Holy crap, I actually get mail from people who like what I write. Let's read a few...
Oh, and BTW, there are spoilers for my stories on this page as I do respond to e-mails concerning them, so take that into account before you read.
from Laura date Thu, Jun 14, 2012 at 5:36 AM subject Regarding Your Stories If your'e interested, I'd like to talk to you about getting some of your stories published electronically and making some money.
Let me know.
Thank you,
Laura
No, for three reasons.
from Michael date Thu, Jul 15, 2010 at 6:23 PM subject As it was meant to be Illogicalities I noticed in the story:
1. Ken is introduced to Mikkel's family as a doctor, but no one expects him to help the old man when he has his attack. I doubt they would have contemplated the concept of any doctor other than a medical one. Certainly Alice's comment ‘Oh … from a town other than Charleston? I already know the doctor there.’ supports this view.
2. Alice left school after her 2nd year. And she still can't read? My sons certainly managed it before the end of their 1st year. Stutteringly at times, but all they needed was practice. And with Mikkel reading each evening, his disdain for his children's illiteracy seems odd. Come to that, since he appears not to speak English, why does he have some English books?
3. After the earthquake, Ken reviews his actions and decides that he has made Alice get through her work a bit faster than she would have done had he not been there. Therefore, she would not have been further down the ladder were it not for him, she would not even have reached the top. So he had no cause to kill her.
Heaven forbid a story about time traveling and underage sex be "illogical."
1. Although he does state that he is a doctor, he more or less stumbles in the door moments after Mikkel collapses. He has no tools, no medicine, no clear indication of what exactly has gone wrong. Could he do CPR? Sure, but is that any guarantee it will save the old guy? Let's not forget, he's already possibly screwed up the timeline once by messing with Alice's fate. Can he really afford to do the same by saving Mikkel? I grant you, giving Mikkel another chance at his advanced age probably wouldn't cause Nazis to ride dinosaurs through the streets of New York City in the 1940s, but Ken doesn't want to take his chances. Besides, considering it took 30 minutes for the real doctor to get back anyways, there probably wasn't a whole lot that could have been done anyways. Medicine in the 1830s wasn't exactly great, and even now old people die even with prompt modern medical attention. I'd chalk it up to fate.
2. Did we lose sight of the fact that it's 1836? An illiterate farm girl isn't exactly a rarity, and Hooked on Phonics or a comprehensive and thorough educational system was probably kinda hard to come by. As for the books in english, Charles had only died a month ago, and it may be safe to assume that either he, or his mother, who had died 2 years earlier, could read them.
3. But how can he be sure? Yeah, Alice may not have died in the original earthquake, but in this timeline, she certainly had a chance to if Ken hadn't been there, be it from the upturned pitchfork or from the fall to the floor itself from any height. Even if killing her would have been the wrong thing, and she had gone on to live a full life, there's no guarantee that she would have had children anyways. Consider that she and her sister were due to become orphans in a few months anyways, and there's no telling how their lives may have turned out then, particularly if Alice had become crippled from the fall. There are a lot of what-ifs, and Ken's decision, to end her life or let it continue is one of those what-ifs, either one of which could drastically change things from how it all played out...or, consider the title of the story. Who's to say that what was written, was how it always was? What if, in the past of the present timeline that Ken came from, there also was this mysterious person who showed up on a road outside Mikkel Ottosson's farm in 1836, who stayed with him and his daughters for 6 weeks before vanishing for 4 months before suddenly returning again? What if, everything really was As It Was Meant To Be?
from Penqwin date Fri, Jul 9, 2010 at 3:30 PM subject The Mall One of the best stories I've ever read; certainly in the top ten.
My favourite age bracket (as seems to be yours as well) and romantic with sympathy and kind-heartedness.
Much appreciate your references to 'good pedophiles' too. We do exist! During my life of over 50 years, I've experienced five girls who made it plain I had the option, but took none.
Two of those were girls who were already 'damaged goods' and I wasn't about to reinforce their conditioning, although they knew I was interested - lots of cuddles, a couple of friendly kisses but not one sexual touch.
Unfortunately, Internal Affairs took my computer, May 2008, and I was prosecuted for possessing inappropriate images. Now I'm a convicted sex offender but can't help ruing a degree of over-kill, even though what I did was illegal and bloody stupid.
I have a few stories at storiesonline.net, under the pen-name Penqwin. They're about romantic and gentle, sexual relationships with barely-pubescent girls. I've got a few unfinished yarns but they'll probably stay that way as I'm dubious about being under possible continued scrutiny - paranoia can be a healthy thing!
Regards,
Penqwin
Oh I know we exist. I'm one of them, and I commend you on your self-control, while simultaneously cringing at your offender status. As I said on my profile page, I too had those sorts of pictures well over a decade ago, before I really knew what they were, and got rid of them once I realized how much I would lose if I was ever caught with them, and that was at age 13. I can't blame you for being paranoid. I'm sure I would be too if I were in your position.
from Richard date Wed, Jul 7, 2010 at 3:52 PM subject FB; It Began One . . . Greetings Hardguy, Thank you for the story. I enjoyed it very much. I found it to be thoroughly charming with some delightful tense moments. Please forgive me for noting that I found Jack's reluctance to violence unpleasantly disturbing. I prefer my heros to at least attempt to rescue the damsel in distress, despite the circumstance. Personal preferance aside the story remains with me brightening my days.
Thank you again, Richard
I dunno, Richard. I never considered Jack a hero. He just kinda got caught up in everything, and did what he thought was right. Personally, I kind of liked how justice was meted out in the end. In fact, I wrote that part before a great deal of the middle of the story.
from yeller (Hayama Kotono's Scanlations) date Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Tue, Jul 6, 2010 at 2:58 PMsubject Inuboshi I wouldn't say that the girls are "forced" in most of Inuboshi's stories, usually it is consensual from the beginning.... only a minority of his works I'd say include girls actually being forced to...
I think you are misrepresenting Inuboshi by saying most of his stories are like that... I'd say it is only about 25% of them have girls who are forced/tricked into doing it.
Just look at "Always Watching", Itsuki pretty much initiates it the first time. Even in Miyabi Dream'n Miyabi was caught masturbating and you might be able to make the argument she wanted him to do it anyways... In Akina she definitely isn't forced/tricked whatsoever... How can you say Ichigo and Mint are forced in either of their stories? As far as Sakura goes, though, you are right... she was tricked/forced into it at first... but she did make the contract.
Please correct this on your lolicon page... I think you are misrepresenting Inuboshi on the whole for less than half of his overall works... by saying the girls are usually forced.Also.. wouldn't so much say "cat eyes", as just the bright-large eyed anime style... Inuboshi = Dogstar, Inu = Dog, Boshi = Star.
And I'd say most of his girls have a much more "dog" attitude than a "cat" attitude. Just my two cents.Also... Inuboshi has never done a doujinshi (indie publication) EVER, his stuff is all properly published manga, he does not make doujinshi.
He does Ero-Manga or H-Manga, not doujinshi. Aoyama Reo for example does both manga and doujinshi, it just depends how it was published.
Doujinshi = independently published
Manga = published/distributed by a sponsoring company in magazines, and then later if there is demand the manga stories published in magazines by a particular artist, a publisher may release an artist compilation book with a collection of their stories. These collections are called tankoubons.
Ok, a little explanation for the rest of you. I had a section about Inuboshi over on my Lolicon page, because he's probably my favorite lolicon author, and made sure to link it to the Hayama Kotono Scanlations site, because they mostly focus on his work. Yeller, who sent me 3 e-mails the day after I put the page up, took some issues with with I wrote (as you can see), and it just kind of felt like anything I wrote wouldn't satisfy him, so I removed the section on Inuboshi, but did leave his name in the list of lolicon authors, and of course put a link to Hayama Kotono with the rest at the bottom of the page.
Yeller, it's obvious that you're passionate about this, otherwise I doubt you'd have gone to the trouble of, well, chastising me over what I wrote. In my defense, it's not like I spent a good deal of time working on those few lines, and as such I just checked the first few pages of a few scans to see if the lasting impression I had of Inuboshi's scenarios, which was one of generally reluctant or sexually ignorant girls being coaxed/seduced into their first sex act, which they then enjoy and at the end they indicate they want more of it. Those few that I looked at, mostly confirmed that impression on me, and so I went with it.
The cat vs. dog thing is really a matter of personal observation, and 'cat' was the first thing that came to mind. Yes, I knew his name means 'dog star,' but it didn't register in my brain when I wrote that.
As for manga/doujinshi, with the prevalence of hentai and loli doujins out there, that's an easy mistake to make. I'd chalk that up to my American conditioning to just figure that all lolicon material is produced via "underground" channels. Oh if only the US could be as openly perverted as Japan is.
from Bree date Sun, Jul 4, 2010 at 1:57 PM subject I'm impressed! Hardguy,
You make it very difficult to email you! I actually meant to after I read your repost of the "It Started at the Mall" story and never got that industrious. I just read the start of your "Offer" story and figured it'd be inexcusable to not make the effort.
I'm not sure how to appropriately convey that your stories turn me on in spite of my distaste for pedophilia stories generally. I'm grateful you aren't making them 6, but I'd still love to read that they were 13 or 14! Beggars can't be choosers, of course.
I think the Offer is a promising start. I'm curious where you're heading with it, because you're already starting to develop the contrast between Miriam's would-be-rapist and Kate's would-be-hero. It's more sophistication than I'd usually expect from this sort of thing. I'll be watching anxiously to see how you finish!
Bree
Hah, well, I hadn't put the feedback form page up yet, so I hope it's easier to e-mail me now. ;)
Kids under age 10 or so just don't do it for me. Part of that is because of the physical form that I'm attracted to, and the other is sort of from a hygiene standpoint. I have young nieces and nephews, and while I am in no way planning on doing anything sexual with them, just being around them has taught me something about children: they're filthy little creatures. Seriously, if somebody can't be bothered to use a napkin after they eat, I don't want to know what less visible parts of their bodies are like. At least in those few years leading up to adolescence, they start to feel some kind of awareness of if they're clean or not.
I feel really good about Theoffer getting done sooner rather than later. When I sit down to work on it, I just feel like I'm on a roll and the words come spilling on out.
from poppaclyde date Fri, Jul 2, 2010 at 3:06 AM subject Daddy's Bed I enjoyed this story and can see that it has lots of intriguing possibilities.
I look forward to reading it all again when you have finished it.
Have you visited the Darles Chickens pages on this site? Good stories about consensual sex with young girls. SIte has been moribund for about two years so don't think the stories that have potential will be completed, but it is good.
Just about to read about Miriam, although I don't like stories with any force or violence in them.
Best wishes
Yours aye
Poppaclyde
Thanks, yeah, Daddysbed is probably the closest one I have to finishing something next. I actually feel like I'm going to end up rewriting some of it, because I know the ending I want to give it, but I'm having something of a brain fart when I try to actually get there from what I've already put down. I open it back up every month or so, and usually go on to work on something else instead rather than stare at it frustratedly.
Nope, haven't checked it out.
I don't plan on violence in Theoffer, but as for force...well, can't promise anything.
from jim date Tue, Jun 29, 2010 at 7:23 AM subject It happened at the mall Just discovered then finished the story...loved it. You're not being immodest when you say "well written", very erotic as opposed to a "jack off" tale. It taps directly into the fantasies of a man like me i.e. the girls ages (nice trick at the end intro'ing the 10 year old) the live-in aspects, young friends and inclusion of the "daddy" idea...you covered all the bases. Thank you! However those standards seem to have been abandoned in the GYM story...I read it with high hopes but was disappointed (guess I'm not into rape/humiliation, etc) but your postscript explanation helped my understanding of the style change. Thanks again for the "Mall". Jim
Glad you liked Mall. I'm still pretty proud of it myself, going on 5 years since I finished it. As for Jules, I'm not really sure what plans I have in store for her, if any. Not surprisingly, Gym is not for everybody. It's intentionally over the top, and the story tags kind of let you know what you're in for. It's an intentional lark based off of somebody else's fantasy, and not really an example of all the other stuff I write. That said, a little variety never hurt anybody.
from lilkidsex date Sun, Jun 27, 2010 at 12:15 AM subject Welcome and Thanks Hi Hardguy,
i just wanted to say hi and it's good to know you are interested in writing Mg an pedo stories on Asstr.org
I have heard of Mr Double's site but did not register and pay (for security issues) for the stories and could not find a way to get free access. I had seen your username there.
I hope to see some of your stories and let you know what i think of them in the near future. I hope we can keep in contact and share out interests later on. I know i will enjoy them as much as you write them.
I wish you all the best.
P.S. Do you know of any good peso sites to access freely as i need more videos and stuff. Only if you wish to disclose
Thanks, Scott
No. I don't support that stuff in anyway.
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