1 comments/ 6829 views/ 0 favorites Laid into the River Ch. 01 By: melanie59 This is a story about my best friend Jillian who is now almost nineteen years old. This is pure fantasy and I do NOT support violence/evil like it is descripted in this series. This series has descriptive violence/gore/swearing and may offend some readers. Lastly, this series isn't about things happening to Jill, it's how she evolves from her problems. Characters are under 18 years old in this story but DO NOT engage in sexual acts. Again, this is pure fantasy and for entertainment. Comments/Ratings are welcomed, thank you! -Melanie ---------------------------------------- Jillian has lost her whole family. They were killed in a fire at their house while she was over at her friend's house for a sleepover. Jill was 13 years old when the incident happened. Her life was shattered. She had no idea of what she was going to do because she lost her older sister, Abigail, and her two parents. Jill was a really soft girl, she was sensitive and always looked up to Abigail. Whether Jill was upset at school or having a bad dream, Abigail was always there for her. Her two parents loved her very, very much too and Jill had a hard time accepting the fact that her routine with her family was destroyed forever and beyond. Jill loved to watch movies with Abigail, every night they would pick out a movie and watch. Whether it was a sad movie or a horror movie, it was a very enjoyable one that both sisters loved watching. After the movie ended, Jill and Abigail would be snuggled into each other's arms only to fall asleep to the next morning. Abigail was 18 years old and she had a job at Best Buy. Her parents both worked at major companies. Her mom, a telemarketer for a newspaper company and her dad, a worker in an aircraft building facility. Jill loved to go to school, she loved her teachers, her friends, and the atmosphere. All of this has changed for her now that her family has fallen. Her grandparents passed away and there weren't any relatives around for her to go live with. There was only one choice for her in which she was forced to take, to go into a foster home. "Oh, Jill, I'm so sorry about the misfortune in your life, sweetie!" Her new mother said to her while shedding a few tears. Jill didn't say a word but looked down only to know that her own eyes were bloodshot with tears and sadness. She slipped out of her shoes and neatly organized them next to everyone else's shoes. Jill walked over slowly to give her new mother, Angela, a hug. Angela had straight black hair, green eyes, and was fairly tall. She was about 5'9" tall and was very athletic. Jill loved the feeling of being hugged because it gave her a feeling of happiness and hope once again. It was Christmas time now and Jill's feelings were really torn apart. Jill once again, had to accept a really harsh fact that she won't see any of her family ever again. Next, Jill was welcomed by 2 foster brothers, Jason and Daniel. Jason was 15 years old while Daniel was 17 years old. They both gave their new sister a hug and their greetings. Jill smiled and looked up at both of the boys. Knowing her eyes were blood red and teary, she let out a little smile and a 'thank you' to the two boys. Jason had shaggy brown hair, brown eyes, and black clothing. Daniel looked the same though his hair was a bit wavier. Both were around 6 feet tall and looked athletic, just like their mother. Jill looked around the house pretty amazed. It was a big house. It had 4 bedrooms, 2 washrooms, a kitchen, a big living room, and a basement that Jill hasn't seen yet. The carpet was a soft beige colour. It pleasured Jill's feet as she stood on it. There were couches around the television and a whole bunch of chairs in the kitchen. Her new older sister, Grace, then grabbed Jill tightly. Grace was 18 years old, she had nice long dark hair that went past her shoulders with beautiful green eyes. She was about 5'5" and slim. "Oh, Jill, I'm so happy to have a sister! I'm so sorry for your losses and I hope that things will turn out the best for you, sweetheart!" Grace said joyfully. "Oh...why...thank you so much...I really appreciate it..." Jill said in a very sad tone. "Dad's going to be working late tonight so you'll meet him later, Jill. Grace, show Jill her new room! She must be tired from this huge fiasco." Jill was led into a fairly big bedroom with two beds 3 feet apart, side-by-side, almost up against the wall. Jill is about 5'2" tall and she's a fairly skinny girl. She's generally a small girl like her older sister was. Jill sat on a bed and looked at her fingernails. "You can go to sleep if you like, Jill, sometimes it's best just to sleep all the terror away and welcome new greatness into your heart." Grace said to her softly. "Thank you so much...I can't even begin to start on how...grateful I am...to be here with you guys...thank you." Jill said back in another sad tone. Jill pulled off her shorts and top and let the warm covers take over her cold body. Jill started thinking about her family again, it was going to be hard for her to get them out of her head. Things would never be the same for her ever again. She then closed her eyes and slept the terror away, just like Grace told her to. Chapter 2 "Awww, hello, sweetie." Jill opened her eyes to a soft voice and a hand slowly touching her brown hair. "Hello, Jillian, I'm your new father, Owen." It was dark in the room, nightfall hit just like that while Jill slept away her sadness. Jill smiled at her new father and let a few tears fall from her eyes onto the pillow. "I...just want to thank you for everything you guys have done for...me. It means so much...to me...thank you so much." Jill said in another sad, tired tone. Owen smiled and ran his hand over Jill's tears. "It's okay, sweetie, you're safe here, we love you very much." He said. Jill smiled again and closed her eyes as her father left the room. A few days passed and Jill started to know her new family members. Jason and Daniel were part of an air soft team as well as a paintball team. They both loved to play video games and listen to metal music. Jill was into metal music as well, though she never really knew anyone else that was into it. Jill talked with her two brothers about metal for a while. Grace was into cooking. She was really good at it too. She also loved to go sledding outside in the snow, she wanted to take Jill sometime. Jill was very happy with the new family that she was accepted into although she was still attached to her original family. Christmas day came and everyone opened up their presents. Jill sat on the soft couch. Jill was holding back her tears forcefully knowing that she wouldn't be able to tell her own family 'Marry Christmas'. Daniel threw a present at Jill. "This one's for you, sweetie!" Jill looked at her present. She looked at the nametag and found out it was from 'Santa'. Everyone looked at Jill as she gently tore the wrapping paper and let the object fall into her lap. It was a nice soft thick knitted sweater. Jill smiled right away. "Wow, oh my goodness, this is so sweet you guys, thank you so much!" Jill said in excitement. Jill got up in an instant and hugged everyone in her family and gave them all a kiss on the cheek. "Put it on, Jill!" Jill pulled off her tank top and slid on the warm sweater. Jill smiled right away and gave everyone another hug. Jill also received a couple pairs of jeans that fit her pretty tightly and a couple of new shirts. She was also given new panties and bras from her mother while she was given a couple metal-labeled t-shirts from her brothers. They were bands that she loved and she gave both of her brothers a big hug and a big kiss. Grace had given her a couple of movies and a very pretty ring. Jill was so happy with everyone, she gave everyone another big hug and another big kiss. Christmas passed through along with New Year's. It was the middle of January now and that's when the horrors started coming back to haunt Jill, except this was a new horror. Chapter 3 Jill was happy with all of her new things and how she was welcomed into her new family. Jill helped out around the house, she cleaned up the kitchen every day, she tidied up, and cleaned the washrooms. Jill even shoveled snow outside for her family. One day, Jill was outside in her new sweater shoveling snow to only be interrupted from the voice of her mother. "Jillian! Where's your coat!?" Angela said angrily. Jill walked inside. "I don't have a coat, mum. The sweater you guys gave me works out very well." Jill said softly. "That's fucking hogwash! Are you fucking nuts? You'll get so sick if you go out in that weather!" Angela screamed at Jill. Jill's eyes filled with tears as her mum screamed at her. Jill has never been yelled at like that before. Jill tried to shed her tears with her hands but before she knew it, her mother had slapped her right across the face leaving a large cut from her ring. Jill flew into the wall as she let out a little scream. "Go to your fucking room! When you can actually think, come back out and talk to me!" Jill kicked off her boots and ran to her room crying very quietly. Jill took off her clothes and climbed into her bed. She went to sleep as throbbing pain attacked the wound on her face. Jill has never been hit before in her life, she was in a lot of pain. Blood seeped out of her wound onto her pillow as Grace walked into the room. "Jill! Are you ok? Please don't take this seriously, mom is drunk again!" Grace sat next to Jill on the bed. "She hit me for no reason, Grace..." Jill said as she cried. "Oh my god, you're cut, deeply! Come here!" Jill got up in pain. "Here, put some clothes on, we need to go to the doctor!" Jill put on her clothes and looked at her pillow, her pillow was full of blood. Grace grabbed Jill's hand and pulled her through the living room. Grace stopped and pushed Jill over the coffee table. Jill smacked her head on the carpet. "Oh my god! Jill! I'm so sorry!" Grace yelled. Jill stayed where she fell. Her whole body ached now and her head hurt more than ever. Jill closed her eyes and tried to sleep all the terror and pain away. Chapter 4 Jill opened her eyes. She was in her bed. She wasn't sure if what she experienced was a dream or real life. Jill had a splitting headache. She felt the side of her face and there it was, the stinging cut that Angela had given her. Jill got up and went to the kitchen. Owen was sitting down at the table reading the newspaper. "Dad?..." Jill asked without trying to cry. Owen looked up from the newspaper and looked at Jill's red eyes. "What is it, my little angel?" He said nicely. "Do...you...guys hate...me?" Jill said as she sobbed. "No! Of course not sweetie! Listen...we love you very much but alcohol is a big thing for your siblings and mother, just let it go. Don't let it get to you okay? Please..." Jill nodded as tears fell onto the kitchen floor. Jill walked back to bed in grief. Jill woke up a couple hours later. Not a word was spoken about what happened to her the night before. Months passed as Jill went to school and moved on. It was Jill's birthday in the month of October. No one even looked at Jill that day and no one even said a word to her. Jill was upset because her original family treated her so nicely on her birthday. Jill didn't think anything of it, after all, nothing would be the same for her again. It was November now. Jill did her fair share of chores around the house. She did her homework and paid attention in school. "Jill!" "Yes, mum?" "Why didn't you wipe up the counters after lunch?" Angela said in a very demanding tone. "I...forgot, mum, I'm so sorry, please d---" Before she could finish, she was slapped real hard across the face and landed on a glass cup that happened to be sitting on the table which shattered. Jill's face was cut up real bad. Her lower lip was cut and her right cheek was cut in several places. Jill's right eyebrow was cut deep, blood seeped into her eye. Jill had shards of glass stuck in her smooth skin. Her blood was spilling out of her like crazy. She ran into the washroom real fast and locked the door. Jill couldn't see out of her right eye because it stung with pain because of the blood. Jill looked in the mirror and looked at all the little pieces of glass forced into her face. Jill grabbed a cloth and wet it with hot water. She cleaned out her eye and gently rubbed her bloody eyebrow. Jill whimpered really loud. Jill then heard pounding on the washroom door. "Jillian! Open this door, right now!" Angela yelled. Jill didn't hesitate because she didn't want to be hurt anymore so she opened up the door. Angela looked at Jill's bloody face and realized the pain she'd caused her own little daughter. Jill was sitting on her bottom as she cleaned out her wounds and pushed herself up against the bathtub as Angela walked in the bathroom. Jill looked up into her mother's eyes. "Please mom, don't hurt me! Please! I've learned my lesson! Please just don't hurt me anymore, I'm in so much pain, I can't take it, please, mom!" Angela gave Jill a very dirty look. "I'm glad you learned your lesson. I swear to fucking god if you do this to me again I will fucking hurt you beyond anything you've ever felt, you little bitch!" Jill thought her tear vaults exploded at that moment. Blood was all over her chest and jeans. Her white tank top was bloodstained red. Owen walked into the washroom and picked up Jill gently. He guided Jill to his car. Jill was barefoot as she walked. The rocks outside really hurt her feet. "Oh my god, Jill! You're going to be okay! Stay with me!" Owen told her. Jill cried all the way to the hospital and before she knew it, she was out just like a light. Jill then woke up to a whole new world and realized something very shocking. Laid into the River Ch. 02 This is the second part of the story, this is based off of the first story. Once again, this story is graphic and it might offend people so if you're offended easily PLEASE don't read it. The characters in here may be under 18 years old but they DO NOT engage in sexual acts. The girl in this story is my cousin and she's 19 years old now and I thought I would dedicate a series to her. Feedback is very much appreciated, thank you! -Melanie A very strong white light blinded Jillian as she woke up. She opened her eyes every slowly and squinted as life came into focus for her. Everything was loud and crazy. Jill closed her eyes again. There were sirens everywhere. Her head ached more than ever right now. She opened her eyes again only to be blinded by bright headlights of a car. She was lying on the concrete as she rolled over onto her back. Jill had seen the car she was in and it was a wreck. It was in a big accident and Jill was thrown from the car onto the road. Jill closed her eyes and she couldn't feel her body any longer. Sirens were wailing all around her. Jill thought she was going to pass away into the next world. "Oh my god! I've never seen a dead body before! Oh my god! She's so young too! Oh my god!" Jill heard a woman yell. Jill opened her eyes very slowly and moved a little bit. She didn't want to imagine what she looked like because she probably looked like she had been to the pits of hell and back. "Oh, Jesus...she's alive." Jill heard a man say. Jill couldn't move, she was in so much pain and felt like she was going to feel her soul rip away from her body. All of a sudden, Jill was being dragged across the ground. Jill screamed a very deathly scream and the dragging stopped. "Don't drag her, you fucking idiot! You have to carry her! She's in so much pain? Can't you tell?" "Oh my goodness, I'm sorry." The paramedic lifted up Jill. Jill looked into the paramedic's eyes. The paramedic was about 20 years old. She had nice green eyes and brown hair. Her eyes were full of tears and by that, Jill could tell she was very worried. Jill then closed her eyes and sighed. Jill felt so bad, everything ached. Jill's tears started to come out of her eyes. Jill opened up her eyes and found out that something really bad happened and now she's in a hospital bed. She then sighed and closed her eyes once again. "What's your name, little sweetie?" The paramedic asked. "Uhhh...it's...Jillian..." Jill said very quietly. Jill opened up her eyes again and got another glance at the young girl's face. "My name is Julia. Listen, I'm so sorry for dragging you earlier..." Jill seen a few tears fall from her face. "It's okay, I never felt it really. May I ask what happened?" "Well...you're dad told the police that you and him were going out for ice cream. Then the vehicle you were in smashed really hard into a side of a building and you flew out of the car onto the street." "Oh my god..." "Is that really what happened, sweetie?" "No...That's far from the truth..." Jill felt so violated. Her family hated her for no real reason and now they were going to lie their way out it it. Jill thought about telling the paramedic what really happened. "Julia...can you keep a secret?" "For you? Of course, love." Julia responded. "I don't think my family likes me very much..." "What do you mean?" "They hurt me, they don't care about me, it's like I don't have any feelings..." "Are...you...kidding me?" Julia looked very shocked. Jill shook her head from side to side very slowly as more tears slid out from her eyes. Julia then climbed on the bed and lifted Jill's backside up and gave her a soft hug. She ran her hand through Jill's hair and touched her cold neck. "It's okay, sweetie, you'll be safe, I promise..." Julia then hugged her tightly for another minute and got up. She went over to a desk and got out a piece of paper and starting writing on it with a pen. "Please, Jill, if you ever have to run away from home, come to my home, you'll be safe..." Jill noticed a silver inverted cross necklace on Julia's neck. Julia shoved the paper in Jill's hand and ran out sobbing. Jill put her head back down on the soft pillow and closed her eyes once again. "Hey, Jillian! Come to the park with me!" Jill opened her eyes and seen Abigail. "Abigail?" "Yes, silly! It's me! Come on, let's go! I want to swing with you again!" Jill looked at her sister's face. She was standing over Jill's bed. Was this for real? What the hell happened? Jill walked along with Abigail. They walked through a field as Jill held her tears back with all of her might. Jill looked at the blinding sun, her eyes stung with pain. She looked over at her sister. She was wearing shorts, sandals, and a tanktop. Jill looked at herself, she was wearing jeans and sandals along with a tanktop. "Abigail...May I talk to you, please?" "Awww! Oh my gosh Jilly! What?!" "Are you...really here with me right now?" Jill stuttered. "What the hell? Of course I am! Haha! You joke around too much, Jilly!" Abigail said as she flung her head to the other direction. Her black hair flowed nicely with the small breeze. Jill laughed and hugged Abigail. She then pecked her on the cheek to show that she was happy to have her older sister back. Abigail gave Jill a very suspicious look. They walked the rest of the way to the park and Jill sat on the swing. Abigail joined her. They tried to beat each other to see who can get the highest first. Jill pulled and kicked with all her power and saw Abigail laughing at her. Jill was losing by a little so she stepped it up. The sun was really really hot and Jill was really starting to sweat. Just then the chain of the swing snapped and Jill flew under to hit the hard burning sand. Abigail then jumped off the swing and ran over to Jill. Abigail dove on her knees and leaned over Jill to see if she was okay. Jill looked down Abigail's shirt to find a shiny piece of metal. Jill opened her eyes in shock. She looked over at the doorway and found her foster sister Grace standing there. Jill looked away in disgust. She thought about the dream she just had. Grace walked over and sat on the bed next to Jill. "Jill, I'm sorry, I'll seriously start treating you like a real sister, I'm seriously offended by my own actions..." Jill closed her eyes and tried to imagine Abigail. Jill had a severe headache and her joints all ached with bad pain. "The side effects should only last for a few more hours, it was the only way we could stitch you up without really hurting you." Jill wondered once again. What did Julia do to her? Who was Julia? Why did she have that dream of Abigail? Jill eventually got home and her mother gave her a hug with an apology. Jill looked in the mirrior and looked at the stitches. She didn't look that bad but she would have a couple of minor scars. 2 Years Later... Jillian still couldn't get that dream out of her head. She was 16 years old now and Christmas had just passed. Her brothers had gotten airsoft and paintball guns. Grace had gotten a whole bunch of CD's and new jeans. Jill was given three tank tops, two pairs of jeans, panties, and socks. Jill was once again happy. It was New Year's for the family. Jill went downstairs to be with her two brothers. "Hey, Jill, do you want to feel what it's like to be shot by one of these things?" Daniel asked. "Does it hurt?" "No, of course not, it's just a little pinch, no biggie." "Okay, I guess so..." Jill said. Jill stood up against the way and shut her eyes tightly. Before Jill knew it, her skin all over her body was being ripped apart from paintballs. "Owww...oh...please...don't..." Jill was cut off from her pain. Jason then walked up to Jill and pointed the gun right at her chest. There was about a 5 inch gap between Jill's chest and the gun. Jason pulled the trigger as Jill's chest ripped open. Daniel then walked up and unloaded on Jill's stomach. Jill passed out because of the pain. Her clothes were torn and she had bad bruises all over and even a few cuts. Jill opened her eyes and moved a little bit but only to be attacked by very sharp pain. "Daniel, Jason! Please! Help me!" Daniel and Jason both placed Jill into her bed upstairs and let her be. Jill was in a whole lot of pain. She just closed her eyes and as soon as she closed her eyes, she saw the memory of the paramedic that gave her the note. Jill opened her eyes and inched over to her panty drawer. Jill flipped through her panties and found the white piece of paper. Jill unfolded and read the piece of paper. She looked on one side, there was an address and phone number, the other side, a message. "Jillian, I don't know how to write this for my feelings cannot be put into words. You never knew this but my middle name is Julia. I wish the best for you if don't read this note. Jill, I love you with all my heart and I thought you were gone forever. Please my little Jilly, come see me, I need you so bad. Bundles of love from your caring sister, Abigail."