0 comments/ 5296 views/ 0 favorites Thor's Story Ch. 01 By: maxex5452 Thor sat at his computer desk reading a story from MySpace on his computer. He sighed. He really wished that he could meet this girl. He'd been talking to her the past few weeks, and well, he really liked her. And her stories and everything were very creative and talented. Especially the story he was reading now. Hidden Love it was called. It was part three where the Hero/main guy asks her out on a date, and well, it got pretty hot. He was getting to the part where she was about to give the guy head as he stood in front of her. Thor grunted in pleasure and pain, as his cock stood straight up and throbbing for release. He closed his eyes, trying to think it was him and the heroine was her. Maxe, she wanted to be called. Just the thought of her bobbing her head down on to him made him shudder. He gulped and was just about to give himself the release he wanted, someone knocked on the door. He grunted again, but this time in annoyance. Why now? He asked himself. He pulled his jeans back on, and answered the door without his shirt. At the door was girl that reached below his chin. She had dark gold hair with highlights, framing her oval face nicely. Her dark brown eyes gleamed up at him with curiosity. She looked familiar to him, but he couldn't put his finger on it, how he knew her. "Hey Thor." She said with a shy smile. Her voice was a little husky and sexy, which sent another stirring in his groin area. "Do you recognize me?" She wore a long sleeved shirt from the chill outside, but her breasts curved nicely outwards. He guessed about a C-cup. And blue jeans revealed nice long legs that seemed to go on forever. "Umm . . ." He mumbled, his curiosity peaked from this beautiful girl. "I'm sorry . . . but no." She giggled lightly, eyeing his broad muscled chest. "I'm Maxe from the MySpace thing." Now he knew who she was. He checked her pictures on there before, and thought she was freaking hot, but she didn't have anybody shots. He never thought she would be this slender and perfect. "Hey. . ." He wasn't sure what to say. "You want to come in?" He gestured inwards, and she smiled at him and stepped forward. He them smelled her musky floral perfume and he realized it suited it her. As she walked in, he watched her. She seemed graceful like a cat, hell even acted like one. Her gaze looked at everything, looking for any possible danger. A crazy thought interrupted his thoughts then. Even if she did find something dangerous, she'd probably jump it so she could have fun or something. Her becoming the dangerous thing in the room, he gulped in anticipation. "So what brings you here?" He asked lightly. She smiled showing her perfect white teeth. "I was in the area." She giggled. "I finally got my license, and decided to take a road trip with friends. I got many other stops to go to. I just figured I'd look you up and well . . . come see you." She trailed off. He smiled then. "What about your boyfriend?" "Couldn't come. He had to stay with his parents and blah blah blah. Plus he didn't have that much money." She looked pained as she said this. "Ahh. . ." He mumbled as if he understood. "So what do you want to do?" He grinned as he pictured what they could do but shook it out of his mind. "Umm. . . I don't know." She giggled again. She breathed in deep as if steadying herself. She then saw the computer against the wall. "Oh!" She sat down in front of it, and read a few lines. She grinned mischievously. "Were you doing what I think you were doing?" Thor blushed red and hid his face trying to hide it. "Maybe." He half laughed, half grunted. "Where did you leave off?" She asked curiously. At first he thought of masturbating, but then realized she was talking about the story itself. "Oh . . . umm . . . there." He pointed and flushed a little bit more as she read the part as the girl in the story took him in her mouth. "Haha . . . I bet you would like that don't you?" She giggled and looked at him. He then caught her eyes catching small glimpses down at his crotch. He caught himself looking down, and well there was a slight bulge there. "Any guy would." He answered finally looking deeper in her eyes, wishing he wasn't so nervous and anxious around this girl. As if she intimidated him. Her eyes glinted darkly with dangerous delight and wondered if he was doomed. "May I?" But she didn't gesture towards anything and he wasn't sure what she was talking about. "What?" He asked curiously. She grinned and he wondered what she was up to. For he couldn't even figure her out across the internet, she always surprised him with something totally random. "Close your eyes." She whispered. He did, but before he did, he saw her lick her full lips. As he waited, he felt her small hand work his jeans loose. His pants then fell to the floor. He heard her small gasp of surprise and wondered if he scared her. "You are a naughty boy." He heard her softly say. Her words and tone jerked another stronger response from him. Her hand then took him and slowly moved his shaft up and down through her fingers. Her hands were small, but strong, warm and soft. He groaned and managed to keep his eyes shut. He couldn't believe this was happening. Just a few minutes ago, he was wishing this very thing. He then felt her warm wet tongue flick across the head of his cock. He gasped, not believing his luck. He then felt her tongue slide on top, the bottom and the sides of his shaft. His eyes went wide as pleasure through him when he felt her mouth suck in one of his balls and then the next one. He looked down on her, and she asked sweetly, "Am I doing this right?" He licked his lips trying to get his mouth to work. He gulped and said, "Yeah, but with one small problem." Maxe looked up confused for a second. "Take the shirt off." He ordered. She smiled innocently at him. "If you want it off, you take it off." He reached down and slid the shirt upwards quickly. Once it was off, he saw her breasts contained in a black lacy bra and saw she was telling the truth. They were a small c-cup. But they looked perfect and soft. He then unclipped the front clasp and took it off as well. Her nipples were hard with excitement and looked like they were waiting to be sucked. He groaned inwardly and cupped the left breast in his hand. It was soft and firm. His thumb caressed over the nipple and it grew tauter. Her hand then moved and he wondered what she was going to do next. "Eyes closed." She instructed softly but firmly. Thor obeyed. After a moment of pulling and jacking of his shaft, he felt her mouth close over him. He sighed and felt her mouth swallow him. He then disobeyed her and opened his eyes to see her taking him in like he envisioned. She looked magnificent. Her eyes were closed in concentration, her soft brown hair bobbing softly behind her, and her hand softly rubbing his boys. She sucked him down more, still leaving a few inches to go. But she sucked him down slowly, massaging his shaft with her tongue. He groaned and again thrusted forward, surprising her in gulping more of him down. Her other hand then pushed him back at his hips. She let his rod plop out of her mouth as she said, "Not so hard," and smiled. She then sucked him in her wet mouth again, with her teeth zigzagging across his sensitive shaft. He moaned in pleasure as she continued again. Then she was sucking only the head of his cock, while she pumped him with her other hand. He groaned and moaned. He felt like he was going to bust the load, it felt so good. But then she stopped and stabbed his cock in her mouth again and again, going farther in as she went. After a few moments of this she was deep throating him, nearly gagging on him. She kept this up several minutes as she played with his balls and massaged him all around his cock with her talented tongue. He knew from her talented mouth that he was going to cum soon, and a big one with that. Her mouth slid slowly down his cock until she reached the head and jacked him off for a moment as she caught her breath. She then sucked him down again, but only sucking him half his length, but her hand kept on pumping him. She sucked harder, her hand pumped faster, and her other hand tickled his balls, and he knew it was going to be over soon. "Uhhhh!!!" He exclaimed as his hot cum splashed in her mouth. She swallowed it down, and waited for more. She just kept on milking him with her mouth and hand until he had no more to give. She slowed down until she stopped, licking her lips seductively. The hand that held him and pumped climbed up his slightly defined abs, and lightly scratched down. He was trying to catch his breath, while it seemed she didn't lose any of hers. She smiled, and looked like the cat that ate the canary. "How was that?" She breathed. "Amazing." Thor managed to say. She giggled and put her bra back on, and then her long sleeved top. "Wait! What . . .?" Thor wasn't sure what he wanted to say to her, but he knew he wanted her to stay. "Don't ruin it." She said softly in his ear as she got up from her chair. Her warm soft hands lightly touched his shoulders as she licked his ear. "I had a great time! Bye Thor." Smiling, she left him standing there, still naked at his computer desk. As she left, he watched her. Her hips swaying seductively and he wondered if he'd see her again. "Wait!!!" He called as pulled his pants up and ran across the room and into the hallway. "Will I see you again?" She was just reaching the elevator doors as she stopped and looked back at him. Grinning she answered, "Maybe," And stepped inside and the doors closed. He wouldn't know until she messaged him back on MySpace or if she just showed up out of the blue, like today. But Thor hoped for it soon. . . . to be continued . . . Thor's Story Ch. 02 After Maxe left, he wondered what he could do. And then an idea came to him and he just had to grin. Picking up the phone he called the hotels and motels that were nearest to him. The 2nd call was the lucky one. "How may I help you?" The desk clerk asked. So he asked if she was there. "I'm sorry but she stepped out. Do you want me to leave her a message?" "Umm . . . no. May I ask what room she is in?" "That's confidential sir." Her bland voice replied. He sighed and remembered that a friend used to work there. "Is Frank around?" "Yes he is." Her voice was starting to grate on his nerves. "Can you put him on for me?" "Hold please." There was a soft click and he waited. He checked his watch and wondered if she'd go immediately there or not. Just then his friend came onto the line. "Sup?" Frank asked. Grinning, "Hey Frank want to do a favor for me?" he asked. "What is it?" He asked warily. Thor then told him what he planned. At the end Thor knew that Frank had a grin on his face as well. "Yeah . . . sure dude! Let's do this!" .. .. .. .. Maxe slipped her keycard into the hole, but of course knowing her luck it turned red instead of green. "Damn it!" She swore softly. She was still aroused from what she did to Thor, and what she tried to do to get rid of the feeling was sightseeing and all that grand stuff. After an hour or two of it she gave up on it. Finally the card admitted her entrance to her room. What she was going to do was run a hot bath and maybe enjoy her time alone by being a little naughty. She smiled and turned on the lights, but to her dismay they didn't turn on. "I hate my luck!" She whispered. She closed the door and walked through the room. She got rid of her long sleeved shirt and replaced it with a tank top, she felt much better then. As she sat on the edge of the bed she reached for the phone. She dialed the number for the desk and a male voice answered, "Hello, service desk, how may I help you?" "Yes, my lights won't turn on. Can you please send someone up to check them?" "Yes mame, it will be right shortly." "Thank you." She then ended the call. Just then awareness prickled across her neck. She smiled but it didn't reach her eyes. To play them, you must not let them know that you know they're there. Maxe stood and crossed the room to the bathroom. Turning the hot water knob the water splashed in the tub. She put the plug and felt something behind her. Forming a fist, she whirled around and threw the punch. It caught him on the side of the face, but it merely barely made him stagger. He caught his balance quickly and caught her in his arms. She felt his strength and felt the size of him. He was taller than her and a lot more brooder. She didn't know if she could win this one. At least she was going to try. He had her arms pinned against his chest and she could barely move he held her so tight. From the adrenaline rush and everything that went on before, she felt the wetness between her legs. She groaned, and then felt the stranger's kiss on her lips. A shot of pleasure splashed through her, and she bit it back. As he was distracted with the kiss, her legs climbed up and hung on to his hips. When he tried to make it deeper, she bit his lower lip and wiggled both her legs against him and pushed herself away from him. But with one hand he swiped her legs away and she crashed into his hard muscled body. She then felt his hardness against her wetness and another wave of desire crashed through. No! Damn it! She cried to herself inside. He then threw her done on the bed, leaving her dazed and confused. He caught both her wrists in one hand before she realized what he was doing. With a soft long cloth she was tied to the bed. She struggled and pulled but it merely tightened the cloth. "Damn it no!" She then felt his warm strong hands try to capture her ankles but she kept kicking them away from him. "Bastard!" She yelled, and kicked him in the chest. He stepped back from the blow and chuckled. Oh god! She thought as another wave of desire shot through her and stayed at her core. He sounded sexy! Without warning she felt his warm hands on her hips and tried to struggle against him. She then heard her pants rip. Oh shit! She was so in for it. Damn it! She thought as another wave splashed through her and radiated at her core. Her pants were off and her black thong gleamed in the barely light. Then his fingers were underneath the strings that held it together. "Oh good god no!" She whispered in disbelief and struggled to keep them on. But he just broke them down the sides and pulled them out of between her legs. As it brushed across her wet sensitive lips and clit she gasped and shivered. "Why are you doing this?" She whispered to the stranger above her. He shook his head not answering her, and then started prying her legs apart. As much as she tried to keep them together he managed to pull them apart. He then wedged his torso in between her legs so she wouldn't be able to close them. His finger then brushed her clit and she shuddered. He groaned in appreciation and started playing with her as she continued to struggle. Gasping she tried to get away, but with her hands tied and him hold her down it was no use. As she continued the pleasure started to course through her in streams. A finger slipped inside her wet heat and she moaned through her clenched lips. And then another slipped inside and her lips came unglued and the moan was deep and loud. Slowly she stopped struggling and went with it. As he fingered her at a steady pace her breathing started to get heavier. She was becoming wetter and all he wanted to do was be inside her, but he restrained himself. "Oh god!" She mumbled. "Harder!" She whispered. He wasn't sure if he heard her right, so he asked in a deep voice, "Say what, bitch? What do you want?" She moaned and answered louder, "Faster! Uhhh!" Moaning again as he gave her what she asked for. Gasping, "Oh god yes!" as he started to finger her faster and harder. He stopped, and she yelled, "Why'd you stop?" He then pounded three fingers in her tight hole and she screamed out in pleasure. He was hitting all the right spots with his strong long fingers. She could feel it coming. Her climax, it was so strong and powerful, she shuddered and screamed. He didn't stop; he just kept pounding his fingers inside her and hitting her clit just right, that another orgasm washed through her. His mouth then clamped down on her clit and sucked it hard into his mouth, which made her scream, as another more powerful orgasm crashed through her. As he slowed and stopped, she slowly regained her breath. He then kissed his way up her body, and she felt every one leaving a hot imprint on her skin. He then claimed her lips in a hard kiss and she returned the favor. He then pulled away from her leaving her gasping, "Now, it's your choice. Do you want me to fuck you?" His husky voice threatened to undo her, and she was unsure of herself. He then pulled her tank top aside and she knew it won't be the same afterwards. He dipped his head sucking a nipple in his hot wet mouth. She moaned in response and wondered what she should do. "Time's up! Maybe next time!" He said then, and Maxe knew he was grinning, that bastard! "But just to remember me by," he then bit softly into her shoulder and sucked, making her gasp and squirm in his strong arms. Just when Maxe would to agree to anything he wanted to do to her, he pulled away, leaving her gasping for breath. "See you later, Maxe." He chuckled and got up from the bed, leaving her there. He opened the door and quickly left before she could recognize him. After a second, she realized she was still tied to the bed. "That asshole!" She whispered. "Ugh! God damn it!" She was still cursing as she tried to pull the knot from her teeth. As it loosened a knock came at the door and she gasped. "Help please!" Just before the door opened, she realized she was half naked! "Madam?" A man asked, and she recognized the man's voice from the phone. "What happened to you?" His face was written with concern but his eyes held delight and amusement. "Just untie me please!" She begged. She just hoped he wouldn't take advantage of her like this. "Yes mame," he said trying hard not to smile. He untied her and she got up quickly and covered herself. "I fixed the lights they should work now." "Ok, just let me get dressed." "Don't bother." He flicked the lights on. "Go take your bath." He then finally smiled, "Have a good night." He closed the door. Maxe then remembered the bath! "Shit!" she cried as she raced to stop the flow of water. Good thing it was a deep. She sighed and figured on using it like she planned. Even though she was slightly a little sore from pleasure the stranger gave her, she couldn't pleasure herself, like she planned. But she wouldn't have changed it anyway. It was that good. With that, she took off the remaining clothes left on her and stepped inside the bath with a grin across her face. . . . to be continued . . .