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", "writing": "T-Foot Guess Who\n\nSpitter looks on with glee as the two nearly mindless dinosaurs suck each other off.\n\n“It’s a shame that Badrap gets to have all the fun. I’m the one who created all of these inventions.”\n\nSpitter sighs.\n\n“Now….If I could only get Haxx away from him I would be in control of all of them.”\n\nSpitter starts to scheme.\n\n“Oh…that’s a good idea.”\n\nSpitter looks around and finds what he is looking for.\n\n“Ah, here it is, my last can of gas. Just enough for the two of them. But first.”\n\nSpitter pushes another button on the controller he has been holding.\n\nBack in the cave Bullzeye and Spike stop their sucking.\n\n“Why did you stop?”\n\n“I was about to ask you the same thing.”\n\nAs both looked confused they were compelled to stand up and start walking a few steps.\n\nWith that Spitter pushed a button on the computer console.\n\n“What the…..”\n\nWithin seconds both were in the same room as Spitter.\n\n“Who are you?”\n\n“I am your master.”\n\n“Our master? We don’t have a master.”\n\n“Yes you do.”\n\nWith that Spitter pushes another button on the controller.\n\n“What is happening to us?”\n\nSpitter laughs.\n\n“Nothing much, just taking whatever free will you have left away from you. Won’t it be nice not to think anymore?”\n\nSpike and Bullzeye smile for a second.\n\n“No need to think……..Must fight…….control……”\n\nSpitter growls.\n\n“Whats wrong with this thing.”\n\nSpitter cranks the controller up to full power.\n\nBoth Spike and Bullzeye start to yell in pain.\n\n“We are not your slaves.”\n\nSpike runs towards Spitter knocking the controller out of his hand.\n\n“I see, this is what you were using to control us.”\n\nSpitter remembers the voice commands were still active.\n\n“Command beta 3 activate now.”\n\n“Beta 3 activating….. Controller set to finalize changes in subjects and explode. Commencing…….Commencing. Command finalized.”\n\nWith that the controller exploded and all changes done to the dinosaurs permanent.\n\n“What are you two going to do now? You have no memories and won’t get far.”\n\nSpike and Bullzeye laugh in unison.\n\n“Unfortunately for you, the nanites merged with these bodies and have complete control over. Fortunately us you did not wipe these individuals minds before adding us to their bodies.”\n\nSpitter looked at the two in horror.\n\nSpike looks over to Stegz and T-bone.\n\n“Brothers stand and follow our commands.”\n\n“Yes master.”\n\nBullzeye looks over to the canister by Spitter.\n\n“Hmmm….That will do nicely.”\n\nSpitter looks over to the canister.\n\n“What are you going to do?”\n\n“Why release the rest of the nanites you created and spread them to you and the two other raptors. However, first we wish to play with you first. T-bone, Stegs take our friend Spitter here and put him in the neural neutralizer.”\n\n“Yes master.”\n\nWith that command both grab Spitter.\n\n“Let me go!”\n\nSpitter was no match for the two dinosaurs who strapped him in the chair.\n\n“Lets make this quick.”\n\nSpike pulls the lever.\n\n“Repeat after me Spitter. I am now a slave.”\n\n“I am now a slave.”\n\nSpike looks over to Bullzeye.\n\n“Why don’t you open the canister and release some of the gas.\n\n“Sure.”\n\nWithin moments some of the gas is released and enters Spitter.\n\nSpitter looks up.\n\n“I am yours masters.”\n\nBoth smile and let Spitter go.\n\nBullzeye smiles.\n\n“Lets go get Badrap.”\n\n“Yes master.”\n\nAll the dinosaurs head for Haxx’s room.\n\n“Get Badrap and strap him in the chair.”\n\n“Yes master.”\n\nSuddenly the door bursts open and everyone is on Badrap within seconds.\n\n“What’s going on?! Spitter, is this you’re doing?!”\n\nSpike and Bullzeye laugh.\n\n“It’s our doing. Thanks to Spitters special gas we now have bodies.”\n\n“What gas are you talking about?”\n\n“Without your knowledge Spitter made special nanite gas that would infect anything he wanted. Unfortunately for both of you he did not wipe these individuals minds before adding them.”\n\n“Does this mean you are still Spike and Bullzeye?”\n\n“No, their minds have ceased to be, however we retain their memories. We believe they at least deserve their final revenge against you.”\n\n“What revenge, you said it yourself that they were gone.”\n\n“That we did, however any way you look at it you are still left. We find these forms most interesting and wish to control all of them. Your mind however is useless.\n\n“What does that mean?”\n\n“We are going to put you in the machine like you did with T-bone, Stegz and Haxx.”\n\nBadrap growls.\n\n“I won’t let you!”\n\n“You have no choice. Why not just give in and make it easy.”\n\nBadrap growls as he is strapped in the chair.\n\nSpike and Bullzeye look at each other.\n\nWhat setting do you think?”\n\n“I think he should feel it as his mind turns to mush.”\n\n“That sounds great!”\n\nWith that the device is set and activated.\n\n“Oh, Badrap guess what.”\n\n“What?”\n\n“Do you feel your mind slipping away?”\n\n“No I do……….”\n\nBadrap growls.\n\n“What did you do to me?”\n\n“Nothing much, we set the machine to slowly erase your mind.”\n\n“Spitter did not add such a feature.”\n\n“The things you did not know about Spitter, I guess you were the moronic one after all. “\n\n“I am not moronic, Ha……….was…”\n\n“See what’s happening.”\n\nBadrap growls again.\n\n“Get me out of this chair!”\n\nWithin a few more minutes more of Badrap was gone.\n\n“Where am I? Who are you?”\n\nBullzeye comes over to Badrap.\n\n“Just give in and obey. It would be so much easier if you just gave in and accepted your fate.”\n\n“My fate……I…..give in………”\n\nWith that the last of Badrap’s mind was gone.\n\n“Repeat after me. I am now a slave.”\n\n“I am now a slave.”\n\n“Release the rest of the gas.”\n\nThe canister is opened for the final time and the rest of the gas is absorbed by Haxx and Badrap.\n\nSpike and Bullzeye in unison.\n\n“You are forever enslaved. You have all been obedient thus you enjoy one another.”\n\nWith that an orgy breaks out that lasts for hours…………\n\nMay be continued in the distant future…….\n\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "T-Foot Guess Who

Spitter looks on with glee as the two nearly mindless dinosaurs suck each other off.

“It’s a shame that Badrap gets to have all the fun. I’m the one who created all of these inventions.”

Spitter sighs.

“Now….If I could only get Haxx away from him I would be in control of all of them.”

Spitter starts to scheme.

“Oh…that’s a good idea.”

Spitter looks around and finds what he is looking for.

“Ah, here it is, my last can of gas. Just enough for the two of them. But first.”

Spitter pushes another button on the controller he has been holding.

Back in the cave Bullzeye and Spike stop their sucking.

“Why did you stop?”

“I was about to ask you the same thing.”

As both looked confused they were compelled to stand up and start walking a few steps.

With that Spitter pushed a button on the computer console.

“What the…..”

Within seconds both were in the same room as Spitter.

“Who are you?”

“I am your master.”

“Our master? We don’t have a master.”

“Yes you do.”

With that Spitter pushes another button on the controller.

“What is happening to us?”

Spitter laughs.

“Nothing much, just taking whatever free will you have left away from you. Won’t it be nice not to think anymore?”

Spike and Bullzeye smile for a second.

“No need to think……..Must fight…….control……”

Spitter growls.

“Whats wrong with this thing.”

Spitter cranks the controller up to full power.

Both Spike and Bullzeye start to yell in pain.

“We are not your slaves.”

Spike runs towards Spitter knocking the controller out of his hand.

“I see, this is what you were using to control us.”

Spitter remembers the voice commands were still active.

“Command beta 3 activate now.”

“Beta 3 activating….. Controller set to finalize changes in subjects and explode. Commencing…….Commencing. Command finalized.”

With that the controller exploded and all changes done to the dinosaurs permanent.

“What are you two going to do now? You have no memories and won’t get far.”

Spike and Bullzeye laugh in unison.

“Unfortunately for you, the nanites merged with these bodies and have complete control over. Fortunately us you did not wipe these individuals minds before adding us to their bodies.”

Spitter looked at the two in horror.

Spike looks over to Stegz and T-bone.

“Brothers stand and follow our commands.”

“Yes master.”

Bullzeye looks over to the canister by Spitter.

“Hmmm….That will do nicely.”

Spitter looks over to the canister.

“What are you going to do?”

“Why release the rest of the nanites you created and spread them to you and the two other raptors. However, first we wish to play with you first. T-bone, Stegs take our friend Spitter here and put him in the neural neutralizer.”

“Yes master.”

With that command both grab Spitter.

“Let me go!”

Spitter was no match for the two dinosaurs who strapped him in the chair.

“Lets make this quick.”

Spike pulls the lever.

“Repeat after me Spitter. I am now a slave.”

“I am now a slave.”

Spike looks over to Bullzeye.

“Why don’t you open the canister and release some of the gas.

“Sure.”

Within moments some of the gas is released and enters Spitter.

Spitter looks up.

“I am yours masters.”

Both smile and let Spitter go.

Bullzeye smiles.

“Lets go get Badrap.”

“Yes master.”

All the dinosaurs head for Haxx’s room.

“Get Badrap and strap him in the chair.”

“Yes master.”

Suddenly the door bursts open and everyone is on Badrap within seconds.

“What’s going on?! Spitter, is this you’re doing?!”

Spike and Bullzeye laugh.

“It’s our doing. Thanks to Spitters special gas we now have bodies.”

“What gas are you talking about?”

“Without your knowledge Spitter made special nanite gas that would infect anything he wanted. Unfortunately for both of you he did not wipe these individuals minds before adding them.”

“Does this mean you are still Spike and Bullzeye?”

“No, their minds have ceased to be, however we retain their memories. We believe they at least deserve their final revenge against you.”

“What revenge, you said it yourself that they were gone.”

“That we did, however any way you look at it you are still left. We find these forms most interesting and wish to control all of them. Your mind however is useless.

“What does that mean?”

“We are going to put you in the machine like you did with T-bone, Stegz and Haxx.”

Badrap growls.

“I won’t let you!”

“You have no choice. Why not just give in and make it easy.”

Badrap growls as he is strapped in the chair.

Spike and Bullzeye look at each other.

What setting do you think?”

“I think he should feel it as his mind turns to mush.”

“That sounds great!”

With that the device is set and activated.

“Oh, Badrap guess what.”

“What?”

“Do you feel your mind slipping away?”

“No I do……….”

Badrap growls.

“What did you do to me?”

“Nothing much, we set the machine to slowly erase your mind.”

“Spitter did not add such a feature.”

“The things you did not know about Spitter, I guess you were the moronic one after all. “

“I am not moronic, Ha……….was…”

“See what’s happening.”

Badrap growls again.

“Get me out of this chair!”

Within a few more minutes more of Badrap was gone.

“Where am I? Who are you?”

Bullzeye comes over to Badrap.

“Just give in and obey. It would be so much easier if you just gave in and accepted your fate.”

“My fate……I…..give in………”

With that the last of Badrap’s mind was gone.

“Repeat after me. I am now a slave.”

“I am now a slave.”

“Release the rest of the gas.”

The canister is opened for the final time and the rest of the gas is absorbed by Haxx and Badrap.

Spike and Bullzeye in unison.

“You are forever enslaved. You have all been obedient thus you enjoy one another.”

With that an orgy breaks out that lasts for hours…………

May be continued in the distant future…….

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