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I surprise even myself sometimes. Here is the second chapter to Biker Mice. If there are any suggestions I would love to hear em.

Biker Mice is owned was created by Rick Ungar and rights there of remain theirs (yada yada yada.) ", "writing": "Biker Mice from Mars: Fallen\n\nBack at the Biker Mice’s pad.\n\n“Thanksss for sssaving me.”\n\nVinnie smiles.\n\n“No problem. Any excuse hitting Limburger where it hurts…..”\n\nThrottle speaks up.\n\n“What Vinnie means to say is your welcome. Now, back at Limburger Industries, what did he mean non human hostage?”\n\n“It would be better to ssshow you.”\n\nWith that Sliver took off the clothing that was concealing his appearance.\n\nThere before them stood the 6 foot tall snake.\n\nVinnie is the first to speak.\n\n“You look like a…..”\n\n“A large sssnake.”\n\n“Ah…..yea….”\n\n“Asss you can see I do have handsss and feet ssso I cannot be a sssnake. However mossst notice my hisss.”\n\nThrottle clears his throat.\n\n“So, what did Limburger want with you?”\n\n“I don’t know. One minute I wasss accrosss the universsse and the next wasss a blinding light and I wasss in Limburger’sss office.”\n\nModo grumbled.\n\n“Your story still sounds a bit fishy. It has some of Limburger’s stink on it.”\n\n“I can asssure you that I am not with Limburger.”\n\nThrottle looks over at Sliver.\n\n“In any case one of us will be staying with you to keep an eye out for Limburger. We don’t know exactly what he is up to. With this in mind I think Modo should stay behind.”\n\n“Ok, no problem. I can use the time to fix my arm.”\n\n“Make sure to keep an eye on Sliver. We don’t fully understand exactly what Limburger’s plan is. In either case its best Limburger does not get his hands on Sliver again.”\n\n“Right bro.”\n\n“Now that the matter is settled we better snoop around and see what Limburger is really up to. Vinnie lets go.”\n\nVinnie grumbles.\n\n“Awwww, I wish we could just bust a few heads and get the information.”\n\n“Not this time Vinnie. It’s best to keep on the down low. Who knows what Limburger may be planning.”\n\nWith that Throttle and Vinnie leave Modo and Sliver alone in their base.\n\nSliver smiles inwardly.\n\n“Time to get started!”\n\nModo looks over at Sliver.\n\n“Are you alright? You look a bit distracted.”\n\nSliver looks over innocently.\n\n“I’m fine. It’sss been a long day. I am jussst tired.”\n\nModo smiles.\n\n“Just sit on the couch and watch some T.V.”\n\nSliver goes over and sits on the couch.\n\n“How do you turn thisss thing on?”\n\nSliver eyes the remote on the couch and picks it up and starts to hand it to Modo.\n\nSliver tries his hardest to keep from being given away.\n\n“Isss thisss how you turn it on?”\n\nModo starts to take the remote from Sliver and briefly locks eyes with Sliver.\n\nNow is Slivers chance.\n\nHis eyes glow briefly for a second.\n\n“What was that Sliver? Your eyes seemed to glow.”\n\nSliver smiles while Modo continues to stair into his eyes.\n\n“It’sss nothing. The lighting in here mussst glint off my eyesss just ssso.”\n\nModo starts to panic a bit.\n\n“Why can’t I look away from your eyes?”\n\n“You find my eyesss very interesting and wonderful to look into. Isssn’t that true?”\n\nModo cannot help but agree with Sliver.\n\n“Yes I do.”\n\nSliver becomes more excited.\n\n“You look tenssse. You ssshould relax.”\n\nSliver see the words take immediate effect.\n\n“Yes I am a bit tense. I should relax.”\n\n“It’sss hard for you to concentrate isn’t it? Your getting really tired aren’t you?”\n\nModo’s eyes begin to close, Sliver can see his movements becoming sluggish.\n\n“It’s been a long day, I am a bit tired.”\n\n“You can barely keep your eyesss open. Isssn’t thisss correct? Ssso sssleepy?”\n\nModo starts to struggle to keep his eyes open and awake.\n\n“It’s so hard to keep my eyes open. Yawn…..I can hardly….keep….awake.”\n\n“Thatsss right, sssleep. It’sss ok, Sssliver isss here. Sssink deeper and deeper into ssslumber.”\n\nModo could not protest, within moments he is fast asleep.\n\nSliver starts to chuckle a bit.\n\n“Finally, it’sss time to have fun! Modo, can you still hear me?”\n\nModo struggles to speak.\n\n“I can here you Sliver.”\n\n“It feelsss good doesssn’t it?”\n\nModo smiles.\n\n“It feels wonderful. I’m so relaxed.”\n\n“Good. I think you ssshould go deeper…..deeper…..deeper into slumber. The deeper you go the better you feel. It’sss getting harder to think asss you sssink down, doesssn’t it?”\n\nModo’s brow creases as he tries to concentrate.\n\n“I feel even better. Getting….hard….to…..think…..”\n\nSliver’s smile grows.\n\n“Don’t worry Modo. I will think for you. Doesssn’t that sssound good?”\n\nModo smiles again.\n\n“That…sounds….good…”\n\nSliver thinks to himself.\n\n“Its time……to make the first mine!”\n\nSliver stares at Modo intently.\n\n“Modo, you feel wonderful don’t you?”\n\n“I do feel wonderful Sliver.”\n\n“Would you like to feel even better?”\n\nModo smiles more.\n\n“That would…be wonderful….”\n\n“Firssst of all you may open your eyesss, however you will remain in your relaxed ssstate.”\n\nModo opens his now glassy eyes.\n\n“In order for you to feel even better you mussst do sssomething for me.”\n\nModo looks over at Sliver questioningly.\n\n“What must I do to feel even better?”\n\nSliver smiles slightly.\n\n“You mussst take off all of your clothing. Asss you do ssso you will feel even better.”\n\nModo starts to blush a bit.\n\n“I don’t know you very well and I’m kind of embarrassed with stripping in front of another.”\n\n“Modo, sssink deeper into peace and relaxation. Deeper…..deeper….deeper. I’m your friend, aren’t I Modo? You would do anything for me?”\n\nWith those words Modo’s thoughts are overridden.\n\n“How could I forget Sliver. Your one of my closest friends and I’d do anything for you.”\n\nWith that Modo starts to take off his clothing.\n\n“Thank you Modo. Asss you ssstart taking off your clothing you will ssstart to loossse your free will. You don’t need that do you?”\n\n“I don’t need my own will. Sliver will take care of everything.”\n\nSliver himself can hardly stand to see the strongest of the biker mice start to submit before him.\n\n“Asss you strip you will feel extraordinary pleasure and arousal with each piece of clothing you remove.”\n\nModo starts to moan.\n\n“I see you are enjoying yourself?”\n\n“I feel wonderful…..and horny!”\n\nSliver can see his proud mousy member standing a proud 11 inches long.\n\n“Finnisssh ssstripping and sssit back down. I have a sssurprisssse for you.”\n\nModo starts to quicken the pace when removing his socks and kicking off his pants leaving him totally nude.\n\nModo sits down awaiting his promised surprise.\n\nSliver moves over and sits on the floor next to Modo and starts rubbing his member.\n\n“Feel good doesssn’t it?”\n\nModo just moans.\n\n“I will take that as a yesss. I know you want to feel even more. Am I correct?”\n\n“F….Feel more….”\n\nSliver strokes Modo’s drooling member faster.\n\n“Glad to hear. All you have to do is give me any remaining free will and thoughtsss you have.”\n\n“Give….you….all…..”\n\nModo starts to pant.\n\n“Very good. When I allow you to cum the rest of your free will and thought will be mine.”\n\nThe desired effects can be seen.\n\n“Very good boy. Do not worry I will allow you to keep your persssonality and memoriesss when I allow it.”\n\nModo starts to whine as he gets closer to his physical limit.\n\n“Must…..cu…..cuuuummm!!!”\n\nSliver smiles evilly.\n\n“Not now boy. Remember your body and mind are mine now. I did not give permisssion yet.”\n\nModo’s body complies, sitting at the edge of orgasm however unable to continue without Sliver’s permission.\n\n“Plllea….se let me……”\n\n“In a moment pet, but firssst I wish to tassste you.”\n\nWith that Sliver starts sucking on Modo’s cock.\n\nModo gasps unable to speak.\n\n“Your very good boy. I wisssh to tassste more. Sssit ssstill and don’t move.”\n\nModo sits as still as he can.\n\n“It’sss ssso much fun playing with you boy. I’m glad I made you my firssst new toy. When I snap my fingersss you may cum.”\n\nSliver starts sucking again and after a few minutes longer he snaps his fingers.\n\nModo yells and nearly passes out due to the intense pleasure.\n\n“You were very good boy.”\n\n“Thank you….”\n\nSliver stands up in front of Modo.\n\n“What isss your purpossse?”\n\n“To obey and serve you.”\n\nSliver smiles widely.\n\n“You need to go take a ssshower and get clean. When you get out of the ssshower you will regain your memoriesss and persssonalities for now. Remember you will not and cannot talk about what happened without permission.”\n\n“Yes…”\n\nWith that Modo walked into the bathroom to get cleaned up.\n\n“One down and two to go.”\n\nAn hour later…….\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Biker Mice from Mars: Fallen

Back at the Biker Mice’s pad.

“Thanksss for sssaving me.”

Vinnie smiles.

“No problem. Any excuse hitting Limburger where it hurts…..”

Throttle speaks up.

“What Vinnie means to say is your welcome. Now, back at Limburger Industries, what did he mean non human hostage?”

“It would be better to ssshow you.”

With that Sliver took off the clothing that was concealing his appearance.

There before them stood the 6 foot tall snake.

Vinnie is the first to speak.

“You look like a…..”

“A large sssnake.”

“Ah…..yea….”

“Asss you can see I do have handsss and feet ssso I cannot be a sssnake. However mossst notice my hisss.”

Throttle clears his throat.

“So, what did Limburger want with you?”

“I don’t know. One minute I wasss accrosss the universsse and the next wasss a blinding light and I wasss in Limburger’sss office.”

Modo grumbled.

“Your story still sounds a bit fishy. It has some of Limburger’s stink on it.”

“I can asssure you that I am not with Limburger.”

Throttle looks over at Sliver.

“In any case one of us will be staying with you to keep an eye out for Limburger. We don’t know exactly what he is up to. With this in mind I think Modo should stay behind.”

“Ok, no problem. I can use the time to fix my arm.”

“Make sure to keep an eye on Sliver. We don’t fully understand exactly what Limburger’s plan is. In either case its best Limburger does not get his hands on Sliver again.”

“Right bro.”

“Now that the matter is settled we better snoop around and see what Limburger is really up to. Vinnie lets go.”

Vinnie grumbles.

“Awwww, I wish we could just bust a few heads and get the information.”

“Not this time Vinnie. It’s best to keep on the down low. Who knows what Limburger may be planning.”

With that Throttle and Vinnie leave Modo and Sliver alone in their base.

Sliver smiles inwardly.

“Time to get started!”

Modo looks over at Sliver.

“Are you alright? You look a bit distracted.”

Sliver looks over innocently.

“I’m fine. It’sss been a long day. I am jussst tired.”

Modo smiles.

“Just sit on the couch and watch some T.V.”

Sliver goes over and sits on the couch.

“How do you turn thisss thing on?”

Sliver eyes the remote on the couch and picks it up and starts to hand it to Modo.

Sliver tries his hardest to keep from being given away.

“Isss thisss how you turn it on?”

Modo starts to take the remote from Sliver and briefly locks eyes with Sliver.

Now is Slivers chance.

His eyes glow briefly for a second.

“What was that Sliver? Your eyes seemed to glow.”

Sliver smiles while Modo continues to stair into his eyes.

“It’sss nothing. The lighting in here mussst glint off my eyesss just ssso.”

Modo starts to panic a bit.

“Why can’t I look away from your eyes?”

“You find my eyesss very interesting and wonderful to look into. Isssn’t that true?”

Modo cannot help but agree with Sliver.

“Yes I do.”

Sliver becomes more excited.

“You look tenssse. You ssshould relax.”

Sliver see the words take immediate effect.

“Yes I am a bit tense. I should relax.”

“It’sss hard for you to concentrate isn’t it? Your getting really tired aren’t you?”

Modo’s eyes begin to close, Sliver can see his movements becoming sluggish.

“It’s been a long day, I am a bit tired.”

“You can barely keep your eyesss open. Isssn’t thisss correct? Ssso sssleepy?”

Modo starts to struggle to keep his eyes open and awake.

“It’s so hard to keep my eyes open. Yawn…..I can hardly….keep….awake.”

“Thatsss right, sssleep. It’sss ok, Sssliver isss here. Sssink deeper and deeper into ssslumber.”

Modo could not protest, within moments he is fast asleep.

Sliver starts to chuckle a bit.

“Finally, it’sss time to have fun! Modo, can you still hear me?”

Modo struggles to speak.

“I can here you Sliver.”

“It feelsss good doesssn’t it?”

Modo smiles.

“It feels wonderful. I’m so relaxed.”

“Good. I think you ssshould go deeper…..deeper…..deeper into slumber. The deeper you go the better you feel. It’sss getting harder to think asss you sssink down, doesssn’t it?”

Modo’s brow creases as he tries to concentrate.

“I feel even better. Getting….hard….to…..think…..”

Sliver’s smile grows.

“Don’t worry Modo. I will think for you. Doesssn’t that sssound good?”

Modo smiles again.

“That…sounds….good…”

Sliver thinks to himself.

“Its time……to make the first mine!”

Sliver stares at Modo intently.

“Modo, you feel wonderful don’t you?”

“I do feel wonderful Sliver.”

“Would you like to feel even better?”

Modo smiles more.

“That would…be wonderful….”

“Firssst of all you may open your eyesss, however you will remain in your relaxed ssstate.”

Modo opens his now glassy eyes.

“In order for you to feel even better you mussst do sssomething for me.”

Modo looks over at Sliver questioningly.

“What must I do to feel even better?”

Sliver smiles slightly.

“You mussst take off all of your clothing. Asss you do ssso you will feel even better.”

Modo starts to blush a bit.

“I don’t know you very well and I’m kind of embarrassed with stripping in front of another.”

“Modo, sssink deeper into peace and relaxation. Deeper…..deeper….deeper. I’m your friend, aren’t I Modo? You would do anything for me?”

With those words Modo’s thoughts are overridden.

“How could I forget Sliver. Your one of my closest friends and I’d do anything for you.”

With that Modo starts to take off his clothing.

“Thank you Modo. Asss you ssstart taking off your clothing you will ssstart to loossse your free will. You don’t need that do you?”

“I don’t need my own will. Sliver will take care of everything.”

Sliver himself can hardly stand to see the strongest of the biker mice start to submit before him.

“Asss you strip you will feel extraordinary pleasure and arousal with each piece of clothing you remove.”

Modo starts to moan.

“I see you are enjoying yourself?”

“I feel wonderful…..and horny!”

Sliver can see his proud mousy member standing a proud 11 inches long.

“Finnisssh ssstripping and sssit back down. I have a sssurprisssse for you.”

Modo starts to quicken the pace when removing his socks and kicking off his pants leaving him totally nude.

Modo sits down awaiting his promised surprise.

Sliver moves over and sits on the floor next to Modo and starts rubbing his member.

“Feel good doesssn’t it?”

Modo just moans.

“I will take that as a yesss. I know you want to feel even more. Am I correct?”

“F….Feel more….”

Sliver strokes Modo’s drooling member faster.

“Glad to hear. All you have to do is give me any remaining free will and thoughtsss you have.”

“Give….you….all…..”

Modo starts to pant.

“Very good. When I allow you to cum the rest of your free will and thought will be mine.”

The desired effects can be seen.

“Very good boy. Do not worry I will allow you to keep your persssonality and memoriesss when I allow it.”

Modo starts to whine as he gets closer to his physical limit.

“Must…..cu…..cuuuummm!!!”

Sliver smiles evilly.

“Not now boy. Remember your body and mind are mine now. I did not give permisssion yet.”

Modo’s body complies, sitting at the edge of orgasm however unable to continue without Sliver’s permission.

“Plllea….se let me……”

“In a moment pet, but firssst I wish to tassste you.”

With that Sliver starts sucking on Modo’s cock.

Modo gasps unable to speak.

“Your very good boy. I wisssh to tassste more. Sssit ssstill and don’t move.”

Modo sits as still as he can.

“It’sss ssso much fun playing with you boy. I’m glad I made you my firssst new toy. When I snap my fingersss you may cum.”

Sliver starts sucking again and after a few minutes longer he snaps his fingers.

Modo yells and nearly passes out due to the intense pleasure.

“You were very good boy.”

“Thank you….”

Sliver stands up in front of Modo.

“What isss your purpossse?”

“To obey and serve you.”

Sliver smiles widely.

“You need to go take a ssshower and get clean. When you get out of the ssshower you will regain your memoriesss and persssonalities for now. Remember you will not and cannot talk about what happened without permission.”

“Yes…”

With that Modo walked into the bathroom to get cleaned up.

“One down and two to go.”

An hour later…….

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