This story is based on the story Season Pass by Mesmer's Bauble.
"Look, Luke, I'm telling you - you'll never regret it! You've got to trust me. It'll be the best decision you've ever made."
Luke looked at his coworker with a disbelieving eye. "It's a lot of money, Jeff. You have to tell me what it'll get me."
"I already told you, I can't tell you. I literally can't. But I can say you'll be totally amazed and totally satisfied - I guarantee it. Come on! You're already spending a fortune on your holiday - go for the platinum. I know you're good for it; I saw how big your bonus was. Come on, you've got to do it."
"Okay, okay, jeez! I'll give it a try - it's only money, right? So, ah, how do I do this?" Luke asked.
"Here, call this number, they'll take care of everything." Jeff slapped his coworker on the back and chortled. "Damn! Another Platinum Pass member. You're gonna love it!"
Luke walked through the wide gates of the amusement park with his wife Amber and their ten-year-old daughter, Alicia. Amber and Alicia were so excited to be wearing platinum pass medallions around their necks. With the platinum pass, not only could they ride any ride in the park, but there was a special line just for platinum pass members that was guaranteed to be no more than five minutes, no matter how long the regular line was. And they would get twenty-five percent off at any shop in the park! Luke was the only one that knew the platinum pass was supposed to come with a few other perks - he just wasn't sure yet what those perks were yet. They'd certainly cost him enough!
"Okay, where to first?" Luke asked his pretty wife and even prettier little daughter. They looked more like sisters than mother and daughter, with their matching long blonde curls, thin bodies and huge green eyes. Of course, Amber's considerable but perky breasts did set her apart from Alicia's flat chest - but they both had amazingly fine asses. Amber was only twenty-six and didn't look a day past eighteen, so she hardly looked old enough to be the mother of a ten-year-old.
"Oh daddy, please, I want to ride the Big Wave!" Alicia cried and tugged on her father's arm. "It's supposed to be the best."
Luke checked his watch - he had half an hour until his appointment, plenty of time for the Big Wave if the line was really no more than five minutes. "Sure, Princess, let's go!"
The Big Wave was indeed exhilarating. But Luke suspected that his young wife enjoyed the V.I.P. treatment and cutting to the front of the line even more than she enjoyed the ride itself. He hoped he hadn't created a monster. But it was time for his interview so he made an excuse about needing to take an emergency call from the office and sent Amber and Alicia down the long line of shops. They agreed to meet at the Crazy House in two hours.
At his appointed time, Luke walked through a nondescript door with a small sign reading "Platinum Pass Members Services." He gave his name to a young man with a name tag on his red Park uniform - "Chad."
"Welcome! Welcome to your orientation. You're right on time, we appreciate that here, Mr..., well do you mind if I just call you Luke? We don't really use a lot of last names here."
"Um, yeah, sure," Luke replied. "So, like, what's the deal here, Chad?"
"Well, Luke, as you're a new Platinum Pass member I'll be showing you around and explaining the perks of your new status." Chad checked something on his computer screen, then looked up with surprise on this face. "Wow, Luke, according to this you were randomly selected to have a choosing today. That's amazing - brand new members hardly ever get to go out in the field on their first day! Lucky dog. So, I guess I'll shown you around and then, if you'd like, we can head back out into the park and you can make your personal choice. Of course, you can postpone your choice if you'd like, there's no rush. You're always free to just enjoy what's already in the Palace. But it's a pretty big deal to have a choosing on your first day! Some members never get selected. Shall we start with your tour?"
"Um, yeah, sure." Luke responded, even more confused. He felt like Chad was talking in some kind of code.
Chad led Luke through a door and down a long dim hallway. As they walked he said, "Now I'm sure you know all this perfectly well, Luke, but I am required to go over the the main Rules one last time before we enter the Palace. Rule number 1: always wear your member's badge, whether you're in the members area or out with the general public, always. You wouldn't want to accidentally get picked up in a sweep or a choosing now, would you?" Chad smiled and laughed, like that that was the funniest thing in the world.
Luke was puzzled, but he chuckled as if he got the joke. They turned a corner and headed down a second long hallway. Luke realized they were slowly going downhill.
"Rule number two: first come, first served among Platinum Members. More generally, you must always be polite to all other platinum members - it's pretty simple. Like, if you see a particular visitor you'd like to play with, but some other member has already engaged him or her, well, you just have to wait your turn. Play with someone else for awhile, or maybe just watch, if you can. Usually your turn will come around - and if it doesn't, well, there are a lot of visitors out there - go do a choosing. Also, if you join into someone else's party, then go with the flow. Add your own spice to the fantasy, but don't ruin someone else's fantasy. It's simple: be polite. Basically, those are the only two rules. But they are both absolute. Got it?"
"Um, yeah, sure, got it," Luke said even through he didn't. They'd arrived at the end of the hall.
"Right this way," Chad said and led Luke through a doorway out onto an internal balcony that ran all the way around a large square room with very high ceilings. There were about ten men milling about on the floor of the room below them, in twos and threes. Some were sitting at small tables, some standing. In the very center of the floor below there was what appeared to be an information desk manned by a man and woman, both wearing the same uniform Chad was sporting. All the way around the lower room there were red doors, three to each wall. Luke watched as two of the men below opened one of the twelve red doors and disappeared through it. Then he noticed that on the balcony level of the big room there were three long windows spaced along each wall, twelve in all. The room was huge.
"You've probably already figured out that this is the observation level of the Platinum Palace, as we like to call it," Chad said. "Down below is the participation level. You're free to use either, of course, but we generally start new members out up in here on the observation level - it's a little less overwhelming." Chad indicated that the they should start walking clockwise along the long interior balcony. "And of course we have plenty of private rooms - don't worry about that! I'll show you how to access those later, and be assured we have everything you might desire. But some of our members, especially our frequent flyers, do enjoy the participation level quite a bit." Chad led Luke towards the first of the big observation windows. "But it's a good idea to start off up here on the observation level."
They arrived at the first large window, and for the first time Luke realized there was another door next to it. The window was large, but it was completely opaque. "This is always a good introduction to the observation rooms," Chad continued. "It's called The Pigsty. It's definitely not for everybody, but you'd be surprised how popular it is. Let me show you how this works." Chad showed Luke a small button under the window, just next to a small brass plaque that did indeed say 'The Pigsty.' "We keep the windows opaqued unless someone out here wants to actively sample what's going on down in the room. If you like what you see and want a little privacy, just go through that door there and choose any of the private observation booths. Don't worry! The glass is one-way, nobody will be able see you." Chad grinned at Luke and actually nudged him. "Ha! That's, like, every new member's first question. So, want to see what's up in The Pigsty?"
Luke was getting more and more confused. But it didn't feel right to let on that he had no idea what was going on, so he just shrugged and said, "uh, sure."
Chad gave Luke a wry smile - this wasn't his first time introducing a newbie to the wonders of the Platinum Palace. "Okay, here we go!" Chad pushed the button next to the plaque and the big window was suddenly transparent.
Luke's eyes went wide with surprise and incredulity at the scene laid out in front of him, about half a floor below where he stood. The room was roughly fifteen feet on a side and the floor sloped slightly from his left down to his right. On the left the floor was covered with dirt and about half way across a very shallow pond began. Basically, the room was a mud pit. There were several benches arranged here and there across the floor, a couple of them half in and half out of the shallow, muddy water. But none of that was the cause of Luke's amazement.
Scattered about the room were six morbidly obese women. Hugely fat women, with rolls of flesh and mammoth breasts. All six women were naked and all six were on their hands and knees, except for one who was on her back in the mud with another flabby naked woman, the fattest of all of them, straddling her on all fours. It took Luke a second to realize that the woman on top was pressing her crotch down into the other woman's face.
Luke couldn't pull his eyes away from the horrifying sight of the roly-poly naked women. He'd never seen so much fat - certainly not naked and coated with mud. And the longer he stared, mesmerized, the more he saw. The women all had tails! Or, rather, the women all had anal plugs up their fat asses that stuck out to look like the corkscrew tail of a sow. And even more humiliating, they all had big, flat pig noses attached, somehow, over their own noses - made all the more obvious by their fat pig-like faces. They were covered with mud and their disgusting rolls of fat were like multiple inner-tubes around their bodies and arms and legs. It was like watching a train wreck - Luke couldn't take his eyes away.
"Oh, hey, you're in for a treat!" Chad said, pointing to the far left corner of the room where a man had entered by a red door. The man was normal looking, about forty, tall, naked and well-endowed. "That's Harry," Chad said. "He's a regular in The Pigsty - he just loves playing with the sows. Let me turn the volume up." Chad twisted another dial.
"Soooooo-eee!" the man in the Pigsty, Harry, yelled as he walked through the mud wearing nothing but a Platinum Member's badge, strapped to his upper arm, and rain boots. "Soooooo-eee!" he shouted again. All of the pig-women looked up excitedly and they all started crawling towards the bench where Harry sat down on one edge of the sty. The big one trampled the one on her back in her rush to crawl to Harry. Luke could hear the disgusting women snorting and squealing as they bumped and shoved one another out of the way to be first to get to Harry. It was then that Luke realized a couple of the pig-women were actually pig-girls. It was hard to be certain, but one of the crawling monstrosities looked to be about fourteen. And the rolling mass of flesh on her back, the one struggling to get up out of the mud, couldn't be more than eleven or twelve! She was barely older than his own beautiful Alicia. As he watched the young pig-girl finally rolled onto her fat belly and hoisted herself up to crawl after the other pigs.
The pig-women crowded around the man, jostling each other. They shoved at one another to be the one closest to the man, who smiled and examined the crowd as if he was picking out the juiciest watermelon from a bin. The pig-women didn't use their hands in the fight, but they butted each other with their heads and massive, flabby shoulders. When the biggest of them finally fought her way to the front, she shoved her head between Harry's knees and slipped her fat lips around his erection. He let her suck him for a few seconds, but then he shoved her away and a different pig managed to shoulder her way in to place her lips around his long thick cock. She too was allowed a few seconds of piggy happiness, which was evidenced by the way her gigantic ass jiggled as she wagged it from side to side with excitement. But then she too was shoved away and another fat piggy took her place.
Something even stranger happened. Harry reached out and grabbed the tail of one of the pig-women. He pulled on the tail, which remained firmly embedded in her rectum, but she shivered all over, and began to squeal loudly - an amazing animal scream that pierced the air. In five or six seconds it was clear that the pig-woman was in sexual ecstasy. Her whole body quivered with excitement and pleasure.
"Pretty cool, huh?" Chad said next to the mesmerized Luke, who jumped at the unexpected sound. "Ha!" Chad chortled and slapped Luke lightly on the back. "First timers - I love it! But it's cool, isn't it. Those tails. When you pull on the tail it gives the sow an electric shock in just the right place. Drives them crazy. And the more they get it the more they need it. They'll do just about anything to get someone to pull their tail. Oh, hey, look, here come the boars!"
From the shadows in the back right corner of the room came an amazing sight. A young, petite woman dressed in the same red park uniform Chad wore, but with knee-high rain boots, stepped out into the light. She was holding a leash in each hand and as she moved forward Luke saw she was leading two enormously fat, naked men. The men crawled behind her with great effort, their gigantic bellies almost dragging through the dirt and mud. Just like the sow-women, the men were adorned with pig-noses and cork-screw pig-tails jutted out from their asses. The woman led the two boar-men to the edge of the muddy water and unhooked the collars from their huge necks. The boar-men immediately waddled out, on all fours, into the dank water - making a beeline for the collection of hog-women jostling around Harry.
As Luke watched, fascinated and disgusted, Harry let go of the squealing sow's tail. He pushed away the fat hog from his crotch and let a different sow-women start sucking at his erection. Luke was shocked to see that it was the younger girl who was now madly suckling at Harry's big erection. Luke was sure the obese child was no more than eleven. And Harry was quite excited about her. He held the girl-sow by her pigtails and fucked her mouth with enthusiasm.
The boars plowed into the middle of the writhing mass of sow-women. The pig-women squealed and started to scatter, obviously terrified of the huge boar-men. And Luke could see why. One of the boars reared up and grabbed a sow-woman from behind, nearly crushing her under his weight. And with no foreplay of any kind he began to rape the huge sow as she squealed in terror. The other boar likewise got his massive arms around the broad, jiggling fat of a sow-woman's middle and rammed his cock into her from behind.
"Don't you love it!" Chad said. Once again Luke was startled, badly. He'd been completely fascinated by the lurid scene. "Those poor bastards," Chad said, indicating the big pig-men. "All they can think of is fucking those fat sows. They'll fuck the fat pigs all day long, until they're too exhausted to stay up. But they can't cum - not once! They're not allowed to. Can you imagine?"
"And the sows," Chad continued, "they're terrified of the boars. It's programmed into them - to amuse the guests. They only get off if they're fucking or sucking a guest. Oh yeah, Harry's getting into it now! Sooooo-eeee!"
Indeed, down in the mud, Harry pushed the piglet-girl's face away, nearly toppling her over. He shoved her again and she excitedly turned on her hands and knees to present her insanely fat ass to him. The huge sow-woman who'd first sucked Harry's dick tried to get into the action and push the little one aside with her disgusting, jowled face, but Harry swatted her away and then knelt behind the younger piglet-child.
Harry grabbed the child by the rolls of flesh that stuck out where her waist should have been. She squealed like she'd been stuck with a pig sticker - and then she WAS stuck with a pig sticker, Harry's. He rammed his cock into the young girl-piglet's cunt, knocking her forward so that her face and shoulders fell into the thick black mud. He grabbed her ass on either side and spread her wide and thrust into her over and over. And then, when he was really fucking her hard, he grabbed her piggy tail and pulled on it. The child-pig squealed again from the mud, a screeching scream of piggy terror and lust and joy.
It was perhaps the most disgusting, depraved, nasty, horrifying thing Luke had ever seen. And yet he had a raging erection. Only his incredible sense of modesty kept him from pulling his hard cock out and spewing his seed all over the window as he watched the middle aged man rape the girl-piglet. Thankfully, Chad reached forward and pushed one of the controls and the large window went opaque again. Luke found that he was breathing hard.
"Told you!" Chad said, "but maybe that's enough of The Pigsty for now. Unless you want to go use one of the private viewing booths. It's fine, really, go ahead - you can come find me when you're done. Or hell, you can go down and join Harry if you want to. He'll share, he always does."
"But, I mean.." Luke started, flustered. "Who ARE those women down there? And the men? Where did they come from? Why do they...?"
"Whoa, whoa, one question at a time, newbie!" Chad raised his hands to slow Luke down. "Didn't you get the introductory lecture? No, I can see you didn't. My bad, my bad. Okay, look - those fat pigs down there are visitors. Most of them have been here several times."
"What? Visitors? What are you talking about!?" Luke interrupted.
"They're park visitors, man. Any park visitor is fair game - except for Platinum Pass members. That's why you need to wear your badge, all the time, no exceptions."
"But, but,..."
"Calm down, it's okay. Look, we flash them and bring them in for programming. They're programmed for whatever use we're going to put them to - like The Pigsty. And then we send them home in two or three days - however long their vacation was supposed to last - with a whole set of memories of what a great time they had in the park. Nobody gets hurt."
"But, Jesus, I mean, it's... I don't know WHAT it is. It's, so, so - Jesus!" Luke was flabbergasted. He looked around him again, at the large square room, the twelve observation windows along the balcony, the twelve red doors down on the participation level and the men - and women! - coming and going here and there, all wearing their platinum member passes. "Jesus!"
"It's okay, Luke, you can handle it!" Chad said. "Look, why don't you just take some time. Take it slow. I'll give you some time to yourself to get adjusted. You can explore around the balcony here - see the other observation rooms, if you want to. You can go on your own. That way, if you want to use one of the private observation rooms you won't have to feel self-conscious about it. Okay? You'll get used to it - I promise - Platinum Members always do. It's just too great to pass up. What do you say?"
"Well, uh, I guess - just looking, that can't hurt. But, no, well, yeah, yeah, I could do that."
Chad glanced at his watch. "Look it's just past nine. I'll be heading out for a choosing at nine-thirty. If you're interested, come on down to the information desk and you can come along. You might even be ready to make a pick!" Chad gave Luke a leer. "And if you have any more questions, anything, just come down to the desk and someone will help you. Okay?"
"Well, yeah. I guess, it sounds good."
"Great! See you soon," Chad said and shook Luke's hand warmly. Then he hustled back to the corner of the balcony and headed down a spiral staircase.
Luke watched Chad jog over to the information booth and relieve the young man who was still on duty there. He looked around the huge room, with the twelve red doors down below, and the twelve big observation windows on the balcony. His brain swam with all the possibilities. All he'd seen so far was the disgusting, but strangely erotic Pigsty.
He should move on, leave the awful Pigsty scene behind. But he couldn't do it. He just needed one more quick look. Luke looked left and right to make sure no one was going to witness his embarrassing weakness, then pushed the button to make the big window transparent again.
"Oh my god," Luke said to himself the second he saw the scene again. He couldn't take it. He dashed for the door beside the window and dived through it. He found a hallway with doors all along one side. The first door was locked, but the second one admitted him to a small room. He was relieved to find another observation window looking down on the scene of the fat little piglet being vigorously fucked by the man Harry. Harry pulled the piglet's tail and she was clearly out of her mind with a combination of fear and pleasure. Her squeals came through clearly. In the privacy of the room Luke dropped his pants and clawed at his erection. Just as Harry pumped his seed into the piglet, screaming out his pleasure, Luke came - a huge, incredibly satisfying orgasm.
Luke leaned against the wall, breathing hard and holding his diminishing hard-on as he watched the scene below. Harry, finally satisfied, backed away from the piglet-child, who started to collapse onto her stomach face in the mud. But one of the two boars quickly pushed his way in back of her and grabbed her around the waist with his fat forelegs. In two seconds the piglet was squealing again, a high pitched terrified sound, as the boar embedded his always-erect cock between her flabby thighs and into her tight pussy.
It was all too much. Luke, ashamed and confused, pulled his pants back up and fled the small room.
