A Fan's Notes
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Chapter 328I have to say I really, really like how this chapter is starting out.� Laura is fucking herself to exhaustion with her new love slut Frankie.� I so love fucking new women repeatedly if she is a newbie or woman who is remembering her true lesbian nature.� This is so cool.� Yours is literally the only story in erotica that can do this.� Other stories can't do it because they are one shot.� Their authors don't ever consider the possibility of showing multiple lovers that cover a span of time.� The few other stories that have multiple chapters don't go here either.� Either the time frame is too small (one week time frame) for one or short time frames.� The one other that did span some time the author simply had inane plots that did not show the women as true women.� He did not explore the women's nature.� He simply put them in situations to fuck (hey, that is great) but I miss what you give.� I especially like the fact that you show her fucking Bonnie when Frankie is temporarily fucked out.� Only the fact that you have this time line can you show this fucking multiple women and have it fit in with the story.� I had this happen a few weeks back.� I will ride my bike in various neighborhoods on Sunday afternoon if I am not in someone's bed.� I will pick a strip mall or church to park and pull my bike off the rack and explore.� I had been curious about one area for years and finally decided to explore.� I saw a church and pulled in.� I usually start around one to give the congregation time to leave.� I noticed a car but didn't think much about thinking I would be gone in few minutes.� A woman came out of the church and I had to notice her.� She was a blonde MILF.� I was taken by her sheer beauty.� Her 5'8" height and great bust.� She came over to me and asked me what I was doing and I told her.� We made small talk as I got my bike ready.� She was intelligent and pleasant.� I was getting to pedal off when she told me she lived a mile down the road and to peddle down and she would join me.� I had to be honest.� I have enough on my plate and I was not in seduction mode.� I just love biking.� I told her I was a lesbian and wanted to be honest with her.� I saw some surprise but she smiled and said she is not a bigot.� I raised an eyebrow and looked over at the church sign and saw the Southern Baptist affiliation.� She smiled again and said her husband was the leader of the family and so that is her church.� She was just stating the facts I sensed.� She seemed happy with it all. I smiled back and told her I would get to her house soon.� She got in her beamer.� I saw one reason why she loved her husband.� I peddled down some side roads before heading to her house.� She was waiting for me and I felt my pussy spasm.� She was wearing shorts and a blouse tied off underneath her cleavage with buttons open.� I sensed the gods smiling on me.� Soon we were pedaling around looking at the rich houses.� Her husband is commodore in the navy.� She had her own business doing medical transcriptions at home.� She had two sons in college.� I ogled her cleavage.� I peddled slow and looked at her butt and she caught me.� I made my cute you got me look and she laughed.� I caught up and told her sorry.� I was not looking for love.� She laughed and sped up and leaned forward showing me her ass again making us both laugh.� Lisa was a definite flirt.� We rode around for about ninety minutes and I stopped at her house and told her I really enjoyed meeting her.� She invited me in and I looked her hard in the eyes.� If I went in was going to seduce I was telling her and I saw her body love quiver.� She told me to come in again with a long touch on my arm.� I followed her in.� We relaxed and she showed me her 3000 square foot house.� I was impressed.� She was so polished and her intelligence was turning me on along with her beauty.� We were in her office and she was showing me her transcription gear when I turned her around and pulled her to me and kissed her.� Her mouth did not open at first and she was a little stiff.� I clutched her to me our tits mashing and my hand stroking her back.� She immediately melted and opened her mouth wide letting me spear my tongue down her throat.� Gods she soon was wiggling all against me and panting as we broke our kisses for air before kissing hotly again. I soon had her naked and on her office chair.� I kissed her deeply before playing with her tits.� They had been augmented but was a great job.� Not that beach ball job.� They had heft and jiggle.� She told me that her babies took her titties away and doctors gave them back.� I sucked her thick nipples hard and squeezed her tits hard.� I loved her tits all over and kissed up repeatedly to her mouth kissing her deeply and I shuddered when she gave my tongue head.� I was soon wolfing her pussy down as I sucked and tongued fucked her pussy and loved sucked her clit.� She was crying out in ecstasy and swooned when I began to fuck her with one and then two fingers.� I sucked her off once to jackknifes and guttural groans and sucked her off again now working her g-spot as she shrieked and bucked wildly.� She got me on her desk and got on her knees and looked at my soaked cunt and breathed deeply.� She slowly bent and licked my pussy and almost immediately buried her face into my cunt grunting, snuffling and moaning as she wildly licked, tongued and sucked my slit and clit.� I was humping in new love clawing her scalp and was soon wailing as my womb exploded and was flipping and flopping hard into the desk as my veins were filled with boiling ecstasy.� She got up on the desk and got in 69 and I loved feeling her tits and belling pressing into my belly and chest.� We sucked each other off me losing it first and then her as she jammed her cunt so hard down into my face jamming my head into the hard desk.� I loved the pain and feeling here cunt flooding cunt slime all over my face.� She weakly turned around and licked my face clean.� We cuddled and she told she was tired fighting her lesbian desires.� She had many accounts on the web at lesbian sites I discovered.� She had been fucking several men in her church and a few doctors.� Her husband was a good man but was focusing on his career and was boring in bed.� She loved anal and oral and he did not want to hear of such "ungodly" talk whenever she tried to broach the subject. The next night I was at her home again and pounding the hell out of her with my love cock.� I fucked her so hard in her pussy to two orgasms and then attacked her asshole.� She loved it rough and I pounded her butt hole and she cummed so hard.� She then did me and I was reveling in her pounding her first asshole.� She was slamming into my shitter making me gurgle and moan so gutturally.� We started doggy and was doing spoon when I slowly pulled off and rolled over.� She was looking at me with curiosity as I slowly scooted down and lifted her cock.� She gasped "Oh god" when I bent my head down and swallowed her cock and slowly cleaned her cock sucking my asshole off it.� I did atm over and over and cummed twice from her hard anal pounding of my booty.� I then got strapped in again and took her asshole again and loved fucked her and she had her orgasm finally riding me cowgirl her tits flopping and swirling.� I loved how she fell forward and gripped the sheets and groaned so hard as crushing spasms rocked her body and her fingers ripped at the sheets. She finally spent herself and collapsed on me her weight feeling so good our tits mashed and bellies mated in sweat.� I let her rest a few moments and gently rolled her over pullng my dick out her ass all soaked in shit cream.� I loved her moan feeling my dick slip out her asshole.�� I slowly scooted up as she looked up at me with slit slut eyes.� I whispered "Only your mouth Lisa � suck your sweet shit cream off my cock honnnneeyyyy" I whimpered to her in a soft voice.� She looked at me for a long moment and smiled softly and slowly put her cheek on my sweaty belly and slowly moved forward and I moaned feeling and seeing her pink tongue pressed into my belly in front of my dick head and then feeling her tongue worm underneath my cock head and feeling her mouth clamping onto my dick as my eyes rolled back and I felt such strong spasms in my womb and made my eyes spasm. She moaned and groaned as she cleaned my cock with slow undulations of her head and the rising on her hands and knees and licking up my shaft before lifting it up and really bobbing hard to clean completely. She was at my house the next night and the next day she came over early.� I had told her I was going to be home early but I was leaving her to my babies who were home resting after an overseas trip.� I so know how to make them happy.� When I got home I loved getting to our bedroom and Joann was eating out Lisa and Maria was trying to rip the headboard apart riding Lisa's face.� The bed was a mess and they were all soaked in sweat.� I love seeing love.� I joined and Lisa was totally into the group sex.� Then the dp and tp sex started and she was a fucking tiger loving our cocks filling all her fuck holes at the same time.� We took those cherries and double vag and double anal cherries.� She is a total bi sexual whore now.� Another woman after my heart. I like how you show the fates intervening.� I don't believe in the fates of course but I am often surprised by how life flows and brings sweet fucking to me.� Plus, you make it humorous.� Other authors always keep everything so bland.� You have Laura puttering around the house wanting to be just domestic for the night.� I get like that from time to time.� Just rest for a night from hard fucking to let my body fully recharge.� I am surprised how often I get a visitor, phone, text, instant message that sets my pussy on fire and immediately I feel my body reviving and once more wanting and needing to be fucked hard and� long.� You make it humorous with mentions of cat hair balls and Laura speaking to herself that tonight will be a quiet night with no thoughts of fucking.� By putting in this prelude then you setup the rest of the story because we know that something glorious is about to happen.� I just don't see other authors use this technique.� The stories are full bore ahead.� Again with only one shots they can't really do this.� For this to work the main character needs some history with the reader to make this seem natural and real to the flow of the story.� Thank you for taking the time to develop this wonderful universe.� We then hear the doorbell ring and we find Ashley at the door step.� Oh gods, I feel my pussy quivering and getting moist.� This girl fucks like me at her age.� With pure wild abandon.� I then get to smile seeing Laura's consternation.� I never feel that with my archangels.� They want me to fuck others and bring them to themselves so they can partake of my bounty.� I so love reading Laura squirming with desire.� She wants to resist but simply can't.� You just keep the humor flowing with Ashley "casing" the joint and knowing that Makeeda is gone.� This is after following Laura home one night on one of her walks so she knows where she lives just for this moment.� I love the calculation it shows and how Ashley will do what she needs to do to get her woman.� It shows her confidence and intelligence which are both so positive.�� I just love reading Ashley scoping out her woman to make hot fucking happen as soon as possible.� I love to make new and current love happen as quick as possible like Ashley.� I like how Ashley immediately starts to wear down Laura's defenses [Laura could not suppress a grin. Ashley had 'cased the joint,' like Sam Spade. "She might be coming home any minute," she said, crossly.������� "Is she?" Ashley asked boldly.������� Laura shook her head, reluctantly. I should've said yes, she thought. But she knew half of her didn't want Ashley to leave. God, what glorious fucking we had that one time, she recalled. This girl is dynamite. How can I send her away?]� Ashley knows she is beautiful and that Laura will weaken and give in.� She only has to present herself to Laura for their love to renew.� Again this only works with the history of the story.� There has to be a past with Ashley and with Makeeda also for this beginning to work.� You have worked with past stories to make this present so wonderful.� You are the only author who lays such a strong foundation to make future stories so divine and wonderful to read.� Then you show Laura fretting and weakening.� How can any woman resist Ashley?� I just never see this humor in other stories.� I am glad that at least one author has a sense of humor in their writings.� I love how Ashley slowly wears Laura down with first saying they can't fuck at her house and then that they can do it in a car.� She is wearing Laura down with other possibilities and mentioning fucking.� I love how you show weakening of silly defenses.� I am smiling as Laura finally gives into the inevitable.� ["Both." Laura opened the door wider. "You can come in, but only for a moment."������� Ashley pranced inside, but pouted. "What if I take off all my clothes? Would you throw me out? Naked?"������� Laura was completely flummoxed and infuriated by this and didn't know what to say. "Of course not. It's cold outside."]� This is just beyond precious.� You just have Ashley come and they have a conversation leading to sex.� You have humor that makes one smile and chuckle.� I so love your subtle humor.� I know this is happening somewhere in the world at general time.� Your stories are so hot and yet believable.� I have always found that subtle humor so leads to intense fucking and twining love.� I can just see the look on Laura's face as she tries to be "good" and knows she is not going to be "good".� Plus, just knowing that Ashley is working her magic on Laura is hot. Attention:� Long
digression: I simply go with the flow when situations present me new love and fucking when I was not looking for per see.� When it does though, I embrace situations that can bring me sweet, red, wet cunt meat.� I so need new pussy and asshole in my life.� Diamond has joined the cadet ROTC program at her middle school.� She is thirteen now and is now really driven to succeed with Kapri's guidance and love.� She has moved in permanently with Kapri.� Her mother was happy that she is stable and happy now.� Plus, she can still be snarky and I know her mother is happy to off load the problem since she knows that Kapri loves her.� She just doesn't know how much.� Hehehe.�� Soon after Diamond joined she took under her wing two other new recruits one year behind her.� They were looking for someone to shelter them in the new environment and one thing Diamond has is confidence.� Rashonda and Chantal were like puppies looking to her for guidance and help in the cadet program.� You don't earn any points or anything as I understand but it prepares the recruits for high school and give them a head start on their ROTC career.� Many disadvantage black youth use this as a vehicle to learn discipline and get ahead.�� The beauty of today's world is that Diamond and Kapri told me that it required almost no effort for Diamond and then Kapri to seduce them into their bed.� They had been kissing girls and feeling each other up and were primed to be seduced into full lesbian loving.� Then they nearly ate Kapri alive when she joined the festivities.� They are so like me.� The wonderful thing is girls are so primed through the Internet and porn that they are so eager to partake of the female body.� Life is much more wonderful for girls now.� The religious right is losing!!! A few� weeks back the school system that Diamond is in had two half days off for teacher work days.� Kapri had to out of town on business.� On Friday it was supposed to be nice and then the weekend.� I took off so I could take Diamond and her charges to a beach near their house and then on Saturday I was going to take them to the park near there where the ROTC has built an obstacle course, climbing towers and parade grounds.� There we were to meet Denise a Captain from the high school.� She is a senior that is mentoring the girls. I had heard from Diamond how hot she is.� She had sent me pictures of her in military dress and my pussy got instantly wet wanting her so bad.� Her hair cut short but stylish and her military clothes hinting at her breast and hips.� Her beautiful lips, nose and cheekbones.� She is all woman where Roshanda and Chantel were still girlish in their figures with hips beginning to flare and Chantel with nice breast buds developing.� I drooled over their naked bodies that Diamond and Kapri had sexted over to my cell phone with photos and mpegs of them having sex.� I couldn't wait to devour their cunts and assholes and plunge my dick balls deep into their twats and shit holes.� I was mesmerized by their dark skin hue and stiffish hair.� Nice thick lips to suck on and high cheek bones to nip and love kiss.� I knew their assholes were no longer virgin but I masturbated to thoughts to driving my cock balls deep and rolling over and pulling them down to suck their ass juice off my cock as they murmured and moaned tasting their sweet asshole.� I cummed so hard with my fingers working their magic on my sweat soaked body. I took off Friday and got to Kapri's house and prepared the girls a nice Mexican lunch.� I had told them I would take them to the nearest beach.� I had put on a modest yellow two piece and was happy puttering around the house being domestic for a while.� The girls came home and Diamond the slut came up and kissed me on the lips hugging me tight.� Her friends are a few inches taller than her already, came up and hugged me tightly too.� Roshanda lifted her head up and I kissed her chastely smirking as she tried to get a harder lip lock before I rose my head.� I loved her look of frustration.� We ate a wonderful lunch I do say and told them to get dressed for a day at the beach.� I was in the living room getting everything together when I felt a slender body come up behind and dark black hands came around me and started stroking my belly and tit.� Diamond had told them my weaknesses I could see.� My pussy started flooding and I felt my legs quiver with new love as I felt lips kissing my back and hard nipples pressing into my lower back.� Diamond and Roshanda came into view and as they pulled my bottom off and Chantal undid my top and they tugged if off.� My nipples fully engorged, and aching for love.� Chantal hefting my tits and pulping them hard making my nipples bulge and throb.� She then cupped my nipples and ground her palms into my areolas and pulped squeezed my aching nipples as she kissed my neck.� I felt my cunt flood and cum beginning to trickle down my thighs.�� Chantal hefted my hooters up and her two friend bent down and siphoned my nipples into their mouths and loved sucked their stroking my heating body.� Chantel hefting and squeezing my tits jamming my areolas and nipples deep into Diamond and Rashonda's sucking lips.� I had really wanted to play mother hen and take my young charges to the beach for fun but this was so much better!� I felt my legs tremble with want.� I moaned as they led me to the sofa and sat me down with Chantal settling between my legs pushing them out and burying her face into my wet pussy and slashing her tongue into my cunt as she wiggled her face to get her tongue deeper into my pussy.� My head lulled over and Roshanda clamped her mouth to mine and drove her tongue deep into my mouth as Diamond did her tongue magic on my stiff aching nipples making me keen into Roshanda's mouth as my pussy started to love swirl into Chantal's active mouth. I was in pure heaven feeling three teenage mouths loving me so good.� Soon I was humping hard into Chantal's devouring mouth.� I was moaning so hard as she pulled my clitoral hood out with her sucking mouth her lips mashing my rock hard clit.� My nipples sucked and pulled on hard by both of my other angels now with them moving up at times to slam their tongue deep into my mouth and wrestling my tongue wetly.� Kissing down my face and chest to kiss and nip my breast before inhaling and love sucking my hard, thick nipples.� All to soon the dam shattered and I was wailing my love into the room as Chantal still lashed my exploding clit and both her mates sucked my nipples pumping their heads pulling my nipples taunt as I now screamed that I loved them so much and please suck harder which they did sending me into a second devastating orgasm.� I humped and flopped as their little bodies pressed me down hard to continue loving me reattaching mouths if flipped off my nipples or clit.� I was totally spent. I blearily watched Diamond sit beside me on the sofa and told Chantal to suck her cunt.� She looked at my pussy with longing but Diamond the slut pulled open her red cunt seam and fingered her rigid clit and Chantal drooled and slowly moved over and buried her face into Diamond's pussy and feasted making Diamond judder and moan.� I was happy because Rashonda quickly took Chantal's place and I was gurgling and moaning myself as she lapped, sucked and tongue fucked my pussy with expert skill.� Soon Diamond and I were both jackknifing, flipping and crying out in shattering ecstasy,� Rashonda was using her arms to press me down to keep her mouth glued to my clit as I now wailed in lost love "Keep sucking my clit you fucking NIGGGGEEEER!" as my fingers clawed her scalp helping her to jam her mouth tight on my clit as she loved sucked me to nirvana with searing spasms of bliss.� Gods her murmuring and wet slurping sounds on my cunt made my orgasm so blissful.� I was in love as she rose up and sucked my nipples so hard making me keen and legs scissor as burning pleasure seared my tits, clit and brain.� I swooned as the rose up further and kissed me so deeply tasting my cunt in her mouth as our tongues twined in new forbidden love.� We spent the rest of the afternoon sucking each other off in all different combinations.� I definitely showed them who the master was and they repeatedly showed me they are my equal.� Sigh, watching Diamond trying to rip the headboard off as she straddled my face ridding it hard and cumming so hard as she screamed and jerked wildly on the headboard.� Watching Chantal rolling right and left in a serpentine orgasmic throes as Rashonda kept her mouth clamped to her cunt as she sucked her through a multiple orgasm her arms wrapped around Chantal's torso to keep her love suck on her woman's clit.� How Chantal rolled up onto her ass her body at that 45 degree angle and clenched the sheet with both fists as her body went rigid as her stomach was so hard as her body spasmed� with harsh spasms.� Her head thrashed as she screamed "Goddamn Rashonda�suck my clit harder!�Ffffuuccckkkkkk!"� So beautiful. Then that night me and Diamond got synched in and fucked the living hell out of her follow ROTC mates.� I was so fucking ecstatic as I watched my cock pounding young twats as their cunt lips clung so tight to the cock I was slamming deep into their wombs as I did them in all positions as Diamond passed them back and forth between us as we fucked them senseless and made the cum so hard.� Then after satisfying their pussies we split their assholes in two with our big dicks.� I was swooning as I watched my dick slam balls deep into their tight assholes and then my eyes rolling back as they without prompting pulled off and eagerly turned around to suck their asses off my and Diamond's cock and then themselves taking our dicks out of their spasming shit holes and guiding to their twelve year old cunts and pushing back as I speared my dick into their wombs coated liberally with their shit juice.� I was in heaven.� Especially, when they then tp fucked me over and over as I cummed four times for them.� I was fucked out as they continued to fuck on as I watched lazily before I drifted off to sleep with a big fat smile on my face. The next day I took them to the obstacle course that is setup at a park near their school that the ROTC program uses from the City.� We met Denise and I was again in love.� She is five foot four and has her hair cut short to just below her ears and such thick lips and full cup tits showing through her uniform.� She was polite and nice.� I saw the love lights in the girl's eyes for their eighteen year old captain.� I was watching Denise and did not see any overt signs of lust or desire and decided to go with the flow.� The little minxes had worn their own ROTC uniforms and they did about fifteen minutes of marching drills and barking out cadences.� They then went into the showers and changed into their work out garb.� I felt my pussy spasm seeing all this pussy in tight work out shorts and cutoff tops.� Denise the slut was in super tight cutoffs and no bra her nipples sticking out like bullets.� I was now much more interested.� The bitch had to know the effect this would have on me and her underage charges.� Denise explained the course and raised an eyebrow when I lined up also.� I told her I like a challenge and I saw the fire of competition in her eyes and we were off.� Our prot�g�es were left in the dust as Denise and I pushed each other.� I won both heats but was gassed at the end and knees and back were killing me but I would show it.� I could tell she did not like getting beat, especially by a MILF.� We then encouraged our charges in finishing the course and helping out where needed.� I know Denise saw the girls slinking on me when I helped them over some of the obstacles.� Denise then led more exercises and marches and suddenly three hours were gone.� The girls went to shower and change to street wear.� As we were waiting, Denise asked me how I was related to the girls.� I told her I was best friends with Diamond's mom and she was off and I was looking after them and that I had just met Chantal and Roshanda.� I then looked her in the eye and told her that I had spent all day and last night getting to know them "deeply".� It could mean anything but she knew what I was saying.� Her eyes turned glassy and she breathed under her breath "my god".� I knew she was weakening.� I can so see it.� I told her that I loved getting to know every facet of my new friends.� The innuendo was thick.� Telling her I had fucked them all night without ever saying it.� I then asked to her come home with us.� I just knew the girls wanted to get to know her the same way.� Her eyes got wide and she backed up but I could see the desire she was desperately trying to tamp down.� The girls came out and flirted with us and I could see they saw that she was flustered and now showing signs of response.� Her nipples sticking stiff and hard clearly visible through her top.� Diamond being her aggressive self, invited her back with us.� "It would be a blast!"� Denise quickly declined and walked quickly to her car.� She had been to Diamond's house before talking to Kapri and Diamond about ROTC.� She knew the way but I did not think she would dare.� So I put her out of my mind driving my sweet angels back to Diamond's pad.� I went and took a shower while the girls ordered pizza and played on the wii.� We ate and goofed off playing Wii tennis and bowling and getting my butt kicked.� The sun was going down and I was getting horny when the doorbell rang.� Diamond ran to the door and squealed.� She brought in Denise by the hand.� She was in a nice pair of jeans and yellow blouse that made her so beautiful.� I loved the scent of her body wash.� She was glassy eyed again.� I asked her why she was here and told Diamond to move away.� I wanted to make Denise completely submit to the underage fucking about to commence.� She just looked at me.� I looked her in the eye and said sternly "Why are you here?"� when she just looked at us I barked "SAY It".� She gulped "I want to fuck Diamond, Chantal, Rashonda and You!" she emphasized.� I smiled great big.� "Suck them off! And take off your clothes you Fucking Black Slut!"� I so know sluts as she love shook and quickly stripped as her troops quickly stripped and sat on the sofa all excited and wiggling.� Denise quickly got between Diamond's legs and wasted no time burying her face into Diamond's swollen cunt and lapping with obvious expert skill.� Diamond was soon gurgling, moaning and juddering with body spasms raking her little frame.� I had stripped and was watching but couldn't hold off my new love for Diamond's friends.� I got on my knees in front of Rashonda and leaned in locking our lips as I slide my tongue down her throat.� Chantal masturbated her one hand soaked in her cunt slime and her other hand's fingers plucking and twisting her thick, squat nipples.� I loved how her eyes were so full of slut as she loved herself watching her friends getting fucked.� I quickly siphoned Rashonda's nipples some before kissing down her heaving belly and inhaling her whole upper cunt into my mouth and mauling and love sucking her clit.� Soon enough all three were cumming violently as they screamed and wailed in ecstasy.� Denise and I gulped down hot thirteen and twelve year old cum.� Diamond so aggressive as her clawed hands ground Denise's face deep into her rupturing cunt soaking it in her cum.� I moved over to Chantal and sucked her off as Denise ate out Rashonda with Diamond recovering and tag teaming with Denise.� They were so beautiful one working up to kiss and suck tongue and nipples while the other sucked off Rashonda's cunt.� Gods, she came in Denise's mouth as she sucked her clit with cheek hollowing sucks as she pounded and wiggled her middle finger violently in her exploding twat making the girl go multiple as she screamed all caps and her cunt gushed soaking Denise's face, hand and the sofa.� I had to grip Chantal's hips in a death grip as she rolled and bucked violently to keep my mouth buried deep in her cunt as I gulped down her steamy, creamy cunt nectar and then rolled my face in her still flowing pussy soaking my face from my hair to the base of my throat as I made sure to get her cunt all over me face and throat.� I purred as she licked my face clean and then got me on the floor and we did 69 until I cummed and then she tribbed me to climax ridding my thigh.� The other three did a sweet daisy chain as they took turns sucking each other off as they would pull mouth off cunt to wail their love and then back to sucking until they rewarded their love with an awesome orgasm of new love and then back to sucking.� We fucked and fucked to exhaustion.� That night I went to bed with Denise and fucked with wild abandon getting excited listening to the teenagers fucking with wild abandon deep into the night. Denise spent the night and ate breakfast with us.� We had all showered and we left Denise in the living room and got our dicks strapped in.� we then walked back in and her eyes got so big as she slide to her knees in the middle of the room.� Gods I love bi sluts.� She is a total whore.� She immediately deep throated our cocks as she choked out spit on our dicks to pump them as she sucked off on one cock after another cock.� Diamond gripped her hair and started to pump harder as Denise opened her mouth wide and leaned in signaling she wanted to be skull fucked.� We fucked her throat as she choked and gagged.� We whipped her with our cocks as she moaned and made wet slobbering sounds of sucking off cock.� I so loved seeing her deep throat my cock and then taking it with her spit hanging in ropes off my dick and slashing her black face with it as she moaned and cried in pain.� Her ROTC charges jamming their dicks into her throat making her gag and drool spit all over her tits and belly.� Gripping her head and slamming their dick into her open mouth making obscene noises.�� Holding their shafts at the base soaked in her spit and pistol whipping her face as cried out and groaned.� How Rashonda tilted her head and fucked Denise's cheek making it bulge and roughly pulling her dick out the side of Denise's mouth with a obscene sound and with Denise's spit flinging out her mouth and drooling off Rahsonda's prick.� We then got her down and wasted no time.� I got on the floor and she straddled me and I impaled her cunt and fucked her hard and deep as she settled on me as our tits mashed and mouths kissed in deep love.� She swirled and slammed her cunt into my impaling thrusts.� Then Chantal got on her knees behind us seeing that Denise was deep in the love fuck.� She gripped her ass and barked at her "open your asshole up Bitch!"� She moaned when Denise did not hesitate to grip her ass and open up her rosebud.� Chantal asked her what she wanted.� "Your big black cock up my asshole!" she gibbered back.� Her asshole easily ate Chantal's cock and soon we were slamming her fuck holes with large cock.� Denise jammed back into our pricks and sucked off Denise and Rashonda big cocks as they knelt in front of us.� Denise came with much jackknifing and cursing.� The girls were now calling each other Nigger, Black Cunt, Ghetto Whore constantly.� I love how girls are so much more advance now with porn, Internet and adults like me to guide them.� Denise once she had accepted her desire had totally gone with it.� Diamond pulled out her temporarily spent asshole and Rashonda got behind quickly and took Kapri's ten inch black dick and slammed up her shit hole with one violent thrust making Denise cry out but I noticed immediately push her groin back in time to Rashonda's slow pile driving thrusts.� Diamond now sunk to her knees in front of Denise her cock soaked in ass cream.� Denise's eyes zeroed in on her cock and she opened her mouth wide and moved her head forward, Diamond's cock riding up her cheek as her aim was off and loving how she quickly backed her head and swallowed Diamond's cock with a loving moan of pure happiness.� She bobbed and sucked happily.� I asked her how much she loved sucking her shit off Diamond's cock.�
Denise finished sucking our cocks clean and I got on my back and I watched her straddle me and guide my cock to her asshole and slowly impale herself.� Gods I loved the slut.� With her ass stuffed with my cock there was only one place for Rashonda's dick.� She started moaning, crying big tears while croaking out "Please don't put your dick in my ass Rashonda�You're ruining my shitter�please, pleeeassseee"� Gods that made me so hot for it and I lunged my dick fully up her asshole, her face slashed and bigger tears rolled down her cheeks as she groaned in pleasured pain.� Rashonda's response was to start slapping her ass hard and reaching forward with her other hand and cruelly fisting Denise's hair and jerking head back with vicious pulls.� "Reach back and pull your ass open for me Nigga�Bitch!".�� I felt Denise's full wait on me as her hands reached back and pulled her firm ass cheeks apart.� Denise was totally into the role of victim.� "God, Rashonda, have mercy" she said looking back at her young ROTC charge, "for god's sake don't put your dick in my ass with Barbara's---Pleasssseeeeeeee".��� I smiled up at her feeling her body shudder and her guttural groan as her eyes squeezed shut and face crumbled in fierce pain and pleasure as Rasonda's thick cock slipped back into her shitter.� We fucked her mercilessly as she cummed twice with our double anal assault.� Pushing her off roughly and watching her tiredly move around and slurp, tongue and bob hard on our dicks fresh from her spasming shitter our dicks creamed thickly in shit juice.� After her second orgasm she rested a long time on me with her asshole stuffed with two dicks.� She then revived weakly and croaked softly she wanted to be dp'ed.� We pulled our dicks out and I slowly impaled her cunt with my cock she knew was soaked in her ass juice and Rashonda now had free access to pound her asshole with violent banging making Denise's spent body jolt and wallow on mine as I speared her womb with my heels digging into the mattress to slam my cock so hard and deep into her womb with slow pile driving strokes.�� We fucked her long and deep and I could see a truly horrendous orgasm forming deep in her belly as her eyes went glazed and dilated.� Her body began to shake with small tremors and her fist clenched the sheets.� Gods, then the dam broke and she fell into shattering ecstasy.� She groaned so gutturally deep in her chest and cursed as her body had full� body seizures of fucking bliss.� I was in heaven feeling her belly and tits wallowing down into mine as our sweaty flesh slide and ground.� I counted five throttling seizures of bliss making her moan so deep and then heavenly aftershocks rattling her body making her groan and drool on my shoulder her spent cheek rested on.� Then rolling her off and lying on our backs as she weakly got between our groins and sucked our cocks clean as she murmured and moaned.� Gods, she made sure to clean form the base to the cockhead with tongue licking and loving sucks.� Then going to sleep in my arms as Rashonda cuddled her from behind spoon.� I was in new love. End of long digression: What I like about your stories is the fact that you know how to play scene perfectly.� You have this humorous dialog and you know how to keep it going and still keep it natural to the story.� In other stories, I have seen glimmers of humor and that is it.� You have Ashley tormenting Laura with her desires and her young nubile body.� You keep the "one-liners" and tone going getting all that you can.� You don't overdo it or underplay it either if that makes sense.� You seem to have an innate sense of how write a scene.� I have long thought you would have made an excellent screen play wright.� I adore how Ashley "torments" Laura with her sweet, young, nubile body and fetching personality.� How could any woman resist such a sweet temptation?� Love the "you are the devil" reference and Ashley stating the obvious that Laura wants it.� Of course she does.� Your writing just makes sex and life itself so alive and vibrant.� I get so tired of other stories not having any pizazz in it.� I am just smiling so big right now reading this and chuckling at the humor flooding me here.� You keep it so kicking [Laura shut the door . . . and locked it, which Ashley clearly saw her do. Ashley sidled up closer to her. Laura stepped away but backed into the door. There was no escape, nowhere else to go. She could feel Ashley's warm breath on her face and smell her fresh, somehow alarmingly sexual odor. Alarming because she was afraid she wouldn't be able to resist it much longer. �������"Want another peek at the ghetto booty to motivate you?" Ashley teased, turning again a little to show off her incredible posterior. Her jeans were so tight you could see the crack of her ass.]� Of course this is continuing the humor but you are also showing the confidence of Ashley.� It is really hitting me now that you capture the inner id.� Other stories may say that a character is confident but they never give a moment like you are showing here.� Here we see Ashley sauntering up to Laura and her breath on her face.� Then her seductive speech.� You are showing how Ashley is so hot.� I recently read another story that told us the girl was hot but never showed us like you are here.� A large part of sex is the pleasure of the body of course but of equal part if not more is the pleasure of the soul.� The desire to feel wanted and beautiful.� You show it in your stories.� We see confident women expressing their confidence and seeing their love prey totally succumbing to their charms.� I can just feel Ashley's breath on my cheek as she seduces me.� You so capture real life!� Plus, you capture all the senses.� I so love the musk of a woman.� How we are each unique.� Then Ashley's ass.� I so love black women's asses.� I so love their big firm assess.� I can just see Ashley doing her pirouette and that to die for ass.� I would be moaning knowing my fingers, tongue and dick will be pounding the shit out of her. Like I say, you know how to get the most of a scene [In response, Ashley started pulling her long-sleeved tee shirt up over her head. Now more and more of her delicious coal-black skin came into view. "Maybe you'd like to see a little more," she teased Laura softly.������� "Oh god."]� I so love the capitulation of Laura.� The reader knows she is lost.� How could anyone resist this young nymph?� I know my panties would be a sodden mess by now and my nipples rock hard and aching for love.� You captured this humorous moment and showed us sweet seduction at the same time.� Plus, you again give us women who are confident.� You did so much in this scene.���� I am smiling so big as Ashley flaunts her perfect ass.� I just don't get this subtle play of women in other stories.� In other stories they are never allowed to preen and show off their bodies.� The women in other stories are described as pretty and knowing it but they never get to show it in the story.� Plus, you use clothing.� How Ashley uses her tee shirt to slowly revel her body knowing the affect it will have on Laura.� Using her clothing to her advantage.� And me loving the darker hues love you bringing that front and center.� I always crave reading of dark black skin and the African features of Laura's lovers.� It inflames me so.� I like how you show Laura weakening and how Ashley is making it happen.� She husks to Laura that her lover will not be home anytime soon.� Makeeda is away.� How they can fuck anywhere.� I love reading this again subtle working of wiles and will.� Using simple words to weaken a lover.� I had meet a woman on the Internet that was bi-curious and after a few weeks I was at her home with her husband at work and child at her parents house.� She was so nervous and skittish but I kept slowly stroking her body and cooing to her that the gods were wanting this to happen.� I so slowly undressed and cooed to her that were going to make such sweet love and we did!� I get to see this in your stories and I so love it.� I am feeling my nipples tingle reading how
Laura is lost in a "hypnotic" trance looking at Ashley body becoming more naked.� I think of me falling more into a reverie of
building lust.� I so love seeing a lovers
body being reveled to me and my lust rising to a boiling fever.� Seeing a woman's tits and pussy being
presented to me makes me drool.� Gazing
at an awesome ass and drooling thinking of sinking my tongue deep into her
rectum and plunging my prick balls deep up her asshole making her squeal and
caw.� I feel a fire ignite seeing a man's
hard cock throbbing and waving in front of me as see it gets closer as my mouth
falls onto it and I am tasting your male hood in my mouth and feeling your
prick slide up and down my tongue as I pump my head and into my throat knowing
soon it will be devouring my pussy and asshole.�
You take the time in your writing to make these observations.� I think other authors are too into their
script and forget to give us the little observations of life.�� Things just happen without any soul in
other's stories.� You show us how Laura
is now longing to touch and devour Ashley.�
Ashley is doing her work well making her woman simply die to consume her
body.� I was making comment of the little
observation and you give us a big one here.�
I think Laura and I are a lot alike like this.� My other archangels simply are not interested
in the little things like me and Laura.�
Laura is agog at seeing that Ashley is wearing a raspberry colored bra
like Frankie a little earlier.� These are
the type of observations that I am constantly making and others are not as
interested in.� I love the coincidence
and little strange things in life that bind us together as women and
lovers.� You are the only person to write
this and, additionally, you nail it time after time.� I have marveled at this over the years.� One thing I learned early on is to not
actually make the comparison between most women.� Even Dodie and Maria can get very catty if I
make the wrong observation.� Sheesh.� With all this divine word play and
interaction it is the physical that so caps this time of sweet bonding [Moreover,
she knew well what gorgeous firm little balls of flesh were concealed by the
thin raspberry cups. And Ashley had thick, bulbous, puffy black nipples,
the kind that could send Laura into transports of seething lechery. And
Ashley loved to have them sucked. All this was roiling Laura's brain and
body, so much so that playful flirtatious repartee was almost beyond her at the
moment.] I have loved how you marry the plot
to the women.� You add so much zip with
the plot and such devices but you never forget the women themselves.� You bring front and center Ashley's divine
breast and her thick puffy nipples.� You
so besot the reader with the details of your women.� I can just see such nipples as I lower my
mouth to them and simply deep throat love suck on her teats making her jolt and
love whore moan.� Laura and I are both
tit women.� I make my women writhe and
whimper as I press them to me or down onto the mattress and simply deep throat
love suck as I feel their bodies jolting into mine their fingers clawing the
bed or me.� I pulp their tits as I latch
onto their areolas and simply suck with cheek hollowing sucks.� I snake my other hand down and finger fuck
their flowing twats as they hump lewdly and then desperately into my now
plunging fingers.� I feel their whole
body responding to me at these times.�
Their upper body jolting and cunt humping as I work them hard.� Love cooing to them to cum and often with my
black lovers calling them a fucking nigger and fucking boot lip as their eyes
go opaque with orgasm and they are again flopping and jackknifing violently
pulling my mouth into their tit mashing it with my face.� Guttural groins and crying caws of pure love
filling the air as my finger fucking fingers and hand are soaked in love juice
soaking the bed.� Then rising up to kiss
deep in new or renewed love our twining and plunging tongues again showing why
women are the best lovers.� Brining up my
hand soaked in her cum and licking fingers clean between us as we suck her
sweet nectars like greedy honeybees.�
Only you give me the details to feel this as I read erotica
stories.� Others are just too bland I
fear.
I love the tease that you show.� I love to be sexually teased.� It fires me up and makes me simply devour you
with all my skill and passion.� I am not
so much a tease per se.� I will tease you
if gets you in my bed quicker and it is fun to do at times but I do not need to
do it help my self-esteem.� I try not to
be cocky or arrogant but I am totally confident.� I know I am hot until some bitch makes me
feel like shit and then I am full of self-doubt but that is another story.� I love it when women are teasing me and
seeing them preen and puff up with pride and self-worth when I moan I need them
and I let them see clearly how they are affecting me.� You are the only author (again) that really
actively flirts.� Other stories may have
a line of flirting in the story and tell the reader that the character is a
flirt but never whole scenes.� Plus, they
never show the back and forth and how it really affects the parties, especially
the woman being flirted with.� You have
made me chuckle so many times over the years with your flirting and see Laura
"gulp" when it is hitting home.� I just
smile so big.� This interlude just adds
so much pop to this story.� It makes the
sex to come so much more awesome.� You
finish the scene with Ashley asking Laura if she wants to take off the bra and
you get a few more zingers with Ashley remarking how her sister and Laura have
"white booties".� I just love the mirth
and positive feelings you engender with these moments.� These women genuinely care for each other and
show it with these moments.� It is these
moments that make life worth living.� Of
course I� LOVE sex but it is these
moments that add so much to relationships.�
Thanks for showing we the readers such moments in our stories.� I sure hope readers have many such moments in
their life.� Like last night when I was
with Anthony and Eric and their eyes told me all I needed to know on how much
they wanted me and I flirted with them to stoke the fires.� Soon I was on my knees with their long, thick
black dicks waving before me as I opened my mouth wide do devour as I sucked
and pumped their thick dicks my spit soon drooling off all over my tits and
belly.� I knew that soon those cocks
would be plunging hard and deep up my fuck holes and down my gullet making me
cum so fucking hard so many times.
You so know how to move the story from this fun loving
humorous moment to building love [When she turned around from
pulling the drapes shut, she saw that Ashley had tired of waiting and already
half-removed her bra, which hung limply under her marvelous young
breasts. Ashley turned, presenting the clasp to Laura. "Your
turn."������� Laura approached her
and ran her mouth along one bare black shoulder as she unfastened the
clasp. "God, you are gorgeous," she murmured. "How
can I resist you?"������� Ashley
smiled back over her shoulder. "I thought you'd see it my way."������� Laura slipped her hands under Ashley's
arms and brought them up the front of her body to her naked breasts, cupping
them, squeezing them gently, running her thumbs across Ashley's soft, bulbous
nipples. The bra, now unfastened, slipped away to the floor.]� You are so romantic in your writings.� I love how you show us the events in these
women's lives.� You showing the drapes
being closed in the living room and Ashley using her opportunity to partially remove
her bra is so awesome.� Ashley is making
sure that Laura cannot resist her charms.�
Of course we the reader know she has already capitulated to the fucking
in her home.� I mean Makeeda is away, why
shouldn't she fuck in their home.� I have
to smile at going into the living room to keep out of the bed.� I would be fucking wildly in the bed.� I mean I fuck men in our bed.� I just make sure to change all the
linens.� My babies know my needs.� I love how you show us these moments.�� I can just see the smile on Ashley's face
and the lust on Laura's face.� I love
seeing confidence and happiness in my women's faces.� It makes the sex so much more awesome.� Other authors somehow make these moments so
boring.� They don't make them real.� Just stories on the page.� It is your dialog that really makes this
story come alive.� Plus, you show the
little intimate moments.� Laura running
her mouth along one of Ashley's shoulders.�
I mean, I never, ever see anything like this in other stories.� Women want to love and worship all of a
woman's body and only you capture this.�
I so love working my slut's clothes off and kissing, nipping and licking
her skin as it becomes available to me�
and working her panties off and smelling he sexual essence inflaming me
to new highs.� Sigh, the bra falling away
as Laura cups Ashley's tits and feels her nipples and areolas.� I so love these moments and I am so thankful
that I get to read it from at least one author.�
Again, you do so much in one little section to really prim the pump for
the sex to come.� You show love and
rising sexual heat at the same time.� I know
my fuck hunger would be rising exponentially.�
Other authors are trying to hit home runs where you show the working the
bases with lots of singles is how truly awesome sex occurs.� The little moments building to devastating
orgasms that rip the soul and body with fucking bliss.� Plus, you show confidence in your women.� I love building up women and sometimes men's
confidence in new situations. Attention:� Long
Digression Malcolm has been maturing into a fine specimen of black male hood.� He was a little soft when I first met him but now he has worked out and is nice and muscular without getting too big.� He is a little taller and he keeps himself well groomed.� He has developed the dream of becoming a porn star.� I have told him the true talent is the women and men don't get paid all that much.� Plus, it is like trying to make the NFL.� The odds are so slim.� There are a lot of guys with big dicks that know how to bone with the small number of slots for male actors.� Still he wants to give it a try.� He definitely knows how to fuck a woman into a coma of sexual satisfaction.� He has fucked me into a stupor many a time along with some of my favorite angels along with his step sister and mother.� The one thing I noticed is his stupid "gay" attitude.� I had told him he needed to be ready to perform with other men or multiple men with one woman or maybe a few women in scenes.� He told me he wouldn't be comfortable but I had been talking to him and setup a date to go over to Anthony's and have Eric their along with Tisa.� I showed him pictures of Tisa and he got so hard so fast.� Of course I had to suck him off and then a little later he raped my fuck holes so fucking good as I wailed and jackknifed through four orgasm of fucking bliss as he pounded my womb and stretched my shitter so good as I repeatedly sucked my asshole off his dick before he flooded my womb with his pile driving prick as it sent me into one last screaming orgasm as I clutched his hips with my thighs and wrapped my arms around him to pull him tight crushing my tits to his hard chest as he impaled my womb with his deep thrusting cock as it spewed semen into my shredding womb. I drove him over to Anthony's.� Tisa answered the door in a light blue diaphanous nightgown.�� I looked at Malcolm and smiled seeing the raw lust�� She took us into the middle of the living room where her first cousins lounged n boxers.� She walked around Malcolm inspecting him (I had sent photos of him nude, his ten inch cock throbbing and hungry.� I also sent photos of him pounding the hell out of his step sister and mother and she wanted him bad).� She smiled big at him and patted his now bulging jeans.� She stepped in front of him as I pulled his shirt off and she undid his jeans and jerked them down along with his boxers allowing his ten inch prick to spring out hard and twitching.� This was not about love. She fell to her knees and gripped the base of his cock and dove on his thick dickhead and swallowed it.� She immediately started twisting and bobbing her head hard as she murmured and moaned.� She sucked so hard as her mouth rotated on his dick head before licking his shaft up and down.� She sucked and massaged his balls and clenched his ass as she sucked him harder and taking him deeper into her mouth.� I stripped and got in the lounger and watched Anthony and Eric get naked their thick cocks rock hard as they pumped their shafts letting Malcolm get comfortable.� Tisa was working her spit getting Malcolm's cock all shiny with her spit as she fisted and sucked his dick head and now more of his shaft hard with bobs that made her afro flounce.� She murmured and made obscene noises sucking his thick cock.� Her face soon wet with her own spit as she worked and then rubbing his wet shaft all over her face marking her as the slut she is before again swallowing and sucking and bobbing.� Now Anthony and Eric stood beside Malcolm on each side and I could see he was nervous but he was into the fuck.� Tisa reached up and gripped her cousin's shafts and pumped with her wet hands.� She then moved around a little and swallowed Eric's beautiful cock and bobbed on it now pumping Malcolm's shaft along with Anthony.� I smiled.� The fuck was on.� Malcolm was getting more and more comfortable.� Tisa was bobbing hard and pumping cock now moving to Anthony's thick shaft and swallowing it and moaning at her love of dick.� I was masturbating to the show softly.� I wanted to enjoy the show.� Soon Tisa was using her hands to pump and twist her fists on the shafts she was sucking or gripping thighs or ass cheeks to pound her head forward as she cawed and choked out spit as she sucked hard and twisted her head her lips clamped tight as I loved the obscene noises of sloppy head.� I watched Tisa suck her bucks off in turn for like ten plus minutes wolfing down hard black dick.� I was getting so wet and my nipples so hard.� She licked their shafts and kissed them with love before sucking so hard on their cocks.� She suddenly latched onto Malcolm's cockhead at the glans and sucked so hard with short head pumps and used her thumb and index to ring his cock and jerked his prick just below her hard clamped lips.� Her hand was a blur as she deep throat sucked with short head bobs trying to make him lose control and ejaculate.� Malcolm groaned hard and clenched his thighs his head rocking back.� He kept control.� Tisa smiled and pulled him down by his dick as she got on her back and guided his dick to her wet, swollen cunt and shoved his cock into her cunt hole.� He immediately started to pound her box hard as he mashed her to the floor.� She was primed.� He slammed her ass into the floor for a few minutes before pushing her legs back by her knees and pushed back until her knees were by her ears and now really slammed her cunt.� He was dripping sweat onto her jolting body as he took her to heaven.� Her face slashed and body stiffened and suddenly she was crying out with guttural groans as her body jackknifed and jerked up and down as much as her double over body would allow.� She hard jolted and her face slashed as her head thrashed.� She slowly came down and Anthony laid down on the floor and Tisa groggily mounted her first cousin and slowly impaled her cunt on his eleven inches as she shivered and moaned.� She impaled her twat on his shaft and Eric told Malcolm to take his cousin's ass.� He was there in a flash and gripped an ass cheek to pull her open and roughly found her rosebud and pushed his dick into her backdoor.� I had told him she like it rough in the shitter like me.� He pushed in with hard steady pressure until his ten inches were in her colon.� Soon they were pounding her shit so good as she revived and was on her palms pushing back into their thrusting dicks.� Their cocks fully shoving up her cunt and asshole as her body shuddered with their violent thrusts into her eager fuck holes.� Her head jolting forward her afro jerking. Malcolm was gripping her ass cheeks to jerk her back hard into his thighs.� The sound of wet flesh slapping as their bodies collided.� Her ass cheeks jolting as his dick plunged deep up her ass now soaked in her ass cream.� He pulled out now totally in sync with his male partners in fucking.� Hot sex does that.� He moved to her head.� I had told him she is an ATM freak like me.� He got on his knees and slapped her sweaty face with his dick smearing her ass on her face.� She opened her mouth wide and he shoved his black dick into her mouth and she gurgled and moaned as he skull fucked her as she took his cock into the back of her throat spit choking and drooling out her mouth.� She keened around his dick when Eric invaded her asshole with his thick cock.� She shuddered full body at the invasion.� I was in heaven as Eric and Malcolm kept circling her to stuff their dicks into her mouth straight from her asshole.� I suddenly cummed wildly as I watched her suck so hard on Malcolm's dick that was really thickly smeared from her asshole.� Then she cummed hard.� I think my wails sent her over the edge.� She bucked and flipped as she choked on the dick in her mouth as it jammed the back of her throat as she cummed with dick in all three fuck holes.� They fucked her so hard to help her orgasm last a couple extra spasms of fucking bliss.� She was temporarily spent.� Eric pulled his thick cock out her shit hole.� Anthony used this opportunity to roll Tisa off and Eric laid down holding his cock up at the base.� He pulled her over by her hair and she slowly mounted him and he guided his cock to her pussy and slowly impaled her cunt with his thick shaft sinking slowly up her cunt her pussy gripping it tight as it buried deep in her belly.� I moaned watching his prick soaked in her ass sink all the way into her belly his dick head now buried in her womb.� Anthony� moved around and shoved his dick all the way into her asshole.� Tisa's head rocking back her face slashing as her throat groaned so gutturally. I cawed out ohhhhh goddddsssssdaammnnnnn loudly as I started to masturbate again.� I think this revived Tisa as she began to swirl and pound her cunt down into the long cock filling her up into her womb.� I watched her first cousins pound her fuck holes so good.� I loved watching her cunt lips clinging to Eric's thick shaft on the out stroke before disappearing again as he pounded his dick deep into her belly.� They fucked her for several minutes as Malcolm pumped his shaft.� Anthony pulled out and Malcolm immediately got behind Tisa and again slammed his cock into her shitter as she cried out in ecstasy.� Anthony got in front of Tisa on his knees and roughly jerked his cousin's head up, which was sagged down, by her afro and I watched her greedily feast on his cock straight from her asshole.� Now Malcolm and Anthony took turns pounding her booty.� She rode the fuck in a haze of bliss her body now riding along only now slowly building to her next orgasm I could tell.� I love this haze of a tp fuck.� You can just be overwhelmed by turns the cocks invading all three fuck holes.� Your senses flow from prick to prick.� Sometimes concentrating on feeling their cocks sliding over each other between your fuck holes.� Or suddenly focusing on the prick making your cunt spasm wildly or raping your shit hole in to making you cry out in ecstasy.� Or then your attention is on the dick filling your mouth feeling that dickhead sliding up and down over your tongue as you super suck in rising love tasting your pussy, asshole or both. The doorbell rang as they continued to fuck Tisa mercilessly.� I went to the door and peaked out the window and felt my cunt spasm so hard.� A beautiful black woman was outside.� Her hair lightly died red.� Her hair was in semi tight ringlets and frizzed up.� Her face was flawless and she definitely looked like she belonged in Ebony, advertising hair product.� Anthony had said he was banging a ten and this girl must be her.� I opened the door a little and leaned into the crack.� I smiled at her as she looked at me taking in my sweaty face and dishelved hair with some of it sticking to my sweaty forehead I could feel.� She just looked at me and I asked her if I could help with my southern upbringing.� She tried to look in but I didn't open the door.� I had to pick up her vibe.� She had on a silk top and I could see her bra less a-cup tits jiggling as she tried to see in the door.� She was small chested but had nice titties to pulp and suck I could see.� The fates as always helped me.� Tisa suddenly cried out Ooohhhh Godddddddd with guttural growls following and then Unngggghhhhhhhhh Fuuckkkkkk.� The girls eyes widened and her nostrils flared.� She quickly now told me she was a friend of Anthony and was he home and could she come in.� I then told her directly that he was busy fucking his first cousin with his brother and my eighteen year lover.� Her nipples were hard and poking out her top now.� She moved forward.� I had opened the door more but I blocked it now showing my nude, sweaty body.� I told her "If you come in we are all going to fuck you."� I wanted it clear up front.� She told me she wanted in again and I moved over.� She came in and immediately saw the hard fucking as I turned back around.� Positions had changed I saw.� Tisa was sucking on Eric's cock pounding her throat as Malcolm pounded her booty hole mercilessly as Anthony used his hips and heels to jam his cock with short thrusts into his cousin's stuffed cunt.� He jammed his prick head into her womb with his powerful thrusts. He smiled up and said "Hi Leah".� I moved behind her and pulled her top off and undid her pants and pulled them down as she watched the show in front of her.� She was mesmerized by the hot tp fuck in front of her.� She was a pure slut I could tell.� Eric stood up and Malcolm knew his cue and pulled his cock out of Tisa's ruined asshole that pulsed out a hard spasm of shit juice.� I told Malcolm to come over.� He came over his cock waving, glazed in yellowish creamy shit juice.� I pushed Leah down to her knees.� "Suck Tisa's shit off Malcolm's dick Leah!" I ordered her.� She looked up at me with a hot slut look and gripped the base of Malcolm's dick and still looking up at me slowly moved her mouth forward his dick jamming into her cheek as she roughly guided it into her mouth and moaned as she sucked it in and began to suck and twist as she at first looked at me but soon lightly closed her eyelids and focused on the cock in her mouth.� She sucked Malcolm with perfect skill her head undulating slow up and down and then bobbing hard up and down.� She then clenched his sweaty ass and took his dick down her throat in a slow pushing of her head down his prick.� She rose up choking out sheets of spit as she pumped his shaft and now sucked his dickhead.� Anthony called out that she liked it better in the ass.� Malcolm got her doggy and spit into her asshole and used it to swirl his dick head over her rosebud before roughly sinking it into her butt hole as she groaned so deep in her chest as he slowly worked her open.� I went back to the sofa to masturbate to the now double feature.� He soon enough had Leah's butt loosened up and was slamming his dick balls deep into her shit hole as she cried out and moaned.� He repeatedly moved around and she cleaned off his prick eagerly.� I would then watch the brothers fuck their cousin so hard and deep switching up now doing her spoon as they rolled her right and left to take her asshole or cunt as she cleaned the cock soaked in her ass and cunt.� I was in heaven being surrounded by so much divine fucking.� Malcolm soon pounded an anal 'gasm out of Leah's asshole as she cried out in bliss and shuddered with hard full body spasms her arms weakening until her cheek was on the carpet her face slashing in pleasure.� Malcolm then rolled her into spoon and slowly pounded her booty as she revived.�� I so loved watching these two black foxes getting nailed in spoon.� Malcolm after a while pulled his cock out of Leah's ass and pushed down over her perineum and then shoved it completely into her twat spiking� his dick head into her sodden cunt.� I loved the obsceneness of it.� He then pounded her cunt with hard punishing thrusts one arm underneath her and plucking her nipples and twisting them hard making her cry out in shocking pleasure and her face all slashed in bliss.� Gripping her ribs to slam his dick fully into her cunt and then moving it back to her asshole and taking it completely again.� He then pulled his dick out and lifted it and gripped Leah by her frizzy hair and pulled her mouth down roughly to his cock and barked "Suck your shit off my black dick you fucking cunt!"� I felt my womb spasm hearing her groan so deep in her chest as she clamped her lips on his shaft and bobbed with slow loving undulations of her head sucking her shit off his dick.� Soon both Tisa and Leah were flipping and jackknifing with hard body spasms as they were fucked to heaven and back.� They cleaned their cunt and anal cream off the dicks pleasuring them.� I watched the vixens being pounded with hard cock as the men changed the pairings slowly and raped them with hard savage fucking that made Tisa and Leah cry out in pleasure and have devastating orgasms.� Finally Tisa was fucked out and her cousins led her shakily to the sofa to lie down and bask in her great fuck.� Now Leah was savagely tp fucked as I watched hard black cock pumping fully into her fuck holes as she grimaced and cawed in soul deep pleasure.� I especially loved the ring around the shit hole atm fucking.� She had two more epic orgasms of full deep dick plundering as black shafts pounded her exploding fuck holes as she bucked and flipped as much as the men would let her their pounding rods and hands roughly man handling her as they pleasured their dicks on her spasming fuck holes and hard sucking mouth.� Finally, I could see her ramping up again and the guys were all in sync, Malcolm now so comfortable with other men and communicating with grunts, gestures and motions.� Anthony was pile driving his cock straight down her shitter up on the balls of his feet so his dick was mashing and sliding up and down his brother's rabbit fucking Leah's cunt.� Malcolm had his cock pounding her throat as she choke and gurgled out spit and drool. Malcolm pulled his cock out her mouth as the brothers now really ramped up as he watched pumping his shaft.� Anthony reached forward and fisted Leah's hair with both fist and pulled her head back cruelly and was slamming his dick into her so hard as sweat flung off her jolting body.� She began to choke out screams of bliss her eyes bulging as the brothers lunged their pricks so hard into her jolting body. She flipped and jackknifed her left hand tearing at the carpet the other slapping it with hard slaps.� She strangled screamed out as much as her back pulled taunt throat allowed as a truly horrendous orgasm shattered her.� She just� continued to cry out as she flipped and now Anthony roared out Fucckkkkkkkkk as he slammed his dick into her shit hole jamming her hard back by her fisted hair as he lunged forward as his dick spasmed semen into her colon.� He slammed her so hard her body lurching forward with his power over Eric's hard chest.� He finally emptied his nut sack and pulled out with Malcolm now eagerly shoving his dick into her tired asshole and gripping her hair like Anthony had.� He jerked her head back as she cried out in pained pleasure and drooled spit out as her eyes were now sightless lost in spent pleasure.� He pounded her weakening body as he speared her asshole jerking her head back meanly choking her as she tried to reach up and grip his hands and Eric reached up and jerked them down and started to choke her.� Her body was spent but her womb was priming I could tell by her wild pelvis undulations and shuddering limbs.� Suddenly another orgasm bloomed out her ruined fuck holes as she was gasped.� Her eyes rolled back and spasmed so hard her whites ghoul like as they jerked violently.� She was screaming but no sounds escaped her strangled throat.� Her body wallowed and bucked all over Eric's chest and hard stomach their sweat soak bodies slipping and sliding.� This was their queue and Malcolm and Eric cried out as they started to slam fuck Leah with all their strength filling her cunt an asshole with hot semen as they let her breath enough to not pass out and then choke several more times as she went multiple and was now having full body shakes and stiffening followed by seizures again until they were all spent in new love.� Her body and hair soaked in love sweat and her body prostrate on Eric's exhausted.� They rolled her to the floor as Malcolm got on the floor beside Eric.� Malcolm reached down and gripped Leah's hair and dragged her around by her hair as she cried in new love as her hair was roughly jerked dragging he spent body roughly over the carpet like the slut she is.� She wearily lifted their dicks and sucked them clean with long loving licks and sucks of pure love.� She made sure to get all her pussy and asshole off the black cocks that had just taken her to heaven. I was so happy have seen such divine fucking.� Later I was raped by our studs as my fellow angels slept in each other arms in the Anthony's bed.� I was heaven cumming so many times so hard.� Then in the morning making sweet lesbo love to Tisa and our new runway model love slut.� Gods, she sucks pussy so good and sinks her tongue so deep in your asshole as it clenches on it in helpless love.� I love how she is dom when doing women and roughly fucked my and Tisa's mouth as she rode us like a bronco and tribbed with expert skill.� I think I have a new supper angel entering my life.� Attention:� End
Digression I am smiling great big at Ashley telling Laura how she fantasizes about Laura sucking on her titties so hard.� I have made women swoon and scream from my breast worship and unlike Laura I am always taking it higher and harder.� I so love to pulp tits and maul them as I love them so expertly making my sluts writhe and beg for it.� Sucking a whole small tit into my mouth and totally devouring with love sucks, tongue slapping and mashing into the roof of my mouth.� Using the flat of my teeth to rasp and rub making their legs scissor and hands clutch my scalp.� With bigger tits slapping and pulping as my sluts beg for harder and harder which I so oblige.� Moving to slapping their faces with loud smacks an then their tits as they love moan for it.� Then I am being bitched slapped to heaven and back.� I can guarantee you that I would never read this in another story.� They just have the history first of all, plus, they just don't have dialog.� Your dialog moves us to moments like this.� ["I've got an idea," Laura purred, kissing and sucking her neck, and her earlobe. "Why don't we both get completely naked and fuck our brains out, like you said you used to do in the park?"������� Ashley smirk-smiled and immediately began unzipping her tight jeans. Laura hurriedly removed her own clothing.������ "If we're going to do that, you have to fuck me with one of those strap-ons, like you promised to do last time," Ashley said.]� Gosh, I love this.� You are moving the story forward deliciously and yet you give the small details.� I so love to be stripping down and kissing my woman as her skin becomes available to me.� Only you show this again.� I so love to kiss your upper body.� I do give a lot of hickies so I don't think Laura would like me.� The other night I made Dodie moan and hump like a whore as sucked on her earlobes and kissed her ear my tongue drilling into her ears as she hissed out how much she loved me. �Plus, you use salty language which I love.� I so love to say fuck, shit, goddamn, hell.� Plus, I love to talk to you like a fucking slut / whore using demeaning language like whore, slut, bitch, fuck pig, etc.� When I am denigrated like this it makes cunt flood and nipples simply throb with wild pleasure.� With my black lovers I love saying things like "suck my cunt you black xxxx".� I find most of my black lovers go gaga when we racial insult each other.� I am constantly amazed at how wet and wild they get when I call them a nigger, baboon, boot lip, ghetto jig, and such.� My black lovers wildly spear their dick hard and deep up my ass or cunt when I cry out to them "fuck me Nigger!'� I love how your women express their desires and go for it.� They want to fuck to exhaustion and do it with pure joy and zest for life.� I find your stories to be so positive.� I like how we see a part of Ashley's past, fucking in the park.� I like to fuck indoors generally, put I have a black lover I see sometimes, Nikki, who fucks me in various parks that I did not exist.� Going off the beaten path and fucking like whores.� It is cool to do it in the summer when it is hot and humid and sweat is pouring off our bodies as I push her against a tree and rape her pussy and asshole to ruin.� Of course, I love the strap-on being asked for.� I guess I have penis envy but I so love to fuck het style showing women I can fuck better than the vast majority and as well as a cocksmen like my regular studs.� Plus, I love how you show your women smiling.� It is a small thing, but it is important thing to me.� Other stories are just stories.� I feel these women in my soul.� Seeing Ashley smiles makes me smile.� You are always showing the happiness that Laura brings into these women's lives.� You women are confident and happy and you show this.� Plus, over the years you have shown so many of these growing and becoming more than they were.� I like to think to I am more than I was even a few years ago.� Deshona and Randi are prime examples.� Plus, so many women have dumped their sorry males and now love women.� Love comes with women.� Men can give you awesome orgasms but nothing spiritual.� I know I can depend on you to keep this development of charactere.� I love this cycle that has history and depth.� Thanks yet again. Wow, this next paragraph so captures the
beauty of black women and how we compare our lovers.� This is pretty sublime [Now they were
both naked. They came together in a heated embrace, kissing ravenously,
sloppily, hungrily, and groping. Rubbing her naked body against Ashley's
was the purest heaven Laura had felt in weeks, except when rubbing against
Frankie's. But they were very different, and the feel of their bodies was
very different. Ashley was short but fleshy, her body firm but not hard
or angular. She had very little waist but marvelous plump little breasts
and huge jet-black nipples, and of course the masterpiece 'ghetto booty.'
Frankie was tall, and very lean, almost skinny, her long body a miracle of
angles, very long and narrow waist, her breasts tiny but delectable, just
enough to fit inside your mouth, her ass smooth and round but not a round
bubble paragon like Ashley's. And of course both were dark dark
dark. Very black. Unbelievably
smooth, silky skin. Black enough to give Laura
feverish palpitations of lust.]� So much to love in such a small number of
words.� I have loved your use of
adjectives.� Other authors may say they
kissed with one word like hungrily but not the other words you use.� Your vocabulary is so good.� It the other words you used beside "hungrily"
that really makes this so hot and is getting me wet yet again.� You show the passion.� Other authors just put words on the page and
I can't get excited by that.� Plus, you
show the full body clench / rub that I so need in my life.� I so love puling my women to me in foreplay
feeling our bodies mold as tits mash, nipples rub and poke, hip and legs work
to meld so pussies can rub and juice.�
Hands threading in hair and pulling mouths tight as tongues explore and
then plunge in new or renewed love.�
Gosh, I love to rub against a woman's soft body.� Feeling my cunt spasm and juice your hip,
thigh or belly as kiss passionately with tongues twining in gagging love.� Only you capture this strangely.� I mean all women do this.� Maybe some not that much but still.� Men will only usually pull you close when
they get really excited but I love their hard bodies pounding and grinding into
me or down into the bed or floor or up against a wall or over some piece of
furniture.� Then you do what only can do
literally.� I do not know any other
current story that is multiple parts.�
This allows for history.� The ones
I found had the many lovers of course but I cannot recall the characters
reminiscing about another lover while fucking their current angel.� You take advantage of this.� Sometimes when I look at the "Girls" section
of your site I am amazed at how many lovers Laura has had.� I get so hot looking at them.� But Laura has a history.� She has multiple lovers and, thus, naturally
she compares.� I will be fucking a woman
/ girl and I will think she reminds me of her or she is using her technique or
she fucks like her.� Thus, I love it when
you compare.� You always make this
positive.� She loves both Francine and
Ashley. �She revels in their
differences.� That is one thing I have
loved about Laura is her love all body types.�
I love all women basically.� You
have to be really overweight, beat with an ugly stick or more importantly a
stuck up bitch to turn me off.� I am so happy
when I read that Laura is fucking multiple women and loving it now.� When she first discovered her true nature it
took her so long to accept her true nature and desires.� When I was seduced along with my best friend
by her step sister she fucked us blind.�
She had caught us groping and kissing in sixth grade and she taught us
how to love women and the next week started sharing us with her other lovers
and we were immediately addicted to women and as many as we could fuck.
Then you go on to describe both Ashley and
Francine.� Of course you lovingly
described them in their own stories but to see them described side by side is a
real thrill for me.� I love my women for
their differences.� Ashley is short and
more stout and Francine is tall and angular.�
The ways their tits are different.�
Their hips and thighs being so different and then of course Ashley has
the black bubble butt.� I so love
worshipping and raping these assess.� So
firm and jigglillly at the same time.�
The way some can make one or the other cheek dance or bounce into each
other.� When I try that I almost fall
down.� I have trained myself to do the
one eye brow rising with each eye but I just can't quite master this.� I just shake it in your face.� I really like how you mention they feel different.� This is so true and observant.� Both are divine.� I so love the rounded curves of the more
voluptuous women but also love the angles and planes of skinner women.� Like I have said so many times only you
describe your women and then you really show this with this comparison.� This is like doing your normal work and now
taking it to the second power.� I really
love how you describe their breast and assess.�
I can just feel all of Francine's breast in my mouth as deep throat love
suck and worm my tongue all over it as I pull my head back sucking it tight and
taunt.� I make women wail when I do
this.� Your use of words like "plump" to
describe Ashley's breast and Francine's "tiny but delectable".� You show Laura's and your love for these
women.� I�
can just taste them in my mouth as I work my magic on them.� I so love titties and I love how Laura shares
my passion.� I will spend long, long
minutes worshiping your tits.� I love the
big heavy tits to the flat chested.� I
will clamp my lips to Diamond or Sage's flat chest and supper suck their little
rock hard nipples as I try to suck their skin and nipple up into my mouth as I
press in with my fingers on each side pressing in and getting as much skin and
nipple into my lips and tongue slapping as I deep throat love suck driving them
wild with need and pleasure.� And of
course their assess.� I so love black
women's asses.� They are so big on par
and firm.� I so love to kiss, lick and
nip.� If ass cheeks like Ashley's, I
slowly pull open and slowly work down her ass cheeks until I am working her ass
crease up and down.� I especially love
this when we are all sweaty and I feel their sweat on my sweat on my cheeks and
forehead as I run my tongue up and down savoring their sweat and ass
essence.� Working their rosebud and then
sinking my tongue deep up their asshole and rimming them and tongue fucking as
I feel their sphincter begin to pulse and then spasm on my tongue.� French kissing and probing deep as I suck in
your sweet asshole and lick your rectum and ass folds if you can give me a
rosebud to kiss, suck and tongue fuck.�
Sigh, feeling your colon on my tongue and in my lips as I suck your shit
essence from your red colon meat.� Getting
my face soaked in your ass juice.� Laura
loves the whole body like me.� When I see
a black woman's bubble butt sticking out her outfit I often feel a terrible
desire to seduce her and fuck her senseless.�
Some I do!
Then you finish this paragraph with what
Laura and I both love "black, black, black".�
Since moving here and living with a population that is about fifty-fifty
percent white / black I have become addicted to black women and love to fuck
their men.� I love all the hues.� Form the light, light dusky hues, mixed race
hues and all the brown blends.� But like
Laura, when I see a woman that is so dark I simply feel my cunt spasm and
juice.� When they flash their pearly
white teeth and white eyes at me I simply fall in love with them.�
Attention:� Digression
I was at the main mall downtown and I was
going up the escalator when I saw a young black girl about sixteen I
guessed.� She was nice and stout I could
tell.� She was sitting at a little table
filling out an employment form.� She was
so freaking black with high forehead and large lips and broad nose.� I came on up and turned right and sat in the
other chair.� Her eyes went wide when she
saw me sitting there smiling great big.�
I told her my feet needed a rest and struck up a conversation as I
obviously eyed her.� We exchanged names
and is smiled great big when I discovered I had run into another Barbara.� I had to have her now.� I asked her about herself and of course she
started to melt at the attention.� I
talked about applying for such jobs (I hadn't but love needs small lies
sometimes).� I started to complement her
on her beauty.� She is more the girl next
door look but that is an arrow to my heart.�
She gushed at how beautiful I was.�
I smiled and thanked her.� I saw
her eyeing my d-cup rack as I eyed her c-cup tits.� She caught me looking of course, which I
wanted.� I asked about her boyfriend and
she went on about Tyler.� She asked me
and told her I lived with a woman.�
Another small lie but I did not want to overwhelm her.� I reached over and stroked her hand and told
her skin was so soft and beautiful and soft.�
You are so right about a young woman's skin being so soft and
sweet.� I love an older woman's skin as
it shows character but a young black woman's skin is simply divine with its
smoothness and silky texture.� She
shivered and weakly asked if I was seducing her and I whispered back "Only if
you want me to."� She just stared at
me.� I husked to her to call whomever and
let them know she had met a friend and would be home late.� She just stared at me again.� I looked her deep in the eyes and used my
force of will and whispered "do it".� She
really shivered this time and pulled out her cell phone and called her mom.� She quickly had permission to spend the
night.� I raised an eye brow at
that.� I was going to fuck my Barbara so
long, hard and deep.�
I got up and held out my hand.� She followed me out the mall to the hotel
across the street where I got us a room on the eight floor.� I loved the look of the clerk.� She knew what was happening and I sensed she
wanted to join but alas it was not to be.�
We got to the room and I sat her on the bed and sat beside her and
cupped her head and brought out mouths together and probed her lips and teeth
for a few swipes.� Her mouth opened wide
in invitation.� We immediately did a full
body clench as she went crazy.� I soon
found out she had wanted to fuck girls for years and was stunned that I simply
appeared in her life.� We were soon naked
rolling around on the bed in a full body clench as we kissed deeply in new
love.� Our tits mashed and rolling over
each other as she instinctively humped my hip.�
She was a fucking natural.� I
siphoned her nipples and tit meat and began to pulp first lightly and then
harder and then really hard when she groaned so gutturally and legs
scissored.� I loved pulping them with my
white fingers.� I pushed her head down
and begged her to pulp my tits and she happily obliged saying she loved seeing
her black fingers sinking deep into my breast.�
I went down on her and sucked her off several times as she jackknifed
violently as she cried out and moaned so good for me.� I was so happy when she went down on me with
obvious hunger and gusto.� She quickly
passed my two pussy eating tests.� I call
them the nose and lips test.� She had her
nose pressed into my mound sucking my clit and then when she worked my fuck
hole her nose was sliding all over my crease and riding over my bulging
clit.� When a woman licks at a pussy and
keeps her head back that is clear signal if she doesn't come on down that she
is not into it.� Then she passed the lips
test.� I need to see your lips mashed
into my vulva, flaring around them.� Your
lips tight to my pussy lips sucking in my cunt petals and inner folds making me
buck helplessly and wail in love.� Seeing
your lips all covered by cunt meat.� She
was trying to stuff her face up my pussy.�
We fucked to exhaustion.� I got up
while she slept and got my strap-on and computer out the car and let her sleep
for a while longer as I worked on the laptop.�
I woke her up about an hour later and found out she was fuck animal in
bed.� I speared my cock so deep and hard
into her belly as she moaned cleaning it and cummed twice so hard the last one
multiple.� She then did me and I
patiently taught her how to use her cock and use her hips.� We started doggy but ended missionary.� She was now slamming her dick hard and deep
into my cunt.� I was feeling my orgasm
building.� We were kissing in sloppy
heated love.� Our titties all mashed and
nipples digging.� She grunted how did I
love having a nigger bitch fucking her white cunt.� A black girl after my heart.� I curled my ankles over the back of her
ankles as she flexed and I used the leverage to tilt my cunt up into her now
violent thrusts as our sweaty bellies wallowed.�
She was slamming my ass into the bed her cock head piercing my
womb.� I grunted groan "fuck me you
goddamn fucking nigger�fuck me hard nigger!"�
I felt my eyes bulge and belly tense like steel as my womb trembled
wildly and then exploded.� I cummed with
gut wrenching spasms of dire bliss as wave after wave of searing ectasy erupted
from shredding womb.� I started to wail
but Barbara locked our lips and I gagged as her tongue flowed around my tongue
and down my throat.� My harsh sobbing
moans swallowed by her devouring mouth.
I finally recovered and rolled us over and got in cowgirl and started to fuck again my tits flopping and slapping up and down.� Soon I paused and reached down and slipped her dick out my dripping cunt and sucked clean and then mounted her again and shoved it into my asshole and gurgled sinking down as her cock fully invaded my asshole.� I started a slow rhythm at first as my asshole loosened up and then was slamming up and down and encouraging her to fuck up into my spasming asshole.� I fucked her for five minutes and then pulled up and back and settled between her spread legs and lifted her cock and lowered my head and kept eye contact as I swallowed her dick head and slowly undulated my head sucking hard with short sucks.� She groaned "oh shit � your doing ass to mouth."�� I sucked her dick clean and remounted and we fucked wildly with me getting off to clean repeatedly telling her how I loved tasting my asshole.� I fucked cowgirl until I felt my asshole spasming wildly and fell forward my hands by her head as I now wailed and cursed her as my asshole exploded with searing, gut searing spasms of pure fucking bliss.� I juddered and bucked wildly feeling her dick worming around in my shit hole.� I settled down and kissed her in deep love.� I then unstrapped her and got back in my harness and settled on my back.� She mounted me and guided my cock to her pussy and was soon humping me like a pro.� I loved her tits swirling and whiplashing into each other and then a new angle had them whiplashing up and down.� She cummed hard her whole body spasming as she groaned out how good it felt between harsh whore moans.� We kissed as she recovered and I pushed her up to cowgirl again and pulled my cock out her super wet cunt and moved my dick head to her rosebud.� She looked at me and whispered she had never been fucked in the ass.� I slowly pushed and gripped her hips hard and pushed down as her asshole resisted until it gave way and her asshole was invaded for the first time.� She cried out in pain and I patiently waited for her to adjust.� The beautiful� girl is a slut.� Soon she was gently rocking prying her shitter open for my cock.� I loved watching her asshole bow out and in as it was still tight making her vagina open, pulse and work.� I lovingly worked her asshole loose and began to sink my cock deeper into her belly.� She gripped my ribs and looked down working her groin up and down working her asshole loose as she hissed and sweat dripped off her face and tits onto my sweaty body.�� I loved watching her look down at my dick invading her asshole, sweat dripping off her face.� My cock now slowly disappearing up her asshole as we pumped and surged more vigorously as her asshole opened up for butt rape.� My body thrilled to the sound my groin slapping her ass as we surged into each other her tits jolting and flopping.� We were fucking hard now with my smoking her asshole with hard rapid strokes then slowing to slow pile driving thrusts making her gurgle and curse me.� When I would tire she would take over slamming her groin up and down impaling her ass.� I loved how she would sink her groin down until my dick was fully up her ass.� She would then grind her ass around in little tight circles her sweaty ass cheeks slipping over my sweaty groin my dick head circling deep in her belly.� I could see that her asshole was giving her divine pleasure flooding her brain with then need for constant anal sex I could clearly see.� I was beginning to think of when to take her ATM cherry.� I love to make anal virgins cum hard from my dick rapping their shit hole and then as they are in aftershocks pull them off and pull their heads down as they happily comply and swallow my dick soaked in their ass juice and moaning in pure happiness and pleasure.� Murmuring how much they love sucking their shitter off my dick.� I was gripping her hips hard to pile drive her down into my savagely up thrusting dick her whole body jolting as she milked her tits and her sweaty face slashed with pure fucking anal pleasure.� She surprised me when she suddenly rose up and off my cock letting it flop to my belly as her asshole gushed shit juice.� I looked at her as she sat beside my hip and her sweaty face looked up at me as she lowered her face and got her lips on my belly and lipped my dick head into her mouth and moaned so loud as she tasted her asshole on my dick.� I cried out fuccccckkkkkkk as my eyes rolled backed and spasmed as I felt her grip my dick at the base and rise up sucking hard now bobbing softy her head undulating, her sweaty, stiffish hair flouncing.� I loved this slut.� The girl is a pure slut just like me.� She repeatedly sucked her ass off my dick sometimes licking up the shaft all around and swirling her tongue all over my dick head before slowly swallowing again and bobbing with slow head undulations and twist.� Gods she is so beautiful. End of Digression: I have to smile as we see Ashley calling herself a nigger.� Laura being her sweet self is put off by this.� This is a charged word and you have to have permission to use it if you are white.� Younger blacks feel they have taken a negative and made it into a positive.� Persons old enough to remember the civil right movement are definitely against the world.� I can see both sides of the divide.� Younger blacks simply have no memory of what their predecessors endured.� If you have not experienced something then it can be very hard to understand.� A sexual point would be anal sex.� If you have not experienced (a positive event) you simply may not be able to understand the joy of it.� A while back my company had some sensitivity training (racial sensitivity).� The speaker was a black woman (not old enough to remember the civil rights time) but very educated about the past.� She was getting pissed when some young black men in the class could not understand her problem with the word nigger.�� They told her that had made it into a positive.� They had to agree to disagree.� I love to use racial epitaphs in the bedroom but not outside it.� I curse like a sailor on leave in the bedroom but otherwise I am very prim and proper in my speak.� In a lot of ways I am the whore in the bedroom and angel in the kitchen.�� I am surprised sometimes how my black lovers get to the point where every sentence has the word "nigger" in it.� Once or twice I was almost overwhelmed by the sheer number of times I heard the word.� They used it as a noun, pronoun, adjective, adverb� and verb.� So I like how you show Ashley being comfortable using the word.� I would be like Laura some in the sense that outside of the bedroom why use it.� A person has a name and outside the bedroom I like to use it, but I am getting more comfortable at times in using nigger when among my black angels or male lovers.� They are always calling me a nigger, nigga, wigga or wigger.� I am sometimes surprised at how a black woman who seems so educated, and socially conservative almost beg me to call them a nigger and any white male loves involved.� It makes them fuck like animals.� Again, I love how you show it as a positive.� Ashley and the other women to use the word are proud to use it and don't feel demeaned.� That takes all the sting out.� There are a few authors that bring this front and center.� The black women are embarrassed but love it when their white lovers reacially demean them.� I like reading it but the sex is so routine and boring as usual.� Plus, the one I like the most has the women use the stereotypical old South black dialect.� I don't like reading that or hearing it too much.� It just doesn't float my boat for some reason.� I do like urban /ebonics.� I remember Diamond one time was talking to me with no accent or slang as were necking.� She turned to me with a big smile and said "You're surprised I can talk so white, aren't you?"� I smiled and said "I don't think of it as White, you are simply speaking the King's English."� She just smiled and we resumed kissing heatedly and soon she was making gurgle and groan so hard sucking my white pussy off as she asked how good her "nigger ass" was doing now sounding like a ghetto whore now.� My grip on the back of her head grinding her face into my cunt told her!�� You strike the right balance of bringing up the topic and not use it to demean and showing Laura's gentle loving nature again.� I guess I am just more guttural and crass. I have always smiled at your dialog that seems so freaking alive and natural ["At least you're not one of them," Ashley giggled again. "Do I taste like chocolate? I've never tasted me."������� "You taste like Ashley. Mmmmm, best thing I ever tasted."������� "Here," Ashley prompted, holding one of her round naked breasts in both hands and pushing her large black nipple toward Laura's mouth. "You're taking too long. I want to be sucked. Laura sucked. You do it best."������� "I think I can accommodate."]� I know I constantly harp on this but I was just reading another few stories (trying to) and they simply bored me.� They try to create these worlds and they just bore me.� One thing I noticed a lot was the lack of meaningful dialog.� Just boring conversation to move the story and the same basic lines that are used in the sex scene.� The boringness that others have, you are doing a great job in a few words and.� There is no witty remarks in their stories .� No communication between the women.� One thing I really noticed is that without dialog the stories are pretty boring.� Plus, the story has no heart because we don't we don't know the women.� They are given some back story but we are not allowed to get to know them.� No interaction between the women.� I mean the above just rocks.� The one story had some adult women talking about fucking their daughters (which you know I love) but it was just conversation to move the story forward and explain things.� It was not between two women who know each other.� Then you show the cute moments.� One thing I have noticed in other stories is we never see a breast being cupped.� You bring this front and center.� It really hit me.� You show Laura cupping and sometimes semi pulping her women's tits.� Other author always say that a woman is having her tits sucked but never show the� handling of the tit.� This is where you shine forth.� Other authors talk of it but you show it.� It just makes the sex so much better where you give us that next level of detail.� You don't bore us with minutia but you show how to love a woman.� One thing I love about you telling of the handling of breast is the way you handle different bust sizes.� With women like Ada and Karen you have a bounty to work with.� You can stroke, cup, maul and pulp their tits and still have breast you have to move your hands to love.� The medium size that you can use both hands to totally maul and then the smaller to flat tits that you can totally work with one hand.� Just trying to read those stories really hits home to me how great your writings are.� You give us sweet dialog and wonderful scenes.� This is great what you do story after story. I have to smile at the dilemma that Laura finds herself in.� One thing reminds me of me and the second in how Laura and I are very different too.��� She is thinking to herself how lucky she is.� I do not believe in the fates but I too wonder at my good fortune.� But, I also know that good luck comes when hard work and opportunity intersect.� Laura puts herself out there to give herself the opportunity for new love.� With Ashley she saw her washing her sister's vehicle and made an introduction after spying on her for a few minutes drooling over her booty.� There have been so many other women she put the move on and few that pursued her.� The important thing is that Laura has not been passive in her pursuit of new love.� If she had spied Ashley and simply moved on down the road then she would not be having this nubile black vixen throwing herself at Laura.� This shows the confidence that Laura has that I so love reading.� Other stories just don't get this confidence across except for dominatrix controlling their women totally.� Boring.� You then show the taking of the initiative bf Ashley putting Laura into a position that she will not be able to resist her charms.� Women taking charge and pursing their natural desires.� I read an article recently about the old lesbian pulp novels that had all the lesbians as messed up in one way or another.� Stories today don't show that but they are kind of neutral.� You are alone in making these women alive and vibrate.� This leads to confidence and taking advantage of situations and making love happen.� Love it! Where we are so different is the idea of fucking in the bed I share with my archangels.� We simply don't care.� The stipulation is that I have to change the sheets the next morning if fuck any guys in our bed.� We realize that we need to pursue new love to keep our core relationship alive, healthy and vibrant.� I love to fuck women and men in their spouses or significant other's bed.� I think of it as I am bringing passion to the bed that will hopefully morph into their relationship.� So many relationships between long time partners have allowed their relationship to become so stale and boring.� I am like the energizer bunny bringing a charge to the bed.� Over the years I have started with one partner and soon had the other person in the bed and rocking both of their worlds.� I am just happy that the world is slowly but surely changing.� When I listen to my teenage lovers talking about how unfair man's world is and racial bigotry I smile and agree.� But I am thinking just one generation ago things were so much more dire.� Now, no one cares about interracial relationships if you are my age or younger.� The teenagers of today are totally oblivious in general about the racial divide.� I think porn movies and stories like yours are really helping.� You are giving young girls a role model that is positive and life affirming.� Laura is a woman that is confident and gay.� She loves black women and who cares.� So I have to thank you for giving us such positive stories.� Even this desire to not have sex in her and makeeda's bed is loving and pure.� I may not observe that but I love Laura for being so old fashioned.� Plus, I have warmed to Makeeda over the years.� Please keep your stories positive and life affirming. Attention:� Long
digression. Reading this I realize that Ashley is playing the role of the young seductress.� She is such a ing�nue with a wonderful deviant twist.� She is a complete slut like me who loves playing the "role" whatever it may be.�� I am always happy to play roles in my sex life.� I love being the dom or the sub.� The slut willing who� take dicks in every fuck hole.� I so love to play in a character.� The slave owner in Rome or Antebellum South flogging and whipping my slut slaves into weeping whores, crying for mercy and never receiving it.� Or I am the slave often starting out strong and defiant and having my will broken and then mercilessly raped.� Having black males "abducting" me and then raping me.� With my teenage lovers playing a teacher or coach seducing and then fucking their willing bodies or they play like they are resisting me and I have to slap, whip and then rape them cruelly for their silly resistance.� I love to act a role too.� Recently I had this happen with Jennifer, Terri's mother.� She fucks women on her carrier under her command and one of her superior's.�� It came to her attention that a young black buck was fucking two of her bi sexual sluts and other women.� She told me he was like six foot three and very thin, but, he has a twelve inch dick and knows how to bone.� He was only nineteen.� Jennifer could care less but wanted to fuck him badly.� But she wanted to have some fun with him first.� She asked me if I could help her and told me what she had planned.� I had to smile and say I was in!!� I so love Jennifer.� I simply adore fucking her and her daughter and step-son.� I feel my womb quivering and pussy getting wet just thinking of fucking them alone or better when sweet incest has me in bed with mother and daughter as they suck each other pussies and then mine and adding in Malcolm for hot het / lesbo sex. Jennifer got me a commander's uniform that fit me and found a couple of rooms in a building on base she could use on Sunday.� She had Terrell to come to the office at 3:00 p.m. prompt.� He came in and was nervous as hell.� Jennifer was behind a desk with his file on her desk and I was sitting in a chair to the side.� My father taught me to sit with my back straight and I think I cut an imposing figure sitting there looking serious.� He was actually sweating.� Jennifer started in asking him to explain himself fucking women on her ship.� She listed names and dates and times.� He was really getting nervous now.� He was sweating but keeping quiet since he knew that anything he said would be used against him.� This went on for a few minutes.� From time to time Jennifer would ask me if I was taking this all in and if I had any questions and I would respond that she was doing a great job.� He stammered that he was not sure what Jennifer was talking about and he never took "liberties" with any women on the ship.� What else could he say?� We knew that he would have to say that to save himself.� Now the play was on!� Jennifer asked me if I believed him and I said I did not.� Poor guy was really sweating now.� She then asked me to help her get to the truth.� I was looking stony as I slowly stood up and walked over to Terrell.� I had to look up at him slightly and noticed just how thin he was.� I was anxious to see his cock not only because I wanted it in my mouth, cunt and asshole but because I wanted to see a dick that big on such a slender frame.� I am curious about things like that I looked him in the eye as I started to unbutton my top and slowly undress.� The look on his face was fucking priceless.� He was flummoxed.� I took my top off and now reached behind me to unhook my bra my tits falling out and jiggling as he eyed them.� He was totally confused now looking over at Jennifer who had a stern look on her face.� I know she was laughing her ass off on the inside.� He kept looking back and forth and gulping loudly.� Sweat was now beading on his face and know body.� I could see a bulge forming in his pants.� It made my pussy even wetter.� I know undid my slacks and pushed them down and took my shoes off and pushed my Unitarian panties down.� I was naked and my nipples engorged with fuck need and pussy lips hanging down ready for hard fucking.� I could smell my musk filling the room.� He was staring at my rack and hard nipples.� I asked him if he liked what he saw and he said "Yes Mam" hesitantly.� I got right in front of him and sunk to me knees and undid his slacks and jerked them down his boxers tenting with his twelve inch cock twitching in the fabric like an obscene Cobra.� I jerked them down and moaned.� I had expected him to have a thin cock to go with this frame.� Instead it was thick with a bulbous cock and thick veins.� I was in instant love.� I gripped his dick at the base and feed it into my watering mouth.� I clamped on his dick and sucked with loving hard sucks as I started to pump his shaft and suck while I started to bob and twist my head making my hair jerk.� I soon had his cock wet with spit as I swished my mouth to produce spit I pooled in my hand to smear and coat his cock so I could pump hard and fast and loved seeing my spit drip off in strands to the tiled floor.� Slowly lowering my mouth again and feasting on his black dick as I felt his dick head filling my mouth.� How it slide up and down my tongue jamming into the back of my throat my lips feeling his veins as they rode this thick cock.� Pumping hard as I undulated and twisted my head sucking hard pulling his cock out to spit on it and pump it before clamping my lips tight again and pumping hard into my throat drooling and choking out spit obscenely like the whore I had become. Jennifer had gotten up and stepped up to Terrell.� She slowly unbuttoned his top and pulled it off and his undershirt his body now naked.� He was sure skinny.� The stories was he was a demon of hard fucking so I had so smile as I jammed his dickhead into my throat.� He knew how to use his thin limbs and torso and skinny ass.� He was lost in my blow job and he was going with the moment.� He knew that if he went down we were going with him so he was able to relax.� Jennifer stripped slowly exposing her gourd tits and flaring hips and big ass.� She lifted her face and he lowered his head and mated their mouths and jammed his tongue deep into Jennifer's mouth as he cupped the back of her head and jammed their mouths tight as I watched his tongue work deep in her mouth making her moan and love shake her nipples now rock hard.� I sucked and jammed his cock into my throat and took a few inches down my throat before pulling off choking and coughing out pools of spit onto his cock and floor.� Lubricating his shaft even more so I could twist my fists as I sucked his dick head.� Jennifer and Terrell kissed for several minutes as he sucked her tongue into his mouth and gave it head making her knees weak.� He was taking charge the fucking animal.� He gripped her head and tilted and sucked her throat into his mouth and sucked in her throat and pumped it between his teeth marking her as his white whore and making Jennifer shake violently as she keened and cawed deep in her chest her eyes going glassy.� I couldn't wait to suck on her bruised neck myself. He pushed her down and husked at her to sucks his balls.� She easily tilted her head down and swallowed a big testicle and sucked it in and pulled and tongued it in her mouth I could see her cheeks showing her working tongue.� She sucked on both nuts in turn and licked the base of his shaft.� I pulled off and kissed down his shaft as she kissed up.�� Our mouths came together for a long moment as we kissed deeply tasting Terrell in our mouths.� I then sucked his family jewels into my mouth and worked my magic as Jennifer sucked his cock with hard pounding bobs her head jamming his dick into the back of throat as she moaned and choked cawed.� We sucked him for another ten minutes as we at times licked his shaft and lipped up and down and tongue swirled his dick head and butterfly licked it and worked his shaft from both sides taking turns sucking him with all our love and skill.� Terrell then gripped our heads and pulled us up.� He pushed Jennifer over as she gripped the desk and pushed his dick into her dripping snatch and worked it quickly into her steamy depths.� I kissed her back and then got on the desk in front of her and pulled her face into my flooded cunt and cried out as she sucked my clit deep into her mouth and tongue slapped and buzzed as she sucked.� Her head jamming into my twat as Terrell pounded her hard jolting her face into my cunt.� The sounds of his sweaty groin slapping into her now sweaty ass.� I watched her eyes start to get that half roll back and her face sort of freeze as she sucked rhythmically, almost automatically on my clit.� I was leaning back on hands behind me and told Terrell to fuck her harder that she was about to cum.� He gripped her ass real hard and slammed his foot long cock into her womb and growled as he slammed fucked her flooding cunt.� Her head lifted from my needy cunt and her eyes spasmed and stared as her body had full body spasms and flipped up and down as her guttural groans filled the office.� He fucked her hard through her orgasm prolonging it.� He slowed as she came down and she quickly sucked me off as I bucked and jammed my cunt into her devouring mouth.� I jackknifed wildly as I screamed in ecstasy.� Good thing the building was closed for the weekend.� Now I was gripping the desk as he did me doggy and I sucked Jennifer off.�� My feet planted on the floor my tits mashed into the desk as my jolted me from his hard driving dick thrusts deep into my trembling belly.� I had her cumming in my mouth quickly as she cawed and jolted with full body spasms of love as her head did that forward tense jerking as her sightless eyes half rolled back so heavenly.� I was primed and cummed right behind her.� Terrell took me over to the sofa on the wall and sat down and I crawled up on the sofa and guided his cock to my pussy.� I rode him cowgirl and dismounted several times to suck my cunt off.� Jennifer was watching as I now mounted him with my back to him and rode him hard as he slammed up.� Gripping the back of the sofa to help me swirl, jam my groin down into his towering prick piercing my womb making me moan and gurgle constantly.� Jennifer came over and got on his cock as I dismounted and got on my knees and kissed her face and sucked her nipples when they slowed fuck.� She dismounted to suck her pussy off his thick shaft all shiny with our twat juice.� We rotated back and forth riding his pleasure shaft.� Jennifer was riding him her back to him as he reached around to pulp her tits and pull her nipples making her cry out in fierce pleasure.� She reached down and pulled his dick out of her cunt and guided it to her bung hole and jammed down whimpering as it slowly invaded her backdoor and she worked her shit hole loose as he moaned fuck and shit.� Soon her asshole was loosened up and she quickly rode it balls deep into her colon. She pumped her hips up and down and he fucked her hard and then slow.� His dick almost a blur sometimes and then slow and sensual and then pile driving slow thrusts.� I loved how her soft gourd tits whiplashed up and jolted and flopped.� I was kissing her and sucking her nipples with love sucks as they now slow fucked.� She then rose up and sat on the other side of Terrell.� Her ass juice was thick on his cock and splattered on his belly and groin.� She had gushed out her ass when she pulled his thick shaft out.� Her ass is a nice juicer.� She kissed and licked her splatter ass juice off his belly and groin.� Now she gripped his cock at the base and lifted his thick truncheon and looked up at him as she lowered her mouth and sucked his dickhead in and sucked it clean as he moaned goooddddammnnnnn as she took half of his thick cock into her throat and then licked the rest clean.� I climbed on and guided his shaft straight to my asshole and invaded my rectum with his shaft of iron.� I whimpered as it invaded the depths of my belly.� I was facing him and started to bounce up and down as he gripped my hips and slammed up and I moaned in such need feeling his balls slapping my ass.� Jennifer pulled his dick out repeatedly and sucked my ass off his dick making him growl and call us sluts and white bitches which only made us moan loader.� We took turns riding his cock into our assholes sucking clean our own and each other's assholes.� Moaning how sweet our shit tasted.� Jennifer cummed first with her patented stiff neck and eyes half rolled back orgasm that went screaming as her anal 'gasm shattered her.� Her tits really flopping as she wildly bucked up and down impaling her shit hole on his shaft as she went multiple in her anal orgasm and she screamed and screamed as her body had full body spasms and jackknifes.� She staggered off after she came down and he took me down and did me spoon as he fucked my asshole and then pussy and back and forth pulling my top leg up to fully invaded my fuck holes.� I rolled off four times I think to suck my cunt and asshole off his prick.� I kept moaning my ass tasted so fucking sweet and I loved sucking my shit cream off his cock which made him moan.� I felt that delicious tension forming in my belly as he pounded my asshole and now Jennifer recovered was sucking my nipples and kissing me as Terrell gripped my shoulder and leg to really pound my shit hole.� I gritted my teeth holding my anal 'gasm off and felt the tension so tight in my sphincter and womb.� Then I feel off the precipice and my belly exploded as I screamed all caps and had wild jackknifes as Jennifer gripped my tit with both hands and pulped squeezed as her mouth mashed my teat into her mouth and she super love sucked.� They were able to keep me pressed back into Terrell as I flipped and jackknifed.� I then stiffened like a board and they instinctively knew I was on the edge of another killing orgasm and I felt Terrell now pile drive my asshole with powerful timed strokes and Jennifer used my stiffened body to use only one hand to keep my nipple stuffed in her mouth and used her free hand to buzz my clit roughly.� I shattered and screamed wildly as several orgasms blasted out my ruined shitter and exploding clit.� I was still stiff at first as I screamed again, Jennifer stopped rubbing my muff and gripped my tit in a death grip and gave my long, stiff nipple deep throat love sucks.� I now went into convulsions of shattering bliss as my lovers gripped my body roughly back into Terrell's torso as I flipped and jackknifed with shattering bliss.� I was hoarse as my orgasms finally waned.� I was temporarily spent.� I love my body.� I was shattered but I knew I would soon revive.� I was so in love with Jennifer for sharing this wonderful fuck with me. We then sucked Terrell off as he bucked his hips into Jennifer's mouth as he filled it to overflowing with semen. She had pooled all she could and we shared it as we kissed in deep renewing love feeling our love for each other twine even tighter.� I already knew that I was going home with her to fuck her and her daughter the night threw.� Terrell was spent and ordered him to sit in a chair.� We then kissed and groped each other and got in 69 on the sofa and sucked each other off as I felt her belly and tits grinding all over my belly and torso and then how they mashed and her body bucked up to slam her body into mine her nipples grinding hard into my belly.� She then sucked me off as she spread my pussy wide open and wildly liked up and down and over my clit and diving deep into my pussy and back and forth.� I felt my eyes roll back and spasm long and hard as yet another shattering orgasm shattered me.� Then Jennifer was on the cold tile her face mashed into my twat as she sucked me off again.� I was in heaven caressing and then gripping her head and jamming her head back as I screamed out my renewed bliss and cried out "Keep sucking my clit you godamn Jewish cunt!" as I humped into her mouth with my swirling hips.� How she sucked even harder her lamprey mouth sending fierce bolts into my exploding clit making my cum so much harder.� She then laid me out on the sofa and got her right leg between me and the sofa back and the other foot on the floor and rode my face hard as her cunt swept and jammed into my lapping and spearing tongue.� I was in even more love when I felt her hands behind my head now and jamming my head up, my tongue was buried in her twat as it exploded and flooded my mouth with her hot steamy cum.� I gulped reflectively all her sweet divine nectars.� Looking up at her face staring down at me on a stiff neck her chin juddering as her half rolled eyes spasmed and she cawed so deep in her chest as her chest heaved in bliss her nipples so hard as her tits jiggled.� I love how her tits so engorge in her orgasm and neck flushes so red. Terrell was now in the game again and he fucked us long and hard as our pussies and assholes were taken hard and deep again as more orgasms shattered us and now he cummed in my mouth and I shared with Jennifer.� I loved feeling our tongues wrestling with Terrell's semen pungent taste filling our mouths.� We went to the showers and cleaned up and I went home with Jennifer to a waiting Terri.� My pussy had been worn out but seeing her naked in her parent's bed waiting for her mother and me made my body instantly hot again and my soul to sing.� So many more orgasms to relish and burn into my memory. End of long digression: One thing that I have always loved about your stories from the first Karen chapters has been you use of the small details that totally rock the reader.� I am just totally amazed at how time after time I am simply bored by the blandness of other authors in how they describe their sex.� Especially� when they are describing foreplay.� They ramp it up some for the final sex scene but they just kill foreplay.� They simply say that woman X sucked woman's Y's nipples.� When you first discover sex stories on line this is enough but soon it becomes so bland.� You have always taken it to the next level.� [Laura was neither. She opened her lips eagerly and sucked Ashley's large, plump nipple deeply into her mouth. Ashley gasped almost helplessly as she watched it, as well as some flesh of her breast, disappear.������� "Annnnggghhhhh! Oooohhh shit, that feels good!"������� Laura could say nothing but, "Mmuunnggmmnnggghhh." She sucked it passionately, pushing Ashley's fingers aside so that she could hold the marvelous little warm ball and squeeze it happily while she sucked.]� I am very oral which is kind of obvious being a lesbian.� Therefore, I so enjoy how you detail your women's nipples, pussies and asses.� Along with the oral I want to add tactile because they go together.� Where others say that Laura would suck Ashley's nipple and leave it at that but you give so much more.� I love how you show how Laura feels.� Other stories it is a mannequin doing the sucking.� I say that because there is no emotion or ummphfff to the sex.� We see how "eager" Laura is to get her nipple treat.� Plus, you show how she sucks that divine treat deep into her mouth and gives deep throat love sucks.� I so worship sucking on nipples and cocks.� With your vivid visual imagery I am right there with Laura as she sucks and cups the tit to love squeeze.� I mean isn't this so much more than� "she sucked Ashley's nipple."� You show us Laura using her mouth and hands (how original!) and then you give us the sounds of snuffling we make when we super suck on a nipple, pussy, cock or asshole.� I keep saying only you, but you are super, duper alone with your use of vocalizations.� I have marveled and despaired with the silence in other stories.� I just so tired of it.� You keep your stories so noisy (not sure how to phrase).� I keep marveling that only you do this and happy that I found you.� Plus, with your divine prose I can be there with Laura as she love sucks on Ashley's nipples.� I love nipples because you never know what a woman may have.� Some are thick / slender, long /short, then you have smooth to crinkly, some with cute dimples.� How some are more pulpy as I gnaw and bend over if long enough.� You give me enough details to know how I would attack a woman's nipples.� I so love feeling it between my lips and tongue lathing / batting and jamming and deep throat suck or jam into the roof of my mouth (thank you for that trick) making them whimper.� Plus, for me the tactile is so important as I do oral.� How I am cupping, squeezing or pulping your tits.� I moan feeling the weight of your tits and the warmth.� I also love feeling it slide along my tongue as I work in and out my mouth.� I love this with cocks.� Feeling a man's dick head sliding up and down my tongue and jamming the back of my throat and roof of mouth as they fuck my mouth hard with various angles.� Using my hands to pump the shaft fucking my mouth or stroke their belly and thighs as I revel in their hardness.� I love finding one author that so understands the use of hands during sex. You now show us the pleasure that Ashley
is feeling.� Other author will tell you
maybe once that the woman being given oral moans once to show us it is
pleasurable but no more.� You on the
other hand actually show us the moan with your divine vocalizations.� I mean it just takes it to another
level.� I have wondered since discovering
you how this is so.� It seems so basic
but it is not.� Hearing Ashley moan just
gets me so wet.� Then you show the ramping
of sex that I find so thrilling in your stories [Laura sucked. She
sucked and sucked, at first gently, lovingly, then more insistently, even
roughly, digging her fingers into Ashley's hard little breast and sucking
Ashley's thickening, hardening nipple down to her throat. Ashley by now
was whimpering softly, and beating her elbows back against the sofa.]� Other
authors simply forget to show us how sex ramps up from slow to more urgent and
faster.� Again, it is natural to sex but
they do not capture this.� So strange. I
so know that fuck hunger overwhelming me and making me go faster and
rougher.� I simply must consume you.� I love how you detail Ashley's nipple getting
rock hard with Laura's loving ministrations.�
Again you are showing the ramping of sex that I adore.� You give us the divine sounds of Ashley
whimpering under her love assault.� Then
the nice detail of her elbows slamming the sofa back.� I love to see my love sluts losing control as
I work them.� My goal is by the time I
get to your pussy it is a soaking mess all swollen and ready for hard
loving.� I love smaller tits because I
can cram down my throat and suck so hard as I work your nipple with my
tongue.� I so love to pulp your tits as I
make you swoon and groan so hard as I ask if you want it harder and I always
get yeessssssss.� I Pulp and then rise up
and smack your tits so hard as they jolt and flop and with most of my rough
fuck sluts I smack their faces so hard as I watch my white bitch's faces turn
red and my black angels jolting and sagging as I pull your hair jerking your
head up and slamming into the bed as I curse you calling you a bitch or a
fucking goddman fucking nigger as I see your nipples getting even harder it
seems and your cunt flooding harder.� I
love to take my time but often what happens is what is happening here.� You so catch the change of pace.� I know Laura is planning on consuming
Ashley's tits and work her way South for some divine black gash but Ashley has
other thoughts.� She needs Laura's
cock.� I love it.� This was not looked for and it is
happening.� I can guarantee that other
authors would finish the oral sex before moving on to another sex act.� It is that lack of imagination again.� You show how sex is dynamic.� I will lead things along until my slut whimpers,
begs, suggests or commands another path.�
My thoughts generally are we will get to awesome orgasms and how we get
there is not so important.� Only if I am
totally consumed by fuck hunger do I insist the fuck go down a path I have
already picked.� Plus, it shows more of
that communication between women that I so love.� You show the spontaneity of life and not the
boring script of other stories.� Ashley
knows that her lover will listen and try to satisfy her needs.� I love that in your writings.� Women trying to truly please each other.
I am smiling seeing Laura a little breathless with her hurry to get her strap-on and the need coursing through her body ["Here I am," she gasped as she pulled up again at the sofa, unable to keep her eyes from going briefly, madly, lecherously wild at the site of Ashley's black naked body against the stark white fabric. "Here . . . let me get . . . this on . . . and . . ."������� Ashley was smirking up at her, sassy and pert, looking good enough to devour. "God, it's so obscene," she giggled, reaching out with one hand and stroking the shaft that now protruded from Laura's groin with her fingertips. "Isn't it a little bigger than a real cock?"] �I am so happy when you show the emotion in Laura.� By seeing her lust it merges with my lust and I can get into the story so much deeper.� Your adverbs of madly, lecherously, just adds so much to the story.� We can see her desire for Ashley.� Other stories never show the woman actually feeling anything.� They simply say this as part of the script and setup.� Never from the woman herself.� I have often thought you should be a screen writer.� Then we see the confidence of Ashley.� She would not be looking like she is without an innate inner confidence.� I can just see that smirk.� I believe in using a big cock.� I want my women to know they have been truly fucked.� I love my nine and half inch cock.� I have spares and black and white cocks according to my woman's desire or who is fucking me.� I love to see a newbie gasp and shudder when they see my dick if they have not partaken of bigger cock.� I so love to see their wonder and how they are tentative at first but soon are bobbing hard as I skull fuck them and then slamming deep up their pussies and assholes.� I do realize it is competitive of me.� I want to use a bigger dick than the norm.� I want to shock and awe!� It is the little moments that I so adore in your writings.� Ashley the slut is giggling as she strokes the cock soon to be plowing her fuck hole.� That is so sweet and a little innocent.� The juxtaposition is so endearing.� I love fucking young teenagers and seeing this merging of the innocent and the slut.� Knowing I am teaching them to be totally in tune with their body and go for all the pleasure this short life can give you.� You are constantly changing gears in your sex.� The strap-on has made its appearance but you show Laura falling on Ashley one more time and pulling her close pressing skin to skin as her lips travel all over Ashley's upper body.� I so love to feel your body under my fingers and you are the only author to show this.� I too clutch you and pull you tight so our tits mash, bellies wallow and mouths mate tight in deepening love.� I so love to dig my fingers into your tits and ass.� I love it in reverse when my lover is mauling me showing me how much they love me and are going to love rape me.� Only you capture the kissing of areas other than the main erogenous zones.� It is only with working the whole body that you make a woman have full body orgasm.� Thanks for showing this yet again.� You are a treasure for showing this where no other author does. One thing I have always loved about your writing is the moment of penetration.� Other authors just say the cock goes in the pussy or asshole basically.� They don't make it special.� We like to be penetrated because it feels good and you actually show us.� Other authors just state the het fuck is starting and have the cock slide in home without any emotion if you ask me.� You give us this [Ashley had fallen silent now, and she gazed rapt and still with anticipation into Laura's eyes. Laura looked down to guide the shaft with one hand into the puckering blossom of the girl's swollen pussy, it's wavy black lips now parted to reveal the hot glistening pink interior, ready to receive the invader.������� "Unnngghmmmnnhh!" Ashley groaned softly as the long stalk penetrated her, wincing slightly, her eyes fluttering open, still staring up glassily into Laura's. "God . . . that thing is bigger than it looks."������� Laura pushed it in deep, but still slowly.������� "Unhhhh! Oh shit. God, Laura, that feels good!"]� I mean the emotion you capture here is so freaking sweet.� I can just see my love's face looking like this when I approach with my dick.� I know I have the same look.� I don't care how many times my archangels have fucked my cunt and asshole with their cocks it is still so fucking special.� Looking deep in their eyes as they stroke my kitty making it slosh and coat their cockhead they are running up and down my slit and rubbing hard over my clit making me cry out for it and hump in helpless pleasure and need.� My eyes just zero in on the cock as it approaches my pussy from missionary, spoon or similar position.� I love seeing your hand guiding your dick and feeling it explore my passion flower or rosebud.� Plus, you describe Ashley's pussy and how swollen and wet it is.� Other authors make me think women are like mannequins without a quim to devour and plunder.� I can just feel their connection with their hot stares of renewing love.� then the penetration.� You show us the pleasure that Ashley is feeling as Laura's big dick sinks into her cunt.� I never, never get this from other authors.� The dick just penetrates and they begin to fuck.� You are allowing the sex to ramp up from this moment of penetration to the cataclysmic finale.� Then you show Ashley's face slashing with Laura's love cock sinking in deep.� I so love the little details when I fuck.� I observe so closely to burn these little moments into my mind that you put in your writings so I can relive them again and again.� Sigh, hearing her croak how good it feels going in.� Communication is vital to great fucking and you show it.� It does not have to always be verbal which you also show.� When I am with my male lovers alone or with my playmates and I see the bucks catching eyes and motioning heads to communicate how they are going to rape us next is so hot seeing.� I probably catch things when my angels don't but that is their loss.� I love watching people.� I have to smile as you continue to show the full body loving with Laura sucking on her nipples hard and moving her mouth all around her upper body as she slowly pumps her dick balls deep into Ashley's young belly.� I so love to fuck a slut and seeing her tight pussy clutching my dick and her inner lips pulled out all pink and wet before I punch deep into her cunt sleeve again.� I so love to love to tilt your head over as we begin a love fuck and suck your neck viciously into my lips and teeth and give you a vicious hickey as you buck, wallow, clutch against me gurgling and moaning how much you love me.� There are so many things that only you show.� Writers should flock to your site to see how to write hot, realistic sex with great plot development that is not boring to read.� You don't put in a bunch of extra crap that takes away from the story.� They need to observe your dialog and attention to small details especially. I love it!� How you bring the small intimate moments that bind women's souls.� We see Laura sinking her dick all the way into Ashley's belly and pauses.� This is a magical moment.� I so gag and whimper like Ashley when I feel a large prick sunk deep into my womb or shit hole.� I just feel so stuffed and filled with hard cock.� I feel like I am connected to you.� With women it is spiritual this connection.� I just lock eyes with my woman and feel the love flow.� With men it is primal, physical.� They are taking me and I know it as I burn my eyes into their eyes telling them to pound the shit out of my womb and tear my asshole in two.� Part of the reason women bound is the tenderness we put into our fucks.� You show kissing Ashley while things are moving slow and then kissing face and shoulders and then siphoning her nipples some to give her the extra jolt of some titty sucking to get her clit thrumming.� Men may kiss you and suck your tits but not the other.� That is why we rock!� I am thinking here (paused for a minute) I can't think of one story by another author showing this loving the woman with your hands and lips right before the het fuck.� Again it is something only you capture.� I have to smile at Ashley love smiling and beginning to rotate her twat into Laura's cock and beginning to hump encouraging Laura to fuck her.� I so know that fuck hunger that tells your cocksman to plow your furrow and pound your mound.� I have to chuckle at Ashley crying out for it and Laura afraid that she might not get to fuck Ashley as long as she� wants.� [Laura released Ashley's wet nipple from her mouth long enough to answer her. "Slow down, honey," she smiled, speaking softly. "You don't want it to be over too fast, do you? I want to kiss and lick every bit of you. God, I love your body. So firm and smooth."������� And with that she resumed devouring it in every way possible, though now she also began to probe and pump Ashley's pussy gently, still unwilling to pick up the pace, which Ashley clearly wanted.������� "Oh! Unh! You're taking too long!" Ashley panted, churning her hips.]� Sigh, you so capture a great female het fuck.� I so work my whole woman's body to bring her to a feverous pitch.� I so love to kiss, nip, clutch and pluck your body driving you to the heights of need and want.� Slowly working my cock into your cunt.� Looking down and seeing your inner lips clinging to my cock on the out stroke and then driving them hard into your pussy and with my savage in thrust as I make you gag and shudder.� I will fuck you so good and make you cum quick and then hold my dick deep in your fuck hole as we kiss and cuddle only to ramp up again and really fuck you good after the edge has been taken off and we can fuck long and gloriously.� I so love how you show how the woman receiving is feeling it.� I never get to see in other stories the churning of hips into my thrusts like I do with you. I am so there as this hot fuck continues.� Though I do love to take you quick so I can
take you again there are times that I want to take longer but my woman simply
won't let me.� I am smiling at this
because you so capture fucking.� With
other stories there is no variation to the fucking.� The het fuck just happens without any
details.� Of course, without details how
can you show any variation to the fuck.�
They will talk about the fuck getting harder and faster but it is so
linear and boring.� The fuck simply gets
faster because that is the nature of the fuck but they don't show how it flows
and morphs in the fuck.� Without this
variation fucking would really become boring very quickly.� Me, I am a total slut.� I love to cum hard and quick when het fucking
and then continue to be fucked to total exhaustion as you pound my willing fuck
holes.� I was looking for something
different and was at local black swing club and soon enough I was surrounded by
suitors.� The females were slinking all
over me and the males puffing their chests.�
I was smitten with Kordell.� I had
seen him a few times but had been there to pick up a lady angel.� I had heard of his thick ten inch dick with a
light colored bulbous dick head.� I was
soon back at his house and on my knees sucking on his beautiful rock hard black
dick.� It was so hot.� Soon I was on my back on his bed as he
pounded me so hard and deep.� I was
whooping and bucking like Ashley here.� I
needed it and I was going to get it.� My noises
and obvious enjoyment really inspired him to slam his dick into my clutching
cunt.� I loved how he got up on his palms
to pound me hard then grinding me down to the mattress with his body as he
flexed his strong hips to impale my womb as I clutched his hips with my legs
and looped my arms over his strong back as my womb simply exploded with
scalding seizures of pure ecstasy as I cawed and cried out in shattering
pleasure my body bucking into his hard belly and chest grinding and bucking.� Gods my orgasm was so long and full of
crushing spasms.� He let me recover
before stroking me harder getting me wound up again.� We fucked all positions so good and I was
weeping tears of scalding pleasure as I convulsed and bucked through my third
orgasm as he did me spoon clutching my tit with one hand pulping it and his
other gripping my hip hard to position me for his womb piercing slam
thrusts.� His suddenly spurting hot bolts
of semen flooding my womb as I convulsed through my orgasm that went on and
exploded into a fourth orgasm as my cunt spasmed on his cock as it finished
spurting into my womb as I sagged into the bed my neck exhausted as I drooled
on the mattress my eyes rolled back as those fucking aftershocks filled me with
fucking bliss as I groaned deep in my chest and my continued to hitch and
shudder so hard as molten bliss flowed out my cunt to my nipples and besotted
brain making them pulse with spent bliss.�
Then later when he had recharged he fucked my a-hole so good as well as
my pussy.� I loved how he hissed what a
slut and white bitch I was when I pulled his dick from asshole to my flowing
cunt and impaled myself and then later when I eagerly turned around when he
croaked he wanted to see my suck my ass off his black dick.�� I am so there as you show Laura kissing and clutching Ashley as she pumps her sodden pussy and the way she is trying to control the fuck but Ashley is controlling it.� It only seems fair since she is the fuckee.� Like I say, women love the whole body.� When I was fucking Kordell he didn't do any of the total body love like Laura and women do.� I can just feel those squirts of pleasure that Ashley is feeling as Laura sucks her nipples as she impales her.� I so love feeling a woman encircling me with her arms like Ashley here as I fuck her and she draws me close as our tits mash and sweaty bellies wallow and slide.� With a woman being wound up like Ashley is here it can only end in the divine way that you are show here ["Unh! Unh! Unnmmgggghhh!" Ashley grunted. "Oh yes! Oh fuck! Oh yes!"������� Laura slid it in deep. Ashley seemed to love it deep. She whinnied and groaned with sharp outbursts of pleasure when the dildo rammed down into her pussy, for Laura was now drilling her more than fucking her. Ashley lay on her back on the sofa with her knees up around Laura's shoulders, her cunt uptilted to take every inch of the dildo into it. Laura was all over her, fucking her the way she wanted to be fucked, roughly, deeply, ramming her, piercing her. She had rarely seen a woman or girl who loved this hot frenzy more.������� "Mmmmnnggg . . . oh honey . . . oh honey . . . you are so beautiful . . . so lovely . . . so hot . . ." she murmured, panting, to Ashley, consumed by hunger for her body, matching Ashley's fuck-frenzy with her own while still shocked deep down by the way they had both descended so quickly into this sexual mania.������� "Ungghh! Awwonngg! Oh fuck yes!" Ashley gasped. "Ummmm . . . ummmm . . . ummmm . . . oh . . . it's . . . ohhhhh fuck!"������� "Yes . . . honey . . . yes . . . come for Laura . . . come for Laura . . . yes . . ." Laura panted to her.������� "Anngghh! Anngghhh! OHNNGG! AHHNNGGGNNNIIIEEE!" Ashley suddenly cried out, her body flipping and jackknifing under Laura, nearly throwing Laura off since they were both precariously perched, Ashley on the bottom and Laura gingerly on the top, on the narrow sofa cushions. "Oh shit! AUUNGGGHHHH!" she roared again as a second shattering spasm shook her body.]� Now this is why we fuck het style.� I read het stories hoping to get good stories of how it is to fuck het style and I am totally disappointed.� It is the vocalizations that make me go crazy when I read your stories.� Other stories are so fucking silent.� I mean it is hearing my sluts grunt, groan, caw as I ramp them up that inspires me to fuck them harder and harder.� Each grunt makes me want to love rape you even harder as my cock pumps your flooding cunt or leaking asshole with plunging thrusts as I pull you to me our sweaty bodies wallowing as I kiss your body and mouth if position allows as tongues plunge in hot pure love.� I can't emphasize enough how important your vocalizations are.� This lets the reader know this orgasm is a golly-whooper.� Other authors don't give the sounds of a woman cumming hard and therefore it lessens the fuck to the bland ordinary.� Please always besot the reader with your divine vocalizations. You describe this story so expertly.� I get so tired of stories making a fuck seem so ordinary.� You need adjective and adverbs to let the reader know this is a hot fuck.� How both women are striving and working hard for Ashley to cum hard.� You need words like "rammed down, drilling her, roughly, deeply, fuck-frenzy".� When a fuck is described in a clinical manner then it becomes boring.� But with these words and phrases we see how hot the fuck is.� We can just see their sweat dripping off their bodies, the way hips flex to slam dick deep into womb, nipples rock hard and poking and dragging over tits as bodies press at times as their love ramps up.� You actually describe and detail your sex.� I mean this is what is needed to make it hot.� I get so tired of not seeing this in other stories.� I mean they are not exactly the same of course but the general tired and bland descriptions lets the reader know what sex act is being performed but no details to draw you into the fuck.� My pussy is really wet reading this because I am in the fuck and my belly is spasming needing a good fuck soon.� I am so thankful to find an author that constantly lets the reader know the pleasure of the woman being fucked.� You make it clear that Ashley is reaching nirvana with the punishing hammer fuck she is receiving.� Her grimaces and slashing face showing her fierce pleasure.� I love how you show that they are becoming one in a spirit of love.� Laura is being drawn into Ashley's fuck hunger.� Laura is a lot more gentle than me but she has been consumed by Ashley's need.� She is now ram fucking Ashley with her dick slamming it deep into her belly and slam fucking her womb as Ashley whoops.� This makes me go wild as I hear you woofing and gurgling as I fuck you with my dick inspiring me to rape your fuck hole even harder.� I so love to be on the receiving end as I surge and cry out for harder and feel those dick(s) slamming so hard into my womb and shitter driving me towards dying ecstasy.� I love how you show women working their wills on each other.� Laura is more slow and steady and Ashley is like me wild and hard.� Fucking her lovely body has filled Laura with Ashley's fuck hunger.� Now she is ram fucking Ashley's lovely, nubile body.� I am smiling great big.� I love seeing you show this loving dynamic between women.� Gods, I love the details.� The way that Ashley has pulled her legs back, her knees by her woman's shoulders.� Oh gods, this so opens your fuck holes to devastating slam fucking.� I have never seen this detail in other stories.� Again that blandness I so bemoan.� I can just see her face as I chuff and look down into her slitted eyes as I flex and spear her womb with my big dick.� My sweat dripping off and splattering all over her sweaty face and upper chest.� See her head jolt back as I again and again spear my dick into her womb as I see her body tightening up as I fuck her even harder.� I would be love chanting to her like Laura.� I love to murmur and croak to my woman how beautiful she is.� How I want her.� How I am fucking her so good and hearing her grunt back in the affirmative.� It is only with this communication that we can express this and only you show this.� This is why I go on so much about this lack of communication in other stories.� Without seeing this in stories it just makes the silence so deafening.� It makes me frustrated this lack of sounds as I make so clear.� I really love how Ashley's has her legs pushed back to open her pussy for full, balls deep penetration.� Last night I was fucking Maria missionary face to face spearing her asshole.� I fucked her long and hard and made her cum three times with hard ass, pussy and lots of a2p fucking.� I could feel her tightening up again.� I rose up and hooked her legs behind the knees and folded her back and pressed her down with me on palms and simply slammed her asshole with all my strength with punishing hard, fast strokes.� Her ass was rebounding off the mattress up into my punishing down thrusts.� Her hands were clutching my hard biceps her head thrashing her eyes now bulging her head a few inches off the bed as it jolted on her tense, spasming neck.� She was close.� I screamed at her "Cum on my dick fucking your asshole you Fucking Goddamn Illegal Alien Cunt � you fucking piece of Mexican shit!�Cum you fucking cunt!"� I grunted as I slammed fucked her with all my strength.� Her grunts were now so guttural as her groin spasmed up into my dick slamming up her colon.� I felt her fingers now jerking on my biceps and then her whole spasmed rock hard stiff as I nailed her to the bed with pile driving thrusts.� Suddenly she was screaming all caps like Ashley with her head now slamming up and down into the mattress her ankles herking and jerking by my ears.� She screamed three times as her head slammed so hard into the mattress and her left hand ripped off my arm and now slammed the mattress too.� She cummed so long and hard.� As she was still aftershocking hard I slipped my dick from her ruined asshole and moved up over her and lowered my hips and gripped her head by her sweaty hair and lifted it up roughly.� My dick head waving in front of her mouth.� "Suck your shit off my dick Maria!" I hissed down to her.� I felt my eyes spasming as she moved forward and moaned as she sucked my dick deep into her mouth and bobbed slowly, twisting as she cleaned my dick.� My eyes rolled on back as I jammed my dick into the back of her throat and she choked and gurgled her hands now gripping my hips to help her bob on my cock.� I so moaned in love as she murmured she loved her asshole on my dick.� I so love my two babies. With all the things I have detailed that show the sex being detailed that leads to the orgasm and how you draw in the reader.� You have done all these things so when Ashley cums so fucking hard we are there with her.� You have set it up for the love kill.� You deliver so totally with her wails and convulsions of a shattering orgasm.� You take a fuck from the coming together, foreplay, penetration, ramping up to the slam fuck end fuck.� Then your judicious use of all caps.� Other authors use it all the time.� I am a screamer and yeller but not every time.� Plus, you know how to vary your sounds.� Some authors do use guttural sounds but unfortunately it is same sound or maybe two maybe three and it is over and over.� Then if they use caps they use it all the time.� Again, it is variety that makes sex so awesome.� There are only so many different sex acts.� It is what we do with them that makes sex so special.� It is this specialness that you capture again and again.� Your attention to detail and vivid imagination lets the reader again and again experience orgasms that are blessedly wonderful.� I can feel this fuck with Ashley and Laura.� Then the details.� Like Ashley cumming so hard that Laura has to struggle to keep her position and keep hammering her pussy.� I am not surprised when someone like Dodie almost throws me off but when Joann does it am always shocked at how such a tiny body can develop such power in her orgasmic throws.� Thank you for this great fuck. You now give us the sweet time of post coital.� I have loved how you show your women bonding after great sex.� This is so true.� The way a woman goes from thrashing and moaning like a demented whore to that slow coming down and way strong aftershocks can grip one and the way the body hitches and jerks with strong tremors.� The way the eyes stay sightless sometimes and only slowly come into focus on your lover.� I love doing that to a woman.� Making her totally spaced out and then seeing her slowly come back to me.� I see that Laura is like me.� I too like to press you down with my body missionary.� I support the majority of my weight but I want you to feel my big tits mashed into yours, our sweat soaked bellies and ribs pressed together as my dick is buried in your womb or shit hole and slowly lowering my mouth to yours as languid tongues snake and duel in your mouth as our love reaches new heights as I then kiss and nip your whole face and shoulders as I coo how much I love you and want you again and again before kissing your mouth with soul kisses sliding my tongue down your throat making you moan hard into my mouth as your legs and arms enfold me pulling me down harder.� I smirk as I feel them totally giving their souls to me for repeated hard and deep dick fucking.� Only you show post coital time.� A few might mention it but again you actually show it.� Again seeing and hearing is believing it while other authors only hint at it.� I have to smile at the little interruption to this sexual interlude.� Poor Laura freezes up and gets all stiff when Ashley mentions fucking Makeeda with her strap-on.� I have to smile at Laura being herself.� She wants to be spiritually true to her archangel.� This little bite of conflict adds some spice to the story.� I love how you keep it in the story but still have the story move forward and don't make it maudlin.� I have always smiled when Laura beats herself up like this.� I get this from some of my angels this querying about the significant other in my life.� Most are stunned that I have two main babies and then there is Dodie whom is my archangel also.� I love having my two Wetback and Jewish bitch lover as they love me to call them as I grudge het fuck them.� Unlike Laura I will go into great detail about them and how great they are to fuck and how good they are.� Most of the time they are soon in bed with them and myself and then alone with them as I share them with my archangels.� That is part of our credo, sharing our loves with each other. Another thing I have always liked about your stories is how
you show the flow of sex.� With other
authors they make everything so cyclic.�
If one woman is fucked with the strap-on then the other woman must
be fucked with the strap-on.� Of course
this happens a lot but by nowhere all the time.�
That is the beauty of being a lesbian or bi as a female.� We know of other ways to fuck.� I have always adored the way you do this over
and over in your stories.� Instead of
Ashley reaching for the strap-on she begs for some sweet trib fucking.� I love how you show the flow of sex.� Plus, you actually communicate between your
women.� In other stories the sex flows
from scene to scene with no communication between the lovers.� That is now how we fuck.� A lot of it may be with grunts and subtle
body language between intimate lovers but most of it is I want this or I would
like that verbally.� You show this.� I often wonder why other authors don't show
this.� It only takes a line or two of
dialog to show this.� Is it laziness or
simply a lack of imagination?� I do
wonder.� You now give us a page of sweet
dialog between your women.� What is cool
about this is how you continue to give us dialog.� I can guarantee there would not be this
dialog in other stories.� The setup is
done.� The coming together is done.� We have had the sex act.� I just know that other authors would not have
any more dialog.� They don't see the
need.� The plot and story development
would not need any more so why have it.�
Instead you show us some sweet dialog and bonding.� We see the sweetness and innocence of
Ashley.� She is still full of wonder at
the great sex she has just experienced and is in desperate need to fuck Laura immediately!� She needs to make her cum hard and fast!� I love fucking young girls for this
exuberance that still comes readily.�
As you get older you still relish great sex but the wonder dims.� I guess once you know what is possible on a
regular basis then the wonder goes away.�
You simply make it happen.� Then
we see Ashley digging for information.�
She wants to know how many black women Laura has fucked.� I have to smile.� Laura being her sweet self always demure when
these type of questions are asked. �Me I
try to answer as best as possible.� I
love telling black women how I love fucking black women.� When my teenage conquests ask me if I am a
MILF that likes to fuck young girls I tell them yes and I know others who would
fuck them just as good.� I love how I can
see the wheels turning in their eyes.� I
can see the hope and calculation of getting to these other women hoping to have
their brains fucked out.� I so love
making love happen.� I am just happy that
an author has this dialog that is simply not needed in the story.� The setup is done and no more is needed for
the sex to continue but you give it to the reader.� It is sweet and endearing reading this
dialog.� It makes Ashley so much more
than just a fuck toy.� Seeing her desires
and desire to simply know makes her a vibrant and dynamic young woman.� This is character development that others
never ever give. In fact you keep the sweet dialog
coming.� I have to smile at the idea of
Makeeda's mother looking down on Laura fucking a teenager right in front of her
face.� I am sure a woman of that
generation would not be understanding.�
Hehehe.� That is a little moment
that is sweet and endearing and again I guarantee that is something that no one
else would capture.� I am smiling as
Ashley is getting Laura's motor revving up as she gets on top of Laura and is
kissing and stroking her body.� I can
just feel those hands running over my belly and ribs making me gag in helpless
love and stroking my breast and if they know pulping them or if a newbie
showing her how with my hands on hers milking my tits as I moan and my legs
scissor in pleasure.� I so love that body
to body contact that only you show.� I am
just happy that one writer shows women loving their whole lover.� I so love to play my women like a violin. �I love how Ashley keeps digging about how many
other black loves she has had.� I get
that sometimes from white lovers when they find out I have fucked blacks.� I make it clear I prefer black but love all
colors.� Some are nonplussed at
first.� The men especially can be
competitive.� I tell them why
compete.� Just fuck me as good as my
black bucks.� If they are as good as
their self-advertisement and they don't show any bigotry then I might arrange a
gangbang with them and some black bucks.�
I always want to help break down any racial barriers.� With white women I am always happy to help
them explore black cock and pussy.� I
find that ALL of them jump at the opportunity.�
I love watching a white woman getting fucked hard by her first black
lover.� Sometimes it is her first black
gangbang and often it is her first gangbang.�
I love seeing them an hour later all dripping in sweat, hair a fucking
mess and dicks ripping in three fuck holes making her ramp up to yet another orgasm
of crushing bliss.� I find that white
women go crazy on their first black pussy.�
I do feel that once you go black you never go back has some merit for a
lot of white women.� They become
addicted, especially pussy.� My black
women love me bringing newbies to the black berry juice and having them go
insane trying to inhale their nipples off and bury their faces in their pussy
as they try to suck every drop of sweet cum out their exploding cunts.� I do hope that Ashley quits thinking that
whites are turned off by her beauty.� I
know that many blacks love calling themselves nigger and saying whites are
thinking that.� Many do in the
bedroom.� I am not na�ve that there are
still assholes in the world but they are getting fewer and fewer.� Especially Ashley's age.� Today's youth are really breaking down the
personal racial barriers.� I do agree
that institutionally we have a long ways to go.�
I hate man's world for many things.�
I have to love the brothers fucking Ashley.� I so love fucking close family members.� I know those brothers would have been
communicating to each subtly how they would be fucking Ashley.� I do hope the brothers cum inside their
lovers normally.� Pre cum is the most
motile anyways.� i love reading
confidence [Ashley grinned. "Maybe they're afraid I'll tear
them up in the sack."]� I do find that black women are so much more
confident at a younger age than white girls can be.� I love confidence in women and I love you
bringing it front and center yet again.�
All of your women except maybe Inky were confident and strong willed.� I love that in women.� You are stories are positive and life
affirming.�
I am loving your dialog and then you up
your game with this ["I am. Lay back. Spread 'em for
Ashley the Apprentice Lesbian. She's about to get her wings."������� Laura
smiled and spread her thighs, overcome by this marvelous girl's quirky and
captivating charm. Also, freshly consumed by lust for her delicious
compact gleaming black body. "I'm all yours, honey."]� I
love humor.� This so binds women souls
together.� it is touching with the gentle
one liner.� I will have to remember this
line and see if can work it in (in reverse of course with a teenager
seduction).� I find that humor really
makes women eyes go gaga for me.� It is
such a weapon in the arsenal of love.� it
makes them pliant like Laura here.� I
love reading how Ashley's humor is captivating Laura.� It is so true how sweetness makes women melt
for you.� I love how you tell us of Laura
spreading her legs for Ashley.� This is
the type of details that I crave and so wish that I would find in other
stories.� I so love opening my thighs to
my lovers opening my pussy and asshole for sweet invasion.� I can see the fuck hunger burning even higher
in their eyes.� Plus, you
communicate�� Ashley is stroking Laura's
fire and Laura is letting her woman know that she is on fire for it.� I love telling my slut or male lover that I
am totally theirs.� Please, oh please,
fuck me so good.� I am there as they open
their pussies up for grinding, spreading back their labia and bringing their
twats together.� I love watching my lover
working with me.� The eagerness and
sometimes concentration as she works her pelvis into position to work our
sodden twats together.� I can just see
their bodies working.� I rarely get trib
outside of your stories but when I do they just get in classic scissors and
come together and I guess grind because the authors make me assume it because
they give me no freaking details.� I have
to smile at Laura's hair trigger clit.� I
may cum fast but not as fast as Laura except on a few occasions of supper
lust.� I have to smile at Ashley now
saying what Laura had said earlier ["No, you're not," Ashley
said firmly, beginning to gyrate her pelvis.
"You're going to let me make you come." She swirled her hips
gently, and the sensation of their wet cunt flesh sliding together momentarily
took the breath away from both of them.]� I can see Ashley wanting to control the
fuck.� I am love to be controlled and
will readily submit to your will.� I so
know that gagging of pure pleasure as the tribbing starts to get that thrum of
pure pleasure to pulsing.� Tribbing is
like penetration.� You get that pleasure
that makes your pussy spark and spasm and your belly clench.� That indirect stimulation of the clit usually
lets the fuck continue.� Even with
careful mating of ones twat it is not possible to stimulate one's clit like
good oral can.� I so love feeling our
soaked cunt lips grinding and stretching.�
Our clits rubbing directly making bodies lurch with that direct
stimulation and then that indirect stimulation as the clit is indirectly ground
and pressed.� Like I just said, what trib
I do get in other stories is basic scissors.�
You do this of course but you show other positions in trib [They
had begun by half-sitting, leaning into each other, but now Ashley pushed Laura
down flat onto her back and rose up into a more dominant position, jamming her
groin into Laura's, as if she had quickly become aware that indeed this was not
going to last very long, and she intended to have the upper hand. She
pumped Laura, pumping harder and faster, working both of them into a heated
frenzy in only moments. Her beautiful little breasts swirled, and Laura
raised her hands to them.]� I think that Laura prefers the sitting
position of trib but it goes into another direction because we have another
woman involved and she takes it in this direction.� I love how you show the dynamic of them
fucking and letting the moment guide their motions and desires.� Only you capture the fluidity of fucking and
I love reading it.� I love reading of
Ashley's dominate nature. She is going to control this fuck.� I love to be dominated and I love reading
Laura being plaint to her teenage lover.�
I so love to be on my back as my woman grinds her cunt down into
mine.� Feeling her weight as she grinds
and sweeps our pussies all over each other.�
Feeling our groins collide and jolt as our pussies slide into thighs in
our exuberance.� Of course the little
details again.� I so love watching a
woman's body when is really working.� How
even small tits will slide and roll on her chest.� Sigh, I so love the details in your
stories.� Seeing Laura's hands rising to
cup, swirl and grind those little titties with focused love.�
I like the little things that get Laura
off.� I love to suck on titties like
Laura and it makes me hot but it doesn't make cum instantly like it can with
Laura.� It will help me get their but it
is not the rocket ship like it is for Laura.�
I so love to deep throat love suck a nipple or cock while I am
cumming.� I call it my love
pacifier.� Again you show the mirth of
youth ["Laura," Ashley giggled softly into her ear,
"you're weird." This angle made it impossible for their cunts
to mash together as they had been doing, but it did not prevent Ashley from
rubbing the protruding bud of her clit into Laura's, which instantly set them
both to keening and gasping. "Are you going to come?"]� It is so
sweet to see the youthful wonder of loving.�
I find things humorous but alas it has been way to many years since I
giggled over this.� I may chuckle but not
the giggle of innocence.� I love fucking
young girls.� It helps me to remember
when I was more innocent and able to wonder.�
I like how you are able to capture the dynamic of adult women and still
capture the aspects of youth.� I love how
you detail the change of angles.� The
scientist in me is always marveling at how a change in angle can make a woman's
tits behave so differently and how a change in the angle of attack changes the
sensations of getting fucked.� One of the
things I love about tribbing is how you don't get that constant stimulation and
when your clit is directly worked it makes you jolt like you just
described.� It makes you fuck all the
harder.� With trib fucking you can make
it last and last if you want by not sweeping hard and working the groin and inner
thigh and when it is time to cum then really concentrating on the clit and
reaching for paradise.� Now you do the
comparing lovers that I so love.� As
Laura sucks on Ashley's nipple she reflects on how she is able to get most of
Francine's tit into her mouth as she deep throat sucks on her nipple. Where
with Ashley's breast it is larger and more firm, thus, less is able to be
stuffed.� First, you are the only author
that shows this comparing lovers anatomy as she is fucking her current
angel.� I do this myself.� I only compare verbally with my most
confident and less jealous lovers since the green eyed monster most always be
looked out for.� So I love reading Laura
doing the same thing I do when fucking angels.�
The other cool thing about the observation is that fact that it can even
occur.� It takes a history and time for
this to occur and you set a universe where this can and does happen.�� A few stories have some length to them but
they never take advantage of the past.�
It is all so linear and just moves forward.� I love how you bring the past into the future
and work them together.� it is so hot to
read.
You now bring us to the shattering end of a another great fuck ["Yes . . . mnngghhphhh . . . yes . . . yes!" Laura panted, releasing Ashley's breast from her mouth, then quickly siphoning it up again, sucking hard, pumping, thrusting, lifting her pelvis off the sofa cushions in the attempt to jam it completely into Ashley's warm, sopping wet slit. "Fuck me, honey . . . yes!"������� Ashley, still grinding and swirling her hips in a fierce but steady rhythm, now grasped Laura's head in both hands and pushed her breast so hard into Laura's face that it mashed Laura's nose flat too, so that she couldn't breathe for a second, but then could again as she felt the ferocious rumbling of her orgasm simply explode inside her body and her breath gushed forth in sharp cries as she released Ashley's nipple and groaned into her chest.������� "Auunngghhhh! Ohnnmmgg! Auuunnggghhh!" she cried out, almost a roar, a loud shout of ecstasy, as wave after wave of excruciating pleasure ripped through her womb and curled her toes. "Oh shit . . . ohhnnnngggg!" she sighed, more softly now, as the waves slowed and weakened.]� I love how you show the striving to reach nirvana.� You give the details.� Like Laura releasing her teat to gasp out her pleasure and then jamming that teat back into her mouth to love suck again.� I so love the ramping that you show until the end of a great fuck.� One keeps working and striving to reach the goal of womb searing shattering orgasms.� Orgasms that scald the soul with pure fucking ecstasy.� I have to smile at the working of both women for pleasure.� Ashley is doing the fucking but she goes for more pleasure jamming Laura's mouth into her tit to help her deep throat love suck her nipple.� I love how you constantly show the total body loving.� I have never seen other authors showing the giving and taking of pleasure so clearly.� I have to smile at the small details like Laura's breath being blocked by all the tit meat stuffed in her nose.� I know that hot stuffy feeling of having a tit or pussy mashed into your face so hard and deep that you get this temporary blocking of breath.� I just patiently continue to do my love work and keep going and if necessary move things around to gasp a few breaths before getting back to work.� I love how you tell the reader how Laura's orgasms are different.�� They are devastating like mine but even such orgasms have different births.� Some come on lightening quick and some build and build.� The way the waves of bliss can be so different too.� Fast and numerous or that one long stiffening searing spasm that threatens to tear muscle from bone it feels like.� Sigh, the vocalizations of yet another wondrous orgasm.�� This is why we fuck to experience such ungodly pleasure.� I live for this again and again.� Attention:� Long
digression I am always looking for new situations to reach the heights of new love like Laura.� I was at the ocean front during the last warm spell we had here.� I had rented a suite with Anthony, Eric, Steven, Mercury and Jamaeel.� I was going to be fucked to death for the whole weekend.� I had taken off Friday and went down and rented the suite.� I got in a one piece bikini and meet the brothers as they came in with Jameel and I went to walk the strip.� I walked the streets a while and then went into a little mom and pop shop that has nice Mexican food.� A sweet looking girl in front of me was a little short of money and I put several dollars over her shoulder and made up the difference.� She turned to me in surprise and I noticed her almost angelic face.� I was already in love with her platinum blond hair, blue eyes and puffy nipples I could see jutting out her bikini top.� She thanked me profusely and I told her no problem and we exchanged names and I discovered her name was Angel and I told it fit her sweet innocent face.� I could tell she was nonplussed as she stepped away while I got my order.� She then came up to me and told me she was not innocent and that she was older than I thought she was.� I thought she was thirteen and told her and she told me she was seventeen.� I told her to be thankful for youthful looks since I am so thankful I don't show my years.� She sat with me and we made small talk and learned she was staying the weekend with a girlfriend a few blocks off the strip.� I was thinking I� wished I was not with the boys or I would have took her back to the suite and love fuck her blind over the weekend.� She led the conversation to sex and I helped it along since I loved learning her exploits.� She was on the road but still at the start really.� I could tell she was trying to impress me with her fucks and having taken it in the ass a few times but disappointed that the guys came so quick.� She was just really starting to feel the pleasure of anal sex when the boys spent themselves in her asshole.� She told me she had just taught herself how to do deep throat off the Internet.� Wish I had had the Internet when I was growing up.� I could have learned so much so much faster.� I finally made a decision and told her what I had planned for the weekend.� I wanted her desperately.� She was stunned.� I told her that all three of my fucks holes where going to have black dicks buried in them at the same time.� Double anal and vag fucking was sure to happen.� How I would suck my shit juice off their dicks and groan feeling their dicks sliding straight from my butt hole to my cunt.� Taking their cocks fully down my throat and telling her how long their beautiful black dicks are.� I asked her "Do you want to come to my suite?"� I told her that if she came the black bucks would rape her into a coma of pure pleasure and that her face would be buried in my cuint so many times and I would fuck her fuck holes with my strap-on along with my friends.� That I would rough her up, choke her and probably ram my fist up her asshole until my elbow was jammed in her ass.� She was wide eyed by now and her mouth hanging open.� I wanted to really make sure she knew what she was asking for.� Her almost b-cup titties were swollen and her nipples poking out her bikini top and I could smell her juicing pussy.� I pretended to drop my fork and bent under the table and sure enough she had a nice wet spot on her yellow bikini bottom.� She made the table jolt when she jumped as I ran two fingers up and down her wet slit showing through her bikini bottom.� I got up and gave her my hand and I told her to call her girlfriend and make arrangements to spend the weekend with me.� She did in a voice full of wonder.� I loved the way she kept looking at me with awe and hunger.� I took her up to the suite and all my friends were there now.� They smiled at us with interest and raw hunger at the youthful Angel.� I took her to the bathroom and told her take a shower and give herself an enema from my bag I had brought.� I told her to think more while showering and be sure.� To come out nude if she wanted to stay or put her bikini on and she could leave.� I brushed my teeth and left her in the shower. �She took a long shower while I waited.� We talked and I made introductions with Jamaeel and laughed at his humor and loved looking at his handsome face and hard body.�� I then told the guys to strip and start stroking their dicks.� I wanted her to see what she was about to fuck if she stayed.� I stripped and lounged on one of the sofa and stroked my cunt and massaged my tits making my nipples rock hard.� Jamaeel came over and I smiled looking at him.� I had not fucked him yet and I loved how he had his eight inch dick throbbing beside me as I looked down at his beautiful black dick.� He was silently asking me to suck it.� I moved my head down and latched my mouth on his dick and started to suck on it with slow undulating bobs of my head loving how he groaned in pleasure.� I then heard the door open and made sure to suck hard on his dick for ten more seconds to show Angel my love for black dick as I bobbed slowly sucking hard as I pulled my mouth off sucking wetly and fluttering my tongue over his dick head before rising up.� I turned to the door and felt my womb clench seeing Angel naked and staring at us with a lost look and beginning lust.� I quietly asked her to come to me.� Jamaeel would have to wait.� I sat her on the sofa and moved and mated our mouths and swiped her teeth and slithered my tongue down her throat when they parted for me.� I clenched her to me and love shook feeling her melt for me as I wanted the bi slut first.� I kissed her deeply as our tongues dueled and twined in rising love.� I kissed her as deep as I could tilting my head to mash our mouths tight as I slammed my tongue down her throat repeatedly as she cawed into my devouring mouth.� I quickly got her small titties in my hands and started to suck her thick puffy nipples with hard love sucks.� I began to pulp squeeze her tits making her writhe and gurgle as I mashed her nipples into her tits.� Rubbing my palms over her rock hard nipples roughly.�� I love tits I can fist and maul completely.� I squeezed her small tits with both hands to bulge her puffed nipple up above my hard mashing hands.�� Sucking on her engorged nipples now making her writhe and caw in helpless pleasure as I rhythmically pulp squeezed her titties making her cry out in raw pleasure as I sucked her nipples with deep throat love sucks.�� I asked her if she loved it and she moaned yeesssssssss.� I continued to suck her nipples and deep throat kiss her making her my total teenage slut.� Her legs instinctively spreading out letting her wet pussy scent fill my nostrils with her need and want.� I moved up and kissed her� mouth hard and raining her neck, shoulders and face with light kisses between deep kissing.� I started to pump her little tits harder and then worked my right hand down and fingered her soaked slit and forked her clit and squeezed and pumped it making her cry out in pleasure and hump like a whore as I slide two fingers into her cunt and started to pump her squishy cunt.� I worked her for a few minutes as she worked up and I voraciously sucked her nipples and sucked all her of her tits in my mouth and deep throat sucked them.� Stretching them out as my tongue swiped her turgid nipples.� I sensed her orgasm coming and I reached up and fisted her hair and pulled her head over first softly until her neck was stretched out for me and I then meanly jerked her head hard and down and jammed my mouth into her neck and sucked it hard pulling her tender neck flesh into my mouth.� I viciously sucked it in and out my clenched teeth.� Sigh, the scream of pure love and ecstasy that filled the room as her lovely body now convulsed and juddered wildly as her cunt convulsed out hot sloshes of cum all over my slamming fingers and down my pistoning hand.� I saw that our male friends were stroking their hard dicks patiently letting me get my needed cunt meat.� I looked up at her dark blue eyes lost in helpless pleasure as her face was frozen in wild pleasure as she moaned deep in her chest now.� I laid her down on the sofa and got a foot up on the sofa and led her fingers to my cunt and she started to pump and play with my pussy and clit as I sucked on my nipples and stretched my clitoral hood back as she rubbed and buzzed my clit and worked two fingers into my cunt and kept looking me deep in the eyes as she finger fucked me so good.� I moaned out how good she was fucking me.� After a few minutes I felt my belly contracting and begged her to pump my cunt hard her knuckles ramming my mound making obscene noises.� I told her to hook her fingers and rub my frontal vaginal walls.� She soon found my spongy nerves which made her gasp when she found it and raked fast and hard.� I wailed my crushing pleasure as my body flipped and convulsed as I fought to keep my balance as my head thrashed and juddered hard forward and back as my teeth clenched so hard as I sprayed spittle between harsh groans of womb rending pleasure.� I pulled my nipples and twisted them cruelly throughout my orgasm to prolong my pleasure as my twat jammed down into Angel's slamming fingers.� I was totally spent when my orgasm finally abetted. I lazily watched as Jamaeel slowly pulled Angel off the sofa as I laid down to recover.� He led her to an open area and pushed her down to her knees.� He wasted no time and guided her mouth to his waving dick and moaned as her mouth opened wide and clamped on it and began to pump her head immediately as she sucked and twisted her head slowly reaching up to fondle and squeeze softly his nut sack.� I smiled at her already good skills.� She started to pump her head to take his dick to the back of her throat.� I softly cooed to her to pump the black dicks surrounding her.� I smiled watching her eyes look and reached up to now pump Anthony and Eric's large dicks.� I loved seeing her white hands pumping their black dicks.� She moved her mouth to Eric's bulbous dick head and swallowed it undulating her head on his dick head as she now pumped Anthony and Jamaeel dicks.� Mercury came over to me and sat beside me on the sofa and cupped the back of my neck and I swallowed his nine inch dick and groaned feeling it fill my mouth as I pumped slowly rotating my mouth on his dick.� I loved tasting his dick after a too long absence.� Steven scooted my groin up on the sofa and got me side saddle and I shook feeling his dick head rubbing over my slit and clit making me groan on Mercury's dick and then groaning harder as his dick slide into my lubricated cunt and he started to pump his dick in and out my dripping cunt.� I bobbed and glanced a lot at Angel bobbing on Anthony's dick now and Anthony gripping her head and now ramming his dickhead into her throat and listening her caw and drool spit.� She was passed around with their dicks now slamming into her throat.� Steven fucked me with hard deep strokes making my pussy spasm and juice.� I watched Angel bobbing hard and sucking good but I saw she needed some pointers to take it to the next level.� I continued to suck Mercury with hard sucks like Angel.� We fucked for a few more minutes like so when Mercury pulled on my bobbing head as I sucked his dick signaling he wanted my cunt on his dick.� As I shifted over and Mercury roughly got my hips positioned on the sofa and sank his dick into my happy pussy making my head judder and eyes half roll back.� I lifted Steven's black glistening dick.� I so love how black cocks and cunts when they get all shiny with fuck juice and sweat.�� Angel was leaving Anthony's dick and getting ready to swallow Jamaeel's dick again when I called out to her softly.� I told her she needed to work their nut sacks and use her tongue more and her whole mouth.� I told her watch me.� I started to lick up Steven's thick dick with long tongue strokes and curled my long tongue around his dick head and glans and slithered my tongue all over his cock crown making him curse and groan. I then sucked for a few hard bobs and head twist drooling spit and used my tongue to rasp down his dick and moved my head lower as my head kept jamming forward and his dick hitting my face as Mercury slammed his dick into my steamy cunt.� I loved hearing my cunt squish and feeling my juices soaking my thighs and sofa.� I lipped down his shaft and licked his nutsack and slowly swallowed a testicle and swished it in my mouth and pulled on it making his hips buck and then worked his other nut in my mouth before slowly licking up his shaft and then swallowing his dark black dick head and bobbing hard pumping his shaft with my fist and working his balls with my fingers.� I then tilted my head and gripped his shaft and bugled my cheek with his dick head until it slowly popped out my mouth before swallowing again, bobbing with slow pumps of� my head and head twisting before pulling out roughly the side of my mouth.� I looked at Angel with slut eyes and she smiled at me and I concentrated on my lovers as they passed me back and forth.� Now when I looked over Angel too was using her tongue, sucking nutsacks and pumping their dicks into her cheeks and her bucks were themselves roughly popping their dicks out her mouth and were now slapping her face hard with their dicks leaving red marks and her spit all over face and hair.� I would get my head right so I could watch thick black cock slapping cruelly over her angelic pale face.� The sounds so loud in the room as she moaned at each hard strike on her face now all covered with red strike marks and covered in spit.� How they surrounded her and I watched black cock striking her upturned face from three sides.� How she kept her face perfectly positioned to be viciously dick whipped as she groaned in defiled pleasure.� A pure slut after my own heart I already knew.� She moaned and sucked even harder on their dicks and kept her head so still and positioned as they skull fucked her and she kept her mouth wide open when they barked at her to keep her goddamn mouth wide open and she hacked and choked out spit all over her little titties and belly.� The way she lunged on the black dick heads and licked so lewdly looking up at them with pure slut eyes.� The way her face winced and she loved moans as they would again dick whip her face with their rock hard cocks.� I so know that feeling of hard dicks slashing over my cheeks, nose, eyes an forehead as I so love the pain and the way I feel so slutty and under their domination.� How the slaps of their cocks across my face is so loud in my ears along with my hard moans and whinny's of defiled pleasure.��� They got her doggy and Anthony got behind her and she looked back with lust and fear at his big eleven inches but she didn't move and even moved back towards him as he guided his dick to her wet cunt and impaled her with his massive shaft.� I was licking Steven's shaft and felt my body freeze and suddenly shake wildly as an orgasm blasted suddenly out my womb that Mercury was slam fucking.� I flipped and jackknifed wildly and exalted in pure ecstasy.� When I could concentrate again I noticed Anthony was gripping Angel's hips hard slamming her back onto his lunging dick as he buried his full manhood into her tight cunt seeing her inner folds clutching his dick on the out stroke.� Jamaeel and Eric were constantly moving Angel's head to their cocks as they knelt in front of her on their knees so she could suck them off.� Soon she came with such deep groans of crushing pleasure as her body convulsed and juddered hard.� Anthony kept slamming her womb and as she came down I smiled as he moved his dick up to her asshole over her perineum and slowly pushed into her sphincter and she keened as he slowly forced his thick dick head into her asshole.� Watching her shit hole resist and then his dick was in her rectum as she keened and her head sank to the floor. Anthony went slow but still pumped her asshole bowing out on his dick as he gripped her hip and forced his dick hard into her shitter as she cried out he was too big.� Jamaeel lifted her head up and rubbed his dick over her teeth and she immediately opened her mouth and sucked on his divine pacifier.� I had rolled over and was licking my cum off Steven's dick when I keened and juddered as my asshole was invaded by Mercury's nine inch dick that he slowly sank all the way up my shit hole.� I sucked hard on Steven's dick in happiness as I felt my asshole pumped hard and deep.� I looked over and Anthony was fully burying his dick into Angel's shit hole and I watched him slowly settle onto the floor guiding Angel into spoon and stroked his dick in and out her asshole as she propped herself up on elbow and looked back at Anthony with pure slut love her face showing the extreme anal pleasure his dick was pumping into her ass.� He pumped her hard angling his dick into her shitter fully burying it into her asshole, his dick all creamed with shit juice.� I felt my womb beginning to tighten again seeing him settle back his dick sliding out her butt hole and his hand behind her head.� I moaned on Steven's dick seeing her head easily moving down to Anthony's dick and his hand behind her head and her mouth opening wide to eagerly clamp onto his dick and bobbing softly on his dick sucking her shit off his dick.� She sucked and licked his dick head as Eric slide her around and now stuffed his prick into her asshole and pumped it hard as she sucked on his brother's dick.� Soon Anthony got up and Jamaeel laid down and she sucked on his black dick as Eric savaged her butt hole.� I was now sucking my shit off Mercury's dick as I bobbed hard and licked his shaft and nuts before sucking both again.� Angel had been rolled over and she was sucking her shit off Eric's dick as Jamaeel stuffed his black dick into her asshole.� Soon we both were coming violently as our assholes were pounded hard with black dick.� I felt my soul exalt feeling my sphincter spasming and shredding on the black dick slamming up my shitter.� �Soon we were being dp'ed with me on the floor and Angel on the sofa having all three fuck holes filled with black dick as we groaned feeling black dick heads rubbing over each other in our bellies and sucking on dicks straight out our pussies and assholes.� I was so happy at how Angel loved sucking her shit off our buck's dicks and was reveling in having three dicks buried in her body at the same time.� They way she cried out fuck, shit, damn and goddamit during her hard fucking and orgasms.� We were pumped full of loads of black semen.� I loved watching her suck Jamaeel off in her mouth and watching his body shudder as he cried out fuuuccccckkkkkk his hips lurching off the floor and the way some of it leaked out the corners of her mouth as she swallowed his load.� How later they were standing with her arms and legs looped around Mercury's torso as the other black bucks took turns raping her asshole and watching them hefting her up and slamming her down onto their lunging pricks.� Her sweaty hair jerking around and her asshole all wet and gaping as a black dick head was pulled out and another stuffed fully up her butt hole and pumped in and out savagely.� Myself reveling in feeling dicks sliding over each other in my belly and feeling their dick heads spewing semen deep up my fuck holes.� How we fucked our bucks out and then showering with Angel and then taking her to bed and fully educating her in the ways of lesbian fucking like only a MILF can.� The way she tribed me riding on top her cunt pounding and grinding into my cunt and feeling her swirling her hips and flexing them up and down to ride our cunts until I was wailing and jackknifing wildly in womb scalding shocks of crushing bliss.� Then getting her up and pulling her forward and settling her pussy on my belly and starting her to pumping my stomach up and down.� The way her face shocked and froze in wonder and then slashing as I ground her cunt up and down my stomach feeling it getting soaked in her cunt juice.� I could feel her clit dragging over my hard muscles and her labia lips being stretched and ground by her mound mashing my stomach.� I leaned her forward and I sucked in her small titties and siphoned her nipples as I humped up into her stomach.� I loved watching her little titties swirl as she ground up and down my undulating stomach.� How she groaned so dementedly as her face slashed in helpless pleasure.� The way she threw her head back and whinnied in pleasure as she surged her swollen cunt up and down my hard stomach.� We fucked in deepening love as we now kissed deeply and then I wolfed her tits down my throat as I loved sucked her nipples.� Soon she was humping down desperately as her head thrashed and demented groans flowed from her throat as she pumped down with all her strength as I gripped her hips to help her grind cunt into my flexing stomach.� She had been gripping the sheets but she was now gripping my tits as her anchor and I loved feeling her pulping them in spastic clutches as I felt her body beginning to hitch and tighten.� I could see her face tightening up and her face spasming with her approaching orgasm.� I reached up and pulled her down.� I swallowed her left tit and supper sucked as I gripped her hips and slammed her down into my now surging stomach.� I was in heaven as she suddenly screamed her love by my ear as her cunt convulsed and� spasmed hot cum all over my stomach as I felt her hips convulse and shake as her body wallowed all over mine and she gutturally moaned out "I love you Barbaraaaaaaaa!" as I then mated our mouths tight our tongues dueling hotly to deepen our love even more.� Our sweaty bodies melded in spent love.� The beauty was in the middle of the night we were again puonded to heaven by black dicks as they now chocked and gasped us as they roughed us up with hard slaps, hair pulling, spitting and double anal as Angel learned that pleasure too.� Then a long rest session before more hot lesbian loving.� We then took a long rest brake before we again gave ourselves to our black lovers on Sunday afternoon before I again made love to Angel Sunday night with her cunt and then asshole taking my love fist.� I slammed my fist fully up her belly and jamming back down against her tired inner sphincter.� I so loved how her body juddered and shook with her sweat soaked hair lankily jerking as my fist lunged up her asshole to my elbow.� Collapsing my fist and sliding out her shit hole and gripping her sweaty hair with my shit juice soaked hand pulling her around by it and then rubbing her face all over with my hand soaking her face in her shit cream and then licking and kissing off.� Then guiding her around again and kissing her ass as I once more wormed my hand into her colon and forming my love fist and once more ramming fully up her shit canal.� How she keened feeling my fist in deep in her belly and cried out feeling the crook of my arm slamming into her ass cheeks.� Swooning and feeling my eyes half roll and spasm so hard as she keened�groaned� and cried out she loved feeling my fist "oh god, your ruining my asshollleeeeee � more, more oh god I love it!"� The way she came so violently with full body spasms and wild jackknifes as I jerked my fist in the middle of her belly and then finished her off with two final slams of my fist fully up and down her colon.� When she finally recovered and got her strength back I was looking in the mirror as she got behind my ass and worked her fist into my shitter.� I so loved feeling her bury her fist up my asshole.� She stroked my lower butt hole as I gagged feeling her working my rectum and pounding my sphincter.� I felt her hand relax and slip through my loosened rosebud and now she was in front of me worming her hand all over my face soaking my sweat covered face in my ass cream.� Then moaning as she licked off and then she kissed me deeply with her tongue soaked in my asshole.� How she slapped my ass and told me to pull my ass cheeks open and gagging in helpless love feeling her tongue easily sinking deep into my asshole and her tongue lathing my tired rectum and colon meat.� Feeling her clamp her mouth tight and French kissing my shit hole her tongue slithering in my colon folds as I pushed my colon into her tongue.�� She sucked so hard on my butt hole as I was pushing into her probing tongue as I gasped and groaned my shocking pleasure.� Then she slipped her hand back into my asshole and pumped me hard.� Slipping her hand out a few more times as I keened feeling her knuckles rippling over my ruined shitter.� Again reveling in feeling her hand soaked in my asshole roughly massaging my face before she licked clean as I purred and we kissed in building love.� She shoved her hand into my ass and I moaned for deeper.� She finally worked up her confidence and soon she was ramming twisting her fist deeper into my belly as I whinnied in fierce pleasure.� I love shook and cried out fuck as she worked her fist deeper up my ass.� Finally she was slamming her fist fully up my asshole her elbow jamming my ass cheeks.� I was in love shakily looking back and seeing the pure slut in her.� The way I could tell she loved the pleasure she was giving me and feeling my asshole sliding up and down her plunging arm.� How hot it looked in the mirror or looking back and seeing her elbow jutting out my asshole and her kissing my ass and licking my shit cream off her forearm.� I so love seeing the little things.� The way she pulled her fist out my asshole and smeared my face in my shit and hungerly licked it off yet again.� Doing it again and then jerking my clit off as she slammed my asshole with full arm strokes fully up my colon.� Gods, I came so hard seeing her sweet innocent face kissing and nipping my ass cheeks as her free hand jerked me off wildly now to a screaming, jackknifing orgasm of perfect love and bliss.� Totally losing it and finally coming to enough to realize I was prostrate on the bed her arm fully up my asshole as she kissed my back and murmured she loved fucking me.� Her other hand mashed by my mound into the mattress as she gently worked my spent clit and swollen labia lips producing those hard aftershocks that make my belly convulse, toes curl, eyes spasm and love moans caw deep in my throat.�� How I groaned and drooled into the mattress thinking of how lucky I was to have this angel in my life now.� I was already planning on how soon I could share her with my archangels for deep hard fucking. End of long digression:�
I love how you tell us that Laura only slowly comes out of the fog of her orgasm.� Mine are like this too.� I am often stunned and groggy after a womb shattering orgasmic affair.� I will mumble and love moan as the last aftershocks fade away.� I so love that feeling of sweet lassitude of spent body and spirit.� I feel so sexy and loved at these moments.� You then pay off with the cute line that Ashley had earlier about earning her wings.� Nice bringing around of the story.� I know that Ashley must feel real proud and happy at this moment.� Like I say, it is these moments that truly bind souls together.� you being the master give us some last lines of sweet dialog ["Guess I did," Ashley gulped. "Now I can fly. Want to do it again?"������� Laura sat up, gently moving Ashley aside and then embracing her from a sitting position, giving her a warm, lengthy kiss. "Have some pity on an old lady," she said. "Give me a few minutes to recover?"]� I love Ashley because she is always ready to go at it again.� I thank the gods that I am still horny at my age.� I can still fuck my pussy and butthole to ruin over and over until my body is simply exhausted.� I have to smile at Ashley not being able to keep her mouth shut.� She again mentions Makeeda's mother's picture.� I do think it is deliberate but then again some teenagers seem to be oblivious to the obvious sometimes.� I have to give Laura credit for brushing aside the potential love kill and rekindling the air of love.� Of course smelling Ashley's divine fuck musk doesn't hurt.� I love how you end the chapter with the more sweet loving just on the horizon.�
I have to smile
how this chapter starts out ["Auntie Laura, why do people moan when
they have sex?"]� There are several reasons for my big
smile.� The first is the fact that I know
that major humor is coming.� I have seen
Laura simply die when she is confronted with sexual situations that confront
her sexuality or the fact that she is a wanton slut like myself.� I know she is going to turn beat red and
start to stammer.� One of the great
things about this is the fact that I know this.�
The reader who has followed this story for any length of time has come
to know Laura.� We know how she will
react in certain situations.� Only by
giving the reader chapters to come to know a character can the reader do
this.� Plus, you are consistent with your
portrayal of Laura.� You have remained
true to the nature that is Laura.� I have
seen Laura grow and come to accept her true lesbian self.� She has truly grown and changed slowly from a
woman who could not believe herself to be gay to a
woman who no longer sleeps with men.� A woman who went ballistic when her lovers slept with other women
to a woman who can accept it.� Though sometimes I can hear her grinding teeth.� I say it like that because she is still
jealous but has grown and choose to not be a hypocrite.� I have to smile.� She knows that Makeeda sleeps with others and
"accepts" it but when confronted with it, she is more her old self.� She has changed and grown but you have kept
true to Laura.� She simply cannot become
like me who is totally open to multiple relationships
with women and sport fucks men.� I have
seen many stories where a woman totally converts to lesbian or group sex with
men and or women and it is like overnight and sudden.� You show that true change comes with
time.� Laura had to first accept herself
and then work to embrace that change.� I
love that you have shown this.� Not only
has Laura changed with time for the better so have others.� What I like about this is the fact that your
change is positive.� My father has a
saying "It is a lot easier to go down than up.".� I have seen that so much.� I know some women and guys that I grew up
with and I remember them telling me I will not be like this or that and they
grew up to be exactly what they said they would not become.� Mostly not becoming their parents and yet
becoming them in large measures.� Making
the same mistakes their parents had made.�
I will not be like my parents and they are.� I love my parents and so respect them, but
they both, like all people had faults and I do not carry those on.� True, I have my own set to weight me
down.� So, you have shown the
positive.� I love that in your stories.� I like reading stories of women being
denigrated and brought down in the bedroom.�
One author has strong black women totally "enslaved" in the bedroom and
maybe in a situation for a time (sometimes months) but they eventually leave
it.� I like that for a change of pace but
they do give me that soul deep pleasure.�
It is fluff.� Your stories are
real life.� Plus, you make it funny!� I mentioned that you have shown other women
develop so positively and I really, really love that.� This story is about Laura and yet you take
the time to make other women grow and change for the better.� I keep thinking about Deshona and Randi.� Deshona was a
frozen, cold bitch that with Laura's love is now maybe frosty on the edges but
she is much warm and giving now.� I melt
for Deshona when she enters the story.� Randi was a mean spirited bitch at times that was super
competitive.� Now she has left that
demeanor behind and is now so much more loving and not as self-absorbed.� You did not have to do this.� The story is about Laura not these other
women but you develop them in such a positive manner.� There are many other examples in this story
of growth.� Thank you for being so
positive.
I so love humor
in life.� At work now I don't really show
my humor anymore and it sucks.� I know my
co-workers miss it.� I so love to
experience it in real life and love reading it.�
I know that you will get all you can get out of this situation.� Of course little children are curious about
this thing we adults make into such an event that can seem clouded in mystery
and very something special.� I love how
Laura gives an answer that I would try.� Logical and very plausible.�
When you try to deflect, put a germ of truth in it and it makes it a
whole lot easier.� Her comparing it to a
yawn that makes you feel all better is very good.� A good yawn can make you feel wonderful.� As soon as I read that line I couldn't wait
to see what Alana would say.� The beauty
of children is you never know how their minds are going to work.� When she asks Laura about why she moans soft
and her mommy loud I knew Laura was in trouble.�
I have been in this situation a few times and made to squirm like Laura
a little.� I like the challenge of trying
to answer the question and reinforce the idea that she can't say anything about
it except to mommie and me.� I am loving seeing
Laura dying from it now.� I love how
Laura's hands are shaking and she is blushing knowing she has been caught in
the act so to speak.� I like how you show
that Alana is so smart.� She has heard
her mother with her male lover and the sounds they make.� Children are always so much smarter than we
give them credit for.� She knows that her
mother is doing something special and of course is anxious to know about
it.� I like how Laura does not take
advantage of this situation.� At Alana's
age I would have been ready to know the secrets to the kingdom I think but
Alana is not ready and Laura knows this.�
When I saw that first line, in a one shot story I
would have been sure that a story of pedophilia was about to follow.� But, with your story line I knew exactly what
was about to happen.� That is one thing I
so love about this story is that is filled with such a rich and long history to
it.
I like the fact
that the male lover is not in the picture now.�
Men are great to fuck on the side but not as the main course.� Once one has used their dick, it is time to
shoo them on their way.� I love how Laura
has shown so many women that the true path to happiness only lies with
women.� Men can fuck your brains out but
are so boring and childish with that male ego that I can't stand too much of
them outside of the fuck.� Another thing
I like is you showing that Nyomi has gotten her daughter black Barbie
dolls.� I have read and seen enough to
know that our dominate white culture can be
overpowering and I like it when black mothers make sure to reinforce that black
is beautiful to their children.� It is
these little things that I so love about your writings.� The little positive things
again.� No other author puts so
much into these moments.� I remember one
story about a 16 year old runaway girl being taken in by a 23 year old and they
finally became lovers.� It was so
positive.� But that was the end of the
story.� You have had these positive
moments for over 328 chapters now.� A few
stories had a character change like they had an epiphany.� There is a reason these are treated as
miraculous.� They are that freaking
rare.� Instead, true change comes one day
at time with constant work and effort to change one self.� Just little things that
really draw in the reader when they care about the characters.� You� make us want to care about these women
with all the little details you give us.�
I have loved how over the years you have given me so many characters to
care and long for.� You have done it with
so many wonderful women and I thank you for it.
I have to like
how Laura tries to deflect with telling Alana that there won't be any sex
because she and Nyomi are tired.� The little white lie.�
I like how you show the innocent persistence of youth.� Alana wants to know about sex and yet she
doesn't yet understand sex.� It is so cute.� I like how Alana asks if you can have sex if
you are tired.� I may start out tired but
once the fuck starts I always feel my body filling with sexual energy that
makes my body and soul hungry for a hard, hot fuck.� I have often marveled at myself over the
years.� I am always ready to fuck.� Last week I was at Dodie's
crashed on her bed. She and Frankie had gone to an event in the early evening
and I was too tired to get up and go home.�
Work had been hard as usual and got to their place and found out they
were going out later.� I sucked them off
in the shower in turn as Dodie and then Frankie took
a shower.� They sucked me off as I felt
the tension leave me from the day's work.�
I flopped on their bed.� About two
hours later I heard the door-bell ring.�
I groggily go up put on one of Dodie's
nightshirts and went downstairs to answer it.�
I felt my body tingle seeing that it was
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