General Comments are found here. Comments on individual stories can be found on their index pages.
General Comments:
Author
Date
Comment
Chase's Response
John
28 October 2017
Hey, I have read most of your stories and thoroughly enjoyed almost all,
I love the loving tender aspects and wanted to let you know that your work and
efforts are appreciated, thank you so much.
Thank you so much, John! I really enjoy writing stories where there is love,
romance, and humanity at the core of the relationships, and I'm glad it shows!
RS
26 October 2017
Glad to have you back in the fold, many of us missed your writing while the ASSTR site was down.
I have just finished reading the last of the chapters that you posted and I must say that you still
amaze me with the quality and feel of the work you do, very impressive, but again I want to say
thank you for the time that you can take me away to a different reality if for but a little while. I always
look forward to new works of yours, and I have really enjoyed the short stories, of which some of them
seem to be rather open ended and with further potential. Thank You.
Thank you, RS! I really appreciate you reaching out and letting me know you are still reading and
enjoying my stories! I'm still catching up on editing and publishing stories/chapters I wrote during
the months of ASSTR downtime, plus I've been adding to several series since then, so hopefully
I can keep adding new stuff regularly for some time.
A couple of the short stories I may
revisit, especially Jae Hwa, that one I left somewhat open with the possibility of adding more later.
Most of the others I will probably leave as little self-contained vignettes so as not to 'over-produce'
them by trying to bring in all the context and 'reasons' that I narrate into my various series.
Anonymous
29 June 2017
It's been 4 months since your last dispatch. Please let us
know that you are alive, healthy, and free.
By June, I was locked out of my author account, sorry. I had no way to
update my home page, and unfortunately, you didn't include an email
address to get back to you. I'm back now though (October 2017!)
Anonymous
24 June 2017
Hey Chase. You're missed around these parts. Hope we get to read some of
your art soon.
Thank you! Sorry I was AWOL so long. Partially due to being very busy, partially
because I couldn't get in to manage my author account (see comment below.)
Ron
20 April 2017
Just wanted to thank you. I've enjoyed your stories
Many thanks, Ron!
Anonymous64
20 February 2017
Chase! How soon are we going to see more chapters!? Man you've
got everyone hanging by hairs on here!!!! Personally need more of
Shipwrecked, Flower Petals and Run!! More of the others as well too
but those are my personal favorites!!!!
Sorry for the months-long delay. I was very busy until about mid-April 2017,
and when I had time again, I found myself locked out of my author account. And
then ASSTR crashed leaving everything up in the air for a couple more months.
It is October, 2017, and I'm finally back in. I've published ~10 new chapers of Shipwrecked
over the past week, and I have new chapters of FP ready to edit and publish. Run is getting
close, too. I am writing the entire end of the story before publishing any more so that I can
(hopefully) clean up all the lose ends (of which there are many!) Thanks, A64!
Tio
19 February 2017
I just want to tell you how much I have enjoyed your stories.
I have read several of your short stories , Sempier Fi and Shipwrecked
(to date). Everything I have read could easily go to conventional print but
for the hot sex. I'm pretty sure you are ex-military. Sempier Fi was written too
well for a "civilian". I passed the link around to some of my VFW buddies, they
all agree.I'd like to see more of that type.
I am hooked on Shipwrecked.
I can't wait for the next installment. I spent 20 years at sea. I have always wished
to be washed up on an island like theirs. And of course with all the free sex I'd
never come home.I will add more comments on the most recent chapter so as
not to cause a spoiler here. Everytime I buy GS cookies, I think of Bailey.
Thank you so much, Tio! I really appreciate your comments. I won't discuss my past but
I will say that military stories are something which I felt compelled to tell, and Semper Fi
was a sort of culmination of a lot of those ideas needing to come out. I'm glad that was
realistic and enjoyable.
And who wouldn't want to know Bailey and the others
on Phoenix? (In a fantasy world, of course.) I love writing that story and I hope I can
continue to keep it feeling fresh and interesting as the community grows and matures.
Anonymous
30 January 2017
Hey! I love the stories on here. I've got an idea though. How about a story
of a boy and a girl together? rather than adult child
Hi there, Anon! I don't know what ages you are looking for, but the series
Emmy Grows Up
might fit what you are seeking, though it has adult/child relationships, too.
I do have in mind a concept for a new series which is predominantly pre-pubescent and
blossoming characters, few if any adults. I haven't done anything with it yet, and I have
some other priorities I really want to finish/launch/continue, but I'll return to this
if I can flesh out the idea a little better. It's a sort of homage to the 'playing doctor'
fap stories but cast in the the more 'plausible' narrative I like to use.
Angunn
15 January 2017
I have to say that what I like most in your writing, is about the creampies.
Especially the anal ones. I am longing for more to come. It is so arousing the way
you describe ! And also when you describe the cleanig of vagina after the girls
and women peeing. That is one of the things I am sorry to say I have not
experienced. I think it must be good for you to know that many of your readers,
men and women, are siting around the world so sincere waiting for more to come.
Panties is also one of my faourites. The girls and women hunting, finding and
smelling..
Something is now hitting my nose !
Hi Angunn! It is wonderful to hear from my favorite Norwegian lady :)
Thanks for the very kind words! I love the creampies, too. ;)
It is
ashamed you have never had the pleasure of being cleaned after peeing. Maybe it
is not too late for you? Perhaps someone might be wanting to do that for you,
you never know!
I love knowing that people, men and women, are getting
off to what I write. It turns me on a lot to hear about it from people, and you
are a favorite since you tell me what you really think!
I wonder, were
you smelling your own panties or someone else's? Either way, it is very hot and
I'm sure the scents are delightfully naughty!
Anonymous
11 January 2017
Just read the opening chapter of "ahead of the Curve." Excellent work! I'd just
like to make an observation about you feeling that one reader was "ordering you" to
finish some other project you'd started. I saw that more like a fan of one of those
projects making a request. You obviously hit on something that grabbed that reader,
and passionate feedback may often feel like "an order," but try to accept the praise
more than the frustration of a reader getting hooked on one of your premises. Great
writers have great hooks, and when on gets hooked it isn't unusual to hear how they
feel. That's my two cents worth.
Thanks, and you're right, of course. That's the basic idea I tried to express at the
beginning of my response. It is truly humbling that readers feel strongly enough about
what I write that they get upset when I don't keep feeding new chapters on a regular
basis, or don't do so fast enough.
I think that one just hit a combination of
things: I'd been in the middle of a very busy period of my life when writing was something
I had to squeeze in (and I'd nonetheless delivered a couple dozen chapters or more of various
series,) new stories were taking my attention (and I wanted to write them while they were
boiling in my head,) AND I'd just published seven new chapters in Flower Petals, the series
the commenter had explicitly listed.
And, this isn't the first one of these sort of 'demand'
emails I've gotten, just the one I happened to publish and respond to. A couple of others that
I got that same week were far less publishable (let's just say that one of them addressed
me and my -- to the reader, unknown and anonymous -- family a variety of disturbing
names, apparently because I hadn't put up new Flower Petals chapters fast enough or something --
the email was largely incoherent.)
Anyway, you're right, though, and I appreciate that
you took the time to explain how you saw it. I'll try to take it that way in the future. But it
would be nice if it sounded less like a demand and more like an expression of interest. Thanks
for commenting, anon!
I am just writing to let you know i have read and liked several of
your stories. Thanks for putting them up on ASSTR and sharing them.
I appreciate the longer form and characterization.
I just finished
Emma Grows Up. I liked the hypersexualization and the parental encouragement.
I confess to being skeptical about 9 year old girls taking a man's cock vaginally
but its fiction and i liked the fantasy.
Hi Alexander Martin! I really appreciate you reaching out to me! I'm glad you
are enjoying Emmy, though it definitely is not a normal story/style for me,
as you noted. All my best!
Anonymous
4 January 2017
I've read several of your stories and enjoyed them greatly. Thank you.
Many, many thanks!
Anonymous
4 January 2017
I love your writing, and I appreciate the time you've devoted. Thank you for
sharing your passion with us all.
Thank you so much! It is my pleasure to do so!
Anonymous
4 January 2017
Don't listen to that guy demanding more of one thing vs another. You are one of
the best writers of the genera and I couldn't be more thankful for your decision
to share your fantasies. You are doing great work, write only what you want to:)
Thank you so much! I'm definitely not going to worry about some anonymous commenter
who thinks they can direct my efforts. I'll continue to write what I'm feeling and try
to ensure it is always quality. I'm certainly not interested in trying to force out new
chapters in stories which I'm not feeling like writing at that time. Thanks for understanding!
Anonymous
1 January 2017
Is there a way to download your stories on asstr.org as one complete
file so I can read in my e-reader?
Currently, I don't know how to provide that for readers. All of my stories on
ASSTR are in html format as individual chapters. I don't even have a master
text file of the published versions (with all the incremental edits) available
for myself.
I'd love to provide epub and other formats for ereaders,
but right now, I don't have a clue how to do that. Sorry!
Anonymous
22 November 2016
How about working on some of the stories you already have going? I mean, a
YEAR for an update to Flower Petals before you released a couple of chapters.
Starting new stories just means you'll be leaving more and more readers hanging.
SMH. I put out more content than most authors on ASSTR in a given year, and that's not
good enough. I really do appreciate that you want more, more, more. You like my writing
and want to read more of your favorite series. I get that, and I am humbled.
But making demands of how I spend my time? Directing me to do one thing instead of another?
Not cool. Yes, there was a huge gap for Flower Petals while I had a lot of Real Life going
on and while other stories took precedence. But since October, 2016, I didn't just publish
"a couple of chapters," I've published seven. More than 22,000 words.
All while adding to other series
and stories. Flower Petals is open-ended, as I've said many times elsewhere. There is no rush
from my end to get to a conclusion. There is no conclusion.
And no author is going to
willingly force him/herself to write in a series where the muse isn't hitting. I write what is flowing.
I won't sacrifice the quality for the quantity.
I do this as a hobby. I make zero money
for my efforts. I share it because I know others like to read what I write, and it does feel
good to have readers compliment my work. But this is a hobby, one I choose to share with you.
I appreciate the desire for more of your favorite series. I don't appreciate being told what to do
with my time. If this comes off defensive, it is because I simply cannot understand why anonymous
commenters believe they can order me to write what they want to read and to ignore
what I feel compelled to write, what I am enjoying writing. I do this for myself first, sorry.
That's just the way it is.
General Comments:
A couple of the short stories I may revisit, especially Jae Hwa, that one I left somewhat open with the possibility of adding more later. Most of the others I will probably leave as little self-contained vignettes so as not to 'over-produce' them by trying to bring in all the context and 'reasons' that I narrate into my various series.
I am hooked on Shipwrecked. I can't wait for the next installment. I spent 20 years at sea. I have always wished to be washed up on an island like theirs. And of course with all the free sex I'd never come home.I will add more comments on the most recent chapter so as not to cause a spoiler here. Everytime I buy GS cookies, I think of Bailey.
And who wouldn't want to know Bailey and the others on Phoenix? (In a fantasy world, of course.) I love writing that story and I hope I can continue to keep it feeling fresh and interesting as the community grows and matures.
I do have in mind a concept for a new series which is predominantly pre-pubescent and blossoming characters, few if any adults. I haven't done anything with it yet, and I have some other priorities I really want to finish/launch/continue, but I'll return to this if I can flesh out the idea a little better. It's a sort of homage to the 'playing doctor' fap stories but cast in the the more 'plausible' narrative I like to use.
Something is now hitting my nose !
Thanks for the very kind words! I love the creampies, too. ;)
It is ashamed you have never had the pleasure of being cleaned after peeing. Maybe it is not too late for you? Perhaps someone might be wanting to do that for you, you never know!
I love knowing that people, men and women, are getting off to what I write. It turns me on a lot to hear about it from people, and you are a favorite since you tell me what you really think!
I wonder, were you smelling your own panties or someone else's? Either way, it is very hot and I'm sure the scents are delightfully naughty!
I think that one just hit a combination of things: I'd been in the middle of a very busy period of my life when writing was something I had to squeeze in (and I'd nonetheless delivered a couple dozen chapters or more of various series,) new stories were taking my attention (and I wanted to write them while they were boiling in my head,) AND I'd just published seven new chapters in Flower Petals, the series the commenter had explicitly listed.
And, this isn't the first one of these sort of 'demand' emails I've gotten, just the one I happened to publish and respond to. A couple of others that I got that same week were far less publishable (let's just say that one of them addressed me and my -- to the reader, unknown and anonymous -- family a variety of disturbing names, apparently because I hadn't put up new Flower Petals chapters fast enough or something -- the email was largely incoherent.)
Anyway, you're right, though, and I appreciate that you took the time to explain how you saw it. I'll try to take it that way in the future. But it would be nice if it sounded less like a demand and more like an expression of interest. Thanks for commenting, anon!
I just finished Emma Grows Up. I liked the hypersexualization and the parental encouragement. I confess to being skeptical about 9 year old girls taking a man's cock vaginally but its fiction and i liked the fantasy.
I'd love to provide epub and other formats for ereaders, but right now, I don't have a clue how to do that. Sorry!
But making demands of how I spend my time? Directing me to do one thing instead of another? Not cool. Yes, there was a huge gap for Flower Petals while I had a lot of Real Life going on and while other stories took precedence. But since October, 2016, I didn't just publish "a couple of chapters," I've published seven. More than 22,000 words. All while adding to other series and stories. Flower Petals is open-ended, as I've said many times elsewhere. There is no rush from my end to get to a conclusion. There is no conclusion.
And no author is going to willingly force him/herself to write in a series where the muse isn't hitting. I write what is flowing. I won't sacrifice the quality for the quantity.
I do this as a hobby. I make zero money for my efforts. I share it because I know others like to read what I write, and it does feel good to have readers compliment my work. But this is a hobby, one I choose to share with you. I appreciate the desire for more of your favorite series. I don't appreciate being told what to do with my time. If this comes off defensive, it is because I simply cannot understand why anonymous commenters believe they can order me to write what they want to read and to ignore what I feel compelled to write, what I am enjoying writing. I do this for myself first, sorry. That's just the way it is.