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Describing Anal Intercourse

By: Cal Y. Pygia



Like any process, anal intercourse is actually a series of discrete phases, or stages. Writers may analyze these stages differently, but, before embarking upon a description of this, or any other sexual activity, the writer should identify which separate phases he or she sees as comprising the totality of the process and, of course, the sequence, or order, in which each phase occurs.

I see anal intercourse as being comprised of these incidents, in this order:

1. Approach (the penis is slid between the buttocks)

2. Penetration (the penis impales the anus)

3. Occupation and acquiescence (the penis fully enters the rectum, and the fluttering of the recipient's anus subsides)

4. Fucking (self-explanatory)

5. Ejaculation (self-explanatory)

6. Withdrawal (the penis is removed from the rectum, usually trailing, or offering a final volley of, semen)

Note: phases five and six can be reversed, so that the fucker withdraws before ejaculating.

There is more to describing anal intercourse than merely identifying its stages and their sequence of occurrence. Two characters are involved, whether they are both males, a male and a female, or a pair of females aided by one's use of a strap-on dildo: a giver, as it were, and a receiver. Each will feel different sensations, and each will feel different emotions, the giver taking a dominant, and the receiver a submissive, role, which will color their attitudes and sentiments.

The writer who includes the inner states of the characters, offering both perspectives (that of the impaler and the impaled) will write a much more highly charged and arousing description of anal intercourse than will the writer who neglects to do so, and, since the whole purpose or erotica is to arouse the reader, the writer, it goes without saying, should not ignore this means to provide additional stimulus. After all, as psychologists remind us, sex is as much, if not more, a matter of the mind as it is of the flesh.

Each phase of the act can, and should, be the occasion to explore the characters' emotions as well as to describe their physical sensations. Although, for the sake of variety, the writer may change the emotional states that the characters feel with respect to each of the stages of anal intercourse that the writer has identified, it is important to describe the inner states of the characters as they participate in each stage of the act. For example, the impaler may feel emotions such as these:

1. Approach: anticipation

2. Penetration: empowerment

3. Occupation and acquiescence: mastery

4. Fucking: supremacy

5. Ejaculation: triumph

6. Withdrawal: disappointment

The impaled, on the other hand, might associate these emotions with each stage of the act:

1. Approach: trepidation

2. Penetration: fear

3. Occupation and acquiescence: submission

4. Fucking: fulfillment

5. Ejaculation: pleasure

6. Withdrawal: sorrow or loss

Especially if anal intercourse is the sexual centerpiece, so to speak, of the story, it should also be transformational. In other words, the fact that the characters engage in it, when there is no need for them to do so (for example, they might have performed oral sex, masturbated, or, in the case of a heterosexual couple, engaged in penile-vaginal intercourse), should change them as individuals, as human beings. The act should have positive or negative consequences regarding one or both of its participants. As a result of indulging in anal intercourse, one or both characters should be different at the end of the story than he or she was at the beginning.

The way that the characters feel at the outset of the act (in our example, anticipation in the case of the impaler and trepidation in the case of the impaled) should be reversed or otherwise changed in some way because of the act itself. 

For example, perhaps now that he has indulged himself in this act with the impaled, the impaler no longer anticipates doing so again, because he has learned what it will be like with this particular partner. He may then seek a new partner to impale or he may seek to perform the act in a different position or in a different locale or as a means to a different end. He may condition himself to expect nothing in the future, with this or a different partner, so that he is not controlled by the other's responses and reactions or he mat seek to determine a different outcome than that which he anticipates at the beginning of the act. Perhaps his anticipation will make him a better, or at least a more versatile, anal impaler. 

Likewise, the impaled may discover that he or she had no reason to feel anxious and may approach the next session of anal intercourse without such trepidation. If so, perhaps the impaler will recognize this change in attitude on the impaled partner's part and adjust his own behavior in accordance with the other's. Perhaps both partners feel, at the outset, that anal intercourse is vile, but, as a result of engaging in the act, one or both come to view it as not only good but enjoyable as well or maybe one comes to prefer it exclusive to any and all other sexual activities.

The possibilities, while not endless, are many and varied, but whatever the change, the transformation is usually predicated upon the initial mental state, or emotional status, of the characters, so deliberation should be given to what they feel, emotionally, at the beginning of their session and how you, as the writer, want them to change as a result of their participation with one another in anal intercourse.

In describing anal intercourse, the writer will have occasion to describe the various body parts involved in the act: penis (glans and shaft), scrotum and testicles, perineum, buttocks, anus, and rectum, and the writer should not hasten past any of them, because the description of these anatomical parts is itself arousing when done well, with poetic as well as merely literal rhetorical and stylistic techniques. Reading how others describe anal intercourse will improve the way in which one describes this same act him- or herself, although the development of one's own style, and not mere imitation, should be the author's goal, both immediately and long-term.

Anal intercourse can be viewed from several vantage points, or camera angles, as it were, and the writer of erotica should consider which angles to use in describing this act and which of the possible angles best serves his or her aims. Likewise, anal intercourse can be performed in a variety of positions, and there is no need to have a couple finish in the same position as the one in which they began the act. Alternating between describing the characters' inner states; modifying the vantage points from which the action is described, as if one were filming the scene with several cameras at different locations and elevations; and changing the positions in which the couple perform are all ways by which to vary the descriptions of the act while maintaining and heightening the reader's arousal.

Before writing a scene or a story concerning anal intercourse, a writer should ascertain what he or she wants to accomplish by such a scene or story. Some preliminary questions will focus one's aims. These questions might include:

1. Is this the first time the characters are having anal intercourse? If so, their attitudes, competence, concerns, emotions, and other related actions, thoughts, and feelings will differ from those that are apt to be associated with a couple who has performed this act before or who do so on a regular basis.

2. Why did the character who is to be impaled agree to participate? Does he or she seek to secure the other's love, to deepen the intimacy between them, to end the other's insistent demands to do so, to prevent the impaler from seeking someone else who will provide this outlet to his libido? To satisfy his or her own curiosity concerning this act? The character's motive will affect all that happens between him or her and his or her partner as well as what happens within him- or herself and how and why he or she is changed by the act.

3. Why did the character who is to impale the other agree to participate? His or her motive can be as varied as his partner's motive and will affect all that happens between him and his or her partner as well as what happens within himself and how and why he is changed by the act. (We use the masculine pronoun because most impalers are male, although, as we have observed, females may also adopt the penetrating role with the assistance of a strap-on dildo.)

4. How do the characters think of their agreement to participate in this act? As a gift? As a surrender or a conquest? As an act of interpersonal, albeit nonverbal, communication? As a bonding activity? As a means of empowering oneself or of controlling the other participant? As an act of love?

5. Are the participants heterosexual, gay males, or lesbians? The dynamics will change with respect to the sex and gender of the act's participants.

6. When and where are the participants performing this act? Indoors? In the bedroom? Somewhere else in the house? In someone else's house, such as one of their parents or children? Outdoors? In a field or meadow? In a forest? In a parked automobile? Are they in danger of being discovered or observed? If so, does their awareness of this fact heighten or dampen their arousal? Is either an exhibitionist? Does one want to perform in a "public place" while the other prefers to engage in the act in a "private place"? If so, how do they decide where to do so? Which partner makes the decision, or do they compromise in some way?

Finally, develop a list of synonyms for each of the verbs and nouns that describe various actions associated with anal intercourse. Don't forget to use your list of the stages of the act that you identified earlier; this list will assist you. For example, for "penetration," or "penetrate," your list might include:

Penetrate, enter, pierce, breach, insert, violate, ravage, trespass, invade, assault.

All of these considerations will affect the way you describe anal intercourse in a scene or a story and can enhance your reader's own sexual arousal; therefore, they deserve your careful consideration as a writer. Also consider them as you read the approaches that other writers have taken concerning their descriptions of anal intercourse. You will learn from them, as they will from you. To get you started, here's one of my own descriptions of this practice, from my short story, "Beefy Buns"; enjoy!

She positioned herself on her elbows and knees, legs spread wide, to provide easy access to the tiny, puckered anus between her satin-smooth buttocks, and I took my place, on my knees, behind her, the jostling mattress dipping and rolling beneath us.

Although smaller than a woman's ass, Mona's bottom was fuller than a man's backside and every bit as smooth, soft, and inviting as any female's derriere. Just the sight of the round, sleek orbs and the small, tight opening that led into her innermost depths brought my cock fully erect again and made my balls ache. There was nothing more tempting, I thought, than a pair of lovely buttocks; although mere muscle and fat overlaid with skin, they seemed not only to invite, but also to demand, to be both penetrated and fucked. I had every intention of obeying their silent command. It would be a true joy to shove my cock through Mona's tight anal opening and deep into her bowels.

Taking my cock in hand, I guided the massive organ between the silk-smooth cheeks of Mona's magnificent derriere. It was heavenly to feel the smooth, cushioned flesh slide past both sides of my prick as I introduced my organ into her cleavage, the already parted globes spreading further to admit my hard, swollen manhood.

My penis met the stout resistance of her anal sphincter. Gripping my member more firmly, I pointed the tip of my prick into the dimple between Mona's ass cheeks and pressed forward, resolutely, with my hips. My glans pushed through the opening, followed by an inch of my rigid cock. I continued to push, forcing another inch of my stiff prick through her asshole, and another, and another, until I had buried my erection inside her impaled buttocks to the very root, and my balls were crushed between my pubes and her perineum and scrotum. It felt wonderful to have conquered her ass, to have invaded the sanctuary of her rectum, and to have usurped from her the last vestiges of her own autonomy, making her fully and completely a woman.

Her head hanging, Mona moaned as, reaching forward and below her, I cupped her breasts in my hands, squeezing them hard, as if they were melons, while I ground my pubes against her bare, cock-skewered ass.

Then, as I withdrew, drawing my erection back through her speared anus until only the glans remained within the tight ring of muscle, I released one of her tits and gripped her genitals, squeezing both her diminutive cock and balls repeatedly.

Mona squirmed, and I slapped her ass. Immediately, she stilled herself.

Inwardly, I chuckled. At just nineteen, Mona was little more than a girl, although she'd frightened me badly enough only a few hours ago, accusing me of sexually harassing her at work to the point that I was afraid she might be setting me up for a lawsuit. A sudden pang of doubt and fear stabbed me as I realized that, even now, she might be doing just such a thing. She could claim that I'd raped her. No, I told myself. It was obvious that she was enjoying herself; it was evident that she liked to have a cock in her mouth or up her ass, to be used and dominated. She might act the self-assured, no-nonsense, ball-busting bitch at work, but she was glad enough to be on the receiving end of a man's cock at home, where a person's true character was most evident.

I had no intention of disappointing her. As a manager--and a man--I knew well how to take charge, and I did so now.

I slammed my hard cock full force into her bouncing buns, shoving the thick column all the way inside her rectum until my groin collided with her buttocks, flattening them beneath me, and my balls ground hard against her perineum and scrotum.

Again, Mona moaned. Her whimper excited me, and I pulled out, all the way out, this time, my cock sliding free of her gaping asshole. The sight of her round anus, stretched to many times its normal size, and the knowledge that it was I--and my thick, hard cock--that was responsible for this transformation of her asshole into a cunt--was erotic in the extreme. No female, not even a genetic female, is truly a woman until she's been fucked by a man, and Mona was no exception. In fucking her in her beautiful transsexual ass, I would be making of her a true and complete woman.

My prick slipped easily back through her wide-stretched, circular opening and plunged deep into her bowels. After ramming it home, I withdrew, again letting my bloated cock slide all the way out of her tunnel of love. It was fun to see my prick slide effortlessly all the way into her ass or to pull all the way out, and, several times, I repeated this action, watching my organ vanish and reappear as I worked it in and out and back and forth within her entrails, my toil punctuated by Mona's moans and groans, whimpers, gasps, and cries.

Reaching beneath her, I found her genitals again, and was surprised to find her erect. Her small cock had stiffened so that it ran parallel to her lower belly, pointing upward, and her balls, small in the contracted pouch of her silk-smooth scrotum, had risen to rest below the base of her blood-engorged cock. I chuckled at the thought that, ready as she might be to play the man and to penetrate a cunt or an asshole, there was no partner for her by which she might accomplish such a feat, and her cock, erect or not, must remain idle and redundant while mine filled her again and again. Despite her male equipment, she was, and would always be, a she and, as such, the receptacle, rather than the instrument, of invasion and occupation, the conquered rather than the conqueror.

Nevertheless, now that she was hard, there was no sense, I told myself, in letting a perfectly good, if smallish, erection go to waste, and seizing her little penis between my thumb on one side and my index and middle fingers on the other side, I pumped the flesh of her cock back and forth upon the slender, straining shaft, eliciting more moans and gasps from the beautiful shemale whose ass I was riding fast and hard.

I slammed my meat home again, crushing her sleek, soft-firm buttocks before my driving pubes and feeling the circle of her anus all along my plummeting member. My hips buffeted her bottom, and I ground my groin hard against her impaled buttocks before wrenching my cock back through her asshole, the sphincter of her ass dragging against my retreating prick, as if seeking to resist its departure just as, following my initial penetration of her ass, the sphincter had seemed to resist my organ's invasion.

Back and forth, with greater and greater passion, force, and speed, I worked my cock inside Mona's anal opening, ramming and jamming, lunging and plunging, stabbing and jabbing her buttocks, her asshole, and her rectum with my thick, hard manhood while, her frame shaking, her breasts bouncing, her buttocks flattening and recoiling, and her cock and balls joggling, the mattress beneath our bucking bodies dipping and rocking, I fucked Mona with all the strength, energy, stamina, and brutality that my lust-enflamed soul could muster--which was considerable. The more she bounced and flounced, the harder I thrust and lunged, and the more Mona moaned and groaned. She began to toss her impaled buttocks back, to meet my assault, and her ass and my groin, her perineum and scrotum and my balls, colliding again and again, made the loud slapping sounds of flesh smacking flesh.

In my mind, I compared--or, perhaps I should say, I contrasted--her asshole as it had looked prior to my assault, tiny and tight, with how it looked now that I had ravished it, gaping wide open, and the mental images of her anus relit my dying lust, renewed my will, and gave me the strength to prolong my attack. I rammed my cock into her impaled bottom with as much savage fury as I'd used in the delivery of any previous stroke, and my effort was rewarded with a cry from Mona, followed by a tremulous whimper.

I rammed my cock through her anus, into her bowels, withdrew the rigid fleshly pole; and drove it home again, with greater force, as if, with my penis, I meant to disembowel the ass it fucked.

Of course, Mona was up to the challenge of having me jam my cock into her ass and wrench it free so that I might plunge into her bowels again--and again---and again--and, although it seemed impossible that her little anus, even stretched to many times it normal size, could tolerate my continued assault, she weathered the attack until the moment that orgasm seized me, my belly heaved, my legs quaked and shuddered, my cock convulsed, lurching frantically within the depths of her bowels, and, my breath coming in quick, hot gasps and my heart pounding like machine-gun fire, my thick viscid semen spewed into the chamber of her lower intestine, spraying the walls of her rectum with repeated volleys and jets until, the reservoir of my seed spent at last, my penis softened, dwindling, and withdrew from Mona's round, wide-stretched anus, trailing white fluid down the cleavage between her buttocks, over her perineum, and down the back side of her scrotum.