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//� I like how this chapter starts with us seeing Laura and her archangel just doing the domestic thing.� This is just so cool to read in erotica.� Other authors always keep the story so scripted and predictable.� I read erotica of course for the sex (hopefully lots of it) but it is nice to get the little extra things like character development and seeing them just sharing life.� Even though we don't see them doing anything specific I just get the feel of everyday life as this story starts.� I guess since we have got to observe Laura and Makeeda together for so long now I just feel their domestic side of life.� I have to smile as Laura cannot quite control her jealousy.� She can't resist making those little digs that you get from women who are jealous or not totally confident.� I have always found it funny how Laura always got jealous over her lovers other loves.� I have always felt that I am free loving then I need to accept that in my loves.� I need them to be this way with me.� I could not live with any snipping and subtle back biting.� I am happy to see the character progression in Laura though.� In the past she would just go ballistic and act so badly when she suspected or knew her angel was in the arms of another lover.� I always felt so bad for her when she would get so upset and distraught when she would lose it and let the green eyed monster loose.� I also like the back and forth you show between lovers [Laura held her head high with mock disdain.  "I still think you're seeing somebody."  She was only half-serious, but she could get into the theatrics of it if required.������� Makeeda pursed her lips in exasperation.  "Maybe we should move down there.  Then you could keep an eye on me.  Anyway, what about you?  I know you're not 'knitting with the cats,' as you say, while I'm gone."������� Laura blushed.  "I�"������ "What about that cute, short one who makes the funny faces?  The one you were with when we first saw each other?"]� This is just so real sounding.� Two women working out their little doubts and making the other see her error and getting her to get real.� I simply don't think I have ever read such dialog and read the emotion behind the words in another erotica story.� It just doesn't happen.� The one shots don't have the history and are usually about the beginning of the love story.� Only with multi part stories can you begin to explore the emotions that you do.� It takes time for these things to bubble to the surface and then see how they will deal with them.� I just love the back and forth and the reactions that you show.� The exasperation of Makeeda having to put up with the jealousy and Laura blushing when she knows she is busted.� You show how Laura has so grown.� When she sees that she getting out of line with her jealous she sees it.� In the past she simply couldn't.� The growth that you show is that now she can.� I love that in your story arc here.� So many of your women have progressed from where they were.� The Harem and Sandy authors and some in the het world, the characters are just so locked into what they were at the beginning of the story.� Time and life experiences changes us.� It must.� Often I have seen that people seem not to grow in a positive way.� I love that you show persons whom desire for doing better and strive to do it.� My father always says "It is easier to go up than down."� Laura is growing up in her emotional maturity.� I am just so happy for her.� Her willingness to be positive and see the best in her lovers has enabled so many of them to become more than they were. �I love it.

//� I like how you show that Makeeda is so observant.� She noticed the interplay between Laura and Sara.� She may have been attracted to Laura immediately but she also observed her lover and how she was comporting herself.� I have found that women tend to be more observant than men as a general rule.� Women just seem to notice persons so much more than men do.� Several times I have almost been caught by a woman's man and he simply didn't see what was happening in front of him.� I know part of it was their inability to even conceive that their woman was getting ready to fuck another woman.� That I am totally thankful for!� But I think another part is the self absorption that most men seem to have.� They don't seem to really see things unless they think it directly affects them or better their situation.� It doesn't really mind me so much since I don't have romantic situations with them. �They are just sport fucks to me. I wonder how must women put up with it.� I like the interplay of emotions that you show ["I saw her making them.  At La Rondine, when you two came in together.  You know, I fell in love with you at first sight.  I couldn't keep my eyes off you.  I thought she was so lucky.  Cute, too.  I was jealous.  I'm still jealous."������� "Too bad I didn't ever get to meet Diane, so I could be jealous of her," Laura said, pouting and hoping to veer away from the subject of Sara.������� "You are jealous of her," Makeeda smiled.  "You frown every time her name comes up."]� I like the fact that Makeeda is able to talk about Sara without any rancor.� She simply accepts that she was with Laura at that time and not let it affect anything.� I get to see again that Laura has conquered her green eyed demon but still lets it peak out a little.� I just like the fact that she has learned to control this darker trait.� I used to think that her jealousy was so bad it was almost a tragic flaw.� I thnk it pretty much was.� I know it really hurt her earlier relations.� It has been a while since I read the earlier chapters but I can still remember the almost violent jealous reactions she had.� Sholandra and Randi come to mind.� I for some reason have been free of jealousy except for small twinges and when I feel it I jump on it mentally with both feet and stomp it to living hell.� You can't let your darker aspects get to even first base.� Most emotions I can control very well.� The only thing I really have a problem with is shooting off my mouth and reacting to the immediate moment.� As I get older I am slowly learning control but it is slow.� Sort of like Laura and her learning to control her jealousy.� I like how you have shown that it has taken her hundreds of chapters to change.� She has slowly seen the need to change and you show her positive character by making the changes.� I used to be amazed and now accepting that so many people simply don't want to change.� It is always "why should I change" with almost all people.� All changes starts from within and I see that in Laura.� She has seen how her past relationships failed and that jealousy was a major part of their failures.� I just like how you make it part of the storyline.� Her ability to change herself.� Still, she lets her tragic flaw leak out from time to time.� Plus, I love how you show a little deviousness on her part.� Sure, she is jealous but she is also trying to divert and obfuscate.� This I do too.� When I sense conflict coming I try to know and read my women to see how to deflect.� I just hate conflict so much.� You show again how lovers read each other.� I can just see Makeeda's smile when her woman reacts exactly like she knew she would.� I simply never see this in other stories.� One shots can't show this, to know a person over time and other stories simply never go here.� You know how to show these life moments things and still keep the heat of the erotica sky high.� You balance them both masterfully.

//� one thing I have liked about your stories is we get to see Laura's thoughts.� We get to see how her mind works and the emotions that are coursing through her veins.� I am not to sure about the voices an author uses but I think most keep it strictly third person impersonal.� They tell a story.� This is alright and I can understand it since this is erotica.� Some stories do give me a little first person(?) perspective but it is limited.� It usually only occurs when they are being overwhelmed by the sexual situation.� Of course I love reading anytime how a woman is being overcome by lust and how it is affecting her body and overwhelming her mind.� The only problem is the sameness of how almost all authors keep it just so sexual (not a bad thing � just the sameness).� How she is overcome by some seductive aspect of foreplay and how she is about to lose her mind from her orgasm.� Like I say I like this of course but that is kind of easy.� Of course she is feeling wonderful from her seduction and great fucking.� You show us how Laura feels about an old love and the emotions that this engenders.� �You are simply the only author in erotica that lets us inside the main characters thoughts that have nothing to do directly with sex.� We see how meeting an old love after you have a falling out can be so awkward if and when you do meet again.� What I like is you showing the way one can be torn by conflicting emotions.� I like seeing how she may or may not change dentists so she can avoid seeing Sara again.� This is just so cool to read.� I to know that dilemma of conflicting thoughts and emotions.� Wanting to do both things at once.� We see her conflict as she tries to be strong about her feelings about Sara and at the same time she can't help but remember their love and great fucks.� Seeing both the good and bad like an long term relationship brings.� Seeing her wanting to act like nothing is still between them when she sees Sara and then again at the same time wanting to see the flare of desire in Sara's eyes as she feels it flickering deep in her soul.� It is just so cool to see this in erotica.� The play of emotions that we all feel.� Other authors keep everything so superficial.� They never let us really see how their women think and feel on a deeper level.� We never really see their true selves thinking and feeling.� I like how we see Sara keeping everything so professional and then she gets that little turning of her lips at the corner.� Seeing her feelings slowly beginning to work its magic.� Like I say, one shots can't show this.� It has taken over sixty chapters to get to this point where we can have this past and the latent desire that still lingers.� No other story that has multiple chapters has allowed women to live their lives and go where they may.� All the other stories have not really advanced much really.� The women are kind of static within the story.� They have no history like Laura has with so many of her women.� Of course some of the women have moved out of her life without touching it that much but so many have and with it comes all this sweet emotion and interplay.� In all of erotica you are the only author that has this interacting of characters.� Even if other authors had their characters speak in the first person we wouldn't hear all that much that would come from the story.� Only you have so much happen over a length of time that allows the characters to think and react like you have Laura.� They simply don't have the history and flow events to allow the writer and reader to experience their inner thoughts and emotions like we do with Laura.

//� One thing I have always liked about Laura is her willingness to take a chance.� She knows that their past love and great fucks give her a chance to make a play for renewed love.� She makes a tentative gesture towards Sara and waits to see what will happen.� �[Finally, Sara shook her head slowly.  "I don't think we better, Laura."������� Laura shrugged, trying not to wince at this little rejection.  "I guess . . . you're right.  I can't help . . . wanting to . . . you know."������� Sara nodded.  "Me too," she said, almost inaudibly.  "I have a . . . girlfriend now."  She looked down, almost embarrassed to admit it, apparently.  "She might see us.  She works in this building."]� What is cool here is even though we don't get to hear Sara's thoughts you can almost see her thoughts as she reacts to Laura.� We see her initial distance but we can see her slowly warming up to her old lover.� We see her gentle grace, her beautiful face and she more and more recognizes Laura and responds to her overtures.� I have to give a little mental fist pump that Sara has a new girlfriend.� I am so happy that she has found a new love.� Her last chapter was kind of sad and I am happy to see Sara is moving on with her life.� Love is usually a lot closer than one thinks.� I just love how you show the emotions flitting through Laura.� I have always thought of your work being so subtle. �Other authors are so rough by comparison.� I think a lot of it is because they never focus on these small little moments in their characters lives.� Everything is about the main sex acts.� There is nothing wrong with this of course but it is so Hollywood to me.� The lowest common denominator type of stuff.� These interactions between Laura and Sara are so soft and limpid.� It is leading towards the sex but it seems so real life to me.� I like how we see Laura's heart fluttering in response to the news.� I think mine would in this specific situation.� I would be like wow, she has moved on and maybe we won't be able to reconnect.� I love how you show women can joust with each other as Sara is willing to slip that her new love can be a bitch and maybe seeing an old love on the side is not such a bad thing.� Then seeing Laura trying to be noble and backing off and now Sara is wanting them to go out.� I so know that subtle backing off to sink the hook deeper in my love prey's bite to reel her into my loving arms.� I can just feel the sexual electricity beginning to arch and connect these two totally hot women.� You have always been the master of making the reader think that maybe it won't happen ["No.  That isn't all," Laura said evenly.  "You know that could never be all."������� They looked into each other's eyes without speaking for a very long time, so long that Laura almost felt as if they were making love right there, with their clothes still on.  "You better go, Laura," Sara finally said, again almost inaudibly.������� "Yes."������� Laura left.  She listened to her heels ring on the hard marble floors of the medical-dental building as she walked to the elevator.  She rode down to the lobby trying to ignore the turmoil in her stomach.  Her cell phone rang inside her purse as she was going through the revolving doors to the street.������� "Laura?"������� "Yes, Sara."������� "Wait there.  I'll be down in a minute."]� I truly think that without that first wonderful line then Sara would not have succumb to Laura.� The spoken word can be so freaking powerful.� You can just tell that she has jolted Sara's world and she is needlessly trying to resist what her heart is telling her.� Then the scene makes you think it truly won't happen and then you swing it around one hundred and eighty degrees so masterfully.� This is just so real life where others keep it so rough and course to me.� They kind of keep it porn feeling while you are more like a movie production.� Good Hollywood versus bad Hollywood.�

//� I love how you are able to put real life impediments into the story and make them flow into the story and not drag down the story unnecessarily.� Sara's new girlfriend is the jealous type and they must work around it.� You show us this and let it add to the tension of the narrative but you don't let it bog down the story.� You use it add spice to the story.� Other authors just take a factoid like this and so over develop it and forget about the main focus of the story and that is the sex.� I remember when Stacy first seduced Julia and show she wanted her to only sleep with other women with her there.� She was being greedy.� Julia wanted to have other experiences outside of Stacy.� She later told me she quickly started having sex with her bisexual part time employee at her part time business.� The girl had desired her from the beginning and was delirious when Julia finally noticed her interest.� Sweet Julia has shared Traci with me since.� She tastes so good and sucks pussy so good.� I remember Julia contacting me soon after we first fucked.� She and I had to plan some to get in some action when Stacy was at the studio.� Frankie made sure to keep her busy and I took off from work.� Julia's husband was on a business junket.� I was told by Julia to bring a strap-on.� I arrived at her house and when the door was closed we fell on each other like starving wolves.� Sigh, I can still feel us almost ripping our clothes off as we stumbled into her living room.� We were soon totally naked and I was kissing her deeply spearing my tongue down her throat and squealing as she sucked on my tongue bobbing on it like a cock.� I got her on the sofa.� I inhaled her nipples and pulped her gourd tits.� I devoured her pussy like a mad woman moving up from time to time to kiss and suck her nipples before I sucked her off to a bucking and jackknifing orgasm.� I was pumping her clit through my clenched lips with hot powerful deep throat love sucks.� I so loved feeling her pelvis jamming up into my mouth as her cunt ruptured steamy love juice all over my chin and throat.� She then sucked me off two orgasms.� I felt my eyes bulging out my eye sockets feeling her trying to suck my clit off and French kissing my cunt during my second orgasm feeling her tongue fluttering deep in my exploding cunt and seeing my cunt juices overflowing her mouth and smearing her face with my cunt slime.� We tribbed on the floor and sucked and fingerfucked through the morning.� We were so hot for each other.� New love is so intoxicating.� We then cuddled, ate lunch and showered.� She then took me to her bedroom and I smiled great big seeing some belts, short handled flogger, a butt plug with tassels and a pair of handcuffs.� I stuck my wrists out and pouted when she draped the handcuffs over my wrists.� She told me she needed to be punished.� I asked her why and she told me because she was such an adulteress wife.� Cheating on her husband and her girlfriend.

//� I opened the handcuffs and asked her what I couldn't do.� She made a pose like she was thinking about it and told me she couldn't think of any.� She told me she liked her husband to rough her up and he had just left on his trip and any bruises could easily be his.� I felt my cunt getting hot and my nipples getting hard thinking how lucky I was to have this loving slut in my clutches.� I put her hands behind her and handcuffed her tight and jerked on them making her cry out in pain.� I then roughly jerked her around and slapped her viciously and spit in her face several times until her face was soaked in my spit.� I smeared my spit into her face and slapped her viciously over and over loving how my hand stung from the hard slaps.� I jerked her around her large bedroom by her hair jerking her over to follow me like a stooping bitch.� I picked up a belt and threw her down on the bed.� She got her ass high in the air and her cheek on the bed.� I then blistered her ass with hard strikes of the belt leaving red belt marks all over her ass and upper thighs and lower back.� The bitch was moaning and gurgling and shyming her ass for me. �I growled and cursed and whipped her calves and lower thighs making her scream and collapse on the bed.� I dropped the belt and picked up the flogger.� I gripped her hair and twisted it in my fist.� I jerked her cruelly off the bed loving how she stumbled and feel to her knees whimpering and crying big tears down her cheeks.� I then dragged her roughly to the middle of the room and started to flog her tits and belly with the flogger turning her pale flesh as red as her butt and legs.� I struck her breast hard making them whip to the side.� I slapped her face viciously and spit more into her face and hair.� I screamed at her if she was "goddamn fucking adulteress whore" and she wept "yesssssssssss".� I whipped and flogged her for another ten minutes I think and then got her on the bed on her knees again.� Her hands still handcuffed her cheek wallowing on the bed.� I got my cock strapped on and got behind her.� I slammed my cock deep into her wet, open cunt and slammed fucked her to a cawing, bucking, jolting orgasm.� Her cunt was dripping cunt juice and running down her thighs.� I slapped her ass cheeks getting them even more beat red and screamed at her that I was going to "to ruin her shitter with my big cock!" I gripped and massaged her ass cheeks roughly exposing her shit hole to me.� I swished and let tons of spit fall onto her rosebud and used my thumb to penetrate her asshole and loosened it up.� I got my cock pressed into her asshole and slammed my cock hard forward spearing it into her rectum making her scream in pain and pleasure.� I loved how her asshole bowed out at first it was so tight.� I worked her asshole open and soon had my dick slamming fully up the slut's shit hole.� I growled seeing her ass juice smearing the length of my dick.� I pulled it out roughly and flopped down on the bed and barked at her to clean my dick without using her hands.� Which she couldn't do of course.� I just love barking that kind of shit at my sluts.� I love making my sluts totally submissive to me when I am dom.� I swooned seeing her sweaty, flushed face looking at me with lazy slut eyes.� I watched her awkward motions of turning around with her hands handcuffed behind her back.� Then feeling her cheek resting on my belly and feeling her tongue lapping my thick strap-on into her mouth and hearing her moan as she began to bob on my dick cleaning it with loud slurps and slowly lifted her head up and started to work her head up and down.� She cleaned my cock good so I took off the handcuffs.� I smacked her some more and barked at her to get her ass in the air again and I speared my dick fully up her asshole shivering hearing her deep guttural groans of pained pleasure.� I pounded her shitter hard and deep and then pulled out again and flopped on the bed and watched her turn around and I again barked at her no hands.� She lipped my dick into her mouth and undulated her head sucking on my big dick.� I smiled as she tentatively moved her hand to the base of my shaft and gripped it slowly seeing that I was allowing it.� She then really bobbed on my dick hard holding it steady.� I jerked her head off my cock and jerked her head up to me and again slapped her hard on both cheeks and spit in her face and wedged fucked her mouth making her gag and drool thick gobs of spit all over her face and neck.� I sneered at her that she didn't suck dick good enough and cruelly pulled her arms behind her again and handcuffed her again making her cry and whimper.� I smacked her viciously some more and spit in her face and wallowed it hard into her face letting her know she was my total whore.� I raped her asshole so hard and deep again loving seeing my strap-on ram fully up her shit hole and sliding out getting all creamed with shit juice.� I got out the key again and took the cuffs off.� I rolled on my back and snarled at her to fuck my cock with her hot asshole.� She then mounted me cow girl and pounded her asshole hard slapping her ass cheeks onto my thighs making me moan as I bucked up to ravage her asshole.� We fucked wildly her big hooters flopping up on the upstroke and then slapping her sweaty chest as she paused to down thrust impaling her shit hole fully on my up lunging dick.� I heard the divine sounds of sweaty flesh slapping and seeing the force of our colliding flesh rippling up and shaking her tits violently.� I watched her wantonly pull up off my dick and seeing it fall from her asshole to flop on my sweat soaked belly.�� Seeing her ass juice splatter and flow out her red asshole and coating my belly and harness along with it smeared over the length of my cock.� Moaning as she sat between my spread legs and leaning forward to take my shit covered dick into her greedy mouth.� She cleaned it so thoroughly licking up the shaft form the base to the cockhead and twisting hard on it.� I swooned and felt my eyes roll back seeing her looking up at me with hot eyes and hearing her moan sucking down her ass juice.� She came hard once with me pumping her asshole throughout her orgasm as her tits flopped and rolled as she rode out her orgasm still pumping.� When she came down she then worked her cunt and asshole back and forth cowgirl and reverse missionary.� Gods she deep throated my cock the last two times she dismounted me seeing her throat bulge knowing that cunt and ass juice were coating her windpipe down to her Adam's apple.� I loved how we kissed deeply as she cum again with my dick spearing up and forward into her exploding shit hole.� She had her right hand between our bodies rubbing her clit as she wailed into my mouth our tongues sloppily twining and our teeth clanking in heated love.� When she was finally recovered then it was my turn to whipped and fucked.� I so love reciprocity.�

//� One thing that stands out about your stories is that little extra zing you put in your stories.� Other stories Sara would just come down and the story would progress.� Instead you show how real life can intervene and Laura has to wait fifteen minutes for her to appear.� We see that Sara had to sneak out of the building to see Laura since her lover works in the same building.� It is just these little real life moments that make your stories just that little something more special.� Other authors just seem to want to rush things and not add any little extra facets to their stories where you always take the time to do this.� I can just image Laura's roiling feelings.� I have to give her credit.� She says she would have waited all night basically where after fifteen minutes of waiting I am starting to fall apart.� I have tried to learn that most women are not punctual like me but it is still hard.� Now you give us that humor that I have always loved in your stories ["I think I need mouth to mouth resuscitation," Sara said, making another funny face.������� "Me too," Laura laughed, grabbing her head in both hands and giving her a scorching kiss.]� No other author has these little moments in their stories.� It is quite sad actually.� I think most women at least sometimes try to be humorous.� Other authors just keep to the tried and true and don't allow their women to breath and show true character.� One's humor says an awful lot about you.

//� I like how you vary the pacing of your stories.� They start to kiss and grope and then you have them halting their groping since they are still in public.� I just know that other authors would have them go inside and commence the lovemaking.� They simply don't want to place any hitches or speed bumps in their stories progressions.� They want to get from point A to point B without any deviations.� I like you showing these speed bumps.� Having to put on the brakes when the loving needs to be subdued for a little time.� You now do some exploring about human sexual nature.� Now this is something that you don't see in other stories.� Laura is a little nonplused that Darlene seemingly decided to become "gay".� I too have wondered that some from time to time.� I have always been attracted to my own sex strongly ever since I can remember.� Thus, to me it seems natural.� I have known so many women that fought it forever.� They felt something towards other women but suppressed it.� Usually the awakening comes around puberty.� I think this is what happened to Darlene.� Her being free now to be herself tells me she has been denying her true self.� I just wish all women could see that this is our true nature.� Sure enjoy some male cock from time to time but only being with women can fulfill our spiritual needs.� So I have seen seemingly straight women pursue and seduce the "lesbian".� It is almost comical sometimes seeing the confusion on the "lesbian's" face when the tables are turned to speak.� I then like how Sara is her usual sensible and logical self and show Laura isn't.� I like how she and Laura started their relationship and then you showed us how Laura and Karen started their lust with sudden rampant lesbian desires.� That it just takes that spark to make the hidden truth come to light.� You see the confusion in other stories but they just don't handle it in the way you do.� You make it special.� The other is so stereotypical.� The woman being seduced maybe kind of felt an attraction but suddenly feels its full force.� That is true sometimes but not all the time like other authors always write it.� You over the years have had seductions that cover the whole gambit just like real life.� Some women are actively pursuing their seduction and to some it is a surprise.� The actively pursuing is clearly evident on sites for hooking up with people looking for sex.� They are simply flooded with bi-curious.� Always a fertile ground I have found.�

//� I have never seen an author talk about how ones sexuality can change over time.� And only you show it as not part of the main story line.� More of a reflection that allows the reader to themselves reflect on such things if they wish and I do.� I like how Laura is pushing for details about Darlene and if she is hot in the sack.� I always want to know such details but Sara demurs.� I have women be like this at first.� I have found I can usually get them totally confessing all the hot details of their sex life away from me.� I find total interest and focus makes most women loosen up and even start to preen when they see how it makes me so totally fucking hot for it.� We get to see a little of Laura's green eyed monster rearing its head.� I have always found it amusing when it does.� What is cool here is that it shows itself for the first time in a long time but Laura controls it.� In the past it used to consume her totally and make her "stomach curdle".� Here it shows up and Laura immediately suppresses it.� I just love it.� In the past she wouldn't even of have attempted it and now she actively suppresses her negative emotions.� This shows such real growth of the person that Laura is.� Only you have allowed your women to grow and show growth like this.� It is just so rad that you do.� Only by having so many chapters in Laura's live that has covered so many years can you show this.� You show how we can grow and be better and I absolutely love it.� Plus, you show here how women can be at different points in the lust curve.� Laura is ready for sex the instant they get into Sara's apartment and Sara is demurring and putting it off even telling Laura she is "lucky" that Sara is seeing her.� How true!� I just love how you show this struggling to get in sync with each other.� It is obvious Sara is dying for it but I agree with her that Laura left her and she has the right to pace the seduction.� I just love that you show this.� In other stories once the women know they will be sleeping together it simply happens like now.� Only you show how, often, you may know that you will be sleeping with her but then you still have to work to make it happen.� Sara is happy with her new life and is now willing to share again with Laura and she has to come to terms with how to work it.� I just love that you show this.� Other authors just make it always happen right off the bat.� It is great when that happens but rarely is it that quick.� One usually has to work to get one's pussy to at least some degree.� I have loved and pulled my hair out waiting for sweet angels like Bonnie to fall into Laura's loving arms.� Only you take the time and have the courage to show this.� Of course only you and a few other authors have created stories long enough to capture these dynamics and they don't.� Always instant gratification or maybe a one chapter delay.� Only you show how sometimes you have to be patient.� I love it.

//� I have always loved how you show your women contending in that loving way.� You are making it so clear that Laura is horny for it and Sara is resisting her.� In other stories you have that initial resistance to the initial seduction but then they always quickly capitulate.� They may resist the first setting but always fall the second round.� Here we get to see old lovers morphing the game.� [Sara smiled seductively.  "Why should I give in right away?  It makes me feel good that you want me."������ "I can make you feel even better."������� "I know you can.  Now, just sit there while I make a pot of tea."]� We get this flow of emotions and desires and a little wit thrown into the mix.� That is nice.� Plus, I love hearing Laura's confidence.� I have that same confidence.� I know I can totally rock your world.� You then bring up an interesting point that I have never seen brought up by another author.� In fact, only the few that have multiple stories can even talk about it and again only you do.� This is love making styles.� To see a style one must see the loves more than once or even a few times.� You need a history and that is what you give us.� This is the type of stuff I love.� I like how you talk about lovemaking having variations.� I am like Laura in that I normally attack you in my loving.� I want to consume you totally and rack your body with orgasm after orgasm wringing your flesh out totally and then having you do that to me.� I want it hard and deep.� I revel in rough sex and having all my fuck holes plundered over and over.� Gods, I love to have cocks sinking into all my fuck holes at the same time or feel a beautiful woman's fist slamming down my shit hole up to the elbow.� But then again sometime I make love like Laura did with Sara.� Slow and romantic with an old lover and we are just gently consuming each other and sharing that soul deep love fuck.� It will probably get rough but much of it is slow and romantic.� I like how you show this.� Other authors have all the fucks the same.� Plus, they are almost generic with their lack of details and keeping it so linear.� Only your stories make each fuck and the orgasms so beautiful and divine.� I find each fuck and orgasm so special.� I know an orgasm is an orgasm but I feel like each one is the most special and so fucking rad and only you capture this.� I have marveled at how you do this year after year.� I have simply never seen any one other than you ever raise this.� I guess because you aim for more you thus do more.

//� I have to smile at the snipping that Laura does at the mention of Sara's lover's name.� I have to smile at Sara bringing it up.� Women just can't resist the little jabs I have found.� I am pretty free of the green eyed monster but I do slip every once in a while.� I just smile and deflect with humble humor when I am zinged with it.� I just want to love you.� I like again that you have the history that allows you to show this.� One shots cannot really show since they don't have the time.� I have always loved your pacing and humor [Laura clinked glasses with her and drained her own glass halfway down, feeling like Sara's sister Dee Dee, who usually did the same when you handed her one.  "How about 'now' rather than 'then'?" she asked, looking at Sara pointedly.  "I want you."������� Sara flirted.  She sashayed across the kitchen, swaying her substantial but shapely butt in Laura's direction.  "You see something you like?  My advice is . . . better take what you want.  Before you change your mind."������ "I'm not changing my mind," Laura laughed, starting out of her chair.  "I always wanted you."]� I just love this because we get to see the women's personalities in this banter.� Other stories just keep their women so bland and vanilla.� They are just characters in a story that will lead to some nice fucking.� We get to see actual women in your stories.� I do get tired of never seeing women have humor in other stories.� Nor any intimate dialog like you give us.� Like I say, it just makes them bland and doesn't allow them to breathe as real persons.� Kind of like watching a movie with bad actors that just detract from the story.� When you can get into the story it just makes the eventual sex so womb searing I have found.� I love you physically, but, marrying the emotional and spiritual just makes the sex so much more rad!� You show this.� Like I say I love your pacing [She grabbed Sara next to the sink, embracing her and dropping both hands to her splendid ass, digging her fingers into both firm cheeks through Sara's skirt.  Sara sat her glass on the kitchen countertop and embraced Laura back, now kissing her with the same intensity with which she had earlier responded in the parking garage.  Then she kissed Laura's cheek and forehead while Laura's fingers scrabbled at the buttons of her crisp white blouse, trying to get them unfastened.]� I just love how you show so judiciously the advancing of lovemaking.� You move it forward and keep it special at the same time which is just so special.� Other authors never give the small details that make it seem real and thus really draw the reader in so deeply.� I love all the different scenarios you show in your stories.� Not to long ago I had Joann up on our counter right after she had come home from work.� She had on an older outfit and I tore it off her shredding it as I exposed her treasures to my hungry mouth.� I sucked her nipples off and rammed my tongue down her throat before sinking to my knees and wolfed down her cunt as I sucked and lashed her rock hard clit and gobbled down her cunt lips and teethed her puffy mound.� I loved how her screams filled the kitchen as her hand clamped onto the top of my head and rammed my face deep into her exploding cunt as I gulped down her sweet juices.� I feel my eyelids flutter feeling my head rocked back by her surging cunt that rocked up and off the counter into my hungry mouth.� I so loved looking up and seeing her swollen nipples rocking on her shaking tits and her slit eyed stare looking down at me with heated promises of devoured pussy and asshole.

//� You continue to show them bantering about the upcoming sex which I find so delightful to read and laugh gently on.� No other author has this gentle banter between two lovers.� Other authors are too hurried to get to the sex because they are one shot stories.� The few who have stories long enough for this just don't.� You do and thus you are unique it seems.� You now show us the wonderful pacing that you so besot the reader with [Laura had Sara's shirt half-open by now and was kissing the smooth dark skin that appeared.  Sara grabbed her hand and pulled her toward the bedroom.  Without speaking, they both began to peel off their clothes, so that they were nearly naked by the time they got there.  The bedroom was only a few steps from the kitchen.  Sara peeled down the bedspread and blankets.  She slipped out of her panties.  Laura did the same.]� I just love reading these moments.� You never get this time with other authors.� The sex just instantly transitions to.� I can feel Laura's lust rising as she sees Sara's hot body coming into view.� I always feel my belly hitch and my cunt convulse when I see my lover's body unveiling itself for me.� Seeing her breast, nipples, pussy and ass coming into view and feeling my mouth watering knowing I will soon be devouring them and taking her to heaven over and over.� I always think of how I am going to devour your cunt or dick and using all my skills to make you groan and scream in pleasure.� I so love getting nude and seeing my woman nude and devouring her.� Often some clothing or adornments are worn but I always work to get us totally naked for hot fucking.� Just one of my tendencies.� This is what I often feel ["Come here, my darling," Laura purred to her, nearly orgasming immediately simply at the feel of Sara's naked body pressing against her own, if that were possible.  She honestly felt it was.  This was paradise.]� I so feel my womb quiver, pulling my woman close and twining our limbs and getting our bellies wallowing and tits mashed as we devour mouths and consume upper bodies.

//� Like I say, you so show the pacing� I love [Her hands finally came to rest on Sara's naked breasts.  She cradled the full, firm beauties in her palms, brushing Sara's large, dark nipples with her thumbs.  Laura kissed her mouth again, her neck, her shoulder, her clavicle, her smooth upper chest, her lips and tongue descending slowly.  When they reached the dark, protruding bud of Sara's soft nipple, both of them seemed to tense up with sexual excitement, their breath quickening, their bodies expectant.]� I keep harping on things like this because only you show the loving of the area between a woman's mouth and her breast.� And I am only shown the mouth on breast loving.� Only you show the loving of the whole woman and using more than just your mouth.� I mean we use our hands so much when we love each other.� With men it is a lot less but still I use my hands on their hard bodies.� Clenching their hard cocks and pumping their cock hard and clamping my mouth on their cock head and twisting my mouth right and left as I pump the shaft I am bobbing on.� I so love feeling your body underneath my fingers.� I love to squeeze and massage your whole body.� To feel your breast in my palms and your nipples in my fingers and palms.� I really love using my tongue to kiss, lick and lathe your entire body.� I so love working down from your mouth and loving your ears and neck and then working down your upper chest to your tits and then simply devouring and pulping your titties as I watch you melt and die for me as I take you heaven.� More upper persuasion for lower invasion.� I so love working a newbies upper body and seeing her crumble for me.� Working her mouth and titties and in between, so almost always by this time they are under my complete spell for totally devouring and long hard fucking.� Sigh, so romantic you describing that tensing one gets as passion rises and souls start to entwine.� Like how you tell the reader that all this loving is making one's body coil with want and love.� I love ramping our bodies up and then having such strong orgasms that one thinks you are losing you mind with ecstasy.� I love giving women such strong orgasms that I can so see in their eyes that their souls are simply being rent apart with fucking bliss and knowing I was the cause or part of the cause.� I love how you bring this front and center.

//� You continue to give us that wonderful dialog that I so love.� I keep going on but only you do it.� Just banter and mirth between women.� The Harem author has some dialog that is outside of the sex or setting it up but he never shows the mirth or just wittiness that you constantly show.� I must guess you like showing this and use it in your life.� I wonder why other authors don't use it.� We all have mirth in our lives and I wonder why authors don't show it.� We see some of the mirth here [Sara mewled a little, and her eyes rolled up.  "Makes you come?  What do you think it does to me?"������� Laura now sucked her breast intently, without bothering to reply.  She was in heaven.  Nothing could get her mouth off this lovely breast.  She tongued and lip-chewed Sara's bulbous, silky, dark nipple, pinching it between her tongue and the roof of her mouth until Sara whinnied softly and tossed her head back and forth.������� "Oh . . . shit!" she hissed softly.  "That's a Laura suck if there ever was one.  Nobody suck titty like Laura."]� You so effortlessly show the transition from mirth to loving.� I so love how you give the details of breast worship and other parts of sex.� I get so tired of other authors never giving any details.� Here you show what Laura is doing and so beautifully describe Sara's divine beauties.� I sometimes stop reading stories when they again refuse to describe their women to me and actually show me the loving.� Only you give me the details that I so crave.� Love seeing what Laura is doing to Sara's nipple in her mouth.� Other authors just tell me that subject A is sucking subject B's nipple.� Boring!� I am so happy that you give both dialog and such great sex.

//� Another thing I have always enjoyed about your stories is that your details allow you so show the change in pacing and methods.� Like I keep harping on, other authors are so bland and lacking of details.� Thus, they never show me things like Laura first sucking Sara's nipples hard and then working them easy.� It is the change that simply reduces my sluts to whimpering slaves eager to do my bidding.� This is just so devastating.� I love looking up as I am loving my slut's breast and nipples.� Working gently and then suddenly sucking hard and pulping their tits and listening to them moaning so hard, long and loud.� Watching their heads thrashing and eyes squeezing shut in fucking ecstasy.� Then asking them if they want it harder and them croaking out weakly "yes". �Then pulping harder and super sucking and gnawing their nipples.� Then backing off and gently loving before ramping up again reducing them to moaning, squirming love sluts for me.�� [Laura stopped sucking hard and sucked softly for a while, gazing up into Sara's swirling dark brown eyes.  "I could just swallow these, if you gave me the chance," she murmured, still licking each bulbous, saliva-wet nipple, then unable to keep herself from taking one deep into her mouth again. ]� Sigh, I so love to suck deep and just supper sucking and slowly pulling out with my mouth with my mouth clamped tight and dragging out slowly as I suck and tongue lathe and really work her nipple as I let it slip through my hard sucking lips and mouth.� I so love making them wail and mewl like a total whore in heat.�

//� You now show that changing of pace and diverting of flows.� Laura is ready to slide South for some divine gash and starts working her way down.� Other authors, once something starts, it is going to happen.� Yet you show how things can morph.� Laura is ready for some oral and Sara is not.� I love how you allow your lovers to let things go in various directions.� Other stories are so stale and predictable.� I get so tired of first, poorly described stories, and then adding on top of it just boring linear progression.� Here you show how sometimes your lover has other ideas about what is going to happen.� Laura being gentle of spirit and willing to go with the flow lets Sara divert her path.� She knows that all paths lead to nirvana if you just let them.� We discover that Sara and her current white lover love strap-on sex and Sara wants to have some of that with Laura since they have had scorching strap-on sex in the past.� I just love seeing this.� How lovers often negotiate what they desire and how sensitive lovers listen and then try to do what their lovers desire.� I love letting my women guide and shape my loving of their divine bodies.� I know sometimes I divert my lovers and archangels when I need some type of loving real bad.� I am just thankful that one authors shows this.� Only you have the timeline that allows you to show us their past and their past desires and predilections.� You show this here [Laura, smiling inwardly, had to admit she was not opposed to this activity herself.  Being monstrously oral, and having a long-standing fervid infatuation with Sara's beautiful naked breasts, she quickly grasped any situation that gave her the opportunity to maul them for long periods with her mouth. ����� She immediately snatched the dildo and harness from Sara's hand and began fitting it into place.  "You don't want it any more than I do, darling," she purred, rolling onto her back and holding the shiny blue plastic stalk straight up in the air, a delightfully obscene invitation.������ Sara crossed her eyes and made a dorky face.  "That's what I like about you, Laura.  You grasp another person's needs so quickly."]� Sigh, this story is really reminding me of why I love Sara so much.� She is so balanced and funny.� Makeeda is growing on me but Sara is the bomb.

//� I like how you give the little details.� You always remember to show us, without overwhelming us, the sweet details [Sara knee-walked on the mattress over to Laura and straddled her hips.  Together they maneuvered the upright dildo so that the bulbous blue head of it nudged Sara's swollen, partly open black cunt lips.  She was indeed very wet, Laura could see, from their little playing and kissing and sucking.  Laura, while observing this, also noticed that her little silvery pussy ring was gone.]� I get so tired of other authors just basically getting in position and then having them beginning to fuck.� I like seeing how Sara moves.� I never get these little details like this from other authors.� Then the divine observations of Sara's beautiful slit.� You are definitely the only author that actually explains their woman's vulvas and breasts.� It is truly amazing actually.� Male or female it doesn't really matter who is writing the stories it seems.� It is just amazing after reading so many stories from so many authors for me to be able to say that you are the only one.� I sure love the details that you give us.� I can just so get into the story and feel my juices flowing when I read your details of your women.�

//� Sometimes you bring in the little things that are nice.� I like how you show that Sara's new lover doesn't want Sara to wear her clit ring because she thinks it looks trashy.� Like a exotic dancer.� We then see that Laura and Sara totally disagree.� I really like Laura bringing up some past exotica dancers she has made love too.� I get so tired of people judging other people for such little and trivial things.� I too have found that women in such fields are usually sweet and nice.� I just wish people would worry about their own issues.� I find I have enough problems of my own to worry about.� I just like you doing this.� We could have not done anything or just have Sara saying that her girlfriend didn't like it.� But you give us her reasoning and show just how mean spirited and wrong it is.� I like it when authors show the best in people.� I think this is part of man's world just trying to slam us down.� Like in the Bible where the women get blamed for the lusts of men.� So wrong!� I like how you make your point and show your women moving on.� Why dwell on such negatives is my thought.� I will make my point but then lets move on and have hot, hard fucking to celebrate life and love.

//� Sigh, you so how know to give us pacing and sweet details [Then, without further comment, she lowered her pussy onto the dildo, letting out a soft whoosh of air from her mouth as the thick blue shaft slid up into her body while Laura held it steady with the fingers of both hands.  "Ohhhhhh!  Oh . . . that feels good!" she threw her head back, beaming as it rode up deep into her.]� I have to constantly marvel at how you so perfectly capture this moment of penetration.� Other authors always just give me that it happens.� They never have their women express that pleasure of having your cunt or asshole invaded by a loving dick.� The way air often leaves your lungs or you get that freezing of the face feeling a dildo or cock sliding into a love hole.� You remind the reader why it so fucking rapturous and makes us love to fuck.� last night I was at Dodie's and frankie's.� we love to just fuck the three of us.� I love my sweeties but I need dodie a lot.� We had been making out and sucking each other off but it was now time for the strap-ons to come out and play.� I can so clearly see Frankie's eyes slitting watching dodie mount her and then slitting further when Dodie rubbed her cock up and down her slit and rubbed over her hard clit.� Then the way her eyes flared when dodie slide her dick deep into her pussy and started to stroke it in and out.� Oh gods the whimpering moans and face slashes.� Then later dodie was riding me with me on my back our tits mashed and me stroking her back and ribs kissing her shoulders and neck.� Then seeing her face freeze up and whinnying groans cawing out her throat as Frankie slide her big dick into her clenching rosebud.� The way Dodie's body juddered underneath by rubbing hands and her head jerking as Frankie slide her dick fully up her tight asshole.� The music to my ears hearing dodie gurgle and gasp out how good frankie's dick felt sliding deep into her shit hole.� She threw her head back mashing her tits into mine and she hissed her pleasure as Frankie's dick slide up her colon.� "Oh goddamnnnnnn that feels so fucking good!"� I love how you let your women express their pleasure at being fucked good, deep and hard.� with your loving words I can see Sara's body shaking and the blue dildo disappearing up her tight, flowing cunt.� Thank you for such wondrous word pictures.

//� geez, you give such beautiful word pictures [For a moment she was frozen in place, I enjoying the surfeit of sweet sensations that filled her body, and Laura took the opportunity to run her hands all over the smooth, warm, available flesh of this lovely woman.  Sara was still sitting straight up, eyes closed, and from this angle, from below, her breasts looked enormous, even though they weren't.  They were beautifully proportioned to her body, not too big, not too small, just right.  But her dark, swelling nipples looked even puffier than they usually did, and Laura could hardly wait to see them dangling over her mouth like ripe fruit, just waiting for her to inhale them.] What is so sad is that I never see any of this in other stories.� Never do lovers run their hands over a lovers body just for the sheer pleasure of doing it.� You make it clear that Laura is doing it just because Sara's divine body is driving Laura crazy with pleasure.� I so love to run my hands all over a lover's body.� A woman's softness or a man's hardness.� Geez, again the loving word picture of Sara's doves.� You just make me want to suck her tits off her chest.� Love devour and pulp in my strong hands.� You so describe her tits.� The size and the shape of her nipples and using words like "ripe fruit" that fills one with guttural hunger for her hanging gourds.� Seeing my lover over me like this and wanting and then the taking of her tits.� I so love seeing breasts from all angles and this is so fucking rad.� Seeing a small tittied woman like Amber, Kapri or maybe Joann with her slightly larger tits riding me cowgirl and seeing them barely shaking or whiplashing up and down and around in circles as they do me. �Or a big hootered girl dodie, Hillary or Camille and seeing their tits roll and whiplash around and flop up and then smack down on their sweaty chests and if we are really sweaty seeing sweat flying and hearing those loud sounds of flopping tits on sweaty chests that just makes me grit my teeth and grip their hips and spear my dick viciously up into their tight cunts or assholes.

//� One thing that you have shown so well is doing multiple things at one time.� I have really come to hate the fact that other authors, except for a few,, and they too are limited, �only show one thing at a time.� I can guarantee that once the dildo slips into the pussy or hopefully asshole all other things are no longer told about.� I get this picture of a robot rising above its fuckee and simply going through the motions.� The lack of details make me think this.� They stop the foreplay and do just fucking.� A great fuck requires so much more and you always show this thankfully.� You love the whole woman.� Men are not so good at this.� They can hammer you but women know how to fuck the whole woman.� You have Laura drawing Sara down into her loving arms while fucking up into Sara's swirling pelvis pumping her cunt expertly but also loving her tits.� That is loving a woman!� Love her totally!!� I am so there as Sara leans forward her hands on each side of Laura's head and Laura is simply devouring her tits and sucking on those nipples so hard.� I have always adored the way Laura's siphons nipples and areolas.� We both make our women whimper and scream with our breast worship and skill.� I love stretching out their nipples in my drawing back head and looking into their faces and seeing them slash and those helpless whimpers and grunts of lost pleasure.� I so make them my total sluts.� Sigh, the details of Laura taking both hands and guiding a plum sized nipple into her mouth and love devouring it.� Just the fact that you tell the reader that Laura is doing this is unfortunately is so unusual that it is sad.� I have come to lament it so, that other authors simply don't show what is happening in a fuck.� It is such a lose for them and more so for the readers.� By you giving us the details of their breast you draw us in.� I get so tired of only be told the basic cup size of a woman's breast and nothing else.� Here you show us Sara's tits that makes me see my women's tits.� Hillary's heavy udders that I grip and pulp near the base of her tits, pulling my head back while my mouth is pulling back even harder with hard sucks on her nipples when she rides me reverse missionary.� Roughly jamming her tit meat into my mouth and sucking voraciously and gnawing on her nipple and areola.� Or Camille, Dodie or Nirita's full rack, smothering my face when they arch their back and I suck their nipples off and pulp squeeze their udders making them cry out in helpless pleasure.� Then the smaller titties like Veronica, Jessie or Joann that I have to crane up to get to and then wolfing down totally and deep throat sucking making my cheeks hollow out as my tongue wickedly bats their nipples all over, while, also, tongue drilling.� Then my flat chested sluts like Kapri, Amber or Sally clamping my mouth to their chest as I spear their cunts or assholes.� I so love gnawing on their� nipples and rubbing the front of my teeth back and forth over their areolas as I alternate this and supper sucking.� Lunging up viciously spearing their cunts or tearing their assholes apart and making them scream and cry out in primal pleasure.� My sluts just thrash their heads around, their throat convulsively working, their eyes bulging as I work my tit magic.�

//� I have always smiled when I read Laura thinking her baby is going to "pop" to soon.� I too have that problem though it really isn't a problem.� I'll just make you cum and cum again.� I agree with Laura's observation that most women cum quicker than they think when fucking with women.� We just know how to fuck a woman's body with total focus and skill.� I too hear it from straight newbies.� They are just not used to having their body focused on and a person working hard to make the cum hard and deep.� There are skilled cocksman but so many are not.� Sad.� Like I say, only you give the details.� Not only do you give the detail of the moment but you also give the details of the process like [And this time it was quite clear there would be no waiting.  Already Sara was chuffing and grunting softly and throwing her head back and gnawing her full lower lip and wheezing and undulating ever more rapidly.  And Laura was so completely preoccupied by Sara's marvelous breasts that she could barely force herself to pay attention to how quickly or slowly Sara was getting to the finish line.]� Other authors simply don't show how the woman being fucked is reacting to the lovemaking.� They just have the fuck happening.� That robs the reader and the woman in the story.� Hear you show the woman ramping up.� This is what I live for.� Seeing my slut ramping up.� Her body juddering and hitching and that stiffening that tells me I am taking her to heaven.� I love how you always capture the sounds of rutting.� That divine expression of lust and love.� Seeing my woman's tits swelling and her nipples engorging as I get her to the finish line.� Like seeing Laura focusing on Sara and simply loving her woman and not really caring when she is going to have an orgasm.� I just focus on getting you to the finish line and making you cum so fucking hard.� With men you just let them take you and they will get what they want but women require and desire that total stroking of their body to take them to nirvana.� I like how you always show Laura and her women so focusing on this.

//� I love seeing Laura love devouring Sara's nipples.� It is so true that almost all men don't know how to really work a woman's breast.� I find even a lot of women have to be taught how to devour tits.� Man's brainwashing has robbed them of the innate desire to inhale and pulp tits and denying them of the knowledge of how rad it is.� We see the results of it here.� ["Nnnggeee . . . ohnnmmmggg . . . nnggeeee . . ." Sara whinnied softly, grinding her cunt down hard on the stalk, mashing her breasts into Laura's face, closer and closer to completely losing control.  "Oh yes . . . oh Laura . . . yessssss!"]� So much to revel in here.� We see that Laura is working her tits and grinding her dick expertly into Sara's juicing pussy.� What can be more perfect than a mouth full of tit stuffed in your mouth and your dick plundering her asshole or pussy.� I so love devouring your tits and swirling my pelvis to sink my dick hard and deep into your fuck hole.� Feeling your sweaty body against mine, our groins slapping as I sink my dick into your belly and my mouth sucks and tears at your tits savagely as my hands either grip your hips to slam down with my dick or my hands are pulping your tits as your head thrashes or jolts that helpless way that makes me devour you even harder.� Of course I am besotted by your vocalizations.� Only you give me these sounds on the ramp up and I never know which sounds your whores will make.� Just like real life.� A few authors do show vocalizations but after you read a few stories you see that it is the same ones over and over again.� Boring.� Sigh, I am so there as Sara grinds her cunt down feeling her juices running down my cock and soaking my harness and my groin.� I love that slicked up feeling of slimy cunt juice slavering our groins making wet slippery, smacking sounds that makes us wild.

//� I will take you quickly to orgasm but I do back off some here and there.� I like how you show the flow of a fuck.� With other authors it is always full speed ahead.� They just go at that one boring speed where you show the flow mainly but some ebb and more importantly that back and forth between lovers working for orgasm.� I love the history of your story.� We get to see that her and Sara have fucked so many times before and this love fuck is healing old wounds.� They are using their bodies needs to restore their love.� You give the detail of the dildo pressing into the fucker's public bone and giving you that buzz contact that sometimes takes you to orgasm.� I have never read this in another story.� And of course you reinforce the pleasure of sucking Sara's divine plump nipples.� I live to gnaw, pulp and devour totally with hot sucks to your plums.� I make my women die from it.� I can just see's Sara's head thrown back her chest mashing her tits deep into Laura's mouth wanting all the hot sensations she can get.� That giving and taking in lovemaking that blows souls apart with pure fucking ecstasy.� I live to hear this ["Bite them," Sara suddenly commanded, in a crazy, half-delirious voice.  "Bite them, Laura, bite them!  I'm . . . I'm going to . . ."]� I will take you so hard when I hear such hot words.� My women know what this means with me and I so deliver.� Laura knows Sara's limits and will not go beyond.� With my regular lovers I know their limits and take them to it and push beyond if limited.� With new lovers I closely gauge your reactions and take you slowly harder and harder until they are total pain sluts just like me.� I love to clench my teeth into your nipples and areolas and gnaw, graze and stretch out as they writhe beneath me and pull or push my head harder into their tits.� Hearing their moans and cawing for me to take them harder and what a slut they are.� They definitely know how to urge me on.� Like last night when I had pulped Joanne's tits. �Her areolas and nipples squirting out my clenched fists all swollen and bulging as my teeth raked and tore at her nipples my tongue rasping her nipples. �My throat deep throat sucking her flaring nipples.� Sigh, the screams of bliss and her fingers clenched into my scalp slamming my face hard into her tit stuffed into my mouth her back arched high to drive her tit up into my mouth.� My foreplay made her cum so fucking good I must say.

//� Sigh, to write something and then see this [Sara's wet breasts and hard, stiffened nipples, now completely black from engorged blood, danced and swished before Laura's mouth, and Laura stuffed one, then the other, into her hungry maw as voraciously as she could, sucking, pinching, now biting, sinking her teeth into the one in her mouth, gnawing it, but not hard enough to cause pain, just enough to send a stabbing flame through the lovely globe she was currently sucking.]� I so know that "stabbing flame" blasting out my tits filling my body with fiery bliss making me writhe. �My elbows dig into the sheets my heels dragging and scissoring across the bed.� I love the detail of her breasts wet with spit and the change in color of nipples / areolas as they engorge with blood.� That is a fucking wonderful detail.� I love it!� Sigh, the details of working Sara's tits completely.� That is tit loving!� I have always loved how you show love cooing.� Laura is gurgling how much she loves Sara's boobs and Sara is basically incoherently babbling out her pleasure.� This so excites one and makes the fucking so much hotter and the orgasms so much harder.� Communication just makes you get so in sync with your lover and helps to take her to heaven.� Again something only you capture.�

//� The two things that initially captured me about your writings were sounds and then how you capture the orgasm itself.� Only you capture the true essence of why we fuck ["Auunnggghhhh!" Sara suddenly cried out in a huge, bellowing roar.  "AUNNGGHH!"������� Her tight body went into convulsions as the spasms of a horrific orgasm ripped through her.  Her firm breast was still mashing into Laura's face, and Laura quickly sucked her big, swollen nipple into her mouth again, biting it as Sara had requested, biting even harder now, feeling the ripple surge through Sara's thrashing body as a fresh squirt of sexual fire shot through her.  Laura's other hand slid down to anchor the dildo, since Sara was twisting and squirming so violently on top of her that she was afraid it would slip out.  Sara continued to fuck herself on it, and to grunt and groan and yelp as the final spasms of her orgasm wrenched her.]� Gods, I love how you show those primal screams of fucking bliss that women make when you are fucking their souls apart with pure fucking ecstasy.� So love pounding my cock so deep into your pussy or asshole as I fuck you through an orgasm.� Or having you up top and slamming down into my upthrusting strap-on as you take yourself to nirvana.� Love the detail of Sara mashing her nipple into Laura's mouth and Laura is taking the present and pulping it in her mouth.� Supper sucking and working it over with her teeth and rasping tongue.� I so know those shooting fiery bolts of pleasure shooting out my tits as they are loved thus during orgasm.� Makes me think I am going to die from pure simple pleasure.� Gripping the back of your head and mashing your face hard into my bosom feeling you work your magic as my body jackknifes and jolts as pure screams of ecstasy sheers out my throat.� Love how you show Sara being a pure slut as she continues to work her cunt on the dildo making sure she takes every drop of pleasure her body can make.� Only you make the orgasm special like this and then on top of that you show the woman striving to make it last as long as fucking possible.� Slamming that cunt down into the invading shaft feeling your cunt muscles strangling and milking the stalk with wild gut wrenching spasms tearing your belly apart.

//� Wow, what a special detail.� Again something that no other author gives me.� We see Laura breathing hard through her nostrils so she can continue to devour Sara's nipple.� I too do that and I love reading it.� You constantly nail it and make me go gaga with the sweetness of your prose.� I simply adore the details of my fucks.� I am not sure why other authors don't give us these moments that make fucking so awesome.� This is why I crave each of your chapters.� I love how this fuck has healed the rift between Laura and Sara.� I so love seeing reconciliation.� I have to smile at Laura still showing from time to time her old self and asking about Darlene.� I just don't care about the "other" woman, well, maybe wishing she could join us! �I see the pain has been salved [Sara gave her a cross-eyed, cuckoo stare.  "What part of 'nobody' don't you understand?"  She stretched, then climbed off Laura, letting the wet blue plastic dildo flop out of her pussy and land on Laura's flat belly.  "Well . . . that sure took care of my problem.  How about you?"]� Not so long ago I experienced a similar fuck.� Years ago (way to many!) back in college I was not as calm as I am now.� I have always had a mean streak when I feel I am being attacked or hurt.� Back then I had a fuck mate in my junior year.� Laci was a regular fuck mate that started to get to possessive.� When we had a real bad fight and she called me a stupid slut and a nymphomaniac.� I couldn't be true to anything since I was such a slut if I had too.� In my pain I basically called her a chubby, fat white whale and she was damn lucky that a woman as beautiful as me would even look at her.� She was not fat but she was always worried about her full stout figure.� I knew it and used it against her.� I am fully able to take all your fears and use them against you in a fit of anger.� I have finally learned to control my evil side so much better now but not then.� I really broke her down and made her blubber and wail and I just laughed at her as she left slamming the door behind her cursing me out.� Recently I saw her listed as a friend to someone I was looking at on facebook.� I don't do it myself and find it boring but a fuckmate asked me to look at her page and in traveling around I found Laci's name.� I traced down her page and then sent her an email telling her I was so sorry for my actions so long ago and I hope she could forgive me.� To my surprise she responded and told me that she long ago forgave me and what's up.� We slowly got to know each other again.� I found out she is divorced with a teenage girl in the DC area.� I tentatively told her I had a conference coming up in the area.� To my relief she told me I could stay at her place.� Her face book page showed she was still beautiful.� A nice thick body made for hard fucking which she knew how to use.

//� I went up the day before the conference and found her house (got to love Google earth).� She greeted me at the door and I loved her look.� She wore jeans and a light sweater.� The jeans showed her thick legs and the sweater covered her full c-cup tits.� Her brunette hair in curls down at her shoulders.� Her green eyes smiling and warm.� After a while I noticed the girl was not around and asked to meet her and felt my pussy spasm when Laci told me she was at her friend's house for the next few days.� We had a wonderful dinner and I helped clean up and put the dishes away.� We went into the living room and talked and I felt my nipples harden when she turned the lights down and put soft jazz on the stereo.� She sat down next to me and leaned against me stroking my knee through my Dockers.� I looked over at her and saw the same raw hunger I felt throbbing in my rock hard nipples and swollen pussy.� Our open mouths mashed together and our tongues immediately dueled in hot love and need.� They slithered and stabbed before she took control and shoved her tongue deep into my mouth.� Gods I felt my body shuddering as our hands stroked and clenched over our heating flesh.� She kissed me deeply before I shoved her down onto the sofa and climbed on top of her body and kissed her deeply tilting my head to stab my tongue down her throat.� We soon got naked and I got her laid out on the sofa with one foot on the floor and the other leg on the side of the back of the sofa.� I simply devoured her cunt with wild gusto.� I stabbed her open cunt and latched onto her clit and sucked it with hard rhythmic sucks.� I gobbled her pussy and then moved up and sucked her full tits and pulled hard on her nipples and stretched out her tits making her gurgle and cry out.� We kissed before I went south and devoured her pussy some more.� I moved back and forth between her pussy and titties working my magic.� I could feel her stiffening and writhing in that impossible way and then her thick thighs clamped on my head and she started wailing in crushing ecstasy.� I moaned feeling my head rocked back and my ears mashed by her spastically squeezing thighs.� I prolonged her orgasm with my hard sucks on her clit and squeezing of her ass and hips.� When she finally came down she got me sitting on the sofa and settled between my legs spreading them wide and dined on my running sodden cunt.� Gods, all the old memories were brought to life as she sucked my cunt inside out and lashed my rock hard clit.� She started fingerfucking me hard with two fingers raking my nerve bundle until I was shrieking and wallowing as my body jackknifed and humped in the air before crashing back into the sofa only to rise again shaking violently as my cunt pulsed out searing waves of cum and bliss.

//� We sucked it each other off several more times before sleeping.� When we woke in the morning we immediately started kissing and groping feeling our bodies instantly hot for each other again.� I was almost instantly wet for her yet again.� she got out her strap-on and got it synched in.� She remembered my love of big dicks and had ten inches of dick ready for me.� She mounted me missionary pushing my legs back and shoved her dick deep into my wet cunt.� She fucked me hard using her weight to slam her dick deep into my cunt piercing my womb deep in my belly.� She savagely sucked on my nipples biting on them and pulling them taunt stretching my tits out making me cry out in pleasure.� She rammed fucked me to a mind blowing orgasm that had me flipping and screaming in ecstasy.� I can so clearly remember swooning and her lifting my legs and putting them on her shoulders as she sat up and slowly slide her dick into my shit hole.� I felt my whole body stiffen and shudder as that bulbous cock head pierced my rosebud and invaded my rectum.� She slowly worked my asshole loose and then pounded her cock so hard into my colon making my head lull to the side moaning and gibbering.� She pounded my shitter while I began to pull on my nipples with one hand and began to masturbate my clit with the other.� Soon I felt that delicious tightening in my belly and my asshole beginning to pulse and clamp down on the invading stalk sliding in and out.� Suddenly I cried out when her dick slide out my shit hole but I purred with happiness when she kneed to my head and pushed her dick down and I opened my mouth and moaned tasting my shit juice on it.� She pumped her dick in and out my mouth as I pumped my head up onto the stalk invading my mouth.� She was one of the first girls I did atm with and I loved doing it with her again after so long.� She asked me how my shitter tasted and I moaned back like sweet candy and I croaked "I love sucking my shit off your dick baby!"� I loved seeing her eyes pulse and she again lifted my legs onto her shoulders and she took my asshole roughly.� She fucked me close to orgasm several more times before ripping it out and moving up and leaning down and letting me clean my shit hole off her dick with hungry sucks.� She gripped my hair and tilted my head back and slide it down my throat deep and then ordered me to lick up and down the shaft with slow tongue strokes while looking at her.� I just felt our love renewing as we started into each other's eyes as I licked my asshole off her dick.� She then ravaged my asshole to a simply mind rending orgasm.� I can see my ankles herk and jerk over her shoulders as I gripped the sheets with my clawing hands and slammed my body up and down on the bed as I died from ecstasy.� Screaming out at the top of my lungs goddamn, shit and fuck for the gods to hear.� Feeling my tits whiplash and flop on my sweaty chest as my asshole pounded pure fucking pleasure to my brain.� Only slowly did my orgasm wane as she kept pounding my asshole so well and slammed her thighs into my thighs and ass making my body jolt back my tits wallowing and whiplashing back and forward.� I so love feeling my tits whipping around like that slapping up into the base of my throat as the shockwave moves up and feeling them shudder before whiplashing down and flopping on my ribcage.�

//� when I finally recovered I sucked her off to orgasm first before getting synched in and took her first missionary, then spoon where she came hard. She then got her on her hands and knees and I took her again.� I pounded� her cunt hole hard watching her body shake and those shockwaves rippling down her thick but toned thighs and hips.� I pounded her hard and leaned over sometimes to watch her hanging tits whiplash and swirl violently.� I then swished my mouth and dropped heavy gobs of spit onto her sphincter and used my thumb to invade her rectum.� I spit into her open asshole and worked it loose and then took my dick from her cunt and slammed it deep into her shitter.� She wailed and shook as I buried half of my dick up her asshole.� She shuddered and moaned sagging as I slowly worked her shit hole watching her sphincter bow out and in at first.� I had to take several minutes to work her shitter loose so I could work my dick hard in and out her asshole.� Then I quickly took her asshole balls deep.� I pounded her hard gripping her hips and slamming forward making her jolt forward. �A constant symphony of moans and groans filling the room.� Sweat was now dripping off her back and down her ribs her hair all sweaty and lank like mine.� We were two whores in heat.� I pounded her shit hole with ball deep thrusts and pulled out and stepped over her shoulders.� She turned over and opened her mouth wide and I slide my dick deep into her mouth and I moaned feeling my eyes roll back as she sucked and bobbed on my dick so deep and hard her hair jerking and her tits rolling with her pumping head.� She flipped back over and I mounted her again and again as I took her asshole deep and hard and she cleaned off repeatedly moaning and telling me her asshole tasted like chocolate and how sweet it was.� I could sense the end coming and barked at her to jerk her clit off.� She frigged herself hard as I got up on the balls of my feet and hammered fucked her asshole so hard her whole body whiplashing and shaking with my punishing thrusts.� She came with a startling wail of crushing pleasure and massive seizures of shaking and juddering.� She slowly collapsed and I followed her down getting into pushup position still slamming my dick straight down her shit pipe prolonging her anal 'gasm.� She shook and jackknifed up as she had a second orgasm as I nailed her down to the bed.� I felt my sweat dripping off my face as I pumped my hips slamming my dick into her sphincter.� Finally she came down from her orgasm high as her body slowly stopped jerking and herking. �I then stopped my rape of her spent asshole.� I pulled out and laid down on my back to rest and moaned watching her roll over and scoot down lifting my dick from my sweaty belly and slowly lick up from the asshole ring on my dick and then swallowed the cockhead to finish cleaning it as she purred and moaned her pleasure.�

//� Sigh, she sat back against the headboard with some pillows behind her.� She then had me lie against her and I settled into her warmth and felt her firm tits, pressing into my back and her thick thighs clasping around my hips.� My sweaty head was resting on her shoulder.� She started to pump my slippery tits hard and pulped them sinking her fingers deep and twisting them to knead my tits harshly just like she remembered me loving it. She slowly worked them and then snuck her right hand down my sweating belly and started to rub over my clit.� I reached down and pulled my clitoral hood back and spread out my labia lips with my fingers.� My clit and slit were wet and swollen and primed.� She jerked off my clit with her rubbing fingers for a minute before shoving two in my hot steamy fuck hole and pumping my cunt with her arched fingers raking my frontal vaginal wall and her thumb mashing and swirling over my throbbing clit.� Her other hand stroking over my heated flesh.� My thighs, ribs and belly.� My head lulled over and she kissed my cheek and forehead and started whispering to me to cum.� cum hard on her fingers.� how much she had missed me and loved me.� I wallowed back into her� and started to twist and pull on my rock hard nipples.� I felt my belly starting to tighten and my thighs started to shake wildly.� She raked her fingers harder and her thumb really mashed, rubbed and squirted over my throbbing clit.� I felt my nipples engorge and clit pulse madly as I pulped my tits and twisted my nipples with spasming fingers.� My body spasmed wildly, grinding me back into Laci's divine warm flesh my ass wallowing all over her groin and cunt.� I then snapped my head back suddenly thudding into her shoulder as my orgasm went from not quite being here to simply shattering me with beautiful ecstasy that erupted out my cunt as she pumped her fingers deep and circled over my nerve bundled.� I so remember small details.� I can still feel my heels digging into the mattress and shoving my back into her sweaty torso wallowing wildly.� I wailed and screamed that I loved Laci as my body jackknifed and slammed back into her body.� She jerked me off with such loving skill that prolonged my orgasm.� She suddenly used her free hand to slap my face and scream at me to cum again "you fucking whore, cum you goddamn slut!" as my face kept jolting to the side reddening with her short vicious slaps.� She knows me so well as my body sagged and then my heels dug in and I surged back into her chest again and screamed full caps as a second orgasm roared out my shattering cunt and roasted my mind with fucking searing bliss.� I wailed and jerked forward.� I loved feeling my wet lank hair jerking beside my sweat dripping face.� I then rocked back with a crippling gut tearing spasm and wallowed back into Laci's body as I cum and cum.� My orgasm simply fled like it appeared and I collapsed limply back onto her body as she softly stroked my spent flesh.� I was floating on a cloud of pure love.

//� We fucked the rest of the day and both evenings after I came home form the conference.� Our fucking has totally healed our rift.� We shared to each other our love of black cock and cunt meat.� We both live in areas with lots of black lovers to choose from.� She has been down twice to share with us.� I am smiling thinking of us having come back from the abyss.� I wish I could heal a few other wounds but alas I probably never will be able to.� I see that Sara and Laura have healed most of their pain but not all of it.� I think it is still fresh and they were archangels.� That would make it tougher.� I guess if Joanne, Maria and I split up like Sara and Laura had, it would be very awful and hard to recover from.� Still I love seeing how they continue to fuck heatedly and take all the joy and love their bodies have to give.� That is why we fuck.� To share and to give totally.� Maybe with time they can come to an understanding of being friends with benefits.� Still fucking hotly but going home to their main babies.� To me that is the definition of paradise on earth.� Having those special ones you share your soul with and the other angels that you share your body with to mind shattering orgasms often with your loving partners.� Sharing everything and loving completely.� I think Laura sees this, she just needlessly beats herself up over it still sometimes.� So many women to love and be loved by.� I never tire of sharing myself and love reading of a woman like me.� You show the sharing but remember to keep Laura real and loving in her pursuits.� I like other stories of women sleeping with multiple lovers and enjoy the sex but one needs the emotional side to really connect and share.� You show this.� One night stands are great and having fuck buddies but having women to share with is truly what makes the soul sing.� I hope I get to revel in Laura for many years to come.� One can hope!!!

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Chapter 322:

//� I like how this chapter starts.� Laura is on the prowl.� Well sort of.� It is even better.� She is taking advantage of opportunity.� She is walking down the street and sees a beautiful young black woman washing a car.� Instead of just ogling as she walked by Laura instead stops to look at the beautiful creature obviously strutting her stuff.� I love looking at young girls showing off their wares.� I see it all the time.� I am so often amazed at seeing twelve, thirteen and fourteen year olds made up and dressed so provocatively.� I am just their as Laura instead of simply moving on she is getting closer to the young vixen and is checking her out closely.� She is absorbing the beauty before her.� I have always loved how Laura swoons over the lovely creatures around her.� To many people simple avoid opportunities.� I am smiling as she is hiding behind trees as she gets closer.� I will sometimes kind of do that a malls.� Following a hot fox I have seen walking by and doing a 360 and following behind her drinking her ass and legs.� Sometimes I will try and pick and sometimes I get lucky!� With sluts like Sari, Amber and Veronica I have been at the mall cruising for teenage sluts.� I like how you catch young teenagers showing off their wares.� I have so noticed these tarts posing and wearing tight clothes.� A while back I was with Amber and Veronica at the local mall hangout site.� They were cruising and I was tagging along being represented as the older aunt indulging her nieces.� They zeroed in on a young buxom dark haired girl with Eastern European features.� They soon had Debra with us at the table in the food court.� They were flirting wildly with her and soon asked if I could take them back to Amber's house.� I love sluts who lie so easily when love is in the air.� Debra called her mom telling her she was staying the night with a girlfriend.� How true!� Of course I came in with them when I got Amber home and soon I had my face buried in Debra's cunt and sucked her off so good as she screamed in ecstasy.� My nieces ate her out repeatedly until she was totally spent.� Of course the tart recovered almost immediately and then she started eating our swollen cunts with hot gusto.� She simply moved up and down the sofa eating us out to multiple orgasms that had her lips swollen.� Her face, neck, tits and hair soaking wet with our milky cum.� Sigh.� Then we got our strap-ons buried deep into her fuck holes.� We tp'ed her asshole mercilessly as she sucked them clean straight out her shitter.� My little minxes have learned so good as they gripped her body hard to slam their dicks so hard and deep into her bucking and jamming body striving to impale her fuck holes fully on our invading shafts.� They way they pounded her exploding fuck holes through the girl's jackknifing and wailing orgasms.� I am shivering feeling their cocks sawing so deep in my cunt and asshole feeling their dick heads rubbing across each other in my belly.�

//� I love how you capture the moment and clearly show what you are trying to get across to the reader [She moved one tree closer and stopped again.  She had not yet seen the girl from the front and waited patiently to do so.  Meanwhile, there was a thrilling spectacle of glossy black thigh flesh and shapely calves flexing in the sun as the girl leaned far over the roof of the car, even kicking one foot in the air and balancing on one foot on the stool in order to reach the furthest parts.  She was short, perhaps five one, Laura guessed, and built on a small frame with short arms too, and so certain parts of the car, a large American sedan, were hard to reach.]� I have to admit that I am the big three gal myself.� I am first drawn in by your face, tits or ass but it is the rest that totally captures my heart.� I so love gazing at your legs, arms and simply get instantly wet for Serena Williams thighs and shoulders.� I moan and groan at how only you truly describe a woman's breast, ass and face.� But ONLY you describe the rest of a woman's body.� Others keep their women mannequins really and you instead flesh them out literally as living, breathing women.� Love how you mention sunlight working over Ashley's working leg muscles.� Sigh, that is beautiful in my mind's eye.� Love how you try to clue the reader into the actual hue of your women of color.� Heck, we white girls come in all different hues.� I do so love to watch you muscles playing and working after I have stripped you down.� Especially, the way your ass cheeks work as you walk and look back at me over your shoulder.� Fills me with fucking fire and inspires me to fuck you into a complete coma of spent bliss.� I do like how you show the exuberance of youth.� Young tarts are so good at showing off their wares before society and man's brainwashing has enforced a rigid code of "civility" that cows and tries to keep our sexuality crushed and under control.� Thank you for always making your women so confident of themselves.

//� I have always loved how you so positively and lovingly describe your women.� You lovingly paint the word picture of Ashley.� Where other authors never describe anything other than basic measurements and hair color you give us this [When the girl did climb off the stool and turn, Laura did see her from the front and felt a happy little flutter everywhere in her body.  The girl was very pretty, with a high, gleaming forehead, no doubt filmed with a little sweat following these exertions, and small breasts that jutted against the cloth of her striped top.  As Laura had anticipated, the girl's eyes swiftly swept across the entire neighborhood to see if anyone was watching, though without appearing to pay too close attention in case anyone was.  It was a skilled glance, clearly well-practiced, and Laura wondered if she often washed the car this way, putting on her marvelous little show.]� This word picture is immediately drawing me into the story and already I feel my nipples tightening and my pussy fluttering thinking of being there with Laura as she love rapes this young fresh nubile Nubian goddess.� You also show what I was mentioning.� A young, confident beautiful woman making sure her wares are appreciated.� I just know if any boys were around they would be all over her.� I so smile to myself when I see teenage aged girls already practicing their wiles.� I find girls in middle school coming onto me when Amber, Veronica, Sari, Sarah are on the prowl and I am part of it.� I have made it clear that I want as much as I can get.� They love watching me devour sweet young tarts with my adult passions and hunger.� I have taught them so much and they are so loving to include me as much as they do.� I am smirking at the practiced glance.� We women do love to be adored when we preen.�

//� We see that Laura moves in to get closer to this young tart.� What I like seeing is that Laura is putting herself in a position to win new love.� To often people walk past something that is possible for fear or man's brainwashing.� They have spent millennium forcing women to forgo their natural desires for sex that males get to express and enjoy.� I am smiling great big as Laura sees as she gets closer that Ashley is braless and her nipples are erect and sliding underneath the thin fabric of her top.� I may like noticing other features of my women but I feel my eyes ogling and zooming in on the main erogenous zones.� I know my mouth would had immediately started salivating and my pussy tingling seeing her nipples like this.� I love how you show the little things that excite us.� Other authors are so course in their story telling.� You make it flow so natural to the story and intoxicating.� You then show Ashley answering in that youthful, fresh way that only a teenager can bring.� When I am around my teenage lovers I often sit their with a slight "headache" listening to their inane conversations, pouting and constant plotting on getting that girl or guy.� I have to believe I was never like that.� Probably selective memory but I sure hope I was more mature at that age.� I chuckled at this [Laura almost hated resorting to this hoary old saying, and yet she had to say something.  "How would it be if I brought mine by here for you to wash when you're finished with that one?" she said, feeling like a dork, but moving closer.]� Sometimes one does have to resort to old cheesy lines like this.� I am usually quick on my feet but sometimes I am smacking myself mentally on the forehead when I say something so dorky I am cringing.� They laugh but my first thought is oh my gods I have blown my chance at getting in her panties.� I am quick on my feet so I recover but I hate feeling like a dork.� Still, you show Laura going for it and opening the fist gambit to new love.� I will make such overtures and will pursue you as long as you don't get overly cruel on me.� I love pursuing new love especially when they are so open and spontaneous. �If my gaydar has not been pinging then I am hoping for newbie cunt meat to dine on.� I find with younger women today that they are so much open to possibilities.� Man and the religious right are sure losing their grip on the early twenties and teenagers I can clearly see.� Both male and females seem so much more free to explore new frontiers that their parents were brainwashed to bypass and shun.� Thank the gods that their vile influence is slowly but surely fading.

// �Laura shows this by starting the tableau.� This is how I live my life.� I go for what I want and desire.� I take the freedom.� I went to an all week conference in January in a city about six hours away.� I make it a point to find partners for every night.� I had found female companionship but on Wednesday Sally had gotten what she needed from the conference and went back to Cleveland.� So Thursday morning I went into the eating area starting my search for new fuck mates.� I love talking like that.� I started to scan the room and quickly stopped.� I saw a table with three male, young black professionals.� All good looking and just had that air of culture and bearing about them.� I also noticed all had wedding bands on which made me crave them more.� I asked if I could join them.� I am smiling still seeing their looks of welcome and instant interest.� I quickly learned their names and we made small talk about our jobs and reasons being there.� I could tell that Ray was eyeing me with building lust and he was already ready.� The other two I could tell themselves had been brainwashed at least some.� I made it known I was looking for companionship to help spend the evening.� Ray quickly, of course, volunteered their services.� Gerry looked happy but reserved but Ezekiel was fidgeting.� We went to our classes and seminars and had lunch.� Gerry was now coming onto me but Ezekiel was still very reserved.� We meet for dinner and then Ray asked me to come to up to their hotel rooms.� Gerry and Ray were sharing a room and we went in and I noticed the two large beds all pulled back and ready for fucking.�

//� I wasted no time.� Seeing that Ezekiel was the worried one I dropped to my knees and looked up at him with heated eyes as he looked down at me with suppressed hunger.� I slowly undid his belt and zipper as his trousers bulged.� I shoved his pants down and then his briefs and moaned seeing an eight in dark black dick bobbing in front of me.� Ray and Gerry quickly undressed and told Ezekiel to get naked to.� I had opened my mouth and sucked in his beautiful dick and started to bob on it taking its warm length to the back of my throat as I sucked him hard.� The other to studs bent down and helped me get out of my clothes.� I twisted my head and licked all up and down Ezekiel's rock hard shaft.� I then started sucking off his workmates cocks as I moved right and left and sucked hungrily on black dick.� Ray and Gerry had six inch dicks that I sucked with wild gusto.� I was moaning and making sure to make lots of slurping noises to let them know I was a total slut.� I told them to racial insult me and fuck me rough and hard.� Ray was the aggressive one and he started working his dick harder into my mouth and I opened wide and jammed forward hard.� He got the message and started to gag fuck me gripping my hair and slamming his dick into my throat.� Soon they were all skull fucking so me so fucking hard as I gagged and choked out spit.� I deep throated them and licked their scrotums with their dicks fully down my throat making it bulge I know.� I so love seeing a woman's throat bulging with live or plastic cock.� I can so easily handle normal sized cocks.� I loved them calling me a worthless white bitch and did I "love sucking on a nigger's dick".� I moaned yes and I loved hearing Gerry and Ezekiel moaning how good I sucked dick.� Their moans and "shit, goddamn, fuck" made me feel so hot and sexy.� I could tell their wives are not good cock suckers.�

//� they fucked my face and throat for the next ten minutes I guess and then got me on the bed and started mounting me missionary and fucked me so hard and deep.� I loved when Gerry got my legs over his shoulders and speared his dick fully up my hot, tight cunt and fucked me hard into the mattress.� I came so violently as I bucked up and mashed my tits into his hard chest.� I gagged as they did me spoon and I did cowgirl my tits flopping and swirling slapping on my chest.� I would dismount and suck my cunt off their black cocks loving my slimy, whitish cunt juice smeared the length of their cocks and running down their nut sacks.� I just knew that Ezekiel had not experienced as much as Ray and Gerry.� I was riding him cowgirl again my hands on his shoulders.� I rose up and gripped his dick and pressed it into my sphincter and pressed down as I gripped his dick tight.� His head rose up his eyes big as saucers and groaned "Ohhhhhh ggggodamnnnnnn" as he felt my tight asshole greedily eating his cock as it slide deep into my rectum.� I started to pump up and down and soon I was fully impaling my shit hole on his dick as he lunged up his groin slamming into my ass cheeks.� He fucked me hard moaning and constantly moaning goddamn and then I pulled off his dick and I felt my asshole gush ass juice over my rosebud and splattering his groin and nuts.� His eyes bulged again as he watched me sit beside his groin and bend my head down and licked my ass juice off his belly and then lifted his dick and pumped my head deep on his cock my sweaty hair whipping around.� I loved all their gasps and groins and Ray saying he had seen this in a porn movie.� I mounted Ezekiel again and he fucked me hard.� Soon I was riding my other black bucks my tits flopping, wet slapping sounds of our surging bodies colliding making my tits whiplash.� I did lots of atm and Gerry had me spoon my left leg lifted high in the air and he punished my asshole so good and then moaned he wanted to fuck my pussy too and I reached back and guided his dick to my cunt and he slammed it balls deep into my spasming cunt that milked his dick as he gurgled out shit and what a slut I was.� He went back and forth between my fuck holes and suddenly out of nowhere my cunt exploded on his pumping dick and I was jackknifing and screaming like a banshee as I writhed my leg kicking in the air.� They continued to fuck me.� I was riding Gerry again and Ray got behind and slammed his dick fully up my asshole making me scream in pain and pleasure.� I croaked for Ezekiel to get in front of me and I croaked I wanted to suck his fucking nigger cock.� He groaned as I clamped my mouth on his dick and he started to flex his hips slamming his cock deep into my throat making me gurgle and drool spit.� He was totally into it now.� Soon his dick was raping my asshole as Ray let me feast on his dick right out of my asshole my nose pressed into his belly as he jammed his six inches down my gullet.� They fucked me all ways and finally I was on Ray's belly and leaning back as he slammed his dick up my asshole and Ezekiel pounded my cunt.� I thought back to what I saw Dodie doing last week with some Hebrew brethren.� I croaked for Ezekiel to jam his dick into my asshole.� He told me that Ray already had his dick in my asshole.� Like I didn't know!� I instructed him to use his thumb to press his cockhead into my shitter and worm it in.� He did it looking up at me in hot lust and amazement.� I keened as I felt his cock stretching out my sphincter and finally slipping in.� I gurgled and groaned gutturally feeling his dick sliding onto Ray's and their two cockheads sliding up and down my asshole making me caw and judder in ecstasy.� I could feel my body tightening with physical pleasure and knowing what I was about to reach nirvana.� I told Ezekiel to lean back his upper torso as he still pumped his dick hard into my stretched asshole.� I told Gerry to straddle my hips with his right knee beside my hips and his other leg extended over me and his foot on the bed.� He looked at me for directions.� I loved watching sweat dripping off his dark black face and chest.� I gasped out to him to bend his dick down and fuck my cunt.� His wide eyes looked down and he nodded as if in a trance seeing that my cunt was fully exposed and open for his beautiful black dick.� "Pleasssssse, fuck my cunt Gerry!" I moaned.� I gibbered and moaned as he started to pump his dick straight down into my cunt feeling his dick head slithering and riding onto Ezekiel's pumping shaft that was in turn riding on top of Ray's.� I had been supporting myself with both hands by Ray's head but I reached forward with my right arm and gripped Gerry's shoulder and jammed myself onto their cocks.� I felt my whole body shuddering and my eyes bulged and then I screamed out in helpless pleasure as they pumped my writhing and wallowing body.� I cumed so fucking hard as I kept jackknifing and wailing as pure ecstasy were exploding out my shit hole and cunt.� I gurgled and spluttered along with my moans.� I felt so full of hot black dick.� I had another orgasm on top of my first orgasm and just felt such powerful spasms gripping and throttling my body with wracking pure fucking ecstasy.� I was totally spent as my orgasms finally started to wan.� They got me on my back and Ray piledrove his dick into my asshole and he groaned so fucking loud shooting off hot semen up my clenching shit pipe.� Then Ezekiel and then Gerry mounted me missionary and slammed fucked my cunt and quickly shot hot semen up my cunt sleeve and flooding my womb with hot cum in fiery pulse after pulse.� They took turns fucking me the rest of the night as they would recover.� Sometimes together in various combinations or alone as they recovered at various rates.� Sigh, I was so tired but happy the next morning.� The next night I made sure to suck them off first since I had felt them cum so hard in my fuck holes.� I pumped and sucked on their dicks and told them to cum together on my face.� I so loved feeling their hot semen hitting my face so hard their semen blasting into my eyes, cheeks, forehead, hair and throat.� I could feel their first powerful pulses splattering all over my face and hair.� Some of their semen lashing fully over my hair.� I felt like a beautiful porn star and they loved doing it.� Perfect giving and taking.

//� You now give us the delicious dialog that makes the story move along so nicely and also reveals truths about the women in the story.� I try to read stories that have lots of "plot" and dialog but don't seem to go anywhere.� I am always amazed how your are able to convey so much about you women and Laura's growth in so little dialog and plot.� I like how you strike such an effect balance.� Your stories are not only sex but you don't waste kilobytes developing story lines that are not supposed to be erotica.� If you want a lot of story then go to slash fan sites.� This is how I discovered sites like asstr.� I was getting tired of reading big long stories and having PG-13 sex or badly described sex.� I wanted to get my sex without a ton of story.� The only problem in this world is so many of the stories don't really have a story.� Then some do but I get tired of wading looking for the pay off.� You on the other hand develop Laura each chapter and show us these new women and with the older women in her life you show their growth.� Deshona, Randi and Yvette are so much more than when they first appeared in the story.� I love it!� Then we see how Laura has grown.� One thing I love seeing is how Laura is able to admit she is a lesbian or has strong lesbian desires.� In the past she used to fall apart when she was confronted with her true sexuality.� In fact I used to pull my hair listening to her denying the truth and falling to pieces a few times.� She has grown so much.� I love strong women who are sure of themselves.� But I also like seeing growth.� I am so much a better person than I was at Ashley's age.� Then as I truly grew up I have continued to become more and better.� I am so far from perfect but I continue to strive to be a better person to others and myself.� I am smiling seeing Ashley being so forward.� I so know I am going to be devouring a newbie when they don't run or are not squimishy with me from the beginning.� I have noticed that a change has come over the last generation.� Women of this age bracket are so much more open to themselves and what they want and whom they want to be.� Still lots of homophobia of course but so much less.� One still gets lots of initial gasping but so many are really curious and desirous.� I just take that curiosity and set the hook deep and then reel them in quick and fast.� I then devour with wild gusto and total focus and love and besot them with unimagined pleasure and then share with my archangels and angels and make them total bi sluts at the least.� I so love seeing a newbie dining on an angel of mine's cunt or asshole and making them cum so fucking hard.� I just preen knowing I have shown another woman the truth about themselves.

//� I love you showing a curious, horny teenager seeking new frontiers ["I get it.  You're married, but you always fantasied about doing it with a chick.  A hot neighborhood sista with a ghetto booty."������ Laura smiled mysteriously and said nothing.������ "Me too," Ashley went on, now shockingly frank.  "I mean, I always wanted to have a lesbian experience.  Just didn't want to do it with Elvis, know what I mean?"]� I like how you show restraint can be just as effective in landing your woman as putting the blast on her.� I try to gauge your reactions with careful listening and watchful observations.� I know almost all teens both male and females wonder about the same sex before man's brainwashing takes full affect.� They just need to be shown the joys of bi and gay sex.� I have to agree with Ashley about the butch girls.� I can go soft butch but I have always thought that if nature makes you a girl then be one dammit.� Of course that is short sighted and mean of me.� All of us need to be what we are but I am just not attracted to a woman whom chooses to look and maybe act like a guy.� If I want that I just fuck a guy.� I know I have so much more to grow.� I no longer get fried about it but I still fret about it I guess.� I love the curiosity you show here.� I so know I will score when I hear such openness to new things.� I love how the religious right is losing the war.� One girl and even boy at a time.� I just laughed now [Laura followed her into the house like an obedient dog.  I hope my tongue isn't hanging out, she thought.  She had a hard time keeping her eyes off the 'ghetto booty,' which was indeed a miracle, high and hard and round and swelling.  The glossy black backs of Ashley's young thighs were also hard to ignore.]� I have always adored your little humorous jabs.� One author works for his humor and achieves it but you succeed with you humor almost effortlessly.� It just flows from the story.� I am known for being witty and love reading it.� It so hooks newbies and makes your angels swoon for you.� Then you show the affect of a "ghetto booty" on you.� I love looking at the whole body but it is your ass, tits and face that initially hook me.� I can still remember the first time I saw Shana.� It was her awesome tits and then ass that smite me.� Soon I noticed her hypnotic eyes and full shoulders but I was hooked by her tits and especially by her bubble butt.� I could just feel myself drool thinking of sliding my tongue deep into her rectum and gaping that beautiful ass and fluttering my tongue in her rectum licking all around.� I so swoon as you are telling us the darkness of Ashley's skin.� I so love all hues of women of color skin but a truly dark Latina or black woman makes my cunt instantly wet.� Only you tell us the hues of your women of color.� Thank you!

//� I am having to smile at this turn of events.� You take a common event in suburbia and show how love can grow from it.� I guess all across the country car washes are prevalent in the warm weather.� Here there is a ton every weekend when it is warm on the weekends.� I have over the years gotten my car washed early on Saturday morning when I am not in with an angel.� I will do something early in the morning.� There is a web site locally that many organizations sign up on and I look for carwashes where I might find black or Latina girls else it is simply cruising.� The latter are still so fucking rare here.� Sigh, fortunately I love the darker hues as much!� I look for organizations that I suspect black females will be at.� You would be surprised how many churches have gay members and don't even know it the idiots.� I also seek high and middle schools with high black attendance.� During July last year I saw one for the rotc programs at some close by high schools.� I know many minority students use this as a vehicle to get ahead.� So when Saturday came I went out and ran around the neighborhood and took a nice shower.� My babies were away so I was free if I got lucky.� Of course I rarely score like this but one has to try.� I do better now that I am open to screwing any hot young studs that may catch my eyes.� What teenage boy doesn't dream of fucking a milf.� When I got to the car wash I nearly swooned.� It was full of black women and girls.� I pulled in and got out. �I always make sure to wear as little as possible.� My toned thighs were stuffed in a pair of tight cutoffs and I was not wearing a bra underneath my baby doll.� I smiled seeing the guys ogling my firm tits and poking nipples.� Fortunately, a black woman about thirty I thought came over with a clipboard in hand.� She eyed me over and looked at my car.� I showed her some areas I wanted to make sure were clean and I felt my nipples harden even more and my pussy clench when she rubbed up against my arm and side "inspecting" the areas I was pointing out.� She was only about five foot one and had a full rack bulging out her bikini top and her own cut off jeans showed her flaring hips and tight thighs.� I found out her name was Jessica and she was a cpo on a carrier.� We made hot eye contact as we bantered about the heat and her watching over the car wash.� I already knew that I would be dining on her cunt in a few hours as I felt her eyes hungrily devouring my tits.�

 

//� As my car finally got down the queue and was ready to wash two high school girls jumped in front of the boys getting ready to start washing.� They cursed each other but I told the boys to move on.� They stared at the girls and called out dykes to them.� I looked at Jessica and she stormed over to the boys and started getting ghetto on them.� Little did the boys know that they had pulled the wrong chain.� I had to chuckle at their discomfiture.� I felt the beginnings of a dilemma forming.� One girl was black about five foot seven with b-cup upswept breast with jutting nipples and the other girl was Puerto Rican with full c-cup tits and frizzy hair tied back in a ponytail.� The girls ogled me and gushed about how beautiful I was and how hot my car was.� I rolled my eyes.� Hondas are not sexy.� They got to work with a vengeance making sure to shimmy their tits for me and sticking out their asses.� I felt my lust for them flaring.� I wanted all three of them and I knew I had to get them all or nothing.� Jessica came back other and fumed about the boys. �She watched the girls enthusiastically wash my car.� She watched me lovingly watch their wet asses and swaying tits.� I felt her deflate a little and start to move off.� I gripped her hand and pulled her back to me surreptitiously.� I bent down and whispered in her ear "I want to eat your pussy so bad baby!".� I smiled watching her melt for me.� I knew she was mine.� I just had to get the other two.� I asked for their names and found out the black cutie was A'drea and the Puerto Rican was Samara.� Made me think of the ring.�

 

//� They finished my car and I gave them twenty dollars.� They beamed and I asked the three of them if I could take them to lunch showing my appreciation for the military.� They eyed each other and accepted.� I went back at 2:00 as the wash was breaking up and they followed me to a favorite Mexican restaurant and I bought them lunch.� I had gotten a booth and Jessica sat beside me and the teenagers on the other side.� We joked and I found out that the two teenagers were rising Seniors and at the top; of their rotc class.� Jessica mentored at the other high school and didn't know the girls well.� It was kind of funny all three were gay or bi and they weren't sure about the other.� It was making them hesitate to come on to me for fear of being reported I was sure.� I knew I was not going to let this opportunity slip through my fingers.� I had requested a booth in the back of the restaurant.� Gave us some privacy.� I looked into Jessica face and said repeated softly "I'm going to suck your pussy so good."� When I looked over at the teenagers their mouths were hanging open.� I spoke to them "Jessica and I are going to fuck you blind."� I told them how mature women can fuck you so hard and deep.� That we were going to make them cum so hard feeling our tongues in their pussies and sliding up their assholes.� I told them all how I was going to ride their faces and plunge my strap-on up their assholes and pussies.� They all just stared at me in shock.� It pays to be a slut sometimes.� They were all in the palm of my hand.� I was sure they were wondering what they were getting into but I shivered thinking taking them to new heights.� I kind of think of it as my version of shock and awe.� I paid the bill and told them to follow me home.�

 

//� We got back home and they followed me into the house like little sheep following the shepherd.� In the living room I pulled off my clothes and told them to get naked.� I settled on the sofa and watched them looking at me waiting for instructions.� They were so beautiful and I looked at their hard nipples and wet cunts and distended labia lips.� Their breathing shallow, their eyes full of fire.� I told Jessica to turn towards the teenagers and then told them to fuck her good.� They all hesitated and I urged Samara on sensing she was the most ready to move forward.� She stepped forward and cupped her hand behind the cpo's head and pulled it back lowering her mouth.� She slammed her tongue down Jessica's throat and I started masturbating watching Jessica's compact body shuddering.� A'drea bent and hefted Jessica's full tits in her hands and excitedly started slurping and sucking on her nipples.� Fucking an officer was filling them with raw lust.� They quickly got her on the floor and they kissed her deeply and sucked her nipples off and pulped her tits in their lust.� Jessica moaned and spread her legs wide.� Samara was soon between them and licking her pussy wildly and sucking so hard on her clit.� A'drea sucked on her nipples bunching her tits together and sucking fast over both nipples pulling on them and squeezing her tits hard.� Jessica was moaning dementedly.� She had a hand on both of their heads encouraging them. She kept calling A'drea a fucking nigger and Samara a worthless Spick and filthy wetback.� A slut after my own heart.� Samara sucked harder on her cunt and wormed two fingers into Jessica's pussy and pounded her hard while she stretched out Jessca's clitoral hood and worked the nubbin in and out her lips.� A'drea whined and pawed at Samara's head begging her to let her eat Jessica out.� I had to smile when Samara wiggled her head no and sucked all of Jessica's cunt she could into her mouth and supper sucked pumping her head hard.� All Jessica could do was explode with a wailing orgasm.� her body flopped and jackknifed wildly as Samara continued sucking her off and A'drea fell back on her tits stuffing her mouth full of a nipple and voraciously sucking on it.

 

//� The girls switched up and now A'drea sucked her off with lots of tongue fucking.� Then A'drea got on a chair and whined for Samar to suck her off.� I smiled as Samara scurried over quickly and shoved her face deep into her lover's cunt.� Jessica kneed over to me and fell on my pussy.� Gods she was so fucking good.� I had already jerked off once to take off the edge and now I watched Jessica suck me off with military precision.� Soon I came screaming as I bucked my cunt into her devouring mouth.� We spent the rest of the afternoon sucking and tribbing ourselves to ruin.� We had pizza delivered and had a nice dinner.� The girls called their mothers and told them they were spending the night with a friend.� I took them into the bed room and fished out strap-ons for me and the teenagers.� I told them that Jessica was the person of honor tonight and got to go first.� She got on her knees on the bed and started to suck us off.� I loved how she made obscene slurping noises.� I gripped her hair and jerked her head hard and looked her in the eyes asking permission.� She moaned her eyes rolling back and I started skull fucking her hard her spit flinging out her open mouth and drooling off my dick onto her tits and belly.� The girls excitedly took their turns pounding Jessica's throat and loving the power it filled them with.� Soon we were fucking her missionary and doggy hard and deep her firm tits rocking and rolling.� I told her I wanted to dp and tp her and she cawed yeessssssss!� I got on the bed and she mounted me reverse missionary and I fucked her cunt and the girls spit into her asshole and I noticed A'drea made sure to go first and sank her white dick into the naval officer's tight asshole.� Soon she had it buried and she lunged and pounded her dick into the cpo shit hole she fucked her hard for a few minutes and then pulled out to let Samara have her turn.� I moaned as Jessica's head rocked back and she screamed when Samara shoved her cock balls deep up Jessica's needy asshole.� A'drea got on her knees by our heads and pressed her cock down.� I saw her hopeful look.� I love girls watching porn.� Jessica eyes slowly refocused and she saw A'drea looking at her pleading.� She opened her mouth wide and A'drea shoved her ass creamed dick into Jessica's mouth and her eyes rolled back as Jessica undulated her head up and down working the big plastic dick in her mouth.� She slurped it clean and bobbed on it with gusto until Samara pulled out and fell to her knees on other side and Jessica lunged on it and slurped it clean.

 

//� We fucked her hard and she had one thrashing grunting orgasm.� We kept fucking her me pounding her box feeling her cunt juices basting my groin.� Our sweaty bodies mashed together our tits flattened our nipples digging into tits and upper bellies.� We kept pounding her with girls slamming her asshole with all their strengths.� I saw Jessica's arms contort back when A'drea gripped her wrists and pulled on them to slam Jessica into her dick pounding her shitter.� Sometimes she gripped her shoulders or hips but I noticed she liked gripping and pulling on her wrists.� Samara simply pulled her head back her hair.� They sometimes torpedoed her asshole by pulling out their dicks and slamming right back in.� The poor woman simply died from her second orgasm. She screamed like she was being murdered and humped up and down as she cum violently.� We then did the teenagers hard and deep and found out they were no anal virgins and loved doing atm as much as the adults.� We made Samara cum twice and A'drea three times.� Then it was mine turn.� We were all dripping with sweat by now and our hair totally lank. �Gods they took turns doing me classic tp and then spooning me as I kept rolling over and cleaning the cock that had just been pillaging my asshole to ruin and making cum so fucking hard three times myself.� I loved cuming while Jessica slammed her dick down my throat tasting my asshole all over it and Samara was arching her back slamming her dick fully up my exploding shit hole as I gagged and screamed around the dick down my throat.� The slut A'drea frigging my clit and fingerfucking my pussy to make the cum that more devastating and crippling.� I felt my body contract as much as it could folding at the pelvis and then ramming straight all the while being pinned by the cocks down my throat and up my asshole.� it was pure heaven let me tell you.

 

// �The next morning I got up early like normal and got in shower.� I smiled when the door opened and Jessica stepped in.� We immediately wrapped our arms around each other and kissed deeply letting our new love twine with our tongues.� We raped each others mouths and Jessica tried to swallow my nipples and pulped my tits like she now knew I loved it.� She then kissed down my belly licking off the shower spray as she nipped and sucked.� She got on her knees and looked up at me with squinted eyes in the spray.� "This nigger is going to suck your white cunt so good honey!" she cooed and then simply devoured my cunt.� Gods her tongue slithered and punched so deep into my wet, swollen pussy.� She gobbled my fuck hole and sucked so damn good on my clit.� I gripped her hair and jammed her face into my rotating and humping cunt.� I so loved looking down and telling the nigger to suck my goddamn white cunt good you fucking black cunt and other such.� I gurgled as she sucked harder and deeper looking up at me with heated eyes full of lust and promise.� I cried out helplessly as I cum wildly my cunt riding up and down her dark black face her mouth working magic on my exploding cunt.� I then got on me knees and sucked her off after ravaging her mouth and tasting my cunt in her mouth and sucking her nipples deep and hard gnawing on the areolas and pulp squeezing her tits so hard.� I got on my knees and sucked her off with all my skills as she cursed me and told me to suck her fucking cunt off you white bitch and her other such talk.� I am smiling seeing her body juddering forward and slamming back into the wall when she cum so hard and violently for me.� She screamed her pleasure her full tits whiplashing and flopping on her flailing and jolting body.� I let her slide down and then barked at her jerk herself off as I sucked on her nipples hard.� I looked her in the eyes and slapped her tits hard but not to hard.� I felt their full weight judder over.� She moaned and I asked her if she liked it rough.� Geeezzzz, her head lulled back her eyes rolling back and she cawed a long yessssss!� I quickly ramped up slapping her tits so hard in the shower spray her tits flopping and wallowing with my blows feeling their heavy weight in my palms as I mercilessly slapped her full titties seeing her nipples so swollen and steepled areolas.� I gripped her face hard and spit in her face.� Her moans told me all I needed to know.� I started to slap her face viciously as it jolted to the side and still slapping her heaving tits and upper arms as she whined moaned.� Her body began to shake and judder helplessly as I now snarled at her to "cum for me you fucking goddamn nigger!"� I slapped her face and tits harder still barking at her.� I loved seeing my white hand striking her black face and seeing her face jolt to the side over and over.� Gripping her face with my fingers and thumb and calling her a nigger and fucking jigaboo.�� Hearing her low moans and slapping her face harder listening to her moans get even deeper and harder.� Her slitted eyes watched me raise my hand and then slap her viciously repeatedly and spitting into her face and eyes.� I watched her breathing get deeper and harsher knowing her orgasm was approaching.� I watched her fingers slamming her cunt.� Her other hand forking and squeezing her clitoral hood, rubbing furiously over her swollen nubbin.� Sigh, she cumed so hard for me her cries echoing off the shower stall walls her ankles wallowing all over the tiles of the shower stall floor. �Her head thudding back into the tiles and wallowing all over it as her whole body jackknifed and shuddered violently as she cumed so fucking hard for me as I simply enjoyed the show as I sat back and watched the most beautiful sight in existence right before my eyes.

 

// �I got her groggily up and out the shower.� She looked around for the towels but I told her to not get dry and led her back to my bedroom.� I quietly asked her as we dripped water whom she wanted first and she smiled great big and whispered immediately Samara.� I told her to take her to the first bedroom on the left since it has a king size bed also.� She woke up the teen angel and quietly took her out of the room.� I moaned getting up on the bed and rubbing up against A'drea and she quickly woke up as our bodies were now both wet and slippery.� We got in the that full body clench I call the "love clench" as our tits mashed and arms and legs twined as we rolled right and left our tongues exploring deep into hungry mouths.� I swirled my tongue around hers and before twining them tight in deepening love.� I whimpered when she roughly shoved her tongue deep into my mouth and kissed so fucking deeply our faces tilting over to mash mouths tight letting her tongue rape my throat as I juddered and felt my eyes roll back behind my eyelids.� I pressed her down and got up on my hands and mated our groins and started to fuck her pussy with mine.� Gods it was so perfect.� I rub and swirled my cunt into hers as she whimpered and moaned she could feel my clit fucking her pussy.� I would fuck her good and then sag down when I tired and we kissed deep wallowing our tits against each other.� I would rise up when I felt my arms strengthen again.� Finally, I could sense her reaching her orgasm.� Her hands clenched my ass checks and jammed hard down as I felt her thighs clenching along mine her ankles hooking over my heels.� I rammed fucked her with my cunt and digging clit and I saw her eyes get that beautiful exotic look of a shattering orgasm being born.� I arched my back as hard as I could and concentrated on contracting those muscles in my lower belly and inner thighs that send me over.� Suddenly, my cunt felt like it was tearing itself inside out as I cried out and jammed forward and down with all my might slamming my cunt repeatedly into her open, red, flowing cunt.� Her guttural moans and her flopping, hitching body was so fucking beautiful as I felt my face slash horribly and I spastically rammed my cunt into hers as our orgasm bonded us in deep love.� I wailed "fuck" over and over as spittle sprayed out my clenched teeth between tight throated wails.� I am swooning feeling our cunts soaked in each other's hot cunt juice.� I sagged down and we kissed deeply again.� I soon was slowly moving down her body inhaling her nipples and drilling her navel before simply devouring her cunt to a devastating orgasm.� I loved how she screamed her bliss and bucked and jackknifed so wildly as her body would seizure with horrible contractions and then stiffen like she was being torn apart before another seizure gripped her whole body and shook it violently making me feel so beautiful and loved.� She ate me so expertly to devastating orgasms before we tribbed again in classic scissor.� I cum with womb scalding shocks and she finished herself off riding my face.� I loved urging her on and feeling her grinding her cunt over my mouth and chin my tongue drilling deep and sucking savagely on her clit.� She cum so hard filling my mouth to overflowing with hot teenage cum.� It was so cute that a little later Samara startled me beside the bed.� I had dozed off a little I think and she simply said with heat filled eyes "my turn".� She got on the bed and A'drea left with a skip in her step.� Obviously, eager to devour Jessica beautiful cunt.� Gods, what a total slut and whore in bed Samara is.� Just like me at her age.� We fucked so exuberantly as we came with womb shattering orgasms.� Adding to my pleasure were the wails and curses that came from Jessica and A'drea as they continued to fuck like bitches in heat.� Gods, I love hot, sweaty, hard fucking love.

//� I can say that no other author shows how bantering over peeling an orange can lead to love.� You so capture how it is the little moments that we must seize upon to find love.� Other authors always have some big setup that builds to the penultimate moment of seduction.� Sure that occurs a lot.� And you show this.� But you also show how the continuous moments of our life can also lead to love.� You just capture this so effortlessly.� I am truly amazed at how you pull both off so expertly.� Some of it technical with your command of English and plot structure but I feel a lot of it is the passion and desire you bring to the stories and infuse your women with.� You continue to show how we use dialog to enrapture and seduce (plus that humor again!).� [Ashley's smirk turned into a very beguiling grin.  She turned sideways and gave a salacious bump and grind with her delectable bottom.  "Exactly."  She beckoned Laura over to the sink and began peeling her own orange.  "Are you a serial murderer?  Or did you have something other than murder in mind?"��� ����� "Divorced," Ashley shrugged, but with a meaningful glance.  The glance said: nobody is going to catch us, Laura.  Take your best shot.  "So . . . if you are a serial murderer, I guess I'm done for."  She said this with an airy, resigned sort of attitude, charmingly theatrical.]� I so love meeting sluts like this that I don't have to work my magic on.� They are ready to fuck and I just need to take their love.� I love how you show that Ashley is so strong and sure with a sense of humor.� I love how you show Laura using Ashley's humor and going with it to lead their rendezvous of hot love.� If you have humor it just inspires my humor and so leads to quicker loving and mind shattering orgasms.� ["I don't like triangles.  I like people who are free.  Less trouble that way."������ "I'm not married to a man," Laura said flatly.  "A woman."������ A smile of pleased understanding curved Ashley's enchanting mouth.  "Women are worse.  They cut you.  They want to kill you."������ "Are you speaking from experience?"������ Ashley grinned mischievously.  "Want to see my scars?"������ Laura nodded slowly.  "I do.  I want to see everything I can see."������ Ashley turned and walked to the other side of the kitchen, knowing Laura's eyes would be fastened on the Daisy Dukes and their contents.  She beckoned with her head.  "Come with me."]� Sigh, this is so fucking beautiful to read.� I get so tired of bland stories that keep the sex and the buildup so fuzzy and out of focus.� I feel that his could be used in a movie the dialog and pacing is so good.� This is real life.� Not forced and not stilted.� I can so see that your command of language and structure lets the reader get so into the story.� This is real life and makes my mind constantly flow to similar events and sometimes almost the same thing in my life just different to the reality of my life.� I love the little bit of mystery that Ashley is showing.� Since she has had no lesbian adventures (yet!) I can see boyfriends jealously fighting for her attentions and discovering her infidelities.� I can see an angry male pounding the shit out of her.� Pinning her to the bed as he slams her missionary style, her legs on his shoulder or doggy style slamming his cock up her cunt and then taking her asshole with deep powerful strokes of his long, thick cock.� Pulling out and pulling her around for her to slurp and bob on cleaning her shit juice off with moans of pure pleasure.� Snicker.� It is my fantasy after all.�

//� I like how you so effortlessly move from plot development to the loving in each chapter.� Like I say, you give us both.� You give us plot and story development to draw the reader into the story and make us come to know and care for these women.� You then give us scorching sex that makes one masturbate their kitty into a coma.� I so adore your sex.� Without the sex all the plot would wasted.� This is erotica after all and you never forget it.� But you again take things so much higher than the normal story.� I know I complain incessantly about the blandness of other's stories.� The plot is so misty and vague or borrinnggggg! and then the sex is so ho-hum.� Part of what makes it so bland is how predictable the sex is.� Same ole poorly describe kiss the mouth first, then suck the titties and then eat pussy.� Almost always the same tiring thing.� You give us so many different first movements [Laura caressed her smooth black cheek with the knuckle of one hand.  "What if your 'lesbian experience' makes you scream and shriek and groan?  Won't the neighbors want to rescue you?"������ Ashley now made big eyes at her.  "Are you really going to make me scream?  I can't wait."]� Not only the physical is unique but you give us that wonderful dialog that is so natural and wonderful.� I too love telling my love sluts what I am going to do to them and then doing it.� I make their eyes bulge like here.� I so love delivering the prefect love kill.� Plus, the subtle humor.� You are letting Ashley knowing she is about to die from it and Laura is doing it with that subtle humor I so love.� I love how you keep the motion going and show that ramping up of foreplay that leads to womb searing orgasms ["Not me," Ashley panted back.  "You're making my heart race."������ "You're making my pussy wet."������ These words seemed to electrify Ashley.  Laura could feel her taut little body tense up in her hungry embrace.  She ran her fingers all over Ashley's exposed black skin, and her lips up and down Ashley's smooth black neck, tasting a little of the thin sheen of sweat she had earlier seen there.  Her hands found the ghetto booty and squeezed it with hot relish through the Daisy Dukes.]� I so love feeling my slut love shaking in my embrace as we kiss and murmur love to her and make her hitch and writhe against me.� I so love bringing our lips together like Laura and Ashley here and licking lips and sucking on her lips with mine and running my tongue along her gums and teeth hearing her mewl and worming my tongue into your month as you moan and open your mouth wide so I can invade and conqueror your tongue.� I so love taking newbies mouths and claiming them for mine.� Whispering in her ear how I am going to suck their nipples so hard and sink my tongue deep into their pussies and assholes feeling them shake almost violently in my arms and gurgle into my devouring mouth.� I feel their knees going weak and having to crush their body to mine to keep them from collapsing.� Feeling our tits mashing and nipples digging.� I love how you kiss your women's neck and then telling of tasting a woman's sweat.� I love sucking on a neck or titty that is soaked and dripping with sex sweat.� Lapping and greedily swallowing that salty musky perspiration.� I love how you show that Laura's mouth is feasting on Ashley's neck and Laura's hands are busy working Ashley's awesome butt.� I so love reading an author who shows multi tasking and loving the whole woman.� Stroking the whole body to make her cum so devastating and awesome.� Needless to say again something that other authors never show.� How bland and sad it is for them and us.

//� Your pacing is so divine.� You show them finding a bed to fuck and how Laura is still leading this delicious fuck forward [Laura helped her pull them down, exposing the bottom sheet.  Then she grabbed Ashley again, kissing her rapaciously and pulling up the candy cane top to get her hands on the girl's marvelous, round, springy little breasts.  Ashley's nipples were big, bulbous puffies, and Laura cupped them in her palms, eager to get her mouth on them.  She kissed Ashley's neck again.]� Sigh I so love stripping my whore down so I can devour her.� One thing that you capture so well is that stripping down your slut and devouring her as you disrobe her.� I so love to kiss you deeply as I strip you.� Feeling your body squirm against mine as I remove your clothing and I stroke your fevered flesh.� I so moan when I heft or cup your tits for the first time rubbing my thumb over your rigid nipples and steepled areolas if you have the bumps.� Feeling your nipple squirming underneath my rubbing thumb and those steeples rasping underneath my thumb pad as I circle the nipple making you whimper and groan deep in your chest.� I so love how Laura cups Ashley's breast as she continues to kiss her neck.� Making Ashley her total slut.� Plus, I love how you actually describe Ashley's breast.� I am constantly amazed over the years how no other authors really describes their women's breast.� I can't remember one story where I get more than the general cup size and how they swing on the torso maybe.� Oh yeah, long nipples and thick nipples are mentioned.� But never the thickness of the nipple or the length describe.� Just long.� No details to draw the reader in. �Never anything about the areola.� Do they steeple and are they puffy at all.� Only you do this.� I have come to think you are more observant than them and have the desire to really describe your women as women.� Others keep them mannequins while you breath life into your women.�

//� I like the idea that Laura is helping Ashley achieve her dream.� I love in helping in that.� A few months back I visited a swing club that plenty of dykes and bi women frequent.� Men and couples come to this club to find women to take home.� I was looking for a couple and saw a new couple.� They were so young and the guy screamed navy.� I asked to join them.� When he stood to let me sit I was impressed with his manners and noticed his dick appeared to be large in his jeans.� One can be fooled but my interest went higher.� His wife (wedding bands) was Filipino and had that long black hair with full c cup tits and big ass I could tell.� I quickly found out that they were from a small Wisconsin town and had gotten out as quick as possible.� I told them I was a lesbian that loved cock and what were they looking for.� Janice was wanting to start fucking women and she told me Peter wanted to fuck his wife with other girls and guys.� I noticed he was �extremely nervous and I found it sweet.� Janice was definitely leading things here.� I leaned in and asked Janice in a soft voice how big Peter was and she whispered back nine inches.� I was hooked.� He still had some acne which on a guy is big turn off.� But a big dick can cover a lot of sins I do believe.� We had a few drinks which seemed to calm Peter down.� I then asked them to take me to their home.� I followed them back to their apartment and Janice led me to their bedroom with a nice queen bed in it.� I noticed that Peter was nervous again and we all just kind of fidgeted again.� Janice was clearly wanting to move things forward but Peter's nervousness was putting her off.� I asked Peter what was wrong and he kind of sputtered and said he was just nervous and a little out of his depths.� I can say I took the high road.� I then asked Peter if he was sure he wanted to do this.� I did not want to be the direct cause of any major problems.� I believe in adultery if a spouse needs spice to hopefully take back to the other partner.�

//� He assured me he wanted to get into swinging but he knew his parents would shit if they knew what he was doing.� I just smiled at him and asked him what he wanted to happen next.� He stared at Janice and me and said he wanted to watch us fuck and eat each other's pussies.� I smiled and asked Janice if they were into anal.� She smiled yes telling me she loved it in the ass.� Peter loved fucking her in the ass and she loved it.� I smiled bigger.� I took her in my arms and kissed her deeply and hungrily.� I slammed my tongue down her throat and explored her gums and underneath her tongue.� Soon she got into it and her tongue wormed into my mouth and fluttered around before I clamped onto it and gave it head.� We were quickly stripping down grinding our tits into our chests and rubbing mounds on hips and thighs when we got naked down below.� I loved hearing her squeals of pleasure.� Soon she was giving head to my tongue.� She was a very quick learner.� Now stripped, I inhaled her nipples.� She had rubbery erasure nipples that stretched and bent all over with my fingers and thumb and swallowed down my throat and teeth raked.� She was writhing in my arms.� I started jerking her off as we clenched and our legs were wrapped around each other's legs.� I wormed my hand down and shoved two fingers into her tight cunt and started pumping her fuck hole as I felt her juices running and dripping off my hand.� I then used my free hand to roughly pull her hair twisting her head back and over and then sucked her neck deep into my mouth and gave her vicious hickey sucking her neck between my teeth.� Her body wallowed into mine her nipples dragging all over my lower tits and upper belly.� She's about eight inches shorter than me.� Both of her hands were gripping my ass pulling my groin into her hip as I slimed it.� I finished marking her as my bitch and bent her back and gripped a tit and lifted it swallowing her turgid nipple and sucked it with deep throat sucks as I batted it with my tongue.� I felt her body begin to shake violently and her head whipped back as a full throated scream filled their bedroom as she jackknifed into my body her free tit rubbing over my chest and the nipple in my mouth got longer and harder as she cum so fucking hard.� Peter was sitting on the bed jerking his dick and watched us with glittering eyes.� I then led Janice's hitching body to the bed and leaned her back on it and put her sweaty thighs on my shoulders as I got on my knees between her legs.� I sucked her off with all my skills.� I sucked her clit hard drawing it up between my lips stretching it and then lapping her fuck hole and French kissing her cunt deeply.� Soon I was finger fucking her hard with two fingers that I pumped her flowing fuck hole.� I was working her clit hard working for the love kill when I slipped my two fingers from her pussy into her asshole and soon had her bunghole opened up and pumped hard.� Gods I loved pounding up into her shit hole as I sucked her clit off.� She again cum so violently her groin leaping up off the bed jamming my head back as her cunt gushed cunt juice all over my chin and throat as I sucked her clit through her orgasm make her flop and twist in ecstasy.� She quickly recovered and pulled me up on the bed and got between my legs.� She dove on my pussy and ate it like a wild woman.� I could tell she had been planning for this.� I later found out she had rented a ton of lesbian videos and read how to tutorials on cunnilingus on the Internet.� She tongue fucked my cunt hole and swallowed and lapped my clit so good. She drove her long tongue deep into my cunt wiggling it everywhere it felt like.� I felt my body lurching and seizing up and I cried out I was about to cum.� She then French kissed my cunt her tongue spearing deep into my clutching cunt.� She started to frig my clit and I simply died as my hands clenched into her scalp and jammed her face deep into my exploding cunt.� I wailed and cursed as my womb shattered and spasmed out hot gushes of cunt juice into her gulping mouth.� She sucked me through my bucking and wallowing orgasm.� I slowly calmed down and she then started ramping up again starting to fingerfuck my cunt and then my asshole going back and forth between the two.� Oh gods I was soon screaming as a second orgasm that went multiple had me flipping and jackknife violently as she sucked so hard on my exploding cunt and rammed her fingers deep up my clenching sphincter.� Again I jammed her head into my cunt and cursed her continuously as my womb shattered and my legs scissored and my elbows slammed into the bed in helpless ecstasy.

//� Peter was now more than ready.� I felt Janice pull her fingers from my spent asshole and lazily watched her move over to Peter sucking my asshole off her fingers.� She then dove on his nine inch shaft of iron.� She bobbed and twisted her head as she sucked her husband off.� I loved watching her hair flounce and jerk with her bobbing.� I finally recovered and moved up on his other side.� She didn't hesitate to take her mouth of his cockhead she was sucking hungrily and press it over to me.� I moaned taking his hard dick into my mouth and sucking hard on it and pumped my head up and down his veined shaft.� We sucked him off and then I watched Janice get settled and slowly take his dick down her throat.� Gods I loved watching her throat bulge with his shaft sinking fully down her throat.� She slowly came back up with tons of spit cawing out her throat.� She gasped in breath before taking down her throat again.� She came off and then tilted his dick over to me and then I deep throated his white dick down my gullet and licked his scrotum with my mouth wide open like a whore as the base of his prick jutted out my mouth.� I gagged up tons of spit myself and hacked spit all over his crown pumping his shaft and dickhead before swallowing fully again ramming my nose into his stomach.� I loved how they had both shaved all their public hair off.� It is nice not having male pubic hair tickling your nose and cheeks.� Dodie and I get our regular guys to shave it off.� We sucked on his white shaft and then he started fucking us.� We did it all ways as he pounded our pussies so expertly.� I loved it when he spread his legs on each side of our ass as we laid on the bed and he rammed our cunts so deep and hard.� Janice and I were constantly sucking and tonguing each other's tits and rubbing over each other's bodies with our clutching hands.� He fucked us each to squealing orgasms and he came in his wife's cunt.� He rested while I sucked his wife's cunt clean and we ate each other in a hot sixty-nine with her cuming first and then pressing down on my hips and sucking up on my clit until I felt my clit scream out in shattering pleasure as hot spurts of ecstasy blasted out my clit with her sucks.� We had some down time until Peter was ready and soon he was pounding our cunts and then took Janice's asshole spoon and pounded her hard.� I loved watching her roll off and gripping his shaft and sucking hard on his dick head sucking her ass juice off his prick.� She sucked hard bobbing on his dick sucking him off.� She told me to get on his other side and get on my side and I felt her guiding his cock to my asshole and pushing his cock into my rectum.� Gods he fucked me hard and she pulled it out and cleaned it with loud slurps and she shoved it back up my shitter and he pounded me.� She kept pulling it out and sucking clean.� She started to jerk me off as I squeezed my tits.� I felt my body jolting and my tits rolling until I had a shattering anal 'gasm.� I screamed and jackknifed.� I was spent. I slowly turned over and cleaned my asshole off his dick.� Janice then mounted him cowgirl and rode him hard her tits flopping.� She would pound down on him until she tired and then he took over slamming his dick slow and then fast up into her shit hole making her tits roll and flop up.� I pulled his dick out her asshole and sucked clean repeatedly.� She got off his prick and helped me clean a few times.� She then got doggy style and he fucked her back and forth between her cunt and asshole.� I loved watching his cock head sliding over her perineum to sink in the other fuck hole.� Laying my cheek on her full ass cheek and having him stuff my mouth with his cock all creamed with cunt or ass juice.� He started to ram fuck her and I got on my back below her and sucked hard on her nipples pulling her torso down.� Geez, she really cum so hard as she wailed and cried out with her orgasm.� Her body shaking and suddenly jamming my face full of her firm tits and then lifting only to slam down as her body was throttled with pure fucking bliss.� He pulled out her spent asshole and shoved his cock deep into my cunt and put my ankles on his shoulders and pounded me hard all bent over and soon I came so hard as I felt his beautiful dick blasting searing bolts of semen into my shattering womb.� I saw Janice's face come into view and we kissed deeply as she swallowed my further screams as her plunging tongue plunged down my throat and his spurting cock made a second orgasm bloom out of nowhere filling me with pure fucking ecstatic pleasure.� We slept and Sunday morning fucked hard and gloriously throughout the dawn hours our assholes and cunts taken repeatedly so hard and deep.� I had four more orgasms and Janice told me she had three herself.� We were totally wrung out by the time I had to leave to get back home.� Dodie and Frankie were coming over in the afternoon for some fun and games with me and my babies.

//� Just to make sure it is clear how you so describe a woman's breast like light years more than any other author I have read (and that is a lot) [Laura helped Ashley pull the top over her head, then kissed her way down Ashley's shoulder and her chest to one beautiful small breast, which she cradled in her palm.  Ashley's nipple was not only big and bulbous but black as coal, with a thick stubby center, and Laura licked and then sucked it hungrily.  She managed to suck about half of Ashley's small breast into her mouth.]� this one example is so much more than any other and this is the same thing I have seen for over 300 chapters.� It is amazing really when I compare you to all the other authors out there.� I can so clearly see Laura inhaling half of her small tit into her mouth.� Like me and Joann and Giovanna last night.� Perfect tits that I can half inhale like so.� I so love feeling my mouth fill with nipple and tit meat and squeezing the half jutting out my mouth as I sucked and stretch your tit so fucking taunt in my hard sucking mouth.� Two other things you capture that others again don't is the urging that Ashley and Laura encourage each other on.� They inflame their desires higher with the spoken world.� I get so tired of the silence until orgasm of other authors.� Plus, you show them undressing and giving us the little details of tops coming off and the pants being unbuttoned.� I can just so see it and think of me recently doing the basic same thing.� Your details allows us readers to get ourselves into the story by letting our life experiences merge with the story.� Like great poetry does.� I have to love Ashley gurgling at Laura inhaling her tit so deep into her mouth.� I find my new lovers are often surprised when I or a fellow fuckmate try to suck their tits off.� I make all my fellow lovers if not already versed learn how to truly love tits.� My virgin to great tit loving newbies so swoon when I work their tits and nipples especially with those cheek hollowing sucks and me pulling my head back stretching their breast and nipples out and through my clenching teeth.� Making them love harder and harder.� Yet again I must say only you show this hard tit sucking that I so love to give and take.� You are always giving the reader those divine small details ["Watch me," Laura panted back, now holding Ashley's small, perfect breast in both hands and raking her erect wet nipple with her teeth.]� Silence other authors have in their stories never allows them to complete their lovers.� I constantly murmur how beautiful I find my lovers and how I love this or that about their bodies.� It just makes them give me their whole body.� Anal virgins, I so know how to get them to give me their sweet, tight asshole.� Because I seduce not only their bodies but their souls with me constantly whispering how hot they are and how much I need to devour their total bodies.

//� There are three things that really drew me into your stories very quickly.� The first was the vocalizations of women being pleasured.� First, it was so fucking accurate and two you show the vocalizations throughout the initial seduction to the final throes of orgasm.� The second was the way you describe orgasms.� I finally found an author that made me feel an orgasm when I read their story.� I can feel my womb flipping and contracting just reading your stories.� It is so dead on.� Then there is this [This was perhaps almost as good as the moment of true orgasm: mashing your own hot flesh for the first time against the naked body of the girl you had just been so feverishly desiring for the past hour, hungering for her every pore, dying to touch her bare skin, to fill your mouth with her vibrant flesh, as Laura was doing right now.  She loved hearing Ashley mewl and whimper, as if this was more than she had bargained for too.������ "Unhhhh!  Oh!" Ashley gasped as Laura swarmed all over her delicious young body.  "Oh . . . oh Laura . . . yessssss!   Mmmmmm!  Oh . . . oh god that feels good!"]� Only you show the wonders of the full body clench.� That swarming over your lover and pressing your body to hers as completely as you can.� I think when reading other stories like there is an invisible barrier between their bodies.� A barrier that only allows them to use their mouths and fingers only on a woman's lips, breast, pussy and sometimes asshole.� That is so limiting.� You shatter those barriers.� You love the whole woman!� I so believe in fucking the whole woman.� I want my senses overwhelmed and then shattered by raw, exploding pleasure.� To do that you need to love the whole body.� I am so their as Laura consumes Ashley completely.� Making her whole body burn with the fire of need.� I so love to wrap my arms around your torso our legs twined tight.� Our titties mashed and grinding as our bellies and hips rub and grind.� Rolling to the right and then to the left putting first one on the top and then other as tongue plunge deep into cawing mouths and tongues twine in hot, slithering love.� Feeling our nipples poking and squirming around into tit meat and along our chests and upper bellies.� My hands clenching and stroking your fervid back and ribs.� Grabbing and massaging roughly your ass cheeks as I jerk in hard on them grinding your cunt into my lower belly, hip or my wet mound.� Our groins instinctively humping and swirling.� Smearing our love juice all over each other's groins.� I know I repeatedly say this but I find it weird and funny that only you show this.� I wish I knew why other authors ignore this so completely.� You make the muff munching and digital penetration so more rad with the real life buildup.� I live to start the windup and start making my sluts keen for it like Ashley here.� It so inspires me when my women tell me how I am pleasuring them.� It just makes me redouble my efforts.

//� I am smiling reading Laura "ingesting" Ashley's nipple.� Love your word choices!� I too inhale and devour your nipples and whole tit.� I so make my women writhe, whimper and beg when I love their tits.� I do have to say I am a master just like Laura.� I just do it harder and make them love it.� I am smiling even more when Ashley goes on how Laura is better than a man.� I hear that all the time with newbies along with my other angels.� It is for simply the reason that Ashley is expressing here.� We truly mean it.� All men really want is to bury their prick in our pussies and hopefully our assholes I know.� The rest is really window dressing to get to our fuck holes.� Even great lovers like Eric and Anthony when you really get to it are still working to burying their pricks in my mouth, cunt or asshole.� While I am loving your tits, mouth, belly, back, legs � I am doing it for the sheer love of pleasuring you.� You show this with Laura.� We women love our woman's body simply because nothing else would give us more pleasure.� We know we will get ours.� Our mouths, fingers and our bodies as trib implements are for your pleasure mainly.� When you hump my leg or hip I love feeling your cunt grinding and immolating itself and feeling it spasm and gush pussy juice all over my leg or hip but the pleasure I derive most is mainly mental.� Seeing you cuming so hard as killing spasms tear at your flesh and makes your face slash like I am garroting you and the screams of pleasure make my eyes roll back and spasm.� This is how Ashley is reacting and Laura has just started fucking her.� I love reading this attitude in Laura for it reflects mine [If Ashley was going to come quickly, then so be it.  She had had those who took a while, those who needed relaxation and concentration, and a few like herself who simply boiled over like a pot on the stove, as Sara had recently put it.  It was hard to tell which kind Ashley would be, but already she was writhing and whimpering and twisting, as if an orgasm could not be far off.]� I do want my cunt meat but if you cum quick then I will just make you cum again and again until you are spent.� I am like Laura. And I, like Laura, have found that women say they have a hard time cuming hard, but, I have found almost all cum pretty quickly with myself and my angles.� A skilled lesbian or bi chick can make most women cum fast and hard and then repeat it as soon as the clit will allow it.� I love liberating women and teaching them to cum and cum and to constantly go for the brass ring and not be ashamed to be a hedonist, a total slut and nympho and be damn proud of it.�

//� I love seeing Ashley's confidence knowing that almost all men want her.� I love sass and confidence.� That is something else I like about your stories is the confident women in it.� It is an aphrodisiac.� Laura has now arrived at heaven.� She is tonguing and devouring Ashley's beautiful quim� [Ashley was very aroused, now whimpering and twisting wildly, making it hard to keep one's hungry mouth on her inflamed slit.  Her pussy was small and tight and very red inside, framed by thickish black cunt lips, her clit a bright little marble at the top, which Laura tongue-swiped eagerly, bringing choking little shudders of joy from Ashley's lips.������ "Unh!  Ohhnnnggg!  Aiinnnggh!"������ "Oh, you have a pretty one, darling . . ." Laura cooed to her, tongue-fucking her, then fingering her with two fingers while she kissed her nubby little clit.]� Like I say you are the only author that describes the pussy being devoured.� This is one thing I find weird in that female authors don't describe pussies either.� I mean we spend an awful lot of time with our eyes only inches above what we are devouring.� I mean we spend most of our time up and close and personal with our women's pussies and get to know our lover's pussies so well.� Plus, others just tell us that the woman is going down on the woman and they usually tell us that the woman eating is so happy.� I love how you tell us that Laura is using the flat of her tongue and how Ashley is responding to the loving ministrations and Laura using two fingers to massage the opening of Ashley's wet fuck flower.� I love words like "nubby little clit" and "choking little shudders".� These are not bland vanilla descriptions.� These are word pictures that draw the reader in so hard.� Two Sundays ago I was in Shari, Cindy and Tameka's area and decided to stop in and catch up.� I got to their townhouse I noticed the driveway had their cars plus another.� I retrieved the hidden key.� When I got on the porch I could hear the obvious sounds of hot rutting.� I then got indecisive.� I can get like that.� I know I spent several minutes fretting about going in.� Should I just barge in with a new woman added to the dynamic.� Almost putting the key in the lock and then bending back up gnawing my lip going back and forth about going in.� Suddenly, the door opened and Shari stood there.� Back from the entrance so only I could see her.� She was dripping sweat and had cum all over her face, hair and dribbling down her throat.� I looked over and saw Cindy on the living room floor out for the count at the moment all sweaty.� Her legs spread out lewdly her cunt all swollen.� Her groin soaked in sweat and cum.� I stepped into the house and Shari closed the door.� On the big sofa, Tameka had her head on an armrest with one foot on the floor.� A dark black woman on her hand and knees was simply devouring Tameka's cunt like a famished whore.� She was lapping and pulling out Tameka's clit and letting it snap through her pulling lips and following the clit back down mashing her face into her cunt and lapping again before pulling the clit and hood up and letting squirt through her lips.� Over and over she did this and reached up to pull Tameka's nipple the other hand clutching Tameka's hip.� We watched Tameka start cawing and hitching.� Her belly suddenly contracting making her torso according a little.� Her head rising up more and more from the armrest.� She stared down with bulging eyes and horribly slashing face.� Slashes that showed Tameka's approaching ecstasy.� Finally the damn broke and Tameka was groaning so gutturally as her body writhed and bucked as waves of crushing bliss throttled her brain with pure bliss.� I had stripped by now and was rubbing my pussy.� I watched the new woman setup and she smiled up at me.� I went over to her and got her to sit on the end of the sofa as I settled between her legs.� I heard Cindy gasp and looked over and saw that Shari was fingerfucking her while sucking hard on her tits.� I looked up and asked my new lover what her name was and she smiled and told me Selena.� The whore reached down and pulled her shaved cunt wide open for me.� Her mound was several shades darker than her dark black skin and her labia lips and hood where almost midnight.� Her slit wet and pink.� Her inner cunt meat red and clutching for me as she clenched her belly to make her cunt pulse for me.� Her clit was like an oblong ripe pinto bean.� It was so shiny and wet.� Her humping groin making it rise and fall making my mouth water for it.� Her angular face and beautiful midnight eyes begged me to suck her off.� I dove my face deep into her cunt and I ate her out with all my skills and hunger.� I loved sucking in her labia lips and gnawing on them and stretching them out to get a feel for their length.� Sucking her clit and feeling it between my lips and deep in my mouth as my tongue traced it and memorized its size and dimensions.� Filling my mouth with spit and sucking her clit deep into my mouth and tongue slapping on as I deep throat soaked it in its pool of spit.� I made her wail.� I pushed her legs back and noticed her asshole was all puckered and swollen from being recently fucked.� I wormed my tongue deep into her asshole and tongue fucked it hard licking over her perineum and then sucking and tongue fucking her cunt.� Working back and forth over her perineum to work both fuck holes.� I got her legs on my shoulders and slammed fucked her asshole with two fingers while I French kissed her cunt my tongue wiggling deep in her pussy as my left hand forked and squeezed her swollen clit between my fingers.� I love squirting larger clits between my fingers feeling that hard nubbin worming up and down between my fingers.� I loved seeing her eyes large as saucers as her teeth gritted and her fingers were clawed into my scalp.� She was grunting and growling telling me to suck her black cunt and to "suck this nigger's cunt! you goddamn! white bitch!."� Snarling more at me to suck her off and I did!� Gods her screams made my ears ring when she cum so fucking hard bucking and jackknifing violently as she cum and cum for me flooding my mouth with hot pulses of steamy cum.� She overflowed my mouth her juices running down my cheeks and chin.� Sigh, I so love new love.

//� Geez, you so know how to ramp up to the orgasm ["Oh! Oh!" was all that Ashley could respond, thrashing and churning in the rumpled sheets, her face contorted with the fierce pleasures Laura was arousing in her taut body.������ Laura knew she would probably feel a little twitch or hitch in Ashley's clenching flesh if she touched the magic button, and sure enough, when her fingertips passed over a spongy little wet area she felt Ashley tense, and gurgle. ����� "Unnmmnnggg!"������ Oh honey, that's it! she hummed to herself, immediately fastening her lips on Ashley's swollen clit and rubbing the inside wall of her pussy frantically.  It took only a couple of seconds for Ashley to tense up in a sharp seizure, to wheeze and wail, and then to just about explode in a firestorm of orgasmic spasms.������� "Anngghhieeemmnnggiiieee!" she cried out, her delicious dark body leaping and surging off the bed in a cataclysm of coming, arching and shuddering, twitching and clenching fiercely.  "Unngggunnnggguunnggg!  Ahhnnggiieee!"]� This is just so perfect.� You show the rising passion and the need that fills your body when a woman is loving you.� I get so tired of other authors not showing this specialness.� They say the woman loses it at orgasm time but you show Ashley's face slashing and her body hitching as she is getting to her orgasm.� I can just see the sheets seeing and sawing as my slut is writhing on them.� I am constantly glancing up when I am in position to look at your face and working harder just to see you face contort and slash.� I love searching for the spongy nerve bundle myself.� I don't call all of them g-spot.� Only some women simply come apart when you go for it.� They cum harder and longer ,but not with the total loss of control and soul shattering that a true g-spot gives a woman.� I don't think I have one.� I cum hard but not like Jonelle or Ashley here.� I love how you show that moment I call the precipice.� I can so feel my body normally tightening up as my orgasm is approaching.� I can just feel my mind losing it as I know I am getting so close to another womb shredding, horrendous orgasm that is going to tear me apart with fucking bliss.� I too feel like Laura when I am taking a new love slut to heaven.� Knowing that she is going to die from the pleasure I and any love mates are giving her.� Focusing totally on her and giving her our all to make her cum the best ever.� Until the next one I give her.� I just feel waves of pure love flowing through me when I take my angle slut to heaven and see, hear, taste, smell and feel her body responding so fully to my loving ministrations.� I feel so happy and complete when I take a woman like this.� And, oh, how you make the orgasms so fucking awesome.� I have said in the past it is your adjectives and adverbs.� I have thought more on it and it is that other authors only give you the noun and the verb.� They give the basic situation and tell you basically what is being done but they don't give any details: the adverbs and adjectives.� I have read other authors telling of hitting the g-spot and maybe it is on the frontal vaginal wall but never about how you hook those fingers and find it and then really work it.� How it feels spongy and knobby at the same time and how it gives just slightly as you rake your fingers over it in a blur during the love kill.� They never give the sounds of women ramping up and then cuming so hard for you.� I get so freaking tired of the silence or the same sounds that certain authors use over and over and over and over and you get the point.� When I first see a new story of yours I scroll down just to see divine sounds I will hear when I read the story.� Other stories leave the reader distant from the action.� Thus a sense of remoteness sets in, at least for me.� I don't feel like I am there with the women.� With your stories I am always right there with them.� My mouth is sucking in Ashley's clit and deep throat sucking her clit down my throat.�� I can feel how I am leaning up a little on one side so I can rake my fingers hard, deep and fast over her nerve bundle and pressing in so hard as her orgasm is hitting her.� Feeling the bucking and wallowing and sudden stiffening or jumping as her body cums so hard for me.� Hearing those grunts up to full throated screams that make my soul feel so alive as I swallow your divine cum.� Only you make me feel like I am there with them and I have cum to so many orgasms masturbating to your stories timing my cum with your women's orgasm.� I feel you have given me so much pleasure over the years.� I so love cuming so hard as I am up on my shoulders and neck and my heels are digging into the mattress and I have lifted my groin so high in the air and it is humping up spastically as I wail and jackknife high in the air as pure waves of searing ecstasy is shattering me with fucking bliss as I feel full body spasms crushing me over and over as I pound my cunt and pull my nipples to prolong the orgasms that your stories have given me.

//� I am so smiling as Ashley is groggily wondering if she just experienced what she did.� I love it when newbies are so shattered and surprised at how women can give them such great orgasms.� I have some women that love me for the sack but tell me they could never live with women.� That is how I feel about men. �A man with a big dick and knows how to use it is great but their whining and immaturity just drives me nuts.� Wow! this is something I don't read in other stories [Laura had not moved.  Her fingers were still embedded in Ashley's wet, pulsing cunt, and her lips were just an inch or so from the girl's clit, which she had sucked into throbbing ecstasies.  Instead of answering, she resumed her caresses aggressively, figuring that if the girl could come that easily and quickly, there were probably more spasms where those had come from.  Often a woman reached an orgasmic plateau from which she could continue to come for several minutes, if helped along.]� Most stories are so one and done.� I think most women can come back to back but I don't this as a rule because I don't want to spoil them.� I do it but not all the time.� I am always afraid they will come to expect multiple orgasms all the time.� Make it special like Laura does.� Plus, I don't want to blow out their clits to fast with to many orgasms to close together.� I am smiling at how you so hit your small details.� This is so me. �Waiting for that small amount of time waiting to deliver another quick love kill.� I can through your words feel my woman's sopping wet cunt still pulsing and juicing with my mouth just above paradise and her cunt wafting heavenly cunt musk to my nose and brain.� And then suddenly bending down and inhaling her pussy and clit and raking her g-spot supper fast and hard and making her cum shrieking and jackknifing.� Making her cum so hard as her body flops and shudders with those full body spasms that makes me so hot for her.� Wringing her body out as she finally pushes back and grips my hand to stop my ministrations as I have worn her pussy temporarily out.� With your stories I truly never know how you are going to flow your sex.� Each story is like each fuck.� New and alive with the possibilities for truly harrowing orgasms.� This is how I always want to make you cum for me [She began to gyrate her pelvis into Laura's probing hand and sucking mouth, and in a few seconds more she was coming again, this time not the sharp, explosive seizures she had had earlier but instead long, slow, wrenching shocks that traveled through her body from one end to the other, leaving her quivering and moaning and gasping for breath.������ "Ohhhnnnnnn  . . . annnggghhhhhhh!  Oh Laura ahhhnnnnnnnn!  Umnnnunnnhhhh!"]� Like I say, you know how to make the reader feel like each orgasm is organic and real.� Other authors with their bland and rote sex deny the reader this.� You should teach this somehow on the Internet.� 101 writing for great sex stories.

//� Now you show a nice dynamic.� The woman giving has done her loving duty and now it is time for some sweet release.� With a newbie especially you often take matters into your own hands.� Plus, stunning your woman with great orgasms sometimes leaves her incapable of immediately taking care of your raging needs.� I like how you show Laura in answering her own hunger is still pleasuring Ashley.� I am like this and almost all women are to some degree at least.� I too would be climbing up her body sucking and stroking as I went.� Making strong aftershocks ripple out her cunt and throttle her sweet flesh.� Then clamping my cunt onto your thigh and start tribbing.� I so love riding a thigh and gag feeling my cunt lips dragging and stretching.�� Feeling my clit rub up and down and feeling your leg getting slicked up with my cunt juice.� My eyelids are fluttering thinking of doing this and sucking down your nipples or kissing your deeply.� Wallowing my body down into yours and feeling our tits mashed and flattened and bellies bellowing against each other.� Feeling my juices soaking my clamped thighs as I know they are running down making a wet spot on the bed or carpet.� Makes me feel like a bitch in heat.� Taking my hands and clenching them in your hair and anchoring us as we hump and our mouths lock tight and tongues duel and plunge in hot love.� Looking down as I spear my tongue down your throat and watching you swoon before I again close my eyes and hump and jam my cunt up and down your leg.� Feeling that delicious heavenly tightening that starts in my womb and then seizes my belly making it contract so fucking tense and then my thighs and then my whole body is shaking and spasming as pure ecstasy is again pumping through my veins making me scream out or into our mouths as they are clamped tight in love.� I love screaming into a mouth that my tongue is buried deep in.� Feeling it spasm and slap into the roof of her mouth or spasming underneath her tongue and trying to drill out the bottom of her mouth.� Feeling my lover gripping my ass or wrapping her arms around holding me tight as she crushes me into her as she humps up desperately with her thigh to give me such perfect pleasure.� I just love that you have women that fuck like this.� You so show the give and take of great sex.� That perfect harmonious balance that women so effortlessly achieve.� I so love writing something and then reading it [Ashley, still overcome herself by her second wave of orgasms, only belatedly realized that Laura was coming too, slumped forward on her naked body and twitching and groaning in a scalding, jolting surfeit of bliss.  Her arms came up to clutch Laura, and Laura could feel the sweet caress of her fingertips on the backs of her shoulders as the dying spasms of her climax faded.]

//� Of course I love reading their sweet post coital time of snuggling and sharing.� I love that afterglow of holding your lover tight and just that sweet sharing time.� Cooing and learning more about each other if newbies or sharing life with regular angels.� I love reading how Ashley so openly and with out rancor says she loves to fuck.� I so notice that about younger girls and teenagers.� They are truly beginning to shuck man's and the religious right's brainwashing.� They are learning how to grab pleasure where and when they can.� Girls now don't feel like a slut getting dick or some hot pussy.� They are so much more open to bisexual or lesbian adventures according to how they want to think about themselves.� I still get so mad and frustrated what when we seek out and take pleasure we are sluts and whores.� When men do it they just elbow each other and make that Tim Allen sound that means way to get some.� Sigh, things are improving as the election of Barack Obama shows.� But.� I have to chuckle at Ashley ewwwwinggg at Laura's cum on her leg.� Me I would have slide down and licked it off while massaging and kissing her lower body.� I am smiling so great big reading this ["I did.  I . . . just came forever.  Can we do it again?"������ "Oh yes," Laura grinned.  "Again and again."]� One has to love hot first encounters especially with love struck newbies.� They just want to fuck and fuck and have the supreme orgasms they have just discovered with the emotional advantages that women give.� Men can fuck the hell out of me but they can't give me the emotional love I need that only women give me.� Geez,� I just love the joy, light and love in your stories.� It makes me Smile! J

//� Wow, Ashley is truly a slut after my own heart.� She is proud of her fuck hunger and talks of two brothers doing her and cuming all over her.� I usually like my cum in me and not on me but it is a nice change of pace.� A couple of times ago with Eric, Anthony and Steven they were raping the white bitch and I was so delirious with the orgasms they gave me as they fucked me so hard.� Feeling them take me individually and together.� They were finishing me off tp their big dicks slamming deep into my willing fuck holes making me cum so hard as I screamed out my soul blistering pleasure.� The last orgasm me pounding my fists down on Steven's shoulders as he speared up into my cunt and the brothers ravaged my asshole and came around and let me atm my shit juice off their dicks.� I felt my whole body shuddering and jolting as killing waves of excoriating bliss blasted out my asshole and clit.� I felt my rock hard nipples swell even more as they were crushed and drug around on Steven's hard chest.� I just cum so fucking hard.� I was sort of out of it as my body reveled in the supreme fuck I was receiving.� I groggily remember them getting me up on my knees and feeling their cocks pressing into my face.� I opened my mouth and clamped onto Eric's thick dickhead and started to pump.� After only a minute I felt him shiver and he pulled out my mouth and his hot cum splashed hard into my closed right eyelid and then hard into my nose.� His other spurts were not so hard and coated my nose and cheeks.� The others had been jerking their meat and Anthony cursed out and I felt his semen blasting into my cheek, mouth and forehead.� Then Steven pounded the back of my throat for about thirty seconds before he roared and pulled out.� He kept harshly barking out for me "feel my cum bitch" and other expletives with lots of slut and whore added to them.� I don't mind being degraded by hot lovers who know I love it and don't really degrade me with the words.� I felt his semen hitting me in the eyes and cheeks and into my hair.� He cums with many hot spurts of beautiful white cum.� I was just like Ashley,� I was covered in semen and loved it!� Just like I like to be squirted on.� I am so happy to read these little asides.� It just dawned on me that this is something else you do that other authors don't.� Give us these little factoids about your women.� Just a little aside that makes them more hot and beautiful.� It makes them more complete and lets us understand their personalities and natures better.� Again to draw us in and love them all the more.

//� I love how you never miss an opportunity to describe your women so lovingly [She watched with delight as Ashley hopped off the bed, her lovely little breasts bouncing, her coal-black nipples gleaming, her 'ghetto booty' swaying, and darted down the short hallway to the linen closet for some towels.]� What women doesn't delight in watching her slut move and the subtle play of her muscles as she walks, talks and simply bending over.� So many things to observe and swoon over.� I like learning she is a chemical engineer major.� So was I until I switched to computer science.� For exactly the same reason!� Yeah, I love Ashley already!� I love how Ashley makes it clear that she will fuck whom she wants.� I love aggressive and confident women. �Makes me swoon for them and want to submit to them as they love rape me.� I just love your dialog.� It moves the story along and gives us little insights ["But isn't it a little dangerous?" Laura pressed her.  "I mean, not everyone is a sweet, mild-mannered lesbian like me.  There are rapists.  Murderers.  You know."������� Ashley shrugged.  "I can take care of myself.  I don't have to invite them in."������� Laura could not keep her mouth off Ashley's naked breasts for long.  "I just love to suck," she murmured.  "And you have such beautiful ones."]� Most stories don't give me dialog and most that do seem to go no where.� It takes so long to get to the payoff and that is what erotica is all about after all.� You do so strike the perfect balance.� I so love how you show Laura not able to keep her mouth off of Ashley.� I so want to suck and stroke your body constantly.� Learning it and reveling in it.� I so love the feel of your body underneath by fingertips and underneath my rubbing cheek and body.� Feel the sweat after we have got all heated up.� Like I say I have always loved your breast worship [Laura returned to sucking.  Ashley's black, saliva-wet nipples were thick, shiny black plums but tasted even better, chewy and pulpy.  Soon she was twisting and gurgling.������� "You'll tell me if I'm doing it too hard, right?" Laura prompted her softly.�������� "You can . . . never . . . do it too hard . . . for me . . ." Ashley panted, holding her small breast in both hands as if to make sure that it didn't slip out of Laura's mouth.   A minute more elapsed while she writhed and mewled happily.  "You know . . ." she panted.  "I imagined that lesbians put their pussies together.  Know what I mean?  Just like guys and girls do."]� Sigh, now this is how you suck titties.� I am smiling as usual as Laura is worrying about doing it to hard while I am always doing harder and taking my sluts harder and harder making them come to crave and need it.� Sucking your tits down my throat and stretching out their nipples and tit meat making them gurgle and swoon.� I so know watching a slut cup and hold her tits up for me like this.� Girls like my archangels and main angels pulping their tits on their own and me pulping newbie tits out the tops of my clenched fists making their areolas and nipples bulge up.� Starting hard but ramping up as I suck and tongue drill as� I squeeze harder and harder as they whimper and slowing down as they beg to stop and I work their tits at that level and love coo to them as I pleasure their tits so good and then take harder as the gurgle and head lulls over often drooling for me.� Taking hard and soon they are pulping for me and begging me to do them harder and crueler.� Then letting them do me and they so devour my tits hard and cruelly abuse them like I crave and hunger for.� Again, using dialog to move the story along.� Also, you show here yet again how women communicate their needs and desire.� I get tired of other stories just having the sex happen by script.� They don't show women connecting and sharing as they fuck and bond.� We all want to pleasured to the maximum and the only way to do this is to communicate to your woman.� You have shown that from the beginning.� That really grabbed my attention when I first discovered your stories.� It is such a positive to read.� Women allowed to communicate, request and demand their desires and actually have them headed.� I love it.� I love seeding control to men but I don't get the emotional hit that I do with women.� The hit that communication and sharing gives one.

//� I so love you giving us the detail that Ashley's eyes are rolling back in her pleasure.� Again, it is the adjectives of your descriptions that make the stories so fucking hot and awesome.� When I am not shown these little details I can't fully get into the story.� I now love reading Laura thoughts.� I noticed that a lot of authors avoid letting us see the inner thoughts of their women in real time.� I like reading Laura's thoughts because I can see her planning her love moves and see how much pleasure she gets out of doing them.� [And she quite imperceptibly began to turn up the heat even further, swarming all over Ashley, pressing her own naked breasts into the girl's smooth dark flesh, siphoning up Ashley's breasts, sucking big chunks of them into her mouth now, her hands racing over Ashley's squirming body, then darting between her thighs, to check the warm wetness there, which she immediately verified.  She's ready for the next step, Laura thought.  Oh honey . . . I can't wait to feel your pussy against mine!]� I so know that ramping up I do, to take my woman to heaven.� I so love reading how Laura is attacking Ashley's whole body.� I too want to fuck you completely.� Building up the heat and the focus of my attack to make you simply die from it.� I especially love reading how Laura is sucking most of her small titties into her mouth and super sucking and tongue lathing.� I love how you show loving the whole woman.� I never ever read another author showing their women stroking their women's body.� They just focus on what is right in front of them.� A lot of times I am not exactly sure what my hands are doing exactly. �I just know that they are stroking, clenching, massaging some part of your sweaty, wiggling body.� I so love to work ribs, shoulders, belly, thighs and everything else.� Love the excitement you show in Laura as her need to pleasure Ashley supremely is rising.

//� Like the detail of fluffing their crotch hairs out.� I and my archangels stay shaved and we encourage our lovers to shave or keep it very cropped.� Same for our male lovers.� But a hairy bush is nice on occasions too.� Love the prickly itching and tickling on my nose or the smoothness of a freshly shaved mound.� Sigh, you just keep besotting me with first contact [Laura, equally thrilled, didn't move for a few seconds, letting both of them enjoy the pure pleasure of this intimate contact.  Ashley's pussy was also warm and slippery and gooey against hers, and the look on the girl's face was priceless, a half-swoon of delicious ecstasy. ������� "You like that?" she murmured, holding Ashley's hot, throbbing eyes with her own.������ Unable to speak, Ashley nodded, biting her full lower lip.  She responded in kind as Laura began gently to undulate her hips and rock their touching groins together in rhythm.  "Are . . . we going to come this way?" she finally asked in a hushed, clotted voice.]� Yet again only you capture this for some reason.� That first moment of feeling a nipple or clit in your mouth.� The feel of dick or strap-on penetrating your cunt or sphincter or sliding down your throat.� Or the feel of one's pussy against your lover's pussy or some other part of her body.� This is so special and makes our bodies just clench and freeze and to have only one author capture this is kind of weird to me.� Men I guess don't feel it as much but I sure do hear them exclaim how they love feeling their dicks sliding up my tight cunt or shit hole and the same thing when I watch them penetrating fellow lovers.� So they should be able to capture this too.� But only you do.� You know how to pause and savor the moment.� Just like we do in real life.� I am thankful one writer does.� I would probably stop reading porn if I didn't have you to constantly go back to keep it real and fresh.� I too so love the feel of wet pussies grinding and sliding as our juice merges and slimes our groins in hot need and love.� Have to love the MasterCard moment of Ashley's face swooning in pleasure.� These are the moments I live for seeing this in my woman's face.� Knowing I put it there.� Maybe with help but at the minimum I know I was a big part.� I so love the ramping up you are showing here.� We sag with that initial coming together but then love takes over and we must start fucking with want, need and finally abandon.� I have to smile warmly feeling my belly roll hearing Ashley's softly asked question.� I love making my women so soft and pliable to me.� Allowing Laura's women to be both strong and yet vulnerable to her like this is just so special and I love reading it chapter after chapter.

//� Wow, I just love the communication and the wanton fuck need in your stories! [Ashley gulped, as if at first unable to speak.  Then she smiled.  "God . . . it's great.  But I don't think I can come this way.  I need it fast and hard."������� "That too can be arranged," Laura smiled back at her.������� Almost immediately she picked up the pace.  She knew that even being fucked harder and faster this way might not bring Ashley to her climax, since some women never could make it all the way by this method; but it was surely worth a try, before turning to another avenue.  Laura, already perpendicular to the supine Ashley, bent forward even more over her and began to grind and pump her wet pussy into Ashley's with fierce, churning abandon.]� I like hearing Ashley stating her needs and letting Laura know about how her body responds.� I so encourage my lovers to communicate to me thus.� I need it to better be able to love you completely.� I soak up their words.� Plus, with your communications it is always back and forth.� Laura responds to her lovers and they to her.� Again, so positive and life reaffirming.� Sigh, I love the ramping up.� You are right. �Some women can't cum this way but I sure am going to try.� Sigh, I love tribbing all ways but this is probably my favorite.� I love pumping my sluts hard like this.� Grinding my twat into yours and sweeping the full v of your groin.� Using all my strength to grind down into your wet swollen cunt.� ��Sigh, I love how you use words like "fierce, churning abandon".� Just in describing it in this way adds so much heat to the story.� Other authors just tell me they trib in the basic position.� Here I can feel deep in my belly the effort Laura is putting into her tribbing.� The fever and passion that is coursing through her veins.� I can just feel our pussies grinding and my tits swirling as I work down and roughly around.� I know you have stated this in previous fucks but I really like reading how Laura is totally consumed by fuck hunger for Ashley.� How fucking her again and again is ramping up her desire and love for this delightful, open fuck bunny.� When you connect to your lovers it does make the sex get better and better and makes you want to fuck them with your all to make their orgasms the best possible.� By giving totally you receive totally.�

//� Love how you just keep ramping and loving the total body [She pumped her hard while running her hands over Ashley's delectable small breasts, squeezing them, pinching Ashley's deeply black, thick, bulbous nipples, leaning down at intervals to savagely kiss her mouth and suck her lips, and bite her smooth black neck, churning, pumping, churning, grinding.  All the while Ashley was whimpering and writhing under her, pumping back, as much as she could, to meet Laura's sharp thrusts.]� I so love to do this.� Rub and kiss your whole body while fucking you with my all.� Sigh, I am especially loving how you are reminding the reader how black Ashley's body is.� Latina's are still hard to find here (is getting better with more legal and illegal immigrants coming to the area) that I have focused my desires on Black and Asian lovers.� I want all races but I am most attracted to women of color.� I am so there reading how Laura is working Ashley's body so well.� All the ing words to show just how great this fuck is.� Seeing Ashley and thus my own lovers, fucking back and going for the brass ring.� I like how you show the fuckee is fucking back striving herself to make the fuck better.� To many stories don't show us how the woman being fucked is loving and responding to the ministrations being done to her body.� About a week back, myself and my two babies went to Dodie and Frankie's.� Frankie and Joann paired up and disappeared into their bedroom.� We took the main guest bedroom with its king sized bed.� We had sucked and fingerfucked ourselves to many great orgasms.� Maria loves to be tribbed in the position here.� I was fucked out at the moment and Dodie mounted her and was pumping away. She was holding her left leg out in front of her using it like a post to anchor herself.� I loved watching her sweaty body surging and grinding wildly on Maria's groin.� How Maria rotated her groin up into Dodie's gagging and flexing.� Dodie like Laura bending down at times to pulp Maria's tits and kiss her tits and face.� Dodie was riding her again her tits rolling and whiplashing up off her chest and flopping down loudly.� I so love to see tits flop.� Sometimes sweat splattering around off her heavy hooters.� Her 36d tits sloshing all over her chest and seeing them jolt when their groins sometimes violently jammed together.� Maria gets control after multiple orgasms and I am smiling seeing Dodie in my mind's eyes suddenly cumming wildly.� Maria had one leg on Dodie's hip and was clenching her down as Dodie began to scream and curse jamming down and around into Maria' wet, open, flowing cunt.� I loved how Dodie kept working with spastic jams and sweeps even as horrible jackknifes tore her muscles almost off the bone.� Her eyes bulged and then rolled back as her head thrashed forward and back violently.� She had lost any control to her motions and simply spasmed and rocked her cunt all around her tits rolling on her chest.� Maria had gripped her hips to help keep her grinding.� Finally, Dodie collapsed over and jolted as her body half laid on Maria's.� I was of course long fully recovered and moved in.� I roughly uncoupled Dodie's from Maria's supine body and rolled her over.� I loved feeling the strong aftershocks rippling out Dodie's womb making her shake and jolt.� I mounted Maria's cunt and threw her leg over my shoulder.� I started my humping and soon felt my tits rolling and flopping up and slamming back down on my chest.� I was quickly heated up again and sweating like a pig.� I looked down at Maria's rolling tits as she ground up into me her slitted eyes boring into mine as her face slashed like a slut.� I fucked her hard grinding down and across the v of her groin feeling my juices flowing out my cunt soaking her groin and down her asscrack.� I fucked her with my all.� I used one hand to hold onto her leg like I like and my other reached down and pulled on her nipples.� I love seeing her face slash and teeth gnash.� I kept pumping and I could sense she was finally starting to reach her orgasm.� She pulled a tit up with both hands and sucked her nipple deep into her mouth and I watched it hollow out as she sucked hard on her swollen, throbbing nipple.� I pumped and surged looking at my sweaty tits flop up and down and watched my baby's orgasm hit her.� I loved watching her head rock back her nipple slipping roughly out her mouth as long torturous groins started cawing out her throat as she came with long full body convulsions that tightened up her whole body for long seconds and then made her shudder violently the length of her body.� Dodie recovered suddenly appeared as she half laid on Maria's torso from the side and started sucking hard on her nipples as she bunched up her tits and pressed them together as she sucked and teeth raked her nipples quickly first one and then the other.� Sigh, the beauty of multiple lovers.� The sudden addition of tit loving made a second orgasm bloom out of the waning first one and Maria was now screaming and then groaning so deep in her chest as she bucked and writhed in deep ecstasy bursting out her rupturing cunt and pulsing nipples.� I gagged feeling her cunt gushing hot cum all over my grinding cunt and soaking again our cunts, thighs and ass cracks.� The way her rupturing cunt made her buck and jam her cunt so hard into my grinding and jamming pussy.� The looks on Maria's face were so precious as her face constantly slashed and tore with pure ecstasy.

//� I know I am quoting a lot here but there is so much to love.� ["Are you going to come?"�� �����"I . . . I don't know," Ashley gasped.������� Laura smiled.  "I do."������� In a fluid motion, she briefly disengaged their crotches, first leaning forward and crushing Ashley's squirming body under her, mashing their breast together and devouring her face with hungry kisses, then her neck, her shoulders, her nipples.  But very soon she was sliding down Ashley's body to her pussy, sliding three fingers into her wet, goopey slot, fucking her hard with her hand while also licking and sucking her clit, a hot, unbridled frenzy of lust that quickly had Ashley whooping and arcing and quivering with incipient sexual spasms.������� "Ahhiieee!  Oh god!  Unggghh!  Aiieeee!" Ashley squealed and thrashed under Laura's attack, whooping and gasping.  "Ooohhhhh!  Oh!"������� Hearing her moan and whimper and seeing her twist and writhe only turned Laura into a redoubled hot whirlwind of maniacal lust.  She was all over Ashley, pumping her frantically, hand-fucking her, nipping her inner thighs, sliding up to suck her stiff black nipples, descending again to suck her clit, until Ashley began to shake and shudder and rise up stiffly off the bed in a fierce spasm of sexual release.������ "Auunggghhhh!" she roared, her sweet, sassy little voice suddenly shattered and throttled by a violent uprush of crippling ecstasy.  "Auunngghhhh!  Oh!  Oh!  Mnnnggeeee!"������� Her delicious small body flipped, then rose up again, flipped again, before she fell squirming and groaning back to the sheet, her flesh still quivering from the aftershocks of a shocking and powerful orgasm. ������� "Ohhhhh!  Ohhhhh!"]� First you again show how sex can morph.� Laura sizes up the situation and decides to make Ashley's orgasm happen quicker.� I like how you show that sex flows.� Your sex is spontaneous and not scripted like other authors.� They start something and that is how it is going to end.� They never ever show this.� Often I am requested to do something other than I am doing.� I usually follow their lead but sometimes I am selfish and continue doing what I want.� If they whine or plead enough I will probably change but maybe I won't sometimes.� That is what adds spice and you show this in your sex.� You show how women communicate and negotiate in their lovemaking.� The give and take that women do in their lovemaking.� I love reading it so much.� Not only does she change tactics we see that she detours.� She kisses and wallows all over Ashley's body reveling in feeling their tits mashing and bellies wallowing.� I so love to kiss you deeply and then work hungrily till I get to your wet open gash and gobble it like a mad woman until your cuming violently for me.� Then instead of just blandly saying that Laura eats out Ashley you give it heat.� You tell us that Laura is fucking her hard with her fingers and then attacking her clit with "hot, unbridled frenzy of lust".� This just imparts the heat of the moment.� When it is just stated it loses its power.� This I feel and shiver over.� I can just feel my hand wedge fucking your sloppy fuck hole and I am inhaling in your whole upper cunt.� I feel this when I read your stories.� Then of course you give us the divine vocalizations of a woman being pleasured down to the depths of her soul.� I live to make my women groan so deep in their chest and get that lost far away look as their body either gets that relaxed tension or are vibrating like a bow string about to break.� Sigh, you mention how Laura is turned on by watching her lover getting close to orgasm.� I never read that in other stories.� How watching your woman getting ready to cum makes your feel ecstatic.� I have to admit that seeing a guy tensing up and the way their face twists up makes me hot too.� I love making people cum.� I love sucking on your cunt or tits and looking up and seeing you getting ready to fall off the precipice of bliss and I just redouble my efforts to make you cum hard and fast.� You show this moving and changing that I so love by showing Laura moving up to inhale some more nipples and I am sure kissing her deeply.� I so love to dine on sodden cunt meat and then move up and suck hard on your nipples and then kissing you deeply and letting you taste your cunt on my tongue and in my mouth before moving slowly back down your writhing body to once again tongue fuck and suck your cunt.� Moving up when and if I feel like it and then finally finishing you off with the love kill.� I so love loving the whole woman.� I can just see Ashley's body writhing and tensing more and more as her body approaches orgasm.� I so love seeing and feeling your muscles tensing and quivering underneath my massaging and clenching fingers.� Sucking you harder so I can feel those muscles clenching tighter and knowing soon they will snap into devastating orgasm.� And then your orgasms are second to none.� Only you give them justice that they deserve.� I can feel my lover cuming and myself cumming from your stories.� I feel that overwhelming pleasure searing out my cunt to white out my brain.� The way my muscles spasm and try to tear off the bone and I am jackknifing and wallowing violently as pure ecstasy is screaming out my pussy, nipples and asshole.� I so love to be throttled senseless by sweet intoxicating ecstasy.� You show this in your orgasms.� Plus, I love the little details you give.� You saying that Ashley's small body is throttled so hard.� That just so shows me her petite frame flipping and jackknifing as she wails her ecstasy.� I can just see Joann or Simonette cuming for me with their sweet petite bodies cuming so hard and long for me.� It is the small details that add so much that you constantly use to wondrous affect.� It makes your stories stand supreme in erotica.� Plus, you show that there are stages to orgasms.� The heavenly up rush to orgasm.� That awe inspiring first searing spasm of fucking bliss. Then the gut wrenching spasms tearing your body and soul apart with fucking bliss.� Down to the final powerful aftershocks making your brain swoon and womb bask and flip gently so deep in my spent sweaty belly making me mewl and drool all over myself in spent bliss.� Thank you for more, so much more, than "she came hard".�

//� How sweet.� Laura is thinking to herself that she wants to simply let Ashley ride out her first lesbian orgasms out to the fullest.� She wants her to bask in every last erg of pleasure possible.� I too feel that.� I want to fully hook them on lesbian sex.� I want them addicted for the rest of their lives.� Plus, you are the only author that shows us what the women are actually thinking while they are fucking.� What they feel and are planning.� I love reading their inner thoughts.� I am so beaming as Ashley is already desiring fucking other women.� Even the butch ones.� I love hooking women on pussy.� Your work is so life affirming.� You show sweet love and totally giving shows the women the truth about themselves and desiring more of the wonderful elixir of lesbian lust and love.� I am smiling even bigger with Laura saying she must go home and Ashley is clutching her to keep her leaving.� That is something I love feeling and love instilling that desire for more of me in my newbies.� Making them want and crave all they can get of me. Makes me melt for them and of course I must oblige!� I ask, can a story end any better than this! ["Good," Ashley gently pushed her onto her back and helped to ease Laura's thighs open with one hand.  She began kissing her way down Laura's body.  "You just lie back and let me practice on you until I get it perfect."������ "You're already just about perfect," Laura sighed to her as she stretched out and prepared to quickly die of pleasure.]� Sigh, so full of love and positive energy.� I so love your stories!

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