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Alternate universe story of Tay and Izzy discovering each other as preteens. Stands completely alone from "Into A Tizzy."

This is book 1 of Unexpecttraction, but from Izzy's perspective.

Warnings:
-Cub (preteen)
-Incest

Have fun and enjoy, I hope!

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", "writing": "[center]~Note: this takes place in it’s own universe completely separate from McInTots or “Into A Tizzy”~\n\nIsabelle Lisa McIntosh and Taylor Ryan McIntosh\n\nin \n\nUnexpecttraction, Chapter 1\n\nShark Fin\n\nby the kzx[/center]\n\n\n “Ugh, Tay! Come on!” Isabelle McIntosh’s frustrated voice shouted bouncing off the wall of the house and the surrounding trees. 'Why did he do that? Is he gonna be stupid now?' Many annoying thoughts pestered the 9 year-old dingo girl as she retrieved the hot tub remote which her brother had thrown a good distance from the tub's edge on the deck. She felt a splash behind her and felt icy cold droplets hit her butt and legs. 'Eek!' she thought.\n “Okay, got it.\" She said as she slinked back into the hot tub, hair up in a ponytail, completely naked. Her twin brother, Taylor McIntosh, the culprit, sat awkwardly across from Izzy. A water gun was floating between them and Izzy figured Tay dropped it and that's what the splash was. 'Where'd he get that water gun? Ack... my nipples are hard...' she thought.\n \"Yeesh, it's so cold!\" she said, shivering back into the water. Tay didn't fair much better. He was completely naked as well. The twins had been visiting their relatives in their homeland of Australia and the adults went to town for some shopping. They had a hot tub, which the twins were anticipating the whole trip to use. They decided to use it, getting naked first, of course. \n \"We shoulda waited for it to get hot before getting in.\" Izzy said, holding herself. Her nipples got hard a lot lately and, even though he was her twin brother, she was getting a little self-conscious around him. 'Gosh, this water is cold... and it's such a nice day!' the dingo girl thought.\n “Let’s see… ‘Level 4’” Izzy said, clicking the remote. She heard a beep in a machine somewhere under the deck near the edge behind the house and a rumbling in the water began, flimsy white bubbles beginning their staggering journey to the surface. As the clear water became clouded in bubbles, Izzy noticed Tay hadn't said anything really, not since that chuckle when he threw the remote. 'Ugh... he tossed that remote far on purpose.., I bet...' She looked at him; was he blushing? Why's he just sitting there?\n “Ahh, it's still cold, but, meh, this is nice…” Izzy said, laying her head back and closing her eyes, attempting to elicit conversation. She arched her back a bit, pouting her chest out. 'What if Tay sees my... oh, who cares; he's my brother...' It was this last thought that made other thoughts trail off and become their own monsters. For some reason, she couldn't stop thinking about Tay looking at her chest. What gives? It never mattered before... Is it cus she was now starting to develop a chest worth looking at?\n Moments passed as the twins sat in the hot tub listening to the nature around them. As the heat began to rise in the water, Izzy thought about how conscious she was of the fact that they were doing something naughty. Both twins knew to be quiet to listen for any cars pulling up, though they didn't say anything about doing so.\n “Say, Izzy, I dare you to go under the hot water for as long as you can!” Tay said, maybe a little too excited. Izzy lifted her head and looked at him in a puzzled fashion. Tay just smiled back like an idiot.\n “In this hot bubbly water? No way.” Izzy said in a voice she used in her conversations with Tay quite often, “It’s way too hot!” Tay nudged a little closer, Izzy being only slightly aware of this. \n “Nah, come on!” the dingo boy egged, “I bet you can’t beat my time!” Tay seemed a little too eager. Did he wanna see me naked underwater? Wait! That's dumb! Not only has he seen me several times, but the water's all hot and bubbly, as she just stated herself. Izzy sat upright more and smirked.\n “Okay, fine. Here I go!” the dingo girl said before drawing in a deep breath and plunging into the hot water. Aside from the hot temperature stinging her face, she felt her ponytail dragging on the surface, always last to submerge. 'How long should I stay under? This is stupid... but I guess it's what you do in a pool. Ack! So hot!' She thought. Soon, Izzy burst from the surface followed by a sharp breath.\n “Ahh, it’s so hot!” She wiped the water from her eyes and glanced at Tay, “How was that?”\n “How was what?” Tay asked, as if not paying attention. \n “What was my time?” Izzy asked, a little annoyed. Tay looked at his sister puzzled.\n “‘Time?’” Izzy gritted her teeth and splashed water at her brother.\n “Nevermind! It was about 1 minute and 38 seconds, Tay!” Tay smiled goofily.\n “Oh! That time!” Izzy rolled her eyes. “Oh, I wasn’t timing you.”\n “What?! Come on, Tay, you gotta time me if you wanna know how long I can stay under the water! Don’t you know how this works?” Tay’s ears twitched.\n “Well… well, yeah… I just wanted to see if you could open your eyes underwater.” Tay said, trying to cover.\n “Well, not this water; it’s too hot!” Izzy said, looking down at the rolling bubbles. She looked at Tay again. “Why do you wanna know if I can open my eyes under this water?” Izzy asked. Tay looked dead at his sister, blushing. Why was he blushing?\n “I…. didn’t want you to…. be able to cheat!” Tay quipped. Izzy looked at him with almost pity. \n “Cheat on what?”\n “Holding your breath!”\n “Tay… you… you said you… what does that have to do with… it wasn’t about holding…. ugh… whatever…” Izzy threw her paws up and splashed them down again in exhaustion. \n “You must be blind underwater.” Tay said. Izzy scrunched her face up in confusion.\n “I am not! This water is too hot! It burns my eyes!” \n “Meh, whatever. Girls are blind underwater; this is a fact.” Izzy stood up from the water. The contrasting cool air hit Izzy’s body and it felt good. Tay looked intimidated... and blushing more. Cute, she thought. What if he was growing into a man now, and seeing a girl's body was awakening him. Hmm... the very idea... Tay... attracted to me, his twin sister... Though she was charmed by her own ideas, Izzy was still angry.\n “Taylor! The water is too hot! You couldn’t do it either!” Tay's eyes! On her! His eyes met Izzy’s. \n “I could, too! I’m a boy!”\n “Okay, then do it!”\n “I, uh, don’t want to; bleach, in my eyes, bad.” \n \"We've both opened our eyes under pool water alot of times!\"\n \"I don't wanna do this anymore.\" Tay finally said, shrugging and looking to the side. Izzy threw her arms up, slinging drops of cooling hot water across the deck. “Maybe we should get in the pool. It’s not hot.” Izzy just stared at him then stepped out and walked to the pool. Tay waited behind, content where he was. Why was he being such a butt?\n “Coming?” Izzy asked, twisting around and looking at Tay. He nodded. Izzy turned toward the pool. 'It's actually kinda cute.' A rogue thought! Where'd that come from?! Izzy shook it off and dipped a toe into the pool, quickly withdrawing.\n “It’s so cold!” she cried, retracting her foot.\n “Be right there!” Tay shouted from, now, the far end of the deck. Izzy held herself, wanting to shiver, thinking, 'This water's gonna be very col-'\n “YOU’RE IT!” Tay shouted as he shoved his sister into the cold pool. Where there was awkward warmth now there was icy cold anger. She barely had time to catch a breath to hold before the cold pool surrounded her. Finally, Izzy burst from the water.\n “TAY-LORRR!!! IT'S COLD!!! I TOLD YOU IT WAS COLD!” Izzy screamed, holding herself, scowling at her brother. Tay swam closer to her, smiling.\n \"Hey, if you get out, I'll throw you back in again!\" Tay said. Izzy gave him a dumb look. Was that a threat? \n \"You make that sound so appealing, Tay.\" Izzy said in a sarcastic sigh, letting her arms go and lightly started treading water. She felt her brother staring at her, watching, and when she turned to look at him, he was indeed glaring at all of her. 'Oh, wow, to have the attention of a boy... it's amazing...' she thought. Tay reached out toward her midsection, grabbing for her waist, but she twisted away, narrowly avoiding his grasp and smiling back at him. Tay had a growing severity in the determination on his face. 'Wow... when did he become so cute?'\n Tay darted out at her again, making her giggle and shriek a little. Who cares? We're alone. She backed away from him, teasing, trying to read his next move, frustrating him. But this frustrated boy was smiling deviously. Izzy knew that smile; he was planning something. He dived under in a flash and at the same time, Izzy's eyes widened. 'Was he looking at my body underwater? He's seen it before!' She thought, crossing her legs and raising her knees as if anticipating an attack. She had visions, though, of the last frame of Tay before he submerged: a drooping shark fin of hair. Tay's hair. Wow, he WAS being so cute! Suddenly, the sharkish form poked her in the thigh, eliciting a series of violent kicks toward Tay, almost kicking him, she was sure. Good thing he dodged the kicks, she thought. She didn't want to hurt her brother. Still, how embarrassing! She heard Tay surface behind her.\n \"Taylor!\" She said as Tay breathed enough for a laugh. Fine, you wanna play? Izzy threw herself underwater, rocketing herself toward Tay and poking his thigh. His peen... right there... did it twitch? Izzy was sure the water played tricks on her eyes. \"Hahaha!\" Izzy exhaled in a laugh, surfacing behind her brother.\n \"Did you open your eyes underwater?\" Tay said, head turned.\n \"What? Of course. You know we both open our eyes underwater.\" she said, eyebrows crooked, \"You even said that we do a while ago.\" What was he trying to do? Did he WANT me to see his peen? I've seen it. Many, many times. For years. Tay dived again, seeming frustrated. He soon poked Izzy's tummy. Izzy rolled her eyes: he's trying to get me to pay attention to his peen. What the heck, Tay?", "writing_bbcode_parsed": "
~Note: this takes place in it’s own universe completely separate from McInTots or “Into A Tizzy”~

Isabelle Lisa McIntosh and Taylor Ryan McIntosh

in

Unexpecttraction, Chapter 1

Shark Fin

by the kzx



        “Ugh, Tay! Come on!” Isabelle McIntosh’s frustrated voice shouted bouncing off the wall of the house and the surrounding trees. 'Why did he do that? Is he gonna be stupid now?' Many annoying thoughts pestered the 9 year-old dingo girl as she retrieved the hot tub remote which her brother had thrown a good distance from the tub's edge on the deck. She felt a splash behind her and felt icy cold droplets hit her butt and legs. 'Eek!' she thought.
        “Okay, got it." She said as she slinked back into the hot tub, hair up in a ponytail, completely naked. Her twin brother, Taylor McIntosh, the culprit, sat awkwardly across from Izzy. A water gun was floating between them and Izzy figured Tay dropped it and that's what the splash was. 'Where'd he get that water gun? Ack... my nipples are hard...' she thought.
        "Yeesh, it's so cold!" she said, shivering back into the water. Tay didn't fair much better. He was completely naked as well. The twins had been visiting their relatives in their homeland of Australia and the adults went to town for some shopping. They had a hot tub, which the twins were anticipating the whole trip to use. They decided to use it, getting naked first, of course.
        "We shoulda waited for it to get hot before getting in." Izzy said, holding herself. Her nipples got hard a lot lately and, even though he was her twin brother, she was getting a little self-conscious around him. 'Gosh, this water is cold... and it's such a nice day!' the dingo girl thought.
        “Let’s see… ‘Level 4’” Izzy said, clicking the remote. She heard a beep in a machine somewhere under the deck near the edge behind the house and a rumbling in the water began, flimsy white bubbles beginning their staggering journey to the surface. As the clear water became clouded in bubbles, Izzy noticed Tay hadn't said anything really, not since that chuckle when he threw the remote. 'Ugh... he tossed that remote far on purpose.., I bet...' She looked at him; was he blushing? Why's he just sitting there?
        “Ahh, it's still cold, but, meh, this is nice…” Izzy said, laying her head back and closing her eyes, attempting to elicit conversation. She arched her back a bit, pouting her chest out. 'What if Tay sees my... oh, who cares; he's my brother...' It was this last thought that made other thoughts trail off and become their own monsters. For some reason, she couldn't stop thinking about Tay looking at her chest. What gives?  It never mattered before... Is it cus she was now starting to develop a chest worth looking at?
        Moments passed as the twins sat in the hot tub listening to the nature around them. As the heat began to rise in the water, Izzy thought about how conscious she was of the fact that they were doing something naughty. Both twins knew to be quiet to listen for any cars pulling up, though they didn't say anything about doing so.
        “Say, Izzy, I dare you to go under the hot water for as long as you can!” Tay said, maybe a little too excited. Izzy lifted her head and looked at him in a puzzled fashion. Tay just smiled back like an idiot.
        “In this hot bubbly water? No way.” Izzy said in a voice she used in her conversations with Tay quite often, “It’s way too hot!” Tay nudged a little closer, Izzy being only slightly aware of this.
        “Nah, come on!” the dingo boy egged, “I bet you can’t beat my time!” Tay seemed a little too eager. Did he wanna see me naked underwater? Wait! That's dumb! Not only has he seen me several times, but the water's all hot and bubbly, as she just stated herself. Izzy sat upright more and smirked.
        “Okay, fine. Here I go!” the dingo girl said before drawing in a deep breath and plunging into the hot water. Aside from the hot temperature stinging her face, she felt her ponytail dragging on the surface, always last to submerge. 'How long should I stay under? This is stupid... but I guess it's what you do in a pool. Ack! So hot!' She thought. Soon, Izzy burst from the surface followed by a sharp breath.
        “Ahh, it’s so hot!” She wiped the water from her eyes and glanced at Tay, “How was that?”
        “How was what?” Tay asked, as if not paying attention.
        “What was my time?” Izzy asked, a little annoyed. Tay looked at his sister puzzled.
        “‘Time?’” Izzy gritted her teeth and splashed water at her brother.
        “Nevermind! It was about 1 minute and 38 seconds, Tay!” Tay smiled goofily.
        “Oh! That time!” Izzy rolled her eyes. “Oh, I wasn’t timing you.”
        “What?! Come on, Tay, you gotta time me if you wanna know how long I can stay under the water! Don’t you know how this works?” Tay’s ears twitched.
        “Well… well, yeah… I just wanted to see if you could open your eyes underwater.” Tay said, trying to cover.
        “Well, not this water; it’s too hot!” Izzy said, looking down at the rolling bubbles. She looked at Tay again. “Why do you wanna know if I can open my eyes under this water?” Izzy asked. Tay looked dead at his sister, blushing. Why was he blushing?
        “I…. didn’t want you to…. be able to cheat!” Tay quipped. Izzy looked at him with almost pity.
        “Cheat on what?”
        “Holding your breath!”
        “Tay… you… you said you… what does that have to do with… it wasn’t about holding…. ugh… whatever…” Izzy threw her paws up and splashed them down again in exhaustion.
        “You must be blind underwater.” Tay said. Izzy scrunched her face up in confusion.
        “I am not! This water is too hot! It burns my eyes!”
        “Meh, whatever. Girls are blind underwater; this is a fact.” Izzy stood up from the water. The contrasting cool air hit Izzy’s body and it felt good. Tay looked intimidated... and blushing more. Cute, she thought. What if he was growing into a man now, and seeing a girl's body was awakening him. Hmm... the very idea... Tay... attracted to me, his twin sister... Though she was charmed by her own ideas, Izzy was still angry.
        “Taylor! The water is too hot! You couldn’t do it either!” Tay's eyes! On her! His eyes met Izzy’s.
        “I could, too! I’m a boy!”
        “Okay, then do it!”
        “I, uh, don’t want to; bleach, in my eyes, bad.”
        "We've both opened our eyes under pool water alot of times!"
        "I don't wanna do this anymore." Tay finally said, shrugging and looking to the side. Izzy threw her arms up, slinging drops of cooling hot water across the deck. “Maybe we should get in the pool. It’s not hot.” Izzy just stared at him then stepped out and walked to the pool. Tay waited behind, content where he was. Why was he being such a butt?
        “Coming?” Izzy asked, twisting around and looking at Tay. He nodded. Izzy turned toward the pool. 'It's actually kinda cute.' A rogue thought! Where'd that come from?! Izzy shook it off and dipped a toe into the pool, quickly withdrawing.
        “It’s so cold!” she cried, retracting her foot.
        “Be right there!” Tay shouted from, now, the far end of the deck. Izzy held herself, wanting to shiver, thinking, 'This water's gonna be very col-'
        “YOU’RE IT!” Tay shouted as he shoved his sister into the cold pool. Where there was awkward warmth now there was icy cold anger. She barely had time to catch a breath to hold before the cold pool surrounded her. Finally, Izzy burst from the water.
        “TAY-LORRR!!! IT'S COLD!!! I TOLD YOU IT WAS COLD!” Izzy screamed, holding herself, scowling at her brother. Tay swam closer to her, smiling.
        "Hey, if you get out, I'll throw you back in again!" Tay said. Izzy gave him a dumb look. Was that a threat?
        "You make that sound so appealing, Tay." Izzy said in a sarcastic sigh, letting her arms go and lightly started treading water. She felt her brother staring at her, watching, and when she turned to look at him, he was indeed glaring at all of her. 'Oh, wow, to have the attention of a boy... it's amazing...' she thought. Tay reached out toward her midsection, grabbing for her waist, but she twisted away, narrowly avoiding his grasp and smiling back at him. Tay had a growing severity in the determination on his face. 'Wow... when did he become so cute?'
        Tay darted out at her again, making her giggle and shriek a little. Who cares? We're alone. She backed away from him, teasing, trying to read his next move, frustrating him. But this frustrated boy was smiling deviously. Izzy knew that smile; he was planning something. He dived under in a flash and at the same time, Izzy's eyes widened.  'Was he looking at my body underwater? He's seen it before!' She thought, crossing her legs and raising her knees as if anticipating an attack. She had visions, though, of the last frame of Tay before he submerged: a drooping shark fin of hair. Tay's hair. Wow, he WAS being so cute! Suddenly, the sharkish form poked her in the thigh, eliciting a series of violent kicks toward Tay, almost kicking him, she was sure. Good thing he dodged the kicks, she thought. She didn't want to hurt her brother. Still, how embarrassing! She heard Tay surface behind her.
        "Taylor!" She said as Tay breathed enough for a laugh. Fine, you wanna play? Izzy threw herself underwater, rocketing herself toward Tay and poking his thigh. His peen... right there... did it twitch? Izzy was sure the water played tricks on her eyes. "Hahaha!" Izzy exhaled in a laugh, surfacing behind her brother.
        "Did you open your eyes underwater?" Tay said, head turned.
        "What? Of course. You know we both open our eyes underwater." she said, eyebrows crooked, "You even said that we do a while ago." What was he trying to do? Did he WANT me to see his peen? I've seen it. Many, many times. For years. Tay dived again, seeming frustrated. He soon poked Izzy's tummy. Izzy rolled her eyes: he's trying to get me to pay attention to his peen. What the heck, Tay?", "pools_count": 6, "title": "Unexpecttraction, Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Shark Fin", "deleted": "f", "public": "t", "mimetype": "image/png", "pagecount": "1", "rating_id": "2", "rating_name": "Adult", "ratings": [ { "content_tag_id": "2", "name": "Nudity", "description": "Nonsexual nudity exposing breasts or genitals (must not show arousal)", "rating_id": "1" }, { "content_tag_id": "4", "name": "Sexual Themes", "description": "Erotic imagery, sexual activity or arousal", "rating_id": "2" } ], "submission_type_id": "12", "type_name": "Writing - Document", "guest_block": "t", "friends_only": "f", "comments_count": "9", "views": "1387" }