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A request from chrysops55 to do a story with the Biker Mice from Mars. The first part does not really get into anything as of yet. I will be posting the next chapter up as soon as I get done writing it.

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Use the machine.”\n\n“Yes your royal cheddarness.”\n\nWith that Karbunkle presses various buttons on the console of the dimensional transporter.\n\nSuddenly after a few moments the dimensional transporter starts to smoke and hiss.\n\n“What’s going on Karbunkle!”\n\n“I don’t have a clue your royal wretchedness.”\n\n“Well do something.”\n\nKarbunkle proceeds to kick the machine. It starts to spark and crackle and the doors open to reveal a figure.\n\n“Good work Karbunkle.”\n\n“Thank you your cheesiness.”\n\nThe smoke clears and their before them stands a 6 foot tall snake.\n\n“I’ve never seen you before. What’s your name?”\n\nThe snake looks back at Limburger.\n\n“My name? My name is Ssliver.”\n\n“Hmm….never heard of you.”\n\n“Never heard of me?! This can’t be right! Sssigh…….”\n\n“Are you up for some vermin extermination?”\n\nSlivers eyes sparkle.\n\n“Vermin? What kind of vermin?”\n\n“I’ve been having a rodent infestation. Three mice have been causing me, Laurence Limberger, much grief. I would like to ask you to deal with this problem. Is it too much to ask to strip mine one little mud ball of a planet and send it back to Plutark?! I think its not too much to ask..”\n\nSliver smiles evilly.\n\n“Ssso what plan do you have for catching these meddlesome rodents?”\n\n“I thought you may have a plan.”\n\nSliver smile grows.\n\n“Does thisss mean it’s up to me to decide on how to proceed?”\n\n“Right you are. Once the biker mice are finished you will be rewarded greatly. And I Laurence Limberger can proceed unhindered with my plans.”\n\n“If that’sssss the case then…..”\n\nSliver pulls out a contract.\n\n“What’s this? I do hope it’s not another court order! I’ve been getting too many of these of late.”\n\n“Oh, nothing much. Just a binding agreement between me and Limburger Industriessss promissssing me any reward for getting rid of the biker mice in any manner I sssee fit.”\n\nLimburger reads the document thoroughly.\n\n“Hmmm……I like this; I like this very much….I think I am going to like you. I’m sorry I did not think of you earlier. I could have eliminated these headaches before they even started. ”\n\n“I knew you would. Ssssuch matersss ssshould be left to the professionalsss.”\n\n“Now, its time to put our plan into action.”\n\nMeanwhile at the Last Chance Garage.\n\nVinnie is sitting on the couch grumbling.\n\n“I wish there was something to do. Limburger has been too quiet.”\n\nThrottle walks into the living room.\n\n“I for one am glad it’s been quiet. Fighting Limburger won’t ever learn that he won’t be able to beat us, however it has been quite awhile since he has caused any trouble.”\n\nCharley rushes into the room.\n\n“I think you spoke too soon Vinnie. It seems Limburger is up to no good again.”\n\nVinnie’s ears perk up.\n\n“Finally some action! By the way, where is Modo?”\n\nCharley looks over to Vinnie.\n\nI think he is in the garage fixing his arm.”\n\nMumbling can be heard from the garage.\n\n“I wish I didn’t have to fix this arm of mine so often.”\n\nThrottle walks into the garage.\n\n“Its time to go. It seems Limburger is up to his old tricks again.”\n\nA few minutes later all three biker mice are in the garage.\n\n“Let’s rock, AND RIDE!”\n\n10 minutes later…….\n\nLimburger smiles evilly.\n\n“I can’t wait for the biker mice to fall into our little trap. I wonder…….KARBUNKLE!”\n\nSeconds later.\n\n“You bellowed your cheesiness?”\n\n“That I did. How is the plan coming?”\n\n“Very well your royal rottenness.”\n\n“Ah good. See that everything continues according to plan or else……”\n\n“Very good your royal evilness. It looks like the biker mice are here.”\n\n“Very good and right on time.”\n\nThrottle looks around.\n\n“Hmm….Its not like Limburger to cause trouble right at his base.”\n\nVinnie snickers.\n\n“Maybe he figures that we’re gona beat him anyways and saved himself the trouble of spending the time and resources to do his business elsewhere.”\n\nModo looks over to Vinnie.\n\n“I highly doubt it. The big cheese never cuts corners. Even now I think something is going on.”\n\n“Right you are you miserable rodents.”\n\nVinnie looks around.\n\n“Where is that coming from?”\n\n“Over there.”\n\nThrottle points to the loudspeaker on Limburger Industries building.\n\n“It’s time that you just give up biker mice. You can’t escape my latest plot to capture you!”\n\nThrottle looks around.\n\n“It doesn’t look like you have anything setup here Limburger. Did you think we were just going to surrender with idle threats?”\n\nLaughing can be heard over the loudspeaker.\n\n“You will see soon enough. Karbunkle, bring out the hostage!”\n\nKarbunkle brings out the hostage who is hidden from view.\n\n“I see, you’ve gotten so desperate you capture innocent humans?”\n\n“Who ever said anything about my hostage being human?”\n\nWhimpering can be heard.\n\n“Pleassse help ussssss.”\n\n“Quiet down! Now, surrender to me now or our mystery guest will get hurt.”\n\nThrottle gets a glint in his glasses.\n\n“You win Limburger, we surrender…….Modo, Vinnie Omega Delta.”\n\nVinnie smiles.\n\n“Yes! I love Omega Delta! Heck I love any plan that I get to wail on Limburger.”\n\nWith lightning fast speed Throttle goes after Karbunkle freeing the hostage.\n\n“Thankssss for sssaving me.”\n\n“No problem citizen! Opps, I forgot you aren’t a citizen are you? Anyways are you ok?\n\n“Yessss I am fine, thanksss to you you I was not ssseriousssly hurt.”\n\nMeanwhile Modo is busy cracking the foundation of the building.\n\n“All yours Vinnie.”\n\n“All right!”\n\nVinnie targets Limburger’s building and shoots a grappling hook from his bike.\n\n“Yes! Right on target!”\n\nWith that Vinnie revs his bike up and begins pulling on the building.\n\nLimburger looks down furiously.\n\n“Not again! I hope this was worth the destruction of my building.”\n\nKarbunkle laughs.\n\n“Not to worry big cheese. I have everything planned.”\n\nLimburger looks over at Karbunkle surprised.\n\n“When did you get up here?”\n\n“I have my ways.”\n\nA few more moments and Limburger Industries crumbles.\n\nThrottle looks at Modo and Vinnie and smiles.\n\n“Good job. Now, lets rock, AND RIDE!”\n\nThe biker mice leave Limburger in his ruined building.\n\nLimburger grumbles.\n\n“I guess this isn’t going to be my week.”\n\n“Not so your royal cheesiness!”\n\nWith that Karbunkle pushes a button.\n\n“What the?!”\n\n“Remember I figured the biker mice would end up doing this so I prepared.”\n\nWithin moments Limburger Industries was restored.\n\n“How did you do that?”\n\nKarbunkle laughs.\n\n“Science!”\n\n“Oh well, at least everything is going according to plan.”\n\nMeanwhile……….\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "Biker Mice from Mars: The Decent

The day started like any other in the city of Chicago.

Laurence Limburger like so many times before was plotting to take the resources of Chicago for Plutark.

Join us now to his office…..

We see Limburger grumbling as usual……

“Those blasted Biker Mice have ruined everything thus far……What I’d give to be rid of those troublesome mice once and for all. Hmm….that gives me an idea. KARBUNKLE!!”

Within seconds Karbunkle appears.

“You bellowed your cheesiness?”

“That I did. Do you have any suggestions on how to get rid of those biker mice?!”

“We could do what we always do.”

“Do what, besides fail miserably?”

“Use the dimensional transporter.”

Limberger smiles.

“Ah yes, maybe this time we can succeed! Use the machine.”

“Yes your royal cheddarness.”

With that Karbunkle presses various buttons on the console of the dimensional transporter.

Suddenly after a few moments the dimensional transporter starts to smoke and hiss.

“What’s going on Karbunkle!”

“I don’t have a clue your royal wretchedness.”

“Well do something.”

Karbunkle proceeds to kick the machine. It starts to spark and crackle and the doors open to reveal a figure.

“Good work Karbunkle.”

“Thank you your cheesiness.”

The smoke clears and their before them stands a 6 foot tall snake.

“I’ve never seen you before. What’s your name?”

The snake looks back at Limburger.

“My name? My name is Ssliver.”

“Hmm….never heard of you.”

“Never heard of me?! This can’t be right! Sssigh…….”

“Are you up for some vermin extermination?”

Slivers eyes sparkle.

“Vermin? What kind of vermin?”

“I’ve been having a rodent infestation. Three mice have been causing me, Laurence Limberger, much grief. I would like to ask you to deal with this problem. Is it too much to ask to strip mine one little mud ball of a planet and send it back to Plutark?! I think its not too much to ask..”

Sliver smiles evilly.

“Ssso what plan do you have for catching these meddlesome rodents?”

“I thought you may have a plan.”

Sliver smile grows.

“Does thisss mean it’s up to me to decide on how to proceed?”

“Right you are. Once the biker mice are finished you will be rewarded greatly. And I Laurence Limberger can proceed unhindered with my plans.”

“If that’sssss the case then…..”

Sliver pulls out a contract.

“What’s this? I do hope it’s not another court order! I’ve been getting too many of these of late.”

“Oh, nothing much. Just a binding agreement between me and Limburger Industriessss promissssing me any reward for getting rid of the biker mice in any manner I sssee fit.”

Limburger reads the document thoroughly.

“Hmmm……I like this; I like this very much….I think I am going to like you. I’m sorry I did not think of you earlier. I could have eliminated these headaches before they even started. ”

“I knew you would. Ssssuch matersss ssshould be left to the professionalsss.”

“Now, its time to put our plan into action.”

Meanwhile at the Last Chance Garage.

Vinnie is sitting on the couch grumbling.

“I wish there was something to do. Limburger has been too quiet.”

Throttle walks into the living room.

“I for one am glad it’s been quiet. Fighting Limburger won’t ever learn that he won’t be able to beat us, however it has been quite awhile since he has caused any trouble.”

Charley rushes into the room.

“I think you spoke too soon Vinnie. It seems Limburger is up to no good again.”

Vinnie’s ears perk up.

“Finally some action! By the way, where is Modo?”

Charley looks over to Vinnie.

I think he is in the garage fixing his arm.”

Mumbling can be heard from the garage.

“I wish I didn’t have to fix this arm of mine so often.”

Throttle walks into the garage.

“Its time to go. It seems Limburger is up to his old tricks again.”

A few minutes later all three biker mice are in the garage.

“Let’s rock, AND RIDE!”

10 minutes later…….

Limburger smiles evilly.

“I can’t wait for the biker mice to fall into our little trap. I wonder…….KARBUNKLE!”

Seconds later.

“You bellowed your cheesiness?”

“That I did. How is the plan coming?”

“Very well your royal rottenness.”

“Ah good. See that everything continues according to plan or else……”

“Very good your royal evilness. It looks like the biker mice are here.”

“Very good and right on time.”

Throttle looks around.

“Hmm….Its not like Limburger to cause trouble right at his base.”

Vinnie snickers.

“Maybe he figures that we’re gona beat him anyways and saved himself the trouble of spending the time and resources to do his business elsewhere.”

Modo looks over to Vinnie.

“I highly doubt it. The big cheese never cuts corners. Even now I think something is going on.”

“Right you are you miserable rodents.”

Vinnie looks around.

“Where is that coming from?”

“Over there.”

Throttle points to the loudspeaker on Limburger Industries building.

“It’s time that you just give up biker mice. You can’t escape my latest plot to capture you!”

Throttle looks around.

“It doesn’t look like you have anything setup here Limburger. Did you think we were just going to surrender with idle threats?”

Laughing can be heard over the loudspeaker.

“You will see soon enough. Karbunkle, bring out the hostage!”

Karbunkle brings out the hostage who is hidden from view.

“I see, you’ve gotten so desperate you capture innocent humans?”

“Who ever said anything about my hostage being human?”

Whimpering can be heard.

“Pleassse help ussssss.”

“Quiet down! Now, surrender to me now or our mystery guest will get hurt.”

Throttle gets a glint in his glasses.

“You win Limburger, we surrender…….Modo, Vinnie Omega Delta.”

Vinnie smiles.

“Yes! I love Omega Delta! Heck I love any plan that I get to wail on Limburger.”

With lightning fast speed Throttle goes after Karbunkle freeing the hostage.

“Thankssss for sssaving me.”

“No problem citizen! Opps, I forgot you aren’t a citizen are you? Anyways are you ok?

“Yessss I am fine, thanksss to you you I was not ssseriousssly hurt.”

Meanwhile Modo is busy cracking the foundation of the building.

“All yours Vinnie.”

“All right!”

Vinnie targets Limburger’s building and shoots a grappling hook from his bike.

“Yes! Right on target!”

With that Vinnie revs his bike up and begins pulling on the building.

Limburger looks down furiously.

“Not again! I hope this was worth the destruction of my building.”

Karbunkle laughs.

“Not to worry big cheese. I have everything planned.”

Limburger looks over at Karbunkle surprised.

“When did you get up here?”

“I have my ways.”

A few more moments and Limburger Industries crumbles.

Throttle looks at Modo and Vinnie and smiles.

“Good job. Now, lets rock, AND RIDE!”

The biker mice leave Limburger in his ruined building.

Limburger grumbles.

“I guess this isn’t going to be my week.”

“Not so your royal cheesiness!”

With that Karbunkle pushes a button.

“What the?!”

“Remember I figured the biker mice would end up doing this so I prepared.”

Within moments Limburger Industries was restored.

“How did you do that?”

Karbunkle laughs.

“Science!”

“Oh well, at least everything is going according to plan.”

Meanwhile……….

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