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No. 3499
ID: 692d4a
>>3209
Can I?
Just on this (>>2919) drawing:
>>the male's tail starts thin but then gets unexplicably thicker when it reaches the floor
>>the bondage makes no sense; first it looks like chains, then ropes; maybe it's Spider-Man's webs, who knows
>>still on the bondage, one side has the "chain" linking to the middle of the "rope" part, on the other it links to the edge
>>even then, he's not really restrained; he could just stand up and move way, or in any other way defend himself; he could at least move his foot to the side, so it's really tickling him
>>her feet are completely different from his, like they're not the same species; and then her right foot has the toes almost fusing with each other, like they're webbed
>>what the FUCK is going on with her stomach?!
>>and her face?! Not only are her eyes a mile apart, that mouth is terrible. I've never seen that expression anywhere.
>>they don't even look like mice; he has a tiny muzzle, she has none
>>and speaking of incorrectly drawn animal parts, how are her ears connecting to her head? Does her ear-canal go up, then down?
>>how is she tickling him? The fingers are pointing away, is she rubbing his skin with her interphalangeal articulations? That's stupid
>>HIS hands, however, look like they were abandoned mid-sketch and never looked at again
>>her shin has a painful curve
I'll stop here. Even discounting the unfinished look of the piece (which might be excused as stylistic), the whole thing shows a lack of anatomy and general artistic knowledge.
I also dislike the way he draws feet, with those exagerated arches and way-too-different-lenght toes, but that's on the opinion field.
tl;dr: Pawfeather is shit
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