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Chapter 298:

 

 

//� this chapter starts with a delightful emotion.� we see the wonderful

emotions that flow when reunions occur.� we see the genuine love and

affection that these two women share for each.� the sheer elation that

you feel when a lover is returned to your loving arms.� and i really

love how we see that laura is so happy for makeeda and her successes.� i

love it when whenever i see lovers so happy for the woman in their

life.� women just love and feel such pure happiness for the angels in

our lives.� i have felt that warm feeling inside when i'm coming home

and i see joann's head jumping up and down as she she's trying to see

over the trees with her 5'0" height at the airport.� normally, i don't

like showing my affection for my archangels but at the airport we let it

all hang out.

//� i am smiling great big as laura is giving makeeda the confidence she

lacks in her singing success.� i have always believed that luck is where

hard work and opportunity cross.� makeeda has great skill and talent and

she needs to always believe in herself.� my archangels are brimming in

self-confidence so bucking them up is something i don't have to do for

them.� while i need their support sometimes when i do doubt myself.� i

know i'm good but often i feel like a complete fraud and i need my

archangels and other special angels to give me the confidence that i

sometimes lack.� i love seeing laura giving makeeda what she lacks.

this is what true relationships are all about.� loving and supporting

the women in your life.

//� i am basking seeing laura professing her love for makeeda and then

swarming all over makeeda and making her come within a minute.� i know

makeeda must have been wound tighter than a clock spring.� when joann

and or maria come back from a conference or business trip we fall all

over each other like a pack of starving wolfs.� i love the declarations

of love and words of never leaving.� we have exchanged matching rings

and taken our own private vows.� we plan on spending our lives together

like i think makeeda and laura are thinking of.� i just hope that laura

can convince makeeda to give up that silly idea of monogamy.� one needs

variety to keep a relationship from becoming stale and boring.� laura is

so wise in seeking new pussy and renewing her love for existing lovers

to keep her soul alive and vital.

//� i have to smile for laura when makeeda tells her she must go away to

new jersey to cut a cd to continue her success.� makeeda makes a comment

about laura finding another woman while she is gone.� i just wish

makeeda could see that this monogamy is for the birds.� our bodies were

designed to be fucked by many partners and she should embrace this.� She

is denying herself so much pussy she shouldn't be.� laura is being so

truthful when she says that she only loves makeeda.� shelley is only a

lover that she is sharing sweet physical love with and not the emotional

love that archangels share.� i do love all my women but i only share

that deeper level with my archangels and a lot of myself with women like

dodie, simonette, shari and cindy.� we share the secrets of our souls

with each other.� when you marry the physical with the emotional then

you get that wondrous love that laura and makeeda are sharing.� i just

wish makeeda could see what she is missing with her ideas of having only

one lover.

//� i have to smile at the love makeeda is feeling when she is positive

that it is laura and her love that has brought this sudden success into

her life.� i tend to discount such things but who knows what the fates

truly weave in our lives.� i am just happy for the pure emotion she is

feeling for laura.� I really like laura bucking up makeeda when her self

doubt arises again.� i believe that is one of the main jobs of

archangels is to provide emotional support and love when your lover is

feeling down and blue.

//� i have never had that desire to perform in public like makeeda here

and i have to smile at the joy and almost swoon she feels at the

adulation of her growing legions of fans.� i have a hispanic lover that

i see from time to time and she goes karokee and i have gone with her a

few times.� the way her eyes light up when she sings and listens to

singers just makes me smile at the sheer pleasure i see on her face.

//� i am so happy that laura sees shelley again while shelley's sweetee

is away in paris fucking white women.� i am so happy that laura is not

beating herself up anymore over her need to see other angels.� one so

needs to have spice and variety in ones life to keep things vital and

moving forward.� otherwise, everything would become so stale and

boring.� i don't know how anyone can just live with one person.� i

shudder at that thought.� i need lots of pussy to keep me happy and

excited about life.

//� i have to smile at laura thinking that seeing shelley is enough to

keep her libido in check.� she knows that shelley and her are only

sharing a deeply moving physical relationship that will end when their

respective lovers return from being away.� i can see why laura feels

safe with shelley with this dynamic at play.� she knows it will end soon

enough and then she will be back with makeeda.� but i love seeing the

fates intervening.� she has spotted a beautiful young black woman on the

metro.� she tries to resist the siren call of this ravishing eighteen or

nineteen year old nymph but your loving word picture tells us why this

is impossible [She had long hair, as long as Laura's, that was

tastefully streaked dark honey gold.� She had dark flashing eyes and

smooth dark brown skin and a fantastically small waist, which

accentuated the rest of her slender figure, her delicious bottom, her

small breasts, her long thin legs.]� with such beauty and an opportunity

one must at least make an attempt.

//� i don't consider myself pushy and will back off if given a nice good

brush off but i do believe in testing the waters.� i like how laura

takes advantage of the open seat beside the ravishing girl and makes a

pleasant introduction i'm sure with her most winning smile.� i can

usually tell immediately if their is no hope.� the frosty bitch routine

or the scared shitless hopelessly brainwashed evangelical christian

female.� i love seducing and fucking their brains out but they can be an

almost impossible nut to crack sometimes and i just have to say forget

it.� but if like here, you get a sweet smile then i know the game is

afoot and i just have to try and find the right key.

//� i like how laura genuinely asks allisha about her hair.� i find all

women are hungry for pure honest attention.� i sure know i am.

especially straight women since men so rarely give compliments.� this

interest in her person makes allisha immediately start to thaw and gives

laura an opportunity to start the dance of seduction and new love.� i

know that improvising that laura does here when allisha gets up to go.

she has given off those ambiguous signals that say i am interested but

i'm not ready to go down that road.� laura knows she needs more time in

allisha's presence and keeps the game going by adapting.� i always call

it "going with the flow".� i just want to keep in your presence and let

my looks, charm and genuine interest constantly stroke you.� i keep

pouring on the charm hoping to see that spark of interest that allows my

to start her down the road to seduction and sweet love.

//� wow, this girl is up front and asks laura if she is a lesbian.� i

never get embarrassed or flustered like laura but i do usually use this

tact.� i give them my best sheepish look and tell them yes.� i then tell

them the truth.� they were just so beautiful that i couldn't resist.

this i find is the moment of truth.� when their is no interest and no

hope you are soon left all alone with sometimes some harsh and hateful

words.� it hurts like hell and sometimes i have to sniff and then i

really, really want to kill the bitch.� my gaydar is pretty good when it

comes to reading women who are deep down on the prowl for some lesbian

loving but i do get burned from time to time and i fucking hate it.� but

i do it for this [but instead she smiled more warmly and came back.

"Not really," she said softly.� "I'm . . . kind of flattered."]� i can

feel my heart leaping for joy.� i may have to work like hell for it but

i know i am almost guaranteed to have them eventually screaming

helplessly in my bed as i crush their souls with soul blistering

orgasms.� thinking of my failures i have seen dodie and joann been

cruelly rejected like this and within a month they and we are fucking

her blind.� i simply don't know how they do it.

//� it is cute reading laura being put through the hoops as the girl

first tells her she has had a lesbian tryst in her past and then is all

coy about getting together.� she is so cute in how she makes laura fret

and worry as she first can't make it for breakfast or then lunch and is

clearly enjoying laura's consternation.� i really don't mind once i know

i will be devouring your pussy soon.� i love sass and fire in my women

and this just makes me get my panties in a bunch as i feel my juices

broiling and wetting my panties in lust and and anticipation.� the girl

agrees to meet laura where they are currently but not until five

o'clock.� i would be happy but i hate letting a woman out of my sight

when it is so close.� sometimes they let man's brainwashing scare them

off.� some i have never seen again but i try an get their phone number

or email and try and arrange a meeting as soon as possible.� i just keep

pouring on the charm as long as they give me the opportunity.� i always

believe if they are still letting me flirt and compliment them i will

eventually bed them.� usually i do, but of course, i don't always.

dammit!

//� i am so there as laura finds her juices stewing waiting for her five

o'clock rendezvous of love.� i can focus and do my work but i am

definitely day dreaming and thinking about how i am going to fuck her

blind.� i definitely will get wet panties as i think of what is to come

and remember past fucks.� i love to fantasize about my new loves and how

i will fuck her and what she likes and if a shy and still innocent to

all the ways of lesbian loving what i can teach her.� i love making

women total sluts and whores in my bed.� i fuck with total abandon and i

love to teach newbies to be like me.� i am there also as laura frets

when the girl doesn't show up at the agreed time.� me, i will go crazy

if she doesn't show near the agreed time.� all i can stand is about

fifteen minutes and then i am out of there.� i almost always give them

my cell number and tell them to let me know if they are going to be

late.� i have had women call me when i leave and they are late but still

show up.� they can be curious, cross or hurt but i simply can't take

rejection and i am out of there if i am forced to wait.

//� laura has been remiss and she only now finds the girl's name is

allisha.� what a beautiful name for a beautiful woman.� we also discover

she is getting a divorce.� i love fucking divorced women because they

are often so fuck hungry and often are ready to experiment with new ways

of living and thinking.� i want to rock their word and make them

permanent bi or hopefully lesbian sluts for life.� it seems to me that

allisha is very anxious to get to laura's place.� when i see this desire

and want to be alone with me after they know my true desires i know that

i am almost always about to dine on sumptuous cunt meat.� i love taking

a woman who is helping to seduce herself and she is not even consciously

aware of it.� i feel so many are deep down hungering for female love and

i just help them to discover this latent love desire we are all born

with.

// �we find that she is only nineteen and her marriage only lasted eight

months.� seem the guy was a rover who did her best friend and tried to

do her mother.� i have to give him credit but still he had made a vow of

monogamy to allisha.� i don't agree with such commitments but if you go

into it then you have to pay the penalty if you break the rules.� that

is the reason i make it clear about our relationship with the women i

love.� i have my archangels and i will love you deeply but my deeper

commitments are already given with women i love and care for deeply.� i

also make very clear that my archangels would love to share their love

with them.� it really blows their minds if they are not liberated.� the

ones we share are totally overwhelmed with our loving.

//� i am surprised how i often get lines like this [Allisha grinned very

broadly at this.� "Maybe you have some lessons to teach me, eh,

Laura?"]� so many women are starving for real love that only another

woman can give them.� they get to laura's place and i have to like how

allisha immediately picks up that laura is sharing her life with another

woman and knows she is going to be loving laura soon and that laura will

be "cheating" with her.� i am so thankful that laura is to the point in

her life where she might be embarrassed but she now easily admits she

can't resist allisha's beauty and had to have to have her.� i really

felt for laura in the past when she used to really beat herself up for

no good reason in her love of women.� we should reach out and get all

the loving we can in this short life.� have to like allisha's confidence

in her beauty.� she knows she is beautiful but is not vain about it.

what a deadly combination.� i simply melt for such women.

//� i have to smile at laura one more time having to say she is not

cheating on makeeda.� i hear this often when i'm doing women who have a

significant other.� i realize they are convincing themselves that it is

okay to be seeking pleasure with me and any other angel with us.� i

realize must are not as free as i am and i am happy to put them at ease

to help them realize that it is okay to seek a little sport fucking on

the side.� the passion i can bring should easily be used to spice up

their own love life.� always love the humor you show in your stories

like here with them both embarrassing themselves a little over how they

are gushing to each other about the beauty the see in the others.� women

are just so good at expressing this honest loving feelings we feel for

the women we are about to make love too.

//� like how you show women are so different.� you show how shelley

immediately kisses ardently while allisha is responding very slowly to

laura's oral ministrations.� i like how she teases allisha over her lack

of response and allisha has to smile and, thus, the passion is brought

to the surface and true love starts to surface [Laura could feel her

blood leap through her body, and her pussy almost gush with juice.� In

seconds she and Allisha were devouring each other's mouth, their tongues

coiling feverishly, their teeth clanking.� Laura ran her hands up

Allisha's back to her shoulders, embracing her, digging her fingers into

the girl's lean flesh through her blouse.� Allisha had a beautiful long

neck, and Laura slid her mouth down to it.]� i love that moment a

reserved lover crosses her internal restraints and the true loving slut

comes out and she becomes the demanding and giving lover all women

should be.� i am so there as laura digs her fingers into her new lover's

back.� i so love gripping and love kneading my lover's body with total

passion and focus.

//� i love the confession by allisha that had she only known laura had

been hungering to kiss her neck she would have let her have her way

earlier.� i can sense this is a true lesbian slut whore who has only

been waiting for the proper catalyst to come into her life and release

the true woman within.� i love how you show laura kissing her neck with

such skill and passion.� other authors really only kiss the mouth,

breast and vagina.� it is so sad that they miss the rest of the

beautiful woman's body.� it was all made to be loved and devoured.� i

think it is telling that allisha says that she hasn't kissed this much

since her one time with her girlfriend back in high school.� hopefully,

she is now realizing what she has been missing.� she must see that only

women hunger for this total devouring of their woman.� it is so true how

they both hunger to continue sitting on the sofa and kiss with fervent

passion.� driving tongues down throats, twining tongues and exploring

fully each others mouths.

//� i like seeing laura wanting to know all about allisha's one time

with a girl.� i want to hear about any sex you want to tell me about.� i

even want to hear about het sex.� i just love hearing and seeing sex and

i won't ever refuse the chance to hear and see sex.� i just lose all

focus with the outside world and focus on what is before me with total

concentration.� i see that laura has almost been too successful.� i love

reducing my women to the point that they need to have me now.� that is

my goal after all.� allisha is totally wet and needs it now.� i just

beam when i hear such words and see my women shaking with need for me.

//� have to smile at allisha's long, long tongue.� i have one and my

women love it and i think dodie's might even be a little longer and we

are in love with it when it spears completely down our throats and is

thrusting deep up our pussies and assholes.� it seems like some mythical

creature sometimes what she can do with it.� lucky me!!� i sure have to

love allisha's teasing, confidant ways ["Did I make you gag?� It's my

specialty.� I've got a real long tongue.� I can tickle your tonsils."

She mashed her beautiful lips into Laura's.� "I can stick it up your

pussy too.� Want to feel it?"]� such women make me a weak kneed slut for

them.� i now that fuck hunger that laura and allisha is feeling here

when their clothes are flying off.� i often feel this need to strip

quick and get to the loving.

//� i have always loved the way you have detailed the beauty of these

women who come into laura's life.� how can anyone resist such beauty

[Allisha wore a gauzy bronze wrap on top that unwound off her slender

body very quickly.� Under it she wore a plain black bra, which also came

off quickly, revealing small, 32 C, adorable breasts with large dark

brownish/purplish aureoles.� Laura could never get over the marvelous

array of different colors of black girls' nipples.� Allisha saw her

looking and grinned with salacious narcissism, even cupping the small

twin globes in both hands, raising them one by one to her mouth, snaking

out her long tongue to lick each nipple suggestively while she gazed

meaningfully at Laura from under her heavy eyelids.]� so much to savor.

the sweet unveiling of nirvana to starving eyes and mouth.� the way you

so lovingly describe her heavenly boobs and the way allisha flicks her

own nipples.� i love having big full tits i can bend down and suck my

nipples into my mouth and suck hard and use my tongue magic on.� i know

it has the same affect on my women that it has on laura here when she

sees allisha loving herself with total hedonism.� i love women

pleasuring themselves totally like this.� we should never hesitate to

pleasure ourselves fully and masturbate every opportunity we can.� i

have since i was a little girl.

//� geez, i am swooning over allisha.� she now does what i so love

hearing in my lovers and making newbies to lesbian love understand

should be the norm in our expressing of ourselves ["Tell me you want to

fuck me," Allisha breathed, squirming as Laura sucked her neck and

squeezed her beautiful naked breasts.� "I can see it in your eyes, but

god it gets me hot when you say it."����� "I . . . want . . . to . . .

fuck . . . you . . . my darling Allisha," Laura murmured into her ear,

following the words with her tongue.� "I want to make you come

unbelievably."]� women should always express their fuck hunger and i so

revel in hearing and speaking it.� i will tell you exactly what i am

feeling and how bad i want to fuck you or be fucked by you if want to

hear it.

//� i am so there as laura tells allisha she wants to take her slow.� i

will do fast anytime and go back for seconds and more but slow is so

special.� i am smiling at how laura tells allisha that she can't know

how beautiful she is.� i always want to tell my women how wonderful and

beautiful you are.� you can always find something about a woman you find

beautiful.� her eyes, nose, cheeks, hair something and anything and

please, please tell her and she will be totally your slut from then on.

women melt for compliments.� i know i sure do.� speaking of beauty i can

see why allisha has turned down the very butch women.� i can't

understand why a woman wants to look like a man.� we are women for

crying out loud. �i will do soft butch in a second.� they fuck me so

hard and deep but if you want to look like a guy and be crude like shit

then i am not your girl.

//� i too am a breast connoisseur and love how laura tells about the

shape and coloring of allisha's nipples and her breast size.� one thing

i love about women is how unique and wonderful we are.� each woman's

breasts are so beautiful and wonderful.� i so love starting slow

(usually) with my loving [She restrained herself, but not too much.� She

held Allisha's breasts in her hands and let the tip of her tongue dance

over the girl's large nipples, stabbing the thick, protruding centers

and slowly licking the smooth surrounding areolas, feeling the tiny

bumps rise up against her tongue.� Allisha squirmed and panted, looking

down at Laura's tongue on her nipples.]� i am swooning reading this as i

remember sucking such long, thick nipples into my mouth and loving and

remembering their taste and feel as they slip into my mouth and my

tongue and lips start working on them.

//� one difference between laura and i is that i never hesitate to turn

up the heat when i am loving.� i love to see my women melt and scream as

i turn the heat on.� i do watch closely to see if i cross her comfort

level but i find most women die when i turn the heat on.� i find i must

do what laura does here when she turns the heat up.� i love making women

writhe from my loving [She slackened her lips a little and stroked

Allisha's thick, throbbing nipple with her tongue instead of sucking

it.] �sometimes i take them quick but when we first make love i want to

really, really rock your world.� i want to destroy your cunt and soul

with fucking bliss and pleasure.� i have to think allisha is lucky that

she can have even small orgasms just from having her nipples sucked.� i

always need just that little extra to push me over.� i would love to be

able to suck my own nipples alone to orgasm.� sigh.� a girl can dream.

//� i am smiling great big as laura starts loving her other nipple with

more care and slower but she simply can't resist with her gentle tongue

licking and then sucks it into her mouth and starts to work it harder.

i must have my breast and cunt meat.� i so love feeling a engorged stiff

nipple sliding through my lips.� i just so love that feel.� i so love

getting my woman to this state with my foreplay [ She spent another

minute worshipping Allisha's lovely breast, sucking and tonguing it

gently, but then moved lower, realizing as she kissed her way down the

girl's long, hard stomach that Allisha needed no further preparation.

She was almost insane with need already, writhing and whimpering,

deliciously supple and yielding.]� i love seeing her limbs writhing and

twitching and her belly heaving with need and seeing sweat beading

everywhere if she is a sweater and knowing her cunt is sopping wet with

cunt nectars waiting for my tongue.

//� i am like laura i see.� she finds that allisha has a birthmark she

calls a "splat".� i find them to be so mesmerizing and i love to kiss

and lick them for long, long minutes.� i love making women who are

embarrassed by their marks just beam and coo with wonder and love as i

go crazy over their marks or "defects".� it just makes you unique is my

opinion.� i love seeing that allisha's is quieter but is not the silent

type that make me crazy.� she reacts enough though i would wish for more

and encourage to give me more [Allisha didn't, like some girls, make a

lot of noise.� Her moaning was soft and sporadic, her whimpering

intermittent, and occasionally a helpless little squeak would escape her

throat as Laura's tongue and lips began to approach the puckered black

flower of her beautifully shaped pussy.� Laura was in no hurry, enjoying

these signs of arousal, and skillfully kissing all the smooth dark brown

skin of Allisha's belly and hard thin thighs and spreading the hair of

her thatch gently away so that she could suck the part where each thigh

met her groin.]� i would still be swooning as allisha is making her

little noises and jerks as i work down to her fuck flower.� i need to

bask and preen in your vocalization of the pleasure i am giving you.� it

makes my soul sing seeing you dying from the pleasure i am giving you.

//� i love to do what laura does here when she breaths in deep the musky

scent of allisha's pussy.� i love to breath deep into my lungs your love

scent and let it intoxicate me.� breathing in while i look at your

passion flower close and memorize every facet of your pussy.� Gazing

with love at your lips, slit and clit.� i love how you describe laura

lovingly slithering her tongue deep into allisha's wet puckered cunt and

savoring her wondrous taste.� i live for going down on my women.� then

moving up for [She had a long protective hood over her clit, which Laura

pulled back with her fingertips, exposing the taut little bead.� Then

she withdrew her tongue slowly from Allisha's cunt and pulled it up

along the girl's clit.� This time Allisha could not keep a tiny, clotted

yelp from escaping her throat.����� "Nnnuunnhhhh!"]� i so love getting

my first lick and suck on your clit and start polishing your clit with

my focused love.

//� i so love devouring tender red cunt meat like laura here [Laura

worked slowly.� She was not to be deprived of her pleasure, which was

extreme at this moment, her lips slathered with fragrant pussy juices,

her tongue busy invading the secret creases and stroking the hidden

nerves of Allisha's glistening, streaming furrow.]� i too seek your

hidden nerves to make you scream and hump your cunt hard into my

starving mouth.� i work your pussy to see you die from it.� for some

reason you are the only author to ever show what the woman receiving is

really feeling.� others just don't do it for some reason.� while you

show [Laura let her eyes drift up to the girl's face, a really beautiful

face, she realized again, now contorted by intense pleasure.� Allisha's

brow was furrowed, her mouth curled in a cry of agonizing pleasure that

never escaped.� She looked at Laura, her eyes filling with desperation

before rolling up.]� sigh, i so reading your sexual poetry.� only you

truly capture the magic of lesbian love.

//� oh yeah, i see laura is going for a g-spot orgasm.� me i love to

hook my fingers and work your front vaginal wall.� i know when i do hit

your g-spot because my woman will simply die from coming so hard and

going multiple but i never try and go for it.� if it happens it

happens.� i don't like to fail.� i so love how you actually give us the

detail of sliding your fingers into her steaming cunt and starting to

drive your fingers into her cunt and fucking her hard with slow or hard

strokes as her cunt juices completely slaver your hand.� love the

observation that allisha is becoming more beautiful by the moment.� i

simply love that.� i have never quit put in words like that to myself.

i have thought it but to see the words just blow me away.

//� one thing i have always loved about your writings is you capture the

rhythms of love.� other authors start at point a and so quickly move at

a rapid acceleration to the end point and thus make it boring with the

sameness.� conversely, some are so slow on delivering the heat that i

simply give up and move on.� you seem to be able over and over to strike

the perfect balance.� i really am happy to find an author blessed with

this skill.� you show that here where the heat has backed off and now we

have that dreamy fuck stage [It took her a while to build up to the

inevitable moment.� She fell into a gentle rhythm of rising and falling

currents, her soft panting accelerating for a time, and her body

tensing, clenching a little, even being overtaken by false

mini-shudders, as if a climax were trying to escape, then slowly falling

back into a trough, her breath slackening again, her muscles relaxing,

her pelvis only dipping and undulating slowly instead of churning and

bucking.]� i can eat you out for hours if the gods so bless me.

//� i have to agree with the observation that silent lovers can be such

a bummer.� i want to hear your vocalizations to stroke my ego of course

but also like you say here is that these aural cues tell you where to go

and when to focus or back off if you are trying to prolong the

pleasure.� it can be a bummer and sometimes unnerving when you meet such

silence.� i do like it when you do hit that secret nerve and you see her

suddenly react.� i will almost beg you to let go and vocalize your

pleasure.� you will only make both of us happier.� i beg them to trust

me.� over time you can usually get them to be more vocal.� i love how

you show patience in lovemaking that you just don't see in other

authors.� they just make it seem so root while you give it the spender

it deserves.� you show a lover focusing on your lover [But Laura allowed

none of this to disturb her.� She knew Allisha was going to come, and

Allisha apparently knew it too, for never did she seem desperate or

anguished about the length of time she was taking.� She knew she had a

beautiful body and that Laura was enjoying it to the fullest.]� women

know how to take their time in their love making.� other authors just

seem to want to scream through their sex for some reason.� They miss so

much.

//� you now do two things that i have always worshiped in your

writings.� here you show both the communication that women do during

lovemaking and you show how women do more than one thing while they make

love.� other authors never seem to let their women actually communicate

with each other after the seduction is past.� they never encourage and

make their woman hot with love words cooed to them.� they also just

focus on only one thing at a time.� they kiss and only that and then to

breast and that alone and then straight oral while you show how lovers

digress and love all parts of their woman that they can.� only you truly

capture the magic of this dynamic of lesbian lovemaking.� this is shown

with ["Oh honey . . . you are so beautiful . . ." Laura purred to her,

letting her free hand slide up Allisha's undulating body to one of her

scrumptious breasts, which she squeezed fervently, rolling and gently

pinching Allisha's large, erect nipple between her thumb and

forefinger.� "I want you to come.� I want you to come so hard."]

//� i like how you show laura going for the love kill.� other authors

will say that the woman is approaching her orgasm and the other works a

little harder but they make it seem so bland.� only you give the details

that shows a woman really ramping up the heat and giving her all to give

her woman a womb shattering orgasm like [This made Laura quicken the

pace.� She began probing and frigging her faster, and now lashed

Allisha's swollen clit with her tongue and sucked it feverishly.]� i

give you my all when i sense you approaching your orgasm.� i pour on the

heat to simply shatter your soul with screaming wrenching spams of dire

bliss.� i work and work until you body tells me what allisha's does here

[Allisha's body gave an odd twitch, and her flexing thighs closed

spastically for a brief moment on Laura's head before parting again.

Then her whole pelvis rose off the mattress and began swirling and

shuddering visibly.� Still she made no noise other than her harsh, rapid

breathing, but her entire lower body seemed to be wrenched by

uncontrollable spasms.]� sigh, this is what i live for.� watching my

woman's body starting to go wild and then pushing her over into pure

nirvana of screaming bliss.

//� sigh, allisha is quiet, too quiet for my taste, but her body is

telling me i am doing my job and i can live with that until hopefully, i

can get her to loosen up a little.� i love seeing laura sensing that

multiple orgasms are possible and she goes for it.� if i sense more heat

or vary my stimulation will take over the top again i am going to pour

on the heat until i get what laura gets here [Now there was no mistaking

it.�� She was coming fiercely, and Laura devoured her, wanting to make

it the best.� And surprisingly, in the midst of her orgasm Allisha's

straining body suddenly gave another sharp twitch, and Laura knew

without a doubt that she had touched the spot.� In the middle of her

orgasm, Allisha was suddenly overwhelmed by an even deeper, more

crushing one that seemed to well up from inside the first one.

"Unnngghmmmiiieeee!" she yelped, her face frozen in an ecstatic rapture

that was ripping through her whole writhing body.� "Oh!"]� i am honored

when i can give such bliss.� i love seeing my woman writhing on the bed

like here and feeling and seeing her juices soaking everything and her

face simply being destroyed by fierce grimaces of ecstasy slashing her

face.� nothing is more beautiful than a woman experiencing a multiple

orgasm.� Nothing!!!

//� like the little details like laura easing up on allisha's clit and

stops rubbing her g-spot when she senses that she could over simulate

them with continued loving.� i love just holding a clit in my lips as

you come down and feel our love flowing through my lips and your clit.

i can just lie their like this watching you come back to reality while

your come has totally soaked my face and neck and tits with your sweet

essence.� i am smiling when allisha wants to keep laura's fingers in her

for a while.� the gods know i love to do that especially when it is a

fist or cock that is deep up my pussy or asshole.� after a good dp, tp

or more fuck i will just lie spent between my women as i feel their

cocks buried deep in my spent asshole and pussy.� if i have another cock

loving me i will open my mouth and suck it in and gently suck it clean

of any juices and hum on my love pacifier and just bask as all my fuck

holes are filled as i bask in spent passion and love.

//� love all the post coital communication you give me as allisha gushes

about her first g-spot orgasm and the pure happiness she is feeling.

for some reason other authors never show any communication after their

sex.� they usually part and go their ways or go to sleep.� this is a

time when lovers truly share of themselves and i so thankful to find one

author who shows this special time of sharing and mirth.� i have to love

this slut that allisha hides behind her classy reserve [Allisha beamed.

"I sure do.� Here, lay back and let your new girlfriend show you what

she's been saving up for only you."]� i can only hope and pray that

laura has awakened allisha to her true self and will now listen to this

true inner self and now pursue women like the goddess meant for us too.

maybe a sport fuck from time to time with a man worth his cock but then

kick his ass out and keep him far away until you feel like some strange

again.

//� i love when i awaken her to her true self and she completely lets

go.� i have found some women are like this.� they have been fantasizing

about it and researching on the internet and secret viewing of movies

and i get this [She apparently considered herself something of a sexual

artiste, and Laura in only seconds was nearly climbing the walls.

Allisha swallowed her nipples, Allisha tongue-buzzed her clit until she

was moaning and twisting like a tornado.� Allisha, Laura was quickly

reminded, had a very long tongue, and Laura thought she might squeal

uncontrollably as she felt it snake up into her flowing pussy.� For a

second it almost felt like Allisha was trying to find her g-spot with

her tongue instead of her fingers.� Laura quivered and heard herself

whinnying uncontrollably.]� i love looking down and seeing the pure

happiness in their faces as they go wild on my pussy.� actually,

sometimes i have to restrain them and get them focusing from their wild

gobbling of my pussy and licking and sucking everything and anything it

feels like.� they want it so bad and my soul sings to know i have shown

her paradise on earth and she is finally starting to embrace her true

lesbian self.� i know sometimes i must gently seduce them again until

she finally embraces her true self.

//� my archangels tell me i would make a great porn star because i am so

vocal but they know they are the same.� we let it out like here

["Annngghhhmmnnggiiieeee!" she cried out, her body wrenched and wracked

by piercing spasms of ecstasy.����� Unlike Allisha, Laura was an

extravagant moaner when in the throes of a thrilling climax.� She gulped

and screamed and followed her scream with long, whinnying groans as her

body flipped and surged off the mattress, shuddering and shaking in a

series of hammering blows, until she swore she had come at least twice

and possibly three times.� The orgasms seemed to blend together until it

was impossible to break them into segments; it had felt like one

continuous convulsion, punctuated by brief lulls.� She was barely able

to breathe as the crushing climax subsided; then her breath slowly

returned.]� when my body is singing with ecstasy i simply must let the

gods know my joy.� especially when i am being hammered by a multiple

orgasm like here.� i love just screaming myself hoarse as my body is

flipping and jackknifing all over the bed, sofa or floor with soul

crushing pleasure making me shriek like a harpy.

//� of course i love the post coital time of them sharing joy in laura's

orgasm and allisha being proud and probing a little and finding out some

about the "girlfriend".� i sure do when their is one.� heck, i even want

to know about the guy if he is decent in the sack.� allisha sort of

apologizes for not being a screamer but i think i would do what laura

does here.� i would comfort her and tell that is okay.� her body did the

screaming for her but give a good scream a try and see how you feel

about it.� you might surprise yourself.

//� i love the next part where allisha is trying to angle for more of

laura knowing that she will probably limiting herself when makeeda comes

back in the picture.� i love that i am seeing the true inner lesbian

slut awakening in allisha.� she is has again tasted the forbidden fruit

and know she wants more of it.� i love igniting the inner slut in my new

loves who are new or tried to resist their true lesbian selves.� i want

them to hunger for gash.� then allisha truly delights me when she makes

clear she will be masturbating in hopes of hitting her own g-spot.

being a big self lover i love any time i see in writing women who love

to masturbate for themselves and maybe for their lovers.� i love

frigging myself with a rapt audience watching me intently as i come

screaming and flipping all over the bed with pure self induced ecstasy.

//� love the shot of humor from laura when she tells allisha ["No, but

you can depend on me now," Laura purred, rolling Allisha onto her back

and then swarming over her delicious lean body.] when she is angling for

more of laura in the future.� i guess, unfortunately, she had better get

all of her know.� now i am smiling great big as allisha tells laura that

she comes best in cowgirl position when het fucking and does she have a

strap-on.� oh yeah!� i love this slut.� i would be swooning thinking of

slamming my cock deep up her tight pussy and making her come so fucking

hard like no man has done before or at least as good as the best she may

of ever had.� i do have to be fair.� i then love the observation of them

bouncing off the bed like little girls.� i have come to appreciate your

work so much because you actually show these moments of mirth and

giddiness that lesbian loving gives women and only you capture these

moments.

//� i am really there as laura shows allisha her collection of toys and

allisha is filled with giddy joy over laura's toys.� i have some women

almost swoon over our big collection of toys and some have been down

right shocked.� love the looks on their faces.� it is so damn precious.

really love the fact that allisha tells laura that males have begged her

for her ass and she has deferred like she is begging off the double

penetratro but we see [Allisha looked at her without speaking, a stare

that was also full of meaning; such as, I'll bet you'd like to offer

too, Laura; or, maybe I'll let you if you're nice.]� i know that look

and if i see it i will be working with all my skill to quickly bury my

cock deep up your ass.� i find letting them take mine fills them with an

animalistic desire to let me do them.� i so love seeing that pained /

pleasured look that inserting my cock up their virgin ass gives me.

that look of wondrous sensation and pain that is still pleasure and

slowly taking them until my cock is slamming deep up their shit hole

balls deep and their actually screaming and clawing the bed for me to

fuck them harder and do i.� i make them come so hard from soul

shattering anal 'gasms.

//� they opt for the ridged dildo and laura wants to take a few minutes

and see if she can get allisha to tell her about her previous lesbian

experience.� i will conjole and beg for your sex stories.� it simply

turns me on so.� they go out to the famous white sofa and allisha begins

her story.� i like how she keeps angling for her dildo fuck but laura

wants her sex story.� what a beautiful dilemma.� i would go for the

story first too to get me even more worked up. �i already know i am

going to fuck you blind again.� love hearing the story of young innocent

love.� i can remember such fucks from middle and high school and having

passion almost explode out of no where.� i was always angling for pussy

from a young age once i had been seduced and shown the wonders of

lesbian loving.� i was a nympho from the start.

//� i can remember fucking several girls like this in high school

[Allisha nodded.� "And she had big boobs, about twice as big as mine.

The guys thought she was the bomb.� So I spent a little while sucking

her nipples.� Hers were huge.� Big black knobs.� I really got into it.

You would've loved them.� They stood up like thumbs when you got them

wet and excited."]� i was simply amazed at the size of their aerolas and

their nipples.� seeing such size was a wondorous discovery.� i just

sucked and swallowed them for hours.� so much to love and devour.� i

love all girls and have loved the voluptuous from the start.� as long as

you are not sloppy fat i am hot for you.� blast it, allisha wants to

fuck to bad to finish the story.� can't complain about that.� i would

get the rest during our sweet post coital when she ia all dreamy and

would probably sing songs eloquent about her first time then.

//� i have always liked the way you are able to show the flow of

lovemaking so naturally.� you make it seem so real while some authors

just kind of jump from one stage of lovemaking to the next.� you make it

seem so real as laura starts turning up the heat and once again is

loving allisha's wonderful tits and you again give us more visual cues

to the unique hue, color and dimensions of her nipples.� you have been

the only author to describe vividly the breast and vagina of their

women.� i think i can understand because if had to describe my own body

like this in printed word for reading enjoyment i would be a little

stumped.� i am me and my angels are clear in my mind's eye but putting

it in words would be tough.� i am thankful that i have found one author

who has mastered this skill.

//� i see that allisha is not all that experienced with lesbian loving.

it is amazing how you find women who have little or no direct experience

but their desires, dreams and the access the internet provides can bring

women to your bed with amazing skills and passions for a newbie.� i like

how here you show the fact that allisha is kind of punch drunk.� other

authors will show you how the woman starts out feeling "normal" and then

almost straight through to where she is climbing the walls with wild

desire.� only you show those intermediate steps where you have reduced

her to jello in you hands and she willing to jump off a mountain

backwards if you were to ask her.� i love that glassy eye, groggy motion

state i put them in that you capture here as laura drags allisha back to

her bedroom to fuck her brains out with her ridged dildo.

//� sigh, what a beautiful picture of laura strapping on her cock and

lying back and allisha mounting her cow girl style and [A sly, sexy

smiled pursed Allisha's incredibly desirable mouth as she spread her

thin thighs to straddle Laura's.� She held the end of the dildo with two

fingers, looking down, and together they lodged it between her wet,

swollen, black pussy lips and slid it slowly in.� Laura watched

Allisha's face as she descended onto the strap-on dildo and wondered if

she had ever seen such pure bliss as the thick, ridged pole slid up into

her body.� No way you'll ever woo this darling completely away from

cock, she thought, watching Allisha's eyes roll up and her head loll

back.]� i love watching my cock slide up a beautiful woman's pussy or

asshole.� seeing het sublime pleasure cross her face as it slides in

deep and then watching your cock slide in and out of her fuck hole and

seeing her lips cling to the cock on the outstroke if she is really

tight.� yumm!� if she is really wise she will let women provide the

cock.� it may be plastic or such but we can give the emotional and some

of us have the power to fuck your world hard.� save the men for a sport

fuck.

//� i too love being rode cow girl style because i can see your

beautiful body up above me swirling, rocking or slamming down on me as

you take control and lead the fuck.� i love to have my woman controlling

things.� plus, when the time is right or i'm called upon i can start

coiling my hips and launching my cock hard and deep up your pussy.� i

love starting slow and then pistoning my cock hard and fast up your

pussy with our thighs slapping.� i love you poetry you use to show great

fucking [Her thick, stiffish but long hair was disheveled and tangled

around her naked shoulders, sometimes falling forward to obscure her

gorgeous breasts.� Laura reached up and pushed it away, cupping them in

her palms, twisting Allisha's marvelous thick burnt umber, reddish brown

nipples.� Allisha was lost in a trance of slow, sensual, rhythmic

fucking, letting the perpendicular dildo slide up and down inside her

pussy as she moved forward and backward over Laura, shimmying a little

from time to time, making barely a noise, her breathing rapid but even.

Her eyes were closed, but the pure pleasure contorting her face was

thrilling for Laura to watch.]� no other author shows how long hair

flows around when fucking.� it is so mesmerizing and only you show

this.� again you show how women do more one than one thing when loving

their women.� other authors never show tweaking a woman's nipples while

fucking her or showing how the woman fucking herself on the cock will

control her pelvis and move the cock up her fuck hole exactly how her

body is singing to her too.� thank you for capturing all this.� you show

the true joy of fucking that other authors just seem to gloss over for

some reason.

//� love how you show laura drooling over allisha's swaying tits above

her.� again only you show the thinking of their women while fucking.

other authors just show the fucking and forget to show the mental and

emotions of loving.� they miss so much by doing this.� like how you show

laura getting worked up with the strap-on grinding down on her pubic

mound and working over her clitoral hood.� all that grinding so quickly

gets me lubed up and jangling with a burning womb working towards an

orgasm.� don't always come but i quickly masturbate to an shattering

orgasm or my woman rips it off and sucks me off or some other way.

//� you now show me that communication that i oh so love and never see

in other works of erotica fiction.� with others they simply just fuck

with no communication of desires and needs.� the lovers just do their

acts with no communication which makes it seem so cold and distant to

me.� here we see laura whispering to allisha to bend down so she can

suck her nipples.� it could have been nonverbal communication with laura

moving her hands up to her back and gently pressing her down but it is

still communication.� other authors would just show allisha bending down

and feeding laura her nipples.� i have read enough stories to know this

almost surely how others would write it.� they just have things happen.

this happens of course, allot sometimes, when the fuck hunger is

raging.� lovers just take and demand without much communication but

women usually fuck softer and with divine communication.� women crave

communication so much more than men who only want to satisfy their cock

where women try to satisfy their mates souls.

//� wow!!� you capture also the women your requesting too being so lost

in fuck pleasure she doesn't hear you and then laura pulls her torso

gently down and starts sucking her nipples.� wow, only you capture it

all! �you have always been able to capture the flow of fucking wo well.

you take us from sweet foreplay to the initial fucking and show the

ramping up like here [Then she slid her arm around the small of

Allisha's back to pull her even closer.� They rocked and whinnied

softly, the bed moving under them as their pace increased.����� This was

heaven.� There was no feeling on the planet that equaled it, this gentle

rocking and probing, this rough, ragged panting and soft grunting, this

sensation of hot honey throbbing through your veins, this feeling that

the warm, flexing flesh of a beautiful girl was merging and shuddering

with your own flesh in rhythm, on the verge of a convulsive paroxysm of

total melting together.� Nothing mattered but the harmony of their

merged, writhing, pumping bodies as they hurtled for the finish line.]

only you show this merging fuck like here or the wild slam dance like

when laura nailed dee dee's ass to the bed with double penetrator.� you

make both so magical by show the flow from the slow gentle to the

energetic ending when souls are striving for mind blowing orgasms.

//� now you show how the merging fuck can quickly move to the end game

where passion dictates a wildness in your lovemaking [Up until now Laura

had been merely a stationary accomplice, holding the dildo steady for

Allisha as she fucked herself on it, caressing her body, sucking her

nipples, but not actively thrusting.� But now the excitement was too

much for her.� She pulled Allisha's writhing body hard into her own and

up-jabbed the dildo deep into her spasming cunt.� At the same time she

quickly released Allisha's hard wet nipple from her mouth and slid her

face over to the other breast, sucking that nipple now in deep.� Sucking

it hard, she began fucking Allisha hard too, up-jabbing fiercely and

forcing Allisha's pussy down onto her up-thrusting groin with the arm

she had wrapped around her hips.]� i so love this stage in fucking,

especially when you have penetration happening.� as body and soul become

taunt with need your body simply strives to immolate itself in fire and

passion.� i so love having cock(s) slammed up my body and if the fucker,

slamming my cock so hard and deep up your pussy or asshole or making you

suck my cock deep in your mouth or down your throat as my bed mates slam

your fuck holes.

//� i so love how you show that wrapping of arms around your woman to

pull her close and to help spear your cock, fingers, or fist deep up a

clenching and beginning to spasm cunt or asshole.� i so love feeling

your inner fuck muscles or sphincter gripping my fingers or fist.� sure

wish they could hook a strap-on to our nervous system so we could feel

it on our cocks like the guys.� oh well, can't have everything.� we have

everything else but that would simply be the bomb.� sigh, this is what i

live for ["Aiiyyeee!" Allisha yelped, thrashing and shuddering as the

full orgasm finally began to rip through her, and pumping hard now

herself.����� She fell forward even more onto Laura, mashing her breast

into Laura's face, and her pelvis jerked wildly.� Even though she made

less noise than many girls, she began to keen uncontrollably.

"Unneeee . . . . uuummnnggeee . . . oh!"]� true, allisha is quieter than

most but her body is still being turn apart and she is making just

enough noise to make my soul soar with pure happiness.� nothing is more

pure than watching a woman torn apart with pleasure and knowing you did

it all or had a part in it.� women so bask in the glory and pleasure of

their partners.� that is why we are such superior lovers.

//� i think it is very cute here where you show laura croaking to

allisha to hold her and all allisha can do is lie on top of she being

crushed by bliss and laura contenting herself to hold allisha close to

her as they are now both consumed by blissful orgasms.� i have had that

happen to me when my woman is simply incapable of even of hearing me as

crushing waves of bliss are tearing her apart.� i know i have seen my

angels mouth speaking to me during a crushing orgasm and all i can do is

stare with no comprehension as my body is torn apart with fucking bliss

and my soul soaring among the stars.� i think it is cute when we can't

really hear our lovers request simply because we lost to womb shattering

orgasms.� i too love to bring a star struck lover to my body as her

jolts and jackknifes are telegraphed directly into my body.� paradise

cannot be anymore blissful than having a woman lying on top of you

writhing as she screams her pleasure to the room.

//� i have to smile at all the banter you give us.� i am so thankful to

see allisha starting to acknowledge her true lesbian self.� i love

seeing a newbie starting to realize what she has been missing and see

the hunger awakening in her eyes and then seeing her acting on it.� i

get a little nervous when i see laura talking about giving up her ways

but then i see she can't really resist all these beautiful angels.� life

is so short and one needs to get all the loving they can get.� i

sometimes wonder where the time goes.� i so love seeing allisha pouting

when laura needs to rest some before their next round of loving.� laura

needs a little time to recharge her batteries as she gets a little

older.� i am smiling at allisha wanting it bad.� i love awakening the

fuck hunger in my angels.� this is what i love to read [Oh you delicious

young girls! Laura thought, smiling.� Insatiable. "You remind me of me,"

she said to Allisha.� "But frankly I need a few minutes rest.� I'm not

as young as you are, my darling."]� i know i am "insatiable" and love it

in my angels.� nothing is better than fucking yourself until your pussy

is totally and happily exhausted.

//� sigh, i guess i am starting to reach this age myself [Allisha

crinkled her nose at Laura in a devilish grin.� "Just what I like," she

teased.� "A seasoned, mature lover, who can teach me things."����� Laura

grabbed her, now a little more violently than before.� "Are you

suggesting that I'm old?"����� Allisha now kissed her and drove her

long, sexy tongue nearly down Laura's throat.� "Just old enough," she

said, both of them breathless after she finally pulled it back out.

"Just old enough."]� one thing about this epic story arc you have

created, you have shown laura over the years as she lived her life and

is slowly moving through her life like we all do.� only by giving us

this epic have we been able to travel down this divine story path.� Long

may she run as the old song goes.

 

 

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Chapter 299:

//� i like how this chapter starts with laura reminiscing about an old

love, deshona.� i too know that feeling of pining about an old lover and

wanting her flesh desperately.� sometimes a woman will remind you of

another lover and suddenly you want her and you must have her if at all

possible.� i like how her new love, makeeda, is kindling a renewed

desire for deshona.� i like how you show a new love can make an old love

spring anew with fresh desires to fuck heatedly.� i so love how my

angels inspire me and i them to fuck wildly with myself and the other

angels we can entice to share our bed.� i so love to share.

//� one thing i have so loved about deshona is how you show laura

thawing her out.� she was definitely an iceberg and totally hard and not

really all that nice.� yet, laura had the strength and insight into

deshona so pursue her despite getting allot of pain shoved her way.� i

definitely would not of had the strength and courage to take the abuse

she did.� instead she did thaw out the woman that deshona truly is.

man's world had really fucked her over and suppressed her true lesbian

self and her true self that is indeed warm and caring.� i like us being

able to see laura's memories and seeing how she was able to seduce

deshona and how once she did, deshona turned into a regular fuck animal

that desired and needed to have lots of lesbian sex to truly satisfy her

soul.� i have come to love deshona so much because of the woman she is

now and this story arc allows us to see how she got there.

//� i have to love the cryptic email.� i can imagine reading that at

work without knowing the code and wondering what in the world this

message means.� i would be thinking how weird.� i then have to love how

it inspires deshona to call and then seeing them flirt and banter their

love to each other on the phone line.� yours is the only story that

allows their women to flirt like this.� other stories are too short to

allow for this sharing of souls like here.� they simply don't have the

time or kilobytes to develop such intimacy.� i am smiling great big as

they plan to meet while makeeda is away.� i think one should always get

all the pussy one can.� makeeda will never know and thus she will never

be hurt and laura is getting the loving she needs to keep herself vital

and full of energy.

//� i have to smile as deshona takes the first flight back to san

francisco to get back to laura's loving arms.� i have to smile at molly

the dog and her antics.� i have seen dogs be so affectionate and also

seen them be so jealous when they see affection and they are not the

center.� i have always loved our loving descriptions of your women

[Deshona was wearing shorts and a thin red top, since it was a hot day.

She had short but beautifully shaped dark brown legs that Laura had run

her lips over hungrily many times in the past and wanted to do again,

right now.]� other authors never tell me the beauty of their women's

legs.� i have to love the banter of these two women who know and so like

and love each other.

//� i like how you show them making smoky eye contact as they remember

previous hot fucks.� i so love reminiscing about old fucks and love to

talk to a lover and go over our pasts fucks as our words, tone and

facial expressions ignite our lust and desire to a fever pitch.� only

this story arc allows this reflecting on the past.� only you have

provided us a past that allows the present to reflect.� you are to be so

commended for all the effort and time you have devoted to this great

epic.� i am smiling as they continue to banter as they get to deshona's

bedroom.� i like how you show something about deshona's personality by

the spotless and extremely neat bedroom.� she may have a maid but this

extreme neatness says so much about deshona's personality and the

strictness she has in a lot of her personality.

//� deshona brings in some champagne and they continue to banter and

laura wants to know about a new woman deshona has mentioned, lupe.� oh

yeah, a latina!!!� now we know of two other women in deshona's life.

yes, pumping my fist.� deshona has embraced her lesbian self and is

exploring her new self.� i am so happy for deshona.� to see where she

started and where she is now is such a happy trip for me.� laura now

does what i would always want to do when i sense a new woman in my

angels life ["Yes," Laura breathed, brushing her lips against

Deshona's.� "Every detail.� It makes me want to fuck you better than

they ever could."]� i so love hearing about hot sex with women,

especially new women i can now drool and lust for.� sigh, deshona is

still demure and deflects laura and her inquires about her sex life.

geez, i was hoping or some details.� they share some bubbly and and

banter about the emperor / empress.� i like the latter name better i

must confess.� oh geez, just when i have visions of a good hard dildo

fuck we find it is in baltimore with jill.� but this makes me happy.� if

it is in baltimore then we know deshona plans on going back to there for

more of sweet jill.� yes, she is definitely becoming a lesbian slut

whore.

//� you now give me the humor i so love in your writings and you love

your women's lips with details that i never see elsewhere [Laura leaned

her face so close to Deshona's that she could take her full lower lip

between her teeth.� Neither one had yet drunk a sip of champagne.� "I'll

bet I can make you spurt," Laura breathed again.]� i can't recall

another author that allows their women to truly enjoy the art of kissing

like you do.� love how deshona quakes with desire at the mentioning of

her ability to ejaculate.� i can remember the first time i made love to

a woman who ejaculated and she sure didn't warn me and i nearly choked

to death when that first geyser nearly drowned me.� yumm!� i immediately

buried my face in her cunt and opened wide for the next hot spurts.� i

am so addicted to hot spurting cum rocketing down my throat and soaking

my face and hair with wet, sticky cum.� i simply can't get over how much

deshona has opened up and her warmth as she makes clear she intends to

see laura again.� that friends and lovers should never part.� old love

can live with new love.

//� i have always liked how you show that the undressing and the

beginning of fucking while dressed is so divine. other authors just

always have them strip which is so boring while you show [Laura's hands

were under her shirt before she even finished setting the empty glass on

the bed stand.� Laura ran them up Deshona's peerless back to her bra

clasp.� She quickly unfastened it and slid her hands forward and under

the bra to cup the round, hard miracles of Deshona's extraordinary

breasts.]� this is foreplay that ignites the soul for hot fucking.� cute

detail of lifting her top and bra under her chin and then laura moves in

and devours her hard melons and you always give the hot details that

make it seem like the reader is actually the lover pleasing her woman

[She cradled them in her palms and began feverishly licking Deshona's

wide brown areolas and flicking the rising centers with the tip of her

tongue.� Deshona panted and stroked Laura's hair with one hand, very

reluctant to stop her.� Laura moved both hands to one luscious brown

globe and guided Deshona's nipple into her mouth.� She sucked it hard.]

you show why foreplay is upper persuasion to lower invasion.� i have

always loved your aeroals and nipple stem play.

//� i have always rolled my eyes at how laura is always worried when she

sucks her woman's nipples hard and they nearly die from pleasure.� it is

so cute that she is always worried that she is doing it too hard when

they almost always want harder and longer.� you now do that trick of

laura saying she will do something and then all we see and hear is the

woman gasping or groaning from her doing it.� that is such a cool

literary trick when a skilled writer like yourself pulls it off.� love

the news of deshona teaching lupe to suck her tits hard and then your

always present humor ["Ah!" Deshona gasped, wriggling half-free,

laughing excitedly.� "Please leave some of it for me.� I need this

body."]� mirth can add so much to sex and love.� i like seeing deshona's

neat personality showing again when she insists on neatly pulling the

covers back.� you always keep your women in character.� i love how you

show your women truly observing their lover [Laura was unable to keep

her eyes off Deshona's bobbing, swaying naked breasts during this

procedure.� Deshona's jutting dark brown nipples were hard and still

glossy with Laura's saliva.]

//� they now fall onto the bed and clench and grope as deshona uses

"ebonics".� this is something that makes me instantly wet when my black

lovers talk ghetto to me and others speak in their native tongue.� like

the observation about how free deshona has become because of laura's

loving [Deshona, very refined and self-controlled, never talked

'ebonics' except in the most relaxed and playful of circumstances.� She

seemed at the moment almost bubbling over with delight, as well as

sexual excitement.]� i like how you show us the negotiating we often do

with regular lovers.� communicating to make the fucking extra hot and

special.� they now kiss like true lovers always do [If their first naked

embrace was heaven, this was the seventh degree of paradise.� Since they

had fucked often in the past and were certainly about to undertake a

marathon of fucking in the next few hours, they could take their time

kissing, and they did.� Their mouths met slowly in a calm, exploratory

reacquaintance.� Their kiss was patient and emotional, but during it

Laura could feel every place on her body where Deshona's naked flesh was

touching it.� She knew Deshona was feeling the same thing.]� that

special languid kissing that unites souls and ignites wombs with fire

and desire.

//� you now give us something that i have never seen in another author's

work.� the full body clench where skin is rubbing and tongues twining in

tight hot kissing.� [They kissed and moved ever so slightly together

just to enjoy the feel of their nipples touching, mashing together,

their bellies rubbing, their thighs tensing and sliding against each

other, their fingertips digging into each other's resilient warm

flesh.]� this is simply so divine that i wonder why i never read it in

other works.� i mean we all do it.� even hets.� i have come to find it

so strange.� especially like hearing of them kissing so sensually and

long.� love their murmured words of lust and love and how deshona is

taking control of the fuck.� she wants some nice trib and wants to show

something new and exciting.� They maneuver into position and you show us

that divine rubbing of cunt meat [She and Deshona had fucked this way

many times, and the memory of all those times seemed concentrated into

this one infinitesimal moment, stirring their emotions as well as their

surging sexual juices.� They began to swirl their groins gently against

each other, reaching down with their fingers to splay their wet, swollen

cunt lips further, to ensure the broadest intimate contact.]� love how

you talk about sweet memories bringing great past fucks to mind and

savoring again their sweet taste.

//� i have to like lupe showing deshona [Her black eyes were glazed with

sexual heat as she moved her body a little to the side so that she was

straddling Laura's thigh with both of her own.� Of course, in this

position Laura's thighs were also clamping Deshona's, and she got the

message immediately.� She also instantaneously knew the truth of what

Deshona was saying.� This way, rubbing your cunt against the hard thigh

muscle of your lover, you could pump harder and come faster.]� i know

some say trib must involve pussy to pussy contact but that is not my

definition.� i so love thigh to cunt humping, especially when you are

face to face.� this is absolutely one of my favorites.� more sweet

memories of sara and brandi fucking her with their wonderful thighs.

sigh, sweet memories.� love the fierce need and competition you show

here [On the other hand, Deshona was gasping and grunting and pumping

crazily, and Laura did not want to be beaten to the finish line.� She

clamped her own thighs tightly on Deshona's and began surging and

bucking and pumping furiously herself, feeling the hard muscle of

Deshona's shapely thigh slide in the greasy groove of her gaping pussy,

feeling her throbbing clit jam into it with each frantic thrust.]� i

always want to come quick and strive to come before or with my lover.

of course, losing this particular contest is no loss at all.� i so know

that wild humping of nectar slicked thighs to orgasm.

//� oh yes, the fuck is finishing so wonderfully ["Unh . . . unh . . .

unh!" Laura grunted, knowing she was about to come too, feeling her

suddenly sweaty body merge with Deshona's squirming, struggling flesh,

hearing Deshona's wild whoops and moans in her ears, feeling Deshona's

breasts suddenly mashing into hers again as Deshona shifted her body to

be face to face with Laura.]� love that face to face.� i so love

gripping your back and pulling you close as cunts hump wildly on thighs

and simply tear themselves apart in crushing orgasms of spasming bliss.

as usual you so perfectly capture a stunning, beautiful orgasm

["Unnggghmmnmnngghiiieeee!" she cried out.� "Ohhnnggg god!� Ummngghh!

Auunngghhh!"

Laura was very close behind, only a few seconds, erupting in sharp,

volcanic spasms as a huge, wrenching orgasm pummeled her.� "Ohhnnngggg!

Ummnngghh!� Ooohhhmmnnggiiiee!" she wailed, feeling her body flip and

almost jackknife under Deshona, her thighs clamping Deshona's in a

fierce grip as she pumped her way wildly through a long, exhausting

climax.]� i so live for the orgasm that simply throttles one's mind with

crushing bliss and ecstasy.

//� i have always loved having a spent lover lie on top of me after a

good hard fuck and feel her like laura here ["It's not as if you're very

heavy," Laura smiled.� "I love the feel of you on top of me."]� i love

to go to sleep with a lover lying on top of me as we go off to sweet

slumber.� being an amazon has its benefits.� i am smiling at laura

humping her thigh into deshona's telling her that if they rest for a few

minutes they can go for it again.� i simply love the way she thinks!� i

have done this countless times.� it is such a wonderful way to come.

but alas, deshona wants a break.

//� they talk of makeeda and i am so glad they have both matured to the

point that they can talk to each other about their loves and not get all

jealous and pissy.� i have found that so thirteenish.� adults are

supposed to be beyond that, of course i know that it is easy to say it

and sometimes hard to do it.� like the humor you always show [Deshona

nodded and shrugged.� "I know.� I understand.� She's one lucky woman to

have you.� Although if she screams like I do when you fuck her, she

won't be singing long.� You'll wreck that treasure of a voice."� She

shrugged again.� "As long as I can see you once in a while.� Like

this."]� i have always liked deshona and it has only grown as she has

thawed and become this warmer so much more caring person.� i have to

smile at deshona wanting to know all about makeeda and letting laura

tell her all and then getting demure about lupe.� oh well, i guess most

women like to have their secrets.� i am so happy to hear that lupe is so

hot in bed.� i find almost all latinas i have made love to have been

very wild in bed.� that is one reason i am so attracted to women of

hispanic descent.

//� i love the banter and then passion arises as they kiss long and hard

and get excited and we have some love pinching going on.� like how the

specter of kinky appears when laura pinches her and deshona calls her a

bitch and they playfully act defiant and angry.� i like how you

introduce a theme and then not pursue it.� here they flirt with the idea

of laura giving deshona another fierce ass whipping.� if another author

showed us this, i can guarantee that it would occur.� you show real life

in where one partner brings it up and the other partner is not

interested in the kinky stuff this time and demurs.� i have always loved

your give and take and conversation of your women as they actually

discuss their desires, wants and needs.� deshona may not want an ass

blistering but she wants something equally divine [Deshona shook her

head slowly, solemnly.� She reached down and grasped one of Laura's arms

by the wrist, raising it between them, then running her fingertip along

the bumps of Laura's knuckles.� "You have such a beautiful . . . small .

. . hand."]� oh yeah.� nothing can match the intimacy and closeness of

fisting our lover deep up her pussy or asshole.� feeling your fist

sinking deep up her wet, clinging heat and having her come so crushingly

on your fist and forearm.

//� have to smile at laura holding off on this with makeeda making sure

she is ready to receive this new of loving for her.� like the long

kissing again.� sigh, thanks for showing.� laura slides between

deshona's thighs as she opens them wide in offering and giving.� before

she fists deshona she needs some gash and you now give us the word

picture that i loved immediately.� only you ever describe the women's

vaginas and the rest of their body for that matter.� like here [But only

hers had the sculptured, shell-like beauty of a pristine form, parabolic

in shape and bright dark pink inside, now all shiny with flowing

juices.� She was a copious lubricator, and though her earlier orgasm had

not resulted in the gusher she was frequently capable of, it looked to

Laura now like she was warming up to one.� The aromatic cunt nectars

were glistening and running inside the puckered sleeve of this woman's

marvelous love trench.]� i sure wish other authors gave me these loving

descriptions.

//� love how you tell us of deshona's coloring of her vagina.� women of

color have so many unique hues and colors.� it is such a wonder

discovering each woman's uniqueness.� love how you show the thoughts of

your women [Deshona, knowing that what she craved was coming eventually,

and that there was no rushing Laura when she got into this sexual

worship mode, lay back and yielded her body completely]� i know that

sighing when i am being loved and yet knowing what i want big time the

fuck i'm craving is soon coming my way.� now you give me that

communication that i so love.� this is how women communicate to their

women and i love you showing it [By now Laura had slid two fingers into

the warm, tight, buttery slit and was moving them slowly in and out as

she continued sucking and licking the surrounding flesh.� "I do love

it," she panted.� "And I'm going to cram it tighter than it ever was

crammed by Charles . . . or the Empress.� I'm going to fill it so full

of me that it just shimmers and comes unbelievably."]� giving her loving

threats that melt her womb and prime the pump helping her mental engine

start revving and making her orgasms all the more crushing.

//� other author just have them the fisting seemingly occur out of

nowhere where you show that slow working of fingers into your lover's

pussy as you oh so slowly work your magic [Now Laura had three fingers

in her pussy.� Deshona was so wet and slippery that she knew she could

slide her whole hand into it at any time.� It was small and tight, but

amazingly slippery and gooey and warm.� The last time they had done this

Laura's hand had been inside her before either of them even knew it.]

deshona knows does something that i love to do [Her hand quickly

scrabbled across the sheet to a pillow, which she yanked down behind her

head, propping it up so that she could watch every second of Laura's

hand going into her body.� Laura bent down and licked her clit

passionately before going any farther.� She rotated her three fingers

that were already inside Deshona's tight pussy, watching the flames

ignite in Deshona's black eyes.� ����"Ohhhh . . . I'm going to faint!"

Deshona gasped.]� i love to watch myself being fucked and others being

fucked.� i will always position myself to watch if i can.

//� geez, i love your communications among your women so much.� i never

get it from other authors.� ["I know," Deshona half-grinned, as if she

were pondering the gathering intensity of it.� "You pervert.� You

twisted, wonderful, hot, perverted bitch.� Making me die like this.

Making me want it like this."����� "Mmmm, maybe you better tell me how

much you want it," Laura teased her.� "Maybe you better tell me how much

you want me to fuck you with my hand and make you come."����� "Oh god!

Unhhh!� Oh shit!"]� i have come to detest the silence of other authors.

they never allow their women to make each other hot and show the mirth

and passion of passionate lovemaking.� love how you show that a woman

gives all she can when making love.� laura is constantly loving

deshona's clit as she fucks her with her fingers.� only you again you

show this.� i would hate to make love in the serial fashion that other

authors give me.� boring.� i have to smile at laura teasing and

prolonging the the main course.� i so love prolonging my foreplay so to

speak making my women do this in their rising need [Soon she began to

buck her hips, and bite her full lower lip, and groan in a guttural,

half-savage way.� "Unnnn . . . unnngghhh . . . unnnmmnngg!" she groaned,

her fingers plucking her erect nipples, her breath ragged and strained.

"Laura . . . oh . . . unnmmnngghhh!"] �only you take the time and effort

to show this prolonged fucking that truly makes womb shattering orgasms.

//� oh yeah, you so capture that ramping up of great sex [Even though it

was wildly enjoyable to them both to increase the tension this way,

Laura knew it couldn't go on forever.� "Yes honey . . . yes honey . . .

I'm going to get you there . . . I'm going to fuck you now . . . I'm

going to fuck you hard . . . yes honey . . ." Laura purred to her, now

flicking Deshona's clit and sucking it too between tongue flicks, while

still moving her three fingers, now four, now bunched together with her

thumb, in the greasy, expanding furrow of Deshona's throbbing pussy.]� i

love that working my fingers into my woman and feeling her vagina or

sphincter slowly giving way.� i love your total loving so very much.

you capture so well that warm wet heat that envelopes you hand as you

work it so lovingly into your woman.� i really like the detail of wild

lust that is now burring so hot in deshona's eyes.� i love placing that

wild lust filled gaze in my women's eyes.� it so exciting as you see her

inner self almost becoming animalistic in her need for orgasmic relief

and bliss.

//� Sigh, i love how you show that moment of reaching nirvana ["Oh yes,

honey, I'm in you . . . I'm completely in you."]� i so love working my

fist into my lover and feeling that wet heat enveloping my hand and

feeling her pussy so tightly enfolding my hand as i wait for it to let

me ball my fist.� i love that time when i just flex my hand letting it

throb deep in my woman's belly.� geez, i love how you so often capture

what i just wrote [Their eyes were locked.� Laura twisted her hand,

hardly at all, merely a millimeter in either direction, and watched the

sharp twinges of an approaching ecstasy seize Deshona's beautiful

face.����� "Ahhnnngggg!� Oh!"� Deshona now gasped, breath returning

quickly to her lungs.� "Oh . . . Laura . . ."]� i so love those grimaces

that severe pleasure can put on my angels face.

//� so love the description of laura's fist totally clasped by deshona's

tight pussy and how her outer cunt lips are stretched tight around

laura's wrist.� i so love seeing my fist embedded in my woman or looking

down my pelvis or back over my shoulder as i see my lover's forearm

jutting from my pussy as she fists my willing cunt.� as i have so

noticed, only you show a woman doing more than one thing to love her

woman.� i have a read a few other stories with fisting and all i got was

some lame descriptions of the fisting and nothing else.� while you show

how women really love [She bent her head and again brought her lips

close to Deshona's exposed, shiny pink clit, lashing it with her tongue,

then sucking as she increased the movement of her hand in and out of

Deshona's very tight but very wet cunt.� By now Deshona was whimpering

and pumping frantically.]� i love laura's response to deshona's new

found love of saying words like "fuck".� oh yeah ["Oh, are we getting

smutty now?" she teased, again sucking Deshona's sensitive clit while

hand-fucking her more and more rapidly and vigorously.����� "Unghhh!

Ohnnggg!� Ungghh!� Ahhnngg!"]� have to love deshona's reply.� the kind i

like to engender.

//� i have always loved how you capture the ramping up of sex.� you

always make it different but you do show how sex almost always starts at

a slower speed and ramps up and gets more energetic like here [Suddenly,

they both became rougher.� Deshona was striving to come, panting and

mewling and gyrating madly, and Laura was striving to help her get

there, swarming over her and probing her body and savaging her clit with

her mouth and tongue, also squeezing one of Dehona's rolling round

breasts with her free hand.� They were a hot maelstrom of struggling

flesh, gasping and moaning and surging together, the bed rocking gently

under them as if to accentuate their rising frenzy.]� i love the heat

and sweat that hard fucking always produces.� the beautiful thing about

fisting is the truly harrowing orgasms that it always produces

["Auungghhh!� Oh god, yes!� Auunngghhmmnnnggg!" she groaned, arching her

back, her pelvis shaking wildly, with Laura's arm still protruding out

of her clenching pussy.����� Her eyelids fluttered open long enough for

her eyes to catch Laura's, blazing with the fire of her sexual

obliteration before her eyelids fell again, and her body twitched into

another brief fury of sharp ecstasy.� Laura counted at least three

wrenching, shattering convulsions before Deshona's body finally fell

back limp to the mattress.� She could almost feel Deshona's pussy

muscles loosening around her wrist, releasing her, a pussy satiated and

crushed by a pleasure so intense that Deshona was still panting and

trying to release herself from it.]� your orgasms are simply the best

that i have ever read in any fiction; lesbian, het or in the slash

world.� none has ever really come close.� a few were memorable but they

were only a one shot and they never duplicated the effort like you do

time after time.

//� wow, have to love the tenderness that has has developed between

these women [Laura did not remove her hand right away.� She figured the

intensity would have to wane, and she patiently caressed Deshona's flesh

while she waited, enjoying the trembling, exhausted aftermath almost as

much as the fierce climax itself.� She kissed Deshona's smooth, faintly

sweaty stomach all the way up to her marvelous round breasts, which she

licked and kissed tenderly.]� i have done this often and so love the

feeling of deep intimacy we share at these moments.� i love for my lover

to keep her fist or cock buried in my body after a thrilling fuck.� i

see that deshona loves this same feeling of connection.� we learn that

lupe is hot but conservative and maybe jill can be coaxed.� i sure hope

so!� cute ending of them sharing an ice cream sundae and champagne as

they rest for more fucking.

another great episode in the life of laura

 

 

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Chapter 300:

//� i have to smile as this chapter starts with laura being "strong"

with allisha and shelley.� i just have to chuckle at the way that laura

denies herself.� this is simply something that i would never do.� i must

get all the pussy i can get as soon as possible.� life is too damn short

to deny oneself the heavenly pleasures that only another woman can give

one.� i would simply melt with them begging me for some loving.� i am so

yours as soon as i hear the first little please.� especially, with

allisha.� once i have awakened a woman to her true self i almost feel

obligated to help feed her new desires until she can find other angels

to soothe her longing for lesbian sex.� with the more adventurous

newbies i quickly share with my other main angels.� i so love watching a

woman new to lesbian loving simply dying before my eyes as another

woman's touch simply rocks her world.� i know i am good but so are my

other archangels and regular playmates.� they too know how to rock a

woman's world and each of us bring our own special gifts to our nests of

love.� my soul simply soars as i watch a newbie screaming her throat raw

and she is jackknifing and flopping all around the bed as her pussy is

being sucked inside out and her clit inhaled down a hard sucking throat.

//� i like how you show the real aspects of relationships.� again, you

can only do this because of the story arch you have created here.� you

have given these women room to breath and feel.� makeeda is tired and

worn out when she gets home and she is crabby.� other stories couldn't

delve into the deeper aspects of relationships.� they must rush and have

everyone happy and energetic.� what you show often happens after being

away from home and working hard.� your tired and not "at your best" and

thus we are not affable, witty and charming.� you allow makeeda to be a

real, tired woman.� you show how laura knows how to handle her and

doesn't get hurt or snippy.� i have learned how to handle my archangels

when they are like this and i know they have learned to handle my

moods.� i am kind of famous for being cheery and full of laughter and

teasing but when i get in my tired or not feeling good moods, my

archangels give me my space and the support i need to get over my mood.

//� you show how patience and love can win the day with some more of

your wonderful dialog [Laura came into her arms immediately.� She was

not about to refuse her chances.� "I've been afraid to open my mouth.

You're so . . . withdrawn."����� "Not because of you, my darling.� I

thought of you every minute we were apart.� I'm just tired, that's all.

Give me a Laura kiss.� Make my heart flutter."]� gentle words and simple

compassion and love can win one so much.� i'm not perfect of course but

i do try to make this my main course of action.� i so believe that love

can soothe so many wrongs in the world.� i so love reading of this deep

intimacy between these women and other women and laura in past

chapters.� i so love reading of hot, steamy love soothing a woman's

frayed nerves and giving a woman the love she needs and craves and that

makes her so strong.

//� i like how you show their initial kiss as being deeply romantic but

not the scorcher that leads directly to hot sex.� it's clear that i'm a

sexual animal but i do cherish just being close and sharing closely with

my archangels especially and with others that i truly care for.� just

that close intimate contact where you both can bask in each other's

company and draw strength from each other.� when you are tired, it is

hard to get the fires raging.� when i get real sleepy i just want to

sleep.� i like them just sitting and talking about her recording

session.� i too love to sit down with joann or maria and hearing all

about their conference or how work went on their trip.� i just love to

listen to my babies and watch their faces as they talk about this and

that.� i just lose myself in them as they talk.� i love to listen to

them and my other lovers.� heck, people in general.� i know all about

me.� i want to know about� you.� i too have loved how laura's two most

recent archangels are so modest.� they are confident but don't have the

big-head.� i don't really have that much use for ego.� dodie has it in

spades and that is probably one reason we couldn't gel completely.� she

is the center and she makes sure everyone knows it.� it is so funny to

watch her and joann vie for dominance.� joann always loses unless dodie

wants to lose as so we can abuse her.� that is the reason i love joann

so.� she is tough on the outside but deep down she bows to a true

alpha.� joann is vain and she knows it but she is just so innocent in it

that i'm totally captivated by it.� while maria is like makeeda.� she

always deflect overly amounts of praise.� she knows she is good but

doesn't call attention to herself.� i so love the balance they give me.

//� i see more of makeeda's basic humility when she didn't let her

fellow musicians praise go to her head.� such selflessness makes people

want to do their best for you.� i am smiling great big when you give me

another dose of touching moment.� makeeda is ready for bed after talking

and a little wine.� she is looking only for some sleep since she is so

tired.� as horny as i always am, still it is nice to just go to bed and

snuggle when everyone is just to bushed to make love.� you really touch

my heart with this [Makeeda smiled warmly, but with no hint of sexual

invitation.� "I think you're right."� But then her expression turned

anxious.� "You're staying, aren't you?� I think I'll sleep better than

ever if you're sleeping beside me."]� showing ones vulnerability is so

touching and real.� when a person is willing to show you their

weaknesses you know you are truly sharing your deeper self.� that is

something i have learned to do with joann and maria.� before them, i

would never ever show weakness willingly.� if i thought i was showing

weakness i would get all snarly and mean tying to cover it up.� they

have really helped me grow.� i have to smile at laura's heartfelt

confession of needing to sleep with makeeda.� i do have to smile at her

little guilt over her other angels.� i am just so thankful she doesn't

needlessly beat herself up anymore.� how can one deny themselves

beautiful women.� life is to short to ever let the opportunity for love

and lust to pass one by.

//� i am so there as laura comes out of the bathroom from a quick shower

and makeeda is sound asleep in bed.� she gazes at makeeda observing her

unguarded beauty.� i too love to look at my lovers when they are

sleeping.� seeing the real them without any guard or guile.� it doesn't

hurt when they are beautiful like makeeda and you can get a little added

thrill looking at the beauty of their body lying before you.� watching

mtv i have to agree that having a killer body really helps ones career.

heck, brittany spears proves that looks alone can make a singing

career.� i really agree with laura's observation that when you are in

love, that going to bed doesn't always mean having sex.� just sleeping

with the woman(s) you love is a haven in and of itself.� you can just

absorb their beauty like here [She put on her own shortie nightgown and

slipped beneath the sheet next to Makeeda, inhaling her sweet, familiar

body scent, gazing again at her incredible gleaming dark shoulder, at

the perfect curve of her throat, at the bulge of one large black nipple

visible under the thin fabric of her teddy.� She felt sexual desire but

it was overwhelmed by deeper emotions.]� just snuggling up to your

angels and going to sleep in each other's arms is so perfect.

//� sigh, i love this next part.� i have many times over the years

awaken with a terrible fuck hunger and taken my lovers as they slept.

their beautiful bodies lying beside or on me simply ignite my deep

longing for them.� my body may have been exhausted earlier but now that

my strength has returned, i must have you.� i so live to take my lovers

as often as possible.� i will awaken their fires and let them lead from

their if they so wish but we need to drink deeply from each other.� here

we see that makeeda has awoken in the middle of the night and her

strength has returned and now she must take the body of the woman she

loves.� i so love awakening like laura and feeling joann and or maria

taking my body with groping hands and starving mouths.� awakening me

with a body already on fucking fire.� this is how i love to be awoken by

my angels [Makeeda said nothing.� She had pulled up Laura's nightgown

and was kissing Laura's body hungrily, kneading her breasts, tweaking

and pulling her nipples.� Laura was twisting and panting, and she began

to caress Makeeda in return, running her fingers down Makeeda's sleek

back, under her flimsy teddy, feeling the smooth muscles moving under

her fingertips.� Still, neither one spoke a word.� Laura could hear

Makeeda's breathing accelerate too, though she was not panting as

heavily as Laura was.]� oh yes,� feeling my woman's fingers and mouth on

me as i start to clutch her and bring our bodies close if a full body

clench is possible.� i so love all that skin to skin contact.

//� i love how you show they spend long minutes of groping love.� i so

love pulling my women tight and grinding our beginning to sweat bodies

together as tits mash and nipples dig.� feeling our cunts humping hips

and thighs as our bodies are sliding and grinding, as tongues plunge

deep down throats or pulling and lovingly tearing at rock hard nipples

or sucking necks with fervor making each other scream in raw passion as

pelvis and thighs get slavered with hot cum.� sometimes i like to sleep

in xx sleep shirts and joann and dodie have ripped some of them from my

body in the manner that makeeda does here [She heard a rip and felt the

sharp bite of cloth against her skin as her own nightgown tore and

separated from her body.� "Unngghhh!" she groaned softly as Makeeda's

mouth closed over one of her nipples and sucked it almost maniacally.]

i love to be dominated and having my nightie ripped from me makes me so

instantly wet and feeling vulnerable.� i just melt with need.� i just

moan and feel my eyes roll back as my nipples are swallowed and teeth

raked as their hands are groping my flesh hard and mauling and rolling

my tits over in their strong grips.� they know to start riding their

thighs into my wet open cunt and let me hump like a dog in fucking

heat.� i have come screaming my throat raw from suck fucks in the middle

of the night.� making my cunt rend itself as they rake my nipples and

slapping my tits and face as i wail in desperate cries of ecstasy.

//� oh yes, i talk of my love of aggressive loving and now you show me

some that makes me swoon [Makeeda did not moan but made wet slurping and

sucking noises.� Her hands squeezed Laura's breasts, and she devoured

Laura's excited, throbbing nipples so heatedly that Laura began to

whimper.� She could hardly believe they were both swept up in such a

fierce, focused passion.� Her own hands were ripping off Makeeda's

ragged teddy before she could stop them.� They pressed their warm,

smooth bodies together hungrily.� Laura sucked Makeeda's neck and

dropped her hands to the hard moons of her ass, digging her fingers into

the round flesh.]� i so love reading of your women swallowing and raking

nipples as their squirm and their cunts melt.� now laura is fully awake

and she rips makeeda's worn nightie and gropes her ass which is

something i so love doing.� i love digging and pumping my fingers into a

woman's ass and just pumping her ass and if she humping me to time my

groping to help her hump me with her soaked cunt.� plus, i have loved

how you show your women sucking hot sweaty necks.� i just scream and

feel my eyes roll back and spasm hard as my woman sucks my neck flesh

between her teeth and just pumps that flesh hard and fast as i wail and

sometimes slap and clutch her body in ecstasy or tear at the sheets in

helpless pleasure.

//� one thing i have always loved about your work is you so accurately

capture the ebb and flow of lovemaking.� other authors always make

things seem so linear.� once something starts it always flows in a

boring predicable way.� here you show that laura and makeeda are taking

turns in their position as the dominate one another.� their passion is

giving them both fuck hunger strength and first one is on top and then

the other.� for some reason other authors never show this ebb and flow

and the full body clench as you and your lover roll back forth over the

bed.� now we see laura head south and digs her face deep into makeeda's

wet hot cunt and devours her quim as her tasty juices flow down her

gulping throat.� i so love burying my face in your cunt and flailing and

thrusting my tongue deep as i gulp down your hot flowing cunt cream.

now you show that ebb when makeeda surges and reverses the positions and

goes down on laura.� i so love to have even my smallest lovers dominate

me and make it clear they are in control and will take me how they

want.� i just part my legs wide in love and offering and groan deep as i

feel their face mashing deep into my cunt as they suck my inner cunt

flesh inside out.

//� this is what i live to experience ["Anngghhh!" Laura groaned, her

pelvis jerking off the mattress almost uncontrollably as she felt fresh

sexual fires spurt through her straining body.� "Oh!"]� nothing is more

heavenly than feeling a hot tongue spearing deep up your cunt and

licking and probing your inner fuck petals and worming through all your

hidden crevices and folds.� i love how you show the vocalizations of the

woman doing the devouring.� too often other authors never show them

groaning and humming in the deep pleasure a woman feels when she eats

pussy ["Mmmmmm!" Makeeda hummed, communicating to Laura her own pleasure

at having caused this reaction.]� you show more of the flow of

lovemaking with makeeda slacking off her loving of laura's pussy.� i am

a master at backing off.� i love seeing how makeeda knows laura is

getting close and she slides up laura's body and devours her mouth and

digs her fingers into laura's flesh.� i have gone back and forth like

this for over a half hour i know as i draw my lover's body taunt like a

bow string.� so when i snap it she will die from coming.� i so love

sliding up and tearing at her nipples and grinding my body with hers in

full body clenches.� you show how you do many things to keep your lover

on high simmer [While kissing her roughly and voraciously, Makeeda

dropped one hand to Laura's crotch, just to keep rubbing Laura's aroused

pussy until she was ready to return to it, but not rubbing it hard

enough to make Laura come prematurely.� Her tongue went into Laura's

ear, and her hot breath, and her meaningless murmuring.]� oh yeah,

swirling my fingers in her hot, soaked cunt as my fingers get all slimy

as i fuck her hole and swirl her clit before i bring them up to lick

clean and smear all over my face for her to lick off.

//� love the detail of laura's thighs clamping on makeeda's fingers as

they pump her fuck hole.� i love that feeling.� it makes me feel so

close to my woman.� it is your little details that have addicted me to

your stories.� now makeeda is ready for the love kill and mashing her

face deep as she tongue flails laura's cunt with her deep thrusting

tongue.� i so love looking down my heaving belly at my woman's smoky eye

contact and clamping my hands onto the top of your head and jamming your

face hard into my wildly humping cunt.� i love just trying to

concentrate on your face as i watch my cunt sweep up and down your face

and smearing it heavily with my steamy cunt cream.� i just let my head

lull to the slide and drool all over myself as i clench my stomach

muscles to hump your beautiful face hard with my powerful sweeps feeling

your tongue so deep up my clenching cunt.� i fuck so feverishly for this

moment of perfection on earth ["AUUNNNGGHHHH!" Laura suddenly burst

out.� Her body clenched, and a huge orgasm began to wrack her flesh.

"Ohhnnmmmggghhhh!� Ungghhh!� Auunngghh!"����� The honeyfire ran through

her veins, and the rapturous throbbing in her cunt and her belly

threatened to go on forever, great wrenching spasms.� She was totally

possessed and consumed by this climax, blasted and scorched by it, so

that she lost track of how long she lay gasping and panting with

Makeeda's face still pressed to her groin.]� by the gods i so live for

this.� to come again and again and to make others come like this.

//� sigh, now the fucking continues.� i love pulling my lover up after

she has gone down on me and kissing and licking her face between deep

tongue kisses as i taste my essence in her mouth and throat.� pulling

her tight as sweaty bodies mash and slide together in renewed love and

fuck hunger.� i love the sounds that you have your women make like

makeeda here.� i love to hear my women keening and whimpering in need

that only i and any bedmates can soothe and release.� like here

["Ohhhhh!" she sighed softly as Laura began to descend, kissing her

taut, hard midriff passionately, pushing open Makeeda's already yawning

thighs with her hands, sliding down, down.� "Ohhhhhh!"]� nothing is more

heavenly than hearing my woman hitch and whimper as i part her thighs.

as i look at her beautiful cunt that i am about to devour and her clit

that i'm going to suck down my throat.� i again like how you show all

the different aspects of lovemaking.� i am a screamer and a babbler but

there are times when you are silent and writhing in need as your woman

is making your body tremble and hump in desperate want and desire.� i so

love being reduced into jelly by my woman and mewling like a street

whore in heat.� i love how you show your women screaming and also that

whimpering quiet before the storm.

//� i have found other authors make their women basically fuck in

silence but one thing i have really felt remorse about is the lack of

sounds of pleasure of the woman devouring pussy.� i am always humming

and groaning in pleasure as i devour my woman's cunt and i love to hear

my woman moaning and telling me how she is going to suck my cunt inside

out.� thus i so love this part ["Mmmmmm . . ." Makeeda again hummed as

she again began kissing and tongue-toying with Laura's oozing, throbbing

pussy.������ "Ummnngghh!" Laura groaned.� "Oh!� Unh . . . unh!"����� She

was so close.� She strained and arched her back, her churning hips

rising off the bed.� She clenched.� Makeeda's mouth was glued to her

pussy.� Her clit was inside Makeeda's mouth.]� i have so loved from the

beginning how you so perfectly capture the sounds of women in love.

other authors basically fuck in silence and then seem to remember at the

last moment to have them vocalize their pleasure and then give me a few

shouts of ecstasy that doesn't really ring true.� only you have really

capture the essence of the vocalizations of pleasure that most women

make when they are making love to other women.� to talk and vocalize is

just in our nature.

//� and now you deliver the pay off that makes your work so supreme

["AUUNNNGGHHHH!" Laura suddenly burst out.� Her body clenched, and a

huge orgasm began to wrack her flesh.� "Ohhnnmmmggghhhh!� Ungghhh!

Auunngghh!"

The honeyfire ran through her veins, and the rapturous throbbing in her

cunt and her belly threatened to go on forever, great wrenching spasms.

She was totally possessed and consumed by this climax, blasted and

scorched by it, so that she lost track of how long she lay gasping and

panting with Makeeda's face still pressed to her groin.]� other authors

except for a few simply fail to show why sex between women is so

supreme.� they simply have a wild thrust or two during orgasm and a

scream here and there.� i have yet to read an orgasm after three hundred

of your stories that doesn't show the wonderful and rapturous wonder of

cunt rending orgasms that sear the womb and mind with pure fucking

pleasure.� i have become so connected and addicted to these wonderful

gems.� great, real life women and then wondrous screaming orgasms.

sigh.

//� i like how you show laura reviving and clutching makeeda to her and

basically swarming her.� i so love to do this after i have been fucked

good.� pulling my woman tight and twining our legs as bellies slide

together and arms pull bodies and mouths tight as tongues plunge down

our throats and we share my taste in our mouths.� clutching her back and

mashing her tits against mine.� sucking her neck flesh into my mouth and

pumping hard and fast making her scream in mindless pleasure.� like the

gentle detail of your lovers stroking their woman's face and hair as

their women settles in between their thighs and while devouring sweet,

tender, red cunt meat.� you and i mean only you (no one else even comes

close) describe your women's vaginas which i find just so weird.

[Makeeda's pussy was as black as midnight on the outside but fiery dark

pink on the inside, and Laura's tongue knew every crease and secret

nerve of it.� She quickly had Makeeda clawing the sheets.]� i think

maybe forty women plus have been through this story arc and i have

reveled in your descriptions of each woman's vagina.� i have memorized

every pussy i have devoured.� i just day dream and relive my tasty

pussies when work is slow.

//� i so love to bury my face in a cunt and probe deep with loving

tongue strokes and bob my head as i tongue fuck your steamy cunt hard

and fast.� i really love to do this [As Makeeda's hard black moons

churned up off the sheet, Laura's hands were quick to slip under them,

so that when they came down again they settled into her palms.� Now she

could squeeze Makeeda's ass while she sucked her flaming, flooding

pussy, and she could feel the uncontrollable crescendo of sexual

pressure growing in Makeeda's twisting, squirming body as she made love

to her pussy with almost unbridled passion.]� this is one of my favorite

things to do.� there is just something about squeezing a beautiful ass

as you suck her cunt and your helping her to hump you mouth as you pull

her ass into your hard pressed mouth.� i so love how asses are different

just like pussies.� some are nice little hard cantaloupes, some are

little bunny butts or big voluptuous asses you can dig your fingers into

as you pump her ass and devour her steamy cunt or roll her legs back and

tilt that pelvis up and you rim her asshole and then drive your tongue

deep up her spasming sphincter before you again suck her cunt with

renewed fervor.

// i like how you show your women sensing the end coming.� a woman just

knows when her angel is approaching nirvana [She knew Makeeda was going

to come any instant, and she lovingly poured on the heat, sucking and

slurping Makeeda's burbling, aching pussy until she felt the actual

first quaking of her orgasm beginning deep in her writhing flesh.]

sigh, so true.� a woman always pours on the heat because we want our

love angel to simply be torn apart with divine fucking pleasure.� i so

bask in pure self satisfaction when i deliver this kind of orgasm

["Unngghmmnnggh!" she gurgled, her body beginning to twitch; then went

silent, except for the sound of her labored breathing, as a swarm of

spasms began to wrench her.����� All Laura could do was hold on to her,

clasp her, press her mouth into Makeeda's warm, wet pussy, as if in a

tender and passionate kiss, and feel Makeeda's hard thighs leap and flex

as each fierce shock of coming clutched her.� Makeeda undulated and

surged through a lengthy series of body quakes, finally subsiding into

feverish trembling, punctuated by sharp little shocks that shook various

parts of her slackening body.]� nothing can make a woman happier than

watching her woman simply slip away into another universe of pure

pleasure as her cunt juices flow down your starving throat.� i so love

to open my mouth wide over her fuck hole and let my tongue guide her

flowing juices down my tongue and into my gulping mouth and throat.

what makes my gulping even more heavenly is when my lover's thighs are

clenching my face, her fingers are griping my hair and humping my face

hard into her bucking mound or when her feet or heels are drumming my

back and thighs as she is spasming out of control, screaming to the

heavens.� i so love the physical in lovemaking and you capture it so

well.

//� like the detail of the momentary silence that fills their love

nest.� i know that screaming oneself out and you are lying in your

lover's arms as tongues languidly kiss in deep shared love.� feeling her

tongue soothing my throat that is temporally raw with spent passion.

you now give me that humor i so love mixed with the sweet shared

emotions that truly bind women.� laura uses makeeda's real name and she

gulps out for laura to not leave her and then with i'm sure a smirk on

her face tells laura to never call her that name again.� i love the

emotion and we all know that makeeda's real name will be a inside joke

for these two archangels.� love the tenderness of laura telling makeeda

that cynthia brickus is her real name and only she can use it and

makeeda gets all dreamy in hearing it.� i love saying something sweet

and making joann or maria get all goofy eyed and i see them melt in

deeper love for me.� then more humor about the nightie that laura ripped

in her haste to get at makeeda's body.� it is humor that truly makes a

relationship soar i think.� it makes the good times great and can help

smooth over the rough spots and i think you capture this fact.

//� makeeda talks of her ability to have truly harrowing orgasms.� i

have orgasms that simply blow my mind but they don't last as long as

makeeda's.� dammit!!!� i can get four or five killing spasms but not

where i just fall into a trance of crushing womb shattering convulsions

of cuming that just go on and on.� geez, it isn't fair.� one thing i can

do though is give myself the ultimate pleasure.� i have been

masturbating since i was a little girl and i have become a master at

it.� i get sexed alot but i still masturbate.� a lot.� i am shuddering

thinking of lying on our bed and working my body slowly; working it

taunt.� until i'm pumping my tits and friggin my cunt as my juices

slaver my whole pelvis as it starts to hump wildly.� i then pound my

fuck hole hard and fast while i swirl my rock hard clit and i just sink

my heels into the mattress as i feel the precipice approaching.� oh

gods, then i am screaming as i arch until i'm only on my shoulders and

heels and my mound is humping wildly high off the bed and spittle is

spraying out my clenched teeth as my cum flows wildly out my convulsing

cunt and running down my ass crack and back as i work my cunt as four or

five spasms of pure fucking bliss simply shatter my womb and mind.� i so

love working my cunt perfectly and sinking to the mattress as my cum and

sweat slicked body judders and shakes in aftershocks of pure fucking

bliss and my head continues to thrash back and forth as those pure

aftershocks rock my world.

//� you now give me that dialog of women in love that i have cherished

over the last five years.� ["Here we are," Laura murmured into her neck,

"whispering 'sweet nothings' in the dark.� Want to get up and make some

French toast and do each other's toenails until we get sleepy

again?"����� Makeeda shook her head.� "I am sleepy.� Fucking like that

exhausted me.� I want to sleep here in your arms.� You'll just have to

shut up and try to doze off.� Sorry."����� Laura smiled and squeezed her

tightly.� It did not take long for them to sleep again.]� sigh, only you

show the truly tender in relationships.� you always remember to show

that communication is clearly as important in relationships.� long term

it is probably more important.� one must make your archangels feel like

they are the bees knees as my mother would say.� full of the sweetest

pollen.

//� like how you show the everyday in relationships.� the next morning

you show that need to pee that can override other hornier thoughts until

nature's call is made.� you then show how laura has ideas of some play

with oil and getting makeeda all oiled up and where other authors would

immediately delve into their plans you show the digressions that so fill

ones life.� they reminisce about their first meeting.� i love to relive

those special moments with my archangels and bond us deeper with the

shared moments that brought us all happiness.� love them telling each

other how wet they made each other.� the first time i saw joann and

maria sitting at their table my cunt convulsed and soaked my panties

almost immediately.� i love how they tell me i had the same affect on

them.� makeeda now shares the special gift that she has and sings a

beautiful song to laura.� what a precious gift to share with your

angel.� i sure wish i could serenade my lovers but alas i sound like a

dying amphibian.� real sweet lyrics.� what a special gift makeeda has.

//� again that perfect balance of the sweet emotional and wry humor.� we

see a sweet tear track down laura's cheek while makeeda makes a funny

remark about fucking like wild animals that laura had mentioned

earlier.� i so love your capturing of wit in relationships.� like how

you say they kiss for ten minutes.� i love to kiss and clutch for long

minutes while our bodies rub and slither against each other as i drive

my long tongue down your moaning throat.� then you again show how things

morph.� makeeda tells laura that she wants to save the oil for another

time.� only you show something and then don't do it.� this is real life

instead of the scripts that other authors always follow.� now we get

some sweet breast worship.� you show that there is more than sucking

nipples [She kissed the valley between them, a shadowy, deep valley,

with it's own magical scent, and kissed the bulging underside of each

breast, licking the crease where it met Makeeda's body.� During all this

she did not once touch Makeeda's beautiful, swelling, sensitive nipples,

knowing how such sweet amorous delay would soon have her clawing the

sheet.]� i so love worshiping the whole breast.� large tits give you so

much expanse, curves and creases to explore and devour. �i love making

women like maria, dodie, shari and hillary pant and moan mindlessly as i

devour their large melons completely.

//� i like the tease you show here.� i usually devour your tits with

animalistic fervor, still, from time to time you need to change things

up.� loving the whole breast like laura here with makeeda.� filling her

tits with fire but giving her the payoff with nipple loving.� i will

keep it up until they are whining and begging for it.� i just preen when

they give themselves to me completely like here [Makeeda was panting

softly now.� Her hands swept up her body to her breasts, holding them

from beneath, as if doing that would help or coax Laura to suck her

nipples finally.]� i just smile as i move up and swallow your nipple

into my starving mouth and deep suck as i make your writhe and scream as

i suck and teeth rake your nipples.� i so love watching your eyes roll

back, your head thrash and mindless drool running out your slack mouth

as i make your tits burn and throb with pleasure.� i live to feel your

back arching deep and your hands clawing my scalp as you draw my mouth

hard into your tits mashing your tit flesh deep into my hard sucking

mouth.

//� we see that makeeda can get close to orgasm from having her tits but

she needs some cunt stimulation to come.� i am like that.� i can get

close and hang on the edge but i need some vaginal or anal stimulation

to make it to paradise.� i'm smiling when makeeda mock complains when

she chastises laura for wanting to come together and making makeeda time

her orgasms.� geez, i love your humor.� making women smile is my mission

in life.� like how laura says that will have many opportunities in the

future to strive for� the silmutaneous big O.� cuming together is nice

to shoot for from time to time but lesbian loving kind of engenders you

go first and then me anyway.� like how you show adjusting one's focus.

laura settles down to give some long suck time to makeeda's swollen

nipples but destiny has other plans.� she is too wound up and is almost

immediately on edge.� i just smile and either try and back off or just

go on for the love kill.� sometimes they are going to come no matter

what.� sigh, i feel for laura here.� i so love to dine on swollen

nipples and blood engorged tits.� working my magic on them and

swallowing their flesh deep in my mouth and deep throat sucking and

tongue batting until she is squirming and grunting all over the

mattress.

//� of course when this awaiting one, then leaving sweet breast meat

behind is never to bad [Laura quickly slid down between Makeeda's hard,

glossy thighs.� Like the rest of her body, Makeeda's pussy was

exquisite, and Laura was surprised she had been able to refrain from

kissing and tongue raping it this long.� At this point Makeeda was so

aroused that her pussy was a glistening wet feast, her black cunt lips

swollen and puckered, the inner sleeve bright pink and juicy and

inflamed.]� i have always worshiped how you (and only you) give me the

details of tender, red, sodden cunt meat.� i so love settling between a

woman's thighs and finding her swollen cunt all open wet and running for

me.� her outer lips engorged and parted and her seam glistening red and

begging for my tongue.� other authors for some reason only basically say

the woman at the alter only sees her lover's cunt without any details.

makes it seem like a faceless mannequin's plastic slit.� ho hum.� thank

you for the rich details of each woman's vagina.� your descriptions

allow me to close my eyes and mentally bury my tongue deep up their

cunts and tongue fuck them hard as their warm, tangy juices pour into my

starving mouth.

//� oh yes, i like how this is developing.� laura gets her patented baby

oil and lubs her finger up for some anal play.� oh yes!!!� i love the

detail of her showing makeeda her lubed finger and lets the visual make

makeeda's sphincter clench in happy anticipation.� i love lubing my

fingers up in oil, cunt juice or spit and letting my woman know where

they are going and see her judder and mewl in sweet need and want for

anal invasion.� i so love anal sluts like myself.� does life get any

better than this [In a micro-second she was back in place, licking the

wet, glossy outer lips of Makeeda's blossoming cunt while she insinuated

her oiled finger between Makeeda's hard buns.� Here it comes, honey, she

thought, feeling for Makeeda's pinched-tight anus with the tip of her

finger.���� "Oh!� Unh!"� Makeeda gasped, her eyes rolling up, her upper

body clenching, her phenomenal abs rippling.� "Oh . . . yes!� Ungghhh!"

she groaned, her eyes tearing, as Laura's oiled finger slid into her

ass.]� oh gods i� so love feeling fingers sliding up my asshole as my

cunt is devoured.� i so know that eye rolling back and spasming hard in

my head as i drool out my slacked mouth.� i too often tense up and

vibrate in pure pleasure as my asshole is taken while my clit is

savagely sucked and my cunt hole is tongue and or fingered fucked.� i so

adore having both my fuck holes pleasured at the same time.� nothing in

life is any more perfect than this.� for some reason only you really

show doing multiple things like this while your women are loving.� it

adds so much to the loving when you love assault your whole woman's

body.

//� i love seeing makeeda writhing on the bed.� i would be smiling great

big while sucking her cunt.� now you give me the verbal that other

authors never remember to give.� we don't fuck in complete silence and

then scream once when we come.� we grunt and moan like animals in heat

and speak heated words of love and need like makeeda ["Do it hard,

Laura� Ungghh!� Do it fast!� Fuck me fast!� Yes!� Ungghh!"]� i so love

to have my women tell me to fuck them harder and tell me exactly how to

do it and what a worthless slut i am or when they scream out how much

they love me and that they're my complete whores for the night.� it

makes my soul soar.

//� i so love working your body until the orgasm is burning in your

womb, trying to explode and rend womb and cunt.� i so love pushing my

woman over the edge and delivering the love kill [This fierce sexual

desperation of course gripped Laura with a fever of desire too, and she

threw caution to the winds, suddenly raping Makeeda's tender rectum with

her oiled finger and slurping and sucking Makeeda's soupy, runny black

pussy more passionately, it seemed to her, than she ever had done in the

past.� In seconds Makeeda was coming, spilling over, jackknifing and

arching off the mattress and whimpering, then roaring, in a way Laura

had never heard from her before.����� "Unngghh!� Ummnnggg!� Oh!� Oh!

AUUNNGGHHHHH!� Oh!� Oh!� MMMNNGGEEEEE!"]� sigh, so fucking perfect.� i

so love pounding two or three fingers up your spasming asshole as your

ass juices pour over my pounding fingers while i suck your cunt hard and

flail my tongue deep up your clenching fuck petals.� i so love opening

my mouth wide as waves of hot steamy cum convulse from your rupturing

cunt and floods my mouth and the excess soaks my cheeks, nose and throat

and then runs down to my breast.� the fucking screams of bliss that i

live to hear.� i so thank you for showing the sounds of women dying from

cuming.� i live to hear your screams filling our love nest.� i love

screams, curses and declarations of love spilling mindlessly from your

screaming throat.� i want to make you scream until your throat is raw

with spent love.

//� i am so thankful that i found an author that actually shows the

woman during her orgasm.� i get so tired of the off camera orgasm.� they

just say she came with a scream and jerk or two.� pleeaaasseee.� this is

what i want to see [This time she had a whooping, flexing, roaring,

leaping off the bed orgasm, the shattering kind that could leave you

damp, blasted, and groggy for an hour afterward.� Makeeda shuddered, and

her pelvis went crazy with juddering spasms, her ass clenching on

Laura's still-embedded finger, her pussy flowing with warm nectar that

Laura eagerly licked up.]� sometimes one has a mini orgasm or the

feathery kind and sometimes you are just along for the ride but his what

we live for.� i live to feel my muscles rending themselves as my cunt

and or asshole ruptures and i am flopping and jackknifing all over the

bed as i scream wildly.� i am feeling my belly clench hard as i think

back to last night as joann and maria had me simply screaming my voice

raw several times as they fucked me blind and then seeing in my mind's

eye as joann and maria in turn were wailing like they were being flailed

alive as we made each other come so fucking hard.� thank you for showing

truly harrowing orgasms that make the body sing in perfect harmonious

bliss.� love the detail of makeeda's asshole clenching wildly on laura's

pumping finger.� i so love feeling a tight rectum clenching and spasming

on my invading fingers or plunging fist.

//� i am smiling with laura as she has just witnessed a stupendous

orgasm.� seeing such orgasms leave me feeling warm inside knowing i

delivered such bliss to my angels.� love to just watch as the

aftershocks ripple her flesh and make her mewl and jerk.� i love to look

up from a spent cunt as i gently lick it clean as i look up her belly at

her body still being racked by aftershocks.� i am such a whore.� where

laura wipes her fingers on the sheet to clean them where i would slowly

insert them in my moaning mouth and suck her sweet ass juice from my

fingers and run them up her body and let her suck them clean too.� oh

yeah! i love this next part [Rather than encumber the still-recovering

Makeeda with the need to get her, Laura, off, she found herself

straddling Makeeda's waist and looking down at her lover's hard,

rippling abs as she began to move her own wet, splayed pussy over them,

feeling the firm muscles slide against the raw, wet flesh of her cunt

and her clit, knowing she could bring herself off this way in only

seconds because she was already so aroused.� She could feel the hot,

glowing ember of a certain orgasm deep in her womb; it was growing,

throbbing, swelling, pulsing.]� i love settling my wet, open cunt on

hard abs and tribbing myself to fucking paradise.� i think we need to

visit dodie or stacy real soon.� oh geez, i felt that deep womb spasm as

i think of feeling that feeling deep in my womb and knowing that a womb

shredding orgasm is on the way.� i can just feel my body shaking with

the knowledge that soon my cunt will be tearing itself inside out and my

cunt juices will be gushing all over your hard belly or jamming thigh.

//� oh yes, this next part is magical [Her hands almost of their own

volition found Makeeda's full, firm breasts.� She clutched them, trying

not to squeeze too hard but clearly using them for leverage as she slid

her pussy back and forth, her head thrown back, her body quickly

consumed by a relentless rhythm of fucking that was bringing her closer

to coming by the second.]� i love it rough as i guess i have made it

clear.� three weekends ago simonette and i went to hillary's house.� it

so cool.� her parents were off saving the world.� she lives in a gated

community and i loved watching simonette using her visitor's key and

punching in the code.� it seems so james bond.� later that night hillary

sucked my off to a screaming orgasm that had me jackknifing up into

almost a sitting position as she sucked my clit down her throat and i

thrashed around before flopping onto the mattress and screaming as my

twat humped wildly.� as i finally came down i looked down my belly and

saw her cum covered face looking up at me with great heat.� she climbed

up my body and jammed her cunt onto my stomach and started to hump grind

her swollen cunt meat on my hard belly.� we fucked for at least fifteen

minutes like this.� several orgasms had taken her edge off.� i wore my

ass out humping up and by the end i was gasping and worn out.� i loved

watch watching her heavy mellons wildly rolling and whiplashing on her

chest as she wildly rode my stomach.� finally she reached her tether and

ground even wilder and i grabbed her hips and mashed down with my

remaining strength.� she then gripped my tits like laura except she

mauled and pulped my tits with hard squeezes and rolled my large melons

as i whimpered in pleasure.� she strove wildly while she anchored

herself on my pulped tits and she slowly lowered herself, mashing wildly

and her lip curled up and her faces slashed and then she died from

coming.� her body just convulsed in place and her throat cawed wildly as

her head thrashed and hot cum poured out form her cunt and scalded my

belly and rolled down my sides and soaked my back.� i just watched her

face slash and grimace as her whole body vibrated and twitched.� i so

loved feeling her drool fall on my neck and tits as her sweat splattered

off.� slowly she collapsed on me and just jerked and spasmed softly as

her aftershocks gripped her.� slowly our mouths mated and tongues flowed

deep down throats.� i swooned as she broke our kiss for a moment to look

deep in my eyes and told me how much she loved simonette and me before

our mouths mated tight again and tongues flowed our love to each other

as simonette now recovered came back into our embrace� and the loving

soon ramped up again.

//� i like how you show that a woman as soon as she recovers from a

heavenly debilating orgasm immediately starts to work on giving back to

her lover.� giving her best to help her reach the heavens of bliss.� i

love the tenderness of their shared smiles as they fuck together.� i so

love feeling a stomach grinding and mashing my cunt lips and clit with

those heavenly sweeps.� [Whether her small moans or Makeeda's natural

recovery was responsible for it, Makeeda began to revive and to undulate

under Laura's slow thrusts.� Laura's eyes opened long enough to glance

down at her, and she saw Makeeda smiling warmly up at her, her hazel

eyes swirling and pulsing feverish sensuality.� She ran her hands along

Laura's taut thighs, then bucked upward with her midriff, pushing it

into Laura's aching cunt, knowing how Laura had long fantasized doing

exactly this.]� the thing i love about humping a nice hard stomach is

all the cambers and plains.� when i trib in scissors mode it is pure

grinding.� same with humping a thigh and face to face is that beautiful

humping and pounding of swollen, wet twats.� but riding a stomach just

makes my cunt burn and womb spasm as those hard muscles rub so long

across my slippery lips and hard clit.� it makes me hiss and thrash my

sweaty hair all around.� it is heaven on earth as that heavenly pressure

builds as your cunt is mashed and ground to nirvana.� i so love feeling

my womb shaking and stomach quivering and suddenly my cunt explodes as

scalding waves of pure fucking bliss simply throttles my to near

insanity as i scream and jackknife as waves of hot cum pour from my

rupturing cunt and runs down your sides and soaks your back and bed.� i

just love riding it out and then collapsing on top of my lover and

feeling our bodies glued together by my cum and our sweat as tongues

twine and mate deep in our throats in shared love.

//� i love the communication you show here.� i complain about the

silence of other authors and it is true.� but one thing they never have

done that i can remember is that encouraging of lover to lover.� sweet

whispers of love and heat or guttural curses and commands of lust and

heat.� words that fire your soul to fiery heights and turn exploding

orgasms even more dire as words of hot commanding love are whispered or

shouted at you that simply turn your cunt inside out with crushing

bliss.� i am just thankful i found one author that knows and writes

this.� i get so tired of the fucking in silence and only during the

orgasm is the sounds and never the guttural sounds you capture so

perfect or anything that resembles communication.� always shouts and

screams but never aimed at their loving partner.� sure i scream to the

heavens alot but i also direct my words at my women alot too.� love

laura digging her fingers into makeeda's tits.� i loved to have mine

pulped and bruised but some need a little gentler like makeeda but

pushing the loving limits only takes the sex so much higher.� i love

teaching my milder women to take their bodies higher and harder.� it

makes them come like the true lesbian whores i feel we all are deep

down.� push our bodies to the brink of heaven and hell for the pleasure

we so know how to give and receive.� i so love my archangels because

they want their tits mauled like me.� joann and dodie growl and bare

their teeth when i pulp their tits while marie moans and whimpers but

clenches her hands over yours to squeeze and roll her large, voluminous

tits harder and nastier.� i so love their wanton natures.

//� this loving communication i so love is perfectly captured here ["Oh

god!"����� "Oh honey . . . go for it," Makeeda panted back to her, now

helping even more vigorously, pushing her body up into Laura's groin,

looking up almost in adoration as Laura hurtled toward an inevitable

climax.����� "Oh!� Unhh!"����� "Yes!"]� just these loving words spoken

makes your body buck and strive as your womb flips in your stomach.� men

just fuck, we love.� i am smiling great big as you capture the orgasm

that you know is coming but when it seems still away off and then it

hits you the next instant and shreds your womb and explodes your mind

with fucking ecstasy [Laura froze.� She didn't want to freeze, but her

body took over from her, stiffening momentarily in the grip of a fierce

spasm.� And then she was inundated by an orgasm so powerful that it

flung her forward onto Makeeda as sharp, rupturing shocks welled up

inside her womb.����� "Anngghhh!" she cried out, slumping forward,

catching herself with her palms on the mattress so that she would not

crush Makeeda entirely with her torso.� "Ummmnngghh!"����� An absolutely

thrilling orgasm wrenched her body in this position, as if her wet pussy

were completely welded to Makeeda's hard stomach and an electrifying

sexual current were flowing between their linked bodies at that very

point.����� "Ungghhh!� Unnngghhhh!" Laura groaned again and again as

each piercing spasm ripped through her.]� i know that feeling of being

upright and then suddenly it is like i get hit by a bowling ball and i'm

smashed to the mattress or my lover.� i so love screaming and thrashing

on my lover as ecstasy rips me limb from limb as i scream full throated

screams of bliss and words of cursing or love.� joann is small so i have

to clench and support myself a little though she loves to be smothered

by bigger lovers.� while maria and dodie are big enough to take my full

weight as i just collapse on them and they pull me tight and pull my

head to their ears so my screams fill their souls with wails of

ecstasy.� i just scream my love to them as i cum exhalting.

//� sigh, i so love the tender clutching of makeeda.� drawing her lover

close to share laura's shaking and juddering body as heavenly

aftershocks ripple her flesh.� i so love to pull a spent lover close and

feel her sweaty body breathing hard, those hitches that hit as another

aftershock is spawned by her ruined womb and her soft sighs of spent

bliss.� this is heaven on earth.� i stroke her like makeeda here and

whisper sweet nothings to her and slowly guide our mouths together and

twine tongues in deep love.� i have always thought that birds of a

feather flock together.� makeeda and laura clean themselves up while we

think that is heinous.� if strength remains we simply continue to fuck

covered in sweat and come.� we keep our homes nice and warm to keep the

chill away.� i love to fuck covered in cum and sweat with my hair all

stringy with sweat and love cum coating my wherever it lands on me.

often, we will crawl over our prone spent lover and lick her clean.� i

so love licking and kissing a spent pussy, thighs and belly clean of cum

and sweat.� it is cute when me and another angel are kind of muscling

each other to get the best tasty cream off a spent, sighing angel as she

watches with love in her eyes as we clean her still quivering cunt and

belly.� sigh, a couple of nights ago i watched dodie and frankie impale

shari with frankie's fist up her asshole after their cocks had plundered

all her fuck holes.� it was so beautiful watching those huge cocks

sinking deep in her ass, cunt and mouth.� then fankie finished her with

her fist up her ass as dodie fucked up into her cunt hard and deep.� it

is so beautiful watching her white fist and forearm sink up shari's

clenching sphincter as her beautiful booty cheeks just judder and shake

like heavenly jello.� gods she came so hard.� i then watched as they

cleaned sharri's cunt cream off dodie's cock and both sucked and licked

her ass juice from frankie's fist and then licked her body clean of her

messy cum as shari groggily mewled and sighed in spent bliss.� sigh, so

nasty and beautiful.

//� i so love the mirth and confidence you show in your women as makeeda

says [Makeeda grinned.� Laura looked at her and they both giggled.� "I

am more versatile than I thought," Makeeda said, smiling.� "Or you

are."]� i love confident women.� this is where can tell that true love

and warmth are.� when you hear the sweet words we all long for.� saying

the things i want to hear.� gulp. oh boy.� oh well.� i sort of thought

this might be coming ["You know," Makeeda purred after they wiped away

the mess and cuddled together, warm in the afterglow of their sharp

passion, "they're marrying people over at San Francisco City Hall these

days."� She gazed deeply into Laura's eyes.� "What do you think?"]

chapter 300 has seemed like a good spot to stop and the title of the

last book kind of had laura finding her destiny.� makeeda seems to be

the perfect fit for laura with her passion and her love of jazz music

and singing ability.� like makeeda says it doesn't matter if gay

marriages aren't honored by man's fucked up world it is what is in our

hearts that matter and not the fucked up right.� the fucking hypocrites.

//� i have to smile goofily as laura plays with makeeda about her

wanting to be the one to propose.� like i say, humor is the spice of

life.� i am so happy to see that they are so happy together and that

humor is filling their life.� i can't blame makeeda for putting off the

sex to get a giddy laura to give her answer.� she knows that they will

be fucking their brains out continuously from now on.� of course laura

gives her a "yes".� this is obviously her archangel par excellance.

just a shame that makeeda is so into the monogamy thing.� what a

bummer.� of course it makes since that laura move in with makeeda.� she

is more than happy.� i was reluctant to move in with joann and maria

because i was worried about my freedom but i can see now just how silly

i was.� i knew they had the same views on open relationships but still,

i had always loved having all my options open but living with true loves

brings so many more positives than negatives.� cute remark about the

mingus wanting laura too, just not that way.

//� thunk.� that is the sound of my jaw hitting the floor.� yes!!

pumping my fist.� makeeda is beautiful loving woman how truly cares for

her archangel ["But I've been thinking this over.� While we were apart.

I know you're not a saint.� You like sex."� She smiled.� "You're very

good at it.� I know you have friends . . . from the past."� They both

looked away briefly, nervously, as if this were not comfortable

territory.� "And . . . I don't begrudge you them.� Or . . . maybe you

meet somebody. ... ... ... "Anyway, I don't want you to think you have

to be . . . you know, locked up in a chastity belt while I'm gone.� As

long as she doesn't steal your heart from me, I can overlook almost

anything.� The only thing I ask is that you don't do it here.� Where we

live.� Together.� In this bed.� With Mingus watching."]� as much as i

love laura and her adventures and i believe in giving spice to women's

life i was thinking it would be impossible for laura to have further

adventures.� makeeda loving her so and laura trying to be true to her i

couldn't see laura cheating on her.� her guilt would have been

overwhelming and not pleasant to read.� but makeeda is the bomb!!� she

knows she is already kind of married to her career and knows as her true

talent is discovered she will be spending more and more time on the

road.� to cage laura would have been cruel.� now if laura does have

further adventures and we have the good fortune to read about them it

will be glorious.

//� i have to smile at laura answering makeeda with a hug and

clutching.� she is one fortunate woman to have a divine, loving, caring

angel like makeeda.� i know i am blessed and i truly thank the gods for

the archangels in my life.� i have to smile at how the chapter ends with

us discovering that makeeda has been keeping a nice long, thick strap-on

under the bed.� sigh, i sure hope we get to see that strap-on sinking

deep up tight pussies and rectums in the future.� i can close my eyes

and see the glistening juices as it slides in and out tight fuck holes.

//� i have to thank you for ending this wonderful cycle with such

delightful possibilities.� i had thought this was the end, but who knows

what the future holds.� we will all have to meet it one day at a time.

//� in closing i just want to thank you one more time for giving me this

wonderful saga.� no one else i have read has come close to the wonderful

orgasms you have delivered.