0 comments/ 21031 views/ 0 favorites Rip Tide By: Guenevere First off let me say the feelings you stirred in my when I read your story were so hot. I had a hard time concentrating on anything else after reading it. That is what I miss from you. the fantasies of us and what it makes you feel like... I hope you enjoy this one and please overlook the misspellings and punctuation flaws It's kinda hard to write like this and not get turned on Ok now as promised I have one for you to return the favor... * * * * * * Watching the sun slowly setting out on the horizon of the sea, you and I stroll hand and hand along the surfs edge looking for shells and playing a game I made up called "What if?" The just of the game is when asked a question, "what if ......you were asked to eat sushi? You need to give an honest reply. As we walk along, one of the questions I ask you are "What if....we were stranded on an island with each other?" You look at me when I ask you this and right off say this would be wonderful! I could have you all alone and the world wouldn't be able to interfere with us at all. I hug you close feeling the hardness of your chest and strong arms as they pull me close. The tingle starting deep inside of me as I think about what is yet to be. As we walk further along we come up on a dock with a boat that has a sign outside..."Day Cruises". We stop and I ask the man onboard if they do any evening cruises and he tells me there is one leaving within the hour. Oh what luck I say as I grab your hand and pull you closer to the pier. We can cruise and see the sunset from the ocean just think of how romantic this would be! As we settle ourselves on board the first mate arrives with a pitcher of rum punch and 2 glasses for us. "Enjoy" he says as he walks away to unhook the ropes from the pier. We pour our drinks and settle back to watch the setting sun as we start out to sea. The evening is so tranquil. The gulls dipping below the surface for a quick fish to eat, along the horizon we see dolphins, their fins breaking the surface of the crystal water, it is a moment we carve in our minds to remember forever. As we skim along the water, the time slips along so slowly and we drink our punch watching the water and feeling the warm glow inside. You are setting behind me and I am resting on your chest, feeling your breathing and the sway of the boat it is so peaceful here. I have my hand on your leg and am gently caressing it almost mindlessly and I turn to you and smile "What If?" We have been out to sea for almost an hour when we see the outline of an island ahead. The first mate swings down from above and says we are stopping here to refuel and if we want to get off and have a look around it would be about 15 minutes before we head back to shore. We dock and you jump off first, turning to help me down. Catching me around your waist you lift me off and into your arms pulling me close and whispering in my ear how wonderful this idea was. I look up to you and whisper. "This is only the beginning", we stroll along looking at the quiet, peaceful area we are at. The palms, so tall and untouched. It is as if we were the only ones to ever walk on the sand. We stroll along and find a path leading into the brush. I take your hand at start into the denseness. You stop pulling me to you. "we better head back to shore, after all the boat might leave us here if we're not careful" My lips reach up to yours and softly brush against them "we still have a few minutes to look around" I pull back and turn off into the darkness as you follow. We walk along listening to the evening sounds of the brush. The birds singing their exotic calls of the nighttime. The distant sound of the surf breaking on the shore. We near a clearing ahead and step out of the brush to see a cabin setting alone. Stepping up to the porch I turn to you as if to say…"I wonder who lives here." I step to the door and open it up. You and I step inside to a beautiful romantic place. Lust fruits are laid out on a table, Wine is chilling in a bucket beside it. Across to the left we see a hot tub and candles burning. Further in the edge of a bed is seen from the doorway. "Well it looks like we have stepped into someone's romantic hideaway" you say." we had better get out of here before they catch us" I step into your arms pulling you to me and say. "Remember I asked you a What if question earlier this evening about if we could be stranded on an island together? Well… here we are! I planned this weekend for us to be stranded here alone without anyone else around. I have you all to myself I say as I brush my breasts against your chest feeling you catch your breath as your arms sweep down to scoop around my butt and pull me close to you. I could feel your hardness pressing against me as your breath quickens. I break away and stepped to the table finding pineapple on a plate and picked up a piece turning to offer you a bite. I placed it to your lips and you take a bite. I reached to kiss you and the sweetness of the pineapple mixed with the rum punch we had was delicious. My tongue reaches into your mouth. Mixing and tasting each other. The passion rises within us. You pull me closer. Your arms circle my waist pulling me to you. I felt you hardness pressing against me. I pull back and take you by the hand leading you into the bath area. Stopping by the hot tub I turn and face you. I want to relax with you in the hot tub. I moved away from you and slipped my top over my head. Watching your eyes I see the desire building in them. I move to slip my shorts and bathing suit off. Rising up I stand in front of you naked. Moving to your arms I slipped into them feeling you pulling me close. Your mouth moving to meet mine. Our kiss is long and sensuous. Tongues swirling around tasting and exploring each other. I slip my hands up to unbutton your shirt taking if off your shoulders. Dipping my lips to brush against your chest. Grazing lightly along your nipples feeling your breath catch in your throat. I move to slip your swim trunks off. Stepping back I let my hands graze over your body. Lightly brushing over your arms, down to your waist and then on your thighs stopping briefly to caress your cock. You jump as my fingers circle your stiffness. Gently pulling you toward me I whisper in your ear. "Come with me." We step into the tub. The water is wonderful. The aroma from the salts they added is intoxicating. We moved to the ledge feeling the bubbles caressing our bodies. I slip to the edge and poured us a glass of wine, moving back to set beside you I hand you your glass. You take a sip and reclined in the water. Stretching out letting the bubbles work their magic. I moved in front of you placing a knee on either side of your waist and setting on your lap. I could feel your hard cock press against my stomach as your arms wrapped around me, pulling me close. Our lips met and my tongue slips out in search of yours. The passion builds between us. My fingers dip beneath the water. Gliding over your chest, down to your stomach and coming to rest on your balls, lightly kneading them in one hand, my other caressing your rock hard cock. I look into your eyes. The candle light casting a soft glow on us "Do you know how bad I want you to make love to me?" I say. The pressure of my grip getting firmer on your cock. "Do you know I can't wait?" I quicken my pace watching your eyes all the while as my fingers work their magic over you. Your hands move to my breasts. Your fingers finding my hardened nipples. Gently pinching one between your thumb and forefinger I moan into your ear. My tongue flicking across your earlobe. I move up and over your cock. Positioning the head against me I glide you into my wetness. The feeling was almost overwhelming. Your arms grab my hips holding me as you thrust your cock all the way into me. The passion hit and neither one of us can fight it. Your arms lock around me holding me tightly to you as you thrust your cock in me. Faster and faster we move. The water and rum add to the erotic feel of the sex. I place my hands on the edge of the tub and lift myself up off of you so I can ride you from above. Moving faster and squeezing my muscles to tighten around your cock I felt you tense. Grabbing my waist you thrust into me deeper and faster. I moan. "I can't hold off "Faster and harder we pound into one another. The feelings stirring deep inside of me. The climax builds. I arch my back into you as the first wave of my orgasm hits me. The passion is so intense. My orgasm triggers yours as you feel my muscles contract against your cock pulling you deeper. The first wave hits you as you moan out in ecstasy. I feel your hot sperm filling me as you thrust harder. We ride to the top of fulfillment and over the other side. Our hearts and breath racing from the experience. We start to slow down. We kiss slow and long still spinning from the ordeal. I break away to look at you the fulfillment apparent in your eyes. "I hope you enjoyed that as much as I did" I say as I slide against you. "I do promise that the next time will be slower than but just as erotic as this was" I smile at you wickedly. As we slip out of the tub and move toward the bed... Rip Tide Ch. 2 The sun is rising on the ocean as I stand watching it from the shore. The breeze promises it will be hot today as I point my face into it. I left you sleeping so peacefully. I dared not to disturb you. The remnants of our love making last night play over and over in my head as I let my mind wander. I am lost in a memory when I feel your arms slide around my waist. Your lips find the spot on the back of my neck that you know drives me wild. You run your hands over my stomach and down across my hips as you whisper. "I missed you; I have not slept like that in ages". I turn to face you and bringing my arms up, locking them around your neck I kiss your lips lightly. "Well I have always found you do sleep better after a workout." I grin. Taking your hand in mine we start walking along the beach. No particular place in mind only the two of us alone in the world. We come upon a place where we see a path that leads off into the brush. Turning towards it we start into the denseness having no idea where it will lead us. The morning is rising and the sun shines through the leaves of the palms. Even with the cool underbrush it is warming up fast. I feel a bead of sweat run down the small of my back as I cast a glance at you and notice you are sweating as well. A dip in the ocean would be nice right about now I think. Just then we hear the sound of falling water and step out into what can only be described as the most beautiful place in the world. Looking up we can see the top of a huge waterfall, cascading down over rock ledges and spilling into a lagoon filled with flowers and birds calling all around. I step to the waters edge and slip a foot into the cool clear water. "This is wonderful, care to join me?" I quickly kick off my shoes and slip my shorts and t-shirt over my head. Standing naked before you I smile just before I slip into the cool water. Swimming out to the middle of the water I turn only to see you as you jump in behind me. Watching for you to swim closer you catch me off guard underwater as you swim up to me grabbing me around the waist and pulling me under. Playfully we wrestle in the cool water letting the heat of the day caress our bodies. We swim closer to the falls and dip under them, feeling the pounding force of the water as it beats against us. Surfacing, I swim close to you and bring my arms around your neck and circle my legs around your waist. Feeling your chest pressed against mine, "The heat of the day isn't the only thing hot at the moment." I tease as I brush against your hardness. You chuckle seductively and say" You keep that up and we both know how hot it can get." You cup my butt and pull me closer to you as we glide over to the waters edge. Looking around you see a rocky ledge where the water runs into the lagoon. Still holding me you ease up onto the ledge, placing me on the slippery rocks. You are still waist deep in the water below me with your hands resting on my thighs. The look in your eyes tells me you are up to something. You bend and kiss my kneecap, letting your lips play over my skin ever so softly. Brushing along my leg you move your hands to graze over my stomach. Inching your way up along my inner thigh you bite gently and playfully. Causing my breath to catch and quicken. You draw nearer to me and your hands move to my breasts, caressing them with your fingertips you find my hard nipples. Your mouth is moving higher, your tongue is like liquid fire to my skin. My moans can be heard over the rushing waterfall as you dip your tongue into my wetness. I arch my back up to meet your touch. Slowly your mouth works away at me. Circling the tiny bud of my clitoris, drawing me higher and higher to the brink of ecstasy. Licking and sucking faster and harder now you work your sexual charms on me. Closer and closer I climb to the top of the wonderful feelings you are stirring inside me. Sweating and moaning I can't take it no longer as I feel the first waves of my climax hitting me. Straining to meet you wave after wave of fulfillment takes me. The pounding of the water can't match my cries of enjoyment as you slow your movements. Kissing my thighs you rise up and glide your body over me. Settling over me we kiss deep and long. The taste of me mingles with you arousing me once again. You move to seat yourself beside me on the rocky ledge and taking my hand you pull me up to set astride your hard cock. Moving toward you I take you in my hand and guide you into my hot wetness. The feeling is overwhelming as you place your hands on my hips and pull me down as you thrust up to meet me. I cry out at the intense sensations rippling through me. You groan and roll your head back, resting it on a rock. I move to glide up and down on your hard cock, the wetness from me creating a sensuous feeling for you. I feel your cock growing harder and with each squeeze I give you and I can tell by the moans that you are enjoying it Faster we move together. Our hips grinding as we come together with each thrust. My hands slip behind me to cup your balls gently. I knead them and caress them with my fingernails. They tighten at my touch. Your moans are getting faster as we move. Your hands come up to untwine in my hair, pulling my face to you, our lips meet. Your tongue searching for mine, tasting, exploring, yearning for more. I feel that familiar quiver stirring in me as my climax nears. My breathing hard and fast I say to you "Come with me now I can't hold out much more. I want to feel you cock coming inside of me now". My words are all it takes to drive you over the edge. A low deep animalistic growl escapes from your lips as you drive into me one last final time. Arching up to drive into me as you pull me down, grinding into me I feel the hot spurts of your semen blasting up inside of me. Screams of passion overcome me as my own climax tears at me. Wave after wave it shakes me. Taking me on the ride of a lifetime. Breathing hard and sweat pouring from me we embrace. Arms encircling each other. Our mouths tasting once again the sweetness. We hold each other tightly letting the feelings subside. Slowly I raise my face to yours. Your eyes meet mine and we smile. Your hand cups my face. I move to slip into the cool water once again and taking your hand you follow me back to have some more fun in the water. After all the day is still young.