6 comments/ 75748 views/ 7 favorites 750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story By: BOSTONFICTIONWRITER I was finally doing what I loved to do. I was writing for a living. Having opened up a small office in my neighborhood, I wasn't working for anyone. This was my business. I write custom creative stories for people. Everyone has a unique story to tell. What's your story? It was late Friday afternoon when a college student appeared at my place of business. "Hi," I said. "Can I help you?" "I need a story," he said. "Okay, sure, do you know what type of story you'd like me to write?" "There's this girl in my dorm that I'd like to, you know, get with and I thought that if I could break the ice by giving her a story of what I'd like to do with her, maybe, you know, she'd get with me." "Yeah, sure I can write you a romantic story." "Romance? Nah, I don't want none of that stuff. I don't want to love her. I just want to do her." "Okay, why don't you tell me what you have in mind and I'll start typing. Here's a list of my rates. I charge one hundred dollars for stories between 750-1,000 words and more for longer stories. All my stories come with a computer CD and I give you two printed copies, as well." "That's fine. For a hundred bucks, though, let's keep it closer to a thousand words." "You talk and I'll type. What's your name?" "Jason." "Hi Jason. I'm Freddie, Bostonfictionwriter," I said shaking hands. "Her name is Kathy and she's beautiful. She has a hot body and is wicked cool." "Describe her." "She's about 5'2", maybe 100 pounds, has blonde hair, blue eyes, and A cup titties," he said watching me type before continuing. "I'd like to hypnotize her. I mean, I don't know how to hypnotize someone, but even if I could pretend to hypnotize her, you know, control her mind, so that she'll let me do the things that I want to do to her body. I figure that way, if she's hypnotized, they'll be no guilt and she won't feel awkward about me having her do stuff that she ordinarily wouldn't do." "Have you asked her to, uhm, get with you?" "Oh, yeah, sure, we're beyond that holding hands crap. Only, we both want something a little more adventurous and we thought having you write a scenario for us would give us more ideas to expand our sex life." "Okay, this sounds like fun. Tell me more." "I want to put her under a hypnotic spell where I undress her in front of a few of my friends. I figure that if she reads this story that I'd have a better chance of convincing her to do that, 'cause she's always reading mind control stories on Literotica. That's her thing." "Well, it sounds like you're halfway there." He leaned over to see the screen as I typed. "Can you read to me what you're typing? You're typing so fast and I don't know what you're typing." "Sure. Kathy and I were hanging out in my dorm room having a beer with a couple of my friends." "I bet I can hypnotize you, Kath." "I can't be hypnotized." "Can I try?" "Sure, but it won't work." "What do I get if it works?" "Uhm, I dunno, you can make me remove my clothes in front of your friends to prove to me that you hypnotized me after you wake me up from my trance," she said rolling her eyes. "You're that sure that you can't be hypnotized?" "Yeah, I'm sure. Professionals have tried hypnotizing me before when I wanted to stop smoking." "You're going to be embarrassed." "This is good," said Jason. "You wrote all this shit just from the few things that I told you?" "Yeah, shall I continue?" "Hell, yeah." "I'm ready any time you are, Jason," said Kathy. "Okay then, keep your eyes on my keys. You're getting sleepy. You're getting very sleepy. You are feeling so sleepy that you can barely keep your eyes open. Your eye lids are getting heavy and heavier. They are so heavy that you can no longer keep your eyes open." Jason looked at Kathy in shocked disbelief that she had closed her eyes. "Jason," said one of his friends. "You did it, Dude." "Shh," said Jason. "I need to put her deeper in a trance. Sleep, Kathy. Sleep. Sleep deeply. You are so tired, Kathy, that you must sleep soundly. Only, when you hear me say "strip", you will start removing your clothes. Then, when I say "awake" you will gradually awaken at the sound of my voice." "Gees, Jason, whatever you did, she's practically snoring," said one of his buddies. "Strip." Kathy sat up straight and pulled off her sweatshirt giving Jason and his three friends a view of her white bra. Next, she unbuttoned and unzipped her jeans. Still with her eyes closed and her head down, she stood and pulled her legs out from her jeans, first one and then the other. She stood before the four men in her panty and bra. Then, without hearing another word from Jason, she reached around behind her and unhooked her bra exposing her delightfully perky A cup tits. Her nipples were erect. Then, in one swift movement, she pulled down and off her panty to expose her shaved pussy to the men in the room. She was naked. Ordinarily Kathy was modest. She was the type of woman who wouldn't even wear a bikini at the beach and here she was naked. Now, it was time to prove to Kathy that she could be hypnotized. "Awake...awake." Slowly Kathy was coming around until she was fully awake. "Jason! What the fuck! You asshole," she said grabbing her clothes and running from his room to her room. "How's that, Jason?" "I'll let you know. If this works, my friends will want stories, too." 750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story 02 I looked up from my desk in time to see three men enter my office. "Hi, can I help you?" "Yeah," said a lanky kid about twenty. "Are you Freddie?" "That's me." "We're Jason's friends," he said smiling. "I'm Chad, that's Steve, and he's Kevin," he said pointing to each boy. "Oh, did Jason read his story to Kathy?" "He sure did," said Chad not making any attempt to conceal his shit eating grin. "Did he hypnotize her and get her naked?" "Oh, yeah. Now, we want you to write us stories, too." "Yeah, sure, pull up some chairs. What did you have in mind?" "Well, that story you wrote for Jason was awesome and we'd like one for our lady friends." "Okay, who's first? I need a name and a physical description and any information you'd like included in the story." "How raunchy can you make the stories," said Chad lowering his voice? "It's your story. You tell me what you want me to write." "Okay, I'd want a story just like Jason's only I'd want her to suck my cock after she gets naked. Ordinarily, she doesn't like giving blowjobs and I'm hoping that this story will inspire her." "What's her name and description?" "Elaine and she's 5'7" with black hair and brown eyes, D cup tits, and bushy pussy. She's a little chubby, but that's how I like them with a little meat on their bones." "So, you want a story exactly like Jason's only she blows you before you awaken her from her hypnotic trance?" "Yeah." "And you're friends are there watching her blow you?" "Oh, yeah. Only, I don't want to take too much advantage of her and gross her out too much. I want to cum all over her tits and not in her mouth. She's a spitter. She doesn't swallow. She'd be pissed if I came in her mouth." "And she wouldn't be pissed having your friends see her naked while watching her blow you?" He shrugged his indifference. I don't know why they didn't copy and paste their own story replacing the story I wrote for Jason and Kathy with their names and the names of their girlfriends and descriptions, but why question it. This will be the fastest and easiest three hundred bucks I ever made. "Okay. Here goes." "We could have just used Jason's story, but we all wanted an original Bostonfictionwriter story. You're famous, Dude. Everyone on campus reads your stories on Literotica. You've set the standard high coming in second place in the Survivor Contest for fifteen consecutive years. Your page has more than ten thousand stories." "Well, thank you. That's very kind of you to say." "If you don't mind me asking, why do you only have 5 red H's?" "Bashers continually erase them. I used to have six." "Oh, and Jason said that you'd read the story as you typed it so we could make changes if we wanted and needed." "Okay," I said as I read as I typed. "Keep your eyes on my keys. Focus on the shiny metal and listen to the tingling sound as the keys sway back and forth and back and forth. You're getting sleepy. You're getting very sleepy. You are feeling so sleepy that you can barely keep your eyes open. Your eye lids are getting heavy and heavier. They are so heavy that you can no longer keep your eyes open." Chad looked at Elaine in shocked disbelief that she had closed her eyes. "Chad," said one of his friends. "You did it, Dude." "Shh," said Chad. "I need to put her deeper in a trance. Sleep, Elaine. Sleep. Sleep deeply. You are so tired, Elaine, that you must sleep soundly. Only, when you hear me say "strip", you will start removing your clothes. Then, when I say "blow me" you will take my cock in your mouth, stroke me with your hand, and suck me until you feel me ready to cum. Then, you will remove my cock from your mouth and hold it by your tits so that I can cum all over your big tits. Then when I say "awake" you will gradually awaken at the sound of my voice." "Gees, Chad, whatever you did, she's practically snoring," said one of his buddies. "Strip." Elaine sat up straight and pulled off her sweatshirt giving Chad and his three friends a view of her white bra. Next, she unbuttoned and unzipped her jeans. Still with her eyes closed and her head down, she stood and pulled her legs out from her jeans, first one and then the other. She stood before the four men in her panty and bra. Then, without hearing another word from Chad, she reached around behind her and unhooked her bra exposing her huge D cup tits. Her nipples were erect. Then, in one swift movement, she pulled down and off her panty to expose her bushy pussy to the men in the room. She was naked. "Blow me" said Chad. Immediately Elaine fell to her knees and took his cock in her mouth. Just as he suggested, when she felt him ready to cum, she pulled his cock from his mouth and had him cum all over her big tits. Ordinarily Elaine was modest. She was the type of woman who wouldn't even wear a one piece bathing at the beach without a cover up and here she was naked. Now, it was time to prove to Elaine that she could be hypnotized. "Awake...awake." Slowly Elaine was coming around until she was fully awake. "Chad! What the fuck! You asshole," she said grabbing her clothes and running from his room to her room. "How's that, Chad?" "Awesome." 750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story 03 After writing Jason's friend Chad a story, Stephen was next. He pulled up a chair beside my desk. "I want a story exactly like Jason's and Chad's, but I want to watch my girlfriend do my friends. I like to watch. Only, I don't want them cumming off in her mouth or pussy. I don't want her to know she's been fucked and has sucked." He smiled at Chad and Kevin giving them both a high five. "Then, when I awaken her, my friends will be gone and she'll be horny for me." "Okay," I said. "I need a name and a physical description of your girlfriend and any information you'd like included in the story," I said with my fingers poised on the keyboard. "Her name is Colleen, she's 5'4", has red hair, blue eyes, and is very pretty. She has B cup tits and a trimmed red pussy. I want a story where I hypnotize her after she gets out of the shower while she's still wearing her bathrobe." "I can't believe these women are being hypnotized by you reading them my story," I said. "Hey, it shocked the shit out of me, too," said Steve, "but I'm not going to question it. I'm just happy for the sexual opportunity." "Yeah, but couldn't you get in trouble?" "What do you mean?" "Isn't this rape?" "Rape? Nah. The women all know what we're doing. Only, they use your writing ability as an excuse to do things that they always wanted to do willingly but wouldn't otherwise for fear of being deemed a slut." He smiled. "It's all a game with them and we pretend that we don't know that they are not hypnotized, just as they pretend that they are hypnotized." "Whatever floats your boat," I said already finishing typing the first page. "And like you did with Chad's story, can you read it aloud so that we can all hear it?" "Sure," I said reading as I typed. "Steve's friends Jason, Chad, and Kevin waited for Steve to text them that Colleen was out of her morning shower." The three friends knocked at Colleen's dormitory door. "You guys are up early," she said opening the door. "Oh, we're just looking for Steve and we figured he'd be here with you." "Well, I have to get dressed," she said pulling her bathrobe tie tighter and turning for the bathroom. "Wait Colleen, I want to try something," said Steve. "What," she asked looking from Steve to his friends and back again at Steve's hand that held Bostonfictionwriter's story. "I want to hypnotize you." "No way. I heard what you perverts did to poor Kathy and Elaine." "Are you afraid that I can hypnotize you?" "You can't hypnotize me just by reading a story like you did with those other two dizzy broads." "I double dog dare you that I can." "And what will you do if you can't?" "I'll do all your homework for a week." "And what will you do for me if I do hypnotize you." "I'm not getting naked in front of your friends, Steve," she said clutching the top portion of her bathrobe with her hand. "Imagine a week without homework," he said. "Okay, okay, but if I find out that you had me get naked, I'll be pissed." Colleen sat on the couch beside her boyfriend while he read from Bostonfictionwriter's story. "Keep your eyes on my keys. Focus on the shiny metal and listen to the tingling sound as the keys sway back and forth and back and forth. You're getting sleepy. You're getting very sleepy. You are feeling so sleepy that you can barely keep your eyes open. Your eye lids are getting heavy and heavier. They are so heavy that you can no longer keep your eyes open." Steve looked at Colleen in shocked disbelief when she closed her eyes. It worked. "Sleep, Colleen, sleep. Sleep deeply. You are so tired, Colleen, that you must sleep soundly. Only, when you hear me say "sex", you will remove your bathrobe and give sex to whoever kisses you. Then when I say "awake" you will gradually awaken at the sound of my voice. You will remember nothing." As soon as Colleen closed her eyes, Jason's friends stripped off their clothes. "Sex," said Jason. Robotically, Colleen slowly opened her bathrobe and removed it. She was naked. Steve motioned to Jason, Chad, and Kevin. One by one, as if kissing Sleeping Beauty, they kissed her. It was surreal. Instantly, Colleen moved into action. She reached for Jason's cock and inserted it in her mouth while stroking him. Chad was already down between her legs licking her pussy and she was giving Kevin a hand job with her free hand while he and Jason felt her tits. Then, she leaned the other way and took Kevin's cock in her mouth while giving Jason a hand job. Chad's cock was already buried deep inside her pussy and he was humping away and fucking her, as if he was a sailor on shore leave. Then, they switched again and again until Jason, Chad, and Kevin all knew what it felt like to experience Colleen's hand, mouth, and pussy. Only, under Steve's strict instructions, they knew not to cum inside Colleen, otherwise everything would be ruined. Even though she knew she was being used and abused, she pretended she didn't. She pretended she was hypnotized. After his friends left, Steve dressed her in her bathrobe. "Awake...awake." Slowly Colleen was coming around until she was fully awake. "Where'd your friends go?" "They had to leave." "See, I told you I couldn't be hypnotized." "Before you do my homework, Steve, fuck me," she said. "Suddenly, I'm so very horny." 750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story 04 After writing Jason's friend Chad and Steve a story, Kevin was next. "My story is different from the others. I want to watch my girlfriend with Kathy, Elaine, and Colleen, my friends' girlfriends. I want to watch them make love to one another." "Wow," said Jason, Chad, and Steve in unison. "Okay," I said. "I need a name and a physical description of your girlfriend and any information you'd like included in the story," I said with my fingers poised on the keyboard. "Linda's her name, she's 5'3", has brown hair, brown eyes, and is very attractive. She has C cup tits and a shaved pussy. I want a story where all four women are together and I hypnotize them to have wild lesbian sex while we all watch and take photos." "Yeah, baby," said Jason, Chad, and Steve, slapping one another high fives. "I still can't believe you are able to get these women to go along with this," I said. "They're all hypnotized, Freddie," said Jason giving me a wink. "It's just a game we play." "The women all know what they're doing. They use stories as an excuse to do things they wouldn't ordinarily do but always wanted to try doing. This way, there's no guilt and judgment. They can always say that they were hypnotized. It's like saying that you didn't know what you were doing 'cause you were drunk," said Jason. "We pretend that they're hypnotized." "Whatever," I said. "It's your hundred bucks for me to write whatever you want." "And can you read it aloud so that we can all hear it?" "Sure," I said reading as I typed. "It was Saturday night and we were all hanging out in Jason's dorm room. There were 8 of us, Jason, Chad, Steve, and me and our girlfriends, Kathy, Elaine, Colleen, and Linda." "Hey, let's play game," I said. "What do you have in mind, Kevin, Charades or strip poker," said my girlfriend, Linda. "That's so lame. Let's go out clubbing." "Yeah, sure, we can do that later, after I see if I can hypnotize the four of you," said Kevin. "No way," said Kathy. "Yeah, we already were naked once and God only knows what else you had us do." "C'mon," said Colleen. "I'll make sure nothing happens this time. Steve tried and he couldn't hypnotize me." The men hid their laughter. "I'd like to try to be hypnotized," said Linda. "Besides, hypnosis can't make you do what you wouldn't ordinarily do when not hypnotized." The four women sat on the couch side by side giggling like Japanese school girls while Kevin pulled out the custom story Bostonfictionwriter wrote for him and started reading from it. "Keep your eyes on my keys. Focus on the shiny metal and listen to the tingling sound as the keys sway back and forth and back and forth. You're getting sleepy. You're getting very sleepy. You are feeling so sleepy that you can barely keep your eyes open. Your eye lids are getting heavy and heavier. They are so heavy that you can no longer keep your eyes open." One by one, the four women closed their eyes and slept. It worked. It really worked. Kevin couldn't believe it. "Sleep, Kathy. Sleep Elaine. Sleep Colleen. Sleep Linda." Kevin felt a little bit like Santa Clause talking to his reindeer. Sleep deeply. You are all so very tired that you must sleep soundly. When you hear me say "lesbian" you will all start kissing one another and feeling one another. Then when I say "awake" you will gradually awaken to the sound of my voice. You will remember nothing." As soon as the women closed their eyes, the men undressed the women. "Lesbian," said Jason. Immediately Kathy and Elaine started making out while feeling one another's breasts. Colleen and Linda were making out while fondling one another, too. The four men snapped away with their digital cameras taking close up shots of the four women enjoying one another. Kathy went down on Elaine while Colleen went down on Linda. Then, Linda switched with Kathy and went down on Elaine while Colleen went down on Kathy. It was an orgy of lesbian activity with arms and legs everywhere. It was sometimes difficult to tell which body part belonged to which woman. Never did Kevin imagine it would be this good. He always wanted to see his girlfriend with another woman, but this was unbelievable. "Oh, my God," said Jason. "You'd think they were lesbians in the way they are going at one another." "This story is way better than my story," said Chad. "I wish I had thought of doing this," said Steve snapping some close-up photos of his girlfriend Colleen eating Linda's pussy. Finally, when the four men had their fill of watching women sexually enjoying one another, while they snapped all the photos to last them a full year of jerk-off sessions, Kevin moved to stop the action. Only, he forgot one thing. He forgot to dress them before awakening them. "Awake," he said. "Awake...awake." Slowly the women started coming around until they were all fully awake. As soon as they opened their eyes, they looked down at their nakedness, screamed, grabbed their clothes, and bolted from the room. "Kevin, you're such an asshole," said Linda, his girlfriend, as she ran out the door. "You're going to get what's coming to you, Steve," said Colleen leaving. "How could you do this to me, again," said Elaine to Chad. "I'm so embarrassed," said Kathy clutching her clothes to her person and running out the door for the safe shelter of her room. The four men laughed like school boys while slapping one another high fives and comparing their photos. 750-1,000 Word Mind Control Story 05 I'm Freddie, Bostonfictionwriter. I write stories for people who want to capture memories on paper. When Jason hypnotized his girlfriend from the story written by Bostonfictionwriter and gave a hypnotic suggestion to strip naked in front of his friends, they wanted stories, too. After writing Jason and his friends Chad, Steve, and Kevin a story, I figured I was done writing stories for the college crowd, that is, until 4 women walked into my office. "Hi, can I help you?" "Are you Freddie?" "Yes, I am." "He's cute," said one of the women. "Where's Polo?" "Oh, he's home today. I bring him with me some days, but not today." "I'm Kathy and these are my friends, Elaine, Colleen, and Linda. You wrote stories for our boyfriends and—" Immediately, I knew them all by name. "Listen, I'm so sorry. I tried to tell your boyfriends that what they were doing was wrong, but they all insisted that it was a game and that you women agreed to it," I said throwing up my hands in a submissive motion. "They said that it was a way for you four to do sexual things that you ordinarily wouldn't do without feeling guilty and without feeling like a, uhm, you know..." "Like sluts," said Colleen. "Yes, their word, not mine," I said in defense. "Well, we all agreed to do this hypnotic story thing, but we had no idea that they were going to take it this far. And I don't know if you realize it, but either you are a great writer, Bostonfictionwriter, or you are a warlock because we were all hypnotized at one point or another. We had to be for us to do what we did," said Elaine. As the writer of their stories, even though I knew what they all did, I still felt compelled to ask. "What did you do?" "You should know," said Linda. "Yeah, I do, but only from what your boyfriends told me. I'd much rather hear your side of what happened." "Jason had me strip naked in front of his friends," said Kathy. "My boyfriend, Chad, had me not only strip naked but also suck his cock in front of his friends," said Elaine. "That's nothing," said Colleen. "Steve had me get naked by removing my bathrobe. Then, he had his friends fuck me and had me blow them and give them hand jobs. Thankfully, they didn't cum in my mouth or inside me." "I don't know which is worse," said Linda. "What they did to all of you individually or what they did to us," she said looking at me. "My boyfriend, Kevin, had all the guys strip us naked and then gave us a hypnotic suggestion to have a lesbian orgy while they took photos." I couldn't believe all this really happened. I couldn't believe that my stories were somehow charmed in the way that made these women feel somewhat hypnotized. Only, I wondered how they remembered what happened to them. Maybe, it was a spell that wore off after a few hours allowing them to recall the nastiness their boyfriends did to them. "Now, as revenge, we want you to write us a story," said Kathy. "Sure, I'd be happy to do that and as my apology to all of you, for what your boyfriends did to you, they'll be no charge for the story. Just tell me what you want me to write and I'll write it. Only, I hope what I write for you four ladies works as good as what I wrote for your four boyfriends. "We can only hope," said Elaine. I fell into my usual writer's trance. I didn't need for them to give me any information other than what they planned to do to their boyfriends. "Okay, boys, it's our turn," said Kathy. Just as I did when writing the stories for the men, I recited the story to the women as I quickly typed them a story to their pleasure of sexual hypnotic retribution. "The four of you get on the couch," said Colleen. "Keep your eyes on my keys. Focus on the shiny metal and listen to the tingling sound as the keys sway back and forth and back and forth. You're getting sleepy. You're getting very sleepy. You are feeling so sleepy that you can barely keep your eyes open. Your eye lids are getting heavy and heavier. They are so heavy that you can no longer keep your eyes open," said Elaine. One by one, the four men closed their eyes and slept. It worked. They were hypnotized. The women couldn't believe it. "Sleep, Jason," said Kathy. "Sleep Chad," Elaine. "Sleep Steve," said Colleen. "Sleep Kevin," said Linda. "Sleep deeply," they all said in unison. "You are all so very tired that you must sleep soundly. When you hear me say "gay" you will all start kissing one another and feeling one another. Then when I say "awake" you will gradually awaken to the sound of my voice. You will remember nothing." As soon as the four men closed their eyes, the women undressed them, gave them coats to wear to conceal their nakedness, and piled them a big van. Once there, they gave them their instructions. "Gay," said Kathy. "Gay," said Elaine. "Gay," said Colleen. "Gay," said Linda. That night on the eleven o'clock news the reporter gave his news report. "Well, here's one for the books," he said chuckling. "A riot broke out when four naked men walked into a gay bar and started making out with one another. A fight started when other patrons were rebuffed trying to dance with the men after four anonymous women left the bar yelling, "Awake...awake...awake...awake." Police are puzzled why the men walked into the gay bar naked and who the women were yelling, "awake." The four men are charged with creating a disturbance and violating public nudity laws.