• Chapter 293
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Chapter 293:

// this chapter starts with me really feeling for laura. instead of

basking in all the glorious fucking with ada and marie in a distant city

she is now tearing herself up over makeeda. it is so unfair for the

fates to do this laura. one should be smiling at all the pussy you

devoured and fucked hard and not over emotional turmoil. i am just so

sorry that makeeda is acting so bitchy when they seem to hit off so

well. true it was obvious they were afraid to go to fast but not this

acting like a bitch about it. one is supposed to share positive

emotions and love with women you have shared so intimately with and

obviously connected. i hope we find out soon what her problem is. i

have to agree with laura that the talk to me before sunday is a little

ominous. i hate this vague crap when it it not face to face. i want it

out and over with and this sly voice or email can really piss me off.

// i have to smile at laura taking a drink to calm her nerves. sigh, i

don't drink so that is not an option for me. i hate conflict so i am

there with laura as she calls makeeda with fear and trepidation in her

heart. she knows she is falling hard for makeeda and is desiring her as

her new archangel and is being made to suffer for it. she finds makeeda

at home and we get that stilted and pained conversation when love is

being thwarted and one woman is really trying to hurt another. sigh,

unfortunately this does happen and it is never fun. i know that feeling

of having a lover blow off your tries at conciliation and wit. trying

to get past her frosty manner and work on the problem. i see makeeda

simply ignores laura's expressions of caring and desire. obviously,

makeeda is hung up about something. still, you show how positive laura

is. she doesn't let makeeda's manner get to her and make her

reciprocate with a bitchy manner. women love to have anyone take them

seriously and she starts to melt when laura despite her actions shows

her total support when makeeda tells she is going to japan to sing

jazz. laura is only happy because she knows this is what makeeda

desires. to make it in the jazz world as a singer. makeeda senses no

guile in laura and i think starts to realize how she is acting and

starts to thaw and maybe is letting her heart feel what is buried for

laura.

// i feel so for laura because it's so obvious that we have two lovers

out of phase. they know they feel for each other and one is falling

much harder and faster than the other. laura is in the fast lane and

makeeda is not even on the access ramp it seems. i feel for laura

wanting to give her love to a new archangel and the other is still

hesitant. i guess i have been more the makeeda than laura in the past.

i do want to be sure when i give my heart and i can understand makeeda

having these thoughts of going slow. her past lover burned her and she

is hesitant and is honest enough to know that her career makes huge

demands on her and she must find a lover who can understand this. i

could handle that part easily but i must have my freedom. i need to

have my angels and can't have my wings clipped. things become so stale

and staid without the spice of variety and life. i hope that makeeda

and laura can come to the same page of the book. i'm hoping that laura

can convince makeeda on the joys of sharing and they can become the

dynamic duo. a girl can dream can't she.

// sigh, though laura is trying to confess her deep emotions to

makeeda, she is still blowing her off and not in a good way. it really

sucks when you tell someone you love them and they act like they never

heard it. that is cold. laura is feeling that deep archangel kind of

love and makeeda is not feeling it back it seems. i do wonder with her

pregnant pauses. i think she is feeling deeply for laura but can't

acknowledge it yet. i hope laura has the patience because i don't think

i would. i can't stand repeated rejection when i'm feeling deeply for

you or even when i'm trying to seduce a woman. such coldness really

hits me. i need time to recover before my next overture. i give laura

credit for trying over and over here. she is such a special woman. i

guess i have to give credit to makeeda in that she is keeping the rules

firmly in place.

// laura is now saved from her maudlin thoughts by a phone call from

the divine sara. i wish laura would not fret over sara having found a

new lover with her "odious nurse". laura should lose this jealousy.

i'm so happy when my angels find new women to love and fuck. life is so

fucking short to waste on the silly green-eyed monster. i want all the

pussy i can get and will never let silly petty emotions like this ruin

possible relationships. i know many want and crave that monogamous

relationship at least to begin with. i have to chuckle as i start

fucking them as they realize that this monogamy is not what the poets

and man's world tries to make it. one needs spice and variety to keep

one's sex life vital and fucking hot. men have always gotten a pass in

their endeavors while we are called sluts by the bastards. i do see

society slowly changing in this and i have noticed younger women are so

much more free to choose their own sexuality. i know the religious

right is fighting back but we will be free. it will just take longer

than my life to escape their grasp. oh well. i'll just have to be

happy for my sisters to be.

// after telling an innocent white lie about not calling her while in

dallas, sara invites her over. laura may be tired but she revives

immediately when she feels her cunt quivering over the fucking to come.

i love the emotion you show in sara's response [Sara brightened. "Good!

I'll put on a pot of tea. See you in a few minutes."] one can just hear

the relief in her voice. she knows that laura has been strained over

her relationship with her new nurse angel but she realizes that laura is

coming over and soon they will be twining in the sensual fucking they

share that melts wombs and makes cunts explode with scalding spasms of

pure fucking bliss. those deep emotional fucks that leave one swooning

and basking in pure radiant love for your woman. i love such fucks

where you lie in each others arms covered in sweat as limbs twine as

mouths clamp tight as tongues devour mouths and taste each other's pure

essence. i see that laura is feeling conflicted about going over to

sara's. she wants sara but is wallowing in jealousy and smarting over

makeeda's rejection of her emotions. me i would be rushing over to

sara's to fuck heatedly to forget my problem with a difficult angel. i

would be so happy what sara has taken another lover and wishing i could

get me some. i so love fucking new women. nothing is sweeter than an

angel sharing a new love in her life with you. gods, the sex is so hot

and glorious. we have nearly killed ourselves often with such heated,

hard fucking. making ourselves scream in helpless rapture as cunts and

assholes are fucked into paradise.

// laura arrives and sara greets her and they pass pleasantries and

then [Laura followed her up the stairs and into her apartment. There,

sitting on the sofa in Sara's small living room, the same sofa on which

Laura had sat a hundred times, was a tall, lovely, and very dark�much

darker than Sara�woman wearing blue jeans and a pink tank top, with an

easy, languid smile that seemed both friendly and laced with mysterious,

potent sensuality.] oh geez, my belly would have spasmed so hard i know

my breath would have hitched and i would have folded a little seeing

this divine fuck angel and knowing soon i would be inhaling her clit

down my throat making her scream. of course laura is true to herself

and feels immediate jealousy. i love sara for working through this and

introduces her new angel as sheena. i so love that name. i would be

drooling see this woman. lets fuck!!!! laura is trying not to show her

jealousy but i'm sure that she is quite frosty as she introduces herself

to sheena. she should be warming the atmosphere and quickly get to the

hot fucking that sara is so plainly offering. it is obvious that both

these women are dying to fuck laura together. i would be so happy and

touched with their desire for me. i so love my angels when they share

with me like i share with them.

// laura to her credit realizes that sara and sheena are not wanting to

hurt her but are wanting to share hot soul stirring fucking to help

laura accept this new dynamic. i would be so happy to be included in

this new dynamic. she realizes that sara is showing some deviousness

for the first time but i don't mind a little of this when done

positively like here. sara is only trying to open laura up to a new

dynamic in their relationship. i have done this in the past and helped

women when they have done this with their lovers. one must do what is

necessary to make new love happen. i so applaud sara here. sara is so

wise. laura already is feeling deep attraction to this wonderful new

woman. she can't ignore her eyes [Not only did she have that lazy,

molten smile and alluring, I'll-bet-you-want-to-fuck-me eyes. She was

also very black and smooth, with long, well-shaped arms and shoulders,

completely visible due to the thin straps of her tank top, and full,

swelling breasts under it. Long and slender with full breasts, very

black. A combination Laura was exceptionally vulnerable to.] sara may

not know the particulars of laura's other angels but she knows that

laura is deeply attracted to attractive black women. she will let

laura's very nature help her seduce laura. she knows that laura will

start to feel the lust any red blooded lesbian would feel for this

angel. i would so be devouring her exposed skin with my eyes and

staring deeply into her eyes showing my new love for her and how i'm

going to fuck her blind and tracing her breast with my eyes loving them

already with my vision. i know my pussy would already be really wet by

know. they would find sodden panties when they take them off me.

// have to smile at the discomfort as sara leaves them alone to get

some tea and sheena makes it clear that she and sara have come to know

each other and their little likes and tastes. sheena realizes she is

showing sara's other lover her intimate knowledge while she is still

showing jealousy. i love these situations and know this sometimes

awkwardness. sometimes surprise is the best way to get your woman

seduced and sometimes a woman thinks she is ready but when it is right

there before her eyes she can get skittish, jealous or feeling like

laura here, being a little manipulated. a new situation can make a

woman act negatively until you can calm and soothe her and then seduce

her. it is usually up to her current main angel to do most of the

work. lets see how things work here. oh geez, she is thinking of

bolting. this must be prevented. one only needs time to make it work.

if they bolt you might never get another chance. usually we read our

women well and the seduction occurs and a few times things don't go well

and it takes another rendezvous to get her. a few bolted and we never

did get her to sleep with us but most women want it deep down. you only

have to awaken the desire if hidden from themselves. once a woman

experiences multiple partner sex she will be hooked for life. have more

than woman loving your body simply makes one die from pure sexual bliss.

// personalities are so different. laura is feeling like she is being

used in a bad way where i would be almost bouncing over the coming sex.

the women who know me know i am totally a slut who hungers for new

pussy. i love meeting women in all ways. i would be going along with

the seduction and making sure to respond positively and help things move

forward if awkward like here. sara must sense this and quickly returns

with the tea. she knows that laura will need some seduction and is wise

to return quickly. they have that awkward silence while trying to

figure each other out. love seeing laura inhaling sheena's essence.

sheena must know from sara that laura is a true slut and that her

pheromones must be affecting her. smelling a woman's scent always

starts my pussy to juicing and quivering and my nipples tingling and

hardening. laura knows to listen to her body and now must only overcome

her jealousy. it is so obvious that sheena is offering herself

completely and openly. i would be slavering with desire to consume her

cunt and clit and maybe getting some tasty asshole. at least laura now

realizes why sara couldn't resist this long, sexy vixen.

// sara tries to get things moving forward with some small talk but

laura is being a little bitchy and ruining the atmosphere of love sara

is trying to setup. sheena senses this and i think she leaves the room

to let sara have a time alone with laura to see if she can't get through

her silly actions. i do love how laura looks at sheena's alluring ass

as she leaves the room. she may be put off but she knows to always get

a peak at a beautiful ass. i can almost hear sara's plaintive tone as

she reasons with laura. i mean who could refuse this delightful woman

if she is coming on to you. i will never refuse a pretty woman's

advances. sara states the obvious and tells laura that things can still

be hot and good. life flows and sometimes relationships change but one

should always try to morph with the changes and partake of the glorious

fucking that is always possible. love this observation laura makes of

sara [Sara nodded and bowed her head a little. "I know. But they could

still be very good." She paused and looked bashful and shy, like she

must have looked as a fetching young school girl. "She and I are

thinking of going to Jamaica on a vacation. We thought you might like to

come along."] i love seeing the child like in my women. wow, i would

be all over that trip to jamica with them. recently i went with dodie,

frankie and took simonette and hillary with us down to the outer banks.

dodie has a place down there and we spent a long weekend of intense,

hard, glorious fucking. i think we fucked in every room of the place.

we spent must of the time in the nude. it was heaven. i really loved

watching dodie, frankie and simonette simply fuck hillary into a coma.

she simply loves to fuck and fuck and boy did we wear her holes out.

she had such a dreamy look on the way back home.

// i have to love sara's solution to laura's silly resistance to this

divine dance that sara has setup [There were a thousand ways Laura could

respond to this, and she seemed to rifle through them all before she

could trust herself to speak. Then, before she could utter a word,

Sara's amazing pillowy lips were on hers, Sara's tongue was slipping

through her teeth, Sara's hand was on her breasts through her clothes.]

sara wants and needs laura and shows laura in the most pure way

possible. with her sweet lips and soft hands. there have been times

where such reluctance has presented itself to me or seen it between two

lovers where one suddenly gets skittish or bitchy at the moment of

truth. sometimes what seems intellectually wild and desirable is

suddenly overwhelming or the green eyed monster appears. sometimes

words are used to stroke and soothe but i find that the physical usually

works best with soft words of love. these situations are setup with a

good idea that the seduction is most probable and you merely must show

the woman that paradise is near with the one who knows her best using

her body and words to melt her defenses. i have been in a few

situations over the years where i watched the one woman simply melt her

reluctant partner before my eyes and soon we were fucking gloriously and

i usually find the hard to seduce woman is the wildest slut of all.

letting go is so freeing i have found.

// wow, i see that is what sara is doing here. she is letting her

tongue and fingers love laura while she whispers to laura's better side

and encourages and cajoles to accept what she and sheena can offer. let

go of silly jealousy and accept love. why fight what can only be

heavenly fucking? i have never understood why anyone would deny

themselves of any woman when she is offering herself to you. sometimes

the truth is so enlightening. sara rightly mentions laura's other

lovers and why can't she. laura knows she is right and reflects on her

new love makeeda and feels her silly defenses start to crumble. sara is

still dear to her and is offering herself and another beautiful angel to

fuck gloriously. sara is so wise and warm that i desire her greatly.

laura is fair enough to realize she is being a hypocrite and starts to

melt. i can so sense that moment when a woman is finally crumbling to

my will and she is melting inside and i move in for the love kill like

sara here [On the other hand, Sara's ineffably soft lips on hers had the

effect they always had, making her pussy flood and her blood race and

her heart melt. I can't resist this woman, she thought. I never could.

And Sara knew Laura was succumbing, yielding. She began sliding her

hands under Laura's top as she was kissing her, pulling it up, fiddling

behind Laura's back with the clasp of her bra.] my own cunt is flooding

as i feel your tongue becoming alive with love and i feel you trembling

and moaning softly as my hands slip underneath your clothes and as i

stroke your flesh and knead your beautiful body then unclasp your bra.

i love to turn the heat up with this and drive my tongue down her throat

and so often watching her eyes roll back as her body vibrates with the

beginnings of fuck need.

// only you show how you use the right word at the right moment ["You

want it," she breathed in Laura's ear. "You want it with us. I know you

do. We will be so good together."] words alone can make your angel melt

and watch her eyes roll back with new love. i so love your tenderness

as laura strokes sara's face as they kiss and laura feels all the love

she has hid from herself come flowing to the surface. finally laura is

embracing what sara has so lovingly offered. i am so thankful each time

an angel shares another woman with me. life is meant to be shared. i

am grinning great big as sheena reenters the room and laura closes her

eyes knowing that she is theirs now. she feels the seat cushion beside

her being sat in and then feels what i so revel in. two beautiful women

loving her tits as they remove her top and bra and fasten their lips on

her nipples and start love sucking them. i so adore having two or more

women loving me just for this. my cunt flows as both of my tits are

love mauled and nipples swallowed and sucked hard. feeling two sets of

hands stroking my body and fluffing my hair and having one woman

continue to love my tits as the other mouth explores my upper chest,

neck and belly making my breath heave and by belly bellow. i so love

looking down and watching them love me and seeing them look at me with

that smoky eye contact as you see the lust flare in their eyes and

suddenly your nipple is sucked so hard and you feel hands love pumping

your tit hard and maybe the other angel turns my neck to the side and

suddenly i feel my flesh sucked in her mouth and sucked hard, pumped

through her teeth marking me as her slut. making my mind white out as i

scream in pure pleasure.

// i love being loved like this and then feeling and seeing [She felt

lips grazing her cheek and again opened her eyes to see Sheena's sensual

mouth approaching hers. Their eyes caught only briefly before Sheena's

mouth pressed down on hers, but it was long enough for Laura to let her

know that whatever her earlier attitude had been, she was now completely

theirs and looking forward to a hot ride. She let her mouth fall open

immediately and responded hungrily to Sheena's kiss.] oh gods, i swoon

at moments like this. our loves communicating pure love as her tongue

enters and rapes my mouth. stroking and slithering with your dueling

tongues and then driving her tongue down my throat making my eyes roll

back and my throat moan long over and over. i so swoon when i feel a

soft, long tongue invading and raping my mouth. i am so their as you

show the emotion and sensing of the dynamics [This emboldened Sara, who

quickly began to unzip Laura pants, while still sucking and tonguing her

nipples passionately. She had her hand under Laura's panties almost

immediately, two of her fingers sliding down to Laura's crotch and

pushing into the squinchy wet soup of Laura's pussy quickly.] i so know

sensing that it is time to move forward and finish the seduction.

getting the last of the obstructions out of the way and slipping your

fingers up her tight cunt and start working them in and slowly start

pumping her hot tight cunt. i so love reaching her cunt and finding a

soupy mess and feeling juices flowing over fingers and soaking my hand

in love cream. feeling her pelvis starting to pump and feeling the

instinctive fuck rhythm setting in. love hearing her start to grunt

and moan as you piston her fuck hole and begin to work her now swollen

and wet clit with your other fingers or palm. i so love hearing my slut

and seeing her head start to twitch and getting those heavenly sudden

jerks when a bolt of pure pleasure spears out of her cunt and sears her

brain with pure fucking pleasure.

// only you show the flow of lovemaking. other writers are so spotty

in their writing that the reader seems to be reading a play with most of

the pages missing. it is kissing, straight to some nipple and then

straight to the twat for unimaginative sucking and then orgasm. ho

hum. you show how two women flow in their lovemaking like [Sheena

kissed her hard, stabbing her tongue deep into Laura's mouth. Sara was

busily pulling Laura's pants down her legs, and her panties too. She

slid off the sofa onto the floor, while Sheena's mouth traveled down

Laura's neck to her breasts, which she began to stroke and suck even

more heatedly than Sara had.] two mouths and sets of hands moving over

you body making you melt in pure pleasure. i so love seeing sara

hastily removing laura's pants and sliding to the floor preparing to

bury her face in laura's hot soaked twat. i know i would press my face

in so hard driving my tongue deep up her fuck hole. maybe moving my

face up and down her cunt seam to get her juices all over my face and up

in my hair making me feel all slutty and hot for it. had to smile at

the sofa being to small for comfortable fucking. we made sure that all

our sofas and love seats are large and deep to facilitate pulling your

woman's twat to the edge and devouring our letting her comfortably lean

back while you get up on your knees a little and dive your face hard and

deep into her humping cunt devouring her hot hole and sucking and

flicking her quivering clit for much soaked, sloppy devouring.

// i am smiling great big as they finish stripping laura and most of

their clothes by the time they reach sara's bed. they are so ready to

fuck and eat some tasty white girl cunt meat. now you show how it feels

to have heaven on earth [but for now she was theirs, and she lay down on

the bed between them, with Sara behind her and Sheena in front. Sheena

was kissing her mouth again, while fondling her breasts, and Sara was

nipping and sucking her bare shoulders and squeezing her ass cheeks and

pressing those amazing naked breasts into Laura's back.] two beautiful

women sandwiching you as they love you with total focus and love. gods

i so love reading sheena breathing whisperly her desire for laura as she

alternates between devouring her tits and driving her tongue deep into

laura's mouth stabbing down her throat and sweeping exploring every

crevice and hollow with strong tongue strokes and probing. i always

mewl when my woman devours my mouth with a firm strong and hopefully

long tongue.

// i think only you show how a woman with bigger tits uses them to let

her lover feel their weight on you as she drags and mashes them into

your body. hillary with her big pillowy tits really loves this. i

remember one of our first fucks i was sitting on the sofa after a hot

fuck with simonette and hillary got between my legs and settled her tits

on my thighs and let their heavy weight heat my libido and my thighs and

then started stroking them on my legs and then leaned up and dragged

them up to my soaking cunt and swirled and ground them into my belly,

cunt and thighs. i could feel them slicking with my sweat and fuck

juice. i felt such love as i looked into this seventeen years old face

and seeing pure lust and love for me. she has the face of an angel and

the soul of a complete slut. needless to say i love her deeply as does

simonette and everyone else whom she fucks. we all love her deeply and

purely. sigh, have to love their in concert loving. moving down

laura's body in time one devouring her front and the other her back.

have to smile at the teasing when they avoid her aching cunt making

laura scream for it in her mind. love the teasing as my twat is humping

helplessly looking for relief and pleasure as i mewl and love drool in

building need.

// i love how you show that sara and sheena have a game plan here. you

show how women think and love. they are making laura die for it to make

sure she is completely under their spell. laura already is but they are

making sure. sigh, love reading sheena kissing and nipping laura's

midriff and belly on her way to tender red wet cunt meat and settling

between laura's yawing thighs. love settling in between your legs and

seeing and smelling your cunt up close with complete focus and fuck

hunger. you show the flow again. others never let their women flow in

their lovemaking. sara moves up from kissing laura's ass to her mouth

and devours it again with that smoky eye contact that lets souls speak

to each other in love and lust. i have come to marvel at how only you

capture this flow and moving in loving your women. feeling your womb

jump and cunt spasm as your eyes flash pure lust to each other. then

sara moves up higher to dangle her lovely gourds into laura's face. i

love having big tits dangled in my face. swallowing and sucking her

tits or maybe having to chase around in mirth and rising desperation.

sometimes i am forced to work for my tit meat. i just thrum when i get

that nipple finally.

// i see sara is in the mood for some play [Sara gently teased her by

letting the bulging, dark, huge bulb of one delicious nipple brush

Laura's lips as she groaned from the pleasure of what Sheena was

beginning to do to her cunt. Laura chased it with her lips, then her

tongue, but Sara giggled and kept it just out of reach.] i just smirk

when i make an angel chase my tits when in this position. i love seeing

them grimace in missing my nipples and hearing my aggressive lovers

starting to growl and lunge in hunger. this is perfect mirth and hot

lovemaking ["Ohhnn! Ungghh!" Laura groaned as Sheena's tongue lashed her

exposed clit and then stabbed deep into the sopping wet furrow of her

pussy. "Oh god . . . this is how bad I want it," she gasped, letting

both hands sweep and up and capture Sara's swaying globe, then feeding

Sara's bulging dark nipple into her mouth hungrily. Sara's playful

giggle turned into a hot moan in midstream. "Ohhnnmmmmm . . . oh

Laura!"] feeling your cunt fucked so well as you go for your tit meat.

i love stuffing a tit into my mouth and devouring your nipple and

aureole with hard sucks and fierce tongue lashing. i so love the sounds

of pleasure i make in my woman. i so love stuffing a big tit in mouth

and pushing your nipple deep for super hard love sucks and head pulling

while lathing with my tongue.

// love how only you show those sharp stabs of fucking pleasure that

make it difficult to focus as you are loving your woman. feeling those

clenches and gags as your feasting on a tit, cunt or asshole and you

have to break contact for a moment to clear your mind or simply scream

in fucking pleasure. i dream of those womb melting spasms of pure

pleasure. other writers just say their woman is eating her woman out

and you show what they are doing [Her body was alive and straining with

need, her pussy pulsing wildly from Sheena's increasingly passionate

love assault, which now included her fingers probing Laura's tight,

greasy sleeve, as well as her tongue working Laura's clit frantically,

and her thick sensual lips sucking it quickly from time to time.] it is

all the adjectives and adverbs that make your sex so hot. words like

probing, frantically and thick sensual lips simply adds so much. you

now show the ramping up of sex. you show how sheena starts pistoning

her fingers faster and harder and lashes laura's clit almost maniacally

and sara is moaning hard as she is now pressing her tit roughly into

laura's mouth and laura is sucking her pulpy bulbs hard and heatedly.

love reading of sheena's obvious skill and adds yet more heat to finish

off the love kill. only you capture that fierce fuck hunger that just

makes things ramp and ramp. you show the emotion as well as the motions

of fucking. only you marry the physcial and the emotional and thus your

writings are the envy of the fuck gods.

// gods, this is why i fuck [There was no way Laura could prolong this

sweet pleasure, or keep her body from hurtling into the abyss of a

killing orgasm. It arrived with little further warning. She felt her

body seize up, her flesh everywhere stiffening and clenching, her breath

paralyzed in the depth of her lungs. Even though all this sexual trauma

she could still feel Sheena's tongue stabbing into her pussy, and

Sheena's phenomenal lips on her clit. Sara's large, slippery, wet

nipple slipped out of her mouth as a choked and gargled cry sought to

escape, unsuccessfully. And then Laura was coming in hot furies, her

body convulsing and flipping uncontrollably as both Sara and Sheena

tried to hold her and help her get the most out of this excruciating

orgasm. She whimpered and whinnied but could not cry out, so stunned and

breathless was she made by the fierce shocks. But then it finally

released her. "Auunnggghhhhh!" she almost roared. "Unh! Unh!

Auunnggghhhh! Mmnnngggeeee!"] i so worship that moment of knowing the

orgasm is almost upon me and then the next instant my womb is no longer

straining but exploding deep in my belly and making my cunt spasm hard

as bolts of hot come slush and flow out in jagged spasms of wet heat.

so often i have felt that nipple slip from my mouth or lose all control

of my mouth on hot pussy and simply feel my face press into a hot cunt

as i feel my face spasming and slashing in her wet heat or i must lift

to breath raggedly and or scream out my delirious pleasure. and your

screams and hard groans of pure fucking bliss and pleasure are such a

miracle ot read. no other comes close to hitting it so dead on. others

sometimes brush the edges but only you capture all the sounds and

volumes of pure fucking hot sex and rupturing orgasms. also love how

you show so clearly women holding onto their woman to keep their place

so you can keep your face buried in cunt, asshole or tit trying to

prolong her pleasure. only you show how women strain and try so hard to

give their women every ounce of pleasure possible.

// sigh, now only you show that post coital bliss. laura basks in

having two beautiful women getting on each side of her and wrapping

their arms around her and love coo and kiss sensually. i know sheena

and laura can feel a new deep love flowing as tongues twine and

languidly move back and forth between tight fitting mouths. i so love

tasting my essence in my angel's mouth who just went down on me. now

you show (again as only you do) the mirth and sass of lovers who truly

love and like their bed mate ["That was only my three-star special,"

Sheena murmured in a low, husky, sexy voice, her black eyes glinting

with humor and newly minted affection. "Next time you get the five-star

extravaganza."] wit alone can make me fall for you harder and deeper.

really like the observation of laura feeling totally spent at first but

lying between these two black angels soon has renewed strength and fuck

hunger flowing in her veins. i love feeling myself coming alive after i

have been fucked good and starting my loving in turn.

// love the dynamic you show as laura turns sheena on her back and

kisses her shoulders and neck and only then moving to her beautiful tits

and loving those thick long nipples. i love how you love all your

women. really love how you show two lovers meeting over a thirds tits

like laura and sara here and having to detour to heatedly devour each

others mouths with deep plunging tongues and love murmurs. i am like

sheena in loving to watch this going on right above me but like sheena i

must eventually draw your mouth down to mine and get some sugar too.

letting our spittle mingle as we take turns kissing each other and

watching those ribbons of love drool stretch between moving mouths.

laura and sara then once more focus on sheena. i like how you show the

difference in women. where laura is the type to writhe immediately,

sheena is the type to languidly bask in your loving and slowly ramp up.

i so love hearing those love sighs and seeing your body slowly start to

undulate and hump. again, this beautiful writing so accurately shows

the flow of great lovemaking. i will never tire on how you show this

and make the loving so alive and vital. other writers leave out so much

that their sex becomes listless and bland. makes me shudder to think

that i would ever have to live this kind of sex.

// more of that humor i so love as laura heads south for tender red wet

cunt meat [Laura grinned back at her. "You do it. I think I have a date

with her pussy. If it's okay with you."] sigh, one of the reasons i so

love your writings is you actually describe in vivid detail your women's

vaginas [She lingered on the way over Sheena's taut black stomach and

smooth, velvety lower belly, but in seconds she had reached the long,

parting red blossom of the girl's black-edged pussy, which was flooding

inside with glistening fuck juice. It was one of those long,

sinuous-lipped cunts of her dreams, a heavenly wet gash of dark pink

paradise, and Laura pushed her mouth into it immediately, slithering her

tongue into the juicy interior, which was warm, almost hot, a frothing

wet raw mass of inflamed flesh.] what more can one add. i so love

getting up close to my woman's pussy and seeing its beauty and just

gazing at it and then moving in for my cunt meat and devouring her fuck

hole and clit. as much as i love looking at pussies i could never give

the beautiful descriptions that you do. i truly marvel at them. only

you capture the sights, smells and sounds of a well fucked pussy.

// other writers just say basically that the woman going down eats out

her woman. you show the details of laura pistoning her tongue up

sheena's fuck hole and then pulling sheena's clit hood up and attacking

her little seed. i love finding that seed and making her yelp and spasm

as i start loving her little seed of love. only you show how you move

between clit, fuck hole and perineum to give her maximum pleasure and

not overload any one area. love how you show sheena slowly getting

wound tighter and tighter as laura consumes her hot cunt and sara is

siphoning her nipples down her throat while her hands are kneading and

pumping her tit flesh hard with focused skill. i love how you only you

so clearly show a woman reaching down to caresses the woman's face going

down on her and maybe digging those fingers into her scalp and gripping

her head to start love pistoning her flooding cunt into her woman's hot

sucking mouth. wow, you even show that connection of lovers as sara and

laura make eye contact and silently and loving communicate that it is

time for the love kill and really ramp up the heat on sheena. love

taking that next level and simply inhale her clit down my throat with

rapid tongue bats and head pulling while sara is sucking and teeth

raking sheena's nipples hard. i so love working with another woman to

simply kill our bed mate with killing bolts coming pleasure.

// this is what i live for [This was about all it took to tip Sheena

over the edge. Her body clenched, and her knees jerked up. A fierce jolt

struck her. Only a distant, pinched off mewling came from deep in her

chest. Her flesh shook, and then strained and shuddered as she began to

come in long, rolling waves. "Auunnnggguuuunnnnn!" she groaned

loudly, her ecstatic moans filling the small bedroom, her violent jerks

making the bed shake. "Ohhnnnnggggg! Aunngghhh!" Laura and Sara

continued what they were doing throughout the sharp convulsions of her

orgasm, Laura's mouth glued to her spasming pussy while Sara's mouth was

still lovingly fastened to one of Sheena's nipples. Sheena came and came

until the sharpest spasms finally released her flexing body, and left in

their wake only soft, intermittent, shuddering jolts that soon faded

into slow undulations. Still, it was minutes before she fully recovered

from this thrilling, shattering climax.] i live to make a woman's body

simply tear itself apart with fucking bliss and having another woman

working with me is the purest pleasure possible. i love to keep my

mouth on you and feeling all the jolts and jackknifes rack your body.

looking up or down and watching your co-worker doing her part and seeing

your love victim simply dying form coming so hard. watching her body

slacken into those divine aftershock undulations and sudden jolts that

make her head snap around or limb twitch. really love the little detail

of sheena's knees jerking up. one never knows how a body is going to

respond to a crushing orgasm and love producing them to see what the

current will produce for my enjoyment.

// as usually happens when multiple lovers are playing and energy is

still high the two women who just fucked the third into heaven are now

ready for more fireworks themselves. i have so often worked loose from

the still sighing angel still jerking slightly from feathery aftershocks

still rocking her womb and me and my fuck partner simply fall on each

other like the fuck hungry lionesses we are. i love how laura and sara

let their sweet love simply ignite the fires of love like [She devoured

Sara with her hands and mouth, sucking and squeezing her sweet flesh,

dropping her mouth to Sara's incredible nipples, big puffy chocolate

cupcakes, licking them hungrily. Sara knew how much Laura adored her

nipples, and she smiled sexily, looking down at Laura's lips on them,

holding her own breasts in her hands, feeding them to Laura, who now

began to suck them with sharp, concentrated passion.] i so love

devouring my angels tits and nipples and i swoon when she lifts them for

me to make her nipples stand out for sharp devouring. i am so there

when laura sucks super hard and makes sara whimper. i have always

smiled when laura asks if she is doing it too hard and her current angel

tells her "harder". i have found most women, most ot the time want

their nipples devoured with heated passion while you love maul her tit

flesh. makes them writhe, whimper and love drool.

// as usually happens, sheena wants in on the loving as soon as she

revives. women want to fuck women as much as possible. i like the next

part where you simply tell the reader basically how laura and sheena are

swarming sara's body. you show lovers just kissing, sucking, licking,

kneading and stroking their woman. that feverish swarming where you are

all over her body. i love just loving her whole body from just above

her twat to her divine face. just flowing with another making your

shared woman simply writhe with fuck need. love the mystical connection

you show of how laura and sheena simply communicate on that soul level

of lovers in sync. it is this closeness that only women can share.

this sharing produces this [After a few minutes of this she was almost

delirious with fuck-need, writhing and groaning between their swarming

bodies, her thighs parted, her hands trying to force them down to her

pussy, urging them to bring her sweet relief. Laura teased her, sucking

her earlobe, pinching her large, swollen nipples, still damp with hers

and Sheena's saliva.] i so love reducing a woman to primal fuck need of

scissoring legs that are yawning wide inviting you to devour her

simmering quim as she whimpers and pleads for it. i so love the slut in

my angels.

// of course i love the hot sexy talk. i am so happy that laura is

finally talking dirty to sara. i need such sexy talk to make my body

sing. then only you show that kissing that occurs during the hot

fucking. other authors only have their women kiss during foreplay and

post coital. they miss all the hot tongue and spittle sharing during

the fucking that makes lesbian sex so divine. geez, my head is lulling

as sheena works down the front of sara's body and finally arrives at her

steamy cunt and immediately buries her face deep while laura works down

and parts sara's ass cheeks and starts giving sara those loving hard

tongue strokes down her ass crack that i so love giving. of course this

makes sara whimper and hump like the slut she is. i so love working

with another to make our woman simply melt with fuck need. i like the

thoughts of laura deciding to take sara's asshole. i love taking

women's asshole when they have never given it to their odious husbands

and boyfriends. i show them what they have been missing. i know how to

make a woman a total anal whore. i make them come so hard.

// i am smiling as laura rushes off to her baby oil an lubes her finger

and begins her divine work [Laura had one forefinger greased and slid it

between Sara's ample buns before Sara knew what was happening. She

snapped the bottle shut and pushed it down toward the end of the bed.

Sara's body stiffened a little and she let out a tiny, surprised squeak

as she felt Laura's finger. "Mnnneee!" She looked back over

her shoulder at Laura, who was kissing and sucking and even biting her

firm round ass cheeks while insinuating her finger deeper into Sara's

crack.] i have always loved how you show so lovingly that initial

discomfort and mild pain as your asshole is invaded. you show with your

prose how a woman's face gets that heavenly look of pained focused as

your finger or cock slides home. you show those sights and sounds of

pained entry almost all women make and then you show how that changes to

the sublime look of pure pained pleasure that radiates out form your

skewered asshole and pumps pure pleasure to your throbbing clit and

makes your tits thrum and your mind whites out with pure fucking

pleasure. only you show how come anal sex is totally "rad". i so love

gagging as fingers or cock slide through my sphincter and starts pumping

my rectum making me love moan and thrash.

// love the sounds you show as sara's body is ramping up

["Ahhhhhnnnnnnn! Oh . . . shit! Unngghhhhh!"] only one other author

shows the sounds of lovemaking but his always all caps words. only you

show those varied animalistic sounds of rutting and hot fucking. as

usual you show how you ramp up the heat to crush your woman's body with

a shocking violent orgasm. you show laura pistoning her finger harder

and twisting it around while sheena is sucking and tongue fucking harder

while introducing a few of her own fingers. only you show how more and

more heat is added to finish off the love kill. other authors just

don't show this. it is always simple oral sex basically. how boring as

they depict it. while your sex is alive and vital with life. love the

observation you make that laura and sheena can both read sara's body so

well because of their deep love for her and keep in sync while they ramp

up the heat until [At the same time, Sheena had begun fucking Sara's

pussy more aggressively too, working her fingers into Sara's oozing slit

not more roughly but much more rapidly, fucking her fast and wildly with

them while still sucking Sara's throbbing clit. All this frenzy quickly

became too much for Sara, who clenched and then came in a terrific

eruption. "Ahnn! Ahnn! OOUUNNGGHHMMNNNGGGG!" she suddenly exploded,

her body ripped apart by horrific interior sexual fireworks. "Oh! Oh!

Auunnnggghhhhh!" she groaned, shattered again by succeeding shocks of a

crushing orgasm.] this what i live for. giving my woman orgasms so

strong she feels likes her cunt is going to sear her brain with pure

fucking pleasure. only you show that sudden explosive explosion of pure

pleasure that suddenly crushes you as your cunt rends itself with

scalding spasms of pure fucking pleasure. i so love being in sara's

place as my womb rends itself apart deep in my belly and makes my body

jackknife and spasm around the bed as i scream my bliss as scalding

spasms wrack my body with crushing spasms making my head whip around and

feel that tearing deep in my belly as my cunt radiates pure nirvana into

my veins and whiting out my brain as i love drool while my eyes spasm in

the back of my head. only you make me feel this when i am reading an

erotica story. only with your prose, sharp observations and vivid

details and divine use of sounds actually capture the essence of coming

super hard. only you make my pussy spasm just in reading your stories.

// i love how you tell us that the orgasms your women are heavenly

events that last for some time from initial shocks, to rupturing spasms

and then feeling those wondrous aftershocks that gradually fade away

leaving you spent. other authors just usually have their women come so

blandly. while a few do show hard fucking orgasms they still forget to

show that wondrous coming down in aftershocks and afterglow. they cut

their orgasms short. i love seeing laura and sheena riding out the

orgasm in their original positions giving sara as much pleasure as

possible and only then moving up and wrapping sara in their arms and

kissing in sweet post coital time. love the picture of the three

sharing tongue and spit in languid love. i think sara has come to my

way of thinking [Sara watched them patiently, almost lovingly. "You two

guys are a team," she sighed softly. "You can do me together any time

you feel like it. God, I thought I was going to melt."] sara knows how

to go for the brass ring now. i love fucking one on one of course but i

so love loving with more than one woman. it opens so many dynamics and

possibilities.

// i am so there as the fuck hunger fills laura as sheena stabs her

tongue deep into laura's mouth showing her own hunger for laura's hot

wet cunt. i so love kissing like this and dueling and twining tongues

tight and slithering hard as our cunts flood with fuck juice readying

themselves for more intense fucking. sara does what i like to do and

scoots out of the way allowing laura and sheena to twine arms and legs

and pulling tight as tongues plunge deep into warm mouths. really love

the observation of laura reaching down and palming sheena's ass cheeks

and squeezing and kneading them. i so love feeling my angel's ass

filling my fingers as i feel its resistance as i love pump it and then

while working her ass setting up a nice humping motion and getting her

cunt to tribbing whatever part of my body it is touching. getting her

wet heat all over me. feeling her mound rubbing and mashing into my

body. it is these little things that other authors never give me. the

little things in lovemaking that we all do and that makes fucking so

delightful. sara wants to see her two favorite angels fuck in love for

each other. i love to lie back after a great fuck and watch my other

angels fuck each other while i watch and if not spent gently masturbate,

else, i'll just watch dreamily. love the accurate observation of sara

knowing that laura fucking sheena with her watching will make things so

much easier during their next tryst. laura will have buried all her

silly objections and will gladly partake of the delights of the flesh

she and sheena can so freely offer.

// more examples of the dirty talk that makes sex so hot [Sheena was

equally hot, raising her hands to Laura's small breasts, lightly

pinching Laura's nipples, sucking her neck. "I want to taste your

pussy," she panted into Laura's neck. "I want to drink it and suck

it."] these words just so fire up the libido. i love how you show your

women's personality so subtly. sheena wants some sixty-nine and she

goes for it. laura is not a big fan because both women rarely come

together. sheena doesn't really care and takes control and positions

them head to foot and makes it plain that this is their next sex act. i

personally love for my bed mate to lead me. whatever you want to do,

lead me on. surprise me with what you want to do next. i love how

sheena fucks [There, without warning, she went to town on Laura's

aroused, festering pussy, sucking Laura's cunt lips wildly and invading

Laura's quim with both tongue and fingers. Suddenly realizing that she

liked where she was too, her face nestled between this hot woman's silky

black thighs, her mouth just inches from Sheena's delicious long pussy,

all wet and deep red inside, squinchy with juice, Laura groaned and

quivered.

"Ohhhnnnnnnn! Oh shit . . . that feels so good!" she gasped, letting

Sheena know that her hungry, forceful caresses were hitting the

mark. She, too, quickly pressed her mouth into Sheena's glistening

slit and began devouring it passionately. In seconds both of them were

snuffling and grunting softly and panting as they licked and sucked each

other voraciously.] i love getting busy on my woman's cunt and love it

when it is done to me. gods, i love!!! your words. you excite so much

when you tell us of laura and sheena's "snuffling and grunting" as they

devour each other quims. i really love sixty-nine for this reason.

feeling our bodies jerking and cunts humping while we make the sounds

you mention. i love feeling her digging with her fingers to grip me

tight while her other hand is pistoning fingers hard while she tries to

inhale my clit down her throat and i her's when the dynamic allows it.

// for laura she starts to feel her regret when she realizes she is not

going to last with sheena's frenzied assault on her flooding cunt. me i

don't mind. if on top i will ride out my orgasm with my face buried in

your cunt while i scream or on your thigh when i simply lose all control

of my mouth and very senses. then back to work to finish you off or a

change of position is in order. since laura is on the bottom she can't

help but let her head flop on the mattress as her strength gives out as

her body prepares for nirvana. i love how sara simply can't watch

anymore and inserts herself back into the lovemaking. sometimes i try

to just watch but hot fucking right before your eyes so many times fills

me with renewed hunger and i must rejoin like sara here. i love her

swarming their bodies and kissing and kneading everywhere. love how she

settles by laura's head and feeds laura her divine puffy nipples. i

love lover's who know their angel so well. you show sara knowing how

laura loves coming with sara's nipple in her mouth. only you show that

almost mystical connection between women as they love each other. you

show how we always try to give as much pleasure as possible and by

giving you receive so much in return.

// sigh, what a beautiful picture of sara using her hand to feed laura

her nipples and looking down and gazing with love as laura sucks,

nibbles, and pulls hard on her nipples and aerolas. you fill your sex

with so much tender love it makes my head lull. i so love!!! that

observation of laura's thighs clamping down on sheena's head as she

gobbles her cunt as the orgasm approaches. again the little details

others never show and thus they miss the pure heat you show. you now so

perfectly show the end game ["Unnnhh . . . ummmmhhhh!" she groaned,

sucking Sara's nipple hard and thrusting her quivering pelvis into the

air, feeling Sheena's thick, sensual lips on her clit, feeling her whole

straining body flare with sexual fire. For some reason, sucking

Sara's nipple always made her come. At some barely predictable instant,

her mouth engorged with the woman's incredible plump silky nipple, the

floodgates would open, and she would be coming in a scalding, wrenching

paroxysm. It was no different this time. No sooner had she sucked Sara's

nipple deep into her mouth than the rockets began to go off deep in her

womb, bursting so violently that she was forced to open her mouth and

let the delectable wet bulb escape. "Auunngghhhh!" she roared, her

body flexing and straining into a bow, then collapsing back to the

mattress in sharp convulsions. "Ohhnnnngggg! Auunngghhhh!"] i so love

humping my cunt hard like laura here when my orgasm hits. i want to

feel you mouth pressing hard into my cunt as you suck my fuck hole and

clit. i so love that straining of my twat into your mouth and humping

hard as my cunt spasms and rents itself soaking your face in my cunt

juice. other authors only say their woman come hard with a scream and

spasm while you show your women's body straining and convulsing and

simply wringing all strength from their bodies as their cunts use that

strength to take their woman to heaven.

// i so love how you show sheena not releasing laura's throbbing clit

until she senses laura can't take anymore. again, you show that reading

of a woman's body that great lovers do to give her woman the absolute

maximum pleasure possible. only you show this so clearly and lovingly

and i worship your writings because of it. i'm smiling great big as now

sara is recharged and attacks sheena's body while laura is incapacitated

with lassitude. i am so happy that laura can now watch with only a

passing ghost of jealousy as she watches sara fuck another woman with

her only watching. i hope that laura can fully accept this and accept

fully the love and sex sara and sheena is offering.

// sigh, i so love the tenderness and humor you show yet again as the

story winds down ["May I join you?" she whispered to Sara, sidling

closer. Sara looked up and gave Laura the most shocking,

crazy-funny, cross-eyed smile she had given her in months. "Duh, cuckoo

brain," she breathed, turned again to nearly swallow one of Sheena's

hard, black, shiny wet nipples. "Why do you think I got you over

here?" Laura smiled back. "Mmmmm, I guess this was it."] this lack

in other stories has really become glaring since i discovered your

writings. love how you show them getting sheena to writhing in a minute

and with a few more minutes of intense fucking has her cunt simply

exploding with scalding spasms of the purest fucking bliss possible. i

so love making my woman's cunt explode like this as she jackknifes and

flops all over the bed with limbs jerking and hitching and her belly

bellowing or vibrating like jello. i so love each orgasm because they

are so unique. really love the picture of sara and laura licking

sheena's cunt juices off their lips and fingers. i love licking all the

cunt juice possible. my mother always told me to waste not.

// sigh, i love reading ot them lounging around for a hour love cooing

and resting and then fucking heatedly one more time. i so love resting

and then fucking again once flesh is renewed with vigor. i want as many

orgasms for all as possible and want to swallow as much pussy and ass

juice as possible. i want everything i can get. i am happy that laura

has made peace with her new dynamic with sara and now sheena. happy

that this divine interlude with sara and sheena has helped laura with

her blues over makeeda. i find a good fuck always makes me feel so much

better and more able to meet life's challenges.

 

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Chapter 294:

 

 

// i like how the chapter starts with laura still basking with the

sweet afterglow of the heated fucking she shared with sara and sheena.

i so love basking in the memories of my last great fuck. i want to

relive it all in my mind and in my pussy as it quivers and jumps in

remember ecstacy. i love masturbating to recent fucks. unfortunately,

laura is still pining over makeeda singing in japan and the unsettled

nature of their current relationship. i would be unsettled to with

makeeda distant and cold nature. i would be out getting all the pussy i

could to help settle my nerves. when under stress i need lots of loving

to help soothe my physic and soul. it seems maybe the fates are

deciding to help laura with her problem. laura goes to a wedding of

someone at work and meets a beautiful black girl. i love how laura

zeros in on a potential bedmate. i am always looking and hoping for my

next new fuck. i love how laura zeroes on this new angel and her

considerable charms [this girl, though not conventionally pretty, was to

Laura perfectly stunning in her lemon yellow, scoop-necked bridesmaid's

dress, so dark and lovely, with a perfect smooth chest and perfect bone

structure, as well as an infectious, easily-summoned smile accentuating

her even white teeth.] i so know how to focus on the positive in a

woman and start figuring out how to get in her in one of our beds.

doesn't always work but a girl can dream can't she.

// laura sees her opportunity and gets behind this angel in a conga

dance line and laura starts getting to know the girl. i love how laura

works to get to know this girl. you must get her attention before you

can begin the sedcution. we find that jamilah is is a little tipsy and

looking for a friend. jamilah is picking up that she is totally out of

place here as the only black person and that other people while polite

are only that. i so hate that subtle racism. i just wish everyone

would see the person and revel in what makes us different. i am happy

that you make this subtle comment. here is a beautiful woman that

everyone should be trying to seduce and fuck wonderfully and they are

totally ignoring and missing this wonderful angel. laura will never

miss an angel and the opportunity to sleep with her. i so love the slut

in laura that hungers for pussy and goes for it. i need as much cunt

meat as i can get and i'm always seeking and looking for great new fucks

and fucking all my current angels as much as possible.

// laura starts the gambit by mentioning she needs to a nap before she

drives considering her slight drunken state. i love how she puts out

the idea of a bed and sees how jamilah will respond. yes!!!!! jamilah

feels the same way. she is feeling a little wosey herself and is tired

of the rejection and being the nice person she is invites laura to crash

with her. i have worked similiar situations after parties, clubs or

conferences and i see a woman who obviously needs someone to talk to and

a friend and get to know them and then work to keep the friendship going

at a more intimate place. some of them i have gotten in my bed

afterwards when i sensed they could be seduced. i can just feel laura's

elation as she sees the fates coming into alignment. laura shows her

geniune liking for the girl and rapt attention and jamilah really wants

to spend time with this woman who obviously likes her and is paying rapt

attention to her. this alone will start to seduce many a woman.

// they go to a hotel room the wedding party has thoughtfully provided

all the traveling guests and they get to jamilah room. there laura is

feeling bold but decides to hold back a little. jamilah seems like a

novice and will take some seduction. laura lies back on a bed and makes

a witty comment and jamilah tells her to sleep the night and laura is

drunk enough to fall quickly asleep. when she awakens a little while

later she sees jamilah in the other bed watching tv. laura does what i

would do in this situation [Obviously she doesn't know what a slut is

dozing on the other bed here next to her, Laura reflected, feeling her

drowsy, half-befuddled mind begin to clear. And how I want to run my

hands all over her nakedness. She is so lovely like this, not knowing

I'm watching her. Admiring her. Wanting her.] i so love to gaze on the

beauty of women all the time. the female form is just so perfect. the

angles and swells of the female body.

// jamilah senses she is being watched and looks over at laura.

jamilah tells laura she has been asleep an hour and mentions she

snores. i am smiling because laura does exactly what i would do. one

would have to make her take it back and wrestle and pinch her to make

her see the error of her ways. i know this would let me get my hands on

her and see how her body language reacts. a woman who doesn't want a

woman touching her is very obvious. you can feel the tension and

coldness. instead of that frigid bitch state laura finds that jamilah

is playful and laughs as laura pinches her arm a little. love the

taunts that laura issues of jamilah taking it back which kind of ups the

bar when you get her to say "or what". i love the ogooling [She scooted

back a little from Laura on the bedspread, and her young breasts swayed

under the cloth of her nightie. Laura could see the large dark circles

of her nipples through the thin white cloth, even though it was

sprinkled with the bluebell pattern. Jamilah had large, deeply black

nipples.] i know my pussy would be jumping and juicing by now. maybe,

just maybe, i will be dining on this woman's pussy in the very near

future. i can feel my heart rate accelarte and palms start getting that

sweaty feel as i feel the dance of love beginning.

// sigh, i so love your seduction. now laura caresses jamilah's

shoulder instead of pinching it and they both can feel the moment

change. the moment of truth as arrived. will she freeze up or will she

let you continue. i can feel my pulse beating in my throat as i take it

to the time when she knows my true desires. jamilah makes the almost

steroytipical ["Better be careful or someone'll think you're a lesbian,"

she said, with a half-grin. Without missing a beat, Laura said

boldly, though softly, "I am a lesbian. Does that bother you?"] now we

will know. yessss!!!! she doesn't freak and is not a religous right

wing nut and has no problem with a gay person and is maybe even a little

flattered that a lesbian would find her attractive. i love it when i

tell them i want them and i can almost see the wheels turning. i have

used this argument or something similiar many times over the years

[Jamilah shrugged and giggled softly, nervously. "Do you think that

would make me a lesbian? If I let you?" Laura shook her head. "No,

I don't think so. But if you'd rather not . . ." Jamilah seemed to

ponder it. "What if I like it?" Now it was Laura's turn to shrug.

"Nobody will know but us. I can keep a secret. Can you?"] a lot of

boyfriends and husbands would shit if they knew how many of their mates

were getting pussy on the side. many women like having this secret and

i'm always hoping to make you a bi or lesbian slut but i keep to that to

myself to begin with.

// i love getting my woman to that cat-eyed state where you know that

you are flooding their body with sensuality and lust. It is now time to

bring them home to your bed. i like the observation by laura that

though jamilah is not classically beautiful she is [But at this moment,

yielding to Laura, solemn with sexual promise and wonder, she was almost

exquisitely lovely, luminous with the sense of mystery that pervaded the

room, the mystery of new sexual adventure, and at the same time soft and

glowing with easy sensuality and warmth for Laura.] i just melt for my

woman at this time. i find you so beautiful with our mutual love that i

soon find you be a total fox and so lovely to gaze upon. i am smiling

as jamilah gets that little girl voice when laura compliments her

beautiful skin. you know you are ensaring her heart when you hear and

see this and you know now that you will dining soon on her hard humping

cunt until it explodes in your mouth and you are swallowing her hot

bolts of steamy girl cum. i love how only you show and detail those

moments of a woman crossing each line on her way to seduction. other

authors simply don't give us this loving details that make a seduction

so magical and worthy of much masturbatory times in the future.

// other authors always just have their women kiss right away

mouth-to-mouth kissing. of course this is great, but so often lovers

start with other parts of their woman's body and kiss and stroke it and

work like laura here and only then devour her mouth. this foreplay just

makes them so much more willing to feel your tongue conquering their

mouth. i am drooling as laura starts at jamilah's shoulders, then works

up her neck and finally seduces her ear with her warm breath and

tongue. i am smiling great big when laura now asks jamilah if she can

kiss her mouth and jamilah plays the game of saying she only thought she

was going to kiss her shoulder. i love it because she has already

allowed laura to consume her neck and ear. they both know that she is

laura's. laura continues the sedcution nad further insnares jamilah's

heart with true heartfelt compliments on her beauty. how sad that she

is so lapping up the compliments. once agian it so clear that men are

pigs and have not be telling this wonderful angel just how beautiful she

is and lucky to be able to make love to her. i would simply tell her as

many ways i can think of how beautiful she is. i want to compliment you

as i devour your body. i feel so furtunate for every woman i have

fucked over my life.

// i like how you show how humor can pop up anywhere when laura gives

jamilah the out that they can stop if she likes it too much and she

replies [Jamilah made a funny face. "That sounds so weird. Like, if it

feels too good we stop. Seems like if it feels too good, we should do

more of it." Laura felt her own eyelids lowering, she was so

overcome by sexual desire for this sweet girl. "Maybe we should just go

with the flow, as they say."] you need to alwasys let your woman feel

like she can back out if she wants. when you apply to much pressure is

when they might rebel. i find slow and easy will quickly break her

defenses down. get her to helping you in the seduction. like how laura

just moves and starts kissing jamilah. one has to know when it is time

to move things forward. jamilah has already told us she is ready for

love and fucking and now you must let her body be overwhelmed with the

plesaure that only a woman can give another woman. i love how laura

takes her time with gentle moving of her lips and slowly bringing their

mouths thighter as she slowly increases her caresses with her lips and

tongue on lips. of course jamilah responds with that slow paring of

lips that allows your tongue to slowly invade and conquer. i so love

slithering my tongue through that narrow opening and starting to

caresses her inner lips, gums and tongue. i love it when i get that

hitch in her breath and shuddering and i can feel her tongue coming

alive and quickly starting to twine with mine and starting the dance of

tongue love.

// of course i love the fingers caressesing face and shoulders as both

women heat up. i love caressing your face and body as i start to clutch

your body to mine. feeling our body heat start to build. have to smile

knowingly as laura compliments jamilah on her kissing skills. any woman

will melt a little with such compliments. like how you tell the next

part [This time, as often happened with the second kiss, they were both

more uninhibited. Laura kissed her hungrily. Jamilah responded by

opening her mouth wider, and even thrusting her tongue into Laura's.

Laura pushed her gently down onto her back on the bed. She kissed her

neck now and sucked it too, then moved her lips over to Jamilah's other

shoulder. Jamilah was panting softly and even mewling softly in a

faraway voice.] i so love feeling the slut coming out. feeling her

tongue hotly invading my mouth and dueling and twining with my tongue

after exploring my mouth deeply. just makes me mewl with hot love. i

so love to latch onto that tongue and give it some head as i suck that

invader hard and hot while i bob my head on it a litle. i can feel

their body rise in fucking pleasure as they start making those

animalistic fuck sounds of a woman in heat.

// i love that moment of taking it to the next level and she is totally

accepting now. laura runs her hand underneath jamilah's nightgown and

cups jamilah's breast and she is so accepting. the slut has won and

sweet love is here. laura starts to pump that tit and suggests jamilah

get naked and love how you show sweet love [Jamilah's eyes looked drowsy

and swirly and very sexually aroused. She was no longer offering any

resistance. "Aren't you going to take yours off too?" she asked, in an

almost childish voice, letting her fingers trail across the sleeve of

Laura's dress. "Yes . . . I am," Laura smiled, immediately

beginning to unzip and pull off her clothes. "Why don't we just get

naked and get under the covers?" Jamilah, an amused smile crossing

her lips, watched Laura undress. "I think I'd rather just lie here on

top of the covers. I'm kind of . . . liking this, you know."] i love it

when my woman starts loving it when she is a newbie. i guess this is

why everyone loves the game of seducing a woman new to lesbian loving.

getting them to see the truth and rocking their world. i love my

lesbian, bi and converted lovers but newbies have a specialness all

their own.

// they both strip down and laura tells her the truth when jamilah asks

if she has made love to other black women [Laura dropped her hair and

turned back to face her, discarding her limp bra at the same time. "A

few," she breathed, eyelids heavy, her hands coming up again to

Jamilah's nightgown and lifting it from the hem upward. "None as

gorgeous as you, though." This was technically true since no woman

was ever as gorgeous to Laura as the one she was currently making love

to. And Jamilah was at this moment devastatingly lovely, soft and sexy

and yielding, her young lean body amazingly black and smooth and velvety

under Laura's fingertips.] no woman is more beautiful to me at the time

than the woman(s) i am currently fucking. i give you my all when you

are in my bed. laura proves her love by [She cradled them in her palms

while kissing Jamilah again, an aching slow kiss, full of sensual tongue

and emotion. While she kissed her, she rubbed her thumbs slowly back and

forth across Jamilah's large black nipples, feeling the softer skin of

her wide areolas tighten and the thick nubs in the centers grow harder.

Finally, she dropped her mouth to one and sucked Jamilah's nipple into

her mouth.] i so love feeling your nipples stiffen and lengthening as i

play with them and drawing your tit into my hot loving mouth and start

sucking and tongue lathing. i love feeling your body arching into me

and your breath quickening as i get your tit all swelled with hot blood

and passion.

// i like doing this also [Without releasing Jamilah's nipple from her

lips, Laura raised her eyes. Jamilah's face was twisted in a smile of

intense pleasure. Laura sucked her wet nipple hard enough to make

Jamilah's mouth twist even more sharply, and her brow furrow.] i want

to see your face slashed with pleasure. only you really focus on the

face to show the reader the pleasure these divine women are feeling.

like laura asking for permission to love her other tit and then making

her gasp when she sucks the other tit hot and hard. i love making my

sluts grunt and writhe like the whores they are in my bed. love the

communication you always show. women are so good at telling their lover

how good she is making her feel. of course laura is the master

communicator ["You have such beautiful big nipples," Laura panted, now

sucking and licking them more passionately, pinching one damp one in her

thumb and forefinger while she sucked the other, going back and forth

between Jamilah's lovely breasts rapidly.] i find words with ones

actions is such a potent combination. now you show again how you

revisit areas. other writers never revisit an area once they leave it.

laura knows to go up and give jamilah some hot schorching kisses while

devouring her tits. it is this consuming her whole body that makes a

woman melt in your bed. you show masterful lovemaking. by now jamilah

is kissing back with hot fuck hunger for laura. hopefully, laura has

perminately awakened her true lesbian self and it will now be on the

prowl for all the pussy she can get.

// i so love reading hot sexy talk ["Mmmm, all wet with sweet fuck

juice for me to lick?" she murmured to the panting girl.] i love

talking it and hearing it. it makes me so wet like jamilah here.

sedcution should always involve the physical and the verbal. makes your

woman's cunt a soaked mess waiting to be devoured. i have always loved

how you show the reader what laura is doing as she slides south for some

heavenly gash. how she loves the woman from her mouth and neck all the

way down her body. you detail how laura kisses, strokes and kneads

jamilah's torso , ribs and pelvis before she settles between jamilah's

spreading thighs. other authors only show the kissing, breast play and

then jump straight to the twat. they always just skip loving a woman's

torso, belly and pelvis. i so love loving these areas making my women

love whine and pant while their belly is heaving and torso is jumping to

my caresses and kisses. sucking your belly flesh into my mouth and

giving little love hickies. and of course one must always love her

belly button with much sucking and tonguing. i have made women just

spasm with this.

// i am smiling great big as laura makes jamilah "oh", whine and mewl

when she starts to play with her cunt lips. i love how laura so works

her woman's body so that by the time she starts to play with her angel's

kitty they are nearly driven up the wall. i like how laura quickly

tries to learn a new angel's body and how it reacts. she quickly

discovers that jamilah has a very sensitive body and reacts fully and

strongely to your touch. i love easy comers but women with a longer

fuze is nice too. you can love her body for long, long minutes without

fear of her coming unitl your ready. no problem. one just adapts

because in the end i'm going to give you as many orgasms as i can before

your flesh and cunt are too exhausted to come anymore. love the belly

button loving. love nubby belly buttons you can tongue, teeth and suck

so fucking hard. what i really love is your divine descriptions of

jamilah's oh so wet cunt [Oh my god, I don't want this ever to end,

Laura thought. What a beautiful pussy! Jamilah's blossoming cunt was too

perfect for belief, beautifully shaped, sexily puckered and wet and dark

pink inside, and when Laura pulled the labia open even further with her

fingers, she exposed a large wet expanse of raw flesh, larger than

normal it seemed, a hot glistening wet patch of cunt meat that she

suddenly felt a fierce urge to press her own flooding pussy against. I

can't let her come until I've felt this, she thought, suddenly twisting

her own body so that she could bring their crotches together.] i just

fall in love with a divine cunt like this and just bury my face in it

and devour for all i'm worth. sometimes i will just get her all wet and

runny and rub my face all in her cunt. running my face from hair to

chin in your hot wet cunt. smearing your essence all over my face. so

many of my sluts love when i do this and i will let the temperature

lower a little as i scoot up and let them lick my face clean and bury

their tongue down my throat to taste themselves on my face and in mouth

before i head south again.

// with the above i love how you show the change of plans. only you

show how you get a sudden idea in your head and you completely change

what you had planned to do. this happens so often in lovemaking and

only you show this flexiblity of lovemaking. i have never ever seen

this in another writings. i have often woundered why over the years.

love the observation of how plaint jamilah has become. i love reducing

a woman into my compliant slut for the night. they know they can

totally trust me to take them to heaven over and over again. i have

always adored your moments of first contact [Laura felt her own body sag

momentarily in the wild flux of emotion and sharp physical pleasure that

flooded her flesh as she felt Jamilah's hot pussy sliding against hers.

"Unhhh! Oh god . . .yes!" she too gasped, her head falling back, her

body limp with sexual bliss but then quickly filling again with fierce

sexual urgency.] i just melt when my cunt tribs another cunt and i feel

our sopping wet heat squishing and mashing together in hot love. i so

love feeling the juices soaking our thighs and pelvises and the sounds

of sodden cunts being ground hard together. i so love the sounds of

sodden cunts being fucked and plowed.

// i so love seeing jamilah in a "groggy sexual trance" as she swirls

her cunt into laura's. i have fucked like this for half an hour at

times. just lying back and swirling our cunts gently in relaxed

heavenly fucking of gentle pleasure. love how laura leans up and ups

the heat with [Patiently, she gyrated her pussy slowly into Jamilah's,

feeling their slippery, sensitive wet pussy flesh glide together,

watching Jamilah's facial contortions, and her lovely young breasts and

deeply black nipples sway and swirl as her body moved in response to

Laura's gentle thrusts. Laura could still fuck her while leaning

forward, and so she got her hands on them both, content just to squeeze

them and watch the pleasure make Jamilah grimace.] i always love the

show of a woman's breast moving on her chest. love grabbing tits like

this when plowing my cock into her cunt or asshole and just love mauling

them. so many want me to just love pump hard, squeezing hard and

pumping in time with my deep spearing thrusts. sometimes scissoring and

pulling her nipples hard to make her scream and ram her pelvis back into

my ramming thrusts as i slam fuck them. so love watching those grimaces

of pure fucking pleasure as their tits just radiate and spike their

cunts and brains with pure fucking pleasure.

// now you show how the flow of lovemaking just keeps flowing as laura

is finished with tribbing and disengages from jamilah and swarms her

body just comsuming her. i know that time of just love attacking

whatever comes in range of my mouth and fingers. you just don't know

what you will consume next. finally laura has taken jamilah to that

fever pitch we all want to put our woman in and moves in for the love

kill [She groaned as Laura's mouth finally found her beautiful pussy.

And Laura was not gentle. The time for gentleness had passed, and both

were tense and frantic for release. Laura tongued and sucked and

fingered Jamilah's beautiful black-lipped pussy in a kind of frenzy she

knew the girl had never experienced before, sucking her clit, sucking

the entire little hood that covered it too, sucking the whole upper

portion of Jamilah's flowing pussy into her mouth and lashing Jamilah's

swollen clit with her tongue. Go ahead, honey, you can come now!

she thought, wildly sucking Jamilah's flooding cunt, and squeezing

Jamilah's delicious hard little ass cheeks with her hands.] i so love

taking a pussy hard like this and just making it explode with hard

humping spasms into my starving mouth. i so love sucking your whole

clit and hood into my mouth and giving deep throat love sucks as my

tongue lashes and bats your clit with hard head pulls. i so love the

detail of getting your hands under her humping buns and grabbing hold

and helping to love pump her cunt into your mouth. i so love rumps i

can palm and squeeze in time with her humps as i help left her pelvis

off the bed to hump my mouth hard. last night i was doing this to

joann. with her nice petite frame i can so palm and control her ass

checks as i squeezed and dug my fingers in each time i squeezed and

pulled her ass up and her cunt hard into my mouth sucking her clit down

my throat. it was divine having to half roll to keep my grip and

continue squeezing and humping as she jackknifed and flipped around our

bed screaming and gushing all over my face and down my starving throat.

// joann came like this ["Annnggghhhaaauunnnggghhh!" she cried out, so

loudly that Laura suddenly remembered, in the midst of this sharp

climax, that they were in a hotel room, where passersby in the hall

would hear their sexual cries. "Ohhnnnggghhhh!" Jamilah groaned loudly

again, her body flipping and surging off the mattress as shock after

orgasmic shock ripped through her silky flesh. "Ohhnnggg . . . oh god .

. . oh shit!"] only you capture the truly harrowing orgasm that simply

destoryes one's soul with pure fucking pleasure. i can just see

jamilah's body spasming all across the bed dying from pure pleasure from

her rupturing cunt. i think you are the only author to really capture

the jackknifing that makes a woman's body spasm so hard around the bed.

only you tell of the pelvis leaping up and limbs thrashing or how a body

just surges and twists left and right in helpless bliss. you wo well

capture the physical aspects of coming super hard that i so love

reading. i so love all the hot bolts or streaming cunt jucie i am

rewarded each time i feel that cunt spasming a fresh batch of come for

me to swallow and feel all over my face. i so love laura cooing to

jamilah to keep coming. these verbal ques can give an extra spasm or

two of pure bliss and then additional aftershocks. i love watching with

laura as jamilah slowly comes down as you watch her body hitch and

twitch and her face getting those sharp grimaces of that divine

aftershock pleasure that makes ones legs and arms just thrash out in

that sudden one flex spasm of pure pleasure of a melting womb.

// now you give me what i almost have never read elsewhere [In a

smooth, fluid motion, she lifted herself up and straddled Jamilah's

waist, reaching down to her crotch with one hand at the same time and

spreading her cunt lips again with two fingers, then pressing all of her

wet inner pussy meat into Jamilah's hard abdominals. "Oh godddddd,

that feels good!" she sighed, rubbing her pussy back and forth on the

silky, ripply heaven of Jamilah's stomach muscles.] i so love mounting

a belly with some muscles and just sweeping and grinding soaking your

belly with my juices as i ride my cunt down hard into your stomach

feeling your muscles rippling my cunt flesh and mashing my clit hard as

i pump down hard. i love how you show jamilah immediatley understanding

this new to her fuck and starts to hump up and holding onto laura's

thighs for leverage to hump up. women so quickly read on how to give

their women total pleasure. sigh, what a divine detail ["Unh! Unh! Unh!

Oh god! Unhhhhh!" Laura grunted, tossing her head back, then leaning

forward in the sweet delirium that preceded her climax, reaching down to

clutch both of Jamilah's luscious little breasts in her hands, now

jabbing and bucking maniacally into the girl's hard flesh.] i love how

you show laura's body just bucking with abandon to grind her cunt down

hard for maximum pleasure. i have done this too using my woman's tits

as an anchor as i love crush them as i pulp them in time to my thrusts.

i love giving pleasrure while receiving pleasure.

// i live to experince this [It only took about thirty seconds of this

for her to explode in one of the most wrenching, rupturing orgasms she

had had in weeks. It seemed to rip up through her body from the exact

spot where her greasy cunt meat was welded to Jamilah's now-slippery

stomach, shaking her and making her muscles stiffen and relax in a sharp

rhythm of shocking pleasure. She fell forward helplessly so that her

breasts temporarily mashed into Jamilah's face, then let forth a loud

cry as Jamilah's lips found one of her throbbing nipples and sucked

hard, bringing another fierce jolt of orgasmic rapture to her aching

pussy.] i have so often collapsed like this when on top. i simply

exhuast my body in hard fucking as i start screaming and jackknifing in

pure pleasure. beautiful detail of jamilah giving all she can and

sucking that nipple mashed in her face. i love sucking nipples and tit

flesh into my mouth when i have it mashed into my face like this. i can

just feel my womb explode again deep in my belly when i get a sudden

nipple suck like this. your womb is shattered and suddenly this pure

pleasure bolt makes the sharttered pieces shatter even more making your

mind white out with pure ecstacy. when a woman collapses on me like

this i will pull tight and suck what i can reach as my hands stroke and

press down into me.

// sigh, i love their post coital time of gentle kisses and caresses as

they bask in new love. i am smiling as jamilah is surprised when laura

talks of making love again after a short rest. having only fucked men

jamilah is surprised that more intense pleasure is only a short time

away. just another advantage of fucking women. we can fuck so much

longer and better than only the best of men. our bodies were made for

long fucking and mulitple orgasms over a night of intense fuckng. after

a little cigartte back for jamilah starts the next round of fucking

[Laura pulled her back down on the bed and kissed her joyously, hugging

her hard, pushing their naked bodies together fervently. "I can't keep

my hands off you, you sexy thing," she breathed, again sucking Jamilah's

lovely black neck and shoulders, squeezing her breasts, dropping her

lips to them.] i so love pulling your body to me and twining arms and

legs like this as we once more thrusts tongues down each other's throats

before starting to consume each other's bodies again in hot love.

exploring again a body you have just discovered. feeling our sweat

slicked bodies squirming and getting those sudden lurches as bodies

slide quickly on wet flesh before clutching hands and digging fingers

mate bodies tight in twined humping love as cunts and pelvises pump

against anything they can press.

// i love how jamilah has discovered how women know how to suck titties

nice and hard making them feel like [Jamilah smiled and shook her head.

"Shit, I love it. Makes my titties feel like they're gonna explode."]

now we get something else that only you show. laura has loved the front

of jamilah basically and now it is time to make love to jamilah's

wonderful back and some booty naturally. hehehe. you are the only

auhtor that i have ever read that shows loving all her women. i want to

love all of you and a woman's back is full of little ergenous zones that

make her cunt sopping wet and makes her asshole clench and spasm. oh

yeah, i love how you start the festivites [She maneuvered Jamilah onto

her stomach and began to rub her back, giving her the expert Laura

massage that soon involved kissing and rubbing her own naked breasts

against Jamilah's beautiful warm flesh. "Ohhhhh Laura . . . that

feels so wonderful," Jamilah purred drowsily. "You're fingers are magic.

If you keep it up, I might fall asleep."] i so love starting at your

hair line and working down to your rump. i love how jamilah is right

now swooning drowsily in love but soon i will have your writhing and

begging for me finish you off. hopefully, with my fingers and then my

tongue pistsoning up your clenching asshole.

// i love the long journey to jamilah's ass and how laura spends long

minutes kneading and kissing it making jamilah coo with happiness. i

love hearing a woman compliment her own body and love reading jamilah

admiting her booty is to die for. i really love experiencing this when

loving your body [Jamilah enjoyed it for a few minutes, and Laura knew

precisely how to make her enjoy it. She was enjoying it immensely

herself. And the thick musky odor of Jamilah's reawakened pussy was

beginning to drift up to her nostrils, letting her know that more sweet

fucking was only minutes away.] smelling your cunt and knowing that

sweet loving is only moments away. i so love the smell of a hot wet

cunt filling our love nest. i have to smile at jamilah's comments about

guys wanting to fuck her up her tight asshole. a beautiful ass is

simply made to be fucked and i can't blame the guys for whinning for

it. i have to snicker when jamilah shows her ignorance and claims that

anal sex is only painful and she won't allow it to happen. i love how

laura starts to seduce her to anal sex with letting her know that if

done right by a woman or a guy with actual skill she will simply die

from going to heaven from having her asshole ripping itself apart with

with pure heavenly anal orgasms that make you scream in ecstasy and

makes your body jackknife or pelvies vibrate like jello in pure heavenly

bliss. i like her telling jamilah that she knows a black woman who

finds anal sex to be "rad". you might not get her asshole the first

night or next times but with patience and love i find i can usually have

them soon on their knees and face pressed in the bed and both hands

pulling their ass cheeks apart cooing and begging for me to slip my big

cock into their tight sphincter and sliding up their spasming rectum.

// laura realizes that jamilah will need a few loving tyrsts to wear

down her silly resistence and knows how to get past this stage and back

to loving [Laura did not reply but spent the next several minutes slowly

fucking Jamilah's increasingly wet and tight little pussy with two

fingers while continuing to kiss, suck, and gently bite her lovely round

buns. Jamilah twisted and whinnied softly, her smooth buttocks clenching

each time Laura gingerly sank her teeth into the firm dark flesh.] i so

love pumping a tight wet pussy while i love her rump. i so love getting

my fingers all soaked in love juice and feel it running and dripping off

my hand. laura is a lot like me i see ["Oh, I'm even worse than you

think," Laura smiled, parting Jamilah's hard ass cheeks with the fingers

of one hand enough for her to wriggle her tongue down to Jamilah's

pretty little dark rosebud.] i know to see what the limits are. so

very often no is really just convince me. what is wrong wiht jamilah!!

she obviously loved having her rose bud rimmed and yet she is not ready

to give her asshole to laura. oh well. laura promises to not try and

seduce her asshole anymore. i know to back off and get you later. her

body told me she liked it and her reactions are more like this is not

right because man's world has brainwashed her. she is flirting in her

refusal. when i see this i so know that soon i will have what i want.

// i love seeing a new lesbian slut letting go [Jamilah melted. She

came into Laura's outstretched arms eagerly, letting herself be kissed,

then kissed more heatedly. Laura's hands were all over her breasts, then

the rest of her body. Jamilah's eyes glazed over, and her breath came

fast.] i so love this clutching love and passion. i really love how

how you show jamilah asking for some more trib action. women just

instinctively setup an atmosphere that makes us free to ask for what we

desire. the other may demure or back off but you don't feel like your

asking for to much or being intrusive. you know that your woman wants

to please you and everything is up to negiotation. i so love how you

always take your time in your loving ["Mmmmm," Laura grinned up at her,

holding one wet black bulb lightly between her teeth, "something to

remember me by tomorrow." Jamilah held Laura's head in both hands

and pushed her breast into Laura's mouth. "Don't think I'm ever going to

forget this." Laura sucked and Jamilah whimpered happily for

another minute.] i can take forever devouring your tits like this.

// by the gods i love your sex. you show it all!!! you show the hot

passionate fuck and now the slow sensual fuck [Laura then maneuvered her

own body so that she could do a little more scissors trib with Jamilah.

This time there was less urgency, less fresh wonder on Jamilah's part,

and more intention to simply enjoy it and milk every last sexual

sensation out of this peculiar practice. That being the case, Laura was

determined to help her enjoy it totally. This time they began

slowly, and Jamilah was a full participant, her eyes pulsing as they

held Laura's, her hips undulating rhythmically in a smoldering fuck

motion. Laura turned onto her side so that she could mash her wet cunt

even better into Jamilah's, and held Jamilah's long leg close to her

body, stroking Jamilah's smooth black calf and kissing her shin, feeling

the slow, sensual shivers pass through Jamilah's lovely young body as

the sexual fever began to rise.] i so love watching a newbie getting in

tune with her bodies natural desires and going for the brass ring like

here. i know i have spent long minutes in this kind of sensual scissor

fuck. just genlty grinding and sweeping our soaked cunts in love. we

leave such big wet spots as our pelvies and thighs get all slavered in

hot love juice. i really love the detail of getting on your side to jam

your cunt tight to hers and using that leg as an anchor to pump your

love into your woman's hot thrusting cunt. i can feel my eyes

fluttering here as i remember these sensual fucks of blissful fucking.

i love how it will kind of flow from on our backs to side to side as we

take turns leading and following and getting in perfect synch. getting

quiet and listening to our sodden cunts squinching and slurping against

each other and then letting our love coos once more fill the room.

// of course sooner or later it is time to ramp things up [Laura loved

it but could not stay in this position too long. She knew she might

never have more than this one night with the delicious Jamilah and could

not resist the urge to consume the girl completely. In only seconds they

were whimpering and grinding energetically, their pelvises undulating in

unison, their wet cunt lips and sopping crotch hairs sliding and

crunching together, their pulses racing wildly. Jamilah especially

seemed to let her true voracious lusts out this time, pumping back

vigorously into each of Laura's swirling thrusts, groaning and mewling

and letting her hands race over every part of Laura's body that she

could reach.] i love sensual but it is the ramping and passion that

truly makes sex so fucking divine. i really like how you detail their

cunt lips and crotch hairs grinding in hard love.

// one thing i have always adored about your writings is how you show

the flow of lovemaking. other authors only show the positon the women

start in. they never allow their women to move and change positons to

add that variation to fucking that moves sex into the realms of the

gods. first laura moves up and over and starts to kiss nad suck

jamilah's neck while mashing her tits. this makes my women simply whine

like the sluts they are as they writh underneath me in need. after this

laura goes for the love kill [Laura could feel every little dip and

rise, every little wavelet and surprising undulation in Jamilah's fresh

sexual response, every slightest indication that she was either closer

or not yet close enough to an ultimate meltdown. Jamilah twisted and

coiled under her, finally lying back and gazing up at Laura as Laura

herself rose to a perpendicular angle over her and began to slowly

grind-fuck Jamilah's pussy in deliberate swirling hip motions.] this is

one of my favorite positions as i often put one leg on my shoulder and

pump your cunt hard and tight. i love pumping your pelvis down hard

into the bed or floor spiking your cunt to mine. i want to feel

everything like laura does her. i want to make you grunt and moan and

feel the juices flowing and soaking everything underneath us.

// really like the observation that good ole clit sucking is the truest

way to love kill your women but when you sense that a trib orgasm is

possible one goes for it. i love how you show two women getting in sync

and reading each other's body as only women can truly do. that perfect

giving and taking that only women can truly do. laura being the teacher

leads herself and jamilah to perfect nirvana [Her small, firm breasts

swirled as she pumped back into Laura's grinding thrusts, the large

black circles of her nipples swirling too until Laura's fingers covered

them, scissoring and tweaking them as she accelerated the pace.

"Unhh! Unhh!" she heard herself panting as she fucked Jamilah, squeezing

the girl's lovely naked breasts with her fingers, twisting Jamilah's

damp, thick nipples, her own soft grunts mingling with Jamilah's gasps

and tight little whimpers. "Mnneee . . . mnneee . . ." "Oh

honey . . . are you going to come?" "Mnnneee . . . oh . . . oh

Laura . . . yes . . . oh yes . . ." "Oh . . . me too!"] i have

always sighed with perfect happiness when you detial a woman's breast

swirling on her chest during our fuck rhythms. plus, you are the only

author to truly show a woman doing more than one thing at once. only

you use your hands to love your women while fucking her with your cunt

or mouth. i would be denying my women so much if i didn't pump their

tits and scissor their nipples like laura here. only you show this and

i so thank you. of course, i love the love coo words that again only

you show. other authors only have their women make sounds during the

acutal orgasm and never, ever allow them to actually communicate to each

other while they fuck. i would shrivel up and die if sex was reduced to

this.

// i always love the detail of laura reaching down to open their cunt

lips to get as much inner cunt meat and clit grinding together as

possible. striving for as much pleasure as our bodies can produce. i

have always loved all the sounds of lovemaking ["Oh . . . come with me

now, honey . . . come with me now . . ." Laura panted to her, gyrating

more rapidly and roughly now, hearing the end of the bed hammer

sporadically against the wall as she pumped harder and harder.] give me

the sounds of beds rocking, springs singing and the sounds of cushions

being pushed around. i have always loved how you show the ramping of

sex. other authors just can't really catch this constant ramping up of

energy, passion and love like here [And Jamilah met her each step of the

way, gnawing her full lower lip, her eyes on fire as she pushed her

groin roughly up into each of Laura's thrusts. Their undulations became

sharper, more desperate. "Unnhhh . . . unhhhh!" Jamilah grunted

softly. "Auungghh!" Laura groaned. "Oh yes! Oh yes, honey!"

"Mnnnggeee! Oh!"] one thing you show so clearly is how most women get

more vocal and louder as the orgasm approaches. some are quieter and

you have to teach to let go but it is so fucking natural to go from

softer and gentler to more gutteral and louder and only you capture

this. one writer shows the volumn of lovemaking the only problem is he

starts with the end game volumn without showing the ramping and it seems

so unnatural to me when i read it.

// it is cute reading laura thinking they are going to have a perfectly

timed silmuteneouly orgasm but is a little disapponted when the timing

is not perfect. this has never bothered me at all. as long as we both

come that is the important thing. if silmutaneous, that is great but i

just want us to come like here [The orgasm that overtook Laura was

unlike any she had had for weeks, a glowing, swelling, radiant ember

that grew in intensity inside her womb until all her flesh was paralyzed

by the agonizing pleasure. It was so intense that she had to stop moving

and was only vaguely aware of Jamilah's continued gasping and thrusting

as she too hurtled for the finish line. And then she felt Jamilah

shudder, and heard her cry out, a more unguarded cry than before.

"Ohhnnggg! Mnnggeeeeee!" Jamilah wailed, her lovely supple black body

suddenly flipping and surging off the bed, still scissoring Laura's

groin and pumping furiously as an overwhelming climax shook her.

Somehow Jamilah's cries released Laura's own and she heard herself

groaning and whinnying as the last clenching force of her own orgasm

faded. "Unnnhhhh . . . ohnnnnn! Oh god . . . honey . . . here, hold me .

. . let me hold you," she gasped to Jamilah, twisting her body to

embrace the still shuddering girl, now sliding against her and kissing

her bare round shoulder as Jamilah continued to come.] i have exhulted

when one orgasm soon triggers the other like here. having a woman being

shattered against me can so quickly trigger mine if i'm close. i love

watching a woman striving to reach her own orgasm. all that striving

and huffing and chuffing and then seeing her face freeze and then being

ripped apart with those wild grimaces and cries of pure unadulteraded

pleasure as her womb rips itself apart deep in her belly. i'm just

smiling with all the groans and cries of ecstacy. i so love giving

voice to my pleasure and hearing my women do the same. then love the

beginning of your post coital time as you pull your woman close and

share your aftershocks. again this is someting only you really show.

other authors will have them get in each other's arms after a great fuck

but again no details to make it memorable and perfect for the reader.

only you give the details that makes sex wonderful. i am just thankful

to find one writer who has the skills and life experiences to show this.

// love how the chapter ends with jamilah being so sweetly innocently

surprised and oh so happy when laura tells her the night has just begun

and more intense hard fucking is soon to be had and jamilah is like a

little girl in the candy store. she is so fucking ready now. it is

obvious she is deeply moved by discovering the wonders of pussy and

lesbian loving. i know she will be finding herself girlfriends when she

gets home. laura has shown her the truth and i think jamilah has the

inner sense to listen to her true lesbian self and begin a wonderful

journey of self discovery. a girl can dream can't she.

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Chapter 295:

// sigh, i have to feel for laura here. she is still all torn up over

makeeda not calling. i have to give credit to laura for keeping her

love burning for makeeda. i would be saying fuck the bitch and she

would have to come back to me on her knees. i really, really hate

rejection and the bitchy 'tude. i am very happy though to see that

laura is getting some loving from amber and arthell. i am really happy

with arthell getting more pussy. i remember her first time she sounded

like this was a one time thing. now i see her hungering for more

pussy. i can just see arthell looking up over laura's humping twat and

making that smoky eye contact as she clamps those beautiful thick lips

on laura's swollen, throbbing clit and sucking super hard while laura is

screaming and thrashing around in a crushing orgasm of searing fucking

bliss. i can just see arthell's head bobbing up with those hard humps

and her face all slavered in cunt cream for her to lick and swipe off

and savor as it travels to her stomach. i just wish laura could bask in

these divine fucks and her masturbation in pure joy instead of being

conflicted. makeeda is supposed to bring joy to the woman in her life

and not this pain. she is being so selfish as far as i'm concerned and

i'm impressed that laura continues to hold one and still giving makeeda

more chances to come to her senses. i would be so fed up by now. there

is always more fish in the sea to fuck and love.

// finally, makeeda calls and laura only feels pure joy at hearing her

voice and is totally honest and effusive in her support and praise of

makeeda and her efforts in japan. i have loved laura for being able to

be so positive no matter how negative the situations can be at times.

she is tougher than me. i have to admit as pissed as i am at makeeda

for her actions hearing the weariness in voice would start me to

thawing. i so hate hearing women who are beat down by whatever. i just

want to hold and coo to them. heck, it isn't even sexual all the time.

i just want to protect and nurture. then, of course, once i do get you

bucked back up i would like some hot steamy pussy but that truly is

secondary to helping an angel in need. i do have to smile great big as

laura is so bubbly over the prospect of meeting makeeda who is coming

into town and wants to meet her. i always have to smile at such

positive emotions.

// have to smile again as laura gets so super excited over seeing

makeeda. i know that feeling of elation and butterflies seeing a lover

i haven't seen in a while. i get giddy over renewing our love with

super hot fucking. laura does what i like to do. she sees makeeda

first and gazes upon her without makeeda knowing. i remembering reading

that there are three truths. the one i see, the one you see and the

real truth. i love gazing at women when they don't know i'm watching

them. seeing the truth that doesn't involve me. laura feels the love i

always feel with a woman i love [this impossibly elegant woman with a

spectacular body, with her rich smooth dark mahogany skin, whose face

was unusual, plain at first, then animated and compelling as soon as she

turned those startling hazel eyes on you.] i only focus on the things i

find alluring about you and soon nothing else matters. i am totally

besotted with you and must love you. why focus on any of the

negatives. all of us are beautiful if we only look hard enough (okay,

i'm not perfect in this but i try).

// i like reading of laura and her love for makeeda. makeeda may of

have been acting like a bitch but i will forgive quickly if you will

just let me. once i am in your presence i want to forget the past and

embark upon the future and once more renew our love for each other.

sure is a shame that in man's world one has to be careful as they

embrace and can't show to much passion in front of others in most

situations. hopefully, one day we shall overcome. sigh, i see makeeda

is still being frosty dammit as laura hums the song makeeda left on her

voice mail. i know when laura hums a song she is feeling deep emotions

and she is truly in love with makeeda. i would cringe and seethe a

little with makeeda's "tight" smile. i would be thinking "come on girl,

drop this shit". aha!! finally something i can sink my logic into.

makeeda confesses she really, really missed laura in japan but she

thinks it best they separate. i bet she is afraid that her love for

laura will interfere with her career as a singer. this i can

understand. one's dreams can really give one tunnel vision. i have

tried to not be guilty of this but i have seen in others. hopefully,

laura can overcome this fear. lets see.

// laura does what i would do. i will try and avoid conflict but if

the time calls for it and i care enough i will make you prove you don't

want me. makeeda shows she cares enough to confront laura and i always

think that if this happens they really want to be seduced out of their

silliness. it is time for battle. she calls makeeda bluff so to speak

and we see what i hope and long to see. i think makeeda was hoping for

capitulation and laura's resistance startles her and we see the pain she

is feeling in acting like this. when i see this i know they want me and

i must only find the key and unlock their heart and then overwhelm them

with love and passion and then really, really fuck them senseless in our

bed until she is besotted with ecstasy and love. make them love you

even more than before. makeeda hardens and it is cool to watch laura

considering her options. i do this too. though, i am more calculating

than laura is in this situation i think. i have prized my ability to

think quick, though i will admit that a few times over the years i have

been overwhelmed or just not sure what the hell to do at the precise

moment. then you flow and try and recover. here laura is stunned and

left temporary speechless.

// i see this is a good tactic because makeeda is a nice person when

she listens to her heart. seeing laura like this makes her confess she

is very distressed over this situation. it is humorous to read their

stilted, pained conversation as makeeda tries to break up and laura is

not making it easy for. yeah for laura. finally, laura vents and

blasts makeeda for being so mean and dishonest to be denying their

love. she starts to curse her with her given name. i like how you show

sometimes you just don't know what it is that will make your woman melt

for you. sometimes i have had to just grope around almost blindly and

then stumble upon the key like here ["Laura . . . Laura . . . stop . .

." she laughed and cried. "I forgot . . . I forgot I told you that

name." She gurgled too, like Laura, and wiped the tears off her cheeks

with one hand. "I never tell anyone that name. Oh, stop it . . .

please!"] like i say, it is cute to read but not so nice to experience

until you can look back on it and laugh together after a night of

intense soul stirring fucking that heals and binds souls once more.

arguments can and do lead to some really intense lovemaking. making up

is so nice and healthy. i just don't want to overdose on it. my nerves

couldn't take it.

// i have to smile at laura's declarations of "i hate you" and "i can't

stop seeing you". i know i have gotten maudlin from time to time with

my own melodrama but i do try and not breakdown like this. i have felt

both admiration and loathing when i see women who feel free to show this

vulnerability. i am trying to get better but i really hate to get hurt

on that soul deep level. but sometimes you must venture your true

essence to truly acquire something of worth. like laura here getting

what she so desperately desires and needs [She gulped and was unable to

go on. They were clutching each other desperately, both suddenly

realized. Then they were kissing hungrily, not caring who might see

them. Laura could taste her tears and Makeeda's at the same time. Their

teeth banged together hard.] i guess once joann and i had a real barn

burner and we finally came together like this. she and maria have

taught me that being vulnerable is okay, i just don't want to go there

too often. i need to be loved and pampered and not hurt by the women i

truly give my heart too.

// i like reading laura using a joke about makeeda's swimming to reduce

the tension and let love flow as they kiss hungrily again. letting

their tongues and shared spittle cement their true love for each other.

dodie and i bitch a lot at each other and when we make up we simply wear

each other's fuck holes completely out. makes for heated fucking let me

tell you. we pluck each other's nerve but we never hurt each other on

that soul deep level that truly hurts. i have a big goofy smile as they

hungrily plan to meet at laura's place after work to have some intense

hard fucking to ripe their wombs apart in shared love and ecstasy. i

see that laura is like me in that when she gets nervous or wants the

time to fly she immerses herself in her work. often i look up at the

clock and suddenly see it is time to go home and i wonder where the time

went to. i know that nervous twitch in laura's belly when she meets

makeeda at her place of work so makeeda can follow her home. that

feeling of euphoria that makes you twitch and your breath sort of exhale

from your body as you think of the wonderful fucking that is soon to

happen when you get back to your love nest. i so love gently stroking

my nipples and twat through my clothing getting them thrumming and ready

for our heated fucking to come. a few times i got carried away and

nearly killed myself when i made myself come while driving. you think

you can drive and have an orgasm at the same time but it is very, very

hard trying to steer and see the road when your eyes are bugging out of

your head and your clenching the steering wheel for dear life while your

screaming your head off and suppressing jackknifes so as not to kill

yourself. makes for powerful orgasms though, when you know you have to

control it. makes my eyes feel like they are going to explode out my

sockets. needless, to say i don't do that anymore.

// i like how you show that you never really know how you love will

manifest itself. they both desire to fall on each other like starving

wolves once inside laura's home but decide to hold off for a little

while to let their libidos heat up some more with warm juices of love

percolating. it is nice seeing them declaring their adore for each

other but makeeda is honest enough to tell laura that she really tried

to break away from laura. makeeda wants a career and fears laura might

deflect her. i think that laura is too loving and honest to do that.

if laura commits to makeeda it will be all the way and not make makeeda

have to choose between laura and fame. i think laura is realizing that

she will have to share makeeda with the jazz world if makeeda succeeds.

laura is open and loving enough to do this i think. wow, i have to love

the song. i am a sap for any song that sings of pure and untainted

love. i guess makeeda is expressing her feelings through her craft. i

am just happy that makeeda is finally verbalizing her true feeling for

laura. no more of this frosty manner please.

// i really like how you show the wit of laura [Laura said, very

evenly, softly, pointedly, with a broad smile: "Damn you, Cynthia

Brickus, I love you too."] if you have a sense of wit one should always

use it in moderation. most women melt for a woman who is funny and

witty. i now like how you show those moments of just letting your

feelings and lust go and not knowing exactly where your lips and hands

will travel next [Now there was no way they could keep their hands off

each other. Except for this afternoon in the roof garden, they had not

kissed for over a month, and they tried to make up for lost time.

Laura's lips were all over every part of Makeeda's exposed skin, sucking

her neck, nipping her earlobes, kissing her throat, her upper chest, her

collarbones. Makeeda tried to do the same, though Laura was wearing a

turtleneck sweater, which exposed little.] other authors always make

things seem so pre scripted. of course many times you have a very good

idea of your goals but many times when you first come together you do

have this wild melding of kissing, sucking, nipping and groping that

only you capture. i want to feel all of you and what the same from

you. i want us twining arms and legs as we pull each other tight and

grip tight while mouths consume exposed flesh.

// have to smile at how humor can pop anywhere. they are desperately

shucking their clothes while still trying to caresses flesh at it is

exposed (which i so love to do) and they both break up laughing when

they realize what is the hurry. i can see that humor. they do have all

night but fuck hunger will make a girl in a hurry for her tender red wet

cunt meat. i so love falling on a angel taking her clothes off and

finishing the job while i consume her body with feverish kisses and

caresses. i need you so badly. of course i am smiling great big when

makeeda confesses she masturbated most nights about laura while in

japan. i have so often smirked when women tell me at first they have

never masturbated. there are some but please. we were all horny

teenagers once. i so love playing with my kitty, tits and asshole and

my body in general. i'm not conceited but i do love my body and love

making it sing with soul crushing orgasms brought on by my own hand and

toys. as much as i fuck i still make sure to masturbate frequently. i

have many great lovers but still, no one knows my body as well as me. i

so love bringing myself off and i give many a show for my angels.

watching a woman pleasure herself is so fucking hot. i love getting a

woman who claimed to have never masturbated to jacking herself off

before me by her own hand. it doesn't take a woman long to love

masturbating for an audience i have found.

// i'm happy that laura is not jealous of the ghost of makeeda's former

love and i smirk at makeeda having to tell some guys what team she plays

for. i find most guys are cool about it or skittish but a few really

feel they are meant to show me the truth. i may get some strange with

dodie and frankie if i get crazy but please. the rest i love toying

with and turning their words back on them and making them confused and

frustrated. it is fun watching them get flustered. they can't

intimidate me because i'm taller than most of them and they see i'm buff

and know how to use it. hehehe. sometimes it is like teasing little

boys. to bad makeeda passed up the chance for some gash in japan. i

never turn down the opportunity for pussy when it is offered. i'm

always afraid my destiny might change. i believe in getting all i can

all the time. i'm just happy that laura is her archangel. with a body

like makeeda one should be fucking each and every night or at least

masturbating a couple a times a night.

// oh geez, head lulling time [Also, by now Makeeda was down to her

underwear, all black, and looking devastatingly sexy. Her black bra was

hanging limply from her shoulders, barely still covering her breasts.

Carefully, she and Laura lay her sheath dress across the back of a

chair. This movement made the bra finally slide off, down her forearms

and off her wrists onto the floor. She was now naked except for her

panties.] only you capture those moments of beauty being exposed to

your lustful eyes. i so love how you capture these wondrous moments of

body's being exposed. i know my cunt would have spasm hard and my mouth

would get that drooling feeling as her tits were exposed as her bra

finally slides off. thank you for these magical moments. i am there as

laura grapes makeeda's divine body and starts to kiss and knead it

hungrily. i get so filled with fuck hunger as your body is exposed to

me and i see all that wonderful flesh to consume and love. i see

makeeda is like me in that she wants everyone to get naked as soon as

possible. i just love being nude and fucking exuberantly. i want all

our skin pressing together.

// i love that image of them embracing and mashing their tits hard

against each other flattening them out as nipples dig and rub. of

course i love any mention of masturbating and especially like laura

using the description of her frigging off to get makeeda all hot and

bothered. i love telling my angels of recent hot fucks and masturbating

to get their engines revving and their juices flowing. i like your cute

style of having laura say i am going to do this or that to her woman and

the reader only hears the gasped and moaned pleasure of the woman

receiving the pleasure. this lets the reader fill in all the hot

details from their own lives to fill in. i think this helps draw the

reader in. i like how your writing is so varied and stylish. i always

love the detail of laura feasting on swollen nipples and warm breast

flesh and making her women weak in the legs and their pussies run fuck

juice down their thighs. i love seeing love juice trickling down my

women's thighs and slavering their pelvis. it just makes them glisten

like angels of love.

// i have always adored your beautiful visual of interracial lovers

[They bounced eagerly together onto the mattress and bottom sheet.

Makeeda's body was dark brown and gloriously shaped against the pristine

white of the fabric. Oh god, I'm going to come just from looking at you!

Laura thought, absurdly but very passionately.] their is nothing more

beautiful than this contrast for my money. i love them getting naked

and gasping their words of hot love and then doing that full body clench

i so love ["Mmmm, come here and hug me. Let me feel all of you . . . all

of this incredible body against me. I dreamed of this. Hold me and fuck

me and never let me go." Laura was indeed in heaven. She and

Makeeda embraced head to toe and kissed and rubbed their warm bodies

together for a mere eternity, each of them savoring every scintilla of

emotion and physical connection. Their deep confluence was so intense at

this moment that Laura feared they both might be overwhelmed by it.] i

so love pulling a lover tight and feeling our flesh heating as it

coils. feeling our legs twining as arms pull tight and tongues plunge

deep into each other's mouth and our twats start humping and grinding

each other or thigh, belly or pelvis as our cunts start that instinct

rhythm of love.

// i love the words of archangels declaring their love for each other.

once you find a special woman to share with you should always let her

know just how special you think she is. we always try to make sure we

give each other plenty of praise and love words at our home. i like

seeing them really showing their love for each other like this. i'm not

the best but i try and let my archangels know just how much i love and

need them. i have to smile at makeeda lightening the mood a little with

her playfully admonishing about "fucking" and laura telling it like i

feel; loving and fucking are the same when archangels are involved. the

emotional adds so much to the fucking.

// wow, i really like what i'm seeing now. makeeda really enjoyed

laura playing with her asshole during their last fuck and know she

requests that laura digitally fuck her during their sex tonight. oh

yeah, i love any kind of anal sex. not all women like anal sex and

while i try and educate some just can't seem to get over it like

makeeda's former lover it seems. i love all of our bodies and want it

all. like laura i am always testing my new lovers to see what their

limits are and to see if i can get them to expand their horizons as i'm

willing to expand mine. they banter about this, which again only you

show. other authors either have no communication what so ever or their

lovers just always fuck in perfect sync from a script. only you show

real life women communicating and expressing their desires and wishes

and that sometimes negotiating that lovers do figuring out what the

limits are and how their lovemaking will progress. i like how makeeda

thinks ["I will," Makeeda smiled. "I'll come back for more, if nothing

else."] have to agree that when you tell each other just how your going

to fuck your lover that it is a powerful aphrodisiac that makes the

blood boil with lust as your lover then does exactly what she said she

would do.

// i so love your gentle humor like laura telling makeeda she can say

love or fuck but laura is "I am going to eat you alive. You decide what

to call it." only you show the mirth and teasing of lovers. i so love

watching laura devouring makeeda's nipples and makeeda whimpering for

harder and deeper. women so love to have their titties loved hard. i

am swooning a little as laura announces that she is going to worship

makeeda's hard body. i so love kissing, licking and nipping a woman

with a toned or hard body. it is kind of rare that i just luxuriate in

worshipping it. i love seeing laura's fires burning hotter as she

worships this goddesses hard body [As usual, Laura lusted for the whole

woman, and she now spent a luxurious eternity kissing Makeeda's

incredible hard stomach, letting her lips trace every ripple and nuance

of muscle, feeling the soft invisible down that covered Makeeda's richly

brown skin, letting her tongue dance around the girl's odd and alluring

navel, a nubby jewel of flesh nestled in its own sculptured cavity. ] i

love all bodies of course but i still worship at dodie, stacy, and

polly's sculpted muscles. other lovers have nice toned body but muscles

have a special allure all their own. we are not like brandy but we can

flex and pose and make women gasp with our muscles suddenly in relief.

makes them want to be completely fucked silly by us. you are the only

author to really give us the detail of feeling a woman's downy hairs and

how cute and special it is to rub your cheek against it.

// like how makeeda puts a pillow behind her head and watches the

show. this is something i like to do. it is like a free porno movie.

i just love watching laura kiss all of makeeda's wonderful muscles and

as she is loving her stomach, belly button and ribs and then gets her

hands underneath her butt and starts squeezing her ass cheeks. again

only something you show. this has always been a big kick for me.

squeezing a woman's ass as i kiss her lower body and especially when i'm

devouring her cunt and clit. just squeezing and helping her hump my

face as i really squeeze on the upthurst to get her twat bucking hard

into my starving mouth and flailing tongue. oh yes, now it is time for

back worship that you really helped me learn to focus on [She coaxed

Makeeda over onto her stomach and began kissing the girl's fantastic

back as well as her hard, jutting buns. Though their souls already

seemed knotted together, Laura remembered that they had done this only

once before, and that the magnificence of Makeeda's body was endlessly

fascinating and arousing. She lavished the same sweet attention on

Makeeda's dark brown, muscular back and her jutting ass that she had

shown the front of her body, and soon Makeeda was moaning and twisting

under her, no longer wry and relaxed but now panting and eager for Laura

to turn up the heat.] i love working from the hair line down to her ass

and exploring every square centimeter with my lips and tongue and

impaling her asshole on my tongue and fingers if she is so inclined. i

love my lovers who are really wet and turning them over and finding a

big wet spot and their groins making those little spidery tendrils of

love juice between them and sheets before they break as i completely

turn them over.

// more teasing with laura saying cynthia brickus and makeeda whining

to stop it. geez, i really love your mirth and humor. i mean this as a

high compliment but i so love the fact that laura is such a slut. a

woman should always go for the most pleasure giving and receiving. i am

so happy to see laura being willing to give the anal sex that makeeda's

former lover was too squeamish to really give freely and completely. a

complete giving that makes your woman melt with love for you. makeeda

has requested some digital love but laura [She pulled Makeeda's firm

round cheeks open with her fingers and pushed her face between them

quickly, knowing that Makeeda indeed was already fiercely aroused and

would welcome this happy assault. "Unnhhh . . . oh! Unhhhh!"

Makeeda groaned, her amazing buttocks clenching. With her thumbs

Laura pried open the tight, shriveled little aperture, then quickly

wriggled her tongue into the snug, warm cavity, pushing it in as far as

she could. Having felt it herself, she knew how Makeeda would

react. "Ungghh! Mnnnnggeeee! Oh! Oh . . . god . . . Laura!"] i so

love taking a woman's asshole with my tongue. i so love working through

her tight spinchter and feeling it gripping my tongue as i start pumping

my head to drive my long tongue deep up her rectum. yumm!!!! i so love

reading your anal sex. only one other author really explores this sex

but again he makes it bland. he just basically says that the woman

starts fucking her asshole with her tongue. only you give me the

details of having to pry apart a woman with fleshy buns and then burying

your face deep in that hot, moist crack and smelling her essence.

feeling a woman's cheeks quivering and clenching in your fingers and

then on your cheeks as you dive for goodies. and no one but you ever

tells of using your fingers to pry open that apeture to help get it

loose so your tongue can start pumping and licking its tasty treats.

and especially those squeals you so often get as your tongue first

teases her rosebud and then as it slides through and massages her

rectum. only you give me all the wondrous details. again all i can say

is thank you for the details that make sex so supremely wonderful.

// sigh, something else only you really capture is hearing and feeling

your woman simply dying from the pleasure you are giving her. with your

wondrous details of makeeda whooping, clenching and writhing we so

clearly see her body infused with rapturous pleasure. this is what i

want to see in my woman [It was a sensation Makeeda had clearly never

felt before, and she quivered and moaned happily, finally becoming so

aroused, jouncing and squirming around, that Laura was afraid she indeed

might come after all.] i love how you show more than the actual sex act

like laura digging her fingers into makeeda's ass as she pumps her

tongue hard and deep. i so love gripping and kneading an ass that i am

fucking. i am always happiest when i feel your body getting the

instinctive fuck rhythm and i feel you humping back up into my plunging

tongue. i love how your sex just flows so naturally. other authors

always seem to focus on one thing while you show the flow of great sex

here laura turns makeeda over and discovers [All these preliminaries had

aroused Makeeda's pussy to the point where it was now swollen and

puckered, the wavy black lips shiny with juice and parted to reveal the

glistening wet pink flesh within. Makeeda's large clit was now pushing

out from it's black hood. Everything was ready for Laura's love assault,

she knew. ] i know i have done my job when my foreplay and body loving

has reduced her cunt to a swollen, red, wet pit of love waiting to be

devoured.

// love hearing their declarations of love and laura upping the heat

with a clear statement of intent ["Lie back, my darling, and let me love

you and fuck you to heaven," she murmured.] always love seeing my women

part their thighs for me to settle between and devour. geez, only you

capture the magical moments of first contact and or penetration [The

next few moments were a hot blur for both of them. Makeeda's eyes rolled

up as Laura's mouth touched her swollen, flowing pussy, and a tight

whimper caught in her throat just as Laura's lubricated finger slid

slowly but steadily up into her rectum. "Unhhhhh! Oh!"] other

authors just blandly have it happen where my clit jumped and my nipples

harden and tingled a little when i read this. only you catch these

moments of magic. i just sigh and judder when i feel you lips first on

my pussy and i feel anything penetrating my pussy or asshole. love how

you make clear this magical moment but show how this magical moment must

quickly give way to more heated fucking of pussy sucking and anal

probing. love how you make clear that laura is turning up the heat my

moving makeeda's clit hood back and starting to love suck it. then you

give us [At the same instant she began rotating her finger inside

Makeeda's ass and then sliding it more quickly in and out, fucking her

gently, then more roughly and insistently, then sucking her bulbous

clit, filled with glorious lust and happiness as she felt and heard

Makeeda go completely out of control as a result of this sharp love

assault.] one other author talks of good anal sex but no details

again. i sure wish he would give me the details like this. i so love

feeling my angel twisting and pumping that finger up my ass making me

clench and whimper and moan.

// i have always loved your dialog with makeeda whimpering and groaning

which only you show and laura love taunting her with making her beg.

only you communicate during sex while other authors only let them scream

a little during orgasm. how sad. really love the detail of watching

your lover's body clenching and jumping as you get her closer to orgasm

and watching makeeda's fingers get that nervous twitching and roaming as

they seek more pleasure. i really love watching my woman's fingers

latch onto her nipples and twisting and pulling up and making them

stretch and pull taunt and seeing her back arch and body quiver as she

groans hard and humps harder. i love watching a woman pleasure

herself. sometimes i will take those hands and place on my scalp and

she gets the message and digs in and pumps my face hard into her hard

pumping cunt. i so love feeling you jerking my head hard and tight into

your hard humping cunt. help me tickle your womb with my tongue.

// i so love those long minutes of just devouring your woman's cunt

[The two of them had lapsed into a constant rhythm, a constant pumping

and gyrating motion, that Laura knew meant the end was near. The rhythm

accelerated. Makeeda gasped and grunted softly, pumping harder. Her

incredible body strained and arched up off the mattress. Laura sucked

and tongued her fat hard clit, fucking her ass even harder with her

greased finger, sliding it in deep when Makeeda's pelvis rose off the

bed, skewering her with it. "Auunnrrrggghhh!" Makeeda groaned.] i

love this time of tongue fucking her cunt and then languidly licking her

pussy slow and deep feeling out her hidden folds and then working out

and sucking and licking her outer lips and worrying her lips and

stretching out if they let me. then slowly sliding up and loving her

swollen clit. sucking hard or soft, tonguing fast or slow and maybe

gently nibbling. of course here we get the additional thrill of a

finger fucking a clenching, quivering asshole hard and fast. pulling

that finger out to suck clean and worm back in. sex doesn't get any

better than this.

// now makeeda falls into one of her jonelle type orgasms. they are

super strong like mine but she does seem to slip into some trance like

state that i have never seen of just deep wondrous star journeying.

dammit, i want some. but i do have that super stiffening of my body at

times where i just get so fucking rigid as my heels pound the bed and my

fingers try to tear the mattress a part as a million sex volts rip my

womb to shreds and make my muscles try to quiver off my bones. my

breath just hisses between clinched teeth as my eyes spasm in the back

of my head and my cunt spasms out hot bolts of come that make me vibrate

as those hot gushing bolts soak my woman's face with hot come. i so

know that feeling of feeling my sphincter doing this [Laura could feel

the girl's tight rectum spasming on her deeply embedded finger. Maybe

she was imagining it, but she thought she could feel the rubbery little

bulb of Makeeda's clit throbbing against her tongue too.

"Auunngghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Makeeda groaned, a soft, constant,

tortured groan, her face grimacing as wave after wave of intense coming

wracked her body, which alternately stiffened, then fell back in larger

undulations, then stiffened again for another shockwave.

"Ohhnnnggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" she moaned.] i like how only you

really describe that clit getting super hard and feeling it throb as her

pulse hammers through it. other authors just say she comes without

showing the reader what happens to a woman's body during her actual

orgasm. then the divine groans of a woman coming hard. i so love

groaning out hard and screaming loud during my orgasms. i so often

scream myself momentarily hoarse during sex. generally, i do have those

super powerful spasms that just rip my soul apart with pure divine

pleasure. i just wish i could have the number of spasms makeeda had

here and then just swooning for what must be a few minutes of intense

bliss. dammit, i want this for myself. what can i say, i'm a greedy

slut.

// love how you show that backing off you do when you woman is coming.

most women can't take a lot of clit stimulation while their orgasm is at

its peak and only you show that backing off a little to not over

stimulate. only you show gently holding that clit and maybe gently,

gently sucking or tongue lathing and reducing any penetration you are

doing. then we see why makeeda is so special. she has five or six!!

major spasms and then a ton of aftershocks. that is just unfair. i

want some. oh well, i'm happy for her and jonelle. i so love your post

coital time [Laura carefully slid her finger out and released Makeeda's

clit from her lips. She slipped up next to her, kissing her cheek,

gently massaging her breasts, waiting for her to surface from this

cataclysm of rapture.] i love taking you in my arms and holding you

close as i love coo and kiss and stroke your body. i am smiling as

makeeda tells laura that first she makes her love her and then she seals

the deal with out of this world sex. i know how to capture women with

this kind of sex. so many het women are missing so much. i feel so

sorry for women and heck men who have only known one lousy lover. they

never got the experience to develop into great loves.

// now you show so clearly how the woman recovering suddenly feels her

strength recovering and now needs some of her woman. laura is suddenly

on her back and makeeda is now taking control which i so love for my

women to do. i see that makeeda wants laura to wash her mouth out. i

have to smile since we love to kiss after some annalinglus and she would

be shocked with our atm action. not all my angels are into this but the

ones i love the most are. i guess birds of feather flock together. i

know those little moments of magic emotion as you and your archangel

bond a little closer. i like how laura tells makeeda ["By the way," she

purred into Makeeda's beautifully shaped bare shoulder, "I don't think

it's a 'bad' place. I think it's a yummy place. Anyway, you almost came

while I was doing it. I had to stop."] with my more conservative lovers

i am always trying to educate them to be more open thinking. i am

always so happy when i get a woman to start giving me her asshole.

starting with my tongue and fingers and soon my cock and then hopefully

making her a complete nasty whore as slip my cock out her ass and watch

her turn around and start slurping and licking my cock before sucking it

for all she is worth and down her throat if she has the talent.

// i love the observation how intense fucking can marry with genuine

affection and love and make the sex so stunning. women who are actually

deep lovers can share like this [but Makeeda's lips, Makeeda's fingers,

her smooth skin sliding across Laura's, her soft murmuring, her tongue,

her breath, all of it seemed to combine to draw Laura down into a

whirling hot storm of passion and intense emotion that made her barely

conscious of what was happening to her body other than to feel the

throbbing hunger that seemed to swell up inside her.] like how you show

that loving can be slow and sensuous as makeeda makes smoky eye contact

as she devours with slow focus laura's little doves. other authors just

have them fuck while you show the frenzied and the slow simmering love

making. i love seeing that focused loving that makes you think you're

going to come just from having your tits sucked well. now you show how

lovers move in lovemaking. something again only you really show ["Mmmm,

making you come is my best song," Makeeda grinned. She slid a little

lower on Laura's body, kissing the firm, silky sweep of Laura's abdomen

and her flat belly, but then kissing her way back up again. "I want that

lovely pink passion flower in my mouth . . . but first I want this," she

purred. "I've been thinking of it for weeks."] other authors always

have their move south and never back north.

// now you have makeeda initiating some nice trib action which i so

dearly love reading and sadly find so rare else where. i like it when

lovers lead me like makeeda here making laura happy to have someone else

initiate beside herself. makeeda knows what she is doing and soon they

are [The only sound was their panting and the soft, rhythmical noises

the bed made as they surged into each other. But their eyes remained

locked, and flowing between them was all the intense feeling and

piercing sexual need they had stored up during their time apart. It was,

Laura reflected, perhaps the sweetest and most intimate way to fuck,

their hot, slippery, aching cunts sliding together, their fingers

fluttering across each other's legs, their sexual desperation beginning

to show in their faces, in their eyes. I am going to come, Laura

realized. I don't know if she is, but I am certainly going to come. Any

second.] sigh, nothing is more perfect than two wet sodden cunts

mashing and grinding together in wet slippery love. i can just feel

that heavenly mashing and squishing of my clit as our cunts grind hard

together. one thing about trib is you often can make that smoky eye

contact and let your love just spark and inspire harder grinding and

humping.

// i have always loved how you show that ramping of sex and then going

for the finish line. a great lover like makeeda senses the end game and

starts mashing hard and being aggressive. i see makeeda likes what i

like and gets vertical over laura and starts grinding down for all she

is worth. she then decides to get down and starts grinding almost face

to face to get up close and personal. i like to use the spoken word to

add heat to the fucking like here ["Come, baby, go ahead . . . come home

to Mama . . . come now . . . come home to Mama . . ." she panted to

Laura, synchronizing the grinding of their pelvises to bring the maximum

pleasure to her, to make Laura come, as Laura was only micro-seconds

from doing.] i have seen women eye's just flare and suddenly they are

coming wildly under me just from hearing hot loving words like this. i

so love reading laura's crushing orgasm and attendant screams of

rapture. i so love hearing my women screaming from the fucking i have

been giving them. love how they continue to softly fuck and this

produces one more nice hard spasm of coming. i so love getting that one

last spasm of purest heaven.

// you never cease to amaze me how you show all the variations of

lovemaking. they do share a brief time of languid post coital but the

heat quickly starts to return with laura almost immediately getting

heated again and starts to kiss all of makeeda's upper body. she is

hungry for more loving. i have to love reading makeeda telling laura

how fast she makes her come and even come fast while masturbating

thinking of laura. that kind of talk just makes me preen and feel so

good. i love how verbal makeeda is in telling laura all this. lovers

should always share like this. the spoken word just adds so much to

one's lovemaking ["Mmmm, I'm going to make you come twice again," Laura

murmured, suddenly aggressive again, rolling Makeeda onto her back,

moving her own body half on top of her. All this talk had recharged her

sexual juices, even though she had just had a thrilling set of climaxes.

"Maybe three times . . . or four." Makeeda looked solemnly, deeply,

into Laura's eyes. "I believe you could."] i thank you for having you

women do more than just scream out at orgasm. of course i want that,

especially the way you give it but only you allow your women to

communicate during the lovemaking.

// i love how only you capture the romantic in sex. other authors are

so bland that you can't really get any feel beside their words of their

shared love but they don't show it in the actual lovemaking. sex has so

many flavors and they don't show any of them. one author does you the

sledgehammer approach to his sex that gets me going by sheer brute force

but it is always the frantic, wild lust of great animalistic sex of

women on the score. you show how after their initial fucks, laura and

makeeda now fall into that mode where you move at a more languid pace

and with archangels you do feel that emotional connection that once more

binds you tightly to your woman(s). without the other things beyond sex

you can't really have an archangel. you must love and more importantly

like and cherish the person. pure sex is great but that alone will not

keep you bound to a woman. you show this with laura and her

archangels. now makeeda and laura are letting their emotion percolate

to the surface and this produces [They had pleasured each other in

sequence, but now they swarmed over each other without a definite plan,

simply taking deep delight in the feel of their warm smooth flesh

rubbing, their mouths literally drinking each other. There was no

urgency, no sharp need, but an awareness that they were flowing together

as they had never done up to this moment, more intimate, more intensely

connected, their bodies moving in unison, their breathing rhythmical and

harmonious, their physical needs closely calibrated so that their sexual

temperatures were rising in tandem to the same levels.] i love how you

show that flow of just loving what comes in range of your mouth and

hands. falling into that near perfect sync of intense mated fucking.

// oh yeah, i have to love this next part as laura gets on her knees

and straddles makeeda's tummy and spread's her cunt lips and presses her

warm wet cunt on makeeda's nice hard stomach. i so love this kind of

trib. all that expanse to mash and grind my soaking cunt on. i love

just sweeping in a grinding motion to just below your ribs and then down

to your lower belly and setting up that back and forth motion. i just

love being able to grind my clit for those long inches and feeling all

that friction as my cunt drags along gushing and spasming and i'm

grunting and thrashing. i so often have to grip my woman's ribs or love

mash her tits to stay anchored as i jam and trash and start whipping my

sweaty hair around and moaning hard. dodie will grab my hands and place

them on her heavy tits and i know to start love crushing and watching

her face grimace with intense pleasure as she grabs my hips and slams

her stomach up into my grinding sweeps. pure heavy let me tell you.

now you show that communication that leads ot the variation ot divine

fucking ["You like that, don't you," she purred to Laura. Laura's

eyes were rolling up, and she had to fight to bring herself back, to

answer. "I . . . love that," she panted. "Lean down a little,"

Makeeda said, running her hands over Laura's small, dangling breasts. "I

want these again."] only you show the communication of lovers

expressing and more important listening to each others desires. this

communication must occur for great lovemaking to occur and only show

it. we are not telepathic and need this communication to get our loving

in sync.

// i love how you tell of that rhythm that you fall into after the

first orgasms take the edge off and you fall into that more sensual fuck

that brings lovers closer and binds soul. you can now focus and fuck

with slow intense focus like laura and makeeda now. i love reading of

them falling into a trance of sweet fucking as laura sweeps her soaked

cunt up and down makeeda's hard stomach as makeeda love mauls her tits.

i really love having my tits sucked and squeezed while i am being

fucked. i love tribbing anything but having something i can just ride

makes me gag with pleasure. i love making your stomach glisten with my

juices and seeing them pool and then running down the sides of her

stomach. when i'm being ridden i want to feel your juices all over my

lower body and dribbling off me to make a nice wet spot. i know if i

was writing this i would finish this fuck because once i get going i

like to finish a trib fuck but you show often your woman will take you

in another direction. sometimes i will wail as my woman takes me in

another direction when i really want to continue on our set course but

it turns me on so much when i led by my woman by where she wants to go

and leads me by her will.

// one thing i have so loved about your writings is you show so much

more than the main fuck. here you show makeeda crawling onto laura

after throwing her on her back and mounting her to press her down into

the bed and is now sucking her neck and shoulder while love mauling her

tits. i can tell you that i have never really read this anywhere else.

maybe a little of this from the best but never the little details that

fill lesbian sex. other authors only focus on the tits, pussy and maybe

ass. their is so much more to love and only you show it. then you show

a little digital action which other authors with the exception of one

never show. yet again your writings are so beautifully unique in your

perfect pictures of mind blowing fucking. geez, we do so much of that i

only wonder why they don't show more of this great fucking. but makeeda

is primed and needs more direct contact [But both of them were becoming

so desperate to mash their hungry flesh together than even finger

fucking had to give way to their urgency, and after a few seconds

Makeeda was crouching over her, then crushing Laura against her hard

body in a fierce embrace, her large silky thigh between Laura's, her

thigh muscle rubbing directly into Laura's wet pussy, while Laura's

rubbed hers. This was the way Brandi had often fucked her, Laura

remembered, sending her into shocking orgasmic seizures, and she knew

beyond a doubt that it was going to happen to her again.] i love the

flow of your sex. ideas and desires just flow into our minds and leads

us in unplanned paths that other authors never show. with all other

authors, once a mouth meets pussy or a scissor fuck starts it will be

finished with an orgasm with no variation and especially with no

descriptions of using your hands and lips to love other parts of her

body like you always show like real life lesbians.

// i have read a few other scissor fucks but only you show that face to

face trib where you get your thighs or sometimes you lie on your woman

and just hump and pound your cunts together. i really love fucking this

way where you can look eye to eye and swallow each other tongues and or

kiss faces, hair and suck necks and shoulders. this is the wonderful

state laura and makeeda are now in. all that wonderful grinding and

friction and sweaty bodies slapping and slipping together in wet love.

fucking like this always produces these sweet sounds of love

["Aunngghh!" she groaned as Makeeda's thigh swept up and down in her

flooding crotch. "Ungghhh!" "Ummnngg . . . ahhnngggg!" she heard

Makeeda groaning and grunting softly too.] i so now that clenching of

thighs to jam and sweep up a splayed cunt. i love that warm wet heat

slavering my thigh and feeling a hard thigh crushing my cunt lips and

clit making me scream. i just swoon as a hard thigh is mashing and

mauling my cunt, feeling my clit dragging across that muscle making it

throb and burn with fucking bliss and feeling her thigh simply getting

soaked with my love juices making it just slid and ram so deep and hard

into open cunt making me gag and drool with fucking bliss. i am just so

fucking happy to find one author who knows of this mind blowing way to

fuck.

// i see they achieve that rare and wondrous mutual orgasm where

everything just seems to merge and you do feel like you are becoming one

like [Then a weird thing happened. Laura only remembered it happening

once or twice in her life before. A switch was thrown somewhere. A

circuit was completed. Their two striving, struggling bodies were merged

by an instantaneous lightning bolt, and the orgasm that occurred seemed

to be only one, but experienced equally by two halves.

"Auunngghhh!" she heard Makeeda groan loudly. And then her own strangled

cries were intermingled with Makeeda's groans almost in the same

instant. "Ohhnnnggmmnnggiiieee!" "Auunngghhhh!

Unngghhaiiii!'] it is so wild to feel both of your bodies jackknifing

wildly and hearing to two sets of screams filling the room as souls and

cunts are ripped asunder with pure fucking bliss. what i really like

here is your screams. other authors just say they scream or have it all

caps spoken words. often i do curse and call your name and scream i

love you but usually fucking also involves animalistic sounds of fucking

pleasure and only you capture these guttural sounds of women in heat and

fucking bliss. i sound them out and they are right on. coming hard

just reduces us to our primal animalistic state where only the sounds of

rutting sex is going to get vocalized. you make sex so primal and full

of earth power with these wonderful vocalizations of women fucking hard

and purely.

// one reason i so love face to face fucking is this [They were

kissing, teeth clanking again, their sobs of ecstasy flowing together

into one frantic moan of sharp release as exquisite spasms of sexual

rapture wrenched their shuddering, mated flesh. It was a very athletic

orgasm, full of desperate grasping and fierce hugging and helpless

moaning, and it went on and on until neither one of them could keep it

going any longer. They were exhausted finally, loosening their grip,

their flesh going finally slack, as Makeeda rolled gently to the side

and slid off Laura's body, still panting, her eyes glazed as she smiled

at the smiling, shattered Laura, who lay supine and destroyed beside

her.] i so want to kiss and kissing during orgasm is simply the bomb.

i love to have my mouth raped while i'm coming. i want to feel your

tongue slamming down my throat while i screaming wildly in fucking bliss

and feel you clutching me like makeeda here. grab my ass and slam our

cunts together if tribbing like this or grab my ass and really grind

super hard your thigh into my spasming, rupturing cunt as it scalds your

thighs with splashes of hot come. i so love athletic sex like this

where the sweat is whipping off our bodies and running down onto the

woman on the bottom and bringing your body close so i can lick and suck

it off your heated flesh. then as spent flesh collapses bring bodies

tight as we slip and slide our bodies together with delightful friction

as aftershocks make us mewl and jerk as tongues plunge deep down still

moaning throats and twining in languid love. i so know that nose to

nose smiling and gentle nose kissing after a great fuck.

// have to smile at their loving surprised discovery that cunts nearly

tore themselves apart their orgasms were so strong. my are often like

this but i experience this so more often with my archangels and the

women i really like because when emotion marries with great athletic sex

their is no limit to the ecstasy you can reach again and again. i am

smiling as laura sings again which she only does when she is feeling

deeply and here it is obvious it's deep pure love and then makeeda

stopping her with a deep passionate kiss. sigh, more great fucking.

archangels are such a beautiful thing.

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Chapter 296:

//� i like how this chapter starts out with it clear that laura and

makeeda are fucking heatedly every night.� i love it when i can get

pussy all the time and i feel that happy exhausted feeling in my kitty.

when she is purring and content from lots of devastating orgasms

constantly wrenching and crushing my kitty.� it takes a lot of fucking

to make me cry uncle.� though sometimes i do get to the state that laura

is in now.� in fact i'm there right now.� with laura's busy schedule of

work, working out with makeeda and intense fucking laura is starting to

drag a little.� my eyes are burning now from a lack of sleep from work

and home life.� but can a girl do.� i can't complain when demands become

heavy for a time.� the longer the better!!� you know you are having to

much success when you hear what rhonda has to say to laura here [Rhonda

even stopped her at work, in the hall. "You look like shit," she said,

diplomatically as ever. "You must have some new pretty little thing

keeping you awake at nights."]� i have to smile as rhonda sees right

through laura's protests of innocence.� one just has a glow when

heavenly fucking is filling one's life.

//� i have noticed that laura is what i have read is "serial monogamy".

when she finds a new woman whom she really connects with on a physical

level she puts so much of herself in the relationship.� i can remember

from the beginning rina and jonelle.� the middle is a little blurry now

but more recently was deshona, dawn, sara and now makeeda.� i can fully

understand.� when a new woman comes in your life one can't but help but

want to fuck her over and over.� but i can see where makeeda is

different.� i have always believed that archangels need something more

than just the physical.� sara had her sweet personality but makeeda has

an intensity that is captivating and they share the deep interest in

jazz and music.� it is the interests in life that can truly draw you

into a woman.� joann and maria fucked me blind the first night but it

was their personality and interests that made us click and become a

family unit.� one needs more to share a life than great sex.� as much as

i so really, really, love sex i am able to realize this and i think

laura has this same realization.� that is the reason i can see that

maybe makeeda is the one.� hopefully, they can become dynamic duo

fucking women.� though, i realize that makeeda is into the monogamy

thing.� hopefully, she can see the errors of her way.� a girl can dream

can't she.

//� i had to smile at laura being secretly happy that makeeda is

crestfallen when she tells her that rhonda is sending her to detroit on

business.� i am kind of free of this.� my father always called me a

"butterfly" growing up.� it used to piss him off because i just flowed

with life.� i remember the first time that joann left us for a week long

conference after i moved in.� i was going to miss her but i didn't make

a show of it.� i mean she would be coming back in a week and we could

catch up.� big mistake!!!� i have learned to be more open with my

feelings.� my archangels and my close angels know i care.� i just forget

to show it sometimes and geez, do i pay for it with hostile glares,

silence or aching ears from a good chewing out.� laura promises to call

every night which i smirk at, though, i agree that if the other angel

needs some love cooing then i need to be there.� i have always loved the

humor of your women [But Laura embraced her and breathed in her ear.

"No, when you get off it's because I've been kissing and rubbing and

fucking you and loving you."]� humor can be such a turn on and a strong

glue in a relationship.

//� i have to like the next part when laura's thoughts immediately turn

to dee dee when she thinks of going to ann arbor.� i always get wet and

hot when i am traveling somewhere where i know a hot lover is waiting

for me.� whenever i go home or visit an old lover or a few women like

dee dee that i have seeded over the years from conferences and such.� i

just wish laura would stop beating herself up so needlessly over her

need for sweet pussy.� there is absolutely nothing wrong with an

"overactive libido".� i think this is man's world trying to beat down

our natural desires to fuck and rut.� but laura knows what she is

getting into.� makeeda is a monogamous kind of woman.� i hope laura is

able to educate her over time.� a woman as beautiful as makeeda needs to

have her womb shredded by mind blowing orgasms from as many woman as she

can get.� the way i look at it, one should get all the pussy they can

get.� i so sing when a new woman is devouring my cunt and i'm consuming

hers.

//� i have to smile at laura working it out in her mind how she can have

dee dee.� me, i just go for it all.� that is one of the strong reasons i

live with joann and maria because they feel exactly like me.� we are the

three musketeers for each other.� we are each others support but we oh

so support each other in our hunt for pussy.� we relish new conquests

but simply revel in long time friends and lovers like dee dee.� all

laura has to do is make sure makeeda doesn't find out and everything

will be fine.� this way she is happy and so is laura getting all the

pussy i need.� sleeping with a woman who knows your body intimately and

knows hot make your womb simply shatter itself while tearing your cunt

inside out is simply so divine.� i always dream and get so fucking wet

thinking of fucking old friends i haven't seen in a while.� where laura

doesn't call ahead i'm making sure we catch up with each other and get

our plans all aligned.� especially if she needs to get away from her

partner or odious man.� some are really nice and share their current

lover.� i so love sluts like me.� hehehe.� i especially like seeing

laura putting some nice toys in her suitcase.� i know great times are

ahead with the double penetrator going along.� woo-woo.

//� i have to smile when laura "gives in" and calls dee dee.

finally!!!!� it serves laura right when dee dee is not home and she

starts simmering in her own juices.� i would have had everything lined

up to begin with and we would have been screwing each other blind from

the first night.� i mean, dee dee does have her own life.� i am sure

though she nearly broke her neck returning laura's call when she got

home.� I know that wanting to snap at your lover when you have been kept

waiting.� i control my negative emotions well, but, i can get cranky

when i get sexually frustrated.� i want my pussy now!!� i see that dee

dee still likes to goad by letting laura know that sara has told her

about their splitting up.� some women are always looking for that edge i

have found.� the little butterfly in me just lets it float on by.� i

refuse to be rankled if i can at all help it.� i have to smile at dee

dee working how to get to laura.� i don't know how anyone can live

without a car.� i would go crazy.� have to smile at the guy hoping to

get some pussy by helping dee dee out.� sure, he might get some but some

poor saps never even get a taste when a woman just strings them along

forever.� guys can be so stupid.� hmmmm, now that i think about it, we

can be just as stupid.

//� while, dee dee is arranging her ride i have to smile and shake my

head over laura calling makeeda and leaving her little white lie and

then beating herself up over it.� i have comforted women when they feel

a little guilty over this.� i quickly make them forget such trivial

things as i suck their clit down my throat while pistoning my fingers

hard and deep into their swollen sopping wet cunts until they are

screaming and jackknifing across our bed.� i just hope their woman is

getting some on the side themselves.� they guys can just be ignorant as

far as i'm concerned.� they have much better attitudes about getting

some on the side any ways.� i couldn't live with joann and maria if we

were constantly beating ourselves up over our love life.� i sure hope

that laura was convincing with her phone message.� if she lets her true

love show she shouldn't have any problem.� just think of the positive

and warm emotions while leaving your message and everything should be

okay.

//� i love how you show lovers feeling that oh so special zing when you

see your lover you haven't seen in awhile [she felt a hot, jolting

influx of real joy and passion flood her body all the way to her

fingertips as she let her in. Dee Dee looked even more scrumptious to

her than she ever had before.]� i can feel the pulse pounding in my

throat and the love shakes as i get that little flush to my skin and

feel the love sweat starting to pump.� i am like laura in that i love a

woman of color's skin.� i nearly swoon as i gaze upon a woman of color.

i just want to lick and stroke their whole body and just worship them.

i love "white" women but women of color are just so beautiful.� i am so

their as laura worships dee dee's black skin and is dazzled by her

beautiful white teeth.� dark skin women are so lucky because their color

really highlights their beautiful smiles.� it just lights up the room.

i have to smile at laura getting jealous when her fishing discovers that

dee dee has a librarian slut she is fucking all the time.� i would be

asking for all the hot details, letting it get me hot.� i would be

seeing if maybe a threesome can be arranged.� i so love it when a lover

shares her woman with me.� the sex is so hot and focused as we simply

tear each other apart with fuck passion.� heck, i even want to hear

about het sex if the guy can fuck.� sex just turns me on.

//� i also like you you show your women showing their confidence.� dee

dee knows she is fucking hot and gets laura to admit her desire for

her.� i love it when you have your women asking coyly if laura's wants

them and she gushes her desire for them.� other authors simply don't

show this.� they make clear the passion that is evident in hot fucking

but they never allow their women to really communicate with any sass

about their desire and wants.� i always love to have my women get all

sassy with me and preen their body.� i know that dee dee being all coy

and aggressive in manner.� i so love confidence in women.� i love

reading them expressing their longing for each other.� only your story

arch really allows women to part and then come together like this.� i

love your story for allowing lovers to come together after these lapses

of time.� it always produces such hot animalistic fucking that only you

show so well.

//� i like reading them fencing about dee dee's lovers and seeing laura

stew.� it makes her hot in her own way.� you now give me that humor i so

reading with laura talking like the stereotypical vampire and threatens

to sink her teeth into dee dee's neck and then [Dee Dee laughed but also

gasped a little as Laura did actually sink her teeth lightly into the

smooth black flesh of her neck. Laura sucked. Dee Dee bit her lower lip.

Her neck was shiny with Laura's warm spittle.���� "Unhhhh! Oh . . . god

. . . you mean it!"]� i so love to have my neck kissed and sucked.� it

makes me weakneed and whimpering with desire.� sometimes i just scream

with pleasure as i feel your teeth sinking in hard and sucking and

gnawing my skin with your teeth.� i just want to fold over as my womb

jumps and quivers hard in my belly and my cunt starts to gush fuck

juice.� i really think you are the only author to focus on loving other

parts of the woman beside her mouth, breast and ass.� i think some

mention neck play in passing but they are so pass� in it.� they make it

boring while you show how these parts of lovemaking is what really makes

sex so fucking supper hot.

//� i have always loved how you show the combination of mirth and

passion ["I alvays mean it," Laura said with a maniacal leer,

momentarily lifting her face from Dee Dee's scrumptious neck. She raised

her hands to Dee Dee' small, perfect breasts, squeezing the hard balls

through the fabric of her sweatshirt. "And I am going to suck these

pretty boobies until they hurt, my pet, my angel. I am going to suck

them until you moan and beg me to fuck you. Rrraarrgghh!"� she roared

again.����� Dee Dee was almost overcome with laughter, but she managed

to wriggle out of Laura's grasp and move back a few steps. "Down,

monster. Down. You fiend. Don't touch me."]� you really are the only

author to show the mirth that so often appears in lovemaking.� i have

over the years thought it weird how only you show this.� i love making

my woman's face break out in that great big grin when i make a witty

comment that just makes them light up with happiness and mirth.� i also

love how you show your women caressing and clutching their women through

their clothes as the passion mounts and builds.

//� sigh, i so love how you write.� they have been playing the game of

light mirthful foreplay but you show it now getting serious.� i am so

their as dee dee opens her arms and laura moves and they clutch as dee

dee drives her tongue down laura's throat.� i love this time when i am

pulling my lover tight and our tongues are slithering together and

probing deep down throats and exploring gums, cheeks and underneath each

others tongues.� making us mewl and bellow with rising love and need.� i

so love cradling your face with my hands and mating our mouths tight as

i ram my long tongue down your moaning throat or latching onto your

tongue and giving it hard sucking head.� i am smirking at dee dee asking

if laura brought the good stuff and laura produces her bag of goodies.

i know dee dee's asshole and pussy are spasming as the double penetrator

comes into view.� i love kink so i really love dee dee.� she knows how

to let her body sing to her with all the pleasure this kind of sex can

bring.� being tied or hand cuffed up is just so rad!!!� it just makes my

cunt come so fucking hard with much screaming and panicked, restricted

jackknifing and flipping.� that restraining just makes the spasms so

much harder and soul shattering.� i have nearly blacked out from such

divine fucking.� i can never get enough of good hard kinky sex.� i love

plenty of gentle, loving sex but hard and kinky makes my pussy and soul

just soar.

//� geez, i wish laura wouldn't feel guilty about loving her other

angels.� i mean, what makeeda doesn't know will never hurt her.� i give

such women their strange that allows them to be happy and content with

their partner or odious man.� i love the observation that dee dee like

me often wants to taken from behind with a double penetrator.� i want

that bigger cock pushing hard, fast and deep through my quivering

sphincter and deep into my bowls as you hammer it home.� nail my ass

down on the bed.� the reason being [She ran one long black finger up and

down the larger rubber penis, feeling the lifelike ridges. The larger

one was slightly upcurved and meant to go into your pussy, as you fucked

missionary style, but Laura remembered how Dee Dee often wanted to be

taken from behind, so that the larger appendage accordingly went into

her ass instead. She would scream and shudder as it entered her, shaking

her head and growling in a sexual frenzy that Laura had seen rarely in

others.]� dee dee is so my kind of loving slut.

//� i have always loved your little observations.� only you show dee

dee's eyes dilated with lust and need.� it is these little things that

add so much to sex and only you show it.� it is these observations that

rock you and make your lust just soar.� i have always liked dee dee's

thinking.� laura already knows the answer when she asks dee dee if wants

soft or hard first.� dee dee is like me.� give it to me hard to begin

with and then love coo me afterwards after you have fucked abused me

into that soft dreamy state.� then i am ready to be taking to heaven

with gentle loving and fucking.

//� i am so their as dee dee starts to disrobe and laura is paralyzed

with lust.� shari and cindy are deep black and i just stare almost

blindly as the disrobe for me.� i so love that black hue.� they always

give me a show as the disrobe and shimmy and shake for their audience.

i love that contrast of white underwear and black skin. �it is so

fucking beautiful.� women of color are just so fucking divine.� i am so

happy that laura can feel so much for dee dee now that sara and her have

cooled their relationship.� one should treat each woman as the special

angel she is and worship her completely and without any outside

distractions.� i love all my women.� my archangels and close angels more

but i give my everything to any woman i take into my bed.� i will not

cheat either of us.� laura is also like this but she will so often beat

herself up before the loving starts and that is such a waste.� love was

meant to be given freely and completely.� sigh, i so love watching a

woman removing her clothing and feeling those jolts and shudders as i

love shake over her beauty being reveled to me.� just watching a woman

disrobe can make my nipples rock hard and aching and my cunt sopping wet

and quivering.� i can just feel my fuck hunger just soaring.

// sigh, women must be women.� dee dee simply can't refuse the dig about

sara.� i have found that people always want to get one over on each

other trying to move up the picking order.� i can't blame laura for

getting a little exasperated with dee dee.� but love is in the air and

the spiting is quickly left behind.� just ignore it if all possible is

my motto.� i like how dee dee is so focused.� one thing i have always

enjoyed about your stories is you show the subtle play of women vying to

move the loving how they want it.� laura really wants to start slow and

loving and dee dee won't have any of it.� only you show how women

communicate and move forward in their loving.� no other author ever,

ever shows this.� the sex just happens which it does often especially

with new love but come on, after you get to know your lover you want to

communicate and make the loving even more special and thank you for

showing this.

//� i love how you show dee dee moving things forward from their minor

battle of wills by starting to unclothe laura and knows how to start

heating laura up [Dee Dee was now very aggressive. Having unbuttoned

Laura's shirt, she was kissing Laura's neck and throat while she removed

it, then unclasping Laura's bra, kissing Laura's collarbones.]� i have

always worshipped your showing the loving of the whole body.� thank

you.� i love watching as they strip off the remainder of their clothing

and get ready for some hot fucking.� i always love it when we are fully

naked and lust is pounding in our veins and the room is already starting

to fill with the fuck aroma of love.� dee dee is so like me [While Dee

Dee was stretching out on her back on the bed, Laura was quickly

slipping into the dildo harness and snapping the Double Penetrator in

place. She looked down at Dee Dee, who held up her wrists.]� i so love

offering myself to my woman completely and letting her know she can fuck

me as hard and rough as she wants (without going crazy of course).� i

just know to get to really get to know the woman first or if i'm with

another angel who will vouch for her as she fuck abuses us.

//� i like seeing laura being happy that the initial fuck is going her

way.� she wants to fuck missionary style so she look in dee dee's eyes

as she is pounding her cocks hard and deep into dee dee's fuck holes.

for me spoon is my favorite receiving but i also love missionary so i

can look at my woman as she is loving me and we can devour each other's

mouth and have her loving my tits and upper body when the spirit moves

her.� geez, learn something new with tying the iron to the bed frame and

then the handcuffs to that.� humm.� i have to file that away in case i

ever need it.� i love it that dee dee has already done this.� she is

such a delicious slinky slut.� she goes for pleasure and i so love that

in a woman.� i love the difference between laura and me.� she is jealous

that dee dee shares her kinky side with others.� i would be all ears and

begging for the hot details.� i want ALL the details.� i love watching

and or hearing about sex.� dee dee is happy with laura's jealousy.� i

can see it when dee dee likes the fact that laura goes beyond just

wanting to fuck her.� i guess she would put me in the latter camp.� why

be jealous.� i just want to love and fuck you.

//� i love watching laura devouring dee dee with her eyes as dee dee is

tying up the iron to the bed.� i love watching a woman's body as she

moves when naked.� just seeing her tits swaying and ass cheeks flexing

and just the working of her muscles and the way her neck looks as her

head moves.� it makes me so fucking wet.� wow, i love dee dee for

getting so submissive when she can be so fiery.� i love watching her

laying on the bed with her hands near the headboard waiting to be tied

up.� i love my slut offering herself to me totally when i'm the

dominatrix.� open yourself to me totally and show my complete

vulnerability and i simply fall so deeply in love with you.� i just want

to fuck you so fucking hard and deep and make you die from coming so

hard as i make your womb shatter deep in your belly and making your cunt

shred itself to ribbons as it tears itself inside out.� i want to feel

that deep connection as i blister your ass and thighs, slap your face,

pinch your nipples, lightly choke you and pull your hair.� hear your

whimpering intermingled with those hot love moans of subliminal pleasure

as your mind basks in the that divine intoxicant mixture of pain and

pleasure.

//� have to smile at laura feeling awkward and weird with her cocks

bobbing and weaving in front of her.� i would never grab my cock(s).� i

love watching my shaft of love waving in front of me.� i want my women

to see my tool that i'm about to fuck their pussy and or asshole to

heaven with.� i want to see their eyes glued to my cock as i walk or

slide across the bed to them.� now you give me those word pictures that

i have come to so adore in your writings [her eyes riveted by the

alluring spectacle of Dee Dee's scrumptious lean naked body stretched

out under her, gleaming with a fine black sheen against the stark white

of the sheet, her thick coal-black nipples shiny and swollen, her

incredible hard abs rippling and clenching. She grinned with kittenish

sensuality and spread her thighs a little wider for Laura, showing Laura

the inflamed, glistening seam of her deeply pink inner pussy sleeve and

the wet black lips surrounding it.]� only you paint these loving word

pictures of your women.� the color of dee dee's skin against those white

sheets.� sigh.� seeing her nipples all swollen and puffy with need

begging to be sucked down my throat.� spreading her thighs in love and

want.� i can see see this delectable woman in my mind's eye and i so

thank you for this.� i feel like i am almost there in their lovemaking.

//� i am so there as laura's blood pounds as she clamps the handcuffs

onto dee dee's wrists.� i feel this pounding either way.� when i'm on

top i really get into and i feel the passion rising as i get ready to

give you what you want.� when receiving i know that soon you will be

giving me what i crave.� i like dee dee's ways.� she is the submissive

and wants to get a move on but she can't help but slurp laura's nipple

when it come into range of her mouth.� i couldn't resist this also.� i

love to give pleasure and feel your nipple slipping into my mouth and

feeling it get rock hard as i hard suck and tongue bat.� just latching

on with my lips and sucking hard and rubbing the tip with my tongue like

a rasp making you mewl and hiss and watching your eyes roll back if i'm

lucky.� dee dee knows what she wants and releases laura's nipple when

laura can't proceed with this pleasure overload.� again you show that

communication and flow of two women working together to make the loving

super supreme.� only you show this and i so thank you for that.

//� i have read a few other stories with love bondage (i don't read that

humiliation crap) but they don't give the word pictures. they just have

it happen while you show [Now Dee Dee's wrists were handcuffed to the

bed frame, her arms raised above her head, placing her delicious body in

a slightly contorted, unnatural position�with her ribs showing a little,

her breasts raised a little higher on her chest, her stomach sunken, her

skin and muscles pulled taut�a position that for some reason always

juiced up Laura's lust to a further extreme. Dee Dee thus stretched out

and immobilized and helpless was a wildly, fiercely desirable woman to

her, and she could barely control her hunger.]� now this is why women

are into bondage.� i so love feeling like this waiting for my woman to

work me over.� i love having my tits all pronounced like this.� i shake

and roll them around letting my woman know i'm waiting for her to take

me.� i love it when my women start to slap them hard making both tits

all red and stinging making my nipples scream with pained pleasure and

taking my tits and digging your fingers in and kneading my tits like

dough and then slapping again until i am screaming with fucking pained

pleasure.� i know my women love watching my cunt humping hard as they

slap my tits and face hard with some good hair pulling thrown in.� i

also love having my stomach and cunt slapped hard when tied up like

this. makes me scream in fucking bliss.� sometimes my women will roll me

over and then blister my ass and thighs until i'm humping the bed hard

and screaming for them to stop which really means to give it to me

harder.� it makes me so ready when you finally stop and proceed to suck

my clit down your throat or plunging a cock or fist deep up one of my

fuck holes.

//� again you show that working of wills that i so love seeing in

print.� dee dee loves to be blindfolded but laura doesn't like it

because you can't see the eyes.� i too want to see your eyes but don't

mind using one if she wants it.� i will just look into them the next

time.� for me, i don't need it but some women love to use it on me so i

don't mind and let them blindfold me.� it is cool not seeing what is

going to happen.� sometimes i can just feel my cunt humping hard as i

die from waiting for it and not being able to see what the fuck is going

on.� so laura puts the ball gag in before dee dee can request the

blindfold.� i mean we do this all the time and i am so thankful to see

an author reflect this in her works.� everyone else just have things

happen with no communication which i really have come to find mildly

boring and so unfair to their characters.� laura has so overwhelmed dee

dee that all she wants know is hard fucking [She was getting very

overcome by the sheer sexual excitement of the situation, writhing and

watching Laura swab the lower prong with baby oil,� and stretching her

thighs even wider apart, anticipating the coming penetration. She made a

guttural, lowing sound as she waited.

"Unnnmmggmmmmggnnnnggg," she groaned softly.]� i so love reducing my

women to this state to this raw wanton state of fuck dementia.� i love

seducing a demure woman and making her growl for it like the fuck animal

we all are deep down.� we only need to listen to our true selves.

//� another thing you do is show how stimulus affects your women.� other

authors don't show this except for a few here and there.� you show [This

sound drove Laura almost crazy with lust. She already wanted Dee Dee

fiercely, and this lowing, groaning sound somehow got under her skin and

made her want to eat the girl alive.]� this is so true.� hearing a woman

rut makes me fucking so wet with desire and fires up my fires of love.

makes me want to fuck you so well, hard and deep.� i so know that boring

of my eyes into my woman telling her with my eyes to please, please fuck

me NOW and make my tits whiplash� and my groin jolt as your drive your

cock deep up my belly.� i can see dee dee's nostrils flaring as she

gasps in passion and her eyes flare with fuck need.� i love your

writing!!! you then show that communicating and foreplay that drives me

wild reading because i so love it in my life [Laura smiled down at her

slyly. "Oh, you want it now, do you? Maybe I should just withhold it for

a few more minutes, just to watch you squirm." She ran her hands over

Dee Dee's wildly desirable, very black naked body, squeezing her small,

perfect breasts, pinching and tweaking Dee Dee's thick, shiny black

nipples. "I want to suck these. I'm going to suck these. You'll just

have to wait for Mr. Double Dick."]� i love to be love taunted and to

have my body worked lovingly making me ready for the hard pounding fuck

to come.

//� i so love how you love tits.� other authors just have them bend down

and suck.� only you have your women sometimes grasping hold of the tit

and feeding that nipple and aureole into your loving mouth and then love

sucking and tongue lathing.� i so love to have a woman use her hands to

guide my swollen nipple to her mouth as she love squeezes and kneads my

tit flesh making my tits thrum, burn and zing with pleasure.� i love

having them milk my tit squeezing nice and hard and pumping up to feed

my nipple deep down your mouth as you suck and tongue bat hard.� this

always makes my belly quiver and eyes roll back as i love drool and mewl

like a fuck cat.� other authors tell us they suck a nipple while you

show us intimately [Laura did actually lower her face to Dee Dee's

scrumptious breasts and, guiding one with her hand, closed her mouth

over one swollen black nipple, sucking deep and hard. Dee Dee

yelped.����� "Annmmnnnggg!"����� Laura sucked and Dee Dee whimpered.

Laura moved to Dee Dee's other gorgeous, swollen nipple and sucked it

too. Dee Dee whimpered more hysterically.

"Annggmmnpphhhmmmmnneee!"]� this is why we fuck and especially why

foreplay is so necessary for great mind blowing sex and only lesbians

excel at foreplay.� i love how you constantly show moving form one tit

to the other driving your woman wild with need.

//� i have to smile as laura worries about making a mess as her greased

cocks slide over dee dee's body and sheets.� me and my sluts like it

messy.� i love to take a greased or cunt creamed cock and rub all over

my woman and get her all glistening.� running my lubed cock up and down

you slit and rub your clit and make you jump and hump with jolts of

pleasure.� i love getting our bodies and sheets all wet and drenched

with fuck juice, sweat and any oil or body lotion used.� i sometimes act

like i'm going to start my penetration and then run my cock up and down

your love groove and rub and bat along your thighs making you die from

wanting it so bad.� i have always loved your initial penetration.� i

love how laura takes a finger and rubs her greased pole and works a

finger lovingly up dee dee's hot tight asshole.� i love doing this or

spitting on your asshole and rubbing that spittle in and then working my

finger up through your tight spinchter feeling it fight and then

quivering as i work my finger through and then start to slowly pump your

warm tight asshole getting it ready for my love cock.� other authors

just have the cocks penetrate the love holes and thus make it something

out of a manual while you file it with love and pure fucking pleasure

["Unnggmm!" Dee Dee groaned softly, her eyes watering a little as she

felt the penetration.����� "Here it comes, baby, hold on . . ." Laura

panted to her, easing the poles slowly into Dee Dee's writhing

body.����� "Unnggmm!" Dee Dee grunted again, her eyes rolling up as the

two poles slid into her cunt and her ass.]� sigh, this is what i need

and long to see as i slide my cocks lovingly up into your fuck hole(s).

//� i so love reading of the resistance you feel as your cock slides up

a tight asshole or really tight cunt.� i so love this look of pure love

you almost always see as a cock slides up a woman's asshole [Throughout

it all she kept her eyes on Dee Dee's, watching the throbbing sexual

trance grow there, watching Dee Dee's dark eyes flare and flash as the

penetration progressed.]� it is so intense and focused as a woman feels

cocks sliding up her body and filling her up with pleasure.� i love how

you sow taking your time to let your woman accommodate her duel

invasion.� what makes a double penetrator so special is how you get that

perfect sync of those cocks sliding deep into your body.� usually, one

cock works its way in and gets that love hole loosened up and then the

other cock is introduced with is totally rad but this is so special too

and then feeling those fuck poles just working your quivering holes in

perfect time making your body sing in pleasure.� i so love reading laura

falling into a love trance with dee dee.� she wants to fuck deeply and

emotionally.� she wants to clamp their mouths tight and let their

tongues duel and plunge down throats while their souls moan and mewl in

twined love.� i so love hot deep french kissing while fucking face to

face.� our cunts connected by a cock fucking one of us hard and deep.

//� i so love how you show the tender in fucking [She's a lot like me,

Laura thought, bending down to kiss her cheek, her shoulders, her deeply

black neck, her collar bones. She can't control this hunger, and she

knows we're both the kind of slut that Sara could never be]� i love

fucking especially with women who listen to their true inner slut and

fuck with totally abandon.� i love how you make it clear that one can

fuck in so many ways.� with strap-on sex they just fuck with other

authors with no description of the actual style or rhythm.� you show

that dee dee and laura are not going for the slam fuck to begin with but

are starting out slow and sensual which i so love.� feeling those poles

slowly sawing in and out of my fuck holes.� i just gag and get those

sudden body shudders and limb twitches as i feel both my holes filed up

with big cocks.� i love the double penetrator because it is so smooth

and equal as those poles slide in deep and then are pulled out only to

have them travel home again with cunt and asshole clinging tight making

me mewl and judder with pure fucking pleasure.� nice and slow in

missionary allows such divine swallowing of tongues and having my women

turn my neck and giving me hard throat sucks and hickeys making me

scream in total abandon as i slam my belly up and throw my hips forward

as hard as i can to get your cock buried deep in my belly or bowels or

both like here.� wrapping my thighs around your hips and locking my

ankles opening my pussy up and getting my pelvis angled up so you can

slam your cock(s) deep down, hard up into my belly.

//� sigh, love the intimate eye contact that communicates pure love as

they fall into a love rhythm [But soon she began to fall into Laura's

rhythm, grinding her pelvis sensually up into Laura's forward thrusts,

letting herself be fucked but also fucking back in the same gentle,

swirling upward motion, then digging her heels into the mattress and

starting to pump with� more force as Laura also picked up the pace.]� i

so fall in love with my angels as i feel them opening there cunt up for

my and dig in and thrust up hard to receive my love cock deep against

their womb making the quiver and eyes roll back with lovely moans of

bliss and love drool trickling out of their slack mouth as their face

clenches and twitches in fucking pleasure.� i love laura's observation

of the pleasure of having two cocks in you pumping and slamming.� the

beauty of the dual penetrator is you can work this magic alone but i so

love having other women helping me to bury cocks deep up my love angel

and feeling her thrash and scream as we pummel her into nirvana.� yip, i

know i'm doing my job when i see this ["Unnggmmppggg!" Dee Dee groaned,

her eyes rolling up.]� this is what i live to give my angels.

//� now, again, you show what no other author has ever really shown.

loving the whole woman.� i get so tired of the author only sucking a

tit, or doing oral on a pussy or asshole or doing strap-on and only a

very basic missionary fuck.� i mean come on.� that would make sex so

boring and trivial after the initial blush.� this is what great fucking

is [leaning forward to consume more of Dee Dee's alluring, silky naked

flesh. She ran her hands feverishly over the girl's smooth, hard black

stomach and breasts and arms and shoulders, leaning low to kiss her

neck, then to drop her mouth once more to Dee Dee's delectable firm

breasts, assaulting Dee Dee's swollen jet-black nipples hungrily, now

moving the monster, though gingerly so as not to let it go awry, in and

out of her again.����� "Unnnmmgg! Umnnngghh!" Dee Dee grunted into the

gag, her luscious body writhing under Laura's passionate onslaught.]

use your hands and mouth to love other parts of the body when possible

and use your body to rub and press.� give total stimulus to your woman.

only you capture this and i so thank you for doing it.� i so love

overloading my slut's mind with fucking pleasure and feeling her

throwing her hips up to receive my love cock(s) deep up her belly and or

rectum and hearing those divine sounds of a woman rutting and of course

those lightening fast twitches of her face and sudden flares of the

pupils that show me i'm transporting her to nirvana.� just makes my coil

my hips and spear my cock as deep and hard as possible which so often

just makes them wail with helpless love for me as they scream out my

name and how much they love what i'm doing to them.

//� sigh, such fucking perfection.� i love hearing those handcuffs

clanking away as she is spastically jerking her wrists as her body is

flailed with fucking pleasure.� i love yanking my arms and legs when

handcuffed just so i can hear them clank when i'm the one being

submissive.� sometimes during the foreplay i just love to stretch out my

arms and legs and pull taunt feeling all my muscles cord up.� my angels

know to really slap my cunt and belly hard when i do this.� i just want

to jackknife but i can't and it makes me wild as i feel my cunt just

jumping and quivering and if they keep it up i will come with such

fucking spams of bliss that i just scream myself hoarse sometimes.

especially when they bend down at just the right time and suck my clit

hard and fast through their lips while pistoning a finger or two up my

clenching asshole.� it so often makes me go multiple as i try to tear

the bed apart with my wild restrained spams and flips as i my teeth

clench and eyes roll back and i just hiss and die from pure fucking

bliss.� this is not that kind of fuck and laura always knows how to

finish off her love whore [Dee Dee's legs were not tied to anything, and

so she was free to wrap them around Laura's thrusting hips, which she

did energetically, gyrating her pelvis frantically, whimpering as Laura

probed her harder and faster.����� "Unmmgg! Ummppmmggg! Unmmgg!"]� i so

love wrapping my strong thighs around your hips and using you to help

drive your cock hard and deep.� when giving i so love that pressure and

slippery grip as i know my slut is giving her all to me.� just inspires

me to nail their ass to the bed and make them squeal like the fuck whore

we all are.

//� you show how real fucking is done.� laura has used foreplay and

starting with a slow sensual rhythm and then built to this wild slam

fuck dance.� this is how to drive your woman wild.� get her body primed

with pleasure and then finish her off with a slam fuck that makes her

womb explode as your try and pierce it with your love cock.� of course

when getting double impaled one is so overloaded as both your fuck holes

are stretched and pounded hard and deep and you feel those cocks working

against each other inside your body.� feeling your body being buffeted

and jammed by your lovers.� with the double penetrator you don't have

quite the pummeling but that perfect timing of the dual invasions always

produces [When it did, she wondered how the entire hotel under and over

them did not shake and quake and rock the way the bed was shaking under

their struggling bodies. Dee Dee shuddered and groaned, and a fierce

grimace froze her face.����� "Mmmmnnggggnnnrrrieeeee!" she wailed, her

throttled cries muffled by the ball gag in her mouth. The first cry was

a kind of scream, but it was followed by a short, howling roar as her

sleek body buckled under the force of a shattering orgasm.

"Auuoounnggg!"]� i swear i have thought my woman would die sometimes

from my slam fucking them with our double penetrator.� that look of

shocked pleasure, what could pass for excruciating pain, as their face

is slashed apart with fucking bliss as their womb shatters and their

spasming asshole and vagina gets that death grip on your slamming

cocks.� i so cherish those wild flips and jackknifes i feel against my

body as i hold you close and feel all those divine jolts of bliss and

feel our sweat slicked bodies slapping and grinding and squishing

together as i stroke your face or upper body and kiss your shoulders,

throat or drive my tongue down your screaming throat.

//� i am so there as laura holds dee dee tight as she loves coos to her

as she comes down and finally her love exhausted body collapses in a

sweaty mess on the bed.� i so love to roll my spent lover on top of me

from a good missionary fuck.� feeling her exhausted flesh and seeing her

dreamy eyes up close as her body warms and presses my down and our sweat

commingles and runs off our bodies.� brining our mouths together and

kissing deep in languid love.� many a time i have had an exhausted angel

fall into a gentle slumber in this position.� i'll let them slumber for

a while before i awake for more hot fucking.� i love when they love

drool all over me in exhausted bliss.� have to grin as laura asks dee

dee if she okay and she responds with "what to you think".� no reason

not to fish for a compliment after a great fuck.� i have always loved

the fire in a lot of your women ["You gon' take these handcuffs off me,

you bitch," her eyes glinted with fierce mirth at Laura, "or you

planning to bop me again first?"]� i love all personality types but i

could never live with marie or her with me without joann because we're

both too demure.� we both need joann in our life to bring that pure fire

and verve.

//� i like how you show dynamics in your story.� laura seeing dee dee

still trussed up thinks of love raping her again.� dee dee wants at

laura's body but you make it clear that if laura had wanted to pursue

another round of love abusing dee dee, dee dee would have quickly become

putty in her hands and would immediately offer her body again to laura

to do what she will.� i have been quivering with hopes of getting rolled

over and getting my ass and thighs blistered and then feeling my woman's

tongue snaking up my clenching asshole as she frigs me off to a second

screaming orgasm.� but instead, laura releases her.� dee dee and she

stretches out and dee dee gets her limbs all limbered up and ready to

love.� love reading of laura thinking of a good tummy fuck and seeing

dee dee using her hands to grip her thighs and ass to grind her cunt

down so hard and firm up down her hard belly making laura scream with

pleasure.� i love the sass of women of color ["Ooohhhhh . . . you ready,

girl," her eyes twinkled. Dee Dee never talked 'ghetto' at all, but she

had suddenly become very relaxed and intimate with Laura. "I think a

little muff diving may be in order. Dee Dee been learning. Dee Dee been

learning how to make a woman scream."]� for some reason it makes me

instantly wet and makes my whole body judder with the love shakes.

//� have to snicker at laura thinking dee dee is breaking the mood when

she starts talking about getting out of trouble with a cop when he

nailed her ass to the bed.� i would be drooling asking for all the

fucking details where laura begs her stop.� just our personality

difference.� dee dee has completely revived and being a true slut she

immediately starts devouring laura's body.� i love how you show women

always want to give back the pleasure they just received.� we get it

both ways because giving makes our soul sing and you so clearly show

this.� i love how dee dee just swarms laura's supine body and devours

her tits and nipples while rubbing all over her.� i love to have my

women rub all over me as they swarm me and suck my nipples down their

throat our mount me to kiss me hard and deep while rubbing or humping

their thigh or cunt into my open welcoming cunt like you show here.

only you show how women simply must get close and intimate in their

loving.� we need that body contact.� you show it so clearly here [Dee

Dee quickly turned into a hot whirlwind. She pushed Laura down onto her

back and attacked her with hungry passion, sucking Laura's nipples,

squeezing Laura's breasts, rubbing her thigh up and down in Laura's

crotch. Laura, who was very close to coming already, could do nothing

but surrender. ]� i so adore being love assaulted like this by my

women.� take me.� do it gentle or rough, just make me yours.

//� i love reading dee dee devouring laura's tits with hot love sucks

and reaching down to find a sodden wet cunt ready for hot fucking.� i

love getting my hand all slavered with your love juices and then

bringing up to lick clean and maybe rub in your hair if you like it.

some are like laura and not quite as kinky as me.� i am smiling as dee

dee backs off sensing laura's imminite orgasm and backs off.� her skills

are obviously developing quite nicely.� that is one reason i so love

women having multiple lovers.� all os us constantly teaching each other

and discovering new ways to fuck and new techniques to make our women

scream.� she gives just the right kind of clit sucks and finger fucking

to make laura caw and rise to the pinnacle and then backs down.� i love

it all ways. sometimes i just take them straight through to the finish

line but usually you need to vary like here and constantly change the

rhythm and how many times you surge and delay to always keep the fuck

fresh and dynamic.� this is what makes lesbian lovemaking the supreme

kind of lovemaking.� two women constantly striving with their all to

give and take maximum pleasure by constantly communicating and reading

your lover's body language to give her your all.� only you show this

with laura's complete focus and then showing how she teaches her lovers

to also have this focus.� women just have it but it usually takes some

teaching to make it really shine.� only you show the variation of

lovemaking.� you show how great lesbian sex is so fluid and dynamic

while other authors make it seem almost boring like het fucking so often

degenerates into.

//� i so love feeling that initial penetration as a woman works her

fingers into my tight cunt and then starts up her fuck rhythm and begins

to finger fuck my totally wet and open pussy.� but dee dee must have

been playing around some because she has a new weapon in her arsenal of

love [She bit her lower lip and her eyes watered involuntarily as she

felt Dee Dee's entire hand suddenly sliding into her pussy, fingers,

knuckles and all. She knew she and Dee Dee had never fisted, and the

thought had never even crossed her mind to look at the girl's hands, to

gauge their size, as she knew Amber, or Brenda, would quickly have done.

But this instant she could feel that Dee Dee's hand was quite small and

perfect for the task, realizing all this in a flash before her body

simply drove her mind to the wall and flooded with inflammatory sexual

sensations.������ "Auunngghh!" she cried out, her vision blurred with

tears as she looked down to see Dee Dee's coal black wrist protruding

from her own cunt.]� i so love having a woman whom i know is new or

fairly new to lesbian lovemaking and opening her to other angels and she

learns something i have not shown her and then suddenly she is springing

something new on me from another lover.� sigh.� i remember shari and

cindy tried to hook us on anal fisting but we shied off.� so they taught

simonette, knowing i can't refuse her anything.� plus, i decided last

summer that i have become the mature woman i fucked as a kid and i need

to get over any hang-ups i still might have.� now we all love it in our

closest group and we are still working on a few.� give us time.� hehehe.

//� fisting for me is all about the knuckles.� i so love feeling those

knuckles sliding into my body and when doing the fisting feeling your

warm cunt sliding over my knuckles and then down the back of my hand.

that has always just turned me on so fucking much.� feeling that warm

heat enveloping my hand.� i have big hands so i know about gauging

things.� for me i have to size my woman's twat and see how much foreplay

and or lubrication is needed to get my love fist home or whether ot not

to back off completely.� i like how you show this.� other authors just

always have it happen with no fore thought and especially with no

details.� most women start and hesitate when first introduce to this and

only you show this.� it is mostly mental but one does have to work with

love and skill to really give her what she needs with your love fist.� i

so love feeling that fist working my cunt hole and filling me up as it

slides home and then looking down or back over my shoulder to see your

wrist jutting out my fuck hole and cawing as i feel you start to twist

and thrust as you loosen me up so that wedge can collapse into a tight

fist and i feel you starting to pump my quivering body.� i so know that

"inflammatory sexual sensations" flooding out my fuck hole as i feel my

cunt or sphincter gripping and spasming all over your wrist and lower

arm as you start to fuck me hard and deep making me pound the bed and

love drool all over the place thrusting my pelvis back cawing as i feel

you fist twisting, sinking deep taking me to nirvana.

//� i am so there as laura thrusts violently her pelvis down and into

dee dee's loving thrusts.� i so need to impale my body on your fist as i

feel it sliding deep and twisting those knuckles against my inner fuck

flesh.� i know my eyes just bug out as i focus and thrust with much

cursing and cawing as i dig my heels and thrust of if doggy style using

my knees and palms to really thrust back hard feeling your wrist

slapping against my groin as your fist plunges deep.� i just fall into

the fuck dementia that laura falls into when getting fisted and the

result is almost always [And Dee Dee, who never flinched from rough sex,

responded in kind, thrusting her hand into Laura's body, watching in awe

as Laura began to come after only a few thrusts. Her stiffening body

literally rose off the mattress, her pelvis juddering wildly in the air,

with Dee Dee's hand still embedded deep in her spasming pussy.

"AUUNNGGHHH!" Laura cried out. The orgasm speared her. There was no

other word for it. Her body was jolted and speared and impaled on a

fierce rocket of coming that shook her violently.� "AUUNNGGHHH!" she

groaned again, falling back to the bed, flailing, moaning, twitching as

the aftershocks of the initial quake struck her.]� i love my rougher

lovers because they know how to finish you off with hard pounding

fucking to simply tear your body and mind apart with coming so hard you

really do feel like your are dying from pure fucking bliss.� i so know

that digging my heels in hard and lifting up as high as i can as i roll

up on my shoulders to look up my heaving belly to see that fist still

ramming hard and deep as my cunt humps and spasms in the air as i scream

and thrash my head or get that teeth clenching where all i can do is

hiss and spray spittle as my eyes roll back and my womb shreds deep in

my belly rippling out pure waves of fucking bliss.� a good fisting

simply destroys me as my cunt and or asshole simply tear themselves out

along your wrist as my cunt and ass juice smear and pour out that loving

tight fit.

//� dee dee slides her hand out fairly quickly but i love to hold in you

while i feel the aftershocks dying away and feeling your fuck hole

relaxing and only then pulling out.� i usually lick it clean and share

if so inclined or take my fingers and play with your hair if your a

complete whore like me.� i love the tenderness you show as dee dee takes

laura directly into her arms and gently presses against her while love

cooing and giving little love kisses.� i so love post coital time and

only you really give it to me.� other authors never really detail the

cuddling.� some mention it thankfully, but most simply skip and those

that do don't show the true warmth and depth that you always show.

again, thank you.� have to roll my eyes with dee dee again mentioning

sara and how she is a better fuck. sigh, most women simply must

compete.� heck, i guess i do in the sense that i want to be a fuck

supreme but i just try to keep it abstract i guess.

//� i am smiling as dee dee commiserates with laura about sara and then

gets fired up when she discovers that laura has a new sweetie.� i know

that flash of fire would have made my cunt spasm and start lubricating

again.� fire in a woman sets my pussy on fire for it.� geez, you so show

the tender in love making ["You are my special one for tonight. You're

always special to me. Even when I was with Sara, I couldn't stay away

from you. You know that."����� Dee Dee smirked. She could be so

innocently fetching when she was vulnerable and naked like this. Laura

did feel the fires stirring again.]� i have found sweet words alone will

melt most any woman's defenses once she is already sweet on you.� what

woman doesn't melt when complimented and stroked with loving words.

love the negotiating that only you show with dee dee wanting to hit the

bar and laura's rising libido has other plans and she uses her charms to

get what she needs [She leaned over and kissed Dee Dee's mouth, which

quickly became a wet and searching kiss, with both of them running their

hands over each other's naked body. "I want you again," she murmured

into Dee Dee's smooth black neck. "We can go down to the bar afterward.

I haven't even been able to taste that sweet black pussy of yours

yet."����� Dee Dee giggled softly and wriggled sensually against Laura.

"When you put it that way, how can I refuse?]� i like to be led but will

gladly lead things when they are seemingly distracting us from more hot

fucking.� we can always go out later.� never delay hot heated fucking if

at all possible.� i want as much of your body as i can get without any

distractions.

//� i have always adored how you love the whole woman. �laura makes dee

dee groan hard when she worms her warm tongue deep into dee dee's ears.

that is so fucking hot and i so love doing and receiving your tongue

hot, wet and deep in my ears making me shake and mewl.� you show more of

this total loving with [She began undulating against Laura, and Laura

could hardly bear the hot rush of lust that overcame her. Dee Dee

writhing and undulating her hard young very black body against her was a

temptation she could not survive. Her fingers bit into the girl's

svelte, smooth flesh. She sucked the firm flesh between Dee Dee's neck

and shoulder, making her squeal softly, before quickly sliding

downward.����� "I love your body," Laura panted, sucking her shiny coal

black nipples, kneading Dee Dee's incredible ass with her fingers.]

sigh, so tactile.� i love digging and kneading my fingers into your

body.� gripping and stroking your lovely muscles and tits / ass.� i can

massage and knead your ass for long, long minutes.� with plenty of love

kisses, tongue strokes and nips.� oh yeah, i love laying on you like

laura here and having my lover arch her back to feed me her tits as i

consume the hard and wet nipples while reaching under her to knead her

ass cheeks and grip and help her setup a nice fuck rhythm against my

belly or pelvis getting us all wet with her smeared cunt love cream.

//� i have always loved how you allow your women to be so verbal in

their lovemaking ["Fuck me, Laura . . ." she gasped in a hoarse,

out-of-control voice. "Nobody fucks me like you do. Nobody. Ungghhh!

Yes! Unghhhh! Do it harder! Suck it . . . sssssuck it! Unhhh! Bite

it!"]� i would die if i had to fuck in the silence that other authors

curse their women with.� i love how laura works her way down giving dee

dee's nipples a little teeth raking action to make her jolt and caw and

then works down that taunt belly kissing and nuzzling until she [She

kissed the taut, smooth black flesh just above the dark fringe of Dee

Dee's pubic patch, then pushed her nose into it, inhaling the fresh

odors of Dee Dee's skin mixed with the pungent aroma of her oozing cunt.

Then her face slid lower. Her lips grazed the swollen, sinuous black

vulva of Dee Dee's pussy, and her tongue slid between them.����� "Unh!

Oh!" Dee Dee gasped excitedly, looking down, as if she could see Laura's

tongue sliding up into her wet pussy.]� this is something i love to do

too.� getting the essence of my lover in my olfactory lobes and

relishing her kitty calling to me with its love pheromones.� i so love

those hitches and excited breathes and moans as my tongue slides home

and dig it in deep when they make that focused eye contact showing their

deep rapture and pleasure as you start to lap and tongue fuck her.

//� i have said it over and over but i can't help it.� i have a read a

few other stories recently and they were good and they gave some details

but nothing like this [Laura loved eating a beautiful pussy like this

one perhaps more than anything in life, and she settled down to enjoy

the feast. She worked slowly, savoring each second, sucking Dee Dee's

thick, wavy cuntlips gently, running the tip of her tongue up and down

every crease and hollow, and then directly into the wet, glistening pink

furrow, then pulling it out again and sliding it across Dee Dee's hard

little clit, as she had warned she would do. Dee Dee was lubricating

copiously by now, and Laura drank the girl's cunt nectars as if they

were life-giving liquid, swallowing and sucking and swallowing more,

increasing the heat, sucking and tonguing Dee Dee's pussy now more

vigorously, and feeling Dee Dee respond by gurgling and squirming and

whimpering.����� "Oh! Oh! Unh! Yes, Laura . . . unh! Yes!"]� they never

ever give any details of the woman's vagina and clitoris which i find so

strange.� they never show the ramping up that you do and they never ever

really describe the vocalizations.� usually just moans and groans.� they

never use words like gurgling, squirming and whimpering.� your use of so

many different words works to make each seem so individual and fantastic

like great sex is.� i wish others would start doing what seems to come

naturally to you.

//� i like this next part when you show how sometimes things just happen

without any fore planning.� laura is slurping and pumping dee dee's hot

wet cunt in complete love and happiness.� sometimes when you are pumping

a nice hot pussy with two fingers you want to add a third and fourth as

you start to wedge fuck her driving her crazy and sometimes one just

slowly starts to work those fingers deeper and taking longer strokes to

get her pussy accommodated and you just start working her pussy deep

with your fingers until you reach your knuckles and they really start to

feel that completely filled loving.� they feel so full and pleasured.

it can be so easy to let events take its natural course.� i have done

this to women for the first time and i just make that heated, smoky eye

contact and they stare at me with lust filled eyes as i start to push my

knuckles in and suddenly their head flops back down and they start

moaning so long and lovingly and i can feel their legs parting wider and

their belly just flexing telling me to start working my fist in.� i so

swoon as that hot cunt flesh stretches so tight over my knuckles and

then slowly slides down the back of my hand and down to my wrist.

clinging with hot wet heat as i feel her spongy folds clasping my wedge

like a wet glove of love.� they just swoon and make that hard eye

contact if they have the strength to lift their heads again as their

breath hitches and whole pelvis judders with lust and need.� i love

seeing your pelvis judder, belly heave and neck cord as they feel my

fingers contracting into my love fist and i start to slowly pump and

twist.� sigh, the helpless cawing, twitching, sudden electrical spams

and eye rolls just make my soul soar with pure happiness and mirth.

fisting produces such strong love like here [She gave a small, strangled

groan. "Anngghh!" Her eyes watered as she gazed down at Laura.���� Laura

smiled up at her, feeling the same deep physical connection arise that

had arisen only a few minutes earlier when Dee Dee had done the same

thing to her.������ "Oh . . . Laura . . . yesssssss!" Dee Dee

half-moaned, her eyes rolling up, her lovely young body stiffening, then

undulating, encouraging Laura to really begin fucking her this way

now.]� this is two souls connecting in pure love and pleasure.� the

pleasure that only women can give to each other.

//� i like how you show that women are different.� some women need much

more gentle and loving.� others, they simply get off on hard and

harder.� i am in the laura and dee dee camp.� i want to be loved hard.

i'm into the physical (not sicko) kink of lovemaking and will never turn

that aside.� i love to have my cunt reamed like this too [In seconds

Laura's hand was reaming her tight, clinging pussy, and Dee Dee's pelvis

was jumping and churning off the mattress, pushing up into each thrust,

her cries increasingly desperate and urgent as the inevitable orgasm

approached.����� "Unngghh! Onngghhh! Oh shit . . . auugghhhh! Unggghh!

Yes! Yes!"]� i love it when joann or dodie get up on their knees and

really start to pound their love fist deep up my spasming fuck hole.

seeing them concentrate and the sweat dripping as they ram me again and

again with loving hard strokes of pure love.� i'm clenching deep in my

belly as i see dee dee thrusting her pelvis clear up off the bed to make

sure laura's fist goes into the hilt.� i want to see my cunt up your

forearm as you twist it on the out stroke and then make that hard eye

contact as you suddenly plunge in back up my stretched tight fuck hole

making my pound and claw the mattress and scream in helpless, thankful

pleasure as my womb starts that familiar quiver oh so deep in my belly

telling me it is about to immolate itself in ecstasy.� only you capture

this.� one author does fisting but she just basically says the girl

introduces her fist up her lovers cunt and fucks her with it.� that is

so fuckiiiinnnnggggg boring.� that is merely words while yours is the

purest most holy poetry of true love and fucking.

//� oh geez, you have always killed me because you have so perfectly

captured the ramping up of mind blowing sex.� it is the little things

like how you describe the sounds we make while rutting.� i have

complained vociferously about the lack of sounds during sex while you

give me "strangled groan" from dee dee.� with that phrase i can just see

the contorted ecstasy slashing her face while her throat cords up

straining out that strangled groan as her eyes burn with the fires of

hot love.� i can see the strain in her body as the sweat is beading and

running in rivulets down her divine black skin.� you talk of that almost

mystical connection you get while fisting.� feeling your fist and wrist

sunken deep in your woman's body making her mewl and love judder.� as

the sex ramps you show that verbal and non verbal communication that i

so adore ["Oh . . . Laura . . . yesssssss!" Dee Dee half-moaned, her

eyes rolling up, her lovely young body stiffening, then undulating,

encouraging Laura to really begin fucking her this way now.]� other

authors just have them fuck while you show that almost sublime

communication that women have with each other.� we really do live for

each other and strive with our every fiber to give our all to our women

in our bed.� you can so read it when your woman is ready for you to

finish her off with a loving slam fuck to rock her soul.� i so love

reading it in my woman and then delivering.� here really starting to ram

my fist deep up her cunt and using my other hand and mouth to take her

to heaven.

//� i love how you show that dee dee is like laura and me and wants it

hard, deep and rough.� i so love seeing the affection and love laura has

for dee dee shining through her eyes as she starts to really pound and

twist her fist deep up dee dee's cunt.� i so love feeling your cunt

clinging so hotly and tightly to my fist as i plunge it deep into your

inner folds.� i love ramming it hard and seeing my woman bowing up as

their eyes roll back and spasm almost in time with my fisting

sometimes.� then as the orgasm nears they just stay jackknifed at their

pelvis and give me that accordianing affect as they start to quiver and

face contorts more and more and i just bend down and love suck their

clit down my throat while reaching up and pulling a nipple hard and

taunt with my free hand.� i so revel looking up and seeing them suddenly

scream all caps as they suddenly flip and jackknife all around our bed

screaming as i scoot around to keep my fist plunging up their cunt

making them scream piteously as their womb immolates itself deep in

their belly.� i so live to feel my arm jolted by your throes of ecstasy

while my fist is squeezed and hotly soaked my your flooding love creams

straining to spasm out her rupturing cunt.

//� i see that laura uses my technique.� i love how you always, always

show that you use everything at your command to bring your woman off.� i

guarantee you that no other author has ever showed clit sucks while

fisting.� they are just wo one dimensional in their writings.� love

seeing laura using her thumb to rounghly massage dee dee's clit.� i love

feeling bigger clits mashing and squirting around as i try to press and

buzz it to ecstasy.� thank you for showing this.� hopefully, any men

reading your stories are really absorbing this.� their women will thank

them.� it is the little things that will drive your crazy.� of course i

love the hot love sucks and then have to smile as she backs off.� many

times it is simply impossible or darn right dangerous to try and keep

your lip lock when she is really thrashing.� i have seen stars many a

time.� [Laura instead reached forward and roughly massaged Dee Dee's

exposed clit with her thumb, even bending to suck it a few times, but

being forced away by the frantic pumping and twisting of Dee Dee's hips.

It did not matter, because a few more seconds after she pulled back, Dee

Dee came in shrieking torrents, her sleek hard body jouncing and

straining off the bed, her cunt spasming on Laura's hand as huge

wrenching shocks gripped her smooth flesh.�������������� "Aunngghhh!

Annnggghiiimmmnnneeeeee! Oh! Unghh! Oh! Anngghimmnneee!" she cried out,

surging and twisting, pumping, groaning, until finally the fierce jolts

began to recede.����� "Oh yes, honey, oh yes . . . oh honey honey . . ."

Laura murmured to her, holding her, though it was awkward since her hand

was still embedded in Dee Dee's throbbing cunt.]� sigh, this is why i

fuck.� to see and hear my women simply dying from pleasure i had a part

in.� the screams echoing around the room as the bed is jouncing and

banging from your wild flipping and see the sweat streaming and

splattering as your come soaks my fist and the bed underneath your

pelvis.� watching as the jolts start to subside and her spent, sweat

slicked body collapses back onto the bed with my fist jutting out their

spent cunt still feeling the aftershocks squeezing my fist and jolting

my wrist as you mewl and weakly flop your head around and maybe love

drool for me.

//� like the observation that it is awkward to cuddle with a fist up a

woman's pussy.� i am smiling as laura removes her fist and cuddles with

dee dee.� i love to lick the love cream off myself and share with my

woman and closest lovers i love to smear it in our hairs and face and

lick off.� what can i say, we are such sluts.� recently, i watched

hillary fist shari and cindy.� they are fisting sluts supreme and i

whispered to hillary about the mavis technique and then watching her

nearly killing them from coming so hard.� it was so hot watching her

striving to keep up with their wild grunting thrusts and sudden

jackknifes as she had to keep everything balanced as she grunted and

huffed jamming her rotating fists fast, hard and deep up their spasming

and dripping cunts.� then removing her fists from their spent cunts and

smearing her cum soaked fingers all over her face, tits, belly, upper

body and hair and then laying back and watching shari and cindy dreamily

climb onto hillary and half laying on her torso and starting at her

belly spending ten minutes slowly and purringly lick and lathe if off

while sharing languid kisses themselves to share their own cunt cream as

they worked up her body.� sigh, i so love watching hot sex.� love

reading how dee dee has wrecked the bed.� that means we have fucked

good.� now that i think about it, i'm not sure i have ever seen another

show their women wrecking the bed in their passion.� how strange.� i so

love seeing dee dee all destroyed after their fuck.� i live to see this

in my women.� i so love the post coital time you show and that reviving

of the flesh [Laura stretched out next to her and indulged herself in a

long, searching, affectionate kiss, holding Dee Dee's now-satiated body

against hers and feeling her own sexual need grow much more piquant.]� i

so love pulling spent lover(s) close and feeling our bodies molding in

spent love.� only you really capture with loving words that show divine

post coital time.� other authors just have them always cuddle and then

off to sleep.� please give me some variation!!� i love how the chapter

ends with dee dee getting to work and laura feeling the fires igniting

deep in her womb.� sigh what a way to end a chapter.

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Chapter 297:

//  i like how this chapter starts with our lovers sharing some quite

loving sharing time.  i love those times when you have that quite

sharing time and you express and listen to what each other has to say

with loving attention.  sometimes one has that time of just sitting in

front of the tv, reading together or out at some park or something and

your are mirthfully sharing.  but nothing is more special than that time

of sweet lassitude and gentle sweetness that permeates your souls after

good hard fucking.  i so love post coital time when you just hug and

gently kiss and caress after flesh is spent and you share deeply and

completely.  i so cherish this time with my archangels and the other

women i truly care for.  last weekend i spent the night over simonette's

house with a new girl she seduced.  a sweet formerly innocent girl by

the name of lucy.  she is a cute thai / american mix with big lovely

gourd tits.  simonette likes to share with me the first time she fucks

them with another woman.  i so love simonette.  we fucked the poor girl

nearly blind making her come over and over ripping our cocks deep up her

spasming cunt and asshole and letting her do us the same.  but i so

vividly remember the post coital time we snuggled and gently caressed

lucy and she told me about her life and dreams.

//  so i really love seeing a chapter start out with such loving

sharing.  i have to admit i have never shared sweet bonding time like

here.  i love the position of dangling ones tits in each other face

lying in different directions.  it is just that it leads to fucking with

me since i'm so easily wound up.  but it is so cool to see the

variations of life.  that is one reason i so love meeting and loving

other women is to see the infinite variety of life.  that is so sweet

them gently kissing and licking each other's tits while dreamily

conversing and sharing.  that is simply precious.  i will have to do

that when i'm completely satiated.  just a different version of holding

and caressing when you really think about it.  i get dreamy just

thinking of feeling my lover's nipples and tit being gently lathed and

sucked as i listen to her and taste the essence of her skin and

pheromones.

//  we get some of that sharing when laura is told that makeeda must

take another journey to further her career.  i can understand her

whining here with her personality.  laura needs other lovers but she

needs to spend as much time as possible with her current archangel.  it

is that focus that makes laura so special.  ten days must seem like

forever for her.  joann and maria must do a lot of traveling for their

job and for education and we so miss each other but we also know that

this is time when we can meet old lovers and seek new ones.  it keeps

our relationship so vibrant and alive.  we love to prowl when the cat is

away so to speak.

//  i like how makeeda thinks.  she has told laura the bad news first to

set her up for [Makeeda frowned, though behind the frown Laura could see

how delighted she was at having been asked back to the club.  "That's

the bad news," she confessed.  Her face was suddenly seized by a grimace

of sexual pleasure.  "God, if you don't suck one of those this instant

I'm going to scream."]  i have to smile at makeeda being happy to see

the anguish in laura's face.  i try to control my negative emotions but

i can't but feel myself lighten when i see a lover dying to have me and

showing me her love for me.  i am so happy to see love quickly rising to

the surface to remove any sting and pain her.  lovemaking can soothe so

much and is such a balm to frayed nerves and hurt feelings.  one needs

much love and the love that only women can truly give and share.  love

that humor only you show with makeeda growling out from laura's

ministrations ["You're not making me sorry.  You're making me want to

come."]  for some reason you are the only author to show this component

of any relationship.  a relationship without humor is such a drool and

deadly thing,

//  i am so happy that they commence to fuck until their bodies are

completely limp.  when i know my archangels are leaving for a while we

always fuck like bunnies to make sure our bonds are tight and sure and

give us many happy memories to savor and masturbate to over the coming

week.  i'm just happy that they can now fuck exuberantly and now have

laura not get in a tail spin funk and say hurtful things to wound both

of them.  she has grown and sees that it is so important to give and

receive all the loving you can get.

//  wow, i really like this next part.  it has been so long since laura

simply picked up a woman who is on the prowl.  i always have my gaydar

whirring and a few times over the years i have picked up or been picked

doing something like laura here shopping at macy's.  i just wish it was

a lot more often dammit.  i do know a lot of women who shop for pleasure

to relieve depression.  i cant' see it myself.  when i go to shop i'm

like a laser beam getting exactly what i want as fast as possible.

shopping in a mall is one of my definitions of hell.  now walking the

mall and people watching is something i love to do.  i so love looking

at all the women and girls all dressed to kill and be noticed.  i like

how you immediately begin showing us this divine new angel [The girl was

tall and willowy, a little like Laura, but more full figured, with

larger breasts and a swelling, gorgeous bottom under a tight navy blue

skirt, and scores of thin, long braids that fell nearly to her waist.]

oh yeah, my libido would be warming up.  i love the initial furtive

glances you show as they size each other up and see if they sense

interest.  i love feeling my pulse hitch and that little flush that

heats the skin when you sense new pussy has unexpectedly presented

itself.

//  wow, she is my kind of girl.  i will always rather be the prey than

the hunter and i know my pussy would be quivering seeing this vision

walking to me like she is towards laura.  i would be swooning seeing her

confident smile as invades my space and presents her perfumed wrist to

be sampled.  i would know this is a confident woman who is a confident

lioness and i am what she wants.  i would be love shaking with a aching

cunt and tingling hardening nipples.  i so love the dialog you show of

women connecting in new found love [She sniffed the girl's thin dark

brown wrist.  "Mmmmm.  Smells enchanting to me.  What is it?"

"Ysatis," the girl smirked sexily at her.  "Think it'll do the

trick?"      Laura felt her eyelids growing heavy with sexual innuendo,

almost in spite of her determination not to flirt.  "Depends on what the

trick is, I guess."]  i so love your dialog that show how women use wit

and candor to seduce their woman.  only you ever show this conversation

and wit and i so love your writings for showing this.  other stories are

just so bland without it.

//  i so love reading of that sexual current you can feel between your

eyes as lust is being communicated.  i can just feel my heart sing as i

become convinced that yes this new woman does indeed want me and soon my

face will be buried so deep and long in her cunt until it simply

explodes hot come into my starving gulping mouth.  i so love reading the

banter as they flirt about how much shelley shops there and then

discovering that shelley models for macy.  i just love looking at adds

and drooling over the women and just wishing so bad i could have them

all.  they are so beautiful like shelley.  i have to agree with laura

that if i have seen a woman that i want i simply don't forget your

beautiful face and body.  i soon make even the more plain janes into

ravishing goddesses in my mind.  a personality will soon make me fall so

hard for you until you seem like aphrodite herself beckoning me to your

bed.

//  i love how you show the communication becoming more bold and surer

as you and your new lover start to focus on your true desires ["I'll bet

you look great in your underwear," Laura said, feeling suddenly very

bold herself.      Shelley put the spray bottle down on the counter.  "I

already have tons of Ysatis.  I only used it as a way of meeting you."

A stark confession.]  when you both know what you want and know the

other feels the same why waste time?  i always want to fuck as soon as

possible.  i love braids in a black woman's hair and seeing braids down

to her ass would make my pussy a sopping mess.  love the smoky eye

contact of women in new love and knowing that soon your tongues will be

twining and plunging deep up cunts and maybe assholes.  i love reading

laura croaking out her desire to run her fingers through shelley's hair

when she offers.  i just love shake running my fingers through braids.

sigh, such a shame one must hide ones true nature so much.  i hate man's

world and its rules but i don't believe in messing with the bull either

and getting the horn.

//  geez, i so love your dialog and wit!! ["We can go to my place.  My

roommate's out of town.  Do you have anything pressing?  A date or

anything?"     "I do now," Laura smiled.]  this is women making each

other hot and i am so thankful to discover a writer who shows this.  she

drives laura to her place with her red sports bmw.  driving with verve

and skill.  like you showing such small details.  this shows me a

confident, bold woman who will fuck me so hotly in bed.  i see that

laura is like me.  always checking to see if their is a roommate, and if

one, finding out something about the woman or man.  love your words here

["My roommate is in Paris," she confessed.  "Working for Balenciaga, the

lucky bitch."  She smiled affectionately as she said this.  "I'm stuck

here with . . . you."  She made a devilish moue with her sensational big

lips, a mouth that Laura wanted to crush with her own.]  i so eat up the

obvious love shelley has for her roommate but then makes it immediately

clear she wants to fuck hard and hot with laura.  i so love sluts like

myself.  i wish all women could be so free to seek pleasure and women to

love and share.

//  i love how you show the racketing up of the heat.  it is time to add

the physical to the verbal foreplay with shelley asking laura to touch

her hair.  i so love touching my woman for the first time in our fuck

and feeling the electricity flowing between us.  i have always adored

how you constantly showing your women complimenting each other and

telling each other how special they are to each other ["I should warn

you," she said softly to Shelley as she approached, "that I sometimes go

briefly out of control when I touch the hair of a woman as beautiful as

you."]  i so love complimenting my women.  it is the truth and i want to

say it.  i feel most men are very weak in this area as i so often hear

after fucking their woman during our afterglow of sweet post coital

sharing.  tell her what you found special about her that brought you

together in the first place.  you must always remember to constantly

tell her the things she wants to hear.  i then love how you show they

both have their vanity under control with each thinking the other is so

hot and they are just average.  i know who and what i am but i do try

and make sure i don't get overly vain about it.  sometimes some of my

closest women can get a little vain over their looks.  i just roll my

eyes.

//  i love reading laura whispering her need to kiss shelley and shelley

saying [Shelley gave her a half-smile.  "Whatever you want, Laura," she

breathed.  "That's why I brought you here.  There was something in your

smile I couldn't resist."]  i so love reading about two women connecting

and acting on their natural desires.  desires man's world is always

trying to crush and subvert.  oh geez, you again slay me with that

poetic first moment again.  only you capture the magic of the initial

stages of each part of love making [Laura leaned closer and let her lips

brush Shelley's thick, sensual miracles.  Without even kissing her yet,

she let her tongue slide out and slipped it between Shelley's large

lips.  Shelley's white, even teeth were slightly parted, and the tip of

Laura's tongue slid right through the small gap.  It touched Shelley's

wet, pink tongue, and both of them shivered.      The next instant they

were kissing hungrily, and embracing too.  Laura's fingers bit into

Shelley's back.  Shelley's hands came up to Laura's face.  She drilled

her tongue deep into Laura's mouth, and sucked Laura's lips feverishly.

Laura could feel her pussy throb and melt almost immediately.]  i so

cherish those first moments of tasting her lips and nibbling on them and

sucking them then flowing my tongue into her mouth to ram down her

throat and war long and wetly with her tongue in a tight serpentine

dance of love.  feeling her tongue plunging into my mouth and raping it

with strong tongue strokes and sliding down the top of my tongue and

down my moaning throat.  like laura my cunt simply melts and soaks my

panties and lathers up my pelvis and runs down my thighs.

//  i am smiling great big when shelley confesses her need to fuck NOW

and confessing she has never acted on her impulses so rashly before.

hopefully, after this first time she will now seek and fuck more women.

life is short and i want all the pussy i can get.  i love seeing what

laura sees.  other authors never really describe their women and i so

hate that.  i want to see the whole woman like i do in real life and

only you give it to me like here [Laura had not noticed what a terrific,

high, swelling rump Shelley had.  Now that she was following her to the

bedroom, watching it sway enticingly, she could not take her eyes off

it.  Shelley, though not conventionally full-figured, had definitely a

more opulent body than the average model.  She was lean and taut, but

her breasts and bottom were larger than Laura's.]  other authors women

are just so boring bland i want to scream sometimes.  i love everything

about my women and i love seeing this in laura.

//  i love finding out that shelley's lover name is margaret and that

shelley is so open in sharing info about her.  i just know that margaret

is fucking beautiful women in paris.  i would die to know these two

women and fuck them both.  i like shelley's relaxed confidence and

openness [Shelley grinned slightly.  "Margaret.  Why, does it make it

more exciting for you if you know the name of the girl whose girl you're

screwing?"]  such confidence makes me so weak kneed.  you now start

loving the whole woman like only you do [Shelley was wearing a dark

green blouse that buttoned up the front, and Laura's fingers had the top

three buttons unfastened in seconds.  Her lips slid down Shelley's long,

smooth neck to her throat, then to the skin of her upper chest.

"I want to see you in your underwear," she whispered.  "To see if I

remember."]  i so love kissing and kneading my woman's skin as i undress

her.  igniting the fires of love and getting her hot for it.  love the

words of excitement to raise the temperature even higher.  stoking the

fire with all your senses is so important and other authors forget

this.  i would cringe to fuck like they write it.  only you capture the

poetry and beauty of true fucking and bonding.

//  i just swoon when i read that shelley has a "kittenish" way about

her.  i know that air and i simply want ot fuck you senseless when i see

it.  that one word adds so much to the story.  it adds depth and

dimension to this woman i am falling so hard for.  like the comment

about laura getting to fuck the model that girls like me can only

masturbate too while looking at them in photos.  i love looking at

on-line sites and catalogs and devouring the women and wishing so i

could fuck em all.  i have noticed that other authors have their women

go from fully dressed to completely naked in the blink of an eye which

is so not reality.  i know often we strip in great haste blind in our

lust but so often it is like this [She helped Laura begin to undress.

This moment, while both were still half-clothed but simmering with

sexual urgency, seeing one another's body for the first time, watching

the smooth, delicious flesh slowly come into view, was for both of them,

Laura realized, filled with the most exquisite magic, full of sensual

mystery and controlled but almost frantic compulsion.  You almost didn't

want to go any further, so potent was the feeling of sweet

anticipation.  And yet the feeling of Shelley's smooth, bare, dark brown

skin against her own made Laura's pussy flood with warm juices and grow

all squishy and tingly.]  seeing your woman's skin slowly coming into

view simply ignites your soul and cunt with fire.  and that delicious

tactile feel of her warm skin being pressed against yourself as you pull

her close and hold tight will tits mash and bellies heave against each

other and you squirm your flesh together in rising need.

//  wow, love the detail of laura feasting on shelley's scar.  i love

finding little unique things about my women and focusing on them.

scars, birthmarks, stretch marks, etc., i want to love and worship them

all.  it just makes my women keen and sometimes scream with passion.  my

straight women are simply not used to such focus and adore.  i always

smile knowing that they will give themselves to me completely as my

complete love slut.  i know their mouth, tits, cunt and asshole are all

mine for the taking and take them i will.  love seeing shelley's elegant

bra and how laura kisses all over shelley's upper chest and only then

her breast.  how she works down to the clasp but then moves back up to

the tops of her lifted up tits and kisses them anew.  one always needs

to vary the rhythm and prolong when feasible.  make their cunts stew in

hot juices dying for it.  only then asking permission to unclasp

shelley's bra.  i know shelley's cunt must have gushed a spasm of hot

come with that request.  i love working my women into that needful slut

state.

//  have to love the unveiling that only you give us [Laura smiled and

undid the clasp.  She pulled the cups away, exposing Shelley's

enchanting naked breasts. They were full, beautifully-shaped globes with

jutting dark brown nipples and wide, stippled aureoles, already excited

from Laura's controlled passion.        "Oh Shelley," Laura said calmly,

"they're so beautiful."  She cradled Shelley's marvelous breasts in her

palms.  "Macy's would sell even more of these bras if they let people

see what they're protecting."]  i so love seeing a new woman's tits for

the first time. each woman is such a unique masterpiece from flat

chested women to full breasted women.  i love em all.  i have always

loved how you actually give the details of breast worship.  other

authors just basically say they suck their woman's nipple you show us

[Laura swirled her tongue around one bulging dark brown nipple, then

sucked it slowly and sensually into her mouth.  Her eyes never left

Shelley's.  She tongued and sucked Shelley's nipple and watched the

pleasure saturate the girl's face, watching Shelley's mouth tighten a

little, and her dark eyes flash, then roll briefly up.  Laura released

Shelley's other breast and now clutched the one she was sucking loosely

in both hands, swirling her tongue rapidly over the stiffening bud,

feeling the tiny bumps that sprang up on Shelley's thick aureole,

feeling the saliva overflow her lips until a big string of it ran from

her chin to Shelley's wet nipple.]  you show the variation and how your

lovemaking of her breast flows from moment to moment.  you show us the

pleasure the woman receiving feels and little details like the spittle

that often connects a mouth that has been pulled back from her tit

loving.  thank you for showing us why lesbian lovemaking can never be

matched by anything.

//  i always love it when your women express their pleasure to each

other.  i have always smiled when laura worries about being too rough or

messy.  i seek sluts like me and i am always teaching my more reserved

lovers to open up and partake of all the love one has to give.  i do

watch them closely for body language and facial expressions and use that

to guide my ways.  to know when to back off and to start teaching.

pleasure is my first goal.  love seeing the clothes flying everywhere.

oh wow, you capture that sensuous twinning of limbs that i so love [For

several minutes all they did was kiss hungrily and run their hands all

over each other.  Shelley was not a passive lover but nearly as

aggressive as Laura, kneading Laura's ass and thighs and back with her

fingers, searching for Laura's aching nipples with her mouth, sucking

thirstily, then groaning with excitement as Laura's mouth again found

hers.  They twisted and squirmed excitedly together, kissing and

stroking each other's flesh, taking turns at each other's breasts, then

kissing again even more frantically.]  i have never seen another author

capture this full body clench of arms pulling upper bodies tight as tits

mash and legs twine up as you devour mouth and tits.  i can do this

forever as we roll around the bed first me on top, then bottom or lying

on our sides as we clutch and plunge tongues down each other throats.  i

so love feeling our tits mash and squashing as we rub and hump while our

sweat slavers our heated body and runs off of us in streams and mingles

over our pulled tight flesh.  i sometimes just scream in mind blowing

pleasure from such loving embraces screaming out your name and how much

i love you.

//  i like how laura thinks.  i need lots of hot and heavy but the way

to simply destroy a woman is [They had to get beyond the conflagration

stage for true epic sex to occur, and she was eager to make it happen

herself, eager to see Shelley completely pliant and vulnerable to her

caresses, eager to hear her gasp and whimper and cry out in sharp,

unavoidable rapture.]  this is what i live to give and receive.  this is

how wombs are destroyed and minds simply blasted with pure fucking

pleasure.  i so love reading of laura sliding south for nirvana making

sure to kiss plenty of taunt heaving belly and kissing belly button and

settling between spread thighs and smelling that heavenly gash and

seeing the beauty that is a woman's vagina.  i so love the perfection of

each pussy.  i so love gazing and memorizing each cunt and slowly

bending down and getting my first taste and feeling her pussy lips

gliding under my tongue and between my lips.  i so love discovering a

new pussy like here [She ran it up and down Shelley's vulva.  Shelley's

breathing seemed suspended as she strained to feel each minute sensation

of Laura's tongue tip sliding up and down her swollen pussy lips.  She

couldn't keep her hands away from her crotch.  They slid down her thighs

and with her fingers she pulled her pussy open wider for Laura.  Now the

hot, glistening, dark pink pit was gaping and inviting, and Laura could

not keep her tongue from dipping deeply into it.]  exploring her outer

lips, their length and thickness and then feasting on her inner petals

and discovering all her folds and undulations with my deep exploring

tongue and sucking lips.

//  i so love how you show using the spoken word to further inflame your

woman like ["Darling Shelley, you have such a beautiful pussy," Laura

purred, licking the interior wetness and slurping down the flowing

juices.  "I am going to suck your beautiful pussy so much that you die

of coming.  Would you like that?"      "Oh  . . . god . . . yes!

Unhhhh!"]  i can feel cunts get wetter with such words and feel them

humping my mouth, cunt or cock all the harder as they nearly go wild

with my hot words of love exciting them on.  again i love how only you

capture the pleasure of the woman getting head.  i love hearing that

hitch in breathing and feeling her belly palpitating and her breathing

getting more fevered as i start my love assault.  the sounds of rutting

and love as she starts to hump my head and seeing her hands loving

herself or like here spreading open her outer lips to present her open

wet vagina for my love tongue.  only you capture these small moments of

rapture of lovemaking.  i so cherish all these signs of my woman giving

herself completely to me.  i want her totally abandoning herself to me

and give herself to me completely so i can fuck with our souls totally

connected in true love.

//  now you show how one truly loves a pussy.  most other writers just

basically say that woman is giving head with some details but you get no

real sense of her rhythm or method.  they do say the woman going down

enjoys (of course!!!) but they make it so mechanical.  also, it almost

always seems full speed ahead from the first lick.  yes, sometimes this

is how the fuck proceeds in both of our hunger and need but usually one

wants to feast like here [She licked every inch of it.  She burrowed her

tongue into the slimy warm slit, and then spread open Shelley's clitoral

hood with her thumbs to expose the little oval pinkish bead of her

clit.  This she licked in long, tender swipes, unwilling to over-arouse

Shelley, or to bring her to the snapping point too quickly.  Oh no . . .

oh no, Laura thought, you come when Mama says you come.  Not a moment

sooner.]  i want your cunt exploding in my mouth but i need long, long

minutes of contended cunt devouring of tender red wet cunt meat.  i want

to explore every square centimeter of your cunt.  this takes time and

only you show this time of feasting of licking, sucking, tongue fucking

and just plain ole burying your face hard and deep and grinding in while

your tongue flails the depths of her cunt and your nose is ramming her

clit before you move up to swallow her clit down your throat with supper

hard deep throat love sucks.

//  of course i love the words of pleasure from shelley and laura giving

loving words of pleasure to come.  now you back off which is so

necessary to make a woman really come super hard.  worrying her clit to

the point of explosion and then once more exploring her fuck hole and

maybe down to hear asshole for some nice dining and kissing her thighs

and belly to get her sweet skin taste.  calm her down for the love kill

to come.  one thing that i have come to lament in other's fiction is the

lack of communication.  first they fuck basically in silence.  true some

women are quieter than others but most can be coaxed to let their

passion out.  but another thing they don't show is women battering and

negotiating over how the fuck will proceed.  we all have favorites and

desires.  here we see laura wanting some trib action and shelley lets it

be known she is to close and likes basic oral the best anyway.  we see

that laura knows she will get her trib and happily gets to cunt meat

dining.  only you show how we communicate to make the fuck flow so

beautifully.  i am happy that at least one writer captures this true

life dynamic.

//  i so love how you capture the ramping up of a great fuck.  laura

reaches up to fork and pull a swollen nipple and shelley's own hands are

now pumping her own tits giving herself maximum pleasure possible and

always love it as a woman's pelvis goes crazy and her cunt is humping

hard up into my starving mouth helping to drive my tongue deep up her

fuck hole or mashing her clit and upper cunt meat in my mouth and when i

suck it in for the love kill.  i work your cunt so lovingly for what i

live for [She was almost deceived for a brief instant, because Shelley

began to come soundlessly, only emitting a few strangled squeaks from

deep in her chest as her lovely young body stiffened.  Still holding the

girl's clit between her lips, Laura let her eyes drift up Shelley's

delicious writhing naked body to her face, where she could now see

definite confirmation that Shelley was coming violently.  Her face was

contorted in seizure of excruciating pleasure.      "Ungghhh!  Oh!" she

suddenly found her voice again.  "Annngghiiieee!  Auunggghhhh!"]  my

soul sings and i feel pure happiness and contentment as i swallow your

hot bolts or spurts of come and feeling my mouth buffeted by your wild

humps up into my starving mouth and working to keep in sync with your

humping body.  i can just feel my womb leap hard when i look up and see

a face destroyed by pure pleasure and you're screaming out my name and

telling me how much you love me.

//  i so bask in the words of love and thankful pleasure that is

expressed by shelley.  i always compliment my lovers so highly for the

heavenly wrenching orgasms they give me.  i want to inspire them to give

me many more cunt rupturing or asshole shredding orgasms during our

continuing night of loving or when we meet again.  i am smiling as laura

starts angling for her trib action but we discover that shelley gets a

sensitive clit after a good come.  it takes a few orgasms to start

getting my clit really sensitized but thankfully after just a short rest

she is ready to go again for more hot fucking.  sometimes i "almost"

feel guilty for coming so much.  nah, not really.  i am soooo thankful.

i like how shelley thinks and wants to eat laura out as she lets her own

body rest.

//  i love how you describe the pure pleasure a woman feels when their

nipples are sucked by another woman [Laura was going to say something,

perhaps something clever, but Shelley's thick, sensual lips on her

nipple, toying with it, then sucking it into her warm, wet mouth, took

her breath away.  The feeling was so intense that she swore she could

feel fresh nectars gushing into her already wet pussy.      "Oh god, it

feels so good," she whimpered softly to Shelley, stroking her long thin

braids with one hand.  "You are so gorgeous.  God, I'm glad I met

you."]  i know that feeling of going to say something and your mind just

whites as sudden pleasure throttles your mind.  i know my cunt gushes

when my tits are sucked well and i start my love humping the air as my

cunt slavers cunt juice all over my pelvis, thighs and running down to

soak my asshole.  i can just feel my body vibrating with pure fucking

pleasure especially when she looks up into my eyes an tells me with her

eyes that she so enjoys swallowing and racking my nipples hard with her

teeth.  makes me scream sometimes with pleasure.

//  i so love reading that shelley is half lying on laura as she sucks

her nipples and laura is reveling in that weight which i so crave to

feel.  i really like how you show that lovers do more than one thing at

a time which other authors never show.  here shelley is playing with

laura's pussy folds getting her fingers all lubricated feeling that warm

slimy feeling of fingers covered in heavenly womanly fluids.  ready to

sucked cleaned and shared.  have to smile at shelley letting us know

margaret is white and jealous of shelley bedding other white women.  how

silly and foolish.  she should be so happy for shelley and working to

share.  it would so increase both of their pleasures.  it is this spice

that gives your life so much.  shelley moves down for heavenly gash and

love the communication where laura pleads for quick and shelley is

willing to forgo her right to long cunt dining and quickly delivers the

love kill [And in fact she was right, though it took a little longer.

In thirty seconds she was keening and whimpering, her pelvis churning in

a controlled though nearly desperate rhythm, as the waves of her

approaching orgasm began to gather, then spill.      "Oh . . . now . . .

yes Shelley . . . yes . . . oh now . . . unhhhh!  Unhhhgggghh!  Oh dear

oh yes . . . unngghhhh!  Anngghmmnnnggggeeeee!"]  sigh.  nothing is more

perfect than feeling your cunt searing itself while your womb explodes

deep in your belly and you can feel those wrenching spasms squeezing out

those hot waves of come flooding her mouth if she has her face buried

deep with her mouth wide sucking down my hot come or splashing over hard

driving fingers or if she is concentrating on pulling and swallowing my

clit down her throat i can feel my cunt juices splashing all over her

face and my thighs and belly as i scream out my love and pleasure.

//  i love the fishing for compliments by shelley here asking laura if

she is not a dud.  of course she knows she isn't but what woman doesn't

like compliments.  i know i have done this.  i just preen when i hear my

women singing my praises.  i have to smile at them smoking some weed.  i

simply don't do anything involving drugs, drinking or smoking.

especially anything that packs the calories on.  i know a few girls from

high school and college who have ruined their figures from beer or

munches after smoking dope.  shudder.  still, you are capturing life

because you often have to take a break between loving rounds and i love

how you capture real life in your writings.

//  sigh, now i get some more of that dialog that i so crave and want to

read.  their are some things that some authors hit some but one of the

things that they always miss is the dialog of women at play and love.

for some reason whatever dialog that may have been occurring before the

copulation it suddenly comes to a screeching halt once the loving

begins.  that is not real life with lesbian lovers.  we express our

desires, needs and simple love for our woman.  like here, laura simply

can't wait for some more loving.  once my motor is revving i want my

pussy and get all agitated if i am made to wait for some silly amount of

time and i must try and move things forward.  i need to taste, fuck and

consume my woman.  i love how you show the mirth and love of lovers at

play [No sooner had she stood them there than Laura grabbed her and

pulled her aggressively back down on the bed, rolling her onto her back

and sliding up on top of her, sucking her shoulder, squeezing her

breasts, nipping her delicious black earlobe.      "Aiiyyeee!" Shelley

squealed, giggling and squirming free, though still partially entangled

with Laura.  "You beast!  Let me go!  I'm hungry, I have to eat!"

Laura pinned her to the sheet, holding her wrists.  "Not until I fuck

you again, my sweet," she panted, grinning.  "You are too desirable.  I

can't get enough of you.  I need your beautiful pussy, I need to suck it

and fuck it and push my pussy into it."      "Oh god, you are so hot!"

Shelley gasped.  "I can't believe it.  That anybody could be so hot."]

of course great sex really bonds but the verbal expressing of desire,

love and simple liking is what really cements relationships that make

you constantly desire your fuck angels again and again as often as you

can consummate your love for each other.  i so love putting the light of

love and desire in my women's eyes and making them die for me as they

make me for them.

//  a blissful feeling of contentment is filling me as you make again

that initial moment of coming together so fucking special.  only you put

the magic of great sex on the page.  you always capture that magic of

first touch or penetration like here [Their motions were smooth and

flowing, and it seemed that their bodies were already vibrating in some

mysterious unison, their nerves already connected and thrumming with

anticipation.  Laura had slipped one leg under one of Shelley's before

the girl even knew what she was doing, and their groins came together

almost fluidly, sliding and slipping against each other, a tangled mass

of warm wet hair and oily cunt lips mashing together.      "Unhh!

Unhh!" Shelley grunted softly, her eyes rolling up briefly as their wet

cunts pressed together.      "Ohhhhh!" Laura sighed, feeling her own

body sag, then fill with strong, renewed, even fiery hunger for

Shelley's sleek flesh.  "Oh yes.  Anngghh!"]  by the gods i so love

feeling our thighs sliding past each other in this position and that

first contact and then mashing our cunts as soaked mounds and lips start

smearing and sharing our cunt juices.  i so know that rolling back of my

eyes in my head and spasming as i caw and grab a leg hard to start

grinding our cunts and clits hard together to simply make our clits

explode in pure fucking pleasure as they mash into the others cuntlips

and clits as our rhythm of love starts up.

//  i so love how you capture that non verbal state you can fall into as

you are sweeping your weeping, spasming sopping wet cunt up and down

each other's cunt.  i can trib fuck like this for what seems like

hours.  varying the tempo and angels and just staring off into space as

pure love and lust is communicated between our lubricating and spasming

twats.  i so love just feeling her twat humping and where our legs are

working and sliding against each other all covered in sweat.  just

humping and cawing softly as my womb quivers deep in my belly and

getting up on my elbows from time to time to look down our bodies and

seeing the heavenly pleasure on her face.  you make this so real with

your use of the english language.  others would just say they tribed

with some basic words to tell of the humping while you use words like

[smoldering sensuality and rhapsodic fucking, undulating and gyrating

together slowly, harmoniously]  now that makes it plain why trib fucking

is so fucking special.

//  another thing you capture so well is how things flow during a fuck.

when other authors describe a fuck it is plain and vanilla and they

always move it forward in a very linear boring way.  they never show any

variation in their oral, trib or strap-on sex.  they always get in their

first position and stay there.  ho-hum.  yeah, sometimes that is how you

fuck but a nice long slow fuck usually flows like this [They were

completely synchronized in their motions, and the long, protracted

sequence of their fucking seemed broken into stages, though Laura could

never tell when one stage began and another ended.  In one stage they

were languorous and relaxed, pumping together softly and relentlessly;

in another they were almost hysterically urgent, thrusting and whinnying

and grinding each other roughly; in yet another they swarmed over each

other, changing positions, one rising on top, then the other, one

scissoring her legs frantically, the other pumping hard in a missionary

position.  They kissed and fondled each other both tenderly and more

aggressively throughout this puzzling, endless sequence, and when Laura

finally began to feel the stirrings of an inevitable climax sing through

her body, she instantly knew that Shelley was feeling the same thing.]

love how you show the slow and then the fast.  plus, you are the only

author that show one woman rising up on top her lover and riding her

hard and rough.  i so love throwing one leg over my shoulder and just

grinding down hard and fast while reaching down and pulping her tits

with my free hand.  i have made women simply scream helplessly as they

come hard humping wildly and helplessly simply soaking our twats and bed

in her bolts of love cream.

//  i am so with laura and shelley as their bodies are simply pummeled

and wombs shredded as they come shrieking.  i so love coming hard and

screaming my joy for all the gods to hear and love to hear it in my

women.  screaming like animals, with curses and declarations of adore

and love gasped and mewled out.  when thing i love about most trib

positions is being able to look at my woman's face as it is shredded by

coming.  of course when you achieve a multi-orgasm like hear it is so

hard to concentrate on her face as your screaming and your eyes lose

focus as your face slashes and grimaces through seizures of pure fucking

bliss.  plus, when your head is whipping around it is hard to focus on

her angelic face being shredded by intense spams of fucking bliss.  i so

love doing what laura does here [Laura did not hear her own sharp

scream, but was too devastated by this fierce clenching of her body to

worry about it.  The white-hot pain that was also pleasure seemed to

take forever to release her.  It went on and on.  She revived enough to

grasp Shelley, who was shuddering and grimacing through her own version

of this sweet torture, and they adjusted their bodies enough to embrace

each other as the incredible spasms began to weaken.]  i always crave

that full body contact after great sex and love pulling my woman on top

of me even as my body is still spasming and jerking as i make my arms

gently pull her close even as my arms and hands jerk and hitch with

aftershocks and then lying her on top of me and feeling her aftershocks

and harsh breathing bellowing her tummy down on me as our sweat covered

tits mash and squirm as i guide her mouth to mine and we twine our

tongues in languid love of shared spent bliss.  yours is the only

writings that make me feel this in the written word and i so very much

thank you for this.

//  they start to share sweet post coital time and coo out their

compliments at each other skill like great lovers do.  compliments keeps

one striving to give even more spectacular orgasms.  sure does me.  have

to love how shelley thinks [Shelley made the same moue with her lips

that she had made earlier.  "What she doesn't know won't hurt her.

Shoot, she's probably fucking some beautiful black model over in Paris,

after a day on the ramps."]  shelley is a love slut after my own heart.

she is fucking around and she doesn't care if margaret is fucking

beautiful women in paris.  i so wish all women were free to know their

true lesbian self's.  our bodies were made to be given freely and often

to as many women as we can love.  life is too short to waste it on man's

petty rules.  though they are good for a good hard sport fuck when the

mood strikes.  power has it's own appeal.  just have to endure their

pathetic male ego.  but hell, let the little boys have their hour and

then kick them the hell out of your bed until you need them again.

//  love them sharing about their archangels.  i love telling about my

various archangels.  gets them hot for the current fuck and plants the

seeds for future sharing.  of course, some women you do have to help

with the jealousy thing but usually that can be handled.  love them

resting and then having more great sex where they coil and slowly take

each other to paradise.  sigh, i so love to fuck and fuck with those

little love breaks in between to recharge batteries and let clits rest.

sigh, it is time for the loving to end for the night.  sometimes having

to work is a bitch.  i so feel for laura and her continuing pangs of

guilt over makeeda.  like shelley says, what she doesn't know won't hurt

her.  what is laura supposed to do when she leaves for these long

trips.  one has the right to seek pleasure until your archangel

returns.  i always want to leave my woman dying for more of me and i

really like how this chapter ends ["Tomorrow night?" Shelley asked

plaintively at the door.      Laura grinned at her again.  How could she

resist?  "Yes.  Tomorrow night."      "Oh goody, I can't wait."]  i love

bringing out the little girl in my lovers.

 

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