Sup NOOBS
You fags are in for one helluva treat soon! ;]

Enjoy it while it lasts tho, shit's about to get... scary. >_>

>>8829
I'm already scared shitless just by reading this.

Who knows of what anon almighty it's capable of.... with captcha on!

go to mars. start the reactor.

Oh hell and all that is unholy, its a Dragicorn.... WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!! EVERYONE TO THE BUNKERS!

<Or that.

since its not been uploaded yet

>>8903

Did you just called yourself an asshat?

>>8938
Nope.

>>8940

>>8633
why you no update?

ok, i'll update it :o

i finished the main part of the comic today =T
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there will be 2 alternate endings, each 7 pages long. the ending pairings were publicly voted for.
https://inkbunny.net/journalview.php?id=36797 for details.
wish this comic had made me more money, i broke even :/ *shrugs*

>>9219
In all honesty, you're lucky to break even. The writing was pretty fucking terrible and no one with any sense for decent literature would have paid for it, unless you just gave them the porn without the whole "story" aspect.

Just be glad you got any donations at all from those idiots at inkbunny who will love anything regardless of quality.

>>9222
i know, i totally fucked up this comic from the start by wanting my writer to continue the off the 4 page comic i did. i've learned a shit ton from this project, this was the first time i really worked together with a writer 100% from the start.
but anyway, yeah, next time it'll be better, i promise.

this comic even if the story is shit, still tried alot harder then most comics... it wasnt 2 random ponies fucking for the sake of fucking, and didnt shout 'cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum' every 2 sentences >3>

>>9223
Well, I'm criticizing, being a writer myself, the comic itself as a whole. As an artistic thing, its totally fine. You did great honestly.

But Twiwilightstormshi as a writer? Pretty fucking terrible. It might as well been one of those really bad amateur fanfics on Fimfiction or something, where nothing is really explained in a way that makes sense.

I'm guessing the FAQ page you posted on inkbunny was questions towards Twilightstormshi? A lot of those answers in it didn't really make any sense and was just babbling on of "I'm the writer, and this is how I see the world of MLP, so everything I'm saying is right."

It definitely wasn't as bad as palcomics, but its still far from good, let alone decent.

>>9219

Did you consider making a "Scooby-Doo" ending?:
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[The Mane 6, Apple Bloom and the actual Spike (who we just found out was tied up and gagged in a closet while this impostor "Spike" was running around screwing all the other fillies]

TWILIGHT: Now that we've found the REAL Spike, let's see who's behind the mask...

[Twilight uses her magic to pull the mask off of "Spike", only to reveal underneath...]

TWILIGHT: (gasps in surprise) Jinkies! It's...

ALL (IN UNISON): Cranky Doodle Donkey!

CRANKY: (exasperated) Alright, fine, I admit it! I did it all!

PINKIE: But why, Cranky?

CRANKY: Aw, heck, I just wanted to recapture my youth, and live a little bit. Since Spike was coming of age, I figured I could trap him in a closet, disguise myself as him and have my way with as many fillies as I wanted!

[Cut to Cranky greedily looking inside a treasure chest, which emanates a golden aura from its opening.]

CRANKY: And, while all of Ponyville was busy being mad at Spike, nobody would notice the stash of gold doubloons I found behind the old abandoned amusement park!

TWILIGHT: Well, I suppose that wraps up the Case of the Rapacious Reptile!

PINKIE: Yup! I guess we'll be DRAGON him to jail now, eh?

[Pause, 4 seconds. Nopony responds, except for Twilight, who steps in closer to Pinkie]

TWILIGHT: (whispering to PINKIE) Goddamnit, I hate you.

SPIKE: Spikey Dikey Dooooooo!

[Everypony laughs, and freeze frame. Cue THE END.]

>>9225
yeah, to be honest I thought that was the point, intential bad writing for the B-movie hilarity of it. But then you had the writer defending the work as serious. Made me laugh harder to be honest.

>>9257
oh hell yeah, whats the point of alternate endings if you cant have a lil fun with em

Spike X Cutie Mark Crusaders

I wonder why nobody took the time to update this piece of art.