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Interview With The Tentacle Demon
Oct 4, 2013
Chance
Thank you for this very well written story. It has plenty of imagery, hardly any spelling and grammar mistakes, and is easy to follow. Now a days these are very few and too far in between. Keep up the good work and please ignore the hate mail that you are bound to get.
Oct 4, 2013
Kelly
Cant wait for part 3.
Oct 7, 2013
Anonymous
This is chapter 3 of 19, and he is half human. I know you won't revel the end but I suspect a pregnancy will result.
Oct 7, 2013
Bilboswild
Nice story and look forward to watching how you develop it, and good to read a decent tentacle style story, and will look for others as they come along. Thanks for sharing.
Oct 7, 2013
Anonymous
Lovely story, wondering where it will go from here. Looking forward to reading more.
Oct 7, 2013
Anonymous
great story...can't wait until 4
Oct 7, 2013
Michael
I did wait for part 3. It was worth the wait.
Oct 10, 2013
bubba
keep it going its great
Oct 13, 2013
Troy
Love your story, look forward to each new chapter. Wish it had pictures to go with it. Please keep the chapters coming
Oct 16, 2013 - Chapter 6
Anonymous
Really liking this story. Can see little bit of thought at work on terms of people having different agendas and goals, and keeping secrets.
Keep it up :)
Oct 20, 2013 - Chapter 7
BigMess
I love this story. Well written and hot!
Oct 21, 2013
Chris
Hi there, this is Chris from the north of England and I've followed the ASSTR site for many years. I haven't commented on many stories in that time, but this one is just too good to ignore. For the last week or so, the first thing I do every morning is check to see whether you've added another chapter. Thanks for writing it. (Christopher)
Oct 22, 2013
Jerry
Wow, I love this story. I'm anxiously waiting to read more. I'm a long time reader on asstr. The tentacle demon type stories are not my typical interests, but I find that I am enjoying this and hope you continue to write.
Thank you.
Oct 23, 2013
Chris from Germany
I Love the Story
Nov 4, 2013 - Chapter 3
XericXenophilust
I laughed out loud and found my merely human tentacle tickled to tumescence at times as well. Great combination of tentacle-in-cheek 1950's military science fiction, well-written parody documentary style reportage, and love story with hotter than real life sex. Has a Playboy serial story feel to it, kind of a hot nostalgia. I dip my quill to you, sir or madam, you have "the stuff" and it draws the enlightened reader in with a curious smile and sense of Cheshire cat dread, but pleases erotically in the end. Great work by an obvious artist.
Nov 6, 2013
Bilboswild
I last commented after the first few chapters, about it being good to see a good tentacle story again, and you have continued along that route, lots of new ways to tantalise the "Demon" and also his participants, and look forward to the following few chapters through till the end. Bilbo
Nov 12, 2013 - Chapter 14
Anonymous
This thing is so GOOD! There are times i forget to wank, the story is so interesting!
Nov 15, 2013
Anonymous
mmm...love the continuation...this story is a gem!
Nov 17, 2013
Tom
Hi, Perv,
Wonderful story! I've been anticipating and enjoying each chapter. You've invented a really terrific villian/hero in your tentacle monster, and have done a wonderful job building his personality.
I'm very sorry that your tale is coming to an end.
I can't wait to see what pops out of your delightfully kinky mind next!
Many thanks for a great read,
Tom in Seattle
Nov 21, 2013
mkay from Denmark
I truely enjoyed this story. And followed it from the first chapter to the end. The updates was regular, the writing very good. Easy to read for a nonEnglish person. I hope that you soon will start a new story. If you need any idear for a new story. You could use:
1) the arival of a new type of creature to the institute or
2) tales from lives of grundsorik or
3) the future tales of grundsorik.
Or mayby use some of your wonderful writing skills to continue a story in a univers calle e abd i made by a fellow writer called stombringer, you could bring som scifi to that universe.
Anyway. I love you writing. Hope you will keep it up.
Mk
Nov 23, 2013
Anonymous
Great story.
Dec 16, 2013
Anonymous
Please carry on as it is super... more chapters or stories like it
Feb 18, 2014
Anonymous
I like you style an hope you will continue the story style.
Dec 19, 2014
Anonymous
I really don't know what to say other than the story was incredibly awesome!
May 26, 2015
Stephen
Great story.
Loved Claire and her attitude. Gruthsorik was a wonderful character.
I really enjoyed reading this one.
Thanks for writing it.
Stephen
Apr 17, 2016 - Chapter 16
Tony
Tentacle demon was an excellent series, I hope you post more like it.
Oct 16, 2016 - Chapter 16 
Anonymous
Very good
Oct 16, 2016 - Chapter 2
open mind
Just fascinated-found story today and can't stop
The Five Forms of Kimber
Mar 1, 2015 - Chapter 3
Bilbo
Have read all three chapters of this new story, and it is equally as good as your previous ones, and look forward to reading the additional chapters. Thanks for sharing
Sep 28, 2015 - Chapter 4
Brett
I loved it to death! Talk about motivated treasure hunting, wow!
Thank you
Gotham Sirens: Poison Ivy's Rapevine
May 4, 2016
Anonymous
I'd love to see a sequel w/ a Catwoman/Batgirl/Batman threesome. Perhaps Batgirl doens't know Batman's identity?
A Fantasy Too Far
Oct 2, 2016
Anonymous
I was surprised how much I enjoyed this, plot lines ok for comic.
After finishing it I realised how much it paralled certain episodes in my own life.
It brought back fond memories of some lovely ladies I have known.
Cheers and thanks.
Cyborganic Bioroid Chronicles
Jun 10, 2014
Jerry
Glad to see you writing again. I am enjoying this story, hope you continue!
Jul 14, 2014
Anonymous
Entertaining and realistic. No magic, aside from the "any sufficiently advanced technology" kind, and a sketch of people with actual human concerns.
Aug 1, 2014
Anonymous
absolutely great - can we have more? and how about a dominant cat?
Oct 1, 2014 - Open Late
Anonymous
Interesting story
Oct 1, 2014 - Open Late
Pete
Hi,
Thanks for a hot little piece of scifi!
Nothing like that happened when I working in a fast food place, I just went down with appendicitis after about two weeks!
Thanks again and I will have to look for more of your stories.
Best wishes,
Pete
Feb 11, 2017 - Open Late, Part 2
Anonymous
Love your work, but in regards to "Open Late", what happens to Alison if Mister Walters passes away? Could he will her to Steve?
General Comments
Jul 5, 2014
D
Excellent stories. Thanks so much for sharing them!
Thanks for your time, and again for letting the rest of us enjoy your work.
Jul 31, 2014
Anonymous
I really enjoyed the Interview with a Tentacle Demon story. Very interesting take on him with a surprising amount of detail in how he'd operate. I was actually sort of touching at the end given who exactly one of the leads was.
I also enjoyed the Nyanny very much. I know you're shooting for an anthology but another story with the family would be fun. Especially as the kid grows up and deals with the fact that his nanny is Mom and Dad's sex toy as well.