Your story Self-Discovery allowed me to relive many similar moments and got me hotter than hell. Viva la Vulva!
You did your job beautifully! How incredibly erotic... [The Gentle Breaking of the Waves]
Wow! Wow! I would have loved to see the pictures that went with that photo shoot [in The Camera]. The words were fantastic, but the pictures would have been the piece de resistance. Very well written and enjoyable. Hopefully there will be more in the future.
Wow, Caroline this one is just amazing. I've never been more excited by a story [Pearls in Oyster] before. Thanks for taking the time to pursue your 'hobby'.
I don't often read stories to the end but I did read yours [The Mexican Stand-off], and wished it went on. Thanks for posting.
Too funny... Loved it! I usually don't read essays or other "non-stories" but the title [Addicted to Feedback] caught my eye. Hilarious!
So many stories are just about the sex--no plot, no character development, no plausibility. [Vera] had it all and the sex was wonderful to boot. Simply excellent.
Your enjoyment of your intimate exposure [in Self-Discovery] was a turn-on in itself. How wonderful to have such an experience and memory.
Your description starting from the beginning to the middle and then finally to the wild fuck at the end.... wow... that was awesome. You gave a terrific picture of tender lovemaking throughout the day and ended it in such a way that both love and lust were brought together. You are one very classy lady and your story [The Gentle Breaking of the Waves] is classy as well... I look forward to more of your stories. Thanks so much!
That story was exceptional, I found it extremely erotic and a real turn-on. You are a very sensual and liberated lady... [The Camera]
Very sexy story! BRAVO! BRAVO! Your story [Pearls in Oyster] has left me breathless. Fantastic build up... absolutely fantastic...
OK, both a great erotic, sensual, exciting, hard-on producing story [The Mexican Stand-off] and written with excellent expressions, grammar, and proper use of the language. Wow!
Humour and sex [in Addicted to Feedback].... an unlikely and unwieldy combination but in the hands of a true artisan such as yourself, a masterpiece is possible. Keep on writing, don't stop, please, don't stop, yes, keep doing it like that baby, yes, yes, more...
I don�t have the words to describe just how great a story [Vera] is. Everything about it is perfect. Everything.
The sense of anticipation that you built was absolutely fantastic. You painted some vivid pictures with your words. [Self-Discovery]
Outstanding! What a fuck fest! [The Gentle Breaking of the Waves]
Your build up kept me reading to the end. It left me breathless... yes breathless... not like a lot of the other stories I have read... this really excited me... [The Camera]
Your use of language was exquisite. I especially applaud your refusal to dumb down the vocabulary� [Pearls in Oyster]
OH MY... I lay here only imagining the sensation you felt as you enjoyed your lustful evening... This is a wonderfully written story [The Mexican Stand-off]... Thank you for sharing your evening with me.
Love It! Love It! Love It! [Addicted to Feedback] was so humorous I had to read "Addicted to Feedback" twice. Your sense of humor is really wicked and I must confess that it draws me to read your other stories.
Loved the characters, loved the plot, loved the way you use language, and loved the way you wove music throughout, just as it's woven through our lives and loves, especially at that age. You captured things [in Vera] that are exceedingly difficult to capture. The joy/sadness of an intense love that we know is fleeting, and the vivid memories of a young person viewed through the filter of experience come immediately to mind. Oh, and the sex was pretty damned hot, too! ;-)
Self-Discovery is incredibly stimulating... This is very erotic, exceptionally well written and articulate.
I just read your Gentle Breaking of the Waves... You have hit a level of erotica there that many strive for, but few find. It really is superb. Caroline, yours is the most erotic story I have ever read. Very well done
Brilliant and erotic obsession. The central character's desire for the camera's attention becomes increasingly powerful and increasingly convincing throughout. [The Camera] is erotic and delicious work!
Absolutely Fantastic story! This story [Pearls in Oyster] is both a literary work of art and an erotic tale of passion and lust. Your story is something I have tried to create in action and yet your story far surpasses anything my feeble mind could have imagined. Thank you for a beautiful picture my words could never paint.
Wow, it's been a long time since you've posted a story and I think this one [The Mexican Stand-off] was your best yet. Thanks for all the hard work it takes to put such a great mental image together.
I love it [Addicted to Feedback]! For me, humor and intellect have always been at the heart of good erotica. What you do IS literature!
I hardly know what to say. The early part of [Vera] was so compelling that I was almost disappointed to be interrupted by a sex scene. But the sex between two such compelling characters was magnificent. I felt as though you made me feel not just their physical sensations, but their emotional connection as well. And then the final part�ohmigod! So heartbreaking and yet so beautiful. Thank you for creating something that will resonate with anyone who has loved and anyone who has lost someone she loved.
Just a brief note from a fellow exhibitionist to say that you've captured the emotions in Self-Discovery of one who enjoys being 'seen' perfectly. I look forward to future stories!
You have a gift for words and painting pictures with them. I could imagine being there. I too wondered how you would end the story [The Gentle Breaking of the Waves] but felt you pulled it perfectly into place.
God, that was terrific Caroline! I love your writing style and your subject is very dear to my heart [The Camera].
I just completed Pearls in Oyster. Kudos on such a sexy story. You certainly have a unique gift for creating titillating prose. It is refreshing to read erotica written by someone with impeccable grammar.
I just finished reading The Mexican Stand-off. Please know how much I enjoyed it. You are so very talented and obviously quite intelligent with a gift for creating such titillating scenarios. Your style of building the sexual tension with such descriptive prose is really what erotic literature should be.
I just wanted you to know that I laughed my ass off when I read [Addicted to Feedback]; I actually had to read it twice.
You are a beautiful writer, filled with life's sentiment and warmth. The erotic element [in Vera] is delicatelly balanced into a love story that brought me to tears. Give up technical writing and explore the creative arts where you belong.
�you make sexual intimacy an art form and something beautiful�which it is�there's nothing tawdry or ugly about it. It is beautiful and exquisite and your descriptions are fabulous.
Oh, my, your stories really do break the surly bonds of passive technical writing... very hot!
Whew! That is a 5 hardon rating! [The Camera]
Your Pearls in Oyster is simply fantastic. It is one of the rare stories that creates longing in not only the groin, but also the heart and soul. Thank you.
I do a lot of surfing for stories, and I am usually disappointed. The Mexican Stand-off was fantastic, such imagery, I felt as if I was actually seeing it happen. Wonderful work, I look forward to reading more.Oh, yes... Yes... YESS!!! Oh damn, [Addicted to Feedback] was outstanding... I will be laffing all afternoon. That was a masterful treatment.
Superb! I very nearly cried at the end [of Vera]. What emotions you have brought to the fore in your writing. I'm sorry to repeat, but you have a natural talent for this genre.
You have an amazing talent for this genre and your writing is arousing and sophisticated without being pretentious. Exceptionally well done. I can't praise you enough on these stories really. I think they're exceptional and enjoyed them immensely. I didn't think it was possible to get that turned on by the written word. Keep up the great work and I'll be checking your site regularly for more.
Your intellect shows in all that you write, and for me that is the source of all sexuality. Bravo.
�a quick rush! wonderfully written... short-descriptive and enjoyable... [The Camera]
What magnificent writing. I love how you set the scene to begin the story [Pearls in Oyster]. I will admit that toward the end you had me stiff as hell and then, after finishing, taking a shower to release the beauty of the thoughts.
Wonderful! Great writing and great pacing! I could feel the heat of the setting [The Mexican Stand-off].
Before I read [Addicted to Feedback], I had proclaimed myself a bit of a feedback whore, but I had no idea... Thank you. This cracked me up no end after a totally crappy day. Too funny.
Oh, Caroline! Vera was exquisitely beautiful. I am going to read it again and again�
�wonderfully 'stimulating' reads�
Words are the canvas of the soul. This masterpiece [Pearls in Oyster] is as wonderful as any written on this site or anywhere. The dialogue and sense of wanting to be there are inspiring. If a picture is worth a 1000 words these are those words! Enticing and erotic. The power of a woman's words have brought a fantasy to life. Thank you!!!
Great! A very sexy loving wife story [The Mexican Stand-off]... loved it please write more
What a great pleasure to read your work! Tantalizing, sensual...
�ohhh yummy delicious... such a great grasp of human nature as the seduction of the camera erases all trace of inhibition... I loved The Camera� extremely erotic...
I read Pearls in Oyster first and then, having discovered a new and enchanting writer, devoured the rest. Your scientific background, while hidden, is revealed in the way you write�at least I think so. How? Because your tales are built up layer by layer, because you are very observant and describe with carefully selected words, and the effect is erotic indeed.
[The Mexican Stand-off] begs a sequel. Terrific story. It surely does warrant a continuation. Please?
[Vera is] your best by far�really a different genre from the others. I really can't say how impressed I am by this piece.
Very Erotic. Well-written, brief, and erotic. ...beautifully described female excitement. [The Camera]
Excellent, Excellent! One of the best stories [Pearls in Oyster] that I have ever read. You painted a picture in the mind that was thrilling. Oysters will never be the same thinking of this dialogue.