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Aquea's response |
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11/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 8 |
:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) HURRY HURRY HURRY :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) |
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11/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 8 |
amazing! i'll be checkin in every day for part 9.. i'm absolutely lovin it! |
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5/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
story moving way too slow. this part accomplished absolutely nothing and nothing of any substance was said until the very last sentence.almost half of this part was her describing herself taking a shower. |
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5/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
Am enjoying the story but does it have to be so sloooowww? Keep up the good work but don't tease us so much. |
Don't you know that patience is a virtue? ;) Besides, it will be that much better in the end because of the waiting. |

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5/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
Can't wait for the next one... hope it comes soon |
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5/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
Drawn out. Get to the story. |
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4/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
Ohh you are a master of the cliff hanger aren't you?LOL as usual it was spectacular I am practically drooling for the next one. |
You liked that? :) |

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4/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
Very nice, I hope you continue with the story, and you have definitly got my curiosity up as to what the problem is :) |
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4/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 7 |
I love this story, although teasing us with the slow pace is maddening! Keep up the good work. |
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4/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 1 |
????GOLDEN RETREIVER????? OR ??????MALMUT????? OR INTERCHANGEABLE? |
*sigh* I know, I know...I'll fix it when I repost |

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2/12/2004 |
Coming Home |
A NICE LITTLETORY WELL WRITTEN WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE. |
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2/12/2004 |
Control |
lovely! I can't wait to read more and let's turn the tables too, shall we? with him taking control over her...two can play that game!
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Hmm. We'll just have to see...
*grin* |

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2/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
I've been enjoying your series. It seems so real, it must be based on your experiences.
Can't wait for the next parts. |
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2/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 4 |
YOU PAINT VIVID PICTURES!! |
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2/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
MORE!! WRITE FASTER!! |
I'm going as fast as I can!!
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2/12/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 1 |
BEAUTIFUL!!! |
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30/11/2004 |
Morning |
great stuff |
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30/11/2004 |
Morning |
incredible |
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30/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
I am eager to see how it ends, hope to see more soon! |
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29/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
Very cute. I feel the exact same way about my best friend but can't tell him. This is so romantic. I hope that my story ends like that. |
So email him the story link! :)
And let us know what happens... |

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28/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
Please more soon! |
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28/11/2004 |
Morning |
It made my day a whole lot hotter. |
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27/11/2004 |
Coming Home |
I liked the sensual quality and the waterworks. It works well written from a females'perspective. |
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27/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
I am really enjoying the way you are developing both the characters and the story line.The situations seem to be something I could envision myself getting into. Please post mor chapters soon. |
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25/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
It took too long to come out.
I got really interested in the story, Great writing style but with the time between posts the next chapter takes some adjusting to. I got lucky and read the first 5 all at once and was hooked but as I said, the time between the posts hurts.
I understand that you can only post it as fast as you can write it however you might try writing the whole thing and then posting it a chapter at a time just to keep us interested.
All in all though I do like the story and the writing. |
Believe me, the long gap wasn't the plan. But real life invades sometimes...hopefully it won't happen again. |

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25/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
Good chapter, thanks. |
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25/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 6 |
This was an interesting addition to the rest of the story, but it didn't seem to advance the story much, other than her realization that she's in love with him.
The story, overall, is a good one. Its been a while since I read it and I don't recall if she's explored surgical type options to deal with her problem, or if she rejected those.
Anyway, it's a really good story, do keep it up. |
I just wanted to develop the characters a little more.
That's my main goal in this story, if you hadn't guessed :)
As for surgical options...there aren't a lot. But no, she's not looked into them. Mind you, she'd probably know there wasn't much...she is a doctor! :) |

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24/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
I love stories involving tickling. |
And I love tickling! As long as it's not me being tickled :) |

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23/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
not enough sex because it was too short, a good concept tht ended too soon. |
Well, this was originally going to be chapter one of a longer story. I just never quite got around to the sequel... |

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21/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
OMG this is sooo sweeet!!! |
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20/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
This is a terrific story. I've been anticipating this chapter for a while. Really looking forward to the next one. Hope it's soon. |
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20/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
Will have to read more sections to make a better judgement. Please keep writing. |
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18/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
I am very impressed with the quality of the story. I feel that there is an element of autobiography about this story. Like myself I think you are extremely analytical to the point of being judgemental. |
Not sure if that's a compliment or not! I do tend towards the analytical though.
There are aspects that are from real life, but I'll never tell which ones! |

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18/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
Stephen asks her if she's allergic to anything when he decides to cook for her himself, but, eariler at the Italian restaurant, she's allergic to mushrooms and doesn't like seafood. He asks her if she likes red wine, but he should know she likes red wine because they shared a carafe of it at the italian restaurant. (small gripes, yes.) Besides those two tiny oversights, there were a few punctuation errors since I began reading this story (can't remember exactly where, but I remember being frustrated having to re-read pieces due to bad grammar and/or usage.) Otherwise, I am enjoying the story. |
If you notice any specific grammar problems please let me know; sometimes my fingers move slower than my brain. |

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18/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
I
> hope part 6 comes out soon! |
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17/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
U r telling me, it happens all the time, everywhere. It is this small small misunderstanding that keeps good relationships from blossoming into a fruitful affair. Face to face communication is so important. |
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15/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 1 |
Beautiful -
I believe these people, and I relate to their tentativeness and concern for both the emotional and sexual sides of their relationship. I'm ready to read on.
And I'll keep checking your site for other stories. |
Excellent, thanks! Let me know what you think of the others. |

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14/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
great story thanks Matty |
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13/11/2004 |
Therapy |
Lovely flash!
Great emotion; excellent non-disclosure! I do believe I will go read other stories of yours.
I do especially enjoy seeing a heart on display; this piece does that very very well, indeed.
God Bless and keep you always. |
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13/11/2004 |
Therapy |
GREAT short story, EXCELLENT!!! |
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12/11/2004 |
Coming Home |
This is incredible work! |
Thanks! |

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12/11/2004 |
Control |
Nice Fantasy, turned me on. Good writing. managed to create arousal almost immediately into the story. |
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11/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
Excellent first person narrative. Touched my heart and feelings. Thank you. |
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10/11/2004 |
Morning |
mmmmmmmmmmmmm.
couldabeenme.
lovely imagery. |
If it was you, where the heck did you go? Why'd you leave? :) |

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10/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
Intriguing -- I'm hooked.
I'm surprised at your comment that you may not explain the nightmare. With the amount of detail you include about the nightmare, I expect is that it will introduce a major plot element. My guess is that there's a major trauma in Steven's past, and that the event effectively removed Cathy from the family. I'm probably going to feel cheated if you don't address it.
It's your story, of course, and I don't mean to be telling you how to write it. My intent is to describe the state of mind you've induced in one of your readers.
I'm looking forward to the next episode. |
Thanks for the suggestion. I'm not sure just yet what I'm going to do about it. I guess you'll have to wait and see! |

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10/11/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
I love the story. Was on edge waiting to see what happened next. Can't wait for the next part. |
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3/11/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
Oo! Very nice short-short. I like the physical description of what happens when Erik lets her fall (almost) off his lap -- I can visualize the whole thing, a little blurry but definitely there. Good writing! Don't change your style. |
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25/10/2004 |
Misunderstanding |
very good, very realistic, very believeable, more, please |
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22/10/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 1 |
:) |
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22/10/2004 |
Its not the Size that Counts - Part 5 |
Erm - who are these people? Where did the dog come from? Why did he have an erection as a response to a nightmare? Have you been eating unsafe mushrooms? |
Well, if you read parts one through four, you'd know who they were. The dog belongs to Steven. As for the nightmare, I may or may not explain it in the story. But actually, the erection came from folling around with Sarah, not from the nightmare itself! Does that help? |

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