" us give head as they skull fucked and rammed the full lengths of their dicks down our throats.� Then fucked our cunts and assholes so hard and deep solo and then dp.�� We hard orgasms that made us wail and jackknife so hard.� We were now on the floor.� I had croaked to line us up to 69 so I could we could watch each other's asshole being dp raped.�� The twins on the floor with us mounted over them gagging as their dicks now rammed our assholes so hard our bodies lurching forward.� I watched Joseph get behind Denise and start to work his thick dickhead into her sphincter by pressing in hard into her resisting O ring.� I was up on my palms to see clearly and I loved how his dickhead was running all around his brother's dick trying to pry into her sphincter.� Denise was thrashing and crying out his dick was too big.� He slapped her ass hard the sound loud in the room as she squealed and barked at her "Shut up Nigger! � take my white dick you fucking Nigger!" I then reveled hearing Denise screech "Aaaaiiiieeeeeeeeeee!" as his dick slipped finally into her asshole when he used his thumb on top of his dick head to get the extra purchase and punched into her rectum.� He slapped her ass hard.� He started to pump her shitter as she whimpered and moaned.� I loved seeing her face so slash and crumple with ecstasy and pain that is pure fucking pleasure.� He worked his dick hard and deep up her shit hole as Celeb slow stroked his dick as the anchor.� She twisted and gibbered how good her asshole felt being double fucked with white cock.� I loved how her body juddered forward with Joseph pumping his hips to sink his dick deep up her shitter.� They fucked her good until Joseph pulled out and went to her head and sank to his knees and she lunged onto his cock soaked in her ass and she sucked clean with hard bobs.� As she sucked she whinnied with Celeb now free to slam his cock hard in and out her juicing asshole.� I could see her ass juice leaking out heavily dribbling down into her cunt slit soaking it in shit juice.� I watched Joseph walk around behind me and I began to cry out in raw pain feeling my asshole stretched open as Joseph pushed his dick roughly into my asshole on top of Joshua.� I whimpered in pleasure as my asshole was now pumped with two thick cocks.� Joseph began to slap my ass making me squeal in pain.� I watched Celeb pound Denise hard with his dick slamming up her shit hole.� She suddenly cried out with guttural moans as her body bucked and flipped with spasms of killing bliss.� She cried out over and over her head thrashing as her face slashed.�� Joseph fisted my hair and pulled my head back viciously and barked at me "What are you!" and I cried out "A fucking whore!"� He then snarled where their dicks were and I croaked "in my asshole".� He kept jerking my head so hard as he asked "What do you want you fucking whore!"� "Tear my asshole in two � I'm a fucking goddamn sluttttt!"� I felt my eyes bulge open feeling their dicks punch hard into my belly.� My shit hole then exploded wildly spasming as my womb shredded flooding my veins with scalding ecstasy.� I felt my head jerked viciously and my asshole pounded as wave after wave of crushing bliss shattered me.� They pounded me throughout my long orgasm prolonging it.� I cried in pained pleasure when Joseph roughly pulled his dick out my spasming asshole.� I watched him walk over to Denise and fall in front of her his dick waving soaked in my asshole.� He snarled at her� "Suck it clean you fucking GODAMN NIGGER!" she gripped his shaft and lunged on his dick and twisted and bobbed hard sucking my asshole off his thick cock.� "What does taste like NIGGER!"� She sucked hard for another ten bobs and then popped her mouth off and with a sibilant moan "Like candy!"�� They continued to rape us to more orgasms.� I loved how Joshua pulled his dick roughly out my asshole when Joseph went to fuck Denise's shit hole and I felt him guiding his thick twelve inch dick down my perineum and then I could feel my groin lifted slightly as he used his heels to get purchase and with one savage stroke impaled my womb with his dick soaked in my asshole.� I cried out in perfect pleasure as his dick pounded my tight cunt knowing it was creamed to the base in my shit juice soaking my cunt hole in my asshole and watching Celeb begin to fuck Denise the same way in turn when Joseph came back to me.� Watching him slap Denise's perfect face so hard over and over again and ripping her head around cruelly by his grip in her hair making it a fucking mess.�� His dick going straight to her pussy from her ass.� Denise's face was constantly grimacing and from being slapped viciously as she cried out in pleasure at her pain from her slapped face and vicious head jerks.� Celeb barked at her "I'm fucking your black cunt with my dick from your asshole Nigger!� What do you think about that you goddamn fucking Nigger!"� He slapped her twice so hard her face exploded to the side.� "I lovvvveeee it Celeb � put your dick back in my asshole (he did and pounded her hard for a minute) � put it back in my black cunt�Fuck this Nigger's cunt good Celeb!"� She groaned so hard when he slipped his dick soaked in her ass back into her cunt and savaged her womb with his thick dick head.� We both cummed hard several more times.� I was shattered and watched the brothers get Denise on her knees and jerk their thick white cocks and soak her face in their hot cum.� I loved seeing their bodies judder as semen spasmed up their foot long shafts.� Joshua and Celeb blasted her face with their cum soaking it.� It was so beautiful seeing her dark black face coated heavily in white semen dripping off her chin and jaw line.� Joseph shot his load into her stiffish disarrayed hair.� I weakly kneed over and cleaned her face and licked the cum out of her hair.� I love cum in black women's hair.� "White" hair tends to soak it up where it beads up in black hair for my pink tongue to lick out.

We now have something that is again only something you do:� introspection.� This is so cool.� Laura with the discovery of the photo begins to reflect and ruminate over her past.� In the past Laura was really into some hard core bdsm.� She has left this behind (unfortunately).� What I really like about this is the fact that I know exactly what she is thinking.� I was there in a way during the glorious fucks that were seeped in bdsm.� Most stories in online erotica can't even begin to explore this kind of territory.� Since the vast majority of stories are one shot stories you simply don't have the past to do this.� Even if a character had this past the writer could not really convey exactly what the character would be feeling.� They would just be words on the page.� It would be a plot twist that would have not depth.� Other stories that have length to them simply don't explore anything that is complex.� The stories are simple in their construction and have no real length of time to them.� What Laura is reminiscing occurred in the past.� That is pretty amazing that I can say that about an online story.� Laura is able to reflect on a facet of her life that she no longer partakes of.� This is like life in many ways.� We all grow and change in ways that makes one leave or embrace new facets to life.� I was sorry to see Laura abandon her bdsm ways but it made sense to the life she is now leading.� I am having to smile at Laura and her self observations.�� She finds people to be "weird and twisted".� This is true for many things that we do not embrace ourselves.� I used to be against anal fisting because it was "gay" and it was like leave that to the male homosexuals.� It was weird until I was seduced into it myself and now I try to seduce other women to it.� I have smiled at myself.� If I think it is weird then it is weird.� I think that is a human trait that what we like and embrace is normal and other things we don't embrace are weird.� Nice insight.

I can understand her not wanting to hurt Makeeda except she would not be hurting Makeeda.� I can see Makeeda with La'Tonya and Belissa as they tortured orgasm after orgasm from her writhing, pained filled screams filling their torture chamber over the garage.� I know Makeeda would be quickly back for more.� I like the tension this causes between Laura and Makeeda.� I like seeing the balance they strike.� This is how relationships work.� We are all different and it takes work to bring happiness to relationships because it entails the negotiations and compromises that you show.� Makeeda is frustrated by the lack of success she has had with the direct approach and is trying a flanking maneuver to get her way.� Again you are the only author to show this.� Other stories the sex simply happens with women in perfect sync and harmony.� New partners this is easy because you want to fuck but after you become lovers with a history this dynamic must begin to surface and you acknowledge it.� I like how you bring this out with Makeeda and even with Laura's other lovers.� The stories are so much more than sex.� I love that half of the story is about how they interact and evolve in their relationships.� I also like reading Laura wondering about her love of kink.� She suppresses it where I embrace it.� I still have limits but I do love it.� I love pain but no blood, true bodily harm and no closed fist.� A few times I have gotten in over my head and had to put an immediate stop to the festivities and most of the time get the hell out of there.� But I do sometimes wonder about my love of kink like Laura.� Why do I love to be sexual demeaned.� I so love to be slapped, spit in the face, hair pulled and loved raped.� I love to be called a slut and white whore.� Outside of the bedroom I want total respect but in it I am totally willing to go for it.� I was loved by my parents totally and was not abused when I grew up.� I took to sex when I was seduced and deflowered willingly.� I was soon introduced to the rough sex and loved it.� I craved the degrading and rough sex.� It made me so hot and feel like a total slut.� But sometimes even now I wonder about it.� Why?� It is kind of illogical.� I will think about it, and then shrug.� I like what I like I guess.� I wish Laura could embrace this about herself but I totally understand it.� I have seen people used for a toilet and men simply destroyed in total sadism and loving it.� No thank you!� I will leave that to them and Laura will leave the bdsm to women like me.� I can see this as being tough for her though.� She wants to leave her kink behind and her archangel wants it hardcore.� I have loved watching her squirm and will love watching it again.� Plus, I get the feeling that Makeeda is going to get her wish to some degree.� The photo on the bed is kind of saving, Laura we are going to deal with this subject this time.� Plus, I love to watch Laura squirm because she is blasted cute doing it.

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I like how this story is talking about so many dynamics of relationships.� How facets of the past and work dynamics affect relationships.� I so love how my angels use work to get new pussy.� I have always been open to using a situation to get a woman to give you sex when she might not have without some coercion.� So many women have let man's world brain wash them into not accepting lesbian sex when all women should be craving and seeking it out.� The religions hate gay sex so much because it strips them of control and the patriarchal societies that sets up their religious systems.� Frankie had been going it solo when Dacie sold her half of the business when she decided to retire and move with her new female love.� Dodie has helped out with the finances at first to help her get her business really going.�� About a year ago she went in with Sally who had inherited her father's dance studio about two and half years ago.� She was twenty-six and an awesome dancer but could not run a business.� She had come to Frankie for help and Frankie checked things out and thought it a great opportunity.� Sally, a very pretty red head, was really excited with the offer by Frankie to become a partner of her dance studio.� Then Frankie explained to her that she needed to get completely close to her business partner.� Sally was shocked and wanted to storm out Frankie told us but she needed the money.� Frankie told us how funny Sally looked warring with herself.� Needless to say, she took Frankie's offer.� Now Sally is a raging lesbo slut who is constantly seeking women to fuck and loves seducing newbies and converting them to the gay and bi life style.

Frankie and Sally are generous employers offering top money and benefits to their dancers and office help.� They have the same policy as Frankie has with Sally.� They most get totally close to their best employees.� They lose employees when they go off with each other or fall in love with one of the women coming to Frankie or Sally's dance studio.� Not much a problem usually because a lot of lesbians and bi sluts are attracted to the arts and they are dying to get into their employment.� Usually.� There is a woman that has been doing hip-hop as the basis of her training routine.� She has developed her own brand.� She is also a great jazz dancer.� Her name is De'shante.� She is black with a golden hue to her skin and light red hair that is stylishly cut.� She is about five-seven� and built like a Giselle.� She is lean and super tone with cute A cup titties.� She had been doing her classes at some of the YCMA in the mainly urban black areas.� She had heard that Frankie was willing to host different types of classes.� She did not know of Frankie's tastes it was obvious.� She was an instant hit and was doing three classes a week and then doing a jazzercise class and was learning Yoga and Ti-Chi from Jennifer.� Her clients loved her (many a lot and frustrated at her lack of interest).� She was working as a clerk during the day but was wanting to move to dance full time.� She had two girls fifteen and twelve.� She had her first kid when she had been sixteen.� She had developed her routine to get her figure back and keep her body extremely toned.� She asked Frankie if she could come and work full time.� Frankie had been wet for months wanting her but did not want to force anything.� She is a big money maker for the studios.� She told her stay after class Wednesday when they shut the studio down at five thirty.�

I had helped install a video system for security reasons.� The system is also used to tape dancers for later analysis to help them improve.� One other very important reason is to give the staff the opportunity to be voyeurs when they wanted to watch the fucking that was often happening in the studio.� Sally wants the same setup in her studio.� Frankie has expanded and has rooms for one on one training and private tutoring with an area to work out and a large sofa with oversized horizontal cushions.� Large enough for comfortable fucking.� Frankie's office is large with several sofas, and nice plush chairs.� Also, she has a large room behind the office with a huge special built bed setup like a Japanese geisha whore bed.� The cameras are IP based so I was in another room watching the office with the several cameras setup in the ceiling and one on the wall looking at the desk area.� Frankie knows I love to watch and made sure I could be there.� The cameras are high end high def which gives me a great picture on the 24" monitor I was using.� I can move the cameras some.� I was hoping to get in some good masturbation and later new black pussy.� I smiled when De'shante came in fresh from a shower wearing shorts and a cutoff top showing her slender frame and taunt belly.� She had no bra on and her nipples clearly showed up but were not erect.� She was smiling and comfortable.� She was with the girls.� She was oblivious to the hunger all over Frankie and Sally's face.� Frankie told her what an asset she was and she would love to have her full time.� De'shante was anxious to quite her regular job and become a dance instructor full time.� Sally then told her that to be a full time employee that De'shante had to show her and Frankie that she was able to perform all the "dances" required to be part of the team.� De'shante was confused until Sally slowly moved over and sat beside her.� Sally began to stroke her hair and kissed her shoulder.� I had to smile when she stiffened and looked stern.� She asked in a miffed tone with some trembling in her voice "What happens if I refuse!"� Frankie told her that all would remain as it is.� She would continue to do contract / session work.� She was free to say no.� She could leave now and nothing would change.� They all set in silence for a minute or so.� Sally continued to stroke her arm softly and kissed her shoulder and now moved up to her neck and her soft lips nipped De'shante softly.� De'shante softened visibly.� Sally murmured "I want to eat your black pussy so bad ba-bee� � I'll make you cum so hard De'shante.� "

De'shante shivered at the hot words and soft kisses.� De'shante looked from Frankie to Sally slowly as if seeing them for the first time in a new sexual light.� I could read her body so easily.� She wanted the job of course but new fuck hunger was forming deep in her belly.� The possibilities now opening to her were awakening the bi / lesbian slut in all of us.� Sally murmured into De'shante's neck and ran her fingers through her shoulder length reddish hair.� She told them she had never made love to a woman before.� Sally asked her softly "You have wanted to.� Haven't you?"� De'shante didn't answer.� Frankie then told her to call and let her oldest, Destiny, know she would be home very late.� It was so cool to watch her moving as if in a dream getting her phone out her purse and call her daughter and tell her that mommy had to care take of something.� I could tell her daughter easily accepted the explanation.� I am sure De'shante has needed some cock from time to time.� I was cursing the angle of the cameras some but was happy I could watch.� Eventually they would move the loving to the bedroom and I could come in and watch through the one way mirrors.� De'shante was limpid waiting to be taken.� Her tight top showed her now rock hard nipples, poking out the thin material showing her arousal.� Frankie stood up and slowly stripped as De'shante looked with wide eyes as she shook slightly.� Sally had on a tight dance leotard that she pulled down her shoulders and then down her arms.� She pulled them down her full c-cup tits spilling out her large areolas and swollen nipples thick and long.� She pulled De'shante's top off.� They were both nude above the waist.� Frankie was totally nude and was stepping around her desk.� Sally tilted De'shante's head over and started to kiss her with wet, noisy kisses.� De'shante's body shook and her mouth opened wide as Sally slide her tongue deep into her mouth and their nostrils flared while their tongues now wildly dueled in new love.� De'shante arms had come up to embrace Sally and their bodies melded as tits mashed and nipples poked.� Frankie sat on the sofa and started to kiss and stroke De'shante's shoulders, back and neck.� By now De'shante was moaning and wiggling.� They broke their kiss and De'shante was breathing heavily.� Frankie turned her head and kissed her deeply as they now embraced.� Bodies wallowed hard as tits wiggled and mashed.� Frankie's full b-cup tits with large areolas mashed hard into De'shante's nipples, dark and long with small areolas.� She was whimpering now.

Sally had stripped and quickly worked De'shante's pants off and I know their shaved cunts was filling the room with thick female musk.� Frankie passed De'shante back to Sally. De'shante kissed Sally deeply.� It was hot because it was De'shante that excitedly mated their mouths.� They kissed sloppy and Sally broke their kiss and tilted De'shante's head over and latched onto her throat and gave her a vicious hickey as De'shante wailed and bucked in helpless pleasure.� Frankie gripped her head and tilted her head over the other way and got her pulse point in her lips and now gave De'shante her own hickey as she groaned gutturally in hungry slut love.� Sally had slide to the floor and pushed De'shante back while pulling her ass forward.� Her cunt swollen and exposed.� She wasted no time with a moan she lowered her mouth to De'shante's cunt and sank her face deep into her wet twat and was sucking her clit with short sucks.� I could hear her sounds of Sally munching with her head rocking as she munched clit and cunt meat.� De'shante's eyes were wide as she wallowed her ass to drive her cunt up into the pale white woman devouring her pussy.� Sally stroking her hips and belly pressing in above her clitoral hood to expose her rock, hard, shiny nubbin she was now giving broad flat tongue strokes before swallowing deep into her mouth for deep throat sucks.� Frankie had moved in and was inhaling her nipples with hard sucks.� She worked De'shante's entire soft a-cup tits into her mouth one at a time to hard suck and tongue slap.� De'shante had quickly started sweating.� Her body still heated from her workout and hot shower.� Frankie rose up to kiss her deeply before working her tits again.� Sally had worked her slit and cunt hole for a while but was back at her clit and was rocking her head sucking and munching on soaking wet clit and red cunt meat.� De'shante had one hand on each of their heads and was clawing their scalps.� "Suck my cunt you fucking Lilly white Bitch! � Unnggghhhhh! � Oh god, please don't stop�don't stop�don't stop!"� She was crying out with whinnies that were rising in pitch as her need for orgasm was so plain to see.� Suddenly, her body started bucking wildly as she began to flip and jackknife.� She groaned so gutturally with rib rattling moans.� Her head was thrashing forward and slamming back into the sofa back as she cawed deep chest moans of shattering ecstasy.� Frankie kept her in place with her body pressing in as she supper sucked the nipple buried in her mouth.�

They sucked her to a long devastating orgasm.� She was bleary eyed now as Sally finally sat back her face covered in cum.� Frankie got on the floor between De'shante's thighs and softly licked De'shante's belly and thighs letting her clit rest.� Sally got up on the sofa sitting on her legs and leaning in to kiss De'shante deeply letting her new lover taste her own cunt in Sally's mouth.� Soon, Frankie sensed her time had come and mashed her face into De'shante's fuck hole and was slithering her tongue deep up her wet, sodden cunt.� De'shante surged pressing her back into the sofa as Sally was now bent sucking in her tits munching on them with her lips and grazing teeth.� She loves to be rough.� De'shante's head was thrashing with both her hands on Frankie's head grinding her head into her flowing pussy.� Sally rose up and grabbed De'shante's head with both hands and brought their mouths tight, heads tilted.� De'shante's hands came up to grip Sally's head as they kissed so deeply.� Frankie was working De'shante's clit with lots of tongue lapping and short sucks with more tongue strokes and then stiffening her tongue and wagging her head to slither her tongue all over De'shante's dark clitoral hood.� She is golden brown but her labia lips and clitoral hood are deep dark brown.� Suddenly she sucked her entire upper cunt into her mouth and pulled her head back as she hard sucked until De'shante's pussy was pulled out her mouth with a wet, obscene slurping pop.� She dove back down and swallowed her upper cunt again and repeated over and over.� I think the eight such suck did it.� Sally had sat back to watch and De'shante hands were again clawed into Frankie's scalp as she humped desperately.� She suddenly screamed FFFFUUUUCCCCKKKKKKKK!! and cummed with violent lurching spasms as her cunt spasmed cunt juice all over Frankie's face.� She had four killing spasms of shattering bliss.� She was spent when she now hitched and lurched with strong aftershocks.�

Frankie had got on the sofa and was kissing Sally letting her taste De'shante in her mouth.� De'shante recovered some and looked over at Sally with pure slut lust.� She slithered to the floor and got between Sally's thighs and pushed them out her face lowering until her tongue began to lap and wiggle over Sally's meaty clitoral hood.� Her tongue alive when she wiggled it and stiff as a board when she lapped furiously.� Frankie sat back to watch her partner get pleasured by their new employee.� De'shante worked her head up and down working on Sally's clit and now up and down her slit over and over before again concentrating on her clit again.� Frankie was fingering her clit and nipples with pure happiness on her face.� I was watching De'shante slurp and tongue Sally's pussy.� Sally was moaning continuously and her head lulled down her sweaty hair lank.� I felt electricity surge through my body when De'shante surged her head forward and swallowed Sally's clit into her mouth. She worked her head in a rocking motion sucking hard with cheek hollowing sucks.� Her head rising to tongue stroke soaking wet pussy and then moving forward and sucking Sally's clit again.� She was working hard.� She now lowered her head her tongue a wiggling worm that slithered up Sally's cunt hole making her shudder her head lulled over kissing Frankie.� De'shante was mashing her face deep into Sally's vulva to flutter her tongue deep up her fuck hole before moving up and munching on Sally's upper cunt and sucked it into her mouth rocking her head back and forth stretching her hood out without popping it.� Mashing her head down to work her clit deep in her mouth before moving back again to stretch out her cunt meat in her mouth.� She released the clit in her mouth for a moment "Cum in my mouth you Lilly white Bitch! � Cum in this Nigga's mouth�this ghetto cunt is going to take you to heaven Bitch!"� She sucked Sally's clit between her lips and rapidly sucked in and out her lips.� Sally wailed and began to flip and jackknife violently as shattering waves of bliss throttled her body.� I felt like a porn director watching all this through the cameras.� Really hot.� Changing cameras full screen to get the best view.

Sally's tits flopped and swirled as her orgasm throttled her.� She finally spent herself and De'shante stood up on her knees and husked to Frankie "Spread your legs you fucking Jewish bitch!� Let this Nigger show you how much she is loving munching on white pussy!"� Frankie needed no further prompting and De'shante fell on her pussy wiggling her face deep into her slit and running her tongue up and down her slit. �I know her vulva was flaring showing De'shante's tongue working up and down Frankie's pussy.� She used all the talents she had on Sally to quickly suck her off as Frankie wailed and flopped and Sally sucked on her nipples and kissed her upper body.� De'shante was lightly tonguing Frankie's clit who recovers like me, real quick.� She sensed this and soon sucked her clit back into her mouth.� Frankie gurgled and her groin once again began its instinct fuck hump rising her pussy into De'shante's devouring mouth.� I watched De'shante insert two fingers into Frankie's soupy cunt and begin to pump her sodden folds as she ate Frankie out.� I saw Sally look up into the cameras and wave me to come in.� I hissed being totally nude.�� I had been watching only gently masturbating enjoying the show.� I was now on one foot hoping around trying to get my panties back on.� I was soon dressed and went down the hall.� I didn't want De'shante thinking she was just an object.� Wanted her fully in the fold before she sees how we are all totally sluts.�� I thought about it walking and decided to act shocked so De'shante would not know right now she had been spied on.� I opened the door and gasped.� The gasp was part act and part feeling my brain being hammered with fuck musk making me instantly even wetter.� I was watching De'shante to see how she reacted.� She had risen up her face glistening with cunt slime.� She was only up for about ten seconds before sinking back down and siphoning Frankie's clit back into her mouth and pressing in her lips disappearing in her vulva.� Her head rocking as she worked Frankie's clit and slit.

I stripped hurriedly and pushed Sally into the sofa and sucked her clit deep into my mouth and started to suck with all my skills my hunger at a feverish pitch.� I would tongue her clit with my tongue tip and then move in to suck her clit hard and then do more tongue wiggling sometimes using my index finger to vibrate her clit making her hump and lurch.� I sucked her good as she started chanting OMG over and over as I sucked her and kissed her clit and cunt hole with love French kisses my tongue lathing her clit and exploring her sodden cunt yet again.� I pressed with my thumb behind her clitoral hood to expose her little berry clit fully and loved sucked with rhythmic sucks.� I could hear Frankie chuffing getting close and Sally was rising with her.� Within a minute they both were cawing out their crushing bliss as my head was jammed� back with Sally's desperate heaves as I felt her hand slam and claw my scalp pushing my face harder into her pussy as I deep throat sucked her clit feeling her cunt soak my lower face and throat with her erupting cunt.� I finally rose up when she was spent and saw that De'shante had risen up too her face soaked in Frankie's cunt nectars.� We eyed each other and instinctively leaned into each other and locked lips our tongues dueling hotly tasting our lovers cunts in each other mouths.� We clutched and I whimpered as she pivoted me around and pushed me to the ground.� She was about to go down on me when Frankie told everyone to head into the bedroom.� I was frustrated as hell getting up and following her in.� She went over to the drawers and pulled out a copy of my favorite strap-on and threw it to me as she handed Sally her ten inch cock and she got in her eleven inch dick.� De'shante was calmly watching us.� She got on the bed and fell to her knees.� Frankie asked her if she had ever been gang� banged and she said "no"� with a low trembling voice.� Frankie said "We're going to fuck you like a ghetto Nigger De'shante.� We're going to fuck your cunt, asshole and mouth at the same time you fucking Black Bitch!"� De'shante's dark eyes were dilated I knew.� Her body love shaking at Frankie's promise of hard, gangbanging love.� We moved in, her silence signaling her consent.�

I felt my frustration ebbing away with the thoughts of raping De'shante.� She swallowed Frankie's cock and was undulating and swirling her head sucking hard her cheeks hollowing out.� She did Frankie for a minute before swallowing mine with heated eyes looking up at me as she bobbed and took my dick to the back of her throat.� She was drooling spit and lubricating our cocks so she could pump them and suck with sloppy head.� She soon did Sally and went back and forth between us her mouth sucking hard her sweaty hair stiffish and jerking.� Sally gripped her head and titled it over and roughly pushed her cock into her cheek and roughly pulled it out with a wet pop.� All De'shante did was moan and open her mouth wide to be mouth fucked more.� Frankie now barked at her to open her mouth wide and keep her hands at her side.� She became doe like with her big eyes looking up at us.� We now skull fucked De'shante as she choked and cawed out spit as we jammed her throat and rocked her head back.� Frankie took her cock and began to cock whip her face as she moaned louder.� We all now cock whipped her up turned face her golden face showing our cruel strikes.� Her throat choking and making obscene noises as we fucked her open mouth.� She was groaning constantly now.� Frankie looked at me and I knew it was time to penetrate her.� I got on the bed and they positioned De'shante over me and I guided my cock to her pussy and rubbed it back and forth over her cunt hole and clit as she sagged onto her palms her face above me looking down with need.� Her employers pushed her down as I flexed my hips and my cock sank fully up her cunt.� She groaned so hard and sagged down as our mouths mated and our tongues twined in new love my cock now slowly pumping in and out her wet cunt.� I heard Sally observe how her cunt was clinging to my cock all red and wet.� I had started soft and loving but was ramping up slamming my cock hard into her womb as she grunted and groaned.� She rose up on her palms sweat dripping off her body onto my throat and tits.� Her body juddering with my rapid dick thrusts and then slowing to love stroke her cunt.� I felt Sally moving and stopped and reached up spreading her hard ass cheeks.

She looked me in the eyes with slut slit eyes.� She did not move.� "What do you want you fucking black cunt!" Sally barked at her.� She grunted back "I want your big white dick in my black ass!"� Her face scrunched up as I knew Sally was pushing her dick into De'shante's butt hole grunting out as De'shante's ass� greedily ate Sally's dick.� Soon Sally had her cock buried in her butt hole and we began to pound her fuck holes.� We fucked her hard and deep her body lurching forward and her soft titties rubbing all over mine feeling her stiff nipples dragging over my tits and nipples.� We fucked with punishing strokes her face slashing and demented moans of pure anal pleasure filling the room.� She grunted out how she loved getting fucked in the ass.� Sally then slammed her cock harder into her ass and De'shante grunted out how she liked being dp'ed.� Looking up close at De'shante's face I felt my clit throb seeing it slash constantly now.� Her head thrashed and she cawed to Sally "Oh god, I love it � I can feel both of your cocks in me rubbing�oh god! � keep fucking me!"� We fucked her hard for another couple of minutes as Sally arched her back to slam her dick hard and deep up De'shante's shit hole.� Sally now pulled out and I watched her walk around as Frankie got on her knees and slammed her eleven inches fully up De'shante's ass with a savage thrust that made De'shante cry out in pleasure.�� She surged hard now back into the cock that Frankie was slow pumping in and out her ass with deep thrusts.� Frankie working six inches out and punching back in balls deep into De'shante's shit hole.� Sally sank to her knees and waved her cock in front of De'shante's face.� Her eyes widened and she grunted out she didn't do ATM.� I stroked her face and Sally whispered to her pppplllleasssseeee.� I loved fucked her cunt as Frankie slow fucked her asshole.� Our cocks slow stroking love into her fuck holes to seduce her silly objections to ATM.� She looked up at Sally's sweaty face and then back at the dick in front of her mouth thickly covered in her asshole cream.� Sally whimpered pppllllleeaaassseeee again and I whispered croaked to De'shante who looked down at me and I looked her hard in the eyes "Do it De'shante � Do it � you'll love the taste of your asshole � it will taste so sweet � you'll love the taste of your shit juice�I promise."� She slowly looked up at Sally again who was looking at her with a pleading look her hand at the base of her cock, pushing it at De'shante's lips.� "Pleaaasssseeeee De'shante � please ba-beeeee" she softly husked.� De'shante lowered her gaze to the cock just in front of her mouth, her head moving some to see her ass cream thickly smeared all over the dick fresh out her ass.� She moaned and her head moved forward� her mouth opening wide.� De'shante moved her head forward taking Sally's dick deep into her before clamping her lips tight on the thick shaft.� She undulated her head as she pumped the shaft up and down her tongue savoring for the first the time the taste of sweet shit juice.� She now began to twist her head as she slow sucked her mouth up and down the cock in her mouth.� De'shante's lips clenched tight on the thick cock that was riding around on her tongue flooding her taste buds with the taste of her sweet shit juice.� She moaned loudly now her eyes getting dreamy as she sucked now with slow bobs of her head.� She started slow and she raised a hand to grip the base and began to suck harder and pumping her head with vigor.� She had lifted Sally's cock and was licking up the shaft to get all her shit cream.� Her licks slow and obscene her pink tongue slowly licking up and then swallowing the bulbous dick head and twisting her head hard right and left.� She cleaned her shit cream off totally.� She moaned as she sucked as her fuck holes were still being fucked expertly.� I asked her if she licked the taste of her asshole and she grunted "Fuck yeah!"� I was in love.�

We pounded her so hard.� Sally and Frankie taking turns to rape her asshole and let her clean her shit off their cocks.� She bucked and wallowed all over me as she cummed so hard.� Then we all laid on our backs as she did cowgirl on whomever she wanted her little soft titties whipping up and down.� She was whooping and cawing out her pleasure.� She was pounding her asshole now dismounting and sitting between our legs or by our hips and bending down to eagerly suck her asshole off our cocks.� She was moving to remount Sally and impale her shitter again when Sally guided her ten inch dick to De'shante's pussy hole and jammed up.�� Her free hand gripped De'shante's hip and jerked down impaling De'shante's womb with her dick soaked in De'shante's asshole.� She went crazy fucking with wild bouncing and cummed within a few minutes in wild whoops and thrashing head jerks.� I loved how her soft , small titties jerked up and flopped down on her chest.� We did her spoon rolling her right and left as we took her fuck holes and she sucked our cocks clean.� We fucked three more orgasms out her fuck holes exhausting her.

I eagerly took her place and gagged feeling my cunt and bunghole pierced with big, thick pricks that immediately began to fuck me hard and deep.� I was in heaven being dp'ed by women I love.� Soon Sally was on her knees in front of me as I sucked my ass off her cock with loving moans of pleasure.� I cooed out how I loved the taste of my shit hole on her dick.� They dp'ed me hard and I cummed so hard and they switched up and I mounted Sally and Frankie was ram fucking my butt with her elven inch dick.� She did atm on me and I swirled my head and loved how my sweaty hair felt as it herked and jerked.� She remounted me and fucked me hard in counter time to Sally's thrusts into my flowing twat.� I felt Frankie grip my ass and begin to rip her dick out my asshole and violently thrust it fully up my ass with a savage thrust and ram fuck me over and over.� She fucked me balls deep making me gutturally moan.� I cried out when she began to again rip her dick out my gapped asshole and then torpedo my butt hole again and again ripping her dick out my spasming butt hole and ramming in fully making me howl in pleasure.� I was gurgling when she pulled out and kneed around to my head.� I was looking at her cock getting ready to swallow it with happiness when I felt a big thick cock head pressing into my sphincter.� I cried out feeling De'shante pushing my strap-on into my butt and began to pump my a-hole.� I lunged on Frankie's cock and slurped and pumped my head drooling spit off the cock fucking my throat.� De'shante gripped my ass cheeks to help slam me back into her and Sally's thrusts. �Their dick heads juddering over each other deep in my belly.� Frankie was gripping my hair to fuck my throat.� She suddenly got up and walked out of sight and De'shante's golden hued body was on her knees in front of me.� My dick soaked in my shit juice. �"Suck your asshole off my cock you blond bitch!" she grunted out.� I lunged on her dick and sucked my awesome tasting ass off her dick.� She flexed her hips as I bobbed sliding her dick up and down my tongue as I sucked with lips glued to her dick pumping my mouth.� My head lurched harder suddenly when Frankie roughly invaded my butt hole again.� Within ten strokes of her and Sally's cocks up my fuck holes and De'shante pumping my mouth as I sucked hard made me cum so fucking hard.� I screamed around the cock in my throat as I heaved up and down my tits and belly wallowing all over Sally's sweat soaked body.� I went multiple as I had all three fuck holes fucked so hard and good.� I had like seven killing spasms of shattering bliss as I finally just kept my mouth open so De'shante could fuck it as I drooled and choked out spit in great slimy strands.� I forced my eyes to stay open and look up at De'shante.� Her face snarling as she pumped her hips hard, spiking her dick so hard into the back of my throat over and over.� I could see the sweat splattering off her face and tits as her body flexed to pound her dick into my throat.� I spasmed so wildly feeling pure fucking bliss burning in my veins.� I was in pure fucking ecstasy and love.� My body flipped and jackknifed until I was spent.� I was lying on Sally's body and we kissed deeply.� I love it when I am lying on a body as I kiss you deeply feeling the sweat pouring off my body from another great fuck.

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I like this next part.� We see that Makeeda definitely has a plan ["Oh, you found it." Makeeda said, appearing from nowhere, from around the corner, interrupting Laura's uncomfortable reflections. ��Laura was still holding the picture in one hand. She turned her head, seeing her standing in the bedroom doorway. Makeeda was stunning to her at this moment. True, she had seen her in the kitchen briefly when she came into the house, passing it on her way to the bedroom to change. But at this instant it was as if she was seeing her for the first time, perhaps the first time even in months.]� I think it is cute and a little humorous this little moment.� Makeeda is pouncing like a panther.� She has left the photo and she is wasting no time what so ever to make sure the hook has not only been taken but also sunk deep.� It is so obvious she wants hard kink loving and is willing to work for it.� I love how you show relationships and how we work sometimes deviously to get our way.� It is these subtle interactions that I so love reading in your stories.� Then you show the love that Laura feels for Makeeda.� I love how you just show that even though they have been lovers for a while now Laura still feels that special bond with Makeeda that just hits you sometimes.� You are the only author in erotica that actually shows any true emotion in their stories.� I have never seen anything like this in another story.� I think to some degree it is not possible for it to ring true because one needs time and stories to show the love that exists between two women and then be able to show this.� One shots are simply incapable of this.� I love how you make the reader feel this emotion.� I know my pussy would be spasming at this moment.� Last weekend I went over to Dodie and Frankie's early Saturday since I had not seen them in a week or so.� I got their and saw Joseph's car and two others and I guessed who.� I let myself in and I was right.� Frankie was straddling Joshua as he pounded her pussy hard and Celeb was on his knees behind plundering her asshole.� Frankie was lost in the dp fuck her head resting on Joshua's shoulder moaning like the whore she is her whole body juddering with the power of their strokes burying their pricks fully up her fuck holes savagely over and over.� My pussy was wet almost immediately as I started to strip.� I went to find Dodie.� I found her in their bed room sitting on the edge of the bed.� Her legs hanging down leaning back some on her palms. Joseph had one foot up on the bed slowly pumping his eleven inches fully up her asshole pulling out mostly and then shoving it in sensually.� Dodie was keening moaning.� Gods it simply struck me how beautiful she is.� At first Joann and Maria were jealous of her because she is Hollywood beautiful.� Her dusky skin soaked in sweat, her jet black hair lank with sweat and swaying with her body juddering as her asshole was fucked expertly.� Her perfect face slashed so beautifully.� I was reminded again how lucky I am to have in her my life.� Especially when Joseph pulled his dick out her asshole as she groaned so hard and Joseph asked her what she wanted.� "To suck my asshole off your perfect cock, Joseph" she cawed. She adjusted her body and lowered her head.� His dick soaked in her ass juice and their sweat waving in front of her.� Her mouth opening wide and swallowing his dick soaked in her shit juice.� Her loud moans and hard head pumps sliding his dick into her throat.� I cried out my head rocking back as I gripped my temples and my cunt pulsed juice down my now naked thighs.� Gods, Dodie is so fucking hot.� The way she gripped his hips to help pump her head hard her lank hair jerking.� Then licking up his cock from all sides and then twisting her head only on his thick bulbous dick head as Joseph groaned deep in his chest.� Her perfect face dripping sweat and covered in her shit juice.

I am constantly bemoaning how other authors never tell me much about their women.� I might get their bust size (large or small) and hair color and that is about it.� I can't see these women if the author won't tell me about them.� At first it did not bother me but now it drives me nuts.� I want to have a good idea on their looks.� I have eyesight and want the visual cues.� I am thankful that one author does give me the visual cues I so need to really get into the story.� Here you give me five pieces of information of Makeeda's face:� eyes, mouth, tongue, teeth and her hair.� You even tell us how she has it tied back.� What a freaking difference.� No details and you give me a plethora of details.� This helps me to see Makeeda and thus get into the story so much more.� I wonder over and over why other authors don't do this.� Don't they want to draw the reader into the story.� I need more than a plot and bland words on a page.� You give me the details that many times I have masturbated to these stories and cummed so fucking hard with the women in these stories.� Only your details allow me to do this.� Plus, you describe the woman herself.� The woman that she is that has nothing to do with her physical beauty.� You tell us so much about your woman. You do this with one word for me.� The word is "curtly".� I know many reading this must be going "Whaaat?"� The reason this word means so much is because of all the past history of this story.� We have a past that the current actions can be compared too.� Other stories that are all almost one-shots don't have this history.� So I read "curtly" I would go okay.� She has a sharp edge.� Here, with your story, it again confirms her personality that I have seen in six previous chapters, plus, other stories where she was in them giving us additional insights about Makeeda.� I think it is just so cool that something so small can confirm some basic facets of a character.� I have always found Makeeda to be sharped edge.� I have enjoyed reading your stories because you make your women so real.� Over the years Laura has been drawn to many different kind of women emotionally.� A lot of them have had this sharp edge.� Women like Randi, Yvette (at times), Deshona, Sholandra.� I love the fire but the sharpness is too much for me.� I love Dodie with all my heart but we can't really bind totally.� I never know when her sharp edge tongue will be nicking me.� She knows it but that is the reason she and Frankie are the ultimate archangels for each other. She cuts back.� Of course, I am not perfect.� I get all stiff and pissy when I am upset.� I have always loved how your women are so developed that we see their positive and negative sides.� Other stories rarely give me any depth.� Small one shots simply don't have the time and longer stories are really just one dimensional stories that setup a situation and give a plot but they always forget to develop their women I fear.� So sad.

Also, with this part we get again a contest of wills.� This is what happens in relationships.� We all want to get our way.� Again, most stories can't even attempt this because a one-shot does not have the history to do it.� If they tried it would be false feeling.� Only words in a story.� It takes the history of the past chapters and this back and forth occurring again.� This is not the first time that these women have had this contest.� Makeeda knows of Laura's past with BDSM and her joy in being a sadist.� She wants some.� In the past she has been thwarted in her efforts to get some hard core kink love.� I have been frustrated too because I love this kind of sex but I have admired the way Laura has deflected Makeeda and slowly bent her away from her initial desires and into more "normal" sex.� I love the fact that this comes up again and again.� You show the vagaries of life.� Sometimes Laura and sometimes Makeeda wins though not completely.� I am so happy when Makeeda does get roughed up but she is still not able to get Laura to give her what she fully wants.� I do wish that Laura would revisit her past and let it loose.� I am not that big of fan of doing rope work but I love receiving it.� I am hoping that she ties Makeeda up tight and still has some whips and works her lover over.� I can't remember what Laura still has.� It is funny how some lovers have found my love of such toys.� Almost all have died for it and I have delivered it for them.� I love hearing them scream and writhe in pain as I am giving them orgasms that split their pussies and assholes in two.� I am thinking here again just how lucky we are as readers to have these stories to read.� Stories that have great sex but also gives us great characters that are allowed to be alive and real.� We get so see genuine emotions and interplay between your characters.� You just don't get this with other authors.

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Seeing this interplay of wills just happened to me.� Sometimes I have to shake my head when I try to hold events off not sure someone(s) is really ready for new adventures so to speak.� Last week I got called by Kapri asking if I could take Rashonda and Chantal to a ROTC event Saturday morning.� She and Diamond were going to a family event and the girls didn't want to miss the training to advance their status.� I agreed even though I was planning to go to the law firm that Joshua and Celeb's had landed at to help plan the network modernization they were pushing to make a name for themselves at the firm.� I am charging two hundred dollars an hour plus other benefits that only the brothers three can provide as I call them.� I was going to arrive at eight but pushed back to noon with the ROTC over at 10:00 and giving me time to take the girls home.� Saturday I picked the girls up at Chantal's house and by 10:05 I was on the way back to her house.� The girls started to whine that they had the whole weekend free and wanted to spend it with me.� Their mothers thought they were staying at a mutual friend's home .� I guess they were if staying with me.� I told them I had to go do some consulting work.� They wanted to know about it and I reluctantly told them I was going to Joshua and Celeb's new employment.� They immediately got excited.� I had regaled them with tales of their cocks and how they fucked me so good.� Plus, i had taken Kapri and Diamond a few times to them and I am sure they had gotten those details.� I hesitated about taking them but their incessant pleading wore me down.�

I knew Diamond was ready for their hard loving but I was not sure with these still twelve year old vixens.� I and others had fucked them hard and deep but the power of rugged built men who like to fuck hard is something else.� I was undecided about anything sexual with them but was desperately horny to get fucked hard.� I got to the law firm and the brothers let me in.� I had called to let them know I was five minutes out.� They looked at Chantal and Rashonda with obvious fuck hunger.� I gave them the evil eye and they backed down.� The girls were awed when we got to the fourth floor and saw the firm.� I was impressed.� Gold (I guess) overlay everywhere, marble, big furniture of obvious expense.� Joseph was waiting there.� I took him to the side immediately and told him I would skin him and his brothers alive if they did anything sexual to the girls without my express permission.�� I then went to the server rack and� got logged in.� I was soon lost in the matrix.� I simply fall into it and let it take me where it will as I learned their setup.� I lost track of the girls whom I had told to stay close.� I could not be distracted from my exploration I fear.� After two quick hours I was done and came back to reality.� Of course the minxes were not to be seen.� I went out to office suite I had left the brothers and of course the girls were there laughing and squealing at the attention they were receiving.� The brothers had removed their shirts showing their hard physics.� Rashonda was oooing over the twins doing a pec dance with their chests while Chantal was swinging on Joseph's arm squealing at his strength.� I just rolled my eyes.� The brothers are smart.� They know this was getting my charges horny and ready for fucking.� I could see it in their sultry eyes and the way they were slinking all over their hard bodies. I tried to be good.� I said it was time to go but the girls immediately started to plead that they wanted to stay and have "fun".� I sighed.

I called them over.� I looked them in the eyes and asked them softly if they wanted to fuck the brothers.� They did not hesitate or act chagrin.� Chantal merely nodded yes with fuck hunger in her eyes and Rashonda huskily breathed "yes."� I told them that these men liked to fuck hard.� I told them that if we stayed that they would fuck them just like Diamond.� I had to smile as their eyes dilated and breathing got more hoarse with excitement.� I made my decision.� When it is time to fuck it is time to make it happen.� I now knew the girls were ready emotionally to have their first het fucks.� While rough, the brothers are expert lovers who will so teach them the joy of great rough sex.� I smiled at them.� I then looked at the brothers.� "Take your clothes off but leave your boxers on and fuck Rashonda and Chantal like you would Diamond or me."� They did not hesitate a second.� They quickly kicked off their shoes, tore their socks off and jerked their pants down.� I wanted the girls to have the thrill of pulling their first live cocks out of their nest.� I wanted them to feel their thick shafts and the warmth as they pulled the brother's dicks out their boxers.� The underwear straining to hold their raging fully erect cocks.� I helped he girls get stripped nude as they moved like underwater knowing that were about to be fucked by adult males that were strong and skilled cocksmen.�� I loved how Chantal's tits had grown into soft conical tits with lovely areola's caped over them and bullet nipples made for sucking.� Rashonda's tits had swelled some and her areola's had become thick and almost rubbery with stiff thick nipples when aroused.� Their thick musk made my cunt gush as I stripped their panties down their slender legs.� They were moving as if in a dream looking at the bulging boxers.� I gently pushed forward and smiled as they simply stared at the massive cocks twitching in their nest ready to strike.� I had to smile as I stripped down and they simply stood transfixed.� I saw I needed to help move love forward.� I grabbed their hands and hooked their fingers underneath the boxers elastic bands.� Rashonda had a hand in each twins boxers and Chantal had her fingers underneath Joseph's elastic.� They were staring still at the massive cocks in their nest.� I helped them pull the boxers off their long, thick dicks that sprang free.� Chantal� just gasped and Rashonda gasped "Fuck!".�

I pushed them down onto their knees and husked to them "Suck their cocks you fucking goddamn Niggers!"� The spell was broken.� Their heads moved forward their thick black lips opening wide and sucking in hard white dicks.� Moans filled the room as the girls moaned tasting their first male cock.� The brothers groaned at how good the little minxes were sucking their dicks.� We had made sure the twelve year olds were taught proper techniques sucking our strap-ons.� How to suck, bob, use of hands and how to take thick cocks down their throats.� I want to teach as much and as soon as I can so women can experience all the pleasure possible in both giving and receiving.� The girls were sucking hard their lips clamped tight as their heads did short bobs on the dick heads.� Rashonda going right and left sucking on the twins bulbous dick heads.� They were lubricating the thick shafts drooling spit and spitting on them to get them wet to allow their petite fists to pump the shafts.� Their black hands so hot pumping thick, veined white dicks.� The brothers loved the spit and were telling the girls how nasty and hot they were.� I got on a plush two seat sofa and began to stroke my kitty and pump my tits moaning myself now.� The girls took the dicks to the back of their throats, twisted their heads and pumped fists on the shafts.� Their techniques varying as I had showed them.� I liked watching the twins poking their huge dick heads into Rashonda's cheeks demanding she suck their cock and not the cock in her mouth.� Back and forth she sucked spending a minute or two on a cock before she moved to the other one.� Joseph likes to control you when getting head and his large hands clenched in Chantal's scalp driving his dick into the back of her throat making obscene noises as spit roped and drooled out her mouth.

I barked out to the brothers "The little jungle bunnies suck good dick don't they?" to which the brothers croaked yes and fuck yeah!.� The girls sucked and bobbed hard.� The brothers were ready to take it to the next level.� Celeb laid down on the floor and got Rashonda straddled over him and he guided his thick dick to her slit and quickly worked into her fuck hole and started to stroke it in as Rashonda gurgled and groaned hard.� Joseph took Chantal to the main sofa and sat down and got her to straddle him and guided his dick into her cunt and surged up burying half his cock into her tight pussy as she cried out in ecstasy.�� She began to ride up and down her soft titties rocking up and down as she stroked her pussy on the thick cock pumping it.� I loved how her milky cum was already slavering his cock.� Their moans filled the room.� I watched Chantal's hungry pussy stretching out and now taking Joseph's cock fully up her cunt pounding her womb as she gurgled, moaned and thrashed her head.� Rashonda was having her pussy pounded by Celeb her body jolting forward with his powerful thrusts.� Her head rested on his shoulder constantly slashing in pleasure.� I watched for several minutes as their teenage pussies were pounded with hard cock that stretched out their tight twats and were slamming balls deep into their twelve year old bellies making them constantly whoop and groan like whores.� I was rubbing my muff and massaging my asshole knowing what was coming and was not disappointed.� Joshua got behind Rashonda on his knees and slapped her ass hard as she cried out in pain that is pleasure as she stilled.� Joshua spit into her asshole and massaged her rosebud with his thick dick head.� He pushed in some but did not penetrate her several times.� Rashonda turned her head and looked at him hotly.� "Fuck my black asshole, Joshua�Fuck this Nigger's ass good � make my ass cum Joshua � tear my black ass in two" she croaked to him encouraging the ravaging of her ass with his foot long, thick, white dick.� He penetrated her asshole with his thumb to loosen her rosebud up and pumped for a minute.� He then pushed his thick white shaft into her asshole sinking four inches into her butt.� She screamed in pain at the rough penetration.� She whimpered and moaned as tears leaked down her cheeks as he slowly pumped her shitter loosening up her asshole.� I loved watching her twelve year old ass bowing out, clutching his dick so tight as he worked her sphincter loose.� Chantal was whooping slamming her pussy down as Joseph pounded his cock up into her tight cunt.� The sounds of female bodies being pummeled by hard male bodies filled the room.� I moaned seeing Chantal lift up and settle to the floor quickly and lifted Joseph's waving cock above his stomach and latched her mouth to his massive organ and sucked his dick hard her head bobbing hard as she sucked her cunt off his cock and rushed to remount him roughly guiding his dick to her fuck hole and punching her groin down to impale her cunt fully.� She fucked hard her face now dripping sweat as she rode up and down her tits flopping.� Several times she got off to suck her cunt off his dick.

Rashonda was being buffeted by two thick dicks slamming deep into her teenage belly.� Her body jolting and shaking with the power of the twins slamming their bodies into hers to bury their pricks in her fuck holes.� She was moaning so gutturally and crying out in soul deep pleasure from the dicks pleasuring her cunt and shit hole.� I could feel my body tensing up with the need to cum.� Joshua pulled out her ass and moved quickly to her head and got on his knees and pushed his dick into her lips.� He moaned when her thick lips parted and she lunged her head forward and swallowed his dick, immediately pumping hard as she sucked and twisted her head.� I cummed hard at the atm show.� My groin was high in the air as my toes clenched in the sofa cushions pumping my twat high in the air as I screamed my pleasure working my clit and cunt with my fingers.� When I could focus again I watched first Chantal cum hard her pussy exploding on the dick ravaging it.� She wailed and jackknifed violently as Joseph gripped her ribs hard to slam her cunt hard down onto his savage upthrusts.� She was holding onto his shoulders her body violently shaking all over.� Then I heard Rashonda crying out with a guttural scream and she was violently flipping and jackknifing herself as the twins fucked her hard through her orgasm her body lurching forward with each savage thrust from their pricks spearing through her spasming cunt and sphincter.�

I started to fuck my asshole and my pussy together feeling my fingers rub against each other as I pushed in hard into my fuck holes.� I had to moan like a whore as I worked my squishing cunt and my asshole was making wet obscene noises as I felt my fingers soaked in my ass juice and running down my fingers.� I felt my womb flip as Joseph lifted Chantal up and worked his dick into her greedy asshole watching it sink into her bung hole her head rocking back as she screeched out fffuuucckkkkkk at the rough invasion.� Soon her asshole was stretched out and he was slamming his white dick in and out her dark black ass.� I was so fucking happy right now.� I watched Celeb push Rashonda off his prick and Joshua backed off and laid down on the floor holding his foot long prick up motioning Rashonda over who kneed over and straddled him.� His dick was creamed to the base in her asshole.� She reached down and took his cock in her small hand and rubbed it up and down her slit and then suddenly shoved her groin down impaling her womb on the dick that had just come out her asshole.� He savagely fucked her looping his arms around her and mashed her body to his.� He pounded her so hard her body jolting up as his twin gave him a few minutes to pound her womb with this bulbous dick head.� Chantal dismounted Joseph and falling to her knees and was now sucking her asshole off his cock moaning it tasted like dark chocolate.� While doing this, Celeb moved and invaded Rashonda' s shitter with his cock and they once more savagely dp'ed her black ass.� Rashonda was moaning constantly now and suddenly she had a hard orgasm that had her bucking and flipping as she surged back into the pricks plundering her teenage fuck holes.� Chantal mounted Joseph reverse cowgirl her back to him and got he feet on his thick thighs.� She put his dick back into her asshole and they were off to the races.� She slammed down so hard and fast her head thrashing and rocking her face a constant mask of ecstasy her tits rolling and flopping.� He gripped her ribs and hips to help pile drive his dick deep into her ass.� She soon had an anal 'gasm of crushing strength that had her jackknifing wildly as she screamed "Godddaammnnnnnn you fucking white devvillllll!! � keep fucking my black ass you fucking bassstttarrrddddd�UUUNNGGGHHHHAAARRGGHHHHUUUUUU!" she screamed in blistering ecstasy.� He fucked her throughout her orgasm.� I had another orgasm explode out my fuck holes at this beautiful show before me.� I was able to keep watching as I bucked and flipped.� Chantal was roughly pulled off the dick that had plundered her asshole and dropped on the floor.� "Suck it Nigger! Suck your ass off my white dick Chantal you fucking Nigger!"� She moaned so loud then husked "God, I love it when you call me a Nigger Joseph�It makes me so hot for it."� She gripped his cock at the base lifting it and licked up the shaft with slow licks of her pink tongue from all sides and only then licked his dickhead with long slow strokes all over and around the bulbous cock head before swallowing and slow twisting her head moaning in happiness as Joseph hissed in pleasure.� She now bobbed hard and fast sucking hard.� She now got up straighter on her knees and slowly sank her mouth down his thick shaft.� She kept sinking her mouth down his veined shaft until her nose was bumping into his stomach.� He groaned hard as she jerked her head back an inch and then down again jamming her nose repeatedly into his stomach.� She then rose up choking out spit copiously.� Several more times she deep throat fucked Joseph her throat bulging out so much showing his dick head down around her collar bones.� Gods it was so hot seeing that thick dick head bulging her throat so clearly as it bulged her throat showing where in her throat his dickhead was as she deep throat fucked him.� She was pumping his dick with all the spit she had choked out and sucking his dick head like a succubus.� He growled and moved her to the floor and got her spoon lifting her top leg and urgently punched his dick once more into her asshole immediately fucking her asshole hard.

I was watching with rapt attention my fuck hunger now partially satiated from my two masturbatory orgasms.�� The twins were slamming their thick, twelve inch dicks into Rashonda' s black fuck holes.� Her arms supporting her as she jammed back into the brothers dicks slamming up her belly.� Her body jolting forward with the power of Caleb's powerful hip thrusts slapping his thighs and groin hard into her taunt butt cheeks.� Her head thrashed and her throat cawed gutturally.� Joshua had his legs spread a little and his heels dug into the carpet to thrust up and forward his cock working three or four inches in and out her cunt clutching tightly his thick cock.� Her inner lips all glistening red and shiny as they clutched the white dick see-sawing in and out her twelve year old twat.� I loved watching wet read cunt meat jammed back into her quivering pussy only to emerge again clinging tight to the thick fuck rod plundering her cunt.� His dickhead pounding into her womb with each savage thrust.� Joseph had rolled Chantal over onto her side and pounding her asshole with his eleven cock slamming fully up her black ass.� Her body juddering form his thrusts.� He had gripped her upper leg and lifted up and was gripping her shoulder and neck area with his other hand.� His grip giving him leverage to arch his back and ram his cock hard and deep up her shit hole.� She had recovered from her anal 'gasm and was looking back over her shoulder at him with hot lust.� They moved their heads and joined mouths his thick, long tongue invading deep into her mouth making her whinny in pleasure.� I love how their lips locked so tight as his tongue swirled down her throat making her eyes roll back.� They finally broke their kiss and her lulled down in intense pleasure at her anal plundering.� She was grunting as he pulled his cock almost out her ass and then savagely ram home and then short fast rabbit strokes before ram fucking her with the length of his cock with slower strokes.� He was grunting "goddamn�your asshole is so tight �. Fuck it! It feels so good � so fucking tight!" as he pounded her booty.� Her cone shaped tits rolling and jolting.� He kept grunting how tight her asshole was.� I sensed that orgasms were imminent.� Chantal was along for the ride just basking in her great orgasms and feeling that pleasure you have being fucked expertly and yet knowing that another orgasm was not imminent for yourself.� The brothers were all tensing up and I could tell that Rashonda was ramping up.� She was surging wildly back into the cocks lunging up her fuck holes.� Her head lulled down now her throat keening and crying out fuck! More and more harshly her head jerking up showing her slashing face before lulling down again her stiffish hair in complete disarray.� Her small firm tits jolting her nipples and thick areola fully engorged.�

Joseph was growling and cursing fuck himself now as he pounded Chantal's asshole.�� Several times his cock slipping out and he and Chantal frantically reaching for his cock and jamming it back into her bung hole and lunging it hard up her shit hole again balls deep and commencing to hammer fuck her ass once more.� He was gripping her hard now and grunting.� Chantal goaded him on "Fuck my black ass you Fucking! white bastard � tear me a new asshole you fuc�aaarrgghhhhuuuuuunnnnggggg (she cried out as he fucked her with deep lunging savage thrusts now her whole body jolting hard as he rolled her over more to totally open her ass for his ass rape) � fuck me Joseph, fuck me good you white devil!"� She croaked now.� He was almost whinnying as he cock began to spasm I could see from his desperation.� Chantal looked me hard in the eyes and smiled.� I had told her while teaching her and Rashonda� deep throat that to make a man cum the hardest suck him off after his cock is all raw and sensitive from plundering your fuck holes.� With your mouth glued to his glans and cockhead and hard suck with short hard head bobs and then just suck his dickhead and glans with deep throat sucks as he starts to cum.� It makes them shout, curse and die from it.� I just knew what she was about to do.� She jerked forward and rolled away his dick slipping out her ass as Joseph looked almost frantic.� She turned around quickly, got on her knees hunched over.� I moaned seeing her whole ass and perineum soaked in her ass juice.� She gripped his shaft at the base and jammed it into her mouth and began to suck like I had instructed.� Her small hands gripped his lower shaft and twisted hard on the ass slicked shaft.� Her eyes slit as she sucked hard with short bobs on the end of his shaft.� Joseph rolled onto his back his broad shoulder shaking almost violently.� Chantal moving with his body to keep her position to suck his cock with expert skill I had helped teach her.� His hands now clawed the carpet and he suddenly roared all caps and then screamed gggooddddammmnnn you ffffuuucckkinnggg NNNIIIIGGGGEEERRRRRRR!" as his hips jagged humped up his ass cheeks clenching lifting his ass off the floor.� Chantal mouth was glued on his glans and dickhead as she deep throat sucked as I had told her to do.� I loved how her eyes squeezed shut tight in concentration as she supper sucked so hard her head was lifting with her sucks.� Suddenly her eyes shot wide open as his cock exploded in her mouth.� She sucked and choked as his heavy bolts of hot semen blasted into her mouth and throat.� She choked out drooling spit and semen as she continued to choke on his cum and still sucked between chokes.� It was a sloppy mess all over her lower face and splattering on his groin.� Four times his groin spasmed as it was rigid off the floor filling her mouth and throat with his hot cum.� He finally collapsed back onto the floor his prick still twitching out cum as she now gently sucked him through his aftershocks and started to lick his cum and her spit off his groin and stomach.� She murmured "your cum tastes so good Joseph" as she used broad strokes of her pink tongue to lap it up.�

Sigh, I love great orgasms.� Both having them and observing them up close.� I looked up now over Chantal licking her spit and Joseph's cum up off his belly and now sucking his cock clean of her ass juice with burying his still hard prick deep into her throat her lips clenched tight sucking clean.� I watched the endgame for Rashonda.� She had collapsed on Caleb's hard chest her head lulled over her face slashing with ecstasy as her fuck holes were raped savagely her mouth drooling onto his hard pecs.� Joshua was straddling her ass his body leaned forward his hands spread wide on her back mashing her chest into his brothers crushing her titties and thick nipples I know from experience.� I so love that, having my tits crushed on a man's hard chest, as my nipples send shattering bolts of bliss to my ready to explode clit.� Joshua was growling as he slammed his prick straight down with hard thrusts balls deep into her ass.� Pulling back with only a few inches still in her rectum and the slamming back down his groin pile driving into her firm ass cheeks making her body jolt forward her nipples dragging and mashing on Caleb's chest.� She was chanting in a grunt groan "pound my asshole � oh god! � fuck my ass � oh god! Fuck my asshole! � your fucking me so good you fucking bastards!"� I know Joshua's prick head was jamming into his brother's cock as it was rabbit punched in and out her clutching cunt in counter time with his brother's savage down thrusts.�� Her body began to quake and her head lifted as demented moans were ripped from her throat.� The brothers could feel it too and thrust even harder if that was possible and urged her on.� "Cum you fucking Nigger! � cum on my white cock you black fucking Whore!" Caleb swore at her and Joshua "Take my big white dick in your fucking asshole Nigger!�Take it!!"� She was on the edge of shattering bliss and Celeb took her over the edge.� He fisted her hair and jerked her head up high enough to slap hard with short vicious slaps.� "Cum NIGGER � CUM NIGGER � CUM NIGGER!" he screamed at her as they slammed their dicks as hard as they could into her willing, fuck hungry cunt and shit hole.� Her breathing got more ragged as their racial insults excited her body higher.� The sound of sweaty flesh slapping filled the room as the brothers slammed her ass and cunt with their punishing pile driving thrusts.� Her face jolted with each vicious slap of Celeb's palm against her cheek.� Her body began to buck and jackknife as much as her hard pressed body could.� "Oh my fucking Gaaawwwwwwd!�aaaaiiiiyyyyyyyyyaaaaa � I'm cumingggggggggg!!" she now screamed as her body was simply destroyed by her third anal orgasm of the afternoon.� Her body convulsed wildly as killing waves of ecstasy throttled her.�� I saw four major spasms and then the brothers were howling and slammed their dicks balls deep and held them there as their dick heads spasmed hot cum nearly a foot deep in her belly.� The sudden bolts of hot cum blasting into her womb and deep in her ass made her have a fourth anal 'gasm that had her screaming her bliss as her body flopped and jerked violently yet again.� I was so fucking awed by her perfect orgasm.� The brothers emptied their nut sacks into her spent fuck holes.� They kept them buried deep in her body for a minute as aftershocks rippled through Rashonda' s body.� They finally pulled out, her cunt and asshole immediately streaming cum out her slack fuck holes in an obscene show making her look so hot.� She was prostrate on the floor but Joshua fisted her hair and dragged her around onto his hard stomach.� "Suck your shit off my cock you goddamn nigger!"� Rashonda looked at him with a tired smile and gripped his shaft lifting it and began to lick up the shaft from all sides moaning as she tasted her sweet shit juice.� She murmured "I am a Nigger � I love fucking white cock � god my ass tastes so goddamn fucking sweet!"� She slowly got up on her knees all bent over licking up his cock and now leaning over to lick Celeb's cock clean of her cunt juice with long strokes of her tongue.� She then started to suck and slurp their cocks deep into her mouth slow bobbing and twisting her head as she sucked them clean of her orgasm juice.�

The beauty of it was soon we are in the twins rented pad and the fucking started with me washing the black minxes down and sucking both off so good in the large walk in shower before they spent two hours fucking me and each other in the super large bed they had in one bedroom.� Then we fucked the brothers together.� We did dinner and then more hard fucking with the brothers draining their nut sacks of all their semen into our hungry mouths after raping our cunts and assholes into repeated shattering orgasms.� Then lesbo sex throughout the night, as i fell so much more in love with Rashonda and Chantal.� Our cunts spasmed love juice into our starving mouths.� Then Sunday was rape the women day as the brothers fucked us to oblivion over and over as we wailed in shattering bliss and ecstasy.

End of Long Digression

I have to really smile at this next part.� A lot of the smile is again due to the history of the story. �Makeeda plays her "Ace I the hole".� ["I love you more than ever." She paused. "But . . . I slept with someone in Belgium. I lied to you. This hot Russian girl who just wouldn't leave me alone. Kept saying she wanted American black pussy. I couldn't get rid of her."] �What is so cool is that she has used this in the past to get Laura so mad she gives into her inner kink and gives Makeeda some of the rough sex she craves.� It is that contest of wills that I so love reading.� I like being plaint and led and I love reading of this interplay.� To have this happen we first need the history of the relationship.� Then we need to know the characters intimately to see this intimate dynamic.� Other authors just give us scripted stories that have to follow the standard plot devices to reach their end.� You have actually created a whole world where these women can live and breathe and interact.� Only by knowing these women so intimately can the long term readers really get the juicy interplay and emotions involved.� Newer readers will hopefully go back and read this story arc from the beginning to see where Laura started at and how much she has grown and changed over the years of this story.� I have to smile knowing that Laura is going to start getting jealous and hating herself for it where I would be begging for the details and please bring her home next time.� Now I am chuckling.� We see Makeeda working to inflame Laura's jealousy and you throw in humor by having Laura playing off the Russian woman being of Viking decent and brining up Wagner and his Ring operas and asking if Makeeda was impaled on Brunhilde's helmet.� I like the subtle humor and how witty persons take what they are given and make witty remarks.� I am kind of famous for it and love reading it.� It makes women melt for me.� With men you never know.� Some get so put off if a woman is better at anything.� Like the little history lesson.� I know the Vikings had a large range and Russia makes sense with their seafaring.� The humor continues a little with Makeeda pinching Laura's ass with her humor diffusing the anger she is trying to stoke.� Makeeda wants some punishing love and Laura is playing her usual coy self.� Sigh, this next part is simply divine �[Makeeda's eyes till held hers. Slowly, she reached behind her head and untied the long black piece of cloth that Laura had once used to tie up her, Makeeda's, breasts. "She fucked me better than you ever did," she said evenly, appraising her words' affect on Laura. "I was very unfaithful to you. We fucked for days. I loved it. I think I need some . . . punishment? I came unbelievably when Anya fucked me. I think I was very bad and you should . . . what's the word? Chastise me?"�� She handed the hair-tie to Laura. Laura was paralyzed by so many feelings that she could barely move, but she did manage to take the piece of cloth, knowing what was expected of her. "An . . . Anya?" She realized that her face was flushed, and a hot pulse was beating in her neck.�� Makeeda smirked, taunting her. "Anya Golovina. She was . . . a little rough. But wonderful."]� This is so special because it is so much more than words on a page.� This is two women who are in love interacting and showing their true selves.� Only your stories show this and more I think only your stories can show this.� For the words to have this power we need to have the past and have lived their past to have these words inflame the reader along with the women themselves.� One shots simply can't show this dynamic because you need history to have it and they cannot.� Other authors who have longer stories have never even come close to this.� I am just so happy to have one author who has this desire to give me real women.� I love how Makeeda is really sinking the hook deep.� I know my pussy would be so wet by now hearing these words and the begging to be "grudge fuck."� I would be looking at you with burning eyes knowing I am about to rape you to the depths of your soul.� I always want the details and knowing her name would make me crazy.� I would tie your hands up to the bed or the hooks in our ceiling and simply rape the living hell out of you as I make you die from orgasm after orgasm.�� I love the little details like Makeeda handing Laura her hair-tie.� That is so intimate and I am so happy to read this.� I can feel the fabric in my fingers as I toy with it thinking of how I am going to fuck you so hard and deep.

I have to love this.� It has been awhile since I have been in this dynamic but a little over a week ago I was at Shari's and we fucking so gloriously.� It is always the same.� Cindy and Tameka come upon us fucking and we get "punished" for our adultery.� I was in their bed and was up on one elbow my other hand cupped behind Shari's head grinding her face into my flowing cunt.� I was crying and jolting from the way she was devouring my pussy.� Her long tongue deep in my cunt and then lashing my clit before sucking between her lips and sucking so hard as her tongue slapped and polished my clit.� I could feel my orgasm coming on strong as she worked two fingers hard and deep into my sloshing cunt with hard thrusts her knuckles pounding my mound.� My clit mashed between her lips the nubbin in her mouth being slapped by her serpentine tongue.� My head had jolted forward on my spasming neck my eyes almost squeezed shut.� I was chuffing out "Suck it Shari � suck it harder you fucking goddamn Nigger! � oh gods�Suck Nigger!"� I noticed Cindy and Tameka nude in the doorway watching with whips, floggers and handcuffs in hand enjoying the show.� Shari had a hard grip on my hip with her free hand as she now noisily slurped, sucked my clitoral hood and clit.� I felt my whole body spasm so fucking hard my head straining on my neck as my whole body shook violently as I cried out in shattering ecstasy.� Four spasm rocked my straining flesh so hard as my body simply jolted so hard and then shook violently as my cunt ruptured and soaked Shari's face in my flowing cunt juice which she was gulping down.� I spent my cunt in her mouth and started to come down.� That was when they feel on us screaming at her for being an adulteress whore and me for being a goddamn white cunt.� Sigh, Shari acted so shocked and flustered and I cried at being caught.� To no avail.� They slapped, whipped and flogged us mercilessly after handcuffing us to the brass rails.� Our screams of pain providing no relief as they whipped us so long and hard as we wailed and writhed before they fucked us good with their wands and butt dildos before getting strapped in and pounding us through the night for being such worthless whores.� We were totally fucked out.� Just like I like it.

I have always smiled at Laura's jealousy.� The way she feels a "knife" turning in her heart with Makeeda's goading her about this beautiful Russian woman fucking Makeeda senseless.� It may be a lie but I sure hope not.� I always feel that if I am fucking gloriously then I want my other angels to be fucking others as well.� It is fair and keeps the universe balanced.� One thing I like about your stories is you know how to move it forward in a natural flow that keeps it real.� There is an author of stories that are het based and his stories have a lot of bdsm in them.� I try to read them but I find them so simple and boring.� The story is about seduction of women into being abused.� I have no problem with that of course.� What I have a problem is it is basically the same story over and over.� A woman is brought over into the BDSM world but it is basically the same story, a total innocent or a stuck up bitch getting hers basically.� Again, I have no problem with these stories, because this is happening in the world as we speak.� What the problem is the stories are basically the same.� And they are long without much happening really.� This spinning into BDSM of this chapter is natural and germane to the story.� It is a woman who is frustrated that she cannot get her partner to give her hard kink love.� This is life.� Plus, you are able to do it so naturally without boring me.� I know this is a fine balance that only a good writer can conquer.� I am amazed at how you are able to do this.� When I try to read other stories I get so bored so fast.� Then I find the actual story as yet "oh gods not the same boring story again!"� I do fear you have spoiled me by raising the bar so high.� Others try to give me story that is boring.� I mean the story seems so scripted.� Then we finally get to the sex and it is boring.� The details are like trying to watch through murky water.� People just move into position and fuck and then away without any freaking details.� It gets quite frustrating actually.� The other stories make me really appreciate your stories.� The balance that you strike between plot, characters and sex is totally amazing when I compare them to others stories.� Once more, I must state you are the supreme author on the net who writes erotica.�

Plus, I think you do the best job of actually letting the reader get into the thoughts of your protagonist.� I find other authors do not let us really get into the thoughts of their characters.� They tell us that their characters are thinking this or that but it seems almost forced.� It is like reading a script to a movie.� It is there to just let the reader know important information to move the story forward.� With Laura I actually feel I am Laura.� This is such a huge difference.� One I am reading a story and with your story I am there with Laura.� Therefore, I can feel what she is feeling intimately.� I can feel Laura's consternation at finding the picture and her rising fuck need and how she is trying to control herself.� Even though I am totally into kink fucks I know Laura so well I can feel what she is feeling.� You allow this.� I so appreciate you allowing me this.� It makes me get into the story so deep.� I can then feel what Laura feels and this allows me to get into the fuck.� I still masturbate to your stories regularly after all these years.� Only your stories.� Others just mildly stimulate me at best where with your stories I still scream as I am fingering or jamming dildos up my fuck holes as I simply die from pure fucking pleasure along with your women.�� Like I say, your stories really allow me to feel what Laura is feeling.� Here I can feel her getting into the mood for kink sex.� With Laura it is like having to turn a light switch from off to on.� With me it is merely getting into the mood.� I love my kink sex but it is not my norm.� I just so easily fall into whatever role I need.� I have an aggressive side but I so love to be the sub and being dominated.� With men I find it is either or but with women we tend to more easily go either way.� I find so many love it both ways.� I love how you show Laura flipping the switch in her mind and the affect it is having on both of the women [So, you want me to spank you, eh? Laura thought. She realized that both of them were breathing a little more rapidly than normal. Makeeda's eyes seemed to read hers. They flashed at Laura: I want you do to more than spank me this time.�� She had always wanted the kiss of the whip.�� "Well then . . ." Laura said, with a cold decisiveness that was unusual, tossing the hair-tie next to the picture on the bed. "I guess we'd better get the real rope this time, instead of this silly cloth. It sounds like you deserve something a little more severe."�� A smile of great satisfaction and anticipation spread across Makeeda's face as she realized she was getting her way. "I'll get the box," she said, in a hushed, excited voice.]� You are the only author to really show us what the women are thinking.� You show the subtle.� They have been competing to see how the fuck will go and it is still foreplay but it is having the affect.� Once you think about kink sex and� let it flow into your skin you can't help but start to get excited.� I love how you show us their accelerated breathing and excited voices.� Other authors just forget� to show us the little signs that show arousal.� They keep everything so boring without these kind of details and insights into the women's thinking.� I know Laura's nipples are getting hard and her panties damp with the anticipation of what she is about to do to Makeeda.� I can feel my nipples getting so hard and so wet when I think of how I am going to slap your face and tits, pull your hair, spit in your face and use my whips and floggers to make you scream and wail in pain and then pleasure.� I can feel my palm tingling thinking of hitting your cheek so hard your face is jolting over or your tits flopping and turning so red if a white woman.� I especially love how you touch all the senses.� The tone of voice adds so much.� I feel like an actress when I get into the role and my voice gets so mean and cruel as I demean and defile you with my words and it makes me so wet when I am called a worthless slut, fucking whore and anything else you want to call me.� Make me feel so defiled.� I cum so hard.� Then you always remember to show� both of the women reactions.� Laura is getting into the mood to be the dom and Makeeda is getting hot and bothered because she is already the sub.� I am smiling because she reminds me of a little girl getting a big candy bar.� You have allowed me to get into the story and, therefore, I am so happy for Makeeda and can feel her excitement.� I can feel the shivers when I know I am about to be grudged fucked or getting a hard dose of kink sex with the feel of the palm, whip, flogger and rope.� I am not a big rope girl but my doms love it and therefore I love it.

One thing I like reading about Laura is how we are similar and yet different.� She stews over being manipulated.� I don't see it that way.� Makeeda has a need and is getting it itched.� Still l love reading how she is stewing.�� I wish she would once more embrace her kink self.� It would be so glorious watching her whip and flog Makeeda into exhaustion before ripping orgasms out her trembling cunt with the magic wand.�� [She was still stirring this stew when Makeeda returned, carrying the cardboard box that contained most of Laura's sex toy collection. She had the expectant look on her face of a six-year-old about to celebrate the best birthday of her life so far. She hugged the box to her chest as if she did not want to give it up.�� Laura, feeling that it was quickly becoming her role here to enforce discipline, which would make things so much hotter, pointed sternly to the bed. "Put it down."�� Makeeda obeyed, almost shocked by Laura's tone, but pleased too. She set the box on the bed and Laura pulled out the coils of brown hemp rope, brandishing them like a weapon. She scowled at Makeeda. "Better take off those clothes before I rip them off."�� Now Makeeda showed a little squirt of defiance, tilting her head to the side, sneering back. "What if I don't?"]� Where other authors give me bland descriptions you give me lines that make me smile and chuckle.� One has to chuckle at the birthday analogy.� I am so smiling seeing the happiness that Makeeda is feeling knowing she is about to be fucked abused.� She is my kind of slut!� Then you show us Laura getting into her role.� It just doesn't happen.� You show us her throwing the switch.� You seem to be the only author who makes their characters complex (like people really are) and then show this through the hearing of her thoughts.� You are a novelist that draws the reader in with these talents.� It is so true how getting into character gets you into the role.� When I suddenly bark at a slut and she jumps and I see fear I feel my cunt convulse and pulse out nectars as my slut knows I am about to fuck abuse her to heaven and back.� We see Laura is falling under the spell of being a sadist.� I love how she is falling into the role incrementally.� You show how life is usually one of steps.� Other authors would have this as a black and white.� I like reading how Makeeda is so docile with flare ups of being defiant.� She is a fiery woman who needs to be beat down.� I love how you use words like "sneer".� I just know other authors don't use these words to give the reader the quality of how the woman is reacting.� I can just see her "sneer".�� Laura is "scowling" at Makeeda.� I can just see the whole dynamic.� Plus, you give us the detail of shaking the rope at Makeeda.� I am in the fuck with these details.�

I have to shake my head at Laura feeling like she shouldn't fuck abuse Makeeda because she in love with Makeeda.� I feel that is why I should indulge in such sex if my angels crave such sex.� I love it myself and will naturally lead the sex that way with angels that crave it like I do.� Plus, I so love teaching young teenage sluts the joys of rough, hard sex.� I was addicted at a young age when I was shown just how great it is to be roughed up in sex and then roughing up my lovers.� I smile thinking back to how my adult lovers would swoon when I pulled their hair, slapped their faces and fucked them up the ass with their own strap-ons when I was a teenager myself.� I so believe in giving and taking in kink sex.� I love it both ways.� I sense that Makeeda is a total sub and that is great but variety is the spice of life for me.� Sigh, I love how you give the small details that other authors don't give me.� The small details add so much to the sex.� You showing how Laura advances on Makeeda with a glower on her face and obvious threat in her body language.� I so love to see my dom advancing on me like this.� It makes me wet.� I so love to get into the role I am playing.� Here Laura is playing the dom and Makeeda quickly begins to strip for her dom.� She is the slave.� Other authors somehow make things like this happen but make it boring.� It reads like a script.� You are showing the actual events between two living, breathing persons.� It simply flows off the page like a real life event.� I love being a total sub like here [Makeeda decided to play her role as a meek, contrite maiden. She covered her breasts with her hands. "You're not going to . . . hurt me. Are you? I mean . . . I didn't start it with . . . Anya, you know. She just wouldn't leave me alone."]� I love shaking and having my voice quiver for my lovers.� Recently I was with Diamond and Rashonda and Chantal.� I had my face buried in Rashonda's twat munching away as I drilled her asshole with two fingers rotating them as I pounded her booty hole.� Sigh, she was up on the balls of her feet in Diamond's bed her cunt humping my face my other hand clenched on her hard ass cheek as her hands clawed my scalp and her head rocked back pressing hard into the mattress.� Gods, her wails of shattering ecstasy filled the room as pelvis raggedly humped into my starving mouth as I gulped down her flowing twat juice.� Such guttural moans flowed from her convulsing throat as sweat flowed in rivulets off her convulsing body.� She finally collapsed onto the bed.� Suddenly, I felt my hair fisted and my head jerked back and heard Diamond screaming at me what a "fucking goddamn whore" I was.� Chantal came into view screaming at Rashonda who was still groggy from her orgasm.� Chantal was yelling at her calling her a fucking slut! and goddamn boot lip nigger!� Chantal fisted her hair and jerked her up into a sitting position and viciously started to slap her face and tits as her lover cried and whined she was sorry.� Diamond started to slam my face into the wet spot Rashonda' s body and ruptured cunt had made on the bed.� Then grinding my face into the wet spot as I cried I was sorry and would never cheat on her again which only made her scream at me louder that I was constantly cheating on her.� Belts came out and we were whipped all up and down our worthless bodies.� We were both screaming and writhing in pain as belts struck our torsos and legs and hands slapped our faces so hard and our hair pulled and jerked viciously making us scream so loud in pain all the while our cunts flowing heavily and nipples so engorged and rock hard as our bodies were so primed for hot, hard pain and future fucking.� Poor Rashonda hair a fucking mess as her stiffish hair was now in complete disarray.� I had to put up with Diamond crowing about how red my face and body was with her abuse.� She was going to get it soon I promised myself.� Her body light enough to show my slaps and whipping.� After long minutes of abuse we were hitched up.� Rashonda' s arms spread wide her hands in Velcro cuffs hooked up to hooks I had installed in the ceiling for such events.� I was chained to the upright bed posts with handcuffs my hands immobilized near the top of the post.� Then the sluts hummed as they went into the closet and brought a big bag out and started to take items out and place them on the bed.�� Rashonda looked back over her shoulder with curiosity but no alarm while I was looking with bulging eyes.� Evidently, Kapri had purchased some electrical play toys.� Two samurais, a shock wand and a box with pads to attach to your body to shock you with.� The long blades installed told me where the samurais were going to thrust.� She also had two magic wands.� I gasped where she got them and she said Craig's list.� When she got close to me I told her softly to make sure that Chantal didn't overdo it on� Rashonda.� She whispered back that her and Chantal had played with the toys getting ready for us and she is total pain slut and she knows her lover is as well.� I called over to Rashonda to use the safe word if necessary and she glared back and told me "I don't need no fucking safe word!"� I gave her a be careful what you wish for look.� They took the samurai blades and ran them up and down our soaked slits getting them slimed in our cunt nectars.� They then stroked our cunts with them getting them totally soaked and then went behind us and begin to thrust them up our hungry assholes.� I had to groan in intense pleasure feeling my shit hole stroked by the samurai.� I groaned even more seeing Rashonda flex her knees to sink her groin down to get her hungry asshole impaled with her samurai and seeing her head jerk back as she gurgled feeling her woman stroke her asshole with long strokes of the samurai.� Diamond then put the pads on my sweaty tits and Chantal got her zapper.� Time for pain I thought with a grimaced smile.� I heard the zapper growling and then Rashonda was screaming in pain as Chantal zapped her stomach and then ass cheeks over and over then her tits.� I was screaming as Diamond turned the pads on high making my tits scream in pain as I thrashed and jerked my handcuffs hard my teeth grinding in pain.� I watched Rashonda twist and shuffle around as Chantal turned the wand higher and really made her wail in pain tears now running down her face as she begged and pleaded for Chantal to stop who only zapped her more.� I smiled through my pain as I screamed at a long twist of the knob because Rashonda didn't think of saying "Red".� I had to love my fellow pain slut even more.� I relished how Diamond cursed me and pulled my hair as she twisted her knob on the bed as I cried big tears and moaned for mercy.� Rashonda now sobbing continuously and jerking her hands trying to get away from her tormentor.� After a long time they turned on the samurais and we moaned at the pleasurable tingling and way our sphincter spasmed and we cawed as they pumped the shafts in and out our impaled assholes.� Then they turned the knobs after impaling us fully as my stomach muscles contracted so hard as my asshole tried to spasm apart at the harsh shock I was getting.� Rashonda was screaming so loud at her electrocution of her asshole.� Again and again we were shocked violently in our assholes as our shit holes tried to tear themselves inside out.� Then the sluts got their wands out and jammed them into our swollen, soaked cunts and vibrated or clits expertly.� We both exploded at the same time as our shit holes where violently shocked.� Our cunts ruptured and I convulsed steamy cunt juice all over my groin, legs and floor.� I nearly blacked out.� Rashonda was wailing as her body convulsed and I saw that her eyes were rolled back and spasming continuously as Chantal wand her cunt and shocked her asshole over and� over with high charges making her body go multiple as her cunt spurted all around the head of the wand jammed and wallowed into her exploding cunt.� we were devastated and hanging down after those awesome cums.� Our bodies soaked in sweat.� As we groggily looked at our masters I watched Diamond remove my pads and give the device to Chantal and told her to put them on Rashonda' s vulva and lower belly and Diamond took the wand.� I now wailed getting zapped on my ass, cunt and tits.� Rashonda the poor girl was screaming now all hoarse her body still upright with her chains in the ceiling.� Her lower body convulsed wildly as she was shocked front and back.� Chantal leaned after a few minutes and sucked her clit between her lips and munched on it as she twisted the knobs on high now making her woman scream so loud.� Her body flipped and bucked wildly her pussy squirting all over Chantal's face as she now put her face right in the squirts moaning in pleasure in getting soaked in Rashonda' s cunt juice.� I was on my knees my asshole spasming wildly as it was shocked and Diamond now wand my spasming cunt and I immediately exploded into orgasms that went back to back as I flopped and wailed in shattering ecstasy and love.� Rashonda and I were totally happy sluts let me tell you.

I have to smile at the inner turmoil and fire in Laura's belly.� She is a gentle soul now and tries to keep her inner sadist kink angel under control.� Makeeda wants to feel the rope digging and strangling and the feel of the whip or flogger tormenting her sweet delectable flesh.� Gods know I crave the abuse and defilement.� It makes my pussy so fucking wet and nipples so engorged and rock hard.� In the past Laura has always fought her inner kink devil in giving Makeeda what she wants.� She has felt that because she loves Makeeda that she should not give into her sadist and give Makeeda what she craves and needs.� I have always found that weird.� I believe that if my angels want such loving then I am obligated in giving it to them.� Of course, I have limits too.� I will not draw blood, use a close hand or hurt you to the point that a bodily injury has occur.� I guess I am hypocrite to some degree.� Some people crave such defilement and I won't go there.� I cannot injure you to give you pleasure.� I have seen such acts in person and I definitely cringe and get out of "dodge" so to speak.� The kind of kink that Makeeda is craving is the kind of rough sex that I need.� I love to feel my body writhing as a cattail is tormenting and rough hands are slapping my face so hard and making my tits flop and jolt and blistering my ass till they are fiery red as I wail in pain and cry huge tears of tormented pain.� It makes my clit throb and pulse so fucking hard as I wet myself in pre cum.� I do wonder why sometimes I love it so. To have my hair pulled and jerked and using my hair to drag me around like a worthless whore as I feel my scalp and knees crying in pain.� I am just happy that Makeeda has finally goaded Laura into a state of giving Makeeda what she needs.� Where with me it is merely flipping a switch, with Laura you need a freaking tornado to get her to turn her kink demon on.� I love reading this [But she had never been this deeply in love with her partner in those games, and now a feeling came over her that was completely new. It was a fierce, burning lust to do it, to subjugate Makeeda and give her what she desired, mingled with a seething need to erupt herself in a killing climax as a result of having done it.]� this is how I feel.� I get myself in the mood and mind state to fuck you up.� I will give you a kink fuck that will make you die from the orgasms that the pain and abuse give you.� I can sense pain sluts like me.� I will start gently but quickly ramp up if I get the body language and verbal queues to get more "mean" and "vile".� I so love feeling my palm stinging from slapping your ass as it quakes and turns red if it can, and feeling your tits roll and flop and your face exploding over from my slaps as the sound fills the room and I make you cry and beg for mercy as I fuck abuse you.� I almost never get the safe word as I fuck my angels up.� I so know how to give you what you want and need.� Just as Laura is about to do to Makeeda to at least a much higher degree.� I hope she makes Makeeda happy!� Laura needs to learn that love with Makeeda involves kink sex and she should be happily giving it to her.� I know how fucking my angels up makes me so hot to grab their hair and grind my cunt into their hungry mouths after I have ripped so many orgasms out their body.� How they start out so weakly pleasuring me but revive so quickly as they eat my cunt out and suck on my nipples and we kiss in new and deeper love.

One thing that makes this rad to read is the fact that we have the history of her thoughts on this subject and the fact that we are privy to them in the first place.� I know that there are different manners of writing styles but I have always wanted to know what the protagonist(s) thoughts are.� I am surprised at how other authors don't really let us see their thoughts.� I mean the inner workings of their minds.� We will read of the woman experiencing pleasure A or B but not how it is affecting her.� Other stories we see enough to make the story move forward.� Here I actually feel like I am Laura in a way feeling her letting go and giving into her inner kink devil.� I love stories were I get to think and feel differently from my personality.� Also, this is special because of the history.� A one shot story could only talk about the past attempts by Makeeda to get Laura to give her hard loving.� It would only be words in a story.� But with your story I have lived the attempts by Makeeda in the past to get Laura to fuck her BDSM.� That is what makes this so special.� I have lived the past fucks where Laura has held herself back so I can feel the fire in my belly and pussy clutching with her giving in here.� I can feel that rush I get when I know I am about to fuck abuse another of my angels.� I feel so powerful and aggressive.� This draws me into the story.� I can feel the aggressiveness that Laura feels and the masochist in me can feel the elation that Makeeda is feeling.� I love to be fucked abused myself like most female sadists I have found.� We are bi in this.� I am just so happy for Makeeda.� I am happy myself that I have found a story that lets me feel all these emotions. Others stories do not allow me to feel these emotions.� They are stories that don't really touch my soul or anymore my pussy.� I need this story that you give me with both great sex and women that live and breathe.� I think your one shot stories would rock me but this continuing saga just makes me gaga over these stories that are making a divine story arc of first discovery and now the joy of life.

As usual you show the ramping of sex and pulling the reader into the story by the loving details of the beginning of the fuck [Laura was not gentle while tying up Makeeda's magnificent naked breasts with the tough, bristly hemp. ��"Oww!" Makeeda finally said. "Aren't you making it too tight?"�� "You shut up," Laura said, her voice clipped and terse, even mean.�� Makeeda's breasts were fairly large, certainly larger than Laura's. Not as large as Karen's, but definitely bigger than Yvette's, or Randi's, two others Laura had done this with. But they were so beautifully shaped and proportionate to the rest of her body that you tended to forget how big they were. Now, however, bulging round and shiny, popping almost, from the tight coils of rope Laura had wrapped around them, they were two hard beautiful gourds of flesh. Her large black nipples were swollen like two dark, near-to-bursting plums. Laura had indeed tied them too tightly, feeling this surge of twisted lust rising in her.]� I am almost certain that other would just have Laura tie up Makeeda's tits and not show anything about the play acting in BDSM sex.� Part of great BDSM sex is the role playing.� Both the dom and the sub.� Only you capture this really.� There are plenty of BDSM stories but we really never get to know these women and I just can't get into the fucks really because I am not giving details like here and I never get to know the women and, thus, feel the elation they feel in such sex.� Just this little bit of dialog is getting me into the fuck.� I can hear the trepidation and meekness in Makeeda's voice and the aggressiveness in Laura's voice.� You draw the reader into the story with this.� Then you give such loving details of your women's bodies.� I love how you compare women.� I am always comparing my lover's bodies as I fuck them.� I am so feeling that rope digging into my tits here.� I so love to feel rough rope strangling my tits making them bulge up like here and feeling my nipples so fucking engorged and throbbing wildly as my tits start to turn purple and become both numb and super sensitive somehow.� I just dig feeling rope on my erogenous zones.� I love to feel rope through my fuck seam.� LaTonya and Belissa have a set of hooks and pulley to run rope through and attach things like bowling balls and cinder blocks to the rope.� I feel my cunt screaming as the rope digs in and my eyes slitting watching the attached weight swing pulling the rope tighter.� I love seeing Laura finally revisiting her kink devil.� Makeeda is going to cum so gloriously I think.� I wish Laura would not pull back.� Makeeda would quickly become addicted to the harsh rough rope play.� Oh gods, Laura is not going to back off!!!� Thank you!!!� Laura has strangled Makeeda's tits and I know they are throbbing wildling and bulging out the ropes her nipples filling with blood and sending searing bolts of pleasure to her clit as the rope digs in and makes her tits bulge out the so tight coils.� My cunt got instantly wet seeing where this fuck is going.� I can see that rope partially obscured where it is digging into Makeeda's tits.� Lucky Makeeda!�

Sigh, I love your kink sex.� You show how women can be kinky from time to time.� I have made it clear I love rough sex and being whipped and do the whipping.� But it is only the thrill of rough hard sex that I crave.� I take it to the next level so to speak.� I read stories and I know of persons that lead this life style full time.� People who are true masters and true slaves in their relationship.� The master who totally controls and dominates their slave both mentally and sexually.� I hate that.� I will let you abuse me totally in the bedroom (metaphor) but outside it I want a normal loving relationship with my angels and male lovers.� Plus, you show only rough sex and not over the top I will hurt you bad sex.� I have seen men get annihilated and loving it.� Weird.� You have been able to show the love in the kink sex.� I only do rough sex because I love my angels and truly like the men that rough me up and I don't share the whip / chains / wand with men.� Again you are able to capture the joy of various sex acts and not debase it.� Thank you.� You show that with how this kink sex is starting out.� I so love how you show the tone of voice.� We see Makeeda is now pleading and Laura is snarling back.� I so love hearing fear in other women's voice and the fear I let myself feel.� When in dom mode I feel the aggression flowing in my veins and love seeing it in my women knowing they are going to fuck me up.� I can just see Makeeda shaking in fear.� She knows that Laura will not truly hurt her but she will be feeling a great deal of pain in a few moments.� That is what makes your nipples so erect and painful with need, cunt sopping wet and asshole quivering and pulsing wildly.� I love this stuff as I make clear.� I try to find on the net but constantly get frustrated.� I don't like stories of people trying to beat someone down but I try to read them hoping for great sex.� Never get that I fear.� But the story itself are so disappointing.� Many are long with characters that are boring and don't interest me.� I slog through the words and keep waiting for living, breathing characters to appear and they don't.� I feel like driftwood on the ocean buffeted by lapping waves and adrift on unnamed currents leading me to and fro.� The stories simply are boring.� You are able to balance each chapter's plot and characters and great sex.� It makes trying to read other stories at times quit sad actually.� Why can't writers give me characters that are interesting and stories that aren't long, formulaic and simply retread of the same basic stories in the genre.� Thank goodness I found a true novelist writing erotica on the net.

Like I say, I am not into BDSM to dominate you.� I just want great sex with lots of role playing.� Therefore, I am eating up Makeeda whimpering that Laura has trussed her tits up too tight and listening to Laura snarling back to shut up basically.� I love this give and take during BDSM sex.� I so love to whimper and beg and then be tortured with your palm and belts, floggers and whips.� It is just so hot how one never knows how it will play out exactly.� How will I be tortured and by what.� Then when I am the dom I just love feeling the power I feel as I fuck abuse my sluts and make them whimper, cry out so loudly and scream in pain.� Then ripping orgasm after orgasm out their exploding cunts and assholes.� One thing that I find surprising when trying to read other BDSM story is how there is nothing really going on when you get to the buildup and sex.� The person gets abused without anything really happening.� They just kind of describe in a bland way that the person is getting defiled and abused verbally and physically.� Nothing makes each scene unique.� Lack of details again.� Here we get the tone of your women's voices and how Makeeda is showing fear and Laura is being aggressive and her tone clipped.� With you I feel as if I am in the fuck with them.� I can see Makeeda looking down and seeing her strangled tits and the pain she is feeling and how her cunt is swollen and running fuck juice down her thighs.� You give the little details to draw the reader in.� I feel like I am with them or more accurately I am them.� Then because you story has history we can see Laura reliving her past experiences with Karen.� You are the only author that can do this.� Other stories are only one shots and would be hollow if they mentioned this and other authors who write multipart stories still keep the time frame too short for this.� It is so cool to read this and remember the episodes as Laura is.� It draws the reader in, plus, I love looking back on past fucks and this is exactly like that.� You so bring in the reader with your details and the past history of this story.� I have gotten so tired of other stories saying a person is being whipped and not telling me how it affects the person sexually.� They concentrate so much on the person being broken to their master's will.� I hate that.� I love BDSM for the sex.� You concentrate on the joy it can bring where others don't.� Some do show that it is role playing but, gosh, they make it boring.� You detail how having your nipples and clit whipped can simply make you die from cumming so hard.� You show how you are tormenting your slut's clit until you see it in her eyes and straining body that she is one the precipice of cumming and then really whipping her clit and making her scream as she comes so hard.� Again, it is the details that you give that make your sex so real and in this case harrowing.

Plus, I tried reading some BDSM stories recently and they were boring and with no communication between the women.� Or the standard yes "master" and answering demeaning questions which is part of the game but it gets so boring reading that over and over.� This shows how the act is varied and exciting as each BDSM fuck takes a life of its own [Makeeda's enchanting hazel eyes flared as she saw the belt. Laura could see the ambivalence there. Makeeda did want this, and yet almost instinctively her head swiveled from side to side, as if to persuade Laura not to do it.�� Laura spoke evenly. "Each time you will count, and then say 'Anya.' Like this." She swished the doubled up belt and struck the back of her hand with it. Smack. "One." Smack. "Anya." Smack. "Two." Smack. "Anya." She glowered at Makeeda. "Got it?"�� True fright now showed in Makeeda's eyes. She nodded quickly. "Laura, maybe�"�� "No maybes!"�� ". . . if you . . . took your clothes off, too?"�� Laura grinned. "You little slut. Will it excite you if I'm naked?"�� "Yes! Please!"]� This captures the fun and excitement of BDSM.� What role will be played today.� How will the dom and sub interact.� You show this where other authors just don't.� With them it is just something happening that has been written like lines on a screen play and must be done.� This robs the event of spontaneity, verve and life.� I so love how BDSM and gangbangs are full of possibilities and never know how the events will unwind.� I know that Laura had no idea how she was going to take this fuck until she picked up that belt and relived past memories.� You captured the moment and this draws the reader in.� Your stories feel spontaneous like life.� I am sure your stories are planned to draw us in but it does not feel like it.� I have been trying to reads some stories lately with about half with BDSM themes.� I am not getting anything from them.� The stories seem like something out of a cookie cutter.� So boring and tried and trite.� The stories have a long setup but nothing really is captured.� It feels like a story where your stories feel like life to me.� I think a lot is the fact that you are able to take chapters to develop themes, plot lines and your women where other authors only have one story and it feels forced.� The other thing that has really hit home because I have become aware of it lately is the lack of dialog.� Long stories with little actual spoken word.� The women do not have interaction.� This interaction does not happen in the het stories either.� Nothing even remotely close to what I just quoted.� A few lines here and there.� The author has to explain everything because of this lack dialog.� With your stories the dialog brings the reader along in the story.� It makes the story "pop" and I love it.� I can just hear the tone of voice in the dialog.� The threat by Laura and the pleading by Makeeda.� It makes me smile while making me wet.� I love the classic BDSM themes of explaining the punishment and counting.� It makes me wet getting whipped merciless as I am forced to count and severely punished if I lose count through pain or pleasure.� I can so see (I am smiling so big) that Makeeda is craving it like I do.� I have to really smile at pleading for Laura to get naked and Laura working that into the whipping to come.� That is the interaction that you show alone.� How you take what your lover gives you and incorporate into the current fuck to take it to the next level.� Thank you again for all this wonderful dialog.

I have always loved the little details like showing Laura's lacy black underwear and how it excites Makeeda seeing it.� Like your dialog we don't see the little details from other stories.� They simply don't have the imagination I guess to give us a real story.� It is so scripted I feel reading other stories.� I am always surprised (still) how they make their stories boring.� I am so serious when I say they don't have these little details.� Laura would have just tied Makeeda up without details and started the fun without dialog and things like her lingerie choice exciting Makeeda.� Thank goodness you do.� Then roughly tying up Makeeda's hands behind her back with rough rope.� I love it when I hear Makeeda whimpering and begging Laura to go easy and Laura only roughs her up more.� I love the next small detail of seeing Makeeda's tits starting to get darker with their strangulation.� I love seeing my nigger slut's tits getting that darker shade and nipples all shiny.�� I so love how you show the woman receiving getting into it with how she keeps asking with a little girl voice "you're not going to hurt me?"� Of course she is!!� I swear this dialog does not occur in other stories.� How can it not?� You keep the story zipping along with more sweet dialog ["Each breast gets its 'Anya,'" she said through her teeth, eyes flashing.�� She snapped the flat surface of the double folded belt into Makeeda's swelling left nipple, making a square hit.�� "Anngghh! Oh shit!"�� "Count!" Laura commanded.�� "One!" Makeeda said in a shaky voice.]� This is really, really hot.� I so love the pain being brought front and center.� I can hear the belt singing as it hits her nipple square on.� I don't even really get this from other stories.� I find other stories on BDSM are almost hazy with their lack of getting hard and deep into the actual love torture.� I am not sure how they expect to make the story special without these details.� With the stories I have perused lately not one of them had counting in them.� No rich details either.� Geez, now you really show the women interacting.� Laura is slowly ramping up the force of her belt strikes and Makeeda is beginning to remember to count but we see some defiance from her.� I love that!� I love to act tough only to be broken with wild whipping and flogging and being dragged around by my hair as you whip my ass and back until I break down sobbing and weakly comply to your screamed demands.� I have just been complaining of the blandness of other stories and you are flooding the reader with a fuck that is so individual to these women for this fuck.� Plus, you are showing that ramping up that makes sex so awesome.� It is the ramping that makes sex great.� If you start with it at full speed it makes it boring to read.� I feel like I am in the bedroom with them and I can feel the blood racing in my veins that you tell us that Laura is feeling.� I so feel it when in dom mode.� I feel like a total bitch and I revel in making you scream and writhe in pain and ripping orgasms out your spasming cunt and asshole.� But like so many dominatrix I love getting it right back.� I so love to feel my face jolting over from hard slaps, being spit on and screamed at as I whipped senseless from upper chest to toes (that hurts!).� I have really tried reading some BDSM stories recently and I am reveling in how hot your story is while theirs left me wondering when the fun starts, which alas they never do.

As I mentioned I love seeing Makeeda flashing some defiance.� That fits her personality.� When Maria gets whipped and tortured she only cries, weeps and begs for mercy.� Joann and Dodie are at first defiant and snarly and one has to work hard to break their will.� Even then they are different.� Once your break Dodie's will it is broken but Joann will get all defiant and swelling up if you lighten up on her.� Then you have to double down to make her once more scream for mercy as her body is writhing all over the bed or floor as I really fuck her up.� A little while back La'Tonya took the cane to her butt, thighs and feet.� She had whipped her twice with the cattail but Joann recovered.� She spit and screamed at her "I'll get you for this, you fucking Nigger! you goddamn piece of shit!"� Geez, it took over a week for those marks to disappear.� I felt my cunt spasm and gush fuck juice as Belissa whipped my tits and belly watching Joann scream in pain her whole body lurching up and rolling over with each whack of that cane.� How she broke and slumped on the floor and La'Tonya got the soles of her feet exposed and caned them hard leaving blood bruised marks that had Joann screaming so loud.� Of course when La'Tonya rolled her over and threw her cane down and feel to the floor and sucked her off it only took about a minute for Joann to explode into a multiple orgasm that made her swoon and semi-black out her hands fisted in La'Tonya's hair grinding her gobbling mouth into her gushing cunt.� Pain does bring one such sweet pleasure.� Geez, I so love how you detail a fuck.� The back and forth between two lovers.� Makeeda has shown defiance and Laura is rising to the challenge. She strikes Makeeda's strangled tits even harder making her slut scream in pain that is making both of their cunts so wet I know.� I really love how you make each fuck something special.� Laura and I are so alike and yet not.� Once I start fucking you up I will not stop until the fuck is over or I hear the safe word (which I never do since I know my sluts and I know how to give it to you).� I am smiling as Laura whispers that they can stop and fuck and Makeeda is a pain slut after my heart [Makeeda glowered at her, her face shiny and wet with tears. "Never . . . you cunt!" she said.]� This is so like Makeeda.� She is fiery and wanton and would never stop now that she is now finally getting what she wants.� Plus, how both women are acting is true to their characters.� What is so cool is the fact that I know how they should react.� I have come to know these women and what is true to their characters.� You have made them individuals that I have come to know.� I have the history with them to know their wants, actions and desires.� You are giving me all this and yet I get nothing from other authors.� I have tried to read other stories and they are so lacking.� Rot them!� You capture how being the aggressor makes one's veins boil with desire to inflict pain on your love slut [Now Laura began to strike her strangled, throttled breasts harder with the flat surface of the doubled up belt, somehow feeling it was part of the bargain to make her wince and scream, to make her feel the pain she appeared to crave, to prove she could do it, make Makeeda cry out and plead and beg her to stop. ��"Five!" Whack! "Anya!" Whack! "Six!" Whack! "Anya!" "WHACK!"�� Tears were streaming down Makeeda's lovely face, staining her cheeks, dripping from her chin, her eyes ablaze with pain, her mouth a pathetic grimace of distress. Her tears even wetted the swollen, bursting gourds of her rope-entrapped breasts. She looked down at them, wincing each time the flat side of the leather belt crushed her vulnerable nipples.]� I love how we can just feel the violence of the strikes on Makeeda's tits.� How the pain is flooding Makeeda's body with her tits being strangled and whipped so hard.� I love how you show the details of Makeeda's face and the way her tears are flooding her face.� How her tits are dripping onto her heaving strangled bosom.� You just don't see anything even remotely like this elsewhere.� You are actually showing us the fuck.� I love the exclamation points showing the violence of the strikes and show us the all caps of the final strike here.� You are showing the ramping so effortlessly.� Showing us how Makeeda is reacting and looking down at her tortured tits.� We just don't see this in other stories.� The details.� I love how you use the English language to great effect.� How Makeeda's nipples are "crushed" by belt strikes.� I put my thoughts into what "crushed" feels like and I am in the story with them.� You so effortlessly bring the reader into the fuck.� You use all the senses to draw the reader in.� Laura takes it up to ten and stops her whipping.� I like the detail of how she tied Makeeda's tits up so tight that only the harshest whipping gives you that high but I love that high.� I would want to keep going and there are so many other parts of the body to whip and torture.� But Laura is always more gentle than I am.� I am a total pain slut and am surrounded by pain sluts who crave the same pain that I do.� I know that rush of pain that Makeeda is feeling as Laura loosens her tits and the blood comes rushing back in.� I have screamed so loud at this moment.� I love feeling that rush as my head rocks back and my tits scream in pain as I scream out their pain into the room so loud and with harsh cries and moans.� I have to smile at the little moments you so capture.� The way Makeeda is smiling as she is rolled onto her stomach so Laura can now blister her ass with a good hard smacking.� I love seeing this smile showing what a slut Makeeda is.� I will really blister your ass or slap you senseless when I see these smiles when I am torturing you.� I love staying in character and when you are supposed to be sniveling and begging for mercy I don't want to see any smiles.� Of course my sluts know this and smile for me all the time knowing I am going to redouble my efforts to take that stupid smile off your face.� The last time I did Kapri and Diamond in BDSM I noticed that Diamond will now sometimes smile like her mother when I blister her ass and tits with my cattail.� I know she got that from Kapri.� I really made her scream and jolt off the mattress when I made her pay.� I loved reaching down and jerking her head up so hard by my fist in hair jerking her head up and down and then slamming into the mattress as I whipped her tits with my short handled flogger.� Kapri all fucked out at the foot of the bed watching with cat eyes as I put her daughter in her place.� I finally used the handle of the flogger to fuck her cunt as I jerked her clit until she was crying out and flipping wildly as she cummed so hard for me weeping tears of pure joy and love for me.� I love how Makeeda eggs Laura on.� I so love the interaction of your women.� The back and forth and how their communication moves the fuck along like it does in real life.� She goads Laura into putting a ball gag into her mouth.� I love getting a ball or spider gag shoved into my mouth.� I love it but don't ask for it like Makeeda.� If you give it to me I will open wide with total joy but I don't ask for it.� Thus, I love seeing Makeeda asking for it.� We women are all so different.� I am thankful that you make each of your women so unique and different.� I feel like these women are real.� These stories could easily move to the TV screen because you have crafted a story around these women that just happens to be erotica and has hot fucking in it.� You have created a story that could easily replace Housewives I feel or Jersey Shore.� Never watched them but the Saga of Laura would blow them out of the water.� A story with great fucking.

I love how you show Makeeda wiggling and squirming with rising excitement at her whipping to come.� She is so like me that she craves the sexual high that only BDSM and gangbangs give one.� One gets off on the intensity of these kind of fucks.� How one gets overwhelmed by sensations.� I so love it.� I went over to Joshua and Celeb's new crib.� I had the brothers and Joseph, the twins Mike and John and Anthony, Eric, Steven and a new friend of Steven, Tyrone.� Steven told me Tyrone had the inches and skill I crave.� I needed a hard core interracial gangbang.� The twins have a cool pad on the river.� Huge, high ceilinged rooms.� The living room is spacious with low back furniture.� I noticed a huge ottoman when I came in.� My friends were soon all there.� I was so excited as I stripped down along with my fuck mates and seeing so many rock hard, large black and white dicks.� I was on my knees sucking so hard on the cocks stuffed into my mouth.� I bobbed and twisted hard as I reveled feeling their dicks filling my mouth and jamming the back of my throat.� I soon had spit all over my face, throat and chest.� I loved hearing my loud slurps and the sounds of me spitting on their cocks to get them really wet to let me pump them extra hard.� I so love sucking dicks and fisting other dicks.� I so loved having black and white dicks stuffed hard into my mouth and being skulled fucked at times and having cocks jammed into my cheeks and ripped out the side of my mouth.� Soon I was doggy on the ottoman and was gagging feeling large cocks stuffed up my cunt as I sucked off whoever stepped in front of me.�� Other studs slapping my ass and gripping and jiggling my tits hard and pulling, twisting my nipples making my whole jolt and judder.� Soon enough I squealed when Anthony worked his eleven inch cock into my asshole and with steady pressure pushed up my resisting sphincter and buried it in my shit hole.� I was soon jolting hard my tits flopping as he punished my butt hole.� I was in heaven.� Sucking and being ass fucked.� Then feeling Anthony pulling out and seeing him come into view and swallowing his dick he pushed into my mouth and sucking my shit juice off it.� Gagging on his dick as another monster cock invaded my butt.� I was fucked up the ass and pussy and happily sucked and licked clean as they stepped to my face.� Dick after dick invaded and pounded my fuck holes in turn.

I was jerked up roughly and Celeb laid down on the ottoman and I straddled him and moaned so hard feeling his twelve inch cock invade my pussy fully spearing into my womb.� I looked back and saw Tyron and his eleven cock going for my asshole.� I groaned my head throwing back as his massive black cock fully slide up my asshole.� They pounded me so hard as I got on my palms and then weaken and laid on Celeb's chest as they fucked me brutally.� After a five minutes Tyron was in front of me and I sucked his cock with my twisting head moaning at the taste of my shit cream smeared all over it.� Dick after dick speared my spasming asshole and soon enough I cummed so hard as I groaned and flipped all over Celeb's chest my fuck holes exploding ecstasy to my soul and heart.� I loved being fucked through my orgasm making it last and last.� They roughly shoved me over to the sofa and dp fucked me as I sucked my bucks off as they stood behind the sofa.� I was moaning and cawing as dicks filled all three fuck holes.� Then I felt my eyes widen as Eric who was anchoring the fuck at the time with his cock in my pussy used the removal of dick that� turned out to be Mike's as I now sucked his dick clean of my shit juice to move his dick to my asshole.� I whimpered as I knew what was next.� Joseph moved n and worked his dick into my asshole already stuffed with thick cock.� I cried out and shook violently feeling my asshole being torn in two.� They double fucked my asshole and then pulled their cocks out and worked them both into my cunt stretching it out soaked in my shit juice.� I was swooning in ecstasy not knowing what fuck hole would be fucked next and by how many cocks.� I was being overloaded with raw sensations.� Joseph took my arms and crossed them behind my back and held them in place high and hard causing me pain as I cawed in pleasure.� He slammed his dick into my cunt on top of Eric's.� I had a devastating multiple orgasm that had me jackknifing and wallowing all over Eric's chest as Joseph pushed me down into his sweaty chest by my painfully crossed arms.� I was not a little groggy as they continued to use me as their fuck toy.� They started slapping my ass, tits and face and pulling my hair so fucking hard to keep the sensations pouring into my staggering brain.� I was dp, tp, and lots of double anal and cunt fucking.� I love strong bucks because they have the strength to fuck me standing.� A few times they hosted me up.� I looped my arms around the neck of my stud in front of me my hips clutching his hips as my ankles kicked and spasmed with my fuck rape.� I was swooning feeling myself riding thick long cocks as my bucks lifted me high and then slamming me down on dicks impaling my cunt and asshole.� My bucks changing up to keep the fuck going as my fuck holes were ravaged with some double anal which I had not experienced in this position in a long time.� It was Joshua and Celeb and my asshole was being destroyed filling me with shattering ecstasy.� My head lulled back on Celeb's shoulder as he whispered how hot I was into my ear as they hefted me up and I slammed down into their hard upthrusting cocks.� I lost it and had another multiple orgasm that had me cawing and shuddering with full body spasms.� It was so hot as my sweat slicked body slip and slide all over Celeb's sweaty torso as they ripped their cocks so hard and deep into my exploding shit hole.� My head thrashing on his strong shoulder as I cried out my fucking bliss as my asshole throttled me with fucking bliss.� They finished me off and I got on my knees and sucked so hard on their cocks cleaning my ass off their dicks murmuring how I loved the taste of my shit hole.� I was fucked for another hour all over the room.� I had two more orgasms and was fucked out and now just riding the wave of pleasure of being used.� I was on the sofa and the brother three had their dicks in all my fuck holes and I gagged feeling all their cocks spurting so hard into my body at once.� Then Mike and Tyrone got me on floor doggy with my cheek on the floor and my ass high in the air.� First Mike and then Tyrone pounded my booty hole and emptied their nut sacks into my worn out, spasming shitter.� Now I was on the ottoman again with Anthony's dick in my cunt and then I groaned so hard feeling John now stuffing his cock into my stretched and worn out cunt.� They pumped me so hard and I suddenly felt my body reviving and I was slamming back screaming at them to fuck me harder.� They did, my tits flopping and I felt my eyes spasm wide as their cocks both spurted so hard into my womb.� I wailed and flipped wildly my body bucking up and down slamming into Anthony's sweat soaked chest as my womb exploded and shredded as my womb was flooded with white and black semen.� I felt my eyes roll back as wave after wave of searing ecstasy shattered me feeling their cocks spasm and blast semen into my flipping womb.� I was in heaven feeling my tits crushed into Anthony's chest as we kissed sloppily his long tongue deep in my throat gagging me as my spasms shook me violently with fucking bliss.� They emptied their nut sacks into my cunt and roughly decoupled from me making me feel like a slut which made me shake with aftershocks.�� I was roughly hauled back to the sofa my cunt and asshole leaking cum and draped over the sofa arm with Steven slamming his beautiful black cock up my worn out asshole.� He pounded me my head jerking forward on Eric's belly as I sucked his cock as he sat on the sofa.� I was now totally spent but knew I had to offer my body to my final lovers.� I sucked away happily as Steven slapped my ass hard pumping my shitter.� He growled loudly and I lifted off Eric's cock and looked back as he roared "Take it you goddamn fucking white whore!"� slamming his dick hard up my asshole and juddering as his hips jerked jetting hot cum up my asshole making me gag feeling his semen flood my colon with fresh hot cum.� I he pulled out and crawled up on the sofa and sucked Eric off as his clawed my scalp and I glanced up seeing his head rocked back slashing his cock jerking in my mouth.� I smiled weakly around his cock spasming in my mouth as he screeched "Goddamn�Suck It!� � Suck itYou goddamn Slut!"� I choked on his hard spurts blasting down my throat and filling my mouth and dribbling out my mouth.� All my senses overloaded by hot fucking.� I was totally spent and totally satisfied.�

You now show again that ramping that only you show.� Other authors don't even have pacing in their stories.� Laura is treating Makeeda like a teenage slut needing chastisement.� I love being whipped like Makeeda is about to get.� I like how you do BDSM sparingly.� One needs to save such sex for the only occasional fuck to keep it fresh and new like you do.� I am amazed at how stories don't really show us what the women are thinking as they are fucking and being fucked.� I love reading their thoughts like here [And then she began to whip it with the belt in a frenzy, in a fury, whipping Makeeda rapidly and sharply, watching the alarm in her expression turn in a flash into terror and pain. She squealed and whinnied into the ball gag, but her cries were totally crushed and muffled. Laura whipped her harder. Makeeda writhed and moaned and screamed, as she had warned she would, into the gag, to no avail.]� I guarantee that other authors would just say that Laura would be whipping Makeeda's ass without any qualification.� You tell us that Laura is whipping Makeeda's ass with a "fury" and "frenzy".� This shows the raw, wanton passion that Laura is using to blister Makeeda's ass.� It shows the violence of the butt whipping.� I can get into each strike of the belt knowing the harshness of the blows.� Then showing us how true alarm is in Makeeda's eyes.� My women know they can totally trust me but they show this same fear when they know I am going to use my Amazon prowess to totally fuck them over and have them like Makeeda here; screaming and writhing in pain.� I so love the passion you show in your kink sex like here.� It is not in violence but in love that she is abusing Makeeda.� She is giving her slut what she needs at this time to make her happy.� You make this clear even as she blisters her ass.� One thing I like about your sex is I am never sure what direction your sex will flow like real life.� I just assumed that the belt would be used to the finish off the kink session.� Instead Laura changes to the palm of her hand to finish the abuse of Makeeda's ass.� You show the variation that other authors never show.� It just ups the amperage of the fuck like a hundred percent which you show.� I can feel the pain in my palm as I slap your ass, tits or face so hard.� I love feeling the sting knowing you are feeling it so much more than me.� This is part of the ramping that you are the master of.� It is this amping up of the sex act that makes sex so rad.� I love how you show the woman receiving it loves it.� Makeeda is being fucked abused and her ass blistered but her gyrations and supposed trying to evade the strikes, Makeeda keeps her ass in place for more abuse.� I love whipping a woman and have her trying to get away but not really trying.� Sometimes they do get away and I chase them into the next room or hall and drag them in by their hair after slamming into walls and doors and vicious slapping.� I notice that they are always by the door or near.� Even it takes me time to get there.� Sometimes I wait a few moments and love finding them waiting for me and then getting back into character.� Not only do you give us dialog between your characters but you also show us the vocalizations of fucking.� I get so tired of absolutely no vocalizations of the sex and kink here.� They just don't have sound in their fucking.� They would say that Laura is slapping her ass and that would be about it.� Hearing the actual sounds Makeeda is making adds so much to the story and the sex.� It was your sounds in your first four Karen stories that hooked me.� I was so blown away by them.� I nearly went crazy masturbating to your stories like crazy when I discovered them so many years ago.� Here we see the sounds that sound exactly right with a woman squealing through a gag stuffed in her mouth.� I can see Makeeda writhing in pain her head thrashing as her throats caws distress, pain and pure fucking pleasure.� I love how you make this so intense by the words you use.� You show Laura is still in the "frenzy" of slapping her ass mercilessly.� The way that Makeeda's firm ass cheeks are "jiggling" with the blows.� That makes me see it.� Other authors don't give any details in the sex to draw the reader truly into the story.� I love BDSM but I do it for pleasure and love like you show here [But she was not coming yet, only getting closer, Laura knew. Laura also knew that if Makeeda had truly wanted to get away, she could have easily rolled to the side, slid off the bed, ran from the room. Instead, she squealed and then clenched her fantastic buns and waved her ass in Laura's face, waiting for the next blow, which came in quick succession after the last one. Laura had never spanked anyone so hard, or so fast.�� "Mmmnngggeeeee! Mmmmnnngeeee!" Makeeda screamed, tossing her head, snuffling for breath through her nose, grunting, making a deep, guttural, lowing sound as the pain and sexual excitement gripped her quivering naked body.]� I love how you make it clear that this about love and not true domination and breaking of wills.� Geez, you are really capturing how the woman receiving loves it so.� This is exactly how I am when I am being love abused.� I want to feel the pain.� It makes me so wet and primed for explosive orgasms.� I too will be writhing and begging for mercy but never truly trying to get away because I want and need the punishing treatment I am receiving.� It overwhelms me and makes me cum so hard.� I loved being whipped in this position.� As I wail and flip with my back and ass being blistered it allows me to grind my cunt onto the bed, floor or thighs as I grind my mound and mash, squirt my clit making a big wet spot to hump and wallow my pussy in as I work my cunt to wet, sloppy nirvana.

Wow, Laura is in rare form today.� She is taking it to warp drive.� She surprises me by getting up from her spanking of Makeeda and getting more rope and then tying Makeeda's legs open with the other end tied around the bed frame down low.� Again, I don't get anything like this in other stories.� I have done this at times to my sluts and never seen anything like this in stories.� It is only tie up with rope parts of the body never using the furniture that is handy.� You really do use your imagination and experience to write great details in your stories.� I so love having my cunt exposed like Makeeda's here.� Having your legs all splayed out and your pussy all vulnerable like this makes me feel helpless and totally ready for fuck abuse.� My cunt just gets that much wetter and more swollen.� I just know her cunt is humping the air longing for love abuse.� Thank you for the details.� Laura is a lot sweeter than me.� I have to smile as she asks Makeeda if she is sure.� Of course she is!� I never ask because I know my sluts are like Makeeda.� They crave the pain and abuse.� If I don't hear the safe word it is full speed ahead, but still it is cute to read Laura's more gentle nature.� I love how you show the reader that Makeeda does indeed want it [After a second, Makeeda nodded, confirming it. She even made a soft, tiny "Mnnggg!" squeak into the ball gag.]� I have to love how Laura picks up the belt and proceeds to whip Makeeda's clit.� She knows how to work the clit up with light tapping.� I love it a lot more harsh than this but Makeeda is not as hard core as me and my sluts.� I know Makeeda is loving the sudden shocking jolts of the flat of the belt.� Laura is a great lover.� She moves her aim up and uses the belt on her trussed tits and hits them hard making her scream in pain that only sends bolts of fire and pleasure to your throbbing clit.� You show how to work the whole body to prime the clit for a massive, devastating orgasm.� I so love you showing the screams of pain of Makeeda.� I revel in making my women scream like you are showing Makeeda here.� Seeing their big tears of pain and terror makes me so wet and hungry to hurt them more as my clit and nipples pulse me with pure fucking excitement and pleasure.� I love to hear your scream and see you writhe in agony that is truly pleasure.� Sigh, you do so show the ramping up of great sex [She writhed and bucked, but quickly settled again into a twisting, gyrating rhythm as Laura brought the whip back to her swollen pussy. She might be afraid of the eventual punishment she could receive there, but nothing could keep her body from responding to the steady, relentless tapping Laura was administering. ��"Unggmm! Unggmm!" she began to grunt softly, swirling her pussy up into the belt that was steadily tapping the shiny, erect little berry of her clit, pushing out excitedly from its hood at the top of her splayed and wet pussy. "Ummngggg!"]� I so love great sex.� You bring me in by making clear the agony that Makeeda is in but she is still working her cunt up into the striking belt.� I am reminded of Kapri and Diamond.� You would think I was killing them with my cattail with their screams, curses and writhing body and yet their cunts are humping so hard up into the cattail or their nipples are all marked with my cattail and they never stay rolled over.� They may involuntarily role over for protection but roll over themselves or don't really fight me as I slap their faces viciously and pull their hair without mercy as they scream and force them back onto their back and again cattail their nipples and tit meat and upper chest.� I love to cover my tits when being whipped and having my hands ripped aside and given the same treatment to my face like I do them.� I love it when they fist my hair and slam my head into the mattress making me weak and docile and then my face slapped so fucking hard so many times as I weep and moan and then spitting in my face to fully humiliate me.� Your details are so loving.� How one's clit gets so engorged and exposed with this rough fucking.� That berry all exposed on your vulnerable vulva reading to be taken totally.

You use the kind of language that I love when I fuck ["You are going to come, you nasty little cunt," Laura said to her. "I shouldn't let you come. You want to come, don't you. You want me to whip it right out of you. Don't you."�� Frantically, Makeeda nodded her head, squirming even more heatedly now. "Mmnnggg!"�� Tap tap tap.�� "Ummnngg! Ummnngg! Nnggeee!"]� I love to talk like a whore in the bedroom but outside of I speak the king's English.� I don't curse during work or life in general but when I fuck I love to talk like a drunken sailor on leave.� I love it when Laura and her lovers get course in their language during sex.� Then I love how you show the taunt.� I love to tell my sluts what I am going to do them and hear them whimper and watch them shudder.� I love to use my voice to add to their torment.� What is cool is you show this.� The fact that you add dialog to your stories allows you to do so much more than other authors.� Their silence does not allow them to amp up the sex like you do.� All this excitement you show here is almost all verbal.� I so love making my sluts squeal and caw in need.� I can just hear those "taps".� Other authors tell me they are hitting the clit where you go tap tap tap.� Again this draws the reader into the story.� Plus, you show the little things yet again.� You detail how Laura can see the moment.� I call it the falling off the precipice.� That moment when you know the orgasm is forming and is going to happen no matter what.� Now is the time to focus with total love to make it happen with all the strength that you can make it happen.� I am going to quote the orgasm here which is a few lines.� The reason is because you actual show it.� I get so tired of other stories just saying the woman cummes hard without really showing my why it is "hard".� The lack of details leave me feeling cheated and frustrated not like here ["Oh god, you're going to come, aren't you, you nasty, fucking little cunt bitch!" Laura swore at her, picking up the tempo now, knowing this words would inflame Makeeda even further, knowing now that they were hurtling toward the finish line, only indeed seconds away from it.�� Still, she was not whipping Makeeda's pussy harder, only a little faster. But the increased speed was driving them both into a frenzy. Makeeda was now churning and gyrating her pelvis, pushing her pussy up to meet the whip, desperate to come. ��"Twat! Lying cunt! Fucking little shit!" Laura swore as she now began to deliver the final blows. ��"Unnmmggee! Unnmmggeee!" Makeeda squealed and whimpered, her hips shuddering as the last two or three culminating whacks, now delivered by Laura with full force, landed on her exposed, inflamed, vulnerable, and to Laura very beautiful pussy.�� "Oh god . . . yes . . . now!" Laura heard herself muttering almost under her breath as she watched Makeeda's whole luscious body go into convulsions in the grip of a fierce, rupturing orgasm.�� Makeeda's body arched, and the whole middle half of it rose up from the mattress, as she dug her heels into it, and her elbows, and shuddered violently as massive shockwaves gripped her flesh.�� "Mnngggiiieee!" she tried to shriek. "Mnngggiiieee!"]� Sigh, this is why I fuck.� You show it all and it makes me thankful.� This is a devastating kink orgasm.� You just capture what needs to happen to make sex great.� Sigh, you show right off the top the use of language.� Women love to be talked dirty too.� I may shock a newbie with it at first but soon they are craving it.� It is hot and slutty.� You know you are truly fucking and letting go when rough, coarse language is making your twat jump into however it is being pleasured.� I love making my sluts grunt, groan and squeal when I call them nasty names and racially degrade them.� The way their eyes bulge and nostrils flair and cunts or assholes jam harder into my mouth, cock or fist when I call my black lovers things like nigger, boot lip or fucking ghetto whore.� You so show the ramping up of sex.� Other authors never really show how the fucking just intensifies as one moves to the finish line.� The body strives to reach nirvana and fucks so hard to get there.� You show this where other authors just keep the sex moving at one speed.� No senses of urgency or rising need.� Without capturing this, you miss something that is special about sex.� How you strive for it, work for it.� Sometimes it explodes out of nowhere but usually you feel it coming and that divine tension that forms deep in the belly and must explode out in shattering, devastating ecstasy.� I love how you tell the reader that they are approaching the finish line and how the women know and working to reach it.� Makeeda is humping harder and Laura is striking her pussy faster (lucky: with me it would be harder too).� When you use words like hurtling and frenzy it so captures the urgency and desperation that Makeeda is feeling and desire by her lover, Laura to get her there.� Geez, I say something then I read how Makeeda is desperately humping her twat up into the strikes.� I so see this in my mind.� The sweat streaking off her body, her whinnies of desperation and thrashing of her head.� She is so close and she desperately needs to cum so fucking hard.

Wow, I am talking about ramping up and you are still showing it as the fuck reaches its shattering end.� I am just kind of overwhelmed at how you keep pouring it on.� I am stunned because other authors never show this.� Laura in fact surprises me and I love how you suddenly take it to the next level.� Only now does Laura raise her arm higher and give Makeeda's swollen, black cunt several severe whacks of the belt to finish her off with.� I expected more rapid strikes only but not the "now delivered by Laura with full force" blows.� Laura is so gentle with Makeeda that my belly lurched and nipples harden reading that.� She delivered a full hard core kink fuck and I am loving it!� So is Makeeda!"� I get so tired of reading in countless stories how the woman has an orgasm without any sweet, wet details. She just has a spasm or two and it is done basically.� At first, this was enough but long ago the lack of well detailed orgasms left me feeling cheated.� Here we actually see how the orgasm is tearing Makeeda apart with shattering ecstasy.� The way her body is "convulsing" in throttling spasms of bliss.� I never get descriptions like that from other authors. �This makes me feel her orgasm.� The way you detail Makeeda's heels and elbows digging into the mattress, to raise her mid torso off the bed to shudder in helpless throttling seizures of fucking ecstasy.� Again, I read nothing like that from other authors.� No sweet details like here.� This is an Orgasm!� The way you detail it where others just say she had a spasm without describing it.� Here you tell the reader that Makeeda is "shuddering violently", "massive shockwaves", "gripped her flesh".� This actually shows me just how devastating this orgasm is killing Makeeda with ecstasy.� This is why I fuck!� Each time I am killed with such ecstasy my soul sings with pure fucking joy.� Last night I was at Hillary and Camille's house.� They had given me hell for not seeing them in over three weeks and demanded I come over for the night.� I arrived and was immediately pounced on by two naked starving black pumas.� I was stripped as they dragged me to the bedroom and we feel to the bed as tongues twined in hot renewing love.� I was in heaven having two voluptuous black vixens slinking all over me as heavy tits slide over me as mouths mated tight and tongues flowed form mouth to mouth as the other sister kissed my neck, chest and all over my tits and working to my nipples and sucking in deep for long, hard love sucks.� i felt my cunt humping in love and need.� For a long time they took turns kissing me and working my tits in turn.� Then they slide between my legs pushing them out wide.� They then settled in between my thighs and started to lick my twat together as they tilted their heads resting a cheek on my inner thigh and lapping away at my slit and clit making me gurgle, caw and hump desperately.� They were smiling as they looked up at me.� One sister kissing up my thigh to give the other full access to my aching quim.� Her mouth free to suck hard on my clit and slide deep up my cunt hole making me cry out my inner petals sucking at her tongue.� Back and forth the worked my cunt and then working together again before working solo.� After long sweet minutes I felt that delicious tension forming deep in my belly.� I started to tense up.� I had been gripping the brass railing on the headboard and now my knuckles were whitening with my grip tearing at the rails.� They could see my orgasm rapidly forming and moved into both tongue lapping my slit again their cheeks sliding around on my now sweat soaked thighs.� I jerked the rails for another minute fighting my orgasm but suddenly it surged.� I slammed my hands on their heads and mashed their cheeks into my thighs to get their tongues closer into my juicing slit.� I jammed my head into the rails my neck wallowing on the bed as I wailed "Fuck my cunt! you fucking GODDAMN NIGGERS�ARRRRUUUUGGGHHHHH!"� I was devastated by shattering spasm after spasm throttling me as I jerked their heads hard and I felt full body convulsions shake me violently.� I finally came down from my long orgasm and the sisters slowly slide up and we kissed in languid love my head tilted right and left to kiss mouths full of my cunt essence.� I was cute how they now begged me to sit on their face first.� I had to finally say that Camille went first because age has its privileges.� Gods she sucked my cunt so good as I rode her face so hard as Hillary kissed my back and ribs and nipples when I was not riding Camille's face wildly.� I rode her face from the bridge of her nose to her chin making sure to grind my soaking wet slit up and down her whole face getting it totally slimed in my love juice.� I had to once more wail what a fucking nigger she was as I tried to pull the brass rails apart with wild jerks of my hands as I was shook violently with full body spasms.� I felt my womb shredded deep in my belly as my cunt convulsed fuck juice into her gulping mouth.� I was shuddering with heavenly aftershocks as Hillary encouraged me to slowly lift off Camille's face.� Camille scooted down and away.� Hillary now got between my thighs and looped her arms over my thick thighs and said "Ride my face hard you fucking white CUNT!".� I felt my body instantly revive and rode her face as hard as I had rode her sister's face.� It took me longer to get wound up as I rode her face hard and then slowed to do slow circular grinds as she sucked my cunt meat into her mouth to munch and worm between her thick, sensual lips.� She moaned how she loved sloppy seconds.� Camille moved in on her knees to kiss my back, ribs and necks with her sensual lips adding so much to my pleasure.� I worked my tits and combed my fingers through my sweaty hair to adding to my own pleasure like the slut I am.� I finally felt my womb beginning to flip and tighten up again and shrieked at her to suck my clit she had buried between her lips.� She now deep throat love sucked with hard cheek hollowing sucks her tongue slapping my clit jutting out her mashing lips.� I had to scream "Oh fuck�you goddamn black cunt" as I now whinnied wildly as my hands looped� underneath her head and jammed her face deep into my cunt as she continued to love suck my clit.� "FFFFFUUUUCUCKKKKKK�SUCK� IT HILLARY!" I screamed as my cunt ruptured and my cunt hole gushed fuck juice all over her face as I cummed so hard as five searing ripping spasms tore my womb almost out my belly as I sobbed pure love to Hillary while Camille kissed my shoulder and whispered how much they loved me and to never deny them so long again.� Hillary moaned as my cunt gushed fuck juice all over her face and neck.� Her lips now gently lathing my spent clit.� Sigh, in a few minutes it was my turn to dine on sodden, black cunt meat for long succulent hours

I love how Laura is almost overwhelmed by the power of Makeeda's orgasm.� I just revel and bask when I make you cum so hard.� I know I have done my job when I make you cum super hard and as much as your body can endure in a night.� I love making my sluts cum like this [But it was equally shattering, she knew, for Makeeda in a very short period went through five, six, seven wrenching convulsions and muffled shrieks before her exhausted body fell back to the bed.]� This is why I fuck with my all.� I want you totally spent and sexually in love with me.� I have to smile at Laura panicking worried that Makeeda can't breathe.� She may feel like she can't breathe but she can but Laura is a much gentler soul than me.� I love the love this shows.� This has been a hard fuck but you show that only pure love is guiding it.� For some reason most BDSM stories don't emphasis the love in kink sex.� The women want it but I wish they would show the love between the women more.� I love the black women getting abuse from white men and women stories but other authors make it boring.� Plus, most don't have love involved.� Everyone is getting off but no depth of emotion that you show in your kink stories.� I only let women I love and trust BDSM me.� Women can use the whip on me.� Men can get rough with me but only women share BDSM sex with me.� This is so loving and gentle [But Laura covered her mouth with a ravenous kiss before she could get out anything else. "Ummmmnnnn . . . ummnnnngggg!" she hummed and groaned into Makeeda's mouth, slithering her tongue in deep, feeling a coarse, animalistic hunger for her.�� "Oh god, Laura, yes!" Makeeda panted, suddenly coming to life out of her groggy trance of ecstasy.]� I love how you show the reviving after a truly harrowing orgasm.� I love the groggy lassitude leaving my spent flesh as I once more feel the fuck hunger filling my body and veins with the need for orgasms.� Again I love your language like "ravenous".� You so know how to show the deep passion of great sex between women who love each other.� I so love deep French kissing and love reading it.� Wow, Laura is really in kink mode.� I love how she now falls on Makeeda's tits that are now really strangled in their tight bounds and jams those nipples deep into her mouth and hard sucks making Makeeda wild with need for it.� This is the way to fall on a love abused body.� It does make you cum so hard.� I would be sucking those bursting nipples so hard as I slapped her exposed tits making her scream in pain and ecstasy.� Wow, this ramping up over and over is truly so freaking hot to read.� You have done this over and over in this story and I never get it at all in other stories.� [Laura was quickly all over Makeeda's partially bound body. Since Makeeda's thighs were still held apart by the ropes, her crotch was completely vulnerable, and Laura quickly pushed her own sopping wet and throbbing pussy into Makeeda's exposed slit and began pumping wildly. At the same time she tried to completely consume Makeeda with her hands and her mouth, almost tearing at her sweet dark flesh in a nearly insane fit of physical hunger.�� The hot, wet gash of Makeeda's swollen pussy mashing against hers was overpowering. She needed it, she had to have it, she had to feel the raw slippery wet meat of Makeeda's cunt flesh sliding and pushing into her own, and the feel of it nearly drove her crazy.�� "Mmmnggggg . . . oh god . . . oh god I love you . . . oh god I want you I love you I . . . I . . ."]� I love Laura taking advantage of Makeeda's trussed thighs giving her full access to Makeeda's cunt and humping wildly.� Kink sex makes me even more aggressive than normal and I have seen it make normally wall flowers simply fuck me up over and over and loving it.� I love seeing them snarling and full of passion as they slap me viciously, drag me around by my hair making me scream and use full arms strikes to hit me with their floggers.� I revel in the pain and love it and love seeing women feel empowered and confident enough to let their kink self out and totally enjoy being a sadist instead of just a masochist.

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I so love hard core kink sex.� I love the pain and degradation.� It just makes me so wet and I cum so hard.� I especially love bringing new angels into the full realm of BDSM.� I love taking new sluts to La'Tonya and Belissa for the full fuck them over treatment.� With Galaisha and Sade'� Dodie and I had quickly discovered they were no stranger to cock.� They had their own eight inch cock and found out they are like us.� They are bi with a definite preference for women.� Mainly each other but a need to share women.� Luck us!� We fuck men but make love to women.� They were total anal whores after my heart who loved atm and a2p already.� They had fucked dates together and were used to dp.� Dodie, Frankie and I and soon others showed the wonders of more partners with large strap-ons pounding up all three fuck holes at the same time fucking them hard and deep making ferocious orgasm rip their wombs and butt holes to shreds in shattering ecstasy.� I and Dodie introduced them to our male lovers and I reveled in watching large black and white cocks slamming balls deep into their bellies and down their throats after we taught them deep throat.� I especially swooned the first time Dodie and I had them on her bed doggy and we slide our fits up their tight assholes.� Groaning as I worked Galaisha's asshole with my love fist working first her sphincter slipping my fist out to smear her face in shit juice and worming back in to pound her inner sphincter and then working deeper into her belly.�� I smiled so big over to Dodie as soon we were both in time lunging our forearms up their assholes.� Our elbows jamming into their big ass cheeks making them gurgle and so gutturally groan in fierce pleasure.� Up and down our fist plunged in their colons as their bodies thrashed and big tits swirled and flopped.� Slipping out in time to smear their faces with fresh warm shit juice and letting them lick our forearms with long lewd tongue strokes listening to them moan how much the loved licking their assholes off our arms. �Sigh, they cummed together as we lunged our twisting fists hard deep into their bellies jerking our arms to work their sphincter and make them feel our fists jolting in the depths of their bellies.� They both screamed so hard and long as they flipped and jackknifed wildly and collapsed on the bed in sweaty heaps our arms buried up their asses as we now kissed their backs and cooed to them how much we loved them.� We went to snake our fists out but they both begged to keep impaled for a long time our forearms up their asses.� Finally, they let us pull our soaked forearms out their spasming assholes.� Dodie and I got on our backs and took our loves in our arms and smeared their faces and hair with fresh ass juice.� We then slowly licked, kissed their faces and hair cleaning off their asshole cream as we kissed the sisters deeply to taste their shit holes in our mouth.� I could just feel our love bonding tighter.� It got even more tight when in the morning it was Dodie and I having our butt holes impaled with black forearms and our faces soaked by black hands soaked in our shit juice.� I so love feeling a hand smearing my ass juice all over my face and running your shit creamed fingers through my hair and especially looking over and seeing Dodie having the same thing done.� I love seeing her black hair streaked and soaked in shit juice.� Gods we cummed with so much screaming and wild flips and jackknifes as the sisters used all the skills we had taught them to fully pleasure our assholes.

Dodie and I have corrupted and violated the sweet sisters.� They were already pros to cock with dp action when sharing dates.� They had not been roughed up like we do it and with our male loves but they took to the hard, deep sex like ducks to water.� I swooned seeing large dicks impaling their tight bung holes, clasping cunts and down their throats after we taught them deep throat.� Seeing all three fuck holes impaled with large dicks and strap-ons.� They loved the pain and humiliation when we fully showed them the pleasure of cursing, racial epitaphs, hair pulling, slapping of the face and tits and being punched with moderate force in the body.� The way their eyes rolled back when we choked them the first time and now they eagerly caw when they feel hands chocking them hard again shaking heads as eyes roll back and tongues lull out drooling.� We have shown them the pleasure of the whip, flogger and being chained up and handcuffed.� Still this not true BDSM to me.� This is hard core sex that makes sex so explosive as the wild threats of force and the thrill it generates makes you cum so hard.� I do some rope work but I can never come close to the symmetry that masters achieve.� I am sloppy compared to them.� Plus, I don't have the apparatuses and flair of the stage that you need for a full BDSM love fuck.� I and Dodie had told them of La'Tonya and Belissa.� Dodie has a master she goes to and I still once a quarter I guess go to the Madam for a session in her amphitheater� I love to have people watching me being tortured to so many fucking orgasms that I pass out sometimes in shrieking pleasure.� Galaisha and Sade' were hungry for a love session and I arranged it with Belissa and La'Tonya.� Of course I was going to be tortured with the sisters.

I had to smile as La'Tonya was so expert.� She asked for a full descriptions and lots of pictures.� She wants to be sure she has her apparatuses setup.� She told me she had some new toys to show off.� Her and Belissa have really gotten into it with their room over the large garage.� She wanted pictures of them fucking each other and us and loved the POV pictures Dodie and I took.� I also took some of the sisters standing in front of us.� Galaisha in front of Dodie and Sade' in front of Dodi in the classic Da Vinci pose of outstretched arms and legs to get a feel of their body dimensions and 5'5" height.� I know this was to get their torture apparatuses ready.� I took the sisters over on a Thursday night taking off Friday to have so many days to fuck gloriously.� We arrived and were greeted by our hosts and a beautiful tall, lean black vixen with tight cutoffs and midriff blouse showing her rock hard stomach.� Her lean muscled arms turning my pussy wet.� I knew instinctively she was to be my mistress.� I found out her name is Jada and just graduated from the black college on this side of the river.� She had been on the track team as a sprinter and 200 and 400 meter runner.� We got to know each other and La'Tonya asked the sisters the checklist of does and don'ts.� I smiled when there was no no's.� La'Tonya cocked an eyebrow at the sisters making it clear they wanted all the abuse and pain I crave.� I had to smile and shiver looking over and seeing Jada eyeing me with evil intent licking her black lips making my pussy flood with cream and my thighs clenching in want.� I watched them get up and walk casually over to us.� Jada was in front of me and La'Tonya in front of Sade' and Belissa in front of Galaisha.� I knew what was coming but I knew the sisters didn't realize that the fun started now.� "Why are you still dressed?" La'Tonya hissed at Sade'.� The sisters looked confused when La'Tonya suddenly slapped Sade' hard across the face making her head rock over with a squeal.� She looked back with fear as La'Tonya snarled "well" and slapped her hard again with another squeal of pain and now crying tears.� Belissa pulled Galaisha's head back hard with handful of hair and started to slap her face with hard strikes making her sob and cry out in real loving pain.� Jada moved in on me and I said "Forget it Nigger" with a tone of disdain.� I loved how her eyes flared as she barked out "They told me you had a fucking smart mouth Bitch!"� I had a defiant pose with my face out and sure enough I was slapped viciously and repeatedly like the sisters and soon I started to break with moans and squeals of pain and plenty of tears.

We were roughly jerked out of our clothes and slapped and haired pulled.� I loved watching the sisters stumbling and how Sade's top got caught up around her neck and over her head.� La'Tonya twisted it around her throat and jerked her around harshly choking her cruelly as she stumbled.� La'Tonya jerked hard and twisted it more choking her to the point only panicked squeaks were cawing from Sade' mouth.� She fell to her knees as Sade' now wept and choked for mercy when La'Tonya loosened her hold (but no safe word).� La'Tonya half chocked her as she screamed at her and now twisted an arm behind Sade' making her scream in pain and choked her now with her other hand as the poor girl cawed and wheezed.� Belissa actually ripped Galaisha's dress off as it tattered and Belissa laughed as she slapped the girl viciously on her face and now tits.� Belissa did what she loves and grabbed her nipples twisting them and jerking hard making Galaisha scream in pain as she tried to writhe away which only got more vicious slaps.� I was being slapped and spit in the face with my head twisted around as Jada fisted my hair to jerk my head painful to and fro as she slapped me all over my face and tits.� It took a while to get fully stripped with all the abuse were receiving.� Belissa made sure to rip apart Galaisha's frilly bra and panties that she begged to not be ruined.� Belissa screamed at her "Shut your fucking mouth, you fucking Goddamn Caribbean piece of SHIT!!" while slapping her face so hard on both cheeks while spitting in her lovely face for daring to order her around.� I noticed that the sister's eyes had that dilated look, their nipples rock hard and their thighs and groins glistening in cunt juice.� I knew I had the same look.

We were roughly led to the room of pain I like to call it.� They took the opportunity to smack our asses a lot along with lots of hair pulling making us yelp and cry hard.� I had milled around enduring Jada's verbal abuse and vicious slaps across my face, tits and now ass.� She gripped my head with two fists of hair and screamed at me why I was not moving when ordered.� I just cried and endured her spitting in my face over and over before using her hand to wallow her spit into my pores and hair and then slapping me so hard over and over making me cry so hard and loud as my cunt convulsed cunt juice down my thighs.� I had milled around so I could follow the sisters and watch their legs, ass and back work as we walked through the house and up the steps to the room above the garage.� I so love to watch voluptuous women's legs and ass work.� I felt my pussy quiver watching their strong muscles work as they went up those steps.� I so love strong legs, gluts, and shoulders.� I had to mentally whistle entering the room.� It had been over a month and they indeed had new toys.� I saw two new chairs constructed in bars for easy assembly and change of configuration.� I was fascinated by them but couldn't let on.� I also noticed a new two piston fuck machine with two large cocks attached.� I felt my fuck holes spasm at that.� I have seen on Internet and now I was going to experience one!� They led us to the far wall which has free space and jammed our faces into the wall and told us to not move or else.� They went off to the back room to strip and get ready to really fuck us over.� I asked the sisters in a whisper if it was everything they thought it would be.� They were still hiccupping from their pain and crying.� Galaisha just nodded yes with a soft smile and Sade' said "Fuck yeah!" softly.

I heard our tormentors walking up behind us.� I heard the tassels whispering over the floor.� I looked over at the sisters and smiled knowing what was about to come.� Suddenly, their heads rocked back as screams and then guttural moans started to whinny as I watched the tassels of floggers striking their body as I clenched my teeth and groaned deep in my throat as Jada flogged me mercilessly.� La'Tonya, Belissa and their prot�g� don't whip you lightly.� Belissa calls it "scourging the bitches".� I glanced back and saw their arms wind milling to whip us so fucking good as the sisters screamed in raw pain and pleasure.� They whipped us up and down or back and I know my ass was red with the whipping it was taking.� They finally whipped us around and flogged our tits, bellies and cunts.� I was so fucking wet my cunt so swollen as Jada flogged my tits so good making them burn and scream in pleasure and pain.� The sisters were at times tying to scurry away on the wall which made me grimace smile as Belissa and La'Tonya moved in to slap them so hard in the face and use their hair to jerk them back against the wall and flog them even harder as they wailed and tried to protect their throbbing cunts and nipples with arms that were flogged cruelly until dropped away.� Finally, Belissa moved in and rubbed Galaisha's cunt and announced she was "What a Fucking cunt!� she is a fucking river down there!".� That made La'Tonya announce that we needed further discipline.

They got out the rope from the boxes and soon had our tits strangled with perfect coils and several coils lightly pressing in our throats to make us feel it without choking us.� They had rope on each side of our vulva's making our kitties bulge and flower our labia lips.� La'Tonya moved Sade' over to the rack she has.� It is a conduit coil spool cut in half making a big half-circle.� She has clamps on the floor on rails and had used the pics to get them set already and soon had Sade laid out on it her back severely arched her wrists and ankles cuffed to the locks on the floor.� Her strangled tits all upthrusts and glistening.� Belissa put Galaisha into one of the new chairs that had been sized to her frame.� She looped arms behind her back and on several rails and used rope to tie them in hard to the rails.� Galaisha has very full tits and Belissa had them strangled from the top and bottom her big areola and nipples bulging out and aching for the whip.� I was hooked to chains hanging from the ceiling and an ankle bar locked to my feet and anchored to the floor.� My own tits coiled like Sade's gourd tits.� We were all positioned to watch each other be "tortured".� The floggers came out and again we were flogged mercilessly as we once wailed and cried.� I loved feeling my tits scream in pain as Jada whipped them over and over.� Seeing her move to slap my face and tits and frig my flowing cunt.� I loved seeing La'Tonya flog and cat tail Sade' as she humped and screamed in pain.� Galaisha was trying to writhe as Belissa flogged and move to the cat tail at times to flick her nipples making her scream all caps.� She was whipping her head screaming at her to stop.� Belissa hesitated a few moments but no "safe" word and she again struck her nipples with the cattail making her scream again and again.� I was screaming too as Jada made sure to cat tail my pussy, ass and nipples.� After a long time the wands out came out and we had orgasms ripped out spasming cunts as we had to count to 10 and ask for permission to cum.� The poor sisters couldn't do it and were really slapped senseless as they constantly lost count and forget (or to hell with it) and cummed without permission.�

They would make us cum so hard and then go back to the whips, floggers and now the cane came out.� I was soon covered on my thighs, belly, tits and ass with red cane marks that had me really screaming.� I so love the taptaptaptapTAP of the cane that had my pussy so clenching and aching that this time I did not make the 10 count when Jada finally wand my cunt.� Jada really slapped me hard in the face for that, dragging my head back by my hair spitting in my face and eyes making me weep and beg for some mercy which only made her laugh at me as she made my head explode to the side with her slapping hand.� I loved watching and listening to the sisters whimper and grit out numbers and not making it as they shrieked when another orgasm was ripped out their exploding cunts as the wands overloaded their clits yet again.� I smiled when La'Tonya wheeled the fuck machine to in front of Sade's racked body.� She methodically aimed it and locked the wheels.� She positioned the two rods, the cock heads pressed into her cunt and shit hole. She turned it on and had it on slow motion.� I watched those cocks quickly work into Sade's fuck holes and La'Tonya turned the speed up slowly until they were pistoning in counter time in and out her tight fuck holes.� Soon Sade' was constantly moaning and arms and ankles jerking in their manacles.� She was fucked for a few minutes before La'Tonya moved in with her wand and circled it over her mound for a minute and Sade' suddenly was thrashing her head wildly and screamed "I'm ccccuuuummmiinnggggggggg!"� She had killing spasm after spasm as La'Tonya jammed her clit and hammered her fuck holes with the machine as I watched her asshole try to tear itself inside out on the dick plunging deep, hard and fast up her shitter.� We were fucked out.

The finally released us and unbound our tits.� We were sitting on the floor moaning and hugging each other in our pain and we moaned loudly when it was announced that we needed to be fucked like the whores we were.� La'Tonya and crew spent some time in the back room and I heard giggling and much conversation.� The sisters were kissing and stroking each other the sluts getting excited despite their exhaustion.� I watched Belissa stick her head out and she had red horns on her head with a cute red band in her hair.� She barked at us to not have any fun with a big smile on her face before it disappeared.� Finally, after five more minutes they appeared.� The sisters were still snogging rolling around on the floor humping each other now as tongues stabbed back and forth in tightly mated mouths.� My mouth had fallen open my eyes wide.� La'Tonya and crew all had red horns and strap-on harnesses to which they had attached red tails that were waving high above their heads.� But that was not what had made my eyes bulge out.� Their cocks were like demon dicks.� They were two feet long and at least 3 � inches thick.� They were hanging down waving obscenely with their gate like a cartoon I saw in Hustler magazine long ago.� They stood around and finally the sisters registered them and looked up and squealed.� They sat up and we looked at their cocks like hypnotized sluts.� Jada barked at me to suck her dick and I lifted it and spit all over it and got the head into my mouth and bobbed as much as I could which was little.� I heard the sisters doing likewise as we got the cock heads lubricated.� They thrashed our faces with their massive cocks and got us on our hands and knees doggy style.� I groaned deep in my chest when I felt Jada's cock invading my pussy and stretching it out fully as her dick head was quickly pounding my cervix.� I looked over getting even more excited as I watched La'Tonya and Belissa's demon cocks pound the sisters' cunts.� We were pushed off the massive cocks fucking our twats and we eagerly cleaned our demon lover's dicks.� They fucked us good and I cummed so hard as I wailed and my body had full body spasms.� As I cummed down from my orgasm I watched La'Tonya and Belissa pull their dicks out the sisters cunts and move their dick heads up and push them into the nineteen year old sister's bung holes.� They shuddered and groaned so hard as their shit holes were worked up and soon fifteen to eighteen inch of cock went up their assholes.� I cried out when my own shitter was pried open by Jada and she shoved her cock all the way up my colon until it couldn't go any further.� They slammed their dicks hard and deep up our assholes as we thrashed and clawed at the rubber mats.� I watched their demon lovers pull their dicks out their assholes their black dicks soaked in shit cream. They walked around and rubbed their dicks all over Sade' and Galaisha's face before allowing them to swallow their cock heads to clean with load moans of pure happiness.� Soon I was cleaning my shit hole off Jada's cock.

Again and again we had our assholes and pussies pounded with thick demon cocks.� I felt my eyes roll back and really spasm hard when La'Tonya and Belissa pulled their cocks out at the same time from the sister's clutching assholes.� They stayed straddled over the sisters butts as they looked back with hunger to suck more shit juice off their lovers dicks.� Instead their demon lovers gripped their cocks lifting them and lowered their mouths and sucked the sister's shitholes off their own cocks.� Their mouths clamped tight on their own thick dick heads bobbing as much as the thick cock heads allowed.� That was awesome!� They bobbed and twisted their heads hard as they sucked with lewd slurps.� They told the sisters how sweet their assholes tasted.� Jada had continued to pound my booty as her fellow demons sucked ATM.� I cleaned her dick a few more times once after an awesome orgasm.� She continued to fuck me so good.� She pounded my asshole super hard and got in front of me again and my eyes zeroed in on her cock yet again.� Instead she lifted it right before I could suck it into my mouth and I watched her lift it and lower her head locking eyes with mine and opened her mouth wide swallowing her dick head as I moaned.� She clamped her thick lips tight and bobbed slow and sensuously her head slow twist all the while looking at me.� My eyes rolled back watching up close her do ATM on her dick soaked in my shit hole.� It was so hot as they laid on their backs and we did cowgirl impaling whatever fuck hole we choose.� They watched with glittering eyes as we guided their dicks back and forth between our stretched out cunts and assholes before sucking clean to then stuff back up spasming shit holes before stuffing into our cunts with dicks soaked in our shit cream.�� They even did some dp on us with their cocks as our cunts and assholes were stretched to their limits and more orgasms were ripped out stuffed cunts and assholes.� Kink sex is so awesome because you simply don't know what and how it will go down.� It is an awesome spice to one's sex life.�

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I have always loved how you show the actual fuck and how one strains for the finish line.� It becomes almost urgent when you feel an orgasm forming deep in your belly and you know it will tear your belly to shreds when it explodes out flooding your body with fucking ecstasy.� I keep trying other stories and I am almost saddened how I don't get this from other authors.� The sex happens without any urgency and with a blandness that leaves me wondering why they are fucking to be begin with.� You never forget to show how rad great sex is.� Laura and Makeeda are so obviously straining and striving for nirvana.� You have shown their bodies all sweaty and fucking hard.� I love how you make it so clear how Laura has tied Makeeda's legs to open up her cunt for hard tribbing.� I know they must be gagging in deep love feeling their sodden cunts slipping and sliding over each other flooding souls with pure pleasure and love.� When you tell us that Laura is assaulting Makeeda's exposed cunt with "hungry fuck-assault".� I can just see the hard humping and grinding of their cunts as Makeeda fucks up her open pussy showing her inner cunt petals clutching and opening wetly.� Seeing such loving sights make me fuck you with hungry fuck love.� I am smiling great big when we get more of that wonderful slice of life dialog that you give the reader.� I get so tired of the silence of other authors.� Laura is love cooing to her woman and Makeeda is basically telling her to shut up and fuck her.� I can get to babbling when I am love fucking and I often get a variation of shut the fuck up and fuck me goddamn it.� Hearing such love words always makes me smile and then pour it on as I fuck you with everything I have.� Gobbling your pussy like there is no tomorrow or plunging my cock as deep and hard as possible into your clutching pussy or shit hole.� Again, I love how you show the ramping up of great sex.� You have brought the reader along with the fuck and we can feel it coming with all the urgency that this fuck has generated.� You draw me into each of the fucks with the wonderful details and the pacing that you provide.� I can't stress how important pace is in a story and you have mastered it.� What kills me is that so many stories have no pace what so ever and many that do, have it with such a slow pace that it is deadly.� You have mastered the perfect length of story and then give us story and great sex.� Perfect!!!� Of course you show us the glorious end game of hard intense fuck ["Oh!" Laura cried out. "Oh!"�� "Yes. Unnmmnnggghiiiiieeee!" Makeeda wailed, flipping and surging off the mattress.�� "Oh!" Laura cried out again. She churned, she pumped, she pumped, she gyrated. "Oh! UMMNNGGGHHIIIEEEE!"�� "Ahhnnngggg! Ahhnngggg!" Makeeda moaned. "Ummmmm!" ��Laura's sharp cries mingled with Makeeda's, and for several seconds their bodies collided like two galaxies meeting in a huge conflagration, erupting, exploding, shooting and spurting great geysers of fire into the air, groaning and grunting and gasping together as thrilling, wracking convulsions of their twin orgasms gripped them.]� It is your sounds that really makes your sex so wonderful.� When I cum hard I have to vocalize it and my lovers do it to.� With women who are more quiet by nature I softly encourage them to let it out and so enough that they are much more vocal in their pleasure. �Don't let man's world keep us down and quiet.� I so love how you actually give us sounds of women fucking but they are varied and of different force.� Just like life.� Plus, other authors if they have sounds keep it bland.� You use words like wail, flip, surge, churn, gyrated in your descriptions of their orgasms.� This makes this fuck so individual.� Other authors keep their fucks so bland that they are all alike.� No two of your fucks are alike.� Sex by its definition is repetitive.� There are only so many basic acts and pairing.� Being bi gives me a few more options but still the same basic acts.� It is the pouring of ourselves into the fucks that makes them so wonderful.� You show this again and again.� I have to love the galaxies colliding metaphor.� Now I know I will never read that in another story!� That is a wonderful end to the fuck.� I can just see their bodies coiling and surging into each other to give each other maximum pleasure.

Makeeda goes into one of her seizure orgasms.� I have never seen a woman have one of these I think.� I have seen women get throttled with multiple orgasms that flow into each other making her just cry out and surge and flop over and over but nothing like this.� I will see some surging and receding.� I have stunning and horrendous orgasms but I wish I could a few of these.� I live to have great fucks like what you constantly give me.� Two nights back I was at Tisa's place with her first cousins Anthony and Eric.� We had fucked the brothers gloriously for an hour I guess and each of us had three orgasms fucked out our pussies and butt holes.� We were on her king size bed and ramping up again.� I was riding Eric cowgirl his cock plowing my pussy as I swirled and humped my cunt into his hard up thrusts.� I was watching Tisa getting fucked missionary, Anthony's eleven inches slamming in and out her asshole as he punched his hips.� He would rise and settle down over Tisa.� He was on his palms now arching his back to torpedo his dick up her shit hole.� I could see the tension gripping Tisa as her head thrashed and her groin up jolted to take his dick fully up her spasming shit hole.� She suddenly gripped his strong biceps and began to really churn her hips uptiliting her ass up and giving Anthony full access to her shitter his cock pounding into her booty wet slapping sounds filling the room as sweaty bodies slapped into each other.� She began to grunt groan and caw out "fuck me, fuck me, fuck me Anthony!" as her head thrash harder and her eyes looked up at me with slashing grimaces of rising ecstasy.� Her fingers clawed at her first cousins strong upper arms as she now moaned loud ragged moans one after another her groin slamming up to take his dick fully up her shitter.� Suddenly her body began to flip and jackknife as loud shrieks of shattering ecstasy filled the room.� I loved watching her tits jiggle and flop with her pal mal throes of shattering ecstasy as she cried out whinnying caws of crushing bliss.� She is so fucking beautiful when she cumes.� Watching her cum so hard and well made my own womb suddenly start to clench and my cunt clutch the thick, long black cock plowing up into my womb.� I really began to surge up and down my tits flopping and whiplashing up and down with splatters of sweat flinging off.� I looked down at Eric grimacing as he coiled his hips to lounge his prick into my down plunging cunt.� I sagged forward to grip his shoulders to get purchase to swirl, slam my cunt hole onto his savage up thrusts.� I watched my tits swirl and flop as he reached up to grip my ribs hard and slam me back and down into his cock.� I knew he was using his ankles to get purchase and change the angle to now pound my cunt with hard pounding thrusts his heavy nut sack pounding my ass cheeks.� I felt my womb tightening and my eyes slitting as I cried out to Eric "Pound my cunt! Eric!�fuck me harder goddamn it!"� His eyes light with fire and his dick now pounded into my womb with savage strokes.� I was moaning constantly now.� I kept love grunting and cawing feeling my cunt pleasured so expertly.� My fingers gripped his strong shoulders with a death grip as my head rocked back suddenly as my orgasm exploded out my shredding womb.� I screamed and wailed as I flopped and flipped wildly my tits whiplashing and my groin slammed up and down into his pile driving strokes as my mind filled with pure fucking bliss.� My stomach felt like my muscles would shed themselves as I felt my count spasm out fuck juice all over his groin and creaming his cock with my whitish cum.� I was weeping tears of pure joy and pleasure as strong aftershocks just throttled me over and over with searing ecstasy.� We now got on our knees and sucked off the brothers.� I loved how Tisa was gripping Anthony's strong thighs as her head bobbed hard and with strong slow strokes.� He gripped her head and got her to bob harder and faster her cheeks hollowing out with her love sucks.� He looked like a half man, half animal with his slashing, snarling face as he roared out "Suck it you Goddamn Fucking Nigger BITCH!!"� He jammed his cock into the back of her throat and held her head hard his hips pumping his dick into the back of her throat as he now roared his orgasm his hips raggedly humping as he blasted hot semen into her throat and filling her mouth to overflowing.� I and Eric had slowed to slow head bobs to watch the show.� Now I ramped up twisting my fists behind my mouth sucking and twisting on his bulbous cock head.� I worked his dark black dick.� I loved feeling this thick dick in my mouth as I slow twisted my head my lips locked onto his dickhead as I deep throat sucked and wormed my tongue over his piss hole and glans.� I started to supper suck as I clamped hard to really work his dick head as I now massaged his nut sack with one hand the other pumping his shaft.� I was twisting my head now sliding his dick head up and down my tongue as I hard sucked.� I twisted my head my sweaty , lank hair jerking against my tits and shoulders making me feel so slutty and hot.� I reveled hearing his strangled "Ohhhhhh Goddddddammnnnnnnnnn" as his cock started to jerk and spew hot semen into my mouth and throat his heavy spurts overflowing my mouth with his hot semen feeling it leak out my lips as I choked and continued to suck his cock as his whole body spasmed with pleasure with my mouth sucking pleasure from his thick bulbous cock head.� I felt so connected to my lovers.� This is why we fuck to feel this connection as fill ourselves and each other with pure pleasure.� It was great because now Tisa and I fucked for the next hour until the brothers were ready again and now they switched up and Anthony fucked me so gloriously.� We were finished both spoon on the floor face each other as Anthony filled my ass with semen and Eric filled his first cousin's asshole with his hot cum.� I was whipped as Tisa showered with me.� The slut worked my tits, pussy and ass trying to get me going again and I kept croaking that I was tired and lets go to bed and sleep.� Fortunately, she did not listen to me.� She kept working my tired body until the spark ignited and soon she was sucking me off in the shower and then I her as she screamed and slammed into the shower stall wall so hard over and over.� We then went to bed and fucked for another round of intense lesbo love making sucking, tribbing and finger fucking more glorious orgasms out bodies craving and needing female love.

I am smiling as Laura's weight finally begins to register on Makeeda.� I am always careful with my female lovers and even my male lovers.� Being an Amazon I will crush most of my female lovers.� Only fellow Amazons like Dodie can take my weight for any length of time.� She loves to have my exhausted prostrate form on her strong body and I love hers on mine.� With other women I know to use my elbows, knees and angles to take my weight off my lovers.� With men they almost all love to feel my weight on them for a while like Makeeda here.� I so love to feel a sweaty body on mine after intense love making.� I feel so connected to you at these times.� I love how you show post coital time.� Other authors again forget to show this.� This time of bonding and melding between women.� I want and need to feel your body against mine after wondrous, exhausting sex.� Even with men I love to feel our sweaty bodies rubbing and sliding against each other as we kiss and twirl tongues in afterglow of great sex.� I have to chuckle at Laura being quick to explain to Makeeda that the marks from the rope will disappear within a few hours.� Makeeda is so hot and loving.� She wants the marks to last and last.� I want to have the marks of kink sex all over my body at work.� Knowing underneath my clothes I am a complete pain slut and only I know it.� I love to look in the mirror and see the marks all over my body and shiver remembering how they were put there and I once more relive the great fuck.� This is like reading your stories.� I get to again bask in the great fucks you give the reader.� I love Makeeda more when I see she has my tendencies.� She is a little bitchy like Dodie but you have to love her.�

Sigh, I see that Anya was supposedly a lie.� I wish that Makeeda would fuck all the beautiful women I know who are dying to fuck her.� I would want her too and to tell me all the details!!� Laura is a little angry at the lie but I know she is feeling relief at the fact that Makeeda did not fuck the angel that is Anya.� Laura is still a little greedy that way.� I would be asking Makeeda to bring Anya home.� I am smiling as Makeeda is ready to whip Laura if she is wanting a good whipping and already angling for more and even rougher sex in the future.� I hope she gets it!� Though I fear Laura might not be as aggressive as she wants her to be.� I guess you have to crawl before you can walk.� I am just thankful I got a good kink fuck this time!� Thank you for letting Laura cut loose!

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Chapter 331

I have to like how this chapter is starting because it so reminds me of me.� Laura is feeling fuck hunger for an angel.� Makeeda is her archangel and they have once more fucked gloriously but she has a desperate need to fuck Francine.� I so know that need myself.� I have my main babies but I so need to fuck other lovers regularly.� I have always loved the adjectives and adverbs that Laura uses when thinking of fucking Makeeda.� You are showing that Makeeda is her archangel.� I have to smile.� I don't use the words but it I so agree about the intensity that your words invoke.� I like that you invoke the words, because they make me feel the love that I feel for Joann, Maria and Dodi deep in my heart and pussy and asshole.� I simply need my babies to be complete.� You make clear that while sex is so very important between Laura and Makeeda it is that something extra in their relationship that makes it so special.� The sex is so intense and mind blowing but it is the additional sharing that makes me love my three archangels so completely.�� We complete each other.� They give me passion and I give them structure.� I definitely know that Makeeda gives Laura a structure that she finds comforting.� You are the only author that has shown what I would call true love that lasts over time.� I have read a few one shots that touched me with women coming together in love in nice stories.� But I have never got to see a see a story other than yours where love is a part of a relationship that a reader can read story after story.� Even chapters where Makeeda is not the lead you often give little moments that show the love between them to reinforce the strength of the relationship to the reader and also for the women I am sure.� I just like the time that you but in the story.� I love the time you put in the story line.� I am living these women's lives.� I found a story on Lesbian Lolita.� In two chapters that are about as long as one of yours I would estimate.� We find she is forty and a divorcee whose husband lavished praise to begin with but then things go sour.� She has had three daughters by the cad.� She gets seduced by a college friend.� Then her sister seduces her.� Then her oldest eighteen year daughter and her teacher lover seduce the mother with clear ground work being laid for the two younger daughters to get involved in the story.� That is awful lot to happen in two chapters!� Plus, the sex is the usual bland stuff.� I enjoyed the story because of the unusual setup.� The sex was laid out for the reader but again the standard no details and then the orgasms are just "she came hard."� Please! show me like Miranda why the orgasm are so great.� I can't enjoy an orgasm unless I am told why it is fucking rad.

I am also happy that Laura has grown to the point now she accepts her hunger for other women.� In the beginning of the story she used to beat herself up needlessly over her natural desire to fuck other women.� I have always accepted my need for other women and men in my life.� I hate man's world trying to keep us down and controlled.� Men have always been able to fuck around and get away with it.� I noticed in the bible that the men did the fucking and the women are always the ones blamed for the fact the men could not keep their dick in their whatever they wore back then.� I am so happy that Makeeda is so accepting of Laura's natural desires.� I think that Makeeda is getting pussy when on the road but keeps it to herself like Laura does except when she wants some kink love like the last chapter!� I do agree with Laura that sex with your archangel does have qualities that can't be matched.� The physical is the same but the emotional link that you have with your archangels can't be matched.� I love my three archangels and so many times when we cum in each other's arms the sex merges with the mystical and becomes something the gods envy in their thrown high in the sky.� I so love it when I am spearing my cock deep into Joann, Maria or Dodie's womb and we are fucking missionary and I can so see it in their eyes as the orgasm is hanging on the precipice and I slam my dick even harder into their belly as I start to chant and grunt "cum bitch!" over and over and I then bend down and suck a nipple in deep or lock lips tight and spear my tongue down their throat.� Sigh, the screams in the room or in my mouth as their cunts again explode on my love cock an I see them dying on my cock and I feel our love flowing so fully and freely in both directions as we just fall even deeper in love.� Taking my satiated slut in my arms and stroking her sweaty body as we kiss and cuddle after great sex and we whisper our love as only archangel do.� This is what you show with Laura and Makeeda.� You then show how having other lovers in your life keeps the sex with your main baby so fresh and rad.

I so know that fuck hunger you feel for a certain slut in your life.� I am really into this [And yet scarcely two days after Makeeda's departure, she found herself seething with fantasies of Frankie's lean, dark, naked body writhing in her arms or flexing under her deep, passionate thrusts, or shuddering in a grip of long, moaning orgasms that Laura had brought her to.]� I will suddenly finding myself hungering for a slut I have not had in a while.� I will remember past great fucks and feel the desperate need to have more orgasms in her arms and slamming my cock deep up her fuck holes.� I love all body types like Laura.� I love the voluptuous woman whose body shows the pummeling I am giving her with her flopping tits and jolting ass and thighs.� I love the medium build with the best of both worlds.� But I really love the lean greyhound body type.� Maybe because I am the voluptuous Amazon build myself.� I love the little titties I can inhale and devour.� The lean body I can fully control and the taunt buns I can pry apart and then sink first my tongue and fingers deep up your bung hole and then burying my cock balls deep and plundering your colon and giving you anal 'gasm after anal 'gasm.� Then other tines I am jamming the crook of my elbow into your tight ass crack as I lunge my fist up your colon.� Plus, you are describing the orgasms that Frankie has and she is not even being fucked by Laura.� You describe her body and show her orgasms to be "writhing, flexing, deep passionate thrusts, shuddering and long moaning orgasms."� All that and Laura is only reminiscing past great fucks with Frankie.� It just hit me writing that.� I don't think people remember past fucks no where enough.� I revel in past fucks.� When I have free time I just daydream about past great fucks as my belly spasms and panties get wet and my nipples ache.� I just feel the fuck hunger building.� I feel the desire for pussy and cock raging in my veins.� I noticed this about Laura early on.� She loves sex like me and loves basking in past great fucks.� I felt this with a white version of Frankie.

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Amber is seventeen now and has filled in nicely.� She is now five foot seven and has a cute butt and nice almost b-cup titties.� I love her long brunette hair and her ready smile.� Since her and Veronica broke up I have had a harder time keeping up with her than Veronica.� I have always loved how she loves cock and fist up her ass and the way she devours pussy.� We had texted in the last month but I was really hungering for her sweet body.� I called her up and she gushed how she missed me and I had been on her mind also.� We chatted and flirted as I rubbed my nipples and pussy getting wet for her.� I husked to her that I needed her so bad.� She chuckled lightly and told me I was so nasty. �She told me about her new girlfriend, Kaliah.� She told me how beautiful she is.� She is black and with medium brown color.�� She is five four and has 34dd tits made for pulping, a cute ass.� Her large eyes and slightly Asian caste with her Vietnamese mother.She is twenty-two and has her own little one bedroom apartment in a "black" neighborhood.� She runs payroll now in a large doctor practice.� They love her intelligence and work ethic.� Amber had meet her a lesbian bar downtown.� She spends a lot of her time at Kaliah's apartment and invited me over the next night.� Kaliah knew all about me and was "dying" to meet me.� Amber told me how awesome Kaliah is in the sack.� How she sucks pussy so good and loves strap-on cocks deep in her asshole.� I had to know about atm and a2p and felt my eyes roll back when Amber told me she lovvvveessss both.� She knew that Kaliah would love to meet me.� She told me to bring my cock.� I told her I loved her and got the address.� I went to bed and masturbated to two devastating orgasms reliving past great fucks with Amber and soon Kaliah.� I drove straight to Kaliah's apartment after work and was greeted by Amber at the door.� She was nude with a camcorder filming away.� I asked her about it and she told me it was brand new and HD and I was going to be in her first movie.� Over the last several years various lovers have been filming our fucking so I smiled at the new edition.� I am an attention whore.� I looked around for Kaliah and I was told to strip and go into the bedroom.� I felt a love tremor grip my body and I hurriedly tore my clothes off feeling my nipples now rock hard and my pussy all swollen and already wet.� Amber moaned telling me how good I smelled.� She filmed me as I walked to the room.� I saw Kaliah on the bed masturbating her fingers pumping her pussy the other hand pulling he clit hood back tapping her clit with her index finger.� Her face sweating slightly and her eyes full of slut heat.� Amber husked "Get on the bed and suck her off, Barbara."� I climbed up and gently pushed her hands away and lowered my mouth to her swollen cunt her long labia lips splayed out and several shades darker than her pussy and her clit poking out its hood.�

Her head was on the pillows pressed into the headboard.� I locked eyes lowering my mouth and sucked her clit into my mouth.� Her load moan making me even hotter.� I started to lap away and suck hard on her turgid clit.� I gave short love sucks and then long sucks stretching her cunt meat out.� Then tongue lashing and wiggling my head lashing her clit with my tongue.� Amber telling me to suck harder and sometimes pushing Kaliah's leg down to get it out of the way of her camera.� Soon Kaliah's hands clawed my scalp as I sucked her off and she wailed and flipped wildly as her cunt ruptured in my mouth filling it with sweet hot cum.� She lurched and writhed until spent.� I was kissing her now when Amber told us to trib and I positioned myself missionary our twats angling over to rub across her cunt with my own.� Soon we were humping wildly and gagging.� I loved how our tits mashed and flattened when we clenched as we swirled and jammed our sodden cunts into each other whimpering in rising need and love.� Amber told me to bend my head down to kiss her lover deeply and then suck her nipples and when to rise up and trib harder.� Our twats mashed and our clits dragging.� I was sweating hard now as well as Kaliah.� I was arching my back feeling my cunt trembling when Kaliah grabbed my ass and grunted "Fuck me Bitch!� Cum hard you fucking Bitch!"� She jammed my cunt across hers hard as I felt me clit dragging and mashing over her mound, clit and groin with extra pressure.� Suddenly my womb shattered and I screamed "Ffffuuuuccckkkkkkkkkk!"� as I jammed and slammed my cunt into her mound and groin.� I humped as my cunt soaked our twats in my love juice.� I was moaning like a whore as my body shook violently with spasms rocking my body so fucking hard.�� Amber then directed us with me sucking off Kaliah and then her me and lots of trib and finger fucking as we made each other cum twice more.

We were soaked in sweat both of our long hair soaked in sweat.� I loved how the sweat beaded in her stiffish hair and mine was so lank.� Amber threw me my strap-on told me to get synched in and fuck Kaliah missionary to orgasm.� "She loves it" Amber husked to me.� I got positioned between her legs and lowered my groin and rubbed my cock up and down her splayed groove as she looked up at me with pure love.� I then pushed my nine and half dick into her juicy cunt.� She gagged and moaned so loud as my dick sank all the way into her hot, tight cunt.� I sank down and kissed her deeply as our tits mashed and rock hard nipples drug into tit meat.� I started a love rhythm as my dick sank in and out her tight cunt.� Amber told me to go slow at first and exclaimed how her lover's cunt was clutching my cock on the out stroke all wet and red and jammed back into her cunt with my hips pumping my dick back into her cunt.� After five minutes, Amber told me to ramp up and I started to spear my cock into Kaliah womb with savage thrusts and then rabbit thrusts smoking my dick into her pussy as she thrashed and cawed her soul deep pleasure.� Her thighs clasped my hips and I felt her arms encircle me pulling me down hard as I flexed my hips to slam my dick into her clutching cunt.� We kissed deeply again her tongue deep in my mouth and then mine down her throat making her gag in love.� Amber barked at me to finish her.� I got up on my elbows and slammed my hips with all my strength as I got Kaliah's ass bounding off the bed and jumping up into my savage down, forward thrusts.� After a minute her forehead was in the crook of my neck wallowing when suddenly her head slammed back into the mattress and she wailed "OhhhhGoddammmmm � aarrrghhuuuuuuu � unngghhrrrrrrrrrr"� She surged and bucked up into my body our tits pounding into each other sending more pleasure to our love soaked brains.� She cried and flipped through five massive spasms of killing bliss.� I kissed her deeply when she was spent our tongue twining in love.

I wanted to bask in sweet post coital time but Amber instructed me roll on my back and for Kaliah to mount me her ass on my hips her back to me.� She told Kaliah "Put Barbara's dick in your asshole Koon.� Barbara fuck her black ass good."� I saw Kaliah rise up and grip my dick and push my dickhead into her anus and push down with several pushes as her asshole resisted but then the third push and my dick sank into her rectum as she threw her head back and groan deep in her chest.� She pushed and I started to pump up and my dick quickly sank balls deep into her asshole.� It was obvious her asshole was fucked regularly.� She put her hands beside my head and began to pump, swirl her ass down into my up thrusts her body taking my dick deep up her ass.� We got into a love rhythm my dick pumping her asshole as I gripped her legs at the knees and pressed her lower leg onto her hamstrings and savagely fucked her shit hole.� Then I would grip her legs behind her knees and pulled her legs back to rape her asshole and then loop an arm behind both legs and pull tight and lean her over left and right to pump my dick into her shitter.� I was always varying the angle, pressure and rhythm of my hard anal fucking to keep the pleasure pouring into her ass.� I heard Amber curse and looked around Kaliah as I fucked her ass to see Amber fumbling with her camcorder putting in another memory card her old one full.� She got it in and I fucked Kaliah's asshole for another few minutes when Amber told me "Gape her asshole."� I slipped my dick out and gripped her ass cheeks and pulled hard gaping her asshole.� I was then told to fuck her hard and gaped her several more times as instructed.� Guiding my dick back in Kaliah gapped shitter by burying my middle finger in her gaped shit hole feeling how big it was gapping and riding my dick back into her shitter and pounding her ass.� Then Amber told Kaliah "Pull off and suck your shit off Barbara's dick Nigger!"� Kaliah moaned hard and pulled back and sat by my hip and gripped my dick lifting it as her head sank and I watched her thick lips clamp on my cock and begin to bob.� I immediately noticed she is loud in sucking dick.� Her mouth making a loud slurping sound as she sucked her cheeks hollowing out.� I husked I wanted to see her eyes and she changed angles to let me see her beautiful eyes.� I felt my eyes roll back and spasm so hard when I noticed that she is a woman whose eyes get dreamy and half roll back when sucking dick.� Her mouth clamped tight but making sure to drool spit and let coat my cock making sloppy head as she did slow undulating head bob or when her mouth twisted on my dick head.� Noisy when she was bobbing hard my dick head sliding up and down her tongue to the back of her throat.� I know her mouth was full of spit to make al that wonderful noise.� Amber had us do more anal and atm and then a2p in the reverse cow girl position.� I fucked an awesome anal 'gasm out her shit hole.� She then got us spoon as I pounded her cunt and asshole so hard.� I was pounding her shitter good and made her have another anal 'gasm that had her screaming and wallowing hard back into my tits and belly.� I lifted her spent head lulling down on her neck and guiding her head back to mine and our sweaty mouths mated as tongues dueled hotly in our moaning mouths.� I slow stroked her asshole with my love cock and soon was fucking her hard again as she gurgled and kept moaning "oh goddamn".�� Amber had let us fuck for a while without being a director but now instructed "Pull your dick out Kaliah's ass and guide her head down to your cock slowly�Kaliah only use your tongue and lips to begin with on Barbara's dick�lick her dick before sucking"� Kaliah gurgled okay.� I fucked her hard for another minute using my feet to get purchase to bury my prick balls deep into her lurching body impaling her shitter.� I then rolled back and cupped the back of Kaliah's head and slowly pulled her head down.� "Suck you asshole off my dick Kaliah�Use only you tongue Kaliah � taste your sweet shit honey�you fucking goddamn nigger".� She pressed her cheek into my sweaty belly and extended her pink tongue and wormed over my dickhead and then rose her head and licked up and down my shaft and murmured "My asshole tastes so fucking sweat�God I love the taste of my shit!"� She then swallowed my dickhead and pumped her head slowly savoring the taste of her shit hole.� She slowly extended her hand, gripped the base of my strap-on and began to bob harder pumping hard on my dick moaning constantly.� Again she made sloppy noises as she bobbed and gave head.� I felt my eyes roll back and spasmed so fucking hard watching her do atm and listening again to her sloppy head.� Amber had me fuck her asshole hard and then "Pull out her asshole�roll her over and fuck her missionary�No Kaliah no atm (pouting from Kaliah but quickly spreading her legs for me).� Tell her Barbara what your going to do to her."� "I am going to fuck your cunt with my cock just out your shit hole Nigger�You love it, don't you Nigger!" as I got between her thighs and shoved my dick into her dripping snatch.� Kaliah moaned back "God yeessssss!" as her back arched feeling my dick sink all the way into her cunt soaked in her shit cream.� We again kissed deeply as I pounded her cunt with my dick soaked in her asshole and soon she cummed so hard again as she flipped and wailed her legs and arms pulling me down into her body as I slammed her off the mattress getting the rhythm to pound her cunt hard into the bed.� Four killing spasms throttled her as we once more kissed in new languid love.� Sigh, soon I was directing Kaliah in the rape of Amber.� Then memory cards were used up and much more hot fucking.� Much later I had my fist once more burying fully up Amber's asshole and then Kaliah for the first time.� I feel even deeper in love with Kaliahas she screamed all caps and her cunt slammed into the mattress over and over making a big wet spot.� Her groin jerking up and down as her asshole tore itself apart on my forearm near my elbow as she almost passed out drooling in devastating pleasure.� Gods I love renewing and new love.

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As is said, I love the lean body type with the little titties I can crush and pulp making you writhe and die from it.� I so love how you show the sublime fucking that occurs between archangels.� It is so intense.� This is one reason I love fucking with siblings and mother / daughters.� The incest just makes the sex so fucking intense and deep connecting.� When sisters are simply devouring each other cunts and I watch a daughter inhaling her mothers cunt and the mother is then driving her tongue deep into her daughter's asshole I just swoon.� The looks on their faces.The intense love.The sexual hunger so evident in their fucking.� I have always loved the fact that Laura is a slut like me.� I have my archangels but I need other women and men in my life to make me complete.� So do my archangels and my other angels.� We don't want our sex lives to become stale.� That simply happens with couples who insist on remaining monogamous with each other.� The sex life simply fades after some time frame.� It simply has to.� Some find a happy medium I think but the vast, vast majority let it fade away or a terrible frustration sets in that in time becomes a cancer to the relationship.� I refuse to let that happen.� Keeping ones sex life fresh and alive makes the rest of one's life so much more vital.� I love how you show this with Laura.� She loves Makeeda and the great fucks they have but she needs other pussy to stay happy.� You show this as being true to a liberated woman who has shucked the Calvinist ways of America.� I know of a man that works in a warehouse complex in New York.� It is full of Columbian women.� They love to fuck each other and him and other men and women.� Most are married and have my and Laura's attitude.� Their culture expects them to have lovers on the side.� They know that this keep their main relationship stable and fresh with their spouses also having lovers on the side.� I sure wish America had this attitude.� How liberating and life affirming this would be.

I so love the flirting that you show.� I so know that delicious tension I feel in my body when I am calling an angel up and setting up a hot fuck.� I can just feel my belly and thighs tightening, my womb trembling, pussy getting moist and my nipples hardening when I call or start sexting.� I know that love is in the air and soon I will be dining on hot sweet pussy and succulent asshole.� With guys it is really just setting it up.� No flirting for me except letting them know, I know they want my body.� I have to smile at the wit you show. ["Oh," Frankie flirted, "now you want to see me. Now that she's gone. Now you have time for me.""Don't tease me," Laura said."You love it.""After work? I'll give you a ride home.""I have to work late. Anyway, you have more than a ride in mind."]� This flirting rings so freaking true.� This is women in love.� This is how we flirt with each other when love is in the air.� Most people can show at least some wit and you show this.� What is sad is that other authors never show this. What dialog they do have is the bland dialog necessary to move the story moving forward.� You could have left this out and still move the story forward.� Simply told us they were flirting instead of showing us like you are doing here.� I can see why most stories don't really have flirting in them.� They can't.� One most have a relationship with a person to flirt like this over the phone.� The easy familiarity that is evident in this conversation takes time to develop.� Time that takes many episodes to happen.�� That you have invested the time to do.� Laura has had many liaisons with Frankie that lets her tease Laura about wanting her body.� Again, the time you invest in your stories is extraordinary.� Not one other author have I found in on-line erotica even comes close.� Creating stories that allow women to grow and change.� Stories that allow them to become more than mere words on a page.� I can just see the smile on Frankie's face and the being teased look on Laura's face.� I love this teasing with my lovers.� It gets me so hot for them and they I let them know I am going to fuck them so hard, long and deep.� I just never get this in other stories.� Like I say, it takes time to develop the relationship to show this flirting and other stories simply can't.� Plus, I wonder if other authors just don't want to take the time to develop this.� The time to think about what to say and how to get it to flow into the story naturally.� I am sitting here and I can't remember another author that shows the easy, familiar flirting and banter between women.� Not one story.� The sex in your stories hooked me first of course, but it has been the additional things like the flirting here that has kept me hooked.�

I have to love the office dynamics that you show here.� Frankie works in the same company as Laura and is in fact only a few cubes away.� That is awesome.� I so love to flirt with the women at work and fuck those that are not in the chain of my command.� One thing about your slice of life type of stories is from time to time Laura's cycle comes into the equation.� I can guarantee you that is one subject that doesn't come up in other stories!� This is just another example of how you work real life into your stories.� That does put things in the black and white category.� If Frankie wants some sweet white pussy she needs to fuck Laura now since with Makeeda in the picture you never know when you might get to sleep with Laura again.� I like it.� Puts little dynamics into the story and with hardly any effort on your part.� I know it is, but it just flows into the story.� I like the little things in life and like reading them in your story.� Plus, you show the dynamics between women and how complicated it can get trying to arrange fucks.� Women can be so coy and complicated.� Frankie suddenly gets a little clippy and puts off Laura on setting up a rendezvous of sweet fucking.� I find that weird myself when a woman suddenly puts a damper on our love trysts.� I hate it and they know it if they know me.� I hate to be frustrated and made to feel unloved.� Laura and I are the same in that.� It really hurts me when I am rejected.� I will pursue but I will not let myself be hurt.� I will quickly back off and find me an angel or buck to fuck me hard and deep and put any silly rejection out of my mind.� I also, low how you show growth.� Your women are not the same as they are when they first come into the story.� This is especially true of Laura.� You have shown that people can grow and change for the better.� I have loved watching Laura grow over the years.� I had to smile when the story first started and Laura would run back to men to have them fuck her senseless to prove she was "straight".� I loved those fucks of rough sex and especially when they fucked her so good up the ass.� I would have been turning around to suck my ass off their hard dicks but alas Laura doesn't have that taste.� Loved the a2p fucking too.� It was funny how she would "slip" at first and fuck another woman or Karen again and back to a male lover to prove she was a heterosexual.� I loved being on the journey as she slowly did this less and less and finally came to the point that she left the men behind.� For her it made sense.� I loved not knowing where she was going.� It is like real life.� As I always say, you are the only author to do so many things in these stories.� There have been a few stories that had multiple chapters with the same women and no growth.� The women are the same in the last chapter as the first.� People change and I love reading this in your stories.� Not only has Laura changed but so has so many of the women that have been in her life over the years.� Women like Randi, Deshona, Yvette, Bonnie and even Makeeda.� They have grown in some major ways and other women have just evolved to be more than they were without any major changes.

One area that I have enjoyed seeing growth is Laura's battle with the green eyed monster.� I used to really feel for her and get exasperated with her getting so torn up with her angels finding other women and men to fuck.� Where I would be begging for the details and maybe trying to get them into bed together Laura would feel her "stomach curdle".� This led to so much trouble for her and some of her women.� The names of Chanitra, Yvette, Sholandra, Deshona come to mind.� I used to feel for Laura so hard when she would fall to pieces and get all depressed and when in the presence of her angels act so bad leading to such bad fights and hurt feelings.� I am really pretty free of the monster and I am amused when I see it in my archangels and lovers.� I know that her jealousy ruined a few of Laura's earlier relationships.� The great thing is though, is the fact that Laura has grown!� She is no longer this woman that gets so jealousy she can't even think straight.� Frankie is trying to get in her head and Laura does not rise to the bait.� She keeps her equilibrium and I love it.� I am smiling as even Laura realizes she has grown and matured.� What is cool is first, you do this, and then that you make it so believable in your stories.� You are the only author that allows their characters to grow and mature.� One shots can't do this of course.� The few longer stories have no growth what so ever.� None of this growth could occur though without the universes that you have created.� It takes the stories that you have crafted to allow this.� It has taken years in her life to go from straight to gay.� It has taken years to go from out of control jealousy to controlled jealousy.� It has taken years for other women to grow and change.� It has taken your skill, desire and patience to create this world and the women that populate it.� You spend half of your chapters roughly to develop women, plots and just give them a life that is beyond just the fucking.� Of course I absolutely need lots of sex but it is everything else that allows it to be special and you show this.� Laura needs the anchor that is Makeeda to give her the secure base to have her other lovers that keep her relationship with Makeeda fresh and alive.� I know that relationships that are rough on the edges adds zip to the story but you so know how to balance it.� Life has rough spots that make the sex so much more special and devastating as your cunt and asshole are immolating themselves flooding my veins with shattering ecstasy.� I have tried to read other stories with back story that unfortunately makes me fall asleep.� They read like a C grade story on TV.� Yawn.� Your stories pop with life and vitality.� I have always admired how you balance story with sex.� You are master of both.� I can't even really find a master of either from other authors.

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I have relaxed my rules at work.� I used to only fuck women that had nothing to do with IT in anyway.� Now am open to women that work with IT and maybe a woman who is in IT but not in my group.� None have attracted me as of yet.� I don't do men from work.� To many headaches and none again have caught my eye to tempt me.� About three years ago a cute brunette started to work in purchasing and was assigned to assist IT with our purchases.� I handle a lot of the projects for the department and have a lot of contact with the department.� Her name was Julia and I was attracted mildly at her cute face and killer slender body.� She is about five foot two with nice small but full titties.� She has dark brown eyes that I fall so easily for.� I was not really after her but I like to flirt innocently.� If I get a nibble then I proceed otherwise it is simply for fun.� After a few times working with her and lightly flirting she let me know in no uncertain terms that I was to stop and desist.� She did not want a lesbian hitting on her.� I told her "your command is my wish."� From that moment forward I was as formal as a marine drill sergeant.� It was yes mam this and thank you Ms. Last name.� I was stern faced and strictly business.� I was hurt as hell by her cruel remarks and superior attitude.� I didn't hate her but she kind of cease to exist in way for me.� As time went on I noticed she was trying to thaw the temperature but I refused all overtures of burying the hatchet I guess is the saying.� This went for two years I guess until she visited my office and closed the door and proceeded to cry and say I was being at bitch and she was sorry but I was to superior to take her apology.� I hate to see tears and know I caused them.� I got up and put an arm around her and asked her to forgive me.� She sniffled and told me she was still mad at me and I smiled and told her "You got to" and she asked why and I tapped her crucifix visible at her neckline.� She had to smile.� From that time we were okay.� I made sure to not flirt with her but was my friendly and witty self.

About three months ago I noticed she was opening her shirts more and wearing lower necklines when she knew I had a meeting with her.� In the past I would have been on her like a wolf taking down its prey.� I have enough on my plate, plus, she had always seemed happy with her relationship and I did not want to get involved with anything bringing it down as I sensed was happening.� About a month ago she asked me out to eat dinner after work and I agreed after telling her it was "friends, right".� She just gave me a look and smiled.� I meet her at Ruby Tuesday and had a nice meal making light banter about work, friends, our hobbies and other safe subjects.� After dinner she got nervous and I knew what was next.� Sure enough, "What is it like making love to another woman?"� I sighed and gave her the usual answers about how we are softer, gentler (at times), more in tune with our bodies and thus each other and how we focus on our lover.� I also gave her my personal theory of our lovemaking being mainly oral, digital, and our strap-on sex is not main erogenous zone to erogenous zone.� Thus, we just naturally focus on our partner.� She asked questions about technique and how many times I cum and I answered like a clinical therapist.� I was trying to be good.� She told me how she was tired of her relationship and how her husband was selfish and always being with the "fellows".� That sex was boring now.� I chuckled now knowing she had been married seven years and told her she had the "seven year itch" which she had never heard and I explained it to her.� I then tried to be good again and gave her suggestions to try and repair her relationship with her husband.� She gave me a look of "please".� She got nervous again and without looking at me "I want to make love to you"� I was flattered but asked her about her religion.� That it did not exactly smile on women like me.� I did not want her racked with guilt.� I knew once she tastes the forbidden fruit she would always crave it.� I told her we shouldn't make love and she asked why and I told her "Because you will like it too much".� She gulped but told me she was ready and her church was very liberal and accepting of all life styles.� I had to raise an eyebrow at that.� i asked her if she was sure and she very nervously said yes.� I thought about it and told her that she needed to let me know when she could get some time away from her husband and she already had next Wednesday picked out.� I was impressed.� Her husband was going to a basketball tournament up state.� I told her to meet me at my favorite hotel for love trysts at eight.� We would call in sick the next day.� I walked her to her car and took her in my arms and kissed her on the lips and ground our bodies together.� I asked her if she shaved her pussy and she told me "no".� I told her to shave for me.� I loved how she shivered and softly nodded yes.� She was sloe eyed when we parted and left.�

We did not communicate that day and I arrived early and got a room and texted her the room number.� I had brought some movies in case she did not show and would masturbate myself into a stupor if needed.� Plus, I would have some angels and studs the next day was my plan if she was a no show.� I was watching PBS when I heard a knock on the door at eight sharp.� I was very happy.� I opened the door and felt my pussy spasm and my nipples harden.� She was wearing a low cut blouse and short skirt.� I walked her to the bed.� We sat and I complimented her on how hot she looked.� I was wearing a xxx size night shirt down to my knees my tits shaking as I moved.� I smiled at her letting her know I saw her eyeing my tits.� We made small talk and I then turned the covers down and told her we should go to bed.� I loved how she got so nervous.� I pulled off my top and I loved her gasp and the way she unconsciously licked her lips looking at my naked body.� She took her clothes off and I had to smile at the slip and obvious not lacy bra and panties.� We got in bed and pulled up the comforter.� I pulled it back down telling her the room was warm, nice and toasty with my turning up the heat to make us sweat.� She was nervous as I stroked her body especially her torso through her slip enjoying her hitches and caught breath as I started kissing her shoulders, face and around her lips.� I squeezed her tits through the slip and stroked her starting to heave belly.� I started kissing her lips and brushing her teeth with my tongue and sucking on her lips.� I smiled hearing her mewl now and legs starting to scissor and twat hump up.� I kissed her harder and her mouth now opened wide and I speared my tongue down her throat and tilted out mouths tight taking her tongue as mine.� She was writhing now and I sat her up and took off her slip.� She weakly croaked that "I'm not taking off my bra or panties."� I husked back "Of course."� I now kissed her deeply and stroked her tits, hips and belly harder with my free access.� I started to kiss her exposed skin on her torso as she gasped and cawed.� I kissed her exposed tits and licked at the line where bra ended and skin met.

She was starting to bead in sex sweat and her twat humping harder with her groin twisting in need our musk filling the room.� I ran my fingers underneath her bra and squeezed her tits hard and twirled her nipples making her cry out in pleasure.� I kissed all over her belly and up between her tits.� I made sure that she felt my heavy tits dragging all over her body my long stiff nipples scraping her beautiful skin.� I loved how she love shook feeling my tits rolling over her body.� I kissed up her chest to her mouth and mated again tight and we kissed sloppily and moaned in happiness when her tongue invaded my mouth and deeply flailed.� I gripped her head hard and twisted over and sucked in hard her pulse point and chewed cruelly making her scream and spasm over and over in ecstasy.� I slipped my hands behind her and let her feel my fingers on her bra clasp and she melted into me as I unhooked her bra and removed throwing across the room.� I slowly kissed down her chest and inhaled her nipples one at time giving her the pull so slowly out my mouth trick as I deep throat love sucked and tongue bat.� She was thrashing now her hands gripping my head to mash my face into her tits as inhaled her tit meat.� I kissed her heaving belly, ribs and hips with wet kisses and long tongue strokes before kissing up and swallowing as much tits as I could and pulling my head up stretching them out and letting pop out my mouth oh so slowly.� I moved up and kissed her deeply again and again slamming my tongue down her throat and now I was humping her thighs soaking it in my twat juice when her tongue slide down my throat and twisted all around mine as I moaned deep into her mouth as her confidence grew.� She was clutching my tits and I encouraged her to pulp and pull my nipples out taunt.� She tried to move down to suck but I prevented that.� I was the explorer!� I gave her another vicious hickey that again made her scream in pleasure.� I pulled up and pressed my neck into her mouth and jammed her face into my neck with my hand and now I screamed as she gave me hard, vicious hickey that I knew would take well over a week to disappear.� I humped her hip and thigh in new love soaking it wetly in my love juice.� I now kissed down her heaving, sweaty belly and got� on my knees between her legs and reached for her panties and smiled great big when her groin lifted excitedly and I removed them and smelled them deeply as their soaked fabric coated my nose in her essence.� I smiled again when I saw her shaved mound waiting for my mouth.� I settled in and sucked her clit into my mouth and munched on it with slapping tongue and hard love sucks.� She humped up with spastic humps and was squeezing her own tits her head thrashing, her constant moans and gurgles filling the room.� I licked up and down her slit and sucked her cunt petals into my mouth and munched on in my lips her long labia lips I stretched out and popped out my lips before diving again on her clit.� I went for the love kill quick and sucked her entire upper cunt into my mouth and gave deep throat love sucks and hard tongue drilling on her exposed clit nubbin.� I delivered!� Her hands clutched my head and she began to hump in ragged violent heaves and she wailed for me to keep sucking and suck harder.� I focused and sucked even harder and gripped her hips hard to keep my position and butterfly slapped her clit from all angels as I sucked with deep throat love sucks on her clit with my spit filled mouth.� "AAARRRGGGHHUUUUUU!" Julia screamed all caps her body rigid and violent spasming stiffly and then flopping and jackknifing violently as her orgasm throttled her with three long killing spasms of bliss and then tons of strong aftershocks.

I moved up and kissed her deeply with a mouth full of her own cum and flooded her mouth with her cum.� She moaned and gulped it down.� I kissed and cooed to her how beautiful she was and stroked her trembling body.� When she had settled and I moved down slowly and sucked her tits with long love sucks and hard massages and then pulping them as I sucked on her nipples.� I kissed her for a while and inhaled tit meat before kissing down her belly and again settling between her legs and again devouring her wet, swollen cunt.� She cried out when my tongue slide deep up her cunt and I tongued fucked her hard.� I had found out she was an anal virgin at Ruby Tuesday and slowly slipped my middle finger up her asshole as she cried out noooooooo! and I smirked as her ass stayed in position to allow me to drill my finger slowly up her shit hole.� I sucked her off as I finger fucked her asshole.� I licked clean several times loving how her head flopped down the first time she saw that.� I sucked her clit with total focus and love and worked her whole slit working down to her fuck hole and sucking in her cunt meat and munching on with wet sloppy, slurping, noisy tonguing and sucking.� She soon cummed again with wild flipping and jackknifing her body trying to roll over to the left and me jamming her back down again into the mattress so I could continue love sucking her exploding cunt.� I moved up and kissed her again gagging as her tongue slithered deep in mouth tasting herself in my mouth.� I moved up and straddled her face and settled my pussy down very slowly.� Her eyes were zeroed in on my swollen cunt and hanging labia lips.� I kept my pussy just above her up jerking head her mouth making sucking noises trying to reach my pussy.� I wanted her to go for it and she did when she looped her arms over my thighs and jerked down mashing my pussy into her mouth.� I cried out when her mouth latched onto my cunt hole and started sucking and her tongue slithered deep up my twat.� The bitch was a lesbian whore in waiting.� She moved up and sucked my clit with hard short sucks and soon her head was lapping working my clit and slit with tongue strokes and sucking sucks on my slit, labia lips and clit.� I was gripping the headboard and jerking it hard as I felt the tension building and I cried out to her to suck my clit hard and don't stop.� Her eyes slit and she looked me hard in the eyes and swallowed my upper cunt like I had and did what I had done I suddenly felt my womb rupture and flood my brain with scalding, shattering ecstasy.� I was screaming trying to ripe the headboard off the bed as full body spasms throttled making my toes curl, body spasm and tits swirl and flop.� I was weeping when my orgasm finally abetted.� She rolled me onto my back and slithered on top of me and kissed me deep and then sucked on my titties with slow loving sucks and kisses all over.� She lifted them and kissed the undersides and secret crease husking how she loved my full almost double d tits.� She now kissed down my sweaty belly and settled in between my legs and proceeded to suck me off with total love.� She buried her face in my twat her mouth disappearing in my vulva and her nose mashed into my upper mound and all over my clit when tongue fucking my cunt hole and licking my perineum and surprising me by licking and tonguing my asshole.� I was in love.� Soon I had the back of my head jammed into the bed my back arched up and my heels dug into the mattress.� I was as stiff as a board my hands clawed into Julia's scalp.� My torso half rolled over the tension making me judder.� I screamed "Suck my cunt you goddamn fucking Christian slut!"� She sucked harder her eyes full of slut love.� She suddenly wormed her first two fingers up her asshole and pounded my shitter.� I immediately erupted into a shattering orgasm that had me screaming all caps and whole body jolting and spasming all stiff as my toes tried to curl off.� My whole body spasmed stiffly.� I was throttled with shattering bliss.� I cried out in ecstasy my tits jiggling wildly as body thrummed with ecstasy my limbs jerking stiffly.� I watched her cheeks hollow out with her sucks as I another orgasm exploded out of nowhere.� I cried out again as my body stiffened even more and I just juddered as scalding waves of bliss burned in my veins.� Finally, I was spent.� She crawled up and we twined limbs and kissed in new languid love.�

We had sweet post coital time and then she was tribbing missionary her cunt on my hip and her thigh in my cunt as we humped.� I gripped her ass to help her roughly hump my hip and groin while her thigh pound and ground my mound.� I loved how her face slashed so hard near mine.� I would rise up and we kissed in sloppy love our tongues dueling hotly.� After about five minutes she began to hump more raggedly her breathing harsh as she rose to the pinnacle. I helped her hump hard with my grip on her ass.� Her hard humping making her full tits swirl and flop dripping sweat now.� I loved watching her face slash more and more and hearing her chuff and whinny.� Her cunt sweeping over my hip and mound her knee and lower thigh wallowing in my cunt getting all juiced.� I started to call her a fucking whore and a goddamn slut and loved how her fucking surged harder. Soon her head threw back and she cried out as her body convulsed hard and her twat gushed hot steamy fuck juice all over my cunt and� groin making me cry out in new love.� She was throttled with three massive spasms and then hard aftershocks.� I loved watching her weaken and settle on me our tits mashing and wet twats wallowing as our mouths mated tight and tongues dueled wetly in new love.� I stroked her sweaty body and murmured to her how beautiful she is and how I wanted her so bad.� I rolled us over and got her up and positioned my cunt and threw her leg on my tit her ankle at my shoulder and began to swirl and sweep my cunt all over her cunt gagging and moaning.� I begged her to call me a cunt, whore, slut.� It took a little begging but she was soon calling me what I needed to hear and then easily got her to add things like "fucking cunt, worthless whore".� I had to whine and beg for goddamn but soon she added that spicing up her vile language to me "fuck my cunt you goddamn slut" and calling me a "worthless piece of shit."� I was liberating her soul.� I was fucking wildly now my tits flopping and swirling up and slapping off my chest and slamming hard down into my sweaty chest.� I was in heaven.� Holding her leg for dear life grinding my cunt so hard into hers.� She husked for me to ride her face again and I eagerly complied and soon was jackknifing wildly my cunt rupturing in her mouth flooding it and soaking her face in my cum.� I so loved watching my tits heave as violent spasm throttled me mercilessly.� I finally collapsed and rolled her on top of me and we kissed deeply again our love twining tighter as our tongue dueled form mouth to mouth.�

We fucked deep into the night before exhaustion made us cuddle and coo in love as our sweaty bodies cooled under the covers.� The next morning we got in the tub and I sucked her off twice as she wailed and slammed so hard into the wall her legs spread wide to give me full access as I drilled her cunt the first time and her asshole the second time and my head rocking back with her hard swirling humps.� Her fingers clawing my scalp to drive my face deep into her vulva and helping me to bury my tongue deep up her cunt and hold it there when her pussy exploded letting her cunt juice flow down my tongue and into my gulping mouth.� I loved feeling her sphincter spasm hotly on my plunging tongue as she cummed me working her asshole with my tongue and her cunt with my soaked fingers.� Then I was humping her face hard until I screamed so loud my soul shattering as my cunt ruptured in her mouth as she vibrated my clit with her buzzing fingers.� Her mouth sucking in my cunt meat as it spasmed and filled her mouth to overflowing with twat love juice.� We got out and dried off and had breakfast.� We got back and put out the do not disturb sign and I got out my strap-on and asked her if she wanted me to fuck her het style.� She stroked the cock and moaned yes.� I told her "If I do I wall take your asshole as mine.� I will take what I want and I am rough when I fuck het style.� Are you ready for that?"� She merely nodded as we quickly stripped and I felt my cunt getting instantly wet and my nipples rock hard.� I so love taking anal, atm and a2p cherries.� I got strapped in and ordered her to get on her knees and told "Suck my dick bitch."� I smiled as she love shook and swallowed my cock and started to bob and twist her head with obvious skill.� I pumped my hips sensually stroking my dick head up and down her tongue as she sucked and undulated her head like a fucking whore taking my dick to the back of her throat.She gripped my thighs to help her pump her head hard at times.� It was obvious she loved giving head.� She sucked me off licking my cock and swirling her tongue all over my dickhead like the real thing before swallowing and bobbing hard and then slow with lots of undulations of her head like a true cock slut.

I watched Julia give me head for a few minutes and then gripped her head with both hands and jerked to get her to still and told her "Open your mouth wide slut.� Drop your arms to your side slut.� I'm going to skull fuck your worthless ass."� I hesitated watching her follow my orders and look up at me with willing, submissive eyes.� I slowly pushed my cock into her throat and ramped up until I was slamming my cock into the back of her throat making her caw and choke out spit that roped all over her lower face, tits and belly making her look so hot.� I then stopped and gently asked "Annnnddddd?"� Giving her a chance to back out.� She looked up at me with slut eyes and gripped my ass cheeks now with clenched fingers and drove her mouth onto my cock jamming her throat.� I smiled.� Another complete slut born.� I skull fucked her hard and long loving her choking sounds and spit all drooling out her mouth.� I pushed my cock into her cheek bulging it before ripping it out her mouth as groaned so gutturally for me.� Again and again I jammed my cock into her cheeks and roughly fucked them before pulling out the side of her mouth stretching her mouth before my dick head popped out wetly.� I then cock whipped her face loving the red marks soon covering her face as she gladly let me skull fuck and dick whip her face over and over as she cawed and moaned taking my loving abuse.� I loved how she clutched my thighs and ass and kept her face so adoringly upturned so I could cock whip it and see her lovely eyes enjoying my love abuse.� I then roughly got her up on the bed and sank my cock deep into cunt missionary.� I soon had a hard loving rhythm up and was slamming my dick hard and deep into her gurgling, moaning, whinnying body.� I loved feeling her thighs clutching my hips as our tits mashed when I pressed her down into the bed.� Soon I felt her body tensing and slammed fucked her into the mattress bouncing her up into my savage down thrusts.� She cummed so hard for me with loud guttural caws and bucking and jolting up into my hard pressing body as I flexed my hips to spear her womb through her orgasm.� I love moaned feeling her legs and arms enfolding me pulling hard down into her bucking and writhing body.

I let her recover and rolled us onto our sides and took her spoon feeling her gag and shudder as my cock speared into her soaked cunt.� I fucked her lovingly and after a while pulled out and rolled on my back and moaned for her to suck her cunt off my cock.� She looked at me for a moment and then moved in and lifted my dick and swallowed my dick head and moaned so loud sucking her cunt off my cock.� She bobbed hard before I rolled her over again and now pounded her cunt with hard strokes making her gurgle and cry out in pleasure.� Several more times she sucked and licked my prick clean of her pussy juice.� I was getting her ready for what was to come.� I fucked her good spoon and then got her doggy and slammed her flowing pussy for five minutes her tits swaying and flopping. �I loved her grunts, groans and gurgles.� Her head was lulled down lost in pleasure when I took my cock out her pussy and moved up and began to press into her anus.� Her head whipped around and she looked at me with big eyes.� I smiled at her and pressed harder as she shook and keened and then cried out when I punched my hips taking her anal cherry with my love cock.� She cried out in pain and moaned as I slowly worked her shit hole loose. I stroked her shaking body and cooed to her to relax and let me take her to "anal 'gasm heaven".� She at first couldn't, being all tense as I worked her sphincter loose that was bowing out so hard as her asshole clutched tight my dick.� She whinnied her pain and cried and I loved seeing her tears streak down her cheeks as she sobbed.� I slowly pried her asshole open and now my cock started to stroke ever deeper into her ass.� I smiled and felt my womb spasm when I felt and heard her first catch of breath when pleasure started to pulse out her sphincter and I knew the nerves in her shit hole were turning from pain to pleasure.� I could feel her body starting to jolt with pleasure as her nerve endings in her asshole came alive.� I slow stroked her bung hole stroking her body and whispering how beautiful she looked with my cock sinking deeper into her shit hole.� I loved how my dirty talk was making her moan louder.� Now she was jamming back softly and moaning and husking how good her asshole was making her feel.� I cooed to her to feel the pulses of pleasure as I jammed my hips harder driving my thick shaft so deep into her ass.

I began to ram fuck her shit hole making her cry out in pleasure now gripping her ass cheeks and jamming her back into my pile driving thrusts.� Our sweaty bodies slapping loudly.� I would slow and then rabbit fuck her asshole fast and furious and then give her slow pile driving thrusts jolting her forward.�� She was cawing constantly now and juddering with body spasms.� I husked to her how she felt and she moaned "I'm in heaven � fuck my asshole harder � unngggghhh unnggghhhh� unnggghhhhh�deeper" and I did slamming my cock balls deep up her anus.� I rolled her into spoon and lifted her leg to give me full access and pounded her asshole with a love rhythm and soon she had her first anal 'gasm that had her shrieking and slamming back into my tits and groin over and over as her orgasm throttled her mercilessly as her asshole exploded in pure fucking ecstasy.� I reveled in feeling her body wallowing spastically against mine as killing jolts of pleasure exploded in her veins.� She was now lulled against me and I pulled my dick out her still spasming asshole as her body shook with aftershocks and rolled onto my back.� I cupped her lulled head and slowly rolled her over to look at me.� "Suck your shit hole off my cock Julia � use only tongue and mouth � and then you can use your hands" as I pushed her down towards my dick.� She resisted looking at me with hesitant eyes but I pushed her head harder to my belly and she easily complied now her sweaty cheek on my sweat soaked hard belly.� I love making newbies give in and accept new pleasures that I open to them.� I pushed her heard forward and felt me belly tighten seeing her tongue come out as her head reached my dick head and now slithered all over it.� Then she put her tongue back in her mouth and I saw the change.� Her mouth opened wide and she swallowed my dickhead undulating her head hard with wet sucks filling the room.� I cried out fuucccckkkkkk as my eyes rolled back as always happens when a new atm slut is born.� She sucked hard and then pulled her head back and groaned "goddamn my asshole tastes so fucking good" and pushed her face into my belly and eagerly swallowed my dick and sucked hard and then licked up the shaft from my fake balls to the dick head making me moan in happiness. She now gripped it and lifted it and gave it her all, sucking and bobbing.� I let her enjoy her first atm repast.� Then rolled her spoon again and took her asshole.� She did atm herself now and finally took us cowgirl taking control and pounded her asshole hard as I slammed up her tits rolling and flopping as sweat dripped off her body and face.� She dismounted three times to suck her shit juice off my cock.� The last time I rolled onto my side and got Julia on the bed on her side and fucked her mouth with my cock pounding her throat with my dick soaked in her ass cream.� I rolled onto my back again and she mounted me cowgirl and I stuffed my cock back into her ass and pounded my dick up as she slammed down her tits flopping up and down with her up and down gyrations driving my dick fully up her shit hole her body slapping loudly into my groin.� I loved how my groin slamming her ass made her tits jolt with each hard slap of our sweaty bodies.

We fucked cowgirl for a few minutes when I stilled her with my fingers sinking into her hips.� I pulled my dick out and slide it over her perineum and circled her cunt hole my dick head soaked in shit juice.� I stroked now up and down her slit and batted her clit making her caw and groan in pleasure.� I centered my dick head on her cunt hole and looked her hard in the eyes and saw only pure slut love and pushed my dick into her cunt burying it.� I slammed fucked her cunt hard and I reveled in her gurgling, cawing and load moans of pure pleasure.� She went crazy slamming down and grinding her ass on my groin rotating my cock in her pussy before slamming up and down and then grinding.� She feel forward her palms by head and rotated her ass as she pushed back into my forward thrusts.� When I fucked slow and sensual I lifted my head and wolfed sucked her nipples making her cry out in loud whinnies.� We ramped up and I pounded her womb and she finally snapped and collapsed on me and cried out in shattering cries of ecstasy as I looped my arms around her and held her tight as her body bucked and wallowed all over me.� Her head resting on my shoulder cawing out and moaning "oh god � fuck � fuck � shit oh god" as ecstasy flooded her veins with ecstasy.�

Soon I had her strapped in and she was fucking me.� I have to admit she was not a natural but I patiently taught how to thrust and use her hips to drive her dick into my willing fuck holes.� She did me doggy first since that is easier.� I soon had her slapping my ass and gripping my hips to drive me back into her thrusts.� I felt the tension rising and looked back at her and cawed "Fuck me harder goddamn it � (she did)� yeesssssssss � fuck � oh gods yesssssss" and then I was cumming so fucking hard as I bucked and jackknifed loving how my hooters flopped and swirled with my wild gyrations.� I collapsed on the bed and she rolled me over and crawled on me and we kissed as I felt her ever hard dick pressed into my belly.� She mounted me missionary and soon I was wrapping my legs around her hips and my arms around her torso as I kissed her shoulders and neck and felt my body ramping up again and I screamed "I looovveeee yooouuuuu!" as my body simply exploded as I bucked up and humped hard into her pressing body.� We rested in post coital time kissing and cooing when I got in spoon and guided her prick to my asshole and she eagerly invaded my rectum and slammed my asshole hard and deep.� I was in heaven, Julia fucking my asshole so good and then her pulling out and rolling onto her back and lifting her dick "Suck your asshole off my dick Barbara � suck your ass off it Bitch!"� She was learning so fast.� I rolled over and swallowed her dick and did slow head twirls as I sucked her dickhead with loving sucks.� I then bobbed hard and then slow telling her my ass tasted so sweet.� She fucked me to a devastating anal 'gasm that had me flopping and wallowing into her belly and tits.� We rested and then had her fuck me doggy anal with her slapping my ass and pulling my hair as I begged her to rough me up and she took to it like a duck to water.� She punished my asshole and she "made" me suck my shit juice off her cock several times and again I felt that delicious tension forming deep in my belly.� My clit throbbing and asshole spasming in pleasure.� I told her to fist my hair and pull my head back hard when I cummed.� She fisted my hair and she used that to anchor her slamming thrusts into my spasming shit hole and then I screamed as my orgasm exploded out my shit hole "Ffffffuccckkkkkkkkk � aaarrrgggghhhhnnnnn � Goodddaammmnnnnn!"� the last part strangled out as she ripped my head back my eyes staring at the ceiling as I felt my womb exploding in my belly.� She jerked my head so fucking hard as she slammed in time to her head jerks her other hand clawed into my ass to help her punish my exploding shit hole.� My orgasm went multiple as she half strangled me as I sprayed spittle with my strangled screams of bliss.� I so love how the strangling made my eyes bulge and then roll back and spasm so hard as boiling bliss flooded my veins and brain with pure fucking bliss.� I was spent when I finally stopped cumming and now aftershocks rippled out my ruined asshole.� Sigh, Julia later had me slapping, pulling her hair and then I was gasping her to near blacking out as she learned the pure fucking pleasure of gasping.� I loved how her hand covered my hand choking her and felt her fingers squeezing mine as I strangled her to nirvana.� I so love teaching women to be pure fucking sluts.�

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One thing I have always liked about reading Laura's story is the fact that I get to read her thoughts.� Other stories it is just a script that will tell the reader that the characters are feeling lust but we don't get to actually see the woman feeling the lust.� Here you tell us that [She was really hungry for Frankie.� More than just a few hours would be needed.� I want to eat her alive, she realized.� Frankie looked stunning.� She still wore business suits, as, Laura supposed, befitted a young lawyer, but somehow their severe, tailored cut had a way of emphasizing her stunning sexiness, as if to say: I have to dress in this grey, serious manner to conceal the volcano underneath.� Please take me home and fuck me up my ass.� I so love it!� I will be a wild animal in your arms.� She also wore brightly colored blouses underneath the suit to provide contrast, and the sharp, deep reds, greens, yellows, or oranges, only set off to perfection the deeply black sheen of her marvelous skin.� Laura could get wet just looking at her throat, or her collar bones.]� I so love reading this.� I so hunger for sluts to love.� I want to consume and totally fuck you out.� I do want to "eat you alive".� Reading this lust from Laura makes my pussy quiver.� I love getting into a character's head and you allow the reader to do this.� I love how Laura is undressing Frankie with her mind to get to her charms.� I love looking at women and imagining those clothes coming off and then devouring her sweet delectable body as I make her scream and nearly die from cumming so hard and over and over.� I love how you detail the clothes which no other author does.� I do love fucking a woman right after work or after something formal and undressing her and kissing and stroking her body as I reveal it to my starving eyes and then hungry mouth and lips.� Then you show what I am always doing.� Imaging how I am going to fuck my angels.� Or with men how they are going to fuck me.� With women I can see and taste them as I see their writhing in my mind's eye as their cunt explodes in my mouth or on my fingers.� Then seeing my cock sinking balls deep into her cunt and then plundering her tight asshole.� Pounding anal 'gasms out her shit hole and pulling out and lifting my cock and watching her mouth clamp on and her head undulating as she sucks her sweet shit juice off my dickhead as I moan and my eyes roll back.� I love to think and fantasy about my sluts and studs and I enjoy reading Laura doing the same thing.� I like how you show the clothes that the women wear in your stories.� I am� always saying that the women and sex in other stories are not shown or detailed and I think this is another thing that only you show.� I can just see the contrast that Frankie dresses in.� She is showing she is playing the business game but showing she has personality with her colorful blouses.� I love seeing color on women.� I like bright colors.� Then you show how Laura so loves the color of her black lovers.� With other stories that I can find with interracial lovers they say the women like the contrast but never really drive it home like you do.� They don't show how white women like Laura and I are intoxicated with black women and men.� I so love looking at a black woman and just soaking up her black skin and facial features.� You so show this with saving things like "black sheen" and "marvelous skin".� You show why blacks are so beautiful.� I so love looking between my thighs and seeing a black woman's face buried in my cunt my labia lips enfolding her mouth as she buries and snuffles as she eats me out.� Or she is sitting on my face and all I see is her black body above me dripping in sweat her belly bellowing as she works her sodden cunt into my mouth.� Or I am getting ready to swallow a thick, black bulbous dick head and my mouth is salivating with hungry lust.� Laura is so right, I do get wet looking at my black angels and hoped for sluts to be in my bed soon.

One thing I have always loved about your stories is the dialog that you have in your stories.� I have read some stories recently and some of them had no dialog what so ever.� Stories without dialog for me are kind of boring.� It is through talking to people that you come to know them and that is dialog in stories.� In other stories without dialog I can't really get to know the women.� Then what dialog I get is usually setting the plot or moving the scene along.� That is okay.� In one shot stories that is all you have time for really.� But when you have dialog that lets you see the sparkle that is a woman's personality and verve then it is just candy for me like here ["You know, sometimes you look like a jaguar or something, when you look at me," she said.� "Like you just want to�"�� "Fuck you to pieces?" Laura interjected, chuckling softly.� "Fuck you to heaven and back?"�� "Or hell."� Frankie broke into a smile.� "Nobody ever looked at me quite like you do.� God, it makes me hot.� I get wet when I see that fire in your eyes."]� First, I have always enjoyed your humor and witty remarks.� I never get the word interplay in other stories.� I get so tired not seeing wit in women in other stories.� It is not the women's fault, it is the authors not giving them the opportunity to show their humor.� Plus, you show how words can get you so wet.� I love it when a woman looks at me with fuck hunger and I know that soon she will be making me scream in shattering bliss.� They are promising me hot sex and I can't wait.� Plus, I love talking to fuck mates with other persons around and using words like fuck, slut and nigger with others around and they don't know we are getting each other wet with promises of hot fucking.� I am known for showing my sluts my fuck hunger and seeing them love shake for me.� I am just thankful one author shows this interplay between women.� Also, you are showing their confidence.� They both know they are hot and know they will make each other scream in bed and showing this confidence.� I have always loved how you are so positive in your stories and showing how your women are confident.� Even when the sex is kinky like last chapter you show the women receiving it is loving it and there is no trying to break her will.� She just loves kinky rough sex.� Your stories are so fucking positive.� Plus, I love the smiles that you have in your stories.� Your women are so happy with each other and this makes them smile.� I love seeing Frankie smiling so great and big.� Laura makes her happy and smile.�

You keep the dialog going.� One thing that hit me a while back is that dialog also breaks up the flow of the story on the screen.� When it is just paragraphs that flow one after the other it can get hard to read when they are long.� Dialog breaks up the words on the page and makes it a lot easier to read.� I like how Frankie compares Laura to her kitty cat and Sammie's claws.� Again the humor that I so love.� I never see this in other stories.� I love seeing your women so smart and intelligent.� Plus, I love seeing how her words are getting to Laura.� She has to ask Frankie to back off some on her sexy trash talking.� Her panties are getting wet and she is having a hard time concentrating on driving.� This may seem trite to some readers but I like seeing the little moments of life.� I like seeing how Laura takes Frankie to the BART station to get her car and then following her home. �It is a small thing but it is these things that make each of us unique.� The little moments of our life.� I know a little more about Frankie knowing this.� It doesn't take much to get me hot and I love reading this in Laura ["There you are, you little devil," Frankie cooed, picking up the tiny ball of ginger-and-white fur and rubbing Sammie against her smooth black cheek.� "Let's go get you something to eat so Laura and Mommy can get down to business."�� Laura found this so hot that she could barely stop herself from trembling in anticipation.� Oh god, I am going to fuck this darling into cinders, she thought, alarmed at the depth of her desire for the lovely Francine Bell.� She watched while Frankie cleaned out Sammie's litter box, freshened her water, and poured kibble into her dish.� Frankie enjoyed being watched.� She could feel Laura's hungry eyes on her body, even though she was still fully clothed.]� Watching Frankie bending over and showing off her body would be getting me hot too.� Plus, just hearing talk about us getting ready to fuck would make my cunt pulse and nipples harden.� I would know that love is in the air.� I so know the love tremors where I am shuddering with body shudders feeling my panties getting wet and my nipples throbbing as they rub in my bra cups.� I have always loved reading Laura's thoughts.� They are so much like my own.� I am thinking the same thoughts.� I am going to simply devour your pussy and asshole and then latter probably be plunging my cock up your fuck holes making you die from my expert fucking.� One big difference between Laura and is our acceptance of our lust.� I revel in it and I am never shocked by need for hot hard fucking.� I so love desiring my sluts and cocksmen.� I revel in it.� I like how Laura and I are so alike and yet different.� She is sweet and I am rough.� Plus, I love how Frankie is an attention whore.� I think most people are.� She enjoys being watched.� My women know I swoon over just watching them walk around.� I swoon just watching them walk around the room before we fuck so I can see their calves, thighs and hips working.� If voluptuous I will swoon watching your shoulders and back working.� I love watching muscles work.� With men I enjoy it but it is not the subtle play that you wave with women's bodies.� Again you show how women can be hot even in their clothes.� Frankie is still fully clothed but she is fucking hot.� I would be salivating knowing that I would soon be undressing her and fucking her senseless.� My mouth devouring her cunt until it explodes in my mouth and my cock plundering her asshole giving her anal 'gasms and watching her do a2m and a2p over and over.

Last Thursday night I was with Tisa, Mike and John.� We were having a nice little dinner at an intimate dinner.� I was looking with obvious fuck hunger at the brothers hungering for their cocks to be deep in my belly.� Then looking over at Tisa and soaking up her black beauty and seeing my face buried in her pussy� and sucking away happily until she humps wildly her cunt erupting hot steamy black pussy juice into my starving mouth.� Tisa and I were wearing low cut blouses and I loved how they all were trying to look down my blouse at my braless tits my nipples hardening at times and seeing them stare so obviously as I did at Tisa's long nipples almost always sticking out in her rising lust.� The brothers were all smiles seeing how we were both getting so horny.� We were soon at Mike's house and they sat on the sofa after stripping and told us to put on a show.� We shucked our clothes off and fell to our knees and kissed deeply as our tits mashed and fingers quickly buried in each other's twats.� My head threw back feeling her fingers sinking deep and pounding my flowing box.� I looked at her face slashing and nostrils flaring as I pounded her cunt with hard thrusts twisting my two fingers plundering her pussy.� We kissed sloppy our tongue dueling form mouth to mouth.� I was shaking more and more as we began to sweat making our tits and bellies slide wetly.� We were in perfect sync. �We finger fucked hungrily taking turns to lean down and suck on rock hard nipples making each other cry out in pleasure.� Instinctively, we leaned apart slightly sensing our orgasms were arriving so we could watch each other.� She had a grip on my shoulder and I was gripping her ribs hard as I now slammed three fingers into her cunt my hand soaked in her flowing juices and her hand soaked in my flowing pussy juice.� My eyes were bulging and her eyes were slit and we were both beginning to shake violently when we had simultaneous orgasms.� We were both wailing and having full body spasms.� I loved seeing her body spasm so hard and then still and then another violent spasm rocking her making her tits flop like mine were.� I could feel her cunt spasming out fuck juice completely soaking my hand.� We kept our grips on each other's bodies to slam fingers up erupting pussies.� Our orgasms finally started to abet and we feel into each other's arms and loved cooed before mating mouths tight and kissing deeply in renewed love our tits mashed out as our arms enfolded each other holding tight as we now humped in rising need yet again.�

We were roughly pulled apart and had big white cock waving in front of our sweaty faces.� Mike was in front of Tisa whose tongue was licking all over his thick dick head.� I once more reveled in a black woman's face swallowing a thick white dick and now undulating her head as his dick slide up and down her tongue jamming the back of her throat I could hear.� I now concentrated on John's cock sucking and bobbing enjoying its slight right twist.� John using it to jam my cheek and pull out the corner of my mouth.� We sucked away happily bobbing and twisting our heads on the cocks pumping out mouths.� Tisa stilled and rose some and then slide Mike's ten inches down her throat as he croaked out "goddmannnnnnnnn � deep throat it Nigger!"� I had to take John's cock down my throat feeling his dickhead sliding along my throat as I sunk my head down until my nose was in his sweaty belly.�� Tisa and I sucked and bobbed with sloppy head making lots of obscene noises and spitting all over their cocks and now pumping our fists as we sucked.� Tisa leaned down and sucked in Mike's balls and I had to do the same making John groan in pleasure as I pulled on his testicles in turn.� The brothers then laid down on the floor.� Mike telling Tisa "Put it in your ass Nigger!"� She shuddered and quickly straddled him and happily stuffed his cock into her bung hole and pushed down his dick head sliding into her rectum.� I quickly followed suite and gagged feeling John's twisted cock prying into my shitter and sliding in pushing into my colon making me whinny in pleasure.� Soon we were slamming up and down our tits flopping and mine swirling up and around to slap together high off my chest before slamming down again into my sweaty chest.� We soon had awesome anal 'gasms.� We ramped up again and were doing cow girl facing each other smiling in pure happiness.� I then pulled up and settled by John's hip and bent down seeing Tisa now dismounted and bending down also as we swallowed cocks soaked in our ass juice and moaned happily sucking our asses off our lovers cock.� I may love black cock but white cock is awesome too I thought as I took John's dick head to the back of my throat.� I bobbed hard as did Tisa her big afro jerking with her hard head bobs.� We did a2m repeatedly until I cummed first as I screamed my shattering ecstasy and shook violently as John rammed his cock balls deep up my exploding shitter.� I had three long killing spasms.� I looked down as I lifted up and had another hard spasm of bliss seeing my asshole pulse out a huge gush of ass juice all over John's cock and belly.�� I bent down to begin licking and lip up my shit juice as I moaned tasting my sweet shit juice.�� A minute later I heard Tisa wail and stopped and looked over and she was having full body spasms her whole body shaking violently her ass grinding on Mike's groin his dick fully buried up her shit hole.� He was gripping her tits in his big hands pulping her tits and especially her nipples adding to her screaming pleasure.�� Tisa finally started to come down and gagged out "God I love your white cock in my black ass Mike � you made me cum so fucking hard!"� She now sagged down and their mouths came together and tongues dueled hotly in her mouth as she moaned and groaned into his mouth.� We switched up and had more awesome orgasms fucked out our pussies and assholes.� I had to cum hard when I heard Tisa croak to John during her last orgasm "John � fuck me with your beautiful white cock � unnggggghhhhaaaaaaa � Goddamn you fuck me so good!"�� We finished off the great fuck with us sucking our lovers off.� I loved feeling Mike's cock spasming on my tongue as it exploded in my mouth and filled it with his hard pulses of hot cum as I bobbed up and down his thick shaft.� Tisa was sucking on John's cock head her lips glued so tight on his dick her head still as she sucked with hard sucks her cheeks hollowing.� Sigh, John began to husk "Ohhhhh god � keep sucking Tisa you� goddman Nigger � suck nigger, suck nigger � oowwnnnggghhhuuuuuuuuuu" as his cock now spasmed hard in her mouth flooding it with white cum.� The beauty of it is soon Tisa and I were showering and sucking each other off and then to bed for more intense fucking before fucking the brothers again draining their nut sacks in our spent assholes.

One thing I have always loved about your stories is the fact that they feel like real life.� Other stories either meander without meaning or seem so scripted.� A lot of stories just don't really seem to go nowhere.� They have words but they mean nothing to the women in the story.� I am not sure how to describe it beyond that.� Long stories that have story that doesn't pop and so little dialog and interaction between the characters.� Then you have the shorter one shot stories that have so little dialog and the story itself has a plot feel.� I used watch the various star trek shows and the later ones seemed so episodic.� The characters after the TOS seemed so card board and never really grew.� The dialog was so for the current episode only.� There was never really any growth.� I get that in most of erotica.� Okay, we have a boring plot, no dialog and everything needs to follow the same formulaic pattern everyone else uses.� Sometimes I have some hope when I start a story but it is always dashed.� One story started strong but really lost its way and I noticed the story was abandoned.� Your stories are so not like this.� I never feel like I am reading a story only.� I am reading the life and loves of Laura.� I am in her life and not some boring story.� Because of this I am just so drawn into your stories and I live the moments of her life with her angels and archangel.� This allows me to be so amped up reading the sex that I cum so hard masturbating to them.� I so love masturbating and feeling the tension rising and then buzzing my clit with my fingers as I work my cunt or asshole with a buzzing silver bullet or hard plunging fingers.� I can't wait to see what slice of life I will read in these women's life.� I have loved reading the back and forth between your women.� Frankie has bought some wine and a fancy corkscrew and wants to use it but Laura is horny and wants some loving.� I know that feeling.� I find that most of my angels like to extend the foreplay interlude before we get down to foreplay proper and I am always wanting to move things forward to me consuming your body and rocking your soul.� With guys that is not a problem!� I am smiling as Frankie is mock complaining as Laura draws her close and then locks lips and slides her tongue deep into Frankie's willing mouth.� I so smile when nervous fillies are dilly dallying and I take them in my arms and kiss them deeply and feel them melting for me.� I love swallowing their moans and knowing our faces will be buried in each other's twats devouring succulent red cunt meat.�� One thing you show here is the battle of wills that we all do.� The difference is you show the real battle of wills when love is involved.� They both want loving just differ on how to get there.� I don't know why other stories can't show this daily life.� They either ignore it totally or can only show the extreme exerting of will.� The hard core bdsm and the breaking of wills.� I really don't like these stories.� I love seducing and getting my way (and being seduced and led) but only in the context of give and take.� This is what you capture so well.� This giving and taking that is so consensual.� With other authors it is always the breaking of wills.� Not seducing but actual breaking of a woman's spirit.� There is one author that shows black women willingly submitting to being defiled and racially vilified but the story is boring and the sex so bland.� Sigh.� Here we see that Laura is using her charms to simply get her way.� You have never taken advantage of your women and that is one reason I so love these stories.

One way you draw the reader in is to show the personality of your women and their humor ["I thought we would drink a nice glass of wine. Then smooch. Then undress. Then . . . you know. But here we are smooching . . . and we didn't even get to the wine yet. It's all because you're a horny old lesbian who wants my black pussy."�� "Hey . . . watch it with the 'old' stuff!" Laura slapped her delicious bottom. "I'm thirty. Whatever happened to respect for your elders?"]� I am so happy that Laura is comfortable with her age.� I am a MILF that is over 40 now.� I am fortunate that in my family that both my parents look 15 � 20 years younger than they are and now I am.� I can still pull off the mid twenty look and I am totally comfortable picking up college age women at bars and high school girls at malls, high school functions and on the web letting them see my being nasty on the web cam as they do dirty things for me in return.� I don't mind being teased about being so old and loving to fuck the youth of America so to speak.� I am always happy to see this interaction between your women.� No other author allows their women to have this interaction.� Plus, with the humor you see the affection between these women.� Other stories tell you there is affection but I can't see it really because the women are not allowed to have moments where you can see the affection.� I always love it when my black sluts tell me I am lover of the dark meat or addicted to the black berry juice.� The younger girls especially love telling me that I am a Wigga that is addicted to Nigger couchie.� How right they are!� You just show love in your stories and I love it.� I never know exactly what you are going to give me next in your stories which again is like real life.� They go to the bedroom and Frankie goes into the bathroom and Laura [By the time�only a few minutes�that Frankie emerged from the bathroom adjacent to the master bedroom, now wearing only her pale peach bra and panties and carrying her clothes, Sammie had also returned from the kitchen. Laura was lying on her back, naked, the strap-on already fixed in place and ready to go, dandling the kitten on her belly.�� "Look at you two," Frankie paused by the edge of the bed. "The two loves of my life."]� Of course you have the humor Sammie but this is so wonderful to read.� This is a little moment that is making Frankie smile and her pussy juice and we get to see it.� I have read so many stories over the years and I can't think of one moment like this.� This would not pop with a first time story because we have no history between the women.� But even more is the slice of life moment that we are seeing.� This is two women who love each other inflaming their souls for hot fucking.� I so love these little moments.

I can just feel what Frankie is feeling.� Last week I picked up Rashonda and Chantel for a night of good fucking.� I went to my favorite hotel and got a room on the sixth floor and we went up and I loved how they were shaking in their need for me and slinking on me and then we were kissing deeply as the elevator took us up I ground their twats into my thigh as I made them whimper with my tongue slamming down their throat in turn.� We got in the room and I turned up the heat to get our nest nice and toasty.� I went into the bathroom to strip and freshen up for some hard fucking.� I came out and felt my belly melt in love.� They were on their backs on the bed stroking their black dicks I had bought them.� Both ten inches long, bulbous dickhead,� veined and thick.� They were stroking them with smoky eyes and Rashonda husked, "Come suck our black dicks bitch!"� I moaned feeling my nipples rock hard and my cunt getting so wet.�� I climbed up on the bed into the separation between them.� I hunched over and gripped Rashonda's dick and looked at her with kittenish eyes and started to lick her cockhead all over with my long tongue before swallowing and undulating and twisting my head as I sucked hard my head lifting with my love sucks.� I sucked and bobbed and then moved over to Chantal's dick and sucked and bobbed and gave her dickhead butterfly licks all over before swallowing again and twisting and bobbing my head taking her dick hard into the back of my throat.� I went back and forth giving head loving feeling their dicks sliding up and down my tongue and jamming my throat.� I was sucking on Chantal's cock when she growled "Take my black dick down your throat�You goddamn Lilly white Bitch!"� I immediately relaxed and slide her dick down my throat until it was buried in my throat my nose jamming into her stomach.� I jammed down a few times and rose up hacking and choking out spit all over her dick and belly.� Rashonda fisted my hair and drug me over "Take my Nigger cock down your throat you goddamn piece of shit!"� I moaned loudly her words exciting me so as I slide her dick down my throat and rode it up and down my gullet drooling spit all over her groin as I deep throat fucked her cock and then Chantel's dick as I throat fucked their dicks.� They then got me on my knees and began to skull fuck me barking at me to keep my arms at my side and keep my mouth open wide.� I choked and cawed out as I was savagely skull fucked with spit soon soaking my throat, tits and belly as I coughed and choked out tons of spit.� I cried out with their dicks now dick whipping my face and I moaned when Chantel moaned "God you look so hot with our dicks smacking your face!"� They ripped their dicks out my mouth and jammed fucked my cheeks stretching them out.�

They moved me over to the chair and Rashonda sat down and I got over her gripping the arms as she pushed her dick into my asshole and penetrated me roughly her dick punching hard into my shitter.� Soon I was gagging feeling my asshole pumped as I tilted my head over and sucked and bobbed on Chantel's dick.� I was in heaven being taken and used.� I jammed down as Rashonda's dick punched up into my ass.� I rode her hard and then slowed when I tired and she pummeled up hard to pound my shitter good.� I dismounted and sucked my ass off her cock and Chantel sat in the chair and I gripped the arms and slide my ass down her cock until my cheeks were grinding on her thighs.� I did a slow grinding swirling stroke taking her dick slowly up and down my ass before riding hard and fast as she punched up hard.� I would clean my ass off their cock as the other girl sat in the chair and I mounted her cock with my asshole.� I was riding hard and wild on Chantel's dick.� My tits were flying up off my chest and lifting on the upstroke and slamming together off my chest in front of my throat and then slamming down onto my chest and then flying up again to slap together and flop down as sweat poured off my face and stomach and flung off my slapping tits.� Rashonda moaned out "God I wish my tits could to that!"� I was on edge and her moan sent me over and I slammed down and screamed "Goddddammnnnnnn�I'm cumminnnngggg you goddamn fucking NIGGERRRRRSSSSS!"� I flipped and jackknifed wildly as shattering bliss blasted out my asshole in an epic anal 'gasm.� I shrieked and cursed my beautiful black lovers.� They pulled me groogily over to the bed and Rashonda took my asshole doggy as Chantel� laid on the bed and sucked her cock moaning at the taste of my sweet shit juice soaking it.� They took turns raping my shitter as I did atm on their cocks.� I was close to another orgasm as I was deep throating Rashonda's cock when Chantel ripped her cock out my spasming asshole and slammed up my pussy and hammer fucked my now wildly flipping cunt.� I screamed on the cock in my throat as my cunt exploded and I bucked wildly as my womb tore itself inside out scalding my brain with pure fucking bliss.� I lost it and gagged hard on the dick down my throat.� I was spasming so hard I couldn't lift immediately and choked hard as I wailed on Rashonda's dick.� She sensed this and gripped my hair and jammed my nose into her belly as I wailed as loud as I could with a dick in my throat.� I gripped her thighs hard as I had full body convulsions and a second orgasm shattered me and made my have full body spasms.� I had to rise up or the girls would get an unpleasant surprise as my gag reflex was starting to take control.� I gripped her thighs supper hard and she let me pull my head up.� I did fast and heaved and drooled a ton of spit all over her belly and cock.� I took great big breaths and fought to control my stomach.� It was hard as I continued to cum so hard.� I think fighting for control made my cum so much harder.� They did not know I was fighting hurling.� All they knew and loved was me flipping hard and giving great heaving moans as I drooled out spit everywhere and hacked and choked.� They loved controlling me.� I recovered and moaned when Rashonda gripped my hair again and wallowed my face into my spit all pooled on her stomach.� I was being defiled and loving it.� I could already feel my body reviving.� I so love hard fucking.�� They fucked me hard and long which inspired me to rape them each almost to dawn.� We were all exhausted at work and school the next day.

Now we are getting down to Laura.� One thing I have always loved about Laura is how she so focuses on the woman she is fucking at the time.� This is how I am.� I look at you and focus on the things that I find beautiful in you.� If you have small titties I love your small size and how I can pulp and suck your whole tit or most of it into my mouth. If larger tits I love the bounty you give me.� The ability to love the whole tit and making them shake, rattle and roll.� If you have big ass I love the bounty again or if small and taunt I love the firmness.� If voluptuous I love how I can work your Serena Williams like body or if thinner your greyhound form.� I want to love and consume you.� You make it clear that Laura truly loves each and every one of her lovers.�� Of course the sex is great but when you truly care and love your woman it takes the sex to the next level and you show this.� My women know I want to devour them just like Frankie here [Laura's eyes were roaming so hungrily over Frankie's near-naked body that she barely heard what she was saying. The girl, woman, was a masterpiece; so black, so smooth, so slender and curvy at the same time, her face so gorgeous, her body so sleek and lean. ��"There you go again with that jaguar look," Frankie smirked. "Shall I strip for you?"]� I, like Laura am always told I look like various predatory cats or a guy with raw lust in his eyes.� I want my women to see that.� That raw hunger that is going to fuck them hard and deep and shatter them with multiple orgasms until I exhaust their bodies with orgasms.� I want women to see the promise on my face and then deliver great fucks.� With men you are supposed to see the raw hunger they have for pussy and asshole.� Women have been brainwashed into thinking they are not supposed to have this hunger.� Fortunately, my parents protected me from such vile teaching.� Plus, you show here the beauty that is Frankie.� I have always loved how you make it so clear how much Laura loves her women.� It doesn't matter who it is and their body type she loves them completely.� If thin like Jane or Mavis she loves them.� If more voluptuous like Arthell or Nyomi she loves their body.� More body to love. �With Shamika's aunt Iola we get the woman with big tits and ass and Laura loves her completely.� She worships the woman and her body that is gracing her bed.� I have loved how Laura is so like me in this.� Love the woman you are with.� I find each body type gives you unique pleasures that you can exploit for both of your pleasures.� I so love how you worship the female form.� You have always painted such loving word pictures of your women.� I get so very tired of not seeing the women in other author's stories.� Just a very hazy description that gives me a sense of height, bust, maybe weight and eye, hair color.� But nothing to make the woman "pop" for me.� But with you I see Frankie.� What makes her unique and so hot to Laura and thus, me.� I can see those titties I would be pulping with my clenching fist and devouring her thick hard nipples as she wails.� Slapping her model like face so hard filling the room with the sound as she croaks and moans as I pull her hair viciously and scream at her what a nigger she is and asking her if I am right and swooning when my black sluts always moan back "yyyyyeeessssssss I am a goddamn Nigger".�� Then later she would be slapping me so hard and dragging me around by my hair screaming at me what a Nigger lover I am and a worthless goddamn piece of shit I am.� Feeling my face and scalp burning with her slaps and vicious pulling of my hair making my pussy flow like a river.

Like I say, other authors keep their stories so freaking silent.� I feel like I am watching a silent movie.� They don't allow their women to talk.� You have Frankie asking Laura if she wants her strip for Laura and then Laura croaks ["I wish you would." Laura heard her own voice sounding thick, clotted with sexual hunger, pinched and forced. "God, I want you."]� This little bit of dialog conveys so much emotion and hunger.� We can so clearly see Laura's need for her black slut.� This communication between women makes us so hot for each other and willing to totally give our bodies to each other.� I so love seeing it in your stories.� We then get to see Frankie swishing her body around making her tits swirl for Laura and then work her hips showing her mound and ass before pulling her panties down her legs.� All confident women are attention whores and she loves working her body for her white slut knowing it is turning her woman on as well as herself.� [Frankie slipped her panties down her long, slim black legs and kicked them aside. She climbed onto the bed. "I want it more than anything," she smiled, her breasts swooping out a little in the direction of Laura's mouth. "You know I have a bee line straight from my nipples to my pussy. Which is already dripping, by the way."]� I love how Frankie's pussy is already so wet and swollen.� I love working my slut in her clothes and then getting them off and finding her nipples rock hard and her pussy so wet and swollen waiting for my tongue, fingers and cock.� I so love how we know that Laura is going to work Frankie's nipples.� Only you focus on a woman's body with love.� In other stories each body part is loved so fast and then it is move on.� No details and no sense of love.� I will work your body so hard and totally.� I see Frankie's nipples are like mine.� I nearly die from it when I have nipples wolfed down and tits pulped and mauled.� I feel it so hard in my clit and throbs down to my womb deep in my belly.� ["Mmmm, I love cowgirl," Frankie purred, straddling Laura's pelvis and reaching down to guide the stalk of the strap-on dildo into her frothing honey pit. "We've never done it cowgirl." She threw her head slightly back as she lowered her pussy onto the dildo, gasping tightly as it slid up deep into her body. This made her chest and her marvelous little naked breasts thrust out a little, and Laura's hands quickly traveled up her long, smooth midriff to them, cupping them, squeezing them, watching the pleasure spread across Frankie's lovely face. "Oh, shit. God, that feels so good!"]� Gods you make penetration so perfect.� I so love to feel a strap-on or hard male cock sliding balls deep into my tight pussy and feeling my pussy clutching and spaming on that cock filling my sleeve and that bulbous cockhead slicing through my cunt folds to pierce my womb deep in my belly.� Only you capture this!� I am always surprised in het stories especially that authors don't make penetration special like you, a lesbian author does.� I always gag and feel my belly clench and torso spasm feeling that cock penetrating me.� I so know that throwing my head back when on top and arching my back as I work down a thick, long cock.� I so love big dicks because I crave that feeling of being stuffed with cock.� I want to feel that eight inch plus cock piercing my pussy and asshole.� Only you show how this penetration makes one swoon.� Plus, you show how we love with more than just our cock.� I am always surprised how other authors don't show this.� You show Laura using her hands to start working Frankie's titties and making those nipples zing her clit.� I so love to grind smaller tits into a woman's chest and pulp out my crushing fists if a little bigger and seeing them shudder.� I am smiling thinking how often they grip my hands to help my hands grind their titties into their ribcage or clench their fingers over my fist and squeezing in hard to encourage me to strangle their tits out my clench fists as their heads thrash and eyes squeeze shut in extreme pleasure.� Asking them if they want harder and always hearing a sibilant yeeesssssss and plleeeassseeeee.� Again you actually express the pleasure and show how the woman receiving is being so pleasured.� I want to hear it in real life and see it in erotica.� Fortunately, I found one author who shares this love.

I am smiling as Laura recalls past fucks.� I am always doing this when fucking and during the day basking in great orgasms and shared moments.� I like how already you are laying the groundwork for the ramping up of sex that makes it so rad.� In recounting the past fuck with Allisha we see a wild fuck cowgirl and we know that Frankie will be enjoying ramming her cunt down into Laura's upthrusting cock.� You simply can't help it.� You feel an urgency and necessity and only you show this.� Plus, you detail the fuck.� I would just get the fact that the women are fucking cowgirl and that Frankie is working it but that would be it in other stories.� No details and also showing us that loving more than one erogenous zone.� We see Frankie working her pelvis to rotate and plunge her pussy down into Laura's upthrusting cock.� Feeling it punch deep into her clutching pussy spasming and milking that dick that makes men such idiots.� I like how you show several minutes fucking before Frankie bends down to let Laura suck and wolf her little titties.� Again, the ramping up that I so love in your stories.� Your pacing is so perfect in your fucks.� I have to smile at them conversing and Frankie moaning she is already getting close and Laura is not so happy.� Me I don't care.� I fuck you through that first orgasm to take the edge off and then work your body hard and deep and make you cum really hard knowing that now you will last and I can pound you through the bed or have you ride me like a total whore.� Sigh, I love your dialog [For a moment Frankie didn't respond. She was swirling her hips, jamming her pussy down on the dildo and chuffing and gasping softly, her head thrown back. "You . . . may not have . . . any say in the matter," she finally panted, her eyes glazed with sexual storms as she stared down at Laura.�� "Then I better get busy," Laura panted back, scooping one delectable small breast up in both hands and feeding it into her mouth. She sucked it hungrily, passionately, getting as much of the small, firm ball of flesh into her mouth as she could, making little happy squeaking noises issue from Frankie's throat.]� We see the love and need between these two women.� I especially how you show Laura knowing she had as a job to do and gets focused to do it.� I so love being told or asked by my slut to do something and then doing it making her cum so hard doing it.� Laura is thinking like me.� I will make her cum fast and hard and then fuck her better later.� I so love how Laura uses two hands to stuff that titty into her mouth to devour.� Sigh, I so love to suck a whole tit or most of one into my mouth and deep throat love suck as she spasms all around and keens and sometimes crying out to me "stop" while jamming my head into her tit.� I smile around her tit as she dying from my skills.� Sometimes they actually try to make me stop when new to me and I am overwhelming them with pleasure with breast magic.� Having to press them down and shove their hands away as they writhe and seek to reduce the sensations.� I will back off a few moments if sense I must but usually I can pour it on and really make them cum so fucking hard or make their aftershocks just run one into another. Sometimes I exhaust women just with aftershocks as I will let their nipples rest and then suddenly lick, suck and stretch out again as my slut screams and writhes in pure fucking pleasure.� I love it when they tell me that "my clit is going crazy" or "god my clit is going to tear itself apart!" or "your making my tits scream!"� I have always loved your word use.� Other authors just say it is happening.� You use words that so detail and heighten the sex.� Words like panted, scooping, hungrily, passionately.� All these words convey the fuck hunger they are feeling.� With your word picture I can feel Frankie's tit stuffed in my mouth as I love suck and work my oral magic.� Then hearing Frankie's response.� Only you show the pleasure of the woman receiving.� I love it.

I love how you ramp it up now.� Laura is slamming her dick into Frankie's juicing cunt as she munches on her titties sucking them deep into her mouth.� I so love to totally fuck my sluts devouring their whole body.� Plus, again you are showing us Frankie's pleasure.� You tell us that Frankie is loving it but show it with Frankie's vocalizations.� Like I have said so many times I never get the sound of sex during the fuck from other authors.� Even with the quieter women they are snuffling and at least softly grunting and moaning.� I get them to loosen up but with other authors you never get any sounds until the end and usually not even then .� You show us the little noises that Frankie is making as she ramps up toward her orgasm.� Sounds that only inflame you to fuck her harder.� It makes me slam my dick so hard into your fuck hole.� With men it really inspires them to spear their cocks so hard and deep up your spasming cunt and clutching asshole.� Then the outright back and forth communication between Laura and Frankie.� Again, so clearly with words you are telling the reader the love and rising love tension between these women.� They are urging each other on to make Frankie's orgasm so great.� Plus, I love hearing Laura crying out how beautiful Frankie is.� I love the endearments in your stories.� I never hear this love in other stories.� When you read the tenderness between Laura and her lovers it so draws me into the fucks and makes them special to me.� Then you so know how to show the end game [She sucked Frankie's other breast deep into her mouth, really trying to swallow it, feeling her own level of sexual mania jump up two more notches, up to the cracking point.�� "Anngghiiie! Anngghiie! Uummngghhaaiii!" Frankie suddenly came without warning, wailing and convulsing spasmodically on top of Laura, jamming her pussy down on the dildo and whooping hysterically.�� Laura's fingers tightened around the base of the shaft, holding it steady while Frankie tried to fuck herself into oblivion on it. The dewy moisture she had earlier felt from the wet hair of Frankie's crotch was supplemented by a more copious gushing. ��"Awwonngggg!" Frankie groaned loudly, jamming her pussy down again and again on the dildo until the last shuddering spasm of her climax left her gasping and whimpering, slumped forward onto Laura's body.]� Laura is still using her mouth to pleasure Frankie.� My mouth and hands are always busy when I am fucking you with my cock.� Stroking, gripping, mauling and sucking if I can.� You show how the additional loving pushes you over the edge.� Then the divine orgasm.� I like how you tell us this orgasm came out of nowhere.� You never get that from other authors.� Most orgasms you can feel coming but sometimes they do explode out of no where rending your pussy, asshole, or both with sudden scalding spasms of fucking bliss.� I have always wailed my pleasure and love it when I get to read it.� I just cum so hard as my womb shatters and asshole tears itself inside out on your plunging cock.� You show the spasms and full body shakes that grip you during powerful soul shattering orgasms.� I love how you show Frankie impaling her exploding cunt on Laura's prick.� I so love the feel of gushing cunt juice that you show here.� Love how you brought that front and center.� I so love how you show the slut that Frankie is.� I can just see her rotating her hips to bring her groin up and down to impale her exploding cunt to drive herself to nirvana.� I love feeling my ass slapping down into your thighs and my body jolting as my tits flop and roll and I feel my sweaty ass slapping and then grinding down into your thighs as I circle to worm that dick in my cunt or asshole.� Three nights back I was at Dodie's with our babies busy.� I had been riding her like Frankie my cunt already exploding once and I was now slamming my asshole down onto her wildly lunging cock burying her ten inches up my shitter.� I was whinnying and loving how my tits were whiplashing in the air and slamming down as sweat poured off me.� Looking down at Dodie soaked in sweat slamming up and pumping my tits with her clutching hands as I felt the tension rising again.� She pulled me down and adjusted her angle to slam forward now ripping my asshole apart.� I was moaning loudly as I jerked and hitched her hands now pulping behind nipples and sucking voraciously back and forth and then jamming together to suck and lick both together.� I clutched her head and jammed her face into my tits as she sucked and slammed her dick into my asshole now wildly spasming.� I cried out "Fuck me you goddamn Kike�you fucking goddamn Jewish CUNT!� �. AAARRRRGGGHHHHHAAAAAA!" I now screamed as her sucking mouth on my nipples made my clit and asshole explode with scalding spasm of excruciating pleasure.� My head thrashed as my stomach flexed up and slammed down into her belly as my asshole just continued to explode scalding me with fucking bliss as my head thrashed and I screamed several more times all caps with Dodie's loving ministrations.� I spasmed and flipped until exhausted from pure bliss.� We then kissed in languid love as she stroked my body and sweaty hair.� She tilted me over and pulled her cock out my ass and slide up.� Her dick was now in front of my face as she gripped the base and traced my lips with her dick soaked in my shit hole.� "Suck your fucking shit off my cock you fucking goddamn Gentile!� Show your Jewish master how much you love your asshole on my dick, Bitch!�Suck you shit off my dick Cunt!"� I moaned as she now slapped my mouth with her big dick and I opened my mouth wide and swallowed her cock soaked in my shit juice and moaned in pure happiness slurping my shit hole off her dick as I undulated and sucked her cock clean.� She barked at me if I loved sucking my asshole off her dick.� I moaned "My asshole tastes like sweet candy Dodie (I swirled my tongue all over her dick head � looking up at her � and then bobbed again) I love sucking my shithole off your dick Dodie � You fuck my asshole so good � rape my asshole again Dodie�ppppleeeassseeee"� I groaned so gutturally as she rolled me spoon and pushed her dick hard, balls deep up my ass.� I felt my eyes roll back with love as another great ass fuck commenced.�

You now give us some sweet post coital time.� I love that time when bodies are temporarily satiated and you are lazily stroking sweaty bodies and tongues are swirling in mated mouths as tits mash and bellies wallow.� I love to pull you on top of me and feel your weight on me as we twine limbs and kiss in new or renewed love.� Our sweaty bodies slipping and sliding as I feel love once more rising.� I do so feel for Frankie confessing to Laura that she has not had an orgasm in six months.� That is heinous!!� Not getting fucked five or six times a week is nearly unthinkable for me.� If not getting fucked I am masturbating repeatedly.� Frankie is being crazy.� I love all my angels and especially my archangels but I can't deny myself the divine pleasure that only fucking and masturbating gives a person.� Life is too freaking short to not give yourself all the pleasure that you can before we leave this orb.� I hope Frankie loosens up and finds herself some more lovers and gladly partake of them.� Please don't deny yourself Frankie.� Getting ahead at work is cool but don't be crazy about it.� Laura is divine but other women can bring you great pleasure and find some great cocksmen to pleasure your pussy and asshole.� Ok, I am getting off my soap box.� I like how we see the communication between you women as Laura tells Frankie what she wants and Frankie is happy to fuck her cowgirl.� I like how you show how women communicate.� Other stories the sex just happens. We don't fuck by a script and we communicate verbally and a lot of body language and eye contact but still we are constantly urging, wheedling and asking for what we want.� I love that one author shows this.� You then show humor again with the cat sleeping in the chair with her back to them as if in repudiation to their sexual activities.� You are the only person to show how you have humor in life.� I am assuming everyone sees it.� I am not sure why other authors don't show this.� Humor makes life so much more enjoyable.� I find it in sex sometimes.� The twins Celeb and Joshua new pad have, has quickly become a fuck pad on the peninsula.� They are always fucking women from work, clubs, internet and women we bring them.� I was over their last weekend with some of my female and male friends along with others.� I had fucked Odessa in the living room sucking her off repeatedly and then she sucked me off and then finger fucked me as I leaned back on her body until I was crying out humping up lewdly into her fingers as my body wallowed back into her big, soft titties our sweat making me� slide all over her body.�� I was now in a bedroom 69 with Anthony.� I was on top loving him gobbling my pussy.�� I was wallowing my cunt in his mouth as I felt him tongue and suck my clit and fuck hole.� I was sucking his cock and using the angle to take his dick down my throat over and over as he slow pumped his cock sliding his dickhead deep into my throat as I held my head down his shaft gurgling on his cock.� I was happily sucking on black dick and then doing deep throat and feeling my pussy expertly sucked.� I was taking his cock down my throat again when Kapri comes in going on about going down on Odessa herself and loving her black, juicy twat and awesome tits.� She then asked me something and I couldn't answer because I had eleven inches of black dick down my throat as I fucked his cock with my throat making him grunt into my juicing cunt.� My previous orgasms allowing me to ride Anthony's face and just love his gobbling making my belly hitch and spasm in womb pleasure.� I looked up with my eyes at Kapri still talking to me and she asked me again for my opinion, of what, I was not sure with my concentration on deep throating Anthony.�� I finally rose up off his dick now pumping his thick shaft and caught my breath.� I then asked Kapri in an exasperated voice "Can't you see I had Anthony's dick down my throat Kapri?"� She just looked at me and kept prattling on about all the pussy and cock to fuck.� I had to smile at the slut.� I now sucked on his cockhead with slow bobs and twisting on my head listening and making short comments to Kapri before sucking again on Anthony's cockhead.� I just smiled sucking his dick at the weirdness of it all me sucking on his cock while Kapri carried on a conversation with me.� Then Diamond came in with her petite hand clutched around Tyron's thick, black eleven inch dick.� She said "Look momma.� Can we fuck him momma?"� His eyes were glazed at the incest before him.� Kapri turned and took in Tyrone and purred of course "baby" and bent and kissed her daughter deeply.� They fell to their knees and began to suck his rigid shaft taking turns and kissing deeply just over his cock head.� Tyron gasping goddamn and fuck over and over softly.� I told them that maybe later they would fuck each other for him.� His eyes just widened and he nodded yes hopefully.� I went back to sucking black dick in earnestness� and taking his dick down my throat enjoying the show on the floor beside the bed now as the mother and daughter were getting hammered now doggy in the pussy in turn as they sucked each other cunts off Tyron's cock and then guided his dick to their assholes and he cursed and really groaned when they started doing ATM on his dick sucking each other's shit hole off his dick.� Seeing this made me come on Anthony's face as he grabbed my ass cheeks to jam my exploding twat on his face.� I was up on my palms grinding down as my cunt erupted and soaked his face in my hot cum.� I groaned so hard as full body convulsions shook me violently.� I got up on my knees as Anthony stood up on the bed and I started to suck on his cock hard with my head bobbing his dickhead into the back of my throat as I fisted his shaft.� I was positioned so I could see Kapri and Diamond getting fucked still doggy.� Suddenly Diamond was screaming "I'm cummiiinnggggg mommyyyyyyyyyyyy!" followed by crying moans and groans of shattering ecstasy.� She flipped and jackknifed hard and finally came down as Kapri pulled Tyron's dick out her spasming shit hole and latched her mouth to his dick head and sucked with slow twists back and forth on his dick head and then pulled it out her mouth as Diamond got on her knees and now sucked her ass off his cock also.� I pumped and bobbed on Anthony's cock as he maintained control enjoying my sloppy head as I now lowered my head and swallowed his nut sack and worked his heavy testicles in turn in my spit filled mouth before licking up to shaft to again swallow his cock.� I worked his dick as now Kapri was fucked to an anal 'gasm of harrowing dimensions.�� Then her and Diamond sharing Tyron's dick fresh out the mother's ass as Tyron croaked out "Goddamnnnnnn�that so fucking hot!"� I worked on Anthony's dick, nut sack and bent down and got on a hand and tongued his asshole making his body shiver hard.� Then working his nut sack and slowly swirling my tongue around his shaft from base to his dick head and then swallowing and bobbing.� Finally, his control started to slip and I began to deep throat suck his cock head and rode my hands just below my lips as I slow bobbed my head with long hard sucks.� I loved feeling his hands clawing my scalp and pumping my head in time with my bobs letting me feel his strength in his clenched fingers "Suck my cum out my black dick�you fucking goddamn white slut � suck suck suck slut � suck slut � suck slut!"� He then cried out Fffffuuuuccckkkkkkk!! and his hips jerked hard his dick head sliding up my tongue and then his dick blasted hot semen into my throat making me suck harder as his dick spasmed and flooded my mouth with his steamy hot cum.� I swallowed most of it but some leaked down my chin and I felt drip onto my tits.� My hands had clutched his thighs and I loved feeling them spasm with each spurt of his dick in my mouith.� I sucked him dry and he stepped off the bed and out and I watched mother and daughter suck off Tyron with him coming in Diamond's mouth as she kept most of what she didn't choke out with his heavy spurts and made of show of sharing with her mother making Tyron again curse how hot that was.� I told him to stick around and he was wide eyed as Kapri and Diamond climbed on the bed and got in 69 with Diamond on top and immediately started gobbling incestuous pussy.� I love orgies because you just don't know how it will flow.

You then show how sex is something that should have duration.� With other authors they make sex seem so one act.� Great sex is something where one orgasm is only the beginning.� One should continue to fuck until the body simply can't fuck anymore.� I want to wring every orgasm I can out of your body.� A woman's body is designed to cum over and over.� Men need time to recharge (though male enhancements have greatly increased staying power � though no one admits using it).� I just was looking over a long story and each sex scene was over within two paragraphs and gave no real details yet again.� You show that sex has duration and give the details that draw the reader into the sex.� First you give the story to setup the sex and then you deliver real blistering sex that is so true and on target.� I simply have come to be mystified that no other author seems to get it.� You also show that sex takes time which you show. You also show that sex has acts.� Often you will let the reader see the opening few acts and then make it clear that by the end of the chapter that much more hot fucking has happened or will happen.� I think that is so important.� I get so tired of stories making sex seem so fleeting.� They do it primarily by not giving us any details of the sex.� That makes it seem boring and bland and that is a sin.� Great sex is simply awesome and awe inspiring.� I like how here you show that during sex marathons you must take a few breathers from time to time.� Taking to time to replenish fluids lost through sweat and cumming so hard.� Then needing a meal if you have a nice over the night or weekend fuck sessions.� I love being satiated sexually and yet feeling the fuck hunger rising again as I refuel my body for more hot fucking.� I like how you show that love can take root at any time.� While Laura and Frankie are waiting for a pizza to arrive Laura feels her fuck hunger rising again seeing Frankie in a flimsy red robe.� I love being naked with my lovers but clothes can add so much.� Seeing nipples poking out material like here.� Seeing legs exposed and then not exposed and knowing a pussy or cock is waiting for my mouth that is beginning to salivate again.� These are little things but it is the little things that add up to make a total conflagration of hot fucking that immolates the soul and body with pure fucking ecstasy.� You just bring this into the story so naturally.� You make it flow with life and this is not part of the main story.� By adding these elements you simply make the story pop.� You now show how Laura opens new frontiers to her women.� [She returned in under a minute, carrying the tiny Sammie in one hand and the Double Penetrator in the other. "Look what I found in your bag," she said, holding it out, smirking with a naughty six-year-old's grin. "You were holding out on me."�� Laura acted innocent. "You're too sweet for something like that," she said, half-satirically.�� "Wanna bet?" She sat down again next to Laura and deposited Sammie in Laura's lap, then held up the Double Penetrator and ran her fingertip all along the two appendages, tracing their curves and admiring their length.]� I like how it seems that Francine has never been double penetrated and now Laura gets to deflower her DP virginity.� I am smiling seeing the look on Francine's face when she first sees that double penetrator.�� I know she is thinking how good it will feel getting both of her fuck holes fucked at the same time.�� I prefer the traditional DP but I also love how when a double penetrator is used on me I feel that perfect sync fucking of my fuck holes.� Gagging and jerking as my cunt and asshole are spasming pure fucking pleasure to my clit and brain.� What I really like about this moment is the spontaneity that you are showing.� Again, it is the little moments that I mentioned earlier.� This is just happening and it makes Frankie feel like a happy little girl and Laura gets to play along feeling young herself.� This is two women who love each other and are enjoying this little moment that both know is about to lead to some intense hot fucking.

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I am always amazed at how my life rewards me sometimes with showing women new frontiers myself.� Joann and Maria have many clients in China and many of them love the personal services.� The Chinese women are so wild in bed and love to just fuck and fuck I am learning.� They have one client from Shanghai in the clothing import business.� It is run by two women Xuehong and Chaoqiong.� They are in their late twenties and very, very successful.� They have all the finer things of life.� They are lovers but into swinging in the gay life.� I have been regaled with all the details of their beauty and sexual skills in the bedroom.� Xuehong is 5'4" and has a 34D bust with a big ass.� She is not petite like so many Chinese women.� Chaoqiong is very petite like Diamond.� She is only 4'11" and weighs maybe 90 pounds with cute soft barely 34B titties.� They come to America often and my babies have fucked them here and there so many times.� They demand one on one service that my babies know how to give!� Recently, though they came to me.� The Chinese are fascinated by America and our diversity.� Being Hispanic definitely helped them land the account.� Their clients wanted women of course and loved how they look more Chinese than other nationalities.� They have no use for Japanese and don't like the culture of bribes in their nationality.� Xuehong had seen pictures of me and they had been told of my talents and love of black pussy (the edited out my love of cock, especially black cock).� She began to not so subtly hinting at could something be arranged.� Joann and Maria make it clear their views on open relationship.� The Chinese women were dying to eat black pussy.� While not xenophobic Xuehong and Chaoqiong are not used to persons of other color.� They are simply in love with my blond hair and black women.� They also died from it when my babies gave them all the details of me fucking teenagers and especially black teenagers.� Marie asked me if I could arrange something.� They knew this would really cement the business relationship with the women.� Plus, they wanted me to do something for them.� Joann and Maria had been dying to fuck and fist them in the ass but had shied away from attempting it when the women especially Chaoqiong made it clear that they did not do that.� They couldn't risk trying to take those cherries.

I asked Diamond, Rashanda and Chantel if they were up for some Chinese pun-tang and nearly wet themselves squealing yes and jumping around so much.� Xuehong and Chaoqiong came into town later that week and had rented the top suite at the Marriot downtown.� I took my black babies Friday night to the hotel and we went up to the top floor where they let us in.� They were simply beautiful in their diaphanous nightgowns that clearly showed their wares.� Their nipples already rock hard and mounds bulging so clear in the sheer crotches.� I loved the sluts already.� We went in and the women cooed and oogled over the girls.� I did not mind in the slightest them stealing the show.� Xuehong asked them how old they were and she nearly fainted I think we they said at once thirteen.� They asked the girls their names and had difficulty with Rashanda's name.� Xuehong said her name was unusual and that let Diamond bark at them (she loves making people uncomfortable) "Oh, your think our names are black don't you.� You think we're nothing but Goddamn Niggers!"� All three looked stern and very miffed.� I had to smirk at how big the Chinese women's� eyes got and the looks of panic on their faces.� They were stumbling all over themselves trying to apologize.� They were going on in Mandarin trying to figure out what to do.� Finally, Diamond lost it and began to laugh her ass off with Rashanda and Chantel joining her with Diamond soon on the ground rolling around laughing.� Poor Xuehong and Chaoqiong were simply lost by now.� I told them that race relations in the United States were very complicated.� I told them that everything was cool and to ask them later about the protocol and etiquette of race relations.� It is a constantly moving thing and you need to let the girls explain it to them.� Finally, the girls were ready to fuck I could see as they stopped laughing and talking trash between themselves.

The girls started to peel out for jackets, jeans and tops.� Again I could tell our Chinese hosts were nonplussed.� The girls boldness was totally amazing to them I could tell.� They were shocked that thirteen years could be so bold and confident.� Their musk filled the large room when their panties came down showing their shaved mounds all swollen and soaking wet.�� All their nipples rock hard.� Rashanda's small breast so firm he thick areolas swollen and rubbery looking her stubby nipples thick and hard.� Diamond's flat chest, puffed out proud, her small nipples rock hard.� Chantel's gourd tits rolling as she stripped her long nipples rubbery with the need for hard sucks.� They stood there patiently and then moved toward their prey.� I had stripped along with the girls and I watched Chantel move towards me as Diamond moved towards Xuehong and Rashanda to Chaoqiong.� They easily peeled off their negligee exposing fully their shaved mounds and swollen nipples.� Their thick musk flooding the room now.� I sat down on a large oversized chair and Chantel crawled on top of me and mouths mated tight as tongues dueled hotly in our mouths.� I watched the girls enfold their lovers in their arms.� Diamond pulled Xuehong's head down as their mouths mashed together and tongues dueled hotly as Rashanda and Chaoqiong were clenched with arms and legs twined and already humping thighs as their heads tilted allowing tongues to slip deep down throats.� Our hosts had recovered from their earlier shock and were eagerly kissing and humping their teenage lovers.� Soon they were each settled on a huge sofa with large cushions with a black thirteen age slut sitting on them kissing them deeply and sucking on their nipples with expert skill as their black hands squeezed and soon pulped tits roughly as the adult women looked stunned and overwhelmed by the rough loving.� I knew soon Joann and Maria would be fucking their brains out with rough hard sex.� I could tell these Chinese bitches would be under our spell totally.

I had Chantel's tits in my hands pulping her tits as her nipples bulged out the top and I was voraciously sucking her nipples as she thrashed and clawed my shoulders in ecstasy.� I sucked hard and then would move my head up and our mouths mated tongue dueling hotly as she now hefted my tits up one at a time and pulped as her mouth sucked my thick, long nipples so hard and good her lips going up and down and then gluing to my areolas and hard sucking as her tongue swiped my whole nipples making me gurgle and my head thrash.� I looked over and saw Chaoqiong had her hands behind Rashanda's back holding her close as her mouth devoured her thick areolas and loved sucked her nipples making the teenager's head rock back and thrash.� Diamond was kissing Xuehong silly and then hard squeezing her tits while butterfly stroking her nipples making her cry out.� I watched Chaoqiong kiss Rashada and slip two fingers up her twat as the girl was on her knees on the sofa and began to fingerfuck her hard her knuckles ramming her mound hard as she kissed her mouth and nipples with hot French kisses.� I watched Diamond push Xuehong down on the sofa and straddle her face and mash her kitty on the Chinese woman's face who immediately began to gobble wildly.� I leaned back and pulled Chantel onto my mouth and began to eat out widly.� I stabbed my tongue deep into her flowing cunt hole and deep throat sucked her clit with loving sucks.� I was heaven feeling her cunt engulfing my mouth.� I sucked with all my skills and after five minutes or so I was rewarded with her wails of shattering pleasure her cunt ramming down into my mouth as her body convulsed.� I drank her cum as it convulsed out her cunt and helped her lay down.� I got up and watched my minxes.� I saw that Chaoqiong hand was a blur pounding Rashanda's twat her mouth glued to one of her tits sucking on her areola like a lioness.� Rashanda was sagging down her arms on the Chinese woman's shoulders her head lulled into Chaoqiong head.� She was constantly moaning and gibbering "Fuck my black cunt � fuck it hard � make this nigger cum hard Chaoqiong � unnngghhh � make this nigger cum!"� Diamond had her hands on her sofa arm swirling her cunt down into Xeuhong gobbling mouth.� Xuehong's hands clenched into Diamond's hard buns.� Diamond was roughly working her twat up and down the woman's mouth as the woman moaned in happiness.� I had to smile as they both now cummed so fucking hard.� Rashanda cried out in helpless ecstasy as her body was horribly rent with killing spasm of pleasure her cunt splattering fuck juice all over the women and the sofa.� Her whole body violently spasming.� Diamond was trying to tear the sofa arms off as she screamed Fuuuuccckkkkkk over and over her cunt riding from Xuehong's forehead to her chin over and over as her cunt ruptured soaking her face in cum.

So beautiful.� We fucked the whole rest of the evening in straight forward lesbo sex and enjoyed the mixing of the races over and over.� After a wonderful meal and showers our hostesses got out their strap-ons.� My babies had gotten our hosts large cocks to replace their standard six inch models.� I had told my black babies the plan to anally deflower the Chinese women to which they were so excited.� The black minxes had agreed to start out the fucking going straight to their A hole to get the foundation laid for the Chinese women's anal deflowering.� I got Chaoqiong and Xuehong to lay on their backs in the thick carpet and I laid down between them.� Rashanda straddled me as Diamond got over Chaoqiong and Diamond over Xuehong.� The Chinese went to guide their ten inch cocks but the girls swiped their hands away and the women smiled at their willingness to take charge.� The girls got on their knees and lifted the cocks up and spit down on them getting them wet and lubricated.� They ran the cocks up and down their slits getting the slicked with their twat juices.� The Chinese women eyes were so fuck slit hungrily waiting to fuck their cunts.� The girls slowly guided the cocks over their perineums to their assholes and started to swirl the dick head into their sphincters as they began to press down.� I had to smirk as Xeuhong and Chaoqiong eyes got so big with shock and wonder.� All three black teenagers now jammed down hard and cawed and shuddered as their assholes were yet again invaded with large cocks.� Their bodies shook an throats cried out in pain as their tender shit holes were pried open by thick bulbous dick heads.� They pumped slowly their assholes bowing out on the out strokes as their butts slowly sank down the shafts impaling their teenage assholes.� I was looking up at Rashanda her face slashing as her butt hole opened up and ate my dick her ass cheeks now slapping down into my up thrusting hips jolting her body as her ass was filled with hard, thick cock.� I looked right and left at my Chinese lovers as they were now totally into ramming their cocks up black teenage assholes.� They were coiling their hips to slam cocks up into hungry assholes as the girls cried out in pleasure.� Diamond had her hands on Chaoqiong's shoulders hunched over swirling her ass back and down to slam her ass down into the woman's hard up thrusts.� Her face a constant mask of slashing with anal ecstasy.� Chantel was straight up lunging her body up and down fully impaling her own tight asshole.� The sounds of now sweaty flesh slapping hard and fast and then slow.�

�Xeuhong and Chaoqiong were slamming up down gripping their hips to impale Diamond and Chantel's assholes that had totally ringed the black shafts with their ass cream all thick and creamy.� They were excited husking to them "You love it don't you Diamond" "It is so hot my dick fucking your asshole Chantel!"� While the black teenagers were groaning like whores and cawing out "Fuck my black ass!" "Fuck me ass harder dammit!" "Oh god! It feels so good!" and such.� Chantel was moaning so hard as I pumped my dick fully up her thirteen year old tight ass.� I watched Diamond lean back on her palms between Xeuhong's legs slamming her ass down onto the thick dick impaling her tightly clenching asshole.� She was growling now her face fierce as her hips rotated and slammed down making her body jolt as her ass slammed into the groin of Xeuhong.� She suddenly lifted and sat her ass down on the floor and gripped the dick soaked in her ass juice on Xeuhong's belly.� She lifted it her head moving down and swallowed the dick head and pumped hard her hair flouncing with her bobs.� Xeuhong's eyes were as big as saucers as her almond eyes allowed as she excitedly gibbered in Mandarin.� She then said in English "That is so hot! Diamond! � ungghhhh � fuck that is so hot!"� Rashada now dismounted and sat at Chaoqiong's hip.� She lifted Cahoqiong's dick and murmured "God I want to suck my asshole off your dick Chaoqiong" making direct eye contact as she lowered her head and clamped her mouth tight to her cock soaked in shit juice.� She bobbed slowly twisting her head as she moaned and pumped the shaft with her petite fists.� She sucked hard and then released the shaft and did deep throat her nose now pressed hard into Chaoqiong's belly where she ground her nose.� She kept it deep in her throat a long time before rising up and letting a flood of spit flow out her mouth soaking her dick and belly in spit.� Chaoqiong was staring hypnotized murmurming in Chinese before her head went nerveless and her head thudded into the thick carpet where she had a small orgasm with her body hitching and jolting with her eyes rolled back and spasming.� I know where her mouth would be shortly.� I lifted Chantel up and down onto the floor where she licked my cock up and down before happily sucking her ass off my dick with slurps and then lots of head bobbing and dick head licking.

The black vixens fucked their assholes hard on the Chinese cock pounding their butt holes along with me raping Chantel's asshole.� The Chinese women were still in heaven seeing the girls suck their assholes off their dick over and over murmuring how good their assholes and shit tasted.� Rashada had the first anal 'gasm as she screamed in pleasure as her asshole exploded.� Diamond followed suit immediately crying out in shocking pleasure her hand a blur as she masturbated her clit making her whole body violently jackknife over and over as dire spasms throttled her with bliss.� I felt Chantel stiffening with her anal orgasm forming and wrapped one arm around her torso and pulled hard into me crushing our titties and the other gripping her hip to help me slam my dick viciously up her asshole.� I was reward with a whinnying cry of shattering bliss as her head rocked back and slashed right in front of me as helpless wails of ecstasy cawed from deep in her chest her eyes bulging and then squeezing shut in fucking ecstasy.� Slowly our black bitches recovered from their harrowing anal orgasms.� The anal fucking continued with now the girls taken doggy, spoon and missionary along with cowgirl.� Xeuhong and Chaoqiong were shocked again when the girls guided the their dicks soaked in ass juice from their spasming assholes and guided slowly to their swollen, dripping wet cunt and impaled their wombs on dicks soaked in their shit hole juice.� The women again excited gibbering in Mandarin and crying out in English how fucking nasty the girls were.� The girls begging them to call them Niggers, boot lips, jungle bunnies and such until the women were excitedly degrading them with racial epitaphs.� They were having mini orgasms with the racial slurs.� The girls now had them slapping their faces and tits and pulling their hair hard as they cried out in pain still� impaling their fuck holes on hard Chinese dick.� Each of the girls having two or three more orgasms of shattering bliss during the long fuck session.�

We rested for a while after our black sluts cleaned our cocks thoroughly from dick head to the base.� I kept strapped in according to our plan.� Diamond got her favorite strap-on out my carry bag while Rashada and Chantel got strapped into the Chinese women's strap-on.� I smiled seeing these powerful women all docile and slow eyed.� They knew what was coming and were all meek in awaiting the fucking of their life.� I am always amazed at how powerful people loved to be fucked rough and abused with many being into femdom and totally dominated.� I just want to fuck the hell out of them.� We were not sure about them giving head so had decided to go straight to the fucking.� Diamond and Chantel got on the carpet and we guided Xuehong and Chaoqiong to Diamond and Chantel respectively and mounted them reverse missionary.� Soon the black teenagers cocks were buried deep up their lovers twats and groins were swirling sinking dicks deep up tight cunts as they kissed wetly and ground their chests into each other grinding nipples making each other gag as they kissed and groped each other.� Soon the Chinese sluts were swooning.� Chantel rolled Chaoqiong over into missionary and started ram fuck her cunt hole making the bitch squeal as her legs clasped Chantel's hips driving her groin up into Chantel's hard thrusts deep into her tight clutching cunt.� They were so beautiful.� Diamond kept fucking Xuehong hard as she siphoned her nipples when Xuehong got on her palms to drive her cunt back down into the cock pounding her twat her red inner cunt meat clasping Diamond's thick cock on the out strokes.� Rashada and I waited patiently for our turn.� We all love to watch hot fucking up close and didn't mind.� After about four or five more minutes our Chinese hosts were hitching, cawing and stiffening with approaching orgasms.� Chaoqiong orgasm hit first as she started groaning so hard her body flipping and bucking up into Chantel's body pressing her down as her hips snapped impaling Chaoqoing's womb with her savage thrusts.� Her head rocked and strained as she wailed in Mandarin and her hands clasped and clawed Chantel's back.� The screams of ecstasy sent Xuehong over the edge next.� She was pressed down into Diamond who was twisting her nipples and ramming her dick so hard into her sloshing cunt.� Diamond had spread her heels and dug them into the carpet to slam her dick into the beautiful Chinese woman's womb savagely over and over.� She screamed herself and bucked violently several times with killing spasms of bliss.� She then tried to rise up into a sitting position but Diamond held onto her grip on her nipples stretching out her tits cruelly and jerked down bringing Xuehong's body back down wallowing on hers as she flipped and the pained suddenly caused a second orgasm to explode out her rupturing cunt.� Sigh, the wails and gibbering in Mandarin was so sweet to my hears as she flipped and bucked with Diamond now enfolding her to keep her body pressed to her as she kissed her face and speared her womb over and over prolonging the woman's shattering ecstasy.

She Chinese sluts were groggy with pure pleasure and were ready for their ass rape.� I told the girls we would DP them with me and Diamond on the bottom so we could control the Chinese women in case they resisted.� We are the most dom and willing to take control of a woman to bind her to our will.�� One on one fucking and other positions would give Xeuhong and Chaoqiong more opportunities to resist their ass rape.� I got on the floor beside Chaoqiong and helped her roll her over me as Chantel got up excitedly.� I guided my nine and half inch dick and shoved it fully up her buttery cunt as she whimpered and moaned in pleasure her cheek resting on the slope of my tits.� I watched Xeuhong dreamily mount Diamond and gag with Diamond sliding her dick balls deep up her hungry cunt.� I watched Chaoqiong's� face slashing with pleasure as I began to pump her sloshing cunt with my thick cock.� Chantel fell to her knees as Rashada got behind Xuehong on her knees and they both pulled their ass cheeks apart and buried their faces in their asses and started to lick and probe their anuses.� The women whimpered stop and this is wrong and more in Mandarin.� Diamond and I sensually stroked our dicks deep into our Chinese sluts cunts as they gurgled and moaned in soul deep pleasure.� Xeuhong was drunk on pleasure as Rashada snaked her tongue into her tight ass and made her face slash with pleasure.� She was totally into her ass rape.� They knew where the second cock was going.� Chaoqiong was trying to squirm away and twist and I grabbed her arms so she couldn't use them to scrabble away.� I bent her arms at the elbow and got her arms on her back crossed over each other and used one hand to control them.� She whimpered and pleaded and then weakly told me to stop.� I rammed her cunt harder and she swooned.� She was only making a show.� A few times I have gotten in over my head sexually and there was no confusion when I said no.�� Chaoqiong was not stopping us merely adding to the seduction of her asshole.�� I loved controlling her arms as they tried to jerk out my clasp and jamming her arms into her back controlling her.� I loved her eyes pleading for mercy and tears leaking down her cheeks as she piteously moaned "stop" and "no".

Soon fingers were prying open assholes as they cried out in pain and begged us to stop as the girls punched their tongues deep into loosened sphincters and then fingers probing deeper and more tongue to open up the backdoor so to speak.� They now were up on their knees looking at each other as Rashada and Chantel pressed their dickheads into the Chinese whore's spasming shit holes.� Gods, I love the moment of penetration.� Chaoqiong's head on my breast quivered hard as she cried out in pain big tears wetting my tits with my sweat.� Xeuhong's head rocked up on a� stiffened neck as she screamed in pain as she moaned and wailed.� They both were crying with big sobs as their rectums accepted their first dicks.� Diamond and I husked to them to relax and let pleasure take over.� The teenagers only very slowly pumped their hips letting their rectums accommodate the thick cocks buried in them.� I know those assholes were clenched tight bowing out with any motion back of the dicks impaling them.� Rashada and Chantel spent long minutes working the Chinese women's assholes loose.� Now their dicks were sinking deep into their asses with hard long strokes.� They women had stopped sobbing and were now groaning as those millions of nerve receptors turned from pain to pleasure.� Chaoqiong's face was still slashing but now with fierce pleasure.� I had finally released her arms and she was now on her palms ramming back into the prick impaling her asshole.� Xeuhong was whopping, groaning and crying out as she slammed back into the dick savaging her ass.� Both women jolting forward with power of the thrusts from the teenagers slamming their bodies into their ass cheeks.� The thirteen year olds looked at each other and pulled their dicks out and kneed around to where our heads were.�

They waved their dicks in front of their mouths.� Xeuhong did not hesitate a second and opened her mouth wide and swallowed Rashada's dick with hunger and immediately bobbed hard sucking the dick in her mouth liberally coated with her shit juice.� Her head undulated hard up and down as she sucked.� Chaoqiong looked up at Chantel for a long few moments hesitating.� Chantel coaxed her "Open your mouth Chaoqiong.� Suck your shit cream off my dick honey � you'll love it.� Trust me Chaoqiong.� It tastes so fucking good.� I can't wait to taste your asshole honey � it'll taste so sweet�please!" she husked to her lover.� Still looking up with slut eyes she opened her mouth and moved forward swallowing Chantel's cock.� She had a look of trepidation but it very quickly turned to hunger as her hand came up to grip the cock and she sucked hard with her head bobbing and twisting hard.� I so love seducing new sluts to ATM.� I loved seeing the pure pleasure now on their faces sucking their asses off the dicks in their mouths.� Then seeing their faces scrunch up and slash as their assholes were penetrated once more as they cried out in pleasure now.� They were fucked hard and deep now and soon they both had anal 'gasms that rent their souls with shattering ecstasy.� They hungrily sucked their assholes off the black vixens dicks now with gusto.� We fucked them hard until Xeuhong had a multiple orgasm that went on and on and Chaoquiong had a truly epic one a few minutes later.

I loved it.� They were totally addicted to anal sex immediately.� I so know anal sluts waiting to be born.� The next day late in the afternoon they were sitting in bar stools in front of the bar.� We were spinning them around pounding whatever fuck hole we wanted moving back and forth between them to rape all four holes at our pleasure and then them sucking our cocks clean.� I so loved how I pounded Xuehong's ass with savage strokes of my dick and then spun her around and she reached for my dick with hunger and sucked deep into her mouth and bobbed with moans of pure pleasure that squealed around my dick when Diamond torpedoed her dick fully up her asshole and banged her so hard the chair was tilting to and fro.� Back and forth we spun her taking her asshole or cunt and watching her suck it clean when we spun her back around again.� Or Sunday when I had them wrapped around my body as I held them in the air and fucked their cunts so good while the black minxes took turns raping their spasming shit holes.� Chaoquiong is so light.� I would let them down to suck our cocks clean and then they would anxiously leap back up into my arms to they could be double raped again.� Xuehong got on her knees by my hip and started to rip the black dick fucking her woman's ass out and feeling ass juice splattering my thighs.� I loved how she gasped about it gaping and splattering her face with shit juice.� I held Chaoqiong up with one hand and roughly guided my dick to her asshole and pounded her so hard her body jolting up hard as we kissed in new, deep love.� Then holding her up again with one hand and taking my dick out her ass and keeping it away from Xuehong's questing mouth and impaling Cahoqiong's womb with a savage upthrust as I slammed her down into my plunging dick. Then feeling my black minxes moving and shoving their dicks back into her asshole and then lunging up to fill her asshole once more with their thick black dicks.� Fucking her hard until she was once more jerking wildly as full body spasms shook her violently.�� Gods the wails of ecstasy that she screamed out and squealing in Mandarin.� Again and again we fucked her like this as she quickly cummed so hard twice more in my loving arms her throat screaming in Mandarin her ecstasy as her small body jackknifed so violently in my loving grasp.� I loved how Xuehong's was so hungery to clean our cocks of her lover's shit juice over and over.� Staying close to get covered in splattering shit cream and sweat.� I was thinking that Joann and Maria should give me a big bonus for seducing their assholes for them.

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One thing you capture well is the feeling of wonder and seeing something for the first time or having it hit you even if you have seen it before.� With other stories things happen without the sense of the wonders of sex being shown.� I like how Frankie traces the appendages of the double penetrator.� We can see her excitement rising and see so clearly that she is a pure slut.� The kind of women I love.� I really love to bring women out of their shells and having them totally accept their carnal desires.� I so love looking at big strap-ons or big male cocks and just seeing in my mind's eye what they can do to me.� I just feel my womb pulse and quiver deep in my belly and the love shakes rattling me with desire as my nipples harden and pussy gets so wet with want.� Feeling my asshole spasm with want of invasion.� I like how you tell us through Laura how previous lovers did what Frankie is now doing.� You can't help feeling wonder when you see something new and exciting like this.� I felt this a little while ago when La'Tonya and crew showed us their demon dicks for the first time.� I felt my eyes shock wide open� in surprise and happy glee.� Then you tell us that a double penetrator, demon dicks and large dicks are just plain intimidating in a way that is exhilarating.� You can't help but feel that thrill of knowing you are about to be fucked hard and deep.� To feel the power of multiple dicks plowing our love aching fuck holes and making you howl with ecstasy.� Plus, you show this intimidation is the good kind.� Not being cowed or subjected to abuse but knowing that you are about to powerfully fucked.� I can't help but shiver when I know that I am about to be fucked hard and especially by multiple cocks.� It is a "threat" but in a good way.� I love women who have totally become sluts and loved to be fucked so hard and deep by me and others.� Life is too short to not take all the pleasure that one can find in this life.� I am happy that you take a moment to bring the wonder in and not just have here is a new toy and treat it like it is ho-hum.� I am so surprised when other authors don't mine the moments in their stories for these little nuggets of life that make fucking so rad.

Now I am smiling at the cute flirting that we have from Frankie and Laura playing off of it.� I never get that from other stories and it makes me really love it in your stories.� I never get to see women being witty in other stories.� It really is amazing really.� I think most people have at least some sense of humor and I would think I would see it in stories they write.� I would think there is no humor in the world going by their stories.� Besides the humor, it shows the affection between your women.� You don't get humorous repartee with complete strangers as a rule.� You may get humor but not the gentle kind that only familiarity brings and this you show over and over.� It draws me to Laura and her women this affection that you show.� It makes the women and the sex special.� I like the give and take.� With Laura implying Frankie is somewhat innocent and Frankie playing along encouraging Laura to rape both of her fuck holes.� I so love to have my sluts exciting me with their words and sultry actions.� I fuck them so good when they excite me like this.� I have to smile at the interlude of the delivery guy arriving and he can obviously see that they are lovers.� I can just see the boner in his pants.� I get that when I am getting a motel room and some sluts are slinking all over me and I can see the rampant curiosity, desire to join us or open disdain.� I just smirk at them when I get that superiority vibe when I just know they don't get any and I am getting some pussy.� I really love it when it is an older person and I get the racist vibe when I have a black slut or I am the white slut for my back studs.� Fuck them!� I like reading these little moments in your stories.� I don't think the vast majority of erotica can do this.� One shots simply don't have the flow of time and the intimacy of the reader knowing the characters so well to have this work.� With stories where you don't know the women like regular readers do these women.� This moment would seem forced and just a plot device in the story.� It would not ring true like it does in your stories.� I too know these down moments between bouts of intense fucking.� Time to let the body recharge and refuel so you can once more fuck with exuberance and totally fuck your body out once more to exhilarating orgasms ripping your womb and shit hole wide open flooding the body with pure fucking ecstasy.

Sigh, I so love how you show the return of fuck hunger, filling your body once more with need.� [Laura pulled her close before she could dish up the food onto plates. She ran her hands up under Frankie's housecoat, running them all over her body. "I'm sorry, darling, I am hungrier for you than I am for Chinese."�� She kissed her voraciously, squeezing her ass cheeks, sucking her neck. Frankie gasped and shivered and mewled a little. "Ohhhnnnn . . . you're getting me hot again. You and the wine." She dropped a spoon on the floor, where it clattered loudly. "I think you're going to have to show me how that double dingdong works."]� I have loved how you sow the coming together of bodies.� I don't really see the body clench in other stories.� The women kind of stay apart until the sex gets going.� Other authors simply miss time in the fuck.� They keep their women apart with no physical contact for so long in their stories.� I so swoon when I pull a woman's body to mine and feel our warm, smooth flesh sliding over each other as bellies wallow and tits mash as I pull you close so I can slide my tongue down your throat once more making you my slut.� I have always loved how you show the full body clench where you are using your hands as you use your mouth.� I am simply stunned how other authors never show this.� You work your lover's whole body to fill it with need.� Many times the need is already full flame and you are merely stoking it higher moving the fuck forward.� Nice touch the spoon clattering to the floor.� Plus, I love how you never forget to let the reader see how the loving ministrations by Laura is affecting her woman.� I get so tired of merely being told the woman is being affected.� I want to see and hear it like you show.� Last weekend I was back at Celeb and Joshua's crib along with many others and fucking in many glorious different pairings.� I had taken a power nap to get rested and wandered into the main spacious bathroom.� I noticed Rasheda in the shower washing and she husked for me to join her but I had a eyelash in my eye and wanted to check myself out so I demurred.� They have a huge walk inn shower with clear glass to let one see in.� She pouted and went back to washing making sure to sway her hips and turn around and wash her titties and pussy for me.� I felt a tingle but wanted to finish my primping.� She went back to merely washing.� I watched Joseph come in and take a leak his cock soft but still freaking large compared to most dicks.� He had not noticed Rasheda but now he did and I loved how he stopped and stared at her black, glistening body as she ran her hands all over her body not noticing him.� I watched his cock rapidly attain full erection as he stroked it and eyed her thirteen year old body with fuck hunger.� He stepped into the shower and pulled the door closed as she now noticed him looking over her shoulder with a slutty smile.� He walked up to her and pulled her to him his cock pushing into her back and his hands grinding her titties mashing them flat and stroking her belly.� She moaned so loud and he turned her around and hefted her up and she clenched his torso with her arms and legs as he mated their mouths tight and I watched him slide his tongue down her throat as she whimpered and now gyrated her pussy into his stomach and mashed and ground her pulpy areolas and nipples into his hard chest.� They kissed and humped for a few minutes.� He now put her down on the floor and pushed her down by her shoulders onto her knees.� "Suck my white dick Rasheda.� Suck it like the ghetto Nigger you are!"� She gripped his shaft at the base and looked up with kittenish eyes.� Her mouth then swallowed his cock head and began to pump and undulate as she sucked his cock good.� Sucking slow and then fast.� She bobbed her head up and down taking his dickhead to the back of her throat hard.� She would then undulate and twist her head on his upper cock sucking voraciously her lips glued hard to his thick shaft as he cheeks hollowed out showing her deep throat sucks making him groan in pleasure.� Licking up and down his massive shaft and sucking his testicles one at a time into her mouth and working them in her mouth making Joseph throw his head back in pleasure as he hissed and moaned.� She sucked and bobbed for a few minutes murmuring how much she loved white cock.� He then stood her up and pushed her down bent over at the hips her hands pressed into the wall.� He guided his thick cock to her swollen, wet cunt and shoved it deep into pussy and started to hammer fuck her whole body jolting and little titties shaking and rolling.� He fucked her hard his cock now fully burying itself with each hard thrust into her teenage cunt.� I loved watching her red cunt petals gripping his shaft on the out thrust and then still clinging punched deep into her belly.� He would grip her hips and then shoulders to anchor himself to pile drive his dick into her womb over and over.� He pushed her forward slowly until the side of her face was mashed into the shower wall and he lifted a leg and was savagely pummeling her shaved twat as she was now moaning and whinnying loudly her face slashing with constant soul deep pleasure.� She suddenly titled her head back and screamed all caps as massive full body spasms throttled her with fucking bliss.� Joseph fucked her hard prolonging her orgasm as her face slashed so horribly with shattering ecstasy and her cries echoed in the stall.� She was groggy as he led her out the stall with the water still on them both sopping wet and got her down on the tiled floor and he scooted in spoon.� He slapped her ass hard and barked at her open her asshole for him.� She looked back with pure lust as she gripped her ass cheek and opened her bung hole.� She cupped a hand and drooled spit into it and soaked her shit hole in her slimy spit for lubrication.� She croaked "Fuck my asshole good Joseph with your beautiful white cock.� Tear my asshole apart.� Make me cum so hard"� Her body shook and she keened as his thick dickhead pried her shitter open and sank into her asshole making her cry out in pain that is pleasure.� Her asshole bowed out at first as his ass clung tight and only slowly opened up for his dick.� He pumped her slowly until his shitter was loose and now he ramped up slamming his dick hard into her shitter making her body jolt.� He was kissing he shoulders and pulp grinding her small titties making her body spasm and jolt as she moaned and chuffed constantly.� He slammed her ass with his thrusting hips driving his dick deep up her shitter.� Joseph then pulled his cock out and sat up with one hand supporting himself and gripped the back of Rasheda's neck and forcefully pulled her around and down guiding her mouth to his cock waving on his belly.� "Suck you shit off my dick you fucking Nigger!"� She moaned opening her mouth wide swallowing his cock hand immediately undulating her head as she sucked and bobbed on his thick shaft.�� He knows by now she is a total ATM whore but we want to be "forced and controlled" by our dominate lovers and controlled as we do nasty things.� She moaned as she bobbed his dick up and down her tongue then latching into his dickhead and supper sucking while lifting until her head pulled off with lewd wet pop sounds.� She sucked him good before he rolled her over and again and invaded her asshole again and fucked her hard.� Several more times she rolled over and did sweet ATM.� She then mounted him cowgirl slamming down as he thrust up hard burying his dick in her colon and pulling out most of the way all soaked in sweet shit juice.� I loved how she swirled her hips and slammed down impaling her black asshole over and over on his pile driving prick.� How she hooked feet over his thighs to get leverage to slam down as she whinnied.� She then stood up and bent over at her hips and gripped his dick at the base.� She latched her mouth onto his dick head and twisted her head right and left sucking with deep throat sucks as Joseph gripped his temples groaning for control.� She mounted him cowgirl again whooping as she mashed her titties and twisted her nipples making her hiss and cry out in pleasure.�� I loved how Joseph gripped her hips hard to drive her shit hole hard into hard upthrusting dick making her body jolt hard as their slamming bodies filled the bathroom with the sound of wet flesh slapping hard.�� A few more times Rasheda sat by his hips and sucked her ass off his dick.� Joseph sensed a few minutes later her anal 'gasm was approaching.� He gripped her hips so hard his fingers sank into her hips and savagely rammed her down into his dick wildly thrusting up her shit hole.� She screamed full caps the sound echoing in the tiled room as her body convulsed with full body spasms as her face slashed and eyes rolled back.� She now slammed her ass down and ground her cheeks on his groin rotating his eleven inches in her belly.� I loved how her body would pause and then a violent seizure shake her violently over and over.� She spent herself on his cock.� Joseph lifted her off his cock as aftershocks were still rattling her petite frame and guided her head to his lifted cock.� "Suck me off Rashada�use those thick lips Nigger! � swallow my white cum Nigger!" he commanded her.� She moaned hard before swallowing his thick dick head and started to suck and bob twisting her fists on his thick shaft.� Her head rose and fell with her bobs and her head twisted right and left as her black thick lips stayed glued to his cock as her cheeks hollowed out with her hard sucks.� Her eyes slit with concentration.� After about two or three minutes Joseph's control finally started to slip.� His hands were now clawed in her scalp not really controlling her but letting her feel his strength.� She was now sucking hard on his glans and her mouth trying to suck his dickhead off.� Her head rising a little as she tried to supper suck his cum out his straining balls.� "Oohhhhhhh GGGOOODDDAMMMNNNNN YOU FUCKING NIGGERRRRRRR!!" Joseph yelled out.� His hips raggedly jerked off the floor as his dick blasted hot semen into Rashada's mouth and down her throat.� She choked and sucked his seed out his nut sack as Joseph raggedly moaned deep in his chest.� She sucked him dry and finally lifted off his spent dick head and smacked her lips and smiled great big.� She looked over at me on the bathroom counter I had perched on gently stroking my heated flesh.� She quickly moved over and drug my cunt meat to the edge of the counter and proceeded to suck me off murmuring how much she loved white cunt meat.� Soon enough I was screaming just like joseph as my womb ruptured and flooded her mouth with my sweet cunt nectars that she sucked down greedily.

I have found that your stories flow so naturally.� I feel that I am actually living Laura's life with her.� I read other stories and I am like please make it stop.� Some have no details and others just meander all over the place.� I know one thing that makes your stories flow so naturally is the way use dialog between the women.�� Other authors never allow their women to communicate between themselves.� You are given dialog that is done to setup the plot and situation but no real communication.� You give the reader real interaction between women ["We're bad, girl," Frankie panted back, now sucking Laura's naked breasts thirstily. "Are you going to fuck me with that obscene-looking thing? I've never been fucked in both holes at the same time."�� "Ah, my angel, your double virginity is about to fall."�� "It doesn't hurt, does it?"�� Laura pouted. "I would never hurt you. You know that."�� Frankie grinned and tilted her head. "I don't know. You get pretty hot and bothered some times." She tilted her head the other way. "Not that I don't love it."] Because you use dialog to move the story forward you don't have the lurching I experience in other stories.� This just makes it feel like I am with these wonderful women.� I love what I see here.� Frankie is totally hypnotized by the double penetrator.� I love that Laura is going to take her DP virginity.� I so love being the first in showing women new things.� I have never felt the need to take a woman's actual virginity but I love showing them all things that the body is capable of experiencing.� I want to rock women's worlds.� I don't mind brining in others to help make their dreams come true.� I have to smile at Frankie.� She is a lover of anal fucking and she has to know that there is at least some pain involved.� I have noticed that Frankie is a little shy of truly experiencing great anal sex.� It is when the pain turns to pure fucking pleasure that you asshole simply explodes and scalds the mind and soul with pure fucking pleasure.� I so gag with wonder and pleasure when my screaming asshole starts to pulse and throb pure fucking pleasure to my clit, nipples and my mind making me keen and whinny in rising pleasure.� I think we see the truth of it when Frankie lets Laura and the reader know that Laura has ripped her a new one a few times in the end game to another super nova of anal 'gasm.� Again, it is your dialog that allows the reader to see this.� It would not ring true if the author wrote this without dialog.� That is the reason I so love your dialog.� It allows you to expand the story so effortlessly.�� I so love taking all the anal flowers that I can.� I always feel my eyes roll back and spasm when I take another anal, atm and a2p virginity.� I love it!� I also love seeing the love and mirth between these women that only dialog can bring out.� The play pouts and grins show the obvious love and affection between your women.� You are the only author to show obvious affection between the characters.� Other authors say they have affection between the women but you show it and that makes all the difference in the world.

One thing that has always made Laura so special to me, is how she is always letting the woman she is with know how special, wonderful and beautiful she is.� I am always letting my women know just how I find them so freaking special and beautiful.� Each woman has qualities that make her unique and so very desirable.� I think people in general simply forget to tell their loved ones this.� I have found so many women over the years in need of this ego building.� Their husbands and boyfriends sometimes leave them almost dehydrated with lack of compliments.� Even women can be guilty but so much less so.� I love complimenting my women and seeing the lite come into their eyes and their shoulders throwing back that little more and knowing I am making them so happy on so many levels.� Another thing I have always adored Laura for is how she loves the body of the woman she is with.� Laura loves all body types from the outright skinny, to the thicker voluptuous body build.� I am exactly like that.� I will worship and find things special about your body.� If you have a flat chest I lock my lips over your nipples and lick like a cat with the flat of my tongue and try to suck your skin off your chest as I lip lock over your nipple and deep throat love suck and tongue rasp.� Makes them mewl and their legs scissor.� If big enough to suck all into my mouth I do and then pulp out my fists making nipples bulge and love feeling their tits strangled in my fists as they gurgle harder and often put their hands over mine and squeeze encouraging me to rape their titties.� Bigger titties I just maul and pulp their entire weight, size and shape making my sluts keens as I work so hard and suck on their titties all over and lick, caress and really stretch out her areoles and nipples.� Putting the kink in and slapping hard making them jolt and flop.� Using two hands to stretch out and grind pulp as i try to suck their nipples off as they wail and writhe all over the bed their hands clenched in my hair jamming my face into their tits nearly suffocating me.� I love what your body brings me.� I do this for their pussies, asses, thighs, shoulders and face.� Love the whole woman like Laura does.� Also, I just love the little things about a woman's body.� I find beauty in the shape of her nose, the way of her forehead (I can kiss, nip an lick for long minutes), I especially love eyebrows.� I tell each woman what I love about her.� I do this for newbies and my archangels though I know their bodies like the back of my hand.� I love them totally and want them to always know it.� I get this same love of the female body from Laura.� This love of the female form is so shown her [Laura slid back up to face her, kissing her very sensually and romantically, probing Frankie's mouth with her tongue, caressing her breasts lovingly with both hands. "My darling," she murmured, "I want to fuck you until the end of time. I want to fuck you until you come unbelievably and can't take any more and beg me to stop. I want to fuck you until you turn into a shaft of pure light and explode into the universe."�� "Oh god . . ." Frankie squirmed and writhing, as if urging Laura to get on with it. "Oh god . . . why does it make me so hot?"]� When you say that Laura is "sensually and romantically" kissing Frankie this adds another whole level to their lovemaking.� The way that Laura slides up Frankie's body.� I just know it was slow with much kissing and nipping along the way.� Other authors just make it so bland and that it happens without making these sexual moments special.� You do.� Then you show Laura's use of language.� I so love to say fuck, shit, goddamn, bitch, bastard, nigger, koon, bootlip, and so many other nasty and racially charged words that drive my sluts wild.� Laura is more cultured in her language use but I love how she uses language to such great affect.� I guess I carpet bomb my love sluts while Laura uses laser guided bombs.� Plus, I have to smile at the artists prose at the end of Laura's love chant.� My lovers would just stare at me if talked like that.� Dodie can get like this.� Again, it is the differences that I so love in life.� I love how Laura is telling Frankie she is going to fuck her to exhaustion.� The love threat and then delivering.� With other stories I never get this.� I can't really because there is no dialog to allow it.� I just love your dialog.� Then you always remember to show the effect of these words and loving ministrations.� Other authors would just say that Frankie was loving it without having Frankie tell the reader directly how much this is all turning her on and soaking her cunt in love juice all swollen with need.� I so love how you show using all your tools and talents to deliver the love kill to your slut.

I love how you always detail the penetration of cocks into a woman's body.� How you show that it just doesn't happen like it does in so many stories.� They just say that the woman gets strapped in and then no details of the penetration.� Just that they get in position (always missionary) and fuck.� That is it and that is so boring to read.� You know again how to detail the fuck without bogging it down.� I love how we see Laura lubricating her cocks with her love oil and getting the ready for the plundering of Frankie's fuck holes.� I like that you show lubrication of some sort is needed usually.� I try to use what the body provides.� I love to fuck women first in the pussy to orgasm and then using their own twat juice to penetrate their backdoor orifice.� I find just letting your dick get wet with sweat is effective.� Then my favorite is to spit on my dick.� Bending my head down and letting spit drool all over my cock and her bung hole and smearing it in and then using it to penetrate her bung hole with my finger or thumb to get is loosened.� Plus, a girl shows her slutty nature when she lubricates herself.� I had Diamond in bed as Dodie was fucking Kapri in the other bedroom and I had just finished her doggy in the cunt.� We collapsed on the bed with my dick rolling over her buns as we wallowed and kissed spoon. �I whispered into her ear I wanted to fuck her in her black ass.� She looked me hard in the eyes as she brought her hand up to her mouth and drooled spit copiously into it and then lowered her cupped hand and smeared her spit all over her ass crack and asshole.� She worked it into her rosebud moaning as she rimmed herself and then sank her middle finger all the way up her shit hole and fucked herself.� I felt my eyes role roll back when she pulled it out and brought the finger up to her mouths and sucked cleaned with slow bobs of her head as moaned in happiness tasting her sweet ass.� "Tear my black ass up Barbara" she husked to me.� I loved how she keened and juddered as I sank my cock deep into her shitter burying it deep.� Soon I fucked several awesome anal 'gasms out her thirteen year old ass.� I so loved feeling her body bucking wildly against mine as she wailed and cried out in ecstasy.� Later that night her mother, Dodie and I tp fucked her mercilessly our cocks plundering her sweet teenage body.� I am smiling seeing her face up close as her legs and arms enfolded my body as I held her and slammed my cock into her tight pussy and Dodie and Kapri took turns pounding her booty hole.� I loved watching up close as Dodie and Kapri got on their knees in front of my head and fed Diamond their dicks and watching her mouth just above me cleaning them.� Up close I could all the sounds of her mouth sucking hard on their cocks.� I moaned so loving the sounds of her sloppy head up close and personal.� I watched up close as she had two more awesome orgasms as she wallowed and bucked again into my body screaming her love for us.� Then later she was reverse missionary over her mother as Dodie and I took turns ruining her asshole with savage fucking that had her wailing and collapsed on Kapri's body as she just drooled and looked on sightlessly moaning constantly.� Jerking her head up with a hard jerk as we fell to our knees to "make" her clean her shithole off our dicks.� Finally, another 'anal gasm was forming deep in her belly and I watched beside her body sitting as Kapri and Dodie slammed their dicks so hard and deep into her willing thirteen year old body.� Suddenly, she surged up on her palms, her eyes rolled back and a full caps scream started "AAARRRGGHHHUU�" and then was choked off.� Kapri had her hands around her throat and was strangling her daughter gasping pure pleasure to her brain.� Diamond bucked and hands tore weakly at her mother's fingers choking her until she started to black out.� Kapri let her breath as she took in several deep breaths with ragged moans as her body jolted forward as Dodie arched her back to continuously spear her cock into her still spasming shit hole as Kapri kept hers anchored deep and rotated her hips to keep her dick head grinding on Dodie's cock in Diamond's belly. Kapri knows her daughter's body so well.� At the perfect moment she slammed her cunt with her cock and slapped Diamond's face hard twice and Diamond had a second orgasm that made her start to wail again as it was choked� off again and her sweet underage body convulsed with full body spasms.� Her face slashed hard her eyes now bulging as she was choked to near unconsciousness again that had her convulsing on her mother's body still in the throes of her orgasm.�� Seeing Kapri's fingers sunk into Diamond's throat choking her.� Her mouth making soundless whinnies and groans.� Her orgasm just rolled and throttled her body as it bucked and jerked weakly as she weakened from lack of oxygen.� Kapri jerked Diamond's head cruelly and shook it as her daughter started to pass out and only then released her grip as Diamond gasped in breath harshly.�� She mewled mindlessly lost in perfect pleasure as her mother and Dodie held their cocks buried in her belly letting her ride out last dregs of her orgasm.� You then have the cocks so slowly, lovingly penetrate Frankie's body ["Slow . . . slow . . ." Frankie gasped, her eyes rolling up. "Unngghh! Yes! Oh shit, that feels good!"�� And still both shafts were only about halfway in. But already a look of sublime, nearly unbearable sexual pleasure was passing over Frankie's beautiful face. Laura could not take her eyes off it, and yet she was still preoccupied with making this entry smooth and painless. She had paused briefly in her pushing forward, but now she resumed, inching the two cocks deeper into Frankie's body.]� I have to smile at Frankie.� She says she doesn't want any pain but that is part of the pleasure of anal and she knows it.� Your asshole nerves are designed to signal pain and it is the turning that to pleasure that makes anal sex so rad.� I think the most beautiful sight in the world is woman being fucked and her having an orgasm is the pinnacle.� I love how you detail the sensations on Frankie's face.� I find other authors don't give much detail on lesbo sex and even less on strap-sex.� Just� basically that is happening and that the woman comes hard.� They make is so bland.� Her you show all the fleeting expressions that cross a woman's face when anally fucked.� I love how Laura takes time to notice and let it soak into her mind for later call up.� I so live to see such facial expressions and let them burn into my mind.� Love the little details.� Like the pausing to let your lover's asshole expand to take your dick deeper into her bung hole.� One does have to let nature take its course but one can decide if you want to change the course some.� I have always loved Laura's gentle nature.� It is in a lot of ways opposite of mine.� I love the pain of anal fucking.� I love to feel the pain turn to pleasure and I love fucking women so they feel it too.� I revel in taking anal virgin flowers and having my women scream and full body shake as I take their virgin asshole.� Their wailing and weeping turns me on.� Not because I like the pain for itself but for when I feel the "Moment".� I can feel it.� That first pulse of pure fucking anal pleasure that floods your clit and shoots to you nipples.� The way their face show wonder and surprise.� Fucking them hard in the ass as that pleasure takes hold and is merging with pain until they are lost in anal pleasure.� I smile as I have created another anal whore who will always crave rough sex in the asshole.� At times I bend my rules and take the woman easy in the ass when it is obvious she is extremely sensitive to pain and more usually just expecting the pain.� A few have required over the years the "Frankie" treatment but almost all I convert if given multiple anal fucks to teach them the truth.� They are always so grateful.� One thing I have found amusing is how letting them rape me in the ass until I almost pass out from so many womb and anal shredding orgasms make them hunger for the anal exploitation.� Once a woman's lets go she never wants to go back.� Like I say, you show penetration.� I read several stories with strap-on sex recently and they both had the cock go in with no details of the penetration.� One sentence it is going in and then next it is buried hilt deep and they are fucking.� That would be heinous in real life if that was how being fucked by a dick was truly like.

I see the cocks sinking deeper making me feel dp penetration as I read it making womb quiver and pussy getting wet in happy memories.� It is the penetration and then feeling those dick heads sinking so deep into your belly that makes dp sex so great.� The feel of the dick heads riding over each other as your lovers see-saw their docks in and out your fuck holes.� Again, like I say, other authors just never show any of the details of the fuck.� The wondrous sensations of fucking.� Thank you for showing the reader these things.� I have to smile at the competitive streak in Laura.� I don't feel it towards women but I do love fucking women better than their sloppy male lovers.� So many women are seeking adventure that the Internet has opened to them.�� I have to say some men are trapped in the same situation.� Boring sex with a partner with no desire to improve and often sees no fault in themselves.� Just leaves more pussy for me!� Sigh, you so know how to show the romantic side of great het fucking.� Laura knows this the time to start slow and then ramp up to deliver the love kill.� I love how you give descriptions of the het fuck.� How the prongs are now deep in Frankie's fuck holes sunk into her belly.� I so adore that feeling of being full of cock.� Laura uses slow strokes to keep her cocks buried in her lover.� It does take a lot of skill to keep your cock in your slut when banging away.� Even the skilled cocksmen I love to fuck quite often have to shove their cocks back into my pussy and asshole when it slips out.� Just lets me feel the penetration again as their cocks are roughly slammed back into my fuck holes.� Women do fuck more slowly as a rule and have less of the "oh shit" moments of getting your cocks buried back into your woman's fuck hole.� Of course you show the total loving that I love to employ and only you show.� Laura is embracing Frankie so she can kiss her whole upper body like only women do.� Have to love the detail of breathing into Frankie's ear and the sensual fuck stroke.� You are simply the only author to give these moments.� It is the moments that add so much to the fuck.� You need to use all your abilities to give you woman total pleasure.� Like murmuring to Frankie here.� I am always chuffing, grunting, love talking, talking smack as I call you a slut and bitch and if black all the racial epitaphs.� It is overloading the senses that make you cum so hard.� I love the details.� The cocks working in and out Frankie's fuck holes all swollen and wet and dripping with fuck juice now I know.� Then you show how we whites are besotted by our black lovers.� I so love to gaze upon their bodies and all the hues their bodies have and how their hair is capable of so many styles.� How their skin glistens when soaked in sweat and women's bodies are covered in pearly semen and slicked cunt and ass juice.� It is hot on any body but it is like heaven on black women's bodies.� The few other interracial stories I find the authors don't show why interracial is so fucking rad and wonderful.� I love to watch up close interracial couples fucking hard.� I love to look down and see a black woman's face buried in my humping twat or seeing a big white dick sliding down a black sluts mouth or the reverse in color.� You also show variation in the fuck.� Laura is� now grinding her body down into Frankie's reveling in feeling their sweat slicked bodies slipping and sliding.� Their tits mashing and nipples dragging making you gag in pleasure.� You are the only author, yet again, to show the full body clench of humping whores in love.� I so gag when I grind down into a sluts body.� Look into her eyes as I spear my cock into her womb or asshole and see pure fuck love for me.� Our sweat slicked bodies grinding as I hook my ankles over yours for purchase and grind down hard as I lower my face and mate our mouths tight and I spear my tongue down your throat feeling you love shake for me as I swallow your moans with my mated mouth.� I then rise up on my elbows or palms to change the angle of my plunging cock and letting my sweat splatter down on you as I chuff and grunt fucking you hard.� Fucking like this until I am tired and then sinking down again to grind fuck in sensual love.�

I have to love this dialog and showing the effect on Frankie ["I love to fuck you . . . I love to fuck you . . . you are soooooo beautiful . . . I love love love to fuck you . . ."�� All sex did not have to be violent and rapacious. Laura had to remind herself of this. Although she wanted to roughly consume the delicious Frankie, it could also be sweet and exquisitely romantic like this was, touching your heart as well as your swollen sexual nerves, and she brought Frankie along gently and patiently, sensing Frankie's supple, lean body coming slowly alive under her, growing more and more tense and eager.]� I so love to chant to my sluts like this.� Letting them know how I am loving fucking their divine bodies.� I so love to use potty words like Laura her.� It just makes fucking so hot when you use curse and racial epitaphs when you fuck.� Again, you are the only author that has any dialog during fucking to even attempt to show such sweat moments.� I can see my sluts body surging when I chant to them like this and the fire raging even higher as they hump harder into my thrusts.� I think Laura is to gentle in her loving but I can sense here that she will hammer fuck Frankie at the finish line.� Laura is so much more gentle than me.� But Laura is so right in her thinking.� She may not get as violent in her fucking as me but she knows all about ramping up the fuck.� You do start slow and sensual to get your love slut in the fuck and then deliver the punishing end fuck to simply shatter her soul with cunt rupturing and asshole searing anal 'gasms.� Gripping her body hard to slam your dick(s) hard into her body to bury your prick(s) into her wildly spasming fuck holes.� I have been captivated by the fact that you allow the woman be sucked or fucked to express her pleasure.� Here we hear Frankie croaking how wonderful she is feeling.� This was of the first things that drew me into your stories so long ago.� I have come to so hate the silence of others stories.� I love the details.� How Frankie's fuck holes have expanded and are now easily accepting the thick cocks sliding in out them.� I so love loosening up a� tight cunt or asshole and then slam fucking them as my groin slams down into your body to bury my prick fully up her fuck hole.� Laura is ramping up.� I so love this and only you show it.� Like this [["So deep . . . so deep! These cocks are so long. Unghhh! Oh! I can feel them going all the way up inside me!"�� "It doesn't hurt?" Laura panted, ever concerned to make it the best ever.�� "No, oh no . . ." Frankie gasped as Laura thrust forward, pushing the prongs deep into her again. "Anngghhh!" Frankie writhed. She swiveled her pelvis to push her pussy and her ass up into Laura's thrusts. "God . . . no . . . it feels wonderful!" She kissed Laura's face feverishly. "Keep fucking me. I think I'm not going to come for a minute. It feels too good. I don't want it to stop."]� I get so fired up when my lover moans like this for me.� It lets me know that I am doing it right and to focus more to fuck her even better and harder.� Laura is being sweet again as I smile.� I see that nature is taking over and leading the fucking rougher.� This is spot on.� When a woman's body is being dp fucked and those dickheads are working deep in her body she must go wild.� I love looking down and seeing my slut working her groin into my pile driving thrusts.� Her whole body jolting forward as my strap-on buries itself into her fuck hole.� My groin slamming into her ass cheeks or down into her groin to bury my prick balls deep as she wails and hump hard up into my thrusts dying from pleasure like Frankie here.� Gods I love your dialog during the fuck.� When I try to read other stories, when I yet again see no dialog, I can feel myself turning off the story.� I just feel myself falling deeper in love when my slut is moaning and telling me how good I am fucking her.� I just coil my hips and slam down harder or swallow your clit deeper into my mouth and sucking even harder and tongue slapping in a frenzy of rising love.� I love to encourage my lovers to spear my body hard and deeper and love reading it.� Only you show the communication of loves showing pleasure, encouraging your lover and informing your lover what they need to do to pleasure you even more.� Only you show these things.

Like I say you so know how to show the total loving that drives women wild in your bed.� I totally love my women and make them cum so hard over and over and eagerly give their asshole to my love dick or fist.� I do it like Laura is doing here.� [This slow rhythm gave her plenty of opportunity to suck and lick and otherwise devour every available inch of Frankie's delicious naked body that she could reach with her mouth, and she did it eagerly. She sucked her neck and her ear and her shoulder and her breasts and her upper arms and her throat and her jaw and her cheeks and her forehead even, hungrier than she had ever been.�� "Oh god . . . oh shit . . ." Frankie whimpered in a tiny, faraway voice, now undulating more rapidly under Laura, her long, lean body quivering as more and more sexual pressure built up in her tense flesh, wanting release. "Ungghh . . . ungghhh! Oh shit . . . so deep! Anngghhh!"]� You have always captured the ramping up of great sex.� The ramping up that rends souls and causes clits and assholes to explode in shattering ecstasy.� You actually describe the whole fuck.� You tell us that Laura is love fucking Frankie now to ramp up the rhythm to deliver a love kill shortly.� Now you also show that total loving that I always try to give my women.� I love how you so clearly show the total loving.� Laura doesn't just kiss Frankie on the mouth.� She also is kissing every inch of Frankie's body she can.� This is what I do and I love reading it now.� I so love to kiss, lick and nip your sweaty flesh tasting your essence in your sweat.� Sucking in skin and gnawing and worrying.� Giving vicious hickies making my sluts scream in helpless pleasure.� You just describe so deliciously.� Laura is kissing her whole face and upper body with wondrous details that are making my nipples semi harden and tingle.� I so love your details!� Plus, you show how a great lover feels the ultimate fuck hunger for the slut you are with.� I don't really care if you are a long-time lover or newbie.� I hunger to fuck you for so many reasons.� To learn a new body or once more partake of the wonders of a familiar body as I once more devour her.� It is feeling this fuck hunger that makes me focus so hard on my lover.� Laura shows this.� It is this hunger that makes Laura and myself always give our all.� I am thankful to find one author that understands and shows this.� Then you make it so much more intense by showing Frankie responding to the loving she is receiving.� I get so tired of other authors never showing the women reacting.� They may tell you she is dying from it but they never actually show it.� Showing it is so much better.� The way you show her body reacting and her almost helpless vocal cawing.� This shows the pleasure filling her veins and lets you know her clit and asshole are about to explode in mutual orgasms.� I love the small detail of the small tremors beginning to wrack Frankie's body.� When I start to see this I know the tension is building and I start to slam my cock so hard and deep into my sluts body driving the tension higher.� Only you capture this tension.� In other stories there is usually no no details and if any they simply just have a fuck.� No ramping and rising tension to really show the woman's body coiling for shattering ecstasy.� It is really a shame really when others don't show it.

I like how you give this fuck duration.� I read a story recently that had about three sentences of vaguely described sex and it just seem to happen and it was just over. Very borriinnnggggg! Here you tell us that they are sensually love fucking.� That three or four minutes have transpired as Laura is pumping her cocks in and out her lover.� I so love this time.� I do deliver wild end fucks but I make my sluts die from it by starting slow and sensual like her.� Filling her body with pure fucking pleasure that only slam fucking can take higher.� I am smiling at the comment of the quietness of this stage of sex.� I am very vocal during sex and this is especially so as the fuck progresses.� But I know this part of the fuck.� While they are not communicating or moaning loudly I know there is still the noise of fucking during this stage.� This is the stage where words are not always needed.� This is stage where you are snuffling, huffing and chuffing.� You are grunting as you feel cocks sliding deep in fuck holes or you are chuffing as sweat pour off your body as you coil your hips so slam your dick balls deep into your slut's willing body.� This describing the sounds of their fucking so lends to the ramping I love about your sex.� Where other authors don't give any feel to their fucks you are showing the sensual start of love fucks that leads to the wild finish of plunging dick(s) into your lover piercing her cunt and asshole.� This story I just read is amazing how the fuck happens in a few sentences and the orgasm is an afterthought.� We are told she "had!" the orgasm.� We never see an orgasm.� I feel cheated!� You show them starting to voice their love and need as the fuck is ramping and then show us this [Again they went silent, rocking slowly together, their deep concentration punctuated only by their rapid breathing, or an occasional sigh or deep moan of searing pleasure. Laura held her with both hands, both arms, her hands grasping Frankie's bare shoulders from behind, her forearms looped under Frankie's armpits, as if to pull her down into each up-swooping thrust, but really never pulling since Frankie herself was quite eager to force her cunt and her ass down on the uprising prongs of the Double Penetrator. They went on for another two or so minutes, but by now Laura could hear the bed springs beginning to ring and sing more agitatedly.]� As the fuck heats up one can't help but become more vocal but you again show the ramping as love and need are rising.� It is how fucks have a rhythm and variation that makes them so divine.� You show this flow of sex.� Other authors with no details make sex seem so boring and stale.� I am smiling as you show them starting to make more grunts and moans.� Their bodies are ramping up and producing the need to vocalize their pleasure.� Then you give the great detail.� I have read a lot of porn over the years and never remember one author describing the gripping of their of lover like you do her.� Here you are a lesbian author and you capture better details of het fucking than writers of the genre.� I so love to do this and feel her weight on my arms looped underneath her.� I love to grip and manhandle my women as I am slamming my dick into her fuck hole.� I can just feel my fingers gripping Frankie's shoulders through Laura's grip.� It is only by giving us these details that reader can directly relate and this allows us to really get into the fuck.� I really do love to pull my lover into my thrusts.� Conversely, I love to be the one being gripped and pressed down by my lover as they ram me with their cock or strap-on.� This is one advantage that men have with their denser bodies.� I just feel controlled and sometimes almost helpless as men grip my body so hard and slam their dicks so hard and deep into my body.� I revel in feeling their hands gripping my shoulders like here or my ass, hips or ribs as they sometimes shake me and jerk me with their grip to slam their dicks so hard into my fuck hole.� My whole body being jolted or pressed so hard into the bed or floor as they slam their groin into mine or my ass to spike their cock deep into my belly.� Only you capture this slamming of dicks into your body.� You then capture more of the ramping by using the sense of hearing.� We now hear the bed springs beginning to sing.� I so love to hear the bed springs squeal or the legs barking on the floor and the head or floorboard slamming into the wall.� You show how the fuck progresses to the shattering conclusion by the details that you plant in your stories.

Like I say, you sure know how to show the ramping of a great fuck.� I am still stewing over reading a few stories last night with no description of the sex and definitely no pacing.� You need both to show a great fuck that will lead to womb and anal rending orgasms.� Like what you are showing here ["Suck me . . . please! Laura! Please! Do it hard! Oh shit, I'm going to come!"�� This, Laura remembered, was the point at which Frankie contradicted all requests in the past to 'not hurt' her, or not to be 'too rough.' In fact, at this point she was usually a crazy mad whooping sex fiend and wanted to be impaled and devoured. Her long, sleek legs were already wrapping around Laura's thrusting hips, and she was beginning to claw Laura's back with her nails, gulping and gasping and whinnying softly, on the edge of a ferocious climax.]� Where other authors give me silence you give me a woman begging for it.� I get women who start with not really vocalizing and expressing her desires but I quickly teach them to cut loose and let the world here their pleasure and let their lovers know their wants and needs.� I so love to hear my sluts whimpering, cawing, moaning, groaning and crying out.� I revel when they cry out how they need me to fuck them or like here and they let me know I am doing it right which only makes me fuck them harder and with more love focus.� I so love the exclamation points which tells me that Laura is doing it so right.� I then have to love the observation.� I too get the request to go easy at the start of fuck and by the time it has ramped up and I got her body� wound up tight she is sometimes screaming at me to rape her fuck hole.� I love seeing a woman above me and another woman or man is lunging his dick into her asshole and her whole is juddering and jolting forward sliding up my sweaty body with her sweaty body as we pummel her groin and ass cheeks with our slamming groins driving our dicks hard and deep up her beginning to spasm twat and asshole.� I so love making women become total whores and sluts.� I revel in pulling them close and coiling my hips and again and again slamming my dick fully up her clinging fuck hole and making her howl and groan so helplessly, gutturally.� Other authors always make the sex seem like there is a barrier between the women.� Because there is no details I can't see the fuck and the descriptions just make it seem like the oral is so chaste and the strap-on sex I never get any description of the bodies working against each other that het fucking engenders.�� I love how you show Frankie throwing her legs around Laura's hips.� I so love to feel my lover clinging to me so and her arms looped over my torso crushing me down into her striving body.� I so love to grip a strong sluts hips or a man's hips and opening my cunt and ass for his or her pile driving cock.� I just feel my belly melt and I gag with helpless pleasure feeling his dickhead slamming deep up my shit hole or piercing my womb savagely over and over making my orgasm simply start to coil deep in my womb ready to strike my soul with shattering bliss.� I am smiling writing and then seeing Frankie clawing Laura's back with her clipped nails and all the sounds she is making.� I am just thankful that you detail these things.� I then marry what you are writing with my experiences and I am so there with the women living their orgasms with them.

Attention:� Long Digression

Sigh, I so love reading dp fucks.� Three nights back I was over at Tisa's.� She had her cousins Anthony and Eric over along with her twin loves Mike and John.� She had Leah and her new female lover coming over. Leah and her new love, Nancy are like Tisa and I.� We prefer pussy but never turn away a great het fuck from skilled cocksmen.� I had fucked Leah alone and with others and I am simply enamored with her great beauty that should be in Ebony magazine.� She had told us that Nancy is a striking blonde, fair complexion, with dark blue eyes.� About five foot nine with high firm b-cup tits.� She had sexted Tisa some photos she then shared and I was stunned.� Both Nancy and Leah have the features of actresses or run way models.� I read an article about the 10 face having certain measurements and these women are the living epitome of these perfect features.� I was a little enamored of her.� She is like Dodie, simply perfect.� Tisa and I were going to watch Eric and Anthony do Nancy and Mike and John doing Leah.� Both Tisa and I love watching interracial fucking up close.� Seeing, hearing and smelling great sex.� About fifteen minutes after I arrived the models arrived.� I have always loved Leah and her well-grounded attitudes and found out that Nancy is equally cool.� We all made small talk and Nancy flirted with the black brothers as Leah flirted and started to stroke the rigid dicks trapped in the white brother's jeans.� It was time for some good head to commence I could tell.� The girls quickly fished out rock hard dicks.� Leah had removed her top showing her braless small a-cup tits her nipples long and rock hard.� She was in between the white brothers on the long sofa and leaning first right sucking on Mike's ten inch dick and then left sucking on John's eight inch veined shaft.� Leah had fucked the brothers before and moaned she loved sucking on their white dicks.� She slurped all over John's hooked dick licking up the curve and then sucking hard on his dickhead plowing up and down her tongue.� I kept looking at her and over at Nancy on her knees in front of Anthony and Eric as they sat on the smaller sofa.� She first sucked Eric's thick shaft sucking hard on his dickhead and then pumping hard on his shaft.� Then leaning over and taking Anthony's dark black eleven inch dick into her mouth and rotating right and left on his dick head moaning.� Pumping his shaft with her hand as she then bobbed hard on his shaft and then slow sucked his shaft and rotated again on his dickhead before licking it all over on his dick head and glans before diving down suddenly and again bobbing hard.� She then did Eric's cock the same way before licking up and down his shaft and rubbing his dick up and down her cheek getting it wet before tilting her head and swallowing his dick head and bobbing once more and undulating her head to ride his dick head around as it slide up and down her tongue.�

After about five minutes of this the studs stood up and stripped down as the vixens stripped and all got in the middle of the room.� Earlier Tisa and I had spread quilts to help facilitate good hard fucking.� The girls got on their knees and swallowed cocks that were jammed into their mouths and jammed into their cheeks demanding attention.� Nancy sucked hard on Anthony's dickhead in slow sucks up and down and licked the sides of his cockhead before again swallowing and slow sucking hard on his bulbous dick head.� Leah was pumping her hard on John's dick jamming his dick into the back of her throat.� They sucked making lewd, nasty noises as they moved from cock to cock.� It was so beautiful seeing a black dick in Nancy's mouth and white cock in Leah.� Interracial love is so special.� They sucked with all their skills.� Then John gripped his cock at the base and started to dick whip Leah's face with hard slaps of his cock with his brother immediately joining in striking her face over and over.� She groaned deep in her chest at the pleasure she felt in being dick whipped and defiled like the nigger she is.� She is light enough that her face was soon cross stitched with marks of their cocks slapping her face hard.� Eric gripped his cock at the base and looked down at Nancy who looked up at the black brothers.� Anthony gripped his cock and made a motion to strike her face.� They were waiting.� Nancy kept looking up with her eyes slough eyed.� After about fifteen more seconds Eric slapped his cock down hard over her cheeks and nose with a loud slap filling the room.� Her pale face immediately show the strike just like mine does.� She moaned loud as I moaned softly.� The brothers now savagely pistol whipped her face with their black dicks marking her face all over with strike marks.� She moaned and groaned and then was cawing out as they skull fucked her mouth snarling at her to keep her hands clasped between her thighs so show her submissiveness as they slammed their cocks into her throat in turn as she choked and cawed out slimy strands of spit all over her lower face, tits and belly.� Leah was having her head jammed back with savage skull fucking making her choke out spit all over herself and long strands roping off white dicks as they pulled out her mouth so the other brother could skull fuck her hard.�

Mike fisted Leah's hair and jerked her standing, dragging her over bent over and sat on the sofa and roughly got her straddle him and slide his hooked dick fully up her swollen, soaked cunt making her whinny and immediately began to slam down as Mike thrust up with strong humps of his hips.� She fucked wildly for a few minutes and then slowed as Mike plowed her cunt and John got up on the sofa and shoved his dick into her greedy mouth as she bobbed and undulated her head sucking hard as she moaned from her cunt being fucked expertly.� Eric and Anthony laid down on the quilts and let Nancy decide what to do and straddled Anthony and lifted his cock and made me moan as I fingered my flowing pussy guiding his dickhead to her anus and began to push down hard as I watched her asshole begin to give way and then his bulbous dick head slid into her rectum as she cawed deep in her chest.� It took a while for her asshole to loosen as it bowed but soon ate his dick that was now sinking fully up her shitter.� I loved her more, the anal whore.� She slammed her ass down onto the upthrusting dick slamming up her shitter.� Her firm tits rocking and rolling.� She would slow and Anthony would hammer fuck her ass making her body jolt.� He fucked her for several minutes when she pulled up and sat by his hips and gripped his twitching cock at the base lifting it as her perfect face lowered.� She swallowed his bulbous black dick head moaning as he clamped tight and twisted her head back and forth her cheeks hollowing as she sucked.� She slow stroked his cock in her mouth cleaning all her shit juice.� She lifted and mounted Eric and slide his dick fully up her asshole.� Leah was mounting both of the brothers cleaning their cocks as they stood on the sofa.� She was slow pumping her torso letting them fuck up into her flowing pussy.� She was riding Mike as I could see the desperation rising.� She ground her ass down swirling and whinnied hard as fully body spasms made her jackknife and flip hard.� Her frizzy hair so beautiful as it jerked and flopped.� When Leah recovered Mike lowered her to the sofa and pulled his dick out her pussy and pried it into her ass as she cawed and her face slashed and she cried out when his dickhead sank deep up her beautiful black ass.� John guided her head to his lap and she started to feast on his cock her head bobbing hard as her cheeks hollowed out with hard sucks.� Nancy had been riding the black brothers with her ass.� She was mounting Anthony again after sucking her ass off Eric's cock when he held her in place and guided his dick to her dripping cunt and rubbed her pussy making her groan so hard and she slowly impaled her pussy on his dick.� She rode him hard gripping his shoulder as she growled and cursed softly.� Soon she was ramping and then she was wailing as her body convulsed hard and her head jerked wildly as she cried out over and over in ecstasy.�

I love how sex flows and ramps.� Anthony was slow pumping Nancy's cunt when Eric moved in and sank his thick dick into her shit hole.� She moaned so hard in pleasure.� I loved watching them see-saw their cocks in and out her now red fuck holes.� Leah was riding John's cock on the sofa bobbing on Mike's cock and at times rubbing it all over her face and licking it obscenely before swallowing his bulbous cockhead and hard twisting before slow bobbing again.� She then rose her head off and I loved watching it rock back as she whinnied so loud and hard as full body spasm rocked her and her limbs spasmed so beautifully her face slashing so hard as her eyes squeezed shut in ecstasy.� She was still going through hard aftershocks when Mike got up and John scooted their mated bodies on sofa making room and I watched Mike get a knee on the sofa and push his dick all the way up her ass as she screeched in pained pleasure.� Tisa and I watched the two bitches getting dp plowed.� I so loved how their bodies jolted and hair jerked as cocks were slammed into willing fuck holes.� I so loved watching black cocks raping white fuck holes and the inverse with Leah.� Again and again the four brothers were coiling their hips and lunging dicks deep into red, raw fuck holes.� Nancy and Leah's perfect features slashing and eyes so slutty reveling in feeling dicks sliding over each other deep in their bellies.� Mike and John were slamming into Leah's body making it jolt forward as sweat dripped off her body all over.� Nancy had cleaned the black brothers cocks and they now had her butt on Anthony's belly, her back to him, her legs pushed back his dick sliding deep into her ass and Eric using his grip on her ankles to open her pussy up and pumping her twat as it juiced his cock and ran fuck cream down into her ass and Anthony's pumping black prick.� I heard Leah cry out in pain and looked over and saw that John had his dick buried fully up her ass doing rabbit fuck strokes and now Mike was worming his dickhead into her butthole making her head thrash and eyes leak tears moaning softly "no,no,no,no,no." Mike finally got his dickhead into her sphincter and jabbed it in making her scream in pain and then moan in pain and rising pleasure.� Leah had watched also and now stared wide eyed as Eric slide his cock out her swollen cunt and moved it down over her perineum and started to push in his dickhead sliding all over his brother's cock trying to get into her asshole too.� "Oh god no, don't do it Eric � please don't � please don't do�aarrrgghhhnnnnn" she cried out loudly as his dickhead sank into her rectum and he immediately pumped her shithole stretching it out.� She cried and moaned piteously as they worked her stretched asshole and I noticed she was swirling her ass into their cocks.� Gods it was so beautiful seeing Eric do her ass and then slide his dick out and push into her cunt.� He would pump her twat for a few minutes and then work his dick back into her ass making her keen and groan in double anal pleasure.� Her stretched asshole filling her with pleasure.� Leah was getting her black asshole ruined by Mike and John their bodies coiling and lunging their dicks so hard and deep into her ass.� Her face slashing her head jerking in spasms of rising pleasure.� I had to smile great big when the two models had almost simultaneous orgasms.� I loved hearing their cries, groans and whinnies of shattering pleasure as their bodies convulsed wildly and heads jerked so hard in pleasure as throats croaked their soul deep pleasure.� The brothers then got them on the floor side by side and pumped their cocks as the models sucked hard on their dickheads.� I loved how John gripped Leah's head controlling her as his cock now spurted hard bolts of hot semen all over her face.� John smeared his semen all over face and now Mike blasted semen all over her face his cock spurting hard into her closed eyes making her moan.� The black brothers soaked Nancy's perfect face and hair with their semen growling as they made sure to cover her eyes, nose, forehead and hair with semen with their dicks just in front of her face hitting her face hard with their semen shots out their jerking cocks.� Sigh, Tisa and I feel on each other like wolves all worked up sucking, tribbing and finger fucking orgasms out her super hot twats.� After a few orgasms each we were joined by Leah and Nancy after showering and all glowing from their great het fuck.� I really loved going down on Nancy enjoying her perfect blond body as she husked how she enjoyed devouring my blond body.� Later I got to watch some black on black crime as Tisa's first cousins raped her willing fuck holes doing dp, double anal and double vag as Mike and John did the same to me as Nancy and Leah lounged watching us getting raped long and hard until totally exhausted and fucked out.� I groaned so hard feeling Mike and John's cock exploding semen into cunt and asshole at the same time making me scream through a multiple orgasm.� A few minutes later I weakly watched Tisa getting her ass filled with two dicks as they sank deep into her ass and exploding semen deep into her ass making her have an anal 'gasm that made her scream and scream in shattering ecstasy.� Gods I love great sex.

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Like I say, you have mastered the ability to show ramping and the sense of length to a great fuck.� I am amazed at stories that only give you a few sentences of actual sex.� You do not focus only on sex but you still give lots of details and show how sex has length and sense of flow that leads up to the great orgasmic finish.� You have shown us the great sex that is leading up to a shattering conclusion for Frankie.� I so love making my sluts die from it.� Lunging my dick into her exploding fuck hole as she wails and flips I am reveling as I once more make a slut die from a great orgasm I gave or helped gave her.� I have always adored how you show Laura totally loving her woman. I now get to see Laura stuffing one of Frankie's little titties into her mouth and begin to voraciously love suck her tit deep in her mouth.� I so love you showing this.� Other authors never show the woman doing the fucking using all she has to give her slut pleasure.� I so believe in using all my talents to give pleasure.� I love to pulp a tit and nurse suck her nipple with sucking mouth and slapping tongue as I lunge my cock deep into her pussy or asshole.� Grinding my body all over hers as our sweat makes them slip and slide so easily.� Stretching out a small tit with my head pumps or using a hand to pulp a big tit and swelling her nipple up for voracious sucks. �Only you show this kind of fucking.� The whole fuck.� Sigh, then you show the sounds of fucking.� You remember to show how the woman fucking often grunts and snuffles as she sucks or humps.� I love how you to tell the reader that Laura's sounds are involuntary.� You just can't but help making fuck noises when you are fucking hard or happily slurping pussy or bobbing on cock.� Then as always you show the woman being fucked is so enjoying it with the noises she is making.� Both Laura and Frankie noises I never see in other authors.� They just have the fucking happen in silence.� You will get vocalizations during the orgasm (not always) but only then.� I just get so tired of the silence.� You just besot the reader with the sounds of life.� First, the words of �believable dialog and back and forth of life.� This is just delightful to read.� It makes these women so real to me.� I get to smile, laugh, sometimes get exasperated at them and generally love them.� Then you have the hot sounds of fucking and the encouraging words of love that we do during hot fucking.� Again only you show this.� I read some stories on Lesbian Lolita and was not happy at the lack of any details.� I mean none.� I expect it during the build but for the whole fuck.� Please give me a break. �I have to smile at Laura making sure not to be too rough.� I too control my strength and natural exurbance.� I am just more than Laura.� I know to use my teeth but will not really bite you like Laura though I know I give more than Laura.� I just love to be fucked hard and my sluts love it too.� Some may start more gentle but I soon teach them love of "over the top" fucking.� I so love to feel my groin slam down into my slut nailing her to the bed or floor as my dick slides deep up her clinging butt or pussy.�

I just smile as Laura starts out I must control myself and not fuck my angel too hard but she always lets nature take its course and she is slam fucking her love whore just like here [Frankie yelped and surged off the bed into Laura's body, matching the violent thrusting Laura was now administering to her with her own wild gyrations, and drowning out Laura's soft, determined grunting with her almost hysterical whinnying.�� "Annniiieee . . . . nnmmgggnneeee . . ." she wailed, surging up into Laura, then suddenly jackknifing and coming in sharp, punctuated spasms that wrenched her lean body with a violence Laura had never yet seen her experience. "Ohhnnmmgggg! ANNNGGHIIEEEEEE!" she cried out in a piercing shriek.]� This is why I so love to fuck.� Giving and receiving orgasms that simply rend the soul with pure fucking ecstasy and feeing my pussy and or asshole simply tearing themselves inside out as they convulse shattering ecstasy to my convulsing mind and soul.� I so love how you use loving words to describe the fucking.� When I read "violent thrusting" I can just see Laura swirling her hips and lunging forward to spear her cocks deep up Frankie's exploding shitter and cunt.� This is how I deliver the love kill with my sluts.� I want them to feel my body slamming into theirs as I pummel their fuck holes and pound their bodies with my hard working, sweat dripping body.� I love to see their bodies jolting down or forward as I and maybe another fuck them so hard.� I love how you show Frankie fucking back up into Laura's hard hammering body.� You just so show it!� "Her own wild gyrations" shows us Frankie is working her body up into Laura's to slam those hard plunging dicks as deep as the position and Laura's passion allow.� This is why I love het fucking.� To feel the power of strong men fucking me so hard.� To be in classic dp and I am smashed down into a strong man's chest as he grips me to him and lunges his dick hard and deep into my stretched out cunt as our sweat slicked bodies grind my tits flattened out on his hard pecs.� His partner raping my asshole with his lunging dick.� The feel of his hands gripping and controlling me as he clutches my hips, ribs or shoulders to pull me back hard into their plunging dicks.� I feel my body lurch forward with his slamming hips making my nipples drag out fiery bolts of pleasure on his fellow cocksmen chest to my ready to explode clit.� I can just feel my body tensing up as I gibber and groan so gutturally and encourage them to rape my ready to explode fuck holes.� I love to feel their dick heads sliding over each other their bulbous dickhead jarring deep in my fuck holes as their dicks pump in and out my juicing fuck holes.� Then I just feel my ass and cunt exploding and spasming so hard as searing bolts of devastating fucking bliss once more floods my mind as I flip, jackknife and wail my ecstasy yet again.�� I so love to feel those full body convulsions that make my toes curl and fingers claw whatever their gripping and my throat cawing as my head thrashes and my eyes often roll back and spasm so hard.� Then I just feel myself going to heaven if my bucks let their control loose and I feel their cocks shooting their semen so hard and deep into my womb and colon flooding them with hot semen.� It just makes my cum last longer or a second anal 'gasm explode on top of the first one.� Sigh, this is exactly how Frankie is cumming.� She is having full body seizures and wailing all caps like I often do.� I am thankful that one author shows this.� I really do mean this.� You are the only one to capture realistic sounds of orgasm.� A few make sounds but it is always the same and a few other's have been kind of hot but it is always shouted out whole sentences.� I do that too, sometimes, but not all the time like they do.� You show how one never knows what sounds one will make.� Sex makes for such great variation of cumming and only you capture this.� All I can say is thank you for capturing this.� I get to live these women's orgasms with you details.� No other author does it for me.� Only you.�

I love how you show this becoming a love fuck with Laura holding her cocks deep and still inside of Frankie letting her body get the most of the dicks buried deep in her still spasming and clinging fuck holes.� You show Laura love cooing to Frankie which is something men just do it.� It is sweet and enduring.� I love how you show the more gentle and connecting side of women when we fuck het style.� This leads Frankie into a swoon of pure bliss as her orgasm just spasms and rends her with bliss.� I love seeing this in my sluts.� The way their body is filled with hard mini spasms and soft cawing as their face slashes so hard.� The way that arms twitch uncontrollably and legs scissor on the bed.� How their head will lull over and simply whinny and eyes slash shut or stare sightlessly or maybe roll back and spasm.� You show how orgasms can be all over the place in how it throttles your slut with bliss.� I so feel this oral.� Just groaning deep in my throat as I grind my pussy into your mouth and look down at you slurping my clit or tongue fucking my still spasming pussy as I feel my cunt folds clutching your tongue working deep in my fuck hole.� You give me so much to masturbate to when I read your stories.� You show real devastating orgasms.� I nearly went crazy when I first discovered your stories so long ago.� It was like getting hooked on a strong narcotic when only doing I am not sure what before.� I am just thankful I discovered you.� I remember discovering asstr and starting to sense your stories and wondering about them and then finally discovering your site and going nuts.� I was totally blown away let me tell you.� I think you were at 237 at the time and I know I would have lost my mind with the story count you are at now.

I love how you now have post coital dialog.� I would still be experiencing the silence of other stories.� This is time of soft love cooing and gentle sharing.� I love this time of binding with my regular lovers and falling deeper in love with my archangels and having my newbies fall so deeply for me as I do them.� I love the dialog you have.� A concept that other authors just don't have.� The idea that women actually talk to each other.� I can just feel the love flowing between Laura and Frankie here as they bask in the afterglow of a great fuck.� I just feel so close to me women after great orgasms and how it binds our souls together in pure fucking love.� I am smiling at Frankie wanting to keep Laura's cocks buried in her still trembling fuck holes.� I too love to feel dicks deep inside as my asshole and pussy as they slowly stop throbbing and pulsing.� They finally decouple after the moment of bonding has been shared.� I am smiling as you use your gentle humor with the kitten not waking up with all the wailing that Frankie did during her horrendous orgasm.� That is cute and such moments too are binding and only you show them.� Sharing binds souls.� You end with some nice bucking up if it is needed.� Frankie goes on about her skinny body and Laura immediately interjects "beautiful".� I think that Frankie is comfortable and proud of her body but everyone loves to be stroked and Laura is always quick to provide support and love when needed.� It is so sweet about Laura.� I have to smile as the story ends.� I have never really thought of orgasms quite like this ["It is scary," Frankie made big eyes at her. "When you come, it feels like your drowning in a river of, I don't know, rainbows or something."� ��A river of rainbows. Now, that was something Laura had never imagined. She pulled the delicious naked girl down against her own naked body and hugged her in an iron grip. "I'm all yours, my darling," she murmured. "Take me to the river of rainbows."]� I think Laura and I will both remember that cute phrase.� Sort of like a Skittle orgasm.� A sweet way to end the story.� Like I say, only you do such things.� What a way to end a great fuck.

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(reflections while reading Laura's Story)
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A Fan's Notes

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Chapter 330

Chapter 331

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