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No. 24394
ID: 9eaac6
>>24385
Yeah, the dialogue is pretty bad. I get that English isn't the guys native language but it's so... awkward. The facial expressions don't help it at all. Like everyone seems way too casual and bored about everything going on. If you happen to have a fetish for feet, crushing, macro, and vore then this -might- be a decent read for you, but even then they feel hamfisted into every page. This is made even more obvious due the very erratic pacing that goes from awkwardly slow to neck-breakingly abrupt and then back again.
On the positive side, the coloring is done very well, the scenery (when not blocked by a really huge foot) is great, and the overall anatomy of the people and dragons are done well.
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