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It isss good to feel like you did whenever you want.”\n\n“I…won’t worry…..It is good to feel like I did…..”\n\n“Jussst a little longer Modo and you and your two friendsss will have even greater fun…… However, you must not ssspoil our little sssecret jussst yet…..”\n\nModo giggles.\n\n“Yes, we must not spoil the surprise just yet….”\n\nSliver looks down at Modo’s crotch.\n\n“Looksss like my boy isss hard again….Would you like to enjoy yourssself like before?”\n\n“Oh yes Sliver…Plea…se….”\n\nWith that Sliver began…..\n\n“Modo….You feel ssso good don’t you.”\n\nModo starts to loose all feeling in his voice.\n\n“I…feel so good…..”\n\n“You wisssh to feel even better……Ssstrip and ssstand at attention.”\n\n“Yes…..Will stand……”\n\nSliver smiles again.\n\n“Very good. Like before you may not cum until I sssay ssso. Your body and mind belong to me. They will not do anything againssst my command.”\n\n“I will not go against command…..”\n\nWith that Sliver begins to suck on Modo’s cock yet again.\n\n“You tassste wonderful boy….Remember you feel much pleasssure…..”\n\nModo starts to moan after those words are uttered.\n\n“Feel…..so….wonderful…..Must…..cum…….”\n\n“Remember boy you cannot cum without my permission…..I will allow you to in due time, however you mussst allow me my fun…. I own you……”\n\n“Yes….Sliver……You….own me……”\n\nModo can barely contain an imminent orgasm only held back by Sliver’s word, however such release does not look anywhere in sight.\n\n“Modo, you look ssso wonderful under my ministrations.”\n\nSliver stops sucking Modo off and begins playing with his cock sending waves of pleasure through Modo.\n\n“Poor mousssy wantsss to cum. Too bad, it isss not time yet. You will feel even more pleasssure now…..Sssuffer as you feel more pleasssure.”\n\nModo’s legs can barely hold him upright as the pleasure grows.\n\nSliver smiles gleefully at his own handiwork.\n\n“Sssuch a big and powerful boy you are. Too bad you’re mind now.”\n\nSliver’s ministrations continue as all of Modo’s muscles start to spasm due to the pleasure he is receiving.\n\n“No matter how hard you try Modo you will not cum……Anywayssss back to buisssnesss.”\n\nWith that Sliver focuses all of his attention back on Modo’s throbbing mouse hood.\n\n“You tassste wonderful. I think I ssshall keep you thisss for awhile longer…..”\n\nA few hours later……\n\nSliver is still sucking as Modo clearly has been overloaded from the pleasure.\n\nSliver stops sucking on Modo to look up at his face.\n\n“Poor Modo.”\n\nSliver can see a gob of drool coming form one of the sides of his mouth.\n\n“Hmmmm….Look at the time. I think we ssshould finisssh up Modo. It is going to be time for your friendsss to come back ssshortly. As before, when I sssnap my fingersss you will cum.”\n\nSliver begins sucking on Modo’s cock once more.\n\nA few seconds later.\n\n*Snap*\n\nModo groans loudly as he cums.\n\nSliver on the other hand is greedily sucking Modo’s mousy delight down..\n\n“Tasty Modo. Looks like you made another rmesss. Go take a quick ssshower and return to normal.”\n\nWith that Modo goes into the shower yet again.\n\nSliver thinks to himself.\n\n“What fun! I wonder how fun the other two will be.”\n\nAnother hour passes…….\n\nVinnie and Throttle enter the living room.\n\nThrottle turns to see both Modo and Sliver sitting on the couch watching TV.\n\n“I take it nothing happened while we were gone?”\n\nModo looks up.\n\n“Nope. Everything was fine. We got sort of bored so we wanted to see what was on TV.”\n\nSliver looks up.\n\n“Thanksss again for sssaving me.”\n\nVinnie smiles.\n\n“No problem. We couldn’t just let Limburger hurt you. Anyways, it was way past time he got a kick in the rear anyways.”\n\nSliver smiles inwardly.\n\n“This is too good to be true. I think its time to start on these two.”\n\nWith that Sliver’s eyes flashed.\n\nBoth Vinnie and Throttle rub their eyes.\n\n“Wha…..was that?”\n\n“Oh nothing.”\n\nThrottle and Vinnie’s eyes seem to glaze over a bit.\n\n“You look tired from your outing, you mussst be feeling it aren’t you?”\n\nIn unison.\n\n“Yea, we’re so tired.”\n\n“Poor poor boysss. Let me make it easssy on you. Why not let me think for you. You trussst me don’t you?”\n\n“So…..tired. Let think for us…..Sliver is our friend…..”\n\nSliver smiles.\n\n“Very good. I’m glad you trussst me ssso.”\n\nSliver turns to Vinnie.\n\n“Vinnie, I sssee you like to impresss the ladiesss don’t you.”\n\n“Yea I do, its kinda hard though…..”\n\n“Sssuch a poor boy. You don’t want to waiste time on thossse who do not wisssh to be with you. I see two posssible companionsss here who would enjoy your company.”\n\nVinnie struggles a bit.\n\n“But…they buds…..I am…….”\n\n“Itsss ok, you like your buddiesss over anyone elssse.”\n\n“I like my buds over any female.”\n\n“Thatsss good. Why not ssshow off your body….Strip boy…..”\n\nWith that Vinnie peels off his clothing.\n\n“Isn’t that much better? You feel ssso much better being nude don’t you? Ssso free ssso much pleasssure.”\n\nVinnie moans.\n\n“Feels so good. Don’t wana wear …..clothing no more.”\n\n“Doesssn’t it feel ssso good to let me control you, to own you mind and body?”\n\nVinnie moans more.\n\nSliver can see he is getting aroused.\n\n“No troubles…..feels good. Please control me always…….”\n\nSliver looks over to Throttle who has not moved since he was first hypnotized.\n\n“Poor little Throttle. No one hasss paid him any attention yet. I’ll fix that now.”\n\nSliver walks over to Throttle.\n\n“Hmm…..sssuch a horny little moussse we have here don’t we.”\n\nWith those words Throttle’s bulge increases.\n\n“Poor little mousssy. I see you are getting more arousssed by the sssecond. Would you like me to help you?”\n\n“I….I don’t know you well……What’s…..happening…..to….me…..”\n\nSliver smiles.\n\n“Don’t worry little mousssy. You can trussst me. You do trussst me don’t you?”\n\nThrottle starts to pant.\n\n“I trust…….Please help me……”\n\n“Very good little mousssy….You wisssh to feel even better don’t you?”\n\nThrottle moans even louder.\n\n“Want….feel better…..”\n\n“Very good. Give me all your thoughtsss and free will and you will even better then you do now. Trussst me.”\n\nThrottle fights the words Sliver says.\n\n“I….no……give……..”\n\n“Poor mousssy. You mussst give in…..You trussst me don’t you…..”\n\n“No…..must not………”\n\nWith that Sliver grabs Throttle’s pants and pulls them down exposing Throttle’s mousehood.\n\n“What…..you…..doing……”\n\n“You will trussst me. I will make sssure you do.”\n\nSliver kneels down and starts sucking Throttle off.\n\n“What…..you….doing…..Feels…..No….mustn’t…..”\n\nSliver sucks harder on the mouse flesh in front of him.\n\n“Must….not……”\n\n“For every sssecond I pleasssure you the pleasssure will increassse ten fold. You cannot hold back….”\n\nThrottle starts sweating and panting louder, fighting with every last shred of willpower left.\n\n“Must……not…….”\n\nSliver laughs.\n\n“You’re a ssstrong one mousssy. You tassste wonderful. You are getting clossser to cumming. When you do your willpower and thoughtsss belong to me.”\n\nSliver resumes sucking Throttle’s mousehood while playing with his balls.\n\n“Mind….slipping….Must………”\n\nA few minutes pass……\n\nThrottle by now is on the verge of loosing everything panting heavily and lost in pleasure.\n\nSliver gives Throttle’s balls a quick squeeze which sends him over the edge which Sliver sucks down.\n\n“Ahhh…….I…..must….server…..Sliver…….I…..am…..yours…..”\n\nSliver removes his muzzle from Throttle’s cock.\n\n“Very good mousssy. I own you body and mind. You mussst obey.”\n\nThrottle stands looking vacantly at Sliver.\n\n“Must obey……”\n\n“Good mousssy. I like how you look. I will allow you to keep your vest, however you don’t feel comfortable wearing pantsss anymore.”\n\n“I feel…..good….Pants comfortable.”\n\n“Very good mousssy. Now then….Modo come over here please.”\n\nA few seconds latter……..\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Biker Mice from Mars: Lost

Modo had gotten back to normal after he had taken his shower. He however began to think about what transpired only an hour ago.

“Did I really do that?”

“It…was wrong……”

Turmoil was creeping up on Modo when……

“How are you doing Modo?”

Modo turned around and saw Sliver.

“Sliver…..What are you doing here?”

“I figured you may be having sssome troublesss.”

Modo frowned.

“It….was wrong……”

Sliver smiles.

“Wasss it ssso wrong? Didn’t you feel good?”

Sliver briefly flashed his eyes as Modo was looking at him.

“I….felt wonderful… So calm and peaceful.”

“And free of ssstressss and thoughtsss.”

Modo’s grin grows wider.

“Yes…..No thoughts…..no worries.”

“Good. Remember; from now on do not worry about the little thingsss. I will worry for you. It isss good to feel like you did whenever you want.”

“I…won’t worry…..It is good to feel like I did…..”

“Jussst a little longer Modo and you and your two friendsss will have even greater fun…… However, you must not ssspoil our little sssecret jussst yet…..”

Modo giggles.

“Yes, we must not spoil the surprise just yet….”

Sliver looks down at Modo’s crotch.

“Looksss like my boy isss hard again….Would you like to enjoy yourssself like before?”

“Oh yes Sliver…Plea…se….”

With that Sliver began…..

“Modo….You feel ssso good don’t you.”

Modo starts to loose all feeling in his voice.

“I…feel so good…..”

“You wisssh to feel even better……Ssstrip and ssstand at attention.”

“Yes…..Will stand……”

Sliver smiles again.

“Very good. Like before you may not cum until I sssay ssso. Your body and mind belong to me. They will not do anything againssst my command.”

“I will not go against command…..”

With that Sliver begins to suck on Modo’s cock yet again.

“You tassste wonderful boy….Remember you feel much pleasssure…..”

Modo starts to moan after those words are uttered.

“Feel…..so….wonderful…..Must…..cum…….”

“Remember boy you cannot cum without my permission…..I will allow you to in due time, however you mussst allow me my fun…. I own you……”

“Yes….Sliver……You….own me……”

Modo can barely contain an imminent orgasm only held back by Sliver’s word, however such release does not look anywhere in sight.

“Modo, you look ssso wonderful under my ministrations.”

Sliver stops sucking Modo off and begins playing with his cock sending waves of pleasure through Modo.

“Poor mousssy wantsss to cum. Too bad, it isss not time yet. You will feel even more pleasssure now…..Sssuffer as you feel more pleasssure.”

Modo’s legs can barely hold him upright as the pleasure grows.

Sliver smiles gleefully at his own handiwork.

“Sssuch a big and powerful boy  you are. Too bad you’re mind now.”

Sliver’s ministrations continue as all of Modo’s muscles start to spasm due to the pleasure he is receiving.

“No matter how hard you try Modo you will not cum……Anywayssss back to buisssnesss.”

With that Sliver focuses all of his attention back on Modo’s throbbing mouse hood.

“You tassste wonderful. I think I ssshall keep you thisss for awhile longer…..”

A few hours later……

Sliver is still sucking as Modo clearly has been overloaded from the pleasure.

Sliver stops sucking on Modo to look up at his face.

“Poor Modo.”

Sliver can see a gob of drool coming form one of the sides of his mouth.

“Hmmmm….Look at the time. I think we ssshould finisssh up Modo. It is going to be time for your friendsss to come back ssshortly. As before, when I sssnap my fingersss you will cum.”

Sliver begins sucking on Modo’s cock once more.

A few seconds later.

*Snap*

Modo groans loudly as he cums.

Sliver on the other hand is greedily sucking Modo’s mousy delight down..

“Tasty Modo. Looks like you made another rmesss. Go take a quick ssshower and return to normal.”

With that Modo goes into the shower yet again.

Sliver thinks to himself.

“What fun! I wonder how fun the other two will be.”

Another hour passes…….

Vinnie and Throttle enter the living room.

Throttle turns to see both Modo and Sliver sitting on the couch watching TV.

“I take it nothing happened while we were gone?”

Modo looks up.

“Nope. Everything was fine. We got sort of bored so we wanted to see what was on TV.”

Sliver looks up.

“Thanksss again for sssaving me.”

Vinnie smiles.

“No problem. We couldn’t just let Limburger hurt you. Anyways, it was way past time he got a kick in the rear anyways.”

Sliver smiles inwardly.

“This is too good to be true. I think its time to start on these two.”

With that Sliver’s eyes flashed.

Both Vinnie and Throttle rub their eyes.

“Wha…..was that?”

“Oh nothing.”

Throttle and Vinnie’s eyes seem to glaze over a bit.

“You look tired from your outing, you mussst be feeling it aren’t you?”

In unison.

“Yea, we’re so tired.”

“Poor poor boysss. Let me make it easssy on you. Why not let me think for you. You trussst me don’t you?”

“So…..tired. Let think for us…..Sliver is our friend…..”

Sliver smiles.

“Very good. I’m glad you trussst me ssso.”

Sliver turns to Vinnie.

“Vinnie, I sssee you like to impresss the ladiesss don’t you.”

“Yea I do, its kinda hard though…..”

“Sssuch a poor boy. You don’t want to waiste time on thossse who do not wisssh to be with you. I see two posssible companionsss here who would enjoy your company.”

Vinnie struggles a bit.

“But…they buds…..I am…….”

“Itsss ok, you like your buddiesss over anyone elssse.”

“I like my buds over any female.”

“Thatsss good. Why not ssshow off your body….Strip boy…..”

With that Vinnie peels off his clothing.

“Isn’t that much better? You feel ssso much better being nude don’t you? Ssso free ssso much pleasssure.”

Vinnie moans.

“Feels so good. Don’t wana wear …..clothing no more.”

“Doesssn’t it feel ssso good to let me control you, to own you mind and body?”

Vinnie moans more.

Sliver can see he is getting aroused.

“No troubles…..feels good. Please control me always…….”

Sliver looks over to Throttle who has not moved since he was first hypnotized.

“Poor little Throttle. No one hasss paid him any attention yet. I’ll fix that now.”

Sliver walks over to Throttle.

“Hmm…..sssuch a horny little moussse we have here don’t we.”

With those words Throttle’s bulge increases.

“Poor little mousssy. I see you are getting more arousssed by the sssecond. Would you like me to help you?”

“I….I don’t know you well……What’s…..happening…..to….me…..”

Sliver smiles.

“Don’t worry little mousssy. You can trussst me. You do trussst me don’t you?”

Throttle starts to pant.

“I trust…….Please help me……”

“Very good little mousssy….You wisssh to feel even better don’t you?”

Throttle moans even louder.

“Want….feel better…..”

“Very good. Give me all your thoughtsss and free will and you will even better then you do now. Trussst me.”

Throttle fights the words Sliver says.

“I….no……give……..”

“Poor mousssy. You mussst give in…..You trussst me don’t you…..”

“No…..must not………”

With that Sliver grabs Throttle’s pants and pulls them down exposing Throttle’s mousehood.

“What…..you…..doing……”

“You will trussst me. I will make sssure you do.”

Sliver kneels down and starts sucking Throttle off.

“What…..you….doing…..Feels…..No….mustn’t…..”

Sliver sucks harder on the mouse flesh in front of him.

“Must….not……”

“For every sssecond I pleasssure you the pleasssure will increassse ten fold. You cannot hold back….”

Throttle starts sweating and panting louder, fighting with every last shred of willpower left.

“Must……not…….”

Sliver laughs.

“You’re a ssstrong one mousssy. You tassste wonderful. You are getting clossser to cumming. When you do your willpower and thoughtsss belong to me.”

Sliver resumes sucking Throttle’s mousehood while playing with his balls.

“Mind….slipping….Must………”

A few minutes pass……

Throttle by now is on the verge of loosing everything panting heavily and lost in pleasure.

Sliver gives Throttle’s balls a quick squeeze which sends him over the edge which Sliver sucks down.

“Ahhh…….I…..must….server…..Sliver…….I…..am…..yours…..”

Sliver removes his muzzle from Throttle’s cock.

“Very good mousssy. I own you body and mind. You mussst obey.”

Throttle stands looking vacantly at Sliver.

“Must obey……”

“Good mousssy. I like how you look. I will allow you to keep your vest, however you don’t feel comfortable wearing pantsss anymore.”

“I feel…..good….Pants comfortable.”

“Very good mousssy. Now then….Modo come over here please.”

A few seconds latter……..

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