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I was a huge rockstar at one point, rich as can be. Boys surrounding me, (yeah, I'm gay. So what.) Ferraris... I was in heaven. I could buy almost anything, anything except someone's heart, that is. No matter how many dates I went on or how many people loved me, I just couldn't find \"The one\". That was the case, for a long time.\n\n One day while I was checking my mail, I looked and saw a nice fan letter from a boy named \"Commerad\". It has kiss marks all over it and it smelled like Lavender. I smiled and opened the letter slowly, and looked at the soft handwriting, reading:\n\n \"Dear Ember McClain\n\n I am a huge fan of your work. You inspire me beyond belief. You are my idol; my biggest dream is to meet you in person. I would do anything to meet you!!\n\n Love, Commerad the Hedgehog.\n\n I smiled at this and read the adress. It was far, so I decided to mail tickets and passports to California to him. It was going to be the biggest show I have ever had; And I would be on MTV. I wanted my most adored fan to be there LIVE.\n\n A few days later, I was prepping for the opening act. \"Derrick! Get out here!\" I screamed at my cast and crew. \"Michael!!\" It was the beginning of my concert, and I was excited. My big debeaut. Who'd of thought that me, Ember McClain, would be on MTV? The drums began to play, and I walked out on stage and began singing. I looked out to see Commerad, but I didn't know what he looked like. Then, I caught eyes with a beatiful red wine colored hedgehog with shimmering blue eyes. I stared at him while singing. My tail faintly wagged, and I noticed his did as well.\n\n I suppose I was so distracted, I didn't hear Derrick scream at me to duck, when out of the blue, I had 3 knives impailing my stomach, head and chest. After, I heard gunshots shoot over and over into my body. I tasted blood. I struggled to say my final words, looking deep into the hedgehog's eyes and singing softly into the microphone:\n\n \"You... will... remember... my... name... O-ohh...\" I breathed out as I fell to me knees and hit the cold stage floor. Everything went black.\n\n A few hours later, I was proclaimed dead on the spot. My corpse was stitched up and fixed to look like I was brand new. I had a tux put onto me, and flowers onto my cold, dead chest as they lowered my coffin into the filthy ground. My family and friends and millions of friends gathered around my grave and cried, then they went on with their lives as if nothing ever happened to me.\n\n It has been 5 years since that day. They thought I was gone for good but... I wasn't even close. How can someone live through all that, you ask? I never said I did.\n\n I have been haunting that stage for these past years. (Yes, this makes me a ghost.) No one has ever entered, and my blood sits on the floor even still today. I float around aimlessly trying to numb my mind of all the pleasures I had in my old life. Then, one day, a familiar hedgehog cleaner walks through the stage doors...\n\n I couldn't believe my eyes. It was the hedgehog I had fallen in love with at the concert! I turned invisible and watched him from afar as he whistled and cleaned the stage of my soaked in blood. I watched with amazment, as my ghostly heart began to beat outrageously hard. And then, I finally had the guts to speak as I began to sing.\n\n He began to freak out, shake and continue to clean as I flew down and watched him. Then I got closer to him, and sang into his ear softly. He screamed out loud and curled into a ball. What a wimp! I went visible and grinned, saying \"Boo\". He fainted.\n\n When he awoke, I was hovering over him, smiling. \"You fell unconcious,\" I said softly. \"are you alright?\" The hedgehog shook as hard as he can, then froze with awe.\n\n \"...E-e-ember McClain?!\" he shrieked.\n\n \"The one and only.\" I smirked, floating around, singing. He fainted again.\n\n I slapped him back and fourth across the face, and he finally awoke. I helped him up, and stared into his eyes. I froze as I smelled lavender. I looked deep into his eyes, then froze stiff.\n\n \"...Commerad?\" I asked softly. He froze stiff as well, then tears flowed down his cheeks. He hugged me as tight as he could, hopping into my lap.\n\n \"You remember me?!\" he squeaked, as his tail thumped against my crotch.\n\n \"Yes, I remember you more than any of my fans...\" I smiled.\n\n Commerad was smiling, then he slowly frowned. \"Wait. Ember is dead... You're an imposter!\" he screamed, hopping off me and slapping me. I held my cheek and cried out. I began to sing, his ears dropping down onto his head. He closed his eyes then listened, tears flowing down his cheeks. \"I... I've always had a crush on you...\" he blurted, blushing strawberry red. I held him in my lap again and kissed him deeply, holding onto his ass cheeks. He moaned out, blushing his tail wagging. I blushed as squeezed his cheeks, letting go slowly. Commerad's tail was wagging harder than I had seen before. He groaned, burying himself into my chest. \"I know this is alot to ask for but...\" he panted deeply into my neck. \"I've masterbated to you so many times...\" he blushed. \"Especially your porn videos and your naked pictures...\" he groaned. \"Please... have your way with me... I know it's alot but it's my biggest wish of all time... please...\"\n\n I was awestruck. Someone masterbating to me? I just sat there, staring into the little hedgehog's eyes. Finally, I replied, \"Hmmm...\" Feeling my muscles tense, I gripped the pavement. \"Once I get to know you.\" I replied. Commerad's growth was huge and bulding, twitching at every word I spoke. Mine was as well, and my tail thumped as I tried to ignore my urge. I growled looking down, then stared at Commerad. \"Fuck this.\" I snarled, tackling Commerad and pulling down my shorts. Commerad's mouth gaped as he gazed at my cock size. I grinned. \"You llike that bitch?\" I said smoothly. Commerad nodded rapidly, getting as close to me as he could, then began sucking on my growth. I moaned and held onto his head, licking my lips. I began thrusting into his mouth, in and out. I groaned at his tight, wet mouth and I let out my hot seed. Commerad squealed and let go of my growth, letting it pour all over his body. I marvled at his woman-like figure, and got ontop of him.\n\n \"Are you... gonna...\" whined Commerad as I stuffed my cock into his ass. I let out a loud moan. It was extremley tight. I panted loudly, thrusting in and out as hard as I could. I pounded into him roughly, as he screamed out at my size. I grinned, pounding into him harder and harder. Commerad just moaned, staring into the ground. \"Harder...\" he demanded as I pressed him against a wall, pushing my growth deep into him. He screamed out. \"E-ember!!!!\" he yelled as I came hard into his tight ass. He slowly slid down to the floor. I layed beside him and stroked his back. He gazed into my eyes, as we pressed out lips together.\n\n I have been with him ever since.\n", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "    My name's Ember, Ember McClain. I was a huge rockstar at one point, rich as can be. Boys surrounding me, (yeah, I'm gay. So what.) Ferraris... I was in heaven. I could buy almost anything, anything except someone's heart, that is. No matter how many dates I went on or how many people loved me, I just couldn't find "The one". That was the case, for a long time.

    One day while I was checking my mail, I looked and saw a nice fan letter from a boy named "Commerad". It has kiss marks all over it and it smelled like Lavender. I smiled and opened the letter slowly, and looked at the soft handwriting, reading:

    "Dear Ember McClain

            I am a huge fan of your work. You inspire me beyond belief. You are my idol; my biggest dream is to meet you in person. I would do anything to meet you!!

                                                                                                            Love, Commerad the Hedgehog.

    I smiled at this and read the adress. It was far, so I decided to mail tickets and passports to California to him. It was going to be the biggest show I have ever had; And I would be on MTV. I wanted my most adored fan to be there LIVE.

    A few days later, I was prepping for the opening act. "Derrick! Get out here!" I screamed at my cast and crew. "Michael!!" It was the beginning of my concert, and I was excited. My big debeaut. Who'd of thought that me, Ember McClain, would be on MTV? The drums began to play, and I walked out on stage and began singing. I looked out to see Commerad, but I didn't know what he looked like. Then, I caught eyes with a beatiful red wine colored hedgehog with shimmering blue eyes. I stared at him while singing. My tail faintly wagged, and I noticed his did as well.

    I suppose I was so distracted, I didn't hear Derrick scream at me to duck, when out of the blue, I had 3 knives impailing my stomach, head and chest. After, I heard gunshots shoot over and over into my body. I tasted blood. I struggled to say my final words, looking deep into the hedgehog's eyes and singing softly into the microphone:

    "You... will... remember... my... name... O-ohh..." I breathed out as I fell to me knees and hit the cold stage floor. Everything went black.

    A few hours later, I was proclaimed dead on the spot. My corpse was stitched up and fixed to look like I was brand new. I had a tux put onto me, and flowers onto my cold, dead chest as they lowered my coffin into the filthy ground. My family and friends and millions of friends gathered around my grave and cried, then they went on with their lives as if nothing ever happened to me.

    It has been 5 years since that day. They thought I was gone for good but... I wasn't even close. How can someone live through all that, you ask? I never said I did.

    I have been haunting that stage for these past years. (Yes, this makes me a ghost.)  No one has ever entered, and my blood sits on the floor even still today. I float around aimlessly trying to numb my mind of all the pleasures I had in my old life. Then, one day, a familiar hedgehog cleaner walks through the stage doors...

    I couldn't believe my eyes. It was the hedgehog I had fallen in love with at the concert! I turned invisible and watched him from afar as he whistled and cleaned the stage of my soaked in blood. I watched with amazment, as my ghostly heart began to beat outrageously hard. And then, I finally had the guts to speak as I began to sing.

    He began to freak out, shake and continue to clean as I flew down and watched him. Then I got closer to him, and sang into his ear softly. He screamed out loud and curled into a ball. What a wimp! I went visible and grinned, saying "Boo". He fainted.

    When he awoke, I was hovering over him, smiling. "You fell unconcious," I said softly. "are you alright?" The hedgehog shook as hard as he can, then froze with awe.

   "...E-e-ember McClain?!" he shrieked.

    "The one and only." I smirked, floating around, singing. He fainted again.

    I slapped him back and fourth across the face, and he finally awoke. I helped him up, and stared into his eyes. I froze as I smelled lavender. I looked deep into his eyes, then froze stiff.

    "...Commerad?" I asked softly. He froze stiff as well, then tears flowed down his cheeks. He hugged me as tight as he could, hopping into my lap.

    "You remember me?!" he squeaked, as his tail thumped against my crotch.

    "Yes, I remember you more than any of my fans..." I smiled.

    Commerad was smiling, then he slowly frowned. "Wait. Ember is dead... You're an imposter!" he screamed, hopping off me and slapping me. I held my cheek and cried out. I began to sing, his ears dropping down onto his head. He closed his eyes then listened, tears flowing down his cheeks. "I... I've always had a crush on you..." he blurted, blushing strawberry red. I held him in my lap again and kissed him deeply, holding onto his ass cheeks. He moaned out, blushing his tail wagging. I blushed as squeezed his cheeks, letting go slowly. Commerad's tail was wagging harder than I had seen before. He groaned, burying himself into my chest. "I know this is alot to ask for but..." he panted deeply into my neck. "I've masterbated to you so many times..." he blushed. "Especially your porn videos and your naked pictures..." he groaned. "Please... have your way with me... I know it's alot but it's my biggest wish of all time... please..."

    I was awestruck. Someone masterbating to me? I just sat there, staring into the little hedgehog's eyes. Finally, I replied, "Hmmm..." Feeling my muscles tense, I gripped the pavement. "Once I get to know you." I replied. Commerad's growth was huge and bulding, twitching at every word I spoke. Mine was as well, and my tail thumped as I tried to ignore my urge. I growled looking down, then stared at Commerad. "Fuck this." I snarled, tackling Commerad and pulling down my shorts. Commerad's mouth gaped as he gazed at my cock size. I grinned. "You llike that bitch?" I said smoothly. Commerad nodded rapidly, getting as close to me as he could, then began sucking on my growth. I moaned and held onto his head, licking my lips. I began thrusting into his mouth, in and out. I groaned at his tight, wet mouth and I let out my hot seed. Commerad squealed and let go of my growth, letting it pour all over his body. I marvled at his woman-like figure, and got ontop of him.

    "Are you... gonna..." whined Commerad as I stuffed my cock into his ass. I let out a loud moan. It was extremley tight. I panted loudly, thrusting in and out as hard as I could. I pounded into him roughly, as he screamed out at my size. I grinned, pounding into him harder and harder. Commerad just moaned, staring into the ground. "Harder..." he demanded as I pressed him against a wall, pushing my growth deep into him. He screamed out. "E-ember!!!!" he yelled as I came hard into his tight ass. He slowly slid down to the floor. I layed beside him and stroked his back. He gazed into my eyes, as we pressed out lips together.

                                                                            I have been with him ever since.
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